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Is the story of Emperor going good? Should I continue it? Choose after reading.

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dev61901

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Bahut badhiya update bro

1. First wala scene bilkul sholay movie ki tarah tha jaise gabbar puchh raha ho kitne admi the or wo bolte ha ki ek ladka tha or usne sabo pel diya or ladki bhia ke gaya or sardar ne sabko mar diya isi prakar idhar bhi hua bilala or saif ab us safed nakabkosh ko dhundenge jo or koi nahi sad hi ha or unhe ye bhi pata pad gaya ha ki uski madad yahan ke hi kisi ne ki ha to lagta ha ki 1st hero panti idhar hi hogi sad ki

2. Sitara ko bhi lagta ha ki sad per crush ho gaya ha or ab to lagta ha ki uski jan khatre me bhi ha kyonki bilal ko jab pata padega ki sitara ne uski madat ki to wo use utha lega or sad babu hi usko bachhayenge

3. Halima ko ab lagta ha ki sad per shak ho gaya ha or sad ne bhi keh diya ki wo jarur use sachh bata dega

4. Anum ka is tarah sad ki care karna uske behte khun ko dekhkar khud ki patti hatakar khud ki chot ki parwah nahi karna sad ki jyada parwah karna ye dekhkar halima ka dil tut gaya wo sad ke sath rehkar bhi wo chot nahi dekh saki or anum jo sad ko ate hi uski chot ka pata pad gaya or anum ne halima ko suna bhi diya bechari halima kuchh na kar saki bas chupchap dekhti rah gayi bilkul kisi movie ki tarah ek heroine ka dusri heroine se jealousy isliye halima apne room me chali gayi apne emotions ko bahar nikalne ke liye

5. Anum ka is tarah sad ki care karna sad ke liye bhi surprise raha wo anum ke is badle behaviour ko dekhkar chowk gaya or ab to anum ne sad ko bhi keh diya ki use oata oad gaya ha ki use bachhane wala sad hi ha or wo uska sach samne la kar rahegi sad bhi man gaya ki anum bahut sharp minded ha ab dekhte han ki age kya hota ha

6. Or mona ab level 2 per aa gayi ha or upgrade bhi ho gayi ha sad iske bhi behaviour ko dekhkar chowk gaya mona ka behaviour har level ke sath upgrade hoga or lagta ha ki age chalkar kahin mona hi sad ko control na kar le or sad ko ab darkit blessing bhi mil chuki ha dekhte han ki blessing me kya milta ha

Waiting for next update bro
♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️
 
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Dark Rider69

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Ab kya kare bro din bhar thak jata hun to rat ko hi padhna hota ha story lekin me padhta jarur hun tumhari story or achhi tarah padhkar review bhi de hi deta hun
Dark Rider69 bro de diya review jara apni vishesh tippani kare is per
o wah meray bhai!! kamaal analysis as always.. smiles.

iss liye aap ko moka diya analysis ka, coz i know aap acha he karo ge mujh se..
 
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Dark Rider69

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kamaal meray bhai...
What an update!!

Action, suspence. thrill. romance ka perfect mixture..

update 20 k baad se story mai ek boost sa aaya hai. Baki ab mai kya kahu, Dev bhai ne pehlay he aap ko analysis de diya hai.😊

Han ek baat zarror kahu ga ke, ab jessa AK bhai ne bhi kaha tha k anum ka behaviour saad ke prati change hona mangta hai or waisa ho raha bhi raha hai..
Anum ne ussay jataya toh hai ke wo ussay pehchaan gai hai k saad ne he ussay bachaya hai, laikin anum ka shakk zyada pakkah tab hua ho ga jab sitara uss se baat karti hui ghabra rahi thi, phir saad or halima ka uss ko theek ussi jagah milna, saad ke haath se bleeding, phir halima ka jhoot ke mujhay girnay se bachanay ke liye jab saad ne mujhay sahara diya toh shayad stitches khul gaye hoon gay. Jab ke anum ko bhi pata hai ek blind insaan sirf apni hearing sense ke chaltay kisi ko bhi girnay se nahi bacha sakta, ab inn dots ko jab anum ne connect kiya ho ga toh bas sachai uss ke saamnay hai......

Waiting for next update bro, please jaldi update dena.
 
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Ak47203

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Update-22:

The Mist:

Abi tak Emperor ki kahani may:

MONA: ab?

Sad: mujay kya pata!

MONA: anum ko bachana nahi hi?

Sad: bacha to lia,

MONA: but where is she,

Us he time aglay kamray ka derwaza khula ,

MONA: oops!

Sad: hhhhh!

Now Next:

Din is time aada guzar chuka tha.

Har taraf aik ajeeb see khamoshi pheli hui thi.

Aasman may suraj apni puri takat kay sath chamek raha tha,

Iski garmi har guzartay pal kay sath badti ja rahi thi,

Wahi par aik anaj kay godaam may,

*Splash!!, Splash!!!*

Thanda barafila pani un per aik jhatkay say gira,

Admi1: huh, huh, haiii, kon hi behenchod!, boltay huay wo hosh may aya,

Admi2:oooy, pagal, koon haiiii!, hoof,

Or *Bam!!* aik zor ki laat uski kamer par padi,

Abay, aaaa, kooon hiii, oooy meri kamer,

Kehtay huay wo seeda ho kar, uth kay betha,

Ahista ahista say dono kay samnay ka pura manzar saf hua,

Dono aik godaam kay aik kamray may zameen par thay, dono kay kapray ab pani may bheegay huay thay, or unkay samnay thay kuch log,

Admi1: sah!, sss, sahib app?

Admi2: yea hum, sahab yea hum kaha aah gay, hum to udhar?

Yea sab wo dono samnay kursi par bethay huay bilay jat ko kehray thay, jo apni us he kali chamkili dressing or hath may aik silver blade pistole lay kar bohot he sakoon say dono ko ghoor raha tha,

Uski kursi kay pass khaday lagko may say aik ladka kuch kadam agay ki teraf aya,

Yea wohi tha jisko anum nay us time thapper mara tha,

Saif: abay meray Janay kay bad yea kya hua waha?

Admi1: wo wooo!,

Saif: bol b salay, kya hua tha? Itni phat kiu rahi hi teri,

Batao b hua kya, sanp kiu sung gaya tum dono ko?

Or!

Wo ladki kidar hi?

Admi2: sir g, app, wo app, ja, jab!!

Saif: abay bol b kya hua,

Kissnay kia tum logo ka yea haal?

Admi2: wooo us tt,

*baaang!*

Ki aik zordar awaz dure dure tak goonj gai us puray ilakay may

Ab jaha admi2 betha hua tha ab waha per taza behta hua uska lal khun tha or admi2 ki bayjan see lash padi hui thi, jismay koi b movement nahi thi ab.

Yea dekh kar waha par khaday saif or bethay huay admi1 ki sansay mano ruk see gai thi.

Saif: bahiii, ye, yea!

Bila: apni pistol ko saf karta hua bola, kab say aik he bat par ad raha tha,

Is lia uski mushkil khatam kardi.

Phir say apni nazar ko kamptay huay admi1 ki taraf ki.

Han bai tu kuch bolra hi ya tujay b iskay pas pohncha dun?

Admi: sir g jab saif sir gay to ham lai huay paiso ko gin rahay thay, pehlay kamray may he beth kar,

Pata nahi kaha say aik ladka derwaza khol kar andar aya or us ladki ka poochnay laga,

Yea sun kar bila aikdum say seeda hua,

Kya kaha aik ladka?

Admi: apni ankho may aik gheray say dar ko la kar, geee, sir aik ladka tha,

Saif: yea kaisy ho sakta hi? Konsa ladka or kisski itni himet kay hamaray area may aah kay kuch karay,

Bila: kuch sochtay huay, kya wo siraf us ladki ko he lainay aya tha?

Admi: gee sir, siraf ladki,

Or hamnay uska chehra nahi dekha,

Dono saif or bila is bar chonkay:

Bila: kiu nahi dekha?

Admi: mafi sir g mafi, usnay aik safaid rang ka nikab lia hua tha apnay moo per,

Bila: safaid nakab posh, kyat u hosh may to hi.

Saif: hahaha, bai shaid wo ladki koi aam ladki nahi thi,

Hahahaah, safaid nakab posh hamaray tin tin admio ko mar gaya or ladki ko b lay gaya,

Bila: saif aik minute ruk,

Tu yea bata kay us akaylay nay tujay, isay, or jagu tino ko mara?

Admi: gee sir, mujay mera or jagu ka yad hi, per mai bayhosh ho gaya tha ladtay huay, baki ka mujay kuch pata nahi, apna sar jhuka kar, hamay b us time kuch b samaj nahi aii,

Sab kuch aikdum say hua,

Hamay to hatayar nikalnay ka b moka nahi mila sir,

Bila: hmmm, sahi, bilkul sahiii, aik safaid nakab posh, aik ladki kay Pichay aya,

To bachu yea hi hisab, yany bohot ziada kam kharab,

Saif: bai aik minute zara,

Oy, tu or jagu andar thay or yea gandu bahir gira pada tha. Yea sab kaisy hua?

Admi: kuch b nahi pata sahib,

Ham to us say lad rahay thay, mai or jagu, pata nahi yea iskay Pichay kab gaya, tab tak to wo bahir nahi nikla tha,

Bila: nahi saif nahi, isko us ladkay nay nahi kissy or nay mara hi,

Saif: huh? Yea kaisy pata apko?

Bila: kiu kay us ladkay ko yaha tak koi yaha ka he banda la sakta hi,

Or jaisy isnay kaha kay wo akayla he andar aya tha,

Iska saf matlab hi kay wo dusra insan bahir kada hua tha,

Or jab yea nikla hoga to isko mar kay bayhosh kardia,

Hmmm, sochna yea hi kay is time apna konsa aisa dushmen hi jo itni himet kar sakta hi,

Kuch samaj kar bila kada hua,

Usnay apnay baal samaitay, to wo ladki kon thi?

Saif: bohot he mast or chikni bala thi bai, per lagta tha kay yaha say nahi thi,
mainay usko aj he dekha tha,
Bila: han, agger hoti to tujay thapper nah padta us say.

*smiles!*

Saif: yea sun kar aikdum say sherminda sa ho chuka tha,

Bila: us ladkay ko dhoondo saif mai b ab to milna chahta hun us safaid nakab posh say, agger to wo dono idar kay nahi hai to yaha pass may he kahi rukay hongay,

Waisy tunay ladki uthai kidar say thi?

Saif: umm, bai wo apnay chavlo kay khait kay bahir wali road say,

Bila: to udar he dekho kiskay yaha rukay hai wo log,

Admi: sir mujay maf kar dayn. Kehtay he admi dono kay pairo may gir gaya, Aik moka or

*baang!!(

Aglay he pal wo admi b dusray ki terha bayjan see cheez ban kar gir chuka tha,

Bila: sala aik londay say mar kha kar sari izet lootwa kar mafi mangta hi,
thu hi dono par,
Shakay!,

Taizy say bilay ki yea awaz sun kar shaka andar aya or apnay hatho ko band kar bola,

Hukam jat sahab,

Bila: pistol ko jaib may dal kar,inka hisab laga day,

Shaka: dono laasho ko dekh kar,

Jo hukam jat sahab or wo jagu?

Saif: uski b, wo bayjan ab kiss kam ka?

Waisy bai usko b us ladkay nay pata nahi kya mara kay salay ki chaati he toot gai.

Bila: hmmm, aj pehli bar bilay ko kissy nay soch may dala hi saif,

Bai kuch to bat hi, akhir kon hi wo safaid posh!

Hahahah!

Acha, haahahah!

Maza ai ga is bar us safaid posh ka shikar karnay may,
sunlay!
Safaiid poosh!

****

Dusri taraf waha say kuch he dure aik choty see kuttiya may:

Anum: ah!, umm, apni ankho ko ahista ahista kholti hui,

Uski un ankho may wo he scene chalra tha,

Usnay jaisy taisy apnay hath khol kar wo derwaza khola tha,

Uski nazer jab samnay gai thi to usay zameen par khun or aik admi gira hua or aik saya bilkul uskay samnay khada hua dekha tha,

Wo agay badnay he wali thi kay aikdum say uski sari energy khatam hogti chali gai thi or phir,

Huh!, ah, ye mai?

Wo us ajeeb see jaga par jag kar phir say dar chuki thi,

Awaz: oh to app jag gai,

Anum: apni nazer us awaz ki taraf karti hui, tt tum?
mai kaha hun.
kon laya mujay.
Awaz: aray relax karayn,

App safe hai.

Anum: pp per mai yaha kaisy aii,

Awaz: app mujay khait may mili thi or apkay hatho say blood nikel raha tha,

So apki halat dekh kar mai apko yaha lay aii,

Yea hamari jhonpdi hi khait may,

Anum: oh, th thanks so much,

Usnay apna hath apnay chehray kay samnay ahista say kia, usko dekha aik moti see patti jo kafi safai say bandhi gai thi or us say aik ajeeb see smell ari thi,

Ye, kya smell hi, apnay kya lagaya hi mujay?

Awaz: yea lape ki smell hogi apki chote gheri nahi thi to mainay yea lagadi thi,
jadi butio ka lape hi, kuch nahi hoga apko.
Anum: oh, uthtay huay, time kafi ho chuka hi, mujay jana hoga,

Pata nahi wo log mujay dhoond nah rahay ho.

Awaz: oh, kya app chalnay ki halat may ho?

Anum: *smile!* han, mujay kuch nahi hua,

App kab say lai ho mujay yaha?

Awaz: bus aik ghanta hua hoga,

Anum: hmmm, kafi choti see jhonpdi hi, to app to padi likhi lagti ho, kya nam hi apka?

Awaz: oho, mai bhool he gai batana, mai sitara hun. Mainay college say intermediate kia hua hi.

Anum: wow, very good. Hmmm,

Sitara: kya soch rahi ho app?

Anum: kya apnay meray aas pas kissy ko b nahi dekha?

Sitara: Kissko?

Anum: wo aik, ummm,

Sitara: apkay pas to koi bb nahi tha,

Kehtay huay sitara thori ghabrai see dikh rahi thi.

Anum: yea bat note kar kay,

App ghabra kiu rahi ho?

Kya bat hi.

Sitara: geee, nahi, kuch b nahi, wo

App!

Anum: aik ajeeb sa shak paida ho chuka tha uskay dil may wo us chadpai say uthi or sitara kay kafi pass aagi,

Tum kuch b jhut to nahi bolri mujsay?
paka?
Ha!

Sitara: nnn, nahiii, mai nahi bolri,

Sitara ki sansay taiz or chehray par pasina aah chuka tha,

Anum: hmmm, kafi garmi hi nah!

Sitara: geee, gee shaid,

Anum: chalo mujay yea batao kay yaha say wo chavel kay khait kitni dure hi?

Sitara: ziada nahi pp, per app akayli kaysy jai gi?

Mera matlab hi ma ichor ati hun apko.

Anum: acha, mujay chornay ao gi or phir mai apko chornay aau gi, is he terha time guzarta jai ga,

Sitara: um, gg!

Anum: meri help karnay kay lia thanks!

Sitara: dehan say jaiya ga please,

Anum: hum,
yea samnay say mai road par nikel jau gi nah?
sitara: gg, bilkul!
anum: thanks sitara,
Sitara ko usnay aik dafa phir say gore say dekha or bahir nikel gai,

Abi b bahir suraj ki tapish or Roshni puri terha say mojood thi,

Anum ahista ahista chaltay huay us khait ko cross kar rahi thi or uskay dimag may chalra tha wohi dhundla sa saya,

Anum: kon tha wo!, usnay jo color pehna tha wo sad wali shirt say milta joolta tha, kahi waha sad to nahi aya tha,

Per wo kaisy ho sakta hi,

Jaisy he anum jhonpdi say thora dure hui,

Sitara nay aik chain ki sans lee,

Voice: bus itnay say he dar gi?

Sitara: samnay ki teraf apni ankho ko uthati hui,

Uskay samnay phir say wo handsome seepersonality aah chuki thi,

Aah, apko kya pata kitna mushkil tha unko handle karna,

Sad: mujsay ziada kon janta hi is bat ko, *smile!*, waisy per tumnay to aram say kar lia,

Sitara: huh, aram say?

Sad: han, or nahi to kya,

Sitara: *blushes!*, chore he dayn, ab apko b gher jana chahia agger wo apsay pehlay gher pohnch gi to?

Halima: dusri teraf ki side say nikal kar ati hui, kya koi shortcut nahi hi us road tak?

Sitara: apni chehray ki lali ko choopati hui, gee, wo app log dusri teraf say ja saktay hi per!

Halima: per kya?

Sitara: waha b khatra ho sakta hi,

Halima: akhir kya chal raha hi yaha per.

Tum log kiu kuch kartay nahi ho?

Sad: akhir kissnay phelaya hua hi yea dar?

Kisska ilaka hi yea.

Sitara: apnay sar ko jhukati hui, yea ilaka bilal jat or uskay bai saif jat ka hi,

Wo dono hamaray ilakay kay pichly zamidar,

Imran jat kay betay hai,

Dono bohot he buray hai,

Kissy ko b nahi chortay jo b unkay rastay may ata hi wo bina sochay usko mar dety hi.

Halima: or koi b iskay baray may kuch b nahi karta?
kitni ajeeb bat hi yar!
Akhir yea kya jungle raj khola hua hi in logo nay,

Sitara: app log Roshni rehtay he jai nahi to agger wo log apko dhoond rahay hi to yea kafi mushkil ho jai ga.

Dono sad or halima nay sitara ki bat ko samaj kar us say rasta poocha,

Sitara: app log is teraf say seedha jana or dehan say,

Jab apko bajray kay poday nazar ana shuru huay to right turn kar kay bus chaltay jana or road ah jai ga jaha per apko maim illy thi,

Halima: great, to chalayn?

Sad: hmm, apki sari help ka bohot ziada thanks sitara g,

Sitara: yea sun kar man he man shermai, geee, app dehan rakhna,

Halima: sad ka hath pakad kar, iski dressing b karni hi,

Jaldi chalo, dekho yea abi b halka halka bleed kar raha hi,

Sad: hmmm, chalo,

Boltay he dono taizy say kkhaito may bani hui aik pagdandi par chaltay chalay gay,

Halima agay chalri thi or sad bilkul uskay Pichay kiu kay yea aik patli see pagdandi thi,

Sitara unko jatay huay dekh rahi thi,

Usko wo he yadd ara tha jab sad anum ko utha kar bahir aya tha or usnay kiss style say sitara ka wo doopata utara tha,
us doopatay ko kuss kay pakad kar sitara apni ankho may sad ko kaid kar rahi thi,
najanay phir milna hoga b nahi!
Wo in he khayalo may goom thi kay usnay dekha kay wo dono he kafi dure chalay gay thay,

Tab he,

Voice: oy taru tu yaha par khari hui kya kar rahi hi?

Sitara: chonk kar mudi or uskay samnay thi uski pyari bhaabi,

Bhaabi app yaha?

Bhaabi: hmmm, ami nay bhayja hi tujay dekhnay kay lia, waisy tu yaha kya kar rahi hi dekh sham dhal rahi hi gher chal,

Sitara: gee, chalay,
*smiles!*
Bhaabi: sitara kay yea badlay taver dekh kar thori to soch may pad chuki thi,

Per usko kuch kahay baygare wo usko lay kar chal padi.

*****

Halima or sad dono abi kuch he dure ai thay kay halima ko wo sara kuch aikdum say yad aya, wo chaltay chaltay ahista hoti gi.

Sad jo uskay Pichay chal raha tha usko ahista hoty dekh kar bola,

Sad: kya hua?

Halima: wo,

Sad: hmmm, wo kya?

Halima: uski teraf mud kar, yar akhir tum kon ho or kya ho?

Sad: yea sawal sun kar, kiu kya lagta hi tumay,

Mai aik aam insan he hun. Meri aik naak do ankhay, do he kan hi,

Alien to mai kahi say b nahi dekhta,

Halima: hahaha, saaad, boltay he halima sad kay galay aah kar lag chuki thi.

Sad: uskay is hamlay say aikdum khamosh ho chuka tha,
or uski us masoom see image ko mehsoos kar raha tha,
is time usko shaid iski sakht zaruret thi.
halima: thank God tumay kuch b nahi hua.
oh, sad!
mai bohot dar gai thi,
Khaito kay bicho bich dono aik dusray ki un baho may thay,

Suraj b sherma kar ahista ahista Pichay hota ja raha tha,

Sad: tum tik to ho,

Halima: mujay kuch ho sakta hi jab tum ho waha?

Sad: halima, please aisa mat kaha karo,

Halima: kiu nah kahu,

Kya tum nahi ho sad?

Sad: hun, per mai itna important nahi hun,

Tum mujay kuch ziada he importance day rahi ho,

Halima: acha g, to kya ho tum aj batado?

Sad: batau ga bohot jald, abi hamay chalna chahia kahi wo phir kissy mislay may nah phas jai,

Halima: yea sun kar aik ajeeb say moo kay sath sad say dure hui,

Har dafa jab b mainay tumay samajnay ki koshish ki hi tum or ziada uljha detay ho nujay sad,

Sad: halima, it is,

Halima: come lets go,
apnay kharab mood kay sath,
Usnay phir say chalna shuru kar dia,

Chaltay chaltay dono may aik ajeeb see khamoshi he rahi,

Dusri taraf anum b road par pohnch chuki thi,

Is bar usnay apnay charo teraf nazer rakhi hui thi, wo chaltay chaltay shujah’s hut ki teraf he ja rahi thi or uskay dimag may bar bar chalra tha aik repeat telecast ki terha wo sara scene.

Anum: yea kaisy ho sakta hi, kya wo sad he tha ya koi or?

Uff mai pagal ho jau gi paka,

Agger wo sad tha to wo mujay bich rastay may un khaito may thori choray ga,

Kya aisa ho sakta hi?

Kahi, um, kahi wo ladki sitara to kuch jhut nahi bolri thi?

Kya wo sab janti hi.
ufff!
Mujay kuch b samaj kiu nahi ara,

Agger wo sad tha to ab to usko confront karna he hoga,

Per mai is bat ka pata kaisy lagau!

Wo abi yea soch he rahi thi kay khaito may uski teraf atay huay usko sai nazer ai,
*swish swish!*
ki awaz kay sath wo kareeb atay ja rahay thay,
anum: kahi yea wo to nahiii!
oh, no,
Wo jaldi say chalnay lagi,
awaz or sai kafi kareeb atay ja rahay thay,
dono teraf khait he khait thay,

Anum: oh, nooo, not them again, pleaseee, mujay kuch b kar kay gher pohnchna hoga.

Yes, babe we can do this,

Wo taiz hui thi kay

Voice: hay anuuum!

Anum: huh!, yea awaz to,

Wo mudi to usnay gore say dekha dhalti sham may wo do sai or koi nahi balkay halima or sad thay,

Sad ko halima kay sath dekh kara num apni wo sari planning bhool kar unki taraf aii,

Anum: tum dono kya gher nahi gay?

Halima: tum b to nahi gai, tum yaha kya kar rahi ho?

Or tumnay to change b nahi kia?

Kya tum aisay he phir rahi thi.

Anum: wo mai!

Wo abi koi jawab soch he rahi thi kay uski nazer sad kay bheegay huay bazu par gaya jismay say ab ki bar blood drops ki suret may nikel raha tha,

Anum: saaaad! Kkk khun, yea kk kya hua hi.

Halima: anum ka yea reaction dekh kar sad ki teraf lapki or is bar yea paka tha kay sad ka wo prosthetic arm or uskay stitches stretch ho chukay thay,

Anum: tum uskay sath ho or tumay pata b nahi kay uskay bazu say khun nikal raha hi,
halima: wo mujay!
anum: just stop it ok!
Anum nay jaldi say apnay left kalai may lagi hui patti khinch kay utari or sad ki shirt ka bazu upper kar kay usnay wo patti kass kay sad kay stitches per bandhi,

Is time agger usko koi dekhta to bilkul aik diwani ladki he samajta,

Halima: anum ko aisy dekh kar andar he andar kafi toot rahi thi,

Usnay sad ki care nahi ki yea bohot he bada shock tha uski jaisy ladki kay lia jisko aik dost to mila per wo us dost ki care b nahi kar saki thi,

Uska anjam tha wo lal khun jo sad ki body say ahista ahista nikal raha tha,

Aik aik katra dono anum or halima kay lia bohot he ziada bhari sabit ho raha tha,

Is bar tino aik taizy kay sath shujah’s hut tak pohnchay,

Anum: dehan say sad, please bus hum aagay hai.

Sad: anum ko aisy dekh kar man he man hairan or tense dono he hora tha,

Hairan uski is state ko dekh kar or tense, kiu kay ab anum ki us kalai say khun ki aik patli see dhar nikelna shuru hogi thi,

Jaisy taisy tino andar ai or anum foran say bhag kar apni bag may rakhi hui first aid kit lay aii,

Halima: jo sad kay pass khadi thi dil he dil may khud ko koss rahi thi,

Sad: hay kya hua!

Halima: apna sar utha kar, tt *snif!* tum bohot buray ho,

Sad: don’t cry halima,

Mujay kuch b nahi hua see?

Tumharay samnay to hun.

Halima: ho to pp,

Anum: taizy say dono kay bich may ah kar, hato yaha say, bohot ho gaya, usnay halima ko pichy hataya or sad ka bazu apnay hatho may lay kara num nay us dheely patti ko utara or sad ki un stretched stitches ki treatment karnay lagi,

Anum: yea bleeding kiu start hui?

Halima: aikdum say bich may bol padi,

Wo hum phir rahay thay to mera pao mud gaya usko sambhalnay kay lia sad nay jab mujay spakda to shaid tab, he!

Anum: hud hogi hi halima,

Tum dehan b to rak sakti thi nah?

Halima: anum tumhara hath?

Khun nikal raha hi,
yea kya hua?
Anum: apnay hath ko dekh kar, mujay farak nahi padta ab tum jao mai sad ka dehan rak lun gi.

Halima: mai kiu jau?

Sad: app dono please mat laday, or apko kya hua?

Apkay left hath par?

Anum: chonk kar, tumay kaysy pata kay yea mera left hath hi jismay say khun nikal raha hi?

Sad: dil may, (mar gaya bachuuu!),

Anum: bolo sad tumay kaysy pata?

Sad: wo, apnay abi khud he to bataya tha jab hum andar aray thay kay,

Anum: mainay? Per mainay kab bataya?

Sad: yea choray app yea batai kay apko kaha say chote lagi?

Anum: wo bus lag gi, chalo tum room may ao or rest karo utho ao,

Halima: anum or sad ko jatay huay dekh rahi thi bus,

Wo mudi or taizy say staircase ko charti hui upper ki teraf chali gai,

Anum sad ka hath pakad kar usko dehan say room may laii,

Or derwaza band kar kay,

Usnay usko bed per bethaya,

Tum rest karo mai is hath ka kuch karti hun.

Sad: kuch soch kar, kk kya mai help karu??

Anum: yea suntay he aikdum say ruk gai, kya kaha tumnay?

Sad: mai help karu apki?

Anum: aj pehli bar, us ko feel hua! *dadum!* uski dherkan wo b saf saf uskay un kano may,

Wo gore say sad ko dekh rahi thi or yad kar rahi thi wo dhundla sa image,
tum kar chukay ho help!
Usko ab kafi aik jaisa lag raha tha wo saya sad kay jaisa,

Sad: anum ki us nazer ko feel kartay huay,
kk kya?
App tik to ho?

Anum: it was you,
mai janti hun sad.
Sad: kya?

Anum: yes, mujay pata hi, wo tum he thay,

Sad: yea app kya bol rahi ho?

Anum: mujay pagal nahi banao sad batao us jaga par tum he thay nah jisnay mujay bachaya,

Sad: nnn, pata nahi kya bol rahi ho app.

Mujay, um, mujay nahi pata kuch b,

Anum: mai tumsay bulva kar rahu gi such, meri feeling itni galat nahi ho sakti.
dekh laina!
Wo tum he thay,
i know.
Kehtay he anum nay apni kit pakdi or washroom may aik gheri smile kay sath Janay lagi,

Waisy agger wo tum nahi thay to b thanks,

Jatay jatay anum sad ko aik electric shock day chuki thi.

Sad: she is really sharp dam. Ab mai kya karu ga!

Ding: the system is rebooted successfully!

MONA: hay sweet baby,

Sad: huh!, MONA?

MONA: wait wait abi ruko, pehlay kam ki bat ok?

Sad: ye kya,

MONA: shush baby!

Ding: your mission save anum is successfully completed,

Ding: you have received 80 points, total amount of accumulated points is 117.

You have received 25 EXPs.

Tring tum!

Ding: the system has reached level-2.

Ding: the skill store is unlocked,

Ding: you have received the (DARKIT blessing)

MONA: congratulations baby, finally you have upgraded me,

Sad: MONA tum tik hona?

MONA: tik? Yar I am wonderful,

Kiu tumay kya laga?

Sad: nahi wo tum kafi!

MONA: hmmm, kafi khul kay bat kar rahi hun? Yea he nah.

Sad: hmmm, han.

MONA: ok to har upgrade kay sath meray andar b kuch changes ai gay,

Afterall mai grow kar rahi hun.

Per no tension sab kuch under control hi,

Wait zara let me get a recap,

Sad: kuch b samaj nahi sak raha tha, pehlay halima, phir anum, or ab yea updated MONA,

MONA: hmmm, kafi kuch kia hi tumnay meri absence may, great,

System stable hi to aisa kartay hai kay lets talk about it after your nap.
abi you should take some rest.
Sad: whaa!,

Anum: saad, change karlo or rest then,

Wo apnay baalon ko towel say lapait kar bathroom say nikli,

Is time uski bheegi hui Khushbu puray kamray may phel chuki thi,
shaid abi anum nay aik quick sa shower lay lia tha,
Anum: ut jao, kya hua? Dard ziada hi kya?

Sad: siraf anum ki us fragrance ko feel kar raha tha,

MONA: you know, I think you should hold her right away!

*smiles!*

Sad: shush MONA,

MONA: no now you shush! Or suno,

Aisay Emperor bano gay kya?

Come on be a man or hold her,

Sad: but i!

MONA: uff!

Khud ko kab upgrade karna hi baby?

Its high time to proceed.

Sad: ab yea MONA ki batay kafi straight forward hit kar rahi thi usko.
MONA: i am the old one with a new style!, *smiles!*
Wo abi soch he raha tha kay!

*thak thak thik!*

Anum: wait mai dekhti hun.

MONA: stay alarmed, something is wrong.

Sad: whaa?

MONA: yeah!

Jaisy he anum nay derwaza khola to,

To be continued….
Awesome update Had bhai

Ab story main maja aaya
Anum ko sayad pata hai ki Sad dekh sakta hai or use bachaane baala bhi Sad hi hai
Lagta hai anum dhere dhere sad ki dewaani hoti ja rhe hai
 

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Awesome update Had bhai

Ab story main maja aaya
Anum ko sayad pata hai ki Sad dekh sakta hai or use bachaane baala bhi Sad hi hai
Lagta hai anum dhere dhere sad ki dewaani hoti ja rhe hai
Apko kaha to tha yea koi typical story nhi hogi. It's different kiu Kay Mai khud b aik reader hun.
 
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