Aryan s.
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Superb story… waiting for the new update
Thank you so muchGood bro keep it up
Thank you for the reviewSbach bolu me jab bhi apki likhi khani ka update padhati hu I am visualisating the hole story....ek ek kirdaar ka reaction jitna karauri h sirf itna hi likhna...I already reded your all stories and you know it ..me bas ye sochti hu
ye Banda likh kese leta h itna....mujha sach me bhot Kam stories h jinke update ka wait hota h and your are definitely one of them ....and ha waiting for your next update...
fir se election wagara ke chakkar me mat padna ki updates ruk jaye...
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noiceनहीं, पर अक्सर कहानियों में स्टोर रूम या रिकॉर्ड रूम में लोग या आत्माएं फंस जाती हैं।
हां रिकॉर्ड रूम का एक एक्सपीरियंस है मेरा।
they said hum apne dost ka khayal rakh lengeअबे बिल तो भर देता कम से कम
कैसा खडूस बॉस है ये, चिंदी टाइप![]()
Thank you so much for this wonderful review bhaiSuperb update man. Just too goodekansh raghuvanshi ki fat gai akshita ki halat dekh kar, jo ki laajmi bhi hai. Waqt or mahol chahe jo bhi ho, lekin kabhi usne akshita ko chaha tha. Sayad ab bhi man se use chahta ho. Dusri taraf ab use lagne laga haibki wahi akshita ki is halat ka jimmedaar hai. Swara, rohan or baaki staaf members ko bhi yahi lagta hai ki aisa hi hai. Ekansh hospital me usko dekhne gaya, uska man vichlit tha , use khud yahi lag raha hai ki agar wo itna kaam us se na karata to aisa nahi hota, or uski bimari ka bhi use pata nahi tha?? Ye kaisi mohabbat thi bhai? Jo apne mehboob ke baare me itni badi baat use pata nahi thi?
Aage kya hoga ye jaanne ke liye utsuk hai sarkaar
Mind blowing update Aadi bhau
Mera bhi ye sayad biggest review hai aadi bhaiyaAise update ke liye to banta hai
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Thank you so much brotherAwesome update bro
Thank you so muchNice and superb update....