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Naik

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Khuli band aankhon se emma ne karvat li aur uske hath bed ki dusri side par laga jaha aaj raat bhar usko ruthven mahsus ho raha tha vaha abhi khali jagah mahsus hue aur vo hadbada kar uth gaye

Baal bhikhre hue the, aankhon me halki halki nind thi jo raat ko theek se na so pane ki vajah se thi aur subah ki chamak chehre par nikhar la rahi thi

Agar es waqt koe bhi use dekh leta to apna dil haar bathata lekin yaha koe tha nahi

Jab ruthven side me nahi dikha to vo bhagte hue hall me aaye lekin use vaha bhi koe nahi dikha aur fir pura ghar dund dala lekin ruthven ka koe ata pata nahi tha

Jab vapas hall me aaye to use gate khula dikhaye diya to turant bahar ki taraf gaye lekin vaha bhi koe nahi tha

Ab uska dil bathne laga ki kahi ruthven vaha se chala to nahi gaya hai?

Kya jarurat thi use vo sab bolne ki? Jitna samay mila tha usko hi jee leti to kya ho jata? Kya vo sach me yaha se chala gaya hai? Kya ab kabhi ruthven vapas aayega?

Yehi sab sochte sochte uski aankhen bhar aaye aur vo sofe par bath kar pani bahane lagi

Hath abhi bhi uske chehre par hi tha aur dil bahut tej tej dhadak raha tha.

Kya kare kya na kare yeh bhi vo theek se nahi soch pa rahi thi. Aisa kya tha ruthven me jo vo etne kam waqt me bhi kisi ko apna bana leta tha?

Kitna hi samay ruthven aur rachel ne sath bitaya hoga? Aur kitna samay ruthven aur emma ne?

Fir bhi jo haal rachel ka tha bilkul vaisa hi emma ka bhi ho gaya tha

Bahut der tak vo vahi bathi rahi aur gate ko tadti rahi ki kya pata ruthven abhi us gate se ander aa jaye aur use gale se laga le lekin jo ja chuka tha vo vapas kaise aata?

Vahi ruthven ek bus me window seat par batha bahar ka najara dekhta hua aage badh raha tha

Humesha ki tarah koe emotions ya expression nahi the use chehre par. Ek dam sapaat chehra liya vo aage badh raha tha

Jab insaan ka dil aur dimag alag alag jagah kaam kar raha hota hai aur vo dimag ke sath aage badhta hai to bhi uske safal hone ke chances bahut kam hi hote hai. Ek na ek jagah to vo harta hi hai

Abhi tak sab kuch soch samjh kar kar raha tha ruthven jisme dil ka to koe mahtav hi nahi tha

Jo bhi tha vo sab fully planned tha aur dimag ki upaj thi lekin pehle rachel aur ab emma dono ne mil kar uske dil me chingari vapas laga di thi jo uske liye bilkul acha nahi tha

Jab se use hosh aaya tha tab se aaj tak abhi ka pal hi aisa tha jab ruthven ne na apne aas pass ko janane ki kosis ki na koe khatra aane par kaise react karega kya karega vo sochne ki kosis ki

Vo ghar se nikala jo bus mili usme bath gaya bilkul bhi dimag nahi lagaya usne kisi chhij me

Abhi bhi vo bina soche samjhe bas chala ja raha tha. Usko to yeh bhi nahi pata tha ki vo ja kaha raha hai

Bas uske antar man ne kaha ki jana hai to vo chal diya. Na uske man ne bataya kaha jana hai aur na use samjhne ki kosis ki

Kafi ghanto se vo chale ja raha tha aur tabhi bus ka break laga

Driver ne thakan ki vajah se thodi der rukne ka fasla kiya aur sari savari ek ek karke vaha se niche utarne lagi

15 minute ka break tha to ruthven ne bhi apne sar ko jhatka aur apni cap laga kar niche utar aaya

Thandi thandi hawa jaise hi uske sareer se takraye aankhen apne aap band ho gaye uski aur bahut bahtar mahsus karne laga

Ek minute vaise hi khada raha fir aage badh gaya. Sare yatri ek ek karke utar rahe the aur koe chai ki chuski le raha tha to koe cigarettes se apna kaleja jala raha tha

Vahi ruthven bas tahal raha tha. Bina dimag me koe khayal liye sirf tahal raha tha. Vo es waqt kuch sochna hi nahi chahta tha lekin ye jarur decide kar liya tha usne ki ab es khel me kisi aur ko saamil nahi karega

Chahe kitni bhi emergency kyu na aajaye vo ladega akele hi. Sayad dukh hua tha use emma ko lekar****

Doctor- lisa tumhra aaj kal dhayan kaha rahta hai? Etni galtiya? Aur vo bhi etni chhoti chhotiya?

Lisa- sorry sir. Vo main rest nahi kar pa rahi theek se esliye concentration me problem aa rahi hai

Doctor- main karau tumhe aaj ache se rest? Ek gandi muskaan laye bola

Lisa- aapko maine kabhi mana kiya hai kya?

Doctor- mana karna bhi mat yehi acha rahega tumhre liye

Lisa- janti hu esliye hi nahi karti mana

Doctor- tumhra sareer etna kaatil hai na ki main tujh par jada der naraaj nahi ho pata nahi to etni galtiya kisi ki sahan nahi karta main aur vo bhi etne kutil waqt par

Lisa- im sorry main aage se dhayan rakhungi

Doctor- aaj raat ko tumhri sari pareshaniya khatam kar dunga fir tumhra dimag tej chalne lag jayega vapas

Lisa- main tayar hu

Doctor- lekin us se pehle humare subject ke stats dekh kar aao aur sath me uski health ko bhi check karo. Ek percent bhi kahi kami nahi rahni chahiye lisa

Lisa- es baar hum kamyaab jarur honge doctor

Doctor- vo to hona hi hai lekin hume over confident nahi hona. Ruthven ke waqt jo galtiya hue vo dobara na dhoraye jaye aisi umeed karta hu main tumse

Lisa- main shasha nahi hu doctor. Main kisi ke pyaar me nahi padhungi

Doctor- acha to ye baat hai. Tumhe shasha se jalan ho rahi hai? Maine us din jada tareef kar di thi kya uski?

Lisa- nahi aisi to kuch baat nahi hai

Doctor- shasha ne kabhi mera bistar garam nahi kiya lekin tune kiya hai eska matlab ye hua tum jada kareeb ho mere. Ab jaldi se kaam khatam karo aaj raat ko alag dunia me pahucha dunga main tumhe

Lisa- jee doc. Aur lisa vaha se chali jati hai aur doctor apne kaam par lag jata hai****

Chief- any information?

Agent1 - he is a very difficult person sir

Chief- tum logo ko saram nahi aati ye bolte hue? Hum dunia ki sabse best spy agency hai aur fir bhi hum ek criminal ko nahi dund pa rahe?

Agent1- sir if you dont mind usne etne bade crimes bhi nahi kiye jo etni special attention mili hai. Us se bade bade terrorist humare radar par hai fir bhi unpar koe karvaye nahi ki ja rahi

Chief- shut up and do you work

Maya- us par kyu chhila rahe ho? Jaise hi agent vaha se gaya maya boli

Maya- kisi ek person par etni attention doge to sawal to uthenge hi na?

Chief- jis chhij ke bare me pata na ho uske bare me bolna nahi chahiye maya

Maya- aur tumhe kisne kaha ki mujhe kuch pata nahi hai?
Apni kamar par hath rakhte hue aankh roll karte hue maya boli

Chief- what do you mean?

Maya- apne colleagues ke sare dirty secrets pata hona chahiye aur humare business me to ye bahut important hai

Chief- maya had se jada jankari rakhna sehat ke liye acha nahi hota

Maya- haha mujhe nahi dara paoge tum.

Chief- abhi kosis bhi nahi ki hai maine. Agar kisi din aisa karne ki socha to musibat ho jayegi

Maya- main us din ka intezaar karungi****

Bus vapas chal padi aur apni raftaar pakad li. Jaisa pehle ruthven batha tha abhi us se thoda sa satarak ho gaya tha

Uske anatar man ne usko track par lana suru kar diya gaya tha aur ab vo jo soch kar chala tha uspar bhi sawal khade karne lag gaya tha

Usko sahi galat ka andaja ho gaya tha aur abhi jo kar raha tha usme sirf aur sirf galtiya najar aa rahi thi

Lekin vo kisi tarah apne sub conscious mind ko control kar raha tha aur apne soch ke mutabit chal raha tha

Apni khud ki jung me ek aur chhij add ho gaye the ruthven ke life me aur vo us se bhi ladte hue aakhir kaar pahuch gaya

LONDON

jaha uske sare dusman mojud the. Pata nahi kuch socha usne ya fir aise hi tesh me aakar ye kadam utha liya lekin kisi bhi angel se ye kadam sahi nahi lag raha tha

Yaha tak ki usko khud bhi negative feeling hi aa rahi thi lekin fir bhi vo yaha pahuch hi gaya

Ab usko koe planning ki jarurat nahi thi. Sidhe apne ek ek dusman ko dundna tha aur unke sath kya karna tha ye usne abhi tak decide nahi kiya tha

Bus stand se utara aur camera se bachte hue paidal hi chalne laga

US me tha to vaha kisi ko jada ek dusre se matlab to rahta nahi hai esliye yaha vaha jane me jada dikkat ka samna nahi hua aur vo khud bhi bahut chhokana tha

Camera se kaise bachna hai, konse raste par jana hai aur kab jana hai kab rukna hai sab uske dimag me bahut ache se chal raha tha

“NO RUTHVEN…. PLEASE DON’T DO THIS….PLEASE” ruthven se thodi door ek sniper lagaye bathi ladki apne aap se hi boli

Tow bhai sahab kaha jaa rehe uneh khud bhi pata bas bus pakad lia or chal diye
Baherhal doctor fir aaj Raat raas Leela machayega apni assistant ke saath sahi h
Maya ko bhi bahot kuch pata h
Baherhal dekhte yeh ladki Jo Ruthven per Nishana lagaye baithi h uska Nishana nishane per lagta ha ya nahi
Badhiya shaandar update bhai
 
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Naik

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Ek bahut purani building ke niche aakar ruthven ke pair ruke. Vo building etni jada old aur rusty thi ki america jaise desh me koe uske aas pass bhi jana pasand na kare unless vo drug addict ho

Kyuki vaha par aisi jagah par sirf drug addict hi milte the. Sehar ke bicho bich khadi es building par abhi tak sarkaar ne kyu dhayan nahi diya? Ye bada sawal tha lekin eska jawab pane ke liye to ruthven yaha aaya nahi tha

Ruthven ne apne charo taraf dekha aur sab kuch analysis karne laga. Vaha thodi hi door par rk flyover tha jiske niche koe badi nadi bah rahi thi aur us flyover ke dono taraf skyscraper bane hue the

Matlab agar yaha fasa to vo easily kisi bhi building me ja kar chhup sakta tha ya bach kar nikal sakta tha

To bahar se nikalne ka to plan ready tha aur vo easy bhi tha lekin es building ke ander kya mojud tha eska andaja use nahi tha

Aur uska dimag baar baar chhikh chhikh kar bol raha tha use ki abhi vo ander jane ke liye tayar nahi hai apne kadam vapas khech le lekin vo aaj vapas jane ke mood me nahi tha

Use pata tha ki vo bewakufi karne ja raha hai lekin jab dil aur dimag me ladae chalti hai to insaan khud chudta hi hai aur vohi ruthven ke sath hone wala tha

Shaam dhal aaye thi aur charo taraf alag alag light jagmagane lag gaye thi

Dimag ke lakh samjhane par bhi ruthven ke samjh me nahi aaya aur uske kadam ander ki taraf badhne lage

Use sense ho raha tha bahut kuch vaha par aur kitne bade khatre me vo ja raha hai eska bhi usko bahut jaldi andaja ho gaya tha kyuki usko vaha alag alag tarike ke log hone ki feelings aa gaye thi

Bahut tarah ke chemicals uske naak me ghum chuke the aur uski aankhon ke samne uska bachpan wala chehra flash ki tarah ghum kar nikal gaya

Bahut tej jhatke se usne apne sar ko hilaya aur fir vapas samne concentration karne laga

Vo siddiyo se upar ja raha tha bina koe aawaz kiye sath me kaha kya hai sab apne dimag me bathata ja raha tha

Bahar se jitni gandi aur purani ye building dikh rahi thi ander se bilkul uske opposite thi. Agar first floor ko chhod diya jaye to ye Ek dam saaf high tec building bilkul vaisi jaise ek research center ko honi chahiye dikh rahi thi

Ye sab to ruthven samjh gaya tha lekin ek chhij jo uske dimag me ghum rahi thi ki bahar koe guard kyu nahi tha?

Use koe camera bhi nahi dikha tha bahar aur na koe advance protection guard. Jo bahar se dikh raha tha vaisa ander kuch nahi tha fir bhi esko guard kyu nahi kar rakha?

Kya es building me aisa kaam ho raha hai jisko protection ki jarurat nahi hai ya fir koe aur vajah hai?

Bas ek yehi chhij thi jo ruthven abhi tak samjh nahi paya tha. Aur ese doubt ke chalte vo extra cautious ho gaya tha

Apne defence ko etna majbut karke chal raha tha ruthven ki agar koe bijli ki gati se bhi uske pass aayega to bhi apne defence ke karan kuch seconds jarur mil jayegi usko sambhalne ke liye

Aise hi chalte chalte vo third floor par pahuch gaya. Ek dhundli memory uski aankhon ke samne flash hue aur vo siddiyo ko chhod kar kamro ki taraf badh gaya

Ab tak ke mahool se vo kuch chhije samjh gaya tha. Building automation par chal rahi hai, bahut sare kamre bane hue hai jo high tech se secure hai, light aur temperature automatic hai aur sayad puri building sound proof hai

Ek kamre ke samne pahuch kar vo use kholne ki kosis karne laga lekin jor jabardasti karte hi bahut tej alarm bajne laga

Room bilkul closed tha kahi se bhi koe jagah nahi thi jisme vo ander kya hai vo dekh sake

Alarm bajte hi vo aur jada satark ho gaya aur stairs ke pass pahuch gaya jaha se uske pass jane ke char raste khul gaye upar niche room ki taraf aur khidki tood kar bahar khudne ka

Abhi bhi alarm tej baj rahi thi aur use ab tej tej kadmo ki aawaz bhi sunane de rahi thi jo uski taraf hi aa rahi thi

Usne turant hathiyaar ki khoj suru ki lekin vaha fire cylinder ke alava aur kuch nahi dikha to usne vohi tod liya. Ab tak vaha bahut sare log us floor par aa chuke the jinke hatho me automatic refiles thi

Use samjhte der nahi lagi ki vo unse abhi nahi lad sakta aur upar ki taraf bhaga to puri gang bhi uske piche bhag li

Agar gun ki jagah aur kuch hota to ruthven bina soche samjhte ab tak sabke sar faad chuka hota lekin etni sari guns aur vo bhi closed area me vo samna nahi kar sakta tha aur ye vo jaan gaya tha

Lekin upar jakar use ek aur jhatka laga jab do chehre uske samne aaye

Ek chehre ko dekh kar to vo samjh gaya ki ese vo janta hai. Bahut buddha admi tha chehre par jhuriya pad chuki thi aur baal safeed ho chuke the. Chehre par kaminapan tapak raha tha

Jitna vo use ghur kar dekh raha tha utna bhi vo chehra bhi use dekh raha tha. Shocked expression bhi dono side me mojud the

Samne wala koe aur nahi doctor hi tha aur uske sath thi lisa

“Ruthven… mera bacha” bas etna hi bola doctor ki ruthven ke dimag ne jhatka khaya aur vo uski taraf badhne laga. Doctor ke face par es waqt dar ka namonisaan bhi nahi tha balki ek chamak thi

Vahi lisa ki halat aisi thi ki dar ke mare uski chut se pani risne lag gaya tha. Vo ruthven se kabhi mili to nahi thi lekin jitna suna aur padha tha uske bare me uske pair kapne lag gaye the

Doctor- mujhe pata tha. Pata tha mujhe. Lisa maine kaha tha na ruthven meri ab tak ki sabse behtareen invention hai vo aise mar nahi sakta lekin kisi ne meri baato par yakeen nahi kiya. Hahahahaha. Main jeet gaya main jeet gaya

Doctor ko aise behave karte dekh ruthven ne to koe expression nahi diye lekin lisa ki halaat aur kharab hone lag gaye

Ab tak sare guards bhi vaha pahuch chuke the aur unhone ruthven par banduke taan di thi

Doctor- khabardar jo mere bache par kisi ne hathiyaar uthaye to. Dafa ho jao yaha se nahi to kacha chaba dalunga ek ek ko
Doctor guraya aur guards vaha se bhag liye

Ruthven- you did this to me?

Doctor- ohh. Matlab door se bhi mera subject meri baat maan gaya?

Ruthven ne aankh badi karke matlab samjhne ki kosis ki

Doctor- tumhe sab samjh me aa jayega. Main hu na tumhre liye tumhre pass? Sab samjha dunga

Lisa- he came to kill you
Lisa ne jaise ruthven ki man ki baat pad li thi. Vo shasha jitni intelligent to nahi thi lekin apni field me uski pakad bahut achi thi. Etne samay se doctor ke sath rah kar vo sare subjects ke behaviour analysis bhi karti thi to vo samjh gaye ki ruthven yaha kya karne aaya hai

Doctor- ye mera bacha hai mujhe kabhi hurt nahi kar sakta. Maine hi to esko kichad se utha kar naye jindagi di thi. Etna capable kiya tha ki aaj ye apne pahchan ke liye apne hak ke liye dunia se lad sake. Hai na mera bacha??

Ruthven ke dimag me uthap puthal machni suru ho gaye thi doctor ki baate sunte sunte. Aaj tak aisa uske sath kabhi nahi hua tha. Humesha focused rahne wala ruthven bahut buri tarah divert ho raha tha aur apne aapko kabu me karne ke liye bahut kosis kar raha tha lekin safal ho nahi pa raha tha bechara

Doctor- kya tumhe yaad nahi ruthven ki kaise maine tumhe us jalim dunia se bachaya tha? Kaise us narak se nikal kar apne yaha laya tha? Apne bache se badh kar tujhe pyaar kiya tha? Yaha tak ki shasha ko bhi nochavar kar diya tha tum par?

Doctor bolte ja raha tha vahi lisa confused khadi bas sab samjhne ki kosis kar rahi thi. Aaj ruthven samne khada tha to doctor kuch aur hi behave kar raha tha aur etne saalo se kuch aur hi tha doctor

Doctor- koe baat nahi beta agar tumhe kuch yaad nahi hai to. Jaisa maine pehle tujhe sare dukh dard se door kiya tha vaise hi ab bhi tumhri madad main hi kar sakta hu. Aao mere pass aao i can help

Ruthven- sttooppp ittt. Stoooppp ittt
Ruthven apna sar pakad kar bahut jor se chilaya aur vahi jamin par bath gaya

Doctor- na my child nahi pareshan nahi hote. Tum apne pitaji ke pass aa chuke ho ab tumhe koe dard nahi de sakta

Ruthven- i said stop it
Ek baar fir ruthven bahut jor se chhilaya. Uski aawaz me etna dard tha ki lisa jaise self centered ladki bhi thodi bhauk ho gaye thi lekin doctor ke chehre par muskaan aa gaye thi

Vo khud ab dheere dheere aage badhne laga

Lisa- nahi doctor he is not stable. Abhi uske pass jana safe nahi hai

Doctor- he is my child lisa vo mujhe hurt nahi karega

Lisa- vo abhi kar sakta hai. At least call…

Doctor- shut up

Aur doctoe bilkul ruthven ke pass pahuch gaya. Jaise hi uska hath ruthven ke sar ko chhuva ek current dod gaya ruthven ke pure sareer me aur vo jhatke se khada hokar doctor ka galla pakad kar use hava me utha diya

Ruthven- i said stoppppp
Aankhon me angare liye ruthven jor se dahada

Lisa jo door khadi thi vo bhi apne aap do kadam piche ho gaye

Doctor- i know you are hurt let me help you. Let pa help you my child

Ruthven ko fir kuch feel hua uske dimag me aur usne doctor ko door fek ke mara jo sidha lisa ke pairo ke pass ja gira

Doctor- release Adam. I want him alive.

Khaste hue doctor khada hua aur lisa ko bola jisne apne hath me liye tab me kuch ungliya mari aur bahut sare kamro me se ek kamra khula aur usme se nikla ek danaav…
Ruthven waha pahoch gaya jaha se insaan ko insaan nahi ek haiwan banaya jaata h
Lagta doctor ki awaz me kuch aisa h jisko sunker Ruthven ka dimag saari soojh bookh khone lagta h
Ab lagta yeh Danaav or Ruthven me Jung hone wali h
Baherhal dekhte h kia hota h
Badhiya zabardast shaandar update
 
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आखिरकार रूठवेन की तकदीर ने उसे वहां पहुंचा ही दिया जहां उसने अपने जीवन के कई साल काटे थे । उस जगह पर जहां उसका बचपन खोया था और जवानी तबाही के रास्ते पर चल पड़ी थी ।
यही कारण था कि इस मिस्ट्रीयस बिल्डिंग पर कदम रखते ही उसे अपने बचपन की कुछ - कुछ यादें धुंधली सी नजर आने लगी थी ।
यह वही जगह थी जहां मानव के शरीर पर एक्सपेरिमेंट किया जाता था । यह वही जगह थी जहां मानव को एक मशीन के रूप मे , एक आत्मघाती हमलावर के रूप मे , एक विनाशक के रूप मे तब्दील कर दिया जाता था ।
Jee bilkul yahi se sab suru hua tha aur esliye hi use ye jagah jani pahchani lagi thi aur kuch dhundla dhunla dikha bhi tha
रूठवेन के याददाश्त के नजरिए से सोचा जाए तो यह अच्छा शगुन हो सकता है । शायद उसे अपने ' गजनी ' अवतार से छुटकारा मिलने मे कुछ मदद हासिल हो !
Abhi nahi. Abhi waqt hai
डॉक्टर एक नम्बर का कपटी , धूर्त और मक्कार इंसान है , इसमे जरा भी संदेह नही है हमे । अब देखना यह है कि रूठवेन डॉक्टर से कैसे निपटता है !
Abhi to doctor niptega ruthven se bhai
बहुत ही खूबसूरत अपडेट भाई ।
आउटस्टैंडिंग एंड अमेजिंग अपडेट।
Bahut bahut sukriya bhai. Sath bane rahi
 
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