Naina
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★☆★ Xforum | Ultimate Story Contest 2019 ~ Results ★☆★
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Let me check scores.
taking kala bhensa
( actually he is trying to say bhaisa but its written bhen +sa) as reference
story that got lower score than this story are Kal ho na ho /एक छोटी सी प्रेम गाथा/Wah Kiya Pyar He/REALITY?/MAA-BAAP/KISMAT KA KHEL these stories received lower points than kala bhensa.
story got same score as kala bhensa are LOVE WITH FIXERR/Adrishya bandhan.../Falling in love/JAD/DOSTI , PYAR AUR JINDEGI/Ek ahsash jo jindgi badal de
it means iconic writer niks bhai's both story either lower or as same level as this kala bhensa
even those who got .5/1 above points than this feel dis pointed by their performance because they deserve lower points only from the judgment
Real FACTS of this Judgment :
1. pick top story from the lot every one appreciated .....check ..check...check again...oh yes ...got it .... Ek mukkamal mohabbat because everyone said best, let it be
2. pick from close friend....kaun sa ..kaun sa...romeo ka le lete hai....oh lekin usne khud bol diya ki uski story incomplete hai to dikkat ho jayegi na....waise bhi usko vsc me de chuke hai....harshit ko de dete hai...xp me bhi nahi mila tha...kahi post to nahi kiya usne bhi kuchh...naah nahi kiya hai safe hai......Delusion but really deserve? ...ghanta farak padta hai.
3. koi bhi le lo jiska jyada bura na bola gaya ho....
baki sabko .5 ke difference daal diya jaye , pura padhne ki kya jaroorat hai ....hindi ka kaam tamam.
chalo english bhi dekh liya jaye...sali story hi kam hai, kiska chance banta hai....HT ka kya? tab rahne do..usko to dena hi nahi chahe jo jaye..usne bhi nahi diya tha mere dosto ko....kuchh karo ki usko na mile.
simple hai , rule ke hisab se minimum five chahiye aur vo to ho jayega abhi....koi muskil nahi...lekin agar usne hungama kiya to? nahi karega....chalo english ka koi prize nahi. kahani finish....
Big Judgement requires big sacrifice and someone sacrificed during this judgment also and some grudge settled well , bravo!!
you can ban me , if you can't digest it.
taking kala bhensa
( actually he is trying to say bhaisa but its written bhen +sa) as reference story that got lower score than this story are Kal ho na ho /एक छोटी सी प्रेम गाथा/Wah Kiya Pyar He/REALITY?/MAA-BAAP/KISMAT KA KHEL these stories received lower points than kala bhensa.
story got same score as kala bhensa are LOVE WITH FIXERR/Adrishya bandhan.../Falling in love/JAD/DOSTI , PYAR AUR JINDEGI/Ek ahsash jo jindgi badal de
it means iconic writer niks bhai's both story either lower or as same level as this kala bhensa
even those who got .5/1 above points than this feel dis pointed by their performance because they deserve lower points only from the judgmentReal FACTS of this Judgment :
1. pick top story from the lot every one appreciated .....check ..check...check again...oh yes ...got it .... Ek mukkamal mohabbat because everyone said best, let it be
2. pick from close friend....kaun sa ..kaun sa...romeo ka le lete hai....oh lekin usne khud bol diya ki uski story incomplete hai to dikkat ho jayegi na....waise bhi usko vsc me de chuke hai....harshit ko de dete hai...xp me bhi nahi mila tha...kahi post to nahi kiya usne bhi kuchh...naah nahi kiya hai safe hai......Delusion but really deserve? ...ghanta farak padta hai.
3. koi bhi le lo jiska jyada bura na bola gaya ho....
baki sabko .5 ke difference daal diya jaye , pura padhne ki kya jaroorat hai ....hindi ka kaam tamam.
chalo english bhi dekh liya jaye...sali story hi kam hai, kiska chance banta hai....HT ka kya? tab rahne do..usko to dena hi nahi chahe jo jaye..usne bhi nahi diya tha mere dosto ko....kuchh karo ki usko na mile.
simple hai , rule ke hisab se minimum five chahiye aur vo to ho jayega abhi....koi muskil nahi...lekin agar usne hungama kiya to? nahi karega....chalo english ka koi prize nahi. kahani finish....
Big Judgement requires big sacrifice and someone sacrificed during this judgment also and some grudge settled well , bravo!!
you can ban me , if you can't digest it.
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Let me check scores.
taking kala bhensa
story that got lower score than this story are Kal ho na ho /एक छोटी सी प्रेम गाथा/Wah Kiya Pyar He/REALITY?/MAA-BAAP/KISMAT KA KHEL these stories received lower points than kala bhensa.
story got same score as kala bhensa are LOVE WITH FIXERR/Adrishya bandhan.../Falling in love/JAD/DOSTI , PYAR AUR JINDEGI/Ek ahsash jo jindgi badal de
it means iconic writer niks bhai's both story either lower or as same level as this kala bhensa
Real FACTS of this Judgment :
1. pick top story from the lot every one appreciated .....check ..check...check again...oh yes ...got it .... Ek mukkamal mohabbat because everyone said best, let it be
2. pick from close friend....kaun sa ..kaun sa...romeo ka le lete hai....oh lekin usne khud bol diya ki uski story incomplete hai to dikkat ho jayegi na....waise bhi usko vsc me de chuke hai....harshit ko de dete hai...xp me bhi nahi mila tha...kahi post to nahi kiya usne bhi kuchh...naah nahi kiya hai safe hai......Delusion but really deserve? ...ghanta farak padta hai.
3. koi bhi le lo jiska jyada bura na bola gaya ho....
baki sabko .5 ke difference daal diya jaye , pura padhne ki kya jaroorat hai ....hindi ka kaam tamam.
chalo english bhi dekh liya jaye...sali story hi kam hai, kiska chance banta hai....HT ka kya? tab rahne do..usko to dena hi nahi chahe jo jaye..usne bhi nahi diya tha mere dosto ko....kuchh karo ki usko na mile.
simple hai , rule ke hisab se minimum five chahiye aur vo to ho jayega abhi....koi muskil nahi...lekin agar usne hungama kiya to? nahi karega....chalo english ka koi prize nahi. kahani finish....
Big Judgement requires big sacrifice and someone sacrificed during this judgment also and some grudge settled well , bravo!!
you can ban me , if you can't digest it.
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Let me check scores.
taking kala bhensa
story that got lower score than this story are Kal ho na ho /एक छोटी सी प्रेम गाथा/Wah Kiya Pyar He/REALITY?/MAA-BAAP/KISMAT KA KHEL these stories received lower points than kala bhensa.
story got same score as kala bhensa are LOVE WITH FIXERR/Adrishya bandhan.../Falling in love/JAD/DOSTI , PYAR AUR JINDEGI/Ek ahsash jo jindgi badal de
it means iconic writer niks bhai's both story either lower or as same level as this kala bhensa
Real FACTS of this Judgment :
1. pick top story from the lot every one appreciated .....check ..check...check again...oh yes ...got it .... Ek mukkamal mohabbat because everyone said best, let it be
2. pick from close friend....kaun sa ..kaun sa...romeo ka le lete hai....oh lekin usne khud bol diya ki uski story incomplete hai to dikkat ho jayegi na....waise bhi usko vsc me de chuke hai....harshit ko de dete hai...xp me bhi nahi mila tha...kahi post to nahi kiya usne bhi kuchh...naah nahi kiya hai safe hai......Delusion but really deserve? ...ghanta farak padta hai.
3. koi bhi le lo jiska jyada bura na bola gaya ho....
baki sabko .5 ke difference daal diya jaye , pura padhne ki kya jaroorat hai ....hindi ka kaam tamam.
chalo english bhi dekh liya jaye...sali story hi kam hai, kiska chance banta hai....HT ka kya? tab rahne do..usko to dena hi nahi chahe jo jaye..usne bhi nahi diya tha mere dosto ko....kuchh karo ki usko na mile.
simple hai , rule ke hisab se minimum five chahiye aur vo to ho jayega abhi....koi muskil nahi...lekin agar usne hungama kiya to? nahi karega....chalo english ka koi prize nahi. kahani finish....
Big Judgement requires big sacrifice and someone sacrificed during this judgment also and some grudge settled well , bravo!!
you can ban me , if you can't digest it.
Also jisko aap niks bhai samjh rahe hain woh alag hain
the original niks bhai is not in Xforum..rest replied in ask staff.
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Nahi sir he meant bhainsa as in animal waala
please read the story again before posting.. 
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Ye cheez bhai bilkul aise likha jaise sb saamne huwa ho itng maza to story parh ker bhi nai ata
Let me check scores.
taking kala bhensa
story that got lower score than this story are Kal ho na ho /एक छोटी सी प्रेम गाथा/Wah Kiya Pyar He/REALITY?/MAA-BAAP/KISMAT KA KHEL these stories received lower points than kala bhensa.
story got same score as kala bhensa are LOVE WITH FIXERR/Adrishya bandhan.../Falling in love/JAD/DOSTI , PYAR AUR JINDEGI/Ek ahsash jo jindgi badal de
it means iconic writer niks bhai's both story either lower or as same level as this kala bhensa
Real FACTS of this Judgment :
1. pick top story from the lot every one appreciated .....check ..check...check again...oh yes ...got it .... Ek mukkamal mohabbat because everyone said best, let it be
2. pick from close friend....kaun sa ..kaun sa...romeo ka le lete hai....oh lekin usne khud bol diya ki uski story incomplete hai to dikkat ho jayegi na....waise bhi usko vsc me de chuke hai....harshit ko de dete hai...xp me bhi nahi mila tha...kahi post to nahi kiya usne bhi kuchh...naah nahi kiya hai safe hai......Delusion but really deserve? ...ghanta farak padta hai.
3. koi bhi le lo jiska jyada bura na bola gaya ho....
baki sabko .5 ke difference daal diya jaye , pura padhne ki kya jaroorat hai ....hindi ka kaam tamam.
chalo english bhi dekh liya jaye...sali story hi kam hai, kiska chance banta hai....HT ka kya? tab rahne do..usko to dena hi nahi chahe jo jaye..usne bhi nahi diya tha mere dosto ko....kuchh karo ki usko na mile.
simple hai , rule ke hisab se minimum five chahiye aur vo to ho jayega abhi....koi muskil nahi...lekin agar usne hungama kiya to? nahi karega....chalo english ka koi prize nahi. kahani finish....
Big Judgement requires big sacrifice and someone sacrificed during this judgment also and some grudge settled well , bravo!!
you can ban me , if you can't digest it.
Naina
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WowLet me check scores.
taking kala bhensa
story that got lower score than this story are Kal ho na ho /एक छोटी सी प्रेम गाथा/Wah Kiya Pyar He/REALITY?/MAA-BAAP/KISMAT KA KHEL these stories received lower points than kala bhensa.
story got same score as kala bhensa are LOVE WITH FIXERR/Adrishya bandhan.../Falling in love/JAD/DOSTI , PYAR AUR JINDEGI/Ek ahsash jo jindgi badal de
it means iconic writer niks bhai's both story either lower or as same level as this kala bhensa
Real FACTS of this Judgment :
1. pick top story from the lot every one appreciated .....check ..check...check again...oh yes ...got it .... Ek mukkamal mohabbat because everyone said best, let it be
2. pick from close friend....kaun sa ..kaun sa...romeo ka le lete hai....oh lekin usne khud bol diya ki uski story incomplete hai to dikkat ho jayegi na....waise bhi usko vsc me de chuke hai....harshit ko de dete hai...xp me bhi nahi mila tha...kahi post to nahi kiya usne bhi kuchh...naah nahi kiya hai safe hai......Delusion but really deserve? ...ghanta farak padta hai.
3. koi bhi le lo jiska jyada bura na bola gaya ho....
baki sabko .5 ke difference daal diya jaye , pura padhne ki kya jaroorat hai ....hindi ka kaam tamam.
chalo english bhi dekh liya jaye...sali story hi kam hai, kiska chance banta hai....HT ka kya? tab rahne do..usko to dena hi nahi chahe jo jaye..usne bhi nahi diya tha mere dosto ko....kuchh karo ki usko na mile.
simple hai , rule ke hisab se minimum five chahiye aur vo to ho jayega abhi....koi muskil nahi...lekin agar usne hungama kiya to? nahi karega....chalo english ka koi prize nahi. kahani finish....
Big Judgement requires big sacrifice and someone sacrificed during this judgment also and some grudge settled well , bravo!!
you can ban me , if you can't digest it.
Romeo 22
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What grudge are youuuu trying to settleLet me check scores.
taking kala bhensa
story that got lower score than this story are Kal ho na ho /एक छोटी सी प्रेम गाथा/Wah Kiya Pyar He/REALITY?/MAA-BAAP/KISMAT KA KHEL these stories received lower points than kala bhensa.
story got same score as kala bhensa are LOVE WITH FIXERR/Adrishya bandhan.../Falling in love/JAD/DOSTI , PYAR AUR JINDEGI/Ek ahsash jo jindgi badal de
it means iconic writer niks bhai's both story either lower or as same level as this kala bhensa
Real FACTS of this Judgment :
1. pick top story from the lot every one appreciated .....check ..check...check again...oh yes ...got it .... Ek mukkamal mohabbat because everyone said best, let it be
2. pick from close friend....kaun sa ..kaun sa...romeo ka le lete hai....oh lekin usne khud bol diya ki uski story incomplete hai to dikkat ho jayegi na....waise bhi usko vsc me de chuke hai....harshit ko de dete hai...xp me bhi nahi mila tha...kahi post to nahi kiya usne bhi kuchh...naah nahi kiya hai safe hai......Delusion but really deserve? ...ghanta farak padta hai.
3. koi bhi le lo jiska jyada bura na bola gaya ho....
baki sabko .5 ke difference daal diya jaye , pura padhne ki kya jaroorat hai ....hindi ka kaam tamam.
chalo english bhi dekh liya jaye...sali story hi kam hai, kiska chance banta hai....HT ka kya? tab rahne do..usko to dena hi nahi chahe jo jaye..usne bhi nahi diya tha mere dosto ko....kuchh karo ki usko na mile.
simple hai , rule ke hisab se minimum five chahiye aur vo to ho jayega abhi....koi muskil nahi...lekin agar usne hungama kiya to? nahi karega....chalo english ka koi prize nahi. kahani finish....
Big Judgement requires big sacrifice and someone sacrificed during this judgment also and some grudge settled well , bravo!!
you can ban me , if you can't digest it.
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