Fantasy Vengeance ~ Revenge is sweet [ᏚᎩᏚᎢᎬᎷ]

[Salty~Otaku]

comeback acha lga

mujhy update k start mein lag rha tha k ap is update mein thora sa buildup karo ge new arc ko par jesa k ap ne kaha tha k unnecessary kuch bhi nai ho ga to update wesa hi tha apni baat pe puri karne k liye thanks

Main story lambi kheench sakta tha! Aur Yaqeen maano ke mere paas wahan likhne ke liye pura Arc tha, Lekin wo sirf story lambi kheenchne wala tha, Story pehle he bohat lambi hai, Main kheenche bina ache se complete karna chahta hu

abhi just office se akar update read kiya hai to abhi review likhne ka mood nai hai aur wese bhi adha update to sar k uper se hi nikal geya hai to dubara read karna pare ga ek baari. next update mein hi is ka review bhi add kr dun ga

Samajh sakta hu! Main ye Update Manhwa style me likh raha tha, Bohat se logo ke sar ke upar se gaya ho ga First page per Guide me last ke Question answer parh lena wahan sab kuch Explain ker raha hu abhi.

comeback acha lga

mujhy update k start mein lag rha tha k ap is update mein thora sa buildup karo ge new arc ko par jesa k ap ne kaha tha k unnecessary kuch bhi nai ho ga to update wesa hi tha apni baat pe puri karne k liye thanks

abhi just office se akar update read kiya hai to abhi review likhne ka mood nai hai aur wese bhi adha update to sar k uper se hi nikal geya hai to dubara read karna pare ga ek baari. next update mein hi is ka review bhi add kr dun ga

keep

waiting for the next update ​

Stay Tuned

 

[Salty~Otaku]

Bohot hi shandar update dia hai bhai...maza aa gaya...

Must update hai or happy Diwali

Awesome update

Bahot zabardast bro

Awesome update bro

Good

Shandar update bro

Nice update

Bro dhamekdar update bro

Jabardast update bhai.

nice update

Mind blowing update maja aa gya bro

Superb update

Best Update....But

Bahut hi jaandaar aur shandar Update hai bhai ,aur Gaurdian k saath yudh ki toh baat hi kya , ekdum sajeev chitran kiya hai

Excellent update Bhai

Noww he is cooommmmmingggg

Bhai story bahot bahot bahot bahot bahot bahot jabardast hain. Please update jaldi dena bhai. Mujhe intajaar rahegaa dost update ka. Bhai jaldi dena update

Shandar story hai bhai maA agaya

Awesome update

sabhi bhaiyon ka stay tuned

 

[Salty~Otaku]

Bhai agr itna time ho ki itna lamba review de sako to to update de diya kro apne story pe

Meri story ka Update 400-500 words ka hota hai kia Update apni jagha aur wo post apni jagha hai

jis story pe apne review diya hai na wo write ab sirf bhav kha rhe hai unka pichle 1 sal se yahi chal rha hai ki wo kahte hai update aj rat ayega aur dete 3 din bad hai.

Bhai wo message parhna tha ek baar, Mujhe situation ka pata hai uss per he sab kuch likha tha, Main kisi ko specially target nahi kia, Lekin mere mann me jo tha wo wahan keh dia.

Hmne to chhod di wo story hi pdhna aur mera comment unko itna bura lga ki unhone hme block kr diya.

Mujhe ap dono ke beech ki situation ka nahi pata to uss per main kuch nahi keh sakta, Lekin wo sirf mer POV tha.

 

[Salty~Otaku]

Bhai waiting for next update

Aaj to update nahi milega

Waiting for next update

Upar Schedule per time Update ker dia tha, Aj 9:30 Update aye ga

 

[Harman11]

Besabri se intzar hai Bhai update ka

 

[Vk1989]

Best bhai

 

[blackblood]

Bhai tumane Jo akash aur veer ke bare me Jo hint Diya hai wo Maine notice bhi Kiya tha
Aur yo Jung ka matter bhi mere samaj me AA Raha tha
Lekin mere ek comment pe aapane mujhe blame Kiya tha to mujhe hurt hua tha isaliye Maine comments karana band kiya tha aur us comment me bhi maine pahle hi bata Diya tha ki it's my personal thinking comment hai
Baki aapaki story mast chal Rahi hai
Aur is arc ki opening God level ki hui hai
Aur ha Maine Jo urvi ke liye comment Kiya tha usaki bhi wajah hai mere pass
Kya hai na ki Mai ek bade family ka hissa hu mujhe family member ko khonese bahot dar lagata hai Bhai to meri soch us tarah ki hai
Aur ha Bhai mujhe abhi chhutiya mili thi phir bhi mujhe gav janeko nahi Mila mere bade Bhai ki ladaki hospital me admit thi is wajah se aur hamare Ghar me hospital ka sab kuchh mai sambhalata hu means Ghar ke new born baby se lekar mere papa Tak (dadaji nahi hai mere ) kisi ko bhi admit karana pada to mujhe hi hospital me rukana padata hai dr. se bat karana treatment ki jankari rakhana sabkuch karana padata hai aur Kam se chhutti bhi Leni padti hai
Aur ek bat Mai story padhate samay aarav ki jagah per khud ko imagine karake padhata hu kyunki ye sab fantasy story hai
Isliye Maine us tarah ka comment Kiya tha baki mere jaise new member ke comment pe jo tumane dhyan diya usake liye mujhe achha laga
Lekin jindagi agar hamari tarah chalati to har koi Aaj sikandar banata

 

[blackblood]

Bhai Mai ek teacher hu
So Mai baccho ki spelling mistake bhi pakd leta hu to aapake clue to bahot bade the
Aur ha aarav ne jo yo Jung ko gift Diya hai wo usako arav ko aur is story match karata hai
Ky hai na king ko agr kuchh ho Jaye to queen ko kingdome sambhlana padata hai aur Queen ke liye yo Jung k siva koi powerfull charecter abhi tak kahani me najar nahi aya hai
Aur ek request hai Aaj ka update jaldi mil jata to acchi bat ho jati kyunki mujhe Aaj bhi night me hospital me rukana padega

 

[Vk248517]

Waiting bro

 

[Salty~Otaku]

Editing!!!​