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Fantasy Lucifer- The fallen angel(completed)

Lone survivor

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WRITER’s NOTE

School times se likhne ka bahut shauk tha mujhe mostly poems hi likhta tha. School me hi ek ladki mili bahut pyaari thi. College ke 3rd year tak relationship chala fir vo chali gaye door. Uske baad kabhi socha nahi tha dobara kuch likunga. Bilkul man hi nahi karta tha. Nashe to jaise jindagi ban gaye the. Pehle bhi nashe karta tha lekin uske baad jada ho gaye. Akela rahna acha lagne lagega aur dheere dheere sab door hote chale gaye. Main akela hi bacha tha. Tab kahi se xf ka pata chala aur pata nahi kyu aise hi ek raat pehli story ka first update post kar diya. Ek medium mil gaya tha mujhe kuch share karne ka aur acha bhi lagne laga tha. Dheere dheere vapas likhna start kiya aur es baar stories. Xf par kuch stories likhi fir vo band hua to yaha aa gaya. Aur vohi silsila yaha bhi kamyaab raha. Aap sabko sayad idea nahi hoga ki jo thoda bahut interact hota hai humara yaha vo kitna important ho sakta hai kisi ki life me. Es waqt mere pass almost sab kuch hai lekin agar kisi ko kuch share karna chahu to aisa person nahi hai esliye beech beech me kuch updates me apni situation likh deta hu to acha lagta hai. I hope ki humara sath aise hi aage bana rahe.

Ek mew story ka dimag me kuch idea hai lekin kab start hogi eske liye abhi sure nahi hu

May be main kuch dino ke liye rehab chala jau ya fir kuch aur mil jaye sath chalne ke. Lets see

In the end i want to thank each and everyone of you guys who has supported me and gave me so much love. Means a lot

Thank you so much guys. Jaldi hi milte hai ek new story ke sath tab tak ke liye 👋
 

parkas

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Lucifer- kyu lode jaise sakal bana kar batha hai? Khushi ka din hai ye to

Naag- bhai nervous ho raha hu bas

Lucifer- abhi bhi mokka pada hai bhag le baad me to bas…. Samjh ja

Naag- aane wala hai aapka din bhi. Aap apna socho, main to fir bhi kaise bhi sambhal lunga

Lucifer- aur mera etna bada hai ki kisi ka muh hi nahi khulne dega

Naag- mansi ko dekha kya bhai aapne? Kaisi dikh rahi hai vo?

Lucifer- achi nahi lag rahi thi mujhe to bilkul bhi. Das kilo ka to makeup kar rakha tha upar se dress…. Chhiii
Pura ka pura mood kharab ho gaya esliye to yaha aa gaya

Naag- bhai mazak na karo

Lucifer- ab jo sach hai vo hai main kya karu esme

Naag- lekin vo to makeup karti hi nahi hai

Lucifer- abe gandu hi rahega tu. Aaj tak aisi ladki dekhi hai tune jo makeup nahi karti ho? Makeup karna unka janam sidh adhikaar hai esko nahi chhod sakti. Lekin etna over bhi nahi karna chahiye tha. Sayad galat decision le liya maine

Naag- aap meri maar rahe ho na bhai?

Lucifer- jake khud dekh le. Sala sach bolna hi paap hai aaj ke time me

Naag- ruko main phone karke bol deta hu use ki makeup kam karle

Lucifer- ha aur jaise vo teri baat maan legi. Aaj tak konsi baat maani hai usne teri? Yaha aakar teri gand aur faad degi agar uske makeup ke bare me kuch bola to

Naag- to main kya karu?

Lucifer- pure time aankh band kare rahna agar uspar najar nahi gaye to hi acha hai nahi to ulti aa jayegi

Naag- aisa kuch bhi nahi hai. Vo bahut sundar hai bhai

Lucifer- mat maan mera kya hai. Main apna mood theek karne ja raha hu
Aur lucifer naag ko vaha akela chhod kar chala jata hai

Bahar vahi shadi ka kaam joro soro se chal raha tha aur en sabke beech ek aur naya chehra use dikh gaya th

Naya matlab bahut dino se jiska chehra nahi dikha tha vo chehra anisha ka

Ek bahut pyaarr lahnge me vo kahar dhah rahi thi. Jaise hi dono ki najar mili anisha ke chehre par muskaan ubhar aaye aur dono ke kadam ek dusre ki taraf ho liye

Lucifer- wow somebody is looking pretty

Anisha- wow somebody know how to compliment?

Lucifer- kiske liye etna saja ja raha hai? Hum to pehle hi ghayal ho chuke hai tumhri aankhon se

Anisha- blush blush

Lucifer- hayyyeeeee

Anisha- bas bhi karo ab. Kaise ho?

Lucifer- aao pyaar kare khulam khula

Anisha- lucifeerrrr plllleeasse

Lucifer- theek hai theek hai. Pyaar ki to koe kadar hi nahi rah gaye dunia me. Kaisi ho?

Anisha- good. You looking different kuch hua hai kya?

Lucifer- kya hoga? Main to bilkul badiya hu. Sayad bahut dino se tune kuch khaya nahi hai mere se esliye lag raha hai

Anisha- i can sense something is wrong here. Bata sakte ho mujhe tum

Lucifer- nah all good.

Anisha- marji aapko. Hum to diwane hai aapke jaisa bologe maan lenge

Lucifer- oyye hoyye aaj kya ho raha hai ye mere sath?
Kahi main sapna to nahi dekh raha?

Anisha- sapna hi to hai ye. Konse angel se reality lag raha hai?

Lucifer- fair enough

Anisha- now tell me what’s going on?

Lucifer- ghumne chalegi mere sath? Ek bahut badiya jagah dundi hai maine

Anisha- aur us badiya jagah par kya dundna hai hume?

Lucifer- ab ye to vaha ja kar hi pata chalega. Sayad tumhe jada jaldi pata chal jaye. After all you have a brain of a supercomputer

Anisha- jada makhan lagane ki jarurat nahi hai. Maine vaise bhi kabhi aapko kisi ke liye mana nahi kiya

Lucifer- abhi to kiya

Anisha- ahh juthee maine kab kiske liye mana kiya?

Lucifer- jab maine pyaar karne ke liye kaha tab

Anisha- mana thode kiya hai. Privacy nahi hai yaha par aur mujhe public me show off karna pasand nahi hai

Lucifer- chalo privacy dikhata hu aur lucifer anisha ka hath pakad kar ander ki taraf le jane lagta hai

Aur use ander bane ek store room ki taraf le jata hai aur pahuchte hi use apni bahoo me jakad leta hai, honth apne aap ek dusre se mil gaye the aur ek wild smooch start ho gaya

Anisha ko thoda dar lag raha tha ki koe aa nahi jaye lekin aise moments ka bhi apna hi maja hota hai aur esliye hi anisha jada excited ho rahi thi

Kuch hi seconds me uska hath lucifer ke hathiyaar par chala gaya aur jaise hi pant ki zip kholne lagi vaise hi

“Tum dono ko koe sarm hai ya nahi? Aise khule me kabhi bhi kahi bhi suru ho jate ho?” Ek aawaz se dono chhonke aur samne dekha to ashmita apne kamar par hath rakhe badi ada se unhe dekh rahi thi

Lucifer- tujhe kabab me haddi banane ke alava kuch aur aata hai kya?
Lucifer bhi usi tone me bola aur tab tak anisha apna huliya theek karne me lag gaye. Kuch hi minutes me lucifer ne uska pura makeup, hair sab kharab kar diya tha

Ashmita- yaha room ki kami hai kya? Jo tum dono openly suru ho gaye? Kisi room me nahi ja sakte the?

Lucifer- hum dono ko openly pasand hai. Tujhe koe problem?

Ashmita- tujhse to baat karni hi bekar hai. Anisha chal mere sath

Lucifer- vo….
“Chhup rah bilkul” ashmita ne use kuch bolne hi nahi diya aur anisha ko leke vaha se chali gaye

Bechara lucifer kya hi kar leta ashmita ke samne sivay usko anisha ko le jane ke?

Fir khud bhi uth kar bahar chal diya

Shadi ki tayari teji se chal rahi thi aur ab use kuch naye chehre bhi dikhne lag gaye the jo mostly ladki walo ki side se hi the

Lekin unse lucifer ko matlab hi kya tha? Vo apne bhavro ki taraf hi mandra raha tha lekin koe bhav nahi de raha tha use to jake mansi ke pass bath gaya jaha mahandi ka kaam chal raha tha

Lucifer- mujhe to sab bhul hi jate hai kisi ko pata hi nahi hai kitna important hu main

Mansi- hehe kya hua?

Lucifer- kuch nahi kuch logo ko meri khushi dekhi nahi jati bas.

Inaaya- tum ladke wale ki side se ho esliye yaha par tum allowed nahi ho esliye jaldi se utho aur niklo

Lucifer- sweetheart tum bhi ladke walo ki side se hi ho

Ashmita- mahandi lagvayega kya?
Achi lagegi tere par

Lucifer- tujh par bhi saree achi lagegi kabhi pahan liya kar hume bhi to lage ki samne wali ladki hai

Ashmita- shut up

“Hello young man, humse bhi milo bahut suna hai aapke bare me” ek damdar aawaz lucifer ke kano me gunji mud ke dekha to ek kadak banda khada hua tha

Chehre par ek rob alag hi dikh raha tha jo chhikh chhikh kar bol raha tha ki ye bahut powerful banda hai

Lucifer- hello uncle. Kaise ho?
Lucifer ladkiyo ke beech se khada ho gaya aur unke samne aa gaya

Veer paal singh mansi ke pitaji aur ek police commissioner

Singh- main bahut badiya. Are bhai jo bhi mil raha hai sab tumhri hi baatein karte rahte hai aur hume dekho milna tak naseeb nahi ho raha?

Lucifer- waqt jab milata hai to ek alag hi drasay banta hai uncle ji jaise aaj bana hai

Singh- ye baat to hai. So kya karte ho aap?

Lucifer- main…

Inaaya- he is my partner uncle ji. Rathore group ka external matter yehi handle karta hai
Inaaya ko laga lucifer kuch fucked up na karde esliye khud hi beech me aakar bolna pada

Singh- internal aap karti ho external ye karta hai to fir mera damaad kya karta?

Lucifer- jo main karta hu vohi vo karta hai. Main inaaya ka partner hu aur vo mera

Singh- sab ek dusre ke partner bane hue hai yaha to

Lucifer- joint family me ja rahi hai aapki ladki. Kisi tarah ki koe problem nahi aayegi

Singh- ab agar meri eklauti beti ko koe problem aaye to khak hai mere jinda rahne ka.

Lucifer- i assure you. Uski life me sirf aur sirf khushiya hi hogi

Singh- i hope aisa hi ho nahi to anjaam acha nahi hoga kisi ke liye

Lucifer- I understand ucle

Singh- okay then main thoda bahar ka kaam check karke aata hu
Lucifer- jee uncle
Aur vo vaha se chale gaye

Inaaya- thank youuuu
Ek gehri saas lete hue inaaya ne kaha

Lucifer- for what?

Inaaya- for not fucking up

Lucifer- don’t worry i will fuck you tonight aur aisa ki subah tum khadi bhi nahi ho paogi and you will keep on screaming ohh lucifer ahhh lucifer lucifer lucifer lucifer

Inaaya- shut up
Muskurate hue inaaya boli aur vapas mansi ke pass jake bath gaye jo thodi tensed lag rahi thi jab uska baap aur lucifer baat kar rahe the lekin jis tarike se lucifer ne handle kiya sab use bhi saas aa gaye aur vapas muskaan fail gaye uske chehre par….
Bahut hi badhiya update diya hai Lone survivor bhai....
Nice and beautiful update....
 
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Nadan Dill

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Nice update bhaii bhit Awla Maza Aya gya par Kar ab new update Ka intazar ha
 
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