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Fantasy Lucifer- The fallen angel(completed)

Lone survivor

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WRITER’s NOTE

School times se likhne ka bahut shauk tha mujhe mostly poems hi likhta tha. School me hi ek ladki mili bahut pyaari thi. College ke 3rd year tak relationship chala fir vo chali gaye door. Uske baad kabhi socha nahi tha dobara kuch likunga. Bilkul man hi nahi karta tha. Nashe to jaise jindagi ban gaye the. Pehle bhi nashe karta tha lekin uske baad jada ho gaye. Akela rahna acha lagne lagega aur dheere dheere sab door hote chale gaye. Main akela hi bacha tha. Tab kahi se xf ka pata chala aur pata nahi kyu aise hi ek raat pehli story ka first update post kar diya. Ek medium mil gaya tha mujhe kuch share karne ka aur acha bhi lagne laga tha. Dheere dheere vapas likhna start kiya aur es baar stories. Xf par kuch stories likhi fir vo band hua to yaha aa gaya. Aur vohi silsila yaha bhi kamyaab raha. Aap sabko sayad idea nahi hoga ki jo thoda bahut interact hota hai humara yaha vo kitna important ho sakta hai kisi ki life me. Es waqt mere pass almost sab kuch hai lekin agar kisi ko kuch share karna chahu to aisa person nahi hai esliye beech beech me kuch updates me apni situation likh deta hu to acha lagta hai. I hope ki humara sath aise hi aage bana rahe.

Ek mew story ka dimag me kuch idea hai lekin kab start hogi eske liye abhi sure nahi hu

May be main kuch dino ke liye rehab chala jau ya fir kuch aur mil jaye sath chalne ke. Lets see

In the end i want to thank each and everyone of you guys who has supported me and gave me so much love. Means a lot

Thank you so much guys. Jaldi hi milte hai ek new story ke sath tab tak ke liye 👋
 

Lone survivor

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UPDATE-253

“Heyy, shiii, calm down calm down, I’m here only. Calm down” eda jo bahut jada stress me dikh rahi thi usko shant karte hue lucifer bola

“ v…vo mujjhmujhe lagta hai guruji kisi problem me hai” vo thoda ghabrae hue boli

Lucifer- mere alava aisa koe nahi hai jo guruji ko pareshani me daal sake. Tum shant ho jao sab theek kar dunga main

Eda- lucifer try to understand please. Maine unki aawaz suni hai jaise kahna chah rahe ho ki mujhe es chakravhu se bahar nikalo. Mujhe kisi anhoni ka dar lag raha hai lucifer

Lucifer- kaun ho tum?

Eda- hai?

Lucifer- ha batao mujhe kaun ho tum?
Tum meri eda to nahi ho sakti? Vo eda jis se maine pyaar kiya tha vo kabhi kisi se dari nahi. Are vo kabhi lucifer se nahi dari bakiyo ki to baat hi chhod do to ya to tum meri vo eda nahi ho ya fir tum darne ki acting kar rahi ho. Kaun ho tum?

“Meri eda” sirf etne se sabado ke eda ke sareer me ek chingari jala di thi. Sadiyo se dabi padi bhawanaye ek baar fir ufaan marne ko tayar ho gaye thi

Eda ka dimag uske dil ke samne ghutne tekne ki kagar par pahuch chuka tha aur agar aisa hota to kisi ka prakarti ki rachna ke waqt banaya gaya plan dhara ka dhara rah jata lekin lucifer ke an waqt par piche hat jane se aisa hua nahi

Nam aankhon se lucifer ko apne se door jata dekh ek baar fir eda ka dil bath gaya. Ab uske mukh se sabdo ne bhi nikalna band kar diya tha bas jo dard takleef thi vo uski aankhen hi bayan kar rahi thi

Lucifer- mujhe pata hai guruji kisi na kisi musibaat me jarur hai

Eda- hu?
Lekin tumne to…

Lucifer- kabhi to meri puri baat sun liya karo. Humesha apni chalati rahti ho
Pata nahi kyu lucifer ke aise bolne se ek pyaari muskan eda ke chehre par fail gaye

Lucifer- guruji ko koe musibaat me daal sakta hai aise mujhe mere baad sirf teen naam dikh rahe hai

Eda- main nahi hu

Lucifer- to fir do naam bache

Eda- mata bhi nahi hogi

Lucifer- fir ek naam bacha

Eda- vohi hai

Lucifer- hum dono me se koe bhi vaha nahi ja sakte
Tumhra aur mera dono ka vaha jana varjit hai

Eda- aur kisi se madad bhi nahi le sakte kyuki kisi ko koe khabar hi nahi hogi es bare me

Lucifer- sahi kah rahi ho tum. Agar guruji heaven ke bahar hai to koe musibat ki baat nahi hai main unhe aasani se doond lunga

Eda- aur agar heaven me hai to fir bahut sare niyam todne padenge

Lucifer- mere liye koe naye baat hai kya ye? Agar heaven me hue to main jaunga aur uske alava agar kahi hue to bhi main hi jaunga

Eda- what the hell?
Ye kya baat hue? Hum dono ko aawaz aae hai matlab hum dono ko hi bulaya gaya hai

Lucifer- hell ko khali nahi chhod sakte aur hum dono ke alava kisi aur ke pass etni shakti bhi nahi hai ki vo hell ko sambhal paye esliye tumhe yahi rahna padega

Eda- hargiz nahi. Hell me jo hona tha vo ho chuka hai ab kuch nahi bacha yaha hone ke liye

Lucifer- fir bhi risk nahi le sakte. Agar tumhe kuch karna hi hai to guruji kaha hai ye pata karo.

Eda- maine kosis ki lekin kuch hath nahi laga. Ek jagah par pahuch kar sab gayab ho raha hai aisa lag raha hai jaise vo dharti par hai hi nahi

Lucifer- eska matlab…..

Eda- mayajaal??? Lekin aisa kaise ho sakta hai? Guruji ko koe kaise mayajal me fasa sakte hai?

Lucifer- supreme fasa sakte hai. Sirf vohi hai jinke pass etni takat hai

Eda- lekin kyu?? Guruji to humesha se unke wafadar rahe hai

Lucifer- lucifer ki vajah se bahut logo ne bagawat ki hai kya pata us list me guruji ka naam bhi jud gaya ho

Eda- hmm. Ho sakta hai fir to unhe dundna bahut muskil hoga. Supreme ka mayajal todna almost impossible hi hai

Lucifer- almost hai na. Hum dono mil kar kya nahi kar sakte? Ye to sirf ek mayajal hai

Eda- vo to theek hai lekin use todne ke liye hume pehle ye pata karna padega ki kaisa mayajal hai, uski structure kya hai, uski kamjori kya hai aur uski takaat kya hai

Lucifer- ye to sirf supreme hi bata sakte hai

Eda- aur vo batayenge nahi

Lucifer- kya tum us jagah ka pata laga sakti ho jaha guruji aakhiri baar dekhe gaye the?

Eda- heaven ke outer area wale park me

Lucifer- mujhe vaha jana hai

Eda- bewakuf mat bano lucifer. Heaven me tum nahi ja sakte. Tumhre vaha jane se bahut kuch bigd jayega

Lucifer- ja to tum bhi nahi sakti

Eda- ye kisne kaha?
Mujhe yaha bejha gaya hai lekin heaven se nikala nahi gaya hai. Main vaha ja sakti hu aur mere vaha jane se kisi ko koe problem bhi nahi hogi

Lucifer- theek hai aaj hum dono dhayan laga kar aur kuch pata karne ki kosis karte hai fir kal tum nikal jana

Eda- tumhe tumse jada janti hu main esliye mere sath khelne ki kosis bilkul mat karo. Mujhe pata hai tumhre dimag me kya chal raha hai aur ye main hone nahi dungi

Lucifer- main to tumhe allow kar raha hu jane ke liye

Eda- tum mujhe yaha uljha kar bewakuf banane ki firak me ho taki tum heaven me ja kar aur problem create kar sako

Lucifer- tumhe aaj tak koe bekakuf bana paya hai?

Eda- ha tumne bahut banaya hai aur ye mera aakhiri fasla hai ki heaven me main jaungi

Lucifer- ek na ek din to tumhe vaha jana hi hai. Aakhir sab kuch tumhra hi to hai

Eda- mujhe tumhri baaton me bilkul nahi aana. Ha ye alag baat hai ki sayad tum mujhe es layak hi nahi samjhte ho ki main guruji ko dund pau aur unhe sahi salamat leke aa saku

Lucifer- sabdo ke her fer me naam mera kharab ho raha hai aur maje koe aur le raha hai

Eda- tum yaha ruk sakte ho jab tak main nahi aau and i promise eda guruji ko vapas leke hi lotegi

Lucifer- aur main kaise rahunga tumhre bina?? Yaha akela? Kya tum mujhe firse akela chhod kar jana chahti ho?

Eda- lucifer??

Lucifer- shhiiiiii sh uske hontho par apni ungli rakhte hue. Aakhiri baar jab tumne mujhe jane ka kaha tha uske baad to ab mil paye hai aur agar ab tum chali gaye to vapas kab mil payenge?
Kya es baar hum judia bardaast kar payenge? Kya rah logi tum mere bina? Ya main tumhre bina?

Eda- lu…luccclucifer please

Lucifer- es brahmand se purana hai humara pyaar kya es me sirf judai hi likhi hai? Main to tumhre naam ke piche apne naam lagane ka mokka bhi kho chuka hu kya tum mujhe meri en chhoti chhoti moments ko bhi mujhse chhinana chahte ho?

Eda- mat karo lucifer please mat karo. Main apna control kho dungi. Mata ka diya hua ashirvaad toot jayega please aisa mat karo

Lucifer- lucifer ne tumhre liye kya kya nahi toda? Agar suruvaat me hi tum mujhe apne se door nahi karti to aaj kyu lucifer lucifer hota aur kyu humare beech etni dooriya hoti?

Eda ka pura sareer kapne lag gaya tha. Chehre par pasine ki bunde uski sundarta ko aur chamka rahi thi aur saase?? Us par to jaise eda ka koe kabu hi nahi raha tha

Lucifer- kyu na main aur tum ek ho jaye aur es niyati ke khel ko aaj yahi ki yahi khatam kar de? Hum dono ka bhichadna es khel ka sabse aham hissa raha hai aur agar aaj hum dono mil gaye to ye khel yahi ke yahi khatam ho jayega

Eda- main aisa nahi kar sakti. Mujhe jitna mila hai main utne me hi khush hu lucifer. Mera ek hissa to tumhre sath hi hai

Lucifer- lekin main utne se khush nahi hu. Kya tumhe hum dono ke sath hue anayay ka badla nahi lena? Kya eda etni kamjor ho gaye ki vo apne pyaar ke liye lad bhi nahi sakti?

Lucifer- apne dil par hath rakh kar bolo eda ki tumhe mera najdeek aana pasand nahi aa raha? Kya tum nahi chahti ki main tumhe apni bahoo me bhar lu? Kya meri aankhon me apna aksh nahi dekhna chahti tum eda?
Batao mujhe? Kya abhi jo main kar raha hu vo tumhe bura lag raha hai?

Eda- mmmammat kaakaro lucifer please mat kakkaro. Main bardast nahi kar paungi

Lucifer- aaj lucifer bina jawab liye nahi jayega. Aaj apni sabse pasandida jagah par khada hu main, 3/4 life maine yahi gujari hai vaha khada ho kar juth nahi bolunga. Lucifer ne jab se hosh sabhala usne eda se pyaar kiya hai, beintaah muhoobaat ki hai maine tumse, tumhe apne khoon se jarur nahlaya tha ye soch kar hi ab mujhe auro ke liye feeling hone lag gaye hai aur main humara pavitra rishta kharab nahi karna chahta tha lekin kya us se koe fark pada?

Lucifer- heaven se nikala gaya, hell se feka gaya, dharti par marne pahuch gaya aur en sab waqt me bahut kuch badla lekin kya eda ke liye pyaar kam hua? Ye ek aisi chhij hai jo lucifer ki kabhi tumhre liye kam nahi hogi. Lucifer ne muhobbat ki hai tumse aur marte dam tak karta rahega

Eda- tum heaven jana chahte ho na? Main nahi chahti ki ab tum koe chhal karo mere sath aur mera dil toote esliye main khud tumhe jane ke liye bol rahi hu. Jao
Eda tumhra yahi par intezaar karegi lekin jab tum es chhokhat par vapas kadam karo to tumhre sath me guruji hone chahiye. Ye wada karke jao mujhse…. Lucifer wala wada

Lucifer- wada raha
Aur lucifer do kadam piche mud gaya

Eda- kisi din mokka mila to bataungi eda ke taraf ki kahani. Aaj maine tumhri suni us din tum meri sunana

Etna bol kar eda mud kar hell ke ander chali gaye….
 

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Ye Prem nischal prem eda luci ka meko to bahut rona aa raha hai kyu kya juda yahi dono mile the sari aurbani ke liye
 
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