Adultery Raj-- hero of the family

[Sandeep singh nirwan]

Update 264 countdown begins posted masti mai padhne ka bindas likes aur revoes pelna ka

 

[Sandeep singh nirwan]

CONGRTULAION BHAI 1500 PGAES KE LIYE MAST AMAZING AWESOME FANTASTIC UPDATE KE LIYE AND ❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤ AND UPDATE ME

Thank you

 

[Sandeep singh nirwan]

Awesome update bhai

Thank you

Me ab kiya hi bolu back to back do update diye he par dono me do chij common he ek time lapse dusra suspense create karne ke chakar me mera visual destroy kar diya
Jab sahi se dikhe ga hi nehi to kese me samajh paunga ke ho kiya rahahe

Time lapse matlb koun si ghatna kab huvi aisa ????thoda aur describe karna bp bro as a reader muje thoda aur janna h

Sorry
janta hu aap ko yea comment bura lage ga

Bp bro apke kahne ka tarika bilkul sahi h jisai kisi bhi writer ko bura lag he nahi sakta h....

Yeakin mano mujhe yea likhte huye koi khusi nehi mil rahahe.
Bhai aap ne Jacques puzzles solve kiya hi hoga. Usme agar picture ke tukre ko sahi sahi nehi joda to picture kharab ho jata he thik wese hi in dono update ka hal he or sirf yea do update nehi piche ke kai update me v huyahe.

Pichle kayi update oh ...usmai 40 days ka gap tha aise ye sab agai describe hoga detail mai....

Aap ek bar writer nehi reader banke is kahani ko pado logic dhundo phir batao kiya dikh rahahe
Sorry once again

Main samaj raha hu but thoda aur clear kardena chahe pm karke chahe yanha.....but kafi kuch agai clear hoga apne mujse spam karwa liya h
Thank you so much for your precious review aise he review dete rahe sach soonkar khusi hoti h ki ek reader kya sochta h

 

[Sandeep singh nirwan]

CONGRTULAION BHAI 1500 PGAES KE LIYE MAST AMAZING AWESOME FANTASTIC UPDATE KE LIYE AND ❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤ AND UPDATE ME

Thank you gurdeep bhai

 

[Alok]

Sandeep bhai aagla update kab tak aayega

 

[Sandeep singh nirwan]

Sandeep bhai aagla update kab tak aayega

Kal morning 9 am tak post kar dunga bus last ki ending baki h ......

 

[Sushilnkt]

मतलब दो उपडते आएंगे

 

[Sandeep singh nirwan]

मतलब दो उपडते आएंगे

Hhhh ....time ko dekh ke kah rahe ho

 

[Sushilnkt]

Hhhh ....time ko dekh ke kah rahe ho

टाइम नही हालात को देखकर कह रहा हु।


आप खुद ही सोचो कब कितने कमेंट आये है।

कहानी में फ्लो होता है। जिसे कब कहा ब्रेक की जरूरत है। वो जरूरी है।

में तो आपके संग हु। बाकी को आपको संग लाना होगा।

 

[Alok]

Kal morning 9 am tak post kar dunga bus last ki ending baki h ......

Ok Sandeep bhai phir subh milte hai...

 

[subodh Jain]

Intejar rahega shubah