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Fantasy Lucifer- The fallen angel(completed)

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WRITER’s NOTE

School times se likhne ka bahut shauk tha mujhe mostly poems hi likhta tha. School me hi ek ladki mili bahut pyaari thi. College ke 3rd year tak relationship chala fir vo chali gaye door. Uske baad kabhi socha nahi tha dobara kuch likunga. Bilkul man hi nahi karta tha. Nashe to jaise jindagi ban gaye the. Pehle bhi nashe karta tha lekin uske baad jada ho gaye. Akela rahna acha lagne lagega aur dheere dheere sab door hote chale gaye. Main akela hi bacha tha. Tab kahi se xf ka pata chala aur pata nahi kyu aise hi ek raat pehli story ka first update post kar diya. Ek medium mil gaya tha mujhe kuch share karne ka aur acha bhi lagne laga tha. Dheere dheere vapas likhna start kiya aur es baar stories. Xf par kuch stories likhi fir vo band hua to yaha aa gaya. Aur vohi silsila yaha bhi kamyaab raha. Aap sabko sayad idea nahi hoga ki jo thoda bahut interact hota hai humara yaha vo kitna important ho sakta hai kisi ki life me. Es waqt mere pass almost sab kuch hai lekin agar kisi ko kuch share karna chahu to aisa person nahi hai esliye beech beech me kuch updates me apni situation likh deta hu to acha lagta hai. I hope ki humara sath aise hi aage bana rahe.

Ek mew story ka dimag me kuch idea hai lekin kab start hogi eske liye abhi sure nahi hu

May be main kuch dino ke liye rehab chala jau ya fir kuch aur mil jaye sath chalne ke. Lets see

In the end i want to thank each and everyone of you guys who has supported me and gave me so much love. Means a lot

Thank you so much guys. Jaldi hi milte hai ek new story ke sath tab tak ke liye 👋
 

ABHISHEK TRIPATHI

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*DHAM* *DHAM* *DHAM* *DHAM*

Pure hell me dham dham dham ki aawaze gunj rahi thi aur ye aawaz ander se to bilkul nahi aa rahi thi. Kadiyo ke sath sath guards ki bhi fat ke hath me aa chuki thi.

Kyuki jadarar guards to eda ko theek tarike se jante bhi nahi the aur janane wale dono lucifer aur mazikeen hell me mojud nahi the

Bahar jis kadar halla ho raha tha us se hi andaza lagaya ja sakta tha ki koe bhari vipada bahar un sab ka intezaar kar rahi hai

Vahi ander eda ek protective shield bana rahi thi kadiyo ke liye aur guards ko motivate karne ki kosis kar rahi thi halanki usko es baat ka pura andaja tha ki ye guards bahar jo bhi hai unke samne jara bhi nahi tik payenge lekin eda ke pass aur koe option to tha nahi na hi usse ye lag raha tha ki bahar se kisi tarah ki madad uske pass aayegi

Esliye jitna uske pass tha us se hi ladne ki tayari me lag chuki thi vo aur sath hi pray kar rahi thi ki mazikeen vaha na paye. Kahi na kahi eda ko mazikeen ki kahi baaton se thoda dar lag raha tha uske liye esliye hi vo soch rahi thi agar vo yaha na aaye to jada acha hai aur vaise bhi jab tak vo lucifer ke sath hai tab tak safe hai

Ek bahut powerful shield bana li thi eda ne aur ab apne hathiyaro ko leke apni chhoti si sena ke sath sabse aage aakar khadi ho gaye

Vaise usse mazikeen ki gate band karne ki advice ka kafi fayda hua tha. Agar aaj gate open hota jaisa humesha hell ka rahta hai to usse bilkul waqt nahi milta aur pata nahi kitna khoon abhi tak bah chuka tha

Gate band hone ki hi vajah se vo khud bilkul tayar ho chuki thi sath me usne kadiyo ko bhi protect kar diya tha

Ab to intezaar tha gate tootne ka aur khoon se holi khelne ka jo bas hone ko aaya tha kyuki gate ki halaat bahut kharab ho chuki thi aur ab to aisa lag raha tha jaise kisi bhi waqt vo toot kar bikhar sakta hai

Eda- get ready dosto. It will be a hell of blood bath
Ek jordaar aawaz ke sath eda ne sabko aagah kar diya tha aur uske bolne matar se vaha ke guards pump ho chuke the

“Tadaaaaaakkkkkk” ek jordaar aawaz ke sath hell ke gate ke chithade udd chuke the aur vaha se ajeeb gareeb rakshasho ki ek fauz ander ki taraf bhagti aaye

Eda jo sabse aage khadi thi vo bilkul tayar ho chuki thi, uska bhaala aur talwar tej chamakne lagi aur vo unki taraf puri speed se bhagi

Eda ki speed etni jada thi ki nangi aankhon se usse dekhne lagbhag na mumkeen sa lag raha tha. Jo bhi beech me aa raha tha un sabko katate hue vo aage badh rahi thi

Usne socha tha ki enka jo bhi maalik hai usko jitna jaldi ho sake maar do taki bina leader ke ye fauz apahiz ho jaye aur uska kaam aasan ho jaye

Lekin aisa hua nahi kyuki laashe bichate hue eda last me pahuch gaye thi lekin usse vaha koe dikha nahi

Charo taraf apni pani najar ghumae usne aur jab koe najar nahi aaya to vapas un rakshasho par toot padi

Baki ke guards to bahut low level ke the vaha par jinhone sayad koe ladae ladi bhi nahi ho kyuki lucifer ke time to aisa hua nahi tha aur kiski himmat hogi jo lucifer ke rahte vaha attack karta esliye unko to bahut problem ho rahi thi sayad me etni si der me kafi log ghayal bhi ho chuke the

Eda vapas mudi aur lone fighter ki tarah bheed se takra gaye. Jaha jaha uske hathiyaar ghum rahe the vaha vaha khoon ki dharaye bahna suru kar rahi thi

Aisa lag hi nahi raha tha ki vo lad rahi hai balki aisa prateet ho raha tha ki vo masti kar rahi hai apne hathiyaro ke sath aur uske chakkar me log apni jaan gava rahe hai

Kuch hi minutes lage the eda ko vaha ka area saaf karne me lekin jaise hi vo sab khatam karke shant hue pehle se bhi jada bheed vapas hell me ghusne lagi

Eda- ohh lucifer tum aaj ka haseen din miss kar rahe ho. It will be a lot of fun today
Apne man me badbadte hue eda vapas tayar ho gaye

Lekin es baar ke rakshah pehle walo ki tulna me jada bhayankar dikh rahe the vaise to eda ko unse kuch problem nahi honi thi lekin vo etna to samjh hi gaye thi ki level aise hi badhta jayega aur jab tak main banda samne aaega eda ke sath ladne wala koe jinda nahi bachega

Us waqt sirf eda hogi aur samne puri fauz

Abhi to vaise bhi eda kuch nahi kar sakti thi sivay ladne ke aur jitna ho sake apne logo ko bachane ke esliye hi vo samne se lad rahi thi taki jada se jada dusman ko vo khud hi maar de

Aur abhi tak uske protected cover tak bhi koe nahi pahuch paya tha

Sare khayalo ko ek jhatka de kar eda ne kuch mantra pade aur uski talwar se aag nikalne lagi aur vo kuch hi seconds me etni bhayank ho gaye ki samne aane wala har dusman usme jalne laga

Hell ko to vaise bhi jalne ki aadaat ho rakhi thi to aise me uski jagah ko to jada fark nahi pada lekin dusmano ki chhikhane chhilane se vo etna to samjh me aa gaya tha ki uski gand ache se jal chuki hai

Eda- aao aur samna karo eda ka. Aaj main dekhti hu ki kon hai vo jisme eda ke gusse ko sahne ki himmat hai
Eda bahut jor se gurrai. Etni tej ki vaha opposition ki halaat sirf uski lalkaar sun kar buri ho gaye to uske sathiyo ka manobal badhne laga

Ab samne uske top tier ke demons aa chuke the jo ye darsha rahe the ki enke baad hi asli banda samne aayega

Vo aag ko chhirte hue aise aage badh gaye jaise samne jalne wali aag nahi pani hai jisko vo kaatate hue aage badh rahe hai.

Eda- you all gonna die a painful death
Aur khadi ho gaye jung ke maidaan me akeli

Vo sare bhi samjh gaye the ki hume pehle es se hi nipata hai esliye charo taraf se gher liya eda ko aur ek sath uspar hamla kar diya

Eda fast to bahut thi lekin etni sari jagah se uspar hamla ho raha tha ki vo thoda defence mode me chali gaye aur sabke attack ko block karne lagi

Un par aag ka bhi asar nahi ho raha tha aur agar eda jada der defence karti rahi to ye unko hi fayda tha esliye apni divya shakti se usne apne sareer se chhote chhote chhaku nikalna suru kiya jinme ek alag hi tarah ki chamak thi aur vo samne lad rahe rakhsaho me ghusne lage

Halanki es se unhe jada chhot nahi aa rahi thi lekin vo pehle ke mukabale thoda slow jarur hone lag gaye the

Jiska fayda agle hi pal eda ne utha liya aur chaar sar unke dhad se ek jhatke me kaat diye eda ne fir air block karke ek bahut tej bavandar uthaya jisme un sab ke pair apni jagah se dagmagane lag gaye

Etni tej tufaan laya eda ne ki samne khade dusmano ke hathiyaar hava me hi lahrane lag gaye aur eda unke sareer ko ukhadne lag gaye

Beech se alag ho gaye sare kuch hi seconds me aur unke khoon se eda ka pura sareer naha liya

Abhi vo kuch aur karti us se pehle hi ek bahut jordar kick padi uski chhati par vo eda udte hue kuch foot door jake giri

Samne dekha to 5-6 giants khade hue the jo eda ke sareer se lagbhag lagbhag 5 guna jada bade the

Sayad lucifer ke actual size ke aas pass ke giants the vo Unme se teen se eda ko gheer liya aur baki 3 eda ke side se hote hue guards ki taraf badhne lage

Khatre ki ghanti jaise hi baji eda ke dimag me raftaar se vo apne pairo par khadi ho gaye aur ek bahut tej waar kiya usne ek giant par lekin natija kuch feel tak nahi hua unko

Talwar uske sareer ko katne me kamyaab nahi ho paye aur us giant ne eda ko vaha hava me uchaal kar door fek diya

Eda man me find their weakness eda find there weakness. Ye sala us ek point se hi marenge aur mujhe vohi dundna hai
Hava me udte hue apne man me eda ne khud se kaha

Es baar vo jamin par giri nahi balki balance bana kar apne pairo par khadi ho gaye

Aur unke sareer ko scan karne lagi jaise kamjor point dundne ki kosis kar rahi ho jisme usse jada time laga nahi. Guruji bahut ache guru the unhone har tarah ki musibaat se ladne ke tarike sikhaye the eda aur lucifer ko aur unhi me se ek tha apne enemy ki kamjori ko dundna aur sateek jagah hamla karna

Jaise hi eda ko pata chala ki unke pair hi sabse kamjor hai to uske hatho se ek bahut bada bhaala apne aap nikalne lag gaye

Ek hath me talwar aur dusre me bhala liye jaise lucifer ladta tha bilkul uski parchai ki tarah hi vo aage badhi

Vo joint eda ko dekh bhi nahi paye ki kab vo apni jagah se hili aur kab usne ek gaint ke pair me apna pura bhaala ghusa diya

“Ahhhhhhhh” ek bahut bhayankar chhikh nikali uske muh se lekin vo sambhal pata us se pehle hi uske face par ek flying kick mari eda ne jis se uska balance bigda aur fir dusre pair me talwar ghusa daali

DHADAAAAAAM jaise aawaz aaye aur laga mano dharti hil gaye ho uske girne se

Baki do jo eda ko ghere khade the uske sath hi unko to kuch karne ka waqt hi nahi mila. Es se pehle ki vo kuch react karte tab tak to unka ek sath jamin me dhas chuka tha

Lekin ab baki ke dono bahut satarak ho gaye the sath me eda ko apne piche apne guards ki chhikhane ki aawaze bhi aane lag gaye thi

Jiska sidha sidha matlab tha ki uske pass waqt bilkul bhi nahi hai esliye hi bina samay gavaye vo baki dono se bheed gaye lekin ab tak vo dono kafi chhokane ho chuke the aur eda ko apne pairo tak pahuchne nahi de rahe the

Jaise hi jhuk kar eda ek ke pair par attack karne lagi vaise hi ek bahut bhayankar gadda type ke hathiyaar se dusre ne eda par hamla kiya aur ek baar fir eda hava ki shar par nikal gaye

Es baar usse dard ka ahsaas jarur ho gaya tha jiski vajah se uska gussa ab out of control hota ja raha tha jo vaha par kisi ke liye bhi acha sanket nahi tha

Apne kapde jhadte hue eda shanti se khadi hue lekin uske chehre par jo sunya bhaav the vo kafi darvane lagne lag gaye the

Kuch seconds ke liye usne apni aankhen band ki aur jab kholi to aisa laga jaise pure nark ko apne ander sama legi vo aur etni tej speed se bhagi ki logo ko sirf vo do joint jamin ke 10 feet ander ghuste najar aaye eda ne kya kiya vo to kisi ko dikhae hi nahi diya

Hell me ek coffin ban chuka tha jisme do giants sama chuke the aur ye najara dekh kar jo giants piche guards ko faadne me lage hue the vo ek dam se ruk gaye aur eda ko aankh faade dekhne lage

Vo ussi speed me un dono ke pass bhi pahuch chuki thi aur jo haal baki dono ka hua kuch vaisa hi enke sath bhi hua

Eda- AUR BACHA HAI KYA KOE? AAJ SABKO FAAD KAR RAKH DUNGI MAIN. TUMNE MERE LUCIFER KI TERRITORY KI TARAF AANKH UTHAE HAI KASAM MERE US PYAAR KI AGAR AAJ ULTE PAIR BHAGNE PAR MAJBUR NA KAR DU TUMHE KYUKI MARNA TO TUMHE LUCIFER KE HATHO HI HAI DARK LORD
eda bahut khatarnaak tarike se chhilaye

“Hahahahaha manana padega tumhe eda, manana padega. Main to ye dekhna chahta tha ki tum kitni badal gaye ho sayad narm to nahi pad gaye lekin khushi hue ye jaan kar ki eda ke hath aaj bhi utne hi majbut hai jitne kal hua karte the. Tumhe jeene ka ek mokka dene ki ichacha ho rahi hai give me mazikeen and i will give you your life back nahi to tayar ho jao apni aankhon se apne lucifer ke ghar ko tabhah hote dekhne ke liye”
Kisi anjaan shaksh ki aawaz pure hell me gunjane lagi sabko pata tha ki ye anjaan shaksh kon hai aur yaha kya karne aaya hai esliye eda ko chhod kar baki sab kapne lag gaye the

Eda- we will see kon kya kya kar sakta hai. Apne pyaar ke liye to main dunia ko aag laga du tum to fir bhi ek shataan ho….
Awesome update bhai.. 💥💥
 
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Nadan Dill

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Nice update bhaii bhit Awla Maza Aya gya par Kar ab new update Ka intazar ha
 

Mr.X796

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Awesome update bro abhi khun bahna suru hua hai Lucifer ko aane do phir aayega maza
 
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Inderr

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dhansu upadte
aur bohat hi vadia fight seens
agar lucifer ko pata hai ki dark lord hell aane wala hai to wo usko maarne abhi tak q nhi aaya hai?
 
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sorbobhuk

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*DHAM* *DHAM* *DHAM* *DHAM*

Pure hell me dham dham dham ki aawaze gunj rahi thi aur ye aawaz ander se to bilkul nahi aa rahi thi. Kadiyo ke sath sath guards ki bhi fat ke hath me aa chuki thi.

Kyuki jadarar guards to eda ko theek tarike se jante bhi nahi the aur janane wale dono lucifer aur mazikeen hell me mojud nahi the

Bahar jis kadar halla ho raha tha us se hi andaza lagaya ja sakta tha ki koe bhari vipada bahar un sab ka intezaar kar rahi hai

Vahi ander eda ek protective shield bana rahi thi kadiyo ke liye aur guards ko motivate karne ki kosis kar rahi thi halanki usko es baat ka pura andaja tha ki ye guards bahar jo bhi hai unke samne jara bhi nahi tik payenge lekin eda ke pass aur koe option to tha nahi na hi usse ye lag raha tha ki bahar se kisi tarah ki madad uske pass aayegi

Esliye jitna uske pass tha us se hi ladne ki tayari me lag chuki thi vo aur sath hi pray kar rahi thi ki mazikeen vaha na paye. Kahi na kahi eda ko mazikeen ki kahi baaton se thoda dar lag raha tha uske liye esliye hi vo soch rahi thi agar vo yaha na aaye to jada acha hai aur vaise bhi jab tak vo lucifer ke sath hai tab tak safe hai

Ek bahut powerful shield bana li thi eda ne aur ab apne hathiyaro ko leke apni chhoti si sena ke sath sabse aage aakar khadi ho gaye

Vaise usse mazikeen ki gate band karne ki advice ka kafi fayda hua tha. Agar aaj gate open hota jaisa humesha hell ka rahta hai to usse bilkul waqt nahi milta aur pata nahi kitna khoon abhi tak bah chuka tha

Gate band hone ki hi vajah se vo khud bilkul tayar ho chuki thi sath me usne kadiyo ko bhi protect kar diya tha

Ab to intezaar tha gate tootne ka aur khoon se holi khelne ka jo bas hone ko aaya tha kyuki gate ki halaat bahut kharab ho chuki thi aur ab to aisa lag raha tha jaise kisi bhi waqt vo toot kar bikhar sakta hai

Eda- get ready dosto. It will be a hell of blood bath
Ek jordaar aawaz ke sath eda ne sabko aagah kar diya tha aur uske bolne matar se vaha ke guards pump ho chuke the

“Tadaaaaaakkkkkk” ek jordaar aawaz ke sath hell ke gate ke chithade udd chuke the aur vaha se ajeeb gareeb rakshasho ki ek fauz ander ki taraf bhagti aaye

Eda jo sabse aage khadi thi vo bilkul tayar ho chuki thi, uska bhaala aur talwar tej chamakne lagi aur vo unki taraf puri speed se bhagi

Eda ki speed etni jada thi ki nangi aankhon se usse dekhne lagbhag na mumkeen sa lag raha tha. Jo bhi beech me aa raha tha un sabko katate hue vo aage badh rahi thi

Usne socha tha ki enka jo bhi maalik hai usko jitna jaldi ho sake maar do taki bina leader ke ye fauz apahiz ho jaye aur uska kaam aasan ho jaye

Lekin aisa hua nahi kyuki laashe bichate hue eda last me pahuch gaye thi lekin usse vaha koe dikha nahi

Charo taraf apni pani najar ghumae usne aur jab koe najar nahi aaya to vapas un rakshasho par toot padi

Baki ke guards to bahut low level ke the vaha par jinhone sayad koe ladae ladi bhi nahi ho kyuki lucifer ke time to aisa hua nahi tha aur kiski himmat hogi jo lucifer ke rahte vaha attack karta esliye unko to bahut problem ho rahi thi sayad me etni si der me kafi log ghayal bhi ho chuke the

Eda vapas mudi aur lone fighter ki tarah bheed se takra gaye. Jaha jaha uske hathiyaar ghum rahe the vaha vaha khoon ki dharaye bahna suru kar rahi thi

Aisa lag hi nahi raha tha ki vo lad rahi hai balki aisa prateet ho raha tha ki vo masti kar rahi hai apne hathiyaro ke sath aur uske chakkar me log apni jaan gava rahe hai

Kuch hi minutes lage the eda ko vaha ka area saaf karne me lekin jaise hi vo sab khatam karke shant hue pehle se bhi jada bheed vapas hell me ghusne lagi

Eda- ohh lucifer tum aaj ka haseen din miss kar rahe ho. It will be a lot of fun today
Apne man me badbadte hue eda vapas tayar ho gaye

Lekin es baar ke rakshah pehle walo ki tulna me jada bhayankar dikh rahe the vaise to eda ko unse kuch problem nahi honi thi lekin vo etna to samjh hi gaye thi ki level aise hi badhta jayega aur jab tak main banda samne aaega eda ke sath ladne wala koe jinda nahi bachega

Us waqt sirf eda hogi aur samne puri fauz

Abhi to vaise bhi eda kuch nahi kar sakti thi sivay ladne ke aur jitna ho sake apne logo ko bachane ke esliye hi vo samne se lad rahi thi taki jada se jada dusman ko vo khud hi maar de

Aur abhi tak uske protected cover tak bhi koe nahi pahuch paya tha

Sare khayalo ko ek jhatka de kar eda ne kuch mantra pade aur uski talwar se aag nikalne lagi aur vo kuch hi seconds me etni bhayank ho gaye ki samne aane wala har dusman usme jalne laga

Hell ko to vaise bhi jalne ki aadaat ho rakhi thi to aise me uski jagah ko to jada fark nahi pada lekin dusmano ki chhikhane chhilane se vo etna to samjh me aa gaya tha ki uski gand ache se jal chuki hai

Eda- aao aur samna karo eda ka. Aaj main dekhti hu ki kon hai vo jisme eda ke gusse ko sahne ki himmat hai
Eda bahut jor se gurrai. Etni tej ki vaha opposition ki halaat sirf uski lalkaar sun kar buri ho gaye to uske sathiyo ka manobal badhne laga

Ab samne uske top tier ke demons aa chuke the jo ye darsha rahe the ki enke baad hi asli banda samne aayega

Vo aag ko chhirte hue aise aage badh gaye jaise samne jalne wali aag nahi pani hai jisko vo kaatate hue aage badh rahe hai.

Eda- you all gonna die a painful death
Aur khadi ho gaye jung ke maidaan me akeli

Vo sare bhi samjh gaye the ki hume pehle es se hi nipata hai esliye charo taraf se gher liya eda ko aur ek sath uspar hamla kar diya

Eda fast to bahut thi lekin etni sari jagah se uspar hamla ho raha tha ki vo thoda defence mode me chali gaye aur sabke attack ko block karne lagi

Un par aag ka bhi asar nahi ho raha tha aur agar eda jada der defence karti rahi to ye unko hi fayda tha esliye apni divya shakti se usne apne sareer se chhote chhote chhaku nikalna suru kiya jinme ek alag hi tarah ki chamak thi aur vo samne lad rahe rakhsaho me ghusne lage

Halanki es se unhe jada chhot nahi aa rahi thi lekin vo pehle ke mukabale thoda slow jarur hone lag gaye the

Jiska fayda agle hi pal eda ne utha liya aur chaar sar unke dhad se ek jhatke me kaat diye eda ne fir air block karke ek bahut tej bavandar uthaya jisme un sab ke pair apni jagah se dagmagane lag gaye

Etni tej tufaan laya eda ne ki samne khade dusmano ke hathiyaar hava me hi lahrane lag gaye aur eda unke sareer ko ukhadne lag gaye

Beech se alag ho gaye sare kuch hi seconds me aur unke khoon se eda ka pura sareer naha liya

Abhi vo kuch aur karti us se pehle hi ek bahut jordar kick padi uski chhati par vo eda udte hue kuch foot door jake giri

Samne dekha to 5-6 giants khade hue the jo eda ke sareer se lagbhag lagbhag 5 guna jada bade the

Sayad lucifer ke actual size ke aas pass ke giants the vo Unme se teen se eda ko gheer liya aur baki 3 eda ke side se hote hue guards ki taraf badhne lage

Khatre ki ghanti jaise hi baji eda ke dimag me raftaar se vo apne pairo par khadi ho gaye aur ek bahut tej waar kiya usne ek giant par lekin natija kuch feel tak nahi hua unko

Talwar uske sareer ko katne me kamyaab nahi ho paye aur us giant ne eda ko vaha hava me uchaal kar door fek diya

Eda man me find their weakness eda find there weakness. Ye sala us ek point se hi marenge aur mujhe vohi dundna hai
Hava me udte hue apne man me eda ne khud se kaha

Es baar vo jamin par giri nahi balki balance bana kar apne pairo par khadi ho gaye

Aur unke sareer ko scan karne lagi jaise kamjor point dundne ki kosis kar rahi ho jisme usse jada time laga nahi. Guruji bahut ache guru the unhone har tarah ki musibaat se ladne ke tarike sikhaye the eda aur lucifer ko aur unhi me se ek tha apne enemy ki kamjori ko dundna aur sateek jagah hamla karna

Jaise hi eda ko pata chala ki unke pair hi sabse kamjor hai to uske hatho se ek bahut bada bhaala apne aap nikalne lag gaye

Ek hath me talwar aur dusre me bhala liye jaise lucifer ladta tha bilkul uski parchai ki tarah hi vo aage badhi

Vo joint eda ko dekh bhi nahi paye ki kab vo apni jagah se hili aur kab usne ek gaint ke pair me apna pura bhaala ghusa diya

“Ahhhhhhhh” ek bahut bhayankar chhikh nikali uske muh se lekin vo sambhal pata us se pehle hi uske face par ek flying kick mari eda ne jis se uska balance bigda aur fir dusre pair me talwar ghusa daali

DHADAAAAAAM jaise aawaz aaye aur laga mano dharti hil gaye ho uske girne se

Baki do jo eda ko ghere khade the uske sath hi unko to kuch karne ka waqt hi nahi mila. Es se pehle ki vo kuch react karte tab tak to unka ek sath jamin me dhas chuka tha

Lekin ab baki ke dono bahut satarak ho gaye the sath me eda ko apne piche apne guards ki chhikhane ki aawaze bhi aane lag gaye thi

Jiska sidha sidha matlab tha ki uske pass waqt bilkul bhi nahi hai esliye hi bina samay gavaye vo baki dono se bheed gaye lekin ab tak vo dono kafi chhokane ho chuke the aur eda ko apne pairo tak pahuchne nahi de rahe the

Jaise hi jhuk kar eda ek ke pair par attack karne lagi vaise hi ek bahut bhayankar gadda type ke hathiyaar se dusre ne eda par hamla kiya aur ek baar fir eda hava ki shar par nikal gaye

Es baar usse dard ka ahsaas jarur ho gaya tha jiski vajah se uska gussa ab out of control hota ja raha tha jo vaha par kisi ke liye bhi acha sanket nahi tha

Apne kapde jhadte hue eda shanti se khadi hue lekin uske chehre par jo sunya bhaav the vo kafi darvane lagne lag gaye the

Kuch seconds ke liye usne apni aankhen band ki aur jab kholi to aisa laga jaise pure nark ko apne ander sama legi vo aur etni tej speed se bhagi ki logo ko sirf vo do joint jamin ke 10 feet ander ghuste najar aaye eda ne kya kiya vo to kisi ko dikhae hi nahi diya

Hell me ek coffin ban chuka tha jisme do giants sama chuke the aur ye najara dekh kar jo giants piche guards ko faadne me lage hue the vo ek dam se ruk gaye aur eda ko aankh faade dekhne lage

Vo ussi speed me un dono ke pass bhi pahuch chuki thi aur jo haal baki dono ka hua kuch vaisa hi enke sath bhi hua

Eda- AUR BACHA HAI KYA KOE? AAJ SABKO FAAD KAR RAKH DUNGI MAIN. TUMNE MERE LUCIFER KI TERRITORY KI TARAF AANKH UTHAE HAI KASAM MERE US PYAAR KI AGAR AAJ ULTE PAIR BHAGNE PAR MAJBUR NA KAR DU TUMHE KYUKI MARNA TO TUMHE LUCIFER KE HATHO HI HAI DARK LORD
eda bahut khatarnaak tarike se chhilaye

“Hahahahaha manana padega tumhe eda, manana padega. Main to ye dekhna chahta tha ki tum kitni badal gaye ho sayad narm to nahi pad gaye lekin khushi hue ye jaan kar ki eda ke hath aaj bhi utne hi majbut hai jitne kal hua karte the. Tumhe jeene ka ek mokka dene ki ichacha ho rahi hai give me mazikeen and i will give you your life back nahi to tayar ho jao apni aankhon se apne lucifer ke ghar ko tabhah hote dekhne ke liye”
Kisi anjaan shaksh ki aawaz pure hell me gunjane lagi sabko pata tha ki ye anjaan shaksh kon hai aur yaha kya karne aaya hai esliye eda ko chhod kar baki sab kapne lag gaye the

Eda- we will see kon kya kya kar sakta hai. Apne pyaar ke liye to main dunia ko aag laga du tum to fir bhi ek shataan ho….
bahut badhiya update hasi bhai........
akhir kar eda ne sab demon ko maar diya or akhir me dark lord ko cheetawani di hai ki dark lord jeet nhi payega..........or usko eda rokegi lucifer ke family ko kuch hne se pehle..............or isbaar eda bilkul lucifer ki tarah ladai ki hai.................dekhte hai lucifer yaha aata hai ya nhi...............
waiting for next update
 
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