Adultery Raj-- hero of the family

[Sandeep singh nirwan]

Saturday.. Megha..Update 217

DEAD END ...THE END OF PHASE TWO......PART ONE THE BLOODBATH....

 

[Bosskhatri]

Story bahut hi acche tarike se ghum rha hai ...dekhte hai kon kis mod pe tutta hai or kon uljhno me hota hai kafi intresting mod ho rha hai...or ye rahul wahi hai jise raj ne pita tha jub wo deepika se milne aaya tha ...kafi intresting hoga aae dekhtekte hai story me..

 

[Xabhi]

Apne bhi sahi kaha bhai lekin Raj hero of the family lekin konsi family iska ullekh kahani mein kahin nahin hai yeh bhi sochna.....

Family wahi nahin hota jiske saath khoon ka rista ho ya phir apke sage sambhandi
Family woh hoti hai jo apke bure samay par apka saath khade rahe hai ki nahin.

Rakth sambhandiyon mein dada...dadi...bua..unki beti...chachi aur do choti behne hai woh kafi nahi hai kya.

Kya sunil...sonali...shwetha...etc...etc.... Raj ki extended family nahin hai kya.

Ek bade papa jo usko marne ke liye supari dega.. uske beta aur beti har woh kam karen jisse Raj toot kar bhikar jaye unko marne se kya hi fark padta hai aap bhi sochna zaara.

Is kahani ka main plot hai " Revenge " kissese har woh insaan se jo Raj ko anath aur uske dada se uska beta....divya se uski bhabhi ko cheena hai sabhi se. Raj ke papa (naam yaad nahin aa raha) unke aur patni ke katleaam ke peche durjan ka saath bhi ho sakta hai iss par abhi bhi khulasa nahin hua hai.

Agar plot revenge ka hai toh kisi bhi dushman ko dusra moka dena galat baat hai.

Jo insaan saari zindagi ghunah karta raha ho woh ek din sudhar jaaye yeh Samrat asoka ka yug nahin hai bhai ghor kalyug hai.

Agar writer saab ne Durjan ko sudhar diya ya aisa kuch kar diya toh yeh kahani nahin drama hojayegi bhai woh bhi ekta kapoor wali.

Durjan ko toh marwana hi achha hai unke beta beti ke baare mein sab log raay de sakte hai par likhna kaise likhna sab kuch writer ke hathon mein hi toh hota hai.

Apse se discussion karke mazaa toh mujhe bohut aaya. Ab iss par bhi dil se nahin mann se sochkar jawab dena bhai.

Dhanyawaad.

Yah revo bhi aapka Super'b hai Bhai or Lagbhag sab sahi btaya hai aapne...

Jb yah pta chal jaye ki saitan singh bhi samil tha tb Raj kya dada ji hi khud apne hatho se maar denge usko, Raj ko marne hi nhi denge kyoki Raj ko guilt ke sath jite huye dada ji bhi nhi dekh sakenge.

Lekin abhi Babita or uske bhai ne kya kiya hai yah puri tarah se malum nhi hua hame, sirf itna pta hai ki unhone bachpan me Raj ko manshik va saririk pratadna di hai, Jiska badla Raj lega, usme koi kami nhi aayegi, Raj ne khud hi kaha tha (Sayad man me) Ki dekho dada ji Mai kis tarah sahi line pr lata hu with devil smile ...

Pr Samrat ashok ko idhar mat lao bhaya kyoki usne apne 99 Bhaiyo ko mara tha ek Raj-Gaddi ke liye.

Usne apni us premika ko mara tha jo kaling ki rajkumari thi, usne prem aswikar kiya or chali gyi ashok ko sirf itna pta tha ki Vo kaling ki nivashi hai, pr Vo rajkumari thi aur vha pr mard or aurat sath milkr yuddh ladte the dushmano se, ashok ne sabko chir faad diya, Uski hi talwar se rajkumari mari or jb usne chehre se mask htaya tb kahi uske hath se talwar chhuti or Usne fir kabhi talwar na uthane ka nirnay liya...

 

[jameraja]

Jordar update gajab ab aayga Maja lagta hai do plot ek sath calege......

 

[Silent lover]

Update 133



Mulakaat……



Divya--- Kha…. na tu khata kyo nahi h….kitna patla ho gaya h….

Raj---- Bua 5 allu ke paranthe khila diye h aur jagah nahi h please …..

Divya--- are 6 feet ka saand ho gaya h par khane mai nakhre ladkiyo wale h kha…..muu khol ….jaldi…..warna tu janta he h muje…

Raj---- Bua mujse hila tak nahi jayega ….is chipkali ko khila do ye sook kar kanta ho gayi…..

Jhanvi---- he he he he supermen bhi dekho kaise darta h pitayi se he he he….ab shweta didi ki bari h…

Shweta--- bua main main aur nahi kha sakti hu.itne dino se meri kha khakar halat kharab ho gayi …..

Divya--- thali mai ek parantha aur rakh kar kya main main kar rahi khao chup chap….

Dadaji--- ha ha ha bus kar Divya dekh kahi tera Deepu aur shweta kha kha bimar he na ho jaye……..waise bhi isai subhe delhi ke liye nikalna h …. Ek month mai result ajayenge….

Divya--- apko ye baat baar baar yaad dilani jaruri h kya papa….

Jhanvi—- he he he ab nana ji ki bari h..he he he.

Raj---divya ko apne pass bithakar ek nivala apne hath se khilate huve ap gusa karte hu bilkul achi nahi lagti chalo ab muu kholiye aur khana khayiye …..



Dadaji--- kanha admission loge Nirwana….

Raj---- kafi dair sochkar delhi lunga dadaji kyoki vithal ka surag wanhi milega aur vo he victor tak leke ja sakta h…..

Shweta--- dekho na dadaji ye muje aur deepika Di kisi ko bhi apne sath nahi rahne de rahe h….bol rahe h ki mere pass khatra h ab ap he kahiye inse ki bahne taakat hoti h aur apne hatho ko fulakar dekhiye meri biceps main bahut strong hu….3,4 ko toh uu he uda du…

Dadaji--- muskara kar beti ab tum uski heemat se jayda kamjori banoge par ha anjan banke ek college mai padh sakti ho .. par rishta kabhi ujagar na ho …..

Jhanvi---- he he he aj apki ye emotional chaal kaam nahi ayegi didi…

Shweta bechari sad sa muu banake rah gayi akhir aj 6 saal se usai raj ki adad jo ho gayi thi ……. Aur pichle ek saal se toh wo uske sath he soti thi …



Morning…..mai….

Hey bhagwan ye ladka kuch bhi sahi se pack nahi karta h…kya karu mai iska …

Jhanvi---- he he he mumma ….superman ki didi he unki packing karti h ……unhe bus fight karni ati h ….

Divya--- tuje bahut bate ane lagi h….

Jhanv---airi gairi samjha h kya superman ki bahan hu fod ke rakh dungi sabko….

Divya—- rook tuje main batati hu….badi ayi fodne wali

Raj jo side mai chup chap Divya ko dekh raha tha usne pass jake Divya ko gale laga liya …… aur bola ap dukhi mat hovo ap toh meri pyari si sweet si bua ho na ….. aur main dur kanha hu apse delhi he toh hu na

Divya--- tum chodo muje abhi tumhari packing karni baki h……..

Raj---- shweta kar degi ap baitho yanha ….muje jee bharke dekhne do apko ………..

Divya---chal hat sab samajti hu main tuje phir apne ankho se nikalte huve ansuo ko ponchkar…. Main tikh hu bus muje roj phone karega …apna dhayan rakhega …..time se khana khayega …..aur khatro se dur rahega …..sonali ko teri har khabar rahni chahiye….main puchti rahungi….



Raj---- agai jhukkar ha meri maa ha main sari bate manuga apki …..

Divya— phir se kah …

Raj-- kya…..

Divya--- jo abhi kaha ….

Raj---- maaa…

Divya ne raj ka matha chum liya …….akhir yahi toh sunna tha usai ……maa….. yahi toh wo apni bhabhi vidya se kahti thi ki ek din kahega Deepu muje maa…..bhabhi ap dekh lena main usai itna pyar karungi ki apse pahle muje yaad karega ……..aur aj Divya ka kaha sach ho gaya tha wo jaldi se apne khawbo se bahar ayi aur raj ke gaal par hath fer usai apne seene se lagakar uske galo ko chum kar usai vida kar diya…..chahre pe muskaan thi par dil mai beintiha dard tha



Raste mai …bhai ek baat batao ap college muje nahi janoge i mean muje dantoge nahi koyi rok tok nahi h na….raj ne ankhe choti kar ke kaha matlb kya tera tu ulta pulta sochna bhi mat samji na……

Shweta--- maine kanhaa kuch kaha ap he ulta pulta soch rahe ho …. Main toh bus u he maje karungi bus ap rokna tokna mat….he he he…

Raj---- ufff ye ladkiiii kab sudhregiii ….tikh h nahi tokunga bus tu jeeti …but everything in limit ok….aur agar phir bhi na mani toh teri shadi itni dur karwa dunga ki phir karti rahna he he he…..

Bus ye sunte he shweta tut padi raj par hath pair laat sab barsane lagi …car ko akhada bana diya shweta ne aur cheekti rahi I hate you bhai main nahi jaungi apko chodkar unki ladayi kafi dair chali aur ant mai wo raj ki banho mai ane par shant ho gayi…… par dikat ye nahi thi dikat toh ab suru hone wali thi ……aur wo thi delhi mai rahe kanha kyoki …..sunil bhi wanhi rahta tha ….aur shweta bhi wanhi rahti thi aur Sonali bhi wanhi thi ..ab kisko manaye kisko na kahe ye uske liye bahut tension wala kaam hone wala tha …. Par isi soch soch mai uska rasta pura ho gaya ……aj wo sidha pahucha jogindar singh ke ghar janha uske bade papa aur badi mumy ne beti shweta ko kinare kar uski puri avbhagat kari aur shweta bus muu fulaye fufai ki tarah bus baithi rahi ……..aur baar baar ek he baat bolti ek beti bhi h apki uski taraf bhi dekh lo…par sabne usai neglect kiya ……par ant mai teeno ne he usai apne hatho se bade laad pyar se khilya jisai dekh kar aur pyar ko mahsus kar usai jo ek pure pariwar ki kami khalti thi wo puri huvi dikhi uske papa mumy ki ankho ki khusi aur raj ke pyar ne bhavuk kar diya …aur ankho se ansuu bah nikle par tabi ghar ke andar deepika aur sunil bhi agaye ….

Deepika aur sunil badi maa hum bhi h in 2 bhukad ko khila dogi ap sara khana…..

S mom---- are aa na tere liye toh sabse pahle h mere bete ….tera he toh intezaar ho raha tha….

S mom ki baat soon sab bus sunil ko he dekhne lage….

Sunil—- dekho nazar mat lagao… hum maa bete ke pyar ko ……kitna jalte h sab maa……jealous people's…



Raj deepika shweta toh bus muu fade he dekhe ja rahe the …… wo kabhi ek baar sunil ko dekhte toh kabhi smom ko dekhte tab jogindar singh bole ki sunil tumhari badi maa ko shoping ghumna mandir le jana bete ki sari duety par kar raha toh …jayda socho mat phir ….purai pariwaar ne behtrin pal sath bitaye aur raat ko final huva ki Raj aur shweta aur sunil deepika ki University campus mai he admission lenge…….. is baat se Deepika behad khus thi kyoki uska bhai ab uske pass har waqt jo rahne wala tha….usai phone kar …roj uski care karne ki jarurat nahi thi…. Ab uske pass rahkar wo uski care karegi par raj ne jab apne plan bataye toh Deepika ka chahra utar gaya ….uski sakal Roni ho gayi…aur wo muu fuula kar baith gayi ….par jab sunil ne samjaya ki 2 banglo honge ek jaise aur un bunglo mai se Underground rasta ayega aur usai he ap dono raj se mil sakti ho ab toh khus ho na ap …..aur sunil ki ye baat soonkar dono bahno ne he ek sath sunil ke gaal par pappi chipka di…..aur isai gale laga liya……aur boli love love u so much bhai



Saturday ….in mall….



Deepika-- abhi movie mai time h …..kuch kha liya jaye….

Anjana — kitna khayegi yaar abhi toh khake ayi thi..

Shweta--- ye bhi kuch puchne ki baat h burger and coke …..

Abhi wo ye baat kar he rahe the Achanak he deepika aur anjana ki ankhe chamakne lagi aur utsahit hote huve boli wo toh hamare seniors sir and mam h na ….

Deepika —- ha bilkul ….chal milte h….

Aur dono khadi hokar chaldi aur sunil unhe jate huve dekhne laga….

Deepika — Hi sir hi mam ap yanha …

Shaks--hmm toh movie ke liye aye the

Ladki--aur tum dono ….hmmm shopping …ke liye ayi hongi …

Anjana--muskarakar movie dekhne aye h mam…

Shaks — that's sound good ajao hamre sath he….

Deepika-- table ki taraf ishara kar kar sath mai aye h warna jarur jarur hum apke sath movie dekhte….

Shaks--- apne chahre par ajeeb se expression laakar oh hume nahi milwaogi….

Deppika-- Jarur jarur ….ayiye na ….

Tap …….

tap ……

tap…….

Deepika--- bhai inse milo ye h mere seniors surendra sir and Babita mam bahut helpful caring aur supporting h ….hum dono ka bahut dhayan rakhte h……aur inse milye ye h mera chota bhai sunil singhaniya aur ye mera lovely cute brother raj singh…

Raj ki back abhi bhi surendra ki taraf thi…….sunil ne hath milaya aur bola afcourse inhe koun nahi janta dii apko baki ka intro main de deta hu inka…..Son of shaitan singh and grand son of shree Thakur jagmaal singh Nirwan aur same intro babita ji ka h ,place of belonging Mandawa….. i m right ……sir and mam

Surendra ki ankhe faili huvi thi wo shock se dekh raha tha sunil ko….aur isi shock se bola Tum kaise jante ho…..hume

Sunil--- main kaise janta hu main toh sab janta hu tumhare bare mai aur itna janta hu ki baat karne mai bhi muje ghinn arahi h tum dono se

Deepika— gusai se sunil….behave your self aise baat karte h bado se yahi sikha h tumne …

Sunil--- bade aur ye itne ghatiya aur ghinone h ki inhe mar jana chahiye….

Chataak……ek thapad sunil ke gaal par pada …..

Deepika--- muje tumse ye umid nahi thi sunil maafi mango abhi…..ke abhi…..

Tabhi Raj khada huva aur Deepika ko ghurne laga uski ankho mai beintiha dard aur gusa bhara huva tha ki Uske andar ka NIRWANA bus kisi tarah khud ko roke huve tha …uski ye harkat dekh deepika bhi sannn rah gayiii…..usai samaj nahi aya ki kya huva raj ko ….…..par Raj ki pith abhi bhi surendra ki taraf thi tabhi bathroom gayi huvi shweta ne ate huve ye sab dekha toh wo turant bhag kar agayi ….aur surendra ne usai dekha toh bola Tum ….shweta….ha main…kyo umid nahi thi tum dono ko ..

Deepika aur anjana toh abhi bhi sab samajne ki kosis kar rahe the ki kya se kya ho gaya kab situation is had tak bigad gayi……..tabhi raj khada huva palta aur bola kaise ho bhaiya …..apko toh meri yaad aati nahi hogi par muje toh apki yaad roj ati h. Surendra aur Babita toh shock se usai dekh rahe the….raj agai bola …khaskar apke bachpan mai diye gaye beshumar pyar ki ….jo roj subhe 5 baje milta tha …..fuuuuuu ek gahri saans chod kar…...koyi itna pyar apne chote bhai ko kaise de sakta h …..kyo sunil sahi kaha na ….ye bolte waqt raj ne sunil ke gaal ko sahlaya jis par deepika ke Thapad ke nishan the ….phir deepika ki taraf dekh kar bola …….ap badi bahan h toh kya ap thapad mar dengi bina wajah jane……ye mera bhai aur jindgi bhar rahega isai koyi chot pahachaye main bardast nahi karuga chahe phir mera koyi saga he kyo na ho…..raj ki baat sunil bola-chodh gusa mat ho na bhai ….koyi baat nahi yaar wo badi h……chal chalte h …..par raj ke reaction dusre the wo abhi bhi apne gusai ko daba nahi pa raha tha isi wajah se sunil bhi jayda bol nahi pa raha tha usai saaf saaf dikh raha tha ki ye raj nahi bol raha h raj ke andar basa Nirwana bahar nikalne ki kosis kar raha h ……..Par sunil ko pata nahi tha ki Raj ka ye dil ka dard aur chahre ka gusa kavita mamta ka tha jo indono ki wajah se aj usai 7 samundra dur thi ….

Babita--- Raj tum wakayi bahut badal gaye ho ….aur ab bahut batamiz bhi ho gaye ho…….

Shweta kuch bolna chahti thi par raj ne chup kar diya aur kadvi muskarahat ke sath bola …muje sab yaad h meri pyari didi ….waqt ne pahiya palat diya h bus ye …..yaad rakhna ……. Hum bhai bahan the. Par ab nahi ……aur phir sunil aur shweta ki taraf dekh kar bola …..chalo chalte h…..Raj ne ek nazar deepika aur anjana ko dekha aur chal diya …..piche khadi deepika jiski raj ki baat se pahle he rulayi foot padi thi…..wo bus raj ko bahte ansuo ke sath jate dekhti rahi … ….Aj ke liye itna he …….so masti mai padhne ka aur likes aur Revoes pelne ka

Nice update

 

[Sandeep singh nirwan]

Story bahut hi acche tarike se ghum rha hai ...dekhte hai kon kis mod pe tutta hai or kon uljhno me hota hai kafi intresting mod ho rha hai...or ye rahul wahi hai jise raj ne pita tha jub wo deepika se milne aaya tha ...kafi intresting hoga aae dekhtekte hai story me..

Right Rahul wahi h jisai raj ne pahle pii taa tha ha ha ha ab aur intresting chije hongiiii

 

[Sandeep singh nirwan]

Bahut hi romanchak aur shandar update bhai

Thank you

Awesome update

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awesome update bro

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Fabulous update bro jabardast Awesome fantastic

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Gajab bro maza aa gaya padh kar

Thank you

शानदार जबरदस्त भाई लाजवाब update bhai jann superree duperrere update

Ye full family drama Tha shurwat mey lekin mast tha aise moment bhi hone chahiye life mey jo Raj ne fehali bar enjoy Kiya hey,
Par muje dipika ka yuu sunil ko sake samne marna kuch Acha nhi laga, usko Iski thodi to saja milni chahiye,
Usko apne bhai se ohhh Bahar ke log jada pass ke hogye the

Ha ye toh galat kiya deepika ne kyoki sunil uska apna bhai h .....usai sabke samne thapad nahi marna chahiye tha... Saza milni chahiye par raj ne saza nahi di ..????

Raj jo kiya hey ohhh ekdam sahi kiya hey, aur abb age kya hota hey ye dekhna bada dilchshap hoga

Sath bane rahe agle update mai aur bhi raj khulenge...... thank you behtrin pratikriya ke liye..

Dhamakedar fantastic mind blowing superb update bro

Thank you

Superb update

Thank you

 

[Sandeep singh nirwan]

Dono updates bahut hi beautiful tarike se likha hai bhai very good.

Thank you

Ab good toh madhu ke saath huwa hai pet se jo ho gayi hai congrats.

Wish puri ho gayi uski

Ab aage badte hai surinder aur babita ki taraf ek hi request hai inko ab jyada mauka na milni chahiye apne kutantr chaturayi ka pradarshan karne ya phir raj ko badnam ya kuch bhi luksaan panchane ki. Ho sake toh in dono ko jaldi nipta do par revenge nirwana type honi chahiye koi bhi discount nahin mile.

Samar bhai ap sahi ho yanha but ek sawal ye bhi h ki kya surendra babita ne aisa kiya h ki Raj ka badla Nirwana ki tarah ho .....????

Inke baap ko bhi jaldi upar bhejo bhai pehle se bahut udd raha hai thoda aur upar yamraj milenge bhejo unke paas.

Baap ko nahi marne ki wajah h wo agai pata lagegi..

Maine yeh sab just suggest kiya hai bhai aise hi likhna hai waisi koi rule nahin hai.

Samar bhai suggestions he toh chije better banata h ....ap dil kholke suggestions dijiye aur question puchiye

Lekin main tumhe hi bachane ki koshish kar raha hoon. Raj toh bachpan se hi bin maa baap ke inn sab ka zulmo sitamb sahte hi bada hua hai. Aur ab bhi tum kahani ke zariye in baap beta beti ko hi bhadava doge toh gaali toh tumhe hi milegi naa.

Ha ha ha kya he ki bachpan ka dard h raj ka toh saza bhi waise he milni chahiye na tabhi toh dil khus hoga.....

Chahe hum mein se koi bhi likhe naa par padh kar mann se toh niklegi hi naa kya likh raha hai bachpan se dard de kar jee nahin bhara kya iss writer ka jo abhi tak khatam nahin huva ***** **** ****** *****.

Fill in the blanks jo bhi apka manpasand gaali ho usko bhar lijiyega.

Dil par nahin lena bhai sach bol raha hoon.

I know gusa kaise ata h .....but apka point of view matlb ap ek reader ke nazariye se soch rahe h aur main writer ke nazariye se isliye soch ka fark aata h ....Rahi baat surendra babita ki bus wait and watch bahut kuch hona h abhi ..

 

[BP high]

Update 133



Mulakaat……



Divya--- Kha…. na tu khata kyo nahi h….kitna patla ho gaya h….

Raj---- Bua 5 allu ke paranthe khila diye h aur jagah nahi h please …..

Divya--- are 6 feet ka saand ho gaya h par khane mai nakhre ladkiyo wale h kha…..muu khol ….jaldi…..warna tu janta he h muje…

Raj---- Bua mujse hila tak nahi jayega ….is chipkali ko khila do ye sook kar kanta ho gayi…..

Jhanvi---- he he he he supermen bhi dekho kaise darta h pitayi se he he he….ab shweta didi ki bari h…

Shweta--- bua main main aur nahi kha sakti hu.itne dino se meri kha khakar halat kharab ho gayi …..

Divya--- thali mai ek parantha aur rakh kar kya main main kar rahi khao chup chap….

Dadaji--- ha ha ha bus kar Divya dekh kahi tera Deepu aur shweta kha kha bimar he na ho jaye……..waise bhi isai subhe delhi ke liye nikalna h …. Ek month mai result ajayenge….

Divya--- apko ye baat baar baar yaad dilani jaruri h kya papa….

Jhanvi—- he he he ab nana ji ki bari h..he he he.

Raj---divya ko apne pass bithakar ek nivala apne hath se khilate huve ap gusa karte hu bilkul achi nahi lagti chalo ab muu kholiye aur khana khayiye …..



Dadaji--- kanha admission loge Nirwana….

Raj---- kafi dair sochkar delhi lunga dadaji kyoki vithal ka surag wanhi milega aur vo he victor tak leke ja sakta h…..

Shweta--- dekho na dadaji ye muje aur deepika Di kisi ko bhi apne sath nahi rahne de rahe h….bol rahe h ki mere pass khatra h ab ap he kahiye inse ki bahne taakat hoti h aur apne hatho ko fulakar dekhiye meri biceps main bahut strong hu….3,4 ko toh uu he uda du…

Dadaji--- muskara kar beti ab tum uski heemat se jayda kamjori banoge par ha anjan banke ek college mai padh sakti ho .. par rishta kabhi ujagar na ho …..

Jhanvi---- he he he aj apki ye emotional chaal kaam nahi ayegi didi…

Shweta bechari sad sa muu banake rah gayi akhir aj 6 saal se usai raj ki adad jo ho gayi thi ……. Aur pichle ek saal se toh wo uske sath he soti thi …



Morning…..mai….

Hey bhagwan ye ladka kuch bhi sahi se pack nahi karta h…kya karu mai iska …

Jhanvi---- he he he mumma ….superman ki didi he unki packing karti h ……unhe bus fight karni ati h ….

Divya--- tuje bahut bate ane lagi h….

Jhanv---airi gairi samjha h kya superman ki bahan hu fod ke rakh dungi sabko….

Divya—- rook tuje main batati hu….badi ayi fodne wali

Raj jo side mai chup chap Divya ko dekh raha tha usne pass jake Divya ko gale laga liya …… aur bola ap dukhi mat hovo ap toh meri pyari si sweet si bua ho na ….. aur main dur kanha hu apse delhi he toh hu na

Divya--- tum chodo muje abhi tumhari packing karni baki h……..

Raj---- shweta kar degi ap baitho yanha ….muje jee bharke dekhne do apko ………..

Divya---chal hat sab samajti hu main tuje phir apne ankho se nikalte huve ansuo ko ponchkar…. Main tikh hu bus muje roj phone karega …apna dhayan rakhega …..time se khana khayega …..aur khatro se dur rahega …..sonali ko teri har khabar rahni chahiye….main puchti rahungi….



Raj---- agai jhukkar ha meri maa ha main sari bate manuga apki …..

Divya— phir se kah …

Raj-- kya…..

Divya--- jo abhi kaha ….

Raj---- maaa…

Divya ne raj ka matha chum liya …….akhir yahi toh sunna tha usai ……maa….. yahi toh wo apni bhabhi vidya se kahti thi ki ek din kahega Deepu muje maa…..bhabhi ap dekh lena main usai itna pyar karungi ki apse pahle muje yaad karega ……..aur aj Divya ka kaha sach ho gaya tha wo jaldi se apne khawbo se bahar ayi aur raj ke gaal par hath fer usai apne seene se lagakar uske galo ko chum kar usai vida kar diya…..chahre pe muskaan thi par dil mai beintiha dard tha



Raste mai …bhai ek baat batao ap college muje nahi janoge i mean muje dantoge nahi koyi rok tok nahi h na….raj ne ankhe choti kar ke kaha matlb kya tera tu ulta pulta sochna bhi mat samji na……

Shweta--- maine kanhaa kuch kaha ap he ulta pulta soch rahe ho …. Main toh bus u he maje karungi bus ap rokna tokna mat….he he he…

Raj---- ufff ye ladkiiii kab sudhregiii ….tikh h nahi tokunga bus tu jeeti …but everything in limit ok….aur agar phir bhi na mani toh teri shadi itni dur karwa dunga ki phir karti rahna he he he…..

Bus ye sunte he shweta tut padi raj par hath pair laat sab barsane lagi …car ko akhada bana diya shweta ne aur cheekti rahi I hate you bhai main nahi jaungi apko chodkar unki ladayi kafi dair chali aur ant mai wo raj ki banho mai ane par shant ho gayi…… par dikat ye nahi thi dikat toh ab suru hone wali thi ……aur wo thi delhi mai rahe kanha kyoki …..sunil bhi wanhi rahta tha ….aur shweta bhi wanhi rahti thi aur Sonali bhi wanhi thi ..ab kisko manaye kisko na kahe ye uske liye bahut tension wala kaam hone wala tha …. Par isi soch soch mai uska rasta pura ho gaya ……aj wo sidha pahucha jogindar singh ke ghar janha uske bade papa aur badi mumy ne beti shweta ko kinare kar uski puri avbhagat kari aur shweta bus muu fulaye fufai ki tarah bus baithi rahi ……..aur baar baar ek he baat bolti ek beti bhi h apki uski taraf bhi dekh lo…par sabne usai neglect kiya ……par ant mai teeno ne he usai apne hatho se bade laad pyar se khilya jisai dekh kar aur pyar ko mahsus kar usai jo ek pure pariwar ki kami khalti thi wo puri huvi dikhi uske papa mumy ki ankho ki khusi aur raj ke pyar ne bhavuk kar diya …aur ankho se ansuu bah nikle par tabi ghar ke andar deepika aur sunil bhi agaye ….

Deepika aur sunil badi maa hum bhi h in 2 bhukad ko khila dogi ap sara khana…..

S mom---- are aa na tere liye toh sabse pahle h mere bete ….tera he toh intezaar ho raha tha….

S mom ki baat soon sab bus sunil ko he dekhne lage….

Sunil—- dekho nazar mat lagao… hum maa bete ke pyar ko ……kitna jalte h sab maa……jealous people's…



Raj deepika shweta toh bus muu fade he dekhe ja rahe the …… wo kabhi ek baar sunil ko dekhte toh kabhi smom ko dekhte tab jogindar singh bole ki sunil tumhari badi maa ko shoping ghumna mandir le jana bete ki sari duety par kar raha toh …jayda socho mat phir ….purai pariwaar ne behtrin pal sath bitaye aur raat ko final huva ki Raj aur shweta aur sunil deepika ki University campus mai he admission lenge…….. is baat se Deepika behad khus thi kyoki uska bhai ab uske pass har waqt jo rahne wala tha….usai phone kar …roj uski care karne ki jarurat nahi thi…. Ab uske pass rahkar wo uski care karegi par raj ne jab apne plan bataye toh Deepika ka chahra utar gaya ….uski sakal Roni ho gayi…aur wo muu fuula kar baith gayi ….par jab sunil ne samjaya ki 2 banglo honge ek jaise aur un bunglo mai se Underground rasta ayega aur usai he ap dono raj se mil sakti ho ab toh khus ho na ap …..aur sunil ki ye baat soonkar dono bahno ne he ek sath sunil ke gaal par pappi chipka di…..aur isai gale laga liya……aur boli love love u so much bhai



Saturday ….in mall….



Deepika-- abhi movie mai time h …..kuch kha liya jaye….

Anjana — kitna khayegi yaar abhi toh khake ayi thi..

Shweta--- ye bhi kuch puchne ki baat h burger and coke …..

Abhi wo ye baat kar he rahe the Achanak he deepika aur anjana ki ankhe chamakne lagi aur utsahit hote huve boli wo toh hamare seniors sir and mam h na ….

Deepika —- ha bilkul ….chal milte h….

Aur dono khadi hokar chaldi aur sunil unhe jate huve dekhne laga….

Deepika — Hi sir hi mam ap yanha …

Shaks--hmm toh movie ke liye aye the

Ladki--aur tum dono ….hmmm shopping …ke liye ayi hongi …

Anjana--muskarakar movie dekhne aye h mam…

Shaks — that's sound good ajao hamre sath he….

Deepika-- table ki taraf ishara kar kar sath mai aye h warna jarur jarur hum apke sath movie dekhte….

Shaks--- apne chahre par ajeeb se expression laakar oh hume nahi milwaogi….

Deppika-- Jarur jarur ….ayiye na ….

Tap …….

tap ……

tap…….

Deepika--- bhai inse milo ye h mere seniors surendra sir and Babita mam bahut helpful caring aur supporting h ….hum dono ka bahut dhayan rakhte h……aur inse milye ye h mera chota bhai sunil singhaniya aur ye mera lovely cute brother raj singh…

Raj ki back abhi bhi surendra ki taraf thi…….sunil ne hath milaya aur bola afcourse inhe koun nahi janta dii apko baki ka intro main de deta hu inka…..Son of shaitan singh and grand son of shree Thakur jagmaal singh Nirwan aur same intro babita ji ka h ,place of belonging Mandawa….. i m right ……sir and mam

Surendra ki ankhe faili huvi thi wo shock se dekh raha tha sunil ko….aur isi shock se bola Tum kaise jante ho…..hume

Sunil--- main kaise janta hu main toh sab janta hu tumhare bare mai aur itna janta hu ki baat karne mai bhi muje ghinn arahi h tum dono se

Deepika— gusai se sunil….behave your self aise baat karte h bado se yahi sikha h tumne …

Sunil--- bade aur ye itne ghatiya aur ghinone h ki inhe mar jana chahiye….

Chataak……ek thapad sunil ke gaal par pada …..

Deepika--- muje tumse ye umid nahi thi sunil maafi mango abhi…..ke abhi…..

Tabhi Raj khada huva aur Deepika ko ghurne laga uski ankho mai beintiha dard aur gusa bhara huva tha ki Uske andar ka NIRWANA bus kisi tarah khud ko roke huve tha …uski ye harkat dekh deepika bhi sannn rah gayiii…..usai samaj nahi aya ki kya huva raj ko ….…..par Raj ki pith abhi bhi surendra ki taraf thi tabhi bathroom gayi huvi shweta ne ate huve ye sab dekha toh wo turant bhag kar agayi ….aur surendra ne usai dekha toh bola Tum ….shweta….ha main…kyo umid nahi thi tum dono ko ..

Deepika aur anjana toh abhi bhi sab samajne ki kosis kar rahe the ki kya se kya ho gaya kab situation is had tak bigad gayi……..tabhi raj khada huva palta aur bola kaise ho bhaiya …..apko toh meri yaad aati nahi hogi par muje toh apki yaad roj ati h. Surendra aur Babita toh shock se usai dekh rahe the….raj agai bola …khaskar apke bachpan mai diye gaye beshumar pyar ki ….jo roj subhe 5 baje milta tha …..fuuuuuu ek gahri saans chod kar…...koyi itna pyar apne chote bhai ko kaise de sakta h …..kyo sunil sahi kaha na ….ye bolte waqt raj ne sunil ke gaal ko sahlaya jis par deepika ke Thapad ke nishan the ….phir deepika ki taraf dekh kar bola …….ap badi bahan h toh kya ap thapad mar dengi bina wajah jane……ye mera bhai aur jindgi bhar rahega isai koyi chot pahachaye main bardast nahi karuga chahe phir mera koyi saga he kyo na ho…..raj ki baat sunil bola-chodh gusa mat ho na bhai ….koyi baat nahi yaar wo badi h……chal chalte h …..par raj ke reaction dusre the wo abhi bhi apne gusai ko daba nahi pa raha tha isi wajah se sunil bhi jayda bol nahi pa raha tha usai saaf saaf dikh raha tha ki ye raj nahi bol raha h raj ke andar basa Nirwana bahar nikalne ki kosis kar raha h ……..Par sunil ko pata nahi tha ki Raj ka ye dil ka dard aur chahre ka gusa kavita mamta ka tha jo indono ki wajah se aj usai 7 samundra dur thi ….

Babita--- Raj tum wakayi bahut badal gaye ho ….aur ab bahut batamiz bhi ho gaye ho…….

Shweta kuch bolna chahti thi par raj ne chup kar diya aur kadvi muskarahat ke sath bola …muje sab yaad h meri pyari didi ….waqt ne pahiya palat diya h bus ye …..yaad rakhna ……. Hum bhai bahan the. Par ab nahi ……aur phir sunil aur shweta ki taraf dekh kar bola …..chalo chalte h…..Raj ne ek nazar deepika aur anjana ko dekha aur chal diya …..piche khadi deepika jiski raj ki baat se pahle he rulayi foot padi thi…..wo bus raj ko bahte ansuo ke sath jate dekhti rahi … ….Aj ke liye itna he …….so masti mai padhne ka aur likes aur Revoes pelne ka

Bhai mane aap ke 01 se 133 update tak pad dala par maan nehi bharraha he jitna bhi padru kam hi lagta he. Bohot kam hi write he is site me jo itni lambi kahani likkhi ho. Bahot maza atahe aap ki kahani padneme.
Aap ne jo pyar or care dikhaya he bohot khubsurat tha. Janvi and Shweta was to cute. Bohot maza aya padke.
Waiting for next one bhai

 

[Sandeep singh nirwan]

Yah revo bhi aapka Super'b hai Bhai or Lagbhag sab sahi btaya hai aapne...

Jb yah pta chal jaye ki saitan singh bhi samil tha tb Raj kya dada ji hi khud apne hatho se maar denge usko, Raj ko marne hi nhi denge kyoki Raj ko guilt ke sath jite huye dada ji bhi nhi dekh sakenge.

Lekin abhi Babita or uske bhai ne kya kiya hai yah puri tarah se malum nhi hua hame, sirf itna pta hai ki unhone bachpan me Raj ko manshik va saririk pratadna di hai, Jiska badla Raj lega, usme koi kami nhi aayegi, Raj ne khud hi kaha tha (Sayad man me) Ki dekho dada ji Mai kis tarah sahi line pr lata hu with devil smile ...

Pr Samrat ashok ko idhar mat lao bhaya kyoki usne apne 99 Bhaiyo ko mara tha ek Raj-Gaddi ke liye.

Usne apni us premika ko mara tha jo kaling ki rajkumari thi, usne prem aswikar kiya or chali gyi ashok ko sirf itna pta tha ki Vo kaling ki nivashi hai, pr Vo rajkumari thi aur vha pr mard or aurat sath milkr yuddh ladte the dushmano se, ashok ne sabko chir faad diya, Uski hi talwar se rajkumari mari or jb usne chehre se mask htaya tb kahi uske hath se talwar chhuti or Usne fir kabhi talwar na uthane ka nirnay liya...

Satyawachan gurudev aur apke ye baate soonkar muje story ki sambhavit ending ka ek part jarur mil gaya h......
Thank you xabhi bhai......

 

[Sandeep singh nirwan]

Bhai mane aap ke 01 se 133 update tak pad dala par maan nehi bharraha he jitna bhi padru kam hi lagta he. Bohot kam hi write he is site me jo itni lambi kahani likkhi ho. Bahot maza atahe aap ki kahani padneme.
Aap ne jo pyar or care dikhaya he bohot khubsurat tha. Janvi and Shweta was to cute. Bohot maza aya padke.
Waiting for next one bhai

Thank you so much bhai ...updates Saturday ya Sunday , Wednesday again Saturday ya sunday isi tarah se ate h.....bro..aur kahani yakinun bahut lambi jane wali h....