Incest Baadshah ~ The Tales of Debauchery

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Ab tak...

Wo ladki... Jiske upar sabhi ki nazre thi. Usne jese hi
Veer aur Sonia ki taraf dekha uske kadam wahi theher gaye.

Aur Sonia aur uss ladki ki aankhein ek dusre se jaa mili...

Sonia usse dekh ke poori tarah se stabdh thi. Usse bilkul bhi ye umeed nahi thi. Uss ladki ke yaha hone ki...

Uske honth khule aur bas dheere se ek hi shabd nikla...,

"K.... Kaera!?"

Ab aage...

Kaera ki nazre aur Sonia ki nazre dono hi aapas me bhidi hui thi, aur na jaane kitni anginat baatein unn dono ki nigaahe ek dusre se keh gayi.

Veer ko Kaera ne abhi tak nahi dekha tha. Uska poora dhyaan Sonia par hi tha. Aur issi mauke ka fayda uthaate hue Veer dheere dheere kuch kadam peeche ki orr liya aur palat ke wo waha se nikalne laga.

'Fuckkkkk... Ye toh wahi hai... Shitttt!!! Club waali... Pari! Remember??'

[Yes Master! But aap bhaag kyu rahe hai?]

'Toh kya karu? I don't want to face her. Tumhe pata hai na mene uske saath kya kiya tha? Aur upar se... Suhana ne kaha tha na. Boht bade bade log aaenge. Iska matlab... She's definitely not a normal person.'

[But aisa thodi hai ki wo aapko kha jaegi.]

'Nooo... Khaegi nahi par yadi galti se bhi usne Sonia jii ke saamne kuch keh diya toh..... Shitttt! Wo dono ek dusre ko jaanti hai. Kahi usne meri baat bata dii toh?'

[Ohhhhh!!!]

'Mein aise bhaagna nahi chaahta par abhi situation hi aisi hai.'

Aur Veer logo ke agal bagal se nikal dur jaane laga.

Idhar Kaera dheere dheere seedhiyo se neeche utri, uska aura hi aisa tha jiske chalte sabhi uske saamne khade log usse nikalne ke liye jagah dene lage aur side hatt gaye.

Ekdum se jese sab shaant pad gaye the. Bas unn high heels ki hi awaaz aa rahi thi jo Sonia ki taraf badh rahi thi.

Wo aate hue seedhe Sonia ke saamne khadi hui. Do itni khubsoorat ladkiya aamne saamne khadi hui thi aur aas paas ke sabhi logo ki nazre unn dono par hi thi.

Sab ka dhyaan apne upar kendrit karwa ke rakhi hui thi Kaera.

Aur finally, Sonia ne iss khamoshi ko dur kiya.

Sonia (frowns) : Kaera...!! I thought you were in America...!?

Kaera : Prakash Sir abhi bhi sabhi ko investigate karne ka kaam karte hai? Tell him to get his news updated then.

Sonia : *frowns*

Kaera : Mein America se kal hi yaha aa gayi thi. What about you? I thought... Sirf Suhana hi dikhegi yaha pe...

Halaki Kaera umr me Sonia jitni hi thi par...
Uske bawajood wo Suhana ko uske naam se hi bulaati thi.

Sonia : Mein unke saath chali aayi. Any problems!?

Kaera : That's so not like you...

Sonia (smiles) : Because I'm not alone.

Kaera : ???

Kaera ko Sonia ka ye jawaab kuch atpata sa laga aur wo prashn bhari nazro se usse dekhni lagi. Jese maano uske haav bhaav dekh ke sach jaan'ne ka prayaas kar rahi ho. Par Sonia ki muskaan usse aur bhi chintan me doobne ke liye vivash kar rahi thi.

Uska sochna, iss baar kaam na aaya. Wo nahi jaan paa rahi thi ki akhir Sonia kya kehna chaah rahi thi. Aisa pehla kabhi nahi hua tha. Wo toh Sonia ke saare actions se waaqif rehti thi. Fir aaj kyu...!?

Kyu wahi muskaan uski samajh me nahi aa rahi thi. Akhir uss muskaan ke peeche ka kaaran kya tha?

Inn dono ko akela chorr idhar Veer nikalte hue baahar jaane hi waala tha jab achanak hi uski kalaayi kisi ne pakdi aur usse kheech ke palta diya.

Veer : What the...!? Huh!?

Uska haath thaame Suhana usse confusion me dekh rahi thi.

Suhana : Kidhar chale tum? Sonu kaha hai? Mene tumhe kaha tha na uske saath rehne ke liye...

Veer : Wo... Wo kisi se baat kar rahi hai shayad.

Suhana : Huh? Kis se?

Veer : Umm... Udhar dekhiye...

Jab Veer ki nazro ko Suhana ne follow kia aur jo nazaara usne dekha, toh usse dekh uski khud ki hi aankhein hairaani ke maare fel gayi.

Suhana : I knew it... Itni badi party ho... Aur ye yaha na aaye... Bhala aisa kese ho sakta hai?

Veer : A-Aap unhe jaanti ho?

Suhana : Jaanti hu? Arre... Boht acche se jaanti hu... Hmph!

Veer : ??

Suhana : Mene tumhe bataaya tha na...!?

Veer : Kya?

Suhana : Sonia had three childhood friends. Ek Pushkar jo ab iss duniya me nahi raha... And there were two more...

Veer : Hmm!

Suhana : Well... And she's one of them. Kaera!

'Kaera... Ek sundar naam...'

[I agree Master!]

Suhana : Chalo ab...

Aur Suhana Veer ko kheechte hue Sonia aur Kaera ke paas le jaane lagi.

Veer : Whaaaaattt?? No no no no.... M-Mujhe baahar jaana hai... Wait!

Suhana : Ugh!!! Baahar kyu jaana hai? What the hell? Andar ho raha hai sab kuch...

Veer : Wo... Haan! Mujhe washroom jaana hai...

Suhana : Haa toh washroom andar hai ab chalo... Aur washroom baad me jaana... Pehle tum mere saath chalo jaldi...

'Fucccckkkkkkkk...'

Suhana Veer ko ghaseet kar le jaane lagi. Na chaahte hue bhi Veer ko ab toh jaana hi tha.

Nervousness toh itni ho rahi thi ab usse ki pucho mat. Kya hoga jab Kaera usse dekhegi aur usse pata chalega...!? Ki Veer wahi banda hai jisne uski virginity lii thi.

'Wait! Mene usse number chorra tha apna... And she didn't call me... Kahi wo bhul toh nahi gayi!? Nahi! Then why...!? Kya wo mujhe pehchaan paegi!? Obviously! No wait... Wo nashe me bhi toh thi... Shitttttt!!!!'

[Ab jo hoye so hoye Master! We'll face it. No matter what aap ko ab peeche nahi hatna hai. You are the Alpha Master. Be the dominator.]

'Yeaaahhh! Right!'

Aur kuch hi palo me Veer Suhana ke sang Sonia aur Kaera ke saamne tha.

Jese hi Kaera ne dono ko aate dekha, toh sabse pehle toh uski nazar Suhana pe gayi aur uske chehre pe santushti ke bhaav aaye. Jese maano wo issi cheez ki umeed me thi.

Kaera (mann me) : As expected...

Par jese hi uski nazre Suhana se hatt bagal me khade Veer par gayi toh wo apni bauhe sikode usse dekhne lagi.

Usne dekha, ki Suhana ke haath Veer ki baazu ko thaame hue the.

Kaera : Hmm?

Fir agle hi pal usse jese Veer ka chehra kuch jaana pehchaana sa laga. Aur dheere dheere jese saari picture clear hoti chali gayi.

Uski aankhein surprise ke chalte badi hoti chali gayi. Aur muh halka sa khul gaya.

Uska ye reaction Sonia ki nazro se bach ke nahi jaa paaya.

She noticed.

Aur Suhana ne bhi ye notice kiya.

Kaera (mann me) : It's him...!!!!! But... How!? Itna kese changed...!?

'Fuckkkk! Gaya mein... Usse yaad hai... Usse definitely yaad hai...'

Aur agle hi pal, wo Veer ki taraf badhi aur uske sameep aayi.

Uske honth kuch kehne ke liye khule...

'Fuccckkk...!!'

Par achanak hi wo honth band ho gaye. Aur uski nazre bhi Veer se hatt Suhana ki taraf jaa pohuchi...

Kaera : I knew you would come...

Suhana : Hmph! Keval husband busy the... Isliye...

Kaera : Of course! I know! I know all the details...

Suhana : *frowns*

Kaera : And... Who's this gentleman...!?

'Huh!? Wait! Ye bhul gayi kya? No no no... Usse yaad hai definitely. Is she trying to save me? Anjaan bann rahi hai!? Hmm!'

Suhana : Well... Ye... Ahem! Veer... Meet her. She's
Kaera. Sonu's childhood friend. And umm... He's Veer... Sonu ka friend.

Kaera : Veer huh....!? Sonia made a friend!? Interesting!

Veer : N-Nice to meet you...!

Jab Veer ne apna haath aage badhaaya toh Kaera ke chehre par ek muskaan thi. Halki sii hi thi par thi zaroor.

Aur ye dekh thodi dur khade do aadmi aapas me baatein karne lage.

"Abey Jassiiii....!"

Jassi : Hmm! Dekh raha hu...

Raghu : Wahiiiii!!

Jassi : Miss ke hontho par muskaan aayi thi. Bhale hi kuch pal ke liye thi. Par mene dekha...

Raghu : Haan! Abey ek minute... Abey ye toh wahi hai na? Meri aankhein kabhi dhoka nahi kha sakti... Abe jisne Miss ko waha club se bachaaya tha...

Jassi : Hmm? Arre haan... Waqai! Ye wahi hai.

Raghu : Ye yaha kya kar raha hai? Nahi... Usse se bhi bada sawaal. Miss ke chehre par usse dekh muskaan kyu hai...!?

Jassi : Ahh! Ab samajh aaya... Zaahir sii baat hai unke chehre par smile hai. Unhe yaad hai ki unhe kisne bachaaya tha. Hum ne hi toh baad me unhe bataaya tha na... Kya kuch hua tha club me.

Raghu : Ohhhhh!

Jassi : Kam se kam unki smile toh dekhne mili...

Raghu (smiles) : Hmm... Hmm...

Ye dono Kaera ke wahi bodyguards the jinse Veer ki mulaqaat club me hui thi.

Idhar Kaera ne Veer ka haath thaama. Unn haatho ko thaamte hi Veer ko Kaera ki makhmali twacha ka jab anubhav hua toh andar hi andar uska shareer garmaane laga.

Veer ne jab paas se firse ussi chehre ko dekha toh ye kehna galat nahi tha ki usse sharm aani shuru ho chuki thi.

Kaera thi hi itni sundar. Upar se... Wo uske itne qareeb thi ki Veer ka nazre milaana hi mushqil ho raha tha.

Par Veer bhi ab pehle ki tarah nahi tha. Usne Kaera ki aankho me dekha. Wo iss baat se confused tha ki akhir Kaera ne uska sach ujaagar kyu nahi kiya!?

Itni badi baat... Aur wo Veer ko aise hi jaane de rahi thi? Itni badi personality... Aise me toh usse pehle hi Veer ki khatiya kar deni chahiye thi. Par uske bawajood na toh ek call aaya uska... Aur na hi.. usne kuch kiya.

Bhala kyu!? Koi ladki kese apni virginity ko leke itni insensitive reh sakti hai? Ye toh harr ladki ke liye boht important matter hota hai. Not to mention ki Kaera ek boht badi personality thi. Fir uske liye toh ye aur bhi important hona chahiye tha.

Then kyu!? Veer jese sadhaaran se ladke ko wo bacha rahi thi? Yahi sawaal Veer ke mann me chal rahe the. Par usse dur dur tak inn prashno ka uttar dikhaayi nahi de raha tha.

'Just why...!?'

[Wo ye jaan bujh ke kar rahi hai Master. Kaaran toh mujhe bhi nahi pata...]

'Wait! I can check her...'

'Check'

[You are not eligible to view this person's status.]

Aur ye padhte hi ek zordaar jhatka laga Veer ko.

'What the fuck!?'

Pari Level 4 par thi. Uske bawajood ye notification jese Veer ko aur duwidha me daal chuka tha. Kya status hoga Kaera ka jab Pari level 4 pe bhi nahi dekh paayi uske status ko.

Veer ne agle hi pal Sonia ko dekha aur...

'Check!'

[Name - Sonia
Age - 26 yrs
Bio - Sonia! Ek boht hi talented, khubsoorat aur mehanati ladki hai. Ek strong independent business woman. Suhana usse boht preeya hai. 3 childhood friends the uske~ Pushkar, Kaera, aur ******. Kuch uljhano me rehti hai. Kaera is her role model.

Favourability - 39
Relationship - Close Familiars]

Sonia ka poora Data uske saamne khula hua tha.

Aur ek Koshish firse kar Veer ne firse Kaera ko scan kia. Akhir Sonia ka status bhi wo ab padhne me saksham tha.

Par...

[You are not eligible to view this person's status.]

'Shittttttt!!!'

Veer chaah kar bhi, Kaera ka status nahi dekh paa raha tha.

'Just who is she...!?'

Ab iska jawaab toh usse Sonia ke through yu hi mil jaata. Par system dwaara diya gaya description ek alag hi cheez hoti hai apne aap me.

"Nice to meet you.... Veer!"

Kaera ke shabd jese usse apni soch se baahar laaye. Wo peeche hati aur ek antim nazar Veer par daal wo yu hi waha se jaane lagi.

Toh Rohan jo ab tak iss poore nazaare ko dekh raha tha wo apni aas liye bhaagta hua Kaera ke bagal me aaya aur badi hi respect ke saath Kaera se kuch kehna chaaha...

Par Kaera ne usse aise treat kiya jese maano Rohan keval ek hawa ko jhoka ho. Wo bina ruke, bina kisi se baat kiye seedhe hi ek table ki orr jaane lagi. Wo apni seat par baithi toh agle hi pal ek aur business attire me ek professional lady uske bagal me aa kar baith gayi.

Idhar Rohan bechaare ki gaand jalna swabhaavik tha. Wo kehte hai na, jo jesa karta hai wo wesa hi bharta hai.

Jo usne Veer ke saath kiya tha. Wesa hi raviyya usse Kaera se mila. Aur ye sabhi waha khade hue logo ne dekha. Rohan ne jese hi dekha ki Veer usse dekh ke muskuraa raha hai, toh uski gaand aur bhi jal gayi. Aur sulghi gaand liye wo apne daat meeste hue waha se nikal gaya.

[Haha~ Such a jerk. That's what you get for disrespecting my Master!]

Veer : Sonia jii... Aapki friend... Yu hi nikal gayi...??

Suhana (sighs) : Ye toh harr baar ka hai.

Veer : Kya matlab!?

Suhana : Let's move to our table... Dinner start ho chuka hai. Wahi samjhaati hu.

Aur Sonia aur Veer ko liye Suhana apni table ki seat me viraajmaan thi.

Uss se kuch hi duri par Kaera ki table thi jaha keval wo aur shayad uski P.A baithi hui thi.

Aur harr ek na ek pal, Kaera ki nazre Veer se bhidti. Nazro ke yu milaap se Veer apni nigaahe hataane par majboor ho jaata. Par ye naino ke khel me keval wahi nahi shaamil tha.

Veer ke saamne baithi Sonia, usse aur Kaera ko ghur ghur ko side eye kar ke dekh rahi thi. Harr ek action uski nazre pakad rahi thi.

Aur pata nahi kyu... Ek ajeeb sii bechaini sii ho rahi thi usse Kaera ke yu iss tarah se Veer ko dekhne par...

Sonia (mann me) : Just what is going on between them!? K-Kya Kaera...?? Veer ko jaanti hai...!? Dono aise baar baar kyu dekh rahe hai... This is so ... Ugh! It's making me anxious...

Suhana : Haa! Toh... Baat aisi hai ki...

Sonia : Ye bataana zaroori hai...!?

Suhana : Hmm? Kyu? Kya tumhe Veer pe bharosa nahi..!?

Sonia : Aisi baat nahi hai. I trust him... It's just...

Suhana : Toh kya dikkat hai...!? Well, wo hamaare saath hai so there's no harm in telling him.

Veer : !??

Suhana : Darasal... Jab Sonu choti thi. Tab se hi uske 3 khaas dost the.

Veer : Ohhh!

Suhana : Aur teeno hi well... Hamaari tarah rich family ko belong karte hai. I mean... Pushkar ab nahi raha... But Kaera aur Nat abhi bhi hai.

Veer : Nat!?

Suhana : Hmm! Nat... Matlab Natalia. She's a singer. Wo yaha nahi rehti ab. Foreign me hai. Sonu ne uske saath bhi apna touch kho diya.

Veer : Uske saath matlab!?

Suhana (sighs) : Kaera se bhi... Sonu ki patri nahi khaati... I don't know uss Kaera ko achanak kya hua hai ki wo bas aise behave karti hai kese Sonu uski bachpan ki dost nahi bas ek stranger hai.

Veer : Aisa kyu bhala?

Suhana : I don't know. Wo pehle aisi nahi thi. I hate to say it... But... She's damn intelligent. I mean... Wo boht hi zyaada talented hai. Ek alag hi level pe hai wo. Sonu se bhi zyaada...

Veer (surprised) : R-Really!???

'Fuckkkk! Ye Suhana mujhe darra rahi hai ya bata rahi hai....!?'

Suhana : Hmm! Bachpan se hi... Sonu usse apna role model maanti aayi hai. Ye kehna galat nahi hoga ki aaj yadi Sonu iss mukaam par hai toh uska boht bada kaaran Kaera hai.

Suhana ke aisa kehne par Sonia ka chehra apne aap neeche udaasi me jhuk gaya jo Veer dekh paa raha tha.

Suhana : Kaera aur Sonu ke beech boht gehra rishta tha. Boht gehra. Par achanak hi... Kaera foreign shift ho gayi thi. Uske baad Sonu aur uske beech kayi saalo tak mulaqaat nahi hui. Aur jab hui... Toh uski personality completely badal chuki thi.

Veer : I see... Aisa kya hua hoga bhala...!?

Suhana : Iska koi fayda nahi. Lakh baar puch chuki hai Sonu aur mein bhi... But she remains indifferent. Wo bas... I don't know kehke hume jawaab de deti hai. Na jaane kya hua hai.

Veer : But... Aisa kese... Baat karne se koi na koi toh hal niklega hi...

Suhana : You don't understand Veer. Maamla boht pecheeda hai. Trust me!

Aisa kya hua tha inn do saheliyo ke beech bhala!? Jo aaj dono itni gehri dosti rakhne ke baad ek dusre se aise pesh aa rahi thi jese maano anjaan ho.

Sonia ka yu maayusi se bhara chehra Veer ko kahi na kahi andar se bada hi tang kar raha tha. Uska dil khud bechain hue jaa raha tha.

Aur agle hi pal Suhana ne fir aur kuch baatein ujaagar kii,

Suhana : Baat sirf itni nahi hai. Sonu ko inferiority complex hai...

Sonia : Diiiiiiiii....

Suhana : Shhh! Jo sach hai wo sach hai.

Sonia : Ughhh!!!!

Wo Veer se nazre churaaye ek baar fir apna sarr jhuka lii.

Suhana : Yaani ki... Sonu apne aap ko Kaera ke saamne tucch samajhti hai. Usse lagta hai ki wo kabhi bhi Kaera se aage nahi nikal paegi. Hamesha uss se peeche hi rahegi. Chaahe wo sundarta ho, chaahe intelligence, chaahe leadership, chaahe richness, personality, everything.... You name it. Harr baar... Meri Sonu... Bechaari maat kha jaati hai.

Veer : Ahh! I see... Ki kyu aap unhe apna role model maanti hai...

Suhana : Par yahi heen bhaavna Sonu ki aur badh jaati hai jab jab usse ye realize hota hai ki wo aur Kaera ek hi umr kii hai. Fir bhi... Look at the difference.

Sonia : And thank you for again making me realize.

Suhana : Sorry Sonu! I had to...

Veer : Iska koi na koi solution toh hoga...

Suhana : Hmm! Par ye yahi khatam nahi hota...

Veer : Huh??

Suhana : Jab jab... Sonu ne kuch paana chaaha hai... Kaera wo pehle hi paa chuki thi.

Veer : ??

Suhana : Bachpan me school me first aane ke liye mehnat karti thi Sonu par top pe hamesha se Kaera ka naam hota tha. Sports me race me first aane ke liye Sonu practice karti thi toh usse pata chalta tha ki Kaera pehle se hi top rank holder hai. Bade hue toh Business me already Kaera apni company ko kaha se kaha leke aa gayi... Aur Sonu abhi bhi uss se boht peeche hai... Itna hi nahi... Jis University se Kaera thi, Sonu ne bhi wahi admission liya tha, iss aas me ki wo iss baar Kaera ko academics me peeche chorregi...

Veer : Then!?

Suhana (sighs) : Firse muh ki khaani padi... Kaera University ki topper in academics bani. Dono ke beech hi ek bridge bana hua hai jo itna lamba hai ki bechaari meri Sonu... Bas usse paar karne ke liye din raat mehnat karti rehti hai.

Veer : Par itni mehnat kyu? Sonia jii... Aap ke paas itna paisa hai... Bhale hi Kaera jii se kam hai. Par... Aapke paas apne aap me ek santushti janak sampatti hai. Fir isme itni mehnat kyu!??

Suhana : Veer! Samjho...!

Veer : ??

Suhana : Pehle... Sonu ye sab karti thi because she wanted to beat Kaera... Wo Kaera se aage nikalna chaahti thi. Tab usse jalan bhi hoti thi. Par ab...

Veer : Ab!?

Suhana : Ab Sonu usse haraana chaahti hai to get her attention. Keval ek baar uska dhyaan kheechna chaahti hai. Apni uss puraani sabse close saheli ka...

Sonia : Boht hua dii... Stop it now. Please!

Suhana : Fine! Yahi hai truth Veer...

Veer : Hmm! It's complicated.

Suhana : Exactly!

Aur kuch derr me hi dinner shuru ho chuka tha.

Dinner karne ke baad jab Veer uthne ke liye hua tabhi uske kareeb ek lady chalte hue aa rahi thi.

Aur Sonia aur Suhana ne jese hi uss lady ko aate hue dekha toh wo dono hi hairaani me pad gayi.

Wo lady Veer ke paas aake khadi hui aur uss se boli,

"Miss wants to see you in private for a moment!"

Veer : Hmm????

Par Veer se zyaada hairaan kar dene waala Sonia ka reaction tha.

Sonia : Whaaaaaaatttttt!???

Wo apni jagah se khadi hui uss lady ko stabdh nigaaho se ghur rahi thi.

Sonia : W-Whyyy!????? Why does she wants to meet Veer? Kya Kaera Veer ko jaanti hai?

Saamne khadi lady, Kaera ki wahi P.A thi jo uske saath baithi hui thi aur wo apni miss ka instruction leke yaha par aayi thi. Par jese ye sab kuch Sonia ko zaroorat se zyaada hi affect kar raha tha.

Veer : K-Kya mein puch sakta hu kyu?

Lady : Mujhe nahi pata! I'm sorry! Unhone bas kuch moments ke liye hi apni table par bulaaya hai. Only you! No one else.

Usne ek nazar Sonia aur Suhana par maarte hue kaha. Wo kya kehna chaah rahi thi matlab saaf tha. Sonia apna nichla honth daato tale dabaaye bechaini me Veer ko dekh rahi thi jese maano uss se guhaar laga rahi ho ki mat jao.

Par Veer ka jaana zaroori tha. Kahi Kaera ne usse uss raat ke baare me discuss karne ke liye toh nahi bulaaya?

Veer : O-Okay!

Suhana : For only few moments... We have to leave too. Tell your Miss Kaera about this...

Lady : I understand. I will tell her for sure.

Aur Veer agle hi pal Sonia ki nazro se dur jaa chuka tha. Kaera ki table ki orr...

Suhana apni behan ke ravaiyye ko dekh chintit thi par usne wo bhaav apne chehre par na aane diye. Wo jaanti thi ki uski behan Sonu itni bechain kyu hai. Sonia ko ek darr tha...

Kaera bachpan se leke aaj tak... Uske haatho se harr cheez pehle leti gayi hai. Chaahe wo top positions ho ya awards ho ya kuch bhi...

Kahi aisa na ho... Aaj Veer ko bhi wo...

Sonia ke paas se dur kar apne paas le jaaye.

Bas! Issi kaaran ek ajeeb sii bechaini ho rahi thi Sonia ko... Wo abhi bhaag ke Veer ko pakad ke apne paas laana chaahti thi par wo khud ko roke hue thi.

Sonia (mann me) : I knew it. I knew ki Kaera Veer ko jaanti hai... Par... Par kese!??? Aur kyuuuu???

Idhar Veer jese hi uske saamne pohucha toh Kaera ne usse uske saamne baithne ke liye kaha.

Lady : Miss! Suhana miss has said that they have to leave soon.

Kaera : Thank you Ruchika! And don't worry... Mujje zyaada samay nahi lagega...

Ruchika : As you say Miss. I will go and inform Miss Suhana.

Kaera : Please do so...!

Aur wo Ruchika Veer aur Kaera ko akela chorr Suhana ko inform karne chali gayi.

Kaera : Veer!

Veer : Aahh! Y-Yes!??

Kaera : It's been a long time... Isn't it!?

'Fuckkkkk! She remembered...'

Veer : Aah! Y-Yeah!!

Kaera : I'm glad ki tumne honestly kaha.

Veer : Th-Thanks!? Ahahaha...

Itni khubsoorat ladki ke saamne baith Veer ka confidence dagmaga zaroor raha tha par still wo pehle se situation ko kaafi behatar handle kar raha tha. Par Kaera ke agle kuch shabd jese usse poora hairat me daal diye.

Kaera : Life is merciless. Zindagi ko gam dena bakhubi aata hai. Jitna iss zindagi se dosti karna chaahoge, ye utna hi dur bhaagti hai. Kuch logo ke paas kaabiliyat hoti hai toh wo apni zindagi badal lete hai. Kuch ke paas kaabiliyat hoti hai par halaat unhe apni zindagi na badalne par majboor kar dete hai. Aur jinke paas kaabiliyat nahi hoti wo bas kismat ke liye baithe rehte hai. Ki kisi na kisi din unki kismat chamkegi.

Veer (shocked) : !??????

Kaera : Fir ek samay aisa bhi aata hai, jab aapke paas sab kuch hota hai, par jeene ki tamanna hi nahi rehti. Aisa lagta hai maano ki bas ye zindagi apne aap hi tham jaaye. Khud ko maarne ki himmat bhi nahi hoti kabhi. Bas talaash rehti hai toh kuch aisi cheez ki jo sab kuch badal ke rakh de. Aur... Baad me wo milta bhi hai. Wo kisi bhi roop me mil sakta hai, ek insaan ke roop me, ya ek jaanvar, ya fir kuch aur... Jo aapko ek raah dikhaata hai, khushiyaa deta hai, ek naya jeevan deta hai. Bas uska intezaar karna padta hai. Aur jab uss se mulaqaat hoti hai, tab pata chalta hai ki Life kya cheez hai.

Veer : Y-Ye...!???

Kaera : Weren't you the one who told me this?

Ye shabd wahi the, jo Veer ne uss raat Kaera ko tab kahe the jab usne ye sawaal pucha tha ~ 'What is life??'

Kaera ko harr ek baat jese by heart ratti hui thi.

'Wtf?? What abnormal memory is this!?'

[I must say! She's damn good!]

Kaera : Tell me Veer! Tumne hi ye sab kaha tha na?

Veer (nods) : R-Right!

Kaera : I still don't understand. I find it relatable. But still... I don't feel anything... Tumhe hi unn baato ka matlab mujhe samjhaana hoga...

Veer : Huh????

'Wtf???'

Kaera usse ajeeb sii nazro se dekh rahi thi. Uske chehre par koi muskuraahat nahi thi. Bas ajeeb sii ek aas thi unn aankho me...

Duwidha me phassa Veer Kaera se nazre churaate hue usne Suhana ki table par nazar maari toh paaya ki Sonia khud boht bechaini sii bhari nigaaho se Veer ko dekh rahi thi. Balki ghur rahi thi.

"Where are you looking!?"

Veer : ???

Kaera ki awaaz jese usse hosh me laayi.

Kaera ne notice kar liya tha ki Veer kaha dekh raha tha. Aur shayad usse Veer ka ye ravaiyya pasand nahi aaya tha. Kahi aur dekhna jab wo uss se baat kar rahi ho...

Kaera : Look at me... You Understand!?

Agle hi pal uski aankho me itna tej tha aur nidarta jisse dekh koi bhi bhaybheet ho jaaye.




Veer : *nods*

Tabhi Ruchika laut ke aayi aur kuch chintit sii lag rahi thi.

Ruchika : Miss! There's a problem!

Kaera : Hmmm? Kya hua?

Ruchika : Wo... Saxena yaad hai na aapko? Uska call aaya tha abhi. Uska kehna hai ki wo apni zameen utne amount me bilkul nahi bechega... Uska kehna hai ki wo zameen boht hi faldaayak hai aur boht hi shubh hai. Keh raha hai ki usse hum se zyaada amount dene ke offers aa rahe hai toh bhala wo saste amount me hume kyu beche zameen!?

Kaera : He's just bluffing. Wo chaahta hai ki hum zyaada paisa deke uski uss zameen ko le jo outer area me hai? Aur already teen baar reject ho chuki hai...!? He should thank us ki humne itna offer diya hai.

Ruchika : I know but wo wahi keh raha hai ki... Amount double karo warna wo kisi aur ko de dega.

Kaera : Ohhh!? Wo kisi ko nahi de paega. Koi lene waala hi nahi hai. He's just bluffing. He wants to play... Then I will play as well...

Ruchika : ???

Kaera : Spread the rumours ki wo zameen ekdum ashubh hai. Waha bhooto ka vaas tha ya kuch bhi... Make it extreme. Press ko inform karo ki company xxxxxx ki Miss Kaera uss zameen ko visit karne gayi aur waha se aane ke baad unhe karodo ka nuksaan hua... Pehle page par display honi chahiye ye news... Go! I'll see... Ki kese amount badhaata hai ab Saxena.

Ruchika (dazed) : Ahhh! Y-Yess!!!

Kaera : Hmm? So where were we...!?

Usne Veer ko firse dekha jo usse muh khole ghur raha tha.

'Who the hell is this girl...!???'
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Update - 121 ~ A trip to the village (2)​

Ab tak...

Dekha ki waha teen shaks khade hue the. Ya teen aurte!

Purvi samet Bhavna, Tejal dono ne hi Veer ko aate dekha.

Par...!

Do aise nazre thi jo aapas me jaa ke itni zorr se takraayi ki aas paas ke logo ko bhi unki bhidant mehsoos ho gayi.

Aur unn do nazro ki maalkin thi.

Bhavna aur Shweta!!!!

Ab aage...

Jab sansaar me ek jagah par kuch ghatit ho raha hota hai toh wahi dusri jagah par bhi kuch na kuch chal raha hota hai. Yahi toh duniya hai. Alag alag insaan ek hi samay par alag alag parishthitiyo se hokar guzarte hai.

Kuch aisa hi haal Arun ka tha. Purvi Tejal aur Bhavna ke saath nikal gayi thi. Shaam ko toh usne phone karke bataya tha par nikalte waqt ek baar bhi nahi jataaya.

Jab Arun apne ghar par kaam kaaj se lauta toh taala dekh ke usne bas ek thakaan bhari aah bhari. Jab aurte aapas me mili bhagat baitha leti thi na toh fir toh woh mardo ko aise ignore karti thi jese jethalal iyer ko karta hai.

Arun jab taala khol ghar ke andar aaya toh bagal me hi table par chipka ek sticky note usse dikhaayi diya. Usme likhawat saaf saaf Purvi ki thi,

'Mein jaa rahi hu. Kab aaungi woh sab phone par bata dungi. Subah shaam maid aayegi, jhaadu pocha bartan ke liye. Khana aap bana ke kha lena. Baahar ka mat khaana meri gerr haziri me. Maid advance me paise maange toh ek rupaya bhi nahi dena. Keh dena jab didi aayengi toh hisaab karengi. Dawayi wagarah sab TV waale showcase ke right drawer me hai. Aur kuch ho toh call kar lena. Bye!'

Itna sab padh ke Arun bas mann hi mann muskura ke baith gaya.

"Batao bhai! Mujhse zyada chinta toh inhe kaam waali ki hai. Chal bhai Arun! Lag jaa kaam par. Khana banaana hai. Aaj samajh aa raha hai ki khana banaana kitna mushqil hota hai. *sigh* "

Aur Arun haath muh dho ke lag gaya apne kaamo me.

Wahi yaha Ragini Veer aur baakiyo ko jab chorr ke aayi tabhi usse car me baithe baithe hi ehsaas hua,

'Hey bhagwaan ye mene kya kar diya?'

Woh ghabraate hue apne seene me haath rakhi. Pichli baar Veer jab Las Vegas gaya tha toh jaane se pehle itni chumma chaati hui thi unki, aur Ragini ne fir woh din kese kaate the ye sirf wahi jaanti thi.

Iss baar toh seedhe uski choot ko choos ke gaya tha Veer. Bhala ab kese samay katega uska?

'Nahiiiii!!! Y-Ye mene kya kar diya? Sab iss Veer ki galti hai. Oh god!!!'

Woh apni choot par haath rakhte hue khud ko aane waale dino ke liye taiyaar karne lagi. Kyuki harr raat ab usse Veer ki yaad hi sataane waali thi.

Ye toh tha swadesh ka haal. Par wahi desh ke baahar kisi dusre desh me ek khubsoorat mahila hospital par baithi baithi apne mobile ko ghoor ke dekh rahi thi.

Uska apna taapmaan badhe ya na badhe par uske gaalo ka taapmaan zaroor badha hua tha.

'Don't make me fall for you! Thank you!'

Baar baar woh line padh ke Suhana ka dil zorr zorr se dhadakne par majboor ho raha tha.

'What did he mean by that? P-Pagal hai kya? I'm- I'm married already.'

"Dinner is here~"

Darwaaza khula aur Sonia ek tray me khaana lete hue andar aayi. Apni choti behan ko dekh Suhana hadbada gayi aur usne fauran hi Veer ka message apni chat se delete kar diya.

Sonia : Huh? Kya hua?

Suhana : K-Kuch nahi! Tum firse le aayi? Nurse log hai toh na yaha?

Sonia : Nurse se hi leke aayi hu. Chaliye ab fatafat khaiye. Aur ye phone me kya dekh rahi thi?

Suhana : Kuch nahi!

Sonia : Don't lie to me! Aap kuch dekh rahi thi.

Usne aage badh seedhe Suhana ka phone hi chhina liya,

Suhana : Sonuuuu!!???

Sonia : Huh? Ohhh! Veer? Aap Veer se baat kar rahi thi?

Suhana : I...

Sonia : Hmm? Gift bheja hai aapne? Kya bheja hai?

Suhana : Kuch nahi! Bas aise hi...

Sonia : Bataiaye na!

Suhana : Mene kaha na kuch nahi hai. Woh toh usne yaha help kii thi isliye mene bhej diya. It's nothing. Lao mujhe khana do!

Sonia : O-Okay!

Sharmaate hue Suhana ek raahat ki saans lete hue khaane me lag gayi. Accha hua jo sahi samay par usne Veer ka message delete kar diya tha. Warna...!

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Mumbai Central
Night ~ 10:45 PM



*Ding Dong*

Station ke shor ne jese sab ko hosh me laaya. Bhavna aur Shweta dono ek dusre ko dekh rahi thi. Aisa laga jese waqt hi tham gaya ho. Dono ek dusre ko pehli baar dekh rahi thi, fir bhi dono ko jese abhaas ho gaya tha. Apne pratidwandi ka.

'This is bad...!'

Veer ne ye dekhte hi khud ko kosna shuru kar diya. Kya soch ke usne Shweta ko saath chalne ke liye haan kaha tha? Uski aqal tab kya ghaas charne chali gayi thi?

*Ding*

[Intimidating Presence has been equipped.]

Ek Raja ke aura me nahaate hue Veer bina derri kiye aage badha aur unn dono maao ke beech aaya. Usne baari baari dono ko dekha. Waha ka vatavaran tang ho rakha tha. Aur ye sabhi mehsoos kar paa rahe the.

Veer : Mujhe station par koi vivaad nahi chahiye. Sabke mann me questions hai I know. Ek baar apni apni seats par hum baith jaaye uske baad hi koi charcha hogi. Is that clear?

Jab uski commanding tone unn sabhi ne suni, toh sab ke badan me ek sihran daud gayi. Unn sabhi aurto ke beech akela mard tha woh. Aur jo tej uski aankho me tha, jis qadar woh apni buland awaaz me unhe nirdesh de raha tha, uski soorat, uski adaa, sabhi khadi aurte waha haami bharne par majboor ho gayi. Ek chu tak nahi nikli kisi ke muh se.

Kamaal tha Intimidating Presence ka. Jesa naam wesa kaam.

Sab ne haan me apni gardan hilaayi aur uske turant baad hi unki train ka announcement hua, jo jald hi nikalne waali thi.

Veer : Chalo!

Baari baari ek ek karke woh sabhi Veer ke peeche chal dii. Uske dono kandho par bags the, saath hi dono haatho me bhi. Arohi aur Kavya peeche se usse dekh ke hi mann hi mann uski tareefo ke pul baandh rahi thi.

Itna sab kuch uthaane ke baad bhi uski peeth zara bhi nahi jhuki. Veer ke liye toh jese ye uski chhingli ka kaam tha.

Suman ki nazre ek taq Bhavna par hi tiki hui thi. Uski aankho me chamak thi. Bhavna bhi kayi baar usse asmanjas me dekhi par jese woh confused sii prateet ho rahi thi. Aur Suman ye dekh bas mann hi mann hass rahi thi.

Peeche chal rahi Tej bhi apna trolley bag ghaseetate hue kabhi apni maa ko dekhti toh kabhi uss anjaan aurat ko.

Shweta!!

Woh jese samajh gayi thi turant hi ki ye aurat kaun thi.

Tej : Aapne usse roka kyu nahi kal? Haan?

Woh apni maa ke paas aate hue virodh me boli,

Bhavna : Kya?

Tej : Veer ko! Usse roka kyu nahi aapne ghar me hi?

Bhavna : Tumhe lagta hai ki woh rukta?

Tej : Kyu nahi? Aap maa ho. Agar aapne manaaya hota toh-

Bhavna (Tej ko dekhte hue) : Woh nahi rukta.

Tej : Kaise?

Bhavna : Maa hu uski! Jaanti hu kyu naraaz hai mujhse. Waaqif hu uski udaasi se. Aur ye bhi jaanti hu ki kab tak woh mujhse rootha rahega.

Tej : A-Aap samajh nahi rahi hai. Dekha na aapne? Kaun kaun aaya hai uske saath. Aap kuch nahi jaanti hai mom apne bete ke baare me. Literally, 20 saal baad mil rahe ho aap ek dusre se.

Bhavna : Accha? Aur tum mujhse zyaada jaanti ho?

Uski baat par Tej ko Nidhi dwara bataayi gayi Veer ki saari baatein yaad aayi. Aur woh guroor me apni maa se boli,

Tej : Bilkul! Mein kuch aisi baate jaanti hu jo aap bhi nahi jaanti.

Bhavna : Ohhh!?

Tej : Isliye keh rahi hu. Aap ne manaya hota toh...! Woh rukk jaata. Aap sach me kuch nahi jaanti! Ek baar koshish toh-

Bhavna jo chal rahi thi woh achanak hi rukk gayi.

Tej : Huh?

Tej bhi saath me rukte hue apni maa ko prashn bhari nigaaho se dekhi.

Bhavna : Tej!

Tej : Hmm?

Bhavna : Tumse 9 mahine zyaada jaanti hu mein usse.

Bas! Ye vaakya hi kaafi tha Tej ko sab kuch bataane ke liye. Woh ek vaakya jese Tej ke saare bolo par haawi pad gaya. Maa thi woh Veer ki. Toh kya hua agar woh uss se 20 saal baad mil rahi thi. Kya hua agar unke beech woh communication nahi tha abhi. Iska matlab ye toh nahi ki Veer ab uski santaan hona chorr chuka tha?

Woh bina kuch kahe firse aage badh gayi. Aur Tej bas wahi khadi rahi.

"Tch!" Nichle honth ko daato tale dabaaye antatah woh bhi peeche peeche chal dii.

Bheed toh thi.



Logo ki bheed se idhar udhar hote hue idhar Veer apne second AC ke compartment ke darwaaze par jab pohucha.

"Le chai chai chai chai~" Ek chai waala ruki train me fatafat bhaagte hue ek compartment se dusre compartment me ghusa.

*Ding Dong*

Aur fir se announcement hua,

"Yaatri gann kripya dhyaan de. Mumbai se Jaipur jaane waali train xxxxx kuch hi samay me platform kramaank xx se chalne waali hai."

Veer : Bheed kaafi hai. Pehle aap log andar hoiye. Mein aata hu fir.

Suman : Jii maali- J-Jii! Veer jii!

Suman sabse pehle andar gayi toh ussi ke peeche Arohi aur Kavya bhi andar ho lii.

Bhavna jab Veer ke saamne aayi toh Veer ne usse dekha,

Veer : Hamara compartment ye left wala hai. Aur baaki inn logo ka right wala.

Bhavna : Hmm!

Balhaar ne reservation toh araam se karwa diya tha. Par compartment agal bagal waale mile the. Yaani alag alag coach.

Bhavna upar chadhi toh uske peeche hi Purvi bhi chadhte hue andar ho gayi. Par jaane se pehle woh Veer pe ek nazar daalna nahi bhuli.

Shweta aayi aur Veer ko ek baar dekh woh bhi chadh ke daaye waale coach me chali gayi. Woh jese kuch kehna chaahti thi. Par baahar khade aur bhi logo ke kaaran woh bina kuch kahe hi bheetar chal dii.

Akhir me Tej jo sabse peeche chal rahi thi woh bhi aa gayi.

Veer : Rukiye!

Tej : ???

Veer : Suitcase mujhe de dijiye!

Tej : Arre nahi! Mein rakh lungi.

Veer : Chot lagi hai aapko! Bhuliye mat!

Uske kehne par Tej chup chaap apne bhai ko dekhne lagi. Uske bhai ko iss baat ka abhi bhi khayaal tha.

Tej : It's- It's really okay!

Veer : Nahi! Aap andar jaiye! Mein leke aata hu.

Tej : No way! Tumhare paas pehle hi itna hai. Aur mein itni kamzor nahi hu ki ek chota sa-

Veer : Baat kamzori ki nahi hai.

Woh kehte hue uske kaan ke paas jhuka aur dheere se bola,

"I know you are strong. Par baat chot ki hai. Pressure se wound khul sakta hai firse. Andar chaliye! Mein laata hu!"

Veer ke bol sunn Tej ko aisa laga jese kap-kapaati thand ki sheet-leher me kisi ne usse garm kambal udha diya ho.

Ek garm sa ehsaas, woh garmaahat, Tej ne jese apne dil me mehsoos kii. Aur apne bhai ki baat maan woh andar chal ke baaye coach ki orr mud gayi.

Usne palat ke dekha toh Veer peeche peeche hi aa raha tha. Aur woh ye dekh khush ho gayi.

Andar Bhavna aur Purvi dono apni seat numbers dekh jagah dhundne me lagi thi. Aur kuch derri ke baad hi unhe apni jagah mil gayi.

Bhavna : Ohh! Ye waali hai.

Purvi : Hmm? Haan! Ye dono upar neeche ki apni hai. Samaan rakh dete hai pehle.

Fatafat apna samaan berth ke neeche daalte hue dono hi Veer aur Tej ka intezaar karne lagi.

Tej khaali haath aayi toh Bhavna ne uss se uske bag ka pucha, jiska jawaab usse agle hi shan mil gaya Veer ko dekhte hue.

Veer ne kuch bhi kahe bina Tej ka suitcase bhi andar kiya aur fir ahista se bola,

Veer : Mein ye baaki samaan rakh ke aata hu.

Tej (nods) : Hmm!

Aur woh nikal gaya. Uske jaate hi teeno stree apni seats par virajmaan ho gayi. Veer ne aisa agar kaha hai ki woh aayega toh zaahir hai woh unke saath hi safar karne wala tha. Na ki apne unn parivaar waalo ke saath. Ye soch ke mann hi mann Tej samet Bhavna aur Purvi bhi kaafi khush ho gayi.

Idhar Veer iss coach se nikal jab bagal waale coach me jese hi aaya. Toh pehle hi usse Kavya ki khil-khilaati hui awaaz sunayi pad gayi,

'Ye ladki bhi! Kitni zorr se hassti hai.'

[Par uske baad bhi aap kabhi nahi bhadakte uss par.]

'Well...!'

[Kyuki woh aapki chaheeti hai.]

'Y-Yeah!'

[Aur aap usse pyaar bhi karte ho.]

'Hmm!'

[Aur-]

'That's it! Ahem! Hum baad me baat karenge iss par.'

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"Arre! Veer bhaiya aa gaye hahaha~"

Kavya apni berth par baithe paav ko latka ke zorr se hilaate hue boli.

Kavya : Bhaiya! Ye chaaro apni seats hai hehe~ Poori full! Upar neeeche agal bagal. Line se hai hamari!

Veer : Haan toh? Ticket me line se hi numbers diye hai. Toh obviously line se hi milegi.

Kavya (blushes) : O-Ohh!

Arohi : Tum itni excited ho Kavya? Aisi kya baat hai?

Kavya : Ohh c'mon dii! Arre mein kitne saalo baad train me safar kar rahi hu. Jab choti thi tab gayi thi. Uske baad kahi jaane nahi mila. Mama ki shaadi me bhi aap log ho aaye the par mujhe nahi le gaye the. Hmph~ Aur uske baad aaj jaa rahi hu. Woh bhi ek unknown gaav me. Woh bhi Veer bhaiya ke saath. Aur wo bhi bina mummy papa ke. Akele! Hehehehe~

Uska excitement usse dekh ke hi pata chal raha tha. Usse aise dekh Veer jo ab tak tensed tha woh khud muskura baitha.

Kavya : Par ek minute! Ehhh? Bhaiya aapki seat?

Veer (smiles) : Meri seat bagal waale coach me hai.

Kavya : Whaaaatttt??? Kyuuuuu????

Woh zorr se chillaayi!

Veer : Arreee?? Kyu kya? Reservation mera pehle unhone kar diya tha toh seat uss hisaab se mili. Mujhe kya pata tha tum sab log bhi baad me kood padoge?

Kavya : B-But-

Idhar Shweta ne jese hi Veer ke muh se 'unhone' shabd suna. Uski maayus aankho me jese ek chamak aa gayi. Ek umang jaagi jese.

Veer ne 'maa' keh ke nahi bulaaya Bhavna ko. Kya ye sanket tha? Kya uske paas abhi bhi mauka tha? Woh taktaki lagaaye Veer ko hi dekhne lagi.

Suman (smiles) : Kood padoge se aapka kya matlab hai Veer jii? Kya aap nahi chaahte the ki hum sab aaye?

Kavya : Haan! Boliye boliye! Jawaab dijiye! We want to know! Nation wants to know...!!!

Kavya ki baat par Arohi halke se hassi. Aur bechaara Veer,

Veer : Mein-

Khamosh reh gaya!

Suman (smiles) : Kherr chorriye! Aap samaan toh rakh dijiye! Kab se liye hue hai!

Veer : Ohh right!

Veer ne saara samaan berth ke neeche kiya aur fir woh seat par baith gaya.

Kavya ne itne me ek chips ka packet khola toh Veer ke bagal se baith woh uske saath share karte hue khaane lagi.

Arohi bhi Veer ke bagal se baithi hui thi. Woh window seat par thi. Usse sight seeing behad pasand thi. Isliye window seat hi leti thi woh. Aur saath me haatho me ek book hoti thi. Harr safar me ye uski aadat thi.

*Munch* *Munch*

Kavya : Bhaiya! *nom* *nom* Hum kab tak pohuchenge?

Veer : Din me!

Kavya : Huhh? Din me?

Veer : Lagbhag 15 ghante ka route hai. Toh tum khud gin lo!

Kavya : Hmm! 11 baje niklegi na train!? 11 toh baj gaye. *munch*

Veer : Bas chalti hi hogi.

Aur uske kehte hi train ne ek dhakka khaaya aur apna sanket de diya.

Veer : Lo! Chal dii!

Arohi : Veer?

Veer : Hmm?

Arohi : Wese! Hum flight se bhi toh jaa sakte the na??

Veer : I don't know! Unhone train ki tickets kii toh fir aapki bhi wahi kari mene.

Arohi : Ohh!

Veer : Aur tum ye harr baar lays ka green flavour kyu laati ho?

Kavya : Because it's the BESTTTT flavour!!!! *nom* *nom*

Arohi (smiles) : Kya tumhe pasand nahi!?

Ek chip woh packet se nikaalte hue puchi.

Veer : Well! Utna nahi jitna dark blue wala hota hai.

Arohi : Ohh! You like spice!!? Huh!!

Veer ko pata nahi kya hua par usne Arohi ki aankho me dekha aur tapaak se bol diya,

Veer : Yes! I love spice!

Jis qadar usne ye kaha tha, aisa laga jese uska ishaara kahi aur bhi tha. Aur isse bhaanpte hi Arohi ke gaal laal ho gaye. Woh fauran hi muh ferrte hue baahar dekhne lagi.

'Fuck! What did I just-!??'

Mann palatne ke liye usne apna phone nikaal Ragini ko ek message daala ki train chal dii hai. Aur fir woh uth gaya.

Veer : Alright! Mein chalta hu. Agar koi bhi dikkat ho toh bas bata dena. Okay?

Kavya : Ehhhh!!? Bhaiyaaa???

Veer (smiles) : What?

Kavya : Aap yahi rukiye na!!!

Veer : Sadly, mujhe jaana hai waha.

Kavya : Ahhh! Right Right! Woh didi!! Mujhe bhi unse milna hai.

Veer : Huh?

Arohi : Mujhe bhi!!!

Veer : Wait!

Suman : Kyu nahi? Shuru se hi ye safar atpata sa lag raha hai. Agar hum unse baat nahi karenge toh aage ka safar aur bhi atpata ho jayega hum sab ke liye.

Kavya : Ohh! Suman aunty aap sach me sabse best ho!!!!

Woh uth ke Suman se chipak gayi.

Suman : Fufufu~ Toh chale?

Kavya : Yes yes!!!

Dono behne uth ke waha se nikal gayi. Aur Shweta akeli waha reh ke ghabra uthi.

Shweta (uthate hue) : M-Mein bhi-

Uske uthate hi Suman ne usse pakad ke waapas baitha diya,

Suman : Aap yahi rukiye tab tak! Mein mil ke aati hu na. Yaha pe kisi ka hona bhi toh zaroori hai na? Mein ho aau, fir aap chali jaana?

Shweta : P-Par-

Suman (smiles) : Chaliye Veer jii!

Bina Shweta ko bolne ka mauka diye, Suman Veer ke aage chal dii.

Usne Veer ka haath thaama hua tha. Aisa lag raha tha jese ek biwi apne pati ke sang chal rahi ho.

Veer : Umm...! Suman!

Suman : Hmm?

Veer ne ishaara jab apne haath ki orr kiya toh Suman ne ek pal me hi uska haath chorr diya.

Veer : Woh! I think sab galat samjhenge toh-

Suman (nazre jhukaate hue) : Maaf kijiye maalik! Bhavnao me beh gayi thi.

Kehte hue woh palat ke firse jaane lagi par achanak hi rukk gayi. Uski mulaayam baah ko Veer jo jakde hue tha.

Suman : Maalik?

Veer : No! Sorry! Tum meri ho! Log kya sochenge, farq nahi padna chahiye mujhe. Chalo!

Uski baah ko chorr Veer ne uski hatheli ko pakda aur aage chal diya. Suman ke hontho par pyaari sii ek muskaan sajj gayi.

Idhar Arohi aur Kavya dono hi Tejal Purvi aur Bhavna ki berth ke paas pohuch gayi thi.

Kavya : Umm...!

Tej (smiles) : Arre? Kavya? Arohi? Aao na!

Woh dono hi aake baith gayi.

Tej : Mom!!! Aapko pata hai ye dono kaun hai? Meri behne!!! Ye Arohi aur ye Kavya!

Usne uth ke dono ko apne gale se laga liya.

Kavya : Umm mein-

Tej (smiles) : Ye tum dono ki Tai jii hai! Meri aur Veer ki mom!

Kavya : O-Ohh! Namaste Tai jii! Umm-

Arohi : N-Namaste!

Bhavna (smiles) : Namaste! Tum dono...! Sumitra ki beti ho?

Kavya : Ahhh? Aap mummy ko jaanti ho?

Bhavna (smiles) : Kyu nahi jaanungi? Idhar aao meri bacchiyo!

Usne apni baah khol dono ko bulaaya toh dono uske paas aayi. Aur dono ko hi Bhavna ne apne gale se laga liya.

Bhavna : Boht pyaare bacche hai Sumitra ke. *Muah*

Uski iss baat pe Tejal ka muh bigad gaya. Pranjal kameene ki jo yaad aa gayi thi usse. Agar abhi woh Pranjal ki kartoote bata deti toh shayad uski maa apne shabd waapas le leti.

Kavya : T-Tai jii? Aap? Aap fir ghar me kyu nahi thi? Ghar me aapke baare me koi baate kyu nahi karta? Hume toh kuch pata hi nahi tha aapke baare me. Ek photo tak nahi hai aapki. Agar aap Veer bhaiya ki mummy ho toh aap kaha thi ab tak?

Usne bebaak andaaz me sab puch liya.

Bhavna : Beta! Ye lambi kahani hai.

Kavya : Mein sunn lungi!

Bhavna (smiles) : Ussi ke liye toh hum sab iss safar par jaa rahe hai.

Arohi : Past me kuch bada hua tha. Hai na?

Arohi ki baat par Bhavna ne peni nazar se usse dekha. Ye ladki hoshiyaar thi.

Bhavna (nods) : Hmm!

Arohi : K-Kya...!? Kya isliye aapne tau jii ko chorra?

Bhavna (sighs) : Nahi! Woh ghatna alag hai. Par haan! Woh ghatna bhi saath hi judi hui hai. Tum dono chal rahi ho toh sab pata chalega tumhe. Wese!? Sumitra kesi hai?

Arohi : Woh theek hai!

Bhavna (smiles) : Hmm! Apni maasi se toh mil lo!

Dono ne mud ke saamne baithi Purvi ko dekha jo pehle se hi muskura ke apni baahe felaaye unka intezaar kar rahi thi. Dono khushi se uth ke Purvi ke paas gayi toh Purvi ne pyaar se unhe apne seene se laga liya.

Purvi (smiles) : Tum dono boht pyaari ho!

Kavya : Thank you! Hehe! Ahh! Bhaiya aa gaye!!

Itne me Veer bhi Suman ke saath aa chuka tha.

Suman dono Bhavna aur Purvi ko namaste kar ekdum Bhavna ke saamne baith gayi. Aur usse hi dekhne lagi,

Bhavna : ???

Bechaari Bhavna ki samajh nahi aa raha tha ki bhala ye aurat usse aise kyu dekh rahi thi? Par kahi na kahi jese uska mann bhi usse kuch sanket dene ki koshish kar raha tha.

Bhavna : Aap? Kya mein aapko jaanti hu?

Aur ab Suman se jese na raha gaya. Uski aankho se achanak hi aasu nikal pade. Veer hairat me bagal me baithe sab dekh raha tha.

Aur tabhi,

Suman : Didi!!!!

Kehte hue Suman aage badh seedhe Bhavna ke gale se lag gayi.

'Whattttt???'

Stabdh hue Veer saamne ke drishya ko dekh raha tha. Didi? Par Suman ka toh koi rishta hi nahi tha Bhavna se. Fir didi? Kya muh boli didi maana tha usne?

'Just what is going on????'

[Tamaasha dekhte rahiye! Don't stop them. When it crosses the limit. Only then cease them!]

Veer chup chaap baithe sab kuch ghatit hota dekhne laga. Aur baaki sab bhi. Ye sab chal kya raha tha?

Bhavna : Huhh??

Suman namm aankhein liye peeche hui aur apni chaathi par haath rakhte hue boli,

"M-Mein...! Mein Suman Didi!!!"

Bhavna : S-Suman? Huhhhh??!!

Pehle toh Bhavna ki kuch samajh na aaya. Par uske baad hi jese uske dimaag me kuch aaya aur woh bhauchakki sii Suman ko dekh chillaayi,

Bhavna : Sumannnn???!!!!

Suman (nods) : Haan didi!!! Suman!!! Mein Suman! Aapki Suman!!!!

Uske itna kehte hi Bhavna ne usse kass ke apne seene se laga liya.

Bhavna : Hey bhagwaannn!!! Sumannn!!!

Suman : Didiiiiii!!! *sniff*

'Ye dono? Ek dusre ko itne acche se jaanti hai? Akhir maajra kya hai?'

[Just witness!]

Bhavna :T-Tum yaha? Mujhe vishwaas nahi ho raha. Tum! Tum yaha kya kar rahi ho? Haan? M-Mein toh pehchaan hi na paayi tumhe.

Suman (smiles) : Kese pehchaanti aap? Tab mein choti thi. *sniff* Aur ab lagbhag 20 saal baad dekh rahi hai aap mujhe. Par aap abhi bhi utni hi khubsoorat hai. Bilkul bhi nahi badhi hai aapki umr.

Suman ko iss tarah bhaavuk hote Veer ne boht hi kam dekha tha. Matlab saaf tha. Suman aur Bhavna ke beech ek gehra rishta tha.

Bhavna : Accha toh? Aur khud ko toh dekho? Haan? Kaha hai baal bacche? Shaadi ho gayi hai na?

Suman : Ek beti hai. Sonali! Woh ghar pe hai. Aur...! Mene apne pati ko chorr diya hai.

Bhavna : K-Kyu??

Toh Suman uske kaano me jhuki aur dheere se boli, "Maalik ke hote mujhe kisi aur mard ki kya zaroorat?"

Sunte hi Bhavna ka shareer kaanp utha. Ek sansani bhara vichaar uske mastishq se hote hue guzra.

Bhavna : I-Iska matlab!?

Usne ek jhatke me Veer ki orr dekha.

Veer : Hmm?

Aur fir Suman ko. Jo rehesyamayi tareeqe se muskura rahi thi. Aur agle hi pal usse saara maajra samajh aa gaya. Uska sarr neeche jhuk gaya.

Bhavna : Suman t-tum...!?

Suman (smiles) : Hmm?

Veer idhar poori tarah se confused tha.

'What the-!?? What was that look? Woh mujhe aise kyu dekhi?'

[Shayad...!]

'Shayad?'

[Shayad unhe pata chal gaya.]

'Kya???'

[Ki aapne Suman ke saath sex kiya hai.]

'Whaaaatttttttt???'

[Hmm! That look says it all. She seems disappointed.]

'Fucccckkk!!! P-Par ek minute! Suman ne kyu?'

[Suman ne kuch soch rakha hoga. I don't know. I'm trying to calculate everything. Rokiye mat unhe. Jo ho raha hai hone dijiye filhaal. We'll get clues.]

'Shiiitttt!!!'

Veer unn dono ko bareeki se dekhne laga.

Bhavna : Par tum-!?

Suman : Mein yaha kese?

Bhavna : Haan!

Suman : Lambi kahani hai. Safar me aage bataungi. Jese jese aap apne ateet ko kholengi, wese wese mere ateet ke panne bhi saamne aate jayenge.

Bhavna (frowns) : T-Tum!!

Suman : Par aapko swasth dekh boht accha laga. Ab lag raha hai jese sab kuch theek ho jayega.

Bhavna (sighs) : Mujhe pehle se hi andaaza ho jaana chahiye tha.

Suman : Aap kitna hi khilaaf kyu na ho le. Iske virodh me kyu na chali jaaye. Ye hoke hi rahega.

Bhavna : Sh-Shayad tum sahi ho!

Veer ko unki baate zara bhi samajh nahi aa rahi thi. Aur Veer hi kya? Waha baithe kisi ko bhi samajh nahi aa rahi thi siwae Purvi ke.

Purvi : Aur mujhse nahi milogi?

Suman : A-Aap?

Purvi (smiles) : Andaaza kyu nahi lagaati?

Suman ne jab asmanjas me Bhavna ko dekha toh Bhavna ne muskura ke kaha,

Bhavna : Ye Purvi hai!

Suman : Ahhh!!?! Didi!? A-Aap bhi?

Purvi (smiles) : Hmm!

Aur dono saheliyo ki tarah ek dusre se lipat gayi.

Tej : Koi mujhe batayega ki yaha kya ho raha hai? Haan?

Suman (smiles) : Bas ye samajh lijiye! Ki saheliya aapas me mil rahi hai.

Tej : M-Mom??

Bhavna : Hmm! Filhaal yahi kehna sahi hoga.

Tej : Urghh!!

Aur iss tarah Suman Purvi aur Bhavna ki aapas me puraani yaado ko lekar baate hone lagi. Par Veer ki kuch bhi samajh nahi aa raha tha. Usse itna zaroor pata tha ki Suman Bhavna aur Purvi ke saath ateet me judi hui thi. Par kese?? Iska jawaab hi usse dhundna tha. Usne ek aur baat notice kii thi. Woh ye ki Purvi aur Bhavna dono hi usse ab kuch zyaada hi chhup chhup ke dekh rahi thi.

Raat ke 11:50 ho chuke the. Aur dheere dheere ab train ki lights band honi shuru ho gayi thi. Log khaa pee ke apni apni berth par sone jaa rahe the.

Bhavna ne itne me bag se ek tiffin nikaala aur usse khol ke unn sab ko dekhte hue boli, khaas kar Veer se.

Bhavna : Beta! Ye lo! Thoda sa tum sab kha lo!

Tiffin me uske haath ka banaya hua khaana tha. Veer ne jese hi dekha uska mann sach me lalcha gaya. Apni maa ke haath ka khaana.

Kavya : Ohh ohh! Kya hai?

Bhavna (smiles) : Puri aur aloo ki sabzi!

Kavya : Ohh! Achaar bhi?

Bhavna : Haan haan! Aam ka mirchi ka dono ka hai. Lo na!

Kavya : Haan mein lungi! Mujhe roll kar ke do na tai jii!

Bhavna (smiles) : Kyu nahi!

Arohi (blushes) : Kavya? Hum ghar se khaa ke hi aaye the na?

Kavya : Haan par mujhe firse bhook lag gayi.

Jaha Arohi sharma rahi thi toh wahi Bhavna aur Purvi dono hi Kavya ke ravaiyye se behad khush thi.

Bhavna : V-Veer!? Tum-

Veer : Nahi! Mene ghar me kha liya tha.

Bhavna : O-Ohh!

Tej : Veer???

Purvi : Thoda sa kha lo beta?

Veer : Mujhe waqai bhook nahi hai. Maasi!

Purvi ne udaasi me Bhavna ko dekha. Jese kehna chaah rahi ho ki mene koshish ki, par tumhara ladka nahi maana.

Veer : Aur aap!

Tej : Huh?

Veer : Aapki aaj dressing badalni hai. Mein leke aaya hu. Chaliye!

Tej : Nahi! Iski koi zaroorat nahi hai!

Veer : Bilkul nahi! Mrinal jii ne kaha tha ki yaad se dressing badal dena.

Tej : Par...!

Veer : Dikhaiye!

Tej : Toh ab top utaaru yaha?

Veer : ....

Tej (smiles) : Aise upar nahi hoga.

Tej ne apne full sleaved maroon top ki taraf ishaara karte hue kaha. Upar karna asaan nahi tha.

Arohi : Kya hua?

Tej : Ohh kuch nahi!

Veer : Pranjal ne haath me kechi maari thi inhe.

Kavya aur Arohi : K-Kyaaaaa????

Veer : Hmm! Ussi raat fir mein usse ghar par chorr ke gaya tha.

Arohi : Toh ye sab hua tha? I'm so sorrryyy!!!

Kavya : S-Sorryyyy!!!

Woh dono sarr jhuka ke Tej se maafi maangi.

Tej : Arre arre? Isme tum maafi kyu maang rahi ho? It's really okay! I'm fine!

Arohi : I just-

Veer : Arohi dii! Inhe washroom me le jaa kar please inki dressing change karwa dijiye!

Arohi : Haan! Kyu nahi!

Tej : But-

Arohi : Nahi! Aap chaliye! Abhi!

Woh Tej ko pakad ke medic box ke saath seedhe usse washroom me le gayi.

Suman : Ab mujhe bhi chalna chahiye! Koi aur bhi hai, jo betaab hai yaha aane ke liye. Ijaazat dijiye!

Suman uth ke Bhavna aur Purvi ki taraf haami bhar waha se fauran hi nikal gayi.

Toh wahi Shweta jo ab tak akele baithi hui thi. Uske mann me na jaane kese kese drishya aa rahe the.

Ek drishya me usne dekha, ki Bhavna Veer ko apne gale se lagaaye usse choom rahi hai. Aur uski taraf dekh ke haivaano waali hassi hass rahi hai.

Toh dusre drishya me usse dikhaayi diya. Ki usse Tej aur Purvi pakdi hui hai. Aur Bhavna train me Veer ke saath baith ke ravaana ho rahi hai. Woh zorr zorr se guhaar laga rahi hai. Par Tejal aur Purvi hasste hue usse chorrne ka naam nahi le rahi.

"N-Nahiiii!!!!"

Woh jhatka maarte hue aankh khol ke baith gayi. Poora chehra uska paseene se bheega hua tha.

"H-Hey bhagwaan! Nahi! Mera baccha!!!"

Tab tak Suman bhi aa pohuchi.

Suman : Ab aap jaa sakti hai.

Shweta : H-Haan!

Fatafat woh kuch samaan utha ke waha se nikal gayi.

Toh wahi yaha se Arohi aur Tej bhi waapas aa chuki thi. Aur woh bhi ab waha se apne coach ke liye nikal gayi.

Abhi unhe gaye thodi derr hi hui thi ki Shweta haafte hue unke coach me aa dhamki.

Aur bas, do nazre firse aapas me jaa takraayi.

Shweta aur Bhavna ki!

Shweta jaanti thi ki uske saamne ye baithi Veer ki asli maa thi. Aur uski sautan. Par Bhavna nahi jaanti thi ki ye aurat Veer ki sauteli maa hai.

Veer : Aap yaha?

Shweta : H-Haan mein ye! B-Beta! Mein ye pulaav laayi thi. Sabke liye thoda thoda banaya tha. Th-Thoda kha lo.

Veer : Umm! Mujhe bhook nahi hai asal me.

Shweta : Ahh?

Uski nazar achanak hi wahi side table par rakhe tiffin par padi. Jo Bhavna ke paas rakha hua tha. Iska matlab? Iska matlab Veer ne Bhavna ke haath ka khaana kha liya tha?

Khud se hi mann me soch woh itna udaas ho gayi ki usse rona aa gaya.

Tej : Aaiye aaiye! Baithiye!!! Mom! Aap jaanti hai ye kaun hai?

Tej jese intezaar hi kar rahi thi iss aurat ke aane ka. Uski nazre aag fek rahi thi.

Bhavna : ???

Tej : Ye hai hamaare Veer ki dusri maa!! Uski sauteli Maa!! Kyu? Mene sahi kaha na?

Shweta : M-Mein-

Shweta itna darr gayi ki uska badan tak hilne laga. Inn sabhi ke beech woh ek akeli fass gayi thi. Upar se Veer bhi kuch nahi keh raha tha.

Tej : Veer!

Veer : Huh?

Tej : Mene socha tha mein tumse permission lungi uske baad hi ye sab bataungi. Par ab mujhse aur chup raha nahi jayega.

Veer : ???

Tej jo safar ki shuruaat se hi ek kharaab mood me thi. Shweta ko dekhne ke baad woh seedha bhadak uthi.

Tej : Kuch puch rahi hu aapse! Aap mere bhai ki sauteli maa hai ya nahi?

Shweta : H-Haan! M-Mein hu! P-Par-

Tej (smiles) : Mom! Ab jo mein aapko bataane jaa rahi hu. Aap dhyaan se suniyega!

Purvi : Tej? Araam se! Shor nahi beta!

Tej : Nahi Maasi! Ab aur chup nahi reh sakti. Wahiyaat giri ki bhi hadd hoti hai.

Bhavna : Tej??

Tej : Ye aurat!!! Aapko pata hai isne kya kiya tha? Kya kya kar ke baithi hai ye?

Bhavna : ???

Veer ko ek abhaas hua. Shayad Tej koi bhaanda phodne waali thi. Woh uthne hi waala tha ki,

[Wait Master!]

'Pari? Mujhe rokna hoga Tejal dii ko. Warna woh kuch-'

[No! Abhi nahi! Hone do jo ho raha hai. Just watch!]

'Shit!!!'

Majbooran woh rukk gaya.

Tej : Jab aap Veer ko chorr ke gayi thi mom!! Toh ye aurat!! Ye aurat kuch saal baad hamaare Veer ki zindagi me aayi. Aur pata hai isne kya kiya mom?? Mere bhai ki zindagi nark bana dii isne! Nark!!!

Bhavna : !!!??

Purvi : Tej dheere!!

Tej (bhaavuk hote hue) : Ye aurat ne...! Mom! Mujhse kaha bhi nahi jaa raha hai. Iss aurat ne itne dard aur itne kasht diye hai hamaare Veer ko ki ginaane par bhi gin nahi paogi aap.

Bhavna : Tej??

Tej : Mom!!! Iss aurat ne shadiyantra racha tha. Y-Ye shadiyantra kar rahi thi hamare Veer ke khilaaf. Usse jaydaad se baahar karne ke liye. Issi ki vajah se bhai darr darr bhatakta raha. Ghar se baahar nikalwa diya tha isne mom Veer ko. Ek number ki jhoothi, makkaar aur kapti aurat hai ye...!

Shweta : Nahhhiiiiii!!!!

Shweta kaanp uthi. Uski aankho se aasu dhaar bann ke behne lage. Harr ek shabd usse uski buri harqato ki yaad dila raha tha. Woh ghinoni kartoote jo usne ateet me kii thi. Kaise woh saazisho ka hissa thi. Ussi ki glaani ke bhaar se toh ab tak ubhar nahi paa rahi thi woh. Aur idhar Tej ek ke baad ek waar karti jaa rahi thi.

Tej : Dekhiye isse! Dekhiye kese naatak kar ke Veer ko behlaane fuslaane aayi hai. Taaki humse Veer ko dur kar sake Mom! Yahi iska lakshya hai. Sharm nahi aayi aapko ek baar bhi? Thuu hai aapke upar!! Khud ka beta nahi tha toh jalan ke maare sautele bete ko ghar se baahar fikwa diya? Arre bhagwaan bhi maaf nahi karega aapko. Meri haay lagegi aapko!

Shweta : N-Nahhhiiii!!! Chup ho jao!! Bhagwaan ke liye...! *sniff*

Tej : Chup ho jau? Kyu chup ho jau?? Aisi ghinoni harqat karne waali aurat ko toh jail ki salakho ke peeche hona chahiye. Uske baad bhi mere bhai ka badapann toh dekho. Mom!! Inhe aur inki beti ko Veer bachaane gaya. Jaan jokhim daal ke. Upar se inn madam ko rehne ki jagah bhi dilvaayi. Fir bhi syaanapanti toh dekho!! You are not only a disgrace to the family. But you're a disgrace to yourself as well!!!

Uske itne kadve shabd sunn Shweta bechaari ka dil dahal gaya. Woh toh yaha bas pyaar se Veer ko tiffin khilaane aayi thi. Ek ke baad ek jese uss se saari cheeze chhinti jaa rahi thi.

Tej : Mom! Iss aurat ke kaaran mere bhai ko ghar se nikaal diya gaya. Woh raat me baarish me bheegta koi thikaana dhundta raha par koi na aaya uski madad ke liye. Uska itna dardnaak haadsa hua ki ICU me kuch din admit tha. Par ek insaan uss ghar se dekhne nahi aaya mom hamare Veer ko!!! Ek insaan bhi nahiii!!! Bhala ho unn Nidhi ma'am ka! Jinhone Veer ko panaah dii. Tab jab woh ekdum akela tha!! Par ye- ye toh- sach me...!

Tej aur hamle karti ki itne me Bhavna ne ishaare se rok diya. Woh haafte hue gusse me shaant hoke baith gayi. Shweta apna muh apne haatho se chhipaaye bas sisak sisak ke roye jaa rahi thi.

Tabhi Bhavna ne bas ek sawaal pucha,

"Kyu?"

Uske gaal se ek aasu ki boond beh ke neeche giri. Purvi ka bhi yahi haal tha.

Bhavna : Kyu kiya? Mere bacche ke saath aisa?

Aur Shweta aatm glaani me aur doob gayi. Woh fafkaarte hue rone lagi. Bechaari ka haal behaal tha.

Ye sawaal toh jese aur uske dil ko tode jaa raha tha. Aur sach me, Shweta ke paas iska koi jawaab nahi tha.

Bas! Bohut hua!

Woh uthi aur rote hue bhaagte hue waha se apna muh chhipa ke nikal gayi.

Uske jaate hi Purvi ne Veer ko gale se laga ke choom liya.

Purvi : Aur kya kaha tha tune mujhse? Ki ghar me sab mera khayaal rakhte hai? Sab badhiya hai! Ye khayaal rakhte hai tera? *sniff* Haan? Bol? Jhooth bolta hai apni maasi se? Itne dard chhipaaye kya soch raha tha? Ki kabhi maa aur maasi ko pata nahi chalega? Bol?

Veer : Mein-

Bhavna turant hi uth ke aayi aur Purvi ke haatho se Veer ka chehra lete hue apne pait se laga liya.

Bhavna : Ahinda se aisa kabhi nahi hona chahiye. K-Kabhi nahi! Galti meri hai. Jo uss daldal me tujhe chorr gayi. Mujhe kya pata tha ki woh sab-

Veer : ...

Tej : Itne atyachaar kiye hai na unn logo ne mere bhai par. Mann toh karta hai ki-

Veer : It's okay!

Bhavna ne pyaar se iss baar poore garv se apne bete ko chooma aur uske bagal se baith gayi.

Veer : Mein ek minute! Aata hu!

Tej : Kaha jaa rahe ho? Ab ye mat kehna ki tumhe unki chinta ho rahi hai Veer!?

Veer : Bas dekhne jaa raha hu. Check karne! Unhe kisi cheez ki zaroorat toh nahi.

Bhavna ne usse nahi roka. Aur Tej ne bhi.

Veer jese hi utha, woh poori tezzi me dusre coach ki orr jaane laga. Pata nahi kyu par uska dil jese paseej gaya. Usse ek ghabrahat bhi ho rahi thi.

Woh jese hi dusre coach me jaane ke liye washroom ke paas tak aaya toh saamne ka drishya dekh uski saans hi atak gayi.

"N-Noo!"

Shweta bas ek qadam dur the darwaaze se neeche girne ke liye.

Woh besudh sii wahi khadi hui thi. Tezz raftaar me train chalti jaa rahi thi aur zorrdaar hawaaein ki lehre uski zulfo ko udaati jaa rahi thi. Usse na hosh tha na hawaas.

Aur agle hi pal,

Uska ek perr apne aap aage badh gaya.

Uska shareer girte hue hawa ke jhatke se baayi orr itne tezzi se gaya. Par tabhi,

"Huhh!??"

Ek mazboot haath uske pait ke ird gird lapta aur ek hi jhatke me uske badan ko kheechte hue andar kar liya.

Shweta jese apni besudh haalat se jaagi. Gaalo par aasu sajaaye woh uss haath ke maalik ke chehre ko jab dekhi toh,

"PAAGAL HO GAYI HO KYA AAP??"

"Ye kya harqat thi?? Dimaag hai ya nahi aap me? Kuch sochti bhi ho ya nahiii? Haan? Ek baar bhi Bhumika dii ke baare me nahi socha? Aqal kaha thi aapki ye karte waqt??? Haan? Bolo???"

Veer usse lagataar daate jaa raha tha. Par Shweta? Woh khush thi. Khushi ke maare uske aasu nahi ruk rahe the.

Veer ki daant ke bol bhi aaj jese usse amrit samaan lag rahe the.

Woh foot foot kar rote hue uske seene se lag gayi. Usne uski t shirt ko itni kass ke bheencha hua tha ki Veer khud wahi murti sa jamm ke reh gaya.

Aur tab Shweta ne uske seene par kaan lagaaye uski dhadkane suni.

*Badump* *Badump*

Sunte hi uske aasu aur zorro se nikal pade. Kyuki ye saboot tha.

He cared! He actually cared!

Veer ko uski parvaah thi. Fiqr thi. Tabhi toh itna daat raha tha. Tabhi toh uske peeche peeche aaya. Tabhi toh usse bachaaya. Aur tabhi toh uski dhadkane... Itni tezz thi.

Shweta ke thar-tharaate hontho se fir bas itna hi nikla,

"Th-Thank you!!!"

Aur antatah...! Veer ki baahe apne aap Shweta ke ird gird lapit gayi. Ek thakaan bhari aah chorr woh apni sauteli maa ke saath aalingan me wahi khada raha.

Aaj ye haal tha. Na jaane waha pohuchne par kya kya hone waala tha!?
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Aaj ke liye itna hi guys.
Ye update hai more than 6.8k words ka. It's a huge mega update. Mene kaafi detailing me likha hai isse. Kyuki mera mann tha iss hisse ko bade acche se darshaane ka. I hope aap ko pasand aaya hoga. Toh likes zaroor thokne ka aur revos rakhne ka guys.
Dhanyavaad!

 

[Arjun2000]

Editing!

Kitna time bhai

 

[Werewolf]

Kitna time bhai

Post kar diya bhai!

 

[Werewolf]

Gand fad update wolfie bhaya dil gurda fefda sab nikal

Awesome update

Superb update

Awesome update

Are such me maza aaya bhai wolfi

Ding Ragini ko lag raha veer uska pyar accept karenga it's complicated Bhavna shweta alpha Sigma se bhi dengerous ab veer kya stn pe chilayega meri do do maa

WOw amazing
Baki revo Kal subha dunga abhi nindwa aarila to Sahi SE na revo de paoga

bus ITNA bologa ke sote sote update parhna start Kiya aur itne jhatky lagy ke mind he ur gye

Bahut din ke baad update time par mila hai

Superb update

nice1

To Bhavna aur Shweta ji mulakat ho gai.

Ragini bhi bechari thodi to khush hoi.

Naya safar kaisa rahega jaldi batiyega.

Awsome update

Jabardast update

Fantastic mind-blowing update

कमाल करते हो साहब। क्या कहें कलम का जादूगर या बादशाह। मज़ा आ गया, इस किश्त में।
दूसरी बात यह कि आप हर किश्त ऐसे मोड़ पर खत्म करते हो कि आने वाले किश्त का इंतजार बेसब्री से रहता है।

Good update, Abb swetha n Bhavan aik dosry ko kesy treat krti ye dekhna hy

Jabardast update

Superb update bro...
Waiting for next

Awesome update Werewolf bhai...

Zabardast update

Awesome update bhai keep posting

Waah kya update tha chulbula sa update...!
Yeh bhi sahi ke ki stree ko koi nahi samaj shakta.,
Or ha bhai aisa mat samajna ki uper ki line mein shabaashi mili toh ab ku6 nahi bolunga mein, are mene pehle hi kaha tha MAA vaala update aayega tab kurshi thaam ke bethna padega or woh update next update se chalu hoga shayad agar veer ki life mein thode time koi chutiyapa na ho toh varna veer or hum sab ke pyaare jethalaal ki halat toh aap sab jante hi ho ek mushibat gai nahi ki dusri darwaje pe dastak dene ko hi hoti hein....!
Keep Writing....!

ek hi gaana man mei aa raha hai..

प्यार बाँटते चलो प्यार बाँटते चलो ....!

रागिनी को उसका प्यार मिल ही गया

Ultimate scene...!!

Isi baat pe ek pucchi le le yara

साला वीर तो पूरी बारात लेके जा रहा है!!!
ट्रेन का सफ़र कितना awkward होने वाला है!!

क्या भावना पहचान पाएगी अपनी दासी को?

Will this also open the mystery around veer’s locket?

अच्छा ये तो बता दे यार की अपनी female lead कौनसे arc में आएगी?

Nidhi should tell Saloni also about veer’s past hardships so उसके दिल में भी वीर के लिए soft corner बन जाएगा।

और ये कोई मेगा update नहीं था...
मेगा update बस word count से नहीं होता बल्कि importance of content से होता है...

मेगा update वो होगा जिसमें वीर रागिनी से consummation करेगा ...!!!

या जागते हुए श्वेता के बूब्ज़ suck करेगा!!

By the way now the story is entering uncharted territory.
The true suspense जिसे कोई भी guess नहीं कर सकता ..!

Also Bhumika is still a unexplored and redundant character...

Waiting bhai for the next episode!!!

Superb mindblowing update sir g

Aakhir safar ki tayaari shuru ho chuki hai magar ab 4 naye musafir aur aa gaye hai aur unme se 2 bahut hi khatarnak saabit ho sakte hai S n S.

Suman sach mein ek rahsyamayi aurat hai jo jitna Veer ke liye samarpit hai utna hi Veer ki saari khoj khabar rakkhti hai. A wonderful friend but dangerous foe. At the same time mysterious than mystery.

Nidhi aur Veer ko dekh kar unki baate sun kar bas ye hi line dimag mein aati hai

I Hate You Like I Love You

Naa Haan karte hai aur Naa Na

Bechari Ragini ek baar fir apne toote dil ke saath rah gayi thi mager pari ne ek baar bhi Veer ko stree gyan se prakashit kiya aur is murkh maanav ki bina starter ki tubelight jhapar jhapar karne ke baad jal hi gayi. Fir jo Ragini aur Veer ke beech hua usse Ragini ke "Dil mein laddoo foota".

Suhana "The Adorable Psycho" jo ab Veer ke liye aur Veer uske kuch aur hi ban gaye hai aur jo gift usne bheja uske baad Sonia aur Suhana ke beech sweet contest is about to start. Wo bechari abhi tak Keara se compete kar rahi thi Veer ke liye aur ab uski apni bahan. Ye kya kar diya jaalim Werewolf .

Sablog pahunch gaye station magar ye kya ye konsa gaana baj Gaya background mein,

मैं तेरी दुश्मन, दुश्मन तू मेरी
मैं नागिन मगर तू भी नागिन

Super interesting update.

Werewolf मित्र ये ट्रेन का क्या चक्कर है..
फ्लाइट भी जाती है जयपुर.. लगता है कुछ गडबड घोटाला होने वाला है ट्रेन यात्रा मे वीर अपना प्यार बांटते हुये सफर का आनंद लेने वाला देने वाला है... इतनी सारी फूलझाड़ियों अनारो संतरो के बीच एक मात्र केला ओह अकेला जो है

अखिरकार रागिनी की बोहनी कर दिया है वीर ने मस्त तरीके से बजाया हैं... महीनों की तड़फ को बुझाने की जगह और भड़काने का काम किया है...

Cचलिए अब शीघ्र ही नए घटनाक्रम के अध्याय को प्रकाशित कर हम सब की जिज्ञासा को शांत करे
इस बार अंक तुरंत ही दे अब तो इन्तेज़ार नहीं हो पा रहा है

Extraordinary update sir g

Nice update bhai

Nice update janab

Sandar update 120 bhavna aur shweta amne samne hai dono maa hai dekhte hai kya hota hai kuch bahut badi baat hai village se related kisi ko bhi tejal ke baare me koi jankari nahi hai jabki veer ki badi bahan hai kafi sawal hai suspence badh raha hai...

Shweta ki halat to bahot bhuri hai iss vakt.. kaha woh veer ko ek maa ka pyaar dene ke liye veer ko manane ke sapne dekh rahi thi or ab veer ki real maa aa gay hai to ab shweta par kya gujar rahi hogi..

kavya,aarohi,suman or shweta bhi veer ke sath chalne wale hai Jaipur.
shweta or bhavna ka amna-samna hoga to kya hoga ? Dekhte hai aage.

ye suman to sach me hi khatarnak aurat hai bawa..veer ke sath hai to acha hai varna bhul se bhi dushman aisi milti to pakka lawda lag jate.

Ragini ki narazgi durr kar ke usse thoda tript kar diya or Jaipur se aane ke baad uske proposal ka answer dene ka keh diya.. Ragini ko ab yakin ho gaya hai ki veer ka answer uske haq me hi hoga iss liye ab khush hai Ragini.

Superb Update Bhai.

mindblowing update sir g

Morning ~ Veer ki shuruaat hoti hai Packing se, sab use puchhte hain uske busy rahne aur packing karne ka raz, veer sabko bta deta hai.
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Sonali gussa hoti hai aakhir veer sonali se kiye bayde ko bhul gaya tha, sonali use yad dilati hai to wo pahle purvi ke husband ke bare me sochta hai par koi bhi anzan vyakti uske liye bhla kya kardega yahi soch kar wo Nidhi ma'am se bat karta hai. Nidhi ma'am pahle to fee lene se inkar karti hain par baad me maan jati hain fee na lene se.
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Shweta ko jab pata chalta hai veer apni maa aur bahen se mil kar aaya hai aur unhi ke sath apni maa ke ganw ja rha hai to shweta ko lagta hai ki jo bhi veer ke liye uske khwab the wo adhure rah jayenge, yahi to ek mauka tha shweta ke najro me jo wo veer ke liye khud ko achhi maa bankar sabit kar sakti thi par ab jab uski asli maa aa gyi hai to shweta ko dar hai ki wo kanhi usse dur na chla jaye.
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Kavya aur Arohi ki bhi ghar me entry hoti hai, veer unhe bhi sabhi jankari deta hai, aur kavya bhi veer se jid karti hai uske sath hi Jane ki aur to aur ek ke sath ek nahi balki 3 aur free sawari add ho jati hain

This was the best part for me in this update, bechara ek ko na jane ko kahta hai 3 aur taiyar ho jate hain
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Ragini bhabhi ko bhi veer mana hi leta hai aur ganw se bapas aane ke bad hi wo answer dega use kya rishta rakhna hai Ragini ke sath ye kahta hai, wese jo sab usne kiya is update me ragini ke sath us hisab se to veer Ragini ko accept kar lega as a bhabhi nahi balki as a .... Ab jo bhi kaho Ragini bhi khush aur veer bhi abhi ke liye,
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Jab sab log nikalne ko hote hain jaane ke liye to suhana ka luxury gift milta hai veer ko jo ki veer accept karleta hai abhi ke liye
Kher wo sabhi log nikal jate hain apni yatra aage badane ke liye railway station ki taraf.
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Bhavna aur Shweta ~ Ateet me sab kuch achha nahi raha hoga ye to sure hai par Bhavna ke najriye se wo jarur chakit hui hogi shweta ko veer ke sath dekh kar aur hona bhi chahiye aakhir uske sath jo bhi kiya gaya purv me usme Shweta bhi hissedar rahi hogi.
Aur yadi yanha shweta ke najriye se dekha jaye to wo khud ko sharminda feel kar rahi hogi use wo sab yaad aa gya hoga Bhavna ko dekh kar jo usne kiya hoga.
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Ab dekhna ye hoga dono kaise ek dusre ko accept karte hain, kya shweta khud ko is family me adjust karwa payegi ya fir Bhavna veer ko shweta se dur kar legi.
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Ek aur baat dekhne wali hogi, Bhavna aur Suman ye dono kaise react karte hain ek dusre ko dekh kar ya fir sab kuch chhupaaya jayega for now.
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Bahut hi sundar update

Mind blowing update... akhir kar bhavna aur shweta ki milne ki waqt aagayi....

Wahhh mast update tha Werewolf bhai maja hi aa gaya.
To Village arc ab apne main starting point par aa chuka hai. Ab bas safar suru hi hone wala hai. Dekhte hai is safar me hme kya kuch dekhne ko milega.
Phle to bahut hi accha laga sonali ko dekh kr wo bhi is story ki ek main character hi hai. Aur veer ka nidhi ko u fees ke liye bolna wo bhi mujhe bilkul sahi laga. Aur wo padosi ke bacche ka example to epic hi laga. Khir nidhi ko to manana tha hi aakhir wo kaise veer ke kisi kaam ko mana kar skti hai. Na cahte hue bhi use fees leni hi padi. Uske baad kya boom poda veer ne mast. Sweta ka aisa react karna bilkul banta tha. Aur fir jo mai bhi ! Mai bi ! Wala kaand start hua wo to read krke maja hi aa gaya. Na na karte hue 4 log aur ho hi gaye. Aur mujhe ye sbse jyada acha laga ki chlo kisi to jagah veer apne sath apne family ke logo ko le kar chal raha hai. Aur mission dekhne me aur maja aayega. Sath me veer ka aarohi aur kavya aur suman ke sath raas leela bhi dekhne ko mil sakti hai.
Aur suhana ne kya mast gift diya hai. Ekdam wahi jo veer ko cahiye tha. Wo such me ek kafi tej hai her ek choti baat ka dhyan rakhti hai. Tabhi to usne ye gift diya veer ko. Aur veer ka massage padh kar wo jarur sarma gayi hogi. Khair ragini ka scene bhi kafi acha laga. Usko ab almost uska ans mil hi gaya hai. Bas us par final muhar lagani baki hai. Jo sayad sex ho kr hi hoga.
Ab baat meri ye hai ki kya Bhawna, sweta ko janti hai ?
Quoi station par suman aur Bhawna ko dekh kr aisa react karna tha quoi suman ko sayad Bhawna janti hi hogi jaha tak mujhe lagta hai.
Aur kya haal hoga Tejal ka jab wo veer ko apni baki do sister ke sath aise dekhegi ? Wo bhi sayad aur usase aur baki sb se ghulne milne ki kosis karegi.
Is safar me sbse jyada maja aayega Bhawna aur sweta ke hone par mai to abhi se soch soch kar na jane kya kya possibly bana raha hu.
Khair dekhte hai aage aur kya kya hota hai ?

At last Fireworks in store, it seems. A Terrific Update.All aspects covered. All Nidhi Mam,Raginiji, Kavya, Arohi,Sonali,and mainly these two Bhavna and Shweta. A terrific Entry of Village Arc in actual sense. Let's see what is in store in the Birth place. In the initial starting Phase(Aatish Arc), there was some connection of Aatish with some Top Boss family. Are these families related in any way?Not sure because in your story in some stage or other all the incidents described in the story gets entwined with each other. Really excited to see what unfolds in the Birth Place. A lot of puzzles are to be solved like 1)What was the real identity of Tejal,2) Real reason behind leaving of Veer by Bhavna,3)Being a Single woman how Bhavna survived along with Tejal on her own in this mad world and that too in the field dominated mostly by MEN?,4) Why Purvi didn't meet Veer for last so many years and 5) Why hasn't Suman opened up about herself becoming a slave to his Master? I guess we will get answers to these and other questions in this Arc. One more thing, Reaction of the Family of Bajesh is not known regarding this Bhavna and her Re-Entry in the Story. For some reason or the other Brajesh seemed to be quite Upset with Bhavna(As per the Story). From the story it appears that Bhavna is quite Independent,Intelligent,Strong and Bold Woman who doesn't pay heed much to the person who tries to act smart with her. Just don't know how I could write this but wrote what I Believed. An Interesting Update. A Grand and Lovely way to enter this Village Arc alongwith Familiglia Arc in tandem. You are writing a Novel which is unique in its own way. We all love this and expect this to continue to its logical end after may be 300 Episodes. Thank you for giving us such a lovely novel in this forum. Please keep it up. We all will be looking forward for the next Episodes.

Shandar update bro

Shaandar update bhai
Veer ka sigma jhuKne nhi dega
Bhai pari ka ye version ek dum danger lag reli hain
Sirf kaam ki baat na pakao
Veer ki 3 bahan , 2 maa , 1 mousi , 1 loyal suman , khud veer janmbhumi
Ranbhumi ki tarah to nhi
Bahut badi vivad
Bhavna vs shweta hoga yaa
Yaa fir dono ka duo hoga dekhte hain

Fantastic update
Yaar maja aa gaya lage raho

ओह ओ
अब क्या कहें क्या ना कहें
होते होते कुछ हो गया
होते होते कुछ रह गया
बेचारी रागिनी
खैर अब उसने मन बना लिया होगा
अब कुछ भी बाकी नहीं रहेगा
वीर सच ही तो कहा है
"औरतों को कौन समझ पाया है"
खैर एक बात तो है
निधि भी अपनी मन की समझ नहीं पा रही है
वह किसी भी प्रकार से वीर से जुड़े रहना चाहती है
सफर शुरु हो गया है
सफर में चार लोग और जुड़ गए हैं
आरोही काव्या सुमन और श्वेता
अब देखना होगा कि इतिहास क्या है और उसके भीतर रहस्य क्या है

Aag laga di

Super awesome update bro

Awesome update
At last Ragini ko satisfaction mil hi gyi bhle hi Puri na sahi...bhavna aur shweta kya ek dusre ko phle se janti hai??
Pr jo bhi ho maza bhut aane wala hai

Nice update bro

majedar update ..trip pe jaane ki baat batayi to pehle sonali ne behas shuru kar di .. ekdam bachpana bhara pada hai sonali ke ander .
nidhi ke saath bhi achchi baatchit huyi sonali ke padhai ki fees ko lekar .
koi haar nahi maan raha tha par aakhir nidhi ne baat maan li .
shweta ke liye ek jhatka tha ye sunna ki veer ki asli maa mil gayi hai ,par wo bhi haar nahi maani aur veer ko mana liya usko bhi saath leke jaane ke liye .
kavya se shuru hua aur jaake shweta pe khatm hua veer ke saath jaane ka .
suman bhi taiyar hi baithi thi jaane ke liye .ek baat to sahi kahi veer ne suman ke baare me ki dosti aur dushmani me suman bahut danger type hai .
ragini ko manane ke liye uske saath maje karke khush kar diya ..
suhana ne to bahut mehanga gift de diya veer ko .

shweta aur bhawna ek dusre ko dekhkar gussa ho gayi aur ab aage kya hoga dono ke bich dekhte hai ,aur baaki log kya karte hai unko sambhalne ke liye ..
par ye veer ke ghar me kya khichdi pak rahi hai ..

Awesome, beauty❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤

Nice update

awesome bro maaza aa gaya

Superb update

Superb update

Nice update

Mazedar

Nice update

Excellent update

Nice update as always brooo....

Abb dono maa ke bich baatchit hogi ya jalan

Bro very nice update bro weting for next update jaldi dana bro

Superb update bhai

Superb very nice ummid hai ab veer ke sare jawab mil jayenge.

good, now the story is getting more and more interesting

Nice update bhai

Bohat hi zabardast bhai. Ab shewta and Bhavana aur sab ka past ujagar hoyega aur sath sath bohat si nayi cheezi samne ayegi aur yah sab veer ki zindagi me naya mod aur naye disha kayege shayad sath me kai sarey tufan plus mission. Lekin yaha sawal hai ki kiya woh yaha per woh uske barey me kuch jaan payega ya woh abhi mystery rahega the owner of another system. Kia uske baare me kuch jaanne ko milega.
Thanks for your updates dear.

Always awesome

Badhiya update tha.

Iss update ka review kya likhu samjh nai aa rha fir bhi try krta hu..

Ragini lagta hai Veer ko har thode din me apna bag pack krta dekh ab samjhne lagi hai maybe wo akeli Veer ki life me center banke nai reh sakti aur iss baat se samjhauta krna uske chalu kr diya hai. Fir bhi dil ko udaas hone se kaun rok sakta hai. Dil ne dimaag ka kab hi suna hai..? Lekin iss baar Veer ne Ragini ke dil aur mann ke tassali ke liye kuch de diya hai wahi jo bahut se londe ladkiyo ko nahi de pate wo hai orgasm. There is a saying that "food is way to a man's heart" ab maine ye banai hai "orgasm is way to a woman's heart".
Waise jaise Ragini ka character develop ho rha aane wale time me wo ek bahut suljhi hui personality bante ja rahi jisko apna haq aur dayara dono pata hai.

Now lets come to Veer's most loyal lover cum slave Suman. Suman kisi bhi kimat pe Veer ko sabse uncha dekhna chahti hai wo Veer ke khushi ke liye kisi bhi had tak jaa sakti hai. Uske lagbhag sare sapne Veer ke liye hi hai lekin kuch sapne uske khud ke bhi jisme se ek hai Veer usko puri tarah se jaan jaye uske saare raaz Veer ko uske bare me sab kuch pata ho aur dusra sapna hai Veer ka ek ansh jo Veer uski kokh me use de. Dekhte uske kismat me aage kye likha hai.

Ab baat krte hai Nidhi ki Veer aur uska rishta ab bahut gehra hota dikh rha. Bhale hi dono ke bich thode nok-jhok ho rhe lekin ye bhi ek tarah se pyar ko darshta hai. Ab Nidhi bhi Veer pe haq jatane lagi hai. Khair inke rishte me bas ek maryada ki patli diwar hi bachi hai dekhna hoga ye kab giregi wrna dil me pyar toh dono ke hi hai.

Kavya aur arohi ki kya hi baat ki jaye wo toh jitna ho sake Veer ke sath samay bitana chahte hai uske paas rehna chahte hai bhale hi Arohi apne feeling Kavya ki tarah express nahi krti magar dil me toh uske bhi yehi tha. Wo apne bhai se judi har ek cheej me shamil hona chahte hai aise unhe sath ghumne ka bhi mauka mil jaye ye toh sone pe suhaga hogya. Dekhna hoga aane wale safar me dono kya gul khilati hai.

Shweta.. waise ek bahut hi ajeeb cheej hui iss update pe idk if I am overthinking but wo kuch pal jab Veer aur Shweta ki nazre mili mujhe lagta hai ye bahut bada aur imp point tha iss update ka. Kyuki Veer ab wo londa nahi rha jo libir libir krta tha ab sab usko dete hai full izzat. Aise me mujhe lagta hai Veer ne yaa toh kuch dekha ya usko kuch laga cause Alpha aur Signa traits ke rehte wo aise emotion me beh jayega ?
Waise Shweta ke pov se dekhe toh ye uske liye bahut badi jeet hai. Shayad abtak usko koi hope nazar nahi aai hogi lekin Veer ke iss tarah uske liye bhi ticket krane se usko ab asha ki kiran dikhne lagi hogi. Dekho kahi kuch aur competition ke chalte Shweta ke boob se sach me dudh naa aane lage .

Waise update ka end bhi bahut khatrnak huva hai. Ab dekhna hoga kiske Boob me jyada taqat I mean dudh hai. Aage bahut maza aane wala hai.

Waiting for next update.

Nice update bhai..
Veer ko 2-2 maa hoke bhi anath jaisa hi hai. Aab pyar 2 no bhi karne lagi hai..
Dekhate kya hota hai.

Bhvana or shewta lagta hai dono ka kuch bada rahasya hai .......
Ragini or veer ka scene Maja aaygya .....​

Nice update...

Your updates always raise the curiosity
Keep it up

Mast update h bhai...

Awesome update

Bohot he majeedar update! Yaha se rahasaya romanch ki yatra shuru hogi
"Yaatri gann kripya dhyaan de. Mumbai se Delhi jaane waali train xxxxxxx kuch hi samay me platform kramank xx par aa rahi hai."

Aap ne ek ek shabdh Accurate likha hai, kaise kar lete ho bhai?

Super update hai Bhai

क्या खूब लिखा है।
बहुत से सवाल खड़े हो चुके है
जिनके जबाब देने का काम अब वक्त पर छोड़ दिया।


यहाँ महिला जंग के बीच वीर फसता नजर आ रहा है।
रागिनी के अंग के तार छिड़ गए है। वो आग में तपेगी।

सवाल बहुत है जबाब आपके उपडते देगे।
बस उम्मीद है। जल्दी जल्दी उपडते आये

Nice update bhai

agli update ka intizar hay

Nice update bhai

Jabardast Bhai bichari bhabi ko adha hi chhod diya

Fantastic superb update Bhavna or Shweta ab aamne saamne hy Shweta k liye ye movement kafi awkward hnea wala hy jab uski sautan Uske aamne hy waiting for next update

wonderful update hai....
khas kar ke jo gift Mila hai suhana se vo to Veer ke liye bahut mayane rakhata hai.....

last me jo suspense diya hai vo bahut hi rochak hone vala hai, mujhe lagta hai ki dono ek dusre ko achchi tarah se janti hai...

Bhai please give update daily ! Don’t make us suffer

Awesome update sir amazing thank

Fantastic brother
Waiting for twist between moms

Super bro

Nice update

saat deviyan aur ek veer ... aur writer mahoday ne hame iss arc me bahut kuch between the sheets hone ka aashvasan diya hai ... with actual incest ... to sawal yeh hai ki inn cche(Suman is not counted as she is already conquered) me se kitni veer ke neeche ayengi ... in the train and in the village ... mere khyaal se Arohi aur Shweta ke chances jyada hain ... may be Tej too ... after all she is tej ... aur will the writer spring a surprise and a dark horse will win the race into Veer's bed ... but I think abhi writer Purvi aur Arun ki married life me darrar nahi dalega ... Purvi me Veer ka daalke ... so she is the least likely of the lot ... even less likely than Bhavan ... the queen of the bitches ...

Nice behtarin mast awesome update bro

Jabardast update bhai

Super se bhi upar…u have god gifted talent…

Fantastic update bro ab dekhte kya hota h train ki journey me kavya ki masti nd tej ka konsa roop dekhne ko milega abhi wo dekhna hai re baba

Superb update bhai

Nice updates

Hmm to veer kisi ko bina bataye paking kar raha tha khair sabko pata chal gaya to sawal to uthne hi the khair veer ne ragini ke sath apne achhi bonding ki chalte joith nahi bola par shayad use ye akele main karna chahiye tha

Yaha to shweta gale pad gayi re shweta ka to jese pura wajud hil kar reh gaya sahi bhi hai ye aakhir shweta veer keliye itna kuch kar rahi thi or ab veer sodha bhavna ke karib jane laga to lazmi hai shweta kese chup baithegi

Well wo sab to theek tha but ye kavya or aarohi ne sara khel bigaad diya or bhai ye kavya ka kuch jyada ho raha hai chalo arohi ka to samajhte hai ki uska pehli baat aisa hai but kavya thodi jyada chaplusi kar rahi hai Well veer ne use bataya ki tej or bhavna kon hai

Uske baad suman ne accha sambhala baat ko or kya kehti wo kisi apne malik ko apna raaz batane le ja rahi hai tab to ragini veer ki or sonali or aabha or suman ki acchi class lagati

Well sonali yaa isko problem kya hai jab dekho tab apne hero ki insult karti hai Well veer ne nidhi se uski baat ki thi par wo kuch bhul gaya or beech main hume arum ka khayal dikha Well option to accha hai but self respect or ego naam ki bhi chiz hoti hai inshan main wo kese ye kar sakta tha

Well nidhi ke sath baat chit bhi acchi rahi or sonali ka program set hogya par bro ye veer shweta ko apne sath kyu leja raha hai ye pakka is journy main jab bhi veer or bhavna karib aana cahenge ye problem creat karegi

Bro agar aap incest dikhane keliye agar bhavna or shweta ki voating karwao to main 110 % bol raha hu bhavna hi jitegi

Or mera prefer bhavna hi hai baki to aap hi jano Well jab sablog station ja rahe the tab rollc Royce ki entry sach main kamaal ki thi but bro yaar white ke jagah agar black hoti to vibe hi alag banti hai

Well shweta or bhavna in dono ki nazare milne par spark ki jagah aag ki lapte uthi maza aayega is safar main jab ye dono bhidengi wese wolfi bro aap bata sakte ho dono main se kiska palada bhari hai

Well bro mujhe lagta hai ki ye arc aagr lamba chale to readers ko koi problem nahi hoga bas raaz kayde se khulne chahiye please

Well out standing update bro

But aapke update dene ka routine thoda dagmaga gaya hai bro bas use sahi karde please it's a request

Dekhna hay iss safar ma k baad Suman ka kiya Secret samny aata hay

Kaun bol raha h thank you tumhe...
Aur unka contact mere paas hota to main unse baat na kar rhi hoti... Saare secrets jaan leti story k...

Ufffff is bdle me dil hilaaa dia Werewolf ka to

Kaun kehta h Sonali cute nhi h?
Omg she's one of the cutest character in the whole story. Actually uske actions cute h... Bohut zyada

I Laughed so much at this. Jis tarah se veer ne kaha. Muh ka khao pehle. I was imagining sonali with a mouthful of food and uttering those words.

Again she's so cute.

Keeping these things aside. Let's talk about the update now. According to me ye ek aisa update tha jisme bohut saari baate cover up hui h. Itne saare characters ko ek saath ek jagah dikhaana koi asaan kaam nhi hota. Par aapne wo effortlessly dikhaya h...

Let's count. Veer, Ragini, sonali, Suman, aabha, bhumika, shweta, Arohi, kavya, nidhi, Suhana. 11 characters. Pari ko main include bhi nhi kar rahi abhi.

11 characters ko humne ek saath dekha. Aur pata bhi nhi chala ki itne saare characters hamare saamne the. End me Purvi tejal aur bhavna ko to count hi nhi kar rahi main.

Itna effortlessly aapne likha h na ki puchiye mat. Yahi to skills hoti h writer ki. These challenges makes the writer more skilled. Aur shayad dekh k lagta h ye aap k liye baaye haath ka khel tha. That means you have encountered several similar challenges before. And now it's a piece of cake for you. Truly Commendable...

Ek baat jo mujhe aur acchi lagi. Veer's alpha and sigma instincts. Generally writers aisi cheezo ko introduce karne k baad usse bhul jaate h. Aisi bhi koi cheez thi ... But from day 1 ever since instincts were introduced you have kept them in scrutiny. Time and again time and again we see his instincts deluding his decision making and emotions. Iss update me bhi kese Veer ki self respect aur ego beech me aaya ... Just because of those instincts.

Ab thodi kharab baat kar lete h update ki
mujhe feel hua aabha aur bhumika were like statues. Wo thi waha but kuch boli nhi? Kyu? But I cannot complain. After all 11 characters ko hum dekh rahe h. To itna manage karna mushkil hota h no doubt. Shayad update aur lamba ho jata unhe include karne par? If that's what you feared? But main chahungi ki aabha aur bhumika scene me aaye. I want to know their personality.

This update had everything. I can say that it's a perfect start for a new journey. Wo station ka scene. Jaha aapne announcement dikhaya. Choti si detail h... But wo choti si detail hamare experience ko itna badha deti h ki lagta h sab kuch saamne hi ho raha h...

The Beauty of this paragraph...
mujhe nhi lagta iss se better way uss situation ko dikhaya jaa sakta h... Aapne jaan boojh k bhavna aur shweta k naam se update end kia.

sab jaante h inn dono maa ke beech rivalry honi hi h... You used that.. aur itna impactful end diya dono k naam saamne rakh k ki ab to readers curiosity se hi mar jayenge. Unme main bhi hu...

Update k part 2 ka wait nhi ho raha h... Please jaldi deliver kariyega. Wait karna sach me mushkil h. Jaha aapne end kia h wo torture h sach me

Jabardast Updatee

Shaandaar update hai bhai lagta hai ab saare raaz khul jaayenge jaipur jaane k baad

Rihanna ji ye dono wahan thi magar abhi tak ka unka safar aur personality dekho to samajh aayega ki

• Abha bahut hi jyada introvert hai yahan tak ki wo apni saas Suman jo usko apni beti hi maanti hai usse bhi jyada nahi bolti. Veer ke saath waale scenes mein bhi usne kuch nahi bola abhi tak to aisa character achanak kaise openly bolne lag jaayega
• Bhumika vaise to independent ladki hai aur apni maa ke saath hotal sambhalti hai magar asliyat mein wo poori tarah apni maa par dependent hai aur uski apni koi thoughts/ decisions hote hi nahi hai. Wo wahi karti hai jo uski maa kahti hai aur wo apne aap kuch achcha bura nahi sochti hai fir chahe dadaji se property ke batwaare ka samay ho yaa Veer ko Keara ke saamne naa pahchanna, usne bina soche samjhe wahi Kiya ko uski maa ne usko seekhaya.

To ab aap hi batao ki jab inki personalities hi aisi hai to sirf us scene mein mojud hone se hi inki personalities change to hongi nahi.

Waise bhi in dono ke liye kuch bada hi plan kiya hua hoga Werewolf bhai ne tabhi to dialogues naa hone ke baad bhi inki presence updates mein bani rahti hai taaki readers ke minds se ye slip naa kar jaaye.

nice update bro

इस अपडेट का नब्बे प्रतिशत हिस्सा एक घर मे हो रही गतिविधी पर ही केंद्रित रहा। वाक्या था वीर का जयपुर ट्रीप पर जाना और घर के महिलाओ का उसके साथ ट्रीप पर जाने के लिए जिद्द करना।
यह वैसा ही था जैसे कर्ता के किसी खुबसूरत या किसी ऐतिहासिक शहर जाने के लिए प्लानिंग करते देख घर के बच्चे भी जाने के लिए उतारू हो जाते हैं।
उस दौरान सोनाली के एजुकेशन पर भी वीर ने निधि मैम से चर्चा किया। सोनाली का रिएक्शन हमेशा की तरह क्यूट लगा मुझे।

अपडेट का सबसे उत्तेजक क्षण था रागिनी के साथ वीर का अप्रत्याशित फाॅरप्ले सेक्सुअल सम्बन्ध बनाना। शायद रागिनी को अपनी सारी आशंकाओ पर पूर्ण विराम लग गया होगा।

मर्द जाति को सिर्फ एक महिला को संतुष्ट करने मे छक्के छुट जाते है और कहां वीर के लाइफ मे इतनी हसीनाओं ने अपना आशियाना बना लिया है कि ......! प्रभु उसे हिम्मत के साथ साथ सहनशक्ति भी प्रदान करे।

मुंबई फ्लैट फार्म पर भावना के साथ श्वेता और सुमन का आमना सामना कहानी का हाईलाइट था। खासकर भावना और श्वेता का। दोनो सौतन है। कुछ कड़वी यादें और कुछ गिला शिकवा दोनो को ही रहा होगा।
शायद वीर के लिए एक और इम्तिहान का समय है। लेकिन प्रॉब्लम यह है कि दोनो के साथ ही उसके रिश्ते सामान्य नही है।

मुझे लगता है श्वेता को भावना से अन सेक्योरिटी की भावना अपने दिलो-दिमाग मे नही पालना चाहिए। आखिर वीर की वो सगी मां है। और बच्चों पर पहला हक मां का ही होता है।

खुबसूरत और बेहतरीन अपडेट वेयरवोल्फ भाई।
Outstanding & Amazing & brilliant.

Waiting for next update sir g

Wow awesome update Bhai maza hi aa gaya update padh kr to Ek taraf veer apna kuch azeez logo or maa, behan or mausi ke sath apne atit ko janne ke liye nikal rha or udhar jane se Pehle ragini ko kuch kuch hint de gya unke age ane wale relationship ka or arohi or kavya ka pta nhi wha jakar kya hud dank machane wali hai veer ko lekar or dekhte hai suman ka raaz kaise or kitna juda hua hai veer or bhavna ke sath or Jane se pehle hi jo bhidhant bhawna or shweta ke beech ho chuki hai dekhte hai raste ke khatam hone ke sath 2 khatam hogi ya mazedaar

Ab veer ke dono maaye aapas me kaise milte hai uska intazar rahega

Waiting for next update yaar

Waiting

Update kal ayegaa

Nice update

Fabolous n mind billowing update

Jabardast update

Superb awesome update

Update kab ayega bhai

bahut hi dhamakedar update hai bhai

25 वी विवाह की वर्षगांठ पर ढेरों शुभकामनाएं स्वस्थ रहें मस्त रहे व ऊर्जा से परिपूर्ण रहे

Agar aage story me veer ke tarah hi System wali koi girl aa jaye. Aur veer se us girl ko love ho jaye to kaisa hoga ?
Jara is baat par vichar karna Werewolf bhai.

Veer ke laude lagjayenge

Itachi_Uchiha bhai phir ye alpha or Sigma instinct ek taraf Dale dekhenge or ye veer abhi kisi ko bhi chod deta hai phir Aisa kuch na ho sakega ..

bhai baat sahi hai ab story main bahot grils hai .per already pari to hai. but wah Systems hai. kya tej Ya keara dono main se koi System wali milsakti hai kya.

Nahi bhai uske liye bhi kuch na kuch apne Werewolf bhai soch lenge.

Werewolf bhai update de do please

Intezaar rahega Werewolf bhai....

Matbal subhe hi padhne ko milega

Ding werewolf bhai aaj raat I'm not drinking for next update

Shandar jandar update...

Bhawan ke bare me jankar shweta ka reaction asha ke anurup hi tha... ''Hath ko Aya par muhh na lga'' kuch aisa hi shweta ke sath hua he... Abhi to veer ne usse do baat pyar se nhi ki fir bhi usse ummid to thi, but ab ? Khair ummidon to ab bhi rehegi coz ummidon pr to duniya kayam he

Khair ab Jaipur ka safar shuru hone wala he... Kuch Raaj khulenge to kuch naye Raaj samne ayenge... Vaise Tej ko Nidhi mam ke jariye Shweta ke bare me sab PTA chal chuka he past me Shweta ne Veer ko kaise kaise dose diye the... So vo bich me Sweta ki gandiya ko punching bag samajhkar kasarat to jarur karegi

Btw ye samajh nhi aa rha ki bhumika ki bhumika ab tak etni kyo nhi dikhani gaii jitni dikhai gaii... Abhi tak vo sirf ek side charector bann ke rehh gaii... Mana na ki vo ek introvert he but Hume thoda bahut to uski mentality ke bare me pta chalna chaiye tha ? Pehle bhi vo Shweta ke hatho ki kathputli bann kar jee rhi thi... Just like ek robot machine... Es update me jaha ek ke baad ek phuljhadiya Veer ke sath chalne ke liye use convence kr thi to Mann me Aya ki jab etti sari Veer ke sath chal hi rhi he to shyad bhumika bhi jayegi but ... Esi bahane use bhi do pal ki khushi naseeb ho jati but wolfie ko uski khushi kaha manjhur ?

Khair now a days update ki frequency kafi low ho chuki he... Ummid se jyada hi update ke bich gape hote ja rhe he... We know that ki aajkal ki bhagdoud ki zindagi me survival karna kitta mushkil he but jra sa time nikal kar thoda gape decrease kro Yara...

Well Aaj intezar rehega dhamakedar update ka

Please update
Intejar ho raha hai aapka

Aaj update aayega kya bhai

Thanks....we are waiting....

Waiting

Nice

Waiting 4 next update Bhai

Bhai Raat Se Subha Hui par apka update nhi ayya

Awesome fabulous update bro

Update

Bhai badi hee jabardast story he aap kii
Werewolf bhai aapki to story badi kamal kee hoti hee


ye story padke essa realized hua ke veer kii jgah apun hee bhai kya hee khatarnak logik gajab

ab suhana or sonia kya aaps main completed karege pehle wo keara se complete nhi kar paa rhe hee

pranjan kaa to burta hee kar diya dono bhai bahan ne mip kar

sweta kaa bhi ku6 samaj nhi aaya pehle veer maa keta to kehti maar ti ya uske khilaf sajis karti or jab veer ko maa ki sabse jyada jarurat thi tab to aai nhi paas or jab apne balbutte uski propary use dilwa dee to maa kee mamta hee udel dee veer pe ab veer kya karega essi mamta kaa or ab to uski maa aa gai hee uski sagi maa jo use ku6 karan vass use chor gai the kese complete karogi vo

veer kii maa yani bhavna jii kya hee kehna dhire dhire inke bhi raj aayenge samne

ye suman kya balla hee jo veer ko usse bhi jyada janti hee or iske bhi raj khulege kya bhavna jaan payegi suman ko

kya hee hoga iss journey main jha veer apni leddy gang ke sath hoga village main

teeno behen ek hoke veer ko sachi main pagal kar degi ab

Ragini ko uska pyaar bhi except kar lia veer nee

ab dekh the iss yatra pee veer ka kya hoga train ka safer pe kya hoga

Update 121 has been posted guys.