Fantasy Lucifer- The fallen angel(completed)

[Lone survivor]

WRITER’s NOTE

School times se likhne ka bahut shauk tha mujhe mostly poems hi likhta tha. School me hi ek ladki mili bahut pyaari thi. College ke 3rd year tak relationship chala fir vo chali gaye door. Uske baad kabhi socha nahi tha dobara kuch likunga. Bilkul man hi nahi karta tha. Nashe to jaise jindagi ban gaye the. Pehle bhi nashe karta tha lekin uske baad jada ho gaye. Akela rahna acha lagne lagega aur dheere dheere sab door hote chale gaye. Main akela hi bacha tha. Tab kahi se xf ka pata chala aur pata nahi kyu aise hi ek raat pehli story ka first update post kar diya. Ek medium mil gaya tha mujhe kuch share karne ka aur acha bhi lagne laga tha. Dheere dheere vapas likhna start kiya aur es baar stories. Xf par kuch stories likhi fir vo band hua to yaha aa gaya. Aur vohi silsila yaha bhi kamyaab raha. Aap sabko sayad idea nahi hoga ki jo thoda bahut interact hota hai humara yaha vo kitna important ho sakta hai kisi ki life me. Es waqt mere pass almost sab kuch hai lekin agar kisi ko kuch share karna chahu to aisa person nahi hai esliye beech beech me kuch updates me apni situation likh deta hu to acha lagta hai. I hope ki humara sath aise hi aage bana rahe.

Ek mew story ka dimag me kuch idea hai lekin kab start hogi eske liye abhi sure nahi hu

May be main kuch dino ke liye rehab chala jau ya fir kuch aur mil jaye sath chalne ke. Lets see

In the end i want to thank each and everyone of you guys who has supported me and gave me so much love. Means a lot

Thank you so much guys. Jaldi hi milte hai ek new story ke sath tab tak ke liye

 

[Lone survivor]

Shyad devil

Thank you

 

[Lone survivor]

Mera Guess Shi tha ki vo devil he h

Aapko galat kaise sabit kar dete?

Tara ka bhi number lag he gya ye train to ruk he na rhi isme to sab bharte ja rhe h apata na konse station pr Jake ruke gi ye train

Non stop train hai ye

Ab eda ko bhi heaven se nikal diya gya h/ usne khud chorr diya

Eda hi jane

Hell me uske swagat ke liye souls ko itna tadpaya jaye ki unko bhi apne kiye hue sare galat krmo ki yaad aaye ki kyo vo sare kaam kiye inn logo ne

Apna swagat vo khud kar legi

Btw awesome update bro

Thank you bhai

 

[Lone survivor]

Tara is Eda reincarnation, what the hell. That means Tara or Eda is Lucii's first love. What a twist Lone survivor bro. Now Tara is in the line or I would say Tara is sharing first position with Inaya.

May be or may be not
I have no fucking clue

Now devil is in Eda's body so not sure what would he plan and if will cut the wings than Eda cannot return to heaven.

They will always have an alternate

Why Lucii suddenly killed Shekar? So that devil can punish him more in hell? Superb update

I don't know bhai
Let's wait and see

 

[Lone survivor]

Jaisa ki apun ne kaha hi tha.. (Annika : Roshini ko add karne ka hai bas, late entry thi uski).

List to achi hai lekin kya sahi hai??

Firstly, the scene between Tara & Lucifer.. Their conversation and the depiction of feelings & emotions.. was pure gold!

Thank youuuu

Tara bhi Lucifer par flat ho chuki thi, ye to hume pehle se hi pata tha... Jab un donon behnon ke saath Lucifer water park mein gaya tha, tabhi uski list mein Tara ka naam jud chuka tha... Parantu, pichhli kuchh mulakaton, especially last one, mein dono ke beech jo baatein huyi, uski wajah se laga tha ki jo anjaam Eda aur Lucifer ka hua tha wahi shayad Tara aur Lucifer ka bhi hoga, parantu ab cheezein badalti huyi nazar aa rahi hain... This meeting between Tara & Lucifer, for the first time, was filled with love & happiness only!

This time it was all love

Lucifer ki maata shree ne Eda ko vardan types kuchh diya tha, ki wo aur Lucifer ek zaroor honge aur Eda ko uska pyaar zaroor milega... Wahin Supreme ne kaha tha ki Eda aur Lucifer ek naa ho paaye, iska ek bohot bada kaaran tha... What I can understand is, Lucifer ke andar devil ne apni jagah bana li thi, aur Eda ek Angel thi, isiliye shayad dono ka milan sambhav nahi tha... Lucifer ki Maa ke aashirvaad ke phal swaroop, Lucifer ke andar se Devil ki aatma/swaroop/power nikalkar Eda mein sama chuki hai... Ab bhi Eda aur Lucifer ka direct samagam sambhav nahi, kyonki equation wahi hai... Parantu, Tara ke roop mein Eda ka ansh/swaroop aur Lucifer ke ek hone mein aisi koyi samasya hone nahi waali hai...

Nice theory

Ab sawaal ye hai ki kya Eda jaanti thi Tara ke astitva ke baare mein, yadi haan, to kya usne ye sab huddang jo machaya Heaven mein, wo isi mantavya ko poora karne hetu machaya taaki Lucifer ke andar se devil ko baahar nikaala jaa sake... Haalanki, abhi ye saaf nahi hua hai ki Devil kaise nikla Lucifer ke andar se... Kyonki, mujhe nahi lagta ki kisi bhi situation mein Lucifer ne aisa intezaam kiya hoga, jiske chalte Eda ko Devil ka kop bhogna pade, to aise mein ek hi possibility hai ki Supreme ne Eda se krodhit hokar (because of Guruji & Raaj), use wahi saza de di hai, jo Lucifer ko di thi : Hell Lord...

Maybe ho sakta hai
Ys fir kuch aur baat ho jo abhi samne nahi aaye ho

Ab Eda ne Hell ki baagdor sambhal li hai, aur usne apne pankh kaatne ka bhi faisla kar liya hai... Souls ki to lag gayi hai, kyonki itne samay se jo Lucifer ki absence mein unki mauj ho rahi thi, wo ab khatam hone waali hai... I'm interested in Shekhar though,uski soul bhi Hell hi jaayegi na? Yaani, ek nark se mukt hokar, doosre aur us se bhi dangerous nark mein jaane waala hai wo?

Usse jana to nark me hi chahiye

Secondly, Eda ka kya hoga? Kyonki Lucifer ka ant, maut hi hai, ye kaafi clear hai, to Eda.. jise same usi raaste par fenk diya gaya hai jis par Lucifer ko fenka gaya tha, to kya Eda ki maut bhi nischit ho chuki hai? One thing I want is Supreme ki maut, kyonki agar Lucifer aur Eda bina galti ke marenge to Supreme to exist karna deserve hi nahi karte...

Fir bachega kon?

Tara, Anisha ke baare mein baat karne aayi thi Lucifer se parantu Lucifer ne wahi kiya jo sabse best tha... Anisha ko pyaar ki zaroorat hai, us apnepan ki zaroorat hai jo use kabhi nahi mila... Anisha ke iraade sahi nahi lag rahe hain aur jo baatein Anisha aur Lucifer ke beech huyi thi pehle, us se laga tha ki Anisha ki planning behad khatarnak hai, shayad bohot negative bhi... Parantu, mujhe yahi lagta hai ki Tara aur Ashmita apne pyaar aur dulaar se use bhi change kar sakti hai... Waise Lucifer is maamle mein zyada soch nahi raha hai, to shayad Anisha ki planning ke anjaam ko lekar wo pehle hi aashvast hai...

Lucifer besak nahi soch raha ho lekin happy ending dikhana mujhe pasand nahi hai

Tara aur Lucifer ke madhya huyi kiss future mein hone waali ghatnaon ka bhi sanket de gayi... Shayad agla number Tara ka hi hoga parantu dekhna ye hai ki Tara kaise react karegi is sab par... Pyaar to karti hi hai wo Lucifer se, so lagta yahi hai ki jaldi hi Lucifer teeno behno ko ek saath waali apni fantasy bhi poori kar paayega, ya shayad nahi, kyonki Ashmita se to uski fati padi rehti hi hai...

Vaise enka threesome hua to maje hi aajayenge

Is beech Shekhar ko maar diya hai Lucifer ne, aur saabit kar diya hai ki Devil ka hi prakop aur prabhav tha wo Lucifer par, jiske kaaran aaj wo is haalat mein hai, yaani Supreme aur Guruji ne jo bhi sikhaya use, bachpan se us se bhi koyi bohot kroor nahi banta Lucifer yadi uspar Devil ka saaya na hota...

Aisa bhi to ho sakta hai ki agar vo na shikhta to devil uske ander sama hi nahi pata?

Khair, ab dekhna ye hai ki Annika kaise react karegi Shekhar ki maut par... Kya wo Lucifer par hi baras padegi, ya hamesha ki tarah Naag hi beech mein pisega?

Naag hi pista dikh raha hai mujhe to

Raaj, wo kya karega, bhale hi Eda ko zabardasti Raaj ki taraf dhakela gaya ho, par lagta to hai ki Raaj sach mein pyaar karta tha Eda se, aur oopar se wo Lucifer ko apna idol bhi maanta hai... Ab jab dono ko hi same anjaam ke liye dhakel diya gaya hai, to kya jiski aashanka Eda ne jatayi thi wo sach ho jaayega, yaani Raaj ka vidroh! Let's see aage kya hota hai...

Heaven me kuch nahi bachega fir
Eda gaye lucifer to kab ka ja chuka hai aur ab raaj bhi chala gaya to kya bachega vaha

Bohot hi khubsurat update tha bhai! Jaisa maine kaha ki shayad kahani ka ab tak ka sabse behtar... Iske aage shayad kuchh aur kehne ki zaroorat bhi nahi hai!

Outstanding Update Bhai & Waiting For Next...

Thank you so so much bhai
Keep supporting
Much love

 

[Lone survivor]

Nice update bhai waiting for next update

Thank you bhai

 

[Lone survivor]

Matlb bhai kya twist dala eda ko hell soup diya supreme ne bahut khub dekhte h aage kya hota hai wo

Thank you bhai
Keep supporting

 

[Lone survivor]

To tell the truth Lucifer pagal kutte se kam bhi nahi hey sometimes....

Sometimes or most of the time?

 

[Lone survivor]

Wonderful update, one more girl fallen for Lucifer.....

Thank you bhai

 

[Lone survivor]

tab to megaupdate banta tha

Ye kisne kaha?

 

[Lone survivor]

uski yadasht chali gayi hai usko yaad na wo kaun hai usko yaad na hai ki usse powerful duniya me koi na hai kyuki achche achche uske aage gir pade

Koe to Hoga us se powerful bhi