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DEAD END ...THE END OF PHASE TWO......PART ONE THE BLOODBATH....
DEAD END ...THE END OF PHASE TWO......PART ONE THE BLOODBATH....
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Ha ha ha dont worry update bada he ayega sabra kiya h na toh ye toh confirm h ki words 7000 se toh jayda he honge .... Is liye sabra ka faal meetha he hoga...
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Update 100 "THE CENTURY ONE"
Update bohot hi lajavaab tarike se likha tha ju ne padh ke alag hi ahsas ho raha tha.
Iss Update me
1• Action jo tha wo bohot hi jabardast tarike se aapne likha tha Sandeep singh nirwan bhaya bohot hi bariki se aapne action scenes ko darsaya tha jisse padh ke hi bohot maza aaraha tha yaa kaho to ek alag hi imagination kr rahe the hum readers bhailog.
khair ab aate hai iss Update ke dusre point par jo hai emotion
2. Emotional touch jo aaya iss update me wo bohot hi lajavaab tha matlab sach kahu bhaya apki writing skill ki sabse lajavaab baat emotions hai jo aap bohot hi lajavaab tarike se darsate ho har scenes yaa charecters me jo iss Update me aapne Jhanvi ke scenes me bohoot hi bariki se likha tha ki kaise uski wo bachpana aur masoomiyat se uske bhaav aapne uski lafzo me puri sa diya tha jo uski har lafzo yaa kahu to har baato me saaf jhalak raha tha bohot hi lajavaab scene laga mughe Jhanvi ka.
Ab aate hai poonam ke scenes par jo alag hi level ka tha.....sach kahu to mai feel kr paa raha tha uska wo affection,uske wo dil me panap rahe har bhaavo ko mai feel kr paa raha tha......jab poonam ki wo careness raj ke liye bhi ubhari aur uske wo dil jo sihran si daud padi wo ahsas pyaar ka hi to tha jo saayad ab naya jaam lene wali thi aur jab aapne uske har scenes ko palak jhapakte hi badal kr rakh diya deepika aur raj ko gale milta dikha kr poonam ke man galtfahemi si panap gayi,usse laga deepika uski masooka hai lekin bechari ko kys pata ki wo ladki Deepika raj ki bahen hai.....
" galtfahemi uss rab ne uthayi hai uss dil me......kya pata wo rab kis majhdar se soch raha ho.......unki prem ki wo dastaan ko.....jo naa jaane kis mod par bikhregi yaa kis mod par judegi ye to wo dil bhi na jaanta......par haa wo dil hai janaab......uss dil ko to khuda bhi kabhi najarandaz nhi krte to hum gaalib kon hue !! "
Sandeep singh nirwan bhaya Update bohot hi lajavaab tha,apke jaisa emotion criteria koi nhi likhta bhai koi nhi.......aap har charecters aur scenes me emotions aur feel laa dete ho jisse hamara ye man khud b khud hi imagination me lejaata hai.
Take care bhai.......
Update bohot hi lajavaab tarike se likha tha ju ne padh ke alag hi ahsas ho raha tha.
Iss Update me
1• Action jo tha wo bohot hi jabardast tarike se aapne likha tha Sandeep singh nirwan bhaya bohot hi bariki se aapne action scenes ko darsaya tha jisse padh ke hi bohot maza aaraha tha yaa kaho to ek alag hi imagination kr rahe the hum readers bhailog.
khair ab aate hai iss Update ke dusre point par jo hai emotion
2. Emotional touch jo aaya iss update me wo bohot hi lajavaab tha matlab sach kahu bhaya apki writing skill ki sabse lajavaab baat emotions hai jo aap bohot hi lajavaab tarike se darsate ho har scenes yaa charecters me jo iss Update me aapne Jhanvi ke scenes me bohoot hi bariki se likha tha ki kaise uski wo bachpana aur masoomiyat se uske bhaav aapne uski lafzo me puri sa diya tha jo uski har lafzo yaa kahu to har baato me saaf jhalak raha tha bohot hi lajavaab scene laga mughe Jhanvi ka.
Ab aate hai poonam ke scenes par jo alag hi level ka tha.....sach kahu to mai feel kr paa raha tha uska wo affection,uske wo dil me panap rahe har bhaavo ko mai feel kr paa raha tha......jab poonam ki wo careness raj ke liye bhi ubhari aur uske wo dil jo sihran si daud padi wo ahsas pyaar ka hi to tha jo saayad ab naya jaam lene wali thi aur jab aapne uske har scenes ko palak jhapakte hi badal kr rakh diya deepika aur raj ko gale milta dikha kr poonam ke man galtfahemi si panap gayi,usse laga deepika uski masooka hai lekin bechari ko kys pata ki wo ladki Deepika raj ki bahen hai.....
" galtfahemi uss rab ne uthayi hai uss dil me......kya pata wo rab kis majhdar se soch raha ho.......unki prem ki wo dastaan ko.....jo naa jaane kis mod par bikhregi yaa kis mod par judegi ye to wo dil bhi na jaanta......par haa wo dil hai janaab......uss dil ko to khuda bhi kabhi najarandaz nhi krte to hum gaalib kon hue !! "
Sandeep singh nirwan bhaya Update bohot hi lajavaab tha,apke jaisa emotion criteria koi nhi likhta bhai koi nhi.......aap har charecters aur scenes me emotions aur feel laa dete ho jisse hamara ye man khud b khud hi imagination me lejaata hai.
Take care bhai.......
Nirwana.
Kab tak aye ga updaye please time bi bta diya karen.... Itna intazar karwana acha nai hota
Kab tak aye ga updaye please time bi bta diya karen.... Itna intazar karwana acha nai hota
Sandeep Bhai update kab aye ga yar aap to ab update bhi Kam Kar Diya hai Bhai phele 4 update ate the or ab do hi ate hai Bhai or hum ko aap ki store bhot hi zada Pasand hai Bhai yakin mano hum din Bhar me kitne hi bar chik karte is umed se ki sayad update Aya ho