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Thriller Waah! Life Ho Toh Aisi - The Merchant Of Death ( COMPLETED )

Which type of ending do you want for this part?


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Humlog late night shebunino pohanchey and thakkaan ki wajah se sablog dinner karke so gaye.. Subah main utha fresh wagairaah hoke niche aaya and sabke sath breakfast kiya then maine sabko ikatha kiya..

Main-So guys here is the plan...

Maine unko saara plan bataya from start to finish jisse sun wohlog bahot jyaada shocked hue like bahot jyaada..Iss bich unhone saikdon sawaal puche jinka maine jawaab diya..

One-So you are telling me you bought two Military Grade Attack helicopters from the government.. How??

Main-Yeah..You can fly them right??

One - Yeah that's not an issue Six and Eight can fly them.. But what's the schedule..

Main-So Choppers will be unloaded in a few hours and Six and Eight can go have a look at them..

Six-NO need we know there variants and we know how they work so it's not even a big deal..

Main - Ok.. So then Hank humaare weapons ka kya hua??

Hank-Regan already laga hua hai boss iss kaam par kal raatko he nikal gaya tha woh so aaj shyaam takk full armory k sath aa jaaega woh..

Main-Perfect..

So plan ye tha ki humlog kal subah 6 baje take off karenge, Main hounga jet helicopter mein jisko Eight fly karega and dusara helicopter obviously then Six fly karega.. Mere sath keval Eight he hoga helicopter mein baaki One, Two, Three and Six dusare helicopter mein honge kyunki unke task sabse jyaada and important hain Kyunki main helicopter mein koi kaam. Kaa nahi hun mujhe naa toh helicopter k equipmente chalaane ki training hai or naa he main helicopter k andar se goli chala shakta hun aim lagaake issliye maine kam kaam waale helicopter mein 2 bandey he rakhe.. Ab hoga ye ki Humaara Jo main yaani Tank helicopter hai woh humse 3-4 minutes pehle take off karega woh jaaega and jaake net 7:00 Am se 7:02 Am par woh submarine k uppar EMP fire karega, EMP k sath he woh ek missile fire karega Ship k uppar jiss missile kaa motive hoga Ship ko dubaa dena like seedha Ship k uppar he fire nahi karega uske andar waalon ko jaan se nahi maarna caahtey yelog but agar target miss hua toh wohlog marr jaaein toh bhi not a big deal.. Ab tab Jo Heavy machine guns Rakhi hain towers mein woh Helicopter 1 par fire suru kardenge and tab hogi humaari entry yaani jet helicopter ki Ab Eight ne mujhe bola hai ki woh 3-5 Seconds k andar dono towers ko easily udaa shakta hai so unke uddne k baad ab mera helicopter hoga land or Pehla helicopter humaare just uppar hoga ab usme 2 machine guns hain jisme se ek toh by hand chalti hai jisko One chalaaega and dusari jo inbuilt hai woh Six handle karega unka kaam hoga niche fire karna tabtak jabtak saare guards wahaan se ek side naa ho jaaein, uske baad main uttarunga niche or ye tha risky part kyunki main akela ground par hounga Bhalle he mere just uppar helicopter se protection ho mujhe lekin fir bhi saikdon guards mein se agar 5-10 bhi hero bane toh bahot badi dikkat ho shakti hai.. Lekin jo bhi hai karna padega ab mera kaam hoga niche se EMO ko protection dena taaki woh easily chadd shake so mujhe naa keval khudko bachana hai sath - 2 Emo ko bhi bachana hai.. So ye tha ek maatar bada issue..

Lekin agar humlog Emo ko baitha letey hain toh humlog turant wahaan se nikalenge, ab hum teeno toh nikalenge Japan ki side or dusara helicopter jaaega humse opposite yaani Russia k andar ki side wahaan wohlog Helicopter ko ek jungle mein land karenge and wahaan ek gaadi already hogi and wohlog nikal jaaenge.. Idhar humlog pohanchenge Sea of Okhotsk ko cross karke then humlog Japan k ek Desert type area mein land honge jahaan humein ek military jeep khaddi milegi and usase humlog Japan k andar gayab hojaaenge Wahin Hank, Alina and Regan millenge humein....Ab Ek or important information ye thi ki dono he helicopters k andar Self Destruct kaa feature James ne add kiya hai yaani humlog land hotey he woh button daba denge toh 60 Seconds baad helicopters explode hojaaenge jisase Tatyana k khilaaf koi saboot bachega nahi ye Tatyana ki ek condition thi jisase mujhe koi farak nahi padda, mujhe doobara ye Choppers use karne nahi they kabhi and also isase humara bhi faayda tha kyunki saboot mitt jaane k baad humtak koi government agency pohanch nahi shakti.. So ye tha plan lit haina?? Yeah i know..

Ab obviously Eight humaare sath Japan jaaega toh usko wahaan se main wapis uski desired location par bhijwa dunga Jo koi bada issue nahi tha..

Ye tha mera MasterPlan jo kuch he ghanton mein action mein aajaaega.. I can not fucking wait for that moment..

Continued...
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Humlog late night shebunino pohanchey and thakkaan ki wajah se sablog dinner karke so gaye.. Subah main utha fresh wagairaah hoke niche aaya and sabke sath breakfast kiya then maine sabko ikatha kiya..

Main-So guys here is the plan...

Maine unko saara plan bataya from start to finish jisse sun wohlog bahot jyaada shocked hue like bahot jyaada..Iss bich unhone saikdon sawaal puche jinka maine jawaab diya..

One-So you are telling me you bought two Military Grade Attack helicopters from the government.. How??

Main-Yeah..You can fly them right??

One - Yeah that's not an issue Six and Eight can fly them.. But what's the schedule..

Main-So Choppers will be unloaded in a few hours and Six and Eight can go have a look at them..

Six-NO need we know there variants and we know how they work so it's not even a big deal..

Main - Ok.. So then Hank humaare weapons ka kya hua??

Hank-Regan already laga hua hai boss iss kaam par kal raatko he nikal gaya tha woh so aaj shyaam takk full armory k sath aa jaaega woh..

Main-Perfect..

So plan ye tha ki humlog kal subah 6 baje take off karenge, Main hounga jet helicopter mein jisko Eight fly karega and dusara helicopter obviously then Six fly karega.. Mere sath keval Eight he hoga helicopter mein baaki One, Two, Three and Six dusare helicopter mein honge kyunki unke task sabse jyaada and important hain Kyunki main helicopter mein koi kaam. Kaa nahi hun mujhe naa toh helicopter k equipmente chalaane ki training hai or naa he main helicopter k andar se goli chala shakta hun aim lagaake issliye maine kam kaam waale helicopter mein 2 bandey he rakhe.. Ab hoga ye ki Humaara Jo main yaani Tank helicopter hai woh humse 3-4 minutes pehle take off karega woh jaaega and jaake net 7:00 Am se 7:02 Am par woh submarine k uppar EMP fire karega, EMP k sath he woh ek missile fire karega Ship k uppar jiss missile kaa motive hoga Ship ko dubaa dena like seedha Ship k uppar he fire nahi karega uske andar waalon ko jaan se nahi maarna caahtey yelog but agar target miss hua toh wohlog marr jaaein toh bhi not a big deal.. Ab tab Jo Heavy machine guns Rakhi hain towers mein woh Helicopter 1 par fire suru kardenge and tab hogi humaari entry yaani jet helicopter ki Ab Eight ne mujhe bola hai ki woh 3-5 Seconds k andar dono towers ko easily udaa shakta hai so unke uddne k baad ab mera helicopter hoga land or Pehla helicopter humaare just uppar hoga ab usme 2 machine guns hain jisme se ek toh by hand chalti hai jisko One chalaaega and dusari jo inbuilt hai woh Six handle karega unka kaam hoga niche fire karna tabtak jabtak saare guards wahaan se ek side naa ho jaaein, uske baad main uttarunga niche or ye tha risky part kyunki main akela ground par hounga Bhalle he mere just uppar helicopter se protection ho mujhe lekin fir bhi saikdon guards mein se agar 5-10 bhi hero bane toh bahot badi dikkat ho shakti hai.. Lekin jo bhi hai karna padega ab mera kaam hoga niche se EMO ko protection dena taaki woh easily chadd shake so mujhe naa keval khudko bachana hai sath - 2 Emo ko bhi bachana hai.. So ye tha ek maatar bada issue..

Lekin agar humlog Emo ko baitha letey hain toh humlog turant wahaan se nikalenge, ab hum teeno toh nikalenge Japan ki side or dusara helicopter jaaega humse opposite yaani Russia k andar ki side wahaan wohlog Helicopter ko ek jungle mein land karenge and wahaan ek gaadi already hogi and wohlog nikal jaaenge.. Idhar humlog pohanchenge Sea of Okhotsk ko cross karke then humlog Japan k ek Desert type area mein land honge jahaan humein ek military jeep khaddi milegi and usase humlog Japan k andar gayab hojaaenge Wahin Hank, Alina and Regan millenge humein....Ab Ek or important information ye thi ki dono he helicopters k andar Self Destruct kaa feature James ne add kiya hai yaani humlog land hotey he woh button daba denge toh 60 Seconds baad helicopters explode hojaaenge jisase Tatyana k khilaaf koi saboot bachega nahi ye Tatyana ki ek condition thi jisase mujhe koi farak nahi padda, mujhe doobara ye Choppers use karne nahi they kabhi and also isase humara bhi faayda tha kyunki saboot mitt jaane k baad humtak koi government agency pohanch nahi shakti.. So ye tha plan lit haina?? Yeah i know..

Ab obviously Eight humaare sath Japan jaaega toh usko wahaan se main wapis uski desired location par bhijwa dunga Jo koi bada issue nahi tha..

Ye tha mera MasterPlan jo kuch he ghanton mein action mein aajaaega.. I can not fucking wait for that moment..

Continued...
Bahut hi shandaar update, plan ke liye saari accessories aur actors are ready now. AP ne sabko unki original se jayada price de kar unko backstab karne se rok liya hai kyonki itna paisa kahin aur milega nahi aur doosri baat usne sabke jahan mein ye baat daal di ki jo insaan paisa paani ki tarah Baha sakta hai to uske liye khoon bahana koi badi baat nahi hai aur jis tarah aur jis tarah ke logo se AP deal kar raha hai uske baad usse backstabbing karke bachna bhi namumkin hai, to iss tarah AP ne apni taraf se to plan foolproof kar liya ab execution ke time kya hota hai ye to tabhi pata chalega.

Ye Bhagwaan 316 naam ka insaan kuch alagh level par hi storytelling karta hai, pahle part mein AP ko as normal mastmaula type ladka Jo apne parivar ke liye kisi bhi hadd tak jaa sakta hai waisa dikhya aur usi parivaar ko bachane ke liye zahar bhi kha liya jo usse naa maar sakta hai aur naa jeene de sakta hai. Doosre part mein bechara waapas aa kar fir se apni zindgi normally jeena chahta hai magar fir uska past uska peecha nahi chodta hai aur aakhir mein wo apni sabse badi taaqat apne pariwaar, apne dosto aur apni team se bhi door ho jaata hai.

Spiderman movie mein quote tha ki

With great power comes great responsibility

Magar mujhe aisa lagta hai ki with great power comes great bad luck too, kyon ki kisi super human ki kahani chahe wo iss forum mein ho yaa movies mein jitni jayada power utna jayada bad luck, utna jayada personal loss. But still ye kahani aur ye writer apne space ki one of the best hai.

Bhagwaan 316 bro keep writing, keep entertaining us. Your story shows your hardwork, dedication and your wonderful writing skills. Thank you so much.
 

Bhagwaan 316

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Bahut hi shandaar update, plan ke liye saari accessories aur actors are ready now. AP ne sabko unki original se jayada price de kar unko backstab karne se rok liya hai kyonki itna paisa kahin aur milega nahi aur doosri baat usne sabke jahan mein ye baat daal di ki jo insaan paisa paani ki tarah Baha sakta hai to uske liye khoon bahana koi badi baat nahi hai aur jis tarah aur jis tarah ke logo se AP deal kar raha hai uske baad usse backstabbing karke bachna bhi namumkin hai, to iss tarah AP ne apni taraf se to plan foolproof kar liya ab execution ke time kya hota hai ye to tabhi pata chalega.

Ye Bhagwaan 316 naam ka insaan kuch alagh level par hi storytelling karta hai, pahle part mein AP ko as normal mastmaula type ladka Jo apne parivar ke liye kisi bhi hadd tak jaa sakta hai waisa dikhya aur usi parivaar ko bachane ke liye zahar bhi kha liya jo usse naa maar sakta hai aur naa jeene de sakta hai. Doosre part mein bechara waapas aa kar fir se apni zindgi normally jeena chahta hai magar fir uska past uska peecha nahi chodta hai aur aakhir mein wo apni sabse badi taaqat apne pariwaar, apne dosto aur apni team se bhi door ho jaata hai.

Spiderman movie mein quote tha ki

With great power comes great responsibility

Magar mujhe aisa lagta hai ki with great power comes great bad luck too, kyon ki kisi super human ki kahani chahe wo iss forum mein ho yaa movies mein jitni jayada power utna jayada bad luck, utna jayada personal loss. But still ye kahani aur ye writer apne space ki one of the best hai.

Bhagwaan 316 bro keep writing, keep entertaining us. Your story shows your hardwork, dedication and your wonderful writing skills. Thank you so much.
Thanks for the wonderful review bhidu. Guys like you inspire me to just keep writing. :thanx:
 
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