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Incest Baadshah ~ The Tales of Debauchery

Kya Veer apni life behtar kar paega ya sab kuch kho baithega?

  • Veer Baadshah banega

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  • Sab kuch kho baithega

    Votes: 24 1.7%
  • Kuch paega toh kuch khoega

    Votes: 188 13.1%
  • Kuch nahi bann paega

    Votes: 33 2.3%

  • Total voters
    1,440

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Update - 99 ~ A Night at the Mansion (1)

Ab tak...

Divya : The second criminal...!!!!!

Veer : Huh???

Suhana : !!????

Aur agle hi pal... Usne table par ek paper patalte hue rakha. Ye wahi printout tha...

Usse dekhte hi Suhana ka badan kaanp utha.

Saamne printout me jo tha, wo tha...

Ek wanted paper!!!!

Divya : And his name is...

Veer : ?????

"THE NIGHTWALKER!!!!"


Ab aage...

[Is this the one? Master! Please! Be extra careful. Isse dekh ke mujhe bilkul bhi sahi nahi lag raha hai.]

'Tum akeli nahi ho Pari! I'm getting the same vibes. Yaha kuch boht hi bhayanak humse chhupa hua hai. Kuch aisa, jiske liye shayad hum taiyaar nahi.'

[Mein uss Nik ko kabhi maaf nahi karungi. I will never. Sab kuch uske hi kaaran hua hai. I hate that couple.]

'Nahi Pari! Ye toh hona hi tha. I guess maybe mujhe yaha next mission mil jaaye? Tum jaanti hi ho hume points ki kitni zaroorat hai.'

[Maaasttterrr~ Aap sirf points ke liye apni jaan daav pe nahi laga sakte. Missions ka kya hai? Woh toh milte rahenge. I cannot lose you like this okay? Aap sunn rahe ho na?]

'I'm listening Pari! Par, Aisa kaun sa waqt tha meri zindagi me jidhar mene risks nahi liye? Mera jeevan khatro se hi bhara tha Pari. Abhi bhi bhara hai. Aur aage bhi bhara rahega. Ye baat toh mein tab hi jaan gaya tha jab tum mere andar aayi thi."

[I-I'm so sorry. :verysad: ]

'Pagli! Mein tumhe dosh nahi de raha. Tumhare aane se hi toh mein firse zinda hua hu. I can never blame you. No matter what! You are my soul, Pari.'

[M-Maaaasssttteeerrr! (╥﹏╥)]

Pari aur Veer ke beech bhavnaatmak baate chal hi rahi thi jab,

"I'm dropping you both here. You better survive. I won't come here to pick your dead meat."

Saamne se pilot ne Veer se kaha. Helicopter me woh savaar tha. Aur uske bagal se baitha hua tha, Mike. Jo investigation department se hi tha.

Neeche unke ek hi drishya tha. Ek khubsoorat island!!!

Helicopter thoda neeche hua aur utarne ke liye airstairs ko hawa me neeche gira diya gaya.

'Fuck! Meri phat rahi hai utarne me. Mene kabhi kiya nahi ye.'

[Masterrrr! Don't worry! Bas pakad mazboot rakhna apni. Stay strong maaasterr~]

'Yeahhh!'

Mike ki dekha dekhi kar Veer stairs se utarna shuru kiya aur...

*Plop*

Dono ne zameen par girte hue apne qadam rakhe.

"I'm fucking leaving!! Good luck!!!"

Upar se pilot ne zorr se chillaaya, par helicopter ki ghoomti hui blades ki awaaz ke aage uski awaaz theek se sunaayi na de saki Veer aur Mike ko. Aur copter waha se nikal gaya.

Ek lambi aah chorr Veer ne apne saamne dekha. Uske saamne ye khaufnaak sa island maujood tha. Dur dur tak ped paudho ke alawa kuch nahi dikh raha tha usse.

Sooraj dhal chuka tha, andhera barkaraar tha. Chaand par ghane kaale baadalo ki chaadar bichhi hui thi. Aur mand mand chalti thandi hawaein, jo Veer ke badan me ruye khade kar rahi thi.

Yaha se aage ka raasta usse aur Mike ko akele hi tay karna tha. Wo dono iss island ke chorr par akele khade hue the.

Investigation department ki taraf se copter unhe yaha chorr ke nikal chuka tha. Kuch khaas shabd toh nahi kahe the pilot ne uss se kuch derr pehle. Private detectives se jude logo ko waqai kuch zyaada hi hate de rahe the ye investigation waale.

Kherr! Veer aur Mike aage badhe. Unke paas kaafi samaan tha utility ka. Chaahe emergency torch ho, knife ho, ya kuch bhi. Taiyaari ke saath woh yaha aaye the. Yaha aane se pehle kaafi bawaal bhi hua tha. Jesa ki Pari ne Nik ka zikr kiya.

Ek prakaar se Veer uske hi kaaran yaha tha. Investigation department ke Head Nolan ne saaf saaf Nik ko chetaavni de dii thi ki unke department se ab iss case ko lekar koi bhi apni taang nahi adayega. Unhone ye bhi keh daala tha ki ab tum log hi apni taraf se bhejo kisi ko. Bada shauk hai na private detectives hone ke baad public cases solve karna ka?

Toh lo fir. Diya case! Jao! Risk uthao! Aur saabit karo.

Nateeja? Nik ne Veer ko aage kar diya. Woh bewakoof nahi tha jo khud aisi khatarnak jagah jaake apni hi gaand marwaaye. Aur woh Divya ko bhi nahi bhejne waala tha. Suhana ko bhi nahi bhejta woh. Toh bacha kaun?

Of course! None other than Veer!!!

Aur Veer se toh uski koi pehchaan bhi nahi thi. Divya bhi bada hi flirt kar rahi thi Veer se. Isliye Veer ko khatre me daalne se pehle ek baar bhi usne Veer ke baare me nahi socha. Jalan sach me kutti cheez hoti hai.

Par Mike aisa nahi tha. Jab usne dekha ki kese Veer ko akele maut ke kuye me dhakela jaa raha hai. Toh uss se raha nahi gaya. Veer ka toh koi lena dena hi nahi tha iss case se. Usse faaltu me bali ka bakra banaya jaa raha tha. Isliye usne apna naam bhi aage kar diya. Beshaq, uske iss faisle se kaafi vivaad khada hua par ant me uski baat unhe maan'ni hi padi. Akhir uski marzi thi ye.

Woh Veer ko aise akele nahi jaane de sakta tha. Veer andar hi andar Mike ke prati abhaari tha. Kuch log insaaniyat ke aur dil ke boht hi acche the yaha. Jese Mike...

[I fucking hate that man soooo much!! Humne kya bigaada hai uska?]

"Shhhhh! Mene kaha na Pari! It's inevitable! Ye hona hi tha."

[But still...]

"Shhh!!! Let's get going."

Veer ne Pari ko shaant kiya.

Bagal me chal raha Mike tabhi uss se bola,

Mike (smiles) : Don't worry bro! We'll handle this.

Wo Veer ka confidence badhaane ki koshish kar raha tha.

Veer (smiles) : Sure!

Kuch bhi ho jaaye, Veer Mike ko marrne nahi de sakta tha. Apne mann me hi usne ek commitment baandha.

Yaha aane se pehle Suhana ne bhi kaafi virodh kiya tha. Suhana Veer ko yaha help ke liye laayi thi. Usse marwaane nahi. Jese tese Veer ne usse shaant kar diya tha. Par woh jaanta tha Suhana abhi kitni bechain ho rahi hogi. Jab woh copter me baith ke nikal raha tha tabhi uska chehra dekhne laayak tha. Sach kaha jaaye toh pehli baar Veer ne Suhana ke chehre par apne prati woh bhaav dekhe the.

She never showed but she really cares for him. Yaha tak ki Divya bhi kuch chinta me thi. Shayad uska ravaiyya badal raha tha.

Mike aur Veer aage badhe, haatho me torch thi unke. Ghane ped paudho ke patte hataate hue wo Island me aur bheetar ghuse. Aur jese hi ialand ke beecho beech aaye. Saamne ka nazara dekh unke hosh udd gaye.

Island ke beecho beech unke saamne tha...



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Ek khubsoorat par utna hi daraawna sa Mansion.

Badi hi ajeeb sii anubhooti karwa raha tha ye Mansion. Sundar tha, bada bhi tha, par uss mansion me kuch aisi baat thi jo Veer ko aage qadam badhaane se pehle chetaavni de rahi thi.

Ajeeb baat ye thi ki mansion ki lights jal rahi thi. Island me electricity ka koi source nahi tha. Matlab basement me generators pakke se maujood the.

Veer : What do you think?

Mike : Well! I never imagined there would be such a huge mansion hiding in here. And guess what? Lights are on.

Veer : Then that means...

Mike : Yeah! Someone else is inside.

Veer : Other participants?

Mike : Maybe! Or maybe not!

Mansion ki jalti hui lights yahi ishaara kar rahi thi ki koi na koi andar maujood tha.

Mike : We must find whoever it is. We will definitely catch Senior Connor's murderer.

Veer : Hope so...

Mike : Shall we head inside?

Veer : Alright!

Entrance ki orr woh badhe. Entrance par ek bhi guard maujood nahi tha. Koi security nahi thi. Lohe ka bada sa gate tha jisse khol woh andar aaye.

Mansion ke saamne chota sa lawn tha jaha ghaas lagi hui thi, bagal me ek chariot rakha tha safed rang ka par koi ghoda nahi bandha tha uss se.

Andhere me poora Mansion vishaal pedo se ghira hua tha aur woh dono main gate pe pohuch gaye.

Mike ne apne jeb se ek card nikaala aur Veer ko dekha.

Veer (nods) : Do it!

Aur darwaaze ke hi side me ek patla sa slit gap maujood tha. Mike ne jese hi card andar slit me daala toh...

*Click*

Darwaaze se awaaz aayi. Aur woh unlock ho gaya.

Mike : It actually worked.

Veer : The info was true then...

Jankari sach thi matlab. Connor ke akhiri video se unhe iss jagah ka pata chala tha. Ab sawaal ye tha ki Mike ko woh card kese aur kaha se mila? Iski jankaari bhi usne video me hi dii thi.

Slot machines ki street me hi ek aadmi tha jo ye cards bechta tha. Wahi lottery waali slot machines. Yaha sab kuch khufiya tareeqe se hota tha. Uss bechaare ko ye bhi nahi pata tha ki ye cards kis liye hai. Usse bas bechne diye gaye the aur cards bik rahe the, iss baat se hi khush tha woh.

Police usse yu hi giraftaar nahi kar sakti thi. Uss bechaare ko toh ye bhi nahi pata tha ki ye cards kaun bhijwata hai usse. Kyuki delivery wala toh deliver kar ke chala jaata tha.

Inn cards ka istemal island me maujood iss darwaaze ko kholne ke liye hi tha. Koi soch bhi sakta tha aisa? Kuch boht hi badi planning chal rahi thi peeth peeche.

Darwaaza khol jese hi woh andar aaye, andar ka nazaara kuch aisa tha.



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Upar ceiling se chandelier latak raha tha. Andhera tha par jagah jagah candles jal rahi thi. Kahi kuch lights bhi jal rahi thi.

Aur ye main hall bhi nahi tha. Ye toh sub hall ki tarah tha. Neeche bada sa carpet biccha hua tha jo saamne darwaaze ki orr jaake khatam ho raha tha.

Shayad wahi main hall ka entrance tha.

Mike : Let's go!

Veer : Yeah!!!

Mike aur Veer apne dil ki tezz dhadkano ko thaam aage badhe. Hall ka gate bhi khula hua tha.

Jese hi unhone gate khola, unhe ek hallway nazar aaya.



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Jagah jagah paintings lagi hui thi deewaaro par, jo kisi ke ateet ko baya kar rahi thi. Neeche biccha khubsoorat sa kaaleen. Iss area me lighting sub hall ke muqaable zyada thi.

Wo andar ki orr gaye aur jese hi wo enter kiye,

Veer : Huhh???

Unhe waha 6 log aur dikhaayi diye. Jinme se 4 ladke the aur 2 ladkiya.

"What the hell? More people are coming? But that's actually good."

Sofe pe baitha ek ladka unme se bola.

Veer : These guys...

Tabhi ek ladki jo kareeb 27-28 saal ki lag rahi thi woh uth ke aayi aur Veer aur Mike ke ird gird ghoomne lagi. Fir boli,

Ladki : You guys! Are you here for the bars too??

Veer : Y-Yeaahhh!!!

Uss ladki ne sawaal kiya. Kya Veer log bhi idhar bars ke liye aaye the? Veer ne jawaab haan me diya.

Bars!!! Samjhe? Golden bars!!! Bole toh sone ke biscuits.

Mansion me 10 million dollars worth ke golden bars maujood the. Alag alag jagaho par. 10 million bole toh kareeb kareeb 79 crores, 84 lakh, 55 hazaar ke aas paas ka rokda.

Aur shayad yaha maujood baaki log bhi issi ki talaash me the.

Ladki : Ohhh! I'm Emma by the way. A nurse by profession.

Mike : Nice to meet you! I'm Mike. Just a graduate. And he's Veer, my friend.

Mike ne apni identity jaan boojh ke chhupa lii.

Emma : Veer? Strange name! But you are hot though. I will give you that. *wink*

Emma khubsoorat thi. Par Veer ko usme koi interest nahi tha. Uski nazre jiski taraf gayi woh koi aur hi thi.



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Black denim jacket daale woh bookshelf ke paas khadi hui thi. Aur unhe hi dekh rahi thi. Khaaskar Veer ko. Ek sundar vyakti dusre sundar vyakti ki taraf aakarshit hota hai. Ye baat sach thi.

Khubsoorti ka uska koi jawaab nahi tha. Sonia aur Kaera ki takkar ki thi woh yadi chehre ki khubsoorti ki baat ki jaaye toh.

Usse dekhte hi...

*Ding*

[Name : Zoey Clarkson

Age : 27
Bio : Zoey ek model hai. Par paiso ki tangi ki wajah se woh apni life me aage nahi badh paa rahi hai. Khubsoorat hone ke bawajood usse Model contracts zyaada mil nahi paa rahe kyuki woh nudity ya intimate photoshoots pe nahi utarna chahti. Financial condition kaafi gir chuki hai. Kisi se gupt jankari usse mili hai ki island ke iss Mansion me khazana chhupa hai. Woh apna luck azmaane aayi hai yaha. Ghar me uska koi nahi hai. Toh apni jaan ki parvaah kiye bina woh ek akhiri baar apni kismat azmaana chaahti hai.

Favourability : 4
Relationship : Strangers.]

'I see!!!'

Emma dekh rahi thi ki Veer Zoey ko nihaar raha tha aur Zoey bhi usse dekh rahi thi. Ye dekhte hi andar hi andar woh jal bhun gayi.

Woh bhi yaha maujood thi. Fir uski sundarta par koi kyu dhyaan nahi de raha tha? Aisa nahi tha ki Emma sundar nahi thi. Bas, Zoey ke saamne woh thodi feeki lag rahi thi. Zoey kuch zyada hi aakarshak thi.

Mike : And who are they?

Emma : The girl over there. She's Zoey! A model. And these guys are, Jacob, Tommy, Chester, and Ronnie.

Ek ek karke Emma ne unka parichay diya.

Emma : We got familiar just few minutes ago.

[Dekha master!!!! Ye bilkul wesa hi hai jesa Connor ne bataya tha. Alag alag log yaha aate hai. Aur raat guzaarte hai. Golden bars ko dhundne ke liye jo yaha kahi na kahi chhupe hue hai. Par raat me hi...]

'Yeahhh!!! The NIGHTWALKER!!!'

[Yes Master~ Abhi 7:30 hua hai time. Connor ne bataya tha raat 9 baje se shuru hota hai sab.]

'Hmm~ Hamaare paas dedh ghante hai yaha ki territory ko dimaag me baithaane ke liye. Pari!!!'

[Don't worry Master! Path Tracker on hi hai. Mansion boht bada hai. Mene off nahi kiya hai usse.]

'Good job!!!'

Connor ne jab video banaya tha, tab uska connection department se cut ho chuka tha. Mansion me network nahi milta hai. Dusri bhaasha me, phone calls nahi lagaaye jaa sakte aur na hi receive kiye jaa sakte hai.

Iska matlab, Divya aur Nik ko jo video mili woh NIGHTWALKER ne khud hi bheji thi unhe shayad.

Veer aur Mike ko ye raat apne hi bal bute par guzaarni thi. Veer ne harr ek ke naam dimaag me baitha liye the.

Emma jo nurse thi, Zoey ek model. Jacob ek fashion designer ka assistant tha. Tommy aur Chester ka group band tha aur Ronnie ek choti si company ka employee. Sabhi paiso ki tangi ki wajah se hi yaha the.

Mann me dherr saare sawaal aa rahe honge. Ki yadi ye crime yaha ho raha hai, toh police seedha dhaava kyu nahi bol deti yaha? Par jitna asaan ye dikhta tha utna tha nahi.

Ye Mansion band rehta tha. Keval chuni gayi dates par hi khulta tha ye. Aur aaj woh chuni gayi dates me se ek date thi.

Mike ne jo Card use kiya tha kuch derr pehle usme date mentioned thi. Aaj ki date.

Aur toh aur... Govt. police ki madad karne se katra rahi thi. Police department me restrictions thi kuch. Yaani ye jo kaam ho raha tha woh tha toh illegal. Par legally iss par koi rok nahi lagayi Jaa rahi thi.

Ye ek boht badi baat thi.

Emma : So? What are we gonna do?

Jacob : The NIGHTWALKER is real right? I heard rumours about him.

Emma : What do you mean?

Ronnie : The NIGHTWALKER!! He's a protector of the treasure. I have heard about him. He kills those people who try to steal the treasure.

Emma : Wh-Whaaattttt??!

Emma ko iss baare me koi jankari nahi thi ki yaha koi Nightwalker naam jesa bhi kuch tha. Woh toh yaha paisa kamane aayi thi. Kya matlab Nightwalker unhe maar deta hai jo khazana lene aate hai? Emma ki ab phat rahi thi.

Tommy : Of course! What were you expecting? Will someone allow you to steal his treasure just like that? We have to survive this night. A killer will be roaming here freely to kill the one amongst us who tries to steal the treasure.

Chester : Yeah!!! It's just like that. Do or die.

Emma : Whaaatttttt??? N-No waayyy! I-I'm fucking leaving. I don't wanna die.

Emma ne jab ye baat suni toh darr ke maare uske perr kaapne lage. Tommy ne kaha tha ki raat me ek killer mansion me ghoomta hai. Aur unn logo ko maut ke ghaat utaar deta hai jo bhi raat me uski nazro ke saamne aate hai.

Emma bhaagte hue baahar nikalne ko hui par jese hi woh main hall ke gate par pohuchi aur usse kholi...

Uski ghabraahat aur bhi badh gayi. Main hall ka gate band ho chuka tha.

Emma (screams) : Fucking open the goddamn door.... Aaaarrghhhhh!!! Open it!!!! I DON'T WANNA DIE HERE! I WANT TO LEAVE!!!

Par darwaaza nahi khula. Tabhi ek awaaz aayi aur unn sab ko sunaayi dii. Awaaz buland thi par usme ek kharaash thi, Daraavni thi woh awaaz.


"Welcome to the Nightwalker mansion!
You chose to come here. You purchased the card. Now you cannot leave the mansion until tomorrow morning."

"Rules are pretty simple!!! Survive the night! 10 million worth of gold bars are hidden in this mansion. If any of you can find them, you can take them away."

"Game will begin sharp @ 9 PM"

"Remember! You can only search the Mansion for half an hour during intervals. In other words, 9-9:30 will be your search time. After 9:30 Nightwalker will walk through the mansion. If he finds anyone of you roaming. YOU WILL BE KILLED."

"He will walk till 12 AM. Then, again you can search the Mansion for half an hour. After 12:30 he will walk till 3 AM. Again a half hour will be alloted. And last time will be Nightwalker walking from 3:30 AM till 6 AM"

"There are many rooms on both the floors. You can choose whichever you want."

"It's 8:00 PM now. You have 1 hour. You can do whatever you want to do. Remember the time. Sharp 9 PM."

"Good luck!"


Aur awaaz band ho gayi. Awaaz aayi toh intercom se hi thi par Veer ko kahi koi intercom nazar nahi aaya.

[Maaasterrrr~]

Pari ki ek chinta janak awaaz Veer ke mann me goonji,

'Don't worry Pari!! Mein apna dhyaan acche se rakhunga.'

[Yes please!!! Mujhse jitna hoga mein aapki madad karungi.]

Uss awaaz ke band hote hi sabhi ek dusre ko dekhne me lage hue the.

Emma (screams) : WHAT THE HELL IS THIS? YOU ARE TELLING ME A KILLER IS THERE IN THIS MANSION WITH US????

Ronnie : Seems like it.

Emma : This is bullshit... How the fuck can I search the bars if someone is roaming outside to kill me?

Rules simple the. Theek 9 baje maut ka ye khel shuru hona tha. Teen interval diye gaye the. 9 se 9:30, 12 se 12:30, aur 3 se 3:30 tak ka samay. Yaani kul milaake dedh ghante.

Iss dedh ghante ke samay me aapko bars dhundne the. Yadi aap dhundh sakte ho toh dhundho. Par baaki ke samay me, Nightwalker poore mansion me ghoomega. Yadi koi bhi usse nazar aaya toh...

Maut!!!

Veer thoda chintit tha. Emma ki toh phat ke hi chaar ho chuki thi. Par baaki sabhi kaafi relaxed lag rahe the.

Chester : Huhh? That's it??? Man!! This is so easy. We can search for half an hour and when that time ends. We can head back to our room. Simple right?

Zoey : Is that Nightwalker even real?

Zoey ne pehli baar kuch kaha. Veer aur uski nazre ek baar fir takra gayi.

Mike : Hmm! Yes! I can say for sure that the Nightwalker is real. It's not a myth or legend. He's here.

Tommy : Wait!!! What if he's one of us???

Zoey confirm kar rahi thi ki ye Nightwalker sach me hai bhi ya nahi? Kahi ye koi afvaah toh nahi hai? Mike ne bhi Connor ki video dekhi thi. Beshaq, Nightwalker ka mask bhi dekha tha usne uss video me. Isme koi shaq nahi tha ki woh hai. Aur issi Mansion me hai. Shayad woh awaaz bhi ussi ki thi? Kisse pata? Par itna zaroor pata tha ki woh hai yaha par.

Par Tommy ki baat ne ek baar fir unhe chinta me daal diya. Kahi unhi me se ek Nightwalker toh nahi tha?

Mike : I don't think it's plausible. Nightwalker is someone else. Maybe the one who told us about the details? Or maybe someone else? And if he's among us, then we can easily identify him. Whoever will be absent during our group meeting. Only he/she can be one.

Mike ne samjhaate hue kaha. Uska kehna tha ki yadi aapas me se koi Nightwalker nikalta bhi hai toh bhi usse asaani se pakda jaa sakta hai. Group meeting ke dauraan jo bhi unke beech gaayab rahega. Uske upar hi shaq jaega.

Jacob : We should select a room first. We can keep our bags there. And then how about taking a stroll in the Mansion? That way we can get familiar with our surroundings.

Chester : Definitely! Sounds good!!!

Jacob ki raay sabhi maan gaye. Uska kehna tha ki jo ye ek ghante ka samay mila tha. Kyu na hum uss ghante me apne apne room select kar usme samaan rakh de aur baahar nikal ke Mansion ka ek chakkar lagaaye taaki hume pata chal sake kaun sii jagah kidhar par hai.

Idea bura nahi tha. Aur yadi Jacob ye baat nahi bhi rakhta toh bhi Veer ek chakkar mansion ka maarta hi.

Zoey : Alright!

Tommy : Yes!!! That's it guys. Let's meet here after 15 minutes.

Ronnie : Okay!

Emma : J-Jacob, Can I stay in the room beside yours?

Jacob : Ohh sure!!!
Ronnie, Jacob, Tommy, Emma, Chester ye sabhi upar chadhe aur baayi orr mud ke baayi taraf hallway me chale gaye.

Toh wahi Veer aur Mike aage badhe, unke peeche Zoey thi.

Jese hi woh waha pohuche unke saamne do corridor ke liye raste the. Ek baayi orr jaa raha tha jaha woh sabhi abhi gaye hue the. Aur ek daayi orr.



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Veer : Which one?

Mike (smiles) : I always do my things right!

Veer (smiles) : Let's go then!!!

Mike ke kehne par dono aage badhe aur daayi orr mud gaye. Khaas baat ye thi ki Zoey bhi unke peeche thi.

Veer ne peeche palat usse dekha toh ek baar fir unn dono ki aankhein ek dusre se mili. Par dono ne hi kuch kaha nahi. Veer ki pride aur attitude usse conversation strike karne se rok rahi thi. Alpha male instincts active the uske. Ab woh unn ladko me se nahi tha jo laundiyo ke peeche bhaag ke unki chaate.

Ladkiya khud-ba-khud uske paas aati thi. Uski pehchaan hi ab aisi thi.

Mike toh friendly tha hi. Usne hi baat shuru kii,

Mike : You are not going with them?

Mike ne pucha. Zaahir hai ki Zoey unke saath khadi hui thi. Par fir bhi woh abhi veer aur uske saath aa rahi thi.

Zoey : I trust you guys more than them.

Veer : !!!???

Mike : Hahaha~ I see! So that's how it is. Veer! I'm choosing this one.

Mike ne ek room ke darwaaze ke baahar rukte hue kaha.

Veer : Alright! I'll choose the one next to you.

Woh aage badha aur jese hi room ke baahar ruka woh toh uska dhyaan darwaazo aur room numbers pe gaya.

Veer : Hmm?

Darwaaze ki banawat alag kism ki thi. Rectangular Bars bane hue the darwaaze me.

'Iss Nightwalker ko golden bars ka itna shauk hai ki darwaaze par bhi bars banwa diye!? Haha~'

[Yeah!!!]

Jis prakaar se rectangular bars ek chocolate me hote hai. Kuch ussi prakaar darwaaze ka structure tha. Veer ne jese hi darwaaza khola usse aashcharya hua.

'Ohhhh~'

Darwaaza kaafi bhaari tha.

'Hmm? That's weird!'

[Room number?]

'Yeahhh!!! Pari!!! Mike ka room number mere se ek kam ya zyada hona chahiye. Uska room mere bagal se hi hai. Par uska room number toh kuch aur hi tha. Yaha ki numbering lagta badi hi ajeeb hai.'

[I agree master! Yaha ki kaun sii cheez ajeeb nahi hai? Fucking everything!]

'Hahahaha~ Ye baat bhi sahi hai.'

Zoey Veer ke peeche se nikalte hue aage gayi aur Veer ke bagal waale room me ghus gayi. Ghusne se pehle ek baar usne Veer ko zaroor dekha.

[Hehehe~ She's interested in you.]

'Ohhh shut up! Favourability tumne dekhi nahi kya? 4 thi.'

[Toh fir woh aapke saath kyu aayi? Woh bhi aapke bagal waale room me? *sniff *sniff* I smell curiosity here.]

'Hahaha~ Tum overthink kar rahi ho Pari. Usne kaha toh. Woh humpe zyada bharosa kar rahi hai. Aur dusri baat, mene pehle Mike ke bagal wala room le liya. Toh woh zaahir hai ki mere next wala hi room choose karegi. Bhala akele hoke woh humse dur waala room kyu lena chaahegi?'

[Hmm... But still! I can tell... I'm a girl too.]

'Naah!!!'

Veer ne apna bag andar room me rakha. Room accha tha. Par uske bawajood scary vibes de raha tha.

Bag rakh sabhi ussi hall me ikhatta hue. 15 minute baad milne ka decide kiya tha unhone.

Sabhi ekatr hue aur sabhi ne mansion me ghoomna shuru kiya ek saath. Mansion itna bada tha ki sabhi stabdh the ye jaanke.

Aur ghoomte ghoomte unki asli gaand tab phati jab unhe pata chala ki washroom ek hi tha poore Mansion me.

Woh bhi ground floor par. Woh sabhi toh upar wali floor par the. Upar se kitchen bhi ekdum end me tha. Pani ki supply toh yahi thi. Ye toh dikkat waali baat thi.

Ghoomte ghoomte woh ek aise hisse par pohuche jaha ajeebo gareeb paintings latki hui thi.



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Veer unn paintings ke nazdeek pohucha...

'These are weird!! Check!!!'



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*Ding*

[One of the paintings collected by Noah.]

'Noah?? Ye Noah kaun hai? Yaha ka maalik? Ya past me jo yaha tha?'

[I don't know master! Par aap bas apna dhyaan rakho. Don't care for Money or anything else. I want you to be safe. That's it.]

'Tum toh meri maa bann rahi ho Pari! Haha~'

[Because I love you. You know that. Aur aap jaante hi ho mera kya haal hota hai. Why don't you understand?]

'Wese...'

[Hmm?]

'Kya meri maa waqai meri chinta karti hai? Asli maa...'

[Don't get emotional. She definitely loves you.]

'Unki taraf se abhi tak koi response nahi aaya hai Pari. Unhe Pendant dikhane ke baad bhi.'

[Thoda intezaar kijiye. Woh zaroor aapko dhundhne aaengi.]

'Kaash....!'

Poora mansion ghoomne ke baad.

Neeche rakhi badi sii ghadi ka ghanta baj chuka tha.

*Ding Dong*

Ghadi se chidiya nikal kuku kuku kar rahi thi. 9 baj chuke the. Intercom se iss baar koi awaaz sunaayi nahi dii thi.

Aadhe ghante tak unlogo ne dhundha par kahi koi khazana nahi mila.

Zoey : We didn't try harder. What if money is hidden in the basement? Or maybe behind the paintings? You know what I mean?

Tommy : Definitely! We will do that in our next shift.

Aur yahi soch sabhi apne apne kamre me chale gaye.

Kyuki Nightwalker ke ghoomne ka samay shuru ho chuka tha.

Sab ne andar se apne room ko lock kar liya. Raat me woh ghoomta tha, tabhi uska naam pada tha. Nightwalker!!!

Khauf ke maare sab andar dubak gaye. Veer bistar par lete kuch soch raha tha jab achanak hi...

"Eeeeaaarrrrrrrrrrrrrgggggghhhhhhhh"

Ek raungte khade kar dene waali cheenkh poore mansion me goonj gayi.
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Update - 99 ~ A Night at the Mansion (1)

Ab tak...

Divya : The second criminal...!!!!!

Veer : Huh???

Suhana : !!????

Aur agle hi pal... Usne table par ek paper patalte hue rakha. Ye wahi printout tha...

Usse dekhte hi Suhana ka badan kaanp utha.

Saamne printout me jo tha, wo tha...

Ek wanted paper!!!!

Divya : And his name is...

Veer : ?????

"THE NIGHTWALKER!!!!"


Ab aage...

[Is this the one? Master! Please! Be extra careful. Isse dekh ke mujhe bilkul bhi sahi nahi lag raha hai.]

'Tum akeli nahi ho Pari! I'm getting the same vibes. Yaha kuch boht hi bhayanak humse chhupa hua hai. Kuch aisa, jiske liye shayad hum taiyaar nahi.'

[Mein uss Nik ko kabhi maaf nahi karungi. I will never. Sab kuch uske hi kaaran hua hai. I hate that couple.]

'Nahi Pari! Ye toh hona hi tha. I guess maybe mujhe yaha next mission mil jaaye? Tum jaanti hi ho hume points ki kitni zaroorat hai.'

[Maaasttterrr~ Aap sirf points ke liye apni jaan daav pe nahi laga sakte. Missions ka kya hai? Woh toh milte rahenge. I cannot lose you like this okay? Aap sunn rahe ho na?]

'I'm listening Pari! Par, Aisa kaun sa waqt tha meri zindagi me jidhar mene risks nahi liye? Mera jeevan khatro se hi bhara tha Pari. Abhi bhi bhara hai. Aur aage bhi bhara rahega. Ye baat toh mein tab hi jaan gaya tha jab tum mere andar aayi thi."

[I-I'm so sorry. :verysad: ]

'Pagli! Mein tumhe dosh nahi de raha. Tumhare aane se hi toh mein firse zinda hua hu. I can never blame you. No matter what! You are my soul, Pari.'

[M-Maaaasssttteeerrr! (╥﹏╥)]

Pari aur Veer ke beech bhavnaatmak baate chal hi rahi thi jab,

"I'm dropping you both here. You better survive. I won't come here to pick your dead meat."

Saamne se pilot ne Veer se kaha. Helicopter me woh savaar tha. Aur uske bagal se baitha hua tha, Mike. Jo investigation department se hi tha.

Neeche unke ek hi drishya tha. Ek khubsoorat island!!!

Helicopter thoda neeche hua aur utarne ke liye airstairs ko hawa me neeche gira diya gaya.

'Fuck! Meri phat rahi hai utarne me. Mene kabhi kiya nahi ye.'

[Masterrrr! Don't worry! Bas pakad mazboot rakhna apni. Stay strong maaasterr~]

'Yeahhh!'

Mike ki dekha dekhi kar Veer stairs se utarna shuru kiya aur...

*Plop*

Dono ne zameen par girte hue apne qadam rakhe.

"I'm fucking leaving!! Good luck!!!"

Upar se pilot ne zorr se chillaaya, par helicopter ki ghoomti hui blades ki awaaz ke aage uski awaaz theek se sunaayi na de saki Veer aur Mike ko. Aur copter waha se nikal gaya.

Ek lambi aah chorr Veer ne apne saamne dekha. Uske saamne ye khaufnaak sa island maujood tha. Dur dur tak ped paudho ke alawa kuch nahi dikh raha tha usse.

Sooraj dhal chuka tha, andhera barkaraar tha. Chaand par ghane kaale baadalo ki chaadar bichhi hui thi. Aur mand mand chalti thandi hawaein, jo Veer ke badan me ruye khade kar rahi thi.

Yaha se aage ka raasta usse aur Mike ko akele hi tay karna tha. Wo dono iss island ke chorr par akele khade hue the.

Investigation department ki taraf se copter unhe yaha chorr ke nikal chuka tha. Kuch khaas shabd toh nahi kahe the pilot ne uss se kuch derr pehle. Private detectives se jude logo ko waqai kuch zyaada hi hate de rahe the ye investigation waale.

Kherr! Veer aur Mike aage badhe. Unke paas kaafi samaan tha utility ka. Chaahe emergency torch ho, knife ho, ya kuch bhi. Taiyaari ke saath woh yaha aaye the. Yaha aane se pehle kaafi bawaal bhi hua tha. Jesa ki Pari ne Nik ka zikr kiya.

Ek prakaar se Veer uske hi kaaran yaha tha. Investigation department ke Head Nolan ne saaf saaf Nik ko chetaavni de dii thi ki unke department se ab iss case ko lekar koi bhi apni taang nahi adayega. Unhone ye bhi keh daala tha ki ab tum log hi apni taraf se bhejo kisi ko. Bada shauk hai na private detectives hone ke baad public cases solve karna ka?

Toh lo fir. Diya case! Jao! Risk uthao! Aur saabit karo.

Nateeja? Nik ne Veer ko aage kar diya. Woh bewakoof nahi tha jo khud aisi khatarnak jagah jaake apni hi gaand marwaaye. Aur woh Divya ko bhi nahi bhejne waala tha. Suhana ko bhi nahi bhejta woh. Toh bacha kaun?

Of course! None other than Veer!!!

Aur Veer se toh uski koi pehchaan bhi nahi thi. Divya bhi bada hi flirt kar rahi thi Veer se. Isliye Veer ko khatre me daalne se pehle ek baar bhi usne Veer ke baare me nahi socha. Jalan sach me kutti cheez hoti hai.

Par Mike aisa nahi tha. Jab usne dekha ki kese Veer ko akele maut ke kuye me dhakela jaa raha hai. Toh uss se raha nahi gaya. Veer ka toh koi lena dena hi nahi tha iss case se. Usse faaltu me bali ka bakra banaya jaa raha tha. Isliye usne apna naam bhi aage kar diya. Beshaq, uske iss faisle se kaafi vivaad khada hua par ant me uski baat unhe maan'ni hi padi. Akhir uski marzi thi ye.

Woh Veer ko aise akele nahi jaane de sakta tha. Veer andar hi andar Mike ke prati abhaari tha. Kuch log insaaniyat ke aur dil ke boht hi acche the yaha. Jese Mike...

[I fucking hate that man soooo much!! Humne kya bigaada hai uska?]

"Shhhhh! Mene kaha na Pari! It's inevitable! Ye hona hi tha."

[But still...]

"Shhh!!! Let's get going."

Veer ne Pari ko shaant kiya.

Bagal me chal raha Mike tabhi uss se bola,

Mike (smiles) : Don't worry bro! We'll handle this.

Wo Veer ka confidence badhaane ki koshish kar raha tha.

Veer (smiles) : Sure!

Kuch bhi ho jaaye, Veer Mike ko marrne nahi de sakta tha. Apne mann me hi usne ek commitment baandha.

Yaha aane se pehle Suhana ne bhi kaafi virodh kiya tha. Suhana Veer ko yaha help ke liye laayi thi. Usse marwaane nahi. Jese tese Veer ne usse shaant kar diya tha. Par woh jaanta tha Suhana abhi kitni bechain ho rahi hogi. Jab woh copter me baith ke nikal raha tha tabhi uska chehra dekhne laayak tha. Sach kaha jaaye toh pehli baar Veer ne Suhana ke chehre par apne prati woh bhaav dekhe the.

She never showed but she really cares for him. Yaha tak ki Divya bhi kuch chinta me thi. Shayad uska ravaiyya badal raha tha.

Mike aur Veer aage badhe, haatho me torch thi unke. Ghane ped paudho ke patte hataate hue wo Island me aur bheetar ghuse. Aur jese hi ialand ke beecho beech aaye. Saamne ka nazara dekh unke hosh udd gaye.

Island ke beecho beech unke saamne tha...



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Ek khubsoorat par utna hi daraawna sa Mansion.

Badi hi ajeeb sii anubhooti karwa raha tha ye Mansion. Sundar tha, bada bhi tha, par uss mansion me kuch aisi baat thi jo Veer ko aage qadam badhaane se pehle chetaavni de rahi thi.

Ajeeb baat ye thi ki mansion ki lights jal rahi thi. Island me electricity ka koi source nahi tha. Matlab basement me generators pakke se maujood the.

Veer : What do you think?

Mike : Well! I never imagined there would be such a huge mansion hiding in here. And guess what? Lights are on.

Veer : Then that means...

Mike : Yeah! Someone else is inside.

Veer : Other participants?

Mike : Maybe! Or maybe not!

Mansion ki jalti hui lights yahi ishaara kar rahi thi ki koi na koi andar maujood tha.

Mike : We must find whoever it is. We will definitely catch Senior Connor's murderer.

Veer : Hope so...

Mike : Shall we head inside?

Veer : Alright!

Entrance ki orr woh badhe. Entrance par ek bhi guard maujood nahi tha. Koi security nahi thi. Lohe ka bada sa gate tha jisse khol woh andar aaye.

Mansion ke saamne chota sa lawn tha jaha ghaas lagi hui thi, bagal me ek chariot rakha tha safed rang ka par koi ghoda nahi bandha tha uss se.

Andhere me poora Mansion vishaal pedo se ghira hua tha aur woh dono main gate pe pohuch gaye.

Mike ne apne jeb se ek card nikaala aur Veer ko dekha.

Veer (nods) : Do it!

Aur darwaaze ke hi side me ek patla sa slit gap maujood tha. Mike ne jese hi card andar slit me daala toh...

*Click*

Darwaaze se awaaz aayi. Aur woh unlock ho gaya.

Mike : It actually worked.

Veer : The info was true then...

Jankari sach thi matlab. Connor ke akhiri video se unhe iss jagah ka pata chala tha. Ab sawaal ye tha ki Mike ko woh card kese aur kaha se mila? Iski jankaari bhi usne video me hi dii thi.

Slot machines ki street me hi ek aadmi tha jo ye cards bechta tha. Wahi lottery waali slot machines. Yaha sab kuch khufiya tareeqe se hota tha. Uss bechaare ko ye bhi nahi pata tha ki ye cards kis liye hai. Usse bas bechne diye gaye the aur cards bik rahe the, iss baat se hi khush tha woh.

Police usse yu hi giraftaar nahi kar sakti thi. Uss bechaare ko toh ye bhi nahi pata tha ki ye cards kaun bhijwata hai usse. Kyuki delivery wala toh deliver kar ke chala jaata tha.

Inn cards ka istemal island me maujood iss darwaaze ko kholne ke liye hi tha. Koi soch bhi sakta tha aisa? Kuch boht hi badi planning chal rahi thi peeth peeche.

Darwaaza khol jese hi woh andar aaye, andar ka nazaara kuch aisa tha.



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Upar ceiling se chandelier latak raha tha. Andhera tha par jagah jagah candles jal rahi thi. Kahi kuch lights bhi jal rahi thi.

Aur ye main hall bhi nahi tha. Ye toh sub hall ki tarah tha. Neeche bada sa carpet biccha hua tha jo saamne darwaaze ki orr jaake khatam ho raha tha.

Shayad wahi main hall ka entrance tha.

Mike : Let's go!

Veer : Yeah!!!

Mike aur Veer apne dil ki tezz dhadkano ko thaam aage badhe. Hall ka gate bhi khula hua tha.

Jese hi unhone gate khola, unhe ek hallway nazar aaya.



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Jagah jagah paintings lagi hui thi deewaaro par, jo kisi ke ateet ko baya kar rahi thi. Neeche biccha khubsoorat sa kaaleen. Iss area me lighting sub hall ke muqaable zyada thi.

Wo andar ki orr gaye aur jese hi wo enter kiye,

Veer : Huhh???

Unhe waha 6 log aur dikhaayi diye. Jinme se 4 ladke the aur 2 ladkiya.

"What the hell? More people are coming? But that's actually good."

Sofe pe baitha ek ladka unme se bola.

Veer : These guys...

Tabhi ek ladki jo kareeb 27-28 saal ki lag rahi thi woh uth ke aayi aur Veer aur Mike ke ird gird ghoomne lagi. Fir boli,

Ladki : You guys! Are you here for the bars too??

Veer : Y-Yeaahhh!!!

Uss ladki ne sawaal kiya. Kya Veer log bhi idhar bars ke liye aaye the? Veer ne jawaab haan me diya.

Bars!!! Samjhe? Golden bars!!! Bole toh sone ke biscuits.

Mansion me 10 million dollars worth ke golden bars maujood the. Alag alag jagaho par. 10 million bole toh kareeb kareeb 79 crores, 84 lakh, 55 hazaar ke aas paas ka rokda.

Aur shayad yaha maujood baaki log bhi issi ki talaash me the.

Ladki : Ohhh! I'm Emma by the way. A nurse by profession.

Mike : Nice to meet you! I'm Mike. Just a graduate. And he's Veer, my friend.

Mike ne apni identity jaan boojh ke chhupa lii.

Emma : Veer? Strange name! But you are hot though. I will give you that. *wink*

Emma khubsoorat thi. Par Veer ko usme koi interest nahi tha. Uski nazre jiski taraf gayi woh koi aur hi thi.



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Black denim jacket daale woh bookshelf ke paas khadi hui thi. Aur unhe hi dekh rahi thi. Khaaskar Veer ko. Ek sundar vyakti dusre sundar vyakti ki taraf aakarshit hota hai. Ye baat sach thi.

Khubsoorti ka uska koi jawaab nahi tha. Sonia aur Kaera ki takkar ki thi woh yadi chehre ki khubsoorti ki baat ki jaaye toh.

Usse dekhte hi...

*Ding*

[Name : Zoey Clarkson

Age : 27
Bio : Zoey ek model hai. Par paiso ki tangi ki wajah se woh apni life me aage nahi badh paa rahi hai. Khubsoorat hone ke bawajood usse Model contracts zyaada mil nahi paa rahe kyuki woh nudity ya intimate photoshoots pe nahi utarna chahti. Financial condition kaafi gir chuki hai. Kisi se gupt jankari usse mili hai ki island ke iss Mansion me khazana chhupa hai. Woh apna luck azmaane aayi hai yaha. Ghar me uska koi nahi hai. Toh apni jaan ki parvaah kiye bina woh ek akhiri baar apni kismat azmaana chaahti hai.

Favourability : 4
Relationship : Strangers.]

'I see!!!'

Emma dekh rahi thi ki Veer Zoey ko nihaar raha tha aur Zoey bhi usse dekh rahi thi. Ye dekhte hi andar hi andar woh jal bhun gayi.

Woh bhi yaha maujood thi. Fir uski sundarta par koi kyu dhyaan nahi de raha tha? Aisa nahi tha ki Emma sundar nahi thi. Bas, Zoey ke saamne woh thodi feeki lag rahi thi. Zoey kuch zyada hi aakarshak thi.

Mike : And who are they?

Emma : The girl over there. She's Zoey! A model. And these guys are, Jacob, Tommy, Chester, and Ronnie.

Ek ek karke Emma ne unka parichay diya.

Emma : We got familiar just few minutes ago.

[Dekha master!!!! Ye bilkul wesa hi hai jesa Connor ne bataya tha. Alag alag log yaha aate hai. Aur raat guzaarte hai. Golden bars ko dhundne ke liye jo yaha kahi na kahi chhupe hue hai. Par raat me hi...]

'Yeahhh!!! The NIGHTWALKER!!!'

[Yes Master~ Abhi 7:30 hua hai time. Connor ne bataya tha raat 9 baje se shuru hota hai sab.]

'Hmm~ Hamaare paas dedh ghante hai yaha ki territory ko dimaag me baithaane ke liye. Pari!!!'

[Don't worry Master! Path Tracker on hi hai. Mansion boht bada hai. Mene off nahi kiya hai usse.]

'Good job!!!'

Connor ne jab video banaya tha, tab uska connection department se cut ho chuka tha. Mansion me network nahi milta hai. Dusri bhaasha me, phone calls nahi lagaaye jaa sakte aur na hi receive kiye jaa sakte hai.

Iska matlab, Divya aur Nik ko jo video mili woh NIGHTWALKER ne khud hi bheji thi unhe shayad.

Veer aur Mike ko ye raat apne hi bal bute par guzaarni thi. Veer ne harr ek ke naam dimaag me baitha liye the.

Emma jo nurse thi, Zoey ek model. Jacob ek fashion designer ka assistant tha. Tommy aur Chester ka group band tha aur Ronnie ek choti si company ka employee. Sabhi paiso ki tangi ki wajah se hi yaha the.

Mann me dherr saare sawaal aa rahe honge. Ki yadi ye crime yaha ho raha hai, toh police seedha dhaava kyu nahi bol deti yaha? Par jitna asaan ye dikhta tha utna tha nahi.

Ye Mansion band rehta tha. Keval chuni gayi dates par hi khulta tha ye. Aur aaj woh chuni gayi dates me se ek date thi.

Mile ne jo Card use kiya tha kuch derr pehle usme date mentioned thi. Aaj ki date.

Aur toh aur... Govt. police ki madad karne se katra rahi thi. Police department me restrictions thi kuch. Yaani ye jo kaam ho raha tha woh tha toh illegal. Par legally iss par koi rok nahi lagayi kaa rahi thi.

Ye ek boht badi baat thi.

Emma : So? What are we gonna do?

Jacob : The NIGHTWALKER is real right? I heard rumours about him.

Emma : What do you mean?

Ronnie : The NIGHTWALKER!! He's a protector of the treasure. I have heard about him. He kills those people who try to steal the treasure.

Emma : Wh-Whaaattttt??!

Emma ko iss baare me koi jankari nahi thi ki yaha koi Nightwalker naam jesa bhi kuch tha. Woh toh yaha paisa kamane aayi thi. Kya matlab Nightwalker unhe maar deta hai jo khazana lene aate hai? Emma ki ab phat rahi thi.

Tommy : Of course! What were you expecting? Will someone allow you to steal his treasure just like that? We have to survive this night. A killer will be roaming here freely to kill the one amongst us who tries to steal the treasure.

Chester : Yeah!!! It's just like that. Do or die.

Emma : Whaaatttttt??? N-No waayyy! I-I'm fucking leaving. I don't wanna die.

Emma ne jab ye baat suni toh darr ke maare uske perr kaapne lage. Tommy ne kaha tha ki raat me ek killer mansion me ghoomta hai. Aur unn logo ko maut ke ghaat utaar deta hai jo bhi raat me uski nazro ke saamne aate hai.

Emma bhaagte hue baahar nikalne ko hui par jese hi woh main hall ke gate par pohuchi aur usse kholi...

Uski ghabraahat aur bhi badh gayi. Main hall ka gate band ho chuka tha.

Emma (screams) : Fucking open the goddamn door.... Aaaarrghhhhh!!! Open it!!!! I DON'T WANNA DIE HERE! I WANT TO LEAVE!!!

Par darwaaza nahi khula. Tabhi ek awaaz aayi aur unn sab ko sunaayi dii. Awaaz buland thi par usme ek kharaash thi, Daraavni thi woh awaaz.


"Welcome to the Nightwalker mansion!
You chose to come here. You purchased the card. Now you cannot leave the mansion until tomorrow morning."

"Rules are pretty simple!!! Survive the night! 10 million worth of gold bars are hidden in this mansion. If any of you can find them, you can take them away."

"Game will begin sharp @ 9 PM"

"Remember! You can only search the Mansion for half an hour during intervals. In other words, 9-9:30 will be your search time. After 9:30 Nightwalker will walk through the mansion. If he finds anyone of you roaming. YOU WILL BE KILLED."

"He will walk till 12 AM. Then, again you can search the Mansion for half an hour. After 12:30 he will walk till 3 AM. Again a half hour will be alloted. And last time will be Nightwalker walking from 3:30 AM till 6 AM"

"There are many rooms on both the floors. You can choose whichever you want."

"It's 8:00 PM now. You have 1 hour. You can do whatever you want to do. Remember the time. Sharp 9 PM."

"Good luck!"


Aur awaaz band ho gayi. Awaaz aayi toh intercom se hi thi par Veer ko kahi koi intercom nazar nahi aaya.

[Maaasterrrr~]

Pari ki ek chinta janak awaaz Veer ke mann me goonji,

'Don't worry Pari!! Mein apna dhyaan acche se rakhunga.'

[Yes please!!! Mujhse jitna hoga mein aapki madad karungi.]

Uss awaaz ke band hote hi sabhi ek dusre ko dekhne me lage hue the.

Emma (screams) : WHAT THE HELL IS THIS? YOU ARE TELLING ME A KILLER IS THERE IN THIS MANSION WITH US????

Ronnie : Seems like it.

Emma : This is bullshit... How the fuck can I search the bars if someone is roaming outside to kill me?

Rules simple the. Theek 9 baje maut ka ye khel shuru hona tha. Teen interval diye gaye the. 9 se 9:30, 12 se 12:30, aur 3:30 tka ka samay. Yaani kul milaake dedh ghante.

Iss dedh ghante ke samay me aapko bars dhundne the. Yadi aap dhundh sakte ho toh dhundho. Par baaki ke samay me, Nightwalker poore mansion me ghoomega. Yadi koi bhi usse nazar aaya toh...

Maut!!!

Veer thoda chintit tha. Emma ki toh phat ke hi chaar ho chuki thi. Par baaki sabhi kaafi relaxed lag rahe the.

Chester : Huhh? That's it??? Man!! This is so easy. We can search for half an hour and when that time ends. We can head back to our room. Simple right?

Zoey : Is that Nightwalker even real?

Zoey ne pehli baar kuch kaha. Veer aur uski nazre ek baar fir takra gayi.

Mike : Hmm! Yes! I can say for sure that the Nightwalker is real. It's not a myth or legend. He's here.

Tommy : Wait!!! What if he's one of us???

Zoey confirm kar rahi thi ki ye Nightwalker sach me hai bhi ya nahi? Kahi ye koi afvaah toh nahi hai? Mike ne bhi Connor ki video dekhi thi. Beshaq, Nightwalker ka mask bhi dekha tha usne uss video me. Isme koi shaq nahi tha ki woh hai. Aur issi Mansion me hai. Shayad woh awaaz bhi ussi ki thi? Kisse pata? Par itna zaroor pata tha ki woh hai yaha par.

Par Tommy ki baat ne ek baar fir unhe chinta me daal diya. Kahi unhi me se ek Nightwalker toh nahi tha?

Mike : I don't think it's plausible. Nightwalker is someone else. Maybe the one who told us about the details? Or maybe someone else? And if he's among us, then we can easily identify him. Whoever will be absent during our group meeting. Only he/she can be one.

Mike ne samjhaate hue kaha. Uska kehna tha ki yadi aapas me se koi Nightwalker nikalta bhi hai toh bhi usse asaani se pakda jaa sakta hai. Group meeting ke dauraan jo bhi unke beech gaayab rahega. Uske upar hi shaq jaega.

Jacob : We should select a room first. We can keep our bags there. And then how about taking a stroll in the Mansion? That way we can get familiar with our surroundings.

Chester : Definitely! Sounds good!!!

Jacob ki raay sabhi maan gaye. Uska kehna tha ki jo ye ek ghante ka samay mila tha. Kyu na hum uss ghante me apne apne room select kar usme samaan rakh de aur baahar nikal ke Mansion ka ek chakkar lagaaye taaki hume pata chal sake kaun sii jagah kidhar par hai.

Idea bura nahi tha. Aur yadi Jacob ye baat nahi bhi rakhta toh bhi Veer ek chakkar mansion ka maarta hi.

Zoey : Alright!

Tommy : Yes!!! That's it guys. Let's meet here after 15 minutes.

Ronnie : Okay!

Emma : J-Jacob, Can I stay in the room beside yours?

Jacob : Ohh sure!!!
Ronnie, Jacob, Tommy, Emma, Chester ye sabhi upar chadhe aur baayi orr mud ke baayi taraf hallway me chale gaye.

Toh wahi Veer aur Mike aage badhe, unke peeche Zoey thi.

Jese hi woh waha pohuche unke saamne do corridor ke liye raste the. Ek baayi orr jaa raha tha jaha woh sabhi abhi gaye hue the. Aur ek daayi orr.



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Veer : Which one?

Mike (smiles) : I always do my things right!

Veer (smiles) : Let's go then!!!

Mike ke kehne par dono aage badhe aur daayi orr mud gaye. Khaas baat ye thi ki Zoey bhi unke peeche thi.

Veer ne peeche palat usse dekha toh ek baar fir unn dono ki aankhein ek dusre se mili. Par dono ne hi kuch kaha nahi. Veer ki pride aur attitude usse conversation strike se rok raha tha. Alpha male instincts active the uske. Ab woh unn ladko me se nahi tha jo laundiyo ke peeche bhaag ke unki chaate.

Ladkiya khud-ba-khud uske paas aati thi. Uski pehchaan hi ab aisi thi.

Mike toh friendly tha hi. Usne hi baat shuru kii,

Mike : You are not going with them?

Mike ne pucha. Zaahir hai ki Zoey unke saath khadi hui thi. Par fir bhi woh abhi veer aur uske saath aa rahi thi.

Zoey : I trust you guys more than them.

Veer : !!!???

Mike : Hahaha~ I see! So that's how it is. Veer! I'm choosing this one.

Mike ne ek room ke darwaaze ke baahar rukte hue kaha.

Veer : Alright! I'll choose the one next to you.

Woh aage badha aur jese hi room ke baahar ruka woh toh uska dhyaan darwaazo aur room numbers pe gaya.

Veer : Hmm?

Darwaaze ki banawat alag kism ki thi. Rectangular Bars bane hue the darwaaze me.

'Iss Nightwalker ko golden bars ka itna shauk hai ki darwaaze par bhi bars banwa diye!? Haha~'

[Yeah!!!]

Jis prakaar se rectangular bars ek chocolate me hote hai. Kuch ussi prakaar darwaaze ka structure tha. Veer ne jese hi darwaaza khola usse aashcharya hua.

'Ohhhh~'

Darwaaza kaafi bhaari tha.

'Hmm? That's weird!'

[Room number?]

'Yeahhh!!! Pari!!! Mike ka room number mere se ek kam ya zyada homa chahiye. Uska room mere bagal se hi hai. Par uska room number toh kuch aur tha. Yaha ki numbering lagta badi hi ajeeb hai.'

[I agree master! Yaha ki kaun sii cheez ajeeb nahi hai? Fucking everything!]

'Hahahaha~ Ye baat bhi sahi hai.'

Zoey Veer ke peeche se nikalte hue aage gayi aur Veer ke bagal waale room me ghus gayi. Ghusne se pehle ek baar usne Veer ko zaroor dekha.

[Hehehe~ She's interested in you.]

'Ohhh shut up! Favourability tumne dekhi nahi kya? 4 thi.'

[Toh fir woh aapke saath kyu aayi? Woh bhi aapke bagal waale room me? *sniff *sniff* I smell curiosity here.]

'Hahaha~ Tum overthink kar rahi ho Pari. Usne kaha toh. Woh humpe zyada bharosa kar rahi hai. Aur dusri baat, mene pehle Mike ke bagal wala room le liya. Toh woh zaahir hai ki mere next wala hi room choose karegi. Bhala akele hoke woh humse dur waala room kyu lena chaahegi?'

[Hmm... But still! I can tell... I'm a girl too.]

'Naah!!!'

Veer ne apna bag andar room me rakha. Room accha tha. Par uske bawajood scary vibes de raha tha.

Bag rakh sabhi ussi hall me ikhatta hue. 15 minute baad milne ka decide kiya tha unhone.

Sabhi ekatr hue aur sabhi ne mansion me ghoomna shuru kiya ek saath. Mansion itna bada tha ki sabhi stabdh the ye jaanke.

Aur ghoomte ghoomte unki asli gaand tab phati jab unhe pata chala ki washroom ek hi tha poore Mansion me.

Woh bhi ground floor par. Woh sabhi toh upar wali floor par the. Upar se kitchen bhi ekdum end me tha. Pani ki supply toh yahi thi. Ye toh dikkat waali baat thi.

Ghoomte ghoomte woh ek aise hisse par pohuche jaha ajeebo gareeb paintings latki hui thi.

Veer unn paintings ke nazdeek pohucha...

'These are weird!! Check!!!'

*Ding*

[One of the paintings collected by Noah.]

'Noah?? Ye Noah kaun hai? Yaha ka maalik? Ya past me jo yaha tha?'

[I don't know master! Par aap bas apna dhyaan rakho. Don't care for Money or anything else. I want you to be safe. That's it.]

'Tum toh meri maa bann rahi ho Pari! Haha~'

[Because I love you. You know that. Aur aap jaante hi ho mera kya haal hota hai. Why don't you understand?]

'Wese...'

[Hmm?]

'Kya meri maa waqai meri chinta karti hai? Asli maa...'

[Don't get emotional. She definitely loves you.]

'Unki taraf se abhi tak koi response nahi aaya hai Pari. Unhe Pendant dikhane ke baad bhi.'

[Thoda intezaar kijiye. Woh zaroor aapko dhundhne aaengi.]

'Kaash....!'

Poora mansion ghoomne ke baad.

Neeche rakhi badi sii ghadi ka ghanta baj chuka tha.

*Ding Dong*

Ghadi se chidiya nikal kuku kuku kar rahi thi. 9 baj chuke the. Intercom se iss baar koi awaaz sunaayi nahi dii thi.

Aadhe ghante tak unlogo ne dhundha par kahi koi khazana nahi mila.

Zoey : We didn't try harder. What if money is hidden in the basement? Or maybe behind the paintings? You know what I mean?

Tommy : Definitely! We will do that in our next shift.

Aur yahi soch sabhi apne apne kamre me chale gaye.

Kyuki Nightwalker ke ghoomne ka samay shuru ho chuka tha.

Sab ne andar se apne room ko lock kar liya. Raat me woh ghoomta tha, tabhi uska naam pada tha. Nightwalker!!!

Khauf ke maare sab andar dubak gaye. Veer bistar par lete kuch soch raha tha jab achanak hi...

"Eeeeaaarrrrrrrrrrrrrgggggghhhhhhhh"

Ek raungte khade kar dene waali cheenkh poore mansion me goonj gayi.
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Excellent update bhai.. 💥💥

Superb Bro ek update me sab cover kardhiya simply superb.. 💜💜💜💜💜

Just read update 97 and 98. Good job Sir. बहुत ही उम्दा लेखनी l

Ding 🤯🤯🤯🤯🤯 mind blasting update werewolf bhai keep posting.

Fantastic Update😍🔥

Wow amazing update bro
The nightwalker
These is a defecault for veer its my thought coz jis tarha divya aur nik ka reaction tha its dangrours very dangrous ya dekhna bohat mazydaar aur therilling hoga ke how can veer face nightwalker

Baki bohat he badiya update keep writing

Ya bohat badiya kam kiya bhai 😍😍😍😍

Nice update as always..


superb awsm update to gud finally story getting excited eagerly waiting for next update plz do cont asap Takecare

Jaldi se america ka tour khatm kariye mjja nhi aa rha

very good update 😊🎉

मित्र,आप क्या सही मे काला जादू जानते है क्या? मै सोच रहा था की मुंबई मे अपना सब बिरोधी पक्ष को खुला छोड़ के आया है वीर, क्या कर रहा है वो लोग और देखिये आज ही आपका अनुच्छेद मे जवाब मिल गया। चलिये, एक बात तो सामने आया की इस nightwalker का कुछ तो संबंध है सुहाना मैडम से। क्या है यह तो आगे जानने को मिलेगा। एक बात सही है की लस वेगास का ट्रिप मे लगता है एक से बड़कर एक से मुलाकात होते रहेंगे। वीर का अगला लक्ष्य लगता है इस nightwalker के साथ भिड़ंत। कहानी को बहुत ही रोचक और रोमांचक मोड पे ले जाने के लिए बहुत बहुत धन्यबाद। आपके कहानी मे आपक सब चरित्र को आकलन जो करते है इतने बड़े पैमाने पर, वो निःसंदेह प्रशंग्सनीय है। इतना बड़ा परिदृश्य मे सबके साथ न्याय बहुत कम लेखक या लेखिका कर सकते है। मुंबई का सब चरित्र को आप छु लिए सिबाय आरोही,केरा और सोनिया के। उम्मीद करेंगे की अगला अनुच्छेद या उसके अगले मे इनलोगों पर कुछ रोशनी डालेंगे जरूर। धन्यबाद।

Nice update bro

Nice update


Uttam Lekhni ka Prayog Werewolf bhai...Waiting for Next Update Eagerly...

Mast update.

Awesome update👍👍👍👍

nice update .ye ragini ko dekhkar har baar evil smile kyu aati hai suman ke face pe 🤔🤔..
juhi ko wajah se nidhi ki bhi baat ho paayi veer se .juhi ka bachpana ekdam mast hai .
niharika ko badla lena hai isliye usne veer ke mobile me keylocker type kuch lagaya hai par wo kya karta hai aur kab lagaya ye samajh nahi aa raha 🤔🤔.
niharika to veer ke lund aur chudai ko yaad karke hi jharr gayi 🤣..ab uske chut ko ek tagda lund chahiye jo veer ke paas hai .
connor ne kuch jaankari haasil kar li par usko marna pada waha pe .
aur ye wanted paper kya hai jisko dekhkar suhana bhi shock ho gayi 🤔. naye naye naam saamne aa rahe hai .

dark web me live killing ka scene dikhate hai shayad koi group ,aur sab usko dekhkar maja lete honge ya kuch bet type 🤔.

Nice update bhai

Zabardast update :applause:

Nice update bro

superb fantastic update bhai ab ye to live game ho gaya hai lagta hai ispe bet lagti hogi online luck movei ki tarah aage dekho ab kya hoga bahot hi jabardust update bhai👌👌👍👍👍👍

Superb update

Superb update bhai

Amazing update hai bhai maza aa gaya hai




Waiting for the next update bro

Amazing update hai bhai maza aa gaya hai




Waiting for the next update bro

Super awesome update bro🔥🔥

Fantastic update

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Mast Update 🔥🔥🔥


Jabardust fabulous update Bhai superb

Zabardast Update Bhai

Jabardast update.

Kya ye house of killer pehle waale se relate karta hai?

Super wonderful awesome update

Superb update

Nice update bro

Vey fantastic 😊

Mind blowing update yaar

Next level thrill next level suspens
Bro mumbai ka to theek hai but vegas bahut jyada intresting thriller or suspense se bharpur tha maza aaya padh ke ab samjhe bro kyu Hum readers aapko bar bar bolte hai jaldi update karne ko

Bro aakhir aisa kya tha us video main jise dekh kar ek baar divya ki bhi fat gayi
Well jo bhi tha definitely jyada horrible hoga


Hmm or lagta hai nic ne nalon se puche bina hi apni team ke member ko waha bhej diya jiska khamiyaza Connor ne bhugta

Or ab lagta hai Nicolas ko lead main se nikal diya jayega or veer ko is mission ka head banaya jayega

And THE NIGHT WALKER lagta hai ye crime ki duniya ka head hai end next level evil ek sanki sach main ye atish or slogan se bhi jyada intresting villain hone wala hai

Baki dhammake daar update tha bro sach main hat's off to you sir

Awesome update bhai...

Awesome update dear

Fantastic mind-blowing update

Superb fabelous and marvelous update ☺️.
Eagerly waiting for next!

What a fantastic update full of thriller!!! Pari ka secret bhi aane wale kuch update main milega, iss update main kafi kuch thrill diya hai aapne.

Hope bhai next update is thrillersome and full of some action

Raat ko 2 baje uth k padha tha. Aacha hua mne pehle hi ek neend le li thi 🙊
Bohut kuch kehna h... Par main abhi job pe hu.
Update ko lekar sari baate raat me likhungi... ❣️

Beautiful update ❤

Jabardastt Updatee

Amazing update

Bahut hi badhiya update diya hai Werewolf bhai....
Nice and beautiful update....


Update 97 & 98...

So, the dance of death has started in Vegas & Veer is going to have a good time out there, I guess :D ... Jim the Slippery naamak us criminal ko pakadne se Veer ko points aur actual fame ke maamle mein faayeda to beshaq hua hai but jo cheez yahaan dekhne laayak thi, wo ye ki Jim was the weakest of all... He was at the lowest level of all those criminals out there... Aisa hone ke bawajood bhi wo kayi baar Police aur Department ke haathon se nikal chuka tha, yahaan to Veer aur Beowulf's Blessings ke kaaran wo pakda gaya, anyatha Divya ne is baar bhi bewakoofi to kar hi thi... It simply shows that it's gonna be really tough for Veer to survive here in Vegas :eyes2: ... But one thing, that I'm sure about is that, jab Veer Vegas se baahar niklega, tab hum ek naye hi insaan se ru – baroo honge, obviously yahaan missions solve karne ke liye Veer kuchh skills khareedega, stats improve karega aur shayad kuchh cards bhi use praapt hon, but in sabse alag use jo milega wo hoga experience of surviving in such crisis... Aise haalat se nikalne ke baad, people like Pranjal, Rajat & Karunesh won't pose to be the same threat for Veer, as they are right now... :declare:

(Meanwhile, I just want to mention the way you're building up the character of Veer... Starting from Pari's words when he entered in Veer's body, “Maine aaj tak itne kharaab stats kisi ke nahin dekhe", to this point, Veer's character has grown in a way, which I've really loved... He's stronger, more intelligent, more witty & obviously he's more matured... One of the finest build – ups I've ever read on this forum of the main protagonist, not only talking about Incest genre here, but about all the stories I've read... :applause:)

Coming back to the Update, Jim ko pakadne ka sabse bada laabh Divya ki favourability ke roop mein mila hai Veer ko... Fixed at 50, ab yahaan se ye favourability kewal oopar ki hi taraf jaa sakti hai, neeche nahin aane waali... And the kind of interest Divya is showing in Veer, I'm actually expecting this 50 to be around 90–95 when Veer will be leaving Vegas... Iske atirikt 3,000 points aur saath hi fame points bhi mile hain Veer ko, is samay Points to wholesale mein pade hain Veer ke paas, aur in donon updates se jitna main “House Of Killers" ko samajh paaya hoon, Veer ko bohot zarurat padne waali hai in points ki...

Let's just combine what Divya understood about the lines of Daniel & what Connor mentioned in the video message... House of Killers, mere khyal mein ek aisa khel jise hum maut ka khel bhi keh sakte hain... Shayad koyi psycho hai jo sabhi mukhya criminals (of Vegas) ko kisi tarah ke tasks de raha hai... Tasks to kill some people? :think: Connor ne aur Daniel ne, donon ne ek baat similar kahi thi, ki yahaan kewal ek nahi hai balki ek se bohot zyada hain... Shikaar ki baat kar rahe the wo donon ya fir shikaari ki? Shayad us ghar, jise Connor ne House Of Killers kaha, wahaan apne manoranjan ke liye koyi shakhs, kayi saare Connor jaise bandon ko laata hai (ya wo log khud jaate hain), aur uske baad shayad ek game ki tarah unhe wahaan survive karna hota hai..?

Ya fir iska ulta, wahaan gaye sabhi logon ko maarne ka task un criminals ko diya jaata hai, and they might get something as a reward after completing the task... Pehli baat, Divya – Nik ne kaha ki Connor ko wahaan bheja gaya tha, means they knew the location..? Ya fir Connor ne khud us sthaan ko khoja tha? Divya aur Suhana donon hi kuchh jaanti hain jo Veer se chhupa hai... Nightwalker ki photo dekh kar Suhana ka reaction, mujhe to yahi lagta hai ki Suhana ko jaankari hai is shakhs ke baare mein... I hope Veer jaldi hi donon ke bheetar chhupi un baaton ko baahar nikaal lega...

Divya ne shayad Nightwalker ko hi dekha hoga Video mein, jiske kaaran wo itna dar gayi thi, shayad wo Connor ki hatya kar raha hoga us waqt... Beharhal, Daniel ka jo message Divya ne decode kiya tha, us se mujhe aisa sandeh ho raha hai ki Daniel ho ya Connor, donon hi apni marzi se is jaal mein fanse... He was talking about being greedy, and the bad thoughts, shayad kisi laalach ke chalte wo donon is trap mein ghuse aur fir nikal nahin paaye..? :dazed:

Ab Nolan ne saaf kar diya hai ki Department ki taraf se kisi ko bhi nahin bheja jaane waala, arthat ab Divya – Nik ki agency se koyi shakhs wahaan jaayega... I guess, Veer... Khair, Nik ka nazariya bhi shayad Veer ke prati ab kuchh badalne laga hoga... Jaisa maine pehle bhi kaha hai, ki Nik mere sandeh ke daayre mein hai, to shayad wo Veer ke liye aage chalkar dangerous bhi saabit ho sakta hai... Khair, Divya uske saamne hi Veer se flirt kar rahi thi, aur ek baar nahin kayi baar, I think use maaloom hai Divya ki aadaton ke baare mein... Waise bhi Suhana ke prati Nik ka ravaiya kuchh bhinn nahin tha..? :dontknow:

Divya... Veer mein use ek aisa shakhs dikhayi de raha hai jiske sang khelne mein wo asamarth rahi hai... Apni aadaton se majboor Divya ke liye ye shayad aisa pehla mauka hai jab uski tricks kisi launde ko todne mein nakaamyab rahin hain... Secondly, Veer ki history, Slogan – Aatish ke saath, third, Jim waala maamla... Sab kuchh add on hokar Divya ka interest Veer mein badhane waala hain... I think ab Veer ek challenge ban jaayega Divya ke liye, jise fansate – fansate, wo kahin khud hi na fans jaaye... Waise bhi, she seems to be caught in the charm of Veer, especially after that effect of 20 points in appearance... Ang pradarshan ka wo karyakaram to at least yahi darshata hai :lol:...

Idhar Bhavana ki behen jaisi saheli Purvi ka bhi aagman ho gaya hai kahani mein... Ye doodh ka rishta :whistle:... Purvi ki baaton se yahi laga ki wo bhi Tej aur Veer se kaafi attached hai, shayad wo in donon ko apne hi bachon ki tarah pyaar karti hai aur yahi lagta hai ki uski dosti Bhavana ke saath kaafi gehri hai... Bhavana, I think abhi tak shayad wo faisle lene mein maahir nahin huyi hai... Veer ko khud se door karna, ispar yadi charcha ki jaaye to... Firstly, koyi bhi reason raha ho, uska Veer se door hone ko, Mere khyal mein wo kabhi bhi apne us reason ko justify nahin kar paayegi... Yahin par ye sawaal bhi khada hota hai ki jab wo itne saal apne bete se door rahi, uski khoj khabar lene ki koshish tak usne nahin ki (She could've done it with the help of someone like Purvi), ab Bhavana se zyada kaun jaanta hoga Brijesh ko, iske bawajood bhi usne Veer ki existence ko jaan ne ka kabhi koyi prayas nahin kiya... Fir ab aisi kya aafat aan padi ki wo Mumbai chali aayi..? Veer Egypt gaya aur usne wo locket dekh liya, sirf isiliye wo yahaan Mumbai aa gayi... Jaane kise moorkh banane ka prayas kar rahi hai ye mahila, she literally seems to be confused af...

Tej ko bhi usne kabhi uske bhai ke baare mein nahin bataya... Aur jo reason usne Purvi ke saamne rakha wo baseless hai, kyonki Tej pehle hi Veer ke baare mein jaanti hai, par usne koyi bhi waisa kadam nahi uthaya hai jiski aashanka Bhavana jata rahi thi... Khair, ab wo Veer ke baare mein jaan ne ki koshish karegi, I think College jaakar wo pata kare shayad, Nidhi... :think: Kaera sang Veer ki photo bhi chhapi thi na akhbaar mein, jab wo Delhi gaya tha..? Wo bhi ek zariya ban sakti hai... Idhar, shayad Tej bhi apne level par Veer ke baare mein jaan ne ka prayas zaroor kare, aur ho na ho, mujhe yahi lagta hai ki Tej, Bhavana se pehle hi Veer ke baare mein jaan jaayegi... Purvi aur Bhavana ki baatein uske liye bhi ek jhatka hi rahi hongi par main jitna abhi tak samjha hoon, she's really intelligent, and I think she'll handle everything nicely...

Idhar, Ragini ka dil hai ki maanta nahin :haha:... After what she did with Veer before he left for Vegas, uska intezar aur bhi kathin ho gaya hai... I think, jab Veer Vegas se lautega to turant halaal ho jaayega... Suman ki smile ka reason yahi lagta hai ki wo jaan chuki hai ki Ragini aur Veer ka relation kahaan pahunch gaya hai aur jis doosre shakhs ki baat usne ki, jo Veer ke intezaar mein hai, I think wo Shweta hai, par ek baat zaroor jaan na chahunga ki Suman ki favourability nearly 150 hai, aise mein uske andar ek jealousy factor bhi expect kar raha tha main, kya wo jealous ho rahi hai Ragini aur Veer ki gatividhiyon se ya apne Maalik ko ek naya maal multe dekh kar wo khush hai :evillaugh:...

:rip: Niharika... Iska bhi intezam Veer hi karega lautne par... Waise Veer nahin to Veer ke dwara ki gayi iski thukayi ki yaad mein baawli to hi chuki hai ye, par abhi bhi Niharika ke andar uska ghamand aur ego bhara hua hai, she's still forcing Ayushi and that other girl to serve her... Veer ke phone mein kuchh install kiya hai usne, I guess Veer ko bhi pata hoga is baare mein, yadi nahin to bas yahi umeed hai ki us video ki aur koyi copy bana rakhi ho Veer ne, jo uske phone mein na hokar kahin aur ho...

Nidhi is missing Veer too, Juhi ki baat bhale hi usne beech mein kaat di ho, par jo sudden rise uski favourability mein aaya hai wahi kaafi hai bataane ke liye ki shayad wo saara time ab Veer ke hi vishya mein sochti rehti hai... Juhi, again, she's just amazing... Her words, her cuteness, her antics, everything makes her the most loveable character of this story... :love3:

Khair, ab Mumbai mein bhi garmi badhne waali hai... Bhavana aur Tej, donon hi Veer ko dhoondne niklengi, uske baare mein jaan ne ke liye niklengi... To shayad kahin na kahin Bhavana, Brijesh ke parivar se bhi takra jaaye, waise to adhik logon ko uska chehra shayad pata bhi na ho, par jinhe maaloom hai,unka kya reaction hoga Bhavana ko Mumbai mein paakar... Niharika ki planning aur jo kuchh Pranjal plan kar raha hoga, uska kya impact padega, Veer ki absence mein... Nidhi aur Shreya par khatra badh sakta hai...

Most importantly, Vegas, wahaan Veer ki kismat kya kya dikhayegi use... Kya wo is Nightwalker naam ke aadmi ko maat de paayega, ya fir haar ke roop mein ek sabak milega Veer ko, Divya aur Veer ke beech panap rahi cheezen, kya rang dikhayengi aage, ye jaan na bhi interesting rehne waala hai...

Donon hi updates bohot hi khubsurat the bhai... You're nicely introducing more suspense & thrill in the story, the concept of this House Of Killers, is really outstanding, and the way you're executing it, that's appreciable... The closeness of this stort to reality & logic, despite a thing like Pari existing in the story, makes this story more special... So, I hope that you'll continue the way you're going on, and definitely this House Of Killers is going to be insane... :good:

Outstanding Updates Bhai & Waiting For Next...

Zabardast Update Bhai

Thriller.... Awesome

Excellent very excellent

Superb update

Awesome updates

Behtreen update

Just curious to know about
THE NIGHTWALKER, just cateageneous update you given bro,gajab har ek main charecters ke baare me aapne bataya ki matlab uke bhi scenes dikhaye aur imagine to kya hi kahe usme to yaha sab readers hi mahir hai khaskar sex scenes me 🤣,

Ye divya to ab attract ho rahi hai veer ki traf aur flirty way to aur bhi quity quity ho raha tha ahemm ahemm Khair bakchodi nhi kruga ab,

Haa to bhaya ab aau iss update ki taarif pe to mai ek hi chis bolna chahunga fool :flowers:kam pade aaj iss update ko fekk ke marne me,

Khair ye jo Nolan bola ki ab mai apni department se kisiko nhi bhejunga waha uske piche yaa jo bhi bola wo ,ussne kaha divya aur wo Nick Jones yaa nik jo bhi usska name ho ki tum apne team se kisiko bhejo to ye pakka yaa I guess veer ko bhejenge confirmed to hai lekin dekhte hai story to apki hai,krm data bhi aap ho iss storry ke to kya hota hai aage dekhte hai,
Aur divya,nik,suhana ke reaction se to Laaga ki wo log uss printout logo ko aur uss THE NIGHTWALKER ko jaante hai wo bhi with bad paast history ke saath

Nice Update

Bc Review dene ke liye bola tha update nahi :sigh:


Nice update

Suhana lgta hai uski past bahut kuch interesting hai ....wo bahut kuch janti hai dekhte hai wo veer kaise help karta hai.....

Divya wo to bahut kuch chupa rahi hai dekhte hai veer kaisa Pata karta hai....Divya veer ko seduce kar rahi hai wo janti nahi veer kya chhez hai or uske pas jo hai wo v kya cheez hai....

Niharika Sali ko to veer nahi ab Suman uski band bajayegi Sali veer ko fasna chahi te he .....

Ragini my fav 😍 💓 wo to ab veer ke Bina nahi reh shkti ....veer jab aayega wo to tut padegi or apna pyar jarur lagi.....

Nidhi b ab thoda veer ke pyar me aa rahi hai usko juhi hi fasa degi veer ko pyar karne ke like....

Btw sandar fantastic update....



Marvelous jabardast Shandar update bro

Super update hai Bhai

Awesome update

nice update and wetting for next

The last picture which you drew of WANTED is superb 😘. It shows your Amazing creativity ✌️✌️

Warewolf bhot badiya update

Fabulous update bhai 😊☺️

Wahhh ek aur dhamakedar update.Lakin mai ek baat kahna cahunga bhai bura mat maniyega lakin ye update mujhe Is Arc ke baki Updates jitna utna jaandar nahi laga. Haa wo alag baat hai ki is Update ka aage ke story me ak important role hai. Lakin fir bhi is Updates me mujhe kuch bate hi bs achi lagi.
Pahli baat jo achi lagi mujhe wo tha Juhi wala conversation. She is too cute nd such a doll. Jb bhi aap juhi ko le ke ke koi bhi scene likhte ho wo bhut acha likhte ho jisase wo hme bikul apni aakho ke samne dekh rahe hai aisa feel hota hai.
Dusri baat is update ki ye achi lagi ki veer ko apne 2nd dusman ke bare me kuch hint mil gaya hai. Jo ki phle wale se bhi kafi jyada khatarnak hone wala hai.
Aur ab to police wale ne bhi kah diya hai ki unko koi aadmi aise kaam ke liye nahi jayega. Matlb ab in jasuso ko direct kud hi jana padega hr jagah. Jo ki phle se ab kafi jyada risky ho gaya hai.
Well dekhte hai next update me kya kya bawal hone wala hai.

Awesome update sir amazing
Next update awaiting sir
Please next update soon please ☺️☺️☺️

Zabaradast lajawab update waiting for next

Outstanding update waiting for next update

Aap ne to update ke level kaa replay likh dia....

Wohwww... Easy girl, take a breathe n say all is well😂...just control ur emotions a bit😅...but I'm really surprised that aap apna syllabus kaafi dhyan se cover krti h.. U talked a lot.. Well well well...also I knw n I agree that inke jaisa writer mne ni dekha xforum pe, he deserves all these revos n appreciations that he's getting all the time when he uploads a update..surely he's the best..then coming to you..seems like u became AC of him.. Right 😉😂.. Well gud to knw that real talent gets appreciation.. Lots of love to the writer n to all the readers of this story as well..i wish k ye story zda se zda logo tk phoche..👍🙏❤️

Nice behtarin mast awesome update

very nice update

Waiting for today's update :waiting1:

" हाऊस आफ किलर " कांसेप्ट के द्वारा स्टोरी और भी रोचक हो गई है । एक बार तो मुझे लगा कि यह एक ऐसी जगह है जहां कुछ लोग Halloween party मना रहे हैं... अपनी ओर्जिनल आइडेंटिटी छुपाकर । मगर यह पार्टी वैसी नहीं है जैसा आमतौर पर Halloween में होता है । यहां कत्ल हो रहे हैं । लेकिन क्यों ? आखिर बे जान पहचान लोगों के कत्ल से किसी का क्या फायदा पहुंचने वाला है ?

मुझे ऐसा भी लगता है कि इन हत्याओं का सिलसिला हाल फिलहाल में ही शुरू हुआ है । अमेरिका की गुप्तचर एजेंसी एफ बी आई अभी तक इस केस की गुत्थी सुलझाने में कामयाब न हो सकी इसलिए इन्होंने पी डी की मदद लेना उचित समझा । वैसे किसी भी देश की गुप्तचर एजेंसियां अपने कार्य में किसी पी डी की मदद लेना तो दूर उन्हे मौका ए वारदात पर देखना तक पसंद नहीं करती ।

लेकिन जो भी हो " हाऊस आफ किलर " ने कहानी में गजब का रोमांच ला खड़ा किया है । थ्रीलर के साथ सस्पेंस भी पैदा हो गया है कि आखिर यह किस तरह का हाऊस है और इस का सरगना " नाइट वाकर " कौन है !

यहां एक सवाल यह है कि दिव्या ने सुहाना और वीर को किसलिए यहां आमंत्रित किया ? क्या सुहाना " हाऊस आफ किलर " के बारे में जानकारी रखती है या इस केस से उसका कोई प्रत्यक्ष या अप्रत्यक्ष रूप से सम्बन्ध है ?
वीर के लिए माना जा सकता है कि उसने आतिश और स्लोगन वाले केस में काफी दिलेरी दिखाई थी इसलिए इस केस में भी वो शायद कुछ ऐसा ही कारनामा कर दिखाए !

कुसुम देवी के चेहरे पर जब तब रागिनी भाभी को देखकर कुटिल मुस्कान नृत्य करने लगती है । उनकी मुस्कुराहट शरारत भरी नहीं है । कहीं वो कुछ ऐसा तो नहीं करने वाली है जो उन्हें नहीं करना चाहिए ?

निहारिका मैम ने सच्चाई से साक्षात्कार किया था । इसके अलावा Forbidden fruit का स्वाद भी चखा था । यही नहीं बल्कि उन्होंने " डर और पकड़े जाने " का मानसिक उत्तेजना भी महसूस कर लिया था । ऐसे में किस इंसान की कायापलट नहीं होती ! वो इस खेल को जारी रखने के लिए अब खुद ही पहल करने वाली स्थिति में आ गई है और शायद वो जल्द ही हमें देखने को भी मिलेगा ।

निधि मैम की आवाज में अब पहले जैसी गूंज और बेरुखी नहीं है वीर के लिए । कन्वर्सेशन के दौरान उनकी आवाज धीमी हो जाती है । ऐसा लगता है चिड़िया दाना चुग गई है ।

दिव्या जी भी वीर की वीरता से काफी प्रभावित लगती हुई नजर आ रही है । " हाऊस आफ किलर " केस के दौरान ही लगता है वो अपने हसबैंड निक के साथ बेवफाई कर बैठेगी ।

तीनों अपडेट्स बेहद ही शानदार थे वेयरवोल्फ भाई ।
आउटस्टैंडिंग एंड अमेजिंग एंड ब्रिलिएंट ।

Awesome update bhai keep posting

Waiting for next.

Bai story line Acce he,kuc naye Raj ki bat he is update me.....😎😎
But 98 update me Kuc maja Nahi aya.....😜😭😭

Nice update bhai waiting for next update


Waiting for new update
plz update soon sir

Bahot behtareen shaandaar lajawab update bhai
Mamala tow bahot gambheer hota jaa raha h dekhte ab yeh charo log kis tarah iss mamle ko suljhate h

Nice Update...



Waiting for next update bhai


Behad hi shanadar or jabardast update bhai.
Bahut khoob superb.

:superb: :good: awesome update hai bhai,

Bhaut jada khubsurat update hain

House of killers shayad aisa kuch hoga jaise - ( just my guess)
Ek bade mansion ya underground complex mein kuch Anjaan logon ko trap kar ke band kar dete honge organisers (criminals).
Phir in logon ko koi killers apne apne style se stalk karenge aur unhe hide and seek style mein live cameras ke saamne mare denge. kisi episode mein night Walker, doosre mein koi aur killer feature hoga.
Sab killers ka apna apna torture style aur execution signature moves honge. ( like mortal kombat )

Think of Big Boss for killers and sadists!!
And shayad aise hi kisi episode ki “shooting” ke time Daniel us building mein galti se aa gaya aur Mara gaya!!

Am I on the right track sirji?

एकदम fabulous outstanding update bhai

Ek no scene create kiye Ho ekdam movie mafik

Itna suspense to movie mey nhi hota yar
Ekdam zakkasss update

❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️😎❤️❤️❤️❤️😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️


Mazedaar bhai
Waiting for nxt


To ab hoga Veer ka asli test with The Nightwalker. Ab ye kon hai, kya karta hai ye dekhna hoga? Kya Veer jeet payega aur kitne challenge aane waale hai US mein? Kahin US mein rahne ki wajah se India mein uski family par to koi risk nahi aane waala.

Waiting for next update bro

I'm waiting 🥀🖤

Waisy Kal update aay ga na jawn 🥀🙂


Nice 👍

Nice 👍 update bro
update bro

Nice update bhai

Pls America(las Vegas) ka tour jaldi khatm kro
Boring lag rha hai
Iss story me pahle se hi enough character hai
Aur new character mat add kijiye🙏🙏

Meri mummy💋💋


Lajawab update hai bhai......niharika kya plan bana raha hai ye dekhne lauek hoga or usse bhi badkar anjam kya wakai me safal ho payegi niharika...????
Or nightwalker ka shikar kaise karta hai veer ya veer khud shikar ho jayega dekhte hai.
Waiting for next update

Mast updates bro
Story apni same pace se ja rhi hai. And its surprising je itne waqt baad bhi story ussi pace se ja rhi na slow na fast.
Pankaj and chindi gang ab bhi utpatang kaam karne mein lgi hai. But kia inhe pata nhi hai VEER ab in ki league se out hochuka hai... Or ab bhi VEER ko nuksan poncha dein to ye ek Question mark hoga (?) VEER ki ab tak ki development and intelligence pe... Jaha tak muje lgta hai.

BUt Kuch bhi hoskta hai..! Who knows.! Only Mr writer.

And so called Niharika Bansal still thinks she can resist.. Jab uski chut itni panpana rahi ho to. She's just a slave..nothing more.

NIDHI bhi ab charm mein phas chuki hai.. JUHI ke mamu se kab Daddy ban jye ke iski khabar khud NIDHI ko bhi nhi lge gi.

I think SHREYA ne apna charm khatm kar diya hai.. Like jo starting mein tha..due to crowd... I don't know apko mehsus hua ya nhi. Lets see kia socha hai us bare mein.

Suman sahi takkar ki hai.. Jo har haal mein help karti rhe gi VEER ki no matter VEER ko zrurat ho na ho.

Step Mom ke character ko abhi unwrapped hone mein time lge ga tb tk uske bare mein kuch kehna wastage hi hogi... Usse abhi kafi kuch karna hoga.

Mom abhi bhi apne pyare bache ko dhundne mein lgi hai. Jisse pata nhi wo kaise chor ke gyi hai. Or kyu chor ke gyi hai.. Or wo usse us ghar mein talash kyu nhi kar rhi. Don't know kaise tackle kro ge ap isko. And muje aise kyu lag rha hai starting me Mom ka VEER ko dhundne wali baat ap kar to betho ho. But galti se don't know muje aisa lga.

SUMAN wali cheez mein thoda bhool chuka hn. Suman Mom ke khandan ki gulam thi. Mean bhot ameer hounge. But MOM ka abhi ka Background itna strong lag to nhi raha.

New arc shru hochuka hai.

VEER apne favors loutane aya hai. Jab ke VEER pehle hi favor kar chuka hai SLOGAN ko maar ke. Or kafi vada favor tha wo... But kia keh skte hain is feminists ke dour mein mardo ki kaha chalti hai.

Kia naam hai ye detective larki. Divya or something else. Yaad nahi arha.
Kitni chape ho rahi hai. Without knowing ke kia afat hai ye ladka. Jisko wo charm karna chahti hai. Uske charm mein phas jye gi jaise Dr strange ke mirror dimension mein.

Killing arc hai to killing to hogi na. But betting system..! thoda usual nhi hogya. Like Squid Game. But sahi hai with dark web like red rooms.

But wo name "THE KNIGHT WALKER" GOT wala to nahi 😁. Thoda filmy lga unlike your style.

I think is arc mein kafi time lagne wala hai. And ap ne bola tha ye relation se related hai..! kaise? don't know. Mean isse kaise grow kre ga relationship.

Waiting for next update

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Waiting for the next update.

Name nhi yaad rehte... Talking about his so called cuz

Awesome update bro


Fantastic update
Waiting for next update

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Waiting For your Next Update ☺️

Waiting for next update
Please update soon sir

Jhakas broo


Ding new mission jagte raho

Waiting Bade Bhai

Nice update👌

Waiting for your update bro


Good Night Bade Bhai
Kal Wait Karenge Ab


Bhai update nhi diya ???

Waiting for next update bhai

It's ok bro

Lala I am standing in the ration line last night,when will you give a ration.....!🤣😂
Waiting
Keep Writing....!😊

Nice update waiting for next one


dost update

Bhai tu raat me soya nhi hai kya ?🥲

Waiting Bro

Waiting for next update

Waiting for next update bro


SHAANDAAR EXCELLENT FANTASTIC MIND BLOWING AND INTERESTING UPDATE BHAI

Nice update

WAITING FOR NEXT UPDATE BHAI


Guys can any one tell me updates konsa din aayega week me

Story complete Karo Bhai

Waiting for update sir g

It's seems to be that next update 99 is getting intresting !!??

Aur ab ka update kab doge yarr

Bro update

Bhai change. Nhi hua abhi tak please send updates

He does not compromise with quality unfortunately....
(sometimes I am afraid that I will find in some dictionary quality will be synonymous with Werewolf)
Update 99 has been posted.
 

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Yahi baat mere palle nahi padi... :redface:
Sub aapke story ka craze hai bhai kya pata aapke story me jaise kuch bhi kabhi bhi ho skta hai.
Waise aapke readers bhi koi ordinary readers thodi honge.
Wo bhi to aapke story ke tarah extra ordinary hi honge. 😌🙈
 

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Kaafi logo le replies bache hue hai. I know that. Unhe mein shaam tak reply karunga. Update kyu nahi aaya paaya apne time par? Uske do reasons the.

Pehla ye ki mene update 99 ka ek blueprint bana ke rakha tha. Mene socha tha ussi me edit karke post kar dunga. Par beech beeche me plot me jo moderations hue. Uske chalte woh update fit nahi baith raha tha. Nateeja? Mujhe scratch se update 99 taiyaar karna pada. Hence, the wait!!

Update subah aa jaata. Par subah ek emergency ke chalte mujhe nikalna pada. Kaam tha. Waha se lauta toh shaam ko thak ke so chuka tha. Raat me hi bacha kucha complete kiya aur isliye update ko itna samay lag gaya. Sorry for the wait. Hope you guys will understand! Keep supporting bas yaaro. ✨
 

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Sub aapke story ka craze hai bhai kya pata aapke story me jaise kuch bhi kabhi bhi ho skta hai.
Waise aapke readers bhi koi ordinary readers thodi honge.
Wo bhi to aapke story ke tarah extra ordinary hi honge. 😌🙈
Kya pata bhai. Ye bhi ho sakta hai padha hi na ho. :laughing: Possibilities dono hai.
 
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