Fantasy Lucifer- The fallen angel(completed)

[Lone survivor]

WRITER’s NOTE

School times se likhne ka bahut shauk tha mujhe mostly poems hi likhta tha. School me hi ek ladki mili bahut pyaari thi. College ke 3rd year tak relationship chala fir vo chali gaye door. Uske baad kabhi socha nahi tha dobara kuch likunga. Bilkul man hi nahi karta tha. Nashe to jaise jindagi ban gaye the. Pehle bhi nashe karta tha lekin uske baad jada ho gaye. Akela rahna acha lagne lagega aur dheere dheere sab door hote chale gaye. Main akela hi bacha tha. Tab kahi se xf ka pata chala aur pata nahi kyu aise hi ek raat pehli story ka first update post kar diya. Ek medium mil gaya tha mujhe kuch share karne ka aur acha bhi lagne laga tha. Dheere dheere vapas likhna start kiya aur es baar stories. Xf par kuch stories likhi fir vo band hua to yaha aa gaya. Aur vohi silsila yaha bhi kamyaab raha. Aap sabko sayad idea nahi hoga ki jo thoda bahut interact hota hai humara yaha vo kitna important ho sakta hai kisi ki life me. Es waqt mere pass almost sab kuch hai lekin agar kisi ko kuch share karna chahu to aisa person nahi hai esliye beech beech me kuch updates me apni situation likh deta hu to acha lagta hai. I hope ki humara sath aise hi aage bana rahe.

Ek mew story ka dimag me kuch idea hai lekin kab start hogi eske liye abhi sure nahi hu

May be main kuch dino ke liye rehab chala jau ya fir kuch aur mil jaye sath chalne ke. Lets see

In the end i want to thank each and everyone of you guys who has supported me and gave me so much love. Means a lot

Thank you so much guys. Jaldi hi milte hai ek new story ke sath tab tak ke liye

 

[parkas]

update-113
Past

"Eda ohh eda kaha ho beti tum"
Eda- main chhup gaye hu aap mujhe dhondo

Maa eda ki- ohho ye ladki bhi na
Mujhe to nahi mil rahi tum
Kaha chhupi ho?
Eda- hehehe aap mujhe dond bhi nahi pa rahi ho maa

Maa- main to ab buddhi ho gaye hu
Eda- hehehe aap sach me budhi ho gaye ho
Aap to pyaari eda ko bhi nahi dund pati

Maa- ha ha main nahi dund pati eda ko
Ab jaldi se bahar aajao
Eda- aise to nahi aaungi
Aapko mujhe dunda hi padega

Maa- are Lucifer beta aap kab aaye?
Eda ki Mom ne etna bola aur eda jhaat se samne aagaye lekin vaha koe nahi tha

Maa- hahahaha dekho maine dund liya tumhe
Eda- aap gandi ho
Mujhe aapse koe baat nahi karni

Maa- are lucifer aaya tha fir jab tum usse dikhae nahi di to vo yaha se bhag gaya
Eda- mujhe sab pata hai
Lucifer yaha kabhi nahi aata
Vo to kahi bhi nahi aata jaata

Maa- mere sapno me aaya hoga
Eda- aapke sapno me kyu aaya hoga?
Mere sapno me aaya hai

Maa- tum meri princess ho na to tumhre aur mere sapne ek jaise hi hote hai
Eda- nahi mujhe nahi dekhne ek jaise sapne
Aap apne sapno me mat laya karo lucifer ko

Maa- theek hai theek hai
Ab se nahi laungi lucifer ko apne sapno me
Khush ab?
Eda- ab aapko mujhe vapas dundna padega

Maa- nahi bilkul nahi
Maine ek baar dund liya hai aur bas ab
Chalo khana kha lo
Eda- main nahi khaungi jab tak aap mujhe nahi dund lete

Maa- main tumhe yahi pakad kar baand dungi fir tum kaise chhup paogi?
Eda- main eda hu bahut strong
Mujhe koe nahi band sakta

Maa- aur lucifer ne baandha to?
Eda- vo kyu bandhega?
Main usko peet dungi

Maa- tum lucifer ko peet dogi?
Eda- vo peetne ke hi kaam karta hai

Maa- vo to bahut powerful hai tum usse kaise peetogi?
Eda- main kya kam powerful hu?
Ek din to peetega lucifer mujh se

Maa- kyu?
Eda- vo mujhse milta nahi hai esliye

Maa- to tum mil liya karo us se
Eda- mujhe pata nahi hai na vo kaha rahta hai?

Maa- pehle khana kha lo Fir jab tum me energy aa jayegi to usse jake dundna
Eda- theek hai
Usko aaj main peetungi
Hehehehe

Maa- pagal ladki
Vo eda ko le jake khana khilane hi wali thi ki

Mantri- guruji ne eda ko bulaya hai
Gate se ek aawaz aae jiski vajah se en dono Maa betiyo ki masti khatam ho gaye

Maa- abhi khana kha leti hai fir chali jayegi
Mantri- abhi bulaya hai
Ye har roj training ke liye late ho jati hai
Guruji naraaj hai es baat se

Maa- lekin ye to time se hi jati hai?
Mantri- vo sab mujhe nahi pata
Guruji bahut gussa kar rahe the

Maa- eda tum kyu late hoti ho?
Yaha se to etni jaldi nikal jati ho?
Eda- main lucifer ko dundne lagti hu

Maa- galat baat
Pehle jake guruji se mila karo
Eda- guruji kuch nahi kahte mujh se
Main unki pyaari student hu
Aur mantri uncle aa bhi aajayegi meri maa bahut acha khana banati hai

Mantri- hume jana hai tumhe leke aur vo bhi jaldi
Eda- main to khana kha kar hi jaungi
Aur aap ko bhi khilaungi nahi to main lucifer se sikayat kar dungi ki aap mujhe pareshan kar rahe the

Mantri- lekin main to bas order follow kar raha tha
Eda- vo sab mujhe nahi pata
Ab Chhup chhap aaeye aur khana khaeye
Nahi to lucifer ka intezaar kijiye

Mantri- maate kya ladki paida ki hai aapne
Ye sab ko yuhi dhamki deti rahti hai
Maa- ab yehi jane eski aur lucifer ki Maya

Mantri- abhi theek se chalna aaya nahi hai aur baate dekho kitni badi badi karti hai
Eda- mujhe ache se chalna aata hai
Aapki to sikayat karni hi padegi lucifer se

Mantri- hum maafi mangte hai aapse
Ab jaldi se khana kha lete hai nahi to guruji hum dono par bahut gussa karenge
Eda- hum dono par nahi sirf aap par
Mujh par koe gussa nahi kar sakta

Mantri- ha meri pyaari eda sirf mujh par
Kya tumhe acha lagega koe mujh par gussa kare to?
Eda- mujhe to bahut maja aayega
Hehehehe

Maa- beta jaldi se khana finish karo aur jao aise roj roj leta hona achi baat nahi hai
Eda- Maa sab lucifer ki vajah se hota hai
Agar vo mujhe subah ek baar mil jaye to main sara kaam time se kar lu

Maa- mil jayega lekin aaj ke baad tum late mat hona
Lucifer ko training ke baad dunda karna
Eda- theek hai mom

Aur fir dono jaldi se khana finish karte hai aur vaha se chale jate hai****

Ek aur past

Raaj- lucifer khush dikha maine aaj pehli baar
Eda- saanvi khushiya le aaye uski life me

Raaj- mujhe dar hai ki kahi kuch galat na ho jaye aur halaat pehle se bhi kharab na ban jaye
Eda- galat to hona hi hai
Sab ko pata hai ye
Bas hum jab hoga us damage ko kitna kam kar sake vo important hai

Raaj- pata nahi vo damage kam hoga ya nahi
Mujhe to yehi lagta hai ki bahut khoon kharaba hoga
Eda- mujhe lagta nahi hai mujhe pakka yakeen hai
Lucifer ko rokna namumken ho jayega

Raaj- kuch to karna hi padega na
Eda- nahi kar sakte hum kuch bhi
Jaisa ho raha hai vaisa hi chalne do
Baki jo hoga dekha jayega

Raaj- tum aisa kyu bol rahi ho?
Eda- kyuki hum kuch bhi rok nahi sakte
Esliye

Raaj- lucifer se baat to kar sakte hai na
Eda- aur kya bologe usse?
Saanvi se door ho jao vohi tumhre liye acha hai?
Tum me etni himmat hai ki lucifer ke samne ja kar ye sab bol do?
Ek second nahi lagaye vo tumhe marne me

Raaj- tum to kar sakti ho usse baat
Eda- maine ek baar try kiya tha aur uska natija acha nahi tha
Main dusri baar uske samne nahi jaungi

Raaj- kavish wala reason alag tha aur ye wala alag
Eda- main nahi jaungi lucifer ke samne
Jab Supreme ko hi fark nahi pad raha to main kyu apne pairo par khulahdi maaru?

Raaj- kyuko vo Supreme hai aur tum eda
Eda- main nahi jaungi lucifer ke samne aur that's final

Raaj- tumhe dar hai na ki kahi vapas sachae na nikal jaye tumhre muh se?
Eda- next word kya niklega tumhre muh se uska bahut dhayan rakhna raaj

Raaj- mujhe bolne ki jarurat nahi hai
Tum bahut samjhdar ho
Eda- main nahi jaungi aur main nahi jaungi
Eske baad mujhe koe conversation nahi chahiye
Aur eda vaha se uth kar chali gaye


Present

Inaaya ashmita ke office ke bahar apni car me bathi thi aur na jane kya soch rahi thi

Sayad ander jaye ya na jaye yehi soch rahi hogi aur ant me usne yehi decide kiya ki usko jana hi padega

Aur vo ander ki taraf chal di
Ashmita ke cabin ke bahar usse siya mil gaye

Inaaya- ashmita se milna hai
Siya inaaya ko bahut ache se pahchanti thi esliye usse bina kuch bole ander jane diya

Ashmita apne kaam me dabi padi thi aur uski halaat dekh kar hi pata lag raha tha ki vo kitne stress me hai

Jab gate khula aur usne inaaya ko dekha to bas dekhti rahi gaye
Usse samjh nahi aa raha tha ki inaaya vaha kyu aaye hai aur kya karne aaye hai

Inaaya- aajau main ander?
Gate par khadi ho kar usne pucha to ashmita kuch bol nahi paye bas hatho se ishara hi kar saki

Aur inaaya samne wali chair par bath gaye

Ashmita ne inter par juice lane ko bola

Inaaya- koe jarurat nahi hai
Mujhe bas nikalna hai
Ye card dene aaye thi
Mere dad ki shadi hai aur vo chahte hai ki tum vaha jarur aao

Ashmita inaaya ki aankhon me dekhte hue card le leti hai aur inaaya vapas apne chair se uthane lagti hai

Ashmita- kaisi ho tum?
Inaaya- bahut achi thanks for asking

Ashmita- aur lucifer?
Inaaya- usse hi puch lena
Mujh se kyu puch rahi ho?

Ashmita- mujhse konsa vo baat karta hai?
Inaaya- to tum kar lo
Tumhe kisne roka hai

Ashmita- meri kya galti thi?
Inaaya- yeah right meri bhi kya galti thi?

Ashmita- hum firse vohi conversation karenge kya?
Inaaya- just asking
Humari koe galti nahi thi fir bhi hume hi saja mili na?
Aur mujhe nahi pata ki lucifer ne kya kiya tumhre dad ke sath aur maine usse mana bhi kiya tha
Lekin vo lucifer hai vohi karega jo uska man kahega

Ashmita- mujhe pata hai
Main apne dad ki taraf se tumhse maafi mangna chahti hu
Inaaya- too late for that
Ha ek aur baat mujhe koe problem nahi hai agar tum Lucifer se baat karo ya us se koe relation banao
In future mujhe ye nahi sunana ki inaaya ki vajah se main kuch kar nahi paye
Main kabhi tumhre raste me nahi aaye aur na kabhi aaungi
I hope lucifer will get his best friend back
Good bye
Aur inaaya vaha se uth kar chali gaye....

Bahut hi shaandar update diya hai Lone survivor bhai...
Nice and lovely update....

 

[Death Kiñg]

Eda ka kirdar kaafi confusing hota jaa raha hai... Present mein wo aur Raaj ek – doosre se pyaar karte hain, ye baat clear hai, kyonki starting ke kisi update mein dikhaya gaya tha ki donon apni “raasleela" mein khoye huye the... Par past scenes se har baar yahi lagta hai ki Eda, Lucifer se pyaar karti thi... Supreme ne bhi Eda/Raaj se yahi kaha thi ki wo “Lucifer ke liye Eda ka yun gussa hona samajh sakte hain"... Above all, Anisha ne wo book read kar yahi bataya tha ki Lucifer ki ek premika angel bhi thi... Yadi total ki ginti 7 hai, to past mein 2 aur present mein 1 premika ki entry abhi tak nahin huyi hai (considering Kaashvi to be Lucifer's lover too)...

Aise mein jab Saanvi ne saaf kaha tha ki wo ek insaan hai (in a past scene), to kaunsi ladki Angel ho sakti hai... Trisha zaroor kuchh waisi lagi hai ek - do scenes mein... But, It's clear ki Eda Angel hai... Khair, in sabhi baaton se ek cheez saaf hai ki Eda past mein to shayad Lucifer se pyaar karti hi thi... Is update mein uski Raaj ke saath huyi conversation yahi darshati hai... Aise mein uska present mein Raaj ke sang hona, samajh se pare hai... Undoubtedly, something is hidden currently, jo poora past saamne aane ke baad hi samajh aayega...

Eda ke bachpan ke scenes se ye saaf ho jaata hai ki jaisa Lucifer apne bachpan mein Guruji se kaha karta tha ki Eda uss se milne nahin aati, uske pichhe koyi reason tha hi nahin... Apitu Eda to hamesha hi Lucifer ko khojti thi but Lucifer hi us se milne nahin aata tha... Again, yahi lagta hai ki aisi situations zabardasti banayi gayi jis se Lucifer Eda ko hi galat samjhe... Kyonki jab Eda apni Maa aur Mantri donon ko hi Lucifer ke naam se dhamka rahi thi, to sawaal hi paida nahin hota ki wo bachpan mein Lucifer se nafrat karti ho ya use pasand naa karti ho...

Doosre mini past scene se ye lagta hai ki Kavish ka jo kaarnama abhi tak kahani mein chala aa raha hai, uske baare mein Eda aur Raaj baat kar rahe the... Lagta yahi hai ki Kavish ke kaand ke chalte kuchh bohot bada nuksaan uthana pada tha heaven ya fir kisi aur ko... Aur usi nuksaan ke dar ki wajah se Eda dobara Lucifer se baat nahin karna chahti... Kavish mara to nahin tha, ye to saaf hai kyonki present mein wo zinda hai, to dekhne laayak hoga ki aisa kya hua tha us samay jiski goonj baad tak Raaj aur Eda ke kaanon mein maujood thi... Btw. Lagta hai ki koyi “sach" Eda ke munh se nikal gaya tha Lucifer ke saamne, jiske kaaran wo ab Lucifer ke saamne nahin aana chahti... Yahi ki wo us se pyaar karti thi..?

Inaaya ne Ashmita ko invite kar liya hai shaadi ke liye... Ashmita ne koshish to ki us se maafi maangne ki par us maafi naame ko pehle hi swaaha kiya jaa chuka hai, Suresh saahab ke dwara... Ab dekhna ye hai ki jab Ashmita Shaadi mein aayegi, tab uski aur Lucifer ki mulakat kya rang laayegi... Lagta nahin hai ki Ashmita pehal karegi baat karne ke liye, Lucifer to ghanta nahin karega, aise mein chahe uski marzi ho ya na ho, pehal to Ashmita ko karni hi padegi, baaki dekhte hain aage kya hota hai...

Outstanding Update Bhai & Waiting For Next...

 

[The king]

update-113
Past

"Eda ohh eda kaha ho beti tum"
Eda- main chhup gaye hu aap mujhe dhondo

Maa eda ki- ohho ye ladki bhi na
Mujhe to nahi mil rahi tum
Kaha chhupi ho?
Eda- hehehe aap mujhe dond bhi nahi pa rahi ho maa

Maa- main to ab buddhi ho gaye hu
Eda- hehehe aap sach me budhi ho gaye ho
Aap to pyaari eda ko bhi nahi dund pati

Maa- ha ha main nahi dund pati eda ko
Ab jaldi se bahar aajao
Eda- aise to nahi aaungi
Aapko mujhe dunda hi padega

Maa- are Lucifer beta aap kab aaye?
Eda ki Mom ne etna bola aur eda jhaat se samne aagaye lekin vaha koe nahi tha

Maa- hahahaha dekho maine dund liya tumhe
Eda- aap gandi ho
Mujhe aapse koe baat nahi karni

Maa- are lucifer aaya tha fir jab tum usse dikhae nahi di to vo yaha se bhag gaya
Eda- mujhe sab pata hai
Lucifer yaha kabhi nahi aata
Vo to kahi bhi nahi aata jaata

Maa- mere sapno me aaya hoga
Eda- aapke sapno me kyu aaya hoga?
Mere sapno me aaya hai

Maa- tum meri princess ho na to tumhre aur mere sapne ek jaise hi hote hai
Eda- nahi mujhe nahi dekhne ek jaise sapne
Aap apne sapno me mat laya karo lucifer ko

Maa- theek hai theek hai
Ab se nahi laungi lucifer ko apne sapno me
Khush ab?
Eda- ab aapko mujhe vapas dundna padega

Maa- nahi bilkul nahi
Maine ek baar dund liya hai aur bas ab
Chalo khana kha lo
Eda- main nahi khaungi jab tak aap mujhe nahi dund lete

Maa- main tumhe yahi pakad kar baand dungi fir tum kaise chhup paogi?
Eda- main eda hu bahut strong
Mujhe koe nahi band sakta

Maa- aur lucifer ne baandha to?
Eda- vo kyu bandhega?
Main usko peet dungi

Maa- tum lucifer ko peet dogi?
Eda- vo peetne ke hi kaam karta hai

Maa- vo to bahut powerful hai tum usse kaise peetogi?
Eda- main kya kam powerful hu?
Ek din to peetega lucifer mujh se

Maa- kyu?
Eda- vo mujhse milta nahi hai esliye

Maa- to tum mil liya karo us se
Eda- mujhe pata nahi hai na vo kaha rahta hai?

Maa- pehle khana kha lo Fir jab tum me energy aa jayegi to usse jake dundna
Eda- theek hai
Usko aaj main peetungi
Hehehehe

Maa- pagal ladki
Vo eda ko le jake khana khilane hi wali thi ki

Mantri- guruji ne eda ko bulaya hai
Gate se ek aawaz aae jiski vajah se en dono Maa betiyo ki masti khatam ho gaye

Maa- abhi khana kha leti hai fir chali jayegi
Mantri- abhi bulaya hai
Ye har roj training ke liye late ho jati hai
Guruji naraaj hai es baat se

Maa- lekin ye to time se hi jati hai?
Mantri- vo sab mujhe nahi pata
Guruji bahut gussa kar rahe the

Maa- eda tum kyu late hoti ho?
Yaha se to etni jaldi nikal jati ho?
Eda- main lucifer ko dundne lagti hu

Maa- galat baat
Pehle jake guruji se mila karo
Eda- guruji kuch nahi kahte mujh se
Main unki pyaari student hu
Aur mantri uncle aa bhi aajayegi meri maa bahut acha khana banati hai

Mantri- hume jana hai tumhe leke aur vo bhi jaldi
Eda- main to khana kha kar hi jaungi
Aur aap ko bhi khilaungi nahi to main lucifer se sikayat kar dungi ki aap mujhe pareshan kar rahe the

Mantri- lekin main to bas order follow kar raha tha
Eda- vo sab mujhe nahi pata
Ab Chhup chhap aaeye aur khana khaeye
Nahi to lucifer ka intezaar kijiye

Mantri- maate kya ladki paida ki hai aapne
Ye sab ko yuhi dhamki deti rahti hai
Maa- ab yehi jane eski aur lucifer ki Maya

Mantri- abhi theek se chalna aaya nahi hai aur baate dekho kitni badi badi karti hai
Eda- mujhe ache se chalna aata hai
Aapki to sikayat karni hi padegi lucifer se

Mantri- hum maafi mangte hai aapse
Ab jaldi se khana kha lete hai nahi to guruji hum dono par bahut gussa karenge
Eda- hum dono par nahi sirf aap par
Mujh par koe gussa nahi kar sakta

Mantri- ha meri pyaari eda sirf mujh par
Kya tumhe acha lagega koe mujh par gussa kare to?
Eda- mujhe to bahut maja aayega
Hehehehe

Maa- beta jaldi se khana finish karo aur jao aise roj roj leta hona achi baat nahi hai
Eda- Maa sab lucifer ki vajah se hota hai
Agar vo mujhe subah ek baar mil jaye to main sara kaam time se kar lu

Maa- mil jayega lekin aaj ke baad tum late mat hona
Lucifer ko training ke baad dunda karna
Eda- theek hai mom

Aur fir dono jaldi se khana finish karte hai aur vaha se chale jate hai****

Ek aur past

Raaj- lucifer khush dikha maine aaj pehli baar
Eda- saanvi khushiya le aaye uski life me

Raaj- mujhe dar hai ki kahi kuch galat na ho jaye aur halaat pehle se bhi kharab na ban jaye
Eda- galat to hona hi hai
Sab ko pata hai ye
Bas hum jab hoga us damage ko kitna kam kar sake vo important hai

Raaj- pata nahi vo damage kam hoga ya nahi
Mujhe to yehi lagta hai ki bahut khoon kharaba hoga
Eda- mujhe lagta nahi hai mujhe pakka yakeen hai
Lucifer ko rokna namumken ho jayega

Raaj- kuch to karna hi padega na
Eda- nahi kar sakte hum kuch bhi
Jaisa ho raha hai vaisa hi chalne do
Baki jo hoga dekha jayega

Raaj- tum aisa kyu bol rahi ho?
Eda- kyuki hum kuch bhi rok nahi sakte
Esliye

Raaj- lucifer se baat to kar sakte hai na
Eda- aur kya bologe usse?
Saanvi se door ho jao vohi tumhre liye acha hai?
Tum me etni himmat hai ki lucifer ke samne ja kar ye sab bol do?
Ek second nahi lagaye vo tumhe marne me

Raaj- tum to kar sakti ho usse baat
Eda- maine ek baar try kiya tha aur uska natija acha nahi tha
Main dusri baar uske samne nahi jaungi

Raaj- kavish wala reason alag tha aur ye wala alag
Eda- main nahi jaungi lucifer ke samne
Jab Supreme ko hi fark nahi pad raha to main kyu apne pairo par khulahdi maaru?

Raaj- kyuko vo Supreme hai aur tum eda
Eda- main nahi jaungi lucifer ke samne aur that's final

Raaj- tumhe dar hai na ki kahi vapas sachae na nikal jaye tumhre muh se?
Eda- next word kya niklega tumhre muh se uska bahut dhayan rakhna raaj

Raaj- mujhe bolne ki jarurat nahi hai
Tum bahut samjhdar ho
Eda- main nahi jaungi aur main nahi jaungi
Eske baad mujhe koe conversation nahi chahiye
Aur eda vaha se uth kar chali gaye


Present

Inaaya ashmita ke office ke bahar apni car me bathi thi aur na jane kya soch rahi thi

Sayad ander jaye ya na jaye yehi soch rahi hogi aur ant me usne yehi decide kiya ki usko jana hi padega

Aur vo ander ki taraf chal di
Ashmita ke cabin ke bahar usse siya mil gaye

Inaaya- ashmita se milna hai
Siya inaaya ko bahut ache se pahchanti thi esliye usse bina kuch bole ander jane diya

Ashmita apne kaam me dabi padi thi aur uski halaat dekh kar hi pata lag raha tha ki vo kitne stress me hai

Jab gate khula aur usne inaaya ko dekha to bas dekhti rahi gaye
Usse samjh nahi aa raha tha ki inaaya vaha kyu aaye hai aur kya karne aaye hai

Inaaya- aajau main ander?
Gate par khadi ho kar usne pucha to ashmita kuch bol nahi paye bas hatho se ishara hi kar saki

Aur inaaya samne wali chair par bath gaye

Ashmita ne inter par juice lane ko bola

Inaaya- koe jarurat nahi hai
Mujhe bas nikalna hai
Ye card dene aaye thi
Mere dad ki shadi hai aur vo chahte hai ki tum vaha jarur aao

Ashmita inaaya ki aankhon me dekhte hue card le leti hai aur inaaya vapas apne chair se uthane lagti hai

Ashmita- kaisi ho tum?
Inaaya- bahut achi thanks for asking

Ashmita- aur lucifer?
Inaaya- usse hi puch lena
Mujh se kyu puch rahi ho?

Ashmita- mujhse konsa vo baat karta hai?
Inaaya- to tum kar lo
Tumhe kisne roka hai

Ashmita- meri kya galti thi?
Inaaya- yeah right meri bhi kya galti thi?

Ashmita- hum firse vohi conversation karenge kya?
Inaaya- just asking
Humari koe galti nahi thi fir bhi hume hi saja mili na?
Aur mujhe nahi pata ki lucifer ne kya kiya tumhre dad ke sath aur maine usse mana bhi kiya tha
Lekin vo lucifer hai vohi karega jo uska man kahega

Ashmita- mujhe pata hai
Main apne dad ki taraf se tumhse maafi mangna chahti hu
Inaaya- too late for that
Ha ek aur baat mujhe koe problem nahi hai agar tum Lucifer se baat karo ya us se koe relation banao
In future mujhe ye nahi sunana ki inaaya ki vajah se main kuch kar nahi paye
Main kabhi tumhre raste me nahi aaye aur na kabhi aaungi
I hope lucifer will get his best friend back
Good bye
Aur inaaya vaha se uth kar chali gaye....

Nice update bhai waiting for next update

 

[sorbobhuk]

update-113
Past

"Eda ohh eda kaha ho beti tum"
Eda- main chhup gaye hu aap mujhe dhondo

Maa eda ki- ohho ye ladki bhi na
Mujhe to nahi mil rahi tum
Kaha chhupi ho?
Eda- hehehe aap mujhe dond bhi nahi pa rahi ho maa

Maa- main to ab buddhi ho gaye hu
Eda- hehehe aap sach me budhi ho gaye ho
Aap to pyaari eda ko bhi nahi dund pati

Maa- ha ha main nahi dund pati eda ko
Ab jaldi se bahar aajao
Eda- aise to nahi aaungi
Aapko mujhe dunda hi padega

Maa- are Lucifer beta aap kab aaye?
Eda ki Mom ne etna bola aur eda jhaat se samne aagaye lekin vaha koe nahi tha

Maa- hahahaha dekho maine dund liya tumhe
Eda- aap gandi ho
Mujhe aapse koe baat nahi karni

Maa- are lucifer aaya tha fir jab tum usse dikhae nahi di to vo yaha se bhag gaya
Eda- mujhe sab pata hai
Lucifer yaha kabhi nahi aata
Vo to kahi bhi nahi aata jaata

Maa- mere sapno me aaya hoga
Eda- aapke sapno me kyu aaya hoga?
Mere sapno me aaya hai

Maa- tum meri princess ho na to tumhre aur mere sapne ek jaise hi hote hai
Eda- nahi mujhe nahi dekhne ek jaise sapne
Aap apne sapno me mat laya karo lucifer ko

Maa- theek hai theek hai
Ab se nahi laungi lucifer ko apne sapno me
Khush ab?
Eda- ab aapko mujhe vapas dundna padega

Maa- nahi bilkul nahi
Maine ek baar dund liya hai aur bas ab
Chalo khana kha lo
Eda- main nahi khaungi jab tak aap mujhe nahi dund lete

Maa- main tumhe yahi pakad kar baand dungi fir tum kaise chhup paogi?
Eda- main eda hu bahut strong
Mujhe koe nahi band sakta

Maa- aur lucifer ne baandha to?
Eda- vo kyu bandhega?
Main usko peet dungi

Maa- tum lucifer ko peet dogi?
Eda- vo peetne ke hi kaam karta hai

Maa- vo to bahut powerful hai tum usse kaise peetogi?
Eda- main kya kam powerful hu?
Ek din to peetega lucifer mujh se

Maa- kyu?
Eda- vo mujhse milta nahi hai esliye

Maa- to tum mil liya karo us se
Eda- mujhe pata nahi hai na vo kaha rahta hai?

Maa- pehle khana kha lo Fir jab tum me energy aa jayegi to usse jake dundna
Eda- theek hai
Usko aaj main peetungi
Hehehehe

Maa- pagal ladki
Vo eda ko le jake khana khilane hi wali thi ki

Mantri- guruji ne eda ko bulaya hai
Gate se ek aawaz aae jiski vajah se en dono Maa betiyo ki masti khatam ho gaye

Maa- abhi khana kha leti hai fir chali jayegi
Mantri- abhi bulaya hai
Ye har roj training ke liye late ho jati hai
Guruji naraaj hai es baat se

Maa- lekin ye to time se hi jati hai?
Mantri- vo sab mujhe nahi pata
Guruji bahut gussa kar rahe the

Maa- eda tum kyu late hoti ho?
Yaha se to etni jaldi nikal jati ho?
Eda- main lucifer ko dundne lagti hu

Maa- galat baat
Pehle jake guruji se mila karo
Eda- guruji kuch nahi kahte mujh se
Main unki pyaari student hu
Aur mantri uncle aa bhi aajayegi meri maa bahut acha khana banati hai

Mantri- hume jana hai tumhe leke aur vo bhi jaldi
Eda- main to khana kha kar hi jaungi
Aur aap ko bhi khilaungi nahi to main lucifer se sikayat kar dungi ki aap mujhe pareshan kar rahe the

Mantri- lekin main to bas order follow kar raha tha
Eda- vo sab mujhe nahi pata
Ab Chhup chhap aaeye aur khana khaeye
Nahi to lucifer ka intezaar kijiye

Mantri- maate kya ladki paida ki hai aapne
Ye sab ko yuhi dhamki deti rahti hai
Maa- ab yehi jane eski aur lucifer ki Maya

Mantri- abhi theek se chalna aaya nahi hai aur baate dekho kitni badi badi karti hai
Eda- mujhe ache se chalna aata hai
Aapki to sikayat karni hi padegi lucifer se

Mantri- hum maafi mangte hai aapse
Ab jaldi se khana kha lete hai nahi to guruji hum dono par bahut gussa karenge
Eda- hum dono par nahi sirf aap par
Mujh par koe gussa nahi kar sakta

Mantri- ha meri pyaari eda sirf mujh par
Kya tumhe acha lagega koe mujh par gussa kare to?
Eda- mujhe to bahut maja aayega
Hehehehe

Maa- beta jaldi se khana finish karo aur jao aise roj roj leta hona achi baat nahi hai
Eda- Maa sab lucifer ki vajah se hota hai
Agar vo mujhe subah ek baar mil jaye to main sara kaam time se kar lu

Maa- mil jayega lekin aaj ke baad tum late mat hona
Lucifer ko training ke baad dunda karna
Eda- theek hai mom

Aur fir dono jaldi se khana finish karte hai aur vaha se chale jate hai****

Ek aur past

Raaj- lucifer khush dikha maine aaj pehli baar
Eda- saanvi khushiya le aaye uski life me

Raaj- mujhe dar hai ki kahi kuch galat na ho jaye aur halaat pehle se bhi kharab na ban jaye
Eda- galat to hona hi hai
Sab ko pata hai ye
Bas hum jab hoga us damage ko kitna kam kar sake vo important hai

Raaj- pata nahi vo damage kam hoga ya nahi
Mujhe to yehi lagta hai ki bahut khoon kharaba hoga
Eda- mujhe lagta nahi hai mujhe pakka yakeen hai
Lucifer ko rokna namumken ho jayega

Raaj- kuch to karna hi padega na
Eda- nahi kar sakte hum kuch bhi
Jaisa ho raha hai vaisa hi chalne do
Baki jo hoga dekha jayega

Raaj- tum aisa kyu bol rahi ho?
Eda- kyuki hum kuch bhi rok nahi sakte
Esliye

Raaj- lucifer se baat to kar sakte hai na
Eda- aur kya bologe usse?
Saanvi se door ho jao vohi tumhre liye acha hai?
Tum me etni himmat hai ki lucifer ke samne ja kar ye sab bol do?
Ek second nahi lagaye vo tumhe marne me

Raaj- tum to kar sakti ho usse baat
Eda- maine ek baar try kiya tha aur uska natija acha nahi tha
Main dusri baar uske samne nahi jaungi

Raaj- kavish wala reason alag tha aur ye wala alag
Eda- main nahi jaungi lucifer ke samne
Jab Supreme ko hi fark nahi pad raha to main kyu apne pairo par khulahdi maaru?

Raaj- kyuko vo Supreme hai aur tum eda
Eda- main nahi jaungi lucifer ke samne aur that's final

Raaj- tumhe dar hai na ki kahi vapas sachae na nikal jaye tumhre muh se?
Eda- next word kya niklega tumhre muh se uska bahut dhayan rakhna raaj

Raaj- mujhe bolne ki jarurat nahi hai
Tum bahut samjhdar ho
Eda- main nahi jaungi aur main nahi jaungi
Eske baad mujhe koe conversation nahi chahiye
Aur eda vaha se uth kar chali gaye


Present

Inaaya ashmita ke office ke bahar apni car me bathi thi aur na jane kya soch rahi thi

Sayad ander jaye ya na jaye yehi soch rahi hogi aur ant me usne yehi decide kiya ki usko jana hi padega

Aur vo ander ki taraf chal di
Ashmita ke cabin ke bahar usse siya mil gaye

Inaaya- ashmita se milna hai
Siya inaaya ko bahut ache se pahchanti thi esliye usse bina kuch bole ander jane diya

Ashmita apne kaam me dabi padi thi aur uski halaat dekh kar hi pata lag raha tha ki vo kitne stress me hai

Jab gate khula aur usne inaaya ko dekha to bas dekhti rahi gaye
Usse samjh nahi aa raha tha ki inaaya vaha kyu aaye hai aur kya karne aaye hai

Inaaya- aajau main ander?
Gate par khadi ho kar usne pucha to ashmita kuch bol nahi paye bas hatho se ishara hi kar saki

Aur inaaya samne wali chair par bath gaye

Ashmita ne inter par juice lane ko bola

Inaaya- koe jarurat nahi hai
Mujhe bas nikalna hai
Ye card dene aaye thi
Mere dad ki shadi hai aur vo chahte hai ki tum vaha jarur aao

Ashmita inaaya ki aankhon me dekhte hue card le leti hai aur inaaya vapas apne chair se uthane lagti hai

Ashmita- kaisi ho tum?
Inaaya- bahut achi thanks for asking

Ashmita- aur lucifer?
Inaaya- usse hi puch lena
Mujh se kyu puch rahi ho?

Ashmita- mujhse konsa vo baat karta hai?
Inaaya- to tum kar lo
Tumhe kisne roka hai

Ashmita- meri kya galti thi?
Inaaya- yeah right meri bhi kya galti thi?

Ashmita- hum firse vohi conversation karenge kya?
Inaaya- just asking
Humari koe galti nahi thi fir bhi hume hi saja mili na?
Aur mujhe nahi pata ki lucifer ne kya kiya tumhre dad ke sath aur maine usse mana bhi kiya tha
Lekin vo lucifer hai vohi karega jo uska man kahega

Ashmita- mujhe pata hai
Main apne dad ki taraf se tumhse maafi mangna chahti hu
Inaaya- too late for that
Ha ek aur baat mujhe koe problem nahi hai agar tum Lucifer se baat karo ya us se koe relation banao
In future mujhe ye nahi sunana ki inaaya ki vajah se main kuch kar nahi paye
Main kabhi tumhre raste me nahi aaye aur na kabhi aaungi
I hope lucifer will get his best friend back
Good bye
Aur inaaya vaha se uth kar chali gaye....

Bahut badhiya update hai bhai.......dekhte hai raathor ke shadi me kya hota hai
Waiting for next update

 

[parkas]

Lone survivor bhai next update kab tak aayega?

 

[Lone survivor]

Awesome update.. Bhai..

Thank you

 

[Lone survivor]

Nice update bro super update bro magar update Chhota h bro

Mega to diya hi nahi bhai etna time hi nahi hota

 

[Lone survivor]

Chlo ye acha kiya Lucifer ne ki use madhuri ke yaha nahi rahne diya aur mansi ko bhi naag ke yaha bula liya uska dhyan rakhne ko. Ab wo bhi scene dekhne wala hoga jb Aaliya muskan se milegi. Dono ki bate sun kr bahut maja aayega.

Maza to aaega dono milegi tab

Aur ye Rathor aakhir kaise Lucifer pr itni jldi yakin kar le koi bhi baap aisa ladka apni beti ke liye kabhi bhi nahi chahega.

Exactly

Aur simran Lucifer ko bahut ache se janti hai tabhi to apni bato se usko hamesa fasa leti hai.

Us se acha to sayad koe nahi janta

Anisa ne bhi bilkul sahi socha hai ye uski life hai. Nd asmita office ke bahar uski boss nahi hai.

Tej ladki hai

Bahut hi acha Update tha Lone survivor bhai.
Keep posting.

Thank you bhai

 

[Lone survivor]

Yaha Matlb eda bhi Lucifer se pyar karti thi aur karti hai. Lakin kisi na kisi karan se use kisi ne rok diya Lucifer ko batane ka ya lakin Lucifer ko bhi ye baat pata hai. Fir bhi kuch to hua jo dono sath nahi hai.
Aur eda ka bachpan to such me bahut sahi dikhaya ki wo Lucifer ke name se hi abki dhmki deti thi.
Aur Lone survivor bhai. Ab to ye ashmita aur innaya ke bich ka raj open ke do. Aakhir kab tak ye yahi chalta rahega. Baki nice update bro

Mujhe abhi khud nahi pata to aap logo ko kaise bata du bhai?
Jab aaega dimag me kuch to likhunga

 

[Lone survivor]

Nice update

Thank you