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Ab tak aapne dekha dosto ki kaise mai IGRIS ko Buraka se fight krne ko bol deta hu. Aur kud mai vikash ke body se uske shadow ko EXTRACT krne lagta hu. Aur uska name IRON rakh deta hu. fir hum tino mil kr buraka se fight krte hue usko maar dete hai. Fir waha gate hmlogo ke samne aa jata hai aur mai ja kr baki chro hunturs se wapas ghr chlne ko kahta hu.


AB AAGE.....

OUTSIDE THE DENGEON

White tiger guild wale Sachin ke sath abhi bhi Gate ke bahar khade the. Aur gate ke open hone ki ek ummid lagaye hue the.

Manoj ( apne hath me bndi hui ghadi ko dekh ke chinta ke sath ) " Ab to raat ke 3 bhi baj gaye hai. "
" Iska matlba DENGEON ke ander lagbhag 1 week bhit cuka hai. "

Manoj ( sachin ke taraf dekh kr ) " Master Sachin ! Aap ghr kyu nahi chle jate ?"
" Aap ghr ja kar thodi der aaram kar lijiye. Hum sb hai yaha. tab tak hm yaha najar rakh lenge. "

Sachin " Mai apne ghr ja kar aaram kaise kr skta hu, jabki mere team members yaha is Gate ke ander fase hue hai ? "
" Mai subah hone tak yahi intejar karunga. "


ZIZZZZZZZ........
ZIZZZZZZZ.....


Aur abhi ye sb yahi bate kr rahe hote hai ki, Gate ke bich se blue color ki energy ka halka halka flow bahar ki taraf hone lagta hai.

Vinay ( confused ho kr ) " Huh ? "
" ye Red Gate to... "

Manoj ( surprise ke sath chillate hue ) " Red Gate open ho raha hai. "

Aur uske baad Red gate wapas se blue gate me change ho jata hai. Aur gate ke ander se kuch log bahar ki taraf aate hue dikhayi dete hai.

Ganesh ( suprise nd khusi ke sath ) " DENGEON clear ho gaya hai. "

Manoj ( khusi se ) " Hunturs bahar aa rahe hai. "

Sachin ( Surprise nd khusi se Gate ki taraf dekhte hue apne man me ) ' Vikash ? '
' kya Vikash DENGEON ko clear krne me safal ho gaya ? '


Tap... Tap... Tap..

Aur Gate se ek ek krke sare hunters bahar niklne lagte hai. Sare hunturs is time khusi ke karan ro rahe the.

Manoj jo bhi hunturs gate se bahr aa raha tha uska name sbke samne bole ja raha tha.

Manoj " Huntur Ragini. "
" 1st C Rank huntur, 2nd C Rank huntur "
" Ye wapas aa gaye. "
" Ye sab survive kr gaye . "

In sb ko dekh ke Manoj ke sath baki sare White Tiger guild wale bhi bhut jyada surprise ho gaye the.


Tap.. Tap..

Inke baad koi aur bhi gate se bahar aata hai.

Manoj ( khusi se chillate hue ) " huntur Rider ! "

Manoj ( mujhe dekh ke apni muthi khusi se band krte hue apne man me kahta hai ) ' Jaisa ki maine socha tha. '

Ji ha wo aakhiri huntur mai tha jo Gate se bahar aaya tha. Mai apna sir niche kiye hue chl raha tha. mere sath kirti thi jo ki bahut hi jyada happy thi bahar aa kr.

Hm sb logo ke bahar aate hi Gate gayab ho jata hai.

Bs hm sb logo ko hi dekh kr sare shocked ho jate hai.

Vinay " Gate gayab ho gaya hai. "

Ganesh ( paresan hote hue ) " Vikash ! Vikash ke sath kya hua ? "
" Aisa kabhi nahi ho skta . "
" Ye sare hi bs surviver hai ? "

Ragini ( dukh se apna sir niche kiye hue ) " Ha ! Bus hum log hi hai. "

Sachin ( shocked ho kr sbko dekhte hue ) " Sirf low Rank ke hunturs hi survive kr paye ?"
" Na ki koi A Rank aur sirf ek B Rank ? "
( Apne man me ) ' Aakhir ander hua kya tha ? '

Mai ( kirti se ) " chlo chalte hai. Mai tmko ghur chod dunga. "

Sachin ( mere kandhe pr hath rakh ke mujhe rokte hue ) " Ruko jara ! Chlo kuch der phle thodi baat krte hai."

Mai ( Sachin ka hath apne kandhe se hatate hue ) " Abhi mai thaka hua hu. "
" Agr tmhare paas puchne ke liye kuch hai to, jao aur apne guild ke members seka kr pucho. "

Mere aisa karne aur kahne se sachin ko gussa aa jata hai aur wo mera kandha is baat kuch jyada power ke sath pakd kr mujhe rokte hue gusse se kahta hai " Ye koi request nahi hai. "
" Mai Sachin hu . White tiger guild ka guild Master. "

Mai ( cold tone me sachin ki taraf back kiye hue hi ) " Ye ek order hai ya koi dhamki. "

Sachin ( gusse se mujhe ghurte hue ) " Hmne is incident me apne 9 Guild members ko khoya hai. "
" Ek Guild master hone ke nate, kya mujhe haq nahi hai ki mai kuch swal puch saku ? "

Mai ( Sachin ki taraf apni cold blue eye se dekhte hue ) " To kya ho gaya. "
" Mai baki bache hue 3 logo ko bachaya hai. " Agar tum master ho to , tumhe nahi lagta ki tmhe mujhe phle sukriya kahna cahiye ? "

Mere aise dekhne se sachin ko mere aakho me aur dekhne me bahut jyada muskil ka samna krna pad raha tha.

Sachin " Tm sahi kah rahe ho. "
" Mai mafi cahta hu tmse. "


Tap... Tap... Tap....

VROOMMMMM......

Fir mai kirti ke apne sath car me baitha kr uske ghr chorne nikal jata hu.
Aur baki sb log hme jate hua bs dekhte rahte hai.

Fir baki ke bache hue 3 hunturs ko blanket aur coffee di jati hai. Taki wo phle se acha mehsoos kr ske.
Fir wo sb bhi kuch normal ho jate hai. Ragini wahi paas me ek jagah baithi coffee pi rahi hoti hai.
Tabhi Sachin, Ragini ke paas aa kr puchta hai aur kahta hai " Miss Ragini ! "

Ragini ( Sachin ko dekh ke ) " Ji boliye ? "

Sachin ( meri taraf dekhte hue ) " Ye kon hai ? "
" Aur ye itna jyada chida hua kyu hai ? "

Ragini ( niche dekh kr sochte hue ) " Mujhe pakka to nahi pata. Lakin Boss monster ko marne ke baad . "
" Ye uske body ke paas khada ho ke 3 times kuch bola tha. Uske baad..... "

Abhi wo aage aur kuch kahti ki Manoj aa jata hai aur bich me hi Sachin se kahta hai " Uski tarf se mai maafi mangta hu master. "
" Aisa is liye hua hoga quki wo thak gaya hoga. Warna wo bura ladka nahi hai. "

Sachin " Nhai ! Ye problem nahi hai. "
" Tmne ise abhi tak recruit kyu nahi kiya hai ? "

Manoj ( Surprise hote hue ) " Huh ? "

Sachin ( mujhe yaad krke apne man me ) ' Mere khilaf itna jyada confidence ke sath wo khada tha. '
' Agr hmari fight hoti hai to mujhe apna ek hath ko gwane ke liye ready rahna cahiye. '

Sachin ( Manoj se ) " use jldi se hmare Guild me bhrti kro. "

Manoj ( apna sir Sachin ke aage jukhaye hue ) " Mai apni puri kosis krunga. "

Sachin " Itna kafi nahi hai. "
" Mai tumhe apna pura support de raha hu. "
" kobi bhi kimat pr Is ladke ko hmare Guild me le kr aao. "

Manoj ( smile me sath ) " Ji smjh gaya. "
( Apne man me ) ' Mai janta tha meri aakhe kabhi galt nahi ho skti hai. '



~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~

Wrooommm......

Mai, Kirti ko uske ghr drop krne le ja raha tha. Use thakan bhi jyada ho rahi thi aur wo kuch dari hui bhi thi to maine use back seat pr sula diya tha. Wo so rahi thi aur mai car chlate hue uski ghr ki taraf ja raha tha.
Bhale hi itni raat ho gayi thi lakin abhi bhi rode pr kuch gadiya aa ja rahi thi. Lakin road lagbhag khali hi thi.
Mai aaram se ek hath se car chlata hu, dusre hath ko mod kr uspr apna sir tikaye hue kuch soch raha tha.

Mai ( man me ) ' kya ye hamare strength me itna antar hone ke karan hua hai ? '
' kya bekar ki baat hai. '

Quki jb maine Buraka ke shadow ko EXTRACT krne ke liye try kiya tha. Mere tino try fail ho gaye the. Aur aisa kyu hua tha iska mujhe abhi tak koi idea nahi laga tha.
Is baat se mai itni der se gusse me tha.
Ki mere paas ak bhut acha chance tha ek itne strong person ko apne army me lane ka aur mai fail ho gaya.

Lakin fir mujhe kuch yaad aata hai. Aur mai apne inventory se Buraka ko maar kr mile hue uske dagger ko dekhne lagta hu.


DING.....

[ ITEM : BURAKA'S DAGGER ]

[ ITEM CLASS : A ]
[ TYPE : DAGGER ]

[ Buraka dhwara use kiye jane wala ek dagger. Lightweight magic usehone ke karan ye chlane wale ko aur bhi jyada furtila banati hai. ]

Mai ( dagger ko dekh kr apne man me ) ' Mujhe kushi hai ki, mai kam se kam waha se ye to la paya. '

Fir kuch der me kirti ka ghar ja aa jata hai to mai car rok kar Kirti ko jagata hu.
Kirti jldi se uth jati hai aur apna ghr ko dekh kr car se niche utar jati hai.
Kirti window ke paas khadi thi.

Mai ( kirti ko dekhte hue ) " Tumne acha kaam kiya. "

Kirti ( apna sir jutha kr ) " Aap ghar aaram se aur safely pahuch jana. "

Mai " thik hai. "

Mai car ko start krke jane hi wala hota hu ki kirti jldi se kahti hai " Hey bhaiya. "

Mai ( apne man me ) ' Bhaiya ? '

Kirti ( pyar se meri taraf dekh kr ) " Aaj ke liye sukriya bhaiya. "
" Mai aapse kal... Nahi ! Mai aapse baad me milti hu. "


Tap... Tap... Tap....

Iske baad wo apne ghr me jane lagti hai.

Mai ( man me ) ' baad me ? '
( Fir me car ki watch se time dekhta hu jisme 3:50 am ho raha tha ) " Ahhh !! Ab lagbhag raat khtam hi hone wali hai. "

Aur mai Wapas se car ko start krke apne ghr ki taraf le jate hue kahta hu " Matlb mujhe aaj se wapas se Shubham ke sath raid suru karna hai. "



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IN MORNING
RIDER HOME


Shubham mere ghr ke BUILDING ke niche khada tha. Aaj fir usne apne safety ke liye kuch armour phle hue the. Lakin ye pahle wale se alag the.
Is baar usne sirf helmet , apne hatho aur solder pr hi armor phna hua tha.

Mai ( Shubham ko dekh ke apni hasi rokte hue ) " Tm in sab ke sath ek cab bhi le kr aaye ho ? "
" Mai to soch raha tha ki mai tumhe lene aa jau. "
( Apne man me ) ' aisa bs tum hi kr skte ho. '

Shubham ( smile ke sath ) " Rider Tum hi wo ek person ho jo meri help kr rahe ho. To mujhe hi yaha tumhe lene aana chahiye. "
" Chlo chalte hai. "

Mai car me baith jata hu. Aur Shubham car ko aage bada deta hai.

Mai ( Shubham se ) " Raste me hi hme kisi aur ko bhi pick up Krna hai. "

Shubham ( sochte hue ) " Huh ? Kise ? "

Mai car me baithe hue hi kirti ko call krta hu aur kuch der me wo call utha leti hai.

Mai ( phone pr ) " Kirti apne ghr se bahar aa jao. Mai tmhe lift de deta hu. "

Shubham ( Surprise hote hue ) " Kirti ? Kahi ye wahi kirti ko nahi.... "

Mai " Haa tm sahi soch rahe ho. "

Shubham ( apne man me ) ' Ye, uska no. Bhi janta hai. Aur usase bahut friendly tarike se baat bhi kr raha hai. '
' kya Rider aur kirti ke bich koi gahra rishta to nahi hai ? '

Tb tak kuch der me Shubham, kirti ke ghr ke paas phuch jata hai. Fir wo car rok kr mujhse kahta hai.

Shubham " Hum phuch gaye hai rider. "
( Thoda confusion ke sath) " Rider , kya mai ab se Kirti ko bhabhi kahna suru kr du ? "

Mai ( shocked hote hue ) " Kya... ? Wo to bs meri sister ki frnd hai. "

Tabhi thori der me kirti bhi niche aa jati hai. Aaj pahli baar Kirti apni huddi wali jacket nahi pahn kr nahi aayi thi. Aaj Usne Green colour ka ek top ke sath ek blue color ki jeans phni hui thi.


Tap... Tap... Tap....

Thori der me hi wo mere paas aa kr pyar se kahti hai " Good morning Bhaiya. "
( Shubham ki taraf dekh kr ) " Good morning Raid captain "

Shubham ( kirti se ) " ohh !! Hello kirti. "

Aur Kirti aa kr car me piche hi mere bagal me baith jati hai.

Mai ( kirti se pyar se ) " Kya kl raat tmne kuch der ki nind li ? "

Kirti ( smile krte hue ) " Nahi mai so nahi pati thi. Maine kosis kiya lakin mai nahi so payi. "

Mai " Tab to tum jarur taki hui hogi. Yaha car me thodi der ke liye rest kr lo. "

Kirti " Aur aapka kya bhaiya ? "

Mai " Ha main bhi thodi der ke liye so paya tha. Quki mujhe ghr phucahne tak hi 4am ho gaye the. "

Kirti " Thik hai. "

Wahi Shubham ki aakhe aur muh khula ka khula rah jata hai ye sb sun kr. Wo bhut jyada shocked ho gaya tha.

Shubham ( apne man me shocked ke sath ) ' Raat ? '
' so nahi paa rahi thi ? '
' thak gayi thi ? '
' Rider 4am ko ghr phucha. '
' Aur ye kah raha tha ki wo bs iske sister ki frnd hai. '

Fir kud ko control karke Shubham car start krke raid ki jagah pr le jate hue kahta hai " Ummmm... Rider ? "

Mai " ha bolo. "

Shubham ( Darte hue ) " Kirti abhi minar hai. Wo 18+ ki nahi hui hai. "

Mai ( confused hote hue ) " To ? "

Shubham " Nahi kuch nahi ! "

Shubham dar ke karan mujhe aage kuch nahi bolta hai. Aur car chlate hue kud se sochne lagta hai ' Ye Normal nahi hai. '
' Mai apne ordinary standard se Rider ko judge nahi kr skta. '

Fir sari bato ko bhulate hue Shubham car chlan lagta hai.

Mai " jldi chlo, chl kr aaj ka kaam khtam krte hai. "

Shubham ( jose se ) " jaisa tum kaho Rider ! "

Kirti " Ji bhaiya. "






Aaj ke liye bs itna hi dosto !!

Aapke review nd suggestions ka wait rahega comments ke through !!
Apna pyar aise hi banaye rakhiye !!
Nice Update Bhai

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Itachi_Uchiha

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Zabardast Update Valentine Rider Bhai

Maza Aagaya
Sukriya Though_Guy bhai.
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Nice update bhai waiting for next update
Sukriya The king bhai.
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behtrin story dear fantasy level is amazing
Sukriya JAI bhai.
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Nice Update Bhai

Waiting for New Update Bhai
Sukriya Vipul bhail .
keep supporting ☺️👍

Sukriya Anil p bhai.
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Sachin babu fokat mai ulaj rahe the rider se par manoj ne aake sambhal liya jo ki best raha ....
Vikash bahan nahi aaya isi liye bawla ho gaya tha. Lakin manoj to rider ko janta hai isi liye wo turant aa gaya explain krne.
rider sachin ke guild mai toh nahi jayega par support type kuch agreement kar le toh baat alag h par ye bi sambhav nahi lag raha h but manoj ka behaviour acha h sayad kuch rasta nikal jaye ......
Ab jayega ki nahi ye to nahi pata lakin kuch Updates ke baad bs S Rank hunturs ki hi ab baat hogi. Unki sunami aayegi.
aur ye shubham toh bura baklol h bc bhai bahan mai he pata nahi kya kya matlab nikal raha h lol ...
Shubham bechara ek nasamjh baccha hai use abhi duniyadari ka utna pata nahi hai.
but maza agaya akhir rider ko ek dagger toh mila par boss ki soul nahi mil payi ......par bahut shandar update.....apki story fresh mind se read karne pe ....dubble achi lagti h ...
Haa dagger to mil gaya kam se kam. Aur ab kuch naya suru hoga. Jo ki bhut jyada excitement bhara hoga .
Itne ache review ke liye Sukriya Sandeep singh nirwan bhai.

Bahut Hi Gajab Ke Update Hai Bro...
Bahut bahut sukriya ROAN R bhai.
Bhai Story Mast Ja Rahi Hai ....
Lekin Bhai buraka ko add on kyu nhi kar paya kyunki voh s class se bhi upar ka hai ya kuch alag baat hai ...
Kuch to baat thi uska pata aako dhire dhire aage chlega. Isme bhi story ke future ke kuch hints hai.
Bhai Buraka add ho jata toh namit jaisi problem araam se solve ho jati ...
Koi nahi apna hero use bhi dekh lega bs next mission me jo wo jane wala hai wo pura kr lene do use then S Rank huntur bhi uska kuch nahi ukhad payenge.
 

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1 no update bhai maza aa gaya.
Sukriya Scorpionking bhai.
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Nice update bro..
Sukriya arish8299 bhai.
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Bahot behtareen shaandaar update bhai
Yeh tow sahi kaha sock wali baat tow h ki Buraka ko kyon EXTRACT nahi ker paya aisa kia tha
Isme bhi ek raaj hai jiska pata aage aapko chlega.
Lekin ek achchi baat huwi Rider k liye ki Buraka ka dagger lene m kamyab raha jo ek A class ka dagger h
Haa ab A Rank dagger se hi apna rider khus ho gaya aur kr bhi kya sakta hai.
Baherhal dekhte h kia manoj convince ker payega ka Rider ko Whit Tiger Guild m shamil hone k liye
Ab ye to aage hi pata chlega.
Dekhte h aage kia hota h
Bahot behtareen zaberdast update bhai shaandaar
Bahut bhut sukriya Naik bhai. Aap bhi un readers me se ek ho jo mere story ke hints notice krte ho. Bhut khub
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UPDATE - 54


Ab tak aapne dekha dosto ki Buraka mujhe parstav deta hai ki mai sare hunturs unhen de du to wo mujhe jane dega. Lakin mai mana kr deta hu aur hum dono ke army ke bich fight suru ho jati hai. Mai bhi Buraka se fight krne lagta hu. Lakin wo bahut jyada strong tha. To mai ek idea laga kr vikash ke paas uski sowrd fek deta hu jise wo hose me aate hi utha kr mujhe marne dudh padta hai. Lakin mai IGRIS se kah ke use marwa deta hu. Ye sb dekh kr Buraka aur sare hunturs pure shock ho jate hai.


AB AAGE.....


JUMP....

Buraka apne jagah se jump laga deta hai mujh pr. Lakin mai IGRIS ko kahta hu aur wo mere aage aa jata hai.

Buraka ( ye dekh kr ) " Chupne ka koi fayda nahi hai. "


SWOOSSS......

SWOOSSS.......
TADDD......

Aur Buraka ke dagger ke attack ko IGRIS apne sword se rok deta hai.
Wahi mai IGRIS ke piche jamin pr pade hue Vikash ki body ko touch krke kahta hu " ARISE !! "


SSSSSSSSSS.......

AAAHHHHHHHHH.......
THUDDD.....

Aur mere itna kahte hi Vikash ke body ke chro taraf black color ki energy hone lagti hai aur kuch hi second me vikash ki shadow ek black color me mere samne khadi thi. Wo ek baad jor se chillata hai. Uske hath me uski big Axe aur shield thi. Wo mere samne aa kr apne ek ghutne ko mod kr jukh jata hai.

DING....


[ Aapne successfully shadow ko EXTRACTED kr liya hai. ]

Mai ( Vikash ko dekh ke ) " kya ye phle se bada ho gaya hai ? "

Maina aisa is liye kaha quki Vikash ki shadow, usase 4 time jyada badi thi.


DING....


[ Please soldier ke liye ek name select kijiye. ]

Mai ( Vikash ko dekhte hue ) " Vikash ? "
" Nahi ! Vikash nahi Quki wo to ab mar cuka hai. "
" Tumhara aaj se IRON Name hoga. "


DING....


[ IRON Lev.1 ]
[ RANK : KNIGHT ]

Wahi mere aage Buraka, IGRIS se fight kr raha tha. Fight kya kar raha tha. Use bhuri tarah pit raha tha. Aur mere itna sb krne tak wo IGRIS ko khtam kr cuka tha. Usne abhi tak mujh ye sb krte hue nahi dekha tha.

Tap... Tap... Tap...

Buraka ( Meri taraf aate hue ) " Mera dhyan bhatkana band kro. "
" Tmhe kya lagta hai ye ek soldier mujhe rokne ke liye kafi hai ? "

Mai ( Buraka ki tarf dekh kr ) " jahir si baat hai. Bikul bhi nahi. "


KWWUUUUUHHHHHH........

Mere itna Bolte hi IRON, Buraka ki taraf dekh kr bahut jor se chillata hai. Iske karan uske body se ek red color ki energy charo taraf niklne lagtai hai.

DING....


[ IRON ' TAUNTING CRY ( Tana marna ) ' skill ka use kr raha hai. ]
[ IRON DENGOUN ka boss ko tana maar raha hai. ]

Aur is skill ka such me fayda bhi hota hai. Quki Buraka isase bahut gussa ho jati hai.

Buraka ( IRON ko dekhte hue ) " Ek aur majedar bande ko tum mere samne le aaye. "
" Mai sbse phle tmko hi tukdo me kaatunga."


Run.... Run......

Jump..... SWOOSSS......
DHAPPPP.......

Aur itna kah kar Buraka bhagte hue IRON ki taraf jata hai. Aur jump laga kr uske upar apne dono dagger se Attack krne lagta hai.
Lakin IRON apne shield ko aage kr deta hai. Jisase uska Attack us pr ja lagta hai.


SWOOSSS.......
Jump......


Aur fir IRON, Buraka pr Attack krta hai apne big Axe se lakin Buraka uski shield se jump laga kr uske piche chla jata hai.

Buraka ( paglo ki tarah haste hue ) " Ye slow Soldier mere samne kuch bhi nahi hai. "

Buraka ke itna kahte hi mai Wapas se IGRIS ko bula leta hu aur ab kud bhi dono ke sath mil ke Buraka se fight krne pahuch jata hu.

Mai ( smile krte hue ) " To Aisi baat hai to ? To hum tino ek sath kaise rahenge ? "

Waha chro hunturs bhi ye sb dekh rahe the.

Kirti ( dar se Ragini ka hath pakde hue ) " Miss Ragini kya sare hunturs aisehi fight krte hai ? "

Ragini ( dar ke sath, hme fight krte hue dekh kr ) " Aisa aisa hota to, mujhe mera License kabhi nahi mila hota. "


SWOOSSS......

SWOOSSS.....
BOOM.... BOOM....

CRACK... CRACK.....

Hm sb lage hue the. Abhi bhi sare KNIGHTS aur ELVES fight krne me lage pade the.

Ragini ( hmari taraf dekhte hue ) " Maine kabhi bhi aisa na kuch suna hai na hi aaj se phle dekha tha. "

1st C Rank huntur " Hum abhi ek sapne me hai na ? "


SWOOSSS......

IGRIS ne apne sword se Buraka ke right side se ek Attack kiya . Jo ki kafi fast tha Buraka is Attack se badi muskil se bacha lakin tab bhi uske kapde ko chirte hue IGRIS ki sword aagenikal jati hai.

SWOOSSS....

KUCHH.....
Ahhhhh......

Lakin IGRIS ke attack se bachne ko Buraka jaise hi piche hota hai. Mai teji se aa kr uske right solder pr apne dagger se ek cut maar deta hu. Lakin Buraka ne mujhe dekh liya tha to use bhut jyada chot nahi aati hai isase. Bs ek cut hi aata hai.

DING...


[ EFFECT : PARALYSIS has been activated. ]
[ EFFECT : BLEED has activated. ]

Mai ( ye dekh kr apne man me ) ' Is situation me bhi ye aise jaanlewa attack se lagbhag bach hi gaya tha. '

Buraka jldi se mere samne aa jata hai. Uske right solder se blood nikal raha tha.

Buraka ( mujhe gusse se dekhte hue ) " tum sale kachre bahut jyada hati ho. Dusro ki baat mante nahi ho. "


DING...


[ Enemy's ka resistance bahut high hai. Effect cancel ho gaya hai. ]

Mai ( Buraka ko dekh ke ) " Tum aisi position me nahi ho abhi ki ye sb kah rahe ho. "
" Tum ek baar apne chro taraf ghume kr kyu nahi dekhte. "
" Kya tumhare Soldiers bs itna hi kar sakte the ? "

Buraka jb chro taraf ghum kr dekhta hai to Surprise ho jata hai. Quki uske sare Soldiers mare ja chuke the. Ab waha bs mere hi Soldiers khade the.
Aur Buraka ke sath ke ELVES ki body jagah jagah mari padi thi. Kafi sara khoon bhi wahi snow me fail kr use red color ka bana raha tha.

Buraka ( gusse se ) " tum sale, harami. "
" Ye sare Soldiers gayab ho jayenge jb mai tmhe maar dunga to.


Ran..... Run...
SWOOSSS.....


Itna kah kar Buraka meri taraf bhag kar aane lagta hai. Ye dekh kr mai bhi apne dagger par hath se majbooti bada deta hu. Aur use buraka ki taraf fek deta hu."

Buraka ( Gusse se) " Tum dur se hi apna weapon meri taraf fek rahe . Tum sale...... "

Aur mai apne right hath se DOMINATOR ' S skill ka use krne lagta hu.


DING....


{ [ SKILL : DOMINATOR'S TOUCH Lev. 1 ]
[ ACTIVE skill ]
[ Ise use krne ke liye aapko Mana ( MP ) ki jarurat nahi padegi. ]

[ Aap kisi bhi object ko bina touch kiye control kr skte ho. ] }

Aur mere aisa karte hi mera dagger aur teji se Buraka ki taraf badhne lagta hai.

Buraka ( aake fade dekhte hue ) " Iski to speed phle se bhi adhik badh rahi hai ? "


TAKK....

Lakin fir bhi buraka apna dagger mere dagger ke aage kar deta hai. Jisase mera dagger takra kr dusre side janelagta hai.

AAAHHHHHHHHH........

Tabhi is mauke ka fayda utha kar Vikash, Buraka ko piche se aa kr pakd leta hai. Aur apne puri takat se badane lagta hai.

BUZZZZZZ....

BUZZZZZZ....
BOOMMMMM.......

Aur mere army ke tino MAGICIAN'S uske upar apni puri tarak se Aag barsane lagte hai.
Jisase waha ek bahut hi bhayankar dhamaka hota hai. Chro taraf dhuww fail jata hai. Aur jb wo dhuww waha se hatata hai to.
Buraka Bikul sahi salamat IRON ke pakad se aajadi ho kr niche jamin pr gir raha hota hai. Uske body ke upar ke sare kapde jal gaye the.

Buraka niche jamin pr aa kr meri taraf dekh ke bahut jyada gusse me chillate hue kahta hai " Tum sale sb harami.... "
" Mai tum sb ko maar dunga. "


KUCHHHH.....
Aaaahhhhhh......


Tabhi ek dagger aa kr buraka ke right side ke pasliyo ko acha khasa chir deti hai.
Aur ye attack maine hi apne STEALTH skill ka use karke kiya tha. Buraka is Attack ke karan dard se karah uthata hai.

Mai ( smile krte hue ) " Lagta hai ab ye sb khatam ho gaya. "


Tak....

Lakin tabhi Buraka mera wahi dagger wala hath jldi se pakad leta hai. Aur meri taraf dekh kr gusse se chilla ke kahta hai " Tumhe kya lagta hai ? Tm kiska samna kr rahe ho ?"

SWOOSSS......

DHADAAMMM........
CRACK.... CRACK.....

Abhi Buraka aur kuch kar pata usase pahle hi uske piche khada IRON apni big Axe se full strength ke sath uske upar ek Attack kr deta hai. Jo ki sidhe uske sir pr lagta hai aur Buraka wahi jamin me dher ho jata hai.

Mai ( Buraka ko dekh ke ) " Maine to tmse phle hi kaha tha. "
" Ki ab sb khtam ho gaya hai. "


DING.....


[ Aapne DENGEON ke BOSS ko maar diya hai. ]

DING....

[ Aapne 2 leveled up kr liya hai. ]

Fffuuu......

Mai ek rahat ki saas leta hu. Aur kud se kahta hu ' aakhirkar ye sb khatam ho gaya. '

Lakin tabhi IRON apne weapons se Buraka pr fir se Attack krne jate hai.
Mai ye dekh kr turant hi IRON se kahta hu " Hey ! Hey ! "
" Sab phle hi khatam ho gaya hai. "
" Aaram karo ab. "

Mai ( IRON ko dekh kr apne man me ) ' Bhle hi ye ek shadow ban gaya hai lakin abhi bhi ye ek moti buddhi wala hai. '


Tap.. Tap... Tap...

Mere kahne ke baad IRON ruk jata hai. Fir mai waha baki hunturs ki taraf jane lagta hu.

Mai " Ise dekh kar mujhe future ke bare me tention ho rahi hai. "

Mere waha se jate hi, IRON mud kr IGRIS ki taraf dekhta hai. Jo ki use hi ye krte hue ghur raha tha. Lakin jaise hi IRON uske tarf dekhta hai IGRIS apna sir niche kr leta hai.
Aur ek lambi saas le kr mere piche piche aane lagta hai.
IRON fir baki KNIGHT'S ki taraf dekhta hai. Aisa lag raha tha wo use dekh kr Khush the. Unhe dekh kr IRON apne dono hath utha ke unhe batata hai wo kitna strong hai.
Wo sb bhi apne hath utha ke IRON ki khusi me shamil ho jate hai.

Mai ( sbke paas phuch kr unko dekhte hue ) " Chlo wapas chle. "

2nd C Rank huntur ( confusion ke sath ) " wapas chle, kaha ? "


ZIZZZZZZZZ.....
ZIZZZZZZZ......


Tabhi hmare samne DENGEON ka Gate aa kr open hone lagta hai.

Mai ( gate ki taraf isara krke ) " Gate ke bahar. "

Gate ko dekhte hi chro hunturs bahut jyada kuch ho jaye hai. Dono C Rank huntur to rone khusi se rone tak lagte hai. Aur Ragini aur kirti to aaps me chote bacho ki tarah khusi se taliya bajane lagti hai.

1st C Rank huntur ( rote hue ) " aakhirkar ab hum ghur Wapas ja skte hai. "

2nd C Rank huntur ( niche baith kr rote hue ) " Haa !! "

Mai ( Buraka ki body ko dekh kr apne man me ) ' Ab Iska number hai. '







Aaj ke liye bs itna hi dosto !!

Aapke review nd suggestions ka wait rahega comments ke through !!
Apna pyar aise hi banaye rakhiye !!
Vaise manna padega bhai ye Buraka ne kadi takkar di, akhir de bhi kyo na dungon ka boss jo thahra...
Rider ne apne dimag se akhir vijay hasil kr hi li... Akele yah mumkin nhi tha pr igris or iron ki madad se yah possible hua...
Ab gate khul gya hai to vahi iron ne apni Wah - Wahi shadow solder ko dikha kr li igris anubhavi hai Vo to sant hi rha...rider ab elf boss ko arise karne vala hai dekhte hai kya hota hai dungon ke bahar nikal kr... Superb update bhai sandar jabarjast
 

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Ab tak aapne dekha dosto ki kaise mai IGRIS ko Buraka se fight krne ko bol deta hu. Aur kud mai vikash ke body se uske shadow ko EXTRACT krne lagta hu. Aur uska name IRON rakh deta hu. fir hum tino mil kr buraka se fight krte hue usko maar dete hai. Fir waha gate hmlogo ke samne aa jata hai aur mai ja kr baki chro hunturs se wapas ghr chlne ko kahta hu.


AB AAGE.....

OUTSIDE THE DENGEON

White tiger guild wale Sachin ke sath abhi bhi Gate ke bahar khade the. Aur gate ke open hone ki ek ummid lagaye hue the.

Manoj ( apne hath me bndi hui ghadi ko dekh ke chinta ke sath ) " Ab to raat ke 3 bhi baj gaye hai. "
" Iska matlba DENGEON ke ander lagbhag 1 week bhit cuka hai. "

Manoj ( sachin ke taraf dekh kr ) " Master Sachin ! Aap ghr kyu nahi chle jate ?"
" Aap ghr ja kar thodi der aaram kar lijiye. Hum sb hai yaha. tab tak hm yaha najar rakh lenge. "

Sachin " Mai apne ghr ja kar aaram kaise kr skta hu, jabki mere team members yaha is Gate ke ander fase hue hai ? "
" Mai subah hone tak yahi intejar karunga. "


ZIZZZZZZZ........
ZIZZZZZZZ.....


Aur abhi ye sb yahi bate kr rahe hote hai ki, Gate ke bich se blue color ki energy ka halka halka flow bahar ki taraf hone lagta hai.

Vinay ( confused ho kr ) " Huh ? "
" ye Red Gate to... "

Manoj ( surprise ke sath chillate hue ) " Red Gate open ho raha hai. "

Aur uske baad Red gate wapas se blue gate me change ho jata hai. Aur gate ke ander se kuch log bahar ki taraf aate hue dikhayi dete hai.

Ganesh ( suprise nd khusi ke sath ) " DENGEON clear ho gaya hai. "

Manoj ( khusi se ) " Hunturs bahar aa rahe hai. "

Sachin ( Surprise nd khusi se Gate ki taraf dekhte hue apne man me ) ' Vikash ? '
' kya Vikash DENGEON ko clear krne me safal ho gaya ? '


Tap... Tap... Tap..

Aur Gate se ek ek krke sare hunters bahar niklne lagte hai. Sare hunturs is time khusi ke karan ro rahe the.

Manoj jo bhi hunturs gate se bahr aa raha tha uska name sbke samne bole ja raha tha.

Manoj " Huntur Ragini. "
" 1st C Rank huntur, 2nd C Rank huntur "
" Ye wapas aa gaye. "
" Ye sab survive kr gaye . "

In sb ko dekh ke Manoj ke sath baki sare White Tiger guild wale bhi bhut jyada surprise ho gaye the.


Tap.. Tap..

Inke baad koi aur bhi gate se bahar aata hai.

Manoj ( khusi se chillate hue ) " huntur Rider ! "

Manoj ( mujhe dekh ke apni muthi khusi se band krte hue apne man me kahta hai ) ' Jaisa ki maine socha tha. '

Ji ha wo aakhiri huntur mai tha jo Gate se bahar aaya tha. Mai apna sir niche kiye hue chl raha tha. mere sath kirti thi jo ki bahut hi jyada happy thi bahar aa kr.

Hm sb logo ke bahar aate hi Gate gayab ho jata hai.

Bs hm sb logo ko hi dekh kr sare shocked ho jate hai.

Vinay " Gate gayab ho gaya hai. "

Ganesh ( paresan hote hue ) " Vikash ! Vikash ke sath kya hua ? "
" Aisa kabhi nahi ho skta . "
" Ye sare hi bs surviver hai ? "

Ragini ( dukh se apna sir niche kiye hue ) " Ha ! Bus hum log hi hai. "

Sachin ( shocked ho kr sbko dekhte hue ) " Sirf low Rank ke hunturs hi survive kr paye ?"
" Na ki koi A Rank aur sirf ek B Rank ? "
( Apne man me ) ' Aakhir ander hua kya tha ? '

Mai ( kirti se ) " chlo chalte hai. Mai tmko ghur chod dunga. "

Sachin ( mere kandhe pr hath rakh ke mujhe rokte hue ) " Ruko jara ! Chlo kuch der phle thodi baat krte hai."

Mai ( Sachin ka hath apne kandhe se hatate hue ) " Abhi mai thaka hua hu. "
" Agr tmhare paas puchne ke liye kuch hai to, jao aur apne guild ke members seka kr pucho. "

Mere aisa karne aur kahne se sachin ko gussa aa jata hai aur wo mera kandha is baat kuch jyada power ke sath pakd kr mujhe rokte hue gusse se kahta hai " Ye koi request nahi hai. "
" Mai Sachin hu . White tiger guild ka guild Master. "

Mai ( cold tone me sachin ki taraf back kiye hue hi ) " Ye ek order hai ya koi dhamki. "

Sachin ( gusse se mujhe ghurte hue ) " Hmne is incident me apne 9 Guild members ko khoya hai. "
" Ek Guild master hone ke nate, kya mujhe haq nahi hai ki mai kuch swal puch saku ? "

Mai ( Sachin ki taraf apni cold blue eye se dekhte hue ) " To kya ho gaya. "
" Mai baki bache hue 3 logo ko bachaya hai. " Agar tum master ho to , tumhe nahi lagta ki tmhe mujhe phle sukriya kahna cahiye ? "

Mere aise dekhne se sachin ko mere aakho me aur dekhne me bahut jyada muskil ka samna krna pad raha tha.

Sachin " Tm sahi kah rahe ho. "
" Mai mafi cahta hu tmse. "


Tap... Tap... Tap....

VROOMMMMM......

Fir mai kirti ke apne sath car me baitha kr uske ghr chorne nikal jata hu.
Aur baki sb log hme jate hua bs dekhte rahte hai.

Fir baki ke bache hue 3 hunturs ko blanket aur coffee di jati hai. Taki wo phle se acha mehsoos kr ske.
Fir wo sb bhi kuch normal ho jate hai. Ragini wahi paas me ek jagah baithi coffee pi rahi hoti hai.
Tabhi Sachin, Ragini ke paas aa kr puchta hai aur kahta hai " Miss Ragini ! "

Ragini ( Sachin ko dekh ke ) " Ji boliye ? "

Sachin ( meri taraf dekhte hue ) " Ye kon hai ? "
" Aur ye itna jyada chida hua kyu hai ? "

Ragini ( niche dekh kr sochte hue ) " Mujhe pakka to nahi pata. Lakin Boss monster ko marne ke baad . "
" Ye uske body ke paas khada ho ke 3 times kuch bola tha. Uske baad..... "

Abhi wo aage aur kuch kahti ki Manoj aa jata hai aur bich me hi Sachin se kahta hai " Uski tarf se mai maafi mangta hu master. "
" Aisa is liye hua hoga quki wo thak gaya hoga. Warna wo bura ladka nahi hai. "

Sachin " Nhai ! Ye problem nahi hai. "
" Tmne ise abhi tak recruit kyu nahi kiya hai ? "

Manoj ( Surprise hote hue ) " Huh ? "

Sachin ( mujhe yaad krke apne man me ) ' Mere khilaf itna jyada confidence ke sath wo khada tha. '
' Agr hmari fight hoti hai to mujhe apna ek hath ko gwane ke liye ready rahna cahiye. '

Sachin ( Manoj se ) " use jldi se hmare Guild me bhrti kro. "

Manoj ( apna sir Sachin ke aage jukhaye hue ) " Mai apni puri kosis krunga. "

Sachin " Itna kafi nahi hai. "
" Mai tumhe apna pura support de raha hu. "
" kobi bhi kimat pr Is ladke ko hmare Guild me le kr aao. "

Manoj ( smile me sath ) " Ji smjh gaya. "
( Apne man me ) ' Mai janta tha meri aakhe kabhi galt nahi ho skti hai. '



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Wrooommm......

Mai, Kirti ko uske ghr drop krne le ja raha tha. Use thakan bhi jyada ho rahi thi aur wo kuch dari hui bhi thi to maine use back seat pr sula diya tha. Wo so rahi thi aur mai car chlate hue uski ghr ki taraf ja raha tha.
Bhale hi itni raat ho gayi thi lakin abhi bhi rode pr kuch gadiya aa ja rahi thi. Lakin road lagbhag khali hi thi.
Mai aaram se ek hath se car chlata hu, dusre hath ko mod kr uspr apna sir tikaye hue kuch soch raha tha.

Mai ( man me ) ' kya ye hamare strength me itna antar hone ke karan hua hai ? '
' kya bekar ki baat hai. '

Quki jb maine Buraka ke shadow ko EXTRACT krne ke liye try kiya tha. Mere tino try fail ho gaye the. Aur aisa kyu hua tha iska mujhe abhi tak koi idea nahi laga tha.
Is baat se mai itni der se gusse me tha.
Ki mere paas ak bhut acha chance tha ek itne strong person ko apne army me lane ka aur mai fail ho gaya.

Lakin fir mujhe kuch yaad aata hai. Aur mai apne inventory se Buraka ko maar kr mile hue uske dagger ko dekhne lagta hu.


DING.....

[ ITEM : BURAKA'S DAGGER ]

[ ITEM CLASS : A ]
[ TYPE : DAGGER ]

[ Buraka dhwara use kiye jane wala ek dagger. Lightweight magic usehone ke karan ye chlane wale ko aur bhi jyada furtila banati hai. ]

Mai ( dagger ko dekh kr apne man me ) ' Mujhe kushi hai ki, mai kam se kam waha se ye to la paya. '

Fir kuch der me kirti ka ghar ja aa jata hai to mai car rok kar Kirti ko jagata hu.
Kirti jldi se uth jati hai aur apna ghr ko dekh kr car se niche utar jati hai.
Kirti window ke paas khadi thi.

Mai ( kirti ko dekhte hue ) " Tumne acha kaam kiya. "

Kirti ( apna sir jutha kr ) " Aap ghar aaram se aur safely pahuch jana. "

Mai " thik hai. "

Mai car ko start krke jane hi wala hota hu ki kirti jldi se kahti hai " Hey bhaiya. "

Mai ( apne man me ) ' Bhaiya ? '

Kirti ( pyar se meri taraf dekh kr ) " Aaj ke liye sukriya bhaiya. "
" Mai aapse kal... Nahi ! Mai aapse baad me milti hu. "


Tap... Tap... Tap....

Iske baad wo apne ghr me jane lagti hai.

Mai ( man me ) ' baad me ? '
( Fir me car ki watch se time dekhta hu jisme 3:50 am ho raha tha ) " Ahhh !! Ab lagbhag raat khtam hi hone wali hai. "

Aur mai Wapas se car ko start krke apne ghr ki taraf le jate hue kahta hu " Matlb mujhe aaj se wapas se Shubham ke sath raid suru karna hai. "



~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~

IN MORNING
RIDER HOME


Shubham mere ghr ke BUILDING ke niche khada tha. Aaj fir usne apne safety ke liye kuch armour phle hue the. Lakin ye pahle wale se alag the.
Is baar usne sirf helmet , apne hatho aur solder pr hi armor phna hua tha.

Mai ( Shubham ko dekh ke apni hasi rokte hue ) " Tm in sab ke sath ek cab bhi le kr aaye ho ? "
" Mai to soch raha tha ki mai tumhe lene aa jau. "
( Apne man me ) ' aisa bs tum hi kr skte ho. '

Shubham ( smile ke sath ) " Rider Tum hi wo ek person ho jo meri help kr rahe ho. To mujhe hi yaha tumhe lene aana chahiye. "
" Chlo chalte hai. "

Mai car me baith jata hu. Aur Shubham car ko aage bada deta hai.

Mai ( Shubham se ) " Raste me hi hme kisi aur ko bhi pick up Krna hai. "

Shubham ( sochte hue ) " Huh ? Kise ? "

Mai car me baithe hue hi kirti ko call krta hu aur kuch der me wo call utha leti hai.

Mai ( phone pr ) " Kirti apne ghr se bahar aa jao. Mai tmhe lift de deta hu. "

Shubham ( Surprise hote hue ) " Kirti ? Kahi ye wahi kirti ko nahi.... "

Mai " Haa tm sahi soch rahe ho. "

Shubham ( apne man me ) ' Ye, uska no. Bhi janta hai. Aur usase bahut friendly tarike se baat bhi kr raha hai. '
' kya Rider aur kirti ke bich koi gahra rishta to nahi hai ? '

Tb tak kuch der me Shubham, kirti ke ghr ke paas phuch jata hai. Fir wo car rok kr mujhse kahta hai.

Shubham " Hum phuch gaye hai rider. "
( Thoda confusion ke sath) " Rider , kya mai ab se Kirti ko bhabhi kahna suru kr du ? "

Mai ( shocked hote hue ) " Kya... ? Wo to bs meri sister ki frnd hai. "

Tabhi thori der me kirti bhi niche aa jati hai. Aaj pahli baar Kirti apni huddi wali jacket nahi pahn kr nahi aayi thi. Aaj Usne Green colour ka ek top ke sath ek blue color ki jeans phni hui thi.


Tap... Tap... Tap....

Thori der me hi wo mere paas aa kr pyar se kahti hai " Good morning Bhaiya. "
( Shubham ki taraf dekh kr ) " Good morning Raid captain "

Shubham ( kirti se ) " ohh !! Hello kirti. "

Aur Kirti aa kr car me piche hi mere bagal me baith jati hai.

Mai ( kirti se pyar se ) " Kya kl raat tmne kuch der ki nind li ? "

Kirti ( smile krte hue ) " Nahi mai so nahi pati thi. Maine kosis kiya lakin mai nahi so payi. "

Mai " Tab to tum jarur taki hui hogi. Yaha car me thodi der ke liye rest kr lo. "

Kirti " Aur aapka kya bhaiya ? "

Mai " Ha main bhi thodi der ke liye so paya tha. Quki mujhe ghr phucahne tak hi 4am ho gaye the. "

Kirti " Thik hai. "

Wahi Shubham ki aakhe aur muh khula ka khula rah jata hai ye sb sun kr. Wo bhut jyada shocked ho gaya tha.

Shubham ( apne man me shocked ke sath ) ' Raat ? '
' so nahi paa rahi thi ? '
' thak gayi thi ? '
' Rider 4am ko ghr phucha. '
' Aur ye kah raha tha ki wo bs iske sister ki frnd hai. '

Fir kud ko control karke Shubham car start krke raid ki jagah pr le jate hue kahta hai " Ummmm... Rider ? "

Mai " ha bolo. "

Shubham ( Darte hue ) " Kirti abhi minar hai. Wo 18+ ki nahi hui hai. "

Mai ( confused hote hue ) " To ? "

Shubham " Nahi kuch nahi ! "

Shubham dar ke karan mujhe aage kuch nahi bolta hai. Aur car chlate hue kud se sochne lagta hai ' Ye Normal nahi hai. '
' Mai apne ordinary standard se Rider ko judge nahi kr skta. '

Fir sari bato ko bhulate hue Shubham car chlan lagta hai.

Mai " jldi chlo, chl kr aaj ka kaam khtam krte hai. "

Shubham ( jose se ) " jaisa tum kaho Rider ! "

Kirti " Ji bhaiya. "






Aaj ke liye bs itna hi dosto !!

Aapke review nd suggestions ka wait rahega comments ke through !!
Apna pyar aise hi banaye rakhiye !!
To Jaisa socha tha vaisa hi kuchh hua, rider elf boss ki soul ko extract nhi kr saka, isme jarur uske dimag me gunjne vali avaj ke karan aisa hua hoga...
Sachin se sidhe Uski ankho me dekh kr baat karne pr Sachin ka reaction dekhne layak tha usne rider ko chhod mafi bhi maag li ek tarah se, or Manoj ko full support karte huye rider ko jald se jald apni guild me samil karne ka kaha sath me apna ek hath gvane or rider ke confidence Ki bhi tarif ki...
Shubham ko Kirti or rider ke Bich ki bate sunkr full to shock hua pda hai bole to confuse, use Lagta hai ki rider or Kirti ke Bich kal raat ko kuci ku hua hai pr use kya pta ki vo log ek hafte se dungon ke bhitar fase huye the or apni jindgi ke liye lag rhe the...
Dekhte hai shubham ki yah confusing kaha tk jati hai or Nomit ka kya reaction rahta hai rider ke vapas aane pr...
Superb update bhai sandar jabarjast
 
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Vaise manna padega bhai ye Buraka ne kadi takkar di, akhir de bhi kyo na dungon ka boss jo thahra...
Sahi kaha DENGEON ka boss tha. Aise hi thodi nipat leta.
Rider ne apne dimag se akhir vijay hasil kr hi li... Akele yah mumkin nhi tha pr igris or iron ki madad se yah possible hua...
Haa rider ne use dekhte hi sb smjh liya tha kya karna hai.
Ab gate khul gya hai to vahi iron ne apni Wah - Wahi shadow solder ko dikha kr li igris anubhavi hai Vo to sant hi rha...
Iron cahe jo bhi ho hai to Vikash hi na moti buddhi wala.a
rider ab elf boss ko arise karne vala hai dekhte hai kya hota hai dungon ke bahar nikal kr... Superb update bhai sandar jabarjast
Hm ye to ab tak aapko pata c hi gaya hoga.
To Jaisa socha tha vaisa hi kuchh hua, rider elf boss ki soul ko extract nhi kr saka, isme jarur uske dimag me gunjne vali avaj ke karan aisa hua hoga...
Sahi ja rahe ho aap Xabhi bhai. Lakin usme bhi ek bahut bada raj hai.
Sachin se sidhe Uski ankho me dekh kr baat karne pr Sachin ka reaction dekhne layak tha usne rider ko chhod mafi bhi maag li ek tarah se, or Manoj ko full support karte huye rider ko jald se jald apni guild me samil karne ka kaha sath me apna ek hath gvane or rider ke confidence Ki bhi tarif ki...
Haa uski aakho me dekhte hi use feel ho gaya ye normal banda nahi hai. Kahi takat hai isme.
Shubham ko Kirti or rider ke Bich ki bate sunkr full to shock hua pda hai bole to confuse, use Lagta hai ki rider or Kirti ke Bich kal raat ko kuci ku hua hai pr use kya pta ki vo log ek hafte se dungon ke bhitar fase huye the or apni jindgi ke liye lag rhe the...
Shubham bechara ek nasamjh bacha hai jise duniyadari ki utni abhi smjho nahi hai. To jo dekhta hai waisa hi sochne lag jata hai.
Dekhte hai shubham ki yah confusing kaha tk jati hai or Nomit ka kya reaction rahta hai rider ke vapas aane pr...
Superb update bhai sandar jabarjast
Hm ye sb to aage hi pata chlega.
Baki aapka bahut bahut jyada sukriya Xabhi bhai. Itne ache se Update read krke uske main main point ko note krne ke liye.
Keep supporting ☺️👍
 
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