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Fantasy Lucifer- The fallen angel(completed)

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WRITER’s NOTE

School times se likhne ka bahut shauk tha mujhe mostly poems hi likhta tha. School me hi ek ladki mili bahut pyaari thi. College ke 3rd year tak relationship chala fir vo chali gaye door. Uske baad kabhi socha nahi tha dobara kuch likunga. Bilkul man hi nahi karta tha. Nashe to jaise jindagi ban gaye the. Pehle bhi nashe karta tha lekin uske baad jada ho gaye. Akela rahna acha lagne lagega aur dheere dheere sab door hote chale gaye. Main akela hi bacha tha. Tab kahi se xf ka pata chala aur pata nahi kyu aise hi ek raat pehli story ka first update post kar diya. Ek medium mil gaya tha mujhe kuch share karne ka aur acha bhi lagne laga tha. Dheere dheere vapas likhna start kiya aur es baar stories. Xf par kuch stories likhi fir vo band hua to yaha aa gaya. Aur vohi silsila yaha bhi kamyaab raha. Aap sabko sayad idea nahi hoga ki jo thoda bahut interact hota hai humara yaha vo kitna important ho sakta hai kisi ki life me. Es waqt mere pass almost sab kuch hai lekin agar kisi ko kuch share karna chahu to aisa person nahi hai esliye beech beech me kuch updates me apni situation likh deta hu to acha lagta hai. I hope ki humara sath aise hi aage bana rahe.

Ek mew story ka dimag me kuch idea hai lekin kab start hogi eske liye abhi sure nahi hu

May be main kuch dino ke liye rehab chala jau ya fir kuch aur mil jaye sath chalne ke. Lets see

In the end i want to thank each and everyone of you guys who has supported me and gave me so much love. Means a lot

Thank you so much guys. Jaldi hi milte hai ek new story ke sath tab tak ke liye 👋
 

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Guruji- tum mujhe baar baar aake uske karname mat bataya karo
Agar maine lucifer ko bejha hai to kuch soch samjh ke hi bejha hoga esliye uske baare ne sochna ban karo
Aadmi- lekin guruji usne do aadmiyo ko zinda jala diya

Guruji- unka waqt aagya tha aur vaise bhi ye to prakarti ka niyam hai jo aaya hai usse jana to hoga hi
Aadmi- lekin hum kon hote hai ye batane wale ki kab kise jana hai?
Lucifer ko ye haq kisne diya?

Guruji- jab insaano ke bich insaniyat khatam ho jati hai tab bhagwan khud lucifer jaise hawaan ko vaha bejhte hai taki uski hawaniyat dekh ke insaaniyat jaag sake
Aadmi- aisa bhi to ho sakta hai ki vo pehle se bhi jada kharab ho jaye?

Guruji- tum jante nahi ho usse
Abhi to bas suruvaat hai
Ye kahani bahut kuch dikhane wali hai
Aadmi- aap bhi kaha us nashedi writer ki baato me aa rahe ho?
Usse khud nahi pata hota vo kab kya kar raha hota hai

Guruji- lekin uske character ko pata hai ki vo kya kar raha hai
Aadmi- aur ashmita ka kya?
Vo etni jaruri kyu hai?

Guruji- pucho ussi writer se
Kya pata bata de
Aadmi- main ja raha hu
Lekin abhi bhi vahi bolunga lucifer ko vaha bejhne ka faisla theek nahi hai

Dusri taraf

Suresh- sab theek tha aaj?
Guard- sir sab theek tha
Ma'am ghar se college aur college is sidha ghar hi jati hai

Suresh- good
Kuch aisa dikha jo unusual ho?
Guard- aisa to kuch nahi tha sir aaj

Suresh- dhayan rakho
Jaise hi kuch aisa lage bina kuch soche samjhe maar dena baki main sambhal lunga
Guard- okay sir

Suresh- aur meri betiyo ko kuch nahi pata chalna chahiye
Guard- hum duriya bana ke rahte hai

Suresh- etni door bhi mat rahna ki kuch galat ho jaye tumhre pahuchne ke pehle hi
Guard- hum dhyan rakhenge sir

Suresh- theek hai jao ab
Guard vaha se chale jate hai aur suresh kuch sochne lag jata hai

"Agar ashmita aur Tara ko college chhudva ke business me laga du to jada sahi rahega, yaha apno ke bich me rahenge aur jada khatra bhi nahi hoga
Agar jada hi college ki karegi to bol dunga ki exam exam dene chale jao mujhe business me help chahiye main akela pad raha hu, Agar aisa bolunga to mana to bilkul nahi karengi aur aisa bolna hi padega mujhe aur koe option bhi to nahi hai

College me to kuch bhi ho sakta hai unke sath aur har time guards ka sath hona bhi muskil hi hai
Ek second ki bhi chuk muskil me daal sakti hai vaise bhi Sala dusman kuch jada hi hogaye hai humare
Mujhe koe risk nahi lena chahiye
Jaldi se jaldi mujhe dono se baat karni padegi aur unhe samjhna padega "
Suresh yehi sab sochta raha ki kaise karna jada sahi rahega kyuki usse dusra koe option bhi nahi dikh raha tha

Vahi tisri taraf

1-"Kaha hai vo dono jinko un ladkiyo ke peeche dala tha?"
2-"Bhai pata nahi phone bhi nahi utha rahe aur kuch Intel bhi nahi aa rahi ab to "
1-"Unke ghar jake pata kiya kya?"
2-"Kiya tha lekin vo ghar bhi nahi pahuche hai tab se"
1-"Kaha mar gaye sale etna important kaam hai"
2-"Bhai kisi aur ko laga dete hai?"
1-"Lagana to padega hi lekin sath me ye bhi pata karo ki unka kya hua?
Kisi ne tapka to nahi diya hai?"
2-"Bina kisi reason ke?
Muskil lagta hai bhai"
1-"Aisa bhi to ho sakta hai ki koe reason ho aur hume hi na pata ho?"
2-" theek hai bhai main karta hu kuch"
1-"jaldi kar agar humare admiyo ko kuch hua hai to hume jaldi pata karna padega kahi sala koe humari hi fielding lagaye batha ho"
2- "main abhi lagata hu kuch bando ko kaam pe
1-"yaha kyu khada hai fir ja aur kaam kar"

Vapas lucifer ki taraf

Raat ka waqt tha aur lucifer apne real face par aa raha tha vo bahut control karne ki kosis kar raha tha ki aisa na ho lekin uska control khud ke upar se khatam sa hota ja raha tha

Lucifer- ye kya ho raha hai mere sath
Aise to pehle kabhi nahi hua ki main apne aap real face me aajau
Kuch to gadbad hai yaha
Agar aisa hi chalta raha to main bilkul apna control kho dunga aur mujhe raat ko chhup kar rahna padega
Mujhe kuch na kuch to eska ilaaz karna hoga aur vo bhi jaldi se jaldi lekin kaise?
Guruji se puchu?
Lekin vo humesha ki tarah mujhe kuch batayenge nahi
Fir kya karu main?
Abhi to yaha aaye kuch hi din hue hai aur abhi se aisa hone lag gaya pata nahi aage kya kya hoga
Guruji ne mujhe kaha fasa diya
Dhayan lagana suru karta hu vapas se usse se ab kuch ho sakta hai
Bahut saalo se dhayan lagaya hi nahi maine kya pata ussi vajah se sab ho raha ho
Aaj se vapas dhayan lagana suru karunga

Yaha sab ke life me kuch na kuch chod to chal hi raha tha aur sab apne apne tareeko se usse suljane ki kosis bhi kar rahe the lekin dekhna ye hoga ki kon kar pata hai
Kyuki sab aapas me interlinked to hai hi aur essi vajah se Agar ek success hua to automatically dusra haar jayega aur agar ek haar gaya to dusra jeet jayega
Bahut locha hai bhai

Aise hi subah hogaye aur lucifer ka phone bajane laga
Lucifer- kya hua?
Naag- bhai police kutto ki tarah hume doond rahi hai
Aapko bola tha na ki police walo ko maroge to vo hume doguna marenge

Lucifer- mujhe kyu phone kar raha hai?
Naag- aapki vajah se hi to ye sab hua hai

Lucifer- apni deal thi jo dono side se puri ho gaye
Maine tere aadmi bahar nikale aur tu mujhe un ladkiyo ki information de raha hai
Eske baad jo tere sath hoga usme maine kaise involve ho gaya?
Naag- bade matlabi ho bhai
Aapki vajah se hi main fas raha hu
Kuch dino me bande to vaise bhi nikal jate ab Sala police meri aur gand todenge

Lucifer- mujhe 24 ghanto me kuch achi new suna aur main tujhe bacha lunga police se lekin 24 hours ke ander ander
Naag- ab main kya batau?
Sab to pehle hi bata chuka hu

Lucifer- ye mujhe nahi pata
24hours hai tere pass
Aur lucifer phone kaat deta aur bahar aajata hai

Aaj Sunday tha to college vagra to band the esliye vaha jana nahi tha to yuhi gumne lag gaya

Abhi market ke side se nikal raha tha ki madhuri ma'am sabjiya lete dikh gaye aur usne vo kiya jo nahi karna chahiye tha vo ma'am ke pass pahuch gaya

Lucifer- ma'am maas (flesh) jada acha hota hai body ke liye
Bilkul ma'am ke pass jake bola
Ek baar to madhuri ma'am thoda dar gaye lekin fir lucifer ko dekh ke vapas sabjiya lene lag gaye

Lucifer- mujhe aisa kyu lag raha hai ki main yaha hoke bhi nahi hu?
Ma'am- kyuki tumhe yaha nahi hona chahiye

Lucifer- acha ma'am main soch raha tha ki agar aap mujhe apne hatho ka khana khilao to main aapko ek favor de sakta hu
Ma'am- kaisa favor?

Lucifer- aap us favor ke badle kuch bhi maang sakte ho
Aur kuch bhi ye mera matlab kuch bhi hai
Ma'am- khane ke badle favor maang ke khane ki bejjati nahi karungi main

Lucifer- to fir bina favor ke khila do
Ma'am- aajana shayam ko

Lucifer- shayam hi to ho rakhi hai
Ma'am ne ab tak samaan le liya tha aur beg utha ke chalne lag gaye thi

Lucifer- theek hai bye
Lucifer ma'am ko jate dekh ke bola
Ma'am ruki ek second ke liye piche mudi fir tumhra naam kya hai?

Lucifer- shishy (student)
Vaise aap mujhe lucifer bula sakti hai
Ma'am- bye
Aur Ma'am bolke vaha se chali gaye

Lucifer thoda gumta ghumta ashmita ke ghar ka ek round mara, sab check kiya aur vapas aagaya

Abhi raste me kuch sochta aa raha tha ki ma'am ke ghar jaye ya nahi fir yaad aaya ki sala raat ho gaye hai aur kahi vaha chehra na badal jaye bc gand fat jayegi sab ki esliye ye plan cancel kar diya aur apne hi flat aagaya....
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Superb update
 
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Inaaya apne office chali gaye aur vaha se lucifer ashmita ke ghar
Ab vo kisi ki baat kab se manene laga ki inaaya ki maan kar kuch nahi karta?

Gusse me to humesha hi rahta tha aur aaj to aur jada aa raha tha
Sidha gate teji se kholte hue vo ashmita ke ghar ghusa vaha hall me hi ashmita aur Tara bathi thi

Lucifer ko gusse me dekh kar hi ashmita samjh gaye thi ki kya hone wala hai abhi

Lucifer- baap kaha hai tera?
Ashmita- lucifer please meri baat sun

Lucifer- main puch raha hu baap kaha hai tera?
Ashmita- please sun na lucifer
Main unki taraf se tujhse maafi mangti hu, please gussa shant karle
Galti hogaye unse
Main samjhaungi unhe

Lucifer- ya to tu bata de mujhe ki vo kaha hai ya fir main apne tarike se dundoga aur anjaam theek nahi hoga
Ashmita- main galti maan rahi hu na
Please na lucifer hum dono(vo aur tara) ka unke alava aur koe nahi hai
Please samjh na Lucifer

Lucifer- nahi bataegi tu?
Main fir lagau apne bando ko kaam par?
Ashmita- kya etni hi importance hai meri teri life me?
Tu meri ek baat nahi maan sakta?

Lucifer- nahi maan sakta
Aur kuch?
Tara- lucifer manti hu unse galti hue hai aur hum maafi bhi maang rahe hai
Inaaya hume jo saja degi vo hume accept hogi lekin please tum kuch mat karo

Lucifer- saja inaaya nahi main dunga
Aur jaan bujh kar ki gaye galti galti nahi hoti
Tara- kya karoge tum?

Lucifer- insaan ko realise hona chahiye ki usse kab kya karna chahiye
Ashmita- tujhe realise hai?
Tu kab konsa kaam sahi tarike se karta hai?
Manti hu tujhe inaaya se pyaar hai lekin esse tumhe humare mamlo me aane ka hak kisne de diya?

Lucifer- mujhe majbur mat kar ashu
Anjaam acha nahi hoga
Ashmita- tu meri inaaya se baat kara de
Agar vo bol degi ki usne tujhe allow kiya hai to main bich se hat jaungi

Lucifer- nahi Hati to mujhe hatana bhi aata hai
Ashmita- to tu hata hi le

Lucifer- so this is the end?
Ashmita- this is the end Lucifer

Lucifer- acha hai fir
Dekh ab tu mujhe aur kya karta hu main tere baap ke sath usko bhi
Aur agar hai himmat to mujhe rok ke dikha

Etna bol kar lucifer vaha se chala gaya aur pata nahi kitne salo ke baad ashmita ki aankhon me aashu chhod gaye
Uske baap ki vajah se aaj usne almost Lucifer ko kho hi diya
Vo inaaya ko, arjun ko to pehle hi kho chuki thi ab bas lucifer bacha tha aur vo bhi ja chuka tha

Uski himmat nahi bachi kuch karne ki
Badi muskilo se Tara ne usse soffe par bathaya aur pani pilakar normal karne ki kosis karne lagi

Lucifer to gusse me tha hi vo vaha se sidha Naag ke pass chala gaya jo kuch karne me laga hua tha

Lucifer- naag
Mujhe suresh mc chahiye aaj ki aaj
Chahe ashmita ne usse kahi bhi chhupa rakha ho
Mujhe vo chahiye matlab chahiye
Naag- kon suresh bhai?

Lucifer- suresh raichand mc
Ashmita ka baap suresh
Mujhe vo chahiye
Naag- kya kar diya usne?
Kyu etne gusse me ho bhai aap?

Lucifer- naag mera dimag bahut kharab hai aur ab main dekhunga nahi ki samne mere kon hai esliye chhup chhap usse leke aa mere samne
Naag- main bolta hu apne bando ki

Lucifer- jaldi bol aur saraab leke aa mere liye
Naag- jee bhai
Aur naag vaha se jaldi se bhag gaya usse bhi pata chal chuka tha ki agar vahi raha to gand sut sakti hai

Mansi- bhaiya pani
Lucifer- naag tere se aaj tak pani manga hai maine?
Saraab leke aa saraab
Lucifer etne gusse me tha ki usne ye bhi mahsus kiya ki pani dene wali mansi hai naag nahi

Mansi- bhaiya???
Bahut pyaar se boli to lucifer ko mud kar dekhna hi pada ki kon hai aur kon usse bhaiya bol raha hai
Mud ke dekha to mansi hath me pani liye khadi thi

Lucifer- nahi chahiye
Mansi- pee lo bhaiya
Gussa baad me kar lena
Aapko kon hi rokta hai?

Lucifer ko pata nahi kyu gussa nahi aaya mansi par aur usne glass le liya aur thoda sa pee kar vapas vahi rakh diya

Lucifer- naag ko bejhna kaha rah gaya vo?
Lucifer- mujhe bata dijiye kya kaam hai
Main free hi hu main kar dungi

Lucifer- mujhe kisi ko marna hai aur bahut maarna hai
Esliye naag ko bejh do kaha hai vo
Mansi- vo to gaye

Lucifer- kaha gaya vo?
Usko maine daru lane ko bola tha
Mansi- main le aati hu
Unhone bola ki bhai ne kuch kaam ki kaha hai esliye ja raha hu aur mujhe pani ki bol ke gaye

Lucifer- bahut din ho gaye uski class nahi li hai esliye jada udne lag gaya hai vo
Mansi- aap kyu gussa ho?
Aap to humesha haste khelte rahte ho?

Lucifer- humesha hasne wala jaruri to vo khush ho?
Mansi- ye to mujhe bhi pata hai
Ashmita didi se ladae hue hai kya?

Lucifer- usko bhi pyaar hazam nahi hua
Aaj vo mere khilaaf khadi ho gaye?
Maine socha tha main matter karta hu uske liye lekin koe baat nahi
Sabko sab kuch milega
Mansi- kya kiya unhone?

Lucifer- vo apne baap ko bachane ke liye mere raste aa gaye
Mansi- ye to koe bhi karta
Apne pita ko bachane ke liye to bache hi samne aate hai na

Lucifer- jo galat hai vo galat hai
Mansi- lekin apne to apne hote hai na

Lucifer- koe apna nahi hota aaj ke time me
Mansi- aap aankhen khol kar dekhiye bahut log dikhenge aapko

Lucifer- naag to chutiya hai
Sach bata raha hu
Pata nahi tumne kya dekh liya usme
Aur ashmita ne apna rang dikha diya
Inaaya ke sath kabhi na kabhi sath chhut hi jayega
Ma'am ke sath to kya hi bolu?
Aur hai kon?
Kabhi Sali ye life achi lagti hai to kabhi pehli
Ye emotions to nahi the tab
Mansi- emotions ache hote hai
Unke jariye hum dikha to sakte hai ki kaisa feel kar rahe hai nahi to ghut ghut ke hi mar jayenge

Lucifer- marna bhi to sabke naseeb me nahi hota
Mansi- hahaha etni jaldi mukti kisko hi milti hai?

Lucifer- ye bhi sach hi hai
Etni jaldi mukti kaha hi milegi

Ring ring ring ring ring
Lucifer ka phone bajane laga dekha to ashmita ka tha esliye uthaya hi nahi
Bahut baar ashmita ki call aaye lekin lucifer ne nahi uthaya

Fir inaaya ka aagya pehle to socha ashmita ki vajah se kar rahi hogi esliye eska bhi nahi uthau lekin fir apne aap attend hogya

Lucifer- hello
Inaaya- kaha ho?

Lucifer- bahar hu
Kya hua?
Inaaya- ye ashmita mujhe baar baar call kyu kar rahi hai?

Lucifer- mujhe kya pata?
Inaaya- tum sath nahi ho?

Lucifer- aur bhi bahut kaam hote hai mujhe
Inaaya- jaise?

Lucifer- are tum kaam bolo na
Inaaya- main tumhre flat aaungi aaj

Lucifer- theek hai le aaunga main
Inaaya- saaf safae kar lena

Lucifer- tum aakar kar dena
Mujhe bahar kaam hai thoda
Late ho jaunga
Inaaya- tum suresh uncle ko to kuch nahi karne wale?

Lucifer- main kya karunga?
Ngo ja raha hu main to
Inaaya- bahut ache se janti hu tumhe
Ghar saaf kar lena

Lucifer- tum jab free ho jao to call kar dena sath me kar lenge
Inaaya- theek hai OK bye

Lucifer- bye
Aur phone kaat deta hai

Mansi- aap to bol rahe the koe nahi hai?
Lucifer- koe nahi bachega
Thank you pani ke liye
Chalta hu ab

Mansi- kaha ja rahe ho?
Aap to saraab peene aaye the na?
Lucifer- kuch kaam hai
Bye

Aur vaha se payal ke pass chala jata hai
Vaha sab kuch ready tha bas samaan deport karna hai

Lucifer ne pehle hi bande laga diye the uske liye vo aaj bas sab check karne aaya tha

Lucifer- sab theek?
Payal- abhi to theek hai

Lucifer- to problem kaha hai?
Payal- jab kuch nahi bikega tab problem aaegi

Lucifer- bik jayega
Tension mat lo
Payal- aap theek ho?

Lucifer- ha mujhe kya hoga?
Payal- nahi bas aise hi laga mujhe
Sahi me theek ho aap?

Lucifer- sahi me theek hai
Online platform par bhi daal sakte hai
Vaha se bhi kuch na kuch to bikega hi
Payal- hmm maine bhi socha hai es bare me

Lucifer- ek baar logo ko pata chal jayega
Ye quality wise bahut acha hai aur design bhi kafi acha hai
Bahut bhagega
Payal- hope so

Lucifer- baki koe problem ho to batao?
Buddhe log theek hai?
Payal- uncle aunties bhi to bol sakte ho?

Lucifer- samjh gaye na tum?
Kaise hai sab?
Koe aakhiri din me to nahi pahuch gaya?
Payal- uska to kya hi pata

Arohi- didi vo samaan load hogya
Lucifer- ye kon hai?

Arohi- main arohi
Bahut suna hai aapke bare me
Didi bahut baatein karti hai aapke bare
Lucifer- hai?
Ye to mujhe nahi pata tha
Kya baat karti hai?

Payal- kuch nahi karti
Bas ye bata rahi thi ki tum kitne helpful ho
Lucifer- kya naam hai tumhra?

Arohi- arohi
Lucifer- arohi ye baatein karti hai didi tumhri?

Arohi- nahi nahi
Bahut kuch bolti hai jaise aap ek handsome egoistic person ho
Thode sanki bhi ho lekin kabhi kabhi pyaare bhi lagte ho
Payal- bas bas bahut ho gaya
Kuch bhi bolti hai pagal ladki

Lucifer- arohi tum chalo
Hum baatein karte hai tumhri didi ko karne do kaam
Payal- arohi ander jao tum
Aur kuch baatein nahi honi chahiye aap dono me

Lucifer- kyu nahi ho sakti?
Etni sartyvaan ladki se main kyu nahi baat karunga?
Arohi tum mera number le lo
Payal- arohi jao

Arohi ander bhag gaye
Payal- bachi hai vo
Lucifer- mujhe bhi dikhta hai
Andha thodi hu

Payal- uske sath kuch nahi
Lucifer- oye meri najar tum par hai aur tum apni chhoti behan ki taraf dhakel rahi ho mujhe?

Payal- main kahi nahi dhakel rahi
Aur mujh par bhi najar mat rakho
Lucifer- main to rakhunga
Meri najar
Acha koe kaam ho to kar lena mujhe bahut kaam hai Main nikalta hu

Ab inaaya ne bola hai to safae bhi to karni hi padegi aur safae karne ke liye safae ka samaan bhi lena hoga to vohi lene vaha se lucifer nikal gaya.....
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UPDATE-91
Inaaya apne office chali gaye aur vaha se lucifer ashmita ke ghar
Ab vo kisi ki baat kab se manene laga ki inaaya ki maan kar kuch nahi karta?

Gusse me to humesha hi rahta tha aur aaj to aur jada aa raha tha
Sidha gate teji se kholte hue vo ashmita ke ghar ghusa vaha hall me hi ashmita aur Tara bathi thi

Lucifer ko gusse me dekh kar hi ashmita samjh gaye thi ki kya hone wala hai abhi

Lucifer- baap kaha hai tera?
Ashmita- lucifer please meri baat sun

Lucifer- main puch raha hu baap kaha hai tera?
Ashmita- please sun na lucifer
Main unki taraf se tujhse maafi mangti hu, please gussa shant karle
Galti hogaye unse
Main samjhaungi unhe

Lucifer- ya to tu bata de mujhe ki vo kaha hai ya fir main apne tarike se dundoga aur anjaam theek nahi hoga
Ashmita- main galti maan rahi hu na
Please na lucifer hum dono(vo aur tara) ka unke alava aur koe nahi hai
Please samjh na Lucifer

Lucifer- nahi bataegi tu?
Main fir lagau apne bando ko kaam par?
Ashmita- kya etni hi importance hai meri teri life me?
Tu meri ek baat nahi maan sakta?

Lucifer- nahi maan sakta
Aur kuch?
Tara- lucifer manti hu unse galti hue hai aur hum maafi bhi maang rahe hai
Inaaya hume jo saja degi vo hume accept hogi lekin please tum kuch mat karo

Lucifer- saja inaaya nahi main dunga
Aur jaan bujh kar ki gaye galti galti nahi hoti
Tara- kya karoge tum?

Lucifer- insaan ko realise hona chahiye ki usse kab kya karna chahiye
Ashmita- tujhe realise hai?
Tu kab konsa kaam sahi tarike se karta hai?
Manti hu tujhe inaaya se pyaar hai lekin esse tumhe humare mamlo me aane ka hak kisne de diya?

Lucifer- mujhe majbur mat kar ashu
Anjaam acha nahi hoga
Ashmita- tu meri inaaya se baat kara de
Agar vo bol degi ki usne tujhe allow kiya hai to main bich se hat jaungi

Lucifer- nahi Hati to mujhe hatana bhi aata hai
Ashmita- to tu hata hi le

Lucifer- so this is the end?
Ashmita- this is the end Lucifer

Lucifer- acha hai fir
Dekh ab tu mujhe aur kya karta hu main tere baap ke sath usko bhi
Aur agar hai himmat to mujhe rok ke dikha

Etna bol kar lucifer vaha se chala gaya aur pata nahi kitne salo ke baad ashmita ki aankhon me aashu chhod gaye
Uske baap ki vajah se aaj usne almost Lucifer ko kho hi diya
Vo inaaya ko, arjun ko to pehle hi kho chuki thi ab bas lucifer bacha tha aur vo bhi ja chuka tha

Uski himmat nahi bachi kuch karne ki
Badi muskilo se Tara ne usse soffe par bathaya aur pani pilakar normal karne ki kosis karne lagi

Lucifer to gusse me tha hi vo vaha se sidha Naag ke pass chala gaya jo kuch karne me laga hua tha

Lucifer- naag
Mujhe suresh mc chahiye aaj ki aaj
Chahe ashmita ne usse kahi bhi chhupa rakha ho
Mujhe vo chahiye matlab chahiye
Naag- kon suresh bhai?

Lucifer- suresh raichand mc
Ashmita ka baap suresh
Mujhe vo chahiye
Naag- kya kar diya usne?
Kyu etne gusse me ho bhai aap?

Lucifer- naag mera dimag bahut kharab hai aur ab main dekhunga nahi ki samne mere kon hai esliye chhup chhap usse leke aa mere samne
Naag- main bolta hu apne bando ki

Lucifer- jaldi bol aur saraab leke aa mere liye
Naag- jee bhai
Aur naag vaha se jaldi se bhag gaya usse bhi pata chal chuka tha ki agar vahi raha to gand sut sakti hai

Mansi- bhaiya pani
Lucifer- naag tere se aaj tak pani manga hai maine?
Saraab leke aa saraab
Lucifer etne gusse me tha ki usne ye bhi mahsus kiya ki pani dene wali mansi hai naag nahi

Mansi- bhaiya???
Bahut pyaar se boli to lucifer ko mud kar dekhna hi pada ki kon hai aur kon usse bhaiya bol raha hai
Mud ke dekha to mansi hath me pani liye khadi thi

Lucifer- nahi chahiye
Mansi- pee lo bhaiya
Gussa baad me kar lena
Aapko kon hi rokta hai?

Lucifer ko pata nahi kyu gussa nahi aaya mansi par aur usne glass le liya aur thoda sa pee kar vapas vahi rakh diya

Lucifer- naag ko bejhna kaha rah gaya vo?
Lucifer- mujhe bata dijiye kya kaam hai
Main free hi hu main kar dungi

Lucifer- mujhe kisi ko marna hai aur bahut maarna hai
Esliye naag ko bejh do kaha hai vo
Mansi- vo to gaye

Lucifer- kaha gaya vo?
Usko maine daru lane ko bola tha
Mansi- main le aati hu
Unhone bola ki bhai ne kuch kaam ki kaha hai esliye ja raha hu aur mujhe pani ki bol ke gaye

Lucifer- bahut din ho gaye uski class nahi li hai esliye jada udne lag gaya hai vo
Mansi- aap kyu gussa ho?
Aap to humesha haste khelte rahte ho?

Lucifer- humesha hasne wala jaruri to vo khush ho?
Mansi- ye to mujhe bhi pata hai
Ashmita didi se ladae hue hai kya?

Lucifer- usko bhi pyaar hazam nahi hua
Aaj vo mere khilaaf khadi ho gaye?
Maine socha tha main matter karta hu uske liye lekin koe baat nahi
Sabko sab kuch milega
Mansi- kya kiya unhone?

Lucifer- vo apne baap ko bachane ke liye mere raste aa gaye
Mansi- ye to koe bhi karta
Apne pita ko bachane ke liye to bache hi samne aate hai na

Lucifer- jo galat hai vo galat hai
Mansi- lekin apne to apne hote hai na

Lucifer- koe apna nahi hota aaj ke time me
Mansi- aap aankhen khol kar dekhiye bahut log dikhenge aapko

Lucifer- naag to chutiya hai
Sach bata raha hu
Pata nahi tumne kya dekh liya usme
Aur ashmita ne apna rang dikha diya
Inaaya ke sath kabhi na kabhi sath chhut hi jayega
Ma'am ke sath to kya hi bolu?
Aur hai kon?
Kabhi Sali ye life achi lagti hai to kabhi pehli
Ye emotions to nahi the tab
Mansi- emotions ache hote hai
Unke jariye hum dikha to sakte hai ki kaisa feel kar rahe hai nahi to ghut ghut ke hi mar jayenge

Lucifer- marna bhi to sabke naseeb me nahi hota
Mansi- hahaha etni jaldi mukti kisko hi milti hai?

Lucifer- ye bhi sach hi hai
Etni jaldi mukti kaha hi milegi

Ring ring ring ring ring
Lucifer ka phone bajane laga dekha to ashmita ka tha esliye uthaya hi nahi
Bahut baar ashmita ki call aaye lekin lucifer ne nahi uthaya

Fir inaaya ka aagya pehle to socha ashmita ki vajah se kar rahi hogi esliye eska bhi nahi uthau lekin fir apne aap attend hogya

Lucifer- hello
Inaaya- kaha ho?

Lucifer- bahar hu
Kya hua?
Inaaya- ye ashmita mujhe baar baar call kyu kar rahi hai?

Lucifer- mujhe kya pata?
Inaaya- tum sath nahi ho?

Lucifer- aur bhi bahut kaam hote hai mujhe
Inaaya- jaise?

Lucifer- are tum kaam bolo na
Inaaya- main tumhre flat aaungi aaj

Lucifer- theek hai le aaunga main
Inaaya- saaf safae kar lena

Lucifer- tum aakar kar dena
Mujhe bahar kaam hai thoda
Late ho jaunga
Inaaya- tum suresh uncle ko to kuch nahi karne wale?

Lucifer- main kya karunga?
Ngo ja raha hu main to
Inaaya- bahut ache se janti hu tumhe
Ghar saaf kar lena

Lucifer- tum jab free ho jao to call kar dena sath me kar lenge
Inaaya- theek hai OK bye

Lucifer- bye
Aur phone kaat deta hai

Mansi- aap to bol rahe the koe nahi hai?
Lucifer- koe nahi bachega
Thank you pani ke liye
Chalta hu ab

Mansi- kaha ja rahe ho?
Aap to saraab peene aaye the na?
Lucifer- kuch kaam hai
Bye

Aur vaha se payal ke pass chala jata hai
Vaha sab kuch ready tha bas samaan deport karna hai

Lucifer ne pehle hi bande laga diye the uske liye vo aaj bas sab check karne aaya tha

Lucifer- sab theek?
Payal- abhi to theek hai

Lucifer- to problem kaha hai?
Payal- jab kuch nahi bikega tab problem aaegi

Lucifer- bik jayega
Tension mat lo
Payal- aap theek ho?

Lucifer- ha mujhe kya hoga?
Payal- nahi bas aise hi laga mujhe
Sahi me theek ho aap?

Lucifer- sahi me theek hai
Online platform par bhi daal sakte hai
Vaha se bhi kuch na kuch to bikega hi
Payal- hmm maine bhi socha hai es bare me

Lucifer- ek baar logo ko pata chal jayega
Ye quality wise bahut acha hai aur design bhi kafi acha hai
Bahut bhagega
Payal- hope so

Lucifer- baki koe problem ho to batao?
Buddhe log theek hai?
Payal- uncle aunties bhi to bol sakte ho?

Lucifer- samjh gaye na tum?
Kaise hai sab?
Koe aakhiri din me to nahi pahuch gaya?
Payal- uska to kya hi pata

Arohi- didi vo samaan load hogya
Lucifer- ye kon hai?

Arohi- main arohi
Bahut suna hai aapke bare me
Didi bahut baatein karti hai aapke bare
Lucifer- hai?
Ye to mujhe nahi pata tha
Kya baat karti hai?

Payal- kuch nahi karti
Bas ye bata rahi thi ki tum kitne helpful ho
Lucifer- kya naam hai tumhra?

Arohi- arohi
Lucifer- arohi ye baatein karti hai didi tumhri?

Arohi- nahi nahi
Bahut kuch bolti hai jaise aap ek handsome egoistic person ho
Thode sanki bhi ho lekin kabhi kabhi pyaare bhi lagte ho
Payal- bas bas bahut ho gaya
Kuch bhi bolti hai pagal ladki

Lucifer- arohi tum chalo
Hum baatein karte hai tumhri didi ko karne do kaam
Payal- arohi ander jao tum
Aur kuch baatein nahi honi chahiye aap dono me

Lucifer- kyu nahi ho sakti?
Etni sartyvaan ladki se main kyu nahi baat karunga?
Arohi tum mera number le lo
Payal- arohi jao

Arohi ander bhag gaye
Payal- bachi hai vo
Lucifer- mujhe bhi dikhta hai
Andha thodi hu

Payal- uske sath kuch nahi
Lucifer- oye meri najar tum par hai aur tum apni chhoti behan ki taraf dhakel rahi ho mujhe?

Payal- main kahi nahi dhakel rahi
Aur mujh par bhi najar mat rakho
Lucifer- main to rakhunga
Meri najar
Acha koe kaam ho to kar lena mujhe bahut kaam hai Main nikalta hu

Ab inaaya ne bola hai to safae bhi to karni hi padegi aur safae karne ke liye safae ka samaan bhi lena hoga to vohi lene vaha se lucifer nikal gaya.....
Nice one bhai.
Ab naag to Suresh ko pakad ke jarur layega. Lakin dekhte hai Lucifer kuch karta bhi hai ya nahi.
Aur ab in dono ki fight kitne lambi chlegi ye bhi dekhne wali baat hai.
 

The king

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Inaaya apne office chali gaye aur vaha se lucifer ashmita ke ghar
Ab vo kisi ki baat kab se manene laga ki inaaya ki maan kar kuch nahi karta?

Gusse me to humesha hi rahta tha aur aaj to aur jada aa raha tha
Sidha gate teji se kholte hue vo ashmita ke ghar ghusa vaha hall me hi ashmita aur Tara bathi thi

Lucifer ko gusse me dekh kar hi ashmita samjh gaye thi ki kya hone wala hai abhi

Lucifer- baap kaha hai tera?
Ashmita- lucifer please meri baat sun

Lucifer- main puch raha hu baap kaha hai tera?
Ashmita- please sun na lucifer
Main unki taraf se tujhse maafi mangti hu, please gussa shant karle
Galti hogaye unse
Main samjhaungi unhe

Lucifer- ya to tu bata de mujhe ki vo kaha hai ya fir main apne tarike se dundoga aur anjaam theek nahi hoga
Ashmita- main galti maan rahi hu na
Please na lucifer hum dono(vo aur tara) ka unke alava aur koe nahi hai
Please samjh na Lucifer

Lucifer- nahi bataegi tu?
Main fir lagau apne bando ko kaam par?
Ashmita- kya etni hi importance hai meri teri life me?
Tu meri ek baat nahi maan sakta?

Lucifer- nahi maan sakta
Aur kuch?
Tara- lucifer manti hu unse galti hue hai aur hum maafi bhi maang rahe hai
Inaaya hume jo saja degi vo hume accept hogi lekin please tum kuch mat karo

Lucifer- saja inaaya nahi main dunga
Aur jaan bujh kar ki gaye galti galti nahi hoti
Tara- kya karoge tum?

Lucifer- insaan ko realise hona chahiye ki usse kab kya karna chahiye
Ashmita- tujhe realise hai?
Tu kab konsa kaam sahi tarike se karta hai?
Manti hu tujhe inaaya se pyaar hai lekin esse tumhe humare mamlo me aane ka hak kisne de diya?

Lucifer- mujhe majbur mat kar ashu
Anjaam acha nahi hoga
Ashmita- tu meri inaaya se baat kara de
Agar vo bol degi ki usne tujhe allow kiya hai to main bich se hat jaungi

Lucifer- nahi Hati to mujhe hatana bhi aata hai
Ashmita- to tu hata hi le

Lucifer- so this is the end?
Ashmita- this is the end Lucifer

Lucifer- acha hai fir
Dekh ab tu mujhe aur kya karta hu main tere baap ke sath usko bhi
Aur agar hai himmat to mujhe rok ke dikha

Etna bol kar lucifer vaha se chala gaya aur pata nahi kitne salo ke baad ashmita ki aankhon me aashu chhod gaye
Uske baap ki vajah se aaj usne almost Lucifer ko kho hi diya
Vo inaaya ko, arjun ko to pehle hi kho chuki thi ab bas lucifer bacha tha aur vo bhi ja chuka tha

Uski himmat nahi bachi kuch karne ki
Badi muskilo se Tara ne usse soffe par bathaya aur pani pilakar normal karne ki kosis karne lagi

Lucifer to gusse me tha hi vo vaha se sidha Naag ke pass chala gaya jo kuch karne me laga hua tha

Lucifer- naag
Mujhe suresh mc chahiye aaj ki aaj
Chahe ashmita ne usse kahi bhi chhupa rakha ho
Mujhe vo chahiye matlab chahiye
Naag- kon suresh bhai?

Lucifer- suresh raichand mc
Ashmita ka baap suresh
Mujhe vo chahiye
Naag- kya kar diya usne?
Kyu etne gusse me ho bhai aap?

Lucifer- naag mera dimag bahut kharab hai aur ab main dekhunga nahi ki samne mere kon hai esliye chhup chhap usse leke aa mere samne
Naag- main bolta hu apne bando ki

Lucifer- jaldi bol aur saraab leke aa mere liye
Naag- jee bhai
Aur naag vaha se jaldi se bhag gaya usse bhi pata chal chuka tha ki agar vahi raha to gand sut sakti hai

Mansi- bhaiya pani
Lucifer- naag tere se aaj tak pani manga hai maine?
Saraab leke aa saraab
Lucifer etne gusse me tha ki usne ye bhi mahsus kiya ki pani dene wali mansi hai naag nahi

Mansi- bhaiya???
Bahut pyaar se boli to lucifer ko mud kar dekhna hi pada ki kon hai aur kon usse bhaiya bol raha hai
Mud ke dekha to mansi hath me pani liye khadi thi

Lucifer- nahi chahiye
Mansi- pee lo bhaiya
Gussa baad me kar lena
Aapko kon hi rokta hai?

Lucifer ko pata nahi kyu gussa nahi aaya mansi par aur usne glass le liya aur thoda sa pee kar vapas vahi rakh diya

Lucifer- naag ko bejhna kaha rah gaya vo?
Lucifer- mujhe bata dijiye kya kaam hai
Main free hi hu main kar dungi

Lucifer- mujhe kisi ko marna hai aur bahut maarna hai
Esliye naag ko bejh do kaha hai vo
Mansi- vo to gaye

Lucifer- kaha gaya vo?
Usko maine daru lane ko bola tha
Mansi- main le aati hu
Unhone bola ki bhai ne kuch kaam ki kaha hai esliye ja raha hu aur mujhe pani ki bol ke gaye

Lucifer- bahut din ho gaye uski class nahi li hai esliye jada udne lag gaya hai vo
Mansi- aap kyu gussa ho?
Aap to humesha haste khelte rahte ho?

Lucifer- humesha hasne wala jaruri to vo khush ho?
Mansi- ye to mujhe bhi pata hai
Ashmita didi se ladae hue hai kya?

Lucifer- usko bhi pyaar hazam nahi hua
Aaj vo mere khilaaf khadi ho gaye?
Maine socha tha main matter karta hu uske liye lekin koe baat nahi
Sabko sab kuch milega
Mansi- kya kiya unhone?

Lucifer- vo apne baap ko bachane ke liye mere raste aa gaye
Mansi- ye to koe bhi karta
Apne pita ko bachane ke liye to bache hi samne aate hai na

Lucifer- jo galat hai vo galat hai
Mansi- lekin apne to apne hote hai na

Lucifer- koe apna nahi hota aaj ke time me
Mansi- aap aankhen khol kar dekhiye bahut log dikhenge aapko

Lucifer- naag to chutiya hai
Sach bata raha hu
Pata nahi tumne kya dekh liya usme
Aur ashmita ne apna rang dikha diya
Inaaya ke sath kabhi na kabhi sath chhut hi jayega
Ma'am ke sath to kya hi bolu?
Aur hai kon?
Kabhi Sali ye life achi lagti hai to kabhi pehli
Ye emotions to nahi the tab
Mansi- emotions ache hote hai
Unke jariye hum dikha to sakte hai ki kaisa feel kar rahe hai nahi to ghut ghut ke hi mar jayenge

Lucifer- marna bhi to sabke naseeb me nahi hota
Mansi- hahaha etni jaldi mukti kisko hi milti hai?

Lucifer- ye bhi sach hi hai
Etni jaldi mukti kaha hi milegi

Ring ring ring ring ring
Lucifer ka phone bajane laga dekha to ashmita ka tha esliye uthaya hi nahi
Bahut baar ashmita ki call aaye lekin lucifer ne nahi uthaya

Fir inaaya ka aagya pehle to socha ashmita ki vajah se kar rahi hogi esliye eska bhi nahi uthau lekin fir apne aap attend hogya

Lucifer- hello
Inaaya- kaha ho?

Lucifer- bahar hu
Kya hua?
Inaaya- ye ashmita mujhe baar baar call kyu kar rahi hai?

Lucifer- mujhe kya pata?
Inaaya- tum sath nahi ho?

Lucifer- aur bhi bahut kaam hote hai mujhe
Inaaya- jaise?

Lucifer- are tum kaam bolo na
Inaaya- main tumhre flat aaungi aaj

Lucifer- theek hai le aaunga main
Inaaya- saaf safae kar lena

Lucifer- tum aakar kar dena
Mujhe bahar kaam hai thoda
Late ho jaunga
Inaaya- tum suresh uncle ko to kuch nahi karne wale?

Lucifer- main kya karunga?
Ngo ja raha hu main to
Inaaya- bahut ache se janti hu tumhe
Ghar saaf kar lena

Lucifer- tum jab free ho jao to call kar dena sath me kar lenge
Inaaya- theek hai OK bye

Lucifer- bye
Aur phone kaat deta hai

Mansi- aap to bol rahe the koe nahi hai?
Lucifer- koe nahi bachega
Thank you pani ke liye
Chalta hu ab

Mansi- kaha ja rahe ho?
Aap to saraab peene aaye the na?
Lucifer- kuch kaam hai
Bye

Aur vaha se payal ke pass chala jata hai
Vaha sab kuch ready tha bas samaan deport karna hai

Lucifer ne pehle hi bande laga diye the uske liye vo aaj bas sab check karne aaya tha

Lucifer- sab theek?
Payal- abhi to theek hai

Lucifer- to problem kaha hai?
Payal- jab kuch nahi bikega tab problem aaegi

Lucifer- bik jayega
Tension mat lo
Payal- aap theek ho?

Lucifer- ha mujhe kya hoga?
Payal- nahi bas aise hi laga mujhe
Sahi me theek ho aap?

Lucifer- sahi me theek hai
Online platform par bhi daal sakte hai
Vaha se bhi kuch na kuch to bikega hi
Payal- hmm maine bhi socha hai es bare me

Lucifer- ek baar logo ko pata chal jayega
Ye quality wise bahut acha hai aur design bhi kafi acha hai
Bahut bhagega
Payal- hope so

Lucifer- baki koe problem ho to batao?
Buddhe log theek hai?
Payal- uncle aunties bhi to bol sakte ho?

Lucifer- samjh gaye na tum?
Kaise hai sab?
Koe aakhiri din me to nahi pahuch gaya?
Payal- uska to kya hi pata

Arohi- didi vo samaan load hogya
Lucifer- ye kon hai?

Arohi- main arohi
Bahut suna hai aapke bare me
Didi bahut baatein karti hai aapke bare
Lucifer- hai?
Ye to mujhe nahi pata tha
Kya baat karti hai?

Payal- kuch nahi karti
Bas ye bata rahi thi ki tum kitne helpful ho
Lucifer- kya naam hai tumhra?

Arohi- arohi
Lucifer- arohi ye baatein karti hai didi tumhri?

Arohi- nahi nahi
Bahut kuch bolti hai jaise aap ek handsome egoistic person ho
Thode sanki bhi ho lekin kabhi kabhi pyaare bhi lagte ho
Payal- bas bas bahut ho gaya
Kuch bhi bolti hai pagal ladki

Lucifer- arohi tum chalo
Hum baatein karte hai tumhri didi ko karne do kaam
Payal- arohi ander jao tum
Aur kuch baatein nahi honi chahiye aap dono me

Lucifer- kyu nahi ho sakti?
Etni sartyvaan ladki se main kyu nahi baat karunga?
Arohi tum mera number le lo
Payal- arohi jao

Arohi ander bhag gaye
Payal- bachi hai vo
Lucifer- mujhe bhi dikhta hai
Andha thodi hu

Payal- uske sath kuch nahi
Lucifer- oye meri najar tum par hai aur tum apni chhoti behan ki taraf dhakel rahi ho mujhe?

Payal- main kahi nahi dhakel rahi
Aur mujh par bhi najar mat rakho
Lucifer- main to rakhunga
Meri najar
Acha koe kaam ho to kar lena mujhe bahut kaam hai Main nikalta hu

Ab inaaya ne bola hai to safae bhi to karni hi padegi aur safae karne ke liye safae ka samaan bhi lena hoga to vohi lene vaha se lucifer nikal gaya.....
Nice update bhai waiting for next update
 

ANUJ KUMAR

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Lucifer raat ko vapas aaya aur apne flat ka gate khol raha tha ki piche se aawaz aae
Ma'am- tum to khane ke liye aa rahe the?
Lucifer piche muda ma'am ki taraf dekha fir unke flat ki taraf chalne laga

Lucifer- lo main aa gaya
Ma'am- kal bola tha tumne to?

Lucifer- Ma'am aaj ko hi kal maan lo na
Ma'am- kya?

Lucifer- Ma'am agar koe kuch kar raha ho aur aap us kaam ko kisi aur din chahte ho to its better ki aap aaj hi vo din maan lo aur khush raho
Ma'am- tum ajeeb ho

Alia- mumma mujhe bukh lag rahi hai
Alia ander se chhilate hue bahar aae aur bahar hall me lucifer aur Ma'am ko khada dekha lekin lucifer se kuch kaha nahi

Alia- mumma bhukh lag rahi hai
Ma'am- ha beta aaj maine aapka favorite khana banaya hai
Chalo hand wash karo aur dinning table par jake batho
Alia- okay mamma
Aur vo bathroom ki taraf dood jati hai

Ma'am- tum aa rahe ho kya?
Lucifer- etna bol rahe ho to kha leta hu Ma'am

Ma'am- veg hai
Lucifer- adaat to nahi hai lekin fir bhi try kar lete hai

Fir sab dinning table par bath jate hai aur khana start karte hai

Ma'am- tum kya karte ho?
Lucifer- kuch kaam

Ma'am- vohi puch rahi hu main
Lucifer- hifaazat kar raha hu kisi ki

Ma'am- mujhe to lagta hai tumhe hi hifazaat ki jarurat hai
Lucifer- Ma'am kabhi kabhi vo kaam bhi karna pad jata hai jiske bare me hum kabhi sochte bhi nahi hai

Ye sunte hi Ma'am apne past me chali jati hai aur sab yaad aane lagta hai fir vo sab bhi jo halaato ne unse karaya

Lucifer- you good Ma'am?
Ma'am ek dam se hosh me aae fir ha ha mujhe kya hoga

Alia- aap fir juth bol rahe ho
Humesha aise hi karti hai mumma
Baat karte karte kahi hi sochne lag jati hai
Ma'am- acha maine kab kiya bataya jara?

Alia- abhi to kiya aapne
Ma'am- esse pehle kab kiya?

Alia- humesha hi karte ho aap
Mujh to bata sakte ho na main to bari ho gaye hu ab
Ma'am- ale ale sorry beta mujhe pata nahi chala ki aap bari ho gaye ho
Ab se main aapse sab share karungi

Alia- aap mera mazak uda rahe ho
Ma'am- main kyu aapka mazak udaungi?
Main to bilkul mazak nahi uda rahi

Alia- nahi aap bana rahe ho
Main aapse naraj hogaye aur vo apne room me bhag gaye
Actually uska khana to hogya tha esliye Alia bas masti kar rahi thi

Ma'am- pagal ladki
Ma'am muskurate hue boli
Lucifer- you two are blessed to have each other

Ma'am- yeah I know
Tumhre mummy Papa kaha hai?
Lucifer- pata nahi

Ma'am- what do you mean by pata nahi?
Lucifer- jis chhij ke bare me mujhe pata hi nahi hai uske bare me kya hi batau main aapko?

Ma'am- I'm sorry
Lucifer- koe baat nahi
Ma'am kisi ko dost banane ke liye kya karna padta hai?

Ma'am- dosti ke liye dil milne chahiye
Lene dene se dost nahi bante
Lucifer- dil ke alava kuch aur batao Ma'am

Ma'am- tumhe kisse dost banana hai?
Lucifer- hai koe batao na Ma'am
Agar samne wala aapko bilkul pasand nahi karta lekin aapki majburi hai usse dosti karne ki aur esse samne wale ko bhi fayda ho to kaise kare?

Ma'am- fayda dekh ke ki gaye dosti jada din nahi chalti
Lucifer- kuch din hi chalani hai
Batao na Ma'am
Aap ko to bahut time hogaye yaha rahte hue

Ma'am- dekho sachae hi sabse acha option hai
Tum sach sach bata do fir dekho kya hota hai
Lucifer- yehi to nahi kar sakta

Ma'am- dekho friendship is very pure thing esme fayda nuksaan nahi dekha jata
Do logo ki mutual understanding hoti hai
Vo dono sath me kaise rahte hai, kaise feel karte hai ,khush rahte hai ya boredom feel hoti hai
Ye sab chhije dekhi jati hai
Lucifer- enme to kuch mujhe feel hi nahi hoti
Shit Ma'am aap se nahi ho payega Ma'am

Ma'am- tum mujhe sach batao
Kya pata main kuch kar saku
Lucifer- ma'am main chalta hu
Raat hone lag gaye hai
It's not good for me to stay at your place this late
And thank you for the food
Ye bol kar lucifer bina Ma'am ki koe baat sune vaha se chala gaya lekin jata jata Alia ki chocolates Ma'am ko de di thi ki vo Alia ko de dengi morning me

Apne flat par aakar kuch nahi hua bas aage kya karna hai ye hi sochta raha

Dusri taraf

Bunty- bhai pata chal gaya
Ek ladke ne college me mara tha apne bando ko aur vahi vaha se utha ke leke gaya
Sumer- to bc pata kar na koe hai vo ladka aur kyu utha ke leke gaya hai

Bunty- main pure college me pata kar chuka hu koe nahi janta usse yaha tak ki college me bhi pichle kuch dino se hi dikhne laga hai
Bas Park me batha rahta hai
Sumer- mujhe bahane mat de
Vo ladka chahiye to chahiye mujhe

Bunty- kuch aur bhi pata chala hai uske bare me
Sumer- to kya mere se permission lega batane ki
Jaldi bhok

Bunty- un dono ladkiyo se baat karte dekha gaya tha us ko aur ek vaha teacher hai college me hi padhati hai usse bhi baat karte dekha hai
Sumer- un dono ladkiyo se to door raho abhi
Vo teacher ko utha ke la usse jarur kuch na kuch pata hoga

Bunty- kahi hungama na ho jaye
Teacher hai vo
Sumer- college me se thodi utha ke Lana hai
Dekh kaha rahti hai aur fir mokka dekb ke utha lena
Ab bas vohi sahara haj

Bunty- vo to maine pata kar liya *** es building me rahti hai apni beti ke sath
Sumer- utha lao to maa beti ko
Vohi pahuchaegi us ladke tak

Uske baad kuch aur baatein hoti hai fir bunty vaha se chala jata hai


Tara- yaar tum log khane par kyu apni dusmani nikalte ho?
Gussa apni jagah hai aur khana apni jagah
Ashmita- mujhe bukh nahi hai didi

Tara- dekh tu agar khana kha legi to us ladke ko main shabak sikhane me teri help karungi
Ashmita- mujhe nahi chahiye aapki help
Usko to main akele dekhungi
Bahut pasand hai na usko dusro ki zindagi me dhakhal dena dekhna uski zindagi nahi ruth gaye usse to kehna

Tara- ha ha main maan liya lekin ab khana to kha le
Agar bhukhe pet rahi aur bimar pad gaye to kaise badla legi usse?
Ashmita- etni kamjor nahi hu main
Main bas ye soch rahi hu ki vo aaya to esi month hai fir usse mere bare me etna sab kaise pata hai?

Tara- ashu humare bare me sabko pata hota hai
Chahe baat chhoti se chhoti hi kyu na ho usko bhi bahut badi dikhaya jata hai
Ashmita- lekin etni purani baat jiske bare me bahut kam logo ko pata hai ye usse kaise pata chal gaye?

Tara- kya pata vo general way me bola ho?
Ashmita- nahi
Uske aawaz me confidence tha
Usse pata hai sab kuch lekin kaise?

Tara- tu khana to kha fir dekhna kitna tez dimag chalega aur fat se sab yaad aane lag jayega
Ashmita- mujhe sach me bhukh nahi hai
Ab to usse sabak sikha ke dawat lungi main

Tara- pagal hai kya?
Tab tak kya bhukhi bathi rahegi?
Please ashu zid chhod aur khana kha le
Ashmita- lao khana do pehle
Main kha rahi hu fir aap mujhe akela chhod dogi
Promise?

Tara- ha baba promise
Chhod dungi tujhe akele

Uske baad ashmita jaldi jaldi thoda bahut khana khati hai aur Tara vaha se chali jati hai

Kafi der tak ashmita sochti rahti hai ki kya karna hai uske baad kisi ko call karke lucifer ke bare me information nikalne ko bolti hai

Ashmita se lucifer ke bole sabad sahan nahi ho rahe the agar lucifer usse aur kuch bol deta to sayad usse jada fark nahi padta lekin jab pyaar par baat aati hai to log aksar Lund se sochne lag jate hai aur ashmita ke pass to Lund bhi nahi tha

Jiske pass tha vo to sab ki zindagi me tuffan lake aaram se chhilam fuk raha tha apne flat par

Chehre par koe bhav nahi the bas aankhon me bahut sara nasha tha
Ab uska yaha man lagane lag gaya tha jisma ek bada reason tha ki yaha bahut sundar sundar ladkiya thi aur ab lucifer ki najar vaha ja chuki thi to bahut jaldi vo ras chusna bhi start kar hi dega

Abhi to vaise bhi lucifer ke pass jada options nahi the lekin jis tarah se vo dikhta tha usse jada mahnat bhi nahi karni padegi bahut sare options dundne ke liye

Yehi sab sochte sochte fukte fukte subah hogaye

Aur lucifer tayar hoke naag se milne chala gaya

Naag lucifer ke liye bahut bada assets tha kyuki ek to vo lucifer se darta tha aur dusra uski ek gang thi,choti hi sahi gang to thi hi
Esliye usse musibat me nikalna lucifer ke liye faydeman ho sakta tha

Vo vaha gaya naag ko kuch important tips di aur ye bhi bataya ki kaise sab solve ho sakta hai lekin khud ne kuch nahi Kiya
Vo ideas deke naag se favors bhi le raha tha aur khud kuch na karke limelight se bhi bach raha tha

Uske baad vapas ashmita ke ghar ke ghar ki taraf chal diya

Uski kismat achi thi ya kharab ye to pata nahi lekin ashmita gusse me laal peeli hue chhat par ghum rahi thi

Lucifer vahi khada ho gaya aur wait karne laga ki ashmita usse notice kare aur uska intezaar jada der nahi raha kyuki ashmita ki najar uspar ja chuki thi aur uska gussa aur jada bhad gaya tha

Vo bhagte hue niche aae aur lucifer ko kuch sunane wali hi thi ki vo bol pada
Lucifer- I'm sorry us din ke liye, mujhe aisa nahi bolna chahiye tha actually I was in bad phase aur tum mere piche hi pad gaye thi esliye galti se mere muh se nikal gaya
I never in my life disrespected any women and this was the first time
Har kisi ki zindagi me uske pehle pyaar ka bahut mahtav hota hai aur uski jagah koe aur nahi le sakta
MUJHE LIFE ME KABHI PYAAR MILA NAHI ESLIYE BHI THODA KAM RELATE KAR PATA HU
lekin agar kabhi galat karta hu to usse maan bhi leta hu
Es baar meri galti thi aur uske liye main maafi chahta hu
If you want to punish.. actually I'm already being punished so if you want I can do anything you want for you just my way of apologizing

I'm really really sorry.....
awesome update
 

Death Kiñg

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Lucifer ne Inaaya se apne pyaar ka izhaar kar diya hai... Bohot hi unexpected scene tha ye, especially tab jab wo Saanvi se bichhadne ki yaadon ko jeekar aa raha tha... Of course, Lucifer jaanta hai ke use uska pyaar kabhi bhi nahi mil sakta, bichhadna hi uske pyaar ki niyati hai, fir bhi usne Inaaya se pyaar ka izhaar kar diya... Kya Inaaya ka chehra Saanvi jaisa hai..? Maybe yahi ek kaaran ho sakta hai jiski wajah se Lucifer apne aap ko rok hi nahi paaya... Khair, Inaaya aur Lucifer ne kuchh pal saath bhi bitaaye, Inaaya apne aap ko poori tarah se Lucifer ko samarpit sa kar chuki hai... Ab dekhne laayak hoga ki Lucifer ki kismat in dono ke saath kya khel khelti hai... Btw. Kahin na kahin Inaaya bhi jaanti hi hai ke Lucifer sadaiv uske paas nahi rahega aur ek na ek din chala hi jaayega...

As expected Raichand ne apna kameenapan dikha hi diya... Jaisa ke usne plan kiya tha usike mutabik Rathore ki aur uski premika yaani Samira ki photographs viral kar di... Suresh business mein aage rehne ke liye hi ye sab kar raha hai ye to saaf hai, par Rathore aur Inaaya ki baaton se ye bhi laga ke pehle bhi Suresh kuchh na kuchh ghatiya harkaten karta hua aaya hai... Maybe, kaafi pehle se donon ke beech business rivalry chali aa rahi ho... Aur bilkul possible hai ki Inaaya jo aaj Ashmita se itni nafrat karti hai, uske pichhe jo bhi wajah hai, uska kaaran bhi Suresh hi raha ho... Khair, ab Rathore aur Samira ne shaadi karne ka faisla liya hai aur Inaaya ne bhi apni sehmati de di hai... Dekha jaaye to shayad yahaan yahi sahi faisla hai kyonki maybe shaadi se Rathore ki media mein maili ho rahi image kuchh hadh tak behtar ho jaaye...

Lucifer ka reaction is baat par waisa hi tha jaisa ki expected tha... Parantu, Inaaya ne use saaf mana kar diya ke wo Suresh ko koyi nuksaan na pahunchaye... But obviously, wo to wahi karega jo use sahi lagega, and for a change, yahaan jo Lucifer ne kiya wahi karna sahi bhi tha... Aisa keh dena ke Lucifer gusse mein ulta seedha kar deta hai, galat hai, afterall wo jaane kitne samay tak heaven mein nyay karta aaya hai aur doshion ko saza deta aaya hai, to yahaan wo galat faisla kaise le sakta hai..? Ashmita ka reaction bhi jaayaz tha, afterall wo to apne pita ka bachav karegi hi... Wo bhi jaanti hai ke galti Suresh ki hi thi, but it's not possible for her to witness what Lucifer would do with her father... Beharhal, ek aur baar lagta hai ke Ashmita aur Inaaya ke beech ki khaayi gehri ho jaane waali hai...

Idhar, Ashmita aur Lucifer ke beech huyi behes ne ek tarah se unki dosti ke beech bhi daraar paida kar di hai... Ashmita bhi us moment par ajeeb kashmakash mein fansi huyi dikhayi pad rahi thi... Par shayad uske shabdon ne Lucifer ko trigger kar diya... Ab dekhna hoga ke Ashmita aage kya karegi aur kya uske aur Inaaya ke beech ki deewar aur bhi badi ho jaayegi...

Wahin, Lucifer ne Naag ko kaam saunpa hai ki wo Suresh ka pata lagaye aur use lekar aaye... Kya wo ye kaam kar paayega, us se bada sawaal kya abhi tak Suresh underground nahi ho chuka hoga..? Btw. Shayad Naag ko Inaaya hi phone karke mana kar de, yadi use Ashmita se is ghatna ka pata chalta hai to... Idhar, Maansi aur Lucifer ke beech ki conversation bhi rochak thi... Lucifer ne naa hi uske saamne apni aadat anusaar koyi bakwaas ki aur naa hi krodh dikhaya... Maybe, Maansi ka bhi heaven aur Lucifer se koyi talluk ho..? Payal ke NGO ka bhi kaam poora ho chuka hai aur ab bas selling phase hi baaki reh gaya hai... Lagta to yahi hai ki Payal ki mehnat ka phal use zaroor milega... Idhar Aarohi sachmein satyavadi nikli aur Lucifer ke saamne hi Payal ki baatein khol di...

Eda aur Raaj ko hosh aa chuka hai aur ye bhi pata chal gaya ke un dono khud hi apni ye haalat ki thi... Dono hi baaghi ho rahen hain, ye saaf hai aur shayad jaldi hi ek bada toofaan bhi heaven mein aane waala hai jiska nateeja shayad hamesha ki tarah Lucifer ko hi bhugatna pade... Par Supreme aur Eda ke beech huyi baaton ka kya arth tha? “Eda ka to samajh aata hai ke wo Lucifer ke liye kyon lad rahi hai", ye baat kahi thi Supreme ne Raaj se... Kya past mein Eda aur Raaj ke beech bhi kuchh tha... I don't think so, kyonki ye saaf dikhaya gaya hai ke Raaj aur Eda ek doosre se prem karte hain... Wahin ek past scene mein Lucifer ne ye kaha tha ke wo Eda ko pasand karta hai par wo us se baat bhi nahi karti... Ab dekhna hoga ke ye dono aage kya karenge aur uske reaction mein Supreme ka step kya hoga...

Teenon hi updates bohot badhiya the bhai... Inaaya aur Lucifer ke beech prem ka izhaar hua, wo scene behad hi khubsurat tha... Wahin Maansi aur Lucifer ke beech ki conversation bhi bohot badhiya likhi aapne...

Outstanding Updates Bhai & Waiting For Next...
 
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