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Fantasy Lucifer- The fallen angel(completed)

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School times se likhne ka bahut shauk tha mujhe mostly poems hi likhta tha. School me hi ek ladki mili bahut pyaari thi. College ke 3rd year tak relationship chala fir vo chali gaye door. Uske baad kabhi socha nahi tha dobara kuch likunga. Bilkul man hi nahi karta tha. Nashe to jaise jindagi ban gaye the. Pehle bhi nashe karta tha lekin uske baad jada ho gaye. Akela rahna acha lagne lagega aur dheere dheere sab door hote chale gaye. Main akela hi bacha tha. Tab kahi se xf ka pata chala aur pata nahi kyu aise hi ek raat pehli story ka first update post kar diya. Ek medium mil gaya tha mujhe kuch share karne ka aur acha bhi lagne laga tha. Dheere dheere vapas likhna start kiya aur es baar stories. Xf par kuch stories likhi fir vo band hua to yaha aa gaya. Aur vohi silsila yaha bhi kamyaab raha. Aap sabko sayad idea nahi hoga ki jo thoda bahut interact hota hai humara yaha vo kitna important ho sakta hai kisi ki life me. Es waqt mere pass almost sab kuch hai lekin agar kisi ko kuch share karna chahu to aisa person nahi hai esliye beech beech me kuch updates me apni situation likh deta hu to acha lagta hai. I hope ki humara sath aise hi aage bana rahe.

Ek mew story ka dimag me kuch idea hai lekin kab start hogi eske liye abhi sure nahi hu

May be main kuch dino ke liye rehab chala jau ya fir kuch aur mil jaye sath chalne ke. Lets see

In the end i want to thank each and everyone of you guys who has supported me and gave me so much love. Means a lot

Thank you so much guys. Jaldi hi milte hai ek new story ke sath tab tak ke liye 👋
 

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Inaaya- hum esme dekh kya rahe hai?
Lucifer- kuch nahi

Inaaya- nahi agar tum mujhe bata do ki hume dundna kya hai to fir dekhne me aasani ho jayegi na
Lucifer- mujhe lagta hai main hi hu ye book wala lucifer

Inaaya- acha aur tum es book ke jariye apna past dundna chahte ho?
Lucifer- ha

Inaaya- enme se kuch bhi tumhe familiar lagta hai?
Lucifer- sapne include karu to bahut kam aur agar sapne include na karu to almost zero similarity

Inaaya- tumhe na relax mind se sochna chahiye
Kya pata hadbadi ke chakkar me kuch dimag me nahi aa raha ho?
Lucifer- sex karte hai us se hi relax hoga mind

Inaaya- hume na kahi pahado par jakar sochna chahiye
Mahool ka bhi fark padta hai
Lucifer- tumhe kaam nahi karna?
Barbaad karna hai kya apne baap ki legacy ko?

Inaaya- sab ho jayega
Mere akele se thodi chalti hai company?
Lucifer- dimag hi agar sareer me na ho to sareer ke hone na hone ka kya fayda kya hai?

Inaaya- main sab sambhal lungi
Don't worry
Lucifer- mujhe to kaam karna hai
Esliye main ja raha hu

Inaaya- theek hai main bhi jati hu
Raat ko aakar dekhte hai
Lucifer- dekh lena cobra raat ko

Inaaya- dhayan rakhna apna
Aur uske galo par kiss karke Inaaya vaha se nikal gaye aur kuch der baad lucifer bhi tayar ho kar office chala gaya

Office pahuch kar

Ashmita- good morning
Lucifer- morning

Ashmita- maine kuch pata kiya hai
Lucifer- kya pata kiya hai?
Mujhse puch leti main dikha hi deta ohh sorry tu to pehle hi dekh chuki hai

Ashmita- main serious hu
Lucifer- abhi batha hua hai
Lap dance de mujhe fir dekh kaise mera ser jagta hai

Ashmita- lucifer?????
Lucifer- acha theek hai bata
Kya pata kiya hai?

Ashmita- maine India ke sare missing logo ki list nikalvae aur usme kisi ne bhi tumhre naam ki complaint nahi ki
Fir tumhra naam daal ke check karaya to paya es naam ka sirf ek hi banda hai aur vo hai tu
Fir tera haseen chehre daal ke check kiya to bhi jada kuch nahi mila

Lucifer- to tujhe mila kya hai?
Aur ye sab to mujhe bhi pata hai
Main hu hi nahi yaha ka
Ashmita- ha ha tu hai hi nahi es dunia ka

Lucifer- exactly
Ashmita- esliye maine ek doctor se baat ki hai

Lucifer- main bimar dikhta hu tujhe?
Ashmita- bimar to tu hai hi esme dikhane ki koe baat nahi hai

Lucifer- sidhe sidhe bol na
Ashmita- sidha to tera bhi nahi hai
Teda ho rakha hai pura

Lucifer- jab bill me ghusta hai to sidha ho jata hai apne aap
Ashmita- kya pata ghusne se pehle hi dher ho jaye

Lucifer- mokka deke to dekh ek baar
Ashmita- maine ek aise doctor se baat ki hai jo mind ko purani baatein yaad karne ke liye train karta hai

Lucifer- mujhe mere sapne bata dete hai sab kuch
Ashmita- tu kisi se lad ke aaya hai subah subah?

Lucifer- tujh se ladunga aur todunga bed apna
Ashmita- nahi nahi sayad main hi stressed hu tu to humesha se hi kutta tha hai aur rahega

Lucifer- kyu stressed hai tu?
Ashmita- ek to main tere liye etna sab kar rahi hu aur tum madad karne ki bajay mujhe hi suna raha hai

Lucifer- maine kab kya sunaya tujhe?
Chal ja aur mere liye coffee leke aa achi wali
Ashmita- hai?

Lucifer- aur thoda snacks bhi le aana
Mujhe bukh lag rahi hai
Ashmita- dharti par aaja bahut ud liya tu

Lucifer- kar apna kaam mujhe bhi bahut kaam hai
Ashmita- kya kaam hai tujhe?

Lucifer- mujhe bahut sari hot hot ladkiyo se milna hai lekin unse milne se pehle tu mera mood kharab kar deti hai
Ashmita- ruk main karti hu inaaya ko message

Lucifer- kar de
Ek to vo tere se sidhe muh baat tak nahi karegi aur na tere message se usse koe fark padega
Dusra inaaya mere sath hi thi raat ko aur usse sab pata hai
Tisra agar usse fir bhi koe fark pada to mujhe koe fark nahi padega
Fourth and most important apne kaam se kaam kyu nahi rakhti tu?
Ashmita- kis kutte ko dost bana liya maine

Lucifer- teri galti bhugat
Mujhe kya suna rahi hai
Ashmita- main hi bhugat rahi hu
Evening me free rahna doctor ke pass jana hai hume

Lucifer- tere dimag ko ilaaz ki jarurat hai to tu ja mujhe bahut kaam hai
Ashmita- lucifer please yaar
Kabhi to meri baat maan liya kar

Lucifer- theek hai ro mat
Dekhunga
Ashmita- abhi kaha ja raha hai tu?

Lucifer- teri behan ne jo kaam diya tha usse pura karne
Dono behane mil kar pagal bana degi mujhe
Ashmita- main baat kar lungi didi se
Tu mat ja

Lucifer- maine juban di hai
Piche nahi hat sakta
Evening me chalna hai to hot ban ke chalna mere sath nahi to rahne dena

Aur lucifer cabin se bahar nikla aur anisha se takra gaya

Lucifer- dekh ke chal le hacker queen
Anisha- sorry vo main jaldi me thi

Lucifer- kyu?
Yamraj ki bhais piche padi hue hai?
Anisha- har time mazak?

Lucifer- vo londe ke bare me pata chala kuch?
Anisha- aur bhi bahut kaam hai mere pass

Lucifer- jaise ki?
Anisha- aaj dinner par aaoge to bataungi

Lucifer- pyaar me pad gaye ye ladki bhi
Anisha- aisa kuch nahi hai
Us din theek se baat nahi ho paye esliye ek baar aur try kar lete hai

Lucifer- matlab tumhre ghar par?
Anisha- ha

Lucifer- tumhri step mom ke sath?
Anisha- meri real mom ke sath

Lucifer- not interested
Anisha- please na

Lucifer- mera koe fayda ho to sochu
Anisha- kya fayda chahiye aapko
Sab kuch to hai aapke pass

Lucifer- fir bhi main free me kuch nahi karunga
Anisha- to batao kya chahiye aapko?

Lucifer- mujhe sarm aa rahi hai batane me
Anisha- kyu nataak kar rahe ho?

Lucifer- mere flat par aana hoga tumhe raat ko puri raat ke liye
Anisha- whaaaattttttt???????
Main aisi vaisi ladki nahi hu samjhe???

Lucifer- tum ladkiyo ko puri baat sunane me jor aata hai kya?
Anisha- aap ladke baat ko adhuri chhodte hi kyu ho?

Lucifer- mere pass ek book hai
Uski soft copy nikalni hai net se aur fir usme tum jo code vod use karti ho usse use karke mujhe thodi information de dena
Anisha- mujhse bas kaam hi hota hai na aapko?

Lucifer- chalo kaam nahi karte hai tumne pehle jo socha tha vo kar lete hai
Anisha- aaj dinner par aajao kal main aapka kaam kar dungi

Lucifer- aaj main busy hu
Kal dinner fir mere sath raat gujarna akele me
Anisha- sidhe aur ache words me bhi to bol sakte the?

Lucifer- meri juban kharab hai
Main aise hi bolta hu
Anisha- theek hai jao ab
Mujhe bahut kaam hai

Lucifer- main to jaise free batha hua hu?
Fir anisha ashmita ke cabin me chali jati hai aur lucifer payal se milne

Lucifer- ho gaye thi baat mere aadmiyo se?
Payal-hmm

Lucifer- aaj kya hogya hai meri life ki sari ladkiyo ko?
Aisa lamba face bana kar ghum rahi hai pure din se
Payal- main tumhre life ki ladki nahi hu

Lucifer- acha theek hai maan liya
Kya hua ye batao?
Payal- vo tumhre logo ne...

Lucifer- kya kiya mere logo ne?
Kuch galat bole kya?
Naag teri g....
Payal- sun to liya karo pura pehle

Lucifer- to adhura kyu chhoda?
Payal- bolne dete ho tum kisi ko?

Lucifer- bolo bolo
Ye same dialog abhi kisi aur par mara tha maine
Payal- unhone kuch suggestions diye hai aur mujhe theek bhi lage

Lucifer- suggestions?
Sala mujhe to aaj tak nahi diya?
Ye mere pith me chure to nahi ghoop rahe hai?
Payal- sayad pyaar dikhaya hi nahi hoga tumne kabhi

Lucifer- pyaar???
Vo kya hota hai?
Payal- jab do dil har sukh dukh me ek dusre ka sahara bane, sath hase to sath roye, koe bhi rasta lamba na lage, aur sath me koe bhi moment dull na ho to hum bolte hai ko vo dono ek dusre ke sath pyaar me haj

Lucifer- tumne sex to include kiya hi nahi?
Sabse important chhij koe kaise bhul sakta hai?
Payal- sex nahi pyaar hi hota hai vo
Do jism ek hote hai

Lucifer - chalo pyaar karte hai fir
Payal- tumhe maja aata hai na logo ko irritate karne me?
Vaise main samjh gaye hu ki tum etne bure bhi nahi ho jitne tum dikhane ki kosis karte ho

Lucifer- ek baar chal mere sath Tambo me fir dikhata hu tujhe main kitna acha hu
Payal- unhone thode suggestions diye hai aur maine socha ki pehle unko implement kar deti hu uske baad sales start kare

Lucifer- eske liye mera etna important time kyu waste kiya?
Ye to tum mujhe phone par bhi bata sakti thi?
Payal- maine kiya tha call
Tumne uthaya nahi

Lucifer- main kisi ke sath PYAAR kar raha hunga
Payal- whatever

Lucifer- theek hai jab ho jaye to bata dena
Main aakar dekh lunga
Payal- theek hai and thank you

Lucifer- OK bye
Lucifer vaha se nikla aur inaaya ko phone mila diya

Inaaya- tum mujhe kaam karne doge to main kaam karungi na?
Ab kya hua?
Lucifer- tumne lawyer bejh diya?

Inaaya- kaha?
Lucifer- tumko bola to tha Ma'am ke ghar bejh dena maine baat kar li hai unse

Inaaya- kab bola tha tumne?
Tumne kaha tha main baat kar lunga
Lucifer- ha to main baat kar chuka hu na kal

Inaaya- mujhme koe super power to hai nahi ki tumhre bina bataye sab jaan jau?
Aur aisi power hoti to fir tumhe jaan hi nahi jati abhi tak main?
Lucifer- abhi bejh do turant
Maine aaj ka bola hai Ma'am ko

Inaaya- tum bhi na...
Theek hai main bejhti hu
Ma'am ke number send kar do
Lucifer- likho

Inaaya- send kar do na
Lucifer- mujhe nahi aate send karne
Tum likh lo

Inaaya- hey bhagwan kya karungi main eska?
Acha batao
Lucifer-**********

Inaaya- OK bye
Lucifer- bye

Ab lucifer ko Ma'am ke ghar jana tha kyuki usse laga Ma'am ko thoda mental support ki jarurat hogi es time par esliye Alia ke liye kuch chocolates vagra li aur chal diya Ma'am ke ghar

Abhi Ma'am college se aaye nahi thi aur Alia bhi school se nahi aaye thi to lucifer apne flat par ja kar chhilam fukne laga aur aaj Ma'am thoda late ho gaye to usne bhi bore hote hote kuch jada hi fuk li aur ache khase nashe me ho gaya tha

Fir jab Ma'am aagaye to unke flat chala gaya usse dekh kar
Ma'am- bhukh lag rahi hai kya?
Lucifer- bahut jada

Ma'am- tumhri halaat dekh kar lag hi raha hai
Din me etna nasha karne ki kya jarurat aagaye?
Lucifer- bore ho raha tha aapke intezaar me socha kahi intezaar karte karte mar na jau esliye ek chhilam fuk li
Ab Agar mar bhi gaya to gum nahi hoga ki sober halaat me to nahi mara at least

Ma'am- kuch bacho ke doubts the vo samjhne lag gaye thi
Lucifer- mujhe bhi samjhne ki kosis kar lo na Ma'am

Ma'am- tum fir suru ho gaye?
Lucifer- main bhahak jata hu aapko saree me dekh kar
Ab bas aapki saree me ghusna baki hai

Ma'am- tum kab tak us baat ke liye mujhe tane marte rahoge?
Lucifer- jab tak aapki baat sach nahi kar deta tab tak

Ma'am- aaj kaam par nahi gaye?
Lucifer- vo lawyer aane wala hai to yaha aagya

Ma'am- tumhe laga mujhe thoda support ki jarurat hogi
Hai na?
Lucifer- aapko etna sab handle kar rahe ho to ek vakeel ko to kar hi sakte ho Main to bas aagya aise hi

Ma'am- main to koe bhi nahi hu tumhri fir etna sab kyu karte ho tum mere liye?
Lucifer- main bhi to koe bhi nahi hu
Fir bhi aapne etna sab kiya mere liye
Aur main to reality me kuch nahi kar raha agar aap kaho to ek din me aapke bache aapke pass honge aur aapke husband nark ki vadiyo me garam garm tel me fry ho rahe honge
Lekin aap aisa nahi chahti esliye main kuch kar nahi raha

Ma'am - thank you etna sab karne ke liye mere liye
Lucifer- ek baar galle laga kar mere tadap ko door kar dijiye na

Ma'am - ek baar me tumhri tadap door ho jayegi kya?
Lucifer- kam to ho hi jayegi sayad

Ma'am - aur bhad gaye to?
Lucifer- to fir se galle laga lena
Tab tak lagate rahna jab tak ya to main na rahu ya fir meri tadap na rahe
Pata nahi kya jadoo kar diya hai aapne mujh par ki main main nahi raha hu....
Nice and beautiful update....
 
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Asmita ke office me Luci apna phone chhod aaya hai, ma'am ne phone kiya Jise asmita ne utha liya or unki sari baat sun li hai, Lucifer ko asmita Apne sath lekr aayrgi ma'am ke pass aaj aisa promise bhi kr diya hai ab Dekhte hai Luci bhaya kya karte hai Iska...
Ma'am ke samne lucifer vaise bhi kuch nahi kar pata to ab kya hi karega
Payal ke pass pahuch gya Luci or vha pr ek Budhi amma me Luci bhaya ko bina naam btaye hi inaya asmita ko sath rakhne ka kaha hai or unka sath na chhodne ko kaha hai, is amma ko itna sab kaise pta chla Luci bhaya ke bare me, jaha payal shock hui Vahi Luci vha ke mahaul ko dekh kr hi ekdum sant ho gya andar or bahar se...
Anubhav se pata chala bhai
Mikita Luci bhaya ki koi nyi premika hai jo astrology me nipun lagti hai or Usne hame Luci bhaya ke aise hone ke pichhe ka karan btaya or nirmata ke aise nirnay pr sawal guru or ma pr bhi sawal uthaya...
Sari ladkiya lucifer ki premika hi hai
Anisha ko priyanka ji ne Luci bhaya ko dobara dinner me bulane ka kaha Hai jis pr unki bahas bhi hoti hai thodi or fir ek last baar Luci bhaya ko yha bulane ko mana leti hai, Dekhte hai ab priyanka ji ko kya Janna hai Luci bhaya se... Superb update bhai sandar jabarjast
Sayad shadi ka invitation dena hoga
 
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To asmita mna kr le hi gyi Luci bhaya ko ma'am ke pass,
Ashmita ko ki baat kaise taal de lucifer?
inaya se aise baat nhi karni chahiye thi Luci bhaya ko,
Bilkul nahi karni chahiye thi
us amma ne bhi to Yahi kaha tha ki usko Kabhi dur mat Karna, Lekin Lagta hai Luci bhaya ko abhi bhi samajh me nhi aaya hai... Asmita ne bhi yahi samjhaya ki Luci agar aisa hi inaya ke sath karta rha to vo inaya ko kho dega...
Sab ko kho dega aise to
Ye kon log aa gye Jo roshni ko chakraviyuh ke rup me Luci bhaya ko fsana chahte hai...
Superb bhai sandar jabarjast update
Koe to hai hi bhai
 
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What a masterpiece Luci bhaya. Maza aa gya padh kr bhai ma'am bhi maan gyi hai Luci ke vakeel ke liye or asmita ne ma'am ko ek institute me pdhane or counciling karne ka offer diya hai, ma'am ne bhi us pr sochne ka kaha hai... Superb update bhai sandar jabarjast lajvab
Thank you so much bhai
 
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Luci bhaya ko us budhe baba ne apne bete or patni ke galti se mar jane pr diya tha or sath me khud ko marne ka bhi kaha tha...
Inaya ne Luci bhaya ko samjhane ki Kosis Kari Lekin vo inaya se dur rahne ko hi kahta hai pr inaya nhi manti...
Shreya ne Aaj fir Luci bhaya ka rasta roka or use apna gyan dene lagi lekin Luci bhaya use uska aina dikha kr chale gye or bta gye ki jao jakr puchh le kisi se bhi ki vo Kon hai... Or Shreya ne Jise bchaya tha unhone ek or ghar barbad kr diya hai yah bhi btaya Luci bhaya ne usko...
Luci bhaya ko ab sabkuchh samajh me aane lga hai ki Vo aisa kyo hai or uske sath kya ho rha hai... Superb update bhai sandar jabarjast
Thank you bhai
Keep supporting stay tuned
 
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Lucifer ka past aur present dono hi har beet te update ke saath kayi sawaal khade karte jaa rahe hain... Baat karen present ki to Ashmita, Inaaya aur Maadhuri Ma'am, in teenon kirdaron ki bhumika sabse mehtavpoorn nazar aa rahi hai...
Facts
Ashmita, uske saath Lucifer ka rishta shuru se hi dosti ka raha hai aur abhi tak usi roop mein kaayam hai... Dono ke beech ki nok jhonk isi baat ka suboot hai... Ashmita, ab shayad Lucifer ko aur bhi behtar tareeke se samajhne lagi hai... Halanki, abhi wo Lucifer se pyaar nahi karti hai, haan ek dost ke taur par to karti hi hai, parantu ek premika ke naate shayad abhi uske andar Lucifer ko lekar ehsas na jaage hain...
Ek aur fact
Beharhaal, ek baar fir Ashmita ne anjaane mein kaha ke Lucifer usike haathon marega..!!
Anjane me bol rahi hai sayad
Idhar, Inaaya aur Lucifer ki nazdeekiyan bohot zyada badh chuki hain... Kiss, ab shayad aam baat ban chuki hai dono ke beech... Dekhne laayak baat to ye hai ke Inaaya ab saamne se kiss ki maang karne lagi hai... Jo ladki ek samay par Lucifer ko dekhna tak pasand nahi karti thi, aaj usmein itna badlav aa chuka hai...
Pyaar aisa hi hota hai Agar pyaar hai to vaha bhi
Idhar, Lucifer ko apne past se juda shayad ek bohot bada rahasya pata lag gaya hai, joki wo curse tha, us samay bhi Inaaya ne jis tarah Lucifer ko sambhala, saaf dikhayi de raha hai ke Inaaya Lucifer se behad Mohabbat karne lagi hai (Basharte wo koyi game na khel rahi ho Lucifer ke saath, waise iske chances kam hi hain)...
Mujhe bhi kam hi lag raha hai lekin kuch kah nahi sakte en ladkiyo ke bare me
Par Lucifer ka pichhle kuchh updates mein Inaaya se berukhi se pesh aana kuchh samajh nahi aaya, halanki uski koyi bhi harkat samajh nahi aati par fir bhi, jis Inaaya ke saath abhi 4–5 update pehle wo itne pyaar se vyavahar kar raha tha, uske liye achanak se hi ye badla rukh..?
Mood swings hote hai uske
Iska ek kaaran wo sapna bhi ho sakta hai jismein use apne curse ka gyaan hua... Dekha jaaye to Lucifer ki wahaan shayad galti thi hi nahi... Anjaane mein hi uske teer se un dono ki jaan gayi thi aur rahi baat us aadmi ki, to usne khud hi Lucifer se apni maut ki maang ki thi... Par Lucifer ko jaate – jaate ek aisa shraap wo de gaye jise wo aaj tak bhugat raha hai... Kabhi bhi wo apne pyaar ko sada ke liye nahi paayega, jab bhi, jis se bhi pyaar karega, use kho dega... I think, yahi reason hai jiski wajah se wo Inaaya se doori bana raha hai...
Ho sakta hai ye reason
Idhar, Maadhuri Ma'am ki pareshani ki wajah bhi saamne aa hi gayi... Unka pati joki pehle unhe pratadit kiya karta tha, jisne unhe unke bete se door kar diya, ab uska target Aliya hai... Wo Aliya ko bhi Maadhuri se door karna chahta hai... Par ab unhone Lucifer ko sab bata hi Diya hai, to aisa hone se raha... Waise bhi Lucifer pehle hi Inaaya ke zariye Vakeel ka intezaam kar hi chuka hai... Nischit hi Maadhuri ki berang zindagi mein kuchh na kuchh rang to Lucifer bhar hi dega, shayad unhe unka beta hi waapis dilwa de...
Main to dusre tarike se rang bharne ki soch raha tha☠
Wahin Aliya sachmein bohot hi zyada samajhdar hai... Kuchh waqt ki maar, aur kuchh use apni Maa se mili seekh, uski baaton mein aur uski harkaton mein paripakavata jhalakti hai... Saaf dikhayi deta hai ke wo apni umra ke bachon se dus guna zyada aage hai... Aakhir Lucifer tak ko apni baaton se hairaan kar dena, har kisi ke bas ki baat to nahi...
Alia hai hi samjhdar
Madhuri ki beti jo hai
Payal ke saath bhi Lucifer us NGO mein gaya tha... Wahaan jo important cheez huyi, wo thi un Amma ki baatein... Pehle to unhe Lucifer ke baare mein itna sab pata kaise chala, kya wo Supreme/Guruji se judi hain ya fir duniyadaari aur waqt ne unhe sachmein hi alag bana diya hai..?
Duniyadari lag rahi hai mujhe to
Inaaya aur Ashmita ko sada apne paas rakhne ki hidayat di unhone Lucifer ko, joki sambhav hai hi nahi, wo curse, kya wo ye possible hone dega..? Wahin Payal bhi unki baaton se hairaan to huyi, aur ab shayad Lucifer ko lekar uske mann mein bhi sawaal Khade hon...
Lucifer ke liye sabke man me sawalkhade hue hai
Mitika aur Shreya... Dono hi Lucifer ke past se Judi hain... In dono ka zikra, Payal aur Arohi ki entry ke baad hua, matlab abhi tak to past aur present mein ladkiyon ki ginti barabar hi chal rahi hai...
Barabar kaha hai bhai?
Ek kam hai past me count karo vapas
Mitika ko astrology ka kaafi gyaan tha, aur usne saaf bataya wo Karan, jiske chalte Lucifer, Lucifer bana... Ab jab grah – nakshatra tak uske khilaaf the to wo kya hi kar leta... Waise yahaan par Raaj ki baat bilkul sahi baith ti hai, Lucifer ko banaya hi isliye gaya taaki use dard aur takleef dekar baakiyon ko ek sabak diya jaa sake, of course it's not justified but...
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Shreya ek aisi ladki jo kuchh bhi galat hote nahi dekh sakti, usne Lucifer ko ek aadmi ki hatya karne se rok liya par baad mein oata chala ke wo isi laayak tha... Kitni hi ladkiyon ki Zindagi wo barbaad kar chuka tha aur bachne ke baad wahi karna usne fir shuru kar diya... Ye jaan ne ke baad bhi Shreya ko apne faisle par bura nahi laga..
Kya jo lucifer ne kaha vo sach tha???
. Parantu Lucifer ne apni sachayi use bata di, ke wahi agla Supreme hai, par kya wo kabhi Supreme bana tha, I don't think so...
Supreme hell ka bana ho sayad?
Raaj aur Eda ki kahani bhi simultaneously aage badh rahi hai... Raaj ki baaton mein bagawat ki mehak aa rahi hai, dekhte hain iska kya anjaam hoga uski zindagi par, Eda par aur Lucifer par...
Interesting haal lag raha hai mujhe to
Bohot hi badhiya tareeke se kahani aage badh rahi hai bhai... Character build-up sachmein bohot behatreen hai... Kayi characters ki entry ho chuki hai, aur aasar hain ke aage aur bhi ladkiyan aayengi, par sabhi ka role abhi tak alag – alag raha hai, un sabhi ki maujoodgi ko justify kiya gaya hai... Jab itne characters ki bheed mein har character ki apni ek alag jagah ban jaaye, wahi writer ki kaamyabi hoti hai, meri nazar mein, and you're very well doing the same...

Outstanding Updates Bhai & Waiting For Next...
Thank you so much for understanding all this bhai
Etni bheed me sab ko alav alag dikhana hi mere liye sabse important aur challenging hai aur abhi to bheed aane baki bhi hai
Sath bane rahe apne kimati support ke sath
 

Lone survivor

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Kya ianaya kuch janti hai Lucifer ke bare me ya wo pyar me aisa kr rahi hai.
Bahut locha hai vahi .
Mujhe khud nahi pata
Madam se kya favour mangega Lucifer wo bhi ek baat hai.
Ek hi chhij dikh rahi hai mujhe to jo lucifer maang sakta hai aur madhuri ma'am sayad de sayad na de😎
Chlo bs next update ka wait hi kr skte hai.
Nice update Lone survivor bhai.
Intezaar rukna nahi chahiye
 

The king

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UPDATE-78
Inaaya- hum esme dekh kya rahe hai?
Lucifer- kuch nahi

Inaaya- nahi agar tum mujhe bata do ki hume dundna kya hai to fir dekhne me aasani ho jayegi na
Lucifer- mujhe lagta hai main hi hu ye book wala lucifer

Inaaya- acha aur tum es book ke jariye apna past dundna chahte ho?
Lucifer- ha

Inaaya- enme se kuch bhi tumhe familiar lagta hai?
Lucifer- sapne include karu to bahut kam aur agar sapne include na karu to almost zero similarity

Inaaya- tumhe na relax mind se sochna chahiye
Kya pata hadbadi ke chakkar me kuch dimag me nahi aa raha ho?
Lucifer- sex karte hai us se hi relax hoga mind

Inaaya- hume na kahi pahado par jakar sochna chahiye
Mahool ka bhi fark padta hai
Lucifer- tumhe kaam nahi karna?
Barbaad karna hai kya apne baap ki legacy ko?

Inaaya- sab ho jayega
Mere akele se thodi chalti hai company?
Lucifer- dimag hi agar sareer me na ho to sareer ke hone na hone ka kya fayda kya hai?

Inaaya- main sab sambhal lungi
Don't worry
Lucifer- mujhe to kaam karna hai
Esliye main ja raha hu

Inaaya- theek hai main bhi jati hu
Raat ko aakar dekhte hai
Lucifer- dekh lena cobra raat ko

Inaaya- dhayan rakhna apna
Aur uske galo par kiss karke Inaaya vaha se nikal gaye aur kuch der baad lucifer bhi tayar ho kar office chala gaya

Office pahuch kar

Ashmita- good morning
Lucifer- morning

Ashmita- maine kuch pata kiya hai
Lucifer- kya pata kiya hai?
Mujhse puch leti main dikha hi deta ohh sorry tu to pehle hi dekh chuki hai

Ashmita- main serious hu
Lucifer- abhi batha hua hai
Lap dance de mujhe fir dekh kaise mera ser jagta hai

Ashmita- lucifer?????
Lucifer- acha theek hai bata
Kya pata kiya hai?

Ashmita- maine India ke sare missing logo ki list nikalvae aur usme kisi ne bhi tumhre naam ki complaint nahi ki
Fir tumhra naam daal ke check karaya to paya es naam ka sirf ek hi banda hai aur vo hai tu
Fir tera haseen chehre daal ke check kiya to bhi jada kuch nahi mila

Lucifer- to tujhe mila kya hai?
Aur ye sab to mujhe bhi pata hai
Main hu hi nahi yaha ka
Ashmita- ha ha tu hai hi nahi es dunia ka

Lucifer- exactly
Ashmita- esliye maine ek doctor se baat ki hai

Lucifer- main bimar dikhta hu tujhe?
Ashmita- bimar to tu hai hi esme dikhane ki koe baat nahi hai

Lucifer- sidhe sidhe bol na
Ashmita- sidha to tera bhi nahi hai
Teda ho rakha hai pura

Lucifer- jab bill me ghusta hai to sidha ho jata hai apne aap
Ashmita- kya pata ghusne se pehle hi dher ho jaye

Lucifer- mokka deke to dekh ek baar
Ashmita- maine ek aise doctor se baat ki hai jo mind ko purani baatein yaad karne ke liye train karta hai

Lucifer- mujhe mere sapne bata dete hai sab kuch
Ashmita- tu kisi se lad ke aaya hai subah subah?

Lucifer- tujh se ladunga aur todunga bed apna
Ashmita- nahi nahi sayad main hi stressed hu tu to humesha se hi kutta tha hai aur rahega

Lucifer- kyu stressed hai tu?
Ashmita- ek to main tere liye etna sab kar rahi hu aur tum madad karne ki bajay mujhe hi suna raha hai

Lucifer- maine kab kya sunaya tujhe?
Chal ja aur mere liye coffee leke aa achi wali
Ashmita- hai?

Lucifer- aur thoda snacks bhi le aana
Mujhe bukh lag rahi hai
Ashmita- dharti par aaja bahut ud liya tu

Lucifer- kar apna kaam mujhe bhi bahut kaam hai
Ashmita- kya kaam hai tujhe?

Lucifer- mujhe bahut sari hot hot ladkiyo se milna hai lekin unse milne se pehle tu mera mood kharab kar deti hai
Ashmita- ruk main karti hu inaaya ko message

Lucifer- kar de
Ek to vo tere se sidhe muh baat tak nahi karegi aur na tere message se usse koe fark padega
Dusra inaaya mere sath hi thi raat ko aur usse sab pata hai
Tisra agar usse fir bhi koe fark pada to mujhe koe fark nahi padega
Fourth and most important apne kaam se kaam kyu nahi rakhti tu?
Ashmita- kis kutte ko dost bana liya maine

Lucifer- teri galti bhugat
Mujhe kya suna rahi hai
Ashmita- main hi bhugat rahi hu
Evening me free rahna doctor ke pass jana hai hume

Lucifer- tere dimag ko ilaaz ki jarurat hai to tu ja mujhe bahut kaam hai
Ashmita- lucifer please yaar
Kabhi to meri baat maan liya kar

Lucifer- theek hai ro mat
Dekhunga
Ashmita- abhi kaha ja raha hai tu?

Lucifer- teri behan ne jo kaam diya tha usse pura karne
Dono behane mil kar pagal bana degi mujhe
Ashmita- main baat kar lungi didi se
Tu mat ja

Lucifer- maine juban di hai
Piche nahi hat sakta
Evening me chalna hai to hot ban ke chalna mere sath nahi to rahne dena

Aur lucifer cabin se bahar nikla aur anisha se takra gaya

Lucifer- dekh ke chal le hacker queen
Anisha- sorry vo main jaldi me thi

Lucifer- kyu?
Yamraj ki bhais piche padi hue hai?
Anisha- har time mazak?

Lucifer- vo londe ke bare me pata chala kuch?
Anisha- aur bhi bahut kaam hai mere pass

Lucifer- jaise ki?
Anisha- aaj dinner par aaoge to bataungi

Lucifer- pyaar me pad gaye ye ladki bhi
Anisha- aisa kuch nahi hai
Us din theek se baat nahi ho paye esliye ek baar aur try kar lete hai

Lucifer- matlab tumhre ghar par?
Anisha- ha

Lucifer- tumhri step mom ke sath?
Anisha- meri real mom ke sath

Lucifer- not interested
Anisha- please na

Lucifer- mera koe fayda ho to sochu
Anisha- kya fayda chahiye aapko
Sab kuch to hai aapke pass

Lucifer- fir bhi main free me kuch nahi karunga
Anisha- to batao kya chahiye aapko?

Lucifer- mujhe sarm aa rahi hai batane me
Anisha- kyu nataak kar rahe ho?

Lucifer- mere flat par aana hoga tumhe raat ko puri raat ke liye
Anisha- whaaaattttttt???????
Main aisi vaisi ladki nahi hu samjhe???

Lucifer- tum ladkiyo ko puri baat sunane me jor aata hai kya?
Anisha- aap ladke baat ko adhuri chhodte hi kyu ho?

Lucifer- mere pass ek book hai
Uski soft copy nikalni hai net se aur fir usme tum jo code vod use karti ho usse use karke mujhe thodi information de dena
Anisha- mujhse bas kaam hi hota hai na aapko?

Lucifer- chalo kaam nahi karte hai tumne pehle jo socha tha vo kar lete hai
Anisha- aaj dinner par aajao kal main aapka kaam kar dungi

Lucifer- aaj main busy hu
Kal dinner fir mere sath raat gujarna akele me
Anisha- sidhe aur ache words me bhi to bol sakte the?

Lucifer- meri juban kharab hai
Main aise hi bolta hu
Anisha- theek hai jao ab
Mujhe bahut kaam hai

Lucifer- main to jaise free batha hua hu?
Fir anisha ashmita ke cabin me chali jati hai aur lucifer payal se milne

Lucifer- ho gaye thi baat mere aadmiyo se?
Payal-hmm

Lucifer- aaj kya hogya hai meri life ki sari ladkiyo ko?
Aisa lamba face bana kar ghum rahi hai pure din se
Payal- main tumhre life ki ladki nahi hu

Lucifer- acha theek hai maan liya
Kya hua ye batao?
Payal- vo tumhre logo ne...

Lucifer- kya kiya mere logo ne?
Kuch galat bole kya?
Naag teri g....
Payal- sun to liya karo pura pehle

Lucifer- to adhura kyu chhoda?
Payal- bolne dete ho tum kisi ko?

Lucifer- bolo bolo
Ye same dialog abhi kisi aur par mara tha maine
Payal- unhone kuch suggestions diye hai aur mujhe theek bhi lage

Lucifer- suggestions?
Sala mujhe to aaj tak nahi diya?
Ye mere pith me chure to nahi ghoop rahe hai?
Payal- sayad pyaar dikhaya hi nahi hoga tumne kabhi

Lucifer- pyaar???
Vo kya hota hai?
Payal- jab do dil har sukh dukh me ek dusre ka sahara bane, sath hase to sath roye, koe bhi rasta lamba na lage, aur sath me koe bhi moment dull na ho to hum bolte hai ko vo dono ek dusre ke sath pyaar me haj

Lucifer- tumne sex to include kiya hi nahi?
Sabse important chhij koe kaise bhul sakta hai?
Payal- sex nahi pyaar hi hota hai vo
Do jism ek hote hai

Lucifer - chalo pyaar karte hai fir
Payal- tumhe maja aata hai na logo ko irritate karne me?
Vaise main samjh gaye hu ki tum etne bure bhi nahi ho jitne tum dikhane ki kosis karte ho

Lucifer- ek baar chal mere sath Tambo me fir dikhata hu tujhe main kitna acha hu
Payal- unhone thode suggestions diye hai aur maine socha ki pehle unko implement kar deti hu uske baad sales start kare

Lucifer- eske liye mera etna important time kyu waste kiya?
Ye to tum mujhe phone par bhi bata sakti thi?
Payal- maine kiya tha call
Tumne uthaya nahi

Lucifer- main kisi ke sath PYAAR kar raha hunga
Payal- whatever

Lucifer- theek hai jab ho jaye to bata dena
Main aakar dekh lunga
Payal- theek hai and thank you

Lucifer- OK bye
Lucifer vaha se nikla aur inaaya ko phone mila diya

Inaaya- tum mujhe kaam karne doge to main kaam karungi na?
Ab kya hua?
Lucifer- tumne lawyer bejh diya?

Inaaya- kaha?
Lucifer- tumko bola to tha Ma'am ke ghar bejh dena maine baat kar li hai unse

Inaaya- kab bola tha tumne?
Tumne kaha tha main baat kar lunga
Lucifer- ha to main baat kar chuka hu na kal

Inaaya- mujhme koe super power to hai nahi ki tumhre bina bataye sab jaan jau?
Aur aisi power hoti to fir tumhe jaan hi nahi jati abhi tak main?
Lucifer- abhi bejh do turant
Maine aaj ka bola hai Ma'am ko

Inaaya- tum bhi na...
Theek hai main bejhti hu
Ma'am ke number send kar do
Lucifer- likho

Inaaya- send kar do na
Lucifer- mujhe nahi aate send karne
Tum likh lo

Inaaya- hey bhagwan kya karungi main eska?
Acha batao
Lucifer-**********

Inaaya- OK bye
Lucifer- bye

Ab lucifer ko Ma'am ke ghar jana tha kyuki usse laga Ma'am ko thoda mental support ki jarurat hogi es time par esliye Alia ke liye kuch chocolates vagra li aur chal diya Ma'am ke ghar

Abhi Ma'am college se aaye nahi thi aur Alia bhi school se nahi aaye thi to lucifer apne flat par ja kar chhilam fukne laga aur aaj Ma'am thoda late ho gaye to usne bhi bore hote hote kuch jada hi fuk li aur ache khase nashe me ho gaya tha

Fir jab Ma'am aagaye to unke flat chala gaya usse dekh kar
Ma'am- bhukh lag rahi hai kya?
Lucifer- bahut jada

Ma'am- tumhri halaat dekh kar lag hi raha hai
Din me etna nasha karne ki kya jarurat aagaye?
Lucifer- bore ho raha tha aapke intezaar me socha kahi intezaar karte karte mar na jau esliye ek chhilam fuk li
Ab Agar mar bhi gaya to gum nahi hoga ki sober halaat me to nahi mara at least

Ma'am- kuch bacho ke doubts the vo samjhne lag gaye thi
Lucifer- mujhe bhi samjhne ki kosis kar lo na Ma'am

Ma'am- tum fir suru ho gaye?
Lucifer- main bhahak jata hu aapko saree me dekh kar
Ab bas aapki saree me ghusna baki hai

Ma'am- tum kab tak us baat ke liye mujhe tane marte rahoge?
Lucifer- jab tak aapki baat sach nahi kar deta tab tak

Ma'am- aaj kaam par nahi gaye?
Lucifer- vo lawyer aane wala hai to yaha aagya

Ma'am- tumhe laga mujhe thoda support ki jarurat hogi
Hai na?
Lucifer- aapko etna sab handle kar rahe ho to ek vakeel ko to kar hi sakte ho Main to bas aagya aise hi

Ma'am- main to koe bhi nahi hu tumhri fir etna sab kyu karte ho tum mere liye?
Lucifer- main bhi to koe bhi nahi hu
Fir bhi aapne etna sab kiya mere liye
Aur main to reality me kuch nahi kar raha agar aap kaho to ek din me aapke bache aapke pass honge aur aapke husband nark ki vadiyo me garam garm tel me fry ho rahe honge
Lekin aap aisa nahi chahti esliye main kuch kar nahi raha

Ma'am - thank you etna sab karne ke liye mere liye
Lucifer- ek baar galle laga kar mere tadap ko door kar dijiye na

Ma'am - ek baar me tumhri tadap door ho jayegi kya?
Lucifer- kam to ho hi jayegi sayad

Ma'am - aur bhad gaye to?
Lucifer- to fir se galle laga lena
Tab tak lagate rahna jab tak ya to main na rahu ya fir meri tadap na rahe
Pata nahi kya jadoo kar diya hai aapne mujh par ki main main nahi raha hu....
Nice update bhai waiting for next update
 
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