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AK 24

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बहुत ही शानदार तरीके से कहानी आगे बढ़ रही हैँ। और अब तो आकाश का भी कुछ अलग ही लोचा हैँ, वही करण को दिक्कत हो सकती हैँ अब ब्रैड के मरने से। ❤️ देखते हैँ आगे क्या होता हैँ।
Thanks brother Keep Supporting
Yep Karan kaafi Mushkilo mein hai :D
 

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Wao! Karan jo dar rha tha ki kahi uska secret bahar na aa jaye pr sneha to next level ki nikli use to khud vamp banna hai or jb karan se mili to usne khud ko vamp bnane ki peshkash kr di... Wahi akash ke andar 3 personality hai uski bate sun kr to yhi lag rha hai ek jo karan ke paksh me hai or do vo Jo apas me jhagad rhe the ki sneha ko mar diya jaye ya karan ko kisi ke bhi pass na bhatkane diya jaye jo bhi usse lgav rkhe use khatm kr diya jaye... Vhi Peter ne ye sab bate sun li hai akash ki pr lagta nhi hai ki Vo karan ko Itni jaldi ye sab btayega... Superb update bhai sandar jabarjast
Thanks brother Keep Supporting :thanx:
 

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To Jaisa expect kiya tha Vahi hua Peter ne karan ko akash ke bare me nhi btaya, Kyln ne karan ke liye jaal bichhaya tha pr sneha ke vha hone se karan ke liye yah asan ho gya usne sabhi ko apni skill ka use karke behosh kr diya or unka blood test tube me bhar ke nikal gya sath me bonus bhi mila 50 watch me or 50 xp system me apponent ko defeat karne pr mile, karan ne O group ke alava Lagbhag sabhi group ke blood ko test kr liya hai or use unke bich ka different pta Chal gya hai dekhte hai kya hota hai aage...
Karan ne combat weapon ki class chose ki hai or sath me level 5 ice skill vali ladki ne bhi class chose ki hai, Dekhte hai karan ko kon sa weapon milta hai uski skill ke according... Superb update bhai sandar jabarjast

Blood bank skill to great hai bhaya Uski madad se karan future me tahalka mcha dega... Erin ne apne Pahle hi Din apni sword skill se sare classfello ko shock me daal diya hai Apne apponent ko Itni asani se hra kr... Vahi sneha ne bhi bina skill ke hi apne se jyada level ke student ko badi asani se hra diya hai, karan ki bari me uska apponent ek 3rd level ka student Brad tha, karan ne bina kisi skill ke Apne ek punch se brad ke spear ko break kar diya or fir use apne lato ghuso me le liya, karan ko usse 50 xp mili or sath me level up bhi ho gya, ab karan 3rd level pr hai...

Harsh sir Indian hai or ankh se andhe bhi Lekin unhone kadi mehnat se or dragon eye skill ki madad se logo ke aura ko dekhne ka tarika dhundh liya hai or ve ek warrior hain or vo apni self respect pr jite hai Jo unhe bahut hi khass bnati hai...

Harsh ne karan ko apni suspect list me add kr liya hai or sath me sneha ko bhi, unhe sneha ki strength me suspition hai to Vahi karan ke puri tarah se human hone me... Dekhte hai vo karan ka secret jaan pate hai ya nhi... Superb update bhai sandar jabarjast lajvab

Wao! Karan ne Harsh sir ke sath combat practice ki ek legendary person ke sath Itni der tk move exchange huye Vahi Bahut badi baat hai karan or baki ke students ke liye pr karan janta hai ki Harsh sir to uske sath sirf khel rhe the...
Brad or uske dost Max ne milkr karan ko marne ka plan bnaya vo bhi class me or karan ko mara bhi Jisse gussa ho kr karan max ko puri class me hi marne chla rha Lekin harsh sir ne Bich me aakr Karan ko rok diya or ashcharya ki baat ye hai ki karan Ruk bhi gya...
Karan max or brad ki awaj sun kr bred ke pichhe chla gya hai Apne kamre me dress badal kr Vahi akash ne jb karan ke khoon se bhare kapde dekhe to aag babula ho gya or apni khud ki multi personality se bate karne lgta hai Jisme little one akash ki body ko control karne ki dhamki deta hai... Sneha ke puchhne pr ki karan thik to hai ki akash use dekh jaldi se apne kamre me kheech Leta hai or usse class me karan ke sath kya hua tha puchhta hai sneha ka gla dba kr... Superb update bhai sandar jabarjast lajvab

Mtlb akash miya ne Brad ko mar hi diya Vahi Dr Harley ne max or Rakesh ke bite marks Jo sneha ke jaise the or apne aap hi heal ho rhe the unko dekh general ko btaya jo uske pita bhi the aur unhe college me ek investigation karne ko kaha kisi beast se related Dekhte hai kya milta hai unhe... Vahi karan ne kya jabarjast fight kri hai pr mujhe lagta hai sare status ko sath lekr chale to jyada sahi rahega kyoki sirf daudne se hi kaam nhi chalega karan ko majboot bhi hona hoga sath hi sath or Yadi majboot hi nhi hoga to daudne se hi uske pair tut jayenge or kamar ki waat lag jayegi or daudne me stamina ka role to bahut jyada hai jitna jyada stamina utna jyada time tk daud...
Superb update bhai sandar jabarjast
Thanks brother for your review and support :thanx:
Agility aur Stamina ki Importance usey agle aane wale update mein hi mil jaayegi :D
 

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Update 15:- (Tutorial)




Jaise hi main apne Room mein aaya to main kaafi Surprise hua kyuki na to waha Aakash tha aur naa hi Peter.



Main:-Ab to BC Curfew time bhi ho gaya hai, ye dono chutiye itni der tak bahar kya kar rahe hai?



Main Apne Bed pe late gaya aur unka Wait karne laga lekin sayad main aaj itna thaka hua tha ki meri aankh kab lagi mujhe pata hi nahi chala.



Meri subah aankh khuli to hum teeno hi Apne room mein they lekin sab apne apne Khayalo mein khoye huye they. Sabki apni-2 Problems thi aur wo doosro ko bilkul nahi pata thi.


<Daily Quest Complete: Avoid Direct Sunlight for 8 Hours>

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Meri Growth jo Strength mein thi usse mein kaafi Satisfied tha lekin main ye same baat apni Leveling Speed ke Liye nahi keh sakta tha. Mera System abhi Level 3 pe tha aur mere paas Filhal 2 Skills thi jisme se to Fight ke liye thi hi nahi. Meri Skill dusro ki Ability jaise nahi thi jaha wo usey Control kar sake wo bas apni Skill ko ek tarike se hi use kar sakta tha. Main kal Rakesh ke sath Fight mein jeet to gaya tha Lekin bhut mushkil se aur agar mera samna aise bando se hota hai jinhe Fight aati hai to mera kaam ek Skill se nahi Chalne wala tha.



Abhi main soch hi raha tha ki Aakash bhi nind se uth gaya aur wo Normal hi behave kar raha tha.



Aakash:- Uth gaya Bhsdk, raat ko to gaand faila ke so raha tha.



Main:- Haa kal tere jaise Chutiyo ne thaka diya tha isliye jaldi so gaya.



Aakash:- Seriously, tujhe bola to hai maine tujhe koi chutiya pareshan karta hai to mujhe bata diya kar main sambhal lunga aur Second Year walo ko bhi main dekh lunga.



Maine Aakash ko kuch jawab nahi diya bas Middle Finger dikha di. Tabhi Peter bhi utha aur Aakash apne usual self mein majak karne laga lekin aaj Peter kahi khoya khoya sa lag raha tha. Hum teeno Jaldi se Taiyar huye aur Canteen ki taraf chal oade Hallway se hote huye. Hum abhi Hallway mein se jaa hi rahe to mujhe wo dikha jo main subh subh nahi dekhna chahta tha. Wo Rakesh tha lekin pasino mein bheega hua tha aur uske hath kaamp rahe they mujhe dekhte huye jaise uski gaand fat rahi ho mujhse lekin maine to aisa kuch kiya bhi nahi tha. Usne mujhe wahi se awaaz lagayi.



Rakesh:- Karan, mujhe tumse akele main Kuch baat karni hai agar possible hai to.



Maine Aakash aur Peter ko jaane ka ishara kiya aur Rakesh ke paas chala gaya dekhne ki ab ye kehne aaya hai.




Rakesh:- Dekh bhai kal ke sorry, kal hamari galti jo humne dhoke se tujhe Class mein hurt kiya aur tu apna Revenge lene humare piche aaya. Lekin please mujhe maaf kar dena.



Main uski baat sunke speechless ho gaya tha kyuki maine ye expect nahi kiya tha i mean isko meri id pata lag bhi gayi thi kal to ye mujhe Blackmail karta ya badla leta. Khair usne fir bolna suru kiya.



Rakesh:- dekh bhai main Promise karta hu ki main tera Secret kisi ko nahi bataunga. Please tumhe jo karna hai wo karo lekin mujhe jinda rehne do. Main tumhe dubara kabhi pareshan nahi karunga aur jo bhi humare bich mein hua hai wo hum dono hi bhool jaayenge.




Halanki mujhe thoda sa Suspicion tha ki Rakesh kahi jhoot to nahi bol raha, lekin uski Heartbeat sunke mujhe wo sach bolta nazar aa raha tha. Lekin ek baat mere dimag mein nahi ghus rahi thi ki is Rakesh ki itni gaand kyu fati huyi hai.




Main:- Thanks mera Secret rakhne ke liye aur mera tere sath waise bhi koi Gurdge nahi hai, kal Class mein bhi jo usme tum shaamil nahi they balki tumhare dost they aur Roof pe jo humari Fight huyi wo bhi tum ek dum Apne friend ko danger mein dekhke act kar gaye to sab normal hi hai hum dono mein.



Rakesh:- Thank You mujhe bakshne ke liye, main promise karta hu agar tumhe kuch chahiye ho to mujhe keh sakte ho, bas main ye nahi chahta ki jo bhi Brad ke sath hua hai wo mere sath naa ho.



Main:- Kya hua Brad ke sath?



Rakesh:- He is Dead.


Rakesh ne Confuse hoke kaha aur waha se chala gaya. Usey yahi lag raha tha ki Brad ko maine hi maara hai aur Brad ki Maut Hospital mein huyi thi to sayad mujhe pata na ho. Lekin wo mere aaspass bhi nahi aana chahta tha isliye wo tezi se nikal gaya.



Wahi main waha khada hoke apna Best de raha tha us Info ko digest karne mein. Ek Student ki death hona koi Choti baat nahi thi aur uski Investigation bhi honi thi aur mere ko pakka yakeen tha ki is Investigation mein School walo ka shak mujhpe bhi jayega kyuki Recently mere sath hi uski Fight huyi thi. Aur agar unhe ye pata lag jaata hai ki maine Max aur Rakesh ko Pita hai to fir to wo mere piche pad jaane wale they Brad ki maut ke liye lekin Rakesh ko dekh ke lag raha tha ki wo kisi ko meri baat nahi batane wala tha aur Max ko to meri identity kal pata hi nahi thi. Halanki School walo ka shak mujhpe se kam ho jaayega kyuki jab unhe pata lagega ki main ek Level 1 ka Student hu wo bhi bina kisi Ability ke.




Mere dimag mein ek sawal aur tha ki Brad ko maara kisne kyuki Maarne ki koi wajah hi nahi honi chahiye, kyuki Military humey Select karke School mein laati hai taaki Students jaan pehchan ke na hi aur itne kam din mein kisi se jaanleva dushmani ho jaana almost possible nahi tha. Main jaldi se Apni Class mein gaya to mujhe Sneha mili jisne mujhe kalke baare mein mainly Aakash ke baare mein lekin maine usey Ignore kar diya kyuki wo mujhe Aakash se sawdhan rehne ke liye bol rahi thi aur maine aaj tak kabhi Aakash se apne liye koi ill feeling nahi dekhi thi, wo ek acha dost tha aur main kisi ki bhi baat sunke koi bhi chutiya sa decision nahi lene wala tha, maine khud hi theory bana li thi agar Aakash ne Sneha pe attack kiya bhi to uska Reason yahi tha ki wo mere liye pareshan tha aur bhenchod koi mere liye pareshan hai to mujhe usse bachke kyu rehna.




Mujhe bhi kayi baar lagta tha ki Aakash Strange behave karta hai aur kayi baar aisa lagta hai ki wo kisi bhi waqt saamne walo ko cheer-faad dega lekin ye feeling kabhi bhi maine apni aur Peter ki taraf mehsoos nahi ki thi aur Isliye mujhe koi Problem nahi thi usse.




Wahi kuch hi Minutes mein sabhi Students aa gaye aur Harsh bhi Center mein khada tha wahi Rakesh mujhse bhut jyada duri banaye huye tha aur mujhe dari huyi nazro se hi dekh raha tha. Tabhi Harsh ki awaaz aayi aur usne humey humare Thoughts se bahar nikala.



Harsh:- aaj ke Lesson mein hum Individual Practice karenge. Hum kuch din se bas Weapons ke sath Practice kar rahe hai lekin ab hum apne Weapons ko apni Ability aur Apne Fighting Style ya Skill ke sath use karna sikhenge. Ab tumhe ye Part khud karna padega, Creative banna padega Unique Ideas laane honge ki tum apna Weapon kaise use karte ho. Aur kal hum firse Fight karke Test karenge ki aaj tum sab ne kya develop kiya hai.




Isi ke sath sabhi Students hall mein Fail gaye aur khudse hi Practice karne lage, kuch sochne lage, kuch ek dusre se discuss karne lage. Wahi main bhi abhi akela ek kone main baitha tha aur mujhe koi idea nahi tha ki main kya karu. Kyuki mere paas filhal ek hi Skill thi aur usey use karna bhut easy tha bas mujhe apna hath ghumana hota tha. Lekin mujhe abhi sabse jyada jaroorat thi ye sikhne ki main Fight kaise karu, i mean ek fighting style sikhne ki.



Main:-hhhssshhh, kaash koi mujhe Combat Skills sikha sakta.



Maine itna hi socha tha ki tabhi mere System main kuch Change hua, sayad Maine ye baat bolke System ke part ko Trigger kar diya tha.



<Request of Combat Lesson Activated>

<A Suitable Weapon is Currently in Use>

<Hand to Hand Combat Level 1 will know be Shown>




Tabhi mere saamne ek Video aa gayi thi jise main kabhi bhi Start kar sakta tha. Is Video mein ek 6 Feet Lamba Indian-American banda khada tha jiske Brown ghungrale baal they aur usne bhi mere jaise Gauntlet Pehen rakhe they aur wo abhi ek Khaali room mein khada tha. Wo dikhne mein hi kaafi Strong lag raha tha aur kasam se maine apni life main itna Handsome banda nahi dekha tha. Aur ye pehli baar tha jab maine dil se kisi bande ki tareef ki thi. Wahi Uski Eyes Bilkul Red thi.





Maine mann mein socha aur Video Start ho gayi.




"Hello and Welcome, Beginners ki Hand to Hand Combat class mein tumhara swagat hai. Mujhe nahi pata ab kitna time beet chuka hai lekin agar tum is Video ko dekh paa rahe ho to iska matlab hai ki tum humme se ek ho. Aur main Hope karta hu ki jo main sikhane jaa raha hu wo tumhare aur tumhare Age ke liye useless na ho."



Us Bande ko dekhke aur uski baat sunke main Sochne pe majboor ho gaya tha ki ye banda aakhir hai kaun aur uske Words se hi main samjh gaya tha ki wo ek Vampire hai. Lekin maine apne saare Thought aur Questions ko side mein rakha aur Video ko Continue kiya.



"Jo bhi ye Video dekh raha hai wo ye dhyan se dekho, main abhi kuch Skills dikhane wala hu jo tum apne Level pe easily perform kar sakte ho. Hamari Kind ki Ability Better Work karti hai jab hum Sword ya Gauntlet ka Use karte hai."



Itna bolke wo banda ek Fighting Stance mein aa gaya aur firse bolne laga.



"Abhi main tumhe Basic Moves ke 2 Sets dikhaunga. Inko dekhke sikhna tumhare upper hai aur fighting mein use karna bhi tumhare upper hai. Agar tum bhool jaate ho ya ek baar mein nahi sikh paate ho to tum apne System ko Bolke ye Video kabhi bhi dekh sakte ho."



"Jo Pehla Move mein perform karne jaa raha hu wo ek Defensive Move hai. Aur iska naam hai Flash Step. Agar System sahi hai to is Move ko Perform karne ke liye Agility 15 hona jaroori hai isse kam Agility mein tum ye move perform nahi kar sakte."



Wo banda Flash Step use karne ke liye ready hua, usne apni Body Bend ki jaise wo kisi invisible Chair pe baitha aur usne apne dono Foots ke fingers se ek dum se Pressure release kiya aur wo ek dum Instantly Room ke dusre ke Corner mein pahuch gaya apni ek After Image chodte huye.



"Well, ye Skill Use karne mein tumhe Agility ke sath sath Acha Stamina bhi Chahiye kyuki ye Skill bhut jaldi Stamina use karti hai to dhyan rakhna ki tum jaldi thak na jaao. Is Move ka use sirf kisi Heavy Blow ko dodge karne ke liye aur Ek Fast Attack ke liye hi use hota hai. Aur haa ek baat hamesa dhyan mein rakhna beshak ye move bhut fast hai aur aise hi Naked Eye se dekhna Possible nahi hai lekin Flash Step ki Range sirf 5 Meter hi hai. Aur ye Range badhti jaayegi jab tumhara Level aur Agility badhegi."




Is Move ko dekh ke hi samajh gaya tha ki ye Move kita Usefull hai, i mean agar kal ye move mere paas hota to Rakesh mujhe Touch bhi nahi kar paata aur main usey instantly hara sakta tha. Lekin ek sharm ki baat thi mere Agility Point abhi 15 nahi they aur mera Stamina bhi itna jyada nahi tha.



"Jo next Move main dikhane jaa raha hu us move ka naam Hammer Strike hai. Aur ye ek Attacking move hai."




Ek baar dubara wo banda Fighting Stance mein aaya aur usne apna Right leg jor se Ground pe patka aur tezi se Left hand piche khicha aur Right Hand ka Punch pure Shoulder ka use karke aage ki taraf throw kiya. Boom usne ye Move kaafi asaani aur swiftness ke sath Perform kiya tha uske Punch ke Force se saamne ki hawa tak ud gayi thi.





"Cool Right, is Skill ko use karne ki liye bhi tumhari Strength atleast 15 honi chahiye. Aaj ke liye itna hi aage jab tum ready ho jaaoge to next level ke Moves ki Video apne aap Unlock ho jaayegi. Agar tumhe in Videos ka aur bhi Slow Version chahiye to wo bhi tumhe mil jaayegi apne System mein. Good Luck my Friend and Best of Luck."




Jaise hi Video end huyi to wo Screen bhi gayab ho gayi aur maine apni Status Screen dekhi to mujhe uspe kahi bhi Video ya Tutorial ka Tab nahi dikha lekin jaise hi maine mann mein socha to wo Video ka Section firse khul gaya. Waha bhut saari Videos thi lekin Unlocked sirf 2 thi aur ye dono Video inhi Moves ke upper thi.



Maine wo Screen bandi kari aur Sochne laga ki Video mein wo Banda kon ho sakta hai kyuki usko mere System ke baare mein pata tha kya usi ne to ye System nahi banaya aur mere Parents ko Book ke roop mein de diya ho. Ye sab mere mann ke vichar they koi sachayi nahi. Main first Skill to abhi nahi sikh sakta tha lekin Hammer Strike ko perform kar sakta tha kyuki Gauntlet pehen ke meri Strength 15 se upper hi hoti hai.



Main abhi aur kuch sochta ki tabhi mere paas Harsh aaya aur dheere se bola.



Harsh:- Karan, mere paas ek Bad news hai.



Maine uski baat sunke dekha to uske piche wo Black Clothes mein do log khade they.



Harsh:- mujhe lagta hai tumhe inke sath jaana hoga kahi, tumse kuch questions puchey jaayenge lekin daro nahi main tumhare sath hi rahunga.




Iske baad un do bando ne mujhe aur Harsh ko ek Room mein instantly Teleport kar diya tha jisme koi Window nahi thi bas upper ek light lagi huyi thi. Waha us Room ke Center mein ek Table thi aur us table ke ek Corner ki Chair pe ek Black Hood pehen ke ek Ladki baithi thi aur wo 25 ki lag rahi thi. Aur waha 2 Chair is side rakhi thi aur ek badi Chair humare Opposite rakhi thi aur us Chair ke piche ek insaan khada tha jiski Pith humari taraf thi. Aur uski Clothing se hi lag raha tha ki uski Rank General thi, Ek School mein 3 General hote hai, aur yahi School ke Top Superior hote hai. 1 General First year walo ka hota hai aur 2 General Second Year walo ka hota hai aur 3 General overall General hota hai jo Military School ke aur Branches se Contact rakhta hai aur Wo Sidha Supreme Commander ko Report karta hai jo ki puri Military ka Head hai.




Wo General humari taraf muda to mujhe surprise laga kyuki wo banda ya ladka sirf apne twenties mein tha aur uski Watch pe Power level 8 dikha raha tha.



General:- Sit Down.



Usne mujhe Us Aurat ke paas aur Harsh ko mere sath baithne ke ishara kiya. Hum waise hi baith gaye lekin main us ladke ki Presence mein Nervous feel karne laga tha aur mujhe pata tha ki Harsh jo mere sath baitha hai wo definitely is General se jyada Strong hai lekin fir bhi wo General mujhe intimidate kar raha tha.




General:- itna Nervous hone ki Jaroorat nahi ladke, jaha tak tumne Kuch galat nahi kiya tab tak tumhe darne ki koi jaroorat nahi hai.





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