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Khatarnak mod par yah story roki hain bhai. Waqai me abhi agli update pad kar reply karta hoon. Warna chaon se din nahi guzar payega.UPDATE*94
Aise hi sab Paridhi ki kahani sunkar Raj ki tarif aur b’nath rajendra par apna gussa utarte rahe....
Dusri taraf subah jaise hi chanchal ne store room ka darwaja khola to andar ka nazara dekhte hi uski dahsat se cheekh nikal gayi……
Ab Aage.............
Samne ka nazara hi dil dahla dene wala tha….Poore kamre ki deewaro aur farsh par khoon hi khoon laga hua tha.....
Rajendra ki kati huyi gardan andar pankhe se latak rahi thi....chehre se dono ankhe, dono kaan, naak, hoth sab gayab the sahi maayno me ye kahna sahi hoga ki in ango ko chehre se kaat diya gaya tha.....
Niche poore farsh par khoon ke sath sath rajendra ki body ke kisi Biscuit ki size ke chhote chhote tukde phaile huye the……
Chanchal ki itni jor se cheekhne par Kamini aur guards turnt doud kar uske pass store room aa gaye…..
Magar store room ka drishya dekhte hi unki ruh tak hil gayi….Rajendra ki aisi nirmam hatya ka scene dekh kar sabhi ke pasine nikal gaye…..
Kamini (muh me hath lagakar)—omg…..itni buri mout kaise huyi mere hi ghar me…kisi ko kuch pata hi nahi chala…koun aaya tha yaha….?
Guard—koi nahi aaya tha…aur sahab raat me aaye the paidal hi doudte huye….bahut ghabraye lag rahe the… night duty wala guard bata raha tha……
Tabhi chanchal ki nazar deewar par likhe gaye shabdo par gayi…
Chanchal—vaha deewar par kuch likha hai…..
Magar andar poore farsh par khoon aur sharir ke chhote tukde phaile hone ki vajah se kisi ki bhi andar jakar dekhne ki himmat nahi huyi….
Sab ne rajendra ke chehre par ek nazar daali aur turant hi ankhe band karke udhar se palat gaye….
Aisa scene agar koi kamjor dil ka mariz dekh le to usko vahi heart attack aa jaye.....
Bina ankh kaan naak hoth ke rajendra ka chehra bahut hi bhayanak lag raha tha….kisi ki bhi dubara us taraf palat ke dekhne ki himmat nahi huyi….
Kamini ne apne vakil to turant phone kar ke bula liya… usne police ko call kiya aate hi….
Jaldi hi is bhayanak ghatna ki jaankari milte hi police force mouke par pahuch gayi….sath me commissioner bhi aa gaya…..
Unki haalat bhi room ka scene dekh kar bakiyo se alag nahi thi…..
Turant forensick report wali team ko bulaya gaya…un logo ne aate hi room ke sabhi jagah kaatil ke finger print scan karne lage….
Room se rajendra hi haddiyo ke tukde sametne me police walo ke hosh ud gaye…
Itni dardnak aur nirmam hatya unhone aaj tak nahi dekhi thi…sabse pahle rajendra ke sar ko bore me bhara gaya
Kyon ki uske upar nazar padte hi darr lagne lagta ha aur us taraf dekha bhi nahi ja raha tha…
Uske baad kisi tarah haddiya batori gayi…forensick team ko siway deewar par likhe shabdo ke aur kuch nahi mila
Deewar par likhe shabdo ko padhte hi kamini ko chakkar aane laga….use apni mout ka darr bahut gahrayi tak uske mann me sama gaya….
Sabhi deewar par jo kuch likha hua tha use padhne lage..
"Agla number tumhara hoga Kamini".......
“Mout Se Bhi Bhala Koi Bacha Hai Aaj Tak”…
Y....A....M....R....A....J
Ye padhkar kamini ko us din raat ki party ke baad wala scene yaad aa gaya....jisse vo abhi tak dahsat se bahar nahi nikal payi thi ....
Vo itna jyada bhaybheet ho gayi ki darr ke maare buri tarah chillane lagi is kamare se us kamre bhagne lagi....
Kamini (dahsat me)—vo..vo..mujhe bhi maar dega..mai kaha jau…kaha chhipu….ha ye…kamra ..yaha chhup jati hu….lekin yaha to..khidki hai…agar vo yaha se aa gaya to…nahi..yaha nahi..us kamre me chhip jati hu….yaha bhi khidki…
Kamini (rote huye)—hey bhagwan mai kaha chhipu…ye khidki kyo banwayi maine…guard aur bharti karo jitne ho sake utne bharti karo…poore ghar ki naka bandi kar do….
Kamini ko itni buri tarah ghabraye dekh kar chanchal aur sabhi log pareshan ho gaye….Yamraj naam ka darr to unke andar bhi baith gaya tha…
Chanchal (rote huye)—mummy kya ho gaya hai apko… koi nahi hai yaha…kuch nahi hoga..aap chinta mat karo
Commissioner—aap ghbraiye mat,hausala rakhiye kamini ji, aaj se 10 constable ki duty daily yaha rahegi 24 ghante…aur ye case main hamare department ki sabse kabil officer Ruchi Thakur ko deta hu…
Ruchi Thakur ka naam sunkar kamini aur chanchal dono hi ghabra gayi…
Chanchal—nahi commissioner yaha nigrani ka kaam kisi aur ko dijiye….
Commissioner—is case ko ek vahi hai jo solve kar sakti hai…vo behad bahadur hone ke sath minded bhi hai…..
Iske baad vo sab vaha kuch police walo ko chhodkar chale gaye sath me night guard ko thane bulwa liya….
Mai sabhi ko lekar company flat jaise hi pahucha..sab mujhe dekhte hi koi gaal to koi maathe par kiss karne lage…
Mai samajh gaya Paridhi didi ne sab ugal diya…in ladies ke pet me koi baat thodi der bhi hazam nahi hoti…
Mitaly—tu itna achchha kyo hai Raj…ki koi tujhe chah kar bhi nahi bhool sakta…
Neha—mai aaj teri ghulam ho gayi raj…tune meri beti ki laaz bachakar mujhe kharid liya…..
Mai—chachi dubara aisa kabhi nahi bolna...agar vo apki beti hai to kya meri kuch nahi lagti vo... ? maine kisi par koi ehsaan nahi kiya balki jo bhi kiya vo karna ek bhai ka farz tha…
Meera—teri inhi achchhi bato par hi to hum tum par apna dil haar baithe hain…
Payal—aisa kya kiya mere bachche ne koi mujhe bhi to batao….
Phir Paridhi didi ne apni taraf se aur bhi mirch masala laga kar kahani bata daali..
Jise sunn Ruchi aur Payal didi bhi mujhse chipak kar apna pyar baatne lagi...
Paridhi—lekin didi aap aur Payal yaha kaise achanak... ?
Phir Ruchi didi aur Payal didi ne raat ki sari kahani detail me batayi...jisse sabhi ki ankho me anshoo aa gaye... unke mann me ek bar phir se Pari naam ka darr samane laga
Payal didi aur maa to jor jor se rona chalu kar di....mai unko samjhane laga lekin aurato ke aage admi ki sunta koun hai...
Payal (rote huye)—mai isiliye tujhe kahi jane nahi deti.. mujhe kisi par bharosa nahi hai...ab se tu 24 ghante mere sath rahega samjha...
Mai (mann me)—le le beta lounde lag gaye tere to ab.. ab tu Divya se kaise baat karega Payal didi ke hote huye vo to shukar hai Pari ne in logo ko ghar me hi hone ki baat nahi batayi nahi to Payal didi to sab ghar walo ko hi dushman maan leti...
Payal (rote rote)—tujhe meri ek bhi chinta nahi rahti...itna bhi nahi sochta ki agar tujhe kuch ho gaya to mera kya hoga...mai to jeeti hi tujhe dekh kar hu..tu hi meri shaam hai tu hi meri subah...
Maa (rote huye)—tujhe ab kahi jane ki jarurat nahi hai..ab se tu ghar me hi rahega....tu jaha bhi jayega mai bhi tere sath chalungi....
Mai—maa ab mai bada ho gaya hu....
Ruchi—chup kar bada ho gaya hu....tu hamare liye hamari jaan hai...ham sam bahno ka khwab hai tu..
Mai (mann me)—kaha phas gaya...kaise matter change karu...
Payal (sisakte huye)—(mera hath apne sar pe rakh kar) kasam kha meri ki tu ab se mere bina kahi nahi jayega...
Mai—mujh par yakin nahi hai kya apko....aur mai apki kasam nahi kha sakta...kyon ki aap ki mai apne mann mandir me pooja karta hu...
Payal—theek hai tujhe meri kasam nahi khana to mat kha lekin itna jarur sun le ki jis din bhi mujhe tere bagair gujarna pada vo meri zindagi ka akhiri din hoga....
Maine turant apne hath unke muh par rakh ke unhe apni baho me le liya.....
Mai—aisi ashubh baat kabhi nahi karna....samjhi aap
Payal—huu.......
Kisi tarah sab shant huye....mai fresh hone ke baad Divya ke room me chala gaya….
Vo jaise mera hi intazar kar rahi thi…dekhte hi turant mere gale aa lagi…..
Divya—maine to abhi apne saajan ko jee bhar ke dekha bhi nahi hai….ab hum kaise milenge..Payal di ke hote…
Mai—mai kuch na jugad kar lunga...mai bhi to bahut tadpa hu kisi ke pyar ke liye….hamesha mujhe ek khalipan lagta tha apne jeevan me….ab samajh aaya ki vo kyo tha…
Divya—Pari koun ho sakti hai ghar me….?
Mai—koi bhi ho…lekin jo bhi maine uske sath kiya vo sarasar galat tha….kya use apni sautan swikar karogi..?
Divya ekdam se mujhse alag hokar mere chehre ko dekhne lagi jaise mere chehre par kuch likha ho aur vo use padh rahi ho…..
Mai—kya hua aise kyo dekh rahi ho... ?
Divya—aap ye jante huye bhi Pari kya karna chahti hai, tab bhi..... ?
Mai—nafrat ko nafrat se khatam nahi kiya jata....magar pyar ki dor me to bhagwan bhi bandh jate hain to phir Pari kyo nahi... ?
Divya—aap to aise bol rahe hain jaise ki Jante hain Pari koun hai.... ?
Mai—ha....mai janta hu Pari ka punar janam koun hai...
Ye sunte hi divya ke upar jaise kisi ne bomb patak diya ho....vo ekdam se chounk gayi......
Divya (hairat aur chintit)—kyaaaaa..... ??
Mai—ha..Divya...mai tumhe bahut kuch batana chahta hu apne gujre huye kal ke bare me jo koi nahi janta...
Divya—(pareshan hote huye) Pahle ye bataiye...Pari Koun hai..... ?
Kyu jhatke jhatke ddiye ja rahay ho boss lagta hain story khatam hotey hotey haddia kirtan karne lagegi jhatko se lol...UPDATE*96
Vidhya(thoda gusse me jor se)—kya fijool ki baat kar rahe ho...veer mera beta hai.....
Mai—theek hai mai veer ko apka ek raaz bata deta hu….
Vidhya(haklate huye)—kkk….kaisaaa ….raaz…..?
Mai—yahi ki………
Ab Aage…………
Mai—Yahi ki Veer apka Beta nahi hai dusra Ye ki mujhe aaj se 16 saal pahle mujhe maarne me apka bhi hath tha
Vidhya (gusse me)—Chataaakkk….Nahi…ye sarasar jhooth hai....maine tumhe nahi maara….aur veer mera beta hai….tumhari baat par koi yakin nahi karega……..
Mai—Agar medical check up se ye sabit ho jaye ki aap aaj bhi kuwari ho ….kyon ki gopal mousa jo to ek namard hain….aur jiska hathiyar hone na hone ke barabar ho vo bachcha kaise paida kar sakta hai…ye bhi sabit kar du…..tab bhi nahi……??
Ye sunn kar vidhya mousi ke pairo tale jamin khisak gayi poora chehra ek anjane bhay se murjha gaya…..
Vidhya (ruwansi)—Raj beta ye sab jhooth hai…kyo meri jindagi barbad karna chahte ho…? Tumne hi aaj hamari zindagi bachayi aur khud hi barbad karne par tule ho.. kya chahiye tumhe... ?
Mai—mujhe kuch nahi chahiye....mai to bas sach janna chahta hu....poora sach....jo mousi kabhi mere marne par bhi hamare ghar nahi aayi vo achanak 21 saal baad kaise mujhse milne aa gayi... ? veer ka sach kya hai... ?
Vidhya—tum ye kaise jante ho ki mai virgin hu... ? pahle ye batao....kahi tum mere bathroom me............
Mai—chhi........mai itna gira hua nahi hu...ki apno ko hi bathroom me jhakne lag jau.....aur rahi baat mere janne ki to janta to mai bahut kuch hu...sivay khud ke bare me chhodkar....
Vidhya—agar tumne kisi ko bata diya to mai kahi ki nahi rahungi.....mai tumhare hath jodti hu.....jo tum kaho mai karne ko taiyar hu.....
Mai—aap nishchint rahiye....ye baat mere aur apke beech hi dafan ho jayegi.....Raj ki juban Patthar ki lakir hai... maine ek baar jo kah diya to phir main khud ki bhi nahi sunta....
Vidhya—to suno....Veer meri nanad arti ka beta hai.... Jisne Pita ji ki marzi ke bagair kisi dusri jati wale se bhag kar shadi kar li thi to Pita ji ne use ghar aur jaydad se bedakhal kar ke nikal diya…
Vo dono gaon se bhag gaye the kyon ki Pita ji ne un dono ko maarne ke liye apne admi laga rakhe the…..
Uss samay mai yaha nayi nayi shadi hokar aayi thi… shadi ke pahle din se hi gopal ne mujhe sab sach bata diya
Meri to jindagi hi barbad ho gayi ye jan kar ki meri shadi ek hijde se huyi hai….
Gopal ne mujhe kisi or se sambandh banane ko kaha lekin main taiyar nahi huyi…mere bhi kuch sanskar the
Mai science me brilliant thi aur gopal bhi….to ham dono milkar ek formule par kaam karne lage jisse gopal ki mardangi vapis aa sake…aur sath me sharirik taqat bhi badh jaye……
Lekin hamara rishta sirf Laboratory me ek sath kaam karne tak hi seemit tha…..
Idhar meri sasu maa kanta aur Pita ji Brijnath dono ham par bachche ke liye baar baar dabav bana rahe the……
Ham dono ne city me laboratory khol rakhi thi to vahi rahne lage..jisse hamare kharab rishte ki bhanak ghar valo ko na malum chal sake…
Arti aur uska pati pita ji ke darr se karib 8 saal tak sab ki nazaro se gayab rahne ke baad ek din achanak vapis gaon lout aaya….
Pita ji ko iski jankari milte hi unhone uske pati ko gaon ke beech me lakar ghasitate huye goli maar di….sath me uske sasural valo ko bhi ghar me aag laga ke jala diya..
Pita ji aur mere devar ke darr se arti gaon ke bahar hi nadi kinare ek jhopda bana kar rahne lagi....uske teen bachche bhi the.....
Hamari mulaqat ek bar gaon jate huye arti se ho gayi… hum uske ghar bhi gaye….ghar kya jhopdi hi thi..uski aisi haalat dekh kar maine aur gopal ne use kuch paise dene chahe lekin usne nahi liye…..
Teeno bachche us samay bahut chhote the…unko apne pariwar ke bare me kuch nahi bataya tha arti ne….
Tabhi veer apne ghutno ke bal khelte huye hamare pass aa gaya…use dekh mere mann me bhi maa banne ki lalsa hone lagi….
Ek baar mai aur gopal gaon se shahar ja rahe the ki tabhi…..koi hamari gadi se aake takra gaya…
Flashback Continue…
Update 20 ka ek scene……..
Dhudhte dhudhte raj veer ke ghar ke bahar dikh gaya…….unhone turant Raj ko pakad liya…….usko ghasit kar le jane lage to raj ki dard bhari pukar sun kar v’maa (arti) turant bhagte huye bahar aayi……
Raj ki aisi haalat dekhkar wo turant pass me padi kulhadi uthayi aur doudte huye ek admi ka jo raj ko ghasit raha tha uska wo hath kaat diya……….
Wo admi dard se chikh utha….uski cheekh sun kar baki gunde uske oor doude lekin arti aaj poore chandi roop me krodhit thi jo bhi pass aata raj ke, wo usko katti jati……..
Tabhi waha krishna, kamini, brijnath, shera, rajendra sabhi aa gaye…..kamini ne shera ko kuch ishara kiya to shera ne turant goli chala di jo arti ke seene lagi…..kulhadi ke sath hi wo neeche gir gayi……
Raj ( rote huye)- m…a…a……maa
Magar uski awaz koi sunne wala koi nahi tha…..shera ne iske baad arti ke pet me lagatar 5-6 chaku ke vaar kiye……raj ko jabran gadi se pichhe bandhkar ghasitte huye le gaye……
Idhar veer ko rah rah ke Raj ki yaad aa rahi thi…wo adhe raste se hi vapis lout aaya…….jaise hi ghar pahucha bahar ki haalat dekh kar rote rote apni maa ke pass gaya…….
Veer(rote huye)—maa….maa….maa…kisne kiya ye sab…..bata maa kisne kiya……
Arti--beta Raj ko bachao…..wo usko maa..r de..n..ge…jaldi …..jaooo….veer
Tab tak naina aur soniya bhi aa gayi….ye sunte hi dono turant jungle me mandir ki taraf bhagi……..
Raj ki jaan ko khtre ki baat sunte hi veer rote huye paglo ki tarah bhagne laga…..mai aa raha hu raj….mai aa raha hu…….
Veer (man me rote huye)- aaj se meri jindgi ka kewal ek hi maksad hoga “Tere dushmano ki barbadi Raj….mout ka aisa nanga nach khelunga ki dekhne aur sunne walo ki ruh tak kaamp uthegi”…..
Veer rota ja raha tha….doudta ja raha tha….ki tabhi wo kisi gadi se takra gaya……..
Ab uske aage ki kahani…….Vidhya ki jubani
Mai aur gopal turant gadi se niche utre…tabhi hamari nazar khoon se lathpath veer par gayi…
Hamne turant use gadi me lekar arti ko sath lene gaye lekin vaha ka nazara dekh kar sab samajh aa gaya....
Hamne fauran veer ko lekar city aa gaye...aur hospital me admit kiya...
Veer ko turant operation theatre le jaya gaya…karib 4 ghante chale operation ke baad dr.OT room se bahar aaya…
Mai—dr. kaisi hai haalat ab…
Doctor—dekhiye bachche ke sar me gahri chot aayi hai.. hamne operation to kar diya hai magar uska bachna namumkin hai….mushkil se 2-3 ghante bas aur…sorry
Vidhya (ghabrate huye)—gopal tum kuch karo…ab uska koi bhi nahi hai…use bacha lo…ham use apna beta bana lenge….
Gopal—kaise bacha lu….ab sirf ek hi rasta hai…lekin usme bahut risk hai….veer ki jaan bhi ja sakti hai…abhi uska test tak hamne nahi kiya hai kisi par…
Vidhya—to abhi bhi to koun sa safe hai vo….jo bhi karna hai jaldi karo….
Gopal—theek hai….tum yaha ruko mai lekar aata hu…
Vidhya—nahi tum yaha ruko…mai lati hu…tumhara koi bharosa nahi kahi baith jao pine pane….
Vidhya vaha se turant jaldi me bahar nikal jati hai idhar veer ki saans dhire dhire dam todne lagi thi…..
Karib 1.30 ghante baad vidhya vapis aayi aur gopal ke sath milkar VIP room me veer ke pass aa gaye....
Unhone vo formula veer ki body me inject kar diya…
Magar koi asar hota nahi dikha….ab kewal bhagwan bharose hi jindagi ki gadi tiki thi veer ki…
Karib 2 ghante baad veer ki body me hulchul hona shuru ho gayi….
Doctor ne aake use check kiya…veer ka poora badan kisi aag ki bhatti ki tarah garam hota ja raha tha…1 ghante tak aisi hi condition rahne ke baad uski body me achanak badlav aane shuru ho gaye….
Doctor bhi hairan tha ki ye achanak kaise hone laga… veer ka jakhm apne aap dhire dhire bharne laga aur agle 2 ghante me poora jhakhm hi gayab ho gaya…uski body kafi fool gayi thi pahle se…
Magar usko abhi tak hosh nahi aaya tha…ye dekh kar..
Vidhya—ab kaisi tabiyat hai dr.
Doctor—ab khatre se bahar hai...meri life ka ye behad shocking case hai ...aap chahe to inhe hosh me aane ke baad le ja sakte hain
Gopal—thanks doctor…
Karib 6 ghante baad veer ko hosh aaya magar uski yaaddast ja chuki thi sar me chot ki vajah se…
Maine aur gopal ne veer ko apna beta bana liya…aur india se usa shift ho gaye jisse koi bhi veer ki paidaish par sawal na utha sake….
Us formule ki vajah se veer ki body behad strong ho gayi uska dimag bhi kafi tez ho gaya….is ghatna ke lagbhag 14 saal baad ham india vapis aa gaye…
Kyon ki ab veer ko koi nahi pahchan sakta tha…Pitaji aur meri saas bhi bahut khush huye veer ko dekh kar unko bhi varish jo mil gaya….
Bas yahi kahani hai…baki to tumhe pata hi hai raj…
Flashback End…….
Vidhya mousi ke muh se veer ki kahani sunte huye kab meri ankho me pani aa gaya pata hi nahi chala….
Mai—huuu…lekin ye aadha sach hai….poora nahi…
Vidhya (hairat se)—kya matlab...maine sab to sach sach bata diya tunhe beta...ab kya bacha hai... ?
Mai—aapne mujhe kyo maara..... ? aur ..dusra....Chanchal se apka kya rishta hai..... ?