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Incest Baadshah ~ The Tales of Debauchery

Kya Veer apni life behtar kar paega ya sab kuch kho baithega?

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Update ~ 87 - The Past and The Promise
Ab tak...

Shreya : Wo sab mein dekh lungi... Tum batao na, fir mil jaega na paisa?

Ayushi : umm... Yeah I guess...!? Haha!?

Shreya (smiles) : Thanks!!! M-Mein try karungi... 2-3 lakh bhi milenge toh chalega.

Shreya (mann me) : If I can pull 4 to 5 lakhs from here... Toh dii ne bhi 7 lakh jama kar liye hai. FD bhi tudwa lii thi unhone ek. Then total 12-13 ho hi jaega. But 50 lakh... Baad ki baad me dekhi jaegi... Kahi na kahi se... Ho jaega... I'll borrow some from friends... Tomorrow then!!!!


Ab aage...

Nidhi's Apartment...
Morning ~ 8:05 AM


"Shreya! Abhi tak tum naha ke nahi aayi? Aur ye kya? Naashta pehle hi shuru ho gaya tumhara?"

Awaaz thi Nidhi ki, jo kuch derr pehle hi naha ke baahar nikli thi. Uske lambe baal abhi bhi geele the aur bheegne ke kaaran kaale ghane rang ki damak aur bhi badha rahe the.

Unn pyaari aankho me banaawti gussa tha Shreya ke prati aur uske haatho me pooja ke liye kuch safed phool. Badan pe kassi hui ek naarangi rang ki saree jo uske nagn pait ki makhmali twacha ko ujaagar kar rahi thi.

Koi keh sakta tha ki aisi stree, aisi aurat ko koi pati apne paas rakhne me asafal raha? Kyuki, usse dekh acche acche naujaavano ki niyat bigad jaati thi. Fir aisi aurat yadi aapki apni patni ho, toh aap bhala kese usse apne qareeb se jaane de sakte ho?

Par aisa hua tha. Rajat! Nidhi ke pati ne apni ghinauni fetishes ke chalte, apni patni ko kho diya tha. Dusro ko dard dene me, khaaskar aurto ko physically harm pohuchaane me, Rajat ko aanand aata tha.

Ek aisa aanand, jiska wo kaayal ho chuka tha. Nidhi ko maarna, peetna, badan pe garam pighalti hui momm giraana, baalo ko zorr se kheechna, ityaadi. Inn sab peedao se Nidhi ko guzaarta tha woh. Aur Nidhi ka wo bilakhta hua, dard se peedit chehra dekh usse ek aseem sukh pradaan karta tha. Paaglo jese wo hassta, muh se jeebh nikaal, janwaro ki tarah uske bhaav ho jaate the. Saral shabdo me, wo ek darinda tha. Jiske pinjre me, Nidhi jesi masoom koyal, aake phass chuki thi.

Idhar Nidhi aaj shayad naashta bana ke naha ke baahar aayi thi pooja karne aur Shreya ko usne jab bina nahaaye hi nashta karte hue dekha toh usse daatne lagi.

Shreya : Ugh! Please dii! Pehle pait pooja fir kaam dooja. Baad me nahaane jaungi aaj. Aaj boht bhookh lagi hai.

Nidhi : Tum bhi na. Derr raat tak jaagti rahogi, poori neend nahi logi aur fir poora routine bigaad logi apna.

Shreya : Soowiieee~ Last time bas. Haha~

Nidhi (sarr hilaate hue) : Jao ab jaldi. Juhi se seekho kuch. Wo itni choti hone ke bawajood naha dho ke chali gayi school.

Shreya : Haan haan~ Because it's April. Juhi ko pata hai ki bas kuch din aur. Fir toh garmiyo ki chhutiyaa. Par mera aisa nahi hai na didi~ I have to work all the time.

Nidhi : Yahi hoti hai life Miss Shreya!! Life is hard. Always!!!

Shreya Nidhi ki baat par kuch na boli, par andar hi andar wo poori tarah se sehmat thi. Life can be a bitch sometimes. It's hard. Always!!!

Wo apni hi soch me kahi doob gayi,

'Don't worry Dii! I'll fix everything for you. No! We can do this!! Together!!! Mene Mom ko bhi mana liya hai. Even doctor se bhi baat kar lii hai. I just have to submit medical seeking application today. Uske baad, company kuch na kuch raashi zaroor degi.'

Shreya, ek acche aur positive mind set ke saath ghar se nikli aur company pohuchi.

Usne apni colleague Ayushi se bhi consult kar liya tha toh ab bas application dene ki hi derri thi.

Uske baad, Shreya ki mom ke baare me checking hoegi ki waqai wo hospital me admit hai ya nahi? Aur bas, uske baad company kuch medical fee offer kar degi.

Yahi tha simple sa Shreya ka plan. Of course, ye cheating thi ek prakaar se. Par, aaj ke zamaane me kaun cheat nahi karta?

To survive, One must cheat.

***

Ragini's home...

Veer ke iss ghar me, subah subah Veer neend ki waadiyo me tha, saath hi system bhi sleep mode me tha. Kul milaake, wo ek chenn ki neend so raha tha.

College se aane ke baad Veer ka poora focus Nidhi ke upar hi tha aur wo bas ussi ke liye ab apni nayi planning ko anjaam dene waala tha.

System ka sabse pehla mission ~ 'Solve Nidhi's Problem' jo ab tak pending pada hua tha. Ek saal ka waqt diya gaya tha system dwara. Aur abhi keval around 4 mahine bache hue the iss mission ko.

Rahi baat penalty ki? Toh system hi penalty thi. Yadi Veer Nidhi ko Rajat ke changul se churraane me nakaamyab raha, toh woh system ko kho dega. Hamesha hamesha ke liye.

*Creeeaaaakkkkkkkk*

Idhar uske room ka darwaaza khula aur koi andar aaya. Veer hamesha apne room ka darwaza khula hi rakhta tha jab jab wo akela sota tha. Taaki Aabha ya Suman ko jab bhi aana ho wo aa jaa sake.

Par filhaal andar aane wala shaks unn dono me se koi nahi tha. Ye koi aur nahi, Shweta thi.

Ahista ahista wo andar aayi, gate ko andar se hi band kiya aur Veer ke bed ke paas aakar baith gayi.

Jhukte hue wo Veer ke sote hue uss chehre ko dekh jese kahi kho gayi. Komalta se haath uske chehre par ferr, Shweta Veer ko sote hue nihaar rahi thi. Jese wo kisi aur ko nahi, apne bacche ko nihaar rahi ho.

Uske dil-o-dimaag me yahi bas chuka tha ki Veer uski hi santaan hai. Koi gerr nahi, Veer uska baccha hai.

Veer ka uski jaan bachaana, apne logo se dhutkaar diye jaane ke baad Veer ka usse sahaara dena, apni ekmaatr hotel ko kho dene ke baad, Veer ka usse waapas se dilwaana. Uske inn sabhi actions ne, Shweta ke mann aur hriday me ek gehri chhaap chorr dii thi.

Uski nazro me Veer ab woh Veer nahi tha. Veer ka auhda ab boht badh chuka tha dono hi Shweta aur Bhumika ke mann me. Khaaskar Shweta ke.

"Keval tumhe ek Maa ka pyaar chaahiye tha. Jo mein tumhe kabhi na de saki. Keval... Keval ek maa ka pyaar. Kitni gayi guzri hu na mein? Mere paas ek beshqeemti heera jab se maujood tha. Aur mein waha unn chand rupayo ke liye marr rahi thi. Na keval mene unn rupayo ko khoya, balki uss anmol heere ko bhi kho diya. Sahi kehte hai log, laalach buri bala hai. Hai na!? Mere bacche!?"

Veer ke baalo par haath ferr Shweta aaj apni mann ki baat bolti jaa rahi thi.

*Puch*

Apne gehre laal rang se saje hontho se usne Veer ke gaal chume, fir maatha, uski chin aur fir apne gaalo se uske gaal ragadne lagi. Ussi ke sang uske bagal se jhuk ke baith gayi woh.

"Par ab mein... Tumhe sab kuch dungi. Ek Maa ka pyaar jo tumhe kabhi na mil saka. Wo mein dungi tumhe... Mera bachha... *Puch* Mein nibhaungi tumhari Maa ki bhumika... Mein mere betu... *Puch* ""

Bharpoor koshish ke baad bhi wo rok na paayi khud ko, aur uski aankho se aasu chhalak uthe.

*Tip* *Tip*

Aasuo ki boonde Veer ki t-shirt par gir rahi thi aur Shweta kisi ateet me kho gayi.

20 years ago...

Ye baat thi tab ki, jab Bhumika keval 5 saal ki thi. Shweta ek khush haal jeevan vyateet kar rahi thi.

Uske paas lagbhag sab hi kuch tha. Ek pati, ek accha ghar, ek phool jesi sundar beti. Aur kya hi chaahiye tha usse? Yadi kami thi toh bas ek cheez ki. Uske paas ek beta nahi tha.

Par shaayad uski ye khwaaish bhi poori hone jaa rahi thi. 9 mahine apne garbh me bacche ko rakhne ke baad, aaj uske pait me achanak hi dard utha. Aur Shweta ka pati, Hitesh fatafat Shweta ko lekar forun hi aspataal pohuch gaya.

Shweta stretcher par laiti nurse ke dwaara andar bheji jaa rahi thi aur Hitesh ke haatho ko wo zorr se thaami hui thi. Hitesh bhi Shweta ka haath thaame, room ke baahar tak uske saath saath aaya.

Aur fir...

Delivery ki process shuru hui. Harr guzarte pal, Shweta ki zorrdaar cheenkhe hospital ke uss ward me bikharti gayi.

Dard se bilbilaati Shweta sab kuch sehte jaa rahi thi. Kyuki, agle hi pal usse apni ek aur santaan dekhne ko milne waali thi. Uske janm aur khushi ke liye Shweta kuch bhi karne ko taiyaar thi.

Atyant peeda ho ya kuch bhi, wo sab sehte jaa rahi thi. Mann me keval acche vichaar hi aa rahe the.

Bhumika ab akeli nahi rahegi, uske saath uska ek bhai ya behan rahegi ab. Uska pati aur bhi khush ho jaega apna vaaris paane ke baad. Bada hoke wo apne Maa baap ke sapne poore karega. Abhi se hi wo inn khwaabo me kho gayi.

"Aaaaaaaaaaaaaa maaaaaaa~"

Dard pe dard, asahaneeya ekdum. Maa hona apne aap me sukh toh hota hai par Maa bann'ne ka jo raasta hota hai, uss raaste se guzarte waqt jo peeda hoti hai, usse keval ek mahila hi samajh sakti hai. Purush nahi!

Akhir kaar, unn cheenkho par virhaam laga.

Aur kuch antraal ke baad, Shweta ki aankhein dheere dheere khuli.

'!!!???'

Saamne hi Hitesh uska pati baitha hua tha. Sarr jhukaaye. Aur apni patni ki harqat mehsoos karte hi wo uth ke uske paas aa gaya.

Shweta kuch na boli. Uski himmat hi nahi ho rahi thi. Aisa mehsoos ho raha tha usse jese wo ek jung me ladd ke aayi ho. Jidhar ab usse saans lene ke alaawa aur kuch nahi soojh raha tha.

Hitesh jaan gaya ki Shweta kya poochna chaahti hai isliye usse ab bolna hi pada.

Hitesh : W-Wo...

Shweta : !!????

Par wo bolta ki tabhi doctor andar aa gaya aur...

Hitesh : D-Doctor saahab!

Doctor (nods) : J-Jiii!

Shweta (haafte hue) : M-Mera... Mera baccha??

Shweta ke muh se sabse pehle shabd yahi nikle. Usse apni haalat ki parvaah nahi thi. Pehla khayaal aaya toh bas apni santaan ka.

Doctor : ....

Hitesh : ...

Shweta : ???

Doctor : I... I'm so sorry miss but... Something terrible and unwanted happened.

Shweta : ??

Doctor : W-We... We couldn't save your son. He's no more!!! We're so sorry!!

Ye sunte hi, Shweta kuch palo ke liye sann reh gayi.

Shweta : Huh!?

Doctor : Delivery was a failure. We are extremely sorry.

Shweta : H-Hitesh!?? D-Dekhiye... Y-Ye kya keh rahe hai?

Ye khabar Shweta ko abhi nahi dii jaane waali thi. Par ant me sabhi ne yahi decide kiya ki abhi dena hi behtar thi. Yadi in case Shweta ko jhatka lagne se uski haalat bigadti bhi hai toh woh wese bhi doctors ki nigraani me hi rehne waali thi. Isliye, ye dukhad samachaar usse abhi hi diya gaya.

Kitni aas liye thi woh, kya kya sapne nahi sajaaye the usne? Apni kokh se ek nayi santaan ko janm dene jaa rahi thi woh.

Behoshi ke baad apni aankhein khulte hi apne bacche ko dekhna chaahti thi woh. Par usse mila kya?

Jis santaan ko usne janm diya, uska baccha...

Wo choti sii nanhi jaan pehle hi jaa chuki thi?

Shweta ko uss shan kitni peeda mehsoos hui thi, ye koi bhi shabdo me baya nahi kar sakta.

Khabar sunte hi uski condition hyper ho gayi aur ek baar fir, woh behoshi ki haalat me chali gayi.

Jab usse punaah hosh aaya. Toh uski aatma se jese kuch gaayab ho chuka tha. Wo ek zinda laash ki tarah ho chuki thi. Saans toh leti thi, par koi jawaab nahi, aankho se bas aasuo ki dhara, aur sunn'na toh jese chorr hi diya tha usne.

Itna bada sadma laga tha. Samay toh lagna hi tha ubharne me.

9 mahine! 9 mahine tak usne apne bacche ko garbh me rakh itna kasht uthaaya. Par...

Sab kuch khatam ho chuka tha ab uske liye.

Bas yahi ek adhoori iccha toh thi uski. Ek bete ka hona. Beta aa bhi gaya tha. Par antim charan par jese kisi ki nazar lag gayi uski khushiyo ko aur ek jhatke me sab kuch chhin gaya uss se.

Kuch samay beet gaya Shweta ko hospital me doctors ki nigraani me. Jab uski condition stable hui aur wo ghar jaane ki sthiti me aayi toh...

Ek aur bada jhatka jese usse lagna baaki tha.

"Humne aap se ek baat aur chhipaayi hai. Uss waqt hamaari himmat nahi hui aapse bataane ki par ab chuki aapki haalat behtar hai aur aap sunn'ne samajhne ki haalat me hai toh ye hamaari job hai ki hum aapko bataaye. Actually... Wo... I'm very sorry to tell you Miss Shweta... Par... Par ab aap Maa nahi bann sakti..."

*Booommmm*

Ek aur visfot hua uske andar. Itna dukh kam tha jo uss se ye bhi chheen liya gaya? Isse sunte hi bachi kuchi kasar jo thi, wo bhi poori ho gayi. Poori tarah toot padi woh.

Usse doctors se aur jankaari me fir pata laga ki, delivery ke waqt kuch aise circumstances bann gaye the jiske chalte na keval uske bacche ki jaan gayi balki Shweta ki jaan bachaane ke liye bhi unn logo ne extreme measures liye the. Shweta ke andar kuch aisa body part tha, jo shayad damaged ya ruptured ho chuka tha uss failed delivery ke waqt.

Jiski wajah se, woh dobaara Maa bann'ne me asaksham hoke reh gayi.

Uss bechaari se ek Maa bann'ne ka sukh bhi chheen liya gaya.

Shweta mahino tak itna gambheer rahi, uski haalat dekh aas paas ke log bas taras hi jataate the. Harr waqt rona, udaasi me doobe rehna, kisi kaam me mann na lagna. Shweta jese cope up nahi kar paa rahi thi.

Par jese tese, uparwale ke chamatkar se, usne himmat baandhi. Jo hua, so hua. Usse aage badhna tha ab. Uske paas ek hassta khelta parivaar tha. Hitesh aur Bhumika. Wo apne chalte unhe udaas nahi rakhna chaahti thi.

Akhir kaar wo apni uss haalat se thoda theek hui. Par...

Par jese waqai uski khushiyo ko kisi ki nazar lag chuki thi. Ek din, jab wo baithi hui, Bhumika ke liye thand me sweater bunn rahi thi. Tab ek letter aaya uske naam pe.

Ghar ki naukraani usse wo letter dene aayi. Letter kholte hi jese hi usne poora padha wo hadbada ki cheenkhte hue uth gayi.

"Aaaaaaaaaa~"

Aas paas rakhe bartan bhi gir pade. Aur kamre me unka shor phel gaya. Uske thar tharaate haatho se wo chithhi zameen par gir gayi.

Jo usne apne kabhi jeevan me bhi nahi socha tha wo ho gaya.

Hitesh, uska pati...

Pehle se hi...

Shadi shuda tha!!!!!!

Letter ussi ki orr se tha. Aur bas chand shabd hi likhe hue the~

"Shweta! Mujhe maaf kar dena. Mene tumhe pehle nahi bataaya. Kabhi himmat hi nahi hui. Par sach baat ye hai ki, mein shadi shuda hu. Tum meri pehli nahi, dusri patni ho. Mein jaanta hu tumhe jhatka laga hoga ye padh ke. Par yahi sacchaayi hai. Tumse milne ke baad mujhe nahi laga tha ki hamaari shadi itni jaldi ho jaegi. Khaaskar aise ki tum bhaag ke mujhse shaadi karogi. Aur mein khud ko rokk bhi na paaya. Mere paas koi waaris nahi tha. Pehli patni se bhi 2 ladkiya thi mujhe. Aur tumse bhi Bhumika hui. Mein iss baar boht hi sakaraatmak tha. Socha tha iss baar hamaara ek beta hoga. Par ek dukhad samachaar hi mila. Wahi meri pehli patni ne... Mujhe iss baar ek beta de diya. Mujhe maaf karna. Ab mein tumhaara dekh bhaal nahi rakh paunga."

"Tum ek behad hi khubsoorat aur pyaari aurat ho Shweta. Yadi mujhe pehle tum mili hoti, toh mein dusri shadi kabhi nahi karta. Apni galtiyo ki saza ke taur par... Tumhaare liye wo ghar tumhaare naam kar ke jaa raha hu. Kuch paise bhi hai almaari me. Bhumika ke naam bhi kuch paise hai. Ye mere glaani ke chalte tumhaare liye. Mujhe dhundne ki koshish na karna. Mein nahi milunga kabhi. Mera naam, Hitesh nahi hai. Aur na kabhi tha. Tum chaaho toh police me complaint kar sakti ho. Par koi fayda nahi hoga. Mein boht dur jaa chuka hounga tab tak. Isliye khud ko pareshan mat karna. Tum jaanti ho ki mein bhi koi itna ameer nahi ki do do parivaar sambhaal saku. Ab chuki mera beta mere paas hai. Toh mein uski padhaayi aur bhavishya ke liye paise jodna chaahunga. Bhumika ke liye mein ek accha baap na bann saka. Maaf kar dena mujhe Shweta. Maaf kar dena. ~ Hitesh!"

Bas! Yahi chand shabd the uss khat me.

Shweta soch rahi thi ki wo apne dukh se baahar aa paegi. Aur ab? Ye kya tha? Bhagwan toh jese uss se sukh chheen'ne par hi tule hue the. Iss baar toh uska poora sansaar hi ujad gaya.

Daat dene padegi Shweta ki, jo itna sab kuch sehne me bawajood apna maansik santulan nahi khoyi. Beshaq, wo behad royi, toot toot ke royi, vilaap kiya, aur na jaane kin kin halaato se guzri. Par abhi bhi usne apna aapa aur santulan nahi khoya tha.

Usse itna bada dhoka mila tha. Itna bada dhoka. Uss din se hi, Bhumika uske liye ek beti toh thi hi par ek beta bhi bann gayi. Wahi sab kuch thi uska.

Shweta ne unn paiso se Bhumika ko padhyaa likhaaya. Khud usne hotel management ke liye course kiya. Sab kuch unhi paiso se.

Par paise toh paise the. Ek na ek din toh khatam hone hi the. Shweta kaam bhi karti thi par uski aaay itni nahi thi ki wo Bhumika ki fees ke saath saath ghar ke saare kharche utha paaye.

Nateeja? Usse apna ghar bhi bechna padd gaya. Wo sadak par aa chuki thi. Be-sahaara ekdum. Jab dar dar wo bhatak rahi thi.

Tab... Tab uski mulaqaat ek shaks se hui.

Brijesh!!!

Shweta chaahti nahi thi. Par... Par apni Bhumika ke liye jese wo sab kuch karne ko raazi thi. Usse pata laga ki Brijesh bhi ek aurat ki talaash me tha. Toh bas, Shweta ne koi kasar nahi chorri, Brijesh ke sang apna rishta jodne me.

Aur jald hi dono ki shaadi bhi ho gayi. Kuch iss tarah Shweta ne fir Brijesh ke ghar me qadam rakha.

Usse samajh aa chuka tha ki khud ki sampatti hona kitna zaroori hota tha. Mann me wo thhaan chuki thi, ki...

Ki wo hamesha apne aur Bhumika ke baare me hi sochegi. Kyuki koi kisi ka apna nahi hota. Bhumika ko bhi woh wahi sikhaati. Apni dastaan ke baare me bataati.

Aur iss ghar me aate hi uski pehchaan hui fir Veer se.

"Veer!!! Aaj se mein tumhaari Maa hu. Theek hai?"

Veer se usne kaha, toh Veer ne kuch na kaha. Wo usse dekha aur rote hue apne school ka bag liye apne kamre me ghus gaya.

'Kya hua iss ladke ko?'

Shweta aaye din Veer se baat karne ka try karti, par Veer kuch na kehta. Usne socha tha ki Veer ko pyaar se rakhe. Bete ki kami usse hamesha mehsoos hoti thi. Aur ab rishto ke chalte, Veer toh uska hi beta tha na? Toh Veer ko apna maan'ne me kya buraayi thi?

Par... Shweta ka ye vichaar din-ba-din badalta gaya. Jab aaye din Veer ke kisse uske kaano me padne lage.

"Aaj Veer ne class me pant me hi susu kar lii. Hahaha~"

Pranjal aaye din kuch na kuch bataata.

"Arre... Hahaha~ Aaj Veer ko Sir se maar padi. Sir ka diya hua homework hi nahi kiya isne hehehe~"

"Pata? Pata? Aaj kya hua? Veer ne aaj class ke ladko se jhagda kar liya aur fir unn logo ne isse dho diya. Hehe"

"Dada jii! Veer na auto me... Ek ladki ki skirt kheech raha tha aaj. Wo boht royi thi. Aap chaaho toh mere dosto se puch lena."

Toh kahi Vivek ki shikaayte,

"Veer ne toh meri izzat hi dubwa dii college me. Mein isse techfest dikhaane le gaya tha aur ye... Ugh! Ab kya bolu mein, mere dosto ke saamne mazaak bana diya. Akhiri saal hai mera, ab kya sochenge wo mere baare me."

Toh kahi aas pados ke log,

"Aap apne Veer ko samjhaaiye. Kal mere aangan me dale hue kapdo me keechad uchhaal ke gaya hai ye."

"Arre ye toh kuch bhi nahi hai. Ek din isne colony ke uss sabzi waale ke sarr me patthar maar ke uska sarr phod diya tha. Mene aur neelam ne patti kari thi unki. Aur ye? Ye bhaag gaya tha waha se."

"Keval itna hi nahi, arre ek din isne wo kya kehte hai... Kaun sa khel rehta hai? Maar gend!?? Gend se maarte hai jisme? Arre isne uss thos gend se uss koshta saahab ke chote bacche ko maar diya tha. Koshta saahab ne isse mere saamne thappad maara tha."

"Dekhiye Dada jii! Hum sab aapko apne Dada jii jesa maante hai. Par apne iss pote ko samjhaaiye. Cricket khelte waqt, Raikwaar saahab ka baccha aangan me tha toh isne aisi gend pheki ki uske sarr ko jaa lagi. Raikwaar jii ki patni ne isse maara tha fir."

Aur na jaane kya kya... Ye toh 1% bhi nahi tha unn shikaayto me se.

Aur aise hi, Shweta ka lagaav Veer ke prati kamzor hota gaya, uska vichaar Veer ke liye badalne laga. Wo Veer ko pyaar toh dena chaahti thi, par...

Aaye din aisi ghatnao se Veer jese uss se dur jaata chala gaya. Wo yadi Veer ko dekhti toh bas usse sarr jhuka ke apne kamre me jaata hua.

*Thud*

Aur ek tezz awaaz ke saath uska kamra band ho jaata.

Zyaada samay nahi laga, jab Shweta ki nazro me Veer maatr ek ajnabi ke samaan bann ke reh gaya.

Aur Shweta ne Veer ke prati pyaar, izzat, lagaav, chinta sab kuch jese nazar andaaz kar diya. Kahi lupt ho gayi jese.

Fir aaya wo samay, jaha Shweta ne apni soojh boojh se ek hotel apne naam karwaayi.

Kitna zaroori tha ye sab. Yadi usse dhoka mila bhi toh kam se kam jeene ke liye uske paas koi sahaara toh rahega.

Par usse aur chahiye tha. Jitna mil sake utna behtar. Khabar mili, Manorath ki property kii. Jab do praani kisi ek cheez ka shikaar karte hai toh aksar wo raaste me ek dusre se mil hi jaate hai.

Yaha bhi wahi hua, Shweta jaake mil chuki thi Vivek aur Pranjal se. Fir wo samay aaya jaha property ke naam par wo Veer ko ghar se baahar nikalwane ke plan me bhi peeche na hati.

Ye sab zaroori tha. Uske liye keval Bhumika hi sab kuch thi. Toh usne ye kiya.

Par mila kya? Thenga! Property haath se nikal gayi. Firse, usse dhoka mila. Apne naye parivaar se.

Wo waqt aaya, jidhar wo apni jaan par khel rahi thi. Aur apni saari umeed kho chuki thi. Soch rahi thi ki kitna vyarth beeta uska jeevan. Par uss waqt tab...


Ussi ne usse bachaaya. Ussi veer ne jisse wo shuru se ant tak neglect karti aayi. Ussi shan, Shweta ke andar ka wo glaani ka baandh toot gaya. Aur uske mann ne ye baitha liya ki Veer uski hi toh santaan hai.

Haan! Jis santaan ke liye wo itna tadpi, wo jese yahi tha. Jab Veer ne kaha tha ki wo uski Maa nahi, tab...

Isliye boht zyaada peeda hui thi usse. Veer kuch bhi chheen le uss se. Par... Par kabhi bhi ye haq na chheene uss se. Veer ki Maa hone ka haq.

Ek beta usse mil chuka tha. Apna beta. Apni santaan. Aur ab usse kuch nahi chaahiye tha.

Kuch bhi nahi. Na paisa... Na shohrat... Na koi property...

Bas... Veer!!!

*Tip* *Tip*

Aasu jab uske haath par gire, toh Shweta ekdum se jese apne ateet se baahar aayi.

Yahi tha uska ateet. Veer abhi bhi so raha tha. Wo toh bhool hi gayi thi ki wo yaha Veer ko nihaarne aayi thi. Ateet ko jitna bhi bhula do, ek na ek baar saamne aa hi jaata hai.

"Mera baccha...!!!"

*Puch*

Aasuo ko poch, usne Veer ke sarr ko uthaaya aur uske chehre ko apni chaathi me sama liya.

Jese hi Veer ka chehra uske adh nagn uroz se takraaya, ek sihran uske poore badan me fel gayi. Ek chingaari... Bhadak uthi.

Aur uski rulaayi chooth gayi. Veer ke chehre ko kass ke poori taaqat se usne apne stano me daba liya. Pallu toh pehle hi gir chuka tha. Unn bade doodh ki daraar me Veer ka chehra chhup chuka tha.

"Mera baccha.. *subuk* Ohh mera baccha ♡ *subuk* Mujhe maaf kar de Veer... Iss aurat ko maaf kar de... *subuk* Mein kasam khaati hu, aaj se ye Shweta tujhpe koi haani nahi aane degi mere bacche... Ahh~ mera betu... *Muaaahhhh* *subuk* I swear Veer... Maaf kar de iss aurat ko... Maaf kar de... *subuk* "

Wo badbadaati rahi. Jab tak ki usne Veer ke poore chehre par apni chumbano ki barsaat nahi kar dii. Aur fir be-mann wo usse chorr ke apne kamre me gayi.

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Evening ~ 7:44 PM

Veer din bhar ke kuch kaam nipta ke jab ghar aaya toh apne kamre me jaa ke usne haath muh dhoye.

Aur baahar aate hi neeeche se usse Ragini ki awaaz sunaayi dii,

"Veer! Tumse milne Shreya aayi hai."

'Hmm? Shreya jii?'

Sawaal liye wo neeche aaya toh Shreya office ke hi kapdo me baithi hui thi. Aur Veer ko dekh ek feeki sii smile paas kii usne.

Shreya : Umm... Veer... K-Kya hum akele me baat kar sakte hai thoda?

Ye sunte hi Veer ko aashcharya hua ho ya na hua ho, par Ragini ke kaan zaroor khade ho gaye the. Wo ek teekhi nazar se Shreya ko dekhi par Shreya ke uske dekhne par fauran hi Ragini ne apni aankho ke expression badal liye.

Ragini (smiles) : Veer! Apne room me le jao. Shreya ko shayad kuch personal baat karni hogi.

Ragini ki wo smile dekh Veer samajh gaya. Wo jese kehna chaah rahi thi, 'Jao! Jaake baat karo. Aur baad me mujhe sab kuch bataana kya kya hua uss band kamre me. Yadi ek bhi detail choothi toh dekhna fir.'

Veer haan me sarr hilaate hue utha aur Shreya ko apne kamre me leke gaya. Abhi woh aake apne kamre ka darwaza band kiya hi tha ki...

Shreya peeche se uss par toot padi. Uski peeth ko zorr se jakad Shreya ke haatho ne uske pait ko kass liya.

"Huh?"

Veer socha shayad ye fun way me tha par... Lekin Shreya ke agle pal hi subukne ki awaaz aur hichkiyo ne Veer ko hairaani me daal diya.

Veer : Sh-Shreya jii!? Kya hua?

Aur Shreya ne sab kuch bata diya...

Sab kuch. Jo aaj uske saath hua. Sunte sunte Veer ki aankhein felti chali gayi aur mutthi kassti gayi.

Bas bacha tha toh...

*Ding*

[Mission : 1) Rescue the prey from the p
redator.
2) Conquer Niharika Bansal.

Rewards : 1) ???? Points.
2) 3 Free Quest Hunt attempts.
Venue : xxxxxxx company.
Time Limit : 2 Days.
Mission Failure Penalty : 8000 Points.]

Veer palta aur usne Shreya ko apne seene se laga liya,

"Don't worry! I promise! 2 din ke andar hi andar... I'll turn the events. And, you'll be fine."
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Aaj ke liye itna hi guys.
New arc paas aate jaa raha hai. I think, uski starting se pehle abhi more than 5 updates toh lag jaane hi chaahiye, kuch matters ko sort out hone me. Baaki, like thokne ka aur revos rakhne ka. Aur sochne ka, ki aisa kya hua hoga Shreya ke saath? :smile2:

Dhanyavaad! ✨
Ding nice nothing predictable aage kyaa hogaa waiting for next update
 

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So... Another Mission arrives! Niharika Bansal is the target fir Veer... Shreya ki boss prateet hoti hai ye Niharika, owner of that company I think... Shreya ki job Veer ne Suhana se kehkar lagwayi thi, uske husband Gaurav ki company mein... But Gaurav was the CEO of that company and currently I think Niharika (or her husband, if she's married), might be the owners... But Update 86, ka jo washroom waala scene tha, usmein jo aurat thi, yadi wo Niharika hi hai, then one thing I can guess about her is, she somehow dislikes men... Ye isliye nahi kyonki wo lesbian sex ka aanand le rahi thi but her words pointed towards it... Secondly, mission tha, “Conquer Niharika Bansal", it would be damn exciting to read that happening, especially if Niharika really dislikes men...

Shreya ke saath exactly kya hua ye to next update mein hi pata chalega... But ek baat kaafi clear hai ke Shreya ka plan fail ho chuka hai... Apni Maa ki fake Medical reports ke zariye wo kuchh paise haasil karna chahti thi, taaki Nidhi apne bete ko waapis paa sake, jahaan tak main uske plan ko samjha tha,there were not a lot of loopholes... Aur mere hisaab se to kewal ek hi aisa loophole tha jo uska plan fail aur use expose kar sakta tha, and that's Aayushi... In case usne Shreya ko betray kiya ho to nischit hi Shreya poori tarah se fans chuki hogi...

Secondly, the massive reward, if the penalty is of 8,000 points then it's obvious ke rewards mein mile points bhi kam nahi honge... On top of that, 3 free quest hunt chances, means 600 points to waise hi use mil rahe hain, aur yadi koyi legendary card mil gaya to sone par suhaga... Iske alawa if Veer “conquers" Niharika, perks to uske bhi honge hi alag se :D... Btw. Time limit is 2 days, to Veer ke paas waqt to hai achhe se plan banakar use execute karne ka, ab dekhna ye hai ke kya Veer mission poora kar paayega, he'll do it most probably but kaise karega, ye padhne mein Aanand aayega... Plus, this mission's success + Shreya being saved by him + Nidhi's problem being solved by Veer would definitely mean, a huge rise in Shreya's favourability and maybe she'll realise what she exactly feels for Veer...

Suman... Again a rise in favourability, 144, damn she's something else... Is rise ke saath – saath jo change dekhne ko mil rahen hain, Suman aur bhi adhik Veer ke prati jhukti chali jaa rahi hai... It seems that after some time, she might even start feeling jealous on seeing Veer with other girls... Haan, wo Ragini ki manosthiti samajhti hai aur koshish bhi karti hai ke Veer aur Ragini ko akele waqt bitane ka mauka mil sake, but that jealousy factor can come into play too...

Veer ne jaisa ke Kavya se vaada kiya tha usi ke mutabik wo College pahunch gaya... Dance Competition was the reason of Kavya calling him there... Pranjal waale incident ke baad uska bhi jhukaav Veer se prati badh hi gaya hoga aur saath hi wo thodi dukhi bhi hogi hi ke uske sage bhai ne hi Veer ke saath wo sab kiya... Kavya ne socha tha ke wo Veer se us Holi incident ka badla le legi but bechaari... Ek thappad ke badle 10–12 baar apne gaal laal karwa liye usne.. of course chehre ke nahi kahin aur ke... “Only I can bully you & no one else", Veer ke ye shabd, uske thappad jinhe Kavya asal mein Spanking samajh rahi hai, and all of that resulted in a kiss... Sote huye Veer ke saath apni first kiss share ki Kavya ne aur bechaari ko laga ke Veer ki bhi ye first kiss hai... She's too innocent man! Ab use kaun bataye ke roz raat ko do – do auraton ke saath Veer.... :whistle: Aur to aur uski hi badi behen ko bhi wo kiss kar chuka hai, accidental but still a kiss... Imagining her reactions when she'll come to know about Veer:lol:...

Kavya ke scenes aksar hi kaafi cute hote hain... Uska Veer ko dekhte hi uspar kood jaana, Veer ke bum par maarne ke baad khud hi sharma jaana, aur fir wo kiss waala poora scene, halanki Kavya is more than 18 + wo itni samajhdar bhi hai ke wo Veer ke saath apni first kiss share kar li, but still she's too cute... Loved her conversations with Veer... Btw. Ek aur baat pata chali aur wo ye ki, Kavya ko bigadne ke pichhe us Kritika ka haath hai...
K-Kritika ne kaha tha... It feels warm... And soft... ( ˘ ³˘) " Wo aur jhukti gayi aur ant me...
Kya – kya sikha rahi hai ye ladki bechaari cute aur chhoti si Kavya ko... Meanwhile, seems like Kritika has also started developing feelings for Veer... Ab koyi bhi ladki Veer ko dekh kar attract to hi jaayegi, Kritika is no different... Uska Veer se baat karne se katrana aur baar – baar blush karna, isi taraf ishara karta hai ke jald hi Kritika par bhi focused ek update hume padhne mil sakta hai... Waise bhi wo pehle se hi bigdi huyi ladki hai... :sigh:

Pragya too... She blushed on making an eye contact with Veer... What a turn of events it has been... Kisi waqt Veer isi ki wajah se pita tha aur aaj Veer wahaan pahunch gaya hai jahaan Pragya ki maujoodgi se use fark bhi nahi padta... Iske alawa, Arohi, with respect to her personality Chess Competition mein hi bhaag ke rahi thi... Wahin Ragini ka Veer par hakh jamaana, wo scene bhi kaafi badhiya tha... Zyada din tak bach nahi paayega Veer us se...

Coming to Shweta, uska Veer ke prati badhta prem saaf dikhayi de raha hai... Firstly, that incident on the breakfast table... Veer isn't tharki but aakhir hai to launda hi, saamne maal dikhayi dega to nazar chali hi jaati hai :akshay:... Shweta ka pallu sarakne se uske cleavage ki jhalak Veer ko mil gayi jiske chalte achha – khasa impact pada Shweta ke oopar... Clearly, ek pal ko bhi use naa to gussa aaya aur naa hi bura laga... Hairaangi aur sharm hi do visible bhaav lage us waqt Shweta ke, seems like ke ye ek raasta ban sakta hai Shweta ke liye Veer se maafi praapt karne ka...

Shweta ka past bhi saamne aaya... Uske bete ki maut, Uske pati ke dwara diya gaya dhokha, aur fir Brijesh jaise ka saath,the third one was the worst though... Kaafi kuchh jhela hai Shweta ne apne past mein, obviously jab Veer ko is sabka pata chalega to ek soft corner uske dil mein bhi Shweta ke liye ban hi jaayega... But he's not going to forgive her soon... Hitesh aur uski pehli patni ki family ka role bhi ho sakta hai aage chalkar... He deserves a punishment for sure... Let's see Shweta Veer ki maafi ke liye aage kya karegi and also Bhumika, she'll come in the similar picture too...

Idhar, Nidhi se lambe samay baad Veer ki mulakat ho hi gayi... But abhi tak jaisa uska vyavahar tha wo bana hi hua hai... I'm thinking ki Veer kaise uski madad karega? She is definitely not going to take any sort of help from Veer... Let's see Veer kaise mission complete karta hai... Aakhiri baat Veer ki, “If I die, will you care".. of course ek instant inpact dikha Nidhi par iska aur jab akele mein baithkar wo is meeting ko yaad karegi to Veer ke shabd use aur bhi adhik tang karenge... Dekhte hain kab Nidhi is sachayi ko accept karegi that she has fallen for Veer...

Kayi gatividhiyon se bhare huye updates the dono... Chahe wo Suman ho, Ragini ho, Shweta ho ya fir Kavya... And of course Nidhi too... Shweta ka past bhi saamne aa gaya,I think Veer ka bhi ek flashback aayega jismein uske bachpan ki baatein pata chalengi & in my opinion wo past, asal mein Veer Bhavana ko batayega... Filhaal, Shreya ka matter hi important hai, aur Veer abhi usi par focus bhi karega...

Bohot hi badhiya updates the bhai dono... As I said earlier, the conversations of Kavya & Veer were beautifully written... The scene between Nidhi & Veer, was again filled with emotions... Fir chaahe wo Shweta ka past ho ya present ke scenes, dono hi perfectly likhe aapne... You're an absolute master when it comes to depicting those emotions & feelings... Amazing work bro!


Outstanding Updates Bhai & Waiting For Next...
 
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Nice update Werewolf bhai.
Achha update diya he. Ek taraf shreya, Nidhi he to dusri taraf shweta aur uska ateet.
Yahi shreya roj ke jese office Jane wali he par madam abhi ne abhi tak nahaya nahi he. Nidhi hamesha ki tarah hi badi bahen ke roop me pyaar se samjha rahi he usko. Juhi ka example de rahi he par wo bachhi bhi badi samjhdaar he. Usko pata he ki kuch din aur fir to sara din masti hi karni he. Apne mausi aur mama ke sath. Tab tak veer Nidhi ke bich sab achha hua to majha aayega. Kya pata kahi ghumne bhi chale jaye sab😅. Juhi to apna time enjoy karegi hi bas Nidhi ka dekhna he. Veer ne jarur kuch achha soch rakha hoga. Aur iss baar Nidhi haar jayegi apne dil se.
Wahi shreya ne sab plan kar rakha he apni company se paise lene ka. Par lagta nahi uski mann ki hogi. Shreya fass jayegi ya to apni bhul se ya wo niharika shreya ki circumstances ka fayda uthana chahegi.
Idhar Veer in sab baato se anjaan shanti se soya hua he. Suman jagane aati ya ragini par shweta ko kisi ek ne dekh liya hoga to disturb nahi kiya. Shweta ko bhi jese pichle kuch me hosh aaya he ki kon sahi he kon galat. Inn sab baato ke samne aane se ab wo Veer ko wahi pyaar dena chahti he jo aaj tak nahi diya. Matlab shweta tab tak veer ko maa ka pyaar na deti jab tak Veer uske liye kuch na karta.
Wahi shweta ka ateet bhi samne aa gaya. Ek ke baad ek bade dhoke mile he. Ek bete ki chah thi par wo mila nahi ulta wapis maa hi na bann saki uske baad, fir jisko apna pati manti thi wo nikla dhokebaaz jisko saja milni chahiye Vese. Ese nahi Jane de sakte usko. Fir jese tese khud ko aur apni beti ko sambhala aur fir brijesh se shadi kari. Bete ki Kami puri Karna chahti thi par veer bhi tab chota tha. Kese kisi ko bhi ek din me maa maan leta. Wahi pranjal aur vivek to bachpan se hi jese veer se nafrat karte the. To pranjal ki uss ladki ka jana kya fark padta tha wo to pahele bhi nafrat karta tha aaj bhi karta he. Well par shweta ye sab baate Sunn ke Veer se baat bhi to kar sakti thi par usne Veer se distance kar liya aur brijesh ko bhi jese isse fark na pada.
Shweta chahti to Veer se aur close ho sakti thi, Veer ka bharosa jeet leti to Veer sab bata deta. Par nahi shweta ko paisa chahiye tha to chhodo Veer ko. Shweta ka Veer ko maa ka pyaar na dena chalo thik he par yaha sabse badi galti kari shweta ne wo ye ki wo pranjal vivek ke plan me mil gayi Veer ko ghar se nikalne ke liye. Ab Veer ko ghar se nikalne ki ghatna kahani ke shuruwat me hui thi par log jante nahi ki ye bahut badi ghatna he. Jab aapko aapke hi ghar se nikalne ke liye ghar ke log aapke khilaf ho to kese aap unko maaf kar sakte ho. Veer ke sath to koi na tha tab aur Nidhi na hoti to kya pata jinda bhi rehta ya nahi. Ye sab saha he veer ne.
Shweta wahi sab yaad karte aaj glaani me he. Aur ab se wo Veer ko ek maa ka pyaar dena chahti he balki usse ab Veer ke alawa kuch aur nahi chahiye. Par Veer kese ubhar jaye uss dukh se jo barso se dabaye hua he. Aur ab usse shweta ( uski step-mom ) ki kya jarurat jab usko apni maa mil chuki he bas bhavna samne aaye utni der he. Aur lagta he shweta try karti rahegi aur veer bhi chup chap sab dekh lega par maa ke pyaar ki baat aate hi Veer najre fer lega shweta se.
Shweta ke liye bada jhatka ye hoga ki Veer ko pata he ki uski maa kaha he. Tab kya karegi shweta ?? Wahi bhumika bhi try kar rahi he Veer se baate Karna par ateet me bole gaye bol bhari padd rahe he uski juban par. Veer should ignore bhumika for now. Tab akal aayegi usko.
Shreya office se sidha Veer se milne aayi he tabhi se pakka he ki uske sath wo na hua jo socha tha. Shreya ko akele me baat karni he. Ragini to utna sunn ke hi Veer ko looks de rahi he. Jese keh rahi ho baate ke siwa kuch aur kiya to dekh lena 😅 Aur baad me sab batana bhi he usko. Wahi veer ko lag raha he ki kuch baat hogi. Par baat bahut gambhir nikli. Shreya ne jo socha tha wo to na hua par lagta he wo fass chuki he. Ab 2 mission mile he usko.
Shreya sidha Veer ke paas aayi he he darshata he Veer ki image uske mann me. Ab pyaar bhi karti he usse par iske baad favourability uski bhi sky rocket ho jayegi.
Aur Kya pata niharika Veer ki kayal ho jaye😁😁. Harem he to bahar ki kuch aurte to hongi hi.
Ye baat Nidhi ko pata chali to wo khud ko dosh degi. Teeno juhi, Nidhi, shreya sab ke achhe din aane wale he😁. Juhi apne mama ( papa ) ke sath masti karegi wahi Shreya bhi par Nidhi ka dekhna he wo kya karti he. Kitna rokegi khud ko.
Ek POV Nidhi ka bhi chahiye bhai.
Bhavna aur Tejal kya kar rahi he ??😁
Waiting for next update.
 
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