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Fantasy Lucifer- The fallen angel(completed)

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Lone survivor

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WRITER’s NOTE

School times se likhne ka bahut shauk tha mujhe mostly poems hi likhta tha. School me hi ek ladki mili bahut pyaari thi. College ke 3rd year tak relationship chala fir vo chali gaye door. Uske baad kabhi socha nahi tha dobara kuch likunga. Bilkul man hi nahi karta tha. Nashe to jaise jindagi ban gaye the. Pehle bhi nashe karta tha lekin uske baad jada ho gaye. Akela rahna acha lagne lagega aur dheere dheere sab door hote chale gaye. Main akela hi bacha tha. Tab kahi se xf ka pata chala aur pata nahi kyu aise hi ek raat pehli story ka first update post kar diya. Ek medium mil gaya tha mujhe kuch share karne ka aur acha bhi lagne laga tha. Dheere dheere vapas likhna start kiya aur es baar stories. Xf par kuch stories likhi fir vo band hua to yaha aa gaya. Aur vohi silsila yaha bhi kamyaab raha. Aap sabko sayad idea nahi hoga ki jo thoda bahut interact hota hai humara yaha vo kitna important ho sakta hai kisi ki life me. Es waqt mere pass almost sab kuch hai lekin agar kisi ko kuch share karna chahu to aisa person nahi hai esliye beech beech me kuch updates me apni situation likh deta hu to acha lagta hai. I hope ki humara sath aise hi aage bana rahe.

Ek mew story ka dimag me kuch idea hai lekin kab start hogi eske liye abhi sure nahi hu

May be main kuch dino ke liye rehab chala jau ya fir kuch aur mil jaye sath chalne ke. Lets see

In the end i want to thank each and everyone of you guys who has supported me and gave me so much love. Means a lot

Thank you so much guys. Jaldi hi milte hai ek new story ke sath tab tak ke liye 👋
 

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Luci bhaya aap kmal ho dhmal ho bs ab malamal hona baki hai or vo hoga asmita ke Ghar me ghush kr jo usne chalange kiya hai... Police station se sidha jail pahuch gya or vha se naag ke aadmiyo ko chhuda laya... Superb update bhai sandar jabarjast
Thank you so much bhai
Bhai vo MAALaMAAL pehle se hi hai aur vo bhi high quality wale se
 

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Naag ke pichhe police padi hai sahi hai Luci bhaya se kaam karvana chahta tha apna ab apni gand bchaye ghum rha hai... Madhuri ma'am ke yha pahuch gya market me or unse favour mangne ka kahne lga khana ke badle, Lagta hai guru ji ne Luci bhaya ko civilised hone bheja hai protection dene ke alava... Ab Luci ka man badal gya hai dekhte hai kya karta hai ab... Superb update bhai sandar jabarjast
Bhai civilized hone ke liye to lucifer ko koe na hi bejhe to hi acha hai otherwise result aapko pasand nahi aayenge
 

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Ye kya kr diya Luci bhaya ne asmita madam ko provoke kr diya or aage bhi dhire dhire karega Jisse Uski shaktiya jagrit ho jayengi... Superb update bhai sandar jabarjast
Provoke kiya ya fir aayna dikhaya?
Muskil hai decide karna
 

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Abe ye kya tha Bhai log koi btayega... Raat bhar sasta nasha karne ke baad pahuch gya asmita ke pass or ab ekdum se apology apology karne lga... Bhai Isse Pahle mere ko jo nasha tha Vo utar diya tumne last tk aate aate... Superb update bhai sandar jabarjast
Yehi side effects hai bhai saste nashe ke
Saste nashe na kare na karne de
Yaha sab expert log hi karte hai
 

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welcome to the hell again A stoner . I am happy to see you alive here :) .

let me read the nashedibazi. i believe ki tabahi macha degi ye story. Wish you a best wine for you .
Welcome back bhai
A stoner bahut time baad kisi ne ye naam bola hai
Even I'm happy to see you here
Bhai wine nahi whiskey
Humara kya hoga wine se?
 

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UPDATE-11

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* ek screen me guruji dikhae de rahe the aur samne lucifer apne room me batha hua tha
Lucifer- aapne mujhe bejha hai, maine nahi bola ki mujhe yaha bejho
Esliye mujhe kaam mere tarike se karne do
Guruji- tumhre bolna ka tarika bhi badal gaya hai

Lucifer- marne ka nahi badla hai
Guruji- tum chhije kharab kar rahe the

Lucifer- main jo bhi kar raha hu soch samjh ke kar raha hu
Guruji- nahi tumhe bilkul nahi pata tum kyu kar rahe ho

Lucifer- to jisse pata hai usse kara lo
Agar mujhse kaam karana hai to mujhe dakhal pasand nahi
Guruji- sayad meri hi galti hai
Maine hi tumhe astra sastra ka gyan diya lekin ek chhij ka gyan dena bhul gaya vo hai istree ka samaan karne ka gyan

Lucifer- jiska karna chahiye uska main karta hu, madhuri ma'am se to maine kabhi galat nahi bola
Guruji- kyuki badle me bahut kuch chahiye tumhe unse esliye nahi kar rahe
Mujhse kuch chhupane se kuch fayda nahi hone wala tumhe

Lucifer- aap bata kyu nahi dete ki aise kya baat hai us ladki me jo uske liye aapne etne logo ki jaan jhokhim me daal di?
Aap bhi jante ho Main jaha jata hu vaha kya hota hai?
Guruji- mujhe sab pata hai
Aur mujh se sawal puch sake etne yogya tum abhi hue nahi ho

Lucifer- aur na kabhi hunga
Esliye bina kuch bole baat maan li thi lekin kaam karavana hai to mere tareke se hoga
Guruji- kisi kanya ka dil jeetna ho to usse dard nahi dena chahiye balki aise kaam karna chahiye jisse uska dard apne aap khatam ho jaye

Lucifer- aapne bola tha ki uski hifazaat karni hai ye nahi bola ki uska dil jeetna hai
Guruji- tum dono ki manjil ek hai lucifer

Lucifer- nahi chahiye aisi manjil mujhe
Khoon chahiye mujhe bas control karna muskil ho raha hai mujh se
Guruji- tum koe shataan nahi

Lucifer- yaha etne din hogaye aaj tak to aise kuch nahi hua jisse dekh ke aisa lage ki sach me meri jarurat hai
Guruji- to kya tum es chhij ka intezaar karoge?
Aur aisa kuch hogya uske baad tumhri kya jarurat padegi?

Lucifer- mera chehra theek karo
Mujhe pata hai aap kar sakte ho esliye mera chehra theek karo
Chahe kuch bhi waqt ho mera chehra nahi badalna chahiye
Guruji- sare sawalo ke jawab tumhre andar hi hai
Ek baar apne andar jhaak ke dekho sab kuch mil jayega

Lucifer- mujhe paheliya nahi suljani
Mera chehra theek karo aur mujhe dobara kisi se maafi mangne ke liye nahi bologe
Agar aapko manjur hai to theek nahi to main vapas chala jaunga
Guruji- tum vapas nahi ja sakte ab aur agar tum kuch galat karoge to mujhe tumhe rokna bhi padega kyuki puri shristi tumhre upar tikki hue hai aur main kisi bhi kimat par espar aach nahi aane dunga

Lucifer- puri shristi agar es ladki par tikki hoti to aap mujhe nahi bejhte
Ab aap jaye mujhe bahut kaam karne hai
Guruji- madhuri ki samasya bhi tumhe hi door karni hai

Lucifer- mujhe kya karna hai ye mujhe bahut ache se pata hai
Aur etna bol kar lucifer connection kaat deta hai aur vapas bed par gir jata hai

Aaj sayad pehli baar usne kisi se maafi mangi thi aur vo bhi aisi ladki se jisse vo janta bhi nahi hai ye uske liye bahut badi baat thi
Agar guruji ya koe aur hote to sayad usse kuch fark nahi padta lekin ashmita se maafi mangana usse khatak raha tha
Ab dekhne ye hoga ki ye khatak kaha tak jati hai

Dusri taraf

Sumer ke farmhouse par madhuri ma'am ko pakad rakha tha unhone aur lucifer ke bare me puch rahe the

Sumer- jitna jaldi aur aasani se bata doge utna hi acha hoga aapke liye
Kon hai vo ladka
Ma'am- kiski baat kar rahe ho tum?
Mujhe kuch nahi pata

Sumer- vo naya ladka jo college ke Park me batha rahta hai kon hai vo?
Ma'am- mujhe kya pata?
Etne sare students hote hai college me

Sumer- lekin vo ladka naya hai
Pehle to kabhi nahi dekha usse aur sale ne aate hi mere aadmiyo ko tapka diya
Aap se bhi baat karte dekha gaya tha
Esliye agar apni aur apni beti ki salamati chahte ho to uske bare me jo pata hai hume bata do
Ma'am- main kuch nahi janti
Maine bhi abhi dekha tha usse
Naya tha esliye uske bare me puch rahi thi ek baar bas

Sumer- aap teacher ho esliye respect kar raha hu
Lekin mujhe majbur na karo
Ma'am- jab mujhe kuch pata hi nahi hai to main kya batau tumhe?

Sumer- ye aise nahi manegi
Eski beti ko utha lao
Ma'am- mujhe sach me kuch nahi pata
Maine to pehle kabhi dekha bhi nahi usse

Sumer- bunty ja aur Ma'am ki beti ko leke aa

"Uski koe jarurat nahi padegi main khud yaha aagya" piche se aawaz aae aur lucifer Sumer ke kuch bando ko apne kando par tange andar gussa

Aur aate hi sare adhmare logo ko Sumer ke samne fek diya

Sumer- kon hai be tu?
Lucifer- tune ma'am ko takleef deke apni maut ko nyota de diya hai
Aur teri vo maut hu main

Sumer- maro sale ko
Sumer jor se chhilaya aur uske log lucifer ki taraf bhaga

Chahe abhi din ka time ho lekin lucifer ke samne insaan hi the esliye uske liye bilkul problem nahi thi unke body parts unke sareer se nikalne ki

Jaise hi ek aage bada lucifer ne uska galla pakda aur vahi tod diya
Dusre ke pet par bahut jor se laat mari aur vo udta udta jahanum me pahuch gaya

Samne se aa rahe do bando ke sar phut chuke the aur ek ka pair uske sareer se alag ho chuka tha

Aisa narsaghar dekh ke vaha ke logo ki aankhen khuli ki khuli rah gaye aur Ma'am to dar se kapne lagi

Sumer aur bunty aapas me dekhne lage ki kya kiya jaye?
Unhe sabse acha idea vaha se bhagne ka hi laga lekin maut se kya koe bhag paya hai dunia me?

Vo jaise hi bhagne ke liye mude lucifer unke samne khada mila unhe
Jisse dekh ke hi unke sareer se pasine bahne lage

Sumer- hahume maaf kardo
Hum to bas order follow kar rahe the
Humari koe personal dusmani nahi hai ense aur tumse
Lucifer- maaf kar deta agar tu mere samne aake ladta lekin tune jisko uthaya hai uske liye bahut izzat hai mere under
Esliye main tujhe zinda chhodunga lekin tu kuch kar nahi payega

Aur lucifer ne uski dono tange aur dono pair uske sareer se alag kar diye aur sar par etne jor jor se war kiya ki vo vahi gir pada
Bunty to ek war nahi jhel paya lucifer ka aur vahi bhagwan ko pyaara hogya

Abhi lucifer ka gussa bilkul shant nahi hua tha lekin fir Ma'am ki aankhon me aashu dikh gaye usse aur vo bilkul normal hogya

Bhagte hue Ma'am ki sari rasiya kholi aur unhe pakad ke uthane laga lekin madhuri ma'am etna dar chuki thi ki lucifer ke touch se hi unka sareer kapne lag raha tha

Lucifer- ma'am ma'am?
Lucifer ma'am ke gallo ko halke hatho se marte hue unhe jaise hosh me lane ki kosis kar raha tha
Ma'am?
Aap theek ho?
Aap theek ho Ma'am?

Lekin etna sab kuch dekhne ke baad koe kaise theek ho sakta hai
Lucifer ne bhi waqt ki najakat ko samjha aur unhe khud hi utha ke unke ghar le aaya aur bed par lita diya

Unko peene ka pani diya aur sareer ko halka sa rub karne laga taki vo normal ho sake

Lekin ma'am ki to najro ke samne baar baar vohi scene gum raha tha jab lucifer un logo ko berahmi se maar raha tha

Bahut der tak lucifer kosis karta raha ki ma'am normal ho aur usse kuch success bhi mili kyuki ab ma'am thodi thodi response karne lag gaye thi

Lekin abhi tak puri tarah se normal nahi hue thi

Unka gora chehra bilkul laal ho chuka tha aur agar es time koe unhe dekh leta to sidha chum leta etni pyaari lag rahi thi madhuri ma'am lekin samne lucifer tha aur uske liye kiss se important ma'am ki life thi

Ma'am- tum kon ho?
Bahut time baad vo kapte hue sirf etna hi bol paye
Lucifer- aap theek ho?

Lekin ma'am to bas lucifer ko dekhe ja rahi thi jaise uske chehre se kuch padhne ki kosis kar rahi ho ya fir sayad aaj tak unki kisi ne etni care nahi ki ho esliye lucifer ko dekh rahi thi

Lucifer- aap theek ho?
Es baar ma'am ne lucifer ki aankhon me dekhte hue ha me gardan hila di aur jab jake vo thoda shant hua aur piche padi chair leke bath gaya

Kuch der tak vaha shanata raha
Koe kuch nahi bola sayad sabad nahi mil rahe the ya fir dono me se kisi ko nahi pata tha ki bolna kya hai

Lucifer ne aakhir kaar shanti todi aur bola aapki beti school se kaise aati hai?
Ma'am ne ek baar apni ghadi dekhi fir boli bus se

Uske baad fir shanti chha gaye

Lucifer ko hi firse bolna pada
Aap mere number lelo agar fir kabhi aapko lage ki aap kisi musibaat me ho to mujhe turant call kar dena

Ma'am ne koe response nahi diya

Lucifer- ma'am main yaha se door nahi ja sakta abhi aur na aap ja sakti ho
Hum dono ki hi majburi hai yaha rahne ki esliye main aapko bata deta hu ki aaj jo hua vo aage bhi hone ki puri puri possibilities hai
Main bas etna kosis karunga ki aap en sab me involve na ho
Lekin main vada nahi kar sakta
Halanki main es baat kar wada karta hu ki main aapko kuch nahi hone dunga
Please mujhe galat mat samjhna
Ye hi meri zindagi hai aur yehi meri zindagi rahegi

Pata nahi kyu unhone aap se mera milan karaya sayad esme bhi unki koe chaal hi hogi lekin aapke liye main unse bhi lad jaunga
Kyu hogaye aap etne important mere liye me mujhe abhi tak pata nahi chala

"Mumma main aagaye" bahar se Alia chhilate hue ghar ke ander ghusi

Uski aawaz sunte hi dono gate ki taraf dekhne lage aur Ma'am bhi jhat se bed se khadi hogaye aur apne aapko theek karne lagi

Lucifer ne ma'am ko ek baar dekha fir vaha se chala gaya

Lekin ab uske dimag me ek hi chhij ghum rahi thi ki " hum to sirf order follow kar rahe hai"
Lucifer ne etna to samaj liya tha ki jinko usne jalaya tha ye uska boss tha aur vo dono ashmita par najar rakhe hue the Sumer ke Kahne par aur Sumer ye sab kar raha tha kisi aur ke Kahne par

Eska saaf saaf matlab ye tha ki agar Sumer apne bando ke liye ma'am ko utha sakta hai to Sumer ka boss Sumer ke liye bhi kuch na kuch to karega hi
Aur jaisi halaat lucifer ne ki hai Sumer ki uske hisaab se to kuch planned aur badi chhij hogi

Lucifer ko ab ashmita se jada ma'am ki chinta thi kyuki ek baar agar ashmita muskil me pade aur vo nahi pahuch saka to guruji kuch karke usse bacha sakte hai lekin agar ma'am kuch problem me hue aur vo nahi pucha to ma'am ko kon bachaega?

Aisa bhi nahi ho sakta ki lucifer 24 hours ma'am ke aas pass hi ghumte rahe
Ek to vo aisa nahi kar sakta aur dusra aisa karne se vo aur Ma'am sab ki najro me aane lag jayenge
Aur Sala ye dunia etni bhi achi nahi hai ki ek married aurat ka kisi aur ke sath gumne par kuch acha soche

Eska ek sabse badiya idea aaya lucifer ko ki ma'am ke aas pass ek aisi shield bana de jisse usse turant pata chal jaye ki ma'am koe problem to nahi hai
Jisse vo usse solve kar sake aur Ma'am safe bhi rahe

Lucifer ko ye idea sabse theek laga aur usne socha ki aaj hi raat ko vo aisi shield banaega jo ma'am aur Alia ki protection karegi

Ye shield insaano se to apne aap hi unhe safe rakh sakti hai bas lucifer ko jab hi jana hoga jab unhe koe dusri shaktiyo se khatra ho

Ye sab sochte sochte lucifer raat ka intezaar karne laga....
 
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