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Fantasy Lucifer- The fallen angel(completed)

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Lone survivor

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WRITER’s NOTE

School times se likhne ka bahut shauk tha mujhe mostly poems hi likhta tha. School me hi ek ladki mili bahut pyaari thi. College ke 3rd year tak relationship chala fir vo chali gaye door. Uske baad kabhi socha nahi tha dobara kuch likunga. Bilkul man hi nahi karta tha. Nashe to jaise jindagi ban gaye the. Pehle bhi nashe karta tha lekin uske baad jada ho gaye. Akela rahna acha lagne lagega aur dheere dheere sab door hote chale gaye. Main akela hi bacha tha. Tab kahi se xf ka pata chala aur pata nahi kyu aise hi ek raat pehli story ka first update post kar diya. Ek medium mil gaya tha mujhe kuch share karne ka aur acha bhi lagne laga tha. Dheere dheere vapas likhna start kiya aur es baar stories. Xf par kuch stories likhi fir vo band hua to yaha aa gaya. Aur vohi silsila yaha bhi kamyaab raha. Aap sabko sayad idea nahi hoga ki jo thoda bahut interact hota hai humara yaha vo kitna important ho sakta hai kisi ki life me. Es waqt mere pass almost sab kuch hai lekin agar kisi ko kuch share karna chahu to aisa person nahi hai esliye beech beech me kuch updates me apni situation likh deta hu to acha lagta hai. I hope ki humara sath aise hi aage bana rahe.

Ek mew story ka dimag me kuch idea hai lekin kab start hogi eske liye abhi sure nahi hu

May be main kuch dino ke liye rehab chala jau ya fir kuch aur mil jaye sath chalne ke. Lets see

In the end i want to thank each and everyone of you guys who has supported me and gave me so much love. Means a lot

Thank you so much guys. Jaldi hi milte hai ek new story ke sath tab tak ke liye 👋
 

Lone survivor

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To Apne Luci bhaiya ko apna past hi yaad nhi hai Chalo jaise taise vha se nikal aaya or ab guru ji ne bheja gurudev ke pass vo bhi dhakke mar kr sahi hai guru! To yha Luci bhaiya ko ek tarah se asession ki training mili hai kiling instant, gurudev prathvi bhej rhe hai ek ladki or uske dwara chahne valo ko bchane ke liye, ek ladki jiske upar puri duniya ka santulan tika huya hai... Superb update bhai sandar jabarjast
Thank you so much bhai for the support
Yaad hai ya past hai hi nahi ye to waqt hi bataega bhai
Sath bane rahe
 

Lone survivor

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Wah! Luci bhaiya aap to ek najar me flat Ho gye... Ye Madhuri maim hi madad karengi Luci bhaiya jao or jakr daboch Lo :D Sandar update bhai jabarjast
Abhi flat hona sayad sahi nahi hoga
Slow seduction is what this story is about
 

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Oho to Luci bhaiya ne Aaj fir car se thukne ka plan bnaya tha pr asmita ne dekh liya or plan flop pr Tina ne paise diye Luci ke mehantana ke roop me Madhuri maim ab mobile chlana sikhayengi, ye kon log the Jo asmita ke Ghar pr najar rkhe huye the... Superb update bhai sandar jabarjast
Tina nahi bhai Tara
Madhuri ma'am ne to nahi sikhaya bechare ko khud sikhna pada
 

Lone survivor

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Tow Dono ladkiyon mese ek ka naam Asmita h or doosri ka naam Tara
Aisa kia h Asmita m jo dekh nahi paya Lucifer lekin kuch mehsoos kerke khud ki halat kharab ho gayi
Baherhal dekhte h aage kia hota h
Badhiya shaandaar update bhai
Kya hai ye to mujhe bhi nahi pata abhi sayad aage chal ke pata chal jaye tab tak sath bane rahe
 

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UPDATE-4

** ghane janglo me aadhi raat ke waqt bahut sare rakshasho ke bich me lucifer khada hua tha
Uski aankhen aur aankhon ke aas pass ka pura area kala ho rakha tha aur aisa lag raha tha jaise aaj ye raat apne sath kayamat laye hai kyuki jaise hi ek rakshash lucifer ki taraf bhada lucifer ne ek behad khatarnaak punch mara uske pet me aur dusre hath se uske sareer ko pakde rakha taki vo door jake na geere aur agle hi pal uske sari aatandiya(intestine) lucifer uske pet se bahar nikaal laya
Usse door fekte hue apni talvaar nikali aur buri tarah unko kaatne lag gaya
Uski raftaar aisi ho rakhi thi ki aam insaan to usse dekh hi na paye aur kuch hi minutes me vaha sirf lashe bach gaye aur unke upar batha hua tha lucifer***

Next day vo utha aur kuch soch ke ek jagah khada ho gaya aur kisi chhij ka intezaar karne laga
Ye ek t point tha aur agar kisi ko left mudna ho to usse dikhega nahi ki samne koe hai ya nahi

Vahi khada khada lucifer intezaar karne laga kisi ka aur usse intezaar bhi jada der karna nahi pada

Kyuki vahi kali car usse door se aate dikhae di aur lucifer vahi side me khada hogya aur jaise hi usne turn liya ek dum se uske samne aagaya

Car bahut speed me thi esliye lucifer udta hu door jake geera aur usme bathe ladkiyo ko din me taare dikhne lage

Vo dono jaldi se car ke bahar aaye aur lucifer ki taraf bhage jo uthne ki kosis kar raha tha
Morning ka time tha esliye usse thoda pain ho raha tha abhi lekin fir bhi vo uth khada hua aur apne kapde theek karne laga

Bahut sundar ladki- tumhe dikhae nahi deta kya?
Ya fir marne ka shauk chada hai aur agar chada hai to kahi aur jake kyu nahi marte?
Meri hi ghadi mili thi kya marne ke liye?
Usse kaam sunder ladki- tum theek ho?
Kahi chot to nahi aaye?

Bahut sundar ladki- aise log jaan bhuj ke humari gadiyo ke niche aate hai taki paise mil sake
Usse Kam sunder ladki- hospital leke chale kya tumhe?

Bahut sundar ladki- apne purse se paise nikalte hue
Ye lo aur niklo yaha se
Lucifer ki taraf ek notes ki gaadi karte hue boli

Lucifer jo abhi tak kuch nahi bola tha uski taraf dekha, hatho se paise liye aur
Lucifer- kal yahi par milenge aur paise pure laana aur ye bol Kar vaha se chala gaya

Ye dono ladkiya bas usse dekhti rah gaye ki sala abhi hua kya?

"Ashmita aisa nahi bolna chahiye tha tumhe" kam sunder wali boli
Ashmita- didi aise logo ke sath aisa hi karna chahiye
Aur dekha nahi aapne kaise paise leke chala gaya
Tara- tumne bola hi aise usse
Aur dekha nahi chala bhi nahi ja raha tha vo to acha hua usne case nahi Kiya

Ashmita- kar deta to bhi kya ho jata
Chalo college vaise bhi late kara diya es pagal ne
Aur fir dono college ke liye nikal gaye

Lucifer vahi park me jake bath gaya lekin aaj aisi jagah ki kisi ko vo dikhae na de aur aise hi waqt gujar gaya aur aagaya agli morning

Lucifer aaj fir usse jagah khada hua tha lekin aaj ashmita ne usse dekh liya aur apna muh banate hue uske side se nikal gaye

Vo bhi muskurata hua college ki taraf chal diya aur parking me hi ashmita ko rok liya

Ashmita gusse me- what you want?
Lucifer- mere paise

Ashmita- what?
Konse paise?
Lucifer- main Kab se vaha khada hua tha ki koe ameer ghadi mujhe thokegi aur main mar jaunga fir jo paise milege usse aish karunga

Ashmita- tum pagal ho?
Lucifer- mujhe mere paise de do aur main chala jaunga

Ashmita- main kyu du paise?
Aaj thodi thoka hai maine?
Lucifer- ye tumhri galti hai
Main to vahi khada tha
Tumne nahi thoka to esme main kya karunga
Mujhe mere paise de do main bahut gareeb hu mere family bhuki mar jayegi

Ashmita- dekho mujhe irritate mat karo nahi to dad se bol kar haddi pasli ek kara dungi
Lucifer- vo bhi try kar lena
Lekin abhi meri mahnat ki kamae de do
Nahi to pure college ke samne izzat kharab kar dunga

Ashmita ko ab gussa aane laga tha aur vo irritate bhi ho gaye thi lekin esse pehle ki vo kuch karti

Tara- ye lo tumhre paise aur jao yaha se aur aage se humare ghadi ke aage mat aana
Ashmita- didi...
Tara ne usse bich me hi rok diya aur uska hath pakad ke ander le jane lagi

Lucifer paise leke muda to uske just piche madhuri ma'am khadi thi

Ma'am- kya ho raha tha yaha?
Lucifer- ma'am ye ameer log kaam kara lete hai fir paiso ke time par aanakani karte hai

Ma'am- aisa kya kaam karaya enhone tumse?
Lucifer- vo nahi bata sakta
Aap mujhe phone use karna sikha sakte ho?

Ma'am- tumhe nahi aata?
Lucifer- tabhi to puch raha hu

Ma'am- mujhe kya milega?
Lucifer- guru daksina

Ma'am- thank you lekin mujhe nahi chahiye
Aur college me kisi student ko pareshan nahi karoge
Lucifer- main kis ko pareshan kar raha hu?

Ma'am- vo koe aam ladkiya nahi hai esliye bol rahi hu door raho unse
Aurr fir Ma'am bina lucifer ka jawab sune vaha se chali gaye

Uske baad vo bhi vaha se chala gaya
Paise bhi bahut mil gaye the ab to esliye shopping karne ki sochi aur pahuch gaya ek mall me

Usse yaha ka vaise koe idea to nahi tha aur na hi brands vagra ke bare me usse pata tha
Bas aise hi edhar udhar ghumta raha fir kuch kale kapde liye aur ek iPhone leke vapas college chala gaya

Late to ho hi gaya tha esliye college off chuka tha aur sab vaha se ja chuke the

Lucifer ne ek baar ashmita ke ghar ke bahar check Kiya sab okay tha fir vahi chhup ke bath gaya aur phone chalana sikhne laga
Vaise usse jada waqt nahi laga expert banane me
Abhi bhi ek problem thi aur vo thi sim ki
Sim kaise le?
Koe I'd to thi nahi uske pass

Abhi vo phone me ghusa hi hua tha ki usse door kahi kuch aadmi khade dikhe aur unko dekh ke ye to pata chal raha tha ki ache aadmi to ye bilkul nahi lag rahe

Lucifer ne phone vapas pant me dala aur unki harkato par najar rakhne laga

Vo sab baar baar ashmita ke ghar ki taraf dekh rahe the aur fir apne charo taraf
Unko dekh ke ye to pata chal raha tha ki unki gand fati hue thi lekin sayad kisi ne gand me sariya kiya hoga esliye yaha tak aagaye honge

Thodi der baad vo vaha se chale gaye aur lucifer vahi batha rah gaya

Fir kuch soch ke crossed leg bath gaya aur aankhen band karke dhayan lagane laga aur man me bolne laga ashmita raichand ashimta raichand ashmita raichand
Aur uski aankhon ke samne kuch dhundla dhundla dikhne laga lekin usse kuch bhi saaf nahi dikh raha tha ya fir yu bole ki kuch bhi samjh nahi aa raha thi bas bahut tej tej aawaz sunae de rahi thi aur aisi aawaz lucifer bahut ache se pahchanta tha
Uska sareer pasino se bhig chuka tha aur hath kapne lag rahe the ausa lag raha tha ki agar vo kuch der aur es mantra ke bahar nahi aaya to uska sareer uska sath chhod dega aur esliye hi majburi me uski aankhen khul gaye ya kisi ne khol di aur lucifer buri tarah hafne laga

Uska pura sareer pasine me nahaya hua tha aur vo sochne par majbur hogya ki aisa kya hai es ladki me ki vo eske bare me jaan nahi paya
Kuch baatein to hai jo guruji ne usse bataye nahi thi lekin ab usse janni thi

Guruji to batayenge nahi esliye usse aisi jagah se pata karna tha jaha se usse information bhi mil jaye aur koe jada sawal jawab bhi na kare
Lekin aisi jagah milegi kaha ye bahut bada sawal tha jiska jawab lucifer ke pass abhi ke waqt to nahi tha...
Nice and beautiful update....
 

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UPDATE-5
Lucifer raat ko apne flat vapas aagya aur gate khol raha tha ki piche se ek ball udte hue uske taraf aaye jisko lucifer ne bina dekhe bas hath piche karke pakad liya aur fir dheere dheere piche muda
Uski aankhen ka rang badlane laga tha lekin samne dekhte hi bilkul normal ho gya kyuki samne madhuri ma'am khadi thi aur unke sath ek chhoti bachhi

Bachhi- wow uncle aapne bina dekhe kaise pakde ball?
Lucifer kuch nahi bola ball uski taraf feki aur apne flat me ghus gaya

Madhuri ma'am bas uski harkatein dekhti rah gaye
Ma'am- alia ander chalo beta
Alia- mumma vo uncle gunge hai kya?

Ma'am- beta aise nahi bolte
Alia- fir vo bina bole kyu chale gaye?

Ma'am- kya pata unko kuch kaam hoga esliye chale gaye honge
Alia- aapko aata hai aise bina dekhe ball pakadna?

Ma'am- mujhe to nahi aata beta
Alia- fir aap un uncle ko bolo na vo mujhe sikhaye?

Ma'am- pehle tum badi ho jao fir sikh lena
Alia- nahi mujhe abhi sikhna hai
Aap bolo na un uncle ko
Please mumma

Ma'am- theek hai baba main bol dungi tere uncle ko
Khush ab?
Alia- Kab?

Ma'am- kal
Alia- promise?

Ma'am- agar mujhe mila to bol dunga
Ab no more questions chalo jake apna homework karo
Aur Ma'am ne Alia ko uske room me bejh diya aur khud khana banane kitchen me chali gaye

Pata nahi kyu lekin khana banate banate Ma'am lucifer ke bare me hi soch rahi thi
" ajeeb hi ladka hai bilkul, pata nahi kaha se aaya hai
Pehle to kabhi nahi dekha, naya hi hoga
Lekin usko mobile chalana tak nahi aata, aaj ke time me Alia ko bhi aata hai mobile use karna
Sayad majak kar raha hoga
Vaisa ladka bura nahi hai, uski aankhon me kuch ganda nahi dikhta kisi ladki ke bare me
Kya pata main bahut jaldi sochne lag gaye lekin main soch kyu rahi hu?
Pehle to kabhi nahi socha kisi ke bare me
Fir aise hi sochte sochte vo khana bana leti hai aur dono maa beti kha kar so jati hai

Vahi lucifer to aaj alag hi dunia me tha usse yakeen hi nahi ho raha tha ki uski shaktiya ek insaan ke bare me janane me nakaam rahi

Esliye hi chhilam marne laga aur bahut Nasha karne ke baad flat se nikla aur kahi chalta ja raha tha

Bahut der baad ek badnaam Gali me vo pahuch chuka tha
Yaha saraab to jaise bah rahi thi aur jaisa area tha uske hisab se yaha smell bhi bahut gandi aa rahi thi

Lucifer aage badha ek table se kisi ki hi bottle uthae aur dusri table par jake bath gaya

" kon hai be tu?
Aur yaha kaise bath gaya"
Ek aadmi bola jiski table par lucifer jake batha tha

Lucifer apni pocket se ek photo nikalta hai aur table par rakh deta hai
Lucifer- eske bare me information chahiye

Naag- pehle ye bata tu hai kon aur yaha bathne ki himmat kaise hue teri?
Lucifer- dekh marne lag gaya to maar hi dunga esliye jo mujhe chahiye vo mujhe de aur jo tujhe chahiye vo main tujhe de dunga
Deal?

"Deal?
Teri abhi sari Deal nikalta hu
Ek dusra banda lucifer ki coller pakadte hue bola

Ayr yahi usne galti kar di kyuki uske sareer par etna tez punch pada tha ki vaha bhukamp jaisa feel hogya tha

Sab logo ke kaan khade hogaye
Unke area me aake kisi ne unke hi aadmi ki dhajjiya uda di

Lucifer vaha fir se bath gaya
Lucifer- jaldi bata waqt nahi hai mere pass
Tu mujhe eski information de aur main tujhe meri protection dunga
Es sehar me aisa koe aadmi nahi hoga jo tere ya tere bando ki taraf dekhne ki himmat karega

Naag- kaha se aaya hai tu?
Lucifer- pataal lok se
Ab jaldi bhokna suru kar nahi to main marna suru karta hu

Naag- ander chal
Lucifer- ander chal le
Lekin waqt kam hai mere pass

Fir dono andar chale jate hai aur ek ek chair par bath jate hai

Naag- tune kaha tha ek hath se de aur ek hath se le?
Lucifer- apne hi hath se maar le
Mere aise shauk nahi hai

Naag- ye ashmita raichand hai
Lucifer- naam pata hai mujhe

Naag- suresh raichand ki beti
Lucifer- kaam ki baat bol

Naag- raichand bahut bada naam hai apne desh ke esliye enki bahut chalti hai desh me
Vaise to suresh bahut sareef aadmi hai lekin kabhi kabhi gandgi me ghusna padta hai usse bhi etne bade business ko sahi salamaat chalane ke liye
Lucifer- abhi tak tune kaam ki baat nahi bataye

Naag- confirm nahi hu lekin ek khabar hai jo bahut aati hai unke bare me
Lucifer- ab kya main tujhe confirmation du batane ka?

Naag- ye vo ha matlab
Lucifer- Abe muh me kya loda fas gaya?

Naag- sun ne aaya hai ki suresh illuminati ka member hai
Vaise to main en chhijo me yakeen nahi karta lekin etni baar sun liya ki ab Sala juth bhi sach lagne lag jaye
Lucifer- aur kon kon hai family me?

Naag- badi beti Tara aur wife
Bas
Lucifer- illuminati ke liye sacrifices diya jata hai vo bhi kisi behad apne ka
Vo kya diya

Naag- bhai mujhe kya pata?
Mujhe jitna pata tha Maine bata diya
Lucifer- ladki ke bare me bata

Naag- behad sunder hai
Lucifer- agli baar uski taraf agar najar gaye to teri aankhen tere sareer ka sath chhod degi

Naag- buri najar nahi thi
Lucifer- aage bol

Naag- kisi se baat nahi karti aur behad gusse wali hai
Lucifer- aage

Naag- intelligent bhi hai
Bas aur nahi pata mujhe
Lucifer- najar rakhni hai us par
Kar sakega?

Naag- har chhij ki ek kimat hoti hai yaha
Lucifer- hath tu faila bharunga main lekin ek baat yaad rakhna dhoke ki sirf ek saja hoti hai dardnaak maut

Naag- samjh gaya bhai
Lucifer- kimat bata apni ab

Naag- mere kuch aadmi police ne pakad rakhe hai unhe vaha se nikalna hai
Lucifer- ho jayega
Tu apna kaam kar aur kisi ko shak nahi hona chahiye aur ha chhoti se chhoti chhij mujhe pata honi chahiye

Naag- theek hai
Tumhra naam to bata do?
Lucifer- lucifer naam hai mera
Yaad rakhne ki koe jarurat nahi hai

Aur lucifer vaha se chala gaya

Jungle me

""Kya vo kar payega?""
Guruji- usse acha vikalap nahi hai humare pass

Aadmi- lekin vo insaano ke liye khatarnaak hai
Guruji- vo hi sabse acha hai
Usse dekh ke insaan yehi sochenge ki ye to humare jaisa hi hai

Aadmi- hume usse sab bata dena chahiye tha
Guruji- main sab soch samjh ke karta hu
Aur usse jitna pata hona chahiye utna usse pata hai baki waqt par chhod dena chahiye
Dheere dheere sab theek ho jayega

Aadmi- vo fail hua to?
Guruji- asambhav(impossible)
Tum jante ho usse vo kabhi haar nahi sakta

Aadmi- mujhe dar lagta hai usse
Pata nahi kyu mujhe theek nahi lag raha usse bejh kar
Guruji- apne aas pass dekho kya tumhe koe aur dikh raha hai jo us prakar ki shaktiyo ka samna kar payega?
Sirf lucifer hi hai jo na keval samna kar sakta hai balki unhe hara bhi sakta hai

Aadmi- din ke waqt vo bhi lucifer ko hara sakti hai
Guruji- lekin maar nahi sakti
Aur jis waqt vo lucifer ke hatho raat ko aaye to fir tum samjh sakte ho unke sath kya kya ho sakta hai?

Aadmi- jee
Guruji- ab jao yaha se
Mujhe dhayan lagana hai....
 
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Tina nahi bhai Tara
Madhuri ma'am ne to nahi sikhaya bechare ko khud sikhna pada
Bhai hamse correct name ki ummid kam hi rakhna Bahut jagah (story me) dimag uljha rahta hai, bahut se naam bahut si kahani me same hone ki vajah se...
 
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