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Romance Bepanaah Ishq (Completed)

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Wo shcok jis ka bola thaa woh lag Gaya ab dekhna hain yaddasht aan ke purani baate yaad aati Hai ya nahi. Aur Agar nahi aati to woh wahi per hogi jaha usay Pata thaa ki. RAJ usse nahi chahta hain bus ek dost Hai jis se mainay zabardasti shadi kar li thee
Kal parso mein sab kuch pata chal jayegaaa. Yaadash kitni aayi hai kitni nahi
 
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लगता है कहानी अब क्लाइमेक्स की तरफ बढ़ रही है । नेहा की प्रोब्लम भी शोल्भ हो गई और विशाल के साथ उसके बाकी जीवन की डोर भी बंधने की उम्मीद बन गई । वैसे विशाल की फेमिली भी काफी अच्छी है । जब फेमिली बढ़िया हो तो पूत भी सपूत ही होते हैं ।
मुझे बहुत ही बढ़िया लगा कि नेहा के साथ राइटर साहब ने इंसाफ किया ।

इधर कोमल की याददाश्त वापस आने की संभावना जगा रही है । एक साल बाद फिर से वह बेहोशी के आलम में पहुंच गई है । शादी की पहली सालगिरह पर वह पुनः बेहोशी में पहुंच गई है और इस बार मुझे पुरा यकीन है कि वो जब राज को देखेगी तो पति परमेश्वर कहकर सम्बोधित करेगी ।
लेकिन देखना यह है कि याददाश्त जाने के बाद की घटनाएं उसे याद रहती है या नहीं ।

बहुत ही खूबसूरत अपडेट था जगूआर भाई ।
शरीर पर ध्यान दिजिए और स्वस्थ रहिए ।

सभी अपडेट्स आउटस्टैंडिंग थे । हमेशा की तरह ।
 
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Thodi der mein Sonal Raj ke bataye hue location pe pahonch jaati hai jaha Raj parking mein hi uska wait kar raha tha.

Raj jaldi se jaake Sonal ki car ka darwaaza kholta hai aur Sonal bahar aati hai toh Raj usko dekhta hi reh jaata hai. Woh ek tak Sonal ko dekhe jaa raha tha apni palke tak jhapkana bhul jaana hai.

Sonal Raj ko aise ghurte dekh sharmane lagti hai aur dheere se bolti hai.

Sonal: Aise mat dekhiye mujhe sharm aarahi hai.

Raj: Aaj toh chand khud zameen pe utar aaya hai. Aur aisa nazara baar baar dekhne ko nhi milta.

Sonal: Ab bas bhi kijiyee.

Raj: Sach mein aaj bahot khubsoorat lag rahi ho. Swarg ki apsara bhi tumhare saamne apna sir jhukale itni pyaari aur khubsoorat lag rahi ho.

Sonal: Sharma ke. Thank you.

Phir Raj Sonal ko leke uss restaurant ke andar jaata hai. Pure restaurant ka mahaul hi romantic sa banaya hua tha. Background mein ek slow romantic music baj raha tha aur ek alag hi fragnance bhi faili hui thi charo taraf.

Raj Sonal ko leke ek table pe aata hai jo inke liye hi reserved tha. Dono aake table pe baith jaate hai.

Sonal: Aaj achanak se yeh candle light dinner kisliye. Aaj kuch khaash hai kyaa.

Raj: Tum jab se meri life mein aayi ho tab se hardin hi mere liye khaash hai.

Sonal: Aap phir se suru hogaye. Sidhe sidhe bhi toh bol sakte hai naa.

Raj: Ab tumne sawaal hi aisa pucha toh main aur kyaa jawaab deta. Aree banda pyaar karta hai tumse. Tumhare saath akele kuch pyaar bhare pal bitana chahta hai isiliye tumhe bahar ghumane leke aaya. Par tum ho ke pyaar bhare pal bitane ki jagah sawaal karne lagi ho. I am hurttt.

Sonal: Achha achha Sorry. Nhi puchti kuch ab khush.

Raj naa mein apni gardan hila deta hai.

Sonal: Toh ab main kyaa karu jisse aap khush hojaaye.

Raj: Main jo bolunga woh karogi.

Sonal: Ji boliyee.

Raj ek shararati muskaan ke saath Sonal ko dekhta hai toh Sonl samaj jaati hai ke woh fhas chuki hai Raj ke jaal mein.

Raj Sonal ko dekhte hue ishare se apne honth aage kardeta hai aur uspe apni ungliyon se kiss karne ka ishara karta hai.

Sonal Raj ke iss maang pe pehle toh bahot sharma jaati hai aur hairaan bhi hoti hai.

Sonal: Nhiii bilkulll nhiii. Aap bahot badmaash aur besharm hai. Main aisa kuch nhi karungi.

Raj: Soch lo. Phir maij naraaz hi rahunga.

Sonal: Toh rahiye. Par main aisa kuch nhi karne wali. Aap sach mein bahot besharm hogaye hai. Pehle aise bilkul bhi nhi the.

Raj: Thikk hai phir. Ab jab tak tum mujhe woh nhi deti tab tak main tumse koi baat nhi karunga. Yeh bol apna muh ghuma ke baith jaata hai.

Raj ke aisa karne se Sonal ko hasi toh aarahi thi par woh hasti nhi aur Raj ko dekhti rehti hai.

Kuch der tak Raj dusri taraf muh ghumaye baitha rehta hai toh Sonal ko bhi taras aajata hai par usse sharm bhi aarahi thi.

Sonal: Raj samjhiye naa. Main woh nhi karsakti. Mujhe sharm aarahi hai.

Raj: Main aankhein band karlunga aur tum bhi aankhein band karlena.

Sonal: Pleasee Rajjj. Samjhiye naa. Sab dekhenge.

Raj: Achhhaa. Matlab agar hum akele hote toh koi problem nhi hoti rightt.

Sonal: Maine aisa toh nhi kaha.

Raj: Thikk hai. Toh yeh chiz tumhara udaar raha. Mujhe ghar jaate waqt car mein sudh samet chahiye aur tab koi objection nhi chalega. Bolo manjurr hai.

Sonal: Aap kabse itne besharm ban gaye. Pehle toh aise nhi the.

Raj: Saamne itni khubsoorat ladki baithi ho toh thodi besharmi hojaati hai. Toh bolo manjurr hai.

Sonal: Bina uske tohh aap chorenge nhi. Apni tarah mujhe bhi besharm bana dijiye.

Raj hasne lagta hai. Tabhi background music ka volume badh jaata hai tph Raj Sonal ka haath pakad ke dance ke liye beech mein aajata hai.

Phir dono ekdusre ki baahon mein baahein daal dance karne lagte hai. Unko aise dance karta dekh baaki ke couple bhi dance karne lagte hai.

Thodi der dance karne ke baad dono wapas se table mein aake baith jaate hai.

Raj: Ab bolo kyaa khaogi.

Sonal: Kuch bhi manga kijiye.

Raj: Aree kuch bhi kyaa. Jo tumhe pasand ho woh bolo.

Phir Sonal saamne rakhe menu card ko dekhti hai aur 3-4 dishes pasand karti hai. Raj waiter ko bula ke unn dishes ka order de deta hai.

Waiter ko gaye abhi kuch time hi hua tha ke tabhi waha ek jordaar blast hota hai. Blast itna jordaar thaa ke waha baithe sabka sir jhanna jaata hai. Aur pura restaurant kaanp uthta hai. Tabhi bahar se security guard bhaagte hue aata hai aur bolta hai ke saamne wale petrol pump mein blast hogya hai. Ek gaadi ka breakfail hogya tha aur woh sidha waha jaake takra gayi.

Kuchlog apna sir pakad ke baith jaate hai toh kuch iss dhamake ke awaaz se chillake behosh tak hojaate hai. Jisme Sonal bhi shamil thi.

Iss dhamake se jo sound wave create hua woh Sonal ke dimaag mein attack karta hai jisse woh chillate hue behosh hojaati hai. Sonal ko aise behosh hote dekh Raj hadd se jyaada darr jaata hai.

Woh jhatt se Sonal ko pakad ke hosh mein laane ki koshish karta hai par Sonal react nhi kar rahi thi. Raj ne Sonal ke chehre pe paani ke chithe tak maare par koi asar nhi horaha tha.

Raj ke aankho se aansu tak nikalne lage the. Usse samaj nhi aaraha tha ke woh kyaa karee. Tabhi koi bolta hai ke inhe hospital le jao. Shayad dhamake ki wajah se inhe shock laga hai.

Raj yeh sunn jhatt se Sonal ko apni godd mein uthata hai aur apni car ki taraf bhaagta hai. Security guard bhi pichhe pichhe aata hai aur car ka darwaaza kholta hai.

Raj Sonal ko pichhe ki seat mein sula deta hai aur khud driving seat mein baith ke car ko jaldi se hospital ki taraf bhaga deta hai. Pura road block tha. Par phir bhi Raj jaise taise karke waha se nikal jaata hai.

Raj ko Sonal ke birthday wala scene yaad aaraha tha ussdin bhi Sonal aise hi pichhe ki seat mein soyi hui thi jab uska accident hua tha. Raj gaadi chalate hue hi jhatt se apne ghar call karta hai.

Raj: Hello bhabhiiiii.

Nandini Raj ki ghabraayi hui awaaz sunke darr jaati hai.

Nandini: Rajjjj kyaaa huaaa tum itne ghabraaye hue kyo ho. Kyaa huaaa sab thikk hai naa.

Raj: Rote huee. Kuchh thikk nhii haii bhabhiii. Aaplog bas jaldi se City Hospital aajaiyee. Jaldiii bhabhii.

Nandini: Shock hoke. Hospitallllll. Kyaaa huaaa hai Rajjj. Tumloggg thikkk honaa. Sonalll kaha haiii wohh thikk hai naa.

Raj: Rote hue. Mainn phonee pe nhii bata saktaa. Aaplog pleaseeee jaldi se cityy hospitall aajaiyeee. Yeh bol Raj call cut kardeta hai.

Idher ghar mein Nandini ke hospital bolke chillane se sablog hall mein aajate hai.

Ragini: Nandinii kyaa huaa kiskaa phonee thaa. Aur yeh hospitalll kyaa thaa.

Nandini: Mummy Rajj ka call thaa. Ro raha thaa. Jaldi se City Hospital bulaya sabkoo.

Smita: Kyaaaa hospitalllll. Abbb kyaaa hogyaaa. Sonalll thikkk haiii naaa.

Nandini: Pata nhii. Woh bahot ro raha thaaa. Sonalll ki koi bhi awaaz nhii aarahi thiii.

Sablog yeh sunn ghabraa jaate hai. Aur turanttt hospital ke liyee nikal padhtee hai.

Idherr Raj ne calll cutt karne ke baad sidha Yashh ko call lagaya aur usko bhi hospital aane ko boldiyaa. Uske baad usne Sonal ke doctor ko call lagaya.

Raj: Hello Doctorrr mainn Rajjjj.

Doctor: Haa Rajj boloo. Tum itne ghabraye hue kyoo hoo. Sab thikk hai naa.

Raj: Kuchh thikk nhii haii doctorr. Sonall ko pata nhii kyaa hogyaa haii woh behoshh hogyii haii aur hosh mein bhi nhii aarahi haiii. Mainn usse City Hospital leke jaa raha huu. Aap pleaseee waha aajaiyee. Pleaseee doctorr pleaseee.

Doctor: Behoshh hogyiii. Aisee kaisee behoshh hogyii.

Raj: Mainn phonee pe sab nhi bata paungaa. Aap jaldi se waha aajaiyee.

Doctor: Thikk haiii. Mainn pahonch raha huu Tum waha jaake usse admitt karoo.

Phir Raj call cut karke jaldi se Hospital ki taraf gaadi bhaga deta hai.

Idher Yash jo khud apni marriage anniversary celebrate kar raha tha apni biwi aur bete ke saath woh Raj ka call aate hi turant unndono ko leke waha se nikal padhta hai. Swati ne toh raaste mein hi rona start kardiya thaa.

Thodi der mein Raj hospital aajata hai jaha Aarav pehle se hi khada tha. Jo bahar kisi kaam se gaya tha toh direct hospital aajata hai.

Aarav: Bhaiyaa kyaa huaa bhabhii koo. Wohh thikk hai naa.

Raj: Pata nhiiii. Achanak se chillate hue behosh hogyii.

Phir Raj Sonal ko car se bahar nikalke usse andar le jaata hai. Sonal ke doctor ne hospital mein call karke pehle hi sab baat karli thi. Jisse Sonal ko direct ek room mein shift kiya jaata hai aur hosh mein laane ki koshish ki jaati hai.

Thodi der mein baaki sab bhi hospital aajate hai aur Raj pe sawaalon ki baarish kardete hai.

Raj: Sabkuch thikk thaa. Sonal bahot khush thi. Humne khaane ka order diya hi tha ke tabhi waha ek blast hota hai jiske sound wave ke asar se Sonal chikhte hue behosh hojaati hai.

Karan: Kaisaa blastt huaa.


Raj: Restaurant ke saamne wala petrol pump blast kar gaya tha jiske wajah se waha ek bahot tezz dhamaka hua. Maine Sonal ke doctor ko call kardiya hai woh aate hi hongee.
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Agle din Neha college aati hai aur chup chaap canteen mein baith jaati hai. Vishal bhi wahi baitha hua tha. Par naa woh Neha ki taraf dekh raha tha aur naahi usse koi baat kar raha tha. Par Neha aaj sirf usse hi dekhe jaa rahi thi.

Kuch der baad sablog apne class mein chal dete hai par class mein bhi Neha ka dhyaan kahi aur hi tha. Usko Vishal se baat karni thi akele mein par usse koi mauka nhi mila. Usne soch liya tha ke usse kyaa bolna hai.

Recess time mein Neha dekhti hai canteen mein sablog baithe hue hai sirf Vishal waha nhi tha.

Neha: Yeh Vishal kaha gaya.

Payal: Woh thoda library gaya hai. Usko kuch notes banane the toh mujhe class mein hi bol diya tha.

Neha: Achhaa.

Phir Neha Vishal ko ek msg kardeti hai jisme ek cafe ka address likha tha aur ek note bhi tha college ke baad milo.

Udher Library mein jab Vishal yeh msg padhta hai toh uske chehre mein apne aap hi ek muskaan aajati hai.

College khatam hone ke baad jaha sablog apne ghar ki taraf nikal padhte hai wahi Neha uss cafe ki taraf nikal padhti hai.

Kuch der mein Neha waha aake Vishal ka wait karne lagti hai. Thodi der mein Vishal bhi waha aajata hai.

Vishal: Haa bolo.

Neha: Tum ekbaar phir se soch lo. Yeh puri zindagi ka faisla hai.

Vishal: Muskurate hue. Agar mujhe kuch sochna hi hota toh kal main tumhare ghar aata hi nhi. Mujhe jo sochna tha jitna sochna tha maine soch liya hai. Ab tumhari baari hai.

Neha: Vishal main tumse pyaar nhi kar paungi. Aur bina pyaar ke koi bhi rishta nhi chalta.

Vishal: Pyaar nhi kar paogi. Par dost banke toh hum reh hi sakenge naa. Pyaar naa sahi dost banke hi zindagi guzarenge. Aur phir kal kisne dekha hai. Achha chalo meri taraf se love marriage aur tumhari taraf se arranged marriage.

Neha: Par main abhi shaadi nhi karungi. Pehle padhai khatam karungi apne aapko well settle karungi uske baad. Agar tab tak intezaar karsakte ho toh karo.

Vishal: Tumse kisne keh diya ke main abhi shaadi karna chahta hu. Main bhi pehle apne pairon mein khada hojaunga. Uske baad hi shaadi karunga. Toh main tumhari bhi haaa samjhu.

Neha bas halka smile kardeti hai toh Vishal khushi ke maare Neha ko hug karleta hai jisse Neha ko jhatka lagta hai. Usko iss chiz ki umeed nhi thi.

Vishal: Ooo sorry sorry. Excitement ke chalte mistake hogya. Thankk youu Nehaaa.

Neha: Abhi issbaare mein kisi ko bhi kuch mat batana khaash kar college mein. Aur waha jaise itne din behave karte aaye ho waise hi karna. Main nhi chahti unko abhi innsab ke baare mein pata chale.

Vishal: Thikk haiii.

Neha: Ab main chalti hu byee.

Vishal: Byeee.

Phir Neha waha se nikal jaati hai. Uske nikalte hi Vishal bhi khushi se naache hue apne ghar nikal jaata hai aur ghar pahonchte hi apni maa ko Neha ke haa ke baare mein bata deta hai.

Aise hi kuch mahine guzar jaate hai. Inn kuch mahino mein Swati ne ek bete ko janam diya jiska naam Ishita ne Ansh rakha. Sablog bahot khush the. Yash toh khushi se naach raha tha aakhir sab khushi ek taraf aur baap banne ki khushi ek taraf. Swati bhi khush thi par usse ek dukh yeh bhi tha ke woh apni jaan se pyaari behen ke saath apni zindagi ki sabse badi khushi share nhi kar sakti.

Raj ne Sonal ko Swati ke bete ki photo apne dost ke bete ki photo bolke dikha bhi di thi. Aur Swati ne awaaz badal ke Sonal se baat bhi ki thi.

Iss kuch mahino mein Sonal ko hardin Raj ki uss baat ko leke sapne aaye the. Sonal ne Raj ko iske baare mein kuch nhi bataya kyoki usse pata chal gaya tha ke Raj usse issbaare mein kuch chupa raha hai. Aur usse itne yakeen hogya tha ke yeh sapne aur woh dhundli yaadon ka connection khud se hi hai.

Ek din Raj Sonal ko phir se date pe leke jaane wala tha. Kyoki ussdin undono ki marriage anniversary thi aur Raj ussdin ko achhe se celebrate karna chahta tha.

Isiliye usne ek achhe se restaurant mein Sonal ke liye romantic candle light dinner ki taiyaari ki thi aur Sonal ko ek achhe se taiyaar hoke uss restaurant mein aane ke liye bola tha.

Raj khud pehle hi waha pahonch gaya tha sab kuch wapas recheck karne ke liye.

Idher ghar mein Sonal achhe se taiyaar hoti hai jisme Nandini uski madad karti hai.

Nandini: Aaj toh koi bahot buri tarah ghayal hone wala hai.

Sonal Nandini ki baat sunn sharma jaati hai.

Nandini: Haaye haaye dekho toh gaal kaise tamatar ki tarah laal hogye hai.

Sonal: Bas bhi kijiye bhabhi. Mujhe bahot sharm aarahi hai. Aur Raj ko bhi pata nhi kyo aaj achanak se bahar dinner karne jaane tha.

Nandini: Hosakta hai aaj kuch special ho.

Sonal: Sahi kaha bhabhi. Mujhe bhi subah se aisa hi lag raha hai. Aaj kuch toh khash hai. Bahot khash. Kuch aisa jo mere liye sabse important hai. Par kyaa yaad nhi aaraha hai.

Nandini: Mann mein. Khaash toh hai Sonal. Aakhir aaj hi toh woh din hai jisdin tumhe tumhara pyaar tumhe mila tha. Tumhari shaadi hui thi Raj se. Par kismat ka khel dekho tumhe hi woh sab yaad nhi hai.

Nandini: Achha ab choro yeh sab. Ab tumhe nikalna chahiye. Raj tumhara intezaar kar raha hogaa.

Phir Sonal ekbaar achhe se khud ko mirror mein dekhti hai aur nikal padhti hai.

Sonal ke nikalte hi Raj ka call aajata hai uske paas.

Raj: Kaha pe ho Sonu.

Sonal: Bas abhi ghar se nikali hu. Thodi der mein aajaungi.

Raj: Jaldi aao. I am waiting. Aur car aaram se chalana.

Sonal: Ab aap phone rakhenge tabhi toh aaungi.

Raj: Haa haa rakh raha hu. Come fast.


Phir Sonal car mein baith ke car ko Raj ke diye hue location ki taraf bhaga deti hai
बहुत ही बेहतरीन महोदय।।

आखिर नेहा ने न चाहते हुए भी दबे मन से विशाल के साथ शादी के लिए हां कर दी। विशाल ने भी यहां समझदारी का परिचय देते हुए नेहा की हर बात मान ली। उफर राज की शादी की सालगिरह है तो वो सोनल को एक डिनर पार्टी देता है। हो सकता है इस पार्टी में ही सोनल को कुछ याद आ जाए।।
 

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Thodi der mein Sonal Raj ke bataye hue location pe pahonch jaati hai jaha Raj parking mein hi uska wait kar raha tha.

Raj jaldi se jaake Sonal ki car ka darwaaza kholta hai aur Sonal bahar aati hai toh Raj usko dekhta hi reh jaata hai. Woh ek tak Sonal ko dekhe jaa raha tha apni palke tak jhapkana bhul jaana hai.

Sonal Raj ko aise ghurte dekh sharmane lagti hai aur dheere se bolti hai.

Sonal: Aise mat dekhiye mujhe sharm aarahi hai.

Raj: Aaj toh chand khud zameen pe utar aaya hai. Aur aisa nazara baar baar dekhne ko nhi milta.

Sonal: Ab bas bhi kijiyee.

Raj: Sach mein aaj bahot khubsoorat lag rahi ho. Swarg ki apsara bhi tumhare saamne apna sir jhukale itni pyaari aur khubsoorat lag rahi ho.

Sonal: Sharma ke. Thank you.

Phir Raj Sonal ko leke uss restaurant ke andar jaata hai. Pure restaurant ka mahaul hi romantic sa banaya hua tha. Background mein ek slow romantic music baj raha tha aur ek alag hi fragnance bhi faili hui thi charo taraf.

Raj Sonal ko leke ek table pe aata hai jo inke liye hi reserved tha. Dono aake table pe baith jaate hai.

Sonal: Aaj achanak se yeh candle light dinner kisliye. Aaj kuch khaash hai kyaa.

Raj: Tum jab se meri life mein aayi ho tab se hardin hi mere liye khaash hai.

Sonal: Aap phir se suru hogaye. Sidhe sidhe bhi toh bol sakte hai naa.

Raj: Ab tumne sawaal hi aisa pucha toh main aur kyaa jawaab deta. Aree banda pyaar karta hai tumse. Tumhare saath akele kuch pyaar bhare pal bitana chahta hai isiliye tumhe bahar ghumane leke aaya. Par tum ho ke pyaar bhare pal bitane ki jagah sawaal karne lagi ho. I am hurttt.

Sonal: Achha achha Sorry. Nhi puchti kuch ab khush.

Raj naa mein apni gardan hila deta hai.

Sonal: Toh ab main kyaa karu jisse aap khush hojaaye.

Raj: Main jo bolunga woh karogi.

Sonal: Ji boliyee.

Raj ek shararati muskaan ke saath Sonal ko dekhta hai toh Sonl samaj jaati hai ke woh fhas chuki hai Raj ke jaal mein.

Raj Sonal ko dekhte hue ishare se apne honth aage kardeta hai aur uspe apni ungliyon se kiss karne ka ishara karta hai.

Sonal Raj ke iss maang pe pehle toh bahot sharma jaati hai aur hairaan bhi hoti hai.

Sonal: Nhiii bilkulll nhiii. Aap bahot badmaash aur besharm hai. Main aisa kuch nhi karungi.

Raj: Soch lo. Phir maij naraaz hi rahunga.

Sonal: Toh rahiye. Par main aisa kuch nhi karne wali. Aap sach mein bahot besharm hogaye hai. Pehle aise bilkul bhi nhi the.

Raj: Thikk hai phir. Ab jab tak tum mujhe woh nhi deti tab tak main tumse koi baat nhi karunga. Yeh bol apna muh ghuma ke baith jaata hai.

Raj ke aisa karne se Sonal ko hasi toh aarahi thi par woh hasti nhi aur Raj ko dekhti rehti hai.

Kuch der tak Raj dusri taraf muh ghumaye baitha rehta hai toh Sonal ko bhi taras aajata hai par usse sharm bhi aarahi thi.

Sonal: Raj samjhiye naa. Main woh nhi karsakti. Mujhe sharm aarahi hai.

Raj: Main aankhein band karlunga aur tum bhi aankhein band karlena.

Sonal: Pleasee Rajjj. Samjhiye naa. Sab dekhenge.

Raj: Achhhaa. Matlab agar hum akele hote toh koi problem nhi hoti rightt.

Sonal: Maine aisa toh nhi kaha.

Raj: Thikk hai. Toh yeh chiz tumhara udaar raha. Mujhe ghar jaate waqt car mein sudh samet chahiye aur tab koi objection nhi chalega. Bolo manjurr hai.

Sonal: Aap kabse itne besharm ban gaye. Pehle toh aise nhi the.

Raj: Saamne itni khubsoorat ladki baithi ho toh thodi besharmi hojaati hai. Toh bolo manjurr hai.

Sonal: Bina uske tohh aap chorenge nhi. Apni tarah mujhe bhi besharm bana dijiye.

Raj hasne lagta hai. Tabhi background music ka volume badh jaata hai tph Raj Sonal ka haath pakad ke dance ke liye beech mein aajata hai.

Phir dono ekdusre ki baahon mein baahein daal dance karne lagte hai. Unko aise dance karta dekh baaki ke couple bhi dance karne lagte hai.

Thodi der dance karne ke baad dono wapas se table mein aake baith jaate hai.

Raj: Ab bolo kyaa khaogi.

Sonal: Kuch bhi manga kijiye.

Raj: Aree kuch bhi kyaa. Jo tumhe pasand ho woh bolo.

Phir Sonal saamne rakhe menu card ko dekhti hai aur 3-4 dishes pasand karti hai. Raj waiter ko bula ke unn dishes ka order de deta hai.

Waiter ko gaye abhi kuch time hi hua tha ke tabhi waha ek jordaar blast hota hai. Blast itna jordaar thaa ke waha baithe sabka sir jhanna jaata hai. Aur pura restaurant kaanp uthta hai. Tabhi bahar se security guard bhaagte hue aata hai aur bolta hai ke saamne wale petrol pump mein blast hogya hai. Ek gaadi ka breakfail hogya tha aur woh sidha waha jaake takra gayi.

Kuchlog apna sir pakad ke baith jaate hai toh kuch iss dhamake ke awaaz se chillake behosh tak hojaate hai. Jisme Sonal bhi shamil thi.

Iss dhamake se jo sound wave create hua woh Sonal ke dimaag mein attack karta hai jisse woh chillate hue behosh hojaati hai. Sonal ko aise behosh hote dekh Raj hadd se jyaada darr jaata hai.

Woh jhatt se Sonal ko pakad ke hosh mein laane ki koshish karta hai par Sonal react nhi kar rahi thi. Raj ne Sonal ke chehre pe paani ke chithe tak maare par koi asar nhi horaha tha.

Raj ke aankho se aansu tak nikalne lage the. Usse samaj nhi aaraha tha ke woh kyaa karee. Tabhi koi bolta hai ke inhe hospital le jao. Shayad dhamake ki wajah se inhe shock laga hai.

Raj yeh sunn jhatt se Sonal ko apni godd mein uthata hai aur apni car ki taraf bhaagta hai. Security guard bhi pichhe pichhe aata hai aur car ka darwaaza kholta hai.

Raj Sonal ko pichhe ki seat mein sula deta hai aur khud driving seat mein baith ke car ko jaldi se hospital ki taraf bhaga deta hai. Pura road block tha. Par phir bhi Raj jaise taise karke waha se nikal jaata hai.

Raj ko Sonal ke birthday wala scene yaad aaraha tha ussdin bhi Sonal aise hi pichhe ki seat mein soyi hui thi jab uska accident hua tha. Raj gaadi chalate hue hi jhatt se apne ghar call karta hai.

Raj: Hello bhabhiiiii.

Nandini Raj ki ghabraayi hui awaaz sunke darr jaati hai.

Nandini: Rajjjj kyaaa huaaa tum itne ghabraaye hue kyo ho. Kyaa huaaa sab thikk hai naa.

Raj: Rote huee. Kuchh thikk nhii haii bhabhiii. Aaplog bas jaldi se City Hospital aajaiyee. Jaldiii bhabhii.

Nandini: Shock hoke. Hospitallllll. Kyaaa huaaa hai Rajjj. Tumloggg thikkk honaa. Sonalll kaha haiii wohh thikk hai naa.

Raj: Rote hue. Mainn phonee pe nhii bata saktaa. Aaplog pleaseeee jaldi se cityy hospitall aajaiyeee. Yeh bol Raj call cut kardeta hai.

Idher ghar mein Nandini ke hospital bolke chillane se sablog hall mein aajate hai.

Ragini: Nandinii kyaa huaa kiskaa phonee thaa. Aur yeh hospitalll kyaa thaa.

Nandini: Mummy Rajj ka call thaa. Ro raha thaa. Jaldi se City Hospital bulaya sabkoo.

Smita: Kyaaaa hospitalllll. Abbb kyaaa hogyaaa. Sonalll thikkk haiii naaa.

Nandini: Pata nhii. Woh bahot ro raha thaaa. Sonalll ki koi bhi awaaz nhii aarahi thiii.

Sablog yeh sunn ghabraa jaate hai. Aur turanttt hospital ke liyee nikal padhtee hai.

Idherr Raj ne calll cutt karne ke baad sidha Yashh ko call lagaya aur usko bhi hospital aane ko boldiyaa. Uske baad usne Sonal ke doctor ko call lagaya.

Raj: Hello Doctorrr mainn Rajjjj.

Doctor: Haa Rajj boloo. Tum itne ghabraye hue kyoo hoo. Sab thikk hai naa.

Raj: Kuchh thikk nhii haii doctorr. Sonall ko pata nhii kyaa hogyaa haii woh behoshh hogyii haii aur hosh mein bhi nhii aarahi haiii. Mainn usse City Hospital leke jaa raha huu. Aap pleaseee waha aajaiyee. Pleaseee doctorr pleaseee.

Doctor: Behoshh hogyiii. Aisee kaisee behoshh hogyii.

Raj: Mainn phonee pe sab nhi bata paungaa. Aap jaldi se waha aajaiyee.

Doctor: Thikk haiii. Mainn pahonch raha huu Tum waha jaake usse admitt karoo.

Phir Raj call cut karke jaldi se Hospital ki taraf gaadi bhaga deta hai.

Idher Yash jo khud apni marriage anniversary celebrate kar raha tha apni biwi aur bete ke saath woh Raj ka call aate hi turant unndono ko leke waha se nikal padhta hai. Swati ne toh raaste mein hi rona start kardiya thaa.

Thodi der mein Raj hospital aajata hai jaha Aarav pehle se hi khada tha. Jo bahar kisi kaam se gaya tha toh direct hospital aajata hai.

Aarav: Bhaiyaa kyaa huaa bhabhii koo. Wohh thikk hai naa.

Raj: Pata nhiiii. Achanak se chillate hue behosh hogyii.

Phir Raj Sonal ko car se bahar nikalke usse andar le jaata hai. Sonal ke doctor ne hospital mein call karke pehle hi sab baat karli thi. Jisse Sonal ko direct ek room mein shift kiya jaata hai aur hosh mein laane ki koshish ki jaati hai.

Thodi der mein baaki sab bhi hospital aajate hai aur Raj pe sawaalon ki baarish kardete hai.

Raj: Sabkuch thikk thaa. Sonal bahot khush thi. Humne khaane ka order diya hi tha ke tabhi waha ek blast hota hai jiske sound wave ke asar se Sonal chikhte hue behosh hojaati hai.

Karan: Kaisaa blastt huaa.


Raj: Restaurant ke saamne wala petrol pump blast kar gaya tha jiske wajah se waha ek bahot tezz dhamaka hua. Maine Sonal ke doctor ko call kardiya hai woh aate hi hongee.
बहुत ही बेहतरीन महोदय।

पहलके वाली स्थिति आ गई है। जब सोनल की याद चली गई थी।। हो सकता है इस घटना में सोनल की याद वापस आ जाए।।
 

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लगता है कहानी अब क्लाइमेक्स की तरफ बढ़ रही है । नेहा की प्रोब्लम भी शोल्भ हो गई और विशाल के साथ उसके बाकी जीवन की डोर भी बंधने की उम्मीद बन गई । वैसे विशाल की फेमिली भी काफी अच्छी है । जब फेमिली बढ़िया हो तो पूत भी सपूत ही होते हैं ।
मुझे बहुत ही बढ़िया लगा कि नेहा के साथ राइटर साहब ने इंसाफ किया ।

इधर कोमल की याददाश्त वापस आने की संभावना जगा रही है । एक साल बाद फिर से वह बेहोशी के आलम में पहुंच गई है । शादी की पहली सालगिरह पर वह पुनः बेहोशी में पहुंच गई है और इस बार मुझे पुरा यकीन है कि वो जब राज को देखेगी तो पति परमेश्वर कहकर सम्बोधित करेगी ।
लेकिन देखना यह है कि याददाश्त जाने के बाद की घटनाएं उसे याद रहती है या नहीं ।

बहुत ही खूबसूरत अपडेट था जगूआर भाई ।
शरीर पर ध्यान दिजिए और स्वस्थ रहिए ।

सभी अपडेट्स आउटस्टैंडिंग थे । हमेशा की तरह ।
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Aapne sahi kaha Kahani apne anth ki taraf hi hai. Ab Neha ko leke kyaa kahu. Uss bechari ko pehle hi bahot dukh jhelne ko mil chuke the toh uske jeevan mein thodi khushiyan bharr di.

Komal nhi Sonal ki yaadash wapas aane wali hai. Yaadash jaane ki baad wali ghatnaaye usse yaad rahegi.
 
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Aisa toh katai na karna bhai bechaare Raj babu ke saath varna pyar ke maare premi ko tadapane ki haaye lagegi aapko 😆😁
Anyways let's see what's going to happen
Agar Raj ki taraf se mujhe haaye lagi toh uski prem kahani hi khatam kardungaa :lol1: :lol1:
 
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