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Incest Baadshah ~ The Tales of Debauchery

Kya Veer apni life behtar kar paega ya sab kuch kho baithega?

  • Veer Baadshah banega

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Wait kia Veer ki koi behan bhi hai :shocked:

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Aise photo daal ker you ko kia laga hum jaise bhole bhale readers you ki story per laar Tapka ker tharak ka izhar kare gye

Kripiya agar ap aisa soch Rahe ho to main ap se kehna chahu ga ke ap bilkul sahi ho :angel:




Toot Gaya Dil Par Armaan Wahi Hai,
Door Rehte Hain Fir Bhi Pyar Wahi Hai,
Jaante Hain Ke Mil Nahi Payenge,
Fir Bhi Aankho Mein Intezaar Wahi Hai.

YE pari pakka veer ki gaand maare gi raat me likh ker le lo mujh se sign karwa lo....lekin wait mere ko to sign ate he nahi chalo anghoota lagwa lo ye pakka veer ki chal bigare gi



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Dhadkan tez huwi seedhe bolo na gaand phat gayi



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ye larkiyo ka pyaar galat time per he kiu ata hai

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golu ki entry chahe sab ko hero wali lagi ho lekin mera 20 saal ka filmo ka diploma kehta hai aise waqt me dost banne wala he baad me gaand marta hai
Mujhe us dost ka address chahiye jisne Damha ko alcohol diya hey. Usko puchunga ki yeh nasha ka formula kya hey. Kahan kahna chadh ke bolta hey yeh nasha????????
 

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Upar ceiling se dherr saari rassiyaa latak rahi thi. Matlab itni zyaada tadaad thi unki ki aisa lag raha tha maano rassiya nahi balki jangal me ped se latak rahi bel ho
Jungle ka mahool bana dia......Tarzan to yahan bohat enjoy kare ga.....issi ke saath promotion ker du guys jald he mwru new story aa rahi hai Tarzan.....4 galiya dene zaroor ana kiu ke main writers ka naam badnaam karta rahu ga :D

Veer ne inn rassiyo ko isliye kheecha tha taaki Aatish ko koi shaq na ho.

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Aatish : Tumne apne dost ki jaan leli Veer. Jab jab tum uss Laal button ko daba rahe the... Tab tab yaha tank me maujood andar ke ye gates khul rahe the. Tumhe laga tha... Ki tum apne dost ko bacha rahe ho... Par Veeeeeerrrr... Tum unhi haatho se apne dost ko maut ke muh me dhakel rahe the. Tum apni khud ki jaan bachaane ke liye, uss laal button ko jab jab daba ke aage badh rahe the. Tab tab tumhe nahi pata tha... Ki tum apne dost ko maarte jaa rahe the Veeeeerrrrr..
Mere ko iss per bohat zor se ek meme yaad aa raha hai ruko :lotpot:


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Update - 36 ~ Despair and Love

[This update contains some gore scenes. Beware!]
Ab tak...

Ladkhadaate hue Veer bina kuch kahe aage badha aur button dabaayi toh darwaaza khul gaya.

Par...

Andar aate hi usse ek behad hi bhaiyankar darr ki anubhooti hui. Jese maano uski maut aane waali ho. Usse nahi pata tha ki agla padaav uske liye kya kuch laane waala tha. Kya wo waqai Golu ko bacha paega!?


Ab aage...

"Haaah haaah haaaahhhhh..."

[Master! Calm down! Saas araam araam se lijiye. Aap jitna zorr zorr se saas lenge, utna hi panic karenge aur fir behosh ho sakte ho aap.]

Lift se nikalne ke baad Veer ki haalat sahi toh kahi se bhi nahi thi. Fluothane ka concentration bhale hi kam tha. Par shareer ke andar jaate hi uske kuch na kuch side effects toh hone hi the.

Pari ki baat maan jab usne apni aniyantrit saaso ko control kiya toh kuch pal baad usse thoda sahi mehsoos hua.

Wo already ek naye kamre me aa chuka tha. Ye kamra andar se harr jagah safed rang se puta hua tha. Kamra kehna galat hoga. Balki ek behad bada hall type ka tha. Par...

Par ek hi baat thi jo boht hi zyaada ajeeb sii lag rahi thi iss waqt. Yaha tak ki Veer khud confusion me khada hua tha.

Wo ye ki...

Upar ceiling se dherr saari rassiyaa latak rahi thi. Matlab itni zyaada tadaad thi unki ki aisa lag raha tha maano rassiya nahi balki jangal me ped se latak rahi bel ho.

Aur harr ek rassi, dusri rassi se baraabar ke gap me lagi hui thi. Saath hi saath upar ceiling me chaukor khand bane hue the jinke beecho beech ek ek rassiya lagi hui thi.

'Ye sab... kya hai!?'

[Dusri paheli master! Shayad inni rassiyo se aapko kuch karna hai!?]

Aur Pari ke bol jese sahi saabit ho gaye.

Kyuki uske baad hi Aatish ki awaaz intercom se ek baar fir aayi aur Veer ke kaano me padi,

"Ab tum soch rahe hoge ki bhala ye sab kya hai? Kya bala hai ye!? Toh bataata hu... Ye saari jo rassiya dekh rahe ho, inme se kuch aisi hai jinhe kheechne se kuch nahi hoga. Par inhi me se kuch aisi hai, jinhe kheechne par kuch na kuch hoga. Ab tumhe inhi saari rassiyo me se ek rassi aisi dhundni hai jisse kheechne se wo waha diwaar me laga case khul jaaye."

Aatish ki baat sunn Veer ki nazar bagal me gayi jaha deewaar par ek kaale colour ka case laga hua tha.

"Uske khulte hi tumhe firse ek badi sii wahi gol laal button milegi, jisse daba kar tumhara iss kamre ka lock khul jaega. Simple hai. Hai na!? Toh fir shuru ho jaayo."

Aatish iss waqt jidhar bhi baitha hua tha, wo cameras se Veer ko dekh paa raha tha. Aur iss waqt uski awaaz sunn ke hi ye pata lagaaya jaa sakta tha ki wo kitna khush tha.

[Master!]

'Hmm?'

[Mujhe kuch gadbad lag rahi hai. Lift me gas leakage tha. Par yaha toh sab kuch normal lag raha hai. Aur mein nahi maanti ki ye itna simple hai.]

'Tumne thik kaha Pari... Par mujhe pata hai mujhe kya karna hai.'

[Hmm?]

'Check!!!!'

Veer ne ek ek kar ke ceiling par lagi unn chaukor khando ke beech, harr ek rassi ko check kiya. Aur ye karne ke baad jo results usse mile, usse jaankar hi uska dimaag hil gaya.

Kuch khando ke upar aisi aisi cheeze dali hui thi ki unke baare me sawaal uthna swabhaavik tha.

Kuch khando ke upar badi badi dherr saari eete dali hui thi. Kuch ke upar lohe ki rods. Toh wahi kuch me tezaab dala hua tha.

Jese hi Veer ko inn cheezo ke baare me pata chala uska badan sihar utha, ye soch ke ki yadi uske paas aaj ye Check function na hota aur yadi usne inme se kisi bhi ek rassi ko kheencha hota toh uska kya hota?

Maut!

Yahi jawaab tha bas.

Rassi kheechte hi upar ka chaukor khand palatne ke liye banaaya gaya tha. Zaahir sii baat thi, ki jese hi chaukor palatata, upar rakha jo bhi samaan hota wo seedha aake neeche maujood vyakti par girta.

Aaj Veer teen cheezo se bach gaya tha. Eete, rods aur savse khatarnak cheez ~ Tezaab.

Soch ke hi Veer ke raungte khade ho gaye the...

Tezaab jesi cheez ban hoti hai aur aam aadmi ke paas toh bilkul hi nahi rehti. Na jaane Aatish ne kaha se mangwaaya hoga. Par ye bhi baat thi...

Ki Aatish bhi koi aam aadmi thodi tha.

Aatish bhale hi khush tha abhi. Par iss round me baazi Veer ne maar lii thi.

Apne Check function ke kaaran usne sab kuch pehle hi pata laga liya tha.

Ab keval Veer ko acting karni thi.

Usne aage badh pehli rassi kheechi, aur ceiling ka wo chaukor hissa palat gaya.

Par...

Andar se kuch na nikla.

Aise hi usne kuch rassiya kheenchi jinme se kuch khaali thi toh kuch me eete neeche giri par unke girne se pehle hi Veer peeche hatt gaya. Kyuki usse pehle hi pata tha ki unn sab me kya tha.

Tezaab waali ek bhi rassi Veer ne nahi kheechi. Ye boht risky tha aur Veer risk nahi lena chaahta tha.

Veer ne inn rassiyo ko isliye kheecha tha taaki Aatish ko koi shaq na ho. Yadi wo pehli hi baar me sahi rassi chun leta toh ye suspicious maamla bann jaata. Bas Isliye usne dhong kiya aur aise hi kuch ek do rassiya kheechne laga.

Ant me usne wahi rassi kheechi jiske chalte wo kala case side me khula aur andar ek laal button usse nazar aayi.

Button dabaate hi darwaaza khul gaya aur room se baahar nikal usse dusri lift bhi nazar aa gayi.

Jiske zariye wo second floor par pohuch gaya.

'That was too easy... Golu... Chinta mat karna... Mein aa raha hu... Bas thodi derr aur...'

Veer iss samay thoda asmanjas me bhi tha. Kyuki kuch derr pehle jo Aatish itna zorr zorr se thahaake le raha tha, wo ekdum se shaant sa pad gaya tha.

'Shayad usse nahi laga tha ki mein uska dusra round clear kar paunga itni easily.'

[Haha~ Usse kya pata ki aap akele nahi ho. Ye Pari bhi aapke saath hai.]

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Jab Veer second floor par pohucha. Toh intercom se firse Aatish ki awaaz aayi,

"Maan'na padega Veer. Waqai! Tumhari kismat ke kya kehne. Par pata hai!?... Mein tumhaari issi kismat ko sabak sikhaunga abhi. Bas dekhte jao. Uss Ragini ko jese mene toda tha... Wese hi tumhe todunga Veeeeerrr.... Tumhara jab wo darra hua chehra dekhunga naaaa... Jisme ek pal bhi jaan na bachi hooo.... Jisne jeene ki iccha chorr dii hooo... Wahi... Bas wahi dekhna chaahta hu mein... Aaahhh! Tabhi... Tabhi mujhe chenn milega..."

Uski awaaz achanak hi itni badh gayi ki intercom se sound frequency zyaada hone ke kaaran Veer ko apne kaano me haath lagaana pad gaya.

Next room me enter karte hi...

Usse apne perr pe ek ajeeb sa sensation hua.

Par iske pehle ki wo nazre neeche kar dekh paata...

Achaanak hi wo itni speed me khichta chala gaya ki uski kuch samajh me hi nahi aaya. Uska perr, rassi ke ek phande me phass chuka tha. Aur wo rassi jese kisi pulling machine se bandhi hui thi. Ki Veer ka perr jese hi usme aaya aur machine ne usse kheenchna shuru kar diya.

Iss waqt Veer hawa me ulta latka hua tha. Uska ek perr rassi me bandha hua tha aur wo daaye baaye jhul raha tha. Aur uske neeche...

Paani ka boht bada tank rakha hua tha.

"Daaaaaamnnnn ittttt!!!"

Aatish : Veeeeeerrrr!! Ab tumhe pata chalega ki kya hota hai mujhse ulajhna.

Next second hi...

Achanak hi wo rassi neeche aayi aur...

*Splaaaaaashhhhh*

Veer ko poora ka poora uss paani se bhare tank me dubo dii.

"Blurrrrghhhhhh...grrrhhhh" Paani ke bulbule Veer ke muh se chooth rahe the aur wo kisi machli ki tarah chhatpata raha tha, jab wo paani ke baahar aa jaati hai.

[Master!!!? Hold your breath. Paani andar mat lijiye.]

Kamar tak Veer andar hi tha aur fir rassi upar hui aur Veer paani ke baahar nikal aaya. Wo tezz tezz haaf raha tha, khaas raha tha, theek se saas lene ki koshish kar raha tha.

Uska poora shareer kamar se le kar sarr tak paani se geela ho chuka tha.

Aatish : Veer! Mein chaahta toh tumhe kab ka khatam kar sakta tha. Par bhala... Usme maza hi kaha? Jo maza torture karne me hai. Wo maza kisi cheez me nahi. Hahahaha~

Na jaane kitni hi baar Veer ko yu paani me duboya gaya hoga. Par Veer...

Kuch nahi bola...

Uski aankho me bas krodh ke bhaav the. Ekdum laal aankhein jo badla lene ke liye tadap rahi thi.

Wo taiyaar tha. Chaahe jitna bhi torture kyu na kar liya jaaye usse. Ek na ek din wo iss Aatish ko apne khud ke haatho se saza dega. Usne ye nirnay kar liya tha.

Par achanak hi jis baat ki Veer ko bilkul bhi umeeed nahi thi wo hua uske saath.

Achanak hi usse neeche kiya gaya.

Ab wo aisi position par tha ki wo apna ek haath neeche container par tika sakta tha.

Aur issi ka istemaal kar usne apne jeb se knife nikaali aur khud ko upar kar jitne cuts rassi me maar sakta tha utne maare...

Nateeja...

Wo kuch palo me hi free tha.

"Jao... Tum mere test pass hue Veer. Jao... Intezaar kiska hai? Wo laal button dabao aur darwaaza khol lift me jao. Third floor pe hi tumhara dost hai Veer. Jao..."

Bhale hi Aatish ke shabd positive the. Par the toh Aatish ke muh se nikle shabd...

Itni asaani se kese vishwaash kar leta Veer!?

Usne savdhaani barat'te hue wo button dabaayi, jiske chalte darwaaza khul gaya.

Aur Lift ka istemaal kar wo third floor pe bhi pohuch gaya. Koi bhi takleef ya koi bhi trap nahi mila usse.

Sab kuch ekdum shaant tha. Kahi koi gadbad nazar nahi usse.

Ab bas iss darwaaze ke khulte hi usse Golu nazar aa jaega.

Ek aas liye... Veer apne mann me hi khush hone laga. Bhale hi uski jaan inn traps me jaate jaate bachi thi. Par...

Par aaj wo unn traps ko paar kar Golu ke paas pohuch chuka tha.

Aur Golu ko jald se jald churraane ke liye jese hi Veer ne gate khol ke saamne ka nazaara dekha...

Toh...

Wo apne aap apne ghutno par aa gira...

Saamne ka nazaara dekh uski rooh kaanp gayi.

"N-No...!"

Usne apne kaanpte hue hontho se budbudaaya...

Akhir aisa kya tha jo usse nazar aa gaya tha! Raaste me toh usse koi gadbadi mehsoos nahi hui thi. Fir aisa kya tha...!?

Par saamne ka nazaara hi aisa tha ki Veer ne apni zindagi me iss se zyaada khaufnaak drishya nahi dekha tha.

Uski nazre ek hi jagah par tiki hui thi. Wo jese apni palke jhapakna bhul gaya tha. Bhaiyankar khaufnaak, darrawna aur rooh hila dene waala manzar maujood tha uske saamne.

Kyuki...

Saamne...

Ek sheeshe ka bada sa aquarium tha. Aur andar usme ek magar terr raha tha.

Par... Baat sirf yahi nahi thi.

Jis paani me wo terr raha tha...

Wo...

Ekdum laal hota jaa raha tha. Aur...

Veer ne dekha ki...

Magar ke hi paas me...

Kuch paani me terr raha tha.

Aur wo dekh Veer ki nazre darr ke maare felti chali gayi.

Kyuki...

Wo kuch aur nahi... Balki... Ek insaan ka haath tha.

Jiski twacha ke chithde udd paani me hi terr rahe the aur bhayanak laal rang paani me ghulta jaa raha tha. Wo kya tha... Iss baat ka andaaza lagaana bilkul bhi mushqil nahi tha.

Khoon!

Insaan ka khoon...

"Noooo... Nooooo...."

Uska badan boht tezz kampan maar raha tha.

Harr ek ang darr ke maare hil raha tha. Aur uske badan me harr jagah roye khade ho chuke the. Aisa khaufnaak nazaara pehle kabhi nahi dekha tha Veer ne apni life me.

Aur jese ek awaaz ne uska darr saatve aasmaan par pohucha diya...

*Ding*

['Mission : Get to Golu as fast as possible and save him.' has been failed.]

[Mission Fail Penalty : 100 points Deduction.]

[90 points have been deducted. 10 remaining.]

Ye jhatka jese kam tha tha jab agle hi pal Aatish ki baat sunn Veer ka darr yakeen me badal gaya,

"Hahahahaha~ Sahi soch rahe ho Veeeeeerrrr... Ekdum sahi... Yahi hai tumhara Golu... Arre yahi hai... Jo ab nahi raha hahahaha~ Dekh rahe ho? Laal rang ... Aaahh! Adhbhut! Apni shaqal dekho Veer... Yahi... Yahi toh mein dekhna chaahta tha.."

Veer ki aankho se aasu apne aap nikal rahe the. Wo jese kisi sadme me jaa chuka tha par sabse bada sadma jese usse abhi lagna baaki tha.

"Veeeeeerrrrr!!! Hahahahaha~ Tumhe pata hai? Tumne hi usse maara hai Veer... Tumne... Mene nahi... Tumne apne hi dost ka qatl kar diya Veeeerrr... Haan tumne hi..."

Veer : !!?

Aatish : Mene kaha tha na Veer... Mein tumhari kismat ko bhi sabak sikhaunga... Aur tumhe bhi andar se todunga ... Tumhe pata hai Veer...!? Wo dekho... Tank me tumhe teen gate dikh rahe hai!?

Aatish ki excited sii awaaz sunn Veer ki lifeless sii nazre apne aap hi tank ke uss hisse par chali gayi...

Aur waqai...

Waha usse teen bade gates nazar aaye jo tank ke hi andar maujood the.

Aatish : Wo saare gates band the Veer... Wo saare band the. Aur tumhara dost ek taraf tha aur gates ke uss taraf mera paaltu Magarmacch 'Clutch'.

Veer : ???

Aatish : Tumne apne dost ki jaan leli Veer. Jab jab tum uss Laal button ko daba rahe the... Tab tab yaha tank me maujood andar ke ye gates khul rahe the. Tumhe laga tha... Ki tum apne dost ko bacha rahe ho... Par Veeeeeerrrr... Tum unhi haatho se apne dost ko maut ke muh me dhakel rahe the. Tum apni khud ki jaan bachaane ke liye, uss laal button ko jab jab daba ke aage badh rahe the. Tab tab tumhe nahi pata tha... Ki tum apne dost ko maarte jaa rahe the Veeeeerrrrr... Hahahahaha~ Haan! Yahiiii.... Yahiii chehra mujhe dekhna tha Veeeerrrr....

Maano jese ek bomb sa foota Veer ke sarr aur uski saari sochne samajhne ki shakti gaayab ho gayi ye sunn ne ke baad...

Veer : ....

Aatish : Dekhoooo.... Dekhooo Veeeerrrr! Kese... Kese tumhare dost ke shareer ke tukde paani me terr rahe hai. Kese chithde udaa ke rakh diya mere paaltu magar ne... Khooon hi khooon hai Veerrrr... Aur ye sab... Tumne apne haatho se kiya Veeer... Tumne... Hahahaha~ Tumne hi apne dost ko maar diya... Mene toh kuch na kiya Veer. Tumne hi uski jaan leli...

Veer ka dimaag jese kaam karna band kar chuka tha. Uska haal iss waqt shabdo me bataane laayak nahi tha. Uska chehra safed pad gaya tha. Aankhein aisi jese maano unme jaan hi nahi thi. Ab na toh usse kuch sunaayi de raha tha aur na hi kuch feel ho raha tha.

Jis Golu ne uski do baar jaan bachaayi thi. Aaj ussi Golu ki jaan Veer ne apne haatho se leli. Bhala kese nikal paata wo iss glaani se? Inn feelings ke liye glaani bhi ek chota shabd tha.

Veer yaha ye soch raha tha ki... Wo apne pehle mitr, Golu ko bacha raha tha. Wo ye soch raha tha ki harr pal wo usse bachaane me kaamyaab ho raha hai. Par... Par aisa bilkul bhi na tha.

Wo toh ulta apne ussi dost ko maar raha tha. Aisi dardnaak maut insaan kabhi kisi ko na de. Jo manzar Veer ne dekha tha. Wo bataane me bhi kaho uske raungte khade ho jaaye. Fir wo toh khud experience kar raha tha. Na jaane wo iss waqt kinn bhaavo se guzar raha tha. Ye shock itna bada tha ki bechari Pari bhi ekdum shaant pad chuki thi. Usse bilkul bhi aisi umeed nahi thi.

Toh wo sab neeche gubbaare!? Kisi ke maut ke jashn ke liye the!? Veer ne buttons check nahi kii thi. Kyuki unn buttons ko dabaane se darwaaza khul jaa raha tha. Par usse kya pata tha...

Ki jin buttons ko wo daba raha tha wo saath hi saath tank me maujood gates se bhi connected thi. Akhir sahi hi toh kaha tha Aatish ne. Ek prakaar se Veer hi toh Golu ka hatyaara tha?

Aatish : Ab hamaare mehmaan ki bhi khaatir daari kari jaaye...

Veer ghutno ke bal baithe saamne abhi tak tank me ho rahi halchal ko dekh raha tha. Wo insaan ki taang jiske maans ke na jaane kitne tukde paani me idhar se udhar ho rahe the, wo haath...

Ye wahi haath tha... Jo Golu ne usse dosti ke liye aage badhaaya tha!?

Kuch bhaag aise the... Jo pehchaan me tak nahi aa rahe the.

Poora tank... Lahu luhaan ho chuka tha ekdum.

Aur ye sab dekh... Achanak hi Veer ko ubkaayi sii aayi... Aur uske muh se ulti behna shuru ho gayi.

Par jese Aatish ko ye manzoor nahi tha. Kyuki agle hi pal, Veer ke ird gird 8 se 10 log ikhatta ho gaye aur fir...

Usse itna maara gaya ki adhmari haalat me chorr diya.

Veer toh pehle hi sadme me jaa chuka tha. Usne ek baar bhi apne aap ko defend karne ki koshish na kii. Saare hamle wo tab tak sehta gaya jab tak ki wo behosh na ho gaya.

Ek dost mila tha usse...

Aur Veer ne apne hi haatho se uski hi jaan leli.

Aadmi 1 : Bhau! Ye behosh ho gaya hai. Kya karna hai? Isse maar de?

Aatish : Na Na Na Na! Maar denge toh maza hi kya? Wese ab mera kaam iss se nahi hai. Wo toh bas kuch dino se Jalsa me koi manoranjan nahi hua tha. Aur Veer ki badkismati thi ki wo mere plan ke beech me aa gaya. Nateeja... Saamne hai. Maut se acchi saza hoti hai logo ko tadpa ke unhe zinda rakhna.

Aadmi 1 : Bhau fir?

Aatish : Aksar hum bas yahi dhaarna leke chalte hai ki... Kuch log bure hote hai kuch log acche... Kyu hai na?

Aadmi 2 : J-Jii bhau!

Aatish : Veer ki nazro me mein bura tha kyuki mein uske raaste me aaya. Par yahi baat mein bhi toh keh sakta hu? Meri nazar me Veer bura tha kyuki wo merer raaste me aaya!? Insaan bura ya accha nahi hota kabhi bhi samjhe?

Aadmi 1 : Samjhe Bhau!

Aatish : Harr aadmi apni paristhiti ke hisaab se act karta hai. Ab harr aadmi ke apne apne tareeqe ho sakte hai. Veer ki kismat kharaab thi, jo wo mere raaste ke beech aaya. Ab na keval mene uski kismat ka sach usse bata diya balki usse andar se poora tod diya hai. Zindagi bhar ab wo glaani ki Zindagi jiyega... Hamesha uske mann me yahi rahega ki wahi apne dost ka hatyaara hai. Jao ab... Isse iske ghar ke baahar hi fek aao... Ab ye kisi laayak nahi raha. Aur ab hamaara raasta saaf hai.

Itna bol Aatish camera control room se baahar nikal gaya...

Par... Uska chehre par bade hi gusse ke bhaav the. Aur asantushti ke bhi.

***

Poora ek din guzar chuka tha iss ghatna ke baad.

Shaam ka waqt tha aur mand mand hawaaein chal rahi thi.

Nidhi ke ghar iss waqt Nidhi Juhi ke sang baith usse padhaane me lagi hui thi.

Toh wahi Shreya aaj shaam ka evening snack bana rahi thi.

"Ye meri cooking itni buri kyu hai? Aarghh! Kya likha hai?? Vegetables ko kaat ke saute karo?? Hmm! Lo bhai daal diye vegetables..."

Aaj usne josh josh me Juhi ko bol diya tha ki wo aaj noodles banaegi... Aur bas... Shaam hote hi Juhi uske peeche pad gayi. Ab bola hai toh karna toh tha hi kaam...

Isliye mohatarma lagi hui thi, sabhi ke liye Noodles banaane me.

Aur baahar baithi Nidhi Juhi ko pyaar se samjhaate hue padha rahi thi.

Tabhi Achanak hi uska phone baj utha...

Jab Nidhi ne caller name dekha toh wo wahi sthir sii pad gayi aur screen pe naam dekh wo bas wahi dekhti reh gayi.

'Veer!?'

Veer ka call aa raha tha.

'Iss waqt!? Aakhir ab kese usse meri yaad aa gayi? Uss din mandir me toh... Yu naraaz hoke chala gaya tha? Kabhi mujhse baat nahi karta... Fir kyu? Halaki Diwali par usne hi mujhe message kiya tha... Fir bhi...'

Ant me wo call utha leti hai.

Nidhi : Ab kese yaad aa gayi tumhe Veer apni iss madam kii?

Par dusri taraf se koi awaaz na aayi...

Nidhi : ???

Voice : Umm... Wo... Actually... Mein Veer bhaiya ki choti behan bol rahi Ma'am. I'm Kavya.

Nidhi : Aahhh!?

Kavya : J-Jii!

Nidhi (blushes) : Ohh no no! K-Kavya? Haan! Veer ne mujhe bataya tha beta aapke baare me. K-Kaho na? Kya baat ho gayi?

Kavya : Baat boht hi serious hai Ma'am.

Nidhi (frowns) : Kya hua?

Kavya : Mujhe aapse kuch puchna hai? Kya aap aur Veer bhaiya ke beech accha relationship hai?

Nidhi (blushes) : Ehhhhh?? W-Whaat??

Kavya : Hmm! I mean... Ek accha relationship hai na aap dono ke beech?

Nidhi : Y-Ye!? Tum kya puch rahi ho...!?

Tabhi Kavya ki ruwaasi sii awaaz Nidhi ke kaano me padi,

Kavya : Darasal... Kal bhaiya kahi gaye the raat me... Aur... Kal raat me wo... Itni buri haalat me ghar ke baahar mile the. Harr jagah *sniff* chot hi chot thi... Yaha sabhi *sniff* itna pareshan hai... Doctor ko bhi dikhaaya... Wo toh medicine deke chale gaye. Par... Par bhaiya kisi se baat hi nahi kar rahe hai. *sniff* Na jaane kya ho gaya hai unhe. Bas apne room me sarr jhukaaye baithe huye hai. Na khaana khaa rahe aur na kuch... *sniff*

Nidhi : H-Huh???

Kavya : Mene aapko isliye phone kiya hai, kyuki Veer bhaiya ko jab ghar se nikaala gaya tha tab wo aapke hi saath ruke huye the. Toh mujhe laga aapke aur unke beech aachhi khaasi understanding hogi. Shayad aapki baat maan jaaye wo? *sniff* Isliye mene aapko call kiya hai. K-Kya aap yaha aa sakti hai? Please? I-I beg you...

Jab poori baat ka Nidhi ko pata chala toh na jaane kyu par usse ekdum se bechaini sii hone lagi.

Ghabraahat bhi.

Nidhi : M-Mein abhi aati hu.

Aur usne bina koi samay waste kiye, seedha Veer ke ghar ki orr prasthaan kiya.

Juhi ko wo Shreya ki hi nigraani me chorr aayi.

Aur jese hi Veer ke ghar pohuch wo Veer ke kamre me daakhil hui.

Veer ki haalat dekh uski rooh kaanp gayi. Darwaaze ki dehleez pe hi uske kadam tham gaye. Aur ek atyant hi peeda aur ajeeb sa dard uske dil me hua Veer ko uss haalat me dekh.

Nidhi : V-Veeeer!??

Veer : ??

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Aaj ke liye itna hi guys!
Dhanyavaad!

Pasand aaye toh like kar diyo re. 😁
Update me funny banane ko kuch aur tha nahi ya mujhe mila nahi iss liye baki ke update ko aik baar main lapait deta hu....Update Hamesha ki tarha kamal ka tha Alfazo ko ap ne bohat khubsoorati se paish kia hai......Har ehsaas ko hum parhne ke saath mehsoos ker paa rahe the bohat kam aisa hota hai jab hum kisi character ke saath iss had tak connect karte hai ke us ka dard khud ko mehsoos ho....Ap ke andar wo Ehsaas dilwane ki kabiliyat hai.....Nidhi Aur veer ke scene kamal ke hone wale hai Nidhi ke saath jo veer ka rishta hai use hum alfazo me bayan nahi ker sakte.....wo ek drama ka dailouge tha ke....


'Insaan ne sirf un Alfazo ko banaya hai jis Ehsaas se wo guzra ho.....Main to ye bhi nahi janta ke apni iss kafiyat ko bayan kaise karu'


Bilkul aise he ap ki story ke liye Alfaz kam parh rahe hai extraordinary story nahi hai ap ki.....Lekin kisi web series se kam bhi nahi hai
 

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Veer nikal pada hai Suhana/Sonia ke saath Delhi ki trip par... Waise bilkul hi chutiya bana diya iss bechaare ka to Suhana ne... Nahi yaar 20 se oopar ka ho gaya hai shayad Veer aur iss bewakoof ko ye bhi naa pata ke Passport kidhar use hota hai aur kidhar nahi... Pari bhi iss baar uski madad naa kar paayi... Waise Ragini bhi ye samajh gayi thi isiliye shayad Veer ki baat par hans rahi thi... Chalo jo bhi hai kam se kam lounde ko hawaayi jahaaz ka safar karne ka mauka to mila...
Veer didn't had any friends bro. Usse inn sab ke baare me kuch bhi na pata tha. :sigh2:
Kaafi badi badi hastiyaan aayin hai yahaan party mein jinmein se ek Mr. Chutiya, mera matlab Mr. Rohan tha... Sonia se bekaar hi chipak Raha tha... Wo kya hai naa kuchh logon ke DNA mein thodi problem hoti hai jab tak ladki ke saamne bezzati naa ho jaaye inko chain nahi padta... Aur fir entry huyi uss Club waali ladki kahun ya “ The Girl Seeking the meaning of Life” kahun uski... Veer ne to usse ek nazar mein hi pehchaan liya aur saath hi uski fatt bhi gaya... Aur wo laghbhag wahaan se bhaag khada hua... But ye hai naa Suhana... Isse alag hi chul machi hai... Ye nahi ki apne kaam se kaam rakhe... Aur iss aurat ka pati kahaan hai... Lagta hai uss bechaare ke saath bhi Teddy waala kaand hua hoga... Isiliye iske saath naa dikha ab tak... I can feel for that man... :rip:
Haha~ :gaylaugh:
Kaera... Yahi naam hai uss ladki ka aur ye Sonia ki childhood friend hai... Saath hi doosri friend ka bhi naam pata chala – Natalia joki ek singer hai... Shayad uska bhi role ho aage kahani mein... Kaera iss at another level... Koyi bhi field ho wo sabmein best hai aur yahi kaaran hai ke Sonia uss se jalti hai... Chalo koyi Sonia ko Apne local trucks dikhaao aur unke peechhe likha hone waala quote padhaao – “ Jalo Mat Rees Karo”... But wait koshish to ki thi Sonia ne ke wo Kaera se aage nikal paaye but Sed Life... I can understand what Sonia feels... Khaaskar tab jab uske paas koyi dost bhi nahi hai apni feelings share karne ke liye
Actually Sonia jealous hua karti thi. But ab nahi...
She just wants to get Kaera's attention. Kaera ne kabhi defeat nahi experience kii hai. So if Sonia defeats her, Kaera will take interest in her. And that's what Sonia wants.
Par aesa kya hua Kaera ki life mein jo wo bilkul hi badal gayi... Kya iski wajah Pushker ki maut thi??? Ya kuchh bhayaanak ghatna huyi thi Kaera ke saath... Jo bhi ho par she's super talented aur iss baat ka asar Veer par bhi padd raha hai... Haan Werewolf bhai zara dekho Veer apni kahani ka hero hai aur oopar se ab lounda Alpha Trait bhi paa chuka hai... Baat baat par iss tarah hairaan hona aur shocking looks dekar apne aap ko saadharan maanus dikhana achhi baat nahi hai...:nono: Usse koyi samjhaao uske paas wo hai jo kisi ke paas nahi – Pari :love:...
He's getting better. Ek baar uska intelligence 60 above hone dijiye. Fir aapko pata chalega what is Veer.
Waise Rohan ko jo hawa ka jhonka banaya Kaera ne uske liye meri taraf se usse:respekt:... Veer ne jo uss din Club mein usse bola tha wo by heart yaad hai Kaera ko... Jo dikhata hai ke wo kaafi prabhaavit thi Veer ke uss jawaab se... Ab dekhna hoga ke inke beech aur kya baatein hoti hain... Kya uss :sex: ki bhi baat hogi ya fir Veer ka kehna ke wo Apni Virginity ke liye bhi insensitive hai ye sahi hai... I think Kaera ek aesi situation mein hai jahaan insaan ko kuchh bhi feel nahi hota... Maine ek book padhi thi kaafi pehle, usmein bhi jo Lead character tha wo kuchh ghatnao ke kaaran ek aesi mano stithi mein chala gaya tha jahaan chaahe usse koyi jaan se hi maar de usse kuchh farak nahi padta... Let's see ke kya raaz chhippe hain Kaera ke vyaktitva mein...
Aap kuch kuch sahi ho. Par Kaera ka aisa nahi hai ki usse koi jaan se maarne aaye toh usse farq hi na pade...
Suhana ko dekh kar Kaera ka reaction kuchh samajh nahi aaya... I mean to say...
Kaera knows every details regarding Suhana's husband and his company. That's why Suhana frowned. And for some other reason too 😁
Iss beech Sonia ki jalan Kaera ke prati aur bhi badh gayi.
Not jealousy. Sonia is anxious. Kaera achanak Veer me interest kyu le rahi hai? Issi ke chalte she's anxious.
Dono hi updates shaandar the... Update size hi ya, chune gaye shabd, ya fir spelling mistakes joki thi hi nahi... Sabhi maaynon mein dono updates top class the... Bas issi tarah likhte rahiye aur ham reader logis ka manoranjan karte rahiye...

Outstanding Updates Brother & Waiting For Next...
Thanks a lot bro! ✨
 

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1. Nidhi is really confused about her feelings for veer. The way he supported her and that day his touch still gives her goosebumps. Hope so soon nidhi's feeling will be cleared as soon as they return and she will get more lime light.
True that...
2. Ragini's character is also very strange. Absolutely his husband did a big mistake but let's see when they resolve that matter. Her feeling for veer sometimes remember me of song kismat ki hawa kabhi garam garam kabhi naram naram as she is caring but have extra affection maybe coz he saved her.
Yes! The one who saved her was the one she ignored the most and she was also a participant in all those plans Vivek made. That's why she's guilty. And because of that guilty, affection is stronger than the usual.
3.kaera- aise dekha jaye to inke bare me kehne ki jarurat h ni kyuki logo ne already bahut kuch keh rakha h 🤣 but according to me she will play an important role in veer's life coz she is a 👸
Definitely! She gives more like queen vibes rather than the princess. She's cunning, intelligent, and Gorgeous.
4. Sonia- it's really hard to grow in such competition. Life sucks when each and every moment you have to be compared with someone and specially when she is your best friend. She clearly is not as happy
Yes! Sonia is a princess. 👑
5. Suhana- complex numbers are not as complex as her character. Seems to be a rich strong bold lady who have many powerful connections and have done many mischievous activities before. Trying to study veer Werewolf bhai be like dil me aata hu samajh me ni
Well! She has a split personality. She's hella unpredictable. She's like a lioness. If you can tame her, she'll be your perfect weapon.
6. Veer- the protagonist of our story, once a bechara now in the path of becoming a baadshah. Clearly he is building his empire with the works he is doing. Also it seems his mother bhavana belonged to a royal family. No mentioning of her since that ring incident. She also had a daughter whose birth was not specified
Yes! Veer is on his way to become a king. Well, Bhavana's scene will come later.
7. Werewolf bhai kya hi kehne aapke jabardast lekhni, really wonderful. Keep going and keep entertaining us
Thanks a lot bro! ✨
Keep supporting!
 

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Aise photo daal ker you ko kia laga hum jaise bhole bhale readers you ki story per laar Tapka ker tharak ka izhar kare gye

Kripiya agar ap aisa soch Rahe ho to main ap se kehna chahu ga ke ap bilkul sahi ho :angel:
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Toot Gaya Dil Par Armaan Wahi Hai,
Door Rehte Hain Fir Bhi Pyar Wahi Hai,
Jaante Hain Ke Mil Nahi Payenge,
Fir Bhi Aankho Mein Intezaar Wahi Hai.
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YE pari pakka veer ki gaand maare gi raat me likh ker le lo mujh se sign karwa lo....lekin wait mere ko to sign ate he nahi chalo anghoota lagwa lo ye pakka veer ki chal bigare gi
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golu ki entry chahe sab ko hero wali lagi ho lekin mera 20 saal ka filmo ka diploma kehta hai aise waqt me dost banne wala he baad me gaand marta hai
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daikho jo bhi bolo wo chor ker to ayi hai na :D Udhar veer ki band baji pari hai agar aisa hai to Arohi ki nazar me galti us ki honi chahiye ab ache incest writer ki tarha veer ko puri kutayi khane ka inaam dilwa dena :whistle:
Apun wesa incest writer nahi hai. Kuch bhi ho sakta hai story me...
Pencho pura ghar shareefo ka hai sab ko ye pranchal aur vivek he bharkate aa rahe the.....like seriously jis ko daikho us ko bharkaya ja raha hai
Yes! 😁
Yahan ju pranjal likh diye mistake sahi ker lo......finally mistake mil gayi abhi ruko bad reader banne ne do mere ko.....Ahem ahem.....Kaise writer hai ap janab ek naam bhi sahi se nahi likha ja raha ap se puri storie me naam ke siwa hai he kia wo to dhang se likh lo.....bata do agar storie likhne ka mann nahi hai to hum chor jate hai story ko......



Haye dil ko thandak mil gayi sakoon aa gaya ab aage revo per chalte hai :D
Ha ha theek hai theek hai abhi...
(Bc beizzati ho gayi ...)
Anyways mene edit kar diya hai. Thanks! :play:
Baj gaya band golu miya per mujhe abhi bhi shaq hai ke he ij nut a gud
Hmm! 🧐
mere ko janna hai ye xxxxxxxxxxx location hai kahan Pura google map chaan maar lia ye location kanhi nahi mili
Real locations ko censored kar diya 😁
Finally Jalsa ka tour milne wala hai.....oohh god excited 😆
:akshay:
Revo bohat bara likha tha but fuck this internet pura revo barbad ker dia
Ye kya kiya ju ne... :sad:
Apun aage ke updates ke revos ka wait karega ...
 
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