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Fantasy Achanak ka Kanoon

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Subah ke 4 baj rahe hain raat ki bo saari baate ab me yaad. Nahi kar raha hu. Sabse pahle to pahle maine kuch exercises ki aur fir meditation karne baith Gaya, meditation abhi Maine Shuru hi kiya tha the ki achanak mujhe aisa Laga jaise main kahin aur pahunch Gaya Hun. Yahan Charon taraf andhera Hi andhera hua hai aur main kuchh bhi Nahin dekh pa raha hun. abhi main thoda Aage chalne ka faisla Kiya.


Dhire dhire Aage badhane per mujhe Samne ek Roshni dikhai di per yah roshani kuchh alag thi, aisa lag raha tha mano yah roshani Kisi murti ke Piche se a rahi hai.


Murti ka upar sar se lekar niche kandhe tak hi Roshni se dikhai de raha tha dekhne se to aisa lag raha tha ki yah Kisi devta ki murti hai. Per mujhe yah samajh Nahin a raha tha murti Kali kyon hai ya shayad ho sakta hai ki yah murti mujhe Andhere ki vajah se kali dikh rahi hai aur piche se aati huwi huwi Roshni ki vajah se murti thodi bahut dikhai de rahi hai.


Achanak murti ke Samne mujhe Koi baitha hua dikhai Diya actually mujhe vaha insan dikhai nahin diya tha per aisa lag raha tha jaise murti ke Samne Koi baitha hua hai.


Us shaqs ne kuchh shabd bole jise sunkar to jaisa hamesha mujhe hota hai is bar bhi mujhe current lagne lag Gaya. Ab mujhe aisa lag raha tha ki me aaj yahi mar jaunga kyuki ye awaaj se mujhe ghutan ho rahi thi aur me hil bhi nahi sakta tha.


Me kuch nahi kar sakta tha par achanak mujhe aisa laga jaise voh shaqs khada hokar mere pass me baith gaya hain. Mere chahre par paani ki boonde giri aur me uth gaya.


Ab me meditation se bahar aa gaya tha maine time dekha to 8 baj rahe the. Vaise agar voh meditation waala waqt yaad kiya jaaye to aisa lag raha tha mano voh paani ki boonde nahi ho vo anshoo hi the.



Ab me nahane chala gaya tha aur soch raha tha ki aaj ka pura din kaash acha chala jaye. Kyuki maine xxx company me job ke liye apply kiya tha aur mujhe unka interview dene jaana tha aaj.

Me company ke baare me bata du ki ye company xxx group of industries ka hissa hain. Isme kayi companies aati hain aur is industry ki ek company jiski magazine print karti hain vaha apply kiya tha.


Subah 11 bje: Social Printing ltd


8 majila imaarat waali is imaarat ke saamne me khada tha. Is company ka name jaisa ki main apko upar headline me bata chuka is company ka name social printing ltd hain.


Me company ke andar gusa aur receptionist se pucha yaha interview kis taraf liye ja rahe hain.

4rth flour sir.... She tells with a smile

Thank you miss..... Maine kaha

4rt flour par ek room bahar kaafi saare ladke aur ladkiyan room ke bahar khade the. Aur sayad apne number ka wait kar rahe the. Me bhi ek khaali seat dekhkar baith gaya aur apni baari ka intzaar karne laga.


(Writer- guys maine apni ab tak ki life ghar me hi gujari hain, isiliye mujhe jyada knowledge nahi hain office kis trah se chalta hain so agar kuch aisa lage ki ye cheej kabhi office me nahi hoti to iske liye mujhe maaf kijiyega)


Mujhe baithe huwe kuch der hi huwi thi ki mere phone par ek call aayi ye call mere dost aadi ki thi,


Aadi- tu social media printing company me kya kar raha hain.

Me- tu meri jasoosi kar raha tha.

Aadi- Ab tu meri company me enter marega to mujhe to pata chal hi jayega.


Me- abe ye bhi teri company hain.

Aadi- is sahar ki aadi company meri dad ke name pe hain, aur ye company dad ne mere name ki huwi hain, wur tujhe kaam karne ki jarurat kya pad gayi tera dost hain abhi, tu mere sath kam kara karega, ham dono milkar kaam karenge.


Mai- darsal baat ye hain me khud ko sabit karna chahta hu ki me bhi kuch kar sakta hu, mujhe kaam kisi ke recommend karne kisi aur ki wajah se nahi, mujhe ye job khud ke dam par mili hain.

Aadi- par tu isse badi post deserve karta hai.


Me- voh mukam bhi dheere dheere hasil ho hi jayega.

Aadi- theek hain me ye tera part time job samajh ke chhod raha hu aur apni hi company samajh ke kaam kariyo, me un logo ko bol dunga tujhe hire karne ke liye.

Me- nahi tu aisa nahi karega.

Aadi- theek hain bhai.


Aur call cut hone ke baad me apne interview ka wait karne lag gaya.
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Kisi dusre sahar me ek mahal jaise ghar me kursi par baitha huwa hain aur apne samne baithe huwe aadmi pitate huwe dekh raha hain, 4 pahalwaan jaise negros ek aadmi ko kutte ki trah maar rahe hain. Us ghar me thodi thodi dur black suit pahne log hatho me m416 gun lekar khade huwe hain.


Dekhkar to ye koi don lag raha hain, aur usi se halki si duri par kuch do log khade huwe the aur apni ankho se us pitate huwe aadmi ko dekh rahe hain aur sath me aasoo bhi baha rahe hain, inki umra 55 ke pass hogi aur ye pati patni hain.

inke jagah jagah se phate purane kapde kapde dekh kar lag raha hain ki ye bahut gareeb parivaar hain. Yeh sab chal hi raha tha us chair pe baitha huwa aadmi bola.

Admi- Pura sahar Shera bhai se darta aur shera ke niyamo pe chalta aur tune mere niyam nahi maane Rohit.

Rohit- malik maaf kar dijiye maalik galati ho gayi dubara aisi galati nahi hogi.

Shera- dubara galati karne ke liye tu jinda bachega tab galati karega na saale.


Un dono me se admi bola


Aadmi- malik isko chhod dijiye ise markar meri bachi wapas to nahi aa jayegi na.


Shera- tum chinta mat karo hari bhai isko to me maar hi dalunga, kya ye admi janta nahi tha ki shera ko dehej lene waalo se sakht nafrat hain, gussa to me tumse bhi hu agar shera bado ki ijjat nahi karta to ab tak tum bhi pit rahe hote. Mujhe dahej lene aur dene waale dono se nafrat hain.


Hari- par malik is jaan lekar kya hoga meri beti mar gayi aur ab vob wapas nahi aane wali....itna kahkar hari ki ankho se ansoo nikalne lage.


Shera- lo tum kahte ho to abhi mar diya isko bas tum royo mat. Isi liye to ro rahe the na me ise maar kyu nahi raha.


( Writer- are confuse mat hoyiye hamre shera bhai jyada sun nahi paate lakin kisi ko mahsoos na isiliye ye jahir bhi nahi karte hai, is waqt hari bhi ye baat janta hain ki shera bhai sun nahi pate)


Shera- ye paise rakh lijiye, apki beti jaane ka dukh to dur nahi kar sakta par ye paisa apki zindagi ko saral banayenge.


( Chaliye me apko puri baat batata hu hari aur uski patni kamla dono ne apni beti ki shaadi bahut ache aur bade parivaar me ki thi par ladke waalo ne dahej mang liya tha, jisko dene me ye log ko financial Condition itni kharab ho gayi ki 1 saal tak to ye logo har din 1 roti khakar hi jinda rah rahe the aaye beti sasuraal waale use paise mangne ke liye uske mayike bhijwa dete the. Uski beti ko bahut bura lagta tha aur aise ek din khaali hath unki beti sasuraal gayi to sasuraal waalo ne hari ki beti ko ghar se bahar nikal diya air baad me hari ki beti ne aatmhatya kar li. Jab hari ki beti ki shaadi huwi thi tab shera bahut busy tha isiliye uska pata nahi chal paaya ki uske sahar me dahej liya ja raha hain lakin baad me jab use hari ki beti ki lash ke baare me aur usse judi puri kahani pata chali to usne rohit ko uthva liya aur uske baad to apko pata hi chal chuka hain.)


Kuch samay baad ek ladki ghar me gusi aur isse kuch samay pahle hi hari aur uski patni sath rohit mera mtlb lash sabko bahar diya tha. Voh ladki ghar me gusi.


Ladki- bhaiyaaa...

Itna kaha aur apne bhai se gale lag gayi.


Shera- kaisi hain meri bahan

Simran- me bahut achhi hu par apke chahre par tantion aur gussa kyu dikh raha hain.


Shera- ek dahej ka case tha.


Simran samajh gayi thi.

Simran- are apne matter to solve kar hi diya hoga aur ye gunda gardi chhod ke kuch achha karo aur mere liye ek babhi dhun kar lao.

Shera- tere liye babhi dhudne se pahle mujhe tere liye tera hone wala pati talasna hain.

Simran- kya bhaiya aap bhi.


Shera- chal aaja nasta karle maine bhi nahi khaaya hain.

New character introduction

Shera- bhopal sahar ka don. Aur ek acha asdmi. Age 35 year aur pura nahi sun paata lakin jaahir bhi nahi karta.


Simran- gori gori ladki Hain bilkul heroine lagti Hain bilkul yami gautam ke jaisi haaye bahut sunder hain. Age 20 year old.

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Aaj ke liye itna hi.
Nice update bhai
 

Luffy

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Update 6


Subah ke 4 baj rahe hain raat ki bo saari baate ab me yaad. Nahi kar raha hu. Sabse pahle to pahle maine kuch exercises ki aur fir meditation karne baith Gaya, meditation abhi Maine Shuru hi kiya tha the ki achanak mujhe aisa Laga jaise main kahin aur pahunch Gaya Hun. Yahan Charon taraf andhera Hi andhera hua hai aur main kuchh bhi Nahin dekh pa raha hun. abhi main thoda Aage chalne ka faisla Kiya.


Dhire dhire Aage badhane per mujhe Samne ek Roshni dikhai di per yah roshani kuchh alag thi, aisa lag raha tha mano yah roshani Kisi murti ke Piche se a rahi hai.


Murti ka upar sar se lekar niche kandhe tak hi Roshni se dikhai de raha tha dekhne se to aisa lag raha tha ki yah Kisi devta ki murti hai. Per mujhe yah samajh Nahin a raha tha murti Kali kyon hai ya shayad ho sakta hai ki yah murti mujhe Andhere ki vajah se kali dikh rahi hai aur piche se aati huwi huwi Roshni ki vajah se murti thodi bahut dikhai de rahi hai.


Achanak murti ke Samne mujhe Koi baitha hua dikhai Diya actually mujhe vaha insan dikhai nahin diya tha per aisa lag raha tha jaise murti ke Samne Koi baitha hua hai.


Us shaqs ne kuchh shabd bole jise sunkar to jaisa hamesha mujhe hota hai is bar bhi mujhe current lagne lag Gaya. Ab mujhe aisa lag raha tha ki me aaj yahi mar jaunga kyuki ye awaaj se mujhe ghutan ho rahi thi aur me hil bhi nahi sakta tha.


Me kuch nahi kar sakta tha par achanak mujhe aisa laga jaise voh shaqs khada hokar mere pass me baith gaya hain. Mere chahre par paani ki boonde giri aur me uth gaya.


Ab me meditation se bahar aa gaya tha maine time dekha to 8 baj rahe the. Vaise agar voh meditation waala waqt yaad kiya jaaye to aisa lag raha tha mano voh paani ki boonde nahi ho vo anshoo hi the.



Ab me nahane chala gaya tha aur soch raha tha ki aaj ka pura din kaash acha chala jaye. Kyuki maine xxx company me job ke liye apply kiya tha aur mujhe unka interview dene jaana tha aaj.

Me company ke baare me bata du ki ye company xxx group of industries ka hissa hain. Isme kayi companies aati hain aur is industry ki ek company jiski magazine print karti hain vaha apply kiya tha.


Subah 11 bje: Social Printing ltd


8 majila imaarat waali is imaarat ke saamne me khada tha. Is company ka name jaisa ki main apko upar headline me bata chuka is company ka name social printing ltd hain.


Me company ke andar gusa aur receptionist se pucha yaha interview kis taraf liye ja rahe hain.

4rth flour sir.... She tells with a smile

Thank you miss..... Maine kaha

4rt flour par ek room bahar kaafi saare ladke aur ladkiyan room ke bahar khade the. Aur sayad apne number ka wait kar rahe the. Me bhi ek khaali seat dekhkar baith gaya aur apni baari ka intzaar karne laga.


(Writer- guys maine apni ab tak ki life ghar me hi gujari hain, isiliye mujhe jyada knowledge nahi hain office kis trah se chalta hain so agar kuch aisa lage ki ye cheej kabhi office me nahi hoti to iske liye mujhe maaf kijiyega)


Mujhe baithe huwe kuch der hi huwi thi ki mere phone par ek call aayi ye call mere dost aadi ki thi,


Aadi- tu social media printing company me kya kar raha hain.

Me- tu meri jasoosi kar raha tha.

Aadi- Ab tu meri company me enter marega to mujhe to pata chal hi jayega.


Me- abe ye bhi teri company hain.

Aadi- is sahar ki aadi company meri dad ke name pe hain, aur ye company dad ne mere name ki huwi hain, wur tujhe kaam karne ki jarurat kya pad gayi tera dost hain abhi, tu mere sath kam kara karega, ham dono milkar kaam karenge.


Mai- darsal baat ye hain me khud ko sabit karna chahta hu ki me bhi kuch kar sakta hu, mujhe kaam kisi ke recommend karne kisi aur ki wajah se nahi, mujhe ye job khud ke dam par mili hain.

Aadi- par tu isse badi post deserve karta hai.


Me- voh mukam bhi dheere dheere hasil ho hi jayega.

Aadi- theek hain me ye tera part time job samajh ke chhod raha hu aur apni hi company samajh ke kaam kariyo, me un logo ko bol dunga tujhe hire karne ke liye.

Me- nahi tu aisa nahi karega.

Aadi- theek hain bhai.


Aur call cut hone ke baad me apne interview ka wait karne lag gaya.
,
,
,
,
,
Kisi dusre sahar me ek mahal jaise ghar me kursi par baitha huwa hain aur apne samne baithe huwe aadmi pitate huwe dekh raha hain, 4 pahalwaan jaise negros ek aadmi ko kutte ki trah maar rahe hain. Us ghar me thodi thodi dur black suit pahne log hatho me m416 gun lekar khade huwe hain.


Dekhkar to ye koi don lag raha hain, aur usi se halki si duri par kuch do log khade huwe the aur apni ankho se us pitate huwe aadmi ko dekh rahe hain aur sath me aasoo bhi baha rahe hain, inki umra 55 ke pass hogi aur ye pati patni hain.

inke jagah jagah se phate purane kapde kapde dekh kar lag raha hain ki ye bahut gareeb parivaar hain. Yeh sab chal hi raha tha us chair pe baitha huwa aadmi bola.

Admi- Pura sahar Shera bhai se darta aur shera ke niyamo pe chalta aur tune mere niyam nahi maane Rohit.

Rohit- malik maaf kar dijiye maalik galati ho gayi dubara aisi galati nahi hogi.

Shera- dubara galati karne ke liye tu jinda bachega tab galati karega na saale.


Un dono me se admi bola


Aadmi- malik isko chhod dijiye ise markar meri bachi wapas to nahi aa jayegi na.


Shera- tum chinta mat karo hari bhai isko to me maar hi dalunga, kya ye admi janta nahi tha ki shera ko dehej lene waalo se sakht nafrat hain, gussa to me tumse bhi hu agar shera bado ki ijjat nahi karta to ab tak tum bhi pit rahe hote. Mujhe dahej lene aur dene waale dono se nafrat hain.


Hari- par malik is jaan lekar kya hoga meri beti mar gayi aur ab vob wapas nahi aane wali....itna kahkar hari ki ankho se ansoo nikalne lage.


Shera- lo tum kahte ho to abhi mar diya isko bas tum royo mat. Isi liye to ro rahe the na me ise maar kyu nahi raha.


( Writer- are confuse mat hoyiye hamre shera bhai jyada sun nahi paate lakin kisi ko mahsoos na isiliye ye jahir bhi nahi karte hai, is waqt hari bhi ye baat janta hain ki shera bhai sun nahi pate)


Shera- ye paise rakh lijiye, apki beti jaane ka dukh to dur nahi kar sakta par ye paisa apki zindagi ko saral banayenge.


( Chaliye me apko puri baat batata hu hari aur uski patni kamla dono ne apni beti ki shaadi bahut ache aur bade parivaar me ki thi par ladke waalo ne dahej mang liya tha, jisko dene me ye log ko financial Condition itni kharab ho gayi ki 1 saal tak to ye logo har din 1 roti khakar hi jinda rah rahe the aaye beti sasuraal waale use paise mangne ke liye uske mayike bhijwa dete the. Uski beti ko bahut bura lagta tha aur aise ek din khaali hath unki beti sasuraal gayi to sasuraal waalo ne hari ki beti ko ghar se bahar nikal diya air baad me hari ki beti ne aatmhatya kar li. Jab hari ki beti ki shaadi huwi thi tab shera bahut busy tha isiliye uska pata nahi chal paaya ki uske sahar me dahej liya ja raha hain lakin baad me jab use hari ki beti ki lash ke baare me aur usse judi puri kahani pata chali to usne rohit ko uthva liya aur uske baad to apko pata hi chal chuka hain.)


Kuch samay baad ek ladki ghar me gusi aur isse kuch samay pahle hi hari aur uski patni sath rohit mera mtlb lash sabko bahar diya tha. Voh ladki ghar me gusi.


Ladki- bhaiyaaa...

Itna kaha aur apne bhai se gale lag gayi.


Shera- kaisi hain meri bahan

Simran- me bahut achhi hu par apke chahre par tantion aur gussa kyu dikh raha hain.


Shera- ek dahej ka case tha.


Simran samajh gayi thi.

Simran- are apne matter to solve kar hi diya hoga aur ye gunda gardi chhod ke kuch achha karo aur mere liye ek babhi dhun kar lao.

Shera- tere liye babhi dhudne se pahle mujhe tere liye tera hone wala pati talasna hain.

Simran- kya bhaiya aap bhi.


Shera- chal aaja nasta karle maine bhi nahi khaaya hain.

New character introduction

Shera- bhopal sahar ka don. Aur ek acha asdmi. Age 35 year aur pura nahi sun paata lakin jaahir bhi nahi karta.


Simran- gori gori ladki Hain bilkul heroine lagti Hain bilkul yami gautam ke jaisi haaye bahut sunder hain. Age 20 year old.

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Aaj ke liye itna hi.
Awesome update
 

Lovekillsyou

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  1. Dosto insaan kahani to soch leta hain ki kaisi kahani ready karni hain ek badhiya ending ke sath.
  2. Muskil ye nahi ki kahani soch liye, muskil to ye hain bhai ki is kahani me conversation kaise daale.

Me thahra ek introvertet ladka. Mtlb samajhte ho iska ya nahi, me batata hu iska mtlb hain ki voh log jo jyada baat nahi karte.


Ab baat jo insaan kabhi kisi se talk nahi kare. uske liye kahani me do logo ko apas me baate karwana bahut muskil hain re baba.


Mujhe bahut hard pad raha hain.


Soch raha hu seedhe seedhe kahani hi bata du puri ki puri, maine jo jo soch rakha tha aur 3 ya 4 update me kahani khatam karu. Par isse mujhe bahut bura lagega. Apni pahli kahani ko is trah khatam karna.


Jinhone ye kahani ke thode bahut updates pade hain voh bhai log thoda suggest karo na yarr. Me conversation thodi kam daalu aur kahani pari karu to kaisa rahega. Ap log ko maja aaye me yahi chahta hu. Ye kahani me logo ke bich kya baate daalu isi thought ki wajah se kahani aage nahi badhi. Koi suggest karo yaar.


ap kuch bata do Naina ji, mere favourite kahani ke writer Jay Sutar sir aur Werewolf sir ap kuch batao.
Ya fir meri story ki readers ap bata do.
Naik Pta nhi Nevil singh krish1152 Shanu Junaid devil😈 Luffy Shahrukh

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Death Kiñg

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  1. Dosto insaan kahani to soch leta hain ki kaisi kahani ready karni hain ek badhiya ending ke sath.
  2. Muskil ye nahi ki kahani soch liye, muskil to ye hain bhai ki is kahani me conversation kaise daale.

Me thahra ek introvertet ladka. Mtlb samajhte iska ya nahi, me batata hu iska mtlb hain ki voh log jo jyada baat nahi karte.


Ab baat jo insaan kabhi kisi se talk nahi kare uske liye kahani me do logo ko apas me baate karwana bahut muskil hain re baba.


Mujhe bahut hard pad raha hain.


Soch raha hu seedhe seedhe kahani hi bata du puri ki puri, maine jo jo soch rakha tha aur 3 ya 4 update me kahani khatan karu. Par isse mujhe bahut bura lagega. Apni pahli kahani ko is trah khatam karna.


Jinhone ye kahani ke thode bahut updates pade hain voh bhai log thoda suggest karo na yarr. Me conversation thodi kam daalu aur kahani par karu to kaisa rahega. Ap log maja aaye me yahi chahta hu. Ye kahani me logo ke bich kya baate daalu isi thought ki wajah se kahani aage nahi badhi. Koi suggest karo yaar.


ap kuch bata do Naina ji, mere favourite kahani God and demons ke writer Jay Sutar sir ap kuch batao.
Ya fir meri story ki readers ap bata do.
Naik Pta nhi Nevil singh krish1152 Shanu Junaid devil😈 Luffy Shahrukh

Abhi jisko tag nahi kiya maaf kariyega. Par ap bhi kuch btao yarr.
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