Romance Bepanaah Ishq (Completed)

[Jaguaar]

बहुत ही बेहतरीन और शानदार महोदय।।

सोनल के जन्मदिन पर राज रंग जमाना चाहता है लेकिन रंजीत और राजेश उस रंग में भंग डालना चाहते हैं। देखना है कि वो कहाँ तक अपनी कोशिश में कामयाब होते हैं।।

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[Naik]

Update 45​

Sonal apne kaam mein busy thi apne beheno ke saath hasi mazaak kar rahi thi aur Raj durr khada usko pyaar se dekhe jaa raha tha aur soch raha tha.

Raj: Mann mein. Kitni pyaari hai Sonal. Chehre pe duniya bhar ki masoomiyat hai aur muskurahat bhi kitni pyaari hai. Par puri pagal hai. Kitna mujhse pyaar karti hai. Sirf mere liye apni puri zindagi mere naam kardi aur badle mein kabhi kisi chiz ki maang nhi ki. Meri chotti si takleef se yeh kitna ghabra jaati hai.

Bagal mein khada Yash yeh dekh raha tha aur woh puch baithta hai.

Yash: Aise kyaa dekh raha hai Raj. Woh teri hi biwi hai.

Raj: Mujhe pata hai Yash. Par isne mere liye kitna kuch kiya hai aur maine iske liye kuch bhi nhi kiya. Yeh mujhse kitna pyaar karti hai aur kabhi saamne se mujhse pyaar nhi maanga. Main toh iske pyaar ka karzdaar hogya hu.

Yash: Agar aisa hai toh tu isko iske hisse ka pyaar deke woh karz utaar de.

Raj: Bahot jald Yash. Bahot jald. Sonal ko uske hisse pyaar bahot jald milega. Abhi kuch din baad hi Sonal ka birthday hai. Maine socha hai usi din Sonal ko woh sab dunga jiski woh haqdaar hai.

Yash: Bahot achha socha hai. Aur isse achha gift toh Sonal ko mil hi nhi sakta.

Raj: Isiliye toh uss din ko choose kiya hai.

Yehlog baat karne mein busy the aur inko pata hi nhi chala kab Swati inke paas aake khadi hogyi.

Swati: Kis din ko choose kiya hai Raj aur kisliye.

Raj: Bas hai kuch special. Sabke liye surprise.

Swati: Achhaa aisa kyaa karne wale ho. Yash aapko toh pata hi hoga. Mujhe nhi batayenge.

Yash: Jarur batata par yeh surprise bahot special hai aur main promise karta hu isse tum bhi bahot khush hojaogi.

Swati: Aisi baat hai toh phir dekhte hai aisa kyaa plan kiya hai aapdono ne. Achha ab chaliye dinner karlijiye. Bahot late hogaya hai.

Raj: Tum aur Sonal bhi chalo. Saath mein karte hai.

Swati: Humhe abhi thoda kaam hai hum baad mein khaayenge.

Raj: Bilkul bhi nhi. Ruko main abhi aata hu. Yeh bol Raj Sonal ke paas chala jaata hai jaha Sonal apne kaam mein busy thi.

Raj: Sonal.

Sonal: Haa Raj boliye.

Raj: Mujhe bhuk lagi hai.

Sonal: Aapne abhi tak dinner nhi kiyaa. Aap rukiye main abhi aapke liye dinner laati hu. Aap bhi naa bilkul bhi dhyaan nhi rakhte apna.

Raj: Aree ruko ruko. Pehle batao tumne khaya.

Sonal: Abhi nhi Raj. Bas yeh thoda sa kaam baaki hai phir karlungi.

Raj: Yeh kaam yehi band karo aur chalo dinner karne.

Sonal: Par Raj thoda sa hi baaki hai.

Raj: Maine kaha naa chalo chup chaap. Aur jab tak tum nhi khaogi main bhi nhi khaunga.

Raj ki iss baat pe Sonal saare kaam wahi chor deti hai aur Raj ke saath dinner karne ke liye chal deti hai bina koi sawaal jawaab kiye.

Idher Sonal ko jaate dekh Swati bhi chal deti hai. Phir charo milke dinner karne lagte hai.

Dinner ke waqt khaate samay Sonal ke muh mein khaana lag jaata hai jiska usse andaza nhi tha. Raj woh dekhta hai toh woh khud hi khaana saaf kardeta hai jisse Sonal ko thodi sharm bhi aati hai.

Thodi der mein dinner complete karke Sonal aur Swati apna kaam khatam karne chali jaati hai. Raj aur Yash Sonal ke Mama Papa ke saath busy hojaate hai.

Kuch der baad jab kaam khatam hojaata hai tab sab sone ke liye chal dete hai.

Room mein aane ke baad Sonal as usual Raj ke bag se uske liye kapde nikal deti hai.

Raj: Tumhe pata hai tumhari isi aadat ne mujhe bahot pareshan kiya hai.

Sonal: Matlab.

Raj: Yeh jo tum mera har kaam kardeti ho aur isiliye mujhe kuch Karna nhi padhta aur tumhare naa rehne se mujhe pareshani hoti hai.

Sonal yeh sunke hasne lagti hai aur bolti hai. Aadat padh gayi hai toh rehne dijiye. Kyoki main toh yeh kaam karungi hi chahe aap mujhe daante yaa gussa kare.

Raj: Phir karti raho saari zindagi.

Sonal: Khushi se. Chaliye ab so jaaiye. Bahot raat hogyi hai. Waise aapko sir dard toh nhi hai naa ab.

Raj: Jis wajah se horaha tha woh wajah khatam hogyi isiliye ab koi sir dard nhi hai.

Sonal: Aur woh wajah kyaa thi.

Raj: Batadunga bahot jald.

Sonal: Waise mujhe di bata rahi thi aapne koi surprise plan kiya hai. Kyaa hai woh.

Raj: Abhi toh bilkul nhi bataunga. Bahot special hai aur khash tumhare liye hi hai.

Sonal: Mere liyee.

Raj: Haaa. Aisa surprise jisse dekhte hi tum khushi se uchal padogi.

Sonal: Aur woh kab denge.

Raj: Abhi thoda time hai. Par yaha nhi apne ghar mein dunga.

Sonal: Mujhe intezaar rahega.

Phir dono so jaate hai.

Agle din sagai thi toh subah se hi sab kaam mein lage hue the. Par Sonal ne Raj ko akela nhi chora tha. Dono hi ekdusre ki madad kar rahe the aur saath mein hasi mazaak bhi kar rahe the.

Sham ko sagai ke liye guest aane start hogye the. Sablog ready bhi horahe the.

Sonal ne Raj ki di hui saari peheni thi jo uske upar bahot achhi lag rahi thi. Raj toh usko dekhte hi reh gaya.

Sonal: Aise kyaa dekh rahe hai Raj. Achhi nhi lag rahi mujhpe.

Raj: Yeh saree toh tumhare liye hi bani hai. Bahot khubsoorat dikh rahi ho tum.

Sonal: Sharma ke. Thank you Raj.

Phir dono nichhe aate hai. Swati bhi Sonal ki saree dekh rahi thi aur usko woh bahot pasand aayi thi.

Swati: Sonal yeh saree kab li tune. Bahot achhi lag rahi hai. Sagai ke baad mujhe de dena.

Sonal: Yeh saree toh main kabhi kisi ko naa du. Yeh saree specially Raj mere liye laaye hai kal.

Swati: Kyaa baat hai. Raj ki choice toh mast hai. Dekh kaise sab teri saree ko hi dekh rahe hai. Bahot achhi lag rahi hai tujhpe. Ek tera Raj hai jo tere liye khud shopping karta hai aur ek mere Yash hai jo aajtak mere liye ek nail polish tak nhi laaye.

Sonal: Ab isme main kyaa kahu. Par main bahot khush hu. Bhale hi Raj mere se pyaar nhi karte. Par unki yeh care mere liye unke pyaar se kam nhi hai. Main toh saari zindagi isi ke saath jee lungi.

Swati: Ek baat bolu. Raj jab se yaha aaya hai maine notice kiya hai woh tujhe harwaqt dekhta hai uski nazre jaise harwaqt tujhe hi khojti rehti hai. Uski aankho mein mujhe tere liye pyaar dikha hai. Mujhe lagta hai woh bhi tujhse pyaar karne laga hai.

Swati ki baat sunke Sonal ke dil ki dhadkan badh jaati hai. Usko Swati ki baat pe yakeen nhi horaha tha.

Sonal: Aap kyaa keh rahi hai di. Raj toh Megha se pyaar karte hai. Aur aapne jo dekha hai woh mere liye ek care respect hoga.

Swati: Mujhe bhi pyaar ki samaj hai Sonal. Main daave ke saath keh sakti hu Raj tujhse pyaar karne laga hai. Uske dil mein tere liye ek khaash jagah ban gayi hai.

Sonal kuch bhi nhi bolti kyoki uske paas kuch bolne ke liye tha hi nhi.

Swati: Agar tujhe yakeen nhi toh tu khud Raj ki aankho mein dekh yaa uski nazar se halka sa durr hoke dekh.

Sonal bina kuch bole waha se chali jaati hai aur Swati ki boli hui baat sochne lagti hai.

Sonal: Kyaa Raj sach mein mujhse pyaar karne lage hai. Yaani meri mehnat rang laayi. Mere Raj bhi mujhse pyaar karte hai ab. Par agar yeh di ki nazar ka bhram hua toh. Agar di ne jo bola woh galat nikla toh. Nhii nhii main abhi kisi nateeze pe nhi aaungi. Ekbaar mera dil toot chuka hai ab agar dobara toot ta hai toh main jee nhi paungi.

Abhi Sonal yeh soch hi rahi thi ke pichhe se awaaz aati hai mujhe nhi pata tha meri biwi ko akele barbar karne ki aadat hai.

Sonal pichhe ghum ke dekhti hai toh waha Raj khada tha.

Sonal: Raj aap yaha.

Raj: Aana padha kab se dekh raha hu meri biwi yaha akele baithe barbar kiye jaa rahi hai.

Sonal: Aisa kuch nhi hai. Bas kuch soch rahi thi.

Raj: Aisa kyaa soch rahi thi jara humhe bhi batao.

Sonal: Kuch khaash nhi. Bas aise hi.

Raj: Bata bhi do shayad kuch madad hojaaye.

Sonal ab kyaa bole usko samaj nhi aaraha tha woh phirse sochne lagti hai.

Raj: Dekho phir se sochne lagi ho. Achha choro yeh batao aaj sagai hojaa rahi hai. Toh kal yehi rehna hai yaa ghar chalna hai. .

Sonal: Aap jaisa thikk samjhee.

Raj: Thik hai phir kal ready rehna hum ghar chalenge. Ab chalo sagai ki rashm start hone ko hai.

Phir dono waha se sabke beech aajate hai. Par Raj ne Sonal ki baat sunli thi jo usne akele mein kahi thi isiliye woh Sonal dekhte hue mann mein bolne lagta hai.

Raj: I Am Sorry Sonal. Mujhe pata hai tumhe kitni takleef hui hogi mere past ke baare mein jaanke. Par tumne sab haste hue sehliya. Par bas kuch din ka wait karo tumhari mehnat ka fal tumhe milega ab. Bahot jald tumhe tumhara pyaar milega.

Dheere dheere sagai ki rashm puri hojaati hai saare mehmaan bhi dheere dheere chale jaate hai. Ab bas ghar ke kuch log hi baaki the.

Rashmi: Sonal Swati tumhare mummy papa toh bol rahe hai woh kal chale jaayenge. Tumlog toh rahoge naa kuch din humare saath.

Sonal: Mami ji ab main kyaa bolu. Jaisa Raj chahenge main waisa hi karungi.

Swati: Haa Mami ji Yash jaisa chahenge waisa hi hoga.

Rashmi: Raj Yash rukh jao kuch din. Iss sagai ke mahaul mein tumlogo se thik se baate bhi nhi hui. Isi bahane thodi baate bhi hojayegi.

Raj: Maaf karna Mami ji. Hum rukh jaate but hum apna kaam chorke aaye hai. Agar Sonal yaha rukhna chahe toh rukh sakti hai koi problem nhi hai.

Yash: Haa Mami ji. Raj sahi keh raha hai. Swati aur Sonal yaha rukhna chahe toh rukh sakti hai baad mein aajayengi.

Rashmi: Swati Sonal rukogi naa. Shaadi ke baad toh tumdono apna Mama Mami ko bhul hi gayi ho.

Sonal: Main nhi rukh sakti Mami ji. Kyoki mera bhi college chal raha hai. Jyaada chuti nhi karsakti. Phir mere exams bhi aane wale hai.

Swati: Agar Sonal nhi rukh rahi hai toh main akele kyaa karungi. Hum baad mein phir aajayenge.

Rashmi: Ab tumdono ne reason hi aisa diya hai ke main kuch bol hi nhi sakti. Thikk hai phir jao. Lekin promise karo baad mein jarur aaoge.

Dono: Promise.

Phir sab apne apne room mein aake so jaate hai.

Agle din Sonal uthke apne aur Raj ke kapde packs karne lagti hai.

Thodi der baad sab nichhe hall mein baithe hue the.

Deepak: Raj tumlog kab nikal rahe ho.

Raj: Ji bas thodi der mein niklenge. Aaplog kab niklenge.

Deepak: Humlog sham ko niklenge. Tumlog dhyaan se jaana.

Raj: Ji.

Thodi der baad Raj Sonal Yash Swati sabse milke wapas Mumbai ke liye nikal jaate hai aur dopahar tak wohlog apne apne ghar bhi pahonch jaate hai.

Sonal apne ghar mein aake jo khushi mil rahi thi woh khushi usko ab kahi nhi milti thi.

Smita: Kaisa raha Sagai ka function sab achhe se hogya naa.

Sonal: Haa Mummy sab achhe se hogyaa.

Smita: Chalo achhi baat hai. Ab jaao aaram karo. Kal se wapas college start karo. Bahot din chutti hogyi. Exams aane wale hai naa.

Sonal: Jiii.

Phir Sonal waha se apne room mein chali jaati hai. Raj bhi jaane wala hota hai toh usko Nandini pakad leti hai.

Nandini: Toh bataya tumne usse.

Raj: Abhi nhi bhabhi.

Nandini: Ab kyo late kar rahe ho Raj.

Raj: Sonal ko surprise dunga Bhabhi. Kuch din baad uska birthday hai usi din bolunga.

Nandini: Bilkul pehle ki tarah.

Raj: Jiii. Uss waqt toh darr tha reject hone ka. Par issbaar toh koi darr nhi hai.

Nandini: Achhi baat hai. Toh kuch plan kiya kaise kya karoge.

Raj: Socha toh hai. Par pata nhi usko pasand aayega ya nhi.

Nandini: Mujhe batao. Main help karti hu.

Raj: Thikk hai. Main fresh hoke aata hu phir baat karte hai.

Nandini: Thikk hai.

Phir Raj waha se apne kamre mein aata hai toh dekhta hai Sonal fresh hochuki hai aur padhne baith gayi hai.

Raj: Kyaa baat hai tum toh ek achhi bachhi ki tarah chup chaap padhne baith gayi.

Sonal: Main achhi bachhi hi hu. Aur itne din padhai nhi hui toh usko cover karlu.

Raj: Good. Ab tum apni padhai complete karke hi waha se uthogi. Tumhara lunch bhi upar aajayega. Aur main yeh dekhlunga koi tumhe disturb bhi nhi karega.

Sonal: Thikk hai.

Phir Raj fresh hone chala jaata hai par Sonal apni aadat se majbur bina Raj ka kaam kiye usko chainn nhi milta isiliye woh Raj ke kapde nikal ke bed mein rakh deti hai.

Raj jab bahar aake dekhta hai usko hasi bhi aati hai toh gussa bhi aata hai. Sonal tirchi nazro se Raj ko dekh rahi thi.

Raj: Tum nhi sudhrogi naa. Maine tumhe mana kiya tha na.

Sonal: Achha thikk hai ab nhi karungi. Sorryyy.

Raj: Chalo ab padhai karo main neeche hu. Phir Raj waha se nikal jaata hai aur Sonal bhi apni padhai karne lagti hai.​

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[Jaguaar]

Bahot behtareen shaandaar update

Thank you

 

[Bilal jan]

Waiting for next update bhai

 

[Swapnil bombe]

Bhai 2 di chutti he to bata dijiye
Bar bar chek to nahi karna padega
Agle update ka intjar rahe ga

 

[Jaguaar]

Bhai 2 di chutti he to bata dijiye
Bar bar chek to nahi karna padega
Agle update ka intjar rahe ga

Maine yeh baat bata di thi. Aap check karlijiye. Maine yeh baat usi din bata di thi jis din maine update 46 post kiya thaa.

Aur aaj tak toh aapka ek bhi review nhi aaya story pe. Jabki updates regular the. Aur aaj 2 din update band kya kiye waiting ka reply aagaya. Waaahhhh.

Jab regular updates ke waqt silent reader the toh ab kyaa hogyaa.

 

[Anshu Sharma]

Maine yeh baat bata di thi. Aap check karlijiye. Maine yeh baat usi din bata di thi jis din maine update 46 post kiya thaa.

Aur aaj tak toh aapka ek bhi review nhi aaya story pe. Jabki updates regular the. Aur aaj 2 din update band kya kiye waiting ka reply aagaya. Waaahhhh.

Jab regular updates ke waqt silent reader the toh ab kyaa hogyaa.

Me to paka Member hu baki story par dusri id se rebo diya h har
Kal update aye ga na because ju ne 2 din ke baad bola tha update doge

 

[Jaguaar]

Me to paka Member hu baki story par dusri id se rebo diya h har
Kal update aye ga na because ju ne 2 din ke baad bola tha update doge

Maine toh bhai dooj ke dusre din bola tha. Matlab Sunday ko.

Kal update nhi de sakta kyoki abhi tak kuch bhi nhi likha hai aur kal ka pura din busy rahunga.

 

[Anshu Sharma]

Maine toh bhai dooj ke dusre din bola tha. Matlab Sunday ko.

Kal update nhi de sakta kyoki abhi tak kuch bhi nhi likha hai aur kal ka pura din busy rahunga.

Koi na but Sunday ko mega update dena

 

[Jaguaar]

Koi na but Sunday ko mega update dena

2 updates aayenge jaise aate hai. Usi ko Mega Update samaj lena