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Update with new character
Kahani abb tak : --
ab tak aap sab ne padha ki kaise rittika do betiyo ko janam deti hai,, lluske ke baad uski mrityu ho jata hi,, shalini uske betiyo ko apna leti hai,, kamre me kuch log planning kar rahe hote hai,
Kahani aage ki : --
(Agli subah sab apne apne time se uthte hai,, Harshvardhan ne apne kul purohit ko kal hi phone kr ke aane ko kah diya tha,, sab uthne ke baad apne nitya karma se free hokar hall me ekattha ho rahe the kyoki reeti riwajo ka palan jo karna tha,, subah se hi haweli me sab aakar santvana de rahe the,, purohit ji ke aane ke baad Raj vardhan se reeti riwajo ke anusar sare kaam karwate hai,,)
(Shalini apni hi duniya me khoyi huyi thi,, wo bechari un charo bachcho ko ek pall ke liye apni aankho ke samne se hatne nahi de rahi thi,, kyonki us bechari ko bs rittika se kiya hua wada hi dikh raha tha,, isliye wo bachcho ka khayal rakhne me koi kasar nahi chhod rahi thi,, jisme uski madad pichle din ki tarah uski dono nanad ridhima aur nilima aur unke sath rittika ki choti bahan Kamini kr rahi thi )
(Dhire dhire sare reeti riwajo ko maante huye sare kam khatam hota hai uske baad sabhi apne apne kaam me busy ho jaate hai,, raj vardhan ke pass harshvardhan aur jayraaj the jo usko sambhal rahe the,,)
(Aise hi reeti riwajo ko mante huye aaj 13wa din tha,, aaj Rittika ko duniya chod ke gaye 13 dinn bhi ho chuke the,, in 13 dino me kuch logo ko chhod ke sabke routine normal hi the,, )
A Funny Conversation With Writer & Readers for fun
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(Writer--- (Readers se) are Ek minute in sab ghatnao ke bich me,, tum logo ne ya kisi ne ek Baat notice kiya ya nahi,,
Readers--- Achchha waise kya baat hai jo hamne ya kisi ne bhi notice nahi kiya,,
Writer---- Darasal baat ye hai kii wo jo navjaat bachcha hai na,, are wahi,,
Readers--- Are kon wahi, kiski baat kar raha hai tu,,chote bachche to total 4 hai,,
Writer--- are apna hero ,,
Readers-- ha to aise bol na,, kya hua apne hero ko??
Writer--- are baat ye hai ki apne hero ne jab se janam liya hai,, na tab se ab tak ek baar bhi nahi roya aur na hi kisi tarah ki ek bhi awaj nikali thi apne muh se,,
Readers--- tu kahna kya chahta hai??
Writer---- (kuch soch kr muskrate huye) kuch nahi
Readers--- (gusse me) to aise kahani ke beech me bakchodi kahe pel raha hai thik se kahani padh kr enjoy karne de,,)
(Back to story--- Aaj singh haweli me rittika ke jaane ke gum me ek Condolence meet ka aayojan kiya gya tha jisme city ke bahut badi badi hastiya aayi hui thi,, iss Condolence meet ke aayojan ki puri jimmedari SherSingh ki wife nandita singh ne sambhala tha jo ki Harshvardhan ki company me secretary bhi thi,, Singh's groups of company me Harshvardhan aur Rajvardhan ke baad inhi ki chalti thi,,)
(Condolence meet me state ke C.M.,, state ke kai mantri aur uske sath sath bahut se naami garami log bhi aaye huye the,, jisme kuch apne matlab ke liye to kuch in pariwar ke logo se humdardi jatane ke liye aaye huye the,, in sabhi logo ke alawa city ke DIG jo ki Harshvardhan ka khas dost tha wo bhi aaye the,,)
(Sham tak ghar me logo ke aane jane ki bheed lagi rahti hai,, Sham tak kuch gine chune logo ko chod kr sab chale jaate hai,, )
( Sare dinn ki bhag daud se thake Sabhi log jaise hi raat hoti hai sab haweli me jisko jo kamra rahne ke liye mila tha, wo sab apne apne kamre me aaram karne ke liye chale jate hai,,
(kyoki pichle 13 dino se kuch log to pareshani ke karan thik se nahi so paye the to wahi pr kuch aapni planning me mast the,, aaj jo log haweli me ruke the un logo me kuch khas dost the to kuch ristedaar,,)
(To chaliye firr av hum intzaar kiss baat ka kar rahe hai in anjaan logo se introduction karwate hai aap sab ka,,))
(Note:-- yaha pr maine kuch aise logo ka bhi parichay karwa raha hu jo yaha pr present nahi hai taki baad me aapko story aur hero ke pariwar se sambhandh kya hai wo aapko samjh aaye)
Ratna devi ka mayke wale
Pita-- Gajaraj Rathore ... (inki death rahasyamayi hai kahne ko to ye marr chuke hai lekin aaj tak na inki body mili or nahi inki death ka koi karan pata chala)
Maa-- Renuka devi ... (inki death bhi rahasyamayi thi lekin baad me body mill gayi thi, inka is kahani me koi role nahi hai)
Bada bhai-- Gajendra Rathore ... Age 55 years ... hight 6 feet ... kafi gussail aur khunkhar kism ke insaan , haiwaniyat inke chehre pr saaf jhalakti hai (kabhi Vikram dev singh ke dost hua karte the) inhone jamane ke hisab se khudko badal liya hai,, ye har tarah ke do number ke dhandha karte hai sab se chupakar,, (is dhandhe me bahut se bade businessman or politician involved hai isliye ye pakde nahi jate )
1st Patni -- Rupali Rathore ... (inki death bhi 5 saal pahle bachche ko janam dene ke dauran ho hai thi inka is kahani me koi role nahi hai)
2nd Patni -- Rohini Rathore ... age 30 years... hight 5.7 ye bhi bahut he hot and sexy hai figure ki mahila size 34..28..34 .. padhi likhi mordan or tez dimag ki mahila hai aapne aapko fit rakhthi hai aur apne pati ke har galat kaam me barabr sath deti hai (ye pregnant hai)
Beta -- Ronit Rathore ... Age 5 years (apne hero se 5 years bada hai) ... bilkul apne dada aur pita ki tarah vyaktitva hai pr iske chehra bahut masoom hai aur isi wajah se wo jo hai kisi ko dikhta nahi hai jo ye apne aap me hai.....
RatnaDevi ki bahan jo rajvardhan ki saas bhi hai--
Malini devi-- ... age 55 years... hight 5.2 ..Kafi bhari kism ki lekin khoobsurat mahila (inka vyaktitva bilkul apne baap bhai ki tarah hai inki do betiya hai )
(1) rittika (jo apne hero ki chachi thi)
(2)kamini (jo apne hero ki chachi banne wali hai)
City ka D.I.G/Harshvardhan khas ka dost---
Rajesh khanna-- ... age 36 years... hight 5.8 ... kafi serious or sensitive kism ke insaan,, apne duty ke pratee imandar I wajah se itni kamm umar me etne bade post pr pahunch gaye hai (ye ek anaath the inko hero ke dadaji VikramDev singh ne inki puri jimmedari li thi isliye ye iss pariwar ke etne karib hai)
D.I.G Wife-- Sunaina khanna-- ... age 30 years ... hight 5.6 ...bhut he hot , slim and sexy figure size 34..28..34 .. padhi likhi aur ek tez dimag ki mahila or apne pati ki aapne kafi help karti hai (ye bhi pregnant hai)
D.I.G sister-- Madhuri khanna-- ... age 5 years ... Ek cute si, masoom si, bholi si chulbuli ladki,, inka bs ek hi sapna hai apne bade bhai ki tarah kamyab police wala banna,,
Sukarma purohit-- (Ek pandit ji jo ki singh pariwar aur rathore pariwar dono hi khandan ke kul purohit hone ke sath sath bachpan me Gajendra Rathore ke mitra bhi huya karte the,, inke purwaj bhi inke yaha purohit ka kaam kiya karte the) ye theek thak kad kathi ke ek bahut hi sajjan vyakti hone ke sath sath bahut gyani bhi hai,,
(Sukarma purohit ne apne pure jeevan me bs ek hi galti ki hai aur aane wale samay me usi galti ki wajah se aur bhi do galtiya karne wale hai ya kaha jaye to unse karwaya jayega
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Sukarma Wife-- Rupa purohit-- ... age 28 ... Inki bhi theek thak kad kathi ke sath sath ek bhare huye badan ki mahila hone ke sath sath ek bahut hi shushil aur dharmik mahila hai (ye bhi pregnant hai)
Aur ghar ke baki naukar......... (jinka naam time to time pata chalega)
(Back to story-- aaj fir ek andhere band kamre me do aadmi baate kr rahe the,, pahle to ek aadmi bahut payar se dusre aadmi se baat kr raha tha ki achanak gusse me wo dusre aadmi ko jaan se maarne ki dhamki de raha tha,, to aayiye dekhte hai yaha kya bate ho rahi hai aur kon baate kr raha hai,,)
Aadmi1-- (Aadmi 2 bade hi pyar se kahta hai) dekho tum hamare mitra ho aur hamare liye ye chota sa karya kr do
Aadmi2-- (badi vinmra bhaw se uttar deta hai) Lekin mai etna bada jhoot kaise bol sakta hu,,
Aadmi1-- (ek baar fir Aadmi2 bade hi pyar se kahta hai) dekho tum hamare mitra ho hamare liye etna to kar hi sakte jo,,
Aadmi2-- (thoda khijhte huye) mitra hu nahi hua karta tha lekin av to hum tumhare mitra nahi hai to firr......
Aadmi1-- (ek kutil muskan ke sath) to kya hua tum vartaman smay me hame apna mitra nahi hai mante lekin mai to tumhe avi bhi apna mitra hi manta hu meri baat maan lo aur mera kaam kr do,,
Aadmi2-- (thoda pareshan hote huye) ye kaam tum aur kisi aur se kiyu nahi karwa lete,,
Aadmi1-- (Aadmi 2 ka color pakad kr chillate huye) mujhe pata hai mera ye kaam sirf tu hi kr sakta hai aur tujhe karna hi padega,,
Aadmi2-- (haat jodte huye Aadmi 1 se) aap meri baat samjhne ki kosis kijiye mai aisa nahi kar sakta,,
Aadmi1-- (thoda gusse me) dekh meri baat chup chap maan le nahi to tu mujhe achchhe se janta tu mai kya chij hu,,
Aadmi2-- (kuch nahi kahta bs naa me gardan hila deta hai)
Aadmi1-- (iss baar gusse me ek thappad marte huye) tujhe pata hai na mai kya kya kr sakta hu mujhe na kahne ka anjaam bahut bura hoga ,,
Aadmi2-- (haat se apna gaal sahlate huye Aadmi 1 se) mai ye nahi kar sakta ye mere dharam ke khilaf hai,,
Aadmi1-- (firr ek aur thappad marte huye) Harami ki aulaad Tu na bina wajah etni si baat ke liye mujhe iss tarah gussa dila raha hai,, mai firr se kah raha hu maan jaa meri baat
Aadmi2-- (apne dono gaal sahlate huye Aadmi1 se) aap meri baat samjh kiyu nahi jo baat sach me hai hi nahi wo mai kaise kah du ki wo hai,,
Aadmi1-- (iss baar apne jeb se rivalvar nikal kr side me rakhte huye) agar tune mera ye kaam nahi kiya to mai teri jaan le lunga
Aadmi2-- (rote huye) thik hai tum chahe to meri jaan le lo lekin mai ye jhut nahi bolunga,,
Aadmi1-- (iss baar rivalvar Aadmi ke muh ke andar ghusate huye) agar tune mera ye kaam nahi kiya to mai teri biwi aur uske bachche ko maar dunga
Aadmi2-- (kuch der sochne ke baad rote aur khaste huye) tum chaho to unhe bhi maar do lekin mai ye jhut kabhi nahi bolunga ,, kabhi bhi nahi kyoki mujhe pata hai iska anjaam jarur bahut bura hoga
(Aadmi2 ki baat sun Aadmi1 gusse uske ek ke baad ek kaii laat aur thappad marne ke baad me apna sir pakad kr side me pade kurshi pr jakar baith jata hai hai aur kuch sochne lagta hai )
Aadmi1-- (Achanak ek jordar laat Aadmi 1ke pet pr marte huye) thik hai to tu mera kahna nahi manega
Aadmi2-- (Dard se rote bilbilate huye) ha nahi karunga,, kabhi nahi karunga
Aadmi1-- (gusse me haste huye) madarchod mera kaam tu kya tera baap jo marr chuka hai wo apni kabar se aakar mera kaam kr ke jayega,, (aur ek kamini hasi haste huye kamre se bahar jane lagta hai jaise usne koii jung jeet li ho)
(Aadmi2 to aadmi1 ka aisa badla rawaiya dekh kr hairan aur pareshan ho jata hai kyoki use pata tha ki wo ek baar jo karne ka mann bana le usse koi bhi nahi rok sakta chahe anjaam kuch bhi ho iss baat se Aadmi2 aur pareshan ho jata hai aur wo puchta hai)
Aadmi2-- (rote siskte huye aadmi1 se puchta hai) tum aise kaha ja rahe ho ??
Aadmi1-- (ek vijayi muskan ke sath) wo baat aisi hai ki tumhe mera kaam nahi karna to mat karo av tumhe na to khud ke jaan ki parwah hai nahi apne biwi aur bachche ki isliye mai ja raha hu
Aadmi2-- (siskte huye aadmi1 ko hairani se dekhte huye puchta hai) wahi to mai bhi puchh raha hu tum ja kaha rahe ho???
Aadmi1-- (ek chehre ki muskan aur gahri ho jati hai) ab tum mere kahne pr ek galat kaam to kar nahi rahe to maine socha ki tumhari patni aur baki sab se thoda baat kr lu,,
Aadmi2-- (chaukte huye) biwi aur baki sab se matlab kya hai tumhara saaf saaf kiyu nahi batate ??
Aadmi1-- (chehre ki muskan ke sath wapas aakar kurshi pr baithte huye) wo darasal baat ye hai ki tum aaj mere kahne prr ek galti to kar nahi rahe (kamini hasi haste huye) to maine socha ki aaj se lagbhag 15 saal pahle tumne jo galti mere sath milkar ki thi wo tumhari biwi aur baki sab ko bata du,,
(Aadmi2 to aadmi1 ki baat sunte hi damm se farsh pr gir padta hai,, kyoki use apne 15 saal pahle kiye huye paap karm yaad aa jaate hai,, ki usne kya kiya tha,, wo patthar ki tarah jam gaya tha)
Aadmi1-- (Aadmi2 ko pakad kr hilate huye) tum abhi bhi kuch kahna chahoge?? Ya mai jau tumhari biwi ke pass??
Aadmi2-- (hosh me aate huye) lekin usse tumhe kya fayda hoga,, kyoki uss galat kaam me tumne bhi mera sath diya tha,, isse to sab ye bhi to jaan jayenge ki tum bhi mere sath the,,,
Aadmi1-- (jor se thahaka markar haste huye) tu na jindagi bhar chutiya ka chutiya hi rahega aisa kon hai jo wo baat janne ke baad bhi mujhe chu payega,, sab meri mutthi me hai,, kanoon, politicians, social worker sab ke sab mere hi log hai koi mere khilaf aawaz nahi uthayega tu apni soch,,
Aadmi1-- (haste huye aadmi2 ko kandhe se pakad kr) mai to bs ye baat teri biwi ke kaano tak pahunchana chahta hu firr wo ...........(bs etna kahte huye apni rivalvar utha waha se jane lagta hai)
(Aakhir Kaun hai ye 2 log,, aur aadmi1 aadmi2 se aisa kaun sa kaam karwana chahta hai ki aadmi1 etna sab kuch sahne ke baad bhi mana kr raha tha,, aur aakhiri me aadmi1 ne kis paap ki baat ki jo in dono ne 15 saal pahle ki thi,,)
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