Fantasy The great warrior

[Killerpanditji(pandit)]

Update no . 10
Subha jb me utha to time dekha
4 ho rha tha me utha aur apne T F me dyan me beth gya aur apne
Thunder element ko jagrit karne ki kosis
karne lga mene apne ander dekha Yellow gere me Green calour ka gola
tha mughe Priya mam ki
bat yad agyi
aur me us gole ki trafh chl dia lakin mughe apne body me bhut
dard ho rha tha fir
bhi me
kisi tarah apne Thunder element ke karib jane laga meri ankho ke samne andera cha gya aur me
behos hogya jb mughe hos aya
to Subha ho gyi thi me
apne body me toda dard mehsoos kr
rha tha fir bhi me class me
jane ke liye tyar hone lga

Me tyar hoke class ki trafh chl dia ajj meri class nhi thi kyoki kisi ko
pata nhi thanki mere pass
sare element hi

Jb me wha phucga to dekha ajj Aarti
Bi ayi th kyoki uske pass me fier element
Vi tha
karna to mughe gusse me goor rha tha
jese ager pa jaye to mugje khaa jaye

Lakin bechara kuch kr bhi nhi sakta tha
tha to mughe gorta rhta tha me ja kr second seat or beh gya kyoki ajj
first seat phle se Full thi
kyoki ajj me bhut der behos rha tha

Me jaker 2 seat pr beth gya mere bagal ek ladka betha tha

Me chup chap beth gya aur apne clone ke bare me sochne lga ki kese me
clone bnane ki power hasil karu
mene socha ajj Priya mam se puchunga

kuch der bad Shalini mam class me ayi
aur jb unhone mujhe class me dekha to pucha

Shalini.....
Raj apko ye wali class keval three days hi lini thi wo vi physical ki apke pass
to lightning element aur thunder element hi

Me.......
Master Shalini me sari class lunga mudhe vi sikhna hi ki kese Air, water, earth , Akash, fier ko jagrit kia jata hi
kyoki koi bhi gyan hnikarak
nhi hota hi

Shalini........
Very good Raj bhut ache

Uske bad mam sabko batane lagi dyan karne ke bare me kyoki abi bhut se student dyan bhi nhi lga

pate the yese hi ye wali class khatam ho
gyi tvi Master Dav hmari class me agye

Intro of some important character of story..........

1. Master Dev........... Ye magic school ke top 10 master me ate hi inki hmare Rajya me bhut ejjat hi inke pass three element hi Air , water, earth aur ye ek bhut
AChe Talwar baj hi .

Dev.......
Student abi app sb shi se dyan nhi lga pate hi to app sb ko 10 days ki
chutti di jati app sb ko in
dino me ache se dyan lgana sikhna
hi aur ager koi problem ho to

Salini mam se phuch skte hi ok student

sab student........
ok sir

Ese hi ye wali class khatam ho gyi ab Lightning element nki class thinto ma Aur Aarti lightning elememt
Ki class ki trafh chl die

us class me bhi hme whi notice mili jo dev sir ne btaya tha

ME.......
Es class me bhi whi notice hi ye jisko dyan karna ata hi use kya karna hi
ye to btaya nhi gya hi

Aarti........
Raj tumko dyan lagana ata hi kya

Me........
Ha

Aarti........
TO ab hm kya krenge

Me........
Tumhe bhi dyan lagan ata hi

Aarti.....
Ha

Me. Koi bat nhi hm jaker library me koi
magic book le lete hi fir usi se practice
krenge

Aarti.......
Ha yahi sahi rhega

Uske bad me aur Aarti library ke trafh chl die wha jaker hmne kuch magic ki book
li

Uske bad hm dono apne class ki trafh chl die

jb Aarti apne room me phuchi to usse se Priya ne pucha ki

Priya.......
Tum us Raj ke sath kha gyi thi

Aarti.........
wo hm logo ko dyan lagana ata hi to kuch magic book lene gye the

Priya .........
hu magic book lene gye the mere sath nhi chl skti thi jo us ke sath gyi thi wo bada badtameez hi pta nhi apne apko kya samajhta hi

Aarti .......
Ab tum chup bhi rho

Aur uske bad Aarti Teacher stop room ki trafh chl deti hi

Location.......... Planet Alpha xy
ye ek hmare planet se bhut bada aur sktisali hi es ke aur hmare nich ek
surcha kawach hi jo ki
5 year bad tutega

Is planet me Keval ek hi Raja ka Adhikar hi uska nam hi king Mureko

Mureko apne drbar me apne sighsan pr betha tha aur kuch chrcha kr rha tha

Mureko.........

bs ab srif 5 year hi ek bar wo surcha kawach ht jaye fir hm Tha great S of God ko hasil kr lenge aur fir hm bhut sktisali ho jayege

Mantri 1 ......
Ji Mere Malik app shi kh rhe hi us Talwar me bhut skti hi

Mantri 2........
Hm bhi malik mantri 1 ki bato se etfhak rkhte hi

Mureko......
Hahahaha bs ab sirf 5 year hi


Location Davil lok

Is lok me kewal Dark magic ka upyog hota tha yha ke king Lucifier bhut
skti shali tha

Abi Devil king apne upasna me betha Mata Nikumbla ki puja kr rha tha pichle 800 salo se demon king maa Nikumbla ki puja kr rha tha aur ab mata ke prakat hone ka samay a gya tha

Location......... Angel lok

yha pr lord of Angel bhut

Nice update bro

 

[Killerpanditji(pandit)]

location....... Angel lok

yha is lok me lord of Angel bhut chintit the karan tha devil lok ka Raja
Lucifier jiski wajah se lord of Angle
bhut chintit the kyoki
Lucifier pichle
800

Year se Mata Nikumbla devi ki tpasya kr rha hi ab pata nhi Lucifier Mata
se kya mang le

Suprim Angle .....
Lord Ab hm kuch nhi kr sakte vhi kyoki Maa Lucifier ki jb tk wo tpsya
nhikr leta hi tb tk uski raksha krengi
aur hm logo ne sare pryas

kr ke dekh kiye hi lakin koi bhi saphlata
hasil nhai hui hi ab app hi

Btaieye hm kya ke sakte hi

Suprim Angle ki bat sun kr Angle of lord apne vichar chodte hi aur khte hi


LOrd.......
Yahi to hmari chinta ka karn hi ki Lucifier demon king ab kya magne wala hi ager usne kuch esi cije mang li jisse
world ka astitva sankath me
prjaye

Angle of life ........
Lord ab hm kuch kr tvi sakte hi jb demon king apna vardan mangta hi

Lord.......
app bhi shi kh rhe hi Angel of life ab hm smay ki pratikcha kr sakte hai

YE khne ke bad Lord of Angle chle jate hi aur sabha smapt ho jati hi

Back to hero.........

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[ashish_1982_in]

Update no . 10
Subha jb me utha to time dekha
4 ho rha tha me utha aur apne T F me dyan me beth gya aur apne
Thunder element ko jagrit karne ki kosis
karne lga mene apne ander dekha Yellow gere me Green calour ka gola
tha mughe Priya mam ki
bat yad agyi
aur me us gole ki trafh chl dia lakin mughe apne body me bhut
dard ho rha tha fir
bhi me
kisi tarah apne Thunder element ke karib jane laga meri ankho ke samne andera cha gya aur me
behos hogya jb mughe hos aya
to Subha ho gyi thi me
apne body me toda dard mehsoos kr
rha tha fir bhi me class me
jane ke liye tyar hone lga

Me tyar hoke class ki trafh chl dia ajj meri class nhi thi kyoki kisi ko
pata nhi thanki mere pass
sare element hi

Jb me wha phucga to dekha ajj Aarti
Bi ayi th kyoki uske pass me fier element
Vi tha
karna to mughe gusse me goor rha tha
jese ager pa jaye to mugje khaa jaye

Lakin bechara kuch kr bhi nhi sakta tha
tha to mughe gorta rhta tha me ja kr second seat or beh gya kyoki ajj
first seat phle se Full thi
kyoki ajj me bhut der behos rha tha

Me jaker 2 seat pr beth gya mere bagal ek ladka betha tha

Me chup chap beth gya aur apne clone ke bare me sochne lga ki kese me
clone bnane ki power hasil karu
mene socha ajj Priya mam se puchunga

kuch der bad Shalini mam class me ayi
aur jb unhone mujhe class me dekha to pucha

Shalini.....
Raj apko ye wali class keval three days hi lini thi wo vi physical ki apke pass
to lightning element aur thunder element hi

Me.......
Master Shalini me sari class lunga mudhe vi sikhna hi ki kese Air, water, earth , Akash, fier ko jagrit kia jata hi
kyoki koi bhi gyan hnikarak
nhi hota hi

Shalini........
Very good Raj bhut ache

Uske bad mam sabko batane lagi dyan karne ke bare me kyoki abi bhut se student dyan bhi nhi lga

pate the yese hi ye wali class khatam ho
gyi tvi Master Dav hmari class me agye

Intro of some important character of story..........

1. Master Dev........... Ye magic school ke top 10 master me ate hi inki hmare Rajya me bhut ejjat hi inke pass three element hi Air , water, earth aur ye ek bhut
AChe Talwar baj hi .

Dev.......
Student abi app sb shi se dyan nhi lga pate hi to app sb ko 10 days ki
chutti di jati app sb ko in
dino me ache se dyan lgana sikhna
hi aur ager koi problem ho to

Salini mam se phuch skte hi ok student

sab student........
ok sir

Ese hi ye wali class khatam ho gyi ab Lightning element nki class thinto ma Aur Aarti lightning elememt
Ki class ki trafh chl die

us class me bhi hme whi notice mili jo dev sir ne btaya tha

ME.......
Es class me bhi whi notice hi ye jisko dyan karna ata hi use kya karna hi
ye to btaya nhi gya hi

Aarti........
Raj tumko dyan lagana ata hi kya

Me........
Ha

Aarti........
TO ab hm kya krenge

Me........
Tumhe bhi dyan lagan ata hi

Aarti.....
Ha

Me. Koi bat nhi hm jaker library me koi
magic book le lete hi fir usi se practice
krenge

Aarti.......
Ha yahi sahi rhega

Uske bad me aur Aarti library ke trafh chl die wha jaker hmne kuch magic ki book
li

Uske bad hm dono apne class ki trafh chl die

jb Aarti apne room me phuchi to usse se Priya ne pucha ki

Priya.......
Tum us Raj ke sath kha gyi thi

Aarti.........
wo hm logo ko dyan lagana ata hi to kuch magic book lene gye the

Priya .........
hu magic book lene gye the mere sath nhi chl skti thi jo us ke sath gyi thi wo bada badtameez hi pta nhi apne apko kya samajhta hi

Aarti .......
Ab tum chup bhi rho

Aur uske bad Aarti Teacher stop room ki trafh chl deti hi

Location.......... Planet Alpha xy
ye ek hmare planet se bhut bada aur sktisali hi es ke aur hmare nich ek
surcha kawach hi jo ki
5 year bad tutega

Is planet me Keval ek hi Raja ka Adhikar hi uska nam hi king Mureko

Mureko apne drbar me apne sighsan pr betha tha aur kuch chrcha kr rha tha

Mureko.........

bs ab srif 5 year hi ek bar wo surcha kawach ht jaye fir hm Tha great S of God ko hasil kr lenge aur fir hm bhut sktisali ho jayege

Mantri 1 ......
Ji Mere Malik app shi kh rhe hi us Talwar me bhut skti hi

Mantri 2........
Hm bhi malik mantri 1 ki bato se etfhak rkhte hi

Mureko......
Hahahaha bs ab sirf 5 year hi


Location Davil lok

Is lok me kewal Dark magic ka upyog hota tha yha ke king Lucifier bhut
skti shali tha

Abi Devil king apne upasna me betha Mata Nikumbla ki puja kr rha tha pichle 800 salo se demon king maa Nikumbla ki puja kr rha tha aur ab mata ke prakat hone ka samay a gya tha

Location......... Angel lok

yha pr lord of Angel bhut

very nice update bhai

 

[ashish_1982_in]

location....... Angel lok

yha is lok me lord of Angel bhut chintit the karan tha devil lok ka Raja
Lucifier jiski wajah se lord of Angle
bhut chintit the kyoki
Lucifier pichle
800

Year se Mata Nikumbla devi ki tpasya kr rha hi ab pata nhi Lucifier Mata
se kya mang le

Suprim Angle .....
Lord Ab hm kuch nhi kr sakte vhi kyoki Maa Lucifier ki jb tk wo tpsya
nhikr leta hi tb tk uski raksha krengi
aur hm logo ne sare pryas

kr ke dekh kiye hi lakin koi bhi saphlata
hasil nhai hui hi ab app hi

Btaieye hm kya ke sakte hi

Suprim Angle ki bat sun kr Angle of lord apne vichar chodte hi aur khte hi


LOrd.......
Yahi to hmari chinta ka karn hi ki Lucifier demon king ab kya magne wala hi ager usne kuch esi cije mang li jisse
world ka astitva sankath me
prjaye

Angle of life ........
Lord ab hm kuch kr tvi sakte hi jb demon king apna vardan mangta hi

Lord.......
app bhi shi kh rhe hi Angel of life ab hm smay ki pratikcha kr sakte hai

YE khne ke bad Lord of Angle chle jate hi aur sabha smapt ho jati hi

Back to hero.........

nice update bhai

 

[Shahrukh]

Awesome update bhai

 

[Raj Singh Thakur]

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&
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[Devil hunter123]

Nice update

 

[Raj Singh Thakur]

Update.......11
Back to hero........

( Waha hmare Lucifier bechare 800 salo se tpasya kr rhe hi aur yaha hamare Raj bhai sahab so rhe hi

Ab kr bhi kya sakte hi chahe bhi to hm log story ke
hero hi to
kuch bol bhi nhi sakte hi nhi to kya
pta naraz ho jaye ye
naraz bhi bhut
jldi hote
hi hahahaha

Devil lok ka Mahal ............

jb se Devil king Lucifier tpsya karne gye
the sare Rajya ki bagdor Rajguru
karma ke hatho me thi
ajj devil lok me bhut chal phal thi
ek minute ek minute devil
KIng ka Mahal sajaya
ja rha tha
Rajguru kuch bate kr rhe the mantri logo se ( cholo ab yha tk a hi gye hinto inki bate hi sun li jaye
kya pata kuch kam ki hi ho

Rajguru........
Mantri 4 tum Mahal ko ache se shajao
Maharaj ki tpasya puri hone wali hi

Mantri 4 ........ Khus hote hue
jo agya Rajguru ji

Rajguru ...........
Mantri 1 tum se hmne kha tha ki tum 1001 kuwari kanayo ko pakri hm Maharaj ko bhet denge wo kam kha tk phucha ( yha logo ki shadi nhi ho rhi hi ladki nhi mil rhi hi Rajguru nko 1001 kuwari kanaye chahiye lakin bhai kon
bta ke sar kataye apna)

Mantri 1........
Ji Rajguru ji hmne iam khatam hi kr liya
hi app ko sikayat ka moka nhi denge

Rajguru ..........
Sikayat ka moka dene ki bhul bhi mat
karna barna unki jagah pr
tumhari hi bali de denge

Mantri 1. Bechare dar ke bhag gye jaldi kanya dhudne
( Ab bhai koi Aam to hi nhi ki tod layenge )

( Rajguru to bda khaternak nikla cholo ab Raj bhai sahab ko uthate hi nhi to
wo sada ke liye so jayege)

Back to hero..........

Sham ko jb me utha to apne app ko bhut trotaza mehsus kr rha tha
ab mene soch lia tha chaye jo ho jaye lakin Colon magic to me
sikh kr rhunga

Sbse phle mene kl jo book li thi aur ajj jo book li thi use laker apne T. F ke ander chl dia ajj wali
book to baccho wali thi
Mene apni colone wali book nikali

Aur colon bnane ke liye jo mantra hota hi use ache se padhne lga

Is mantra ko apne mn me bolna hi aur
52 minuts tk mantra padhte rhna hi
sa karne se bhut dard hoga lakin
shna padega ab

Mene bhut bar kosis ki jb tk puri trah se thak nhi gya jb me T. F se nikla o morning 4 baj rhe the mene T. F me 2 days 3 hour practice ki thi
ab me apne mn me
16 minut mantra
bol sakta tha me bhut thak gya tha to socha chlo tosha aram hi kr lia gaye

fir me room se nikl kr ground nk trafh chl dia wha pucha to dekha wha to bheed lgi karna apne kuch sathiyo
ke sath betha tha

Rohit aur ek ladki kuch bate kr rhe the
wo ladki Aarti ke group me bethi thi
dyan se dekha to yad aya ye
to wo badtameez Rajkumari Priya
thi jo mugh se us din ladh rhi thi

mughe dekh ke to kuch logo ko bhut
gussa a rha tha ab jahir si bat thi
ki apne karna aur unke sathi
aur Priya ji thi aur Aarti ki
kuch dost pr mughe
kya ghanta fhark nhi parta hi me jaker

ek seat pr beth gya aur thandi hwa ka
maja lene lga pichle jnam me
to dutkar hi shi thi

ab wo jnam na shi to yahi shi
ME apne pichle jindgi ke bare me sochne lga ki mughe abhas hua ki koi
meri traf a rha hi mene apni ankhe
Kholi to dekha ki Rohit
aur Aarti aur Aarti ki
kuch dost thi

Mene socha ki kon samjhaye ki me wo manush hu jiske pass ager wo rhe
to unki jindgi bhi narak bn jayegi

ABhi todi hi der hui thi ki Rohit jiqkuch bola ab unhe jada chup machi thi

Rohit...... Aur Raj bhai kya kr rhe ho
ajj Subha aya kese a gaye bhut thake
thake lg rhe ho

Me....... Gusse se... Tum se matlab jao jaker apna kam karo dubara
dikha bhi mt ab jao

Rohit........ Ja rha hu bhai dat kyo rhe ho

Priya ....... Mene to phle hi kha tha ki
iske pass mt awo lakin nhi meri bat sunta hu kon hi

isi Aarti ji ko kuch puchna tha to ab pucho


Me...... Mene tumse ye bhi kha hi ki tum mere pass awo aur h bhut jada tez mt bolo ab dubara mt ana me tumse bolne
ke liye
mara nhi ja rha hu samjhi

Aarti ........ Wo Raj ji mughe app se kuch bat karni ho

me kuch ulta bolne hi wala tha pr bol nhi paya pata nhi kyo Aarti
ki bat sun kr

Me ....... Boliye Rajkumari ji kya bolna hi apko

Aarti ....... Kya me app ke sath practice kr skti hu magic ki

mughe help bhi mil jayega aur hm ache se practice bhi kr payege

Ab bolna to nhi chta tha lakin bolna padega

Me...... Me app ka koi nouker nhi jo magic sikhata phiru

aur itna kh kr me wha se age ki trafh chl dia ab me waha aur nhi ruk skta
tha

 

[Raj Singh Thakur]

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[Devil hunter123]

Nice update