Incest Waqt: Shaap Ya Varadaan

[Prince Charles]

Nice..

Even though things are going same as Avi Bhai story but u have written in ur lang which is simple and fast. Fast isliye b acha lag Raha h kyuki kafi log already jante h to agar same rehta to Borring lagta..

Well , till yet only 1 thing was different.
Ek update k end m koi aurat ka jikr hua tha , but uska dobara koi role ni aaya .
Avhi Bhai ki story m koi daku type log the jisme samba b tha . wo aisa show kartethe ki Avi ko barbaad krne ki planning Kar rahe ho but mujhe kabi samajh ni aaya ki wo log karte Kya the exactly kyuki unka kabi b Avi ya usse related kisi b person s interaction ni hua aur na kabi wo log Avi k samne aaye .

I just hope waisa hi na ho yahan pr.

Let's see Kya alag hoga .
Going good till yet.. keep.it up..

Waiting for next

dear...waise main abhi kuch nahi bolunga kyunki mujhe suspense khatam karne ki aadat nahi hai bas itna hi kahunga ki padhte raho.

 

[Prince Charles]

Nice update

dear...update posted...

 

[Prince Charles]

nice update

dear...update posted...

 

[Mathur]

awesome one bhai ji

 

[Mathur]

update review

apki writing skills se pta chl rha hai ki aapko suspense jyada pasand hai i like that
lgta hai avi ki virginity uski mam ki jholi mai jayegi majedar lgta hai as usse is field mai thoda deep ka gyaan bhi mil jayega
ab avi mala ko bchayega ya nhi ye dekhna bnta hai HONESTLY speaking bchana chahiye uski bua ki ldki hai aakhir madad toh krni hi chahiye
title aap achi trah se describe bhi kr rhe hai kuch chize waqt pr chod kr like abhi tk avi ko apna bachpan nhi yaad strange

SPOILER ALERT GUESS HAI BS
shayad avi unka khud ka bhatija na ho as uski bua nafrat kerti hai
Baki story ke sath toh pta chl hi jayega




your regular reader​

 

[Ng_TheViper]

update review

apki writing skills se pta chl rha hai ki aapko suspense jyada pasand hai i like that
lgta hai avi ki virginity uski mam ki jholi mai jayegi majedar lgta hai as usse is field mai thoda deep ka gyaan bhi mil jayega
ab avi mala ko bchayega ya nhi ye dekhna bnta hai HONESTLY speaking bchana chahiye uski bua ki ldki hai aakhir madad toh krni hi chahiye
title aap achi trah se describe bhi kr rhe hai kuch chize waqt pr chod kr like abhi tk avi ko apna bachpan nhi yaad strange

SPOILER ALERT GUESS HAI BS
shayad avi unka khud ka bhatija na ho as uski bua nafrat kerti hai
Baki story ke sath toh pta chl hi jayega




your regular reader​

Mala konsi bua ki beti h Bhai ???

 

[tpk]

nice story
waiting for next

 

[Mathur]

Mala konsi bua ki beti h Bhai ???

my mistake bhai sorry maine thyan nhi dia
mujhe lga komal nhi mala bua ki ladki hai
abhi recheck krne pr pta chla

thank you for correcting me

 

[urc4me]

Waiting

 

[janu2016]

bahot khub bhai,
good going.