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Fantasy इच्छाधारी देव

Xabhi

"Injoy Everything In Limits"
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Thank you very much bhai for your beautiful review hamari writing ki tareef ke liye bhi aapka dhanyavaad. Lekin shayad ab bhi hamari story me kuchh kami hae kyu ke hum aapki intresting story list me shamil nahi hae. Well hum koshish karege ke hamari skill aur badhe. Yu hi sath bane rahiye. Adventure trip bas shuru hi hone wala hae to uska maja lijiye lekin usse pahle jaisa ke aapne hi kaha thoda sa garam mahoul aur chhed chhad to banti hae kyu ke us safar me sex bas na ke barabar hi milega to yaha se nikalne se pahle ek bar to maja karna banta hae.
Milte hae kal hi next update me
Bhai Vo magarmaksh vala adventure kafi accha tha aap ki story bhi samil ho jayegi bs kafi Pahle se is trip ka intjar tha Vo suru ho jaye Tabhi add kr denge Isko bhi vo kya hai na Yahi Naina ji ko pta Chala to ho sakta hai kaveri ki band na bja de yha aakr :D
King Bhai ko bhi bulange yha pr
 

Xabhi

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:congrats:for 300 page bhai
Are Ye to Pahle se yha pr virajman hai kyo king Bhai Naina ji ko bulaya jaye
Pr ek problem hai unhe murder mystery thrill suspense jyada chahiye Yadi boby bhai isme or add kr de to Naina ji daud kr aayengi kahte huye
Hella and Nishchal : Ek ankahi prem kahani
:D
 

The king

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Are Ye to Pahle se yha pr virajman hai kyo king Bhai Naina ji ko bulaya jaye
Pr ek problem hai unhe murder mystery thrill suspense jyada chahiye Yadi boby bhai isme or add kr de to Naina ji daud kr aayengi kahte huye
Hella and Nishchal : Ek ankahi prem kahani
:D
Naina ji ko sabhi prakar ki story pasand bas insect jyada pasand nahi he aap bula lijiye unko bhi
 
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Boby

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Bhai Vo magarmaksh vala adventure kafi accha tha aap ki story bhi samil ho jayegi bs kafi Pahle se is trip ka intjar tha Vo suru ho jaye Tabhi add kr denge Isko bhi vo kya hai na Yahi Naina ji ko pta Chala to ho sakta hai kaveri ki band na bja de yha aakr :D
King Bhai ko bhi bulange yha pr
Bhai hum to readers ke pyar ke liye hi yaha likh rahe hae baki kisi ko koi dusre fayde to hone nahi hae. magamachh wale scene ki tareef ke liye shukriya. use likhne me sach me bahot samay laga tha sala plot set hi nahi ho pa raha tha. 3 se 4 baar to alag alag tarah se likhna pada. hame khud hi tasalli nahi ho pa rahi thi apne hi scene se. jab hame sahi laga to hi use final kiya tha. par aap readers ko pasand aaya to hamari mehnat safal hui. aur ha naina ji ka welcome hae. unhe jaroor bulaiye hum wait karege king ji to hae hi yaha pahle se. aur rahi baat adventure trip ki to bas ye shadi ka jhamela poora hote hi inhe nikalna hi hae. jaesa ki plan hae. aap beshak adventure trip ke shuru hone pe hamari story ko apni favorite list me jagah de dena koi baat nahi.

dhanyavaad
 
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Boby

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Are Ye to Pahle se yha pr virajman hai kyo king Bhai Naina ji ko bulaya jaye
Pr ek problem hai unhe murder mystery thrill suspense jyada chahiye Yadi boby bhai isme or add kr de to Naina ji daud kr aayengi kahte huye
Hella and Nishchal : Ek ankahi prem kahani
:D
Bhai ye ek fentasy story hae to murder mistry wala suspance to yaha jyada aa nahi sakta. ha thrill aur suspance ki bat hae to uska maja aap logo ko bharpoor milne wala hae advanture trip me iska vaada hae. aur scene to hamen magarmachh wale kaand se bhi jyada bhayanak soche hae. baki aap log padh kar faisla kijiyega ki hum kaha tak safal hote hae.
 

Xabhi

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Bhai ye ek fentasy story hae to murder mistry wala suspance to yaha jyada aa nahi sakta. ha thrill aur suspance ki bat hae to uska maja aap logo ko bharpoor milne wala hae advanture trip me iska vaada hae. aur scene to hamen magarmachh wale kaand se bhi jyada bhayanak soche hae. baki aap log padh kar faisla kijiyega ki hum kaha tak safal hote hae.
Naina ji dekho boby bhai ne bola hai vo adventure with suspense dal rhe hai to aap bhi aa sakhti hai Yadi apke pass Samay Ho to boby bhai ne kafi mehnat ki hai kirdaro ko sanjone me

Yar boby bhai aapka name baar baar galat ho jata hai likhta boby hu or likh baby jata hai paresan ho gya hu :D
 

Naina

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Bhai hum to readers ke pyar ke liye hi yaha likh rahe hae baki kisi ko koi dusre fayde to hone nahi hae. magamachh wale scene ki tareef ke liye shukriya. use likhne me sach me bahot samay laga tha sala plot set hi nahi ho pa raha tha. 3 se 4 baar to alag alag tarah se likhna pada. hame khud hi tasalli nahi ho pa rahi thi apne hi scene se. jab hame sahi laga to hi use final kiya tha. par aap readers ko pasand aaya to hamari mehnat safal hui. aur ha naina ji ka welcome hae. unhe jaroor bulaiye hum wait karege king ji to hae hi yaha pahle se. aur rahi baat adventure trip ki to bas ye shadi ka jhamela poora hote hi inhe nikalna hi hae. jaesa ki plan hae. aap beshak adventure trip ke shuru hone pe hamari story ko apni favorite list me jagah de dena koi baat nahi.

dhanyavaad
Naina ji dekho boby bhai ne bola hai vo adventure with suspense dal rhe hai to aap bhi aa sakhti hai Yadi apke pass Samay Ho to boby bhai ne kafi mehnat ki hai kirdaro ko sanjone me

Yar boby bhai aapka name baar baar galat ho jata hai likhta boby hu or likh baby jata hai paresan ho gya hu :D
kuch dino baad revo start :smile:
 
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