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Adultery Shaurya : The Warrior (Completed)
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Pehli story mein har koi galtiyan karta hai bro
Aur esi baat pe apko use tips deni chahiye ki kese slow down kare story ko
Verna woh apki tarha bhagayega story ko fir dobara se slow karne ke chakkar ke buildup karte waqt story ki ta ta thaiya ho jayegi
Stone_hearted bro jese likh rahe hk vese hi likhte raho
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Update 11
Shaurya apna suit pehnta hai aur isbaar apni talwaar bhi sath me rakhta hai aur ek mask bhi pehnta hai jispe Lucifer ka sign bna hua ta...
Fir Shaurya Arnav ke paas jata hai
Shaurya : bhai mujhe vo tera ek farmhouse chahiye ta
Arnav : bhai tera hi hai sab yrr tujhe poochne ki jrurt nhi hai but kya kaam pad gya
Shaurya use un ladkiyo ke bare me btata hai ki kaise vo brain dead hai to unhe bacha ke vha rakhna hai jabtak unko thik krne ka koi tareeka nhi mil jata
Arnav : ok bro
Fir Shaurya vha se LUCIFER ke look me bike ko thoda change krke fighting mode me daal deta hai jisse bike ka pura look hi change ho jata hai aur bike ko Shaurya dono Containers ke samne rokta hai to andar se gaurds nikalte
Shaurya : Lucy inhe scan kro aur inke criminal records btao
Lucy : Sir ye sab ke sab rapists aur murderers hai
Shaurya : to mtlb aaj inka akhiri din hai
Tabhi gaurds Shaurya pe goliya chlane lgte hai par Shaurya apne metal hand suit ka electromagnetic shield on kr deta hai jisse goliya Shaurya se kuch door pe hi ruk ke girne lgti hai isee sab ki fat jati hai
Shaurya skates se skating krte hue apni super speed ka use krte hue unhe apni sword se gajar muli ki trah kaat deta hai kisi ko adha kisi ko khi se charo trf bas khoon tha
Ek admi jo jinda ta use pakad kr shaurya uske hath pair kaat deta hai aur khta hai sabko kehna ki LUCIFER aya tha
Aur drugs wale truck pe apni talwaar se LUCIFER likh ke Shaurya ladkiyo vale truck ko le ke farm house chla jata hai aur vha Arnav ne phle hi apni didi jo ki doctor hai unko bhej rakha tha vo bhi Shaurya ko dekh kr Bhut khus hoti hai
Ashima
Arnav ki didi Shaurya ko bhi apne bhai jaisa manti hai
Shaurya : didi aaj gale nhi milogi
Ashima : phle vo vo talwaar to alag rakh
Shaurya : hahahaha didi ye apke liye thodi hai aur Shaurya use rakh deta hai
Ashima Shaurya ko gale lga leti hai
Ashima : mera chota bhai kitna bada ho gya aise hi ache kaam krte rho aur Shaurya ko mathe aur gaal pr kiss kr deti hai
Shaurya : kya didi gaal gnde kr diye
Ashima : Abhi btati hu tujhe ruk fir Shaurya ko dauda leti hai par Shaurya ko nhi pakad pati fir jaan ke gir jati hai to shaurya turant aa jata hai
Shaurya : didi kya hua
Ashima use pakadte hue pakda gya bacchu
Shaurya : didi ye to cheating hui
Ashima : hahahahaha
Shaurya : acha didi mai chlta hu inhe aap dekh lena
Ashima : thik hai tu chinta mt kr mai dekhti hu mai kya kr skti hu
Fir Shaurya waha Se seedha Amishka ke ghar jata hai
Shaurya : Lucy yha ka blueprint nikalo
Lucy : abhi lijiye sir
Shaurya : yha ke sare cctvs hack kr lo yha vhi dikhna chahiye jo mai chahta hu
Lucy : aisa hi hoga sir
Fir Shaurya andr ghusta hai aur do gaurds ko behosh kr deta hai fir seedha bina awaaj kiye tehkhane me ghus jata hai
Vha dekhta hai uski behan nangi bandhi padi thi use bhut dukh hota hai vo turant vha jata hai use khol deta hai
Reena : kn ho tum yha kaise aur kyu aye ho
Shaurya : ek dress deta hai use pehanne ke liye
Reena : kn ho tum
Shaurya : mujhe aapke bhai Shaurya aur Palak ne bheja hai aap jldi se ye kapde pehan lijiye
Reena vo kapde pehan leti hai aur dono bahar aa rhe hote hai ki lawn me unhe do gaurds dekh lete hai
Shaurya pahle sochta hai inhe bina mare chhod diya jae but kal TV pe lucifer aur mera look match ho jaega to gdbd ho jaegi
Lucy : sir inko marna hi pdega vaise bhi ye criminals hai
Shaurya : ok
Fir Shaurya tezi se jaa ke un dono ki gardan madod deta hai
Aur Reena ko le ke vha se seedha Aditi ke bunglow me teleport ho jata hai
Vha pe Amishka ko dekh kr
Reena : Amishka shaurya kha hai mera bhai kha hai mujhe usse milna hai
Amishka : kyu tumne didi ko btaya nhi
Shaurya : mujhse btaya hi nhi gya inki vo halat dekh kr
Reena : kya nhi btaya gya
Amishka : didi yhi Shaurya hai
Ye sunte hi Reena shaurya ko gale se lga leti hai mera bhai mera chota bhai use pure chehre pe choom leti hai aur rone lgti hai
Shaurya : didi dekho ab mai tumhare paas aa gya hu na ab koi kuch nhi kr skta un darindo ko mai aisi saza dunga ki unki rooh tak kaanp jaegi aap chinta mat kro
Reena : haa mere bhai unko chhodna mat itne salo se unhone har din mere badan ko nocha hai
Shaurya : didi sambhalo khud ko mai hu na aapke paas
Reena : nhi bhai aaj mujhe mat rok ro lene de mujhe
Fir thodi der roti rhti hai Reena
Reena : mera bhai aa gya na ab sab thik ho jaega par mujhe ek baat smjh nhi ayi formula to pura khtm ho gya ta aur abhi to tujhe papa ki secret lab ka pta bhi nhi to ye powers kaise
Fir Shaurya Reena ko sab kuch bta deta hai sach sach
Reena : wow papa jis parallel universes pe research kr rhe the Tu vha ghoom bhi aya
Reena : ye kn hai Aditi ki trf dikhate hue
Shaurya : Amishka tum btao mai abhi ata hu
Amishka fir Reena ko Shaurya aur Aditi ke relation ke bare me bta deti hai
Reena : viswas to mera bhi uth gya hai sabse itna kuch hua hai
Aditi : haa didi mai smjhti hu
Thodi der ye log aise hi baat krti rhti hai to Amishka Reena ko Riya ke bare me bta deti hai
To Shaurya andr aa jata hai
Reena : to mujhe teesri girlfriend se kab mila rha hai do se to mil li mai
Shaurya : teesri kn didi
Reena : Riya
Shaurya : didi vo meri girlfriend nhi bs dost hai
Reena : ab mai bol rhi hu na to girlfriend hai aur kal Sunday hai mujhe usse milna hai kal hm chlenge
Shaurya : par didi
Reena : ab Tu apni didi ki bhi baat nhi manega
Shaurya : acha thik hai didi jaisa aap kho
Fir sab so jate hai aur agle din uthte hai to TV pe
Reporter : kn hai ye LUCIFER jisne in criminals ko itni bhayanak maut di hai cctv me khi bhi iska chehra nhi dikha aur yha se karoro ke drugs bhi mile hai yha jinda bache insaan ka kehna hai ki usne bola ki sabse kehna LUCIFER aya ta aur vo ek Container le bhi gya aur ise us Container me kya ta pta nhi hai to kn hai LUCIFER Hero ya villian kya usne ye apne maksad ke liye kiya ya fir police ki help ke liye agr police ki help ke liye to vo ek Container kyu le gya aisa kya tha usme
Arnav : Shaurya ko call krke bhai tu to chaa gya kab aa rha yha
Shaurya : bhai aaj kuch kaam h kal milte hai college me
Arnav : ok bro vo vakeel ka intezaam ho gya hai kal Ashima didi ayengi tera blood sample lene dna check ke liye
Shaurya : ok thanks a lot bhai tu kitna kharcha krta hai hmare liye
Arnav : abe sale bhai bhi bolta hai aur thanks bhi baki kharcha to tujhse bhi krwa hi lunga mai
Shaurya : ok thik h bro
Fir sab ready hote hai
Reena : chl jldi
Shaurya : haa haa
Shaurya : Lucy Ralph bhaiya se contact kro
Ralph : ha chote bol kya hua
Shaurya : kuch nhi bs aa rha tha vha
Ralph : ruk mai wormhole kholta hu
Then sab log andr jate hai vha Ralph sabse milta hai fir Shaurya Ralph ko sab btata hai ki kya hua.....
Ralph : koi nhi chote ab sab thik ho jaega koi jrurt ho to jrur btana ao chlo thoda ghoom kr ate hai sab tumhe dekh kr kafi khush honge
Shaurya : haa chliye bhaiya
Udhr baki teeno ladies Riya se milne nikal jati hai
Amishka : Hii Riya
Riya : hello ji aap kn
Amishka : mai Amishka Shaurya ne btaya hoga na
Riya : ohh rukhe man se haa ao baitho yrr aur ye dono
Amishka : ye hai Reena didi shaurya ki badi behan
Riya : namaste didi
Reena : Namaste
Amishka : ye Aditi hai Shaurya ki khaas dost
Riya : khaas dost mtlb
Amishka fir Shaurya aur Aditi ke relation ke bare me sab bta deti hai
Riya ko shaurya ke upr bhut gussa ati hai ki isse relation rkh skta hai pr mujhse nhi waah jae mujhse kya
Amishka : mai jnti hu tum Shaurya se pyar krti ho aur mujhe koi dikkat nhi hai usne meri vjh se tumhe naa bola aur aaj haa bolega vo bhi tumse pyar krta hai pr kah nhi paya mere karan Aditi didi ka to chlta kyuki hm dono ke relation se phle hi inka relation tha but ab nhi
Riya : wow sach me tum mujhe accept kr logi mai tumhe bojh to nhi lagungi na ki tumse tumhare pyar ko cheen rhi mai plzz mai tum dono ke beech nhi ana chahti
Amishka : bilkul bhi nhi dear aditi didi ki trah aaj se tum bhi meri behan ho junior vali hehehehehe
Riya : okk senior didi but kya vo mujhe accept krega abhi bhi
Reena : kaise nhi krega uski tange tod dungi nhi krega to
Riya ekdm khush ho jati hai
Aditi : vo Siya kha gyi
Riya : vo naha rhi hai
Aditi : kitna nahaegi
Siya : aap logo ne naam liya Siya haazir hehehe
Riya : aiye rajkumaari ji
Siya : aa rhi, olivia jao didi log ke liye chai nasta lao
Olivia : ji mam
Siya : tum dono bhi uski help kro
Isla, Emily : ji mam
Siya : to kaisa lga aap logo ko hmara mahal.
Amishka : kisi ne dikhaya hi nhi
Siya : hm dikhaenge , vaise aap log kaise yha
Amishka : tumhari didi ko apni jr. Sautan jo bnana tha
Siya : ohh woww to jija ji kha gye
Amishka : vo to Ralph bhaiya ke sath nikal gye hai
Siya : mujhse mile bina unko to mai dekhti hu
Fir Shaurya aur Ralph ate hai
Shaurya : kaisi ho choti
Siya kuch nhi khti
Shaurya : Are kya hua ise
Siya : hm aapse naraaj h
Shaurya : thik hai to ye sari chocolate mai Riya ko de deta hu
Siya : nhi vo meri chocolate hai
Shaurya : par tum to naraj thi
Siya : vo to ab bhi hu
Shaurya : accha aap hi btao kya kru
Siya : hme apne sath le chlo apni earth ghumane
Shaurya : okk next time pkka ok bacchi
Siya : sach
Shaurya : much
Siya : okk to pakki
Fir Reena khti hai mai thoda garden me baithti hu
Shaurya : ok didi
Amishka : to Shaurya milo meri junior sautan se
Shaurya : to aap sab me baat cheet ho hi gyi
Riya : apne mujhe accept to kr liya na
Shaurya : ab hmari queen ka order hai to kaise nhi krunga
Riya rote hue mtlb aap mujhse pyar nhi krte bas Didi aur Amishka ke kahne par accept kr rhe hai
Shaurya : use gale lgate hue nhi aisa nhi hai mai to tumhe pyar krta hi hu bs vo iski permission bhi to leni thi isliye nhi accept kiya tha
Riya : acha to mera gift kha hai
Shaurya : mai to gift lana hi bhool gya sorry
Riya turant Shaurya ko kiss kr leti hai
Riya : lo mil gya mera gift mujhe aur shrma jati h
Udhr garden me
Ralph bhi Reena ke bgl jaa ke baith jata hai
Ralph : hii
Reena : hello , thanks aapne mere bhai ki itni help ki
Ralph : isme thanks kaisa usne bhi to is earth ke logo ki help ki hai mtlb ki meri bhi help ki hai vaise bhi vo sirf aapka hi nhi hmara bhi bhai hai
Reena : fir to mai bhi aapki behan hui hehehehe
Ralph : aisa jruri hai kya , kyuki aap bhut khoobsurat hai
Reena : kya aap bhi jhoothi tarif krte hai
Ralph : jhooth nhi sach bol rha aapki kasam , aur mai khoobsurat ladkiyo ki jhoothi kasam nhi khata
Reena : flirt bhut acha kr lete hai hehehe
Ralph : flirt nhi sach bol rha
Reena : chliye hatiye
Ralph : are rukiye to shi
Reena : 6 din yhi hu
Ralph : par aap to ek din ke liye aye hai na
Reena : vo to apne earth ke hisaab se na buddhu
Ralph : acha haa vo kahte hai na khoobsurat ladkiyo ke samne dimaag bhi sath nhi deta
Reena : acha aisa kisne kha hai
Ralph : kisi ne kaha nhi par aaj mai kaha deta hu
Reena : aise hi uut patang cheeze kahte rha kriye
Ralph : kyu
Reena : kyu kya log aapko hi pagal smjhenge hehehehe
Ralph : chliye vo bhi theek h
Reena : aapki kitni girlfriend hai
Ralph : ek bhi nhi kyu
Reena : fir bhi itna acha flirt krna jnte hai
Ralph : kya mtlb hai itna acha flirt krne ka
Reena : kyu kya hua
Ralph : aap to impress nhi hui
Reena : try krte rhiye kya pta ho jau hehehe aur vha se bhaag jati hai
Age next update me.............
Shaurya apna suit pehnta hai aur isbaar apni talwaar bhi sath me rakhta hai aur ek mask bhi pehnta hai jispe Lucifer ka sign bna hua ta...
Fir Shaurya Arnav ke paas jata hai
Shaurya : bhai mujhe vo tera ek farmhouse chahiye ta
Arnav : bhai tera hi hai sab yrr tujhe poochne ki jrurt nhi hai but kya kaam pad gya
Shaurya use un ladkiyo ke bare me btata hai ki kaise vo brain dead hai to unhe bacha ke vha rakhna hai jabtak unko thik krne ka koi tareeka nhi mil jata
Arnav : ok bro
Fir Shaurya vha se LUCIFER ke look me bike ko thoda change krke fighting mode me daal deta hai jisse bike ka pura look hi change ho jata hai aur bike ko Shaurya dono Containers ke samne rokta hai to andar se gaurds nikalte
Shaurya : Lucy inhe scan kro aur inke criminal records btao
Lucy : Sir ye sab ke sab rapists aur murderers hai
Shaurya : to mtlb aaj inka akhiri din hai
Tabhi gaurds Shaurya pe goliya chlane lgte hai par Shaurya apne metal hand suit ka electromagnetic shield on kr deta hai jisse goliya Shaurya se kuch door pe hi ruk ke girne lgti hai isee sab ki fat jati hai
Shaurya skates se skating krte hue apni super speed ka use krte hue unhe apni sword se gajar muli ki trah kaat deta hai kisi ko adha kisi ko khi se charo trf bas khoon tha
Ek admi jo jinda ta use pakad kr shaurya uske hath pair kaat deta hai aur khta hai sabko kehna ki LUCIFER aya tha
Aur drugs wale truck pe apni talwaar se LUCIFER likh ke Shaurya ladkiyo vale truck ko le ke farm house chla jata hai aur vha Arnav ne phle hi apni didi jo ki doctor hai unko bhej rakha tha vo bhi Shaurya ko dekh kr Bhut khus hoti hai
Ashima
Arnav ki didi Shaurya ko bhi apne bhai jaisa manti hai
Shaurya : didi aaj gale nhi milogi
Ashima : phle vo vo talwaar to alag rakh
Shaurya : hahahaha didi ye apke liye thodi hai aur Shaurya use rakh deta hai
Ashima Shaurya ko gale lga leti hai
Ashima : mera chota bhai kitna bada ho gya aise hi ache kaam krte rho aur Shaurya ko mathe aur gaal pr kiss kr deti hai
Shaurya : kya didi gaal gnde kr diye
Ashima : Abhi btati hu tujhe ruk fir Shaurya ko dauda leti hai par Shaurya ko nhi pakad pati fir jaan ke gir jati hai to shaurya turant aa jata hai
Shaurya : didi kya hua
Ashima use pakadte hue pakda gya bacchu
Shaurya : didi ye to cheating hui
Ashima : hahahahaha
Shaurya : acha didi mai chlta hu inhe aap dekh lena
Ashima : thik hai tu chinta mt kr mai dekhti hu mai kya kr skti hu
Fir Shaurya waha Se seedha Amishka ke ghar jata hai
Shaurya : Lucy yha ka blueprint nikalo
Lucy : abhi lijiye sir
Shaurya : yha ke sare cctvs hack kr lo yha vhi dikhna chahiye jo mai chahta hu
Lucy : aisa hi hoga sir
Fir Shaurya andr ghusta hai aur do gaurds ko behosh kr deta hai fir seedha bina awaaj kiye tehkhane me ghus jata hai
Vha dekhta hai uski behan nangi bandhi padi thi use bhut dukh hota hai vo turant vha jata hai use khol deta hai
Reena : kn ho tum yha kaise aur kyu aye ho
Shaurya : ek dress deta hai use pehanne ke liye
Reena : kn ho tum
Shaurya : mujhe aapke bhai Shaurya aur Palak ne bheja hai aap jldi se ye kapde pehan lijiye
Reena vo kapde pehan leti hai aur dono bahar aa rhe hote hai ki lawn me unhe do gaurds dekh lete hai
Shaurya pahle sochta hai inhe bina mare chhod diya jae but kal TV pe lucifer aur mera look match ho jaega to gdbd ho jaegi
Lucy : sir inko marna hi pdega vaise bhi ye criminals hai
Shaurya : ok
Fir Shaurya tezi se jaa ke un dono ki gardan madod deta hai
Aur Reena ko le ke vha se seedha Aditi ke bunglow me teleport ho jata hai
Vha pe Amishka ko dekh kr
Reena : Amishka shaurya kha hai mera bhai kha hai mujhe usse milna hai
Amishka : kyu tumne didi ko btaya nhi
Shaurya : mujhse btaya hi nhi gya inki vo halat dekh kr
Reena : kya nhi btaya gya
Amishka : didi yhi Shaurya hai
Ye sunte hi Reena shaurya ko gale se lga leti hai mera bhai mera chota bhai use pure chehre pe choom leti hai aur rone lgti hai
Shaurya : didi dekho ab mai tumhare paas aa gya hu na ab koi kuch nhi kr skta un darindo ko mai aisi saza dunga ki unki rooh tak kaanp jaegi aap chinta mat kro
Reena : haa mere bhai unko chhodna mat itne salo se unhone har din mere badan ko nocha hai
Shaurya : didi sambhalo khud ko mai hu na aapke paas
Reena : nhi bhai aaj mujhe mat rok ro lene de mujhe
Fir thodi der roti rhti hai Reena
Reena : mera bhai aa gya na ab sab thik ho jaega par mujhe ek baat smjh nhi ayi formula to pura khtm ho gya ta aur abhi to tujhe papa ki secret lab ka pta bhi nhi to ye powers kaise
Fir Shaurya Reena ko sab kuch bta deta hai sach sach
Reena : wow papa jis parallel universes pe research kr rhe the Tu vha ghoom bhi aya
Reena : ye kn hai Aditi ki trf dikhate hue
Shaurya : Amishka tum btao mai abhi ata hu
Amishka fir Reena ko Shaurya aur Aditi ke relation ke bare me bta deti hai
Reena : viswas to mera bhi uth gya hai sabse itna kuch hua hai
Aditi : haa didi mai smjhti hu
Thodi der ye log aise hi baat krti rhti hai to Amishka Reena ko Riya ke bare me bta deti hai
To Shaurya andr aa jata hai
Reena : to mujhe teesri girlfriend se kab mila rha hai do se to mil li mai
Shaurya : teesri kn didi
Reena : Riya
Shaurya : didi vo meri girlfriend nhi bs dost hai
Reena : ab mai bol rhi hu na to girlfriend hai aur kal Sunday hai mujhe usse milna hai kal hm chlenge
Shaurya : par didi
Reena : ab Tu apni didi ki bhi baat nhi manega
Shaurya : acha thik hai didi jaisa aap kho
Fir sab so jate hai aur agle din uthte hai to TV pe
Reporter : kn hai ye LUCIFER jisne in criminals ko itni bhayanak maut di hai cctv me khi bhi iska chehra nhi dikha aur yha se karoro ke drugs bhi mile hai yha jinda bache insaan ka kehna hai ki usne bola ki sabse kehna LUCIFER aya ta aur vo ek Container le bhi gya aur ise us Container me kya ta pta nhi hai to kn hai LUCIFER Hero ya villian kya usne ye apne maksad ke liye kiya ya fir police ki help ke liye agr police ki help ke liye to vo ek Container kyu le gya aisa kya tha usme
Arnav : Shaurya ko call krke bhai tu to chaa gya kab aa rha yha
Shaurya : bhai aaj kuch kaam h kal milte hai college me
Arnav : ok bro vo vakeel ka intezaam ho gya hai kal Ashima didi ayengi tera blood sample lene dna check ke liye
Shaurya : ok thanks a lot bhai tu kitna kharcha krta hai hmare liye
Arnav : abe sale bhai bhi bolta hai aur thanks bhi baki kharcha to tujhse bhi krwa hi lunga mai
Shaurya : ok thik h bro
Fir sab ready hote hai
Reena : chl jldi
Shaurya : haa haa
Shaurya : Lucy Ralph bhaiya se contact kro
Ralph : ha chote bol kya hua
Shaurya : kuch nhi bs aa rha tha vha
Ralph : ruk mai wormhole kholta hu
Then sab log andr jate hai vha Ralph sabse milta hai fir Shaurya Ralph ko sab btata hai ki kya hua.....
Ralph : koi nhi chote ab sab thik ho jaega koi jrurt ho to jrur btana ao chlo thoda ghoom kr ate hai sab tumhe dekh kr kafi khush honge
Shaurya : haa chliye bhaiya
Udhr baki teeno ladies Riya se milne nikal jati hai
Amishka : Hii Riya
Riya : hello ji aap kn
Amishka : mai Amishka Shaurya ne btaya hoga na
Riya : ohh rukhe man se haa ao baitho yrr aur ye dono
Amishka : ye hai Reena didi shaurya ki badi behan
Riya : namaste didi
Reena : Namaste
Amishka : ye Aditi hai Shaurya ki khaas dost
Riya : khaas dost mtlb
Amishka fir Shaurya aur Aditi ke relation ke bare me sab bta deti hai
Riya ko shaurya ke upr bhut gussa ati hai ki isse relation rkh skta hai pr mujhse nhi waah jae mujhse kya
Amishka : mai jnti hu tum Shaurya se pyar krti ho aur mujhe koi dikkat nhi hai usne meri vjh se tumhe naa bola aur aaj haa bolega vo bhi tumse pyar krta hai pr kah nhi paya mere karan Aditi didi ka to chlta kyuki hm dono ke relation se phle hi inka relation tha but ab nhi
Riya : wow sach me tum mujhe accept kr logi mai tumhe bojh to nhi lagungi na ki tumse tumhare pyar ko cheen rhi mai plzz mai tum dono ke beech nhi ana chahti
Amishka : bilkul bhi nhi dear aditi didi ki trah aaj se tum bhi meri behan ho junior vali hehehehehe
Riya : okk senior didi but kya vo mujhe accept krega abhi bhi
Reena : kaise nhi krega uski tange tod dungi nhi krega to
Riya ekdm khush ho jati hai
Aditi : vo Siya kha gyi
Riya : vo naha rhi hai
Aditi : kitna nahaegi
Siya : aap logo ne naam liya Siya haazir hehehe
Riya : aiye rajkumaari ji
Siya : aa rhi, olivia jao didi log ke liye chai nasta lao
Olivia : ji mam
Siya : tum dono bhi uski help kro
Isla, Emily : ji mam
Siya : to kaisa lga aap logo ko hmara mahal.
Amishka : kisi ne dikhaya hi nhi
Siya : hm dikhaenge , vaise aap log kaise yha
Amishka : tumhari didi ko apni jr. Sautan jo bnana tha
Siya : ohh woww to jija ji kha gye
Amishka : vo to Ralph bhaiya ke sath nikal gye hai
Siya : mujhse mile bina unko to mai dekhti hu
Fir Shaurya aur Ralph ate hai
Shaurya : kaisi ho choti
Siya kuch nhi khti
Shaurya : Are kya hua ise
Siya : hm aapse naraaj h
Shaurya : thik hai to ye sari chocolate mai Riya ko de deta hu
Siya : nhi vo meri chocolate hai
Shaurya : par tum to naraj thi
Siya : vo to ab bhi hu
Shaurya : accha aap hi btao kya kru
Siya : hme apne sath le chlo apni earth ghumane
Shaurya : okk next time pkka ok bacchi
Siya : sach
Shaurya : much
Siya : okk to pakki
Fir Reena khti hai mai thoda garden me baithti hu
Shaurya : ok didi
Amishka : to Shaurya milo meri junior sautan se
Shaurya : to aap sab me baat cheet ho hi gyi
Riya : apne mujhe accept to kr liya na
Shaurya : ab hmari queen ka order hai to kaise nhi krunga
Riya rote hue mtlb aap mujhse pyar nhi krte bas Didi aur Amishka ke kahne par accept kr rhe hai
Shaurya : use gale lgate hue nhi aisa nhi hai mai to tumhe pyar krta hi hu bs vo iski permission bhi to leni thi isliye nhi accept kiya tha
Riya : acha to mera gift kha hai
Shaurya : mai to gift lana hi bhool gya sorry
Riya turant Shaurya ko kiss kr leti hai
Riya : lo mil gya mera gift mujhe aur shrma jati h
Udhr garden me
Ralph bhi Reena ke bgl jaa ke baith jata hai
Ralph : hii
Reena : hello , thanks aapne mere bhai ki itni help ki
Ralph : isme thanks kaisa usne bhi to is earth ke logo ki help ki hai mtlb ki meri bhi help ki hai vaise bhi vo sirf aapka hi nhi hmara bhi bhai hai
Reena : fir to mai bhi aapki behan hui hehehehe
Ralph : aisa jruri hai kya , kyuki aap bhut khoobsurat hai
Reena : kya aap bhi jhoothi tarif krte hai
Ralph : jhooth nhi sach bol rha aapki kasam , aur mai khoobsurat ladkiyo ki jhoothi kasam nhi khata
Reena : flirt bhut acha kr lete hai hehehe
Ralph : flirt nhi sach bol rha
Reena : chliye hatiye
Ralph : are rukiye to shi
Reena : 6 din yhi hu
Ralph : par aap to ek din ke liye aye hai na
Reena : vo to apne earth ke hisaab se na buddhu
Ralph : acha haa vo kahte hai na khoobsurat ladkiyo ke samne dimaag bhi sath nhi deta
Reena : acha aisa kisne kha hai
Ralph : kisi ne kaha nhi par aaj mai kaha deta hu
Reena : aise hi uut patang cheeze kahte rha kriye
Ralph : kyu
Reena : kyu kya log aapko hi pagal smjhenge hehehehe
Ralph : chliye vo bhi theek h
Reena : aapki kitni girlfriend hai
Ralph : ek bhi nhi kyu
Reena : fir bhi itna acha flirt krna jnte hai
Ralph : kya mtlb hai itna acha flirt krne ka
Reena : kyu kya hua
Ralph : aap to impress nhi hui
Reena : try krte rhiye kya pta ho jau hehehe aur vha se bhaag jati hai
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