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Fantasy ATTITUDE (KABHI ANGEL KABHI DEVIL) ( Completed )

Rahul

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wonderfull update vj4u bhai to alfreen ko raaz ka sach pata chal gaya jaise taise usne raaz ko apna bhai maan liya samjh gayi uski majburi wo aage raaz ki black power bhi open ho gayi.. I know videos ke upar black power ka asar nai hoga lekin white power ka to hoga hi ishiliye to raaz combo power me hai..chalo sab sath me ladegen
 
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Suryaa

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wonderfull update vj4u bhai to mahi ko raaz ka sach pata chal gaya jaise taise usne raaz ko apna bhai maan liya samjh gayi uski majburi wo aage raaz ki black power bhi open ho gayi.. I know videos ke upar black power ka asar nai hoga lekin white power ka to hoga hi ishiliye to raaz combo power me hai..chalo sab sath me ladegen
Kya likh diya
Raaz Mahi ka bhai?????

Kaha hmee inka rishta paka samjhe rahee hai
Aur kaha aapne
Bhai bana diya
 

Rudrathakur

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tere har pyaade ko itna maarunga ki unki taklif se tera pichwada LAAL HO JAAYEGA...😜😜😜😈😈😜😈😂😂
Bde heavy driver h hmre raaz bhaiya 😜😜😜
Bahut hi masaledaar aur emotions se bhrpur update ...mja aagya ekpal sabhi ko emotional kr diya to wahi agle hi pal ek jordaar hasi...👏👏👏👏
Alfreen ke sath abhi jo hua aur us trance se alfreen jis trha nikli wo bahut hi achha tha..agr ronit aur anjali usko margdarshit nhi krte to najane kb tk wo uhi bhatakti rhti pr usne apne mann me uth rhe sawalo aur black energy ke prabhv pr niytaran pa liya beshak usme ronit aur anjali ke aane ke karan thodi shanti to aayi thi pr unke jaate hi wo shanti bhi chli gyi thi pr fir usne uspr control kiya aur khud ko hosh me lekr aayi aur tb firse ek ashaniya dard ka sailab uske andr utha jise jabt krte hue usne apne bhai ko dekha aur jo phla shbd uske muh se nikla...bhai....🤗🤗🤗🤗
Us ek word ne to kamaal hi kr diya raaz us word ki asr ko feel kr rha tha aur uske baad wo hug...jisme dono ke andr umad rha ek duje ke liye athah prem aur apnapan....aur usi karan alfreen ke andr jo halat bigde hue the wo stable hote chle gye sath me alfreen ne raaz ke deemag me locked black power ko unlock bhi kr diya...ab ye dono bhai bahan ek sath ek shakhs ki army ke samne h aur dono ke gusse ka sailab unpr tutne wala h...bda mja aayega ab😍😍😍
Aur ye showhi ka character bda kmaal h agr ye lmbe waqt tk raaz and prty ke sang rha to achhuta to sach me pagal ho jayega...usse kuchh puchhne pr wo bolega ki...showhi baklol achhuta g ko btana chahta h ki showhi ...bla bla bla😂😂😂😂😂...ise dekhkr mujhe ek movie ka character yaad aa rha tha pr puri trha se nhi aa rha ki kaha dekha tha maine aise character pr h gajab...aur ye showhi bhi apne planet ka ajuba hi h born with 2 god gifted power😍😍 to kya jb showhi me dono power h to wo unhe mila ke new power conversion bhi to bna skta h.....👍👍
Ab dekhte h ky hota b aage..waiting brother..
 
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AB TAK AAPNE PADHA KI JAHAN EK TARAF MAHI APNE SOUL KO 3 PERCENT TAK AMPLIFY KARNE ME KAAMIYAB HO JAATI HAI WAHIN DUSRI TARAF RAAZ NE APNA SUBCONSCIOUS BRAIN HAASIL KAR LIYA HAI.


AB AAGE:-



CHAPTER-1


(UNFOLD THE RAAZ)



UPDATE-41



PLANET-PAGAN


PLACE-OUTSIDE THE CONCEAL




PAR YE KAISE SAMBHAV HUA HOGA...????


itni shaktishali sheild ko hatakar usse bhi sashakth shield ko ussi jagah par laga dena....

is ghatna ko samajhna mere mastishk ke baahar hai....


CONCEAL ke baahar khade un dono PRIME VOTARIES me se ek ne dusre se ye baat kahi thi....


2ND PRIME- FORBIDDEN FOREST ke purane SHIELD ke hatne aur naye shield ke lagne ke baare me bhale hi hum kuch pata naa kar paayen par hum kamsekam ye toh pata laga hi sakte hain ki kya in kuch dino me CHOSENS ya pure ELYSIAN me kuch alag aur anokhi ghatna ghati hai!!!

sambhavata isse hume FORBIDDEN FOREST me hui is anhoni ke baare me koi sutr mil jaaye....


EK GHATNA HUI HAI....AUR US GHATNA KO HUMNE ANJAAM DIYA HAI PAR USKA FORBIDDEN FOREST KE SHIELD KE BADLAW SE KOI LENA DENA HO SAKTA HAI,YE KEHNA AUR JANANA KATHIN HAI....


second PRIME ki baat par first PRIME kuch kehta,usse pehle hi unke piche se ye awaaz aayi jisse sun jab wo dono piche palte toh hairan reh gaye....

kyunki itni sadiyon me pehli baar is planet PAGAN par unke siwa kisi aur ne apne kadam rakhe the...

aur wo isiliye kyunki ye PLANET ek invisible planet tha jisse sirf wo dono hi dekh sakte the aur is Planet ke chaaron taraf bane CONCEAL se nikalte behisab energy ke kano ko wo dono khudme sokh pure bramhand me faile negetive energy me barabar maatra me failate the...

bina kuch kahe jab wo dono PRIMES chup chaap apne saamne kaale labaden me dhak khade 2 lambe chowde khubsoorat naujawano ko dekhte hi rahe toh..


1ST-aise kya dekh rahe ho TRISTEN,UBEL urf PRIMES....


un do naujawano ke mooh se apna naam sun dono PRIMES jinke naam TRISTEN aur UBEL the,unhe ek naya jhatka laga....

wo dono kabhi kisi manushya ke saamne nahi aaye the, isiliye kisi manushya ke liye bhi unka naam aur unki asliyat jaanana namumkin tha par aise me unke saamne khade noujawan unka naam le rahe the,ye unke liye hadh se zyada surprising baat thi....aur isiliye.....


TRISTEN-kaun ho tum dono....???yahan tak pahunche kaise???aur humara naam kaise jaante ho tum dono....


1ST-bande ko DORIAN kehte hain...

2ND-aur mera naam GASTON hai....

UBEL-aadhe adhure jawab ka kya matlab hai???ye ek invisible Planet hai fir tum dono yahan tak pahunche kaise.??aur tum dono hume kaise jaante ho...???

TRISTEN-bina rooke,bina chhupaye ek baar me sab batao..warna fir kuch bhi chupaane ke liye bachoge nahi.

GASTON-yaar,hum toh waise bhi tumhe sab kuch batane hi waale the fir ye dhamki dene ka kya matlab hua....???

DORIAN-arre GASTON tu bhi naa..dhamki toh ye denge hi..aakhir ye VOTARIES hain aur wo bhi PRIMES...

uske upar jinhe ASPRIT CRYSTAL haasil karne jaisa mahatvpurn kaam mila ho,aise me ghamand toh hoga hi,kyun????


DORIAN ki baat sun TRISTEN aur UBEL dono ki hairani aur badh gayi...

aaj se laakhon saal pehle ek kaali urja ke zariye unki utpatti hui thi....

utpatti hone ke saath hi dono ke mastishk me unke kartavyon ki suchi ban chuki thi...

pure BRAMHAAND me negetive energy ki vibes ka niyantran jiske liye unhe ye grah pradan kiya gaya....

THE PAGAN....ek grah jiska arth hi GODLESS tha...kaali urja se bhare CONCEAL se bana ya grah jo sab ke liye invisible tha par TRISTEN aur UBEL ko isse dekhne aur isme moujud CONCEAL se kaali urja bator pure universe me faili negetive energy ko taakat dene ka order mila tha....

aur kyunki ye ek bohot hi mahatvpurn kaam tha jisse in dono ke supudr kiya gaya tha, isiliye in dono ko kaali duniya ke baasindon me jinhe VOTARIES kaha jaata tha,sabse uccha ohda jisse PRIMES kaha jaata tha,wo diya gaya...

inhone kabhi apne janm daata ko nahi dekha tha...bas unki moujudgi,unki taakat ko ye mehsoos karte aa rahe the...

aur fir jab ELYSIAN bana aur usme CHOSENS bana,tab inke mastishk me ek naya daayitv mehsoos kiya tha...in dono ko hi ek naya kartavya mila tha...

aur kartavya tha tha kisi tarah FORBIDDEN FOREST me ghuss ESPRIT CRYSTAL naam ke ek POUDHE ko haasil karna.....

par ye baat sirf in dono tak hi seemit thi par aaj woh baat,woh RAAZ kisi aur ke mooh se sun unki hairangi ka thikana naa tha....

aur isiliye......

dono ke haathon me kaali urja se bani do behad hi shaktishali rays dikhne lagi jisse dekhne ke baad bhi DORIAN aur GASTON yunhi khade rahe aur toh aur dono ab muskurane lage the jisse dekh...

TRISTEN aur UBEL ne wo shaktishali rays un dono par chhod di...

tezi se aage badhti hui wo rays sidhe DORIAN aur GASTON ke paas pahunchi aur agle hi pal....

TRISTEN aur UBEL ki aankhen hairat se phaile gayi...

reason....

wo rays DORIAN aur GASTON ko chunne se pehle hi gayab ho gayi...

wo dono ye sab dekh hairan ho hi rahe the ki...


DORIAN-ego shaant nahi hua hai toh ek do baar aur try kar lo....


DORIAN ki baat sun krodh se bhar TRISTEN aur UBEL ne pehle se zyada shaktishali rays se unpar hamla kiya par is baar bhi wahi hua jo pichli baar hua tha aur saath hi TRISTEN aur UBEL ke chehron par bhi same expressions ne dobara janm liya...

hairani waali...


TRISTEN-ye ho kya raha hai...????hum PRIME VOTARIES hain..sabse shaktishali devils....fir bhi hum in dono par ek waar tak nahi kar paa rahe hain...

UBEL-inse bhi wahi nakaratmak urja mehsoos ho rahi hai jo ek negetive energy ke dhaarak se feel hoti hai...

toh kya ye dono hum dono se bhi zyada taakatwar hain....!!!!


dheere dheere ek dusre se ye baat kahi thi TRISTEN aur UBEL ne par DORIAN aur GASTON ke kaano ne in baaton ko sun liya tha aur isiliye....


GASTON-jab tumhe hum dono se hi negetive energy ke dhaarak hone ka ehsaas ho gaya tha fir tumne humpar waar kiya hi kyun???

bhale hum ek dusre ko nahi jaante,par hue toh hum ek hi biradari ke naa...!!!

sirf isiliye kyunki hum tumhare baare me jaante hain,iska ye arth toh nahi ki hum tumhare dushman hain....

khair, tumhare dusre sawal ka jawab ye hai ki nahi,hum tum dono se zyada taakatwar nahi hain...

humne yahan aate hi tum dono ki urja ko mehsoos kiya tha jisse hum jaan gaye the ki tum humare jitne hi taakatwar ho.....


GASTON ko baat sun TRISTEN aur UBEL ke chitt kuch shaant hue aur....


UBEL-fir humare waar tumhe chhu kaise nahi paaye..???aur sabse mahatvpurn prashn...tum dono ho kaun aur is jagah aur humare baare me kaise jaante ho....???

DORIAN-tumhare waar hume isiliye nahi chhu paaye kyunki jisne tumhe shakti di hai,wo aisa nahi chahte the....


DORIAN ki baat sun TRISTEN aur UBEL ki aankhen badi ho gayi....


TRISTEN-kya tum unhe jaante ho jinhone hume hamara astitv diya hai....???kya tum mile ho unse...???

DORIAN-nahi..tumhari hi tarah hum bhi apne maalik ko,apne LORD ko nahi jaante....

jis din humne WICKEDS ko chuna tha,us din ke baad se humari shaktiyon me zaroorat se zyada izafa hone laga tha.....

aur tab hume hamare maansik tarango dwara ye ehsaas hua tha ki koi hai jisse hume shakti milti hai..

CHOSENS se nikalne ke baad unhi mansik tarango ke sahare hume kya karna hai,iska aadesh milta raha hai....

TRISTEN-fir tumne aisa kyun kaha ki jisne hume shakti di hai,wo nahi chahte ki humara waar tumpar asar kare....!!!!

GASTON-kal,jab hum apne CEREBRATION process ko pause kar baithe hue the tab achanak humare antarman me ek chalchtra chalne laga...

wo chalchitra tum dono ki utpatti aur saath hi is jagah ke baare me tha...

tumse judi saari chizen dikhane ke baad ek baar firse hamari maansik tarango ke zariye hume bataya gaya ki hume kya karna hai aur isiliye hi hum yahan aaye hain...


GASTON ki baat sunane ke baad TRISTEN aur UBEL ka mind clear ho chuka tha aur isiliye....


TRISTEN-yahan aane ke baad kya karne ka aadesh mila tum dono ko...???

DORIAN-kuch der pehle UBEL ne jo baat kahi thi, aadesh ussise juda hua hai...???

UBEL-maine ashanka jatayi thi..!!!kaun si aashanka...???

DORIAN-yahi ki agar beete kuch dino ke dauran CHOSENS aur ELYSIAN me hui kuch alag aur ajeeb ghatna ke baare me pata lagaya jaaye toh sambhavatah FORBIDDEN FOREST ke SHIELD ke saath hue is naye ferbadal ke baare me kuch pata chal sake...!!!

TRISTEN-kya tum jaante ho aisi koi baat jo hamare kaam aa sake...!!!


TRISTEN ke sawal par GASTON ne un dono se unke dwara CHOSENS me ki gayi saari chizon ke baare me vistaar se bataya jisse sun....

UBEL-tum dono bilkul sahi waqt par CHOSENS se nikal aaye kyunki agar ab bhi tum wahan hote toh chup chaap nikal nahi paate...

wahan kiye gaye naye intezam ke tahat ab kisi bhi roop me wahan chhupna asaan nahi hoga...

DORIAN-mushkil bhi nahi hai aur yahi hume mila hua aadesh bhi hai..

TRISTEN-hum samjhe nahi....

GASTON-chalchitra me tum dono ke baare me humne sab kuch jaana..wo sabkuch suna jiske baare me tumne kabhi bhi baat ki ho...

apne vaartalaap ke dauran ek baar tumne kaha tha ki FORBIDDEN FOREST ke kawach ko todne ke liye tumhe apne hi jaise 2 primes ki zaroorat hai....(update 14)

aur ab tumhare saamne wo do moujud hain.. bhale hi hum tum dono ki tarah designeted nahi hain,par taakat hamari bhi tum dono jitni hi hai....

TRISTEN-baat toh tumhari sahi hai kintu tum bhul rahe ho ki ab FORBIDDEN FOREST ke saamne lagi SHIELD dusri hai aur adhik shaktishaali bhi....

aur saath hi tum kuch der pehle kahi gayi baat ko bhi nazarandaaz kar gaye ki ab CHOSENS suraksha ko behad kada kar diya gaya hai....

FORBIDDEN FOREST toh door ki baat hai, ELYSIAN ke atmosphere me enter karte hi wahan lage REVEAL SHIELD ki wajah se enter karne waala wahin phas jaayega...

DORIAN-pata hai hume...aur is rukawat ko bhedne ka ek upay bhi hai aur hume mila aadesh bhi wahi hai...

aur wo yeh hai ki hum chaaron hummese kisi ek ko apni puri urja de denge...

aisa karne se jisme chaaron ki shaktiyan sammilit hongi,uska AURA aur power kayi guna badh jaayega...

aur aisa hone par wo ELYSIAN ke atmosphere me bina REVEAL SHIELD ko chhue aar paar ho jaayega aur pahunchega FORBIDDEN FOREST...

wahan pahunch wo hum charon ki shakti ke ek bade bhaag se wahan lage shield par waar karega...

agar isse koi asar hua toh thik hai,warna kisi wastu ka roop dhar wo wahin reh jaayega aur intazar karega...

kyunki is baat ke chances bohot zyada hain ki jis bhi wajah se wo nayi SHIELD wahan lagi hai,wo wajah,wo kaaran bohot jald saamne aayega aur aisa hone par kisina kisika us jagah par moujud hona zaroori hai taaki aage ki yojna banayi jaa sake...

TRISTEN-appratim.. bohot acche....par ab sawal ye hai ki humme se kaun jayega wahan???

DORIAN-mere hisaab se mere aur GASTON me se hi ek ko wahan jaana chahiye...kyunki hum dono CHOSEN'S ke X SAVENT bhi reh chuke hain aur kuch samay pehle kaafi dino tak roop badal wahan reh bhi chuke hain...

UBEL-DORIAN sahi keh raha hai...???


TRISTEN ko dekh UBEL ne ye baat kahi jispar usne bhi sehmati se apne sir ko hilaya....


GASTON-DORIAN,tum jaao.....


GASTON ki baat sun DORIAN ne haan me apna sir hilaya jiske baad GASTON, TRISTEN aur UBEL ne ek apna apna haath DORIAN ke sir par rakha aur....


APABHAJATI SHAKTIYEM

SHARE THE POWERS....


teeno ke haathon se tez kaali urja ke kan nikal DORIAN ke sir se hote hue uske andar chale gaye aur kuch der baad jab teeno ki powers uske andar puri tarah sama gayi toh apni aakhen khol ek baar teeno ko dekh DORIAN gayab ho gaya.....




PLANET-ANGIS


PLACE-THE LONSDALEITE SURFACE



THIS FEELS LIKE A HEXAGONAL DIAMOND..... ACTUALLY, LONSDALEITE SE BHI HARD LAG RAHA HAI YE....


ANGIS ki dharti ko chhute hue uski sakhti ko bhaampte hui maine ye baat kahi.....

LONSDALEITE ..THE HEXAGONAL DIAMOND...carbon atom se bana ek aisa padarth jo kisi normal diamond se 58 percent tak zyada sakht hota hai...

earth me mere school ke waqt ek exibition me us padarth ki stiffness ke baare me bataya gaya tha...

maine usse chhu kar bhi dekha tha aur aaj,abhi jab mai ANGIS ke bright hard surface jo ki asal me meri body thi,usse chhu raha tha toh mujhe waisi hi stiffness feel ho rahi thi....

apne SUBCONSCIOUS BRAIN ko apnaane ke baad mai RENAISS se gayab hokar sidhe yahan ANGIS ke surface me pahuncha tha....

kisi suraj aur uski roshni ka naamonisham toh yahan bhi nahi tha par ab mere SUBCONSCIOUS brain ke mere paas hone ki wajah se andhere me bhi mai is jagah ko halka halka dekh bhi paa raha tha aur feel toh mai is jagah ko puri tarah se kar paa raha tha...

jahan iske surface ko chhu mai yahan ke mahoul ko samajhne ki koshish kar raha tha....

wahin mai ye feel kar paa raha tha ki naa sirf yahan ka surface behad sakht hai balki issi surface se ek invisible bhaamp sa uth raha hai jo yahan ke pure atmosphere me faila hua hai....

ye sab dekh aur feel kar mai kuch der tak sochta raha aur fir jahan khada tha ,wahin paalti maar kar baith gaya...

reason....

ab waqt aa gaya tha OMMIN WHIZZDER ki wo BODY AMPLIFICATION CLASS jo maine directly kabhi attend hi nahi ki thi,usme batayi gayi baaton ke practicals ka...

par ye AMPLIFICATION bhi mere liye NEW BORN SAVENTS ke mukable behad mushkil hone waala tha...

reason....

NEW BORN SAVENTS ki BODY AMPLIFICATION CLASS se pehle jo un sab ki BRAIN AMPLIFICATION ki class lagti thi,usme maamuli spells bol ANURODHAM uccharit kar unke asar shuru hote hi ARAMATI spell ke zariye apne BODY aur BLOOD ko strong banaya jaata tha taaki BODY aur BLOOD AMPLIFICATION CLASS ke waqt BODY aur BLOOD ko bardasht ke kaabil banaya jaa sake par mere paas ye suvidha uplabdh nahi thi....

aur wo isiliye kyunki mera BRAIN last level commodity jaisa tha jo ANURODHAM matlab request jaise modes par kaam hi nahi karta tha...

kehne ka matlab tha ki mera brain us bijli ke khambe ki tarah tha jisme 24/7 440 volt ki current ghumti thi,usse kam nahi....

batao,itne lambe hone ka bhi kya faayda ki apne hi pair ko jhuk kar chhu naa paao par ab aisa hai toh hai...

aur waise bhi,jinhe samandar naapna ho,unhe jheel aur nadiyon ki lambayi se fark nahi padta....


neeche surface par baith pehle maine apne aap ko aane waali taklif ke liye taiyar kiya...

kuch der tak sunya me ghurte rehne ke baad maine apni aankhen band ki aur apne CEREBRATION process ko pause kiya....

ek second bhi nahi laga tha mere CEREBRATION process ko pause hone me......

apne CEREBRATION process ko pause kar apne dimag ke through maine apne aantarik sharir me jhaanka aur..


STHVIRA PHALAKA...

STURDY LAYERS....


RRRRRRRRRR......


jaise hi maine spell uccharit kiya,jis surface par mai baitha tha,us surface se hota hua pure PLANET ka surface vibrate karne laga...

ye vibrations us bhaamp,us AURA ki wajah se ho rahi thi jo yahan ke pure atmosphere me faila hua tha....

itna hi nahi, spell ke uccharit hone ke agle hi pal mere sharir ke beech ek roshni utpaan hui aur aisa hote hi mai bhi behad tez vibrate hone laga....

par in sabke baawjud mera CEREBRATION process paused hi raha....

kuch der tak toh yunhi normal vibrations hote rahe par uske baad is planet ke surface se nikalte bhaamp, AURA ne mujhe neeche se jakadte hue upar uthana shuru kar diya.....

aur dekhte hi dekhte mera sharir tezi se 1000 feet tak upar hawa me uth chuka tha....

wahin in sab baaton se bekhabar mai apni aakhen band kiye hue paused CEREBRATION me baitha hua tha....

hawa me hazaron feet tak uthne ke baad mera sharir ek point par rook gaya....

mere rookte hi mere sharir aur pure Planet par ho rahe vibrations bhi rook gaye....

sab kuch ekdum se shaant ho gaya tha...par ye shaanti,ye khamoshi aane waale tufaan se pehle jaisi thi.......

kyunki kuch seconds tak hawa me rooke rehne ke baad mera sharir jitni tezi se upar aaya tha,usse double tezi se neech aane laga...

saath hi ab mera sharir aur pura PLANET aur zor se vibrate karne lage...

par jis tufaan ki baat maine kahi thi,wo ye sab ho rahi ghatna nahi thi balki wo tufaan toh theek us jagah par jahan kuch der pehle mai paalthi maar kar baitha tha,wahan ban rahi thi...

jis AURA ne mujhe upar hawa me uthaya tha,ussi AURA ke bohot se bhaag ne milkar jahan mai baitha tha,us jagah par khudko samet liya tha par is baar wo AURA naa toh invisible thi aur naahi wo sirf dhuan thi...

us AURA ne khudko bhi yahan ke surface ka roop de diya tha par wo roop sapat zamin ki tarah nahi tha,balki 4 se 5 tez dhaar aariyon ki tarah tha...

wahin in sab se bekhabar mera sharir double tezi se niche ussi dhaar dhaar aariyon waali zamin ki taraf girta chala jaa raha tha aur finally.....


KHAACHHH........KHACHHHHH.......


SIR ALAG aur DHADH ALAG......


MERE SHARIR KE DO TUKDE HO CHUKE THE.....







AAJ KE LIYE ITNA HI......







AAPKA APNA V...J......
Lovely update bro maza aa gaya
 

Jamesleon

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AB TAK AAPNE PADHA KI JAHAN EK TARAF RAAZ SHOWHI KI MAGIC KE ASAR SE BAHAR AA JAATA HAI WAHIN DUSRI TARAF APNE MOM DAD PAR WAAR KARNE KE LIYE VIRAAZ KO PUNISH KARNE KE BAAD RAAZ PURE DEVIL'S HAVEN KO TABAAH KAR DETA HAI.


AB AAGE:-



CHAPTER-3

(THE SACRIFICE & THE PERFECT EPILOGUE)



UPDATE-152



PLACE-ALFREEN'S MIND'S UNKNOWN DIMENSION





NAHI,NAHI,NAHI,NAHI,NAHI,NAHI,NAHI,NAHI,NAHI,NAHI,NAHI,NAHI......


apne hi dimag ke ek visual dimension me kaid ALFREEN apne sir ko pakad tezi se ye NAHI lagatar chillati jaa rahi thi...

REASON...

UNEARTH THE IMMORTALS naam ki book me RAAZ ke paida hone se lekar uske kokh se nikal urja banane ka safar dekhne ke baad us pure journey ko summerize karte hue woh aakhri shabd "TU FLORIN AUR MARIA KA WOH PUTRA HAI JISKA KABHI JANM NAHI HUA"ALFREEN ke dimag me hathoda ban kar baj rahe the..

aur phir us hathode ki maar ka pressure tab aur zyada badh gaya jab ussi book se nikle woh shabd

"APNE HI MAATA PITAH KO JAAKAR ABHI KHUD MAAREGA TU

JO WAADA TODA,TAB BHI MARENGE WOH,PAR TAB WOH MOUT BEHADH DARDNAAK HOGI"

ye nakaratmakta se bhare sanjoye shabd ALFREEN ke dimag ki naso ko faade lage..

pehle RAAZ ki haqiqat aur phir jis kaaran se woh RAAZ se beintaha nafrat karti aa rahi thi,un dono sach ko jaan ALFREEN ka pura astitv hi hil gaya tha...

jazbaaton ka ek aisa uncontrollable tufaan uth raha tha uske andar jisse naa sehen kar paane ki wajah se woh NAHI shabd ko lagatar chillate hue jaise us sach ko jhooth saabit karne ki bachkana koshish karti chali aa rahi thi..

wahin is sab ke dauran ALFREEN ke andar basi uski WHITE aur BLACK ENERGY ke beech ek alag hi jung chiddi hui thi...

jahan uski WHITE ENERGY sacchayi ko jaanane ke baad ALFREEN ko positive hone aur jitni bhi galti usne anjaane me kar di thi,usse sahi karne ki salah de rahi thi,wahin uske andar nihit BLACK ENERGY usse is sach ko ek jhooth,ek saajish bata rahi thi jo usse bhramit kar kamzor karne ke liye rachi gayi thi.

apne andar basi in dono urjaon ke beech ho rahi ladhayi aur uske upar behadh gehre maansik taanav ke beech apne hi dimag ke visual dimension me fasi ALFREEN ek aise taklif se guzar rahi thi jiski seema woh khud naapne me asamarth thi...

kya sach hai,kya jhooth,in dono naavon me ek ek pair rakh beech mazdhaar me fasi ALFREEN bechaini se bhar tadap hi rahi thi ki tabhi..


ZINDAGI SARAL HAI,AGAR HUM USSE KATHIN NAA BAANAYE...

ye quote ALFREEN ko apne piche se sunayi diya jisse dekh woh ek jhatke me piche moodi aur aisa hote hi uski nazaron ke saamne do anjaan par phir bhi apne se lagne waale chehre the..

ek male aur ek female jinhe pehli baar dekh rahi thi ALFREEN par phir bhi naa sirf usse woh chehre,woh log dekhe aur jaane pehchaane se lag rahe the balki saath hi saath unke presence ki wajah se uske andar chal rahi WHITE aur BLACK ENERGY ki jung par bhi jaise ek halt lag gaya tha..

bechaini aur taklif ki jagah ek ajeeb se sukoon ne le li thi..ek aisa sukoon jisse aaj kaafi waqt ke ALFREEN feel kar rahi thi..

aankhon me sukoon aur sawal liye kuch waqt dekhti rahi ALFREEN un do anjaan logon ko aur phir...


ALFREEN-kaun hai aap dono..???aur mujhe aisa kyun lag raha hai jaise mai aap dono ko pehle se jaanti hun...???

FEMALE-nazar chehra bhale hi naa pehchaan paaye par khoon apne khoon ko pehchaan hi leta hai...

ALFREEN-apna khoon..???mai samjhi nahi...!!!???

MALE-bina samjhe faisla lene ki aadat hai tumhari meri bacchi..nahi toh sach ko bina jaane RAAZ ko joki tumhara apna saga bhai hai,doshi maante hue khudko kaali shaktiyon ki gulaam kabhi nahi banati tum...

us MALE ki baat sun aankhon me vismay liye kuch seconds dekhti rahi ALFREEN usko par phir us uski ankhon me vismay ki jagah ghussa dikhne laga aur..


ALFREEN-kaun ho tum dono..???tumne hi mere dimag me RAAZ ki jhuthi kahani ka maaya jaal buna hai, kyun..???

ussi ke liye kaam karte ho naa....!!!

MALE-hum ISHWAR ke liye kaam karte hain...aur rahi baat kahani ki toh jisse tum jhuthi kahani bata rahi ho,hamare bete ne us kahani ko jeeya hai,jhela hai,tadpa hai..

taaki hum,uske maa baap taklif deh mout naa mare isiliye humare human life ko sukoon bhara end dene ke liye usne apne haathon se hume mukt kiya aur khud, apne aap ko dard aur taklif ke saagar me dubo diya...

aur is beech,hamari layak beti ne khudko uska gulaam bana liya joki uske mom dad ka asli hathyara hai...


jahan us MALE ki baat sun ALFREEN ki aankhein badi hoti chali jaa rahi thi wahin apni baat bolte hue woh male joki RONIT hi tha,uska aur ANJALI ka roop unke human form waale roop me badal gaya..

apne mom dad ke apne saamne dekh pehle toh ALFREEN ka emotional side sailab bankar behne ko hua par phir ek andeshe ke saath ki kahin ye koi maaya toh nahi,uske aankhon me sawal aur negetiveness ke kan bhi dikhne lage jisse dekh...


MARIA-ye koi maaya nahi hai meri bacchi..hamare paas aao...


MARIA ki baat aur unki awaaz me ek aisi gravitational pull thi ki ALFREEN ke kadam apne aap hi apne mom dad ki taraf badh gaye aur jab woh un dono ke paas pahunchi toh uski mom ne uske sir par haath rakh diya aur unke aisa karte hi ALFREEN ki aankhein band ho gayi..

abhi tak RAAZ aur uske mom dad ka rishta aur asal me un dono ki mout kaise hui thi,yahi bas dekha tha ALFREEN ne par ab jab uski aankhein band hui toh usse uske mom dad, RAAZ aur is kahani ki asliyat dikhne lagi jisse dekh uski band aankhein bhi hairat se bhar gayi thi.

saath hi saath ye jaankar ki woh do SERAPHIM ANGELS ki beti hai aur jiski utpatti universe ko bachane ke liye hui hai aur jo GOD ke dono beton ki urja se bana hai,woh uska bhai hai,uske dil me khushi aur garv,dono hi bhaavon ka samagam hone laga tha...

saari sacchayi jaanane ke baad aankhein khul gayi ALFREEN ki aur aisa hote hi woh turant apne dono haathon ko khole apne mom dad ke gale lag gayi..

dard aur khushi,in dono se mile aansu jo najaane kab se ALFREEN ke andar rooke hue bahar nikalne ki pratiksha kar rahe the,ab finally unhe bahar nikalne ka raasta mil chuka tha..

aakhein bhale hi geele the ALFREEN ke,par unke nikalte waqt usse apne dil se ek bojh utarta hua feel hi raha tha..

kuch der yunhi apne mom dad se gale lag rote rehne ke baad woh unse alag hui aur...


ALFREEN-sorry mom,sorry dad..aawesh,ghussa,nafrat,badla...

in saare feelings ki wajah se galat faisla le baithi mai aur apne hi bhai ki dushman gayi...

pata nahi,kaise maafi maanungi usse..!!!aur jo mai ban baithi hun,uske baad woh mujhe maaf karega bhi ki nahi...

jisne aap dono ke human form ko maara,ussika saath dene lag gayi thi mai,ye galti maaf karne ke laayak nahi hai...

FLORIN-AL,tumne galti ki nahi hai,tumse karwayi gayi hai...

jaisa chhal VIDEOUS ne tumhare bhai ke saath kiya aur humare human forms ko uske hi haathon marwa diya,waisa hi kuch usne tumhare saath bhi kiya tha...


apne dad ki baat sun aaakhon me sawal liye woh unhe dekhne lagi jispar..


FLORIN-woh letter jisme tumhare aansu gire the aur jiske baad tum AGATHOKAK me convert ho gayi thi,us letter ko VIDEOUS ne SPELL BOUND kiya hua tha..

jab VIDEOUS ko RAAZ ki aur hamari asliyat ka pata chala,tab usse is baat ka andaza ho chuka tha ki kyun RAAZ me kaali shakti hone ke baawjud uske andar bani BLACK ENERGY usse detect nahi kar paati...

iska reason tum thi...KAALI SHAKTI par niyantran ka hakh humne tumhare bhai ko nahi,balki tumhe diya tha..

us shakti ka pravah tumhare andar ho raha tha par kyunki us waqt tum hamari beti thi aur future AGATHOKAK bhi, isiliye woh shakti khud se khud ko bahar nahi laa sakti thi..

iske liye usse WHITE ENERGY ki zaroorat thi..aur jab hum mare toh humare sharir ki raakh se woh WHITE ENERGY ki key nikal tumme sama gayi...

thik ussi waqt tunhare aansu us kaagaz par gire the.. tumhari dono shaktiyan ek dusre se merge ho chuki thi par unka sahi tarah se pravah hona baaki tha..

par theek ussi waqt VIDEOUS ne apni kaali shakti tumhare andar daal di..

aisa hote hi tumhari dono shaktiyon ka balance bigad gaya..

saath hi saath tumhari kaali shakti tumhari WHITE ENERGY se alag hote hue apne liye ek alag jagah bana baithi..

jab aisa hua toh tumhare sahi se sochne samajhne ki taakat bhi maddham hote hue mastishk me kahin vilin ho gayi aur tum apni hi shakti ki gulaam ban gayi...


apne dad ki baat bade dhyan se sunte hue apni ki hui galtiyan ko pachane ki koshish kar rahi thi..

aur phir jab FLORIN ki baat puri hui toh..


ALFREEN-toh,ab toh mai free hun naa...!!!

MARIA-nahi...is waqt tum behosh ho aur apne hi dimag ke ek aise hisse me khadi ho jahan tumhari unstabled kaali shakti nahi pahunchi hai..

par jaise hi tum hosh me aaogi, toh woh shakti joki VIDEOUS ki shakti ke prabhav me hai,tumhari WHITE ENERGY ko taklif pahunchate hue tumhe dard degi..

bohot dard... aur woh tab tak tumhe dard dengi jab tak tumhari maansikta wapas waisi nahi ho jaati jaisi sacchayi janane se pehle thi...

ALFREEN-toh kya mai theek nahi ho sakti...???kya mai hamesha apne bhai se nafrat karti rahungi...!!!

nahi,nahi..mai aisa nahi kar sakti.. family ke naam par bas wahi toh bacha hai mere paas...

usse nafrat karne ke bajaaye i would rather choose death..

FLORIN-relax kiddo...do baatein bhul rahi ho tum.... pehli,ki tum THE CHOSEN ONE,RAAZ ki behen ho aur dusri,tumhari tarah uska bhi duniya me apna kehna waala bas ek hi hai..tum...

ek aur baat bataun,jab RAAZ apni aloukik shaktiyon ke saath waapas CHOSENS aaya tha,tab woh har kisika dimag aur bhaavnaon ko read karne me saksham tha..

us waqt usne tumhare deepest desire ko bhi padha tha..woh desire jiske baare me tum bachpan me hamesha humse shikayat karti rehti thi..

ki kyun tumhara ek bada bhai nahi hai jo tumhare saare zidh aur nakhre uthata..

tumhare har problem me tumhare saath khada hota aur tum tak pahunchne se pehle hi tumhari us pareshani ko door kar deta..

pata hai,us waqt woh khudko bas ek urja samajhta tha, isiliye tumhari is soch ko jaan woh man hi man tumpar hasa tha lekin jab usse apni asliyat pata chali,jab usse apne haathon se hume maarna pada aur theek ussi waqt jab tum uske saamne aayi,toh tumhara wahi thought dobara uske dimag me gunja tha..

aur tum andaza bhi nahi laga sakti ki us waqt usne kaisa feel kiya tha...???

moral of the story...tumhari taklif ka ilaaj tumhaara bhai hai.. surrender yourself to him..

waise uski bhi ek kaam ki chiz hai jo sirf tum pura kar sakti ho..

ALFREEN-mai uski taklif door kar sakti hun....mai samjhi nahi..

MARIA-jab tumhari taklif puri tarah se door ho jaayegi,jab tumhare dono powers apni apni jagah par pure settle ho jaayenge,tab apne aap samajh jaaogi tum..

ab humare jaane ka aur tumhare hosh me aane ka waqt ho gaya hai meri bacchi..

aankhein band kar khudko apne dimag se nikalo aur hosh me aao...

aur haan,kabhi khudko akela mat samajhna..mai aur tumhare dad humesha tum dono ke andar hain..


apni mom ki baat sun chhalakte aankhon ke saath muskura uthi ALFREEN jiske baad ek baad ek uske maathe ko chuma RONIT aur ANJALI ne aur phir woh dono gayab ho gaye...

wahin un dono ke jaate hi ALFREEN apne bhai ke face ko yaad karte hue apni jagah par baith gayi jiske agle hi pal uski aankhein band hoti chali gayi...





PLACE-THE MID-CROSS SPACE




YE KAISI JAGAH HAI BHAI...????


indradhanush ke mixed colours liye lambe lambe rays aur blurry environment se bane ek bade se comet numa jagah ke surface par prakat hue the hum sab...

hamare chaaron taraf andhere me dooba space tha jahan door door bas sitare hi chamak rahe the...

is ajeebogarib jagah ko dekhte hue hi pucha tha ye sawal ACCHUTA ne jispar...


SHOWHI-SHOWHI batana chahta hai ki hum sab abhi MID-CROSS SPACE me hain...

ACCHUTA-saale tu batwe...tune hi phirse tikdam karke hume is saptrangi jhand jagah me fasaya hai naa..


apni baat bol ghusse se SHOWHI ka gala dabochne ke iraade se uski taraf badha ACCHUTA.

ye dekh SHOWHI turant mere piche aakar chhup gaya aur...


SHOWHI-SHOWHI aapko batana chahata hai ki SHOWHI nirdosh hai...


kaafi dare hue kahi ye baat SHOWHI ne jispar koi kuch kehta ki tabhi..


MAI-relax ACCHUTA...usse apni baat kehne de...

ACCHUTA-par bhai,tu mout ke mooh tak chala gaya tha aur reason,yahi chutiya hai....

MAHI-ACCHUTA,shaant ho jaao... kahani jitni saaf dikh rahi hai,asal me utni saaf hai nahi...

SHOWHI-young lady, SHOWHI aapki dariyadili aur doordarshita ka kaayal hua...

SHOWHI aapko batana chahta hai ki aap shaktishali hone ke saath saath bohot buddhimaan bhi hain..

ACCHUTA-haan,tere hi certificate ki zaroorat thi usse..aur har baat par SHOWHI, SHOWHI ka repeat telecast kyun bajata rehta hai be tu...???

SHOWHI-SHOWHI aapko batana chahega ki SHOWHI aise hi baat karta hai..

SHOWHI ek aur baat bhi aapse kehna chahega ki SHOWHI ko lagta hai ki aap bohot battamiz hain...

ACCHUTA-abbe teri toh..


ye bol ACCHUTA phir SHOWHI ki taraf badhne ko hua par tabhi...


MAI-ACCHUTA....!!!!


ghoor kar dekh uska naam liya maine jiske baad ACCHUTA SHOWHI ko ghurte hue apni jagah par khada raha jiske baad...


MAI-bina rooke puri baat batao SHOWHI....

SHOWHI-bilkul mahabali.... jaisa ki SHOWHI ke baare me aapko ye pata hai ki SHOWHI ek HALTIJA hai...

SHOWHI batana chahega ki HALTIJA ek RIGHTOUS MONASTIC prajaati hai aur SHOWHI ke planet ka naam hai MIRO....

SHOWHI aapko ye bhi bata de ki SHOWHI ke planet MIRO me kul 10001 HALTIJAS rehte hain..

SHOWHI aap sabko ye jaankari dena chahega ki kul do aise GOD GIFTS hain jinme se ek ke saath har HALTIJA paida hota hai..

ek GOD GIFT hai HIDE ki aur dusri hai SHOW ki....

SHOWHI aapko ye news dena chahega ki pure MIRO me SHOWHI hi ek aisa HALTIJA hai jo dono hi GOD GIFTS, HIDE aur SHOW ke saath paida hua hai..

baaki saare HALTIJAS in dono me se sirf ek hi gift posses karte hain..

aur isiliye hi SHOWHI ka naam SHOWHI hai...

SHOWHI aur HALTIJAS ke ye do gifts kya hain aur kya kar sakte hain,iska ek namuna aapne MAHABALI RAAZ ke saath DEVIL'S HAVEN me jo hua,usse dekh samajh liya hoga....

par SHOWHI aap sabko ye bhi batana chahta hai ki jab HALTIJAS ke dono GOD GIFTED POWERS ko ek hi jagah par laakar unhe aapas me milaya jaata hai,toh aise me ek nayi power ka janm hota hai,jisse CONVERSION kehte hain...

aur issi nayi power ki wajah se SHOWHI aap sabki zindagi ne aaya hai...

SHOWHI aap sabko us din ke baare me batana chahta jab mahalabi RAAZ,bilkul aapki resemblance ka ek vyakti humare PLANET me aaya tha..

SHOWHI aap sabko ye bhi batana chahta hai ki waise toh hamara PLANET hidden hai aur hamare PLANET ke chaaron taraf ek invisible SHIELD laga hota hai par us vyakti ke paas pure WHITE ENERGY se bhari ALOUKIK SHAKTIYAN thi jinki madad se woh SHOWHI ke PLANET me enter kar paaya...

iske baad woh vyakti hum sabhi HALTIJAS se mila..

uske saath kuch aur log bhi the jinme ussiki tarah ka resemblence tha..

un logon ke saath usne hum sabhi HALTIJAS ko dekhna shuru kiya..

aisa karte waqt sirf SHOWHI ko dekh bhar usse SHOWHI ke andar panap rahe dono HALTIJA GOD GIFTS ke baare me pata chal gaya..

SHOWHI aapko batana chahta hai ki ussine SHOWHI ko DEVIL'S HAVEN me bheja tha taaki SHOWHI woh kar sake jo usne mahabali aapke saath kiya...

aisa naa karne par usne SHOWHI aur baaki sabhi HALTIJAS ko khatm karne ki dhamki di...

SHOWHI aap sabko batana chahta hai ki SHOWHI ko apni jaan ki parwah nahi hai par saare HALTIJAS ke liye joki SHOWHI ke dost hain, SHOWHI kuch bhi kar sakta hai...

par SHOWHI dil ki gehrayi se mahabali ki maafi ka talabgaar hai...

MAI-baat khtam karo SHOWHI...woh shakhs joki i am sure VIDEOUS tha,chahta kya tha tumhare logon se...???

SHOWHI-VIDEOUS... SHOWHI batana chahta hai ki apne naam ki hi tarah woh shaksh bhi alag hi tha...

SHOWHI ko uske andar immortality
nazar aa rahi thi aur saath hi aseem shakti..

aisi shakti jispar SHOWHI ki GOD GIFTED POWERS ki kaabiliyat bhi kaam me nahi aa sakti...

MAHI-taarif baad me karna SHOWHI..uska tumhare planet me aane ka maksad kya tha..???

SHOWHI- SHOWHI ko uske maksad ke baare kuch bhi nahi pata...usne SHOWHI ke liye DEVIL'S HAVEN ka world door khol diya jisse hote hue SHOWHI us world me jaa chuka tha..

uske maksad ko jaanane ke liye SHOWHI ke saath aap sabko MIRO jaana hoga ..

ACCHUTA-toh kis muhurth ka intazar kar rahe hain hum..aur jis point se baat shuru hui thi,woh toh ab bhi incomplete hai...

hum is MID-CROSS-SPACE me kya kar rahe hain..???? RAAZ,tum hume yahan kyun lekar aaye...???

SHOWHI-SHOWHI aapko batana chahta hai ki ki MAHABALI RAAZ ke dimag me SHOWHI ne hi is jagah ko show kiya tha...

aur woh isiliye kyunki MIRO me jaane ka raasta issi jagah se hai..

SHOWHI aap sabko batana chah raha hai ki jo andhera aap sab dekh rahe hain,ye asal me space ka andhera nahi balki us kawach ka rang hai jo MIRO ke chaaron taraf lagayi gayi hai..

par SHOWHI ye dekhkar hairan hai ki is kawach ka rang joki shweth tha,woh kaala kaise ho gaya hai..??

is kawach ki urja bhi badli hui si lag rahi hai...??? aur saath hi saath behadh powerful bhi..

HIDA-ho sakta hai ye jagah, kawach dusri ho aur tumhara planet kahin aur ho...???

SHOWHI-SHOWHI aapko batana chahta hai ki aisa nahi ho sakta..

aur woh isiliye kyunki MIRO se pehle hi ye MID-CROSS-SPACE paaya jaata hai jahan SHOWHI aur aap sab khade hain aur dusri ye satrangi kirane joki ussi kawach ki urja hai jisse MIRO cover kiya gaya hai...

SHOWHI sure hai ki kirno se jo urja nikal rahi hai woh SHOWHI ke grah ki hi urja hai..

par haan, SHOWHI in kirno ke badle rang ko dekhkar bhi hairan hai..

MAI-VIDEOUS ne apni khudki kaali shakti ko tumhare planet ke kawach me jo safed urja thi,uske saath mix kar diya hai aur un dono urjaon se bani hai ek nayi kawach..

ye rang birangi kirane ussi nayi kawach ki rays hain...

BRAWNY-par tu toh is kawach ko tod sakta hai naa...!!!

MAHI-haan, RAAZ apni puri shakti se is naye kawach ko tod sakta hai par agar usne aisa kiya toh is kawach ke saath saath pura MIRO PLANET bhi khatm ho jaayega...

MAI-right.. isiliye hi VIDEOUS ne apni kaali shakti ko yahan ke kawach ki urja se milaya hai....

bina MIRO PLANET ko koi nuksaan pahuncha kawach ko todne ke liye WHITE aur pure BLACK ENERGY ke ek exact proportion power se is kawach par waar karna hoga...

achi khabar ye hai ki MIRO jis WHITE ENERGY ki SHIELD se protected hai,meri WHITE ENERGY (ERRAPEL) us SHIELD ki energy se match karti hai par buri khabar ye hai jitni maatra me VIDEOUS ne apni KAALI URJA ka istamal us kawach ke upar kiya hai,utna proportion filhal mere andar moujud nahi hai...

SAB-SHIT.... toh ab...


un sabki baat par mai kuch kehta ki tabhi...

AHHHHH.....

ek dard bhari karah ke beech ALFREEN jisse SLUNDER ne humare just piche ek chattan me leta diya tha, usne apni aankhen kholi jispar khush hote hue sabhi uski taraf badhe lekin un sabke badhte kadam tab achanak se rook gaye jab ALFREEN ka dard aur usse nikalne waali cheekh har guzarte pal ke saath badhta chala gaya...

ek haath se apne sir ko aur dusre se seene par haath rakh woh zoron se cheekhte hue chhatpata rahi thi...

usse yun dard se chillata dekh jahan baaki sab usse ghere khade ho gaye wahin mai apni jagah me hi aakhein band kar khada reh gaya...

jo ALFREEN ke saath ho raha tha,woh uske hi karmo ka natija tha..uske andar nihit SAFEDH aur KAALI SHAKTI ke beech ho rahi thi jung aur is jung ka reason tha ki ALFREEN unme se kiski gulaam banegi...

AGATHOKAK ka sahi matlab nahi samajhne aur apni shaktiyon ko kaabu me nahi karna seekhne ki saza bhugat rahi thi ALFREEN...

par usse yun tadapta bhi toh nahi dekh sakta tha mai aur isiliye mere kadam aahista se hi sahi,uski taraf badh gaye..

is beech MAHI, ACCHUTA, SLUNDER, BRAWNY aur HIDA...sabhi usse himmat rakhne ke liye keh rahe the par dard ki adhikta ki wajah se unke shabd uske kaano tak pahunch bhi nahi paa rahe the..

wahin ab tak mai uske paas pahunch chuka tha aur aisa hote hi ALFREEN ko us asahaniya dard ke beech bhi ek ajeeb se apnepan ke sukoon ka ehsaas hua aur ab tak jo usne apne sir ko neeche jhukaya hua tha, dheere se uthathe hue mujhe dekha ALFREEN ne..

aisa hone par itni der me pehli baar ye hua ki uski lagatar nikalti cheekhon me ek halka sa stop aaya..

dard ke adhikta ki wajah se ansuon se bheegi hui thi uski aankhein aur unhi bhari aankhon ko bina jhapkaye woh dekhti rahi mujhe kuch pal aur phir..


ALFREEN-BHAI....


chehre par dard par us dard me bhi ek sukoon ko liye mujhe dekh kaha ye shabd usne jisse sun aur feel kar ek pal ke liye aankhen dobara band ho gayi meri...

wahin MAHI sahit baaki sab bhi joki mujhe ALFREEN ke kareeb dekh thoda piche hath chuke the, ALFREEN ko mujhe bhai bolte suj woh sab bhi muskura uthe the..

khair,jab wapas aankh kholi maine toh..


ALFREEN-bohot dukh raha hai bhai....


ek typical choti behen ki tarah shikaayat ki ALFREEN ne mujhse jisse sun..


MAI-hug me....


itni taklif me bhi meri baat sun muskura uthi ALFREEN jiske baad mere hi haath ko thaam woh mere saamne khadi hui aur agli hi pal woh mere baahon me simaththi chali gayi aur jab aisa hua toh...


mere aur uske sharir ke ird gird ek safed urja se bana ujala fail gaya...

REASON...

"SPARSH WOH NAHI JISNE SHARIR KO PAAYA HO...

SPARSH WOH HAI JISNE AATMA KO GALE LAGAYA HO"....


DARK SPACE me mere dad ne kahi thi mujhse ye baat aur baat issi lamhe ke liye thi jo is waqt mere aur ALFREEN ke beech guzar rahi thi...

apni behen ko gale lagate hi apni rooh ki aakhri hadh tak me jhaankte hue wahan ALFREEN ka naam liya maine aur mere aisa karte hi woh LUSTRAL BEAMS jo ZEAL me mare logon ki spirits ne MAHI ko di thi,(update 125) aur phir MAHI ne mujhme woh BEAMS transfer kiya the,woh mujhse hokar ALFREEN me samane lage..

issi wajah se hamare chaaron taraf roshni si fail gayi thi..

khair,jaise jaise woh BEAMS meri aatma se hote hue mere sharir se nikal ALFREEN ke body se hokar uski SOUL me sama rahe the,uska dard khatm hota chala jaa raha tha...

uske andar basa BLACK aur WHITE ENERGY joki ab tak uncontrollable the,woh ab ALFREEN ke control me aate chale jaa rahe the..

aur phir jab saara LUSTRAL BEAM ALFREEN me samaya aur woh dono energies completely uske control me pure aaye toh ek aur chiz hui..

darasal kyunki is hug ke dauran sirf humare souls hi nahi balki hamare chaaron AMPLIFICATION modes bhi ek dusre se connected the, isiliye ALFREEN ko bhi mere brain me kuch half locked jagah dikh gayi..

ye wahi jagah thi jahan mere BRAIN me meri BLACK ENERGY samayi hui thi aur jisse maine DARK SPACE me bas halka sa uncapped kar uske AURA ko bahar nikal paaya tha..

par uske baad woh jagah phir se locked ho gayi thi jisse chahakar bhi mai khol nahi paa raha tha but jaise hi ALFREEN ki nazar us band jagah par padi toh usse aisa laga jaise woh usse khol sakti hai aur isiliye usne apni PURE BLACK ENERGY ke AURA ko mere brain me transfer kiya aur tabhi..

CLICK......

ek ajeeb si awaaz ke saath badi asaani se mere brain ka woh band hissa khul gaya..

mujhe bhi ye sab feel ho chuka tha aur isiliye mere aur saath hi ALFREEN ke face par bhi ek smile aa gayi thi..

usse dad ki kahi woh baat jisme unhone kaha tha ki uske bhi ek kaam ki chiz hai jo sirf woh puri kar sakti hai,uska matlab samajh aa chuka tha.

woh issi locked jagah ko open karne ke baare me baat kar rahe the..

khair, jaise hi meri woh locked jagah unlocked hui toh mere pure brain me meri KAALI SHAKTI failte hue settle hone lagi aur jab aisa hua toh kuch aisa hua jisse dekh MAHI aur baaki sab hairan ho gaye..


darasal jis WHITE ENERGY ki urja se meri aur ALFREEN ki body covered thi,woh mere ERRAPEL ki shakti thi,par jaise hi mere brain me meri BLACK ENERGY unlock hui aur woh apni jagah matlab mere subconscious mind me jaakar settle hui toh uski urja bhi mere aur ALFREEN ke sharir ke ird gird fail gayi..

aisa hote hi hum dono ke ird gird faili white roshni ne apna rang badla aur uska colour bhi theek ussi taraf satrangi rainbow ki tarah ho gaya jo is MID-CROSS SPACE ke saamne ki taraf faila hua tha...

hairangi ke saath is naye change ko dekh aur uske nateeje ko jaan un sabke face par khushi bhi dikhne lagi thi...

wahin kuch aur der ALFREEN ke gale laga raha mai taaki uske aur mere andar ghum rahi shaktiyan puri tarah settle ho jaaye aur jab ye process pura hua toh ALFREEN se alag ho gaya mai...


ALFREEN-i am sorry bhai....


alag hote hi mujhe dekh ye pehle shabd nikle ALFREEN ke mooh se jisse sun bas ek pal dekha maine usse aur phir...


MAI-cover them...


meri baat sun aur uske matlab ko samajh agle hi pal ALFREEN ne apni AGATHOKAK powers ko turant use me laaya aur khudke saath MAHI, ACCHUTA, SLUNDER BRAWNY, HIDA aur SHOWHI ko bhi apni dono shakti ke daayre me lete hue cover kar liya aur uske aisa karte hi..

apne andar jhaank ERRAPEL aur BLACK ENERGY ki shaktiyon ko ek sahi anupaat ke hisaab se apne dono haathon ne liya maine aur phir..


BOOOMMMMMMM...

apne dono haathon ko hamare saamne dikh rahe us saptrangi SHIELD ki taraf kar diya maine aur mere aisa karte hi meri dono shaktiyan us SHIELD se lagatar takrane lagi aur aisa hote hi...


TADDDDAKKKKK....

dheere dheere woh saptrangi duel energy shield tadakne laga... aisa hote waqt jaisa mujhe andaza tha, us shield se bohot se attack beams nikal humari taraf aaye par ALFREEN ke cover ki wajah se woh attack beams un sabko nuksaan nahi pahuncha paaye..

wahi mujhse toh un beams ki hi shakti bahar nikal rahi thi isiliye mujhpar un beams ka koi asar hua hi nahi...

khair,lagatar tadakte hue kuch der baad jab mere rays ne us pure shield ko naapte hue usse cover kar liya toh...

BOOMMM.......

ek tez dhamake ke saath woh shield toot gayi aur aisa hote hu hum sabke saamne real view aa chuka tha...


SHOWHI-SHOWHI ka ghar,uska planet...MIRO..

bade excitement se bhar saamne dikh rahe ek planet ko dekh uspar point karte hue kahi ye baat SHOWHI ne..

MIRO ko yun door se dekh sabhi excited dikh rahe the..smile mere bhi face par thi par mere smile ka reason kuch aur tha..

darasal mujhe yahan se sirf MIRO planet nahi,balki uske environment ke theek entrance point par ho rahi hulchul bhi saaf dikh rahi thi..

mai dekh raha tha ki VIDEOUS ne apne kuch ELITE WARRIORS humare swagat ke liye wahan tainat rakhe hain..

un WARRIORS ki strength feel kar bhi mai kaafi impressed tha aur woh isiliye kyunki woh sab the toh waise bhi kaafi powerful par unki taakat har guzarte pal ke saath nurture hote hue aur badhti jaa rahi thi...

aisa hone ke kaaran ko jaanta tha mai aur isiliye hi muskura raha tha mai...

un ELITE WARRIORS ke roop me VIDEOUS ne hamare saamne ek super strong wall ka nirman kiya tha jisse todne ke baad hi hum MIRO me entry kar sakte the..

ye sab dekh muskurate hue...


MAI-aakhir chuppa kya raha hai tu.....!!! anyways,i accept your challenge...waise bhi,meri behen ke har aansu ka hisaab tere saath tera har banda dega..

waada hai mera...


apni hi chaalon se thak kar tu ek din BEHAAL HO JAAYEGA....

tu aaj ki woh taarikh hai jo aage chal kar guzra SAAL HO JAAYEGA...

bhej,jitne aadmi bhej sakta hai tu...

tere har pyaade ko itna maarunga ki unki taklif se tera pichwada LAAL HO JAAYEGA...




















AAJ KE LIYE ITNA HI.....




















AAPKA APNA V....J....
kya kahu bhai samj nahi araha
ye update padh kar tarif karuga to
Tarif bi sarmajayegi 😊
Ek dam shandar update tha ye to
Ajke is update me apne jese story me jan daldi ho esa laga



Of mood ko haapy mood me badal diya apne to

Thanks bro
 
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Rahul

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Kya likh diya
Raaz Mahi ka bhai?????

Kaha hmee inka rishta paka samjhe rahee hai
Aur kaha aapne
Bhai bana diya
edit kar diya bhai waise kya farak padta hai ye koi romantic story to hai nai aur shadi waise bhi nai honi to samjho raaz sabka bhai hai ok
 

Rahul

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hain!!!ye kya logic hua bhala..

ab har mobbat ki manzil shaadi nahi hoti,iska ye matlab toh nahi ki ishq ke jazbaat hi badal den..
wo raaz na apna paglu ekdam usko pyar mohbbat na aati hai to ghanta romance karega wo..uske liye ladka ladki dono barabar hain na wo sabko koot deta hai jo ho samne
 
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