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Update 24: First Experience - 1

Ab tak:
Ese hi idhar udhar ki baate kr ke hum lift k paas pahochte hai..jaise hi hum lift mai jaate..mujhe kuch shararat sujhti hai to pehle to mai dekhta koi floor pai rookne to nahi waali lift..wo mere thoda piche khadi kuch baat kr rahi thi..jaise hi lift uppar jaane lagi to turatn piche mud k sanjana ko lift k corner pai lagaaya or kiss krne lagaa.. Pehle to wo ek dum shock ho gayi apne aapko chudaane lagi pr phir wo bhi mera saath dene lagi..humaara kiss wild hone lagaa..hum dono ek dusre hotho ko chus rahe the..ki tabhi lift ruki 7th floor pr to hum turant alag ho gaye pr kisi ne bahaar se darwaza nahi khola..to fatafat apne aapko sahi kiya..or 8th floor pai ruki lift..to sanjana ek baar fataafat mere hotho pai hoth chuaa k nikal gayi...shaam ko milte hai..

Mai smile krte hue darwaza bndh krta hu aur ghar pai chalaa jata hu…

Aage:
Fir 1 haftaa kuch khaas hua nahi 1-2 baar shop pai gayaa to Ritika se dosti badhi thi...Prachi se bhi milne wala tha pr uske parents ka jaane ka cancel ho gayaa tha to koi mauka nahi mil paya aur koi dusra mauka bhi nahi mil paa rahaa tha..Friends se roz mulakat ho jaati thi kuch na kuch bakchodi hoti rehti thi..Savere Aarushi exercise krte samay milti thi par koi na koi bahana krke usse taal rahaa tha...Sanjana se bhi kuch khatti mithi harkate hoti rehti thi pr usse kuch jyada ka mauka nahi mil paa raha tha..NIA headquarter se bhi pataa chal chukaa tha ki sab thik hai mera informer ko 15-20 lagnaa tha recovery k liye, Malik k baare mujhe kuch bhi pataa krne ko manaa kiya gayaa tha..

Shaam 4 baje

Me: Didi mai terrace pr jaa rahaa hu tahelne (Didi ander apne room mai kuch book padh rahi thi)

Didi: Thik hai

Me: To mai abhi terrace pai jata hu daily hum friends 5 baje milte hai aur bakchodi chodte hai pr aaj mai kuch jldi aa gayaa tha..to abhi mai tahel raha tha ki entry hoti Aarushi ki…(Man mai: Lag gye)

Aarushi: Hi Daksh, kaise ho..?

Me: bas bdhiya hu aapke saamne hu vaise do din aap dikhe nahi savere exercise krne..

Aarushi: Haa wo kuch bahaar gayi thi..

Me: Chalo chalte chalte baat krte hai mai idhar apne man mai kuch bahane soch rhaa tha kai kaise jldi se jldi idhar se niklu..

Abhi idhar udhar ki baate krte hue jaise hi mujhe abhi aayegi wo topic pai mujhe ek bahana sujha..

Me: Achaa listen mujhe wo Saurabh k yahaa jana hoga kuch kaamse bulaya tha achaanak yaad aaya..

Aarushi: Saurabh wahi na wo 8th floor wala..wo to abhi mai kuch der pehle lift se aayi thi to usko baat krte suna k wo to kahi jaane ka bol raha tha 4 baje aur shaam 6-7 baje aane ka bol rahaa tha..

Me:(Iski maa ka saurabh, marwaa diya tune) Oh achaa..fir mai kuch aur sochne lagaa..k tabhi Aarushi ne bola

Aarushi: To bataao mujhe Kalpana k saath kya, kaise hua tha..aur abhi koi bahana nahi chalega 1 hafte se dekh rahi tum aur kalapana koi na koi bahana krke mujhe taal rahe ho..

Me: Wo mai nahi bataa paaunga. I am sorry mai nikalne lagaa ki usne bola

Aarushi: Matlab mai ab ye maan lu ki tum sirf bahaar se dikhaane k liye ache bane firte ho blki andar se ho tum hawas k pujaari hi..pehle din hi smajh gayi thi tum jaise ladko ko mai achi tarah jaanti hu..

Me: Thodi aankho mai nami aa jaati hai or gusse mai haa mai hawas ka pujaari hu bas aur please tum bhi mujhse dur hi rehna..

Kalapana: Piche se tabhi awaaz aati hai..Aarushi how dare you to say like this..

Aarushi: To aur kya kahu tum bhi to aisi hi ho apne pati ko chodke pataa nahi kahaa kahaa muh kala krti hogi..

Ye Kalpana k bhi aankho mai nami aa jaati hai..

Me: Jorr se Aarushi..limit mai rehke baat karo jab sach na pataa ho to…

Kalapana: No Daksh, aur Aarushi ki taraf dekhte hue tumhe sach jaanna hai na to mai bataati hu..sach kya hai..

Flashback Kalpana ki zubaani (10 months before)

Amit(Kalpana’s Husband): Aaaahhhhh...tumhaari bahot yaad aati kalpana udhar...ghar aakar tumhe pyaar krke jo sukoon milta hai..mai bataa nahi sktaa meri jaan..

Me: Aaaahhhhh...Amit aur jorrr se...Mujhe bhi tumhaari bahot yaad aati hai Amit 6 mahine kaise nikaalti hu mai hi jaanti hu..tumhaare pyaar k liye taras jaati hu..Haaa ese hi yesss..yess….aaaahhhh amit..

Amit: Mai jaanta hu meri jaan but Army man se shaadi ki hai to..intzaar to krna padega hum dono ko..because duty first baaki sab baad mai..

Me: Haaa..esee….yeeahhhhh amit...mai aa rahi hu faster… uffffff…. Aaaaahhhhh...aur mai jhad jaati hu..

Amit: I am also cumming my love...ohhhhh...ahhhhhhh…..

Aur hum dono bed pai nange lait jaate hai..jab saanse sambhalti hai

Me: Amit ek baar aur...please…

Amit: Oh...meri jaan mai bhi chaahta hu...ki tabhi ek call aati hai..

Me: Itni raat ko kiska call aa gayaa..

Amit(On Call): kuch baat sunta hai ki fir gambhir ho jata hai..aur jawaab deta hai Haa sir… Yes sir.. Ok

Me: Kya hua kiska phone tha..

Amit:(kapde pahente hue) Major sir ka duty call..mayusi mai kal hi nikalna hoga savere 5 baje train hai..

Me: Pr abhi to 5 din aur hai Humne plan kiya tha hum ghumne jaayenge..

Amit: Mai jaanta hu meri jaan pr Border pai meri jyada jarurat jung chidh gayi hai..

Me: (Rote hue) Nahi aap nahi jaaoge pleaseeee… bol do mai nahi aa sktaa..

Amit: Gale lagaate hue nahi kr sktaa mai…Esa mujhe jana hi hoga..

Me: ruaansi awaaz mai fir waapis kab aaoge..

Amit: mayusi se 6 mahine baad..

Me: Aur mai unke gale lag jaati hu..gale lage hue hi kab mujhe nind aa jaati hai pataa hi nahi chaltaa ghadi mai bhi 12 baj chuke the..

Jaise hi mai savere uth ti hu to mere aas paas koi nahi hota Amit..Amit.. jab koi awaaz nahi aati to mai uthti hu aur apne aapko kambal k niche nangi paati hu to mujhe raat ka yaad aata hai to turant time dekhti hu to abhi ghadi mai 6 baje hue the..to rone lagti hu ki mujhe ek chitthi milti hai jo amit ne mere liye likhi thi.. Wo pdhte hue meri aankho mai thodi nami, thoda gussa, thoda pyaar aa jaata hai aur phir apne aapko sambhaalke aansu pahochti hu aur chitthi ko chum k I Love You amit.

Fir kya ese hi kuch 2 mahine nikal jaate hai Amit ki yaad mai aur unki ek aur usi bich chitthi aati hai jisme likha tha ki wo sahi salaamat hai aur jld hi aayenge to mai ab normal ho gayi thi kyunki mujhe andar se to pataa hi hai aur garv hai k ek fauji ki biwi hu..Aur ye hi meri zindagi hai ab..fir kuch 2 din baad meri life mai entry krta hai Daksh mai nahi jaanti thi pehle k ye same flat mai rehta hai

Mai market se activa leke aa rahi thi saath mai meri saas bhi thi ki achaanak ek gaadi wrong side se nikal ti hai mere paas se to mai disbalance ho jaati hu aur accident ho jata hai jisme maire ghutne aur haath koni pai chot aati hai activa k slip khaane ki vajah pr meri kuch jyada hui chot aa jaati hai sir mai bhi lagti hai to mummy ji behosh ho gayi thi..

Mera ye first experience tha to mujhe maalum nahi chal rahaa tha kya karu kaafi bhid bhi jamaa ho gayi thi aur mai rote hue mummyji mummyji pukaarte hue apni saas ko uthaa rahi thi pr wo uth hi nahi rahi thi..pr fir jab mai unko apne kandhe pr uthaane lagi to mujhe bhi tez dard tab mujhe pataa chalaa ki mujhe kaafi chot aayi hai..Please anybody help me ambulance bulaao koyi..

Ladkaa: Kalpana Bhabhi ye kya hua aapko...Aur auntyji ko kya hua..ye to behosh ho gaye hai aur aapko kaafi chot aayi hai..Ambulance phone kiya

Me: Tum kon ho mujhe kaise jaante ho..

Ladkaa: Abhi ye important nahi hai…khoon beh rahaa hai auntyji ka inhe pehle hospital le jaana hoga.aayiye meri gaadi mai..aap chal skti hai..

Me: Nahi maire ghutno pr chot aayi hai aur mauch bhi aa gayi hai khadi nahi ho paa rahi hu..

Aur phir fataafat wo ladkaa aunty ji ko uthata hai aur apni car mai bethata hai aur phir wo mujhe bhi apni gaud mai uthaane ki koshish krta hai pr..mai use manaa kr deti hu..
 
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Update 24: First Experience - 1

Ab tak:
Ese hi idhar udhar ki baate kr ke hum lift k paas pahochte hai..jaise hi hum lift mai jaate..mujhe kuch shararat sujhti hai to pehle to mai dekhta koi floor pai rookne to nahi waali lift..wo mere thoda piche khadi kuch baat kr rahi thi..jaise hi lift uppar jaane lagi to turatn piche mud k sanjana ko lift k corner pai lagaaya or kiss krne lagaa.. Pehle to wo ek dum shock ho gayi apne aapko chudaane lagi pr phir wo bhi mera saath dene lagi..humaara kiss wild hone lagaa..hum dono ek dusre hotho ko chus rahe the..ki tabhi lift ruki 7th floor pr to hum turant alag ho gaye pr kisi ne bahaar se darwaza nahi khola..to fatafat apne aapko sahi kiya..or 8th floor pai ruki lift..to sanjana ek baar fataafat mere hotho pai hoth chuaa k nikal gayi...shaam ko milte hai..

Mai smile krte hue darwaza bndh krta hu aur ghar pai chalaa jata hu…

Aage:
Fir 1 haftaa kuch khaas hua nahi 1-2 baar shop pai gayaa to Ritika se dosti badhi thi...Prachi se bhi milne wala tha pr uske parents ka jaane ka cancel ho gayaa tha to koi mauka nahi mil paya aur koi dusra mauka bhi nahi mil paa rahaa tha..Friends se roz mulakat ho jaati thi kuch na kuch bakchodi hoti rehti thi..Savere Aarushi exercise krte samay milti thi par koi na koi bahana krke usse taal rahaa tha...Sanjana se bhi kuch khatti mithi harkate hoti rehti thi pr usse kuch jyada ka mauka nahi mil paa raha tha..NIA headquarter se bhi pataa chal chukaa tha ki sab thik hai mera informer ko 15-20 lagnaa tha recovery k liye, Malik k baare mujhe kuch bhi pataa krne ko manaa kiya gayaa tha..

Shaam 4 baje

Me: Didi mai terrace pr jaa rahaa hu tahelne (Didi ander apne room mai kuch book padh rahi thi)

Didi: Thik hai

Me: To mai abhi terrace pai jata hu daily hum friends 5 baje milte hai aur bakchodi chodte hai pr aaj mai kuch jldi aa gayaa tha..to abhi mai tahel raha tha ki entry hoti Aarushi ki…(Man mai: Lag gye)

Aarushi: Hi Daksh, kaise ho..?

Me: bas bdhiya hu aapke saamne hu vaise do din aap dikhe nahi savere exercise krne..

Aarushi: Haa wo kuch bahaar gayi thi..

Me: Chalo chalte chalte baat krte hai mai idhar apne man mai kuch bahane soch rhaa tha kai kaise jldi se jldi idhar se niklu..

Abhi idhar udhar ki baate krte hue jaise hi mujhe abhi aayegi wo topic pai mujhe ek bahana sujha..

Me: Achaa listen mujhe wo Saurabh k yahaa jana hoga kuch kaamse bulaya tha achaanak yaad aaya..

Aarushi: Saurabh wahi na wo 8th floor wala..wo to abhi mai kuch der pehle lift se aayi thi to usko baat krte suna k wo to kahi jaane ka bol raha tha 4 baje aur shaam 6-7 baje aane ka bol rahaa tha..

Me:(Iski maa ka saurabh, marwaa diya tune) Oh achaa..fir mai kuch aur sochne lagaa..k tabhi Aarushi ne bola

Aarushi: To bataao mujhe Kalpana k saath kya, kaise hua tha..aur abhi koi bahana nahi chalega 1 hafte se dekh rahi tum aur kalapana koi na koi bahana krke mujhe taal rahe ho..

Me: Wo mai nahi bataa paaunga. I am sorry mai nikalne lagaa ki usne bola

Aarushi: Matlab mai ab ye maan lu ki tum sirf bahaar se dikhaane k liye ache bane firte ho blki andar se ho tum hawas k pujaari hi..pehle din hi smajh gayi thi tum jaise ladko ko mai achi tarah jaanti hu..

Me: Thodi aankho mai nami aa jaati hai or gusse mai haa mai hawas ka pujaari hu bas aur please tum bhi mujhse dur hi rehna..

Kalapana: Piche se tabhi awaaz aati hai..Aarushi how dare you to say like this..

Aarushi: To aur kya kahu tum bhi to aisi hi ho apne pati ko chodke pataa nahi kahaa kahaa muh kala krti hogi..

Ye Kalpana k bhi aankho mai nami aa jaati hai..

Me: Jorr se Aarushi..limit mai rehke baat karo jab sach na pataa ho to…

Kalapana: No Daksh, aur Aarushi ki taraf dekhte hue tumhe sach jaanna hai na to mai bataati hu..sach kya hai..

Flashback Kalpana ki zubaani (10 months before)

Amit(Kalpana’s Husband): Aaaahhhhh...tumhaari bahot yaad aati kalpana udhar...ghar aakar tumhe pyaar krke jo sukoon milta hai..mai bataa nahi sktaa meri jaan..

Me: Aaaahhhhh...Amit aur jorrr se...Mujhe bhi tumhaari bahot yaad aati hai Amit 6 mahine kaise nikaalti hu mai hi jaanti hu..tumhaare pyaar k liye taras jaati hu..Haaa ese hi yesss..yess….aaaahhhh amit..

Amit: Mai jaanta hu meri jaan but Army man se shaadi ki hai to..intzaar to krna padega hum dono ko..because duty first baaki sab baad mai..

Me: Haaa..esee….yeeahhhhh amit...mai aa rahi hu faster… uffffff…. Aaaaahhhhh...aur mai jhad jaati hu..

Amit: I am also cumming my love...ohhhhh...ahhhhhhh…..

Aur hum dono bed pai nange lait jaate hai..jab saanse sambhalti hai

Me: Amit ek baar aur...please…

Amit: Oh...meri jaan mai bhi chaahta hu...ki tabhi ek call aati hai..

Me: Itni raat ko kiska call aa gayaa..

Amit(On Call): kuch baat sunta hai ki fir gambhir ho jata hai..aur jawaab deta hai Haa sir… Yes sir.. Ok

Me: Kya hua kiska phone tha..

Amit:(kapde pahente hue) Major sir ka duty call..mayusi mai kal hi nikalna hoga savere 5 baje train hai..

Me: Pr abhi to 5 din aur hai Humne plan kiya tha hum ghumne jaayenge..

Amit: Mai jaanta hu meri jaan pr Border pai meri jyada jarurat jung chidh gayi hai..

Me: (Rote hue) Nahi aap nahi jaaoge pleaseeee… bol do mai nahi aa sktaa..

Amit: Gale lagaate hue nahi kr sktaa mai…Esa mujhe jana hi hoga..

Me: ruaansi awaaz mai fir waapis kab aaoge..

Amit: mayusi se 6 mahine baad..

Me: Aur mai unke gale lag jaati hu..gale lage hue hi kab mujhe nind aa jaati hai pataa hi nahi chaltaa ghadi mai bhi 12 baj chuke the..

Jaise hi mai savere uth ti hu to mere aas paas koi nahi hota Amit..Amit.. jab koi awaaz nahi aati to mai uthti hu aur apne aapko kambal k niche nangi paati hu to mujhe raat ka yaad aata hai to turant time dekhti hu to abhi ghadi mai 6 baje hue the..to rone lagti hu ki mujhe ek chitthi milti hai jo amit ne mere liye likhi thi.. Wo pdhte hue meri aankho mai thodi nami, thoda gussa, thoda pyaar aa jaata hai aur phir apne aapko sambhaalke aansu pahochti hu aur chitthi ko chum k I Love You amit.

Fir kya ese hi kuch 2 mahine nikal jaate hai Amit ki yaad mai aur unki ek aur usi bich chitthi aati hai jisme likha tha ki wo sahi salaamat hai aur jld hi aayenge to mai ab normal ho gayi thi kyunki mujhe andar se to pataa hi hai aur garv hai k ek fauji ki biwi hu..Aur ye hi meri zindagi hai ab..fir kuch 2 din baad meri life mai entry krta hai Daksh mai nahi jaanti thi pehle k ye same flat mai rehta hai

Mai market se activa leke aa rahi thi saath mai meri saas bhi thi ki achaanak ek gaadi wrong side se nikal ti hai mere paas se to mai disbalance ho jaati hu aur accident ho jata hai jisme maire ghutne aur haath koni pai chot aati hai activa k slip khaane ki vajah pr meri kuch jyada hui chot aa jaati hai sir mai bhi lagti hai to mummy ji behosh ho gayi thi..

Mera ye first experience tha to mujhe maalum nahi chal rahaa tha kya karu kaafi bhid bhi jamaa ho gayi thi aur mai rote hue mummyji mummyji pukaarte hue apni saas ko uthaa rahi thi pr wo uth hi nahi rahi thi..pr fir jab mai unko apne kandhe pr uthaane lagi to mujhe bhi tez dard tab mujhe pataa chalaa ki mujhe kaafi chot aayi hai..Please anybody help me ambulance bulaao koyi..

Ladkaa: Kalpana Bhabhi ye kya hua aapko...Aur auntyji ko kya hua..ye to behosh ho gaye hai aur aapko kaafi chot aayi hai..Ambulance phone kiya

Me: Tum kon ho mujhe kaise jaante ho..

Ladkaa: Abhi ye important nahi hai…khoon beh rahaa hai auntyji ka inhe pehle hospital le jaana hoga.aayiye meri gaadi mai..aap chal skti hai..

Me: Nahi maire ghutno pr chot aayi hai aur mauch bhi aa gayi hai khadi nahi ho paa rahi hu..

Aur phir fataafat wo ladkaa aunty ji ko uthata hai aur apni car mai bethata hai aur phir wo mujhe bhi apni gaud mai uthaane ki koshish krta hai pr..mai use manaa kr deti hu..
kahani kafi achhi likh rahe ho bhai lekin meri aap se sikayat hai ki aapka update itana slow hai ki kahani se tartamyata chhut jati hai. yahi karan hai shayad ki review kafi kam aa rahi hai. kripaya regular update de to fir padhane main aur review mai maza aaye.
 
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kahani kafi achhi likh rahe ho bhai lekin meri aap se sikayat hai ki aapka update itana slow hai ki kahani se tartamyata chhut jati hai. yahi karan hai shayad ki review kafi kam aa rahi hai. kripaya regular update de to fir padhane main aur review mai maza aaye.
Shukriya dost..and
Koshish jaari hai dost regular update dene..jld hi aapki shikayat dur hogi..

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