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Fantasy ATTITUDE (KABHI ANGEL KABHI DEVIL) ( Completed )

Raju0053

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hahahaha....you have always been an admirer of my writing skills brother..

and also have played a big role in keeping my spirits high while writing this story..

thanks a ton for that...

aur agar aapko ye update pasand aaya hai toh aage third aur final level par jo hone waala hai,usse padhkar i am quite sure ki aap thrilled bhi honge, emotional bhi honge,but most importantly,ek tez edranal rush feel karenge apne andar...

kyunki RAAZ,just like the HELL'S BLAZING FIRE...IS COMING BACK...
Bhai bhut zada intezar h brother raaz ka Kaher tute
 

Rdx sam

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lot's of unexpected chizen hone waali hai brother..

aur aapke speculation ke jawab me aane waale level aur phir DEVIL'S HEAVEN me RAAZ and company survivor bhi honge par saath hi saath winner bhi...

saath bane rahiye
Aapki story me jo sabse alag emotional touch h vo h ek pitah ka pyar or sacrifice apne baccho ke liye...
Jayadatar kahaniyon me sirf MAA ki mamta or uska dular hi sunne ko milta h lekin aapki story me vo undekhi fellings chupi hue hoti h jo ek pitah ka apne baccho ke liye pyar h vo ise sabhi kahaniyon se alag karti....
Phir chahePart1 me jairaaj ka Vikram ke liye pyar ho ya part2 me Ronit ka Raaz ke liye pyar...
 

meehacker

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hahahaha....you have always been an admirer of my writing skills brother..

and also have played a big role in keeping my spirits high while writing this story..

thanks a ton for that...

aur agar aapko ye update pasand aaya hai toh aage third aur final level par jo hone waala hai,usse padhkar i am quite sure ki aap thrilled bhi honge, emotional bhi honge,but most importantly,ek tez edranal rush feel karenge apne andar...

kyunki RAAZ,just like the HELL'S BLAZING FIRE...IS COMING BACK...
May be fight between Alfreen and Raaz 🤔
 

23n24

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AB TAK AAPNE PADHA KI JAHAN EK TARAF ALCAZAR ME RAAZ & COMPANY KI MULAKAT ANWIR SE HOTI HAI WAHIN DUSRI TARAF WOH SAB INFERIOR LEVEL KE FINAL CHALLENGE KO SUCCESSFULLY PAAR KAR LETE HAIN.


AB AAGE:-



CHAPTER-3


(THE DEVIL'S HAVEN,THE SACRIFICE & THE PERFECT EPILOGUE)



UPDATE-146



PLANET-ELYSIAN


PLACE-MEDIAL LEVEL



THE QUEST CONTINOUS






OH TERI....YE TOH SCENE HI BADAL GAYA....


kaali sukhi aur halki garam zamin ke edge se thoda door khade the hum par jahan hum khade the,aage ke is scene ko dekh kar kahi ye baat ACCHUTA ne....

hum sabko ALCAZAR ke roof top par pahuncha hamare pairon ke neeche se woh carpet numa kaali shakti gayab ho gayi..

aur thik ussi waqt woh pura ALCAZAR apne roof top ke saath jisme hum sab khade the, puri tarah deh gaya..

aisa hote hi hume us roof top ke saath gir jaana chahiye the but aisa hua nahi..

roof top ke dehte hi hamari location aur scene dono change ho gaya..

ek andheri gufa jaisi jagah ki sarhad par khade the hum sab..

halki halki garmahat thi is jagah par lekin us araam se jhel jaane waali garmi me bhi ek ajeeb si ghutan thi jisse saaf saaf mehsoos kar rahe the hum 6...

aur ussi garmi aur usse paida hone waali ghutan ko feel kar...


HIDA-kaafi exhausting hai yahan ka mahoul...

SLUNDER-haan woh toh hai..but hume karna kya hai,ye kaise pata chalega..???


THAT'S WHAT I AM HERE FOR....


ek kaala dhuan jo hum sabse thoda door ussi kaale maidan ke thik edge par prakat hua,ussise nikli thi ye awaaz jisse sun is baar hum bilkul hairan nahi hue the kyunki hum jaante the ki ye ANWIR hi hai..

waise bhi usne kaha tha ki challenge ke baad mulakat hogi aur as promised,woh yahan aa chuka tha...

khair,ab tak woh kaala dhuan apne asli swaroop matlab ANWIR me badal chuka tha jiske baad..


ANWIR-first things first...

well done guyzz... and to be specific,well done MAHI & RAAZ...absolutely brilliant...

apni thodi bohot shaktiyon ka jaise upyog kiya tum logon ne, ummid nahi thi mujhe ki waisa kuch kar paaoge...

i am really impressed....

MAI-just cut the crap ANWIR.. point par aa aur bata ki is MEDIAL LEVEL me hume kaun kaun se CHALLENGES cross karne hain...

ANWIR-samajh nahi aata,taarif karun yaa mazak udaaun...


kyunki gazab hai tera woh jazba,jisme khawish hai LADHNE KI...

do chaar baatein karta jaa,itni bhi kya jaldi hai MARNE KI...

ACCHUTA-arre waah..mai bhi ek...


tujhse baat karne se goonga hona BEHTAR HAI....

ladhte hue mar jaana teri is sadhi shakal dekhne se toh BEHTAR HAI...


WAAHHH,KYA BOLA HAI YAAR..SACH KA AAIYNA...


SLUNDER aur BRAWNY ne taarif karte hue taali bajayi jispar MAHI aur HIDA bhi has diye jisse dekh ANWIR naaraz nahi hua balki woh bhi muskura diya aur...


ANWIR-zyada waqt nahi hai tum sabke paas.. isiliye jab tak jitna has sakte ho,chill out kar sakte ho, karlo..

anyway,jaisa ki maine ALCAZAR me kaha tha, it's time for you four to get some prize...


ACCHUTA, SLUNDER, BRAWNY aur HIDA ko dekh apne haathon ko rub karte hue kahi ye baat ANWIR ne jiske baad usne apne dono haathon aas paas karte hue ek spherical shape diya..

aur jab aisa hua toh ek gol kaali urja us spherical khaali space ke beech prakat hui..

par hairan karne waali baat ye thi ki us kaali urja se bane ball ke andar se pure WHITE ENERGY ki urja mehsoos ho rahi thi..

aur aisa kyun tha,woh agle hi pal clear bhi ho gaya...

woh kaali urja se bana gola jab prakat hua toh uske agle hi pal usne khudko unfold karte hue khol diya aur jab aisa hua toh uske andar se bahar nikle 4 keys joki WHITE ENERGY se damak rahe the..

un keys ko dekh mere dimag me kuch baatein clear ho gayi..

mai samajh gaya ki woh kaali urja khud VIDEOUS ki hai..

kyunki sirf uski khudki kaali urja hi WHITE ENERGY ki urja ko khudme contain karne ki kaabiliyat rakhti hai...

wahin saath hi saath mujhe un keys ka ganit bhi samajh me aa gaya tha...

khair,jaise hi woh chaaron keys us kaali urja ke daayre se bahar aayi,woh bijli ki gati se aage badhi aur ACCHUTA, SLUNDER, BRAWNY aur HIDA ke andar ek ek kar sama gayi..

aisa hote waqt unhe pain bilkul nahi hua.. aankhon me hairani liye woh ANWIR ko dekh hi rahe the ki tabhi...

KHADAKKKKH..

un chaaron ko apne andar kuch halka sa open hota hua mehsoos hua aur aisa hote hi..

AHHHHHH....

ek aah si nikal gayi un sabke mooh se par ye aah dard ki wajah se nahi balki us shakti ke pravah ki wajah se nikli thi jo abhi sudden unke bodies me flow hona start hui thi..

us energy ke flow ko feel karye hue hairat bhari aankhon se woh chaaron ANWIR ko aise dekhne lage maano aankhon se hi puch rahe hon ki kya woh jo soch rahe hain,woh sach hai..!!!!

aur us nazar aur sawal ko ANWIR bhi pehchaan gaya tha isiliye...


ANWIR-sahi soch rahe ho guyzz...

is waqt tumhare sharir me wahi GOD GIFTED POWERS ghum raha ha jisse humare GOD ne lock kar diya tha..

but filhal us power ka 50 percent hi unlock hua hai....

baaki ka 50 percent abhi locked hai..

aur woh locked part tab unlock hoga jab tum ye level matlab MEDIAL LEVEL cross karoge..


ANWIR ki baat sun aur apne sharir me dobara shakti ke sanchar ko mehsoos kar behadh khush ho chuke the woh chaaron but phir un sabke brain me ek sawal bhi saath hi ubhra jiske baad woh kuch kehne ko hue but tabhi..


ANWIR-jaanta hun kya sawal puchna chahte ho tum sab..??

yahi naa ki itni dariyadili ka kya matlab..???

toh jawab simple bhi hai...DEVIL'S HAVEN jaise khataranak jagah ke safar par bina apni shakti ke nikle ho tum sab..

jitna ye faisla bewakufaana hai,utna hi daring bhi..and our GOD loves this ATTITUDE..

pehle level ko toh tum sab in dono ki madad se cross kar liye but is level me tum aisa nahi kar paaoge..

waise toh unlocked 50 percent shaktiyon ke baad bhi ye kaafi mushkil hone waala hai but iske bina agar tum mare toh hamare GOD aur LORD,dono ke saamne is RAAZ ke paas ek excuse hoga ki fight unfair thi..

aur isse maarne se pehle ye sukoon LORD aur GOD isse kaise de sakte hain...!!!

anyways, congrats apni regained powers ke liye..jab tak isse enjoy kar sakte ho,kar lo..

kyunki tum sabki jaan ke saath ye bhi khatm ho hi jaayegi..

MAI-stop being pain in the ass ANWIR.. matlab ki ulti kar aur bata ki kaun kaun se challenge hai is MEDIAL LEVEL me..

ANWIR-kaun kaun se challenges..!!!dude, second level me sirf ek hi challenge hai..

haan ye baat alag hai ki woh ek challenge bhi tum sabke aukaad ke hissab se kaafi hai...


ANWIR ki baat hairani waali bhi thi but khushi waali bhi..

yaa toh ek jhatke me level paar hoga yaa phir hum hi paar ho jaayenge..

fair enough...

abhi hum ye sab soch hi rahe the ki tabhi apni baat ko aage badhate hue...


ANWIR-jaate jaate ek aur baat bata deta hun..

agar kisi tarah tumne luckily is level ko bhi cross kar liya fir tum sabke saamne hoga HOVERING LEVEL...

us level me tumhara saamna hoga DARK WARRIORS ke 5 elite MEMBERS se jinme se ek mai bhi hun...

ek baat boli thi tumne ALCAZAR me mujhe RAAZ...

sher aur kutte waali..agar tum is level ko cross kar wahan pahunch paaye jo mai khud dil se chahata hun,tab mai tumhe kutte aur sher ke beech ka fark ache se samjha dunga...

MAI-tere ussi dil ke saath saath tere saare armaan bhi bahar nikalunga mai..

that's a RAAZ promise...

ANWIR-kaun kiska kya nikalta hai,we will see...khair, filhal is level ke ek maatra challenge ke baare me jaan lo..

simple hai..ye jo kaala maidaan dikh raha hai naa,isse cross kar jaao...

challenge over...

and before you ask me about the catch..aisa tumhe aag ke beech se guzarte hue karna hai...

simple,i guess...hahahahaa..

arre haan,one last thing,tum dono ke woh weird paaltu janwar aur bird,agar is challenge ko cross kar paaye tum dono toh tumhe mil jaayenge..

ACCHUTA-par unhe toh first LEVEL ke baad RAAZ aur MAHI ko handover kiya jaane waala tha..!!!

ANWIR-let m remind you that you all are not in a position to debate aur demand anything..

aur waise bhi,abhi tum sabka focus challange ko complete karne par hona chahiye,animal rights ke mudde par baat karne ka nahi..


apni baat bolte hue ANWIR ne apne dono haath upar uthaye..aur uske waisa karte hi..

BHAPPPPPPP..

ek jhatke me woh pura kaala maidan 8 se 10 feet unche aag ke lapto se jal utha...

waise bhi ye jagah pehle se hi garam thi,aur ab in badi unchi aag ki lapton ki wajah se woh garmi kaafi badh gayi thi but sehen karne laayak thi..

us aag ki lapton ko normally hum dekh rahe the aur ANWIR muskurata hua hume..

yunhi kuch seconds muskurate rehne ke baad...


ANWIR-asaan lag raha hoga,haina...waise jaankari ke liye bata dun ki JWALAM NIRODHAKAM(FIRE STOPPER)DEHEM VIROTAKAM(BODY SECURER)AGNI ANGAM VARDHUNIYEM(FIRE HOTNESS TOLERANCE)

ye saare spells aur aisa koi bhi spell joki aag se bachne ke liye use me laaya jaata hai,yahan kaam me nahi aayega aur woh isiliye kyunki ye dehekti aag maamuli aag nahi balki...


MAI-HELL'S BLAZING FIRE HAI..


ANWIR ki baat ko maine pura kiya jisse sun MAHI aur uske saath woh chaaron ko laga ek tez jhatka..

is jhatke ke lagne ka main reason ye tha ki agar wakayi hamare saamne HELL'S BLAZING FIRE thi toh ye challenge hamare liye ek suicide mission jaisi thi..

kyunki HELL'S BLAZING FIRE khud GOD ke wrath se bani aag thi jiske beech se toh VIDEOUS bhi nahi guzar sakta tha..

halaki ye aag yahan kaise pahunchi hai,ye bhi samajh aa chuka tha hum sabko..

VIDEOUS ke paas thi pure BLACK ENERGY..woh energy jisse apnaane waale humans ko tadpane ke liye hi GOD ne ye BLAZING FIRE banayi thi..

aur kyunki is aag se DEVIL'S bhi darte the, isiliye ye forbidden nahi tha..

BLACK ENERGY ne khud HELL se is aag ke kuch bhaag ko yahan laakar rakha tha..

aur yun khadi kar di thi hum sabke aage ek deadly situation...

khair,hume seriously sochte dekh zoron se has pada ANWIR aur..


ANWIR-sirf soch kar hi ghabra gaye..

tumhe pata hai abhi tak tum sab normally kaise khade ho..??kyunki is waqt mai tum sabke aur is aag ke beech ek diwal bankar khada hun...

mere sharir par pure KAALI SHAKTI
se bani SHIELD hai..aur ussiki wajah se is aag ki garmi mujhse takrakar rook rahi hai..

but jaise hi mai yahan se gayab ho jaaunga,woh barrier hat jaayega..

aur phir tum sabko pata chalega ki what are you all actually up against..

all the best guyzzz..ek baar phir mai chahta hun ki kisi tarah tum is challenge aur is LEVEL ko paar karo..

kyunki HOVERING LEVEL me mai aur mere saathi tum sabka besabri se intazar kar rahe hain...


DHHHSSSSSSHHHH..

in aakhri shabdon ke saath hi ANWIR dhuan bankar gayan ho gaha aur aisa hote hi usne jo bola tha,woh hone laga..

barrier hath gaya aur jab aisa hua toh..

AHHHHHHHHHH............

ek lay me ek saath dard bhari aah nikli.. par ye aah hum sabke mooh se nahi balki hum sabke rooh se nikli thi..

aur reason.. obvious... aakhir hamare saamne jal rahi HELLS BLAZING FIRE aatma ko hi toh jalati thi...

par kyunki filhal hum sab us FIRE ke daayre se thoda door the, isiliye abhi humari rooh ko sirf ek jhatka sa laga tha.

taklif bhi shanik hi thi par uska asar hum sabke dimag par jaise chhap sa gaya tha...

ACCHUTA, SLUNDER BRAWNY aur HIDA jo ab tak apnne GOD GIFTED POWERS ke 50 percent tak loutne ki khushi mana rahe the,woh khushi bhi us lage hue jhatke ki wajah se dhumil padh chuki thi..

aur MAHI joki LORD OF ANGELS ki beti thi, apne ohde aur ANGEL'S FORM POWER SOURCE ki madad se woh is HELL'S BLAZING FIRE ke beech se araam se nikal sakti thi but aisa tabhi possible tha jab uska woh POWER SOURCE 100 percent tak activate hote hue dusre power source ke saath mil chuka hota but filhal aisa tha nahi...

gambhir soch me dubi hui thi woh bhi is waqt..

wahin in sabse alag mujhe kya karna hai,ye jaan chuka tha mai...

apni jeb me haath daal kuch bahar nikala maine.

ye kuch wahi 3 inch ka red metal box tha jo EXERTION test ke baad SHAILA ne mujhe diya tha.

us waqt jo bhaap is box se nikal rahi thi,usse milta julta bhaap hi filhal mai saamne dehek rahe HELL'S BLAZING FIRE se mehsoos kar raha tha...

khair,us box ko khola maine aur uske andar rakhi cheez joki aur kuch nahi NAAKHUN the,usse dekhne laga..

waise toh pehle bhi box ko khol us naakhun ko dekha tha maine,but uski ehmiyat ab samajh me aayi thi mujhe..

NAAKHUN ek aisi cheez hai jo aag me bhi nahi jalti aur isiliye bakayada is HELL'S FIRE me test karkar is naakhun ko mere liye rakha gaya tha...

jahan ye saari baatein me soch raha tha, wahin ab tak MAHI aur un chaaron ki nazar bhi mere haathon me pakde hue box aur uske andar rakhe nails par padh chuki thi jisse dekh..


MAHI-nails diye the tumhe SOVES SHAILA ne..matlab unhe pehle se hi pata tha ki ek din tum HELL'S BLAZING FIRE se guzroge...

MAI-nahi..pata nahi tha unhe..bas andaza tha..HELL ke fire ka har ounce GOD ke dhyan me rehta hai.

aur jab BLACK ENERGY ne us aag ka kuch portion nikala hoga tab GOD ko aur unse tumhare father ko uske baare me pata chal chuka hoga...

aur tab unhone in nails ke through us heat ko sehne ka tarika nikala hoga...


ye baat bol bohot gambhir mudra me kuch sochne laga mai jisse dekh..


MAHI-but ye toh achi baat hai...tum araam se is HELL'S BLAZING FIRE ke beech se hokar guzar sakte ho..

phir kis soch me goom ho tum...???

MAI-ye maamuli aag nahi hai MAHI.. HELL'S BLAZING FIRE hai..

nails kisi normal aag me kaam aa sakte hain but HELL'S BLAZING FIRE me aisa karna lagbhag naamumkin hai..

is fire me nails D.N.A ki tarah kaam karte hain..

koi bhi shaksh nails ko yahan sirf tabhi use me laa sakta hai jab....

MAHI-us nail par uska paitrik adhikar ho...


meri baat ko pura kiya MAHI ne par aisa karte waqt uske face me ek dard tha aur ye dard tha RONIT ke liye..

nails ke baare me usse andaza ho chuka tha aur mujhe us andaze se taklif aur ghussa dono aa chuka tha...

kaampte haathon se un nails ko apne dusre hatheli par rakha maine aur saame dehek rahi aag ki garmi ki taraf kar diya aur jab maine aisa kiya toh..

aankh band kar jabde sakhti se band ho chuke the mere..mere haathon me rakha hua nail mai kyun use me laa sakunga,woh kaaran dikhne laga tha mujhe..

mai dekh raha tha RONIT ko joki us HELL'S BLAZING FIRE ke beech khade zor zor se cheekh rahe the..

ab bhale hi woh ANGEL the,woh bhi
SERAPHIM but aisa karna unke liye bhi bohot mushkil tha..

mar woh sakte the nahi but jal aur tadap toh sakte the aur wahi hua tha..

1 pura saal us aag me jale the woh aur unke waisa karne par unka ANGEL BODY dheere dheere galne laga tha...

galte hue woh us HELLS BLAZING FIRE se bahar nikle the aur bach gaye woh nails..unke nails jo ab mai bina jale,bina taklif ke use karne waala tha..

kahir,pighalte hue unka sharir jab us aag ke daayre se bahar aaya toh wapas apne asli swaroop me aane ke liye us sharir ko kayi saal lage the aur is dauran bhi us recovery procedure ke waqt unhe behadh taklif hui thi..

nails ko mom ne us metal box me rakh diya tha aur apne husband ki taklif ko dekh saalon saal unke paas baithi roti rahi thi..

ye sab scene dekh aankh khul gayi meri par is waqt meri aankh hadh se zyada laal thi..

us HELLS BLAZING FIRE se zyada garmi mere andar jalne lagi thi aur ye dab dekh aur mehsoos kar MAHI aur woh chaaron bohot dar gaye the...

is waqt naa toh un sabme kuch bhi bolne ki himmat thi aur naa mujhme kuch bhi sunane ki sehen shakti..

par yahan khade hokar bhi koi faayda toh tha nahi...

kuch der tak yunhi khada rehne ke baad ek baar phirse aankhen band kar maine un nails ko apne heart ke upar rakh liya aur mere aisa karte hi mere pure body par woh nails kisi dhuen me badal chipak sa gaya...

ye dhuan RONIT ka SERAPHIM ANGELS SHIELD tha jiski wajah se mujhe saamne dehek rahe HELL'S BLAZING FIRE ke beech se chalte hue aage badhne me zyada taklif nahi hone waali thi...

khair,us dhuen ke mere body se chipakne ke baad..


MAI-tum sabko team work karna hoga...

MAHI..apne ANGELS FORM POWER SOURCE ke AURA ko apne saath in sabko bhi cover karo..

MAHI-but kya inke bodies us AURA ke pressure ko jhel paayenge...!!!???

MAI-pehle ki baat alag thi,ab alag hai..

SLUNDER,apne INBORN REFLEXES me chuppe GOD GIFTED POWERS ke AURA ko apne abhi wapas mile 50 percent shaktiyon ke saath merge karkar SHIELD banate hue sabko cover karo...

BRAWNY,tum bhi aisa apne external pyscical force ke saath karoge..sabko bodies ko us shakti se cover karo..

aur HIDA tum...

HIDA-healing powers ko sab par trigger karun..got it...


meri baat ko samajh HIDA ne apni zimmedari khud hi bata di jisse sun..


ACCHUTA-saala mai hi bekaar hun...arrow bhar hai mere paas..usse kya gaddha khodun...???

MAI-teri shakti khodne ke liye,dushman ki maa CHO**NE ke liye hai... filhal uski zaroorat nahi..

HIDA/MAHI-chhhii RAAZ.. language yaar....

MAI-kya galat bola..??? anyways, turant shuru karo..


meri baat sunte hi woh paanchon apne apne kaam me lag gaye..

kuch hi palon me MAHI ke POWER SOURCE se woh paanchon ghire the..

haalaki aisa hone se un chaaron ko aisa lag raha tha jaise koi bohot vazni cheez unhe daba raha hai but phir bhi over all woh theek the...

SLUNDER ke shield power ne bhi apna kaam kar diya tha..sab us SHIELD ki suraksha ghere me aa chuke the...

wahin HIDA ki healing ability bhi sabke skin se chipak si gayi thi..

aur BRAWNY,uska pyscical exertion force waala power is waqt sabke veins me doudne laga tha..

ye saari surakhshatmak chizen waise toh bohot zyada powerful thi but kyunki ek toh ye powers apne ful limit par nahi thi aur hamare saamne koi normal chunouti nahi balki HELL'S BLAZING FIRE ka challenge tha, isiliye ye sab kitna kaamiyab ho paayenge,ye ek anishchit baat thi but option bhi toh tha nahi..

ek pal sabko dekh un sabke body ke upar doud rahi powers ko feel kiya maine aur phir ek lambi saans lete hue..


MAI-lets go...


mai aage badh chuka tha aur mere saath hi kadam se kadam milate hue woh paanchon bhi aage badh liye the..

but dekhna ye tha ki ye kadam kab tak saath saath chalte hain...

kuch hi palon ne hum HELL'S BLAZING FIRE ki sarhad ke just saamne khade the..



CHALLENGE:THE HELL'S BLAZING FIRE



us jhulasati garmi ko mehsoos kar kuch seconds rooke hum sab aur phir humne apne kadam us fire ke daayre ke andar rakh diya aur aisa hote hi..

AHHHHHHH....

itne saare protection layers ke beech hone ke baawjud ek saamuhik zordaar cheekh nikli un chaaron ke mooh se..

jalan aur pain toh MAHI ko bhi hua tha but kyunki uski body aur power,dono hi un chaaron se bohot zyada strong the, isiliye woh us jalan aur dard ko zabt kar gayi thi.

wahin hadh se zyada garmi tog mujhe bhi lag rahi thi ,mera soul bhi tempt ho raha tha,but phir bhi mai theek tha..

un chaaron ko cheekhte dekh maine unki taraf dekha toh paaya ki un chaaron ki chamdi jali toh nahi thi but laal zaroor ho gayi thi...

iska ek hi matlab tha ki kuch hi der tak unka skin is garmi ko khudko jalane se rok sakta tha,uske baad chamdi palatni shuru ho jaani thi aur isiliye aankhon se hi un sabko tezi se aage badhne ka ishara kiya maine jisse samajh hum sab ki raftaar tez ho gayi.

but is dauran un sabke mooh se cheekhe bhi badastoor jaari hi thi aur phir...

AHHHHHH...

un chaaron ke mooh se nikalne waali cheekh aur dardnaak ho gayi..

REASON...

un sabki chamdi jalkar khudko udhena shuru kar chuki thi..

aur aisa hote hi un sabki souls bhi effect hone lagi thi..

haalaki HIDA ki GOD GIFTED POWER ki wajah se woh jali hui skin wapas heal bhi ho rahi thi but jalne ki raftaar heal hone ki raftaar se zyada thi aur issi chiz ko dhyan me rakhte hue us asahaniya pain ke baawjud apne andar base SHIELD ki power ko aur zyada force se sabke bodies ke aage circulate karne ki koshish karne laga SLUNDER..

HIDA aur BRAWNY bhi uski tarah apne powers ko jitna zyada ho sakta tha,bahar laane ki koshish karne lage...

wahin in sabke beech mai jisse sirf heat feel ho raha tha,but saath hi saath mujhe andar VAGUS NERVES me beh rahe BLACK ENERGY ki AURA bhi smooth si hoti mehsoos hui..

aur ye feel kar mai jaan gaya ki HELL'S BLAZING FIRE is AURA ko aur zyada strength dene ke liye prefect hai..

but jo is fire me mujhe bachaye hue tha,woh nail joki RONIT ki kawach thi, woh mere us kaali shakti ke urja ke liye ek negetive asset tha..

uske rehte mai bas us AURA ko circulate kar sakta tha,usse power nahi de sakta tha....

but filhal ke liye itna hi kaafi tha....tezi se aage badhte hue hum sab ab tak us HELL'S BLAZING FIRE ke daayre ka lagbhag 90 percent bhaag pura kar chuke the...

is beech ACCHUTA, SLUNDER, BRAWNY aur HIDA ke body ka upari parath puri tarah jal chuka tha aur ab woh jalan unke bodies ke second layer ki taraf badhne lagi thi..

is baat ko feel kar liya tha MAHI ne aur isiliye usne apni speed baaki sabse thodi kam ki aur jaise hi woh un chaaron ke theek piche aayi toh usne apne ANGEL'S FORM POWER SOURCE se ek push gush release kiya aur..

DHAKKKKK....

ek zor ka jhatka sa diya us gush ne un chaaron ko jiski wajah se un sabka sharir upar uththa hua sidhe us FIRE ke daayre se bahar jaa gira...

un sabka challenge toh pura ho chuka tha but MAHI ka ye step uske liye jaanlewa saabit hua..

un chaaron ke door jaane se woh saare protection layers jo unke through MAHI ko mile hue the,woh hath gaye..

haan,uski khudki shakti ab bhi uske chaaron taraf ghum rahi thi but utna kaafi nahi tha..

MAHI ka sharir bhi tezi se jalne laga jisse naa sehen kar paate hue woh neeche jhukte hue apne ghutno par aane lagi par tabhi usse apne haath par ek haath feel hua..

ye haath mera tha..

usse bhi push karte hue bahar fekne ke iraade se maine ye kiya tha but jaise hi maine usse chhua toh kuch aur hi ho gaya..

toh hua ye ki mere body me circulate ho rahi SERAPHIM ANGELS ki urja ne naa sirf MAHI ki body me circulate ho rahi ANGEL'S FORM POWER SOURCE ko pehchaan liya balki saath hi saath usne us source ki woh kamzori jiski wajah se MAHI yahan ki garmi bardasht nahi kar paa rahi thi,usse bhi samajh liya aur aisa hote hi..

ek invisible trigger ray mere body se nikal MAHI ke andar sama gaya aur jab aisa hua toh MAHI ke dono power sources ek jhatke me 10,10 percent tak ek dusre ki taraf khisak gaye..

aur itna filhal ke liye kaafi tha..aisa hote hi ANGEL'S FORM POWER SOURCE ki wajah se MAHI ke sharir ka naa sirf jalna rook gaya balki saath hi saath HUMAN FORM POWER SOURCE ke thoda aur strong hone ki wajah ab tak jo part jala tha,woh sab bhi turant heal ho gaya..

in sabke beech jahan ankhon se thanks kehte hue MAHI mujhe dekhne lagi wahin maine uska haath nahi chhoda aur usko saath liye hue mai aage ki taraf jump laga gaya..

us HELL'S BLAZING FIRE ke beech se hote hue hum dono hi uske daayre se bahar nikalne lage but isse pehle ki aisa puri tarah se ho paata,maine ek saath do chizen ki..

PEHLI...

MAHI ke haath ko jisse maine pakda hua tha,aage ki taraf ek jhatka diya maine jiske baad woh mujhse aage nikalte hue tezi se FIRE dimension ke bahar nikal gayi..

DUSRI....

jaise hi meri body us FIRE ke aakhri parath ke paas pahunchi toh maine ek jhatke me mere sharir par chaddhe nails numa dhuen ke shield ko kheenchte hue khudse hata diya aur jab aisa hua toh..

UMMMMGGGGG...

HELL'S BLAZING FIRE ke beech meri body badi tezi se jalne lagi..

tez dard ki leher daud uthi mere andar jisse badi mushkil se sehte hue maine apni aankhen band ki aur mere VAGUS NERVES ke andar circulate ho rahi energy ko bahar laate hue us fire ke saath touch kara diya..

ye ek bohot bada juaan tha jispar daaw par meri jaan lagi thi par chaal chal chuka tha mai...

power circulation ke beech meri body tezi se jalte hue us dehekti aag ke daayre se finally bahar nikal gayi par jab tak aisa hua,tab tak meri puri body HELL'S BLAZING FIRE se jal chuki thi.

aag ke beech ghira aur ho rahe asahaniya dard ko joki mere sharir se zyada meri rooh ko tadpa rahi thi,zabt karne ki naamumkin koshish kar raha tha mai.

wahin mujhse alag jab MAHI us HELL'S BLAZING FIRE ke daayre se bahar nikal rahi thi tab usne mera woh haath jo ki uske haath me tha,ek strong push ke baad alag hota mehsoos kiya tha aur jab woh FIRE RANGE se bahar aa gayi toh zamin par pair rakhte hi woh turant piche palti..

par ek second baad jab meri body aag ke lapton me ghiri hui bahar aayi toh..


MAHI-RAAZZZZZ...

mere naam se cheekhte hue woh mere taraf badhne ko hui par haath aage kar maine usse aage aane se rok diya...

super strength bhi kurbaani maangta hai aur wahi maine diya tha..

ab dekhna ye tha ki ye kurbaani mujhe tohfa deti hai yaa mujhe bhi kurbaan hona padega..

aankh band kar kuch yaad kar apne dard ko zabt karte hue ussi waqt me apni BLACK ENERGY ke AURA ko mehsoos karne me lag gaya tha mai..

shuru me toh kuch bhi mehsoos nahi hua mujhe but phirse achanak se hi mujhe apne brain ke andar ek urja ka sanchaar hota mehsoos hone laga joki har guzarte pal ke saath badhte hi jaa raha tha..

aur jaise jaise ye sanchaar tez hote jaa raha tha,mere sharir ke aag ki lapte bhi gayab hoti jaa rahi thi..

bas kuch hi palon me saari lapte gayab ho chuki thi..itna hi nahi,meri body bhi ek dum normal ho chuki thi..

jalne ke koi nishaan nahi bache the..

wahin mujhe theek hota dekh MAHI ki khushi ka thikana naa raha..woh meri taraf badhne ko hui par tabhi meri nazar joki uske piche tiki hui thi,usse follow karte hue jab woh piche palti toh uski saali khushi jaise ek pal me hi gayab ho gayi..

hum dono ke saamne is waqt ACCHUTA, SLUNDER, BRAWNY aur HIDA neech zamin par pade hue the.

zinda the woh chaaron but haalat unki bohot zyada kharaab thi..

aag me jhulse hue hone ki wajah se chehra aur body, dono hi kaale hokar fath se gaye the..

behosh the woh sab yaa phir ye kahun ki HIDA aur isiliye healing ability bhi theek se kaam nahi kar rahi thi..

unki buri haalat dekh tadap si uthi MAHI aur unke paas jaane ko hui par tabhi...

un chaaron ke theek upar ek bada sa KAALI SHAKTIYON se bana gola prakat hua jo kuch pal apni jagah par ghumte rehne ke baad open ho gaya..

jaise ANWIR ke time hue tha,us gole ke open hote hi uske andar se 4 WHITE ENERGY se bhare keys nikle joki un chaaron ki aadhe locked shaktiyon ki chaabi thi..

woh chaaron keys turant un chaaron ke sharir me jaakar sama gaye aur jab aisa hua toh...

HHHHHHHHHHH..

ek jhatke ke saath hosh me aaye woh chaaron aur theek ussi waqt HIDA ki healing ability joki ab double ho chuki thi, wapas kaam karne lagi..

kuch hi palon me un sabke bodies back go normal ho chuke the..

jitna un sabne activate kiya tha,utne GOD GIFTED POWERS wapas mil chuke the unhe jiski wajah se ek jhatke me uth kar khade hue woh chaaron...

shakti wapas mil jaane ki wajah se super confidence se bhar uthe the woh chaaron..

wahin apne doston ko theek dekh MAHI turant aage badhi aur un chaaron ke gale lag gayi..

woh sab bhi pure dil aur khushi se MAHI ko hug kiye hue the..

wahin un sabse alag khada mai kuch seconds un sabko dekhta raha par phir apni left mutthi jisse maine NAILS ki SHIELD ko hataya tha,usse khol diya..

nails ab bhi moujud the meri hatheli par kyunki ab unka kaam ho chuka tha, isiliye dheere dheere woh nails gayab ho rahe the.

un nails ko dekh uski kahani ko yaad kiya maine aur apni aankhen band kar li...

kuch pal khudko niyantrit karne me nikal gaya mera but phir jab dimag sthir hua toh...


MAI-waada hai mera....


jo dekha gaya hai sapna,pura zaroor woh KHWAAB HOGA....

sawal puchta jaa VIDEOUS,tere har sawal ka mere paas JAWAAB HOGA...

ummid hai zakhm dete waqt unki ginti bhi kar raha hoga tu, kyunki,

tere diye har chot ka aakhir me tujhse bhi HISAAB HOGA...


















AAJ KE LIYE ITNA HI.....


















AAPKA APNA V...J.....
Great going bro. Extraordinary speechless amazing update
 

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AB TAK AAPNE PADHA KI JAHAN EK TARAF ALCAZAR ME RAAZ & COMPANY KI MULAKAT ANWIR SE HOTI HAI WAHIN DUSRI TARAF WOH SAB INFERIOR LEVEL KE FINAL CHALLENGE KO SUCCESSFULLY PAAR KAR LETE HAIN.


AB AAGE:-



CHAPTER-3


(THE DEVIL'S HAVEN,THE SACRIFICE & THE PERFECT EPILOGUE)



UPDATE-146



PLANET-ELYSIAN


PLACE-MEDIAL LEVEL



THE QUEST CONTINOUS






OH TERI....YE TOH SCENE HI BADAL GAYA....


kaali sukhi aur halki garam zamin ke edge se thoda door khade the hum par jahan hum khade the,aage ke is scene ko dekh kar kahi ye baat ACCHUTA ne....

hum sabko ALCAZAR ke roof top par pahuncha hamare pairon ke neeche se woh carpet numa kaali shakti gayab ho gayi..

aur thik ussi waqt woh pura ALCAZAR apne roof top ke saath jisme hum sab khade the, puri tarah deh gaya..

aisa hote hi hume us roof top ke saath gir jaana chahiye the but aisa hua nahi..

roof top ke dehte hi hamari location aur scene dono change ho gaya..

ek andheri gufa jaisi jagah ki sarhad par khade the hum sab..

halki halki garmahat thi is jagah par lekin us araam se jhel jaane waali garmi me bhi ek ajeeb si ghutan thi jisse saaf saaf mehsoos kar rahe the hum 6...

aur ussi garmi aur usse paida hone waali ghutan ko feel kar...


HIDA-kaafi exhausting hai yahan ka mahoul...

SLUNDER-haan woh toh hai..but hume karna kya hai,ye kaise pata chalega..???


THAT'S WHAT I AM HERE FOR....


ek kaala dhuan jo hum sabse thoda door ussi kaale maidan ke thik edge par prakat hua,ussise nikli thi ye awaaz jisse sun is baar hum bilkul hairan nahi hue the kyunki hum jaante the ki ye ANWIR hi hai..

waise bhi usne kaha tha ki challenge ke baad mulakat hogi aur as promised,woh yahan aa chuka tha...

khair,ab tak woh kaala dhuan apne asli swaroop matlab ANWIR me badal chuka tha jiske baad..


ANWIR-first things first...

well done guyzz... and to be specific,well done MAHI & RAAZ...absolutely brilliant...

apni thodi bohot shaktiyon ka jaise upyog kiya tum logon ne, ummid nahi thi mujhe ki waisa kuch kar paaoge...

i am really impressed....

MAI-just cut the crap ANWIR.. point par aa aur bata ki is MEDIAL LEVEL me hume kaun kaun se CHALLENGES cross karne hain...

ANWIR-samajh nahi aata,taarif karun yaa mazak udaaun...


kyunki gazab hai tera woh jazba,jisme khawish hai LADHNE KI...

do chaar baatein karta jaa,itni bhi kya jaldi hai MARNE KI...

ACCHUTA-arre waah..mai bhi ek...


tujhse baat karne se goonga hona BEHTAR HAI....

ladhte hue mar jaana teri is sadhi shakal dekhne se toh BEHTAR HAI...


WAAHHH,KYA BOLA HAI YAAR..SACH KA AAIYNA...


SLUNDER aur BRAWNY ne taarif karte hue taali bajayi jispar MAHI aur HIDA bhi has diye jisse dekh ANWIR naaraz nahi hua balki woh bhi muskura diya aur...


ANWIR-zyada waqt nahi hai tum sabke paas.. isiliye jab tak jitna has sakte ho,chill out kar sakte ho, karlo..

anyway,jaisa ki maine ALCAZAR me kaha tha, it's time for you four to get some prize...


ACCHUTA, SLUNDER, BRAWNY aur HIDA ko dekh apne haathon ko rub karte hue kahi ye baat ANWIR ne jiske baad usne apne dono haathon aas paas karte hue ek spherical shape diya..

aur jab aisa hua toh ek gol kaali urja us spherical khaali space ke beech prakat hui..

par hairan karne waali baat ye thi ki us kaali urja se bane ball ke andar se pure WHITE ENERGY ki urja mehsoos ho rahi thi..

aur aisa kyun tha,woh agle hi pal clear bhi ho gaya...

woh kaali urja se bana gola jab prakat hua toh uske agle hi pal usne khudko unfold karte hue khol diya aur jab aisa hua toh uske andar se bahar nikle 4 keys joki WHITE ENERGY se damak rahe the..

un keys ko dekh mere dimag me kuch baatein clear ho gayi..

mai samajh gaya ki woh kaali urja khud VIDEOUS ki hai..

kyunki sirf uski khudki kaali urja hi WHITE ENERGY ki urja ko khudme contain karne ki kaabiliyat rakhti hai...

wahin saath hi saath mujhe un keys ka ganit bhi samajh me aa gaya tha...

khair,jaise hi woh chaaron keys us kaali urja ke daayre se bahar aayi,woh bijli ki gati se aage badhi aur ACCHUTA, SLUNDER, BRAWNY aur HIDA ke andar ek ek kar sama gayi..

aisa hote waqt unhe pain bilkul nahi hua.. aankhon me hairani liye woh ANWIR ko dekh hi rahe the ki tabhi...

KHADAKKKKH..

un chaaron ko apne andar kuch halka sa open hota hua mehsoos hua aur aisa hote hi..

AHHHHHH....

ek aah si nikal gayi un sabke mooh se par ye aah dard ki wajah se nahi balki us shakti ke pravah ki wajah se nikli thi jo abhi sudden unke bodies me flow hona start hui thi..

us energy ke flow ko feel karye hue hairat bhari aankhon se woh chaaron ANWIR ko aise dekhne lage maano aankhon se hi puch rahe hon ki kya woh jo soch rahe hain,woh sach hai..!!!!

aur us nazar aur sawal ko ANWIR bhi pehchaan gaya tha isiliye...


ANWIR-sahi soch rahe ho guyzz...

is waqt tumhare sharir me wahi GOD GIFTED POWERS ghum raha ha jisse humare GOD ne lock kar diya tha..

but filhal us power ka 50 percent hi unlock hua hai....

baaki ka 50 percent abhi locked hai..

aur woh locked part tab unlock hoga jab tum ye level matlab MEDIAL LEVEL cross karoge..


ANWIR ki baat sun aur apne sharir me dobara shakti ke sanchar ko mehsoos kar behadh khush ho chuke the woh chaaron but phir un sabke brain me ek sawal bhi saath hi ubhra jiske baad woh kuch kehne ko hue but tabhi..


ANWIR-jaanta hun kya sawal puchna chahte ho tum sab..??

yahi naa ki itni dariyadili ka kya matlab..???

toh jawab simple bhi hai...DEVIL'S HAVEN jaise khataranak jagah ke safar par bina apni shakti ke nikle ho tum sab..

jitna ye faisla bewakufaana hai,utna hi daring bhi..and our GOD loves this ATTITUDE..

pehle level ko toh tum sab in dono ki madad se cross kar liye but is level me tum aisa nahi kar paaoge..

waise toh unlocked 50 percent shaktiyon ke baad bhi ye kaafi mushkil hone waala hai but iske bina agar tum mare toh hamare GOD aur LORD,dono ke saamne is RAAZ ke paas ek excuse hoga ki fight unfair thi..

aur isse maarne se pehle ye sukoon LORD aur GOD isse kaise de sakte hain...!!!

anyways, congrats apni regained powers ke liye..jab tak isse enjoy kar sakte ho,kar lo..

kyunki tum sabki jaan ke saath ye bhi khatm ho hi jaayegi..

MAI-stop being pain in the ass ANWIR.. matlab ki ulti kar aur bata ki kaun kaun se challenge hai is MEDIAL LEVEL me..

ANWIR-kaun kaun se challenges..!!!dude, second level me sirf ek hi challenge hai..

haan ye baat alag hai ki woh ek challenge bhi tum sabke aukaad ke hissab se kaafi hai...


ANWIR ki baat hairani waali bhi thi but khushi waali bhi..

yaa toh ek jhatke me level paar hoga yaa phir hum hi paar ho jaayenge..

fair enough...

abhi hum ye sab soch hi rahe the ki tabhi apni baat ko aage badhate hue...


ANWIR-jaate jaate ek aur baat bata deta hun..

agar kisi tarah tumne luckily is level ko bhi cross kar liya fir tum sabke saamne hoga HOVERING LEVEL...

us level me tumhara saamna hoga DARK WARRIORS ke 5 elite MEMBERS se jinme se ek mai bhi hun...

ek baat boli thi tumne ALCAZAR me mujhe RAAZ...

sher aur kutte waali..agar tum is level ko cross kar wahan pahunch paaye jo mai khud dil se chahata hun,tab mai tumhe kutte aur sher ke beech ka fark ache se samjha dunga...

MAI-tere ussi dil ke saath saath tere saare armaan bhi bahar nikalunga mai..

that's a RAAZ promise...

ANWIR-kaun kiska kya nikalta hai,we will see...khair, filhal is level ke ek maatra challenge ke baare me jaan lo..

simple hai..ye jo kaala maidaan dikh raha hai naa,isse cross kar jaao...

challenge over...

and before you ask me about the catch..aisa tumhe aag ke beech se guzarte hue karna hai...

simple,i guess...hahahahaa..

arre haan,one last thing,tum dono ke woh weird paaltu janwar aur bird,agar is challenge ko cross kar paaye tum dono toh tumhe mil jaayenge..

ACCHUTA-par unhe toh first LEVEL ke baad RAAZ aur MAHI ko handover kiya jaane waala tha..!!!

ANWIR-let m remind you that you all are not in a position to debate aur demand anything..

aur waise bhi,abhi tum sabka focus challange ko complete karne par hona chahiye,animal rights ke mudde par baat karne ka nahi..


apni baat bolte hue ANWIR ne apne dono haath upar uthaye..aur uske waisa karte hi..

BHAPPPPPPP..

ek jhatke me woh pura kaala maidan 8 se 10 feet unche aag ke lapto se jal utha...

waise bhi ye jagah pehle se hi garam thi,aur ab in badi unchi aag ki lapton ki wajah se woh garmi kaafi badh gayi thi but sehen karne laayak thi..

us aag ki lapton ko normally hum dekh rahe the aur ANWIR muskurata hua hume..

yunhi kuch seconds muskurate rehne ke baad...


ANWIR-asaan lag raha hoga,haina...waise jaankari ke liye bata dun ki JWALAM NIRODHAKAM(FIRE STOPPER)DEHEM VIROTAKAM(BODY SECURER)AGNI ANGAM VARDHUNIYEM(FIRE HOTNESS TOLERANCE)

ye saare spells aur aisa koi bhi spell joki aag se bachne ke liye use me laaya jaata hai,yahan kaam me nahi aayega aur woh isiliye kyunki ye dehekti aag maamuli aag nahi balki...


MAI-HELL'S BLAZING FIRE HAI..


ANWIR ki baat ko maine pura kiya jisse sun MAHI aur uske saath woh chaaron ko laga ek tez jhatka..

is jhatke ke lagne ka main reason ye tha ki agar wakayi hamare saamne HELL'S BLAZING FIRE thi toh ye challenge hamare liye ek suicide mission jaisi thi..

kyunki HELL'S BLAZING FIRE khud GOD ke wrath se bani aag thi jiske beech se toh VIDEOUS bhi nahi guzar sakta tha..

halaki ye aag yahan kaise pahunchi hai,ye bhi samajh aa chuka tha hum sabko..

VIDEOUS ke paas thi pure BLACK ENERGY..woh energy jisse apnaane waale humans ko tadpane ke liye hi GOD ne ye BLAZING FIRE banayi thi..

aur kyunki is aag se DEVIL'S bhi darte the, isiliye ye forbidden nahi tha..

BLACK ENERGY ne khud HELL se is aag ke kuch bhaag ko yahan laakar rakha tha..

aur yun khadi kar di thi hum sabke aage ek deadly situation...

khair,hume seriously sochte dekh zoron se has pada ANWIR aur..


ANWIR-sirf soch kar hi ghabra gaye..

tumhe pata hai abhi tak tum sab normally kaise khade ho..??kyunki is waqt mai tum sabke aur is aag ke beech ek diwal bankar khada hun...

mere sharir par pure KAALI SHAKTI
se bani SHIELD hai..aur ussiki wajah se is aag ki garmi mujhse takrakar rook rahi hai..

but jaise hi mai yahan se gayab ho jaaunga,woh barrier hat jaayega..

aur phir tum sabko pata chalega ki what are you all actually up against..

all the best guyzzz..ek baar phir mai chahta hun ki kisi tarah tum is challenge aur is LEVEL ko paar karo..

kyunki HOVERING LEVEL me mai aur mere saathi tum sabka besabri se intazar kar rahe hain...


DHHHSSSSSSHHHH..

in aakhri shabdon ke saath hi ANWIR dhuan bankar gayan ho gaha aur aisa hote hi usne jo bola tha,woh hone laga..

barrier hath gaya aur jab aisa hua toh..

AHHHHHHHHHH............

ek lay me ek saath dard bhari aah nikli.. par ye aah hum sabke mooh se nahi balki hum sabke rooh se nikli thi..

aur reason.. obvious... aakhir hamare saamne jal rahi HELLS BLAZING FIRE aatma ko hi toh jalati thi...

par kyunki filhal hum sab us FIRE ke daayre se thoda door the, isiliye abhi humari rooh ko sirf ek jhatka sa laga tha.

taklif bhi shanik hi thi par uska asar hum sabke dimag par jaise chhap sa gaya tha...

ACCHUTA, SLUNDER BRAWNY aur HIDA jo ab tak apnne GOD GIFTED POWERS ke 50 percent tak loutne ki khushi mana rahe the,woh khushi bhi us lage hue jhatke ki wajah se dhumil padh chuki thi..

aur MAHI joki LORD OF ANGELS ki beti thi, apne ohde aur ANGEL'S FORM POWER SOURCE ki madad se woh is HELL'S BLAZING FIRE ke beech se araam se nikal sakti thi but aisa tabhi possible tha jab uska woh POWER SOURCE 100 percent tak activate hote hue dusre power source ke saath mil chuka hota but filhal aisa tha nahi...

gambhir soch me dubi hui thi woh bhi is waqt..

wahin in sabse alag mujhe kya karna hai,ye jaan chuka tha mai...

apni jeb me haath daal kuch bahar nikala maine.

ye kuch wahi 3 inch ka red metal box tha jo EXERTION test ke baad SHAILA ne mujhe diya tha.

us waqt jo bhaap is box se nikal rahi thi,usse milta julta bhaap hi filhal mai saamne dehek rahe HELL'S BLAZING FIRE se mehsoos kar raha tha...

khair,us box ko khola maine aur uske andar rakhi cheez joki aur kuch nahi NAAKHUN the,usse dekhne laga..

waise toh pehle bhi box ko khol us naakhun ko dekha tha maine,but uski ehmiyat ab samajh me aayi thi mujhe..

NAAKHUN ek aisi cheez hai jo aag me bhi nahi jalti aur isiliye bakayada is HELL'S FIRE me test karkar is naakhun ko mere liye rakha gaya tha...

jahan ye saari baatein me soch raha tha, wahin ab tak MAHI aur un chaaron ki nazar bhi mere haathon me pakde hue box aur uske andar rakhe nails par padh chuki thi jisse dekh..


MAHI-nails diye the tumhe SOVES SHAILA ne..matlab unhe pehle se hi pata tha ki ek din tum HELL'S BLAZING FIRE se guzroge...

MAI-nahi..pata nahi tha unhe..bas andaza tha..HELL ke fire ka har ounce GOD ke dhyan me rehta hai.

aur jab BLACK ENERGY ne us aag ka kuch portion nikala hoga tab GOD ko aur unse tumhare father ko uske baare me pata chal chuka hoga...

aur tab unhone in nails ke through us heat ko sehne ka tarika nikala hoga...


ye baat bol bohot gambhir mudra me kuch sochne laga mai jisse dekh..


MAHI-but ye toh achi baat hai...tum araam se is HELL'S BLAZING FIRE ke beech se hokar guzar sakte ho..

phir kis soch me goom ho tum...???

MAI-ye maamuli aag nahi hai MAHI.. HELL'S BLAZING FIRE hai..

nails kisi normal aag me kaam aa sakte hain but HELL'S BLAZING FIRE me aisa karna lagbhag naamumkin hai..

is fire me nails D.N.A ki tarah kaam karte hain..

koi bhi shaksh nails ko yahan sirf tabhi use me laa sakta hai jab....

MAHI-us nail par uska paitrik adhikar ho...


meri baat ko pura kiya MAHI ne par aisa karte waqt uske face me ek dard tha aur ye dard tha RONIT ke liye..

nails ke baare me usse andaza ho chuka tha aur mujhe us andaze se taklif aur ghussa dono aa chuka tha...

kaampte haathon se un nails ko apne dusre hatheli par rakha maine aur saame dehek rahi aag ki garmi ki taraf kar diya aur jab maine aisa kiya toh..

aankh band kar jabde sakhti se band ho chuke the mere..mere haathon me rakha hua nail mai kyun use me laa sakunga,woh kaaran dikhne laga tha mujhe..

mai dekh raha tha RONIT ko joki us HELL'S BLAZING FIRE ke beech khade zor zor se cheekh rahe the..

ab bhale hi woh ANGEL the,woh bhi
SERAPHIM but aisa karna unke liye bhi bohot mushkil tha..

mar woh sakte the nahi but jal aur tadap toh sakte the aur wahi hua tha..

1 pura saal us aag me jale the woh aur unke waisa karne par unka ANGEL BODY dheere dheere galne laga tha...

galte hue woh us HELLS BLAZING FIRE se bahar nikle the aur bach gaye woh nails..unke nails jo ab mai bina jale,bina taklif ke use karne waala tha..

kahir,pighalte hue unka sharir jab us aag ke daayre se bahar aaya toh wapas apne asli swaroop me aane ke liye us sharir ko kayi saal lage the aur is dauran bhi us recovery procedure ke waqt unhe behadh taklif hui thi..

nails ko mom ne us metal box me rakh diya tha aur apne husband ki taklif ko dekh saalon saal unke paas baithi roti rahi thi..

ye sab scene dekh aankh khul gayi meri par is waqt meri aankh hadh se zyada laal thi..

us HELLS BLAZING FIRE se zyada garmi mere andar jalne lagi thi aur ye dab dekh aur mehsoos kar MAHI aur woh chaaron bohot dar gaye the...

is waqt naa toh un sabme kuch bhi bolne ki himmat thi aur naa mujhme kuch bhi sunane ki sehen shakti..

par yahan khade hokar bhi koi faayda toh tha nahi...

kuch der tak yunhi khada rehne ke baad ek baar phirse aankhen band kar maine un nails ko apne heart ke upar rakh liya aur mere aisa karte hi mere pure body par woh nails kisi dhuen me badal chipak sa gaya...

ye dhuan RONIT ka SERAPHIM ANGELS SHIELD tha jiski wajah se mujhe saamne dehek rahe HELL'S BLAZING FIRE ke beech se chalte hue aage badhne me zyada taklif nahi hone waali thi...

khair,us dhuen ke mere body se chipakne ke baad..


MAI-tum sabko team work karna hoga...

MAHI..apne ANGELS FORM POWER SOURCE ke AURA ko apne saath in sabko bhi cover karo..

MAHI-but kya inke bodies us AURA ke pressure ko jhel paayenge...!!!???

MAI-pehle ki baat alag thi,ab alag hai..

SLUNDER,apne INBORN REFLEXES me chuppe GOD GIFTED POWERS ke AURA ko apne abhi wapas mile 50 percent shaktiyon ke saath merge karkar SHIELD banate hue sabko cover karo...

BRAWNY,tum bhi aisa apne external pyscical force ke saath karoge..sabko bodies ko us shakti se cover karo..

aur HIDA tum...

HIDA-healing powers ko sab par trigger karun..got it...


meri baat ko samajh HIDA ne apni zimmedari khud hi bata di jisse sun..


ACCHUTA-saala mai hi bekaar hun...arrow bhar hai mere paas..usse kya gaddha khodun...???

MAI-teri shakti khodne ke liye,dushman ki maa CHO**NE ke liye hai... filhal uski zaroorat nahi..

HIDA/MAHI-chhhii RAAZ.. language yaar....

MAI-kya galat bola..??? anyways, turant shuru karo..


meri baat sunte hi woh paanchon apne apne kaam me lag gaye..

kuch hi palon me MAHI ke POWER SOURCE se woh paanchon ghire the..

haalaki aisa hone se un chaaron ko aisa lag raha tha jaise koi bohot vazni cheez unhe daba raha hai but phir bhi over all woh theek the...

SLUNDER ke shield power ne bhi apna kaam kar diya tha..sab us SHIELD ki suraksha ghere me aa chuke the...

wahin HIDA ki healing ability bhi sabke skin se chipak si gayi thi..

aur BRAWNY,uska pyscical exertion force waala power is waqt sabke veins me doudne laga tha..

ye saari surakhshatmak chizen waise toh bohot zyada powerful thi but kyunki ek toh ye powers apne ful limit par nahi thi aur hamare saamne koi normal chunouti nahi balki HELL'S BLAZING FIRE ka challenge tha, isiliye ye sab kitna kaamiyab ho paayenge,ye ek anishchit baat thi but option bhi toh tha nahi..

ek pal sabko dekh un sabke body ke upar doud rahi powers ko feel kiya maine aur phir ek lambi saans lete hue..


MAI-lets go...


mai aage badh chuka tha aur mere saath hi kadam se kadam milate hue woh paanchon bhi aage badh liye the..

but dekhna ye tha ki ye kadam kab tak saath saath chalte hain...

kuch hi palon ne hum HELL'S BLAZING FIRE ki sarhad ke just saamne khade the..



CHALLENGE:THE HELL'S BLAZING FIRE



us jhulasati garmi ko mehsoos kar kuch seconds rooke hum sab aur phir humne apne kadam us fire ke daayre ke andar rakh diya aur aisa hote hi..

AHHHHHHH....

itne saare protection layers ke beech hone ke baawjud ek saamuhik zordaar cheekh nikli un chaaron ke mooh se..

jalan aur pain toh MAHI ko bhi hua tha but kyunki uski body aur power,dono hi un chaaron se bohot zyada strong the, isiliye woh us jalan aur dard ko zabt kar gayi thi.

wahin hadh se zyada garmi tog mujhe bhi lag rahi thi ,mera soul bhi tempt ho raha tha,but phir bhi mai theek tha..

un chaaron ko cheekhte dekh maine unki taraf dekha toh paaya ki un chaaron ki chamdi jali toh nahi thi but laal zaroor ho gayi thi...

iska ek hi matlab tha ki kuch hi der tak unka skin is garmi ko khudko jalane se rok sakta tha,uske baad chamdi palatni shuru ho jaani thi aur isiliye aankhon se hi un sabko tezi se aage badhne ka ishara kiya maine jisse samajh hum sab ki raftaar tez ho gayi.

but is dauran un sabke mooh se cheekhe bhi badastoor jaari hi thi aur phir...

AHHHHHH...

un chaaron ke mooh se nikalne waali cheekh aur dardnaak ho gayi..

REASON...

un sabki chamdi jalkar khudko udhena shuru kar chuki thi..

aur aisa hote hi un sabki souls bhi effect hone lagi thi..

haalaki HIDA ki GOD GIFTED POWER ki wajah se woh jali hui skin wapas heal bhi ho rahi thi but jalne ki raftaar heal hone ki raftaar se zyada thi aur issi chiz ko dhyan me rakhte hue us asahaniya pain ke baawjud apne andar base SHIELD ki power ko aur zyada force se sabke bodies ke aage circulate karne ki koshish karne laga SLUNDER..

HIDA aur BRAWNY bhi uski tarah apne powers ko jitna zyada ho sakta tha,bahar laane ki koshish karne lage...

wahin in sabke beech mai jisse sirf heat feel ho raha tha,but saath hi saath mujhe andar VAGUS NERVES me beh rahe BLACK ENERGY ki AURA bhi smooth si hoti mehsoos hui..

aur ye feel kar mai jaan gaya ki HELL'S BLAZING FIRE is AURA ko aur zyada strength dene ke liye prefect hai..

but jo is fire me mujhe bachaye hue tha,woh nail joki RONIT ki kawach thi, woh mere us kaali shakti ke urja ke liye ek negetive asset tha..

uske rehte mai bas us AURA ko circulate kar sakta tha,usse power nahi de sakta tha....

but filhal ke liye itna hi kaafi tha....tezi se aage badhte hue hum sab ab tak us HELL'S BLAZING FIRE ke daayre ka lagbhag 90 percent bhaag pura kar chuke the...

is beech ACCHUTA, SLUNDER, BRAWNY aur HIDA ke body ka upari parath puri tarah jal chuka tha aur ab woh jalan unke bodies ke second layer ki taraf badhne lagi thi..

is baat ko feel kar liya tha MAHI ne aur isiliye usne apni speed baaki sabse thodi kam ki aur jaise hi woh un chaaron ke theek piche aayi toh usne apne ANGEL'S FORM POWER SOURCE se ek push gush release kiya aur..

DHAKKKKK....

ek zor ka jhatka sa diya us gush ne un chaaron ko jiski wajah se un sabka sharir upar uththa hua sidhe us FIRE ke daayre se bahar jaa gira...

un sabka challenge toh pura ho chuka tha but MAHI ka ye step uske liye jaanlewa saabit hua..

un chaaron ke door jaane se woh saare protection layers jo unke through MAHI ko mile hue the,woh hath gaye..

haan,uski khudki shakti ab bhi uske chaaron taraf ghum rahi thi but utna kaafi nahi tha..

MAHI ka sharir bhi tezi se jalne laga jisse naa sehen kar paate hue woh neeche jhukte hue apne ghutno par aane lagi par tabhi usse apne haath par ek haath feel hua..

ye haath mera tha..

usse bhi push karte hue bahar fekne ke iraade se maine ye kiya tha but jaise hi maine usse chhua toh kuch aur hi ho gaya..

toh hua ye ki mere body me circulate ho rahi SERAPHIM ANGELS ki urja ne naa sirf MAHI ki body me circulate ho rahi ANGEL'S FORM POWER SOURCE ko pehchaan liya balki saath hi saath usne us source ki woh kamzori jiski wajah se MAHI yahan ki garmi bardasht nahi kar paa rahi thi,usse bhi samajh liya aur aisa hote hi..

ek invisible trigger ray mere body se nikal MAHI ke andar sama gaya aur jab aisa hua toh MAHI ke dono power sources ek jhatke me 10,10 percent tak ek dusre ki taraf khisak gaye..

aur itna filhal ke liye kaafi tha..aisa hote hi ANGEL'S FORM POWER SOURCE ki wajah se MAHI ke sharir ka naa sirf jalna rook gaya balki saath hi saath HUMAN FORM POWER SOURCE ke thoda aur strong hone ki wajah ab tak jo part jala tha,woh sab bhi turant heal ho gaya..

in sabke beech jahan ankhon se thanks kehte hue MAHI mujhe dekhne lagi wahin maine uska haath nahi chhoda aur usko saath liye hue mai aage ki taraf jump laga gaya..

us HELL'S BLAZING FIRE ke beech se hote hue hum dono hi uske daayre se bahar nikalne lage but isse pehle ki aisa puri tarah se ho paata,maine ek saath do chizen ki..

PEHLI...

MAHI ke haath ko jisse maine pakda hua tha,aage ki taraf ek jhatka diya maine jiske baad woh mujhse aage nikalte hue tezi se FIRE dimension ke bahar nikal gayi..

DUSRI....

jaise hi meri body us FIRE ke aakhri parath ke paas pahunchi toh maine ek jhatke me mere sharir par chaddhe nails numa dhuen ke shield ko kheenchte hue khudse hata diya aur jab aisa hua toh..

UMMMMGGGGG...

HELL'S BLAZING FIRE ke beech meri body badi tezi se jalne lagi..

tez dard ki leher daud uthi mere andar jisse badi mushkil se sehte hue maine apni aankhen band ki aur mere VAGUS NERVES ke andar circulate ho rahi energy ko bahar laate hue us fire ke saath touch kara diya..

ye ek bohot bada juaan tha jispar daaw par meri jaan lagi thi par chaal chal chuka tha mai...

power circulation ke beech meri body tezi se jalte hue us dehekti aag ke daayre se finally bahar nikal gayi par jab tak aisa hua,tab tak meri puri body HELL'S BLAZING FIRE se jal chuki thi.

aag ke beech ghira aur ho rahe asahaniya dard ko joki mere sharir se zyada meri rooh ko tadpa rahi thi,zabt karne ki naamumkin koshish kar raha tha mai.

wahin mujhse alag jab MAHI us HELL'S BLAZING FIRE ke daayre se bahar nikal rahi thi tab usne mera woh haath jo ki uske haath me tha,ek strong push ke baad alag hota mehsoos kiya tha aur jab woh FIRE RANGE se bahar aa gayi toh zamin par pair rakhte hi woh turant piche palti..

par ek second baad jab meri body aag ke lapton me ghiri hui bahar aayi toh..


MAHI-RAAZZZZZ...

mere naam se cheekhte hue woh mere taraf badhne ko hui par haath aage kar maine usse aage aane se rok diya...

super strength bhi kurbaani maangta hai aur wahi maine diya tha..

ab dekhna ye tha ki ye kurbaani mujhe tohfa deti hai yaa mujhe bhi kurbaan hona padega..

aankh band kar kuch yaad kar apne dard ko zabt karte hue ussi waqt me apni BLACK ENERGY ke AURA ko mehsoos karne me lag gaya tha mai..

shuru me toh kuch bhi mehsoos nahi hua mujhe but phirse achanak se hi mujhe apne brain ke andar ek urja ka sanchaar hota mehsoos hone laga joki har guzarte pal ke saath badhte hi jaa raha tha..

aur jaise jaise ye sanchaar tez hote jaa raha tha,mere sharir ke aag ki lapte bhi gayab hoti jaa rahi thi..

bas kuch hi palon me saari lapte gayab ho chuki thi..itna hi nahi,meri body bhi ek dum normal ho chuki thi..

jalne ke koi nishaan nahi bache the..

wahin mujhe theek hota dekh MAHI ki khushi ka thikana naa raha..woh meri taraf badhne ko hui par tabhi meri nazar joki uske piche tiki hui thi,usse follow karte hue jab woh piche palti toh uski saali khushi jaise ek pal me hi gayab ho gayi..

hum dono ke saamne is waqt ACCHUTA, SLUNDER, BRAWNY aur HIDA neech zamin par pade hue the.

zinda the woh chaaron but haalat unki bohot zyada kharaab thi..

aag me jhulse hue hone ki wajah se chehra aur body, dono hi kaale hokar fath se gaye the..

behosh the woh sab yaa phir ye kahun ki HIDA aur isiliye healing ability bhi theek se kaam nahi kar rahi thi..

unki buri haalat dekh tadap si uthi MAHI aur unke paas jaane ko hui par tabhi...

un chaaron ke theek upar ek bada sa KAALI SHAKTIYON se bana gola prakat hua jo kuch pal apni jagah par ghumte rehne ke baad open ho gaya..

jaise ANWIR ke time hue tha,us gole ke open hote hi uske andar se 4 WHITE ENERGY se bhare keys nikle joki un chaaron ki aadhe locked shaktiyon ki chaabi thi..

woh chaaron keys turant un chaaron ke sharir me jaakar sama gaye aur jab aisa hua toh...

HHHHHHHHHHH..

ek jhatke ke saath hosh me aaye woh chaaron aur theek ussi waqt HIDA ki healing ability joki ab double ho chuki thi, wapas kaam karne lagi..

kuch hi palon me un sabke bodies back go normal ho chuke the..

jitna un sabne activate kiya tha,utne GOD GIFTED POWERS wapas mil chuke the unhe jiski wajah se ek jhatke me uth kar khade hue woh chaaron...

shakti wapas mil jaane ki wajah se super confidence se bhar uthe the woh chaaron..

wahin apne doston ko theek dekh MAHI turant aage badhi aur un chaaron ke gale lag gayi..

woh sab bhi pure dil aur khushi se MAHI ko hug kiye hue the..

wahin un sabse alag khada mai kuch seconds un sabko dekhta raha par phir apni left mutthi jisse maine NAILS ki SHIELD ko hataya tha,usse khol diya..

nails ab bhi moujud the meri hatheli par kyunki ab unka kaam ho chuka tha, isiliye dheere dheere woh nails gayab ho rahe the.

un nails ko dekh uski kahani ko yaad kiya maine aur apni aankhen band kar li...

kuch pal khudko niyantrit karne me nikal gaya mera but phir jab dimag sthir hua toh...


MAI-waada hai mera....


jo dekha gaya hai sapna,pura zaroor woh KHWAAB HOGA....

sawal puchta jaa VIDEOUS,tere har sawal ka mere paas JAWAAB HOGA...

ummid hai zakhm dete waqt unki ginti bhi kar raha hoga tu, kyunki,

tere diye har chot ka aakhir me tujhse bhi HISAAB HOGA...


















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Wow bhai kamal ka update tha


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