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Fantasy ATTITUDE (KABHI ANGEL KABHI DEVIL) ( Completed )

ashish_1982_in

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AB TAK AAPNE PADHA KI JAHAN EK TARAF MAHI, ACCHUTA, SLUNDER, BRAWNY AUR HIDA THIRD CHALLENGE ME COMPLETELY DIHYDRATE JO JAATE HAIN WAHIN DUSRI TARAF RAAZ US CHALLENGE KO PURA KAR KHUDKO AUR UN SABKO JUNGLE SE BAHAR NIKAL LETA HAI.


AB AAGE:-



CHAPTER-3


(THE DEVIL'S HAVEN,THE SACRIFICE & THE PERFECT EPILOGUE)



UPDATE-145



PLANET-ELYSIAN


PLACE-INFERIOR LEVEL




THE QUEST CONTINOUS


FIRST LEVEL:FINAL CHALLENGE:THE ALCAZAR







WHAT ARE YOU GUYZZ WAITING FOR....???AN INVITATION TO COME IN..!!!!


hume us gigantic ALCAZAR ke bahar abhi kuch hi der beeta tha ki tabhi ek awaaz us ALCAZAR ke andar se gunji jisse sun hum sab thode se chownk gaye the...


REASON...

woh awaaz kaafi refined,BLACK ENERGY se labalab aur strong impact waali thi but kuch jaani pehchaani thi aur isiliye..


ACCHUTA-ye awaaz kuch suni hui si lag rahi hai...!!!haina...???

SLUNDER-haan,but exactly kahan,ye samajh me nahi aa raha hai...???


SLUNDER aur ACCHUTA ki hi tarah ki baatein HIDA aur BRAWNY ne bhi ki jiske baad...


ACCHUTA-RAAZ,MAHI...tumhe ye awaaz pehle bhi suni hui si nahi lag rahi...???

MAHI-i think...

MAI-itni panchayat kis liye..andar chalkar khud dekh lo...ab jab awaaz hai,toh thobda bhi hoga hi..


MAHI ki baat kaaththe hue apni baat kahi maine aur phir aage badh gaya..

mere saath saath woh sab bhi aage badh chale...

kuch hi der me hum sab us ALCAZAR ke bade se front door ke saamne the..

humare us door ke saamne aate hi woh door bina awaaz ke khulta chala gaya jiske baad ek baar ek dusre ko dekh hum sab uske andar chale gaye..

humare andar jaate hi woh darwaza wapas band ho chuka tha..

ek endless hall jahan us door se hone ke baad hum pahunche the,usme khade hokar hum idhar udhar dekh hi rahe the ki tabhi humse kuch door ek black smoke uthne laga jisne dheere dheere ek HUMAN FORM lena shuru kiya.

kuch hi seconds me hamare saamne ek typical kaali shaktiyon ke numainde ke bhesh me,kaale labaade me jisne sir ko bhi dhaka tha,ek banda khada tha...

sir dhaka hone ki wajah se uska face dikh nahi raha tha aur naahi usne ab tak kuch bola tha aur isiliye....


MAI-dramatic entrance ki noutanki ho gayi ho toh apna thobda dikhane ki zehmat uthayega yaa phir aisi hi dulhan ki tarah ghunghat odhe hamara challenge batayega..


HAHAHAHA...


meri baat bol zoron se hasa woh suspicious banda aur phir...


UNKNOWN-typical RAAZ...punch lines kami kabhi nahi hoti...kyun..???

fikr mat kar,tujhe mai apna chehra bhi dikhaunga aur tujhe tum sabka challenge bhi bataunga...


apni baat bolte hue usne apna head cover hata liya aur jab usne aisa kiya toh....


ACCHUTA, SLUNDER, BRAWNY, HIDA aur MAHI bhi buri tarah chownke aur un sabke mooh se ek saath nikla...


ANWIR....


behadh shock hote hue apne saamne muskurate hue khade ANWIR ko dekh kahi ye baat un sabne...


REASON.....


is waqt ANWIR ke pure body se ek behadh strong black energy ka AURA release ho raha tha..

ye AURA maamuli ya normal bilkul bhi nahi tha..aisa AURA sirf pure DEVILS ke body se release hota hai..

ab bhale hi mere saath khade paanchon ne pehle kisi devils ko saamne ae dekha nahi tha,par CHOSENS ki library me unke baare me aur unke sharir se nikal rahe extra ordinary AURA aur shakti ke baare me padha zaroor tha..

unhone ye jaana tha ki ek DEVIL ka AURA ek strong sorcerer's AURA se 1000 times strong aur negetive vibe se bhara hota hai..

aur waisa hi vibe abhi ANWIR ki body se feel kar rahe the woh sab...

kaali gehri aankhen jinme ek invisible par asardaar aag jhalak rahi thi,face jo white the toh but kisi dead person ki tarah jama hua sa,aur us white aur bright face me ek evil persona saaf jhalak raha tha,muskurate hue dekh raha tha hum sab ko ANWIR..

wahin ANWIR ko kuch der dekh..


HIDA-ANWIR..!!!what have you become...!!!

ANWIR-not become..i have been transformed,upgraded into a A+ LEVEL DARK WARRIOR....


bohot proudly kahi ye baat ANWIR ne jiske baad...


ACCHUTA-wakayi,upgrade toh hua hai tu...pehle chota chutiya tha,ab bada chutiya hai...


apni aadat anusaar bina situation dekhe jo dil me aaya,bak diya ACCHUTA ne jispar...


ANWIR-ACCHUTA..the guy with just a loud mouth and no spine...

chaahun toh ek jhatke me tujhe,tujhe kya tum sabko kisi chiti ki tarah yahin masal dun par LORD aur LORDESS ki taraf se mujhe aisa karne ko ijaazat nahi hai...

but we can have a bit of fun...aisa toh kar hi sakta hun mai...


apne haathon ko rub karte hue kahi ye baat ANWIR ne aur phir achanak usne unhi haathon ko aage kar apni taraf kheencha aur uske aisa karte hi ACHHUTA ek jhatke me uski taraf kheenchata chala gaya...

agle hi pal woh ANWIR ke strong grip me jakda chhatpata raha tha...

aankhon me ghussa liye ACCHUTA ne apne sir ko puri taakat ke saath ANWIR ke sir par maar diya par uske aisa karte hi..

AHHHHHH...

ek tez cheekh nikli..par ye cheekh ANWIR ki nahi balki ACCHUTA ki thi...

ANWIR ke sir se khud ke sir ko bhidaate hi usse aisa laga jaise usne kisi patthar par apna sir de maara hai..

ek pal me hi sir ghum gaya uska jipar usne apna sir pakad liya..

wahin ACCHUTA ke ANWIR ke taraf kheenchate aur uske sir par dard hote hi SLUNDER,HIDA aur BRAWNY uski taraf lapke..

waise aage toh MAHI bhi badhne waali thi but tabhi...


MAI-abhi nahi... woh harm nahi karega un sabko..woh bas khel raha hai un sabke saath..khelne do..


meri baat sun MAHI ke badhte kadam apni jagah par hi rook gaye...

wahin jaise hi SLUNDER, HIDA aur BRAWNY aage badhe toh ANWIR ne ACCHUTA ko kisi ball ki tarah un teeno ki taraf fekh diya..

uske throw me itni power thi ki jaise hi ACHHUTA un teeno se takraya,woh teeno udte hue mere aur MAHI se kareeb 10 metre piche udte hue jaakar gire...

waise girne ke baad woh teeno toh jaldi hi uth gaye the but ACCHUTA jiska pehle se hi ANWIR ke sir se hui takkar ki wajah se dimag ghuma hua tha,is double impact waale takkar ki wajah woh thoda rook kar dheere se utha jiske baad kuch der un chaaron ko muskurate hue dekha ANWIR ne aur phir uski nazar mujhpar aur MAHI par padi jiske baad...


ANWIR-MAHI....CHOSENS me apne phase ki best SAVENT..but more importantly,LORD OF ANGELS ki beti...

kya hua,apne doston ko bachane ke liye aage nahi aayi tum...

aur RAAZ...jo khud THE CHOSEN ONE hai..jo kabhi kisi challenge se back out nahi karta..

aaj uske kadam bhi apni hi jagah oar chipke hue hain..puch sakta hun kyun..???

MAI-challenge waala bhaag tune specific hokar nahi bola..mai unhi challenges ko accept karta hun,jo mere laayak hon..

aire gaire logon se bhi takraane laga mai toh phir jaise tune bola,RAAZ,THE CHOSEN ONE,is title ki izzat kharab nahi ho jaayegi...!!!

ANWIR-RAAZ,RAAZ,RAAZ..all show no go,haan...tu apne ilaake ka sher hua karta tha,yahan teri aukaad mere aage kisi kutte se zyada nahi hai...

MAI-ohho..matlab yahan ka sher tu hai..par aise me according to your point of you, tu bhi toh dusre ilaake ka kutta hi hua naa..!!!

anyways, congrats tere upgradation ke liye...

THE DEVIL'S HAVEN me ek peon, ek chaprasi ki post mil gayi tujhe jo yahan humare liye notice lekar aaya hai..

ab jo kaam mila hai woh bhi kar de...notice padhkar suna aur nikal...


meri baaton ko sun jahan mere saare saathi has diye wahin ANWIR mujhe kuch pal ghurta raha par phir uske face par ek smile aa gayi aur...


ANWIR-very well then....

TUUUUUUU...


ek tez chukti bajayi ANWIR ne aur uske aisa karte hi ek saath do chizen hui...

pehli....

usse thoda piche ek saath 6 broad stairs prakat hue jo ghumte hue se is ganan chumbi ALCAZAR ke roof top tak jaa rahe the...

dusri...

ANWIR ke theek aaju baaju me 6 BLACK SHADOWS prakat hue the aur ye do chizen hone ke baad...


ANWIR-6 log ho tum aur jaisa dekh rahe ho,stairs bhi 6 hi hain..one for each one of you..

challenge ye hai ki tum sabko inme se ek ek stairs me chadhte hue is ALCAZAR ke roof top tak pahunchna hai..

aisa kar lo aur INFERIOR LEVEL khatm... simple..!!!!

MAI-very simple..ab hard part bhi bata.. what's the catch...????

ANWIR-arre,saamne hi toh hain...ye 6 BLACK SHADOWS...

chalo,in sabse tumhara intro kara dun.. waise inka koi individual naam nahi hai,bas ek complete pehchaan hai..

they are called the HALLUCINATORS....

jo inka naam hai,is challenge ke dauran wahi inka kaam bhi hai...

jab tum sab apne apne stairs me upar chadhne lagoge,tab ye bhi apni choice ke according ek ek stairs select karenge...

and then,as i said RAAZ...the catch begins...

RAAZ-they will hallucinate us in our way to the top...

ANWIR-yup.. but, that's the half part only...jab tum sab hallucinations ki charam par hoge,tab they will cut off your heads...

aur tum sab apne imaginatory worlds me itne khoye hue hoge ki tumhe pata bhi nahi chalega and you will be dead...

waise waar ye sab sirf ek hi baar karenge aur tumme se jo jo inhe dodge kar paayega,he aur she will paas this challenge...

simple, isn't it....!!!


ANWIR ki baat sun jahan ek taraf woh chaaron halke nervous hokar individually is challenge ko kaise pura karenge,ye soch rahe the,wahin MAI aur MAHI bhi yahi soch rahe the but sabke liye..

wahin apni baat ko aage badhate hue..


ANWIR-now let me let you about the prize..woh prize jo ACCHUTA, SLUNDER, HIDA aur BRAWNY tum chaaron ko milega agar tum sab is challenge ko cross kar gaye...

par woh prize hai kya,woh tumhe tab hi pata chalega jab tum is challenge ko pura kar loge..

sorry RAAZ,MAHI,tum sabko kuch nahi milega...waise bhi,tum dono ke hi parents ne tum sabko viraasat me itna kuch diya hai ki mujhe nahi lagta ki tumhe kisi chiz ki zaroorat hai...!!!

kyun,sahi hai naa..!!!???

MAI- absolutely...par pata hai,kyun tere LORD ne hum dono ke liye koi prize nahi rakha hai...

kyunki bhikari bheek leta hai,deta nahi hai..aur tere dono so called LORDS bhikari hi toh hain...

jiske order se tu yahan hai(VIRAAZ)uski shakti meri bheekh hai aur tere LORD ke LORD ke paas jo shakti hai,woh iske BAAP ka daan hai...

ab jo khud charity case hon, woh kaise un do logon ko kuch de sakte hain jinki wajah se unka pura astitv bana hai...


meri theeki baaton ko sun jalti aankhon se dekha mujhe ANWIR ne aur phir..


ANWIR-all the best guyzzz.i personally want you all to succeed in this challenge...

challenge ke baad milte hain...


apni baat bol kaale dhuen me badal ANWIR gayab ho gaya aur ussike saath woh 6 BLACK SHADOWS bhi un 6 stairs ki taraf jaate hue gayab ho gaye jiske baad...


MAI man me-filhal itni energy, strength hai nahi ki ek saath in chaaron ko handle kar sakun...


maine ye man ki baat MAHI ke brain se connect hokar kahi thi jisse sun waise hi man me...


MAHI-we will share..do,do karkar baanth lete hain...

MAI-sirf HUMAN FORM POWER SOURCE ki shakti se hi tum ye kar sakti ho but woh in sabke liye dangerous ho sakta hai...

hallucinations ke waqt woh shakti ek unwanted aur unbearable shakti ki tarah bhi react kar sakti hai...

MAHI-sabse important baat kaise skip kar gaye tum..energy sharing ki wajah se humara subconscious brain strength bhi kam ho jaayega but phir bhi,if you are risking it,mai bhi ye karungi...


jahan ek dusre ko dekhte hue man hi man kar rahe the ye saari baatein wahin hume yun ek dusre ko lagataar taakte dekh...


ACCHUTA-guyz,nain mattakka ke liye ye jagah thodi odd nahi hai...


ACCHUTA ki baat sun apni nazar ek dusre se hatathe hue un chaaron ko dekha humne aur...


MAI-at the right time...

MAHI-cool...

HIDA-ye kya baat kar rahe ho tum dono...???

MAHI-kuch nahi.. future planning kar rahe the hum dono...

ACCHUTA-kis chiz ki..!!! challenge pura karne ki yaa fir life kaise saath bitana hai,uski...

MAHI-idhar udhar ki baat chhodo aur khudko challenge ke liye mentally taiyar rakho..

HALLUCINATIONS...jaise hi stairs par pehla kadam rakho,khudke brain ko yaad dilate rehna ki jo bhi hoga,woh sab illusion hai,kuch bhi sach nahi..

keep your mind open...ok..!!!

CHAARON-ok...


thoda confidently ye bol woh chaaron aur unke saath mai aur MAHI bhi stairs ki taraf badh gaye..

apne apne stairs ke first seedhi ke saamne pahunch ek dusre ko dekha humne aur phir humne apna first step is level ke aakhri challenge ki pehle paaydaan ki taraf badha liya aur jab humne aisa kiya toh...

ek hawa ka jhonka sa aaya aur ACCHUTA, SLUNDER, BRAWNY aur HIDA se takra sa gaya...

woh chaaron hi samajh chuke the hallucinations ka dour kabhi bhi shuru ho sakta hai aur isiliye...

pehle stair par kadam rakhte hi ek baar unhone upar dekha jahan zigzag pattern me woh endless se lagne waale stairs upar roof top par jaa rahe the..

apni manzil ko dekhne ke baad khudki body ko ek jhatka sa diya un chaaron ne aur phir woh sab jitna ho sake,utni tezi se upar chadhne lage..

is challenge me pysically thakne ka magic toh tha nahi, isiliye kaafi speedily bina thake ek baar me 3 se 4 siddhiyan chadthte hue upar chadhne lage...

wahin un chaaron ki tarah meri aur MAHI ki stair chadhne ki speed bhi zyada thi but upar chadhne ke saath saath hum dono apni aantarik drishti ko bhi jagane ki koshish kar rahe the...

kyunki yahi ek tarika tha kisi bhi tarah ke hallucinations se khudko protect karne ka but problem ye thi ki naa toh mere paas aur naahi MAHI ke paas filhal itni shakti thi jo apni aantarik drishti ko completely use me laa sake..

but fir bhi jitna ho sake,us shakti ko channelize karne ki koshish kar rahe the hum dono..

abhi tak hum sabko stairs chadhte hue 10 minute se zyada ho chuka tha...

par itni der me bhi humne total stairs ka sirf 10 percent hi cover kiya tha...

khair, time ki toh koi boundation thi nahi..

par phir bhi apni puri jaan lagakar upar chadhte hue chale jaa rahe the hum sab...

aur issi tarah hume upar chadhte hue lagbhagh 1 ghanta ho gaya..

ab tak lagbhag 50 percent ka apna safar pura kar chuke the hum sab aur woh bhi bina kisi problem aur hurdle ke..

aur yahi wajah thi ki hum sab ab thoda complacent ho gaye the..

hum sabka zyadatar focus ab tezi se upar chadhte hue roof top par pahuncne ka tha..

hamara concentration level thoda kam ho chuka tha aur yahi toh ye jagah chahti thi..

jab tak hum sabke brains kisi hallucinations ke liye apne aap ko pura ready rakhe hue the,tab tak humare dimag me ek invisible darwaza sa bana hua tha jo kisi bhi unknown aur unwanted drishya ko andar naa ghusne dene ke liye shut down kiya jaa sakta tha but hamara complacent hone se ye darwaza gayab ho chuka tha..

humne kisi bhi external chiz ko ek open invitation sa de diya tha aur shayad ye jagah yahi chahti thi..

abhi hum sab tezi se aage badh hi rahe the ki tabhi achanak se hum sabke saamne ka drishya hi badal gaya...


AHHHHHHH......

ACCHUTA,SLUNDER ke just aage ek unknown dark space ban gaya tha jahan uske mom dad ke spirits chains se bandhe hue the..

unke piche haathon m hunter liye do PUNISHERS khade the jo lagatar un dono par hunter barsaaye jaa rahe the jiski wajah se ACCHUTA aur SLUNDER ke mom dad zoron se cheekh rahe the...

apne mom dad ki cheekh ko sun ACCHUTA aur SLUNDER ki aankhen bhi bhar aayi thi..tadap uthe woh dono aur saath hi ghusse se bhar woh un PUNISHERS ki taraf badhe par tabhi..

un dono ke pair apni hi jagah par jam gaye...woh aage nahi badh paa rahe the...

apni jagah pur stuck hone par unki jhunjlahat aur badh gayi..

bas apne mom dad ke cheekh ko sun khud andar se tooththe jaa rahe the woh dono...

ACCHUTA aur SLUNDER dono hi apne ghutno par aa gaye aur taaki woh cheekhen unhe naa sunayi de, isiliye apni aankhon ko band kar apne dono kaano par haath rakh liya un dono ne...

par unke aisa karne par ulta asar hua..band aankhon aur kaano ke beech unhe unke mom dad aur unki cheekhen zyada kareeb se sunayi dene aur feel hone lagi...

un cheekhon ko sun aur feel kar dono ka mind dheere dheere apna sudh budh khone laga tha...

wahin dusri taraf BRAWNY ke aage unke home planet ka rajmahal tha jiske ek karagar me uske mom aur dad moujud the...

is waqt SHALTON par rajdroh ka ilzam laga hone ki wajah se usse baandh kar rakha gaya tha..

wahin dusri taraf NAOMI fate kapdo me neeche zamin par baithi hui thi...

uske paas hi do lady khade the jo lagatar usse mock karte hue ek gaddar ki biwi bol uspar thook rahe the...

BRAWNY rajpariwar se tha aur ek CHOSENS aane se pehle ek below average zindagi jeene ke baawjud uske khoon me rajdharm aur pyar bhara hua tha...

aise me apne hi pitah ko ek rajdrohi ke roop ke dekh aur saath hi saath apno mom ki dayneeya haalat ko mehsoos kar uska khoon khoul utha tha..

woh bhi ACCHUTA aur SLUNDER ki hi tarah apne mom dad ki taraf lapakne ko hue par un dono ko hi tarah woh bhi aage badh nahi paaya..

fark sirf itna tha ki jahan ACCHUTA aur SLUNDER ke pair apni hi jagah par stucked ho gaye the wahin BRAWNY ke case me uske aage jail ki salaakhen thi jiske dusri taraf uske mom dad the..

aur woh un salakhon ko cross nahi kar paa raha tha..

aur naahi uski awaaz uske mom dad ko aur wahan moujud logon ko sunayi de rahi thi...

ghussa aur bebasi ke mile jule bhaav ke beech fas chuka tha BRAWNY jisme kuch der baad ghussa kam aur bebasi ki feeling zyada hone lagi aur jab aisa hua toh ACCHUTA aur SLUNDER ki hi tarah, BRAWNY bhi apne ghutno par aa rote hue apne mom dad ki tadap dekh aur mehsoos karne laga...

wahin teesri taraf thi HIDA jiske aage ek alag hi scene chal raha tha..ek aisa scene jiske shuru hote hi HIDA puri tarah se panick ho chuki thi...

aur woh scene the uski mom ki death ka..unki tadap,unke dil ka dheere dheere rookna,saanson ko lene me taklif hona aur phir aakhri me unki navs band ho jaana,ye sab naa sirf HIDA dekh rahi thi,balki apne dimag me mehsoos bhi kar rahi thi.

aur ye uske liye unbearable tha..pair uske bhi apni jagah par jam gaye the jiski wajah se woh apne sir ko neeche kiye bas cheekhte hue roye jaa rahi thi....

aur aakhir me chowthi aur paanchwi taraf the mai aur MAHI..

hum dono ke aage chal raha drishya ek dusre se kaafi milta julta tha...

jahan mere aage mere aadhe janm aur aadhi uttpatti ka wahi scene chal raha tha jisse mai kabhi bhi dekhna nahi chahta tha wahin MAHI ke nazaron ke saamne bhi jab uske mom dad human the,us waqt ka scene chal raha tha..

woh scene jisme GOD ne usse uski MOM AVANTIKA ki kokh se nikal liya tha aur phir kayi haxaron saalon baad ek urja ke roop me usse dharti par bheje jaane ki taiyaari ki gayi thi...

aur us scene ko aur taklif deh banane waali baat ye thi ki is HALLUCINATION ke daur me bhi MAHI ko VIKRAM aur AVANTIKA ke faces blurred dikh rahe the..

but in saare HALLUCANATIONS ke beech ek baat ye bhi thi ki unlike ACCHUTA, SLUNDER, BRAWNY and HIDA,hum dono ke reality sense doors puri tarah gayab nahi hue the..

hamare saamne jo scenes chal rahe the,hamare brain ka ek part hume us scene ko fake bata raha tha but phir bhi un HALLUCINATION scenes ne hum dono ke hi right switch ko daba diya tha jiski wajah se hum dono ke hi anger aur frustration ki batti jal chuki thi...

hum dono ke hi zindagi ka woh sach jisse hum yaad nahi karna chahte the,woh hamari aankhon ke saamne chal raha tha aur ye hum dono ke liye hi ek mental tormentation ki tarah tha...

ghusse se kampkapate hue hum dono hi us scene ko band karna chahte the but un chaaron ke hi tarah humare pair bhi apni jagah par jakad se gaye the...

aur is saare chaos ke beech joki asal me bas ek bhram tha, usse bilkul ulat asliyat me kuch aur ho raha tha...

woh 6 BLACK SHADOWS bade araam se sadhe hue kadmo se stairs utarte hue hum sabke paas aa rahe the..

un sabke haathon me ek ek kaali chamakti hui sword thi jisse kuch hi palon me woh sab hamara gala kaatne waale the..

aur hum sab is sachayi se anjaan ek bhram jaal me fase hue the...

but ek difference tha...

aur woh ye ki jahan ab tak ACCHUTA, SLUNDER, BRAWNY aur HIDA ke HALLUCINATIONS unhe bilkul sach lag rahe the,wahin mere aur MAHI ke dimag ka ek hissa hamare samne chal rahe scenes ko jhuta bata raha tha..

but phir bhi jab hum dono us bharm se paida hone waale pain ki wajah se uski awaaz ko neglect karte rahe toh us hisse ne mere aur MAHI ke brain me ek dusra scene bhi chala diya...

jahan MAHI ke dimag ke ys jaage hue hisse me uski aur uske pitah ke beech hui conversation gunj uthi wahin mujhe ek aur painful scene dikhayi dene laga..

woh scene jisme maine apne haathon se apne mom dad ko maara tha...

aur ye scene mere maamle me us ghee ki tarah tha jo aag ko kuch yun bhadkaati hai jo har chiz ko jala deti hai..

mere andar ghusse aur nafrat ka ek sailab sa utha..

ye sailab itna zyada powerful tha ki ek saath mere chaaron AMPLIFICATION modes joki HALLUCINATIONS ki wajah se dull padh gaye the,ek jhatke me activate ho gaye...

kaali urja ka AURA joki nere vagus nerves me ghum rahi thi,woh bhi un AMPLIFICATIONS ke saath judte hue unhe aur strong banane lagi aur jab aisa hua toh mere dimag ka woh hissa jisme HALLUCINATIONS
ka magic kaam kar raha tha,uska darwaza band hone laga..

aisa hone par us HALLUCANATIVE MAGIC ne bhi darwaza band naa ho,iske liye apna dum lagaya par woh kaamiyab nahi ho paa raha tha..

aur is beech MAHI ka bhram jaal bhi tootne laga..aur jab aisa hua toh ek saath do chizen hui..

ek mere saath aur ek uske saath...

hamare brain ka ek teesra part bhi tha joki is waqt ACCHUTA, SLUNDER, BRAWNY aur HIDA ke brain se juda tha..

yaad hoga woh scene jab stairs par pair rakhte hi unse ek hawa ka jhonka takra gaya tha...

ye jhonka asal me brain connectivity ki ray thi...ACCHUTA aur SLUNDER se mera brain connected tha,HIDA aur BRAWNY se MAHI ka..

(NOTE:-yahi baat kar rahe the mai aur MAHI challenge start hone se pehle)


HALLUCINATIONS ko samajhte hi mere aur MAHI ke danger sensing ability activate ho chuki thi jisne hamare us teesre part ko joki un chaaron se connected tha,hum 6 logon ki taraf badhte un BLACK SHADOWS ke baare me joki ab tak theek humare sir ke upar pahunch chuke the,unke baare me bata diya tha aur jab aisa hua toh...


MAI-DODGE GUYZZZ....

INBORN REFLEXES....un chaaron ke ussi bhaag me gunji hum dono ki awaaz aur aisa hote hi woh chaaron bina soche neeche jhuk chuke the...

wahin mai aur MAHI,hume jhukne ki zaroorat nahi padi thi..

jahan ek taraf MAHI ki HUMAN FORM POWER SOURCE ki urja bahar nikal aayi thi jisse takrakar uske saamne waale BLACK SHADOW ki sword rook gayi wahin mai jiske sharir ka har ang,us second scene ko dekh ghusse se ubaal maar raha tha,jaise hi us BLACK SHADOW ne apni sword ghumayi toh meri body ek invisible triggered speed ke saath ghumte hue uske piche pahunch gayi..

wahin jaisa ki tay tha,humare un BLACK SHADOWS ke waar se bachte hi woh yahan se chale jaane waale the,wahi woh karne lage..

dhuan ban woh 6 BLACK SHADOWS gayab hone hi waale the ki tabhi...

mere sharir se BLACK ENERGY ka AURA nikla aur bijli ki tezi se un sabko touch kar gaya..

us AURA me ek electrifying energy thi jisse un SHADOWS tak ko ek tez jhaka laga..

aur jisi chumbakiya kheenchav ki tarah woh 6 BLACK SHADOWS mere saamne kheenchate hue ikattha ho gaye...

wahin un 6 BLACK SHADOWS ko samajh aa gaya tha ki mai unhe khatm karne ka irada rakhta hun..

yahi wajah thi ki woh mujhe attack karne ke liye SPELL bolne waale the but woh aisa kar paate,usse pehle hi jo HALLUCANATIVE scenes maine dekhe the,aur jinki wajah se mere andar rage ka,ghusse ka sailab umda hua tha,us rage ne khudko ek forced energy ka roop diya aur mere chaaron AMPLIFICATION modes ki taakat ko khudme channelize karte hue woh mere VAGUS NERVES ki BLACK ENERGY ke saath ja mila..

aisa hote hi woh RAGE FORCED ENERGY kayi guna tak badh gayi aur ek jhatke me mere sharir se kul 6 layers me nikal un saare BLACK SHADOWS ko jaa lagi....

ye energy un sabke liye bohot zyada painful bhi thi aur deadly bhi..

haad maans naa hone ke baawjud un 6 BLACK SHADOWS ko apne andar kuch jalta aur tooththa hua mehsoos hone laga..

awaaz unke paas thi nahi but phir bhi kisi short circuit ki awaaz un sabse aane lagi...

kisi tarah khudko niyantrit kar woh sab gayab hone ki koshish karne lage aur woh aisa karne me kaamiyab ho bhi jaate par tabhi..

MAHI ke sharir se uski ANGEL'S FORM POWER SOURCE ka beam bahar nikla aur jaise THE DARK LAKE ke aage MAHI ne mujhe chaaron taraf se ghera tha,is baar uski us beam ne un 6 BLACK SHADOWS ko gher liya..

aisa hone ki wajah se ab woh sabhi ek SPELL stopper ke andar fas chuke the jiski wajah se ab woh koi bhi SPELL nahi bol sakte the..

wahin is beech meri ray un sabko penetrate karne lagi thi jiski wajah se un sabka woh SHADOW roop bhi akad sa gaya tha aur usse ek gaadha solid BLACK sharp tool nikalne laga tha..

ye tool unki hi shakti se bana tha jiske nikalte hi maine apna haath aage kiya..

mere aisa karte hi woh tool mere haath me aa gaya jiske baad tezi se aage badha mai aur ek hi jhatke me maine us tool ko un 6 BLACK SHADOWS ke akade hue bodies ke aar paar kar diya...

BOOMMM....

sharir ke kaaththe hi ek dhamake ke saath woh 6 BLACK SHADOWS khatm ho gaye..

but unke khatm hote hi woh ALCAZAR aur wo 6 stairs jisme hum sab khade the,woh hilne laga...

ye isiliye hua kyunki jo tay kiya gaya tha,humne un SHADOWS ko khatm kar usme ek naya clause sa daal diya tha aur isiliye ye jagah ab khatm hone waali thi..

ACCHUTA, SLUNDER, BRAWNY aur HIDA jo apne HALLUCINATIONS se bahar aa mujhe un 6 SHADOWS ko maarta dekh khush ho rahe the,woh bhi stairs ke hilne se ladkhadane lage...

wahin SHADOWS ke khatm hote hi woh sharp tool bhi dhuan banane laga but tabhi maine us tool ko jis stair me mai khada tha,usme ghussa diya aur jab aisa hua toh woh saare stairs jinme hum khade the,usme 6 black carpet se ban gaye aur un carpets ne hum sabko apni shakti se hawa me utha liya...

mai jaanta tha ki aisa hi kuch hoga aur woh isiliye kyunki us tool ko bhi apne masters ke khatm hone ke baad is ALCAZAR se bahar hi jaana tha...

hum sabke liye ek SHADOW ko niyukt kiya gaya tha aur isiliye us tool ne bhi hum sabke hisaab se khudko spread kiya tha...

khair,hume hawa me utha kuch seconds woh tool numa carpet rooka raha but phir jab pure ALCAZAR ki kampan itni zyada badh gayi ki woh puri imarat tezi se tootne lagi toh hum sabhi ke pairon ke neeche bicha woh TOOL CARPET hume liye tezi se upar roof top ki taraf uthne laga...

neeche dekh rahe the hum sab jahan is waqt pura ALCAZAR kisi reth ke mahal ki taraf dehne ki kagar par pahunch chuka tha..

ACCHUTA, SLUNDER, BRAWNY,HIDA aur MAHI ke face par khushi dekhte hi ban rahi thi..

REASON..

DEVIL'S HAVEN ka first level jo successfully cross kar liya tha hum sabne...

wahin un sabse alag mai aankh band kiye hue tha aur woh isiliye kyunki itne dino me pehli baar mera jalta hua dil kuch shaant hua tha...

us shaanti ko feel kar hi raha tha mai ki tabhi...


YE SHAANTI ISILIYE HAI MERE BACCHE KYUNKI AAJ PEHLI BAAR TUNE APNE GHUSSE KO SAHI DISHA DETE HUE KAAM ME LIYA HAI...


ye thi RONIT ki awaaz jo mere andar gunj uthi jisse carry forward karte hue...


ANJALI-SUKH AUR DUKH ZINDAGI KE AHEM HISSE HAIN..INKE SAHI BEECH TAALMEL BAITHANA HI TOH ASLI "RAAZ" HAI....

ye saari baatein bol shaant ho gayi un dono ki awaaz par aankhein meri ab bhi band thi...

aaj pehli baar un dono ki awaaz sun mujhe bura nahi laga tha..

halaki acha bhi nahi laga tha but feelings nutral mode par thi aur utna hi kaafi tha..

khair,ek pal un dono ke face ko yaad karne ke baad mere zehen me aaya VIDEOUS ka face aur aisa hote hi jahan ab tak mere facial expressions normal the,wahin ab mere jabde sakhti se bheenchte chale gaye.

band aankhon ke beech aag dehek uthi jisse mere dil aur dimag dono ne mehsoos kiya aur aankh khul gayi meri...

neeche us khatm hote ALCAZAR ko dekhte hue muskuraya mai aur..


MAI-VIDEOUS.....



daav par apni jaan ko lagakar mai khudko AAZMATA JAAUNGA....

tujhe khatm karne ka VAADA kiya tha,mar bhi gaya toh woh vaada NIBHATA JAAUNGA....

maana ki filhal teri taakat zyada hai mujhse....koi naa.....

tu taakat dikhata jaa,mai JIGAR DIKHATA jaaunga...

















AAJ KE LIYE ITNA HI.....



















AAPKA APNA V...J....
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AB TAK AAPNE PADHA KI JAHAN EK TARAF MAHI DEMONIC BLOOD PARTICLES SE AZAAD HO JAATI HAI WAHIN DUSRI TARAF USKI ANGEL'S FORM POWER SOURCE BHI EK JHATKE ME 25 PERCENT TAK TRIGGER HOTE HUE DUSRE POWER SOURCE KE TARAF SARAK JAATI HAI.


AB AAGE:-



CHAPTER-3


(THE DEVIL'S HAVEN,THE SACRIFICE & THE PERFECT EPILOGUE)



UPDATE-144



PLANET-ELYSIAN


PLACE-INFERIOR LEVEL



THE QUEST CONTINOUS


FOURTH CHALLENGE:THE DARK MAGICAL JUNGLE






THE DARK MAGICAL JUNGLE....ANY GUESSES,KAUN KAUN SE EVIL MAGIC SE POSSESSED HOGA YE JUNGLE...


khudse kareeb 500 metre door dikh rahe ek halke kaale rang ke jungle ko dekhte hue kahi thi ye BRAWNY ne jispar..


ACCHUTA-arre jungle chhod,ye dono itni der se kya badbada rahe hain aur kab tak aisa hi karte rahenge,koi ye bata sakta hai kya..!!!


mujhe aur MAHI ko dekhte hue,joki is waqt un chaaron se thoda aage ek dusre ko face kar aankh band kar baithe hue ek CHANNELIZING SPELL lagatar budbuda kar rahe the,ussi ko dekhte hue kahi thi ye baat ACCHUTA ne jispar...


SLUNDER-ek kaam kar,unhe CEREBRATION mode se nikal khud puch lena jaakar...

ACCHUTA-shakal ke level ko competition dene waali wahiyaad baat karni zaroori hai kya...????

SLUNDER-abbe daant kya andar ho gaye,handsome samajhne laga hai kya tu khudko..???

mujhe toh aaj bhi tere woh andar chale gaye daant bahar hi nazar aate hain..

ACCHUTA-batao.. jis umar me log hot girls ko bikini me imagine karte haun,usme tu mere un daanton ko jo bahar hain hi nahi, imagine kar raha hai..

ek baat bata,tere GOD GIFTED POWERS ke saath teri manly choices bhi toh lock nahi ho gayi...!!!


ACCHUTA ki baat par SLUNDER kuch react karta,usse pehle...


BRAWNY-oh stop it guyz....kaun si baat ko kahan lejaate ho tum dono...

maalum nahi hai kya tum dono ko ki MAHI aur RAAZ apne apne AURA'S ko channelize karne ki koshish kar rahe hain..

ussi kaam ke liye koi SPELL budbuda rahe honge dono..


BRAWNY ki baat sun uske saath ACCHUTA aur SLUNDER bhi hum dono ko yaa phir ye kahun ki specifically MAHI ko dekhne lage.

aur woh isiliye kyunki is waqt uske face par rahaat ke bhaav the joki kuch der pehle tak dard waale the...

toh hua yun ki THE DARK LAKE ke quest ko paar kar jab hum sab aage badhe toh MAHI ko apne chest me halka bhaaripan lagne laga jo guzarte waqt ke saath dard me badalne laga..

dekhte hi dekhte woh dard kaafi badh gaya aur uske mooh se ek ahh nikal gayi..

MAHI ko pain me dekh jahan uska chaaron dost uske liye pareshan ho gaye wahin RAAZ relaxed hi tha aur woh isiliye kyunki usse MAHI ke pain ka reason bhi pata tha aur solution bhi...

darasal MAHI ka ANGEL'S FORM POWER SOURCE jisse kuch der pehle MAHI ne control kiya tha,woh kaabu me toh aa chuka tha par yun achanak se trigger hone ki wajah se apni jagah par stable nahi ho paaya tha..

woh urja MAHI ke heart me baayin taraf dil ki hi tarah dhadakte hue khud ko adjust karne ki koshish kar rahi thi aur is proccess me woh apni MISTRESS MAHI ko hi pain pahuncha rahi thi..

wahin kuch kuch same haalat meri bhi thi..

MAHI ke ANGEL'S AURA se ladne ke liye mere vagus nerves se jo BLACK ENERGY ka AURA bahar aaya tha,woh wapas andar toh chala gaya tha but puri tarah vagus nerves me nahi samaya tha..

woh us part ke ird gird ghum raha tha..aisa hone se mujhe MAHI ki tarah pain toh nahi ho raha tha but bechaini zaroor ho rahi thi aur isiliye hi apne aur MAHI ke urja ko STABILIZE kar unhe unki asli jagah oar settle karne ke hi hum dono is waqt apne next quest THE DARK MAGICAL JUNGLE se kuch door baithe apne AANTRIK DRISHTI ki madad se apni urjaon ko stable karne me lage hue the...

khair,jahan hum dono PAUSED CEREBRATION me baithe hue the, ACCHUTA, SLUNDER aur BRAWNY hume dekh rahe the,wahin HIDA MAHI ko dekhte hue kuch gehri soch me khoyi hui thi jisse jab kuch der baad ACCHUTA ne gour kiya toh..


ACCHUTA-itni gehri soch..!!!aisa kya soch rahin hai WHIZZ aap..???


ACCHUTA ki awaaz sun HIDA ka dhyan MAHI se hath uspar aur uske baaju me khade baaki dono par gaya joki is waqt usse hi dekh rahe the aur isiliye...


HIDA-yaad hai MAHI ke unstable hone par humare dimag se jud RAAZ ne kya kaha tha...???

MAHI abhi sirf ek ANGEL hai...

BRAWNY-arre haan..ye baat toh us waqt mujhe bhi hit hui thi but us waqt ke situation ki wajah se mere dimag se nikal gayi..

kya matlab tha RAAZ ke us baat ka...???


MAINE KOI PARABLE NAHI BOLA THA...STRAIGHT BAAT BOLI THI..AUR JO BOLI THI, MATLAB BHI USKA WAHI THA..


ye awaaz meri thi jo ab MAHI ke saath hi apne CEREBRATION process se bahar aa chuka tha aur un chaaron ko dekh apni baat kahi thi jispar un sabki aankhe badi ho gayi aur..


BRAWNY-matlab..!!kya MAHI ANGEL hai..!!!!????

MAI-sort of..ohda thoda zyada bada hai iska...

ACCHUTA-bhai,tu kya bol raha hai,kuch bhi palle nahi padh raha..???ANGEL se bada ohda hai matlab..!!!!


ACCHUTA ki baat sun ek baar MAHI ko dekha maine jo shaant hi khadi thi aur woh isiliye kyunki woh bhi jaan gayi thi ki ab asliyat chhupane ka koi matlab nahi hoga..

khair,ek pal MAHI ki taraf dekh..


MAI-MAHI LORD OF ANGELS joki GOD'S SON bhi hain, unki beti hai...

BOOMMMM...

meri baat sun ek dhamaka sa hua un chaaron ke dimag me...

ANGELS LORD ki beti unki dost thi,ye baat ab digestable toh thi bhi nahi..

jiske saath hasi mazak karte aa rahe the woh sab,uska ohda itna uncha hai jaan apne aap hi woh chaaron apne ghutne par aa gaye jisse dekh MAHI turant un chaaron ke paas pahunchi aur unhe uthate hue...


MAHI-mai sirf tum teeno ki friend hun aur WHIZZ,aapki SAVENT..aap sabke liye meri yahi pehchaan hai aur mai chahti hun ki aap sab mujhe issi pehchaan ke hisaab se treat karen aur kisi bhi tarah se nahi..

ye request hai meri... please ispar amal kijiyega warna bura lagega mujhe...

MAHI ki asliyat sun trance me toh woh chaaron abhi bhi the par saath hi saath uski saralta ko dekh woh sab muskura bhi uthe aur man hi man behadh khush bhi..

wahin MAHI ki baat khatm hote hi..


ACCHUTA-yaar ek ek card banwa lete hain.. ANGEL'S LORD ki beti dost hai humari toh har jagah par apni dhaak chale,aisa koi identification card toh honi chahiye naa hum sabke paas...


ACCHUTA ke mazak ko sun sabke face par smile aa gayi jiske baad..


MAI-chalen ki aur thodi der yahan rookne ka irada hai...???

ACCHUTA-waah..tum dono ki wajah se hi hum sab abhi tak yahan hain warna ab tak toh next quest ko paar karte hue us ALCAZAR ko apne naam likhwa chuka hota mai..


ye bol ACCHUTA aage badh gaya wahin uski baat sun MAHI aur woh teeno has pade jiske baad hum sab bhi uske piche ho liye...




THE DARK MAGICAL FOREST:-





HALKI KAALI DHUNDH,KAREEB 5 se 8 METRES CHHODKAR LAGE ASANKHYA PED...

PAR DO PEDH AISE JINKE BEECH BAS 3 METRE KA HI FAASLA THA AUR USSI FAASLE KE BEECH BANA THA EK HALKA CHOWDA PAGDANDI SA RAASTA JO SIDHE US ALCAZAR KI TARAF JAA RAHA HAI....

KOI SHIELD, NEGETIVE BARRIERS,TRICK HOLES FEEL BAHI HO RAHE,STRANGE NAA.!!!!


apne stabled ANGEL'S FORM POWER SOURCE ko jo bhale filhal woh yahan is duniya me ekdum se kisi par use nahi kar paa rahi thi, par scene detect toh kar hi sakti thi,wahi kar uske baare me batate hue mujhe dekha MAHI ne jispar....


MAI-kabhi kabhi simple dikhne waali cheezen hi sabse zyada complexed hoti hain...

anyways,chalo aage...


apni baat bol mai aur mere piche MAHI us DARK MAGICAL JUNGLE me enter kar gayi aur humare saath hi woh chaaron bhi ek baad ek piche ho liye...

mai bade dhyan se har taraf dekhta aur dhyan deta hi aage badh raha tha..

yahi cheez MAHI aur woh chaaron bhi kar rahe the...

hume chalte hue ab kareeb ek ghanta nikal chuka tha par ab tak naa toh humare saamne koi challenge aaya tha aur naahi kisi bhi tarah ki rukawat...

bade araam se chalte hue aage badh rahe the hum sab but haan, ek baat joki hum sabke liye kahin se bhi normal nahi thi,woh feel kar paa rahe the hum sab..

aur woh ye ki jahan lagatar kayi 100 kilometres tak tez doudne ke baad bhi hum sab thakte nahi the,wahin filhal bas chalte rehne bhar se hi hume thoda thoda tired feel hone laga tha...

infact meri aur MAHI ki thakan bhi ACCHUTA, SLUNDER, BRAWNY aur HIDA jitni hi thi jiska bas ek matlab tha ki ye MAGICAL JUNGLE ek energy drainage SPELL se bandha hua hai jo isme enter karne waale har shaksh ki pyscical energy ko equally sokhta hai...

but sawal tha kyun...!!!!

agar ye jungle ek energy drainage SPELL se bandha hua hai toh aisa karne ka maksad hai isme enter karne waale shaksh ko thakana aur phir kisi creature yaa task ke through usse khatm karna..

but naa toh abhi tak hume is jungle me koi creature feel hua tha aur naahi koi challenge sense...

phir saala logic tha toh tha kya..???

mai yahi sab sochte hue aage badh raha tha ki tabhi...


HIDA-guyzz...kuch der rookte hain naa...!!!kaafi thakan lag rahi hai...


haafte hue kahi ye baat HIDA jispar ACCHUTA, SLUNDER aur BRAWNY ne bhi haan me haan milaya..

aur ye dekh mai ghusse se unhe kuch bolne ko hua par tabhi...


MAHI-theek hai...5 minute ka break le lete hain...


mujhe request karti nazaron se dekhte hue kahi ye baat MAHI ne jispar ek baar usse ghusse se dekh mai shaant khada reh gaya...

waise thakan toh mujhe aur MAHI ko bhi kaafi lagne laga tha but ek toh hum dono ki iccha shakti bohot zyada prabal thi aur dusri bhale hi hum sab ke energies is jagah par equal amount me drain ho rahe the but MAHI aur meri recovery in paanchon se tez thi isiliye hum abhi unse zyada energy feel kar paa rahe the...

khair,MAHI ke 5 minute ke break ki baat sun woh chaaron kaafi relaxed ho gaye par ye relaxation zyada der tak chal nahi paayi aur woh isiliye kyunki rookne me baad bhi hum sabki thakaan kam hone ki jagah badhne lag gayi thi jiska ek hi matlab tha ki is forest me hum rooke ye chalte rahen, humari energy drain hoti hi rahegi..

ab ye baat kaafi dangerous thi... kyunki humko pata nahi tha ki hume kitne waqt tak chalna padega aur jitna waqt hum yahan rahenge,utne waqt tak humari thakaan badhti hi chali jaayegi..

aur upar se is duniya me woh paani bhi nahi tha jisse peekar hum apne sookh rahe gale ko geela kar sake...

wow,ye pehla aisa challenge tha jisme koi humpar attack nahi kar raha tha but phir bhi hum sabki jaan khatre me thi...

brilliant tactics.. absolutely brilliant...

khair,kar toh kuch sakte the nahi aur isiliye..


MAI-rook kar koi faayda nahi..agar thakna hi hai toh aage badhte hue aisa karen toh hi sahi hoga..

waise bhi,is thakaan aur challenge ko khatm karne ke liye hume is jungle se bahar nikalna hi padega...

meri baat sahi thi aur isiliye hadh se zyada thake hone ke baawjud woh sab kisi tarah khade hue jiske baad hum sab ek baar phirse aage badh gaye...

10 minute, phir 20 minute,30,40,50 aur phir ek aur ghanta hum sab aage badhte hi rahe par agar is dauran koi apni manzil ke paas pahunch raha tha toh woh thi hum sabhi ki thakaan joki ab behoshi me tabdil hone waali thi...

meri aur MAHI ki toh haalat humare recovery power ki wajah se phir bhi theek thaak thi but ACCHUTA, SLUNDER, BRAWNY aur HIDA....

ye chaaron toh chalte hue bhi aise lag rahe the maano neend me hon aur sleep walking kar rahe hon...

but phir kuch der baad ek aisa time bhi aaya jab...


DHOBBB.....


line se ek saath woh chaaron neeche zamin par mooh ke bal gire..itna hi nahi,pairon me taakat nahi hone ke baawjud sirf iccha shakti ke bal par lagatar chalte rehne ki wajah se un chaaron ke mooh se halka halka khoon bhi nikalne laga tha...

haan,hosh me ab bhi the woh chaaron but jaisi unki haalat thi,it was just a matter of time jab woh sab passed out ho jaate...

aur ye sab dekh aur unki bigadti situation ko samajh...


MAHI-inki haalat bohot zyada kharab hai..mujhe inhe apni thodi si energy deni hogi...

MAI-MAHI, tum khud apni HUMAN FORM POWER SOURCE ke reserved energy par ho...

agar tumne inhe us source se power diya,toh tumhari haalat bhi inki tarah ho jaayegi aur even worse..

kyunki i am sure ki ab tak tumne apne channelized ANGEL'S FORM POWER SOURCE ki shakti ko is jungle me activate karne ki koshish kar li hogi but usse koi faayda hua nahi hoga..

tumhari woh power source yahan kaam me aayegi nahi aur uske bina apne dusre power source ko use me laane ka matlab hai...

MAHI-i would completely drain out..i get it.. but inki haalat dekho..kuch der aur,phir ye yahan survive nahi kar paayenge...

meri power source se inki jaan bach jaayegi..haan mai drained out ho jaaungi aur mera ANGEL'S FORM POWER SOURCE mujhe us haalat me jaane se rok nahi paayega but woh mujhe marne bhi nahi dega..

aur itna kaafi hai...

MAI-think practically MAHI...tumhara power source inhe abhi ke liye toh bacha lega but uske baad kya..???

hume is jungle se bahar jaane ka naahi raasta mila hai aur naahi koi tarika...

thodi der baad ye sab phir abhi jaisi haalat me honge aur inhe dobara bachane ke liye tumhare paas koi aur source nahi bachega..

MAHI-tumhe khudpar ho naa ho RAAZ but mujhe tumpar pura bharosa hai..tum inhe aur mujhe kuch bhi nahi hone doge..

jo bhi raasta hai,tarika hai yahan se nikalne ka,tum usse khoj hi loge..

i trust you,the question is do you trust yourself and your immeasurable capabilities...


MAHI ki baat par usse ghoor kar dekha maine usse aur woh isiliye kyunki abhi usne ek tarah se mujhe challenge kiya tha and challenge is something that i crave about..

MAHI is baat ko jaanti thi aur usne meri is aadat ko trigger kar diya tha..


khair,apni baat bol MAHI un chaaron ke saamne jaakar joki ab tak behosh ho chuke the,ghutno ke bal baith gayi aur...


VAGIYEM....

REVIVE....


haath ko aage karte hue apne HUMAN FORM POWER SOURCE me jhaankte hue man hi man uccharit kiya is SPELL ko MAHI ne jiske baad uske andar se uski pyscical energy se bana ray nikal un chaaron ke body me sama gaya aur jab aisa hua toh...

ek saath do chizen hui...

pehli...

ANNNHHHHH..

jhatke waali lambi saans lete hue un chaaron ki behoshi jaati rahi aur woh sab conscious ho gaye..

dusri...

MAHI ki pyscical energy ka ek bohot bada hissa usse bahar nikal chuka tha aur isiliye woh bhi neeche ludhak si gayi..

hosh me toh thi woh but ab usme itni bhi jaan nahi bachi thi ki woh baith bhi sake..

waise hosh me toh woh chaaron aa chuke the but jis state se woh hosh me waapas aate the,woh itni deep thi ki hosh me aane ke baad bhi unki sirf saansein hi chal rahi thi..

woh chaaron ab bhi MAHI ki hi tarah neeche pade hue the..

paralyzed haalat jaise neeche pade hue paanch logon ko dekh raha tha mai jinhe kuch seconds dekh MAHI ki harkat par head shake karte hue mai akela hi aage badh gaya...

but is baar mera aage badhna kuch alag tha.

aur woh isiliye kyunki mai chal nahi raha tha balki bhaag raha tha..

haan,aisa karne se mai bhi jald hi dihydrate ho jaane waala tha but phir bhi mera bhaagna zaroori tha...

darasal is jagah ke baare me kuch kuch idea ho chuka tha mujhe...

woh ALCAZAR jo hamare aage badhne ke baad lagatar humare kareeb to aa raha tha but mujhe aisa feel ho raha tha jaise ye kareeb aana real nahi hai..

us ALCAZAR ko dekhte hue lagatar hawa me ek invisible deflection feel kar raha tha..

aur saath hi saath ye jagah...2 ghante lagatar chalne ke aur alag alag pedon ko dekhne ke baad bhi mujhe un different pedon me ek similarity dikh rahi thi aur ussi similarity ka sach janane ke liye bhaag raha tha mai..

aur abhi mujhe bhaagte hue 5 minute bhi nahi hua hoga ki mera shak yakin me badal gaya...

mujhe apne se kuch door saamne woh paanchon as in MAHI, ACCHUTA, SLUNDER, BRAWNY aur HIDA neeche zamin par pade dikhayi diye jisse dekh...


MAI- RECIPROCATION SPELL....


ek aisa SPELL jiski madad se aas paas ke drishya me bhram paida kiya jaa sakta hai..

har jagah repeat hoti hai aur woh bhi aise ki uspar asaani se nazar nahi padti...

aur yahan us DARK MAGIC JUNGLE me bhi yahi scene tha..

lagbhagh har pedh,direction,tedhe medhe mod ek se hokar bhi ek se nahi the..

kehne ka matlab hai ki pehli baar aage badhne par jo chiz pehle padti hai woh agli baar baad me padti hai...

saare places apne last position se change hote rehte hain aur isiliye is repetitive jagah ko detect karna asaan nahi tha..

but is baar mai ye isiliye kar paaya kyunki jinhe mai piche chhod kar aaya tha,MAHI aur woh chaaron is waqt mujhse kuch aage neeche lete se hue the...

mai ghum phirkar wapas wahin aa gaya tha jahan se shuruat ki thi...

aur aisa mai aur mere saath mere saare saathi pichle do ghanto se karte aa rahe the...


MAI-bewakuf...


khudko ye bolte hue apne sir ko shake kiya maine aur wapas piche palatkar chalne laga..

REASON...

woh do trees jo humne JUNGLE ke start me dekhe the,wahi do trees bas is jagah par aise the jinki jagah flip nahi hui thi..

pehle bhi dhyan gaya tha mera is baat par lekin maine isse casually liya tha...

but ab mujhe lag raha tha ki is jagah ko,is MAGICAL JUNGLE ko cross karne ke liye woh dono trees hi key the...

par us key ka istamal mujhe jald se jald karna tha aur woh isiliye kyunki MAHI aur un chaaron ki haalat ab aur kharab ho chuki thi...

bhale hi mai un sabke paas nahi gaya tha,but i had sensed their vulnerable situation..

khair, wapas palatne ke baad chalte hue mujhe zyada door nahi jaana pada..

JUNGLE ka starting point paas hi tha aur iska andaza mujhe ho chuka tha..

RECIPROCATION SPELL sirf hume aage ki taraf bhatkane ke liye tha,piche ki taraf nahi..

kuch ek minute se bhi kam waqt me mai un do trees joki ek dusre se bas 3 metres ki doori par the,unke paas pahunch chuka tha..

un dono trees ko gour se dekhne laga mai...

ab tak zyada dhyan nahi diya tha maine but ab woh dono trees mujhe pedh kam aur ek darwaza zyada lag rahe the..

haan,un dono ke beech gap thi par waisi gap aur kisi pedh ki jodi ke beech nahi thi..

bas in dono pedon ke beech se aage badhne ka way tha jiske beech se hokar hum aage badh sakte the aur badhe bhi the..

ab samajh me aa raha tha mujhe ki ye gap asal me ek hidden way tha is jungle se bahar nikalne ka...

par kaise..???

kuch der sochta raha mai par phir unme se ek pedh ke saamne khade ho usse apni bachi hui taakat joki behadh kam thi,usse dhakka diya maine aur mere aisa karte hi mujhe aisa laga jaise kuch meri taraf badha ho...

par ye movement thodi tez thi aur different bhi... isiliye ek baar aur try karne ke liye dobara push kiya maine us pedh ko par aisa karte hue meri nazar last baar ki movement ke disha ki taraf thi..

aur jab maine us tree ko push kiya toh uske agle hi pal jo hua,usse dekh mere face par ek smile naach uthi..

is jungle se bahar nikalne ka tarika pata chal chuka tha mujhe aur us tarike ko dekh aur jaan mai wakayi impressed tha..

bohot umda magic se banaya gaya tha ye raasta jisse paar karne se zyada mushkil tha uske baare me pata lagana...

aur jab tak woh raasta aur tarika pata chale,usse emplify karne ke liye energy hi naa bache,yahi toh plan tha VIRAAZ ka...

khair,bas 10 percent shakti hi bachi thi mere andar,us shakti ke saath is challenge ko pura karna tha mujhe...

haathon ko rub karte hue mai un dono pedon ke beech khada ho gaya...

aisa kar apna ek ek haath un dono pedon ke trunks par rakha maine aur ek lambi saans kheench apni saari bachi shakti ko apne dono haathon me daalte hue...


UMMMMMMMMM.......


ek grunting awaaz nikalte hue joki mere zor lagane se nikal rahi thi, dono trees ko push karne laga mai...

aur mere aisa karte hi wahi hua jo maine anticipate kiya tha..

mere push karne dono trees dusri taraf jhukne lage aur aisa hoti hi pura jungle un dono trees ko jado me kheenchata chala jaane laga..

yahi toh is DARK MAGICAL JUNGLE ka asli magic tha...

un do pedon ko unke opposite direction me push karna hi woh tarika tha jisse ye pura MAGICAL jungle aur hamari yahan ki journey puri ho sakti thi...

but ye asaan nahi tha..meri pysical situation utni strong nahi thi ki un do trees ko joki kaafi mazboot the,lagatar push kar sakun...

kuch hi palon ke push ke baad mujhe hadh se zyada thakaan ne gher liya jiski wajah se mere dono haath un dono pedon se sarak gaye aur mai neeche zamin par apne ghutno ke bal baith haanfne laga...

but jaise hi mere haath un do pedon se hate toh un dono trees ki jadon se jungle ka woh saara bhaag jo ab tak sama gaya tha,woh wapas bahar nikal gaya aur dekhte hi dekhte mai back to zero waali situation me pahunch chuka tha...

ab tak ki hui saari mehnat par paani padh chuka tha aur to make the scenerio worse, meri haalat bhi kharab ho chuki thi..

lambi lambi saansein leta hua mai neeche un dono trees ke beech let gaya aur apni aankhen band kar li..


SOUL POWER....


ek aisi power jisse pyscical strength ki toh zaroorat nahi padti par is power se pysical power ko strength zaroor milti hai...

aankh band kar apne SOUL me jhaank ussi soul power ko dhundne laga mai..

but yahan bhi ek problem thi...mere BLACK ENERGY ke consumption se meri soul power jaise kahin chhup si gayi thi..

aur bina usse dekhe mai uski power ko apne body me channelize nahi kar sakta tha...

aur isiliye mujhe dusra tarika apnana pada..

jitni shakti bachi thi,usse ikattha kar apne man me jhaanka maine aur..


HRIDAYAM PIDATOHAM

HEART PAIN

apne hi dil ko pain dene waala SPELL uccharit kiya maine aur mere aisa karte hi..

AHHHHHHHHH...

seene me uthi behadh tez dard se chilla utha mai par us dard ke beech mujhe apne dil ke kareeb ek urja bahar aati hui dikhayi di..

ye urja aur kuch nahi meri SOUL POWER thi joki mere heart me behosh ERRAPEL ki shakti ke piche chuppi hui thi..

but bahar aane ke baad woh urja wapas mere heart me piche samane lagi par woh puri tarah chhup paati,usse pehle...


AATMAM DEHAM SHAKTIYEM...

SOUL POWER TO BODY...


is SPELL ko uccharit kiya maine aur mere is SPELL ko uccharit karne ke agle hi pal mai ek jhatke me apne pairon par khada ho chuka tha..

meri pyscical energy kaafi hadh tak restore ho chuki thi par kyunki ye energy dusre power source se thi, isiliye temporary thi aur fast draining bhi...

zyada waqt nahi tha mere paas aur isiliye maine turant apne dono haathon ko expand karte hue dono trees ko pakda aur ek jhatke ke saath push karne laga..

mere aisa karte hi ek baar phirse pura jungle un do pedon ki jadon me samane laga aur saath hi saath meri temporary pyscical strength bhi double speed se drain hone lagi...

dekhte hi dekhte meri lagbhag 90 percent strength drain ho chuki thi aur aisa hone ke kaaran ek baar phirse mere dono haath dheele padne lage the..

kisi bhi pal mai wapas dihydrate hote hue neeche gir sakta tha but isse pehle ki mai neeche girta...


SWOOSSSSSSS.....

woh saara DARK MAGICAL JUNGLE tezi se simaththa hua aakhirkaar pura ka pura mere push kiye dono trees ke jadon me sama hi gaya aur aisa hote hi woh dono trees jinhe maine pakda hua tha,woh ek purple dhuen me convert ho gaye..

aisa hote hi mai wapas apne ghutno par aa chuka tha..

but lambi lambi saans lene ke beech mujhe us purple dhuen me kuch jaani pehchaani energy feel ho rahi thi..

abhi mai us energy ke secret ko samajhta ki tabhi us dhuen ka kuch bhaag mujhme sama gaya aur jab aisa hua toh mujhe us purple dhuen ka RAAZ pata chal gaya..

asal me woh dhuan hamari wahi energy thi jo is DARK MAGICAL JUNGLE ne consume ki hui thi par ab jab maine us mayavi jungle numa challenge ko paar kar liya tha,toh usne humari us sucked energy ko wapas hume louta diya tha..

khair,energy restoration ke baad mai turant khada hua aur aage badh gaya..

mai dekh raha tha ki mujhse kuch hi door MAHI aur woh chaaron neeche gire hue the aur abhi woh purple smoke un sabke bodies me sama raha tha..

mai jaanta tha ki woh sab completely dihydrated the aur energy loutne ke baad bhi unhe kuch samay lagega khudko restore karne me..

ab tak mai un sabke paas pahunch chuka tha..unki sucked up energy unme wapas sama chuki thi jiski wajah se unhe hosh aane laga tha..

ek pal un sabko dekh mai aage badh gaya...

wahin kuch der baad jab woh sab hosh me aaye aur jab kuch aur time ke baad un sabki energy completely restored hui toh woh sab ek jhatke me uthkar baith gaye..

ye dekh woh sab hairan the ki jahan kuch der pehle tak woh ek ghane jungle ke beech fase hue the,wahin ab woh ek khaali maidan jaisi jagah par baithe hue the..

but jab nazar idhar udhar ghumane ke baad un sabki nazar us disha ki taraf gayi jahan mai gaya toh unhe asli situation ka andaza ho gaya jisse jaan woh khush ho gaye..

woh sab uthe aur meri hi disha ki taraf jahan unse kareeb 100 metre door mai khada tha,tezi se badhe..

THE DARK MAGICAL JUNGLE me energy ke sucked down hone ki wajah se unki aankhon me jo thakaan tha,woh ab chamak me badal chuka tha..

woh sab samajh gaye the ki unka MAGICAL JUNGLE ka challenge pura ho chuka hai aur ye baat unhe mujhe dekh kar nahi balki mai jisse dekh raha tha,usse dekhkar pata chali thi..


THE ALCAZAR...woh killa jiske saamne is waqt khada tha mai aur ye dekh woh sab samajh gaye the ki hum sab INFERIOR LEVEL ke last challenge ke saamne pahunch chuke the..

khair,aage badhte hue woh sab mere aaju baaju khade ho chuke the..

ek pal mujhe gratitude ki nazar se dekh un sabki aankhen bhi meri hi tarah saamne dikh rahe us gigantic ALCAZAR par tik gayi..

wahin mai jo pehle se hi us ALCAZAR naamak INFERIOR LEVEL ke aakhri challenge ko dekh raha tha,meri aankhon me is waqt ek chamak thi aur dil ufaan maarte hue keh raha tha ki...


MAI-


maana ki teri soch, mai JAAN NAHI SAKTA.....

kis bhesh me kaun chuppa hai,mai PEHCHAAN NAHI SAKTA...

laga le jitna laga sakta hai zor tu....

jeetne tu dega nahi mujhe,aur haar, mai MAAN NAHI SAKTA....

















AAJ KE LIYE ITNA HI.....

















AAPKA APNA V...J.....
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AB TAK AAPNE PADHA KI JAHAN EK TARAF MAHI, ACCHUTA, SLUNDER, BRAWNY AUR HIDA THIRD CHALLENGE ME COMPLETELY DIHYDRATE JO JAATE HAIN WAHIN DUSRI TARAF RAAZ US CHALLENGE KO PURA KAR KHUDKO AUR UN SABKO JUNGLE SE BAHAR NIKAL LETA HAI.


AB AAGE:-



CHAPTER-3


(THE DEVIL'S HAVEN,THE SACRIFICE & THE PERFECT EPILOGUE)



UPDATE-145



PLANET-ELYSIAN


PLACE-INFERIOR LEVEL




THE QUEST CONTINOUS


FIRST LEVEL:FINAL CHALLENGE:THE ALCAZAR







WHAT ARE YOU GUYZZ WAITING FOR....???AN INVITATION TO COME IN..!!!!


hume us gigantic ALCAZAR ke bahar abhi kuch hi der beeta tha ki tabhi ek awaaz us ALCAZAR ke andar se gunji jisse sun hum sab thode se chownk gaye the...


REASON...

woh awaaz kaafi refined,BLACK ENERGY se labalab aur strong impact waali thi but kuch jaani pehchaani thi aur isiliye..


ACCHUTA-ye awaaz kuch suni hui si lag rahi hai...!!!haina...???

SLUNDER-haan,but exactly kahan,ye samajh me nahi aa raha hai...???


SLUNDER aur ACCHUTA ki hi tarah ki baatein HIDA aur BRAWNY ne bhi ki jiske baad...


ACCHUTA-RAAZ,MAHI...tumhe ye awaaz pehle bhi suni hui si nahi lag rahi...???

MAHI-i think...

MAI-itni panchayat kis liye..andar chalkar khud dekh lo...ab jab awaaz hai,toh thobda bhi hoga hi..


MAHI ki baat kaaththe hue apni baat kahi maine aur phir aage badh gaya..

mere saath saath woh sab bhi aage badh chale...

kuch hi der me hum sab us ALCAZAR ke bade se front door ke saamne the..

humare us door ke saamne aate hi woh door bina awaaz ke khulta chala gaya jiske baad ek baar ek dusre ko dekh hum sab uske andar chale gaye..

humare andar jaate hi woh darwaza wapas band ho chuka tha..

ek endless hall jahan us door se hone ke baad hum pahunche the,usme khade hokar hum idhar udhar dekh hi rahe the ki tabhi humse kuch door ek black smoke uthne laga jisne dheere dheere ek HUMAN FORM lena shuru kiya.

kuch hi seconds me hamare saamne ek typical kaali shaktiyon ke numainde ke bhesh me,kaale labaade me jisne sir ko bhi dhaka tha,ek banda khada tha...

sir dhaka hone ki wajah se uska face dikh nahi raha tha aur naahi usne ab tak kuch bola tha aur isiliye....


MAI-dramatic entrance ki noutanki ho gayi ho toh apna thobda dikhane ki zehmat uthayega yaa phir aisi hi dulhan ki tarah ghunghat odhe hamara challenge batayega..


HAHAHAHA...


meri baat bol zoron se hasa woh suspicious banda aur phir...


UNKNOWN-typical RAAZ...punch lines kami kabhi nahi hoti...kyun..???

fikr mat kar,tujhe mai apna chehra bhi dikhaunga aur tujhe tum sabka challenge bhi bataunga...


apni baat bolte hue usne apna head cover hata liya aur jab usne aisa kiya toh....


ACCHUTA, SLUNDER, BRAWNY, HIDA aur MAHI bhi buri tarah chownke aur un sabke mooh se ek saath nikla...


ANWIR....


behadh shock hote hue apne saamne muskurate hue khade ANWIR ko dekh kahi ye baat un sabne...


REASON.....


is waqt ANWIR ke pure body se ek behadh strong black energy ka AURA release ho raha tha..

ye AURA maamuli ya normal bilkul bhi nahi tha..aisa AURA sirf pure DEVILS ke body se release hota hai..

ab bhale hi mere saath khade paanchon ne pehle kisi devils ko saamne ae dekha nahi tha,par CHOSENS ki library me unke baare me aur unke sharir se nikal rahe extra ordinary AURA aur shakti ke baare me padha zaroor tha..

unhone ye jaana tha ki ek DEVIL ka AURA ek strong sorcerer's AURA se 1000 times strong aur negetive vibe se bhara hota hai..

aur waisa hi vibe abhi ANWIR ki body se feel kar rahe the woh sab...

kaali gehri aankhen jinme ek invisible par asardaar aag jhalak rahi thi,face jo white the toh but kisi dead person ki tarah jama hua sa,aur us white aur bright face me ek evil persona saaf jhalak raha tha,muskurate hue dekh raha tha hum sab ko ANWIR..

wahin ANWIR ko kuch der dekh..


HIDA-ANWIR..!!!what have you become...!!!

ANWIR-not become..i have been transformed,upgraded into a A+ LEVEL DARK WARRIOR....


bohot proudly kahi ye baat ANWIR ne jiske baad...


ACCHUTA-wakayi,upgrade toh hua hai tu...pehle chota chutiya tha,ab bada chutiya hai...


apni aadat anusaar bina situation dekhe jo dil me aaya,bak diya ACCHUTA ne jispar...


ANWIR-ACCHUTA..the guy with just a loud mouth and no spine...

chaahun toh ek jhatke me tujhe,tujhe kya tum sabko kisi chiti ki tarah yahin masal dun par LORD aur LORDESS ki taraf se mujhe aisa karne ko ijaazat nahi hai...

but we can have a bit of fun...aisa toh kar hi sakta hun mai...


apne haathon ko rub karte hue kahi ye baat ANWIR ne aur phir achanak usne unhi haathon ko aage kar apni taraf kheencha aur uske aisa karte hi ACHHUTA ek jhatke me uski taraf kheenchata chala gaya...

agle hi pal woh ANWIR ke strong grip me jakda chhatpata raha tha...

aankhon me ghussa liye ACCHUTA ne apne sir ko puri taakat ke saath ANWIR ke sir par maar diya par uske aisa karte hi..

AHHHHHH...

ek tez cheekh nikli..par ye cheekh ANWIR ki nahi balki ACCHUTA ki thi...

ANWIR ke sir se khud ke sir ko bhidaate hi usse aisa laga jaise usne kisi patthar par apna sir de maara hai..

ek pal me hi sir ghum gaya uska jipar usne apna sir pakad liya..

wahin ACCHUTA ke ANWIR ke taraf kheenchate aur uske sir par dard hote hi SLUNDER,HIDA aur BRAWNY uski taraf lapke..

waise aage toh MAHI bhi badhne waali thi but tabhi...


MAI-abhi nahi... woh harm nahi karega un sabko..woh bas khel raha hai un sabke saath..khelne do..


meri baat sun MAHI ke badhte kadam apni jagah par hi rook gaye...

wahin jaise hi SLUNDER, HIDA aur BRAWNY aage badhe toh ANWIR ne ACCHUTA ko kisi ball ki tarah un teeno ki taraf fekh diya..

uske throw me itni power thi ki jaise hi ACHHUTA un teeno se takraya,woh teeno udte hue mere aur MAHI se kareeb 10 metre piche udte hue jaakar gire...

waise girne ke baad woh teeno toh jaldi hi uth gaye the but ACCHUTA jiska pehle se hi ANWIR ke sir se hui takkar ki wajah se dimag ghuma hua tha,is double impact waale takkar ki wajah woh thoda rook kar dheere se utha jiske baad kuch der un chaaron ko muskurate hue dekha ANWIR ne aur phir uski nazar mujhpar aur MAHI par padi jiske baad...


ANWIR-MAHI....CHOSENS me apne phase ki best SAVENT..but more importantly,LORD OF ANGELS ki beti...

kya hua,apne doston ko bachane ke liye aage nahi aayi tum...

aur RAAZ...jo khud THE CHOSEN ONE hai..jo kabhi kisi challenge se back out nahi karta..

aaj uske kadam bhi apni hi jagah oar chipke hue hain..puch sakta hun kyun..???

MAI-challenge waala bhaag tune specific hokar nahi bola..mai unhi challenges ko accept karta hun,jo mere laayak hon..

aire gaire logon se bhi takraane laga mai toh phir jaise tune bola,RAAZ,THE CHOSEN ONE,is title ki izzat kharab nahi ho jaayegi...!!!

ANWIR-RAAZ,RAAZ,RAAZ..all show no go,haan...tu apne ilaake ka sher hua karta tha,yahan teri aukaad mere aage kisi kutte se zyada nahi hai...

MAI-ohho..matlab yahan ka sher tu hai..par aise me according to your point of you, tu bhi toh dusre ilaake ka kutta hi hua naa..!!!

anyways, congrats tere upgradation ke liye...

THE DEVIL'S HAVEN me ek peon, ek chaprasi ki post mil gayi tujhe jo yahan humare liye notice lekar aaya hai..

ab jo kaam mila hai woh bhi kar de...notice padhkar suna aur nikal...


meri baaton ko sun jahan mere saare saathi has diye wahin ANWIR mujhe kuch pal ghurta raha par phir uske face par ek smile aa gayi aur...


ANWIR-very well then....

TUUUUUUU...


ek tez chukti bajayi ANWIR ne aur uske aisa karte hi ek saath do chizen hui...

pehli....

usse thoda piche ek saath 6 broad stairs prakat hue jo ghumte hue se is ganan chumbi ALCAZAR ke roof top tak jaa rahe the...

dusri...

ANWIR ke theek aaju baaju me 6 BLACK SHADOWS prakat hue the aur ye do chizen hone ke baad...


ANWIR-6 log ho tum aur jaisa dekh rahe ho,stairs bhi 6 hi hain..one for each one of you..

challenge ye hai ki tum sabko inme se ek ek stairs me chadhte hue is ALCAZAR ke roof top tak pahunchna hai..

aisa kar lo aur INFERIOR LEVEL khatm... simple..!!!!

MAI-very simple..ab hard part bhi bata.. what's the catch...????

ANWIR-arre,saamne hi toh hain...ye 6 BLACK SHADOWS...

chalo,in sabse tumhara intro kara dun.. waise inka koi individual naam nahi hai,bas ek complete pehchaan hai..

they are called the HALLUCINATORS....

jo inka naam hai,is challenge ke dauran wahi inka kaam bhi hai...

jab tum sab apne apne stairs me upar chadhne lagoge,tab ye bhi apni choice ke according ek ek stairs select karenge...

and then,as i said RAAZ...the catch begins...

RAAZ-they will hallucinate us in our way to the top...

ANWIR-yup.. but, that's the half part only...jab tum sab hallucinations ki charam par hoge,tab they will cut off your heads...

aur tum sab apne imaginatory worlds me itne khoye hue hoge ki tumhe pata bhi nahi chalega and you will be dead...

waise waar ye sab sirf ek hi baar karenge aur tumme se jo jo inhe dodge kar paayega,he aur she will paas this challenge...

simple, isn't it....!!!


ANWIR ki baat sun jahan ek taraf woh chaaron halke nervous hokar individually is challenge ko kaise pura karenge,ye soch rahe the,wahin MAI aur MAHI bhi yahi soch rahe the but sabke liye..

wahin apni baat ko aage badhate hue..


ANWIR-now let me let you about the prize..woh prize jo ACCHUTA, SLUNDER, HIDA aur BRAWNY tum chaaron ko milega agar tum sab is challenge ko cross kar gaye...

par woh prize hai kya,woh tumhe tab hi pata chalega jab tum is challenge ko pura kar loge..

sorry RAAZ,MAHI,tum sabko kuch nahi milega...waise bhi,tum dono ke hi parents ne tum sabko viraasat me itna kuch diya hai ki mujhe nahi lagta ki tumhe kisi chiz ki zaroorat hai...!!!

kyun,sahi hai naa..!!!???

MAI- absolutely...par pata hai,kyun tere LORD ne hum dono ke liye koi prize nahi rakha hai...

kyunki bhikari bheek leta hai,deta nahi hai..aur tere dono so called LORDS bhikari hi toh hain...

jiske order se tu yahan hai(VIRAAZ)uski shakti meri bheekh hai aur tere LORD ke LORD ke paas jo shakti hai,woh iske BAAP ka daan hai...

ab jo khud charity case hon, woh kaise un do logon ko kuch de sakte hain jinki wajah se unka pura astitv bana hai...


meri theeki baaton ko sun jalti aankhon se dekha mujhe ANWIR ne aur phir..


ANWIR-all the best guyzzz.i personally want you all to succeed in this challenge...

challenge ke baad milte hain...


apni baat bol kaale dhuen me badal ANWIR gayab ho gaya aur ussike saath woh 6 BLACK SHADOWS bhi un 6 stairs ki taraf jaate hue gayab ho gaye jiske baad...


MAI man me-filhal itni energy, strength hai nahi ki ek saath in chaaron ko handle kar sakun...


maine ye man ki baat MAHI ke brain se connect hokar kahi thi jisse sun waise hi man me...


MAHI-we will share..do,do karkar baanth lete hain...

MAI-sirf HUMAN FORM POWER SOURCE ki shakti se hi tum ye kar sakti ho but woh in sabke liye dangerous ho sakta hai...

hallucinations ke waqt woh shakti ek unwanted aur unbearable shakti ki tarah bhi react kar sakti hai...

MAHI-sabse important baat kaise skip kar gaye tum..energy sharing ki wajah se humara subconscious brain strength bhi kam ho jaayega but phir bhi,if you are risking it,mai bhi ye karungi...


jahan ek dusre ko dekhte hue man hi man kar rahe the ye saari baatein wahin hume yun ek dusre ko lagataar taakte dekh...


ACCHUTA-guyz,nain mattakka ke liye ye jagah thodi odd nahi hai...


ACCHUTA ki baat sun apni nazar ek dusre se hatathe hue un chaaron ko dekha humne aur...


MAI-at the right time...

MAHI-cool...

HIDA-ye kya baat kar rahe ho tum dono...???

MAHI-kuch nahi.. future planning kar rahe the hum dono...

ACCHUTA-kis chiz ki..!!! challenge pura karne ki yaa fir life kaise saath bitana hai,uski...

MAHI-idhar udhar ki baat chhodo aur khudko challenge ke liye mentally taiyar rakho..

HALLUCINATIONS...jaise hi stairs par pehla kadam rakho,khudke brain ko yaad dilate rehna ki jo bhi hoga,woh sab illusion hai,kuch bhi sach nahi..

keep your mind open...ok..!!!

CHAARON-ok...


thoda confidently ye bol woh chaaron aur unke saath mai aur MAHI bhi stairs ki taraf badh gaye..

apne apne stairs ke first seedhi ke saamne pahunch ek dusre ko dekha humne aur phir humne apna first step is level ke aakhri challenge ki pehle paaydaan ki taraf badha liya aur jab humne aisa kiya toh...

ek hawa ka jhonka sa aaya aur ACCHUTA, SLUNDER, BRAWNY aur HIDA se takra sa gaya...

woh chaaron hi samajh chuke the hallucinations ka dour kabhi bhi shuru ho sakta hai aur isiliye...

pehle stair par kadam rakhte hi ek baar unhone upar dekha jahan zigzag pattern me woh endless se lagne waale stairs upar roof top par jaa rahe the..

apni manzil ko dekhne ke baad khudki body ko ek jhatka sa diya un chaaron ne aur phir woh sab jitna ho sake,utni tezi se upar chadhne lage..

is challenge me pysically thakne ka magic toh tha nahi, isiliye kaafi speedily bina thake ek baar me 3 se 4 siddhiyan chadthte hue upar chadhne lage...

wahin un chaaron ki tarah meri aur MAHI ki stair chadhne ki speed bhi zyada thi but upar chadhne ke saath saath hum dono apni aantarik drishti ko bhi jagane ki koshish kar rahe the...

kyunki yahi ek tarika tha kisi bhi tarah ke hallucinations se khudko protect karne ka but problem ye thi ki naa toh mere paas aur naahi MAHI ke paas filhal itni shakti thi jo apni aantarik drishti ko completely use me laa sake..

but fir bhi jitna ho sake,us shakti ko channelize karne ki koshish kar rahe the hum dono..

abhi tak hum sabko stairs chadhte hue 10 minute se zyada ho chuka tha...

par itni der me bhi humne total stairs ka sirf 10 percent hi cover kiya tha...

khair, time ki toh koi boundation thi nahi..

par phir bhi apni puri jaan lagakar upar chadhte hue chale jaa rahe the hum sab...

aur issi tarah hume upar chadhte hue lagbhagh 1 ghanta ho gaya..

ab tak lagbhag 50 percent ka apna safar pura kar chuke the hum sab aur woh bhi bina kisi problem aur hurdle ke..

aur yahi wajah thi ki hum sab ab thoda complacent ho gaye the..

hum sabka zyadatar focus ab tezi se upar chadhte hue roof top par pahuncne ka tha..

hamara concentration level thoda kam ho chuka tha aur yahi toh ye jagah chahti thi..

jab tak hum sabke brains kisi hallucinations ke liye apne aap ko pura ready rakhe hue the,tab tak humare dimag me ek invisible darwaza sa bana hua tha jo kisi bhi unknown aur unwanted drishya ko andar naa ghusne dene ke liye shut down kiya jaa sakta tha but hamara complacent hone se ye darwaza gayab ho chuka tha..

humne kisi bhi external chiz ko ek open invitation sa de diya tha aur shayad ye jagah yahi chahti thi..

abhi hum sab tezi se aage badh hi rahe the ki tabhi achanak se hum sabke saamne ka drishya hi badal gaya...


AHHHHHHH......

ACCHUTA,SLUNDER ke just aage ek unknown dark space ban gaya tha jahan uske mom dad ke spirits chains se bandhe hue the..

unke piche haathon m hunter liye do PUNISHERS khade the jo lagatar un dono par hunter barsaaye jaa rahe the jiski wajah se ACCHUTA aur SLUNDER ke mom dad zoron se cheekh rahe the...

apne mom dad ki cheekh ko sun ACCHUTA aur SLUNDER ki aankhen bhi bhar aayi thi..tadap uthe woh dono aur saath hi ghusse se bhar woh un PUNISHERS ki taraf badhe par tabhi..

un dono ke pair apni hi jagah par jam gaye...woh aage nahi badh paa rahe the...

apni jagah pur stuck hone par unki jhunjlahat aur badh gayi..

bas apne mom dad ke cheekh ko sun khud andar se tooththe jaa rahe the woh dono...

ACCHUTA aur SLUNDER dono hi apne ghutno par aa gaye aur taaki woh cheekhen unhe naa sunayi de, isiliye apni aankhon ko band kar apne dono kaano par haath rakh liya un dono ne...

par unke aisa karne par ulta asar hua..band aankhon aur kaano ke beech unhe unke mom dad aur unki cheekhen zyada kareeb se sunayi dene aur feel hone lagi...

un cheekhon ko sun aur feel kar dono ka mind dheere dheere apna sudh budh khone laga tha...

wahin dusri taraf BRAWNY ke aage unke home planet ka rajmahal tha jiske ek karagar me uske mom aur dad moujud the...

is waqt SHALTON par rajdroh ka ilzam laga hone ki wajah se usse baandh kar rakha gaya tha..

wahin dusri taraf NAOMI fate kapdo me neeche zamin par baithi hui thi...

uske paas hi do lady khade the jo lagatar usse mock karte hue ek gaddar ki biwi bol uspar thook rahe the...

BRAWNY rajpariwar se tha aur ek CHOSENS aane se pehle ek below average zindagi jeene ke baawjud uske khoon me rajdharm aur pyar bhara hua tha...

aise me apne hi pitah ko ek rajdrohi ke roop ke dekh aur saath hi saath apno mom ki dayneeya haalat ko mehsoos kar uska khoon khoul utha tha..

woh bhi ACCHUTA aur SLUNDER ki hi tarah apne mom dad ki taraf lapakne ko hue par un dono ko hi tarah woh bhi aage badh nahi paaya..

fark sirf itna tha ki jahan ACCHUTA aur SLUNDER ke pair apni hi jagah par stucked ho gaye the wahin BRAWNY ke case me uske aage jail ki salaakhen thi jiske dusri taraf uske mom dad the..

aur woh un salakhon ko cross nahi kar paa raha tha..

aur naahi uski awaaz uske mom dad ko aur wahan moujud logon ko sunayi de rahi thi...

ghussa aur bebasi ke mile jule bhaav ke beech fas chuka tha BRAWNY jisme kuch der baad ghussa kam aur bebasi ki feeling zyada hone lagi aur jab aisa hua toh ACCHUTA aur SLUNDER ki hi tarah, BRAWNY bhi apne ghutno par aa rote hue apne mom dad ki tadap dekh aur mehsoos karne laga...

wahin teesri taraf thi HIDA jiske aage ek alag hi scene chal raha tha..ek aisa scene jiske shuru hote hi HIDA puri tarah se panick ho chuki thi...

aur woh scene the uski mom ki death ka..unki tadap,unke dil ka dheere dheere rookna,saanson ko lene me taklif hona aur phir aakhri me unki navs band ho jaana,ye sab naa sirf HIDA dekh rahi thi,balki apne dimag me mehsoos bhi kar rahi thi.

aur ye uske liye unbearable tha..pair uske bhi apni jagah par jam gaye the jiski wajah se woh apne sir ko neeche kiye bas cheekhte hue roye jaa rahi thi....

aur aakhir me chowthi aur paanchwi taraf the mai aur MAHI..

hum dono ke aage chal raha drishya ek dusre se kaafi milta julta tha...

jahan mere aage mere aadhe janm aur aadhi uttpatti ka wahi scene chal raha tha jisse mai kabhi bhi dekhna nahi chahta tha wahin MAHI ke nazaron ke saamne bhi jab uske mom dad human the,us waqt ka scene chal raha tha..

woh scene jisme GOD ne usse uski MOM AVANTIKA ki kokh se nikal liya tha aur phir kayi haxaron saalon baad ek urja ke roop me usse dharti par bheje jaane ki taiyaari ki gayi thi...

aur us scene ko aur taklif deh banane waali baat ye thi ki is HALLUCINATION ke daur me bhi MAHI ko VIKRAM aur AVANTIKA ke faces blurred dikh rahe the..

but in saare HALLUCANATIONS ke beech ek baat ye bhi thi ki unlike ACCHUTA, SLUNDER, BRAWNY and HIDA,hum dono ke reality sense doors puri tarah gayab nahi hue the..

hamare saamne jo scenes chal rahe the,hamare brain ka ek part hume us scene ko fake bata raha tha but phir bhi un HALLUCINATION scenes ne hum dono ke hi right switch ko daba diya tha jiski wajah se hum dono ke hi anger aur frustration ki batti jal chuki thi...

hum dono ke hi zindagi ka woh sach jisse hum yaad nahi karna chahte the,woh hamari aankhon ke saamne chal raha tha aur ye hum dono ke liye hi ek mental tormentation ki tarah tha...

ghusse se kampkapate hue hum dono hi us scene ko band karna chahte the but un chaaron ke hi tarah humare pair bhi apni jagah par jakad se gaye the...

aur is saare chaos ke beech joki asal me bas ek bhram tha, usse bilkul ulat asliyat me kuch aur ho raha tha...

woh 6 BLACK SHADOWS bade araam se sadhe hue kadmo se stairs utarte hue hum sabke paas aa rahe the..

un sabke haathon me ek ek kaali chamakti hui sword thi jisse kuch hi palon me woh sab hamara gala kaatne waale the..

aur hum sab is sachayi se anjaan ek bhram jaal me fase hue the...

but ek difference tha...

aur woh ye ki jahan ab tak ACCHUTA, SLUNDER, BRAWNY aur HIDA ke HALLUCINATIONS unhe bilkul sach lag rahe the,wahin mere aur MAHI ke dimag ka ek hissa hamare samne chal rahe scenes ko jhuta bata raha tha..

but phir bhi jab hum dono us bharm se paida hone waale pain ki wajah se uski awaaz ko neglect karte rahe toh us hisse ne mere aur MAHI ke brain me ek dusra scene bhi chala diya...

jahan MAHI ke dimag ke ys jaage hue hisse me uski aur uske pitah ke beech hui conversation gunj uthi wahin mujhe ek aur painful scene dikhayi dene laga..

woh scene jisme maine apne haathon se apne mom dad ko maara tha...

aur ye scene mere maamle me us ghee ki tarah tha jo aag ko kuch yun bhadkaati hai jo har chiz ko jala deti hai..

mere andar ghusse aur nafrat ka ek sailab sa utha..

ye sailab itna zyada powerful tha ki ek saath mere chaaron AMPLIFICATION modes joki HALLUCINATIONS ki wajah se dull padh gaye the,ek jhatke me activate ho gaye...

kaali urja ka AURA joki nere vagus nerves me ghum rahi thi,woh bhi un AMPLIFICATIONS ke saath judte hue unhe aur strong banane lagi aur jab aisa hua toh mere dimag ka woh hissa jisme HALLUCINATIONS
ka magic kaam kar raha tha,uska darwaza band hone laga..

aisa hone par us HALLUCANATIVE MAGIC ne bhi darwaza band naa ho,iske liye apna dum lagaya par woh kaamiyab nahi ho paa raha tha..

aur is beech MAHI ka bhram jaal bhi tootne laga..aur jab aisa hua toh ek saath do chizen hui..

ek mere saath aur ek uske saath...

hamare brain ka ek teesra part bhi tha joki is waqt ACCHUTA, SLUNDER, BRAWNY aur HIDA ke brain se juda tha..

yaad hoga woh scene jab stairs par pair rakhte hi unse ek hawa ka jhonka takra gaya tha...

ye jhonka asal me brain connectivity ki ray thi...ACCHUTA aur SLUNDER se mera brain connected tha,HIDA aur BRAWNY se MAHI ka..

(NOTE:-yahi baat kar rahe the mai aur MAHI challenge start hone se pehle)


HALLUCINATIONS ko samajhte hi mere aur MAHI ke danger sensing ability activate ho chuki thi jisne hamare us teesre part ko joki un chaaron se connected tha,hum 6 logon ki taraf badhte un BLACK SHADOWS ke baare me joki ab tak theek humare sir ke upar pahunch chuke the,unke baare me bata diya tha aur jab aisa hua toh...


MAI-DODGE GUYZZZ....

INBORN REFLEXES....un chaaron ke ussi bhaag me gunji hum dono ki awaaz aur aisa hote hi woh chaaron bina soche neeche jhuk chuke the...

wahin mai aur MAHI,hume jhukne ki zaroorat nahi padi thi..

jahan ek taraf MAHI ki HUMAN FORM POWER SOURCE ki urja bahar nikal aayi thi jisse takrakar uske saamne waale BLACK SHADOW ki sword rook gayi wahin mai jiske sharir ka har ang,us second scene ko dekh ghusse se ubaal maar raha tha,jaise hi us BLACK SHADOW ne apni sword ghumayi toh meri body ek invisible triggered speed ke saath ghumte hue uske piche pahunch gayi..

wahin jaisa ki tay tha,humare un BLACK SHADOWS ke waar se bachte hi woh yahan se chale jaane waale the,wahi woh karne lage..

dhuan ban woh 6 BLACK SHADOWS gayab hone hi waale the ki tabhi...

mere sharir se BLACK ENERGY ka AURA nikla aur bijli ki tezi se un sabko touch kar gaya..

us AURA me ek electrifying energy thi jisse un SHADOWS tak ko ek tez jhaka laga..

aur jisi chumbakiya kheenchav ki tarah woh 6 BLACK SHADOWS mere saamne kheenchate hue ikattha ho gaye...

wahin un 6 BLACK SHADOWS ko samajh aa gaya tha ki mai unhe khatm karne ka irada rakhta hun..

yahi wajah thi ki woh mujhe attack karne ke liye SPELL bolne waale the but woh aisa kar paate,usse pehle hi jo HALLUCANATIVE scenes maine dekhe the,aur jinki wajah se mere andar rage ka,ghusse ka sailab umda hua tha,us rage ne khudko ek forced energy ka roop diya aur mere chaaron AMPLIFICATION modes ki taakat ko khudme channelize karte hue woh mere VAGUS NERVES ki BLACK ENERGY ke saath ja mila..

aisa hote hi woh RAGE FORCED ENERGY kayi guna tak badh gayi aur ek jhatke me mere sharir se kul 6 layers me nikal un saare BLACK SHADOWS ko jaa lagi....

ye energy un sabke liye bohot zyada painful bhi thi aur deadly bhi..

haad maans naa hone ke baawjud un 6 BLACK SHADOWS ko apne andar kuch jalta aur tooththa hua mehsoos hone laga..

awaaz unke paas thi nahi but phir bhi kisi short circuit ki awaaz un sabse aane lagi...

kisi tarah khudko niyantrit kar woh sab gayab hone ki koshish karne lage aur woh aisa karne me kaamiyab ho bhi jaate par tabhi..

MAHI ke sharir se uski ANGEL'S FORM POWER SOURCE ka beam bahar nikla aur jaise THE DARK LAKE ke aage MAHI ne mujhe chaaron taraf se ghera tha,is baar uski us beam ne un 6 BLACK SHADOWS ko gher liya..

aisa hone ki wajah se ab woh sabhi ek SPELL stopper ke andar fas chuke the jiski wajah se ab woh koi bhi SPELL nahi bol sakte the..

wahin is beech meri ray un sabko penetrate karne lagi thi jiski wajah se un sabka woh SHADOW roop bhi akad sa gaya tha aur usse ek gaadha solid BLACK sharp tool nikalne laga tha..

ye tool unki hi shakti se bana tha jiske nikalte hi maine apna haath aage kiya..

mere aisa karte hi woh tool mere haath me aa gaya jiske baad tezi se aage badha mai aur ek hi jhatke me maine us tool ko un 6 BLACK SHADOWS ke akade hue bodies ke aar paar kar diya...

BOOMMM....

sharir ke kaaththe hi ek dhamake ke saath woh 6 BLACK SHADOWS khatm ho gaye..

but unke khatm hote hi woh ALCAZAR aur wo 6 stairs jisme hum sab khade the,woh hilne laga...

ye isiliye hua kyunki jo tay kiya gaya tha,humne un SHADOWS ko khatm kar usme ek naya clause sa daal diya tha aur isiliye ye jagah ab khatm hone waali thi..

ACCHUTA, SLUNDER, BRAWNY aur HIDA jo apne HALLUCINATIONS se bahar aa mujhe un 6 SHADOWS ko maarta dekh khush ho rahe the,woh bhi stairs ke hilne se ladkhadane lage...

wahin SHADOWS ke khatm hote hi woh sharp tool bhi dhuan banane laga but tabhi maine us tool ko jis stair me mai khada tha,usme ghussa diya aur jab aisa hua toh woh saare stairs jinme hum khade the,usme 6 black carpet se ban gaye aur un carpets ne hum sabko apni shakti se hawa me utha liya...

mai jaanta tha ki aisa hi kuch hoga aur woh isiliye kyunki us tool ko bhi apne masters ke khatm hone ke baad is ALCAZAR se bahar hi jaana tha...

hum sabke liye ek SHADOW ko niyukt kiya gaya tha aur isiliye us tool ne bhi hum sabke hisaab se khudko spread kiya tha...

khair,hume hawa me utha kuch seconds woh tool numa carpet rooka raha but phir jab pure ALCAZAR ki kampan itni zyada badh gayi ki woh puri imarat tezi se tootne lagi toh hum sabhi ke pairon ke neeche bicha woh TOOL CARPET hume liye tezi se upar roof top ki taraf uthne laga...

neeche dekh rahe the hum sab jahan is waqt pura ALCAZAR kisi reth ke mahal ki taraf dehne ki kagar par pahunch chuka tha..

ACCHUTA, SLUNDER, BRAWNY,HIDA aur MAHI ke face par khushi dekhte hi ban rahi thi..

REASON..

DEVIL'S HAVEN ka first level jo successfully cross kar liya tha hum sabne...

wahin un sabse alag mai aankh band kiye hue tha aur woh isiliye kyunki itne dino me pehli baar mera jalta hua dil kuch shaant hua tha...

us shaanti ko feel kar hi raha tha mai ki tabhi...


YE SHAANTI ISILIYE HAI MERE BACCHE KYUNKI AAJ PEHLI BAAR TUNE APNE GHUSSE KO SAHI DISHA DETE HUE KAAM ME LIYA HAI...


ye thi RONIT ki awaaz jo mere andar gunj uthi jisse carry forward karte hue...


ANJALI-SUKH AUR DUKH ZINDAGI KE AHEM HISSE HAIN..INKE SAHI BEECH TAALMEL BAITHANA HI TOH ASLI "RAAZ" HAI....

ye saari baatein bol shaant ho gayi un dono ki awaaz par aankhein meri ab bhi band thi...

aaj pehli baar un dono ki awaaz sun mujhe bura nahi laga tha..

halaki acha bhi nahi laga tha but feelings nutral mode par thi aur utna hi kaafi tha..

khair,ek pal un dono ke face ko yaad karne ke baad mere zehen me aaya VIDEOUS ka face aur aisa hote hi jahan ab tak mere facial expressions normal the,wahin ab mere jabde sakhti se bheenchte chale gaye.

band aankhon ke beech aag dehek uthi jisse mere dil aur dimag dono ne mehsoos kiya aur aankh khul gayi meri...

neeche us khatm hote ALCAZAR ko dekhte hue muskuraya mai aur..


MAI-VIDEOUS.....



daav par apni jaan ko lagakar mai khudko AAZMATA JAAUNGA....

tujhe khatm karne ka VAADA kiya tha,mar bhi gaya toh woh vaada NIBHATA JAAUNGA....

maana ki filhal teri taakat zyada hai mujhse....koi naa.....

tu taakat dikhata jaa,mai JIGAR DIKHATA jaaunga...

















AAJ KE LIYE ITNA HI.....



















AAPKA APNA V...J....
Hamesha ki trha behad shandar lajawab dhmakedar update
Nice line last ki interesting
 

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It seemed that Alcazar was waiting for us, Anwir was trying to humiliate us but he could not do it, instead he became a joke. :lol: The Dark shadows were deliberately showing them that moments to feel weak, found it very difficult to come out in the illusion trap but I understood Raaz and Mahi's plan in the last, It was a very spectacular and terrifying scene and has finally crossed the first level. Now let us see how the second level is and what was the gift.
daav par apni jaan ko lagakar mai khudko AAZMATA JAAUNGA....
tujhe khatm karne ka VAADA kiya tha,mar bhi gaya toh woh vaada NIBHATA JAAUNGA....
maana ki filhal teri taakat zyada hai mujhse....koi naa.....
tu taakat dikhata jaa,mai JIGAR DIKHATA jaaunga...
:applause: :approve:
As always the update was great, You are writing very well, Now let's see what happens next, Till then waiting for the next part of the story.
Thank You...

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AB TAK AAPNE PADHA KI JAHAN EK TARAF MAHI, ACCHUTA, SLUNDER, BRAWNY AUR HIDA THIRD CHALLENGE ME COMPLETELY DIHYDRATE JO JAATE HAIN WAHIN DUSRI TARAF RAAZ US CHALLENGE KO PURA KAR KHUDKO AUR UN SABKO JUNGLE SE BAHAR NIKAL LETA HAI.


AB AAGE:-



CHAPTER-3


(THE DEVIL'S HAVEN,THE SACRIFICE & THE PERFECT EPILOGUE)



UPDATE-145



PLANET-ELYSIAN


PLACE-INFERIOR LEVEL




THE QUEST CONTINOUS


FIRST LEVEL:FINAL CHALLENGE:THE ALCAZAR







WHAT ARE YOU GUYZZ WAITING FOR....???AN INVITATION TO COME IN..!!!!


hume us gigantic ALCAZAR ke bahar abhi kuch hi der beeta tha ki tabhi ek awaaz us ALCAZAR ke andar se gunji jisse sun hum sab thode se chownk gaye the...


REASON...

woh awaaz kaafi refined,BLACK ENERGY se labalab aur strong impact waali thi but kuch jaani pehchaani thi aur isiliye..


ACCHUTA-ye awaaz kuch suni hui si lag rahi hai...!!!haina...???

SLUNDER-haan,but exactly kahan,ye samajh me nahi aa raha hai...???


SLUNDER aur ACCHUTA ki hi tarah ki baatein HIDA aur BRAWNY ne bhi ki jiske baad...


ACCHUTA-RAAZ,MAHI...tumhe ye awaaz pehle bhi suni hui si nahi lag rahi...???

MAHI-i think...

MAI-itni panchayat kis liye..andar chalkar khud dekh lo...ab jab awaaz hai,toh thobda bhi hoga hi..


MAHI ki baat kaaththe hue apni baat kahi maine aur phir aage badh gaya..

mere saath saath woh sab bhi aage badh chale...

kuch hi der me hum sab us ALCAZAR ke bade se front door ke saamne the..

humare us door ke saamne aate hi woh door bina awaaz ke khulta chala gaya jiske baad ek baar ek dusre ko dekh hum sab uske andar chale gaye..

humare andar jaate hi woh darwaza wapas band ho chuka tha..

ek endless hall jahan us door se hone ke baad hum pahunche the,usme khade hokar hum idhar udhar dekh hi rahe the ki tabhi humse kuch door ek black smoke uthne laga jisne dheere dheere ek HUMAN FORM lena shuru kiya.

kuch hi seconds me hamare saamne ek typical kaali shaktiyon ke numainde ke bhesh me,kaale labaade me jisne sir ko bhi dhaka tha,ek banda khada tha...

sir dhaka hone ki wajah se uska face dikh nahi raha tha aur naahi usne ab tak kuch bola tha aur isiliye....


MAI-dramatic entrance ki noutanki ho gayi ho toh apna thobda dikhane ki zehmat uthayega yaa phir aisi hi dulhan ki tarah ghunghat odhe hamara challenge batayega..


HAHAHAHA...


meri baat bol zoron se hasa woh suspicious banda aur phir...


UNKNOWN-typical RAAZ...punch lines kami kabhi nahi hoti...kyun..???

fikr mat kar,tujhe mai apna chehra bhi dikhaunga aur tujhe tum sabka challenge bhi bataunga...


apni baat bolte hue usne apna head cover hata liya aur jab usne aisa kiya toh....


ACCHUTA, SLUNDER, BRAWNY, HIDA aur MAHI bhi buri tarah chownke aur un sabke mooh se ek saath nikla...


ANWIR....


behadh shock hote hue apne saamne muskurate hue khade ANWIR ko dekh kahi ye baat un sabne...


REASON.....


is waqt ANWIR ke pure body se ek behadh strong black energy ka AURA release ho raha tha..

ye AURA maamuli ya normal bilkul bhi nahi tha..aisa AURA sirf pure DEVILS ke body se release hota hai..

ab bhale hi mere saath khade paanchon ne pehle kisi devils ko saamne ae dekha nahi tha,par CHOSENS ki library me unke baare me aur unke sharir se nikal rahe extra ordinary AURA aur shakti ke baare me padha zaroor tha..

unhone ye jaana tha ki ek DEVIL ka AURA ek strong sorcerer's AURA se 1000 times strong aur negetive vibe se bhara hota hai..

aur waisa hi vibe abhi ANWIR ki body se feel kar rahe the woh sab...

kaali gehri aankhen jinme ek invisible par asardaar aag jhalak rahi thi,face jo white the toh but kisi dead person ki tarah jama hua sa,aur us white aur bright face me ek evil persona saaf jhalak raha tha,muskurate hue dekh raha tha hum sab ko ANWIR..

wahin ANWIR ko kuch der dekh..


HIDA-ANWIR..!!!what have you become...!!!

ANWIR-not become..i have been transformed,upgraded into a A+ LEVEL DARK WARRIOR....


bohot proudly kahi ye baat ANWIR ne jiske baad...


ACCHUTA-wakayi,upgrade toh hua hai tu...pehle chota chutiya tha,ab bada chutiya hai...


apni aadat anusaar bina situation dekhe jo dil me aaya,bak diya ACCHUTA ne jispar...


ANWIR-ACCHUTA..the guy with just a loud mouth and no spine...

chaahun toh ek jhatke me tujhe,tujhe kya tum sabko kisi chiti ki tarah yahin masal dun par LORD aur LORDESS ki taraf se mujhe aisa karne ko ijaazat nahi hai...

but we can have a bit of fun...aisa toh kar hi sakta hun mai...


apne haathon ko rub karte hue kahi ye baat ANWIR ne aur phir achanak usne unhi haathon ko aage kar apni taraf kheencha aur uske aisa karte hi ACHHUTA ek jhatke me uski taraf kheenchata chala gaya...

agle hi pal woh ANWIR ke strong grip me jakda chhatpata raha tha...

aankhon me ghussa liye ACCHUTA ne apne sir ko puri taakat ke saath ANWIR ke sir par maar diya par uske aisa karte hi..

AHHHHHH...

ek tez cheekh nikli..par ye cheekh ANWIR ki nahi balki ACCHUTA ki thi...

ANWIR ke sir se khud ke sir ko bhidaate hi usse aisa laga jaise usne kisi patthar par apna sir de maara hai..

ek pal me hi sir ghum gaya uska jipar usne apna sir pakad liya..

wahin ACCHUTA ke ANWIR ke taraf kheenchate aur uske sir par dard hote hi SLUNDER,HIDA aur BRAWNY uski taraf lapke..

waise aage toh MAHI bhi badhne waali thi but tabhi...


MAI-abhi nahi... woh harm nahi karega un sabko..woh bas khel raha hai un sabke saath..khelne do..


meri baat sun MAHI ke badhte kadam apni jagah par hi rook gaye...

wahin jaise hi SLUNDER, HIDA aur BRAWNY aage badhe toh ANWIR ne ACCHUTA ko kisi ball ki tarah un teeno ki taraf fekh diya..

uske throw me itni power thi ki jaise hi ACHHUTA un teeno se takraya,woh teeno udte hue mere aur MAHI se kareeb 10 metre piche udte hue jaakar gire...

waise girne ke baad woh teeno toh jaldi hi uth gaye the but ACCHUTA jiska pehle se hi ANWIR ke sir se hui takkar ki wajah se dimag ghuma hua tha,is double impact waale takkar ki wajah woh thoda rook kar dheere se utha jiske baad kuch der un chaaron ko muskurate hue dekha ANWIR ne aur phir uski nazar mujhpar aur MAHI par padi jiske baad...


ANWIR-MAHI....CHOSENS me apne phase ki best SAVENT..but more importantly,LORD OF ANGELS ki beti...

kya hua,apne doston ko bachane ke liye aage nahi aayi tum...

aur RAAZ...jo khud THE CHOSEN ONE hai..jo kabhi kisi challenge se back out nahi karta..

aaj uske kadam bhi apni hi jagah oar chipke hue hain..puch sakta hun kyun..???

MAI-challenge waala bhaag tune specific hokar nahi bola..mai unhi challenges ko accept karta hun,jo mere laayak hon..

aire gaire logon se bhi takraane laga mai toh phir jaise tune bola,RAAZ,THE CHOSEN ONE,is title ki izzat kharab nahi ho jaayegi...!!!

ANWIR-RAAZ,RAAZ,RAAZ..all show no go,haan...tu apne ilaake ka sher hua karta tha,yahan teri aukaad mere aage kisi kutte se zyada nahi hai...

MAI-ohho..matlab yahan ka sher tu hai..par aise me according to your point of you, tu bhi toh dusre ilaake ka kutta hi hua naa..!!!

anyways, congrats tere upgradation ke liye...

THE DEVIL'S HAVEN me ek peon, ek chaprasi ki post mil gayi tujhe jo yahan humare liye notice lekar aaya hai..

ab jo kaam mila hai woh bhi kar de...notice padhkar suna aur nikal...


meri baaton ko sun jahan mere saare saathi has diye wahin ANWIR mujhe kuch pal ghurta raha par phir uske face par ek smile aa gayi aur...


ANWIR-very well then....

TUUUUUUU...


ek tez chukti bajayi ANWIR ne aur uske aisa karte hi ek saath do chizen hui...

pehli....

usse thoda piche ek saath 6 broad stairs prakat hue jo ghumte hue se is ganan chumbi ALCAZAR ke roof top tak jaa rahe the...

dusri...

ANWIR ke theek aaju baaju me 6 BLACK SHADOWS prakat hue the aur ye do chizen hone ke baad...


ANWIR-6 log ho tum aur jaisa dekh rahe ho,stairs bhi 6 hi hain..one for each one of you..

challenge ye hai ki tum sabko inme se ek ek stairs me chadhte hue is ALCAZAR ke roof top tak pahunchna hai..

aisa kar lo aur INFERIOR LEVEL khatm... simple..!!!!

MAI-very simple..ab hard part bhi bata.. what's the catch...????

ANWIR-arre,saamne hi toh hain...ye 6 BLACK SHADOWS...

chalo,in sabse tumhara intro kara dun.. waise inka koi individual naam nahi hai,bas ek complete pehchaan hai..

they are called the HALLUCINATORS....

jo inka naam hai,is challenge ke dauran wahi inka kaam bhi hai...

jab tum sab apne apne stairs me upar chadhne lagoge,tab ye bhi apni choice ke according ek ek stairs select karenge...

and then,as i said RAAZ...the catch begins...

RAAZ-they will hallucinate us in our way to the top...

ANWIR-yup.. but, that's the half part only...jab tum sab hallucinations ki charam par hoge,tab they will cut off your heads...

aur tum sab apne imaginatory worlds me itne khoye hue hoge ki tumhe pata bhi nahi chalega and you will be dead...

waise waar ye sab sirf ek hi baar karenge aur tumme se jo jo inhe dodge kar paayega,he aur she will paas this challenge...

simple, isn't it....!!!


ANWIR ki baat sun jahan ek taraf woh chaaron halke nervous hokar individually is challenge ko kaise pura karenge,ye soch rahe the,wahin MAI aur MAHI bhi yahi soch rahe the but sabke liye..

wahin apni baat ko aage badhate hue..


ANWIR-now let me let you about the prize..woh prize jo ACCHUTA, SLUNDER, HIDA aur BRAWNY tum chaaron ko milega agar tum sab is challenge ko cross kar gaye...

par woh prize hai kya,woh tumhe tab hi pata chalega jab tum is challenge ko pura kar loge..

sorry RAAZ,MAHI,tum sabko kuch nahi milega...waise bhi,tum dono ke hi parents ne tum sabko viraasat me itna kuch diya hai ki mujhe nahi lagta ki tumhe kisi chiz ki zaroorat hai...!!!

kyun,sahi hai naa..!!!???

MAI- absolutely...par pata hai,kyun tere LORD ne hum dono ke liye koi prize nahi rakha hai...

kyunki bhikari bheek leta hai,deta nahi hai..aur tere dono so called LORDS bhikari hi toh hain...

jiske order se tu yahan hai(VIRAAZ)uski shakti meri bheekh hai aur tere LORD ke LORD ke paas jo shakti hai,woh iske BAAP ka daan hai...

ab jo khud charity case hon, woh kaise un do logon ko kuch de sakte hain jinki wajah se unka pura astitv bana hai...


meri theeki baaton ko sun jalti aankhon se dekha mujhe ANWIR ne aur phir..


ANWIR-all the best guyzzz.i personally want you all to succeed in this challenge...

challenge ke baad milte hain...


apni baat bol kaale dhuen me badal ANWIR gayab ho gaya aur ussike saath woh 6 BLACK SHADOWS bhi un 6 stairs ki taraf jaate hue gayab ho gaye jiske baad...


MAI man me-filhal itni energy, strength hai nahi ki ek saath in chaaron ko handle kar sakun...


maine ye man ki baat MAHI ke brain se connect hokar kahi thi jisse sun waise hi man me...


MAHI-we will share..do,do karkar baanth lete hain...

MAI-sirf HUMAN FORM POWER SOURCE ki shakti se hi tum ye kar sakti ho but woh in sabke liye dangerous ho sakta hai...

hallucinations ke waqt woh shakti ek unwanted aur unbearable shakti ki tarah bhi react kar sakti hai...

MAHI-sabse important baat kaise skip kar gaye tum..energy sharing ki wajah se humara subconscious brain strength bhi kam ho jaayega but phir bhi,if you are risking it,mai bhi ye karungi...


jahan ek dusre ko dekhte hue man hi man kar rahe the ye saari baatein wahin hume yun ek dusre ko lagataar taakte dekh...


ACCHUTA-guyz,nain mattakka ke liye ye jagah thodi odd nahi hai...


ACCHUTA ki baat sun apni nazar ek dusre se hatathe hue un chaaron ko dekha humne aur...


MAI-at the right time...

MAHI-cool...

HIDA-ye kya baat kar rahe ho tum dono...???

MAHI-kuch nahi.. future planning kar rahe the hum dono...

ACCHUTA-kis chiz ki..!!! challenge pura karne ki yaa fir life kaise saath bitana hai,uski...

MAHI-idhar udhar ki baat chhodo aur khudko challenge ke liye mentally taiyar rakho..

HALLUCINATIONS...jaise hi stairs par pehla kadam rakho,khudke brain ko yaad dilate rehna ki jo bhi hoga,woh sab illusion hai,kuch bhi sach nahi..

keep your mind open...ok..!!!

CHAARON-ok...


thoda confidently ye bol woh chaaron aur unke saath mai aur MAHI bhi stairs ki taraf badh gaye..

apne apne stairs ke first seedhi ke saamne pahunch ek dusre ko dekha humne aur phir humne apna first step is level ke aakhri challenge ki pehle paaydaan ki taraf badha liya aur jab humne aisa kiya toh...

ek hawa ka jhonka sa aaya aur ACCHUTA, SLUNDER, BRAWNY aur HIDA se takra sa gaya...

woh chaaron hi samajh chuke the hallucinations ka dour kabhi bhi shuru ho sakta hai aur isiliye...

pehle stair par kadam rakhte hi ek baar unhone upar dekha jahan zigzag pattern me woh endless se lagne waale stairs upar roof top par jaa rahe the..

apni manzil ko dekhne ke baad khudki body ko ek jhatka sa diya un chaaron ne aur phir woh sab jitna ho sake,utni tezi se upar chadhne lage..

is challenge me pysically thakne ka magic toh tha nahi, isiliye kaafi speedily bina thake ek baar me 3 se 4 siddhiyan chadthte hue upar chadhne lage...

wahin un chaaron ki tarah meri aur MAHI ki stair chadhne ki speed bhi zyada thi but upar chadhne ke saath saath hum dono apni aantarik drishti ko bhi jagane ki koshish kar rahe the...

kyunki yahi ek tarika tha kisi bhi tarah ke hallucinations se khudko protect karne ka but problem ye thi ki naa toh mere paas aur naahi MAHI ke paas filhal itni shakti thi jo apni aantarik drishti ko completely use me laa sake..

but fir bhi jitna ho sake,us shakti ko channelize karne ki koshish kar rahe the hum dono..

abhi tak hum sabko stairs chadhte hue 10 minute se zyada ho chuka tha...

par itni der me bhi humne total stairs ka sirf 10 percent hi cover kiya tha...

khair, time ki toh koi boundation thi nahi..

par phir bhi apni puri jaan lagakar upar chadhte hue chale jaa rahe the hum sab...

aur issi tarah hume upar chadhte hue lagbhagh 1 ghanta ho gaya..

ab tak lagbhag 50 percent ka apna safar pura kar chuke the hum sab aur woh bhi bina kisi problem aur hurdle ke..

aur yahi wajah thi ki hum sab ab thoda complacent ho gaye the..

hum sabka zyadatar focus ab tezi se upar chadhte hue roof top par pahuncne ka tha..

hamara concentration level thoda kam ho chuka tha aur yahi toh ye jagah chahti thi..

jab tak hum sabke brains kisi hallucinations ke liye apne aap ko pura ready rakhe hue the,tab tak humare dimag me ek invisible darwaza sa bana hua tha jo kisi bhi unknown aur unwanted drishya ko andar naa ghusne dene ke liye shut down kiya jaa sakta tha but hamara complacent hone se ye darwaza gayab ho chuka tha..

humne kisi bhi external chiz ko ek open invitation sa de diya tha aur shayad ye jagah yahi chahti thi..

abhi hum sab tezi se aage badh hi rahe the ki tabhi achanak se hum sabke saamne ka drishya hi badal gaya...


AHHHHHHH......

ACCHUTA,SLUNDER ke just aage ek unknown dark space ban gaya tha jahan uske mom dad ke spirits chains se bandhe hue the..

unke piche haathon m hunter liye do PUNISHERS khade the jo lagatar un dono par hunter barsaaye jaa rahe the jiski wajah se ACCHUTA aur SLUNDER ke mom dad zoron se cheekh rahe the...

apne mom dad ki cheekh ko sun ACCHUTA aur SLUNDER ki aankhen bhi bhar aayi thi..tadap uthe woh dono aur saath hi ghusse se bhar woh un PUNISHERS ki taraf badhe par tabhi..

un dono ke pair apni hi jagah par jam gaye...woh aage nahi badh paa rahe the...

apni jagah pur stuck hone par unki jhunjlahat aur badh gayi..

bas apne mom dad ke cheekh ko sun khud andar se tooththe jaa rahe the woh dono...

ACCHUTA aur SLUNDER dono hi apne ghutno par aa gaye aur taaki woh cheekhen unhe naa sunayi de, isiliye apni aankhon ko band kar apne dono kaano par haath rakh liya un dono ne...

par unke aisa karne par ulta asar hua..band aankhon aur kaano ke beech unhe unke mom dad aur unki cheekhen zyada kareeb se sunayi dene aur feel hone lagi...

un cheekhon ko sun aur feel kar dono ka mind dheere dheere apna sudh budh khone laga tha...

wahin dusri taraf BRAWNY ke aage unke home planet ka rajmahal tha jiske ek karagar me uske mom aur dad moujud the...

is waqt SHALTON par rajdroh ka ilzam laga hone ki wajah se usse baandh kar rakha gaya tha..

wahin dusri taraf NAOMI fate kapdo me neeche zamin par baithi hui thi...

uske paas hi do lady khade the jo lagatar usse mock karte hue ek gaddar ki biwi bol uspar thook rahe the...

BRAWNY rajpariwar se tha aur ek CHOSENS aane se pehle ek below average zindagi jeene ke baawjud uske khoon me rajdharm aur pyar bhara hua tha...

aise me apne hi pitah ko ek rajdrohi ke roop ke dekh aur saath hi saath apno mom ki dayneeya haalat ko mehsoos kar uska khoon khoul utha tha..

woh bhi ACCHUTA aur SLUNDER ki hi tarah apne mom dad ki taraf lapakne ko hue par un dono ko hi tarah woh bhi aage badh nahi paaya..

fark sirf itna tha ki jahan ACCHUTA aur SLUNDER ke pair apni hi jagah par stucked ho gaye the wahin BRAWNY ke case me uske aage jail ki salaakhen thi jiske dusri taraf uske mom dad the..

aur woh un salakhon ko cross nahi kar paa raha tha..

aur naahi uski awaaz uske mom dad ko aur wahan moujud logon ko sunayi de rahi thi...

ghussa aur bebasi ke mile jule bhaav ke beech fas chuka tha BRAWNY jisme kuch der baad ghussa kam aur bebasi ki feeling zyada hone lagi aur jab aisa hua toh ACCHUTA aur SLUNDER ki hi tarah, BRAWNY bhi apne ghutno par aa rote hue apne mom dad ki tadap dekh aur mehsoos karne laga...

wahin teesri taraf thi HIDA jiske aage ek alag hi scene chal raha tha..ek aisa scene jiske shuru hote hi HIDA puri tarah se panick ho chuki thi...

aur woh scene the uski mom ki death ka..unki tadap,unke dil ka dheere dheere rookna,saanson ko lene me taklif hona aur phir aakhri me unki navs band ho jaana,ye sab naa sirf HIDA dekh rahi thi,balki apne dimag me mehsoos bhi kar rahi thi.

aur ye uske liye unbearable tha..pair uske bhi apni jagah par jam gaye the jiski wajah se woh apne sir ko neeche kiye bas cheekhte hue roye jaa rahi thi....

aur aakhir me chowthi aur paanchwi taraf the mai aur MAHI..

hum dono ke aage chal raha drishya ek dusre se kaafi milta julta tha...

jahan mere aage mere aadhe janm aur aadhi uttpatti ka wahi scene chal raha tha jisse mai kabhi bhi dekhna nahi chahta tha wahin MAHI ke nazaron ke saamne bhi jab uske mom dad human the,us waqt ka scene chal raha tha..

woh scene jisme GOD ne usse uski MOM AVANTIKA ki kokh se nikal liya tha aur phir kayi haxaron saalon baad ek urja ke roop me usse dharti par bheje jaane ki taiyaari ki gayi thi...

aur us scene ko aur taklif deh banane waali baat ye thi ki is HALLUCINATION ke daur me bhi MAHI ko VIKRAM aur AVANTIKA ke faces blurred dikh rahe the..

but in saare HALLUCANATIONS ke beech ek baat ye bhi thi ki unlike ACCHUTA, SLUNDER, BRAWNY and HIDA,hum dono ke reality sense doors puri tarah gayab nahi hue the..

hamare saamne jo scenes chal rahe the,hamare brain ka ek part hume us scene ko fake bata raha tha but phir bhi un HALLUCINATION scenes ne hum dono ke hi right switch ko daba diya tha jiski wajah se hum dono ke hi anger aur frustration ki batti jal chuki thi...

hum dono ke hi zindagi ka woh sach jisse hum yaad nahi karna chahte the,woh hamari aankhon ke saamne chal raha tha aur ye hum dono ke liye hi ek mental tormentation ki tarah tha...

ghusse se kampkapate hue hum dono hi us scene ko band karna chahte the but un chaaron ke hi tarah humare pair bhi apni jagah par jakad se gaye the...

aur is saare chaos ke beech joki asal me bas ek bhram tha, usse bilkul ulat asliyat me kuch aur ho raha tha...

woh 6 BLACK SHADOWS bade araam se sadhe hue kadmo se stairs utarte hue hum sabke paas aa rahe the..

un sabke haathon me ek ek kaali chamakti hui sword thi jisse kuch hi palon me woh sab hamara gala kaatne waale the..

aur hum sab is sachayi se anjaan ek bhram jaal me fase hue the...

but ek difference tha...

aur woh ye ki jahan ab tak ACCHUTA, SLUNDER, BRAWNY aur HIDA ke HALLUCINATIONS unhe bilkul sach lag rahe the,wahin mere aur MAHI ke dimag ka ek hissa hamare samne chal rahe scenes ko jhuta bata raha tha..

but phir bhi jab hum dono us bharm se paida hone waale pain ki wajah se uski awaaz ko neglect karte rahe toh us hisse ne mere aur MAHI ke brain me ek dusra scene bhi chala diya...

jahan MAHI ke dimag ke ys jaage hue hisse me uski aur uske pitah ke beech hui conversation gunj uthi wahin mujhe ek aur painful scene dikhayi dene laga..

woh scene jisme maine apne haathon se apne mom dad ko maara tha...

aur ye scene mere maamle me us ghee ki tarah tha jo aag ko kuch yun bhadkaati hai jo har chiz ko jala deti hai..

mere andar ghusse aur nafrat ka ek sailab sa utha..

ye sailab itna zyada powerful tha ki ek saath mere chaaron AMPLIFICATION modes joki HALLUCINATIONS ki wajah se dull padh gaye the,ek jhatke me activate ho gaye...

kaali urja ka AURA joki nere vagus nerves me ghum rahi thi,woh bhi un AMPLIFICATIONS ke saath judte hue unhe aur strong banane lagi aur jab aisa hua toh mere dimag ka woh hissa jisme HALLUCINATIONS
ka magic kaam kar raha tha,uska darwaza band hone laga..

aisa hone par us HALLUCANATIVE MAGIC ne bhi darwaza band naa ho,iske liye apna dum lagaya par woh kaamiyab nahi ho paa raha tha..

aur is beech MAHI ka bhram jaal bhi tootne laga..aur jab aisa hua toh ek saath do chizen hui..

ek mere saath aur ek uske saath...

hamare brain ka ek teesra part bhi tha joki is waqt ACCHUTA, SLUNDER, BRAWNY aur HIDA ke brain se juda tha..

yaad hoga woh scene jab stairs par pair rakhte hi unse ek hawa ka jhonka takra gaya tha...

ye jhonka asal me brain connectivity ki ray thi...ACCHUTA aur SLUNDER se mera brain connected tha,HIDA aur BRAWNY se MAHI ka..

(NOTE:-yahi baat kar rahe the mai aur MAHI challenge start hone se pehle)


HALLUCINATIONS ko samajhte hi mere aur MAHI ke danger sensing ability activate ho chuki thi jisne hamare us teesre part ko joki un chaaron se connected tha,hum 6 logon ki taraf badhte un BLACK SHADOWS ke baare me joki ab tak theek humare sir ke upar pahunch chuke the,unke baare me bata diya tha aur jab aisa hua toh...


MAI-DODGE GUYZZZ....

INBORN REFLEXES....un chaaron ke ussi bhaag me gunji hum dono ki awaaz aur aisa hote hi woh chaaron bina soche neeche jhuk chuke the...

wahin mai aur MAHI,hume jhukne ki zaroorat nahi padi thi..

jahan ek taraf MAHI ki HUMAN FORM POWER SOURCE ki urja bahar nikal aayi thi jisse takrakar uske saamne waale BLACK SHADOW ki sword rook gayi wahin mai jiske sharir ka har ang,us second scene ko dekh ghusse se ubaal maar raha tha,jaise hi us BLACK SHADOW ne apni sword ghumayi toh meri body ek invisible triggered speed ke saath ghumte hue uske piche pahunch gayi..

wahin jaisa ki tay tha,humare un BLACK SHADOWS ke waar se bachte hi woh yahan se chale jaane waale the,wahi woh karne lage..

dhuan ban woh 6 BLACK SHADOWS gayab hone hi waale the ki tabhi...

mere sharir se BLACK ENERGY ka AURA nikla aur bijli ki tezi se un sabko touch kar gaya..

us AURA me ek electrifying energy thi jisse un SHADOWS tak ko ek tez jhaka laga..

aur jisi chumbakiya kheenchav ki tarah woh 6 BLACK SHADOWS mere saamne kheenchate hue ikattha ho gaye...

wahin un 6 BLACK SHADOWS ko samajh aa gaya tha ki mai unhe khatm karne ka irada rakhta hun..

yahi wajah thi ki woh mujhe attack karne ke liye SPELL bolne waale the but woh aisa kar paate,usse pehle hi jo HALLUCANATIVE scenes maine dekhe the,aur jinki wajah se mere andar rage ka,ghusse ka sailab umda hua tha,us rage ne khudko ek forced energy ka roop diya aur mere chaaron AMPLIFICATION modes ki taakat ko khudme channelize karte hue woh mere VAGUS NERVES ki BLACK ENERGY ke saath ja mila..

aisa hote hi woh RAGE FORCED ENERGY kayi guna tak badh gayi aur ek jhatke me mere sharir se kul 6 layers me nikal un saare BLACK SHADOWS ko jaa lagi....

ye energy un sabke liye bohot zyada painful bhi thi aur deadly bhi..

haad maans naa hone ke baawjud un 6 BLACK SHADOWS ko apne andar kuch jalta aur tooththa hua mehsoos hone laga..

awaaz unke paas thi nahi but phir bhi kisi short circuit ki awaaz un sabse aane lagi...

kisi tarah khudko niyantrit kar woh sab gayab hone ki koshish karne lage aur woh aisa karne me kaamiyab ho bhi jaate par tabhi..

MAHI ke sharir se uski ANGEL'S FORM POWER SOURCE ka beam bahar nikla aur jaise THE DARK LAKE ke aage MAHI ne mujhe chaaron taraf se ghera tha,is baar uski us beam ne un 6 BLACK SHADOWS ko gher liya..

aisa hone ki wajah se ab woh sabhi ek SPELL stopper ke andar fas chuke the jiski wajah se ab woh koi bhi SPELL nahi bol sakte the..

wahin is beech meri ray un sabko penetrate karne lagi thi jiski wajah se un sabka woh SHADOW roop bhi akad sa gaya tha aur usse ek gaadha solid BLACK sharp tool nikalne laga tha..

ye tool unki hi shakti se bana tha jiske nikalte hi maine apna haath aage kiya..

mere aisa karte hi woh tool mere haath me aa gaya jiske baad tezi se aage badha mai aur ek hi jhatke me maine us tool ko un 6 BLACK SHADOWS ke akade hue bodies ke aar paar kar diya...

BOOMMM....

sharir ke kaaththe hi ek dhamake ke saath woh 6 BLACK SHADOWS khatm ho gaye..

but unke khatm hote hi woh ALCAZAR aur wo 6 stairs jisme hum sab khade the,woh hilne laga...

ye isiliye hua kyunki jo tay kiya gaya tha,humne un SHADOWS ko khatm kar usme ek naya clause sa daal diya tha aur isiliye ye jagah ab khatm hone waali thi..

ACCHUTA, SLUNDER, BRAWNY aur HIDA jo apne HALLUCINATIONS se bahar aa mujhe un 6 SHADOWS ko maarta dekh khush ho rahe the,woh bhi stairs ke hilne se ladkhadane lage...

wahin SHADOWS ke khatm hote hi woh sharp tool bhi dhuan banane laga but tabhi maine us tool ko jis stair me mai khada tha,usme ghussa diya aur jab aisa hua toh woh saare stairs jinme hum khade the,usme 6 black carpet se ban gaye aur un carpets ne hum sabko apni shakti se hawa me utha liya...

mai jaanta tha ki aisa hi kuch hoga aur woh isiliye kyunki us tool ko bhi apne masters ke khatm hone ke baad is ALCAZAR se bahar hi jaana tha...

hum sabke liye ek SHADOW ko niyukt kiya gaya tha aur isiliye us tool ne bhi hum sabke hisaab se khudko spread kiya tha...

khair,hume hawa me utha kuch seconds woh tool numa carpet rooka raha but phir jab pure ALCAZAR ki kampan itni zyada badh gayi ki woh puri imarat tezi se tootne lagi toh hum sabhi ke pairon ke neeche bicha woh TOOL CARPET hume liye tezi se upar roof top ki taraf uthne laga...

neeche dekh rahe the hum sab jahan is waqt pura ALCAZAR kisi reth ke mahal ki taraf dehne ki kagar par pahunch chuka tha..

ACCHUTA, SLUNDER, BRAWNY,HIDA aur MAHI ke face par khushi dekhte hi ban rahi thi..

REASON..

DEVIL'S HAVEN ka first level jo successfully cross kar liya tha hum sabne...

wahin un sabse alag mai aankh band kiye hue tha aur woh isiliye kyunki itne dino me pehli baar mera jalta hua dil kuch shaant hua tha...

us shaanti ko feel kar hi raha tha mai ki tabhi...


YE SHAANTI ISILIYE HAI MERE BACCHE KYUNKI AAJ PEHLI BAAR TUNE APNE GHUSSE KO SAHI DISHA DETE HUE KAAM ME LIYA HAI...


ye thi RONIT ki awaaz jo mere andar gunj uthi jisse carry forward karte hue...


ANJALI-SUKH AUR DUKH ZINDAGI KE AHEM HISSE HAIN..INKE SAHI BEECH TAALMEL BAITHANA HI TOH ASLI "RAAZ" HAI....

ye saari baatein bol shaant ho gayi un dono ki awaaz par aankhein meri ab bhi band thi...

aaj pehli baar un dono ki awaaz sun mujhe bura nahi laga tha..

halaki acha bhi nahi laga tha but feelings nutral mode par thi aur utna hi kaafi tha..

khair,ek pal un dono ke face ko yaad karne ke baad mere zehen me aaya VIDEOUS ka face aur aisa hote hi jahan ab tak mere facial expressions normal the,wahin ab mere jabde sakhti se bheenchte chale gaye.

band aankhon ke beech aag dehek uthi jisse mere dil aur dimag dono ne mehsoos kiya aur aankh khul gayi meri...

neeche us khatm hote ALCAZAR ko dekhte hue muskuraya mai aur..


MAI-VIDEOUS.....



daav par apni jaan ko lagakar mai khudko AAZMATA JAAUNGA....

tujhe khatm karne ka VAADA kiya tha,mar bhi gaya toh woh vaada NIBHATA JAAUNGA....

maana ki filhal teri taakat zyada hai mujhse....koi naa.....

tu taakat dikhata jaa,mai JIGAR DIKHATA jaaunga...

















AAJ KE LIYE ITNA HI.....


















AAPKA APNA V...J....
Wow bhai kamal ka update tha bhai aur last line tu takat dikhata ja main jigada dikhauga this line is insane bro
 

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AB TAK AAPNE PADHA KI JAHAN EK TARAF MAHI, ACCHUTA, SLUNDER, BRAWNY AUR HIDA THIRD CHALLENGE ME COMPLETELY DIHYDRATE JO JAATE HAIN WAHIN DUSRI TARAF RAAZ US CHALLENGE KO PURA KAR KHUDKO AUR UN SABKO JUNGLE SE BAHAR NIKAL LETA HAI.


AB AAGE:-



CHAPTER-3


(THE DEVIL'S HAVEN,THE SACRIFICE & THE PERFECT EPILOGUE)



UPDATE-145



PLANET-ELYSIAN


PLACE-INFERIOR LEVEL




THE QUEST CONTINOUS


FIRST LEVEL:FINAL CHALLENGE:THE ALCAZAR







WHAT ARE YOU GUYZZ WAITING FOR....???AN INVITATION TO COME IN..!!!!


hume us gigantic ALCAZAR ke bahar abhi kuch hi der beeta tha ki tabhi ek awaaz us ALCAZAR ke andar se gunji jisse sun hum sab thode se chownk gaye the...


REASON...

woh awaaz kaafi refined,BLACK ENERGY se labalab aur strong impact waali thi but kuch jaani pehchaani thi aur isiliye..


ACCHUTA-ye awaaz kuch suni hui si lag rahi hai...!!!haina...???

SLUNDER-haan,but exactly kahan,ye samajh me nahi aa raha hai...???


SLUNDER aur ACCHUTA ki hi tarah ki baatein HIDA aur BRAWNY ne bhi ki jiske baad...


ACCHUTA-RAAZ,MAHI...tumhe ye awaaz pehle bhi suni hui si nahi lag rahi...???

MAHI-i think...

MAI-itni panchayat kis liye..andar chalkar khud dekh lo...ab jab awaaz hai,toh thobda bhi hoga hi..


MAHI ki baat kaaththe hue apni baat kahi maine aur phir aage badh gaya..

mere saath saath woh sab bhi aage badh chale...

kuch hi der me hum sab us ALCAZAR ke bade se front door ke saamne the..

humare us door ke saamne aate hi woh door bina awaaz ke khulta chala gaya jiske baad ek baar ek dusre ko dekh hum sab uske andar chale gaye..

humare andar jaate hi woh darwaza wapas band ho chuka tha..

ek endless hall jahan us door se hone ke baad hum pahunche the,usme khade hokar hum idhar udhar dekh hi rahe the ki tabhi humse kuch door ek black smoke uthne laga jisne dheere dheere ek HUMAN FORM lena shuru kiya.

kuch hi seconds me hamare saamne ek typical kaali shaktiyon ke numainde ke bhesh me,kaale labaade me jisne sir ko bhi dhaka tha,ek banda khada tha...

sir dhaka hone ki wajah se uska face dikh nahi raha tha aur naahi usne ab tak kuch bola tha aur isiliye....


MAI-dramatic entrance ki noutanki ho gayi ho toh apna thobda dikhane ki zehmat uthayega yaa phir aisi hi dulhan ki tarah ghunghat odhe hamara challenge batayega..


HAHAHAHA...


meri baat bol zoron se hasa woh suspicious banda aur phir...


UNKNOWN-typical RAAZ...punch lines kami kabhi nahi hoti...kyun..???

fikr mat kar,tujhe mai apna chehra bhi dikhaunga aur tujhe tum sabka challenge bhi bataunga...


apni baat bolte hue usne apna head cover hata liya aur jab usne aisa kiya toh....


ACCHUTA, SLUNDER, BRAWNY, HIDA aur MAHI bhi buri tarah chownke aur un sabke mooh se ek saath nikla...


ANWIR....


behadh shock hote hue apne saamne muskurate hue khade ANWIR ko dekh kahi ye baat un sabne...


REASON.....


is waqt ANWIR ke pure body se ek behadh strong black energy ka AURA release ho raha tha..

ye AURA maamuli ya normal bilkul bhi nahi tha..aisa AURA sirf pure DEVILS ke body se release hota hai..

ab bhale hi mere saath khade paanchon ne pehle kisi devils ko saamne ae dekha nahi tha,par CHOSENS ki library me unke baare me aur unke sharir se nikal rahe extra ordinary AURA aur shakti ke baare me padha zaroor tha..

unhone ye jaana tha ki ek DEVIL ka AURA ek strong sorcerer's AURA se 1000 times strong aur negetive vibe se bhara hota hai..

aur waisa hi vibe abhi ANWIR ki body se feel kar rahe the woh sab...

kaali gehri aankhen jinme ek invisible par asardaar aag jhalak rahi thi,face jo white the toh but kisi dead person ki tarah jama hua sa,aur us white aur bright face me ek evil persona saaf jhalak raha tha,muskurate hue dekh raha tha hum sab ko ANWIR..

wahin ANWIR ko kuch der dekh..


HIDA-ANWIR..!!!what have you become...!!!

ANWIR-not become..i have been transformed,upgraded into a A+ LEVEL DARK WARRIOR....


bohot proudly kahi ye baat ANWIR ne jiske baad...


ACCHUTA-wakayi,upgrade toh hua hai tu...pehle chota chutiya tha,ab bada chutiya hai...


apni aadat anusaar bina situation dekhe jo dil me aaya,bak diya ACCHUTA ne jispar...


ANWIR-ACCHUTA..the guy with just a loud mouth and no spine...

chaahun toh ek jhatke me tujhe,tujhe kya tum sabko kisi chiti ki tarah yahin masal dun par LORD aur LORDESS ki taraf se mujhe aisa karne ko ijaazat nahi hai...

but we can have a bit of fun...aisa toh kar hi sakta hun mai...


apne haathon ko rub karte hue kahi ye baat ANWIR ne aur phir achanak usne unhi haathon ko aage kar apni taraf kheencha aur uske aisa karte hi ACHHUTA ek jhatke me uski taraf kheenchata chala gaya...

agle hi pal woh ANWIR ke strong grip me jakda chhatpata raha tha...

aankhon me ghussa liye ACCHUTA ne apne sir ko puri taakat ke saath ANWIR ke sir par maar diya par uske aisa karte hi..

AHHHHHH...

ek tez cheekh nikli..par ye cheekh ANWIR ki nahi balki ACCHUTA ki thi...

ANWIR ke sir se khud ke sir ko bhidaate hi usse aisa laga jaise usne kisi patthar par apna sir de maara hai..

ek pal me hi sir ghum gaya uska jipar usne apna sir pakad liya..

wahin ACCHUTA ke ANWIR ke taraf kheenchate aur uske sir par dard hote hi SLUNDER,HIDA aur BRAWNY uski taraf lapke..

waise aage toh MAHI bhi badhne waali thi but tabhi...


MAI-abhi nahi... woh harm nahi karega un sabko..woh bas khel raha hai un sabke saath..khelne do..


meri baat sun MAHI ke badhte kadam apni jagah par hi rook gaye...

wahin jaise hi SLUNDER, HIDA aur BRAWNY aage badhe toh ANWIR ne ACCHUTA ko kisi ball ki tarah un teeno ki taraf fekh diya..

uske throw me itni power thi ki jaise hi ACHHUTA un teeno se takraya,woh teeno udte hue mere aur MAHI se kareeb 10 metre piche udte hue jaakar gire...

waise girne ke baad woh teeno toh jaldi hi uth gaye the but ACCHUTA jiska pehle se hi ANWIR ke sir se hui takkar ki wajah se dimag ghuma hua tha,is double impact waale takkar ki wajah woh thoda rook kar dheere se utha jiske baad kuch der un chaaron ko muskurate hue dekha ANWIR ne aur phir uski nazar mujhpar aur MAHI par padi jiske baad...


ANWIR-MAHI....CHOSENS me apne phase ki best SAVENT..but more importantly,LORD OF ANGELS ki beti...

kya hua,apne doston ko bachane ke liye aage nahi aayi tum...

aur RAAZ...jo khud THE CHOSEN ONE hai..jo kabhi kisi challenge se back out nahi karta..

aaj uske kadam bhi apni hi jagah oar chipke hue hain..puch sakta hun kyun..???

MAI-challenge waala bhaag tune specific hokar nahi bola..mai unhi challenges ko accept karta hun,jo mere laayak hon..

aire gaire logon se bhi takraane laga mai toh phir jaise tune bola,RAAZ,THE CHOSEN ONE,is title ki izzat kharab nahi ho jaayegi...!!!

ANWIR-RAAZ,RAAZ,RAAZ..all show no go,haan...tu apne ilaake ka sher hua karta tha,yahan teri aukaad mere aage kisi kutte se zyada nahi hai...

MAI-ohho..matlab yahan ka sher tu hai..par aise me according to your point of you, tu bhi toh dusre ilaake ka kutta hi hua naa..!!!

anyways, congrats tere upgradation ke liye...

THE DEVIL'S HAVEN me ek peon, ek chaprasi ki post mil gayi tujhe jo yahan humare liye notice lekar aaya hai..

ab jo kaam mila hai woh bhi kar de...notice padhkar suna aur nikal...


meri baaton ko sun jahan mere saare saathi has diye wahin ANWIR mujhe kuch pal ghurta raha par phir uske face par ek smile aa gayi aur...


ANWIR-very well then....

TUUUUUUU...


ek tez chukti bajayi ANWIR ne aur uske aisa karte hi ek saath do chizen hui...

pehli....

usse thoda piche ek saath 6 broad stairs prakat hue jo ghumte hue se is ganan chumbi ALCAZAR ke roof top tak jaa rahe the...

dusri...

ANWIR ke theek aaju baaju me 6 BLACK SHADOWS prakat hue the aur ye do chizen hone ke baad...


ANWIR-6 log ho tum aur jaisa dekh rahe ho,stairs bhi 6 hi hain..one for each one of you..

challenge ye hai ki tum sabko inme se ek ek stairs me chadhte hue is ALCAZAR ke roof top tak pahunchna hai..

aisa kar lo aur INFERIOR LEVEL khatm... simple..!!!!

MAI-very simple..ab hard part bhi bata.. what's the catch...????

ANWIR-arre,saamne hi toh hain...ye 6 BLACK SHADOWS...

chalo,in sabse tumhara intro kara dun.. waise inka koi individual naam nahi hai,bas ek complete pehchaan hai..

they are called the HALLUCINATORS....

jo inka naam hai,is challenge ke dauran wahi inka kaam bhi hai...

jab tum sab apne apne stairs me upar chadhne lagoge,tab ye bhi apni choice ke according ek ek stairs select karenge...

and then,as i said RAAZ...the catch begins...

RAAZ-they will hallucinate us in our way to the top...

ANWIR-yup.. but, that's the half part only...jab tum sab hallucinations ki charam par hoge,tab they will cut off your heads...

aur tum sab apne imaginatory worlds me itne khoye hue hoge ki tumhe pata bhi nahi chalega and you will be dead...

waise waar ye sab sirf ek hi baar karenge aur tumme se jo jo inhe dodge kar paayega,he aur she will paas this challenge...

simple, isn't it....!!!


ANWIR ki baat sun jahan ek taraf woh chaaron halke nervous hokar individually is challenge ko kaise pura karenge,ye soch rahe the,wahin MAI aur MAHI bhi yahi soch rahe the but sabke liye..

wahin apni baat ko aage badhate hue..


ANWIR-now let me let you about the prize..woh prize jo ACCHUTA, SLUNDER, HIDA aur BRAWNY tum chaaron ko milega agar tum sab is challenge ko cross kar gaye...

par woh prize hai kya,woh tumhe tab hi pata chalega jab tum is challenge ko pura kar loge..

sorry RAAZ,MAHI,tum sabko kuch nahi milega...waise bhi,tum dono ke hi parents ne tum sabko viraasat me itna kuch diya hai ki mujhe nahi lagta ki tumhe kisi chiz ki zaroorat hai...!!!

kyun,sahi hai naa..!!!???

MAI- absolutely...par pata hai,kyun tere LORD ne hum dono ke liye koi prize nahi rakha hai...

kyunki bhikari bheek leta hai,deta nahi hai..aur tere dono so called LORDS bhikari hi toh hain...

jiske order se tu yahan hai(VIRAAZ)uski shakti meri bheekh hai aur tere LORD ke LORD ke paas jo shakti hai,woh iske BAAP ka daan hai...

ab jo khud charity case hon, woh kaise un do logon ko kuch de sakte hain jinki wajah se unka pura astitv bana hai...


meri theeki baaton ko sun jalti aankhon se dekha mujhe ANWIR ne aur phir..


ANWIR-all the best guyzzz.i personally want you all to succeed in this challenge...

challenge ke baad milte hain...


apni baat bol kaale dhuen me badal ANWIR gayab ho gaya aur ussike saath woh 6 BLACK SHADOWS bhi un 6 stairs ki taraf jaate hue gayab ho gaye jiske baad...


MAI man me-filhal itni energy, strength hai nahi ki ek saath in chaaron ko handle kar sakun...


maine ye man ki baat MAHI ke brain se connect hokar kahi thi jisse sun waise hi man me...


MAHI-we will share..do,do karkar baanth lete hain...

MAI-sirf HUMAN FORM POWER SOURCE ki shakti se hi tum ye kar sakti ho but woh in sabke liye dangerous ho sakta hai...

hallucinations ke waqt woh shakti ek unwanted aur unbearable shakti ki tarah bhi react kar sakti hai...

MAHI-sabse important baat kaise skip kar gaye tum..energy sharing ki wajah se humara subconscious brain strength bhi kam ho jaayega but phir bhi,if you are risking it,mai bhi ye karungi...


jahan ek dusre ko dekhte hue man hi man kar rahe the ye saari baatein wahin hume yun ek dusre ko lagataar taakte dekh...


ACCHUTA-guyz,nain mattakka ke liye ye jagah thodi odd nahi hai...


ACCHUTA ki baat sun apni nazar ek dusre se hatathe hue un chaaron ko dekha humne aur...


MAI-at the right time...

MAHI-cool...

HIDA-ye kya baat kar rahe ho tum dono...???

MAHI-kuch nahi.. future planning kar rahe the hum dono...

ACCHUTA-kis chiz ki..!!! challenge pura karne ki yaa fir life kaise saath bitana hai,uski...

MAHI-idhar udhar ki baat chhodo aur khudko challenge ke liye mentally taiyar rakho..

HALLUCINATIONS...jaise hi stairs par pehla kadam rakho,khudke brain ko yaad dilate rehna ki jo bhi hoga,woh sab illusion hai,kuch bhi sach nahi..

keep your mind open...ok..!!!

CHAARON-ok...


thoda confidently ye bol woh chaaron aur unke saath mai aur MAHI bhi stairs ki taraf badh gaye..

apne apne stairs ke first seedhi ke saamne pahunch ek dusre ko dekha humne aur phir humne apna first step is level ke aakhri challenge ki pehle paaydaan ki taraf badha liya aur jab humne aisa kiya toh...

ek hawa ka jhonka sa aaya aur ACCHUTA, SLUNDER, BRAWNY aur HIDA se takra sa gaya...

woh chaaron hi samajh chuke the hallucinations ka dour kabhi bhi shuru ho sakta hai aur isiliye...

pehle stair par kadam rakhte hi ek baar unhone upar dekha jahan zigzag pattern me woh endless se lagne waale stairs upar roof top par jaa rahe the..

apni manzil ko dekhne ke baad khudki body ko ek jhatka sa diya un chaaron ne aur phir woh sab jitna ho sake,utni tezi se upar chadhne lage..

is challenge me pysically thakne ka magic toh tha nahi, isiliye kaafi speedily bina thake ek baar me 3 se 4 siddhiyan chadthte hue upar chadhne lage...

wahin un chaaron ki tarah meri aur MAHI ki stair chadhne ki speed bhi zyada thi but upar chadhne ke saath saath hum dono apni aantarik drishti ko bhi jagane ki koshish kar rahe the...

kyunki yahi ek tarika tha kisi bhi tarah ke hallucinations se khudko protect karne ka but problem ye thi ki naa toh mere paas aur naahi MAHI ke paas filhal itni shakti thi jo apni aantarik drishti ko completely use me laa sake..

but fir bhi jitna ho sake,us shakti ko channelize karne ki koshish kar rahe the hum dono..

abhi tak hum sabko stairs chadhte hue 10 minute se zyada ho chuka tha...

par itni der me bhi humne total stairs ka sirf 10 percent hi cover kiya tha...

khair, time ki toh koi boundation thi nahi..

par phir bhi apni puri jaan lagakar upar chadhte hue chale jaa rahe the hum sab...

aur issi tarah hume upar chadhte hue lagbhagh 1 ghanta ho gaya..

ab tak lagbhag 50 percent ka apna safar pura kar chuke the hum sab aur woh bhi bina kisi problem aur hurdle ke..

aur yahi wajah thi ki hum sab ab thoda complacent ho gaye the..

hum sabka zyadatar focus ab tezi se upar chadhte hue roof top par pahuncne ka tha..

hamara concentration level thoda kam ho chuka tha aur yahi toh ye jagah chahti thi..

jab tak hum sabke brains kisi hallucinations ke liye apne aap ko pura ready rakhe hue the,tab tak humare dimag me ek invisible darwaza sa bana hua tha jo kisi bhi unknown aur unwanted drishya ko andar naa ghusne dene ke liye shut down kiya jaa sakta tha but hamara complacent hone se ye darwaza gayab ho chuka tha..

humne kisi bhi external chiz ko ek open invitation sa de diya tha aur shayad ye jagah yahi chahti thi..

abhi hum sab tezi se aage badh hi rahe the ki tabhi achanak se hum sabke saamne ka drishya hi badal gaya...


AHHHHHHH......

ACCHUTA,SLUNDER ke just aage ek unknown dark space ban gaya tha jahan uske mom dad ke spirits chains se bandhe hue the..

unke piche haathon m hunter liye do PUNISHERS khade the jo lagatar un dono par hunter barsaaye jaa rahe the jiski wajah se ACCHUTA aur SLUNDER ke mom dad zoron se cheekh rahe the...

apne mom dad ki cheekh ko sun ACCHUTA aur SLUNDER ki aankhen bhi bhar aayi thi..tadap uthe woh dono aur saath hi ghusse se bhar woh un PUNISHERS ki taraf badhe par tabhi..

un dono ke pair apni hi jagah par jam gaye...woh aage nahi badh paa rahe the...

apni jagah pur stuck hone par unki jhunjlahat aur badh gayi..

bas apne mom dad ke cheekh ko sun khud andar se tooththe jaa rahe the woh dono...

ACCHUTA aur SLUNDER dono hi apne ghutno par aa gaye aur taaki woh cheekhen unhe naa sunayi de, isiliye apni aankhon ko band kar apne dono kaano par haath rakh liya un dono ne...

par unke aisa karne par ulta asar hua..band aankhon aur kaano ke beech unhe unke mom dad aur unki cheekhen zyada kareeb se sunayi dene aur feel hone lagi...

un cheekhon ko sun aur feel kar dono ka mind dheere dheere apna sudh budh khone laga tha...

wahin dusri taraf BRAWNY ke aage unke home planet ka rajmahal tha jiske ek karagar me uske mom aur dad moujud the...

is waqt SHALTON par rajdroh ka ilzam laga hone ki wajah se usse baandh kar rakha gaya tha..

wahin dusri taraf NAOMI fate kapdo me neeche zamin par baithi hui thi...

uske paas hi do lady khade the jo lagatar usse mock karte hue ek gaddar ki biwi bol uspar thook rahe the...

BRAWNY rajpariwar se tha aur ek CHOSENS aane se pehle ek below average zindagi jeene ke baawjud uske khoon me rajdharm aur pyar bhara hua tha...

aise me apne hi pitah ko ek rajdrohi ke roop ke dekh aur saath hi saath apno mom ki dayneeya haalat ko mehsoos kar uska khoon khoul utha tha..

woh bhi ACCHUTA aur SLUNDER ki hi tarah apne mom dad ki taraf lapakne ko hue par un dono ko hi tarah woh bhi aage badh nahi paaya..

fark sirf itna tha ki jahan ACCHUTA aur SLUNDER ke pair apni hi jagah par stucked ho gaye the wahin BRAWNY ke case me uske aage jail ki salaakhen thi jiske dusri taraf uske mom dad the..

aur woh un salakhon ko cross nahi kar paa raha tha..

aur naahi uski awaaz uske mom dad ko aur wahan moujud logon ko sunayi de rahi thi...

ghussa aur bebasi ke mile jule bhaav ke beech fas chuka tha BRAWNY jisme kuch der baad ghussa kam aur bebasi ki feeling zyada hone lagi aur jab aisa hua toh ACCHUTA aur SLUNDER ki hi tarah, BRAWNY bhi apne ghutno par aa rote hue apne mom dad ki tadap dekh aur mehsoos karne laga...

wahin teesri taraf thi HIDA jiske aage ek alag hi scene chal raha tha..ek aisa scene jiske shuru hote hi HIDA puri tarah se panick ho chuki thi...

aur woh scene the uski mom ki death ka..unki tadap,unke dil ka dheere dheere rookna,saanson ko lene me taklif hona aur phir aakhri me unki navs band ho jaana,ye sab naa sirf HIDA dekh rahi thi,balki apne dimag me mehsoos bhi kar rahi thi.

aur ye uske liye unbearable tha..pair uske bhi apni jagah par jam gaye the jiski wajah se woh apne sir ko neeche kiye bas cheekhte hue roye jaa rahi thi....

aur aakhir me chowthi aur paanchwi taraf the mai aur MAHI..

hum dono ke aage chal raha drishya ek dusre se kaafi milta julta tha...

jahan mere aage mere aadhe janm aur aadhi uttpatti ka wahi scene chal raha tha jisse mai kabhi bhi dekhna nahi chahta tha wahin MAHI ke nazaron ke saamne bhi jab uske mom dad human the,us waqt ka scene chal raha tha..

woh scene jisme GOD ne usse uski MOM AVANTIKA ki kokh se nikal liya tha aur phir kayi haxaron saalon baad ek urja ke roop me usse dharti par bheje jaane ki taiyaari ki gayi thi...

aur us scene ko aur taklif deh banane waali baat ye thi ki is HALLUCINATION ke daur me bhi MAHI ko VIKRAM aur AVANTIKA ke faces blurred dikh rahe the..

but in saare HALLUCANATIONS ke beech ek baat ye bhi thi ki unlike ACCHUTA, SLUNDER, BRAWNY and HIDA,hum dono ke reality sense doors puri tarah gayab nahi hue the..

hamare saamne jo scenes chal rahe the,hamare brain ka ek part hume us scene ko fake bata raha tha but phir bhi un HALLUCINATION scenes ne hum dono ke hi right switch ko daba diya tha jiski wajah se hum dono ke hi anger aur frustration ki batti jal chuki thi...

hum dono ke hi zindagi ka woh sach jisse hum yaad nahi karna chahte the,woh hamari aankhon ke saamne chal raha tha aur ye hum dono ke liye hi ek mental tormentation ki tarah tha...

ghusse se kampkapate hue hum dono hi us scene ko band karna chahte the but un chaaron ke hi tarah humare pair bhi apni jagah par jakad se gaye the...

aur is saare chaos ke beech joki asal me bas ek bhram tha, usse bilkul ulat asliyat me kuch aur ho raha tha...

woh 6 BLACK SHADOWS bade araam se sadhe hue kadmo se stairs utarte hue hum sabke paas aa rahe the..

un sabke haathon me ek ek kaali chamakti hui sword thi jisse kuch hi palon me woh sab hamara gala kaatne waale the..

aur hum sab is sachayi se anjaan ek bhram jaal me fase hue the...

but ek difference tha...

aur woh ye ki jahan ab tak ACCHUTA, SLUNDER, BRAWNY aur HIDA ke HALLUCINATIONS unhe bilkul sach lag rahe the,wahin mere aur MAHI ke dimag ka ek hissa hamare samne chal rahe scenes ko jhuta bata raha tha..

but phir bhi jab hum dono us bharm se paida hone waale pain ki wajah se uski awaaz ko neglect karte rahe toh us hisse ne mere aur MAHI ke brain me ek dusra scene bhi chala diya...

jahan MAHI ke dimag ke ys jaage hue hisse me uski aur uske pitah ke beech hui conversation gunj uthi wahin mujhe ek aur painful scene dikhayi dene laga..

woh scene jisme maine apne haathon se apne mom dad ko maara tha...

aur ye scene mere maamle me us ghee ki tarah tha jo aag ko kuch yun bhadkaati hai jo har chiz ko jala deti hai..

mere andar ghusse aur nafrat ka ek sailab sa utha..

ye sailab itna zyada powerful tha ki ek saath mere chaaron AMPLIFICATION modes joki HALLUCINATIONS ki wajah se dull padh gaye the,ek jhatke me activate ho gaye...

kaali urja ka AURA joki nere vagus nerves me ghum rahi thi,woh bhi un AMPLIFICATIONS ke saath judte hue unhe aur strong banane lagi aur jab aisa hua toh mere dimag ka woh hissa jisme HALLUCINATIONS
ka magic kaam kar raha tha,uska darwaza band hone laga..

aisa hone par us HALLUCANATIVE MAGIC ne bhi darwaza band naa ho,iske liye apna dum lagaya par woh kaamiyab nahi ho paa raha tha..

aur is beech MAHI ka bhram jaal bhi tootne laga..aur jab aisa hua toh ek saath do chizen hui..

ek mere saath aur ek uske saath...

hamare brain ka ek teesra part bhi tha joki is waqt ACCHUTA, SLUNDER, BRAWNY aur HIDA ke brain se juda tha..

yaad hoga woh scene jab stairs par pair rakhte hi unse ek hawa ka jhonka takra gaya tha...

ye jhonka asal me brain connectivity ki ray thi...ACCHUTA aur SLUNDER se mera brain connected tha,HIDA aur BRAWNY se MAHI ka..

(NOTE:-yahi baat kar rahe the mai aur MAHI challenge start hone se pehle)


HALLUCINATIONS ko samajhte hi mere aur MAHI ke danger sensing ability activate ho chuki thi jisne hamare us teesre part ko joki un chaaron se connected tha,hum 6 logon ki taraf badhte un BLACK SHADOWS ke baare me joki ab tak theek humare sir ke upar pahunch chuke the,unke baare me bata diya tha aur jab aisa hua toh...


MAI-DODGE GUYZZZ....

INBORN REFLEXES....un chaaron ke ussi bhaag me gunji hum dono ki awaaz aur aisa hote hi woh chaaron bina soche neeche jhuk chuke the...

wahin mai aur MAHI,hume jhukne ki zaroorat nahi padi thi..

jahan ek taraf MAHI ki HUMAN FORM POWER SOURCE ki urja bahar nikal aayi thi jisse takrakar uske saamne waale BLACK SHADOW ki sword rook gayi wahin mai jiske sharir ka har ang,us second scene ko dekh ghusse se ubaal maar raha tha,jaise hi us BLACK SHADOW ne apni sword ghumayi toh meri body ek invisible triggered speed ke saath ghumte hue uske piche pahunch gayi..

wahin jaisa ki tay tha,humare un BLACK SHADOWS ke waar se bachte hi woh yahan se chale jaane waale the,wahi woh karne lage..

dhuan ban woh 6 BLACK SHADOWS gayab hone hi waale the ki tabhi...

mere sharir se BLACK ENERGY ka AURA nikla aur bijli ki tezi se un sabko touch kar gaya..

us AURA me ek electrifying energy thi jisse un SHADOWS tak ko ek tez jhaka laga..

aur jisi chumbakiya kheenchav ki tarah woh 6 BLACK SHADOWS mere saamne kheenchate hue ikattha ho gaye...

wahin un 6 BLACK SHADOWS ko samajh aa gaya tha ki mai unhe khatm karne ka irada rakhta hun..

yahi wajah thi ki woh mujhe attack karne ke liye SPELL bolne waale the but woh aisa kar paate,usse pehle hi jo HALLUCANATIVE scenes maine dekhe the,aur jinki wajah se mere andar rage ka,ghusse ka sailab umda hua tha,us rage ne khudko ek forced energy ka roop diya aur mere chaaron AMPLIFICATION modes ki taakat ko khudme channelize karte hue woh mere VAGUS NERVES ki BLACK ENERGY ke saath ja mila..

aisa hote hi woh RAGE FORCED ENERGY kayi guna tak badh gayi aur ek jhatke me mere sharir se kul 6 layers me nikal un saare BLACK SHADOWS ko jaa lagi....

ye energy un sabke liye bohot zyada painful bhi thi aur deadly bhi..

haad maans naa hone ke baawjud un 6 BLACK SHADOWS ko apne andar kuch jalta aur tooththa hua mehsoos hone laga..

awaaz unke paas thi nahi but phir bhi kisi short circuit ki awaaz un sabse aane lagi...

kisi tarah khudko niyantrit kar woh sab gayab hone ki koshish karne lage aur woh aisa karne me kaamiyab ho bhi jaate par tabhi..

MAHI ke sharir se uski ANGEL'S FORM POWER SOURCE ka beam bahar nikla aur jaise THE DARK LAKE ke aage MAHI ne mujhe chaaron taraf se ghera tha,is baar uski us beam ne un 6 BLACK SHADOWS ko gher liya..

aisa hone ki wajah se ab woh sabhi ek SPELL stopper ke andar fas chuke the jiski wajah se ab woh koi bhi SPELL nahi bol sakte the..

wahin is beech meri ray un sabko penetrate karne lagi thi jiski wajah se un sabka woh SHADOW roop bhi akad sa gaya tha aur usse ek gaadha solid BLACK sharp tool nikalne laga tha..

ye tool unki hi shakti se bana tha jiske nikalte hi maine apna haath aage kiya..

mere aisa karte hi woh tool mere haath me aa gaya jiske baad tezi se aage badha mai aur ek hi jhatke me maine us tool ko un 6 BLACK SHADOWS ke akade hue bodies ke aar paar kar diya...

BOOMMM....

sharir ke kaaththe hi ek dhamake ke saath woh 6 BLACK SHADOWS khatm ho gaye..

but unke khatm hote hi woh ALCAZAR aur wo 6 stairs jisme hum sab khade the,woh hilne laga...

ye isiliye hua kyunki jo tay kiya gaya tha,humne un SHADOWS ko khatm kar usme ek naya clause sa daal diya tha aur isiliye ye jagah ab khatm hone waali thi..

ACCHUTA, SLUNDER, BRAWNY aur HIDA jo apne HALLUCINATIONS se bahar aa mujhe un 6 SHADOWS ko maarta dekh khush ho rahe the,woh bhi stairs ke hilne se ladkhadane lage...

wahin SHADOWS ke khatm hote hi woh sharp tool bhi dhuan banane laga but tabhi maine us tool ko jis stair me mai khada tha,usme ghussa diya aur jab aisa hua toh woh saare stairs jinme hum khade the,usme 6 black carpet se ban gaye aur un carpets ne hum sabko apni shakti se hawa me utha liya...

mai jaanta tha ki aisa hi kuch hoga aur woh isiliye kyunki us tool ko bhi apne masters ke khatm hone ke baad is ALCAZAR se bahar hi jaana tha...

hum sabke liye ek SHADOW ko niyukt kiya gaya tha aur isiliye us tool ne bhi hum sabke hisaab se khudko spread kiya tha...

khair,hume hawa me utha kuch seconds woh tool numa carpet rooka raha but phir jab pure ALCAZAR ki kampan itni zyada badh gayi ki woh puri imarat tezi se tootne lagi toh hum sabhi ke pairon ke neeche bicha woh TOOL CARPET hume liye tezi se upar roof top ki taraf uthne laga...

neeche dekh rahe the hum sab jahan is waqt pura ALCAZAR kisi reth ke mahal ki taraf dehne ki kagar par pahunch chuka tha..

ACCHUTA, SLUNDER, BRAWNY,HIDA aur MAHI ke face par khushi dekhte hi ban rahi thi..

REASON..

DEVIL'S HAVEN ka first level jo successfully cross kar liya tha hum sabne...

wahin un sabse alag mai aankh band kiye hue tha aur woh isiliye kyunki itne dino me pehli baar mera jalta hua dil kuch shaant hua tha...

us shaanti ko feel kar hi raha tha mai ki tabhi...


YE SHAANTI ISILIYE HAI MERE BACCHE KYUNKI AAJ PEHLI BAAR TUNE APNE GHUSSE KO SAHI DISHA DETE HUE KAAM ME LIYA HAI...


ye thi RONIT ki awaaz jo mere andar gunj uthi jisse carry forward karte hue...


ANJALI-SUKH AUR DUKH ZINDAGI KE AHEM HISSE HAIN..INKE SAHI BEECH TAALMEL BAITHANA HI TOH ASLI "RAAZ" HAI....

ye saari baatein bol shaant ho gayi un dono ki awaaz par aankhein meri ab bhi band thi...

aaj pehli baar un dono ki awaaz sun mujhe bura nahi laga tha..

halaki acha bhi nahi laga tha but feelings nutral mode par thi aur utna hi kaafi tha..

khair,ek pal un dono ke face ko yaad karne ke baad mere zehen me aaya VIDEOUS ka face aur aisa hote hi jahan ab tak mere facial expressions normal the,wahin ab mere jabde sakhti se bheenchte chale gaye.

band aankhon ke beech aag dehek uthi jisse mere dil aur dimag dono ne mehsoos kiya aur aankh khul gayi meri...

neeche us khatm hote ALCAZAR ko dekhte hue muskuraya mai aur..


MAI-VIDEOUS.....



daav par apni jaan ko lagakar mai khudko AAZMATA JAAUNGA....

tujhe khatm karne ka VAADA kiya tha,mar bhi gaya toh woh vaada NIBHATA JAAUNGA....

maana ki filhal teri taakat zyada hai mujhse....koi naa.....

tu taakat dikhata jaa,mai JIGAR DIKHATA jaaunga...

















AAJ KE LIYE ITNA HI.....



















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