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Fantasy ATTITUDE (KABHI ANGEL KABHI DEVIL) ( Completed )

Vipul

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AB TAK AAPNE PADHA KI JAHAN EK TARAF VISION SERPENT KE FIRST LAYERED BODY KO HIDA, ACCHUTA,SLUNDER, BRAWNY AUR MAHI MILKAR KHATM KAR DETE HAIN WAHIN DUSRI TARAF RAAZ US SERPENT KE SECOND AUR FINAL LAYER KO MITA USSE PURI TARAH SE KHATM KAR DETA HAI.


AB AAGE:-



CHAPTER-3


(THE DEVIL'S HAVEN,THE SACRIFICE & THE PERFECT EPILOGUE)



UPDATE-142



PLANET-ELYSIAN


PLACE-THE INFERIOR LEVEL





THE QUEST CONTINOUS


THIRD CHALLENGE:THE DRAWNING LAKE






CHEHRE PAR HADH SE ZYADA THAKAN,PAIR THEEK SE UTH NAHI RAHE,I AM SURE NASEN CHADH CHUKI HONGI,PASINA PAANI SE ZYADA NIKAL RAHA HAI,HALKA HALKA DIHYDRATION PROCESS BHI SHURU HO CHUKA HAI...

PHYSICALLY ITNI TORMENTED SITUATION ME HONE KE BAAD BHI MUJHE AISA KYUN LAG RAHA HAI KI TAKLIF PYSICAL SE ZYADA MENTAL HO RAHI HAI TUM SABKO..!!!


un paancho ko dekh kahi thi maine ye baat...

REASON....

5 km lambe pathrile registaan ko jiske surface me ek ajeeb sa gravitational pull tha,paar kar finally jab humne us desert ka daayra paar kar hi liya..

aur aisa hote hi woh paanchon lambi lambi saans lete hue neeche kaali ghaans se bhare zamin me baith apni thakaan ko mitane ki koshish karne lage..

par pyscically itne negetive haalat me hone ke baad bhi un sabki aankhon se ek dusri hi taklif aur chehre se ek alag hi udasi chhalak rahi aur ussiko dekh kahi thi maine ye baat jispar un sabne kuch kaha nahi,bas sir jhukaye lambi saansein lete rahe jispar...


MAI-doctor se kuch bhi chhupana sahi nahi hota guyzzz....

MAHI-kya baat hai RAAZ...???jo hamesha jaan lene par utaaru rehta hai,woh aaj khudko jaan bachane waale doctor se compare kar raha hai...

MAI-har doctor jaan bachane ke liye medicine nahi karta MAHI..kuch,infact zyadatar log isiliye medicine karte hain kyunki is line me paise bohot hain...

aur aise doctors,unka mariz jiyega yaa marega,ye us mariz ki pysical strength nahi,balki uski financial strength se tay karte hain...

faayda agar unka hai,toh hi sahi maayne me woh doctors bante hain...

bottom line,mai bhi us tarike ka hi doctor hun...filhal tum sabse mujhe faayda hi hai, isiliye puch liya...

ACCHUTA-bhai tu logic kahan kahan se dhund kar laata hai..???saala selfishness ko bhi sach ke paani me dubokar aise pesh karta hai ki naa toh us selfishness ko hazam kar sakte hain aur naahi bole gaye sach se debate...

MAI-meri taarif chhod,apni aur in sabki taklif bata...achanak aisa kya ho gaya ki jahan tum sab pehle hadh se zyada excited aur motivated the,wahin kuch der se demoralised lagne lage ho..???

MAHI-upar se apne saath paanch paanch kamzoriyan saath lekar chal rahe ho...!!!!


VIRAZ ki un sabke liye kahi baat repeat ki MAHI ne jisse sun...


MAI-ohho....so he successfully played you all,haan..!!!

MAHI-played..!!!he only spilled the truth out RAAZ...sach hi toh kaha tha usne...hum sab is safar me,is quest me tumhare liye sirf extra baggages aur kamzoriyan hi toh hain...

agar tum last chunouti ke beech nahi aate,toh we all would have been dead...

MAI-but you are not...

MAHI-sirf tumhari wajah se...

MAI-humari har saans chalne ke peeche ek wajah hoti hai...kya har wajah ko talash khudko blame karti ho tum...!!!

ye yaad raha tum sabko ki ab tak tumne underperform kiya hai,par ye yaad nahi raha ki situations tumhare excel karne ke hain hi nahi..

aur naahi tumhare paas tum sabki full grown shaktiyan hain jiski madad se tum yahan apne dum par survive kar sako...

ek hi chiz hai...ATTITUDE....woh ATTITUDE jiske dum par yahan aane ka aur ladhne ka faisla kiya tha tum sab ne...

par ye dekhkar ajeeb lag raha hai ki ek waana be RAAZ ne apne manupaltive baaton se tum sabke us ATTITUDE ko hi hila diya..

ACCHUTA, SLUNDER, BRAWNY, HIDA...bhul gaye kya tum chaaron ki tum sabko GOD ne SAVENT banane ke blessings ke saath alag se bhi POWER GIFTS diye hain...

haan, bhale hi woh powers aaj locked hain,par hain toh tumhare andar hi...

tum sab aaj bhi blessed ho..par har blessing tabhi kaam me aati hai jab uspar bharosa kiya jaaye..

aur yahan toh blessings tum sab khud hi ho...khud par bharosa rakhna hai tumhe...

and MAHI...i dont think ki mujhe tumhe gyan dene ki zaroorat hai...

gyan ka bhandaar toh tumhe viraasat me mila hai...(VIKRAM)


halka mock karte hue kahi ye baat maine MAHI ko jisse sun itne der se depressed dikh rahi MAHI ke face par bhi smile aa gayi..

saath hi saath apne dad ki yaad aate hi uska saara demotivation jaata raha...

it was just the matter of time and patience...uske baad toh she will be unstoppable,jaanti toh thi woh ye baat but ab samajhne bhi lagi thi...

khair,apni baat ko aage badhate hue..


MAI-jaise is DEVIL'S HAVEN ko penetrate karna mera quest hai,thik waise hi khudpar bharosa karna, VIDEOUS aur VIRAAZ ke har demotivation ko dodge karna, tum sabka quest hai...

beat them by beating your negetiveness....

ye ek jungle hai guyzz...aur jungle ka ek hi niyam hota hai..SURVIVE...

aur is baat se fark nahi padta ki survive kaise kiya jaa raha hai..just hang on,har chiz apne place par pahunchne lagegi..

ACCHUTA-nahi pahunchegi toh pahuncha denge...


purane form ne aate hue kahi ye baat ACCHUTA ne aur phir mujhe hug karne meri taraf aane laga par tabhi mai ghumte hue aage badh gaya aur...


MAI-ab chalo guyzz...next challenge is waiting for us...

ACCHUTA-saala pehle motivate karke emotional kar diya aur phir khud nikal liya..


ACCHUTA ki baat sun baaki chaaron has diye aur woh sab bhi mere piche ho liye..

wahin MAHI thoda tez aage badhi aur mere baaju me pahunch...


MAHI-thanks...

MAI-kisliye..!!!maine pehle bhi kaha tha ki...

MAHI-jo bhi tumne kaha,woh sirf isiliye kaha kyunki isme tumhara faayda hai..i get it...

par aag bhi toh garam hota hai..jalane ka kaam karta hai..lekin wahi aag jab thand me jalta hai toh sharir ko sukoon pahunchata hai..

kuch der pehle hum sabka mind set ussi cold weather me lagne waali thand ki tarah tha aur tumhari baatein,us thand me sukoon dene waali aag ki tarah thi..

MAI-bilkul apne baap ki tarah ho...unki tarah har situation me positiveness ki noutanki karne ki aadat hai tumhe...

MAHI-i will take that as a big compliment...

waise RAAZ...tum toh unki urja se bane ho..tum toh unki har baat ko ,unki soch,samajh,har chiz ko feel karte hoge..

kuch batao naa unke aise tough situations ko deal karne ke tarike ke baare me...

MAI-usse pehle aage aane waale jheel me bina try kare hi naa doob jaaun mai...!!!


jahan apni baat bol mai aage badh gaya wahin MAHI pehle muskurayi par phir uske face se smile gayab hote hue sudden seriousness aa gayi..

woh turant mere paas aayi aur..


MAHI-kya bola tumne...jheel me bina try kare hi naa doob jaaun mai..!!

iska kya matlab hua..???

MAI-aisi hi thodi bohot soch aur samajh thi tumhare dad ki bhi..but ek difference bhi hai..!!!woh sawal puchne ke baad khud hi jawab bhi dhundh lete the aur saath hi saath uska solution bhi...

MAHI-kya baat hai..?? mere dad se nafrat karte ho aur ab unhi ki taarif bhi kar rahe ho...!!!

MAI-nafrat se sach toh nahi badal jaata.aur waise bhi,mai unki taarif nahi, tumhari kami bata raha tha...

MAHI-nazariye ki baat hai..tum meri kami bata rahe the aur mera dhyan dad ki taarif par tha..

but woh chhodo aur apne statement ka matlab batao..???

ab tak woh chaaron bhi humare paas aa chuke the, isiliye ek baar un sabko dekh..


MAI-yaad hai DESERT ke baad kis challenge ke bare me bataya tha maine..!!!

BRAWNY-haan, koi kaali jheel...

MAI-aur us jheel ka naam hai THE DROWNING LAKE...

HIDA-THE DROWNING LAKE...!!!!naam sunkar hi ghabrahat ho rahi hai..

MAI-honi bhi chahiye... kyunki naam me hi us lake ki khoobi chuppi hui hai...

DROWNING LAKE me swim nahi kiya jaa sakta...us lake ka paani usme utarne waale har praani aur jeev ko neeche kheench leta hai..

ab uske baad kya hota hai,ye toh us lake ke water ko touch karkar hi mai bata sakta hun..

ACCHUTA-bhai,aur batane ke liye bacha hi kya hai..ab ek baat toh obvious hi hai ki us lake ka paani bhi BLACK ENERGY se bhara hua hoga..

aur jaise hi koi usme doobta hoga, toh woh paani uske mooh ke through andar ghus usse khatm kar deta hoga..

SLUNDER-haan aur ho sakta hai ki paani ke andar deadly creatures bhi hon aur wahi us paani me utarne waale ko neeche pull karte hon.!!!

MAI-toh matlab aage nahi badhna hai..!!!

HIDA-kyun nahi badhna hai..bilkul badhenge...

MAI-then stop speculating and let's just walk there...


apni baat bol mai aage badh gaya aur woh sab bhi chup chaap mere piche ho liye...




THE DROWNING LAKE




OH SHIT...ISKA END KAHAN HAI.....???




kuch der chalne ke baad jab hum us DROWNING LAKE ke paas pahunche,toh us lake ke endless dimension ko dekh kahi ye baat BRAWNY ne...

jahan door door tak kaale paani se bhare us lake ko woh paanchon dekh rahe the wahin mai aage badha aur lake ke kinare par baith maine pehle wahan moujud paani ko touch kiya aur phir usme apna haath daal diya aur mere aisa karte hi...

jahan maine haath daala tha,us jagah ka paani kuch do hatheli jitna hi gehra tha par mere haath ke us gehrayi ke end point ko touch karte hi woh end part bhi aur neeche khisakne laga aur saath hi saath mere haath ko bhi apne saath neeche pull karne laga..

aisa hote hi maine turant apne haath se apni black energy ki ray release kar di..

aur jab maina aisa kiya toh achanak se hi naa sirf woh neeche khisakne waala part wapas uththe hue apni purani jagah par aa gaya balki mera haath bhi us pull se completely free ho gaya...

apni jagah par wapas khada ho chuka tha mai but aage kya karna hai,iska naa toh idea tha mujhe aur naahi koi plan..

mai toh apni kaali urja ki madad se aage badh sakta tha,but ye paanchon...!!

ye kaise paar karenge is jheel ko,main sawal toh yahi tha jiska filhal mere paas koi jawab nahi tha....

yahan mai ye sab soch raha tha aur wahan woh paanchon meri taraf dekh rahe the is ummid ke saath ki mai koi solution nikalunga...

par jab kuch der baad bhi mai apni sochon me gum raha toh MAHI mere paas aayi aur usne mere kandhe par haath rakha aur...


MAHI-kya hua RAAZ...!!!???kya soch rahe ho..???kya yahan se aage jaane ka koi tarika nahi sujh raha...???


MAHI ki baat sun usse dhyan se dekhte hue..


MAI-ab tak nahi sujha tha.. par shayad ab...!!!hold it....

apne ussi haath ko jisme jheel ka paani laga hua tha,usse aage karte hue kahi ye baat maine jisse samajh toh nahi paayi MAHI but phir bhi usne turant mere us haath ko hold kiya aur uske aisa karte hi....

ek tez sensation meri us hatheli par feel hui jisse mehsoos kar kuch pal ke liye meri aankhen kuch sochne ke andaaz se choti hui aur phir mai wapas mudte hue neeche jheel ke kinaare baith ussi haath ko jisse MAHI ne touch kiya tha,paani me daal diya aur mere aisa karte hi..

ek saath do chizen hui...

pehli...

mere aas paas ka paani vibrate hone laga jiski wajah se jahan pehle mera haath neeche pull ho raha tha,wahin ab uske ulat upar push hone laga..

dusri...

woh jagah jahan mera haath samaya tha,us hisse ka paani mere hatheli par aise tight hone laga tha maano meri hatheli hatheli naa hokar gardan ho aur woh paani us gardan ka gala daba raha ho...

maajra samajh chuka tha mai...aage badhne ka solution bhi mil chuka tha mujhe but woh solution hadh se zyada negetive tha...

but option aur kuch tha nahi aur jo tha,usse mujhe in paanchon ko batana tha isiliye mai wapas utha,un paanchon ki taraf ghuma aur....


MAI-aage badhne ka ek hi tarika hai...


meri baat sun ab tak jo tention un sabke face par thi, woh kam hoti chali gayi aur..


SLUNDER-haash...thank GOD...hume pata tha yaar ki tu koi na koi jugaad laga hi lega...

HIDA-obvio... after all he is RAAZ..the chosen one...

BRAWNY-bhai mai toh ye soch raha hun ki hum sabka dimag iski tarah kab chalega...!!!

ACCHUTA-arre iska jawab toh bohot simple hai..kabhi nahi....


jahan ACCHUTA ki baat sun woh teeno muskura diye wahin mera face jispar is waqt hadh se zyada seriousness dikh rahi thi,usse dekh MAHI ko andaza ho gaya ki jis tarike ki baat mai kar raha hun,woh mushkil toh hoga hi par saath hi saath negetive bhi..

aur isiliye..


MAHI-kya baat hai RAAZ..!!! tarika tough hai yaa kuch zyada hi tough hai..


MAHI ki baat sun un chaaron ka dhyan bhi mere face par gaya jisse dekh woh sab bhi wapas halke tensed dikhne lage..

wahin MAHI ki baat sun..


MAI-tarika tough nahi hai,faisla hai aur woh faisla tumhe lena hai....

MAHI-please be specific RAAZ...

MAI-ye jo jheel ka paani hai,ye normal paani de zyada thick hai..

SLUNDER-haan toh isme BLACK ENERGY ka AURA mixed hoga isiliye..

MAI-nope.. AURA power badhata hau,thickness nahi...


ASMODEUS aur tumhare PITAH ke beech jo fake fight hui, usme jitne bhi DEVILS maare gaye,un sabka khun mila hai is paani me...

isiliye is paani ki thickness zyada hai...


meri baat aur revalation ko sun aankhen hairat se badi ho gayi un sabki aur saath hi saath meri aage ki baat kitni negetive ho sakti hai,iska bhi ek anjana dar se bhara andaza ho chuka tha un sabko...

wahin apni baat ko aage badhate hue...


MAI-woh saare DEVIL'S directly ASMODEUS ke DEVILISH swaroop se bane the..

ek tarah se ye kehna galat nahi hoga ki woh sab ASMODEUS ke DEMONIC descendents the...

isiliye un sabke blood me bhi woh urja thi jo ASMODEUS ke negetive side me thi...

wahi urja ab is paani me bhi hai jisse dodge nahi diya jaa sakta....

MAHI-tarika nahi bataya tumne ab tak...!!!


MAHI ke sawal ki sun ek pal dekha maine usse aur phir...


RAAZ-YOU HAVE TO DIE....


jahan meri baat sun MAHI normal hi rahi aur woh isiliye kyunki usse meri pichli kahi baaton se aisa hi kuch hone ka andaza ho chuka tha wahin ACCHUTA, SLUNDER, HIDA aur BRAWNY ekdum se hadbada gaye aur..


HIDA-ye kya bol rahe ho RAAZ...??

MAHI-wahi jo sach hai...aur guyzz,is tarike ke implication par koi melo drama nahi...

is quest ko pura karna,yahi hum sabka ek maatra moto hai aur agar aisa karne ke liye mere marne ki zaroorat hai,toh aisa hi hoga...


MAHI ki baat sun un sabke face par laachari saaf dikhne lagi..MAHI ne jo kaha tha,woh ek tarah se un chaaron ke liye end of discussion tha,ye samajh gaye the woh sab par sawal toh the hi un sabke man me aur isiliye..


HIDA-but why only MAHI....???humme se bhi toh koi ye kurbaani de sakta hai...!!!

MAI-nope..it has to be MAHI...

CHAARON-par kyun..???

MAI-MAHI ke us AURA ko jo usne DARK SPACE ke bahar release kiya tha,kya usse sense kiya tha tum sabne...!!!???(ANGELS FORM ENERGY SOURCE)

CHAARON-haan..

MAI-wahi AURA aur power source hi is paani aur shakti ko divert kar sakta hai..

ACCHUTA-par MAHI ka woh AURA yahan INFERIOR WORLD me kaam nahi kar raha hai...

MAI-kaam karwana hai bhi nahi..bas us AURA ko apne body me circulate karwana hai.

aur ye kaam MAHI ko is paani me utarne ke baad karna hai.

iske waisa karte hi is pure jheel me faila DEMONIC BLOOD apni saari shakti ke saath MAHI ko yahan ke paani me drown karega...

saath hi ispar alag tarah se humla bhi karega..

us waqt is pure jheel me faila gravitational pull sirf MAHI ke position par focused rahega...

baaki jheel ka har part normal ho jaayega...us waqt hum sab is jheel ko paar kar sakte hain....


saari baatein bohot casually bol di thi maine jisse sun aur zyada depressed feel karne lage the woh sab par unme se koi kuch kehta ki tabhi..


MAHI-guyzz, RAAZ sahi hai..sirf yahi ek raasta hai..

HIDA-but MAHI...

MAHI-end of discussion...toh RAAZ,kya mai paani me utrun....!!!

MAI-thoda door jaakar...


meri baat sun kuch pal MAHI mujhe dekhti rahi...meri bhi aankhen uspar hi tiki thi..

khair,kuch der tak yun eye gaze karte rehne ke baad maine apni aankhen uspar se hata li jiske baad
MAHI bina kuch bole lake ke kinare chalte hue humse thoda door jaane lagi..

is beech mere sharir se chaar bade bade ropes nikle jinhone un chaaron ko mujhse baandh sa diya..

woh sab samajh chuke the ki maine aisa isiliye kiya tha taaki apne saath un sabko kheechte hue tezi se paani me aage badh sakun..

par is beech jab un sabne ek baar phirse us anthhin jheel ko dekha toh...


HIDA-itni lambi jheel paar karne me kitna waqt lag jaayega..???

MAI-ye dikh rahi lambayi ek illusion hai.. length itni zyada badi bhi nahi hai..

maximum 2 minute me hum jheel ke dusri taraf honge...

jab tak meri baat khatm hui,MAHI humse kaafi door jaakar ek jagah par khadi ho chuki thi aur aisa kar usne meri taraf dekha jispar haan me sir hilaya maine aur mere aisa karte hi MAHI apni aankhon ko band karte hue ek chhalang maarte us jheel me kood padi aur uske aisa karte hi...

SHSHSHSHSHSHHH....

pure jheel ke paani me tez leher uthne lagi jo is baat ka suboot tha ki MAHI ne apne ANGEL FORM POWER SOURCE ko apne body me shrug off kar diya tha...

uske waisa karne ki wajah se pure jheel ke paani me mila hua pure DEMONIC BLOOD MAHI ko pehchan gaya aur phir apni puri taakat ke saath woh shakti MAHI ki taraf badh chali thi...

wahin jaise hi maine jheel me uth rahe leher ko dekha toh mai samah gaya ki ab sirf MAHI ke aas paas waale portion me hi saara gravitational pull hoga jiska matlab tha ki now is the time when we should take off aur isiliye....


JAL BHEDAM

WATER PENETRATION


aage hawa me tezi se kudte hue is SPELL ko uccharit kiya maine jiske baad mera sharir kisi rocket ki tarah ek tez forward push ke saath
jheel me jump maar gaya aur mere saath hi bandhe hue woh chaaron bhi ek dhakke ke saath mere piche ho liye...

hum sab behadh tezi se paani ke upari satah par tairte hue aage badhne lage..

woh chaaron mere piche the aur baar baar tez speed ki wajah se unke sir paani ke andar chale jaa rahe the..

kisi tarah khudka balance banaye rakhe hue woh sab apne sir ko upar rakhne ki koshish kar rahe the..

is beech hum kaafi aage nikal chuke the aur aisa hote hi kuch der pehle meri kahi baat ka sach un chaaron ko dikhne laga..

jheel ki anthhin lambayi wakayi ek illusion thi aur ab woh ye dekh aur samajh paa rahe the...

hamare lagatar aage badhte rehne se woh faila hua illusion haththne laga tha jiski wajah se kaafi door hi sahi par hum sabko jheel ka dusra kinara dikhne laga tha...

us kinare ko dekhte hue meri speed aur badh gayi jiski wajah se bas 1 minute ke andar hi hum us river bank ke paas the..

aur jab dusri taraf ka surface humse bas kuch metres ki hi doori ka reh gaya toh maine ek baar phirse jump maari jiski wajah se meri aur mere piche un sabki body upar hawa me uththe chali gayi..

par is baar mere jump se release hui pressure zyada thi jiski wajah se woh sab jo ab tak mujhse bandhe mere piche the,un sabki bodies ko ek jhatka laga jiski wajah se woh tezi se mere upar se hote hue aage nikal gaye..

aisa hote hi maine woh ropes jinse woh sab bandhe hue the,woh gayab kar di thi..

khair,mujhe upar ki taraf se cross karte hue woh sab jheel ke dusri taraf ke surface par roll karte hue gire par girte hi woh sab turant uth chuke the..

wahin upar uchalte hue mai apne pairon par hi zamin par aaya tha..

landing bhale hi meri aur un sabki alag thi par land hone ke baad jo reaction aaya,woh hum paanchon ka ek hi tha..

aur woh reaction tha hum sabka ek saath us disha ki taraf dekhna jahan MAHI ne jump kiya tha...

aur kyunki illusion is taraf se nahi tha, isiliye woh disha,woh point hume dikh raha tha...

kuch der pehle jab hum lake ke dusri taraf the aur MAHI paani me koodi thi,tab jo leher pure lake par uth raha tha,abhi woh saara leher joki DEMONIC BLOOD ki shakti se bana tha,woh theek ussi point par uth raha tha jahan MAHI ne jump kiya tha..

aur iska sirf ek hi matlab ho sakta tha..woh saari demonic shaktiyan,MAHI par haawi ho chuki thi...

ab mai MAHI ke paas pahunch toh sakta tha nahi par MAHI ki halaat mehsoos zaroor kar sakta tha aur isiliye mai turant wapas paani ke paas pahuncha aur usme haath daal apni aankhen band kar pure lake me ho rahi movement ko mehsoos karne lag gaya aur jo scene mere aankhon ke saamne aaya,woh bilkul bhi positive nahi tha....

MAHI....jo kuch der pehle us paani me koodi thi..uske koodne par jaise hi uske sharir me beh rahi ANGEL'S FORM POWER SOURCE aur lake se jude DEMONIC BLOOD ka connection hua toh woh saara blood aur uski shakti ek saath MAHI ke ird gird jama hui aur jab aisa hua toh paani ka woh hissa jisme MAHI kudi thi aur jiski gehrayi bas 6 feet hi thi,achanak hi woh area kisi samandar ke anthhin dept jitna gehra ho gaya jisme MAHI tezi se dubti chali gayi..

saath hi saath us lake ke paani ke blood particles ne MAHI ke sharir ko bhedhne ki koshish ki par woh aisa karne me kaamiyab nahi ho paayi aur tab un particles ne khudko ek zanjeer ka roop aur sakhti dete hue MAHI ko khudme lapetne shuru kar diya..

aisa hote hi MAHI ka sharir jakadne laga aur saath hi saath uska gala bhi ghutne laga..

par woh DEMONIC BLOOD PARTICLES itne me hi nahi rooke..

unhone apna deadly AURA MAHI ke sharir me touch karana shuru kiya aur jab aisa hua toh MAHI ke body me ghum rahi uski ANGEL'S FORM POWER SOURCE tadap uthi...

woh turant MAHI ke sharir ke andruni bhaag me pahunch bachne ke kiye tezi se idhar udhar ghumne lagi par us DEMONIC BLOOD PARTICLES ka asar itna strong tha ki usse rahat nahi mili..

aur tab us POWER SOURCE ke paas khudko surakshit rakhne ka ek hi tarika dikha...

aisa tarika jo MAHI ke HUMAN FORM POWER SOURCE ke liye bilkul theek nahi tha..

woh ANGELS FORM POWER SOURCE MAHI ke chaaron AMPLIFICATION modes ke andar penetrate karne lagi aur jab aisa hua toh...

BHAKKKKKKK.....

MAHI ke body ka saara andruni system hil gaya jiski wajah se MAHI ke mooh se khoon ki ek moti dhaar nikal paani me fail gayi...

par ye toh external damage ka asar tha..asli damage toh MAHI ke andar ho rahi thi..

jaise hi MAHI ke chaaron AMPLIFICATION modes me ANGEL'S FORM POWER SOURCE touch hui,toh woh saare modes kaam karna band karne lage...

blood flow dheere ho gaya jo kisi bhi waqt completely rookne waala tha...

brain cells dead hone lage...body dheere dheere jalne lagi aur SOUL...

SOUL ki shakti aur uski urja,dono hi khatm hone lagi...

MAHI ki aankh aur uske saath uska saara thinking system band hone laga..

mout ke kagar par pahunch gayi MAHI aur jaisa ki aksar is state me pahunchte waqt hota hai,wahi MAHI ke band hote brain me dikhne laga..

woh maa baap jinhe usne kabhi dekha hi nahi,unka dhundla aks...FLORIN,MARIA,uske saare dost aur aakhir me RAAZ....

ye sab dekhte hue MAHI ke dard se bhare face par bhi ek smile naach uthi aur...


MAHI-


jaisa itihaas mere PITAH ne racha tha, mai waisa RACH NAA SAKI....

jo teri(RAAZ) aankhon ko mujhme baandh de, mai waisa SAJH NAA SAKI...

dimag bhi haar gaya aur dil bhi....

bohot kuch karna baaki tha,par afsos,kuch karne ke liye mai BACH NAA SAKI.....

















AAJ KE LIYE ITNA HI.....

















AAPKA APNA V...J....
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AB TAK AAPNE PADHA KI JAHAN EK TARAF MAHI DEMONIC BLOOD PARTICLES SE AZAAD HO JAATI HAI WAHIN DUSRI TARAF USKI ANGEL'S FORM POWER SOURCE BHI EK JHATKE ME 25 PERCENT TAK TRIGGER HOTE HUE DUSRE POWER SOURCE KE TARAF SARAK JAATI HAI.


AB AAGE:-



CHAPTER-3


(THE DEVIL'S HAVEN,THE SACRIFICE & THE PERFECT EPILOGUE)



UPDATE-144



PLANET-ELYSIAN


PLACE-INFERIOR LEVEL



THE QUEST CONTINOUS


FOURTH CHALLENGE:THE DARK MAGICAL JUNGLE






THE DARK MAGICAL JUNGLE....ANY GUESSES,KAUN KAUN SE EVIL MAGIC SE POSSESSED HOGA YE JUNGLE...


khudse kareeb 500 metre door dikh rahe ek halke kaale rang ke jungle ko dekhte hue kahi thi ye BRAWNY ne jispar..


ACCHUTA-arre jungle chhod,ye dono itni der se kya badbada rahe hain aur kab tak aisa hi karte rahenge,koi ye bata sakta hai kya..!!!


mujhe aur MAHI ko dekhte hue,joki is waqt un chaaron se thoda aage ek dusre ko face kar aankh band kar baithe hue ek CHANNELIZING SPELL lagatar budbuda kar rahe the,ussi ko dekhte hue kahi thi ye baat ACCHUTA ne jispar...


SLUNDER-ek kaam kar,unhe CEREBRATION mode se nikal khud puch lena jaakar...

ACCHUTA-shakal ke level ko competition dene waali wahiyaad baat karni zaroori hai kya...????

SLUNDER-abbe daant kya andar ho gaye,handsome samajhne laga hai kya tu khudko..???

mujhe toh aaj bhi tere woh andar chale gaye daant bahar hi nazar aate hain..

ACCHUTA-batao.. jis umar me log hot girls ko bikini me imagine karte haun,usme tu mere un daanton ko jo bahar hain hi nahi, imagine kar raha hai..

ek baat bata,tere GOD GIFTED POWERS ke saath teri manly choices bhi toh lock nahi ho gayi...!!!


ACCHUTA ki baat par SLUNDER kuch react karta,usse pehle...


BRAWNY-oh stop it guyz....kaun si baat ko kahan lejaate ho tum dono...

maalum nahi hai kya tum dono ko ki MAHI aur RAAZ apne apne AURA'S ko channelize karne ki koshish kar rahe hain..

ussi kaam ke liye koi SPELL budbuda rahe honge dono..


BRAWNY ki baat sun uske saath ACCHUTA aur SLUNDER bhi hum dono ko yaa phir ye kahun ki specifically MAHI ko dekhne lage.

aur woh isiliye kyunki is waqt uske face par rahaat ke bhaav the joki kuch der pehle tak dard waale the...

toh hua yun ki THE DARK LAKE ke quest ko paar kar jab hum sab aage badhe toh MAHI ko apne chest me halka bhaaripan lagne laga jo guzarte waqt ke saath dard me badalne laga..

dekhte hi dekhte woh dard kaafi badh gaya aur uske mooh se ek ahh nikal gayi..

MAHI ko pain me dekh jahan uska chaaron dost uske liye pareshan ho gaye wahin RAAZ relaxed hi tha aur woh isiliye kyunki usse MAHI ke pain ka reason bhi pata tha aur solution bhi...

darasal MAHI ka ANGEL'S FORM POWER SOURCE jisse kuch der pehle MAHI ne control kiya tha,woh kaabu me toh aa chuka tha par yun achanak se trigger hone ki wajah se apni jagah par stable nahi ho paaya tha..

woh urja MAHI ke heart me baayin taraf dil ki hi tarah dhadakte hue khud ko adjust karne ki koshish kar rahi thi aur is proccess me woh apni MISTRESS MAHI ko hi pain pahuncha rahi thi..

wahin kuch kuch same haalat meri bhi thi..

MAHI ke ANGEL'S AURA se ladne ke liye mere vagus nerves se jo BLACK ENERGY ka AURA bahar aaya tha,woh wapas andar toh chala gaya tha but puri tarah vagus nerves me nahi samaya tha..

woh us part ke ird gird ghum raha tha..aisa hone se mujhe MAHI ki tarah pain toh nahi ho raha tha but bechaini zaroor ho rahi thi aur isiliye hi apne aur MAHI ke urja ko STABILIZE kar unhe unki asli jagah oar settle karne ke hi hum dono is waqt apne next quest THE DARK MAGICAL JUNGLE se kuch door baithe apne AANTRIK DRISHTI ki madad se apni urjaon ko stable karne me lage hue the...

khair,jahan hum dono PAUSED CEREBRATION me baithe hue the, ACCHUTA, SLUNDER aur BRAWNY hume dekh rahe the,wahin HIDA MAHI ko dekhte hue kuch gehri soch me khoyi hui thi jisse jab kuch der baad ACCHUTA ne gour kiya toh..


ACCHUTA-itni gehri soch..!!!aisa kya soch rahin hai WHIZZ aap..???


ACCHUTA ki awaaz sun HIDA ka dhyan MAHI se hath uspar aur uske baaju me khade baaki dono par gaya joki is waqt usse hi dekh rahe the aur isiliye...


HIDA-yaad hai MAHI ke unstable hone par humare dimag se jud RAAZ ne kya kaha tha...???

MAHI abhi sirf ek ANGEL hai...

BRAWNY-arre haan..ye baat toh us waqt mujhe bhi hit hui thi but us waqt ke situation ki wajah se mere dimag se nikal gayi..

kya matlab tha RAAZ ke us baat ka...???


MAINE KOI PARABLE NAHI BOLA THA...STRAIGHT BAAT BOLI THI..AUR JO BOLI THI, MATLAB BHI USKA WAHI THA..


ye awaaz meri thi jo ab MAHI ke saath hi apne CEREBRATION process se bahar aa chuka tha aur un chaaron ko dekh apni baat kahi thi jispar un sabki aankhe badi ho gayi aur..


BRAWNY-matlab..!!kya MAHI ANGEL hai..!!!!????

MAI-sort of..ohda thoda zyada bada hai iska...

ACCHUTA-bhai,tu kya bol raha hai,kuch bhi palle nahi padh raha..???ANGEL se bada ohda hai matlab..!!!!


ACCHUTA ki baat sun ek baar MAHI ko dekha maine jo shaant hi khadi thi aur woh isiliye kyunki woh bhi jaan gayi thi ki ab asliyat chhupane ka koi matlab nahi hoga..

khair,ek pal MAHI ki taraf dekh..


MAI-MAHI LORD OF ANGELS joki GOD'S SON bhi hain, unki beti hai...

BOOMMMM...

meri baat sun ek dhamaka sa hua un chaaron ke dimag me...

ANGELS LORD ki beti unki dost thi,ye baat ab digestable toh thi bhi nahi..

jiske saath hasi mazak karte aa rahe the woh sab,uska ohda itna uncha hai jaan apne aap hi woh chaaron apne ghutne par aa gaye jisse dekh MAHI turant un chaaron ke paas pahunchi aur unhe uthate hue...


MAHI-mai sirf tum teeno ki friend hun aur WHIZZ,aapki SAVENT..aap sabke liye meri yahi pehchaan hai aur mai chahti hun ki aap sab mujhe issi pehchaan ke hisaab se treat karen aur kisi bhi tarah se nahi..

ye request hai meri... please ispar amal kijiyega warna bura lagega mujhe...

MAHI ki asliyat sun trance me toh woh chaaron abhi bhi the par saath hi saath uski saralta ko dekh woh sab muskura bhi uthe aur man hi man behadh khush bhi..

wahin MAHI ki baat khatm hote hi..


ACCHUTA-yaar ek ek card banwa lete hain.. ANGEL'S LORD ki beti dost hai humari toh har jagah par apni dhaak chale,aisa koi identification card toh honi chahiye naa hum sabke paas...


ACCHUTA ke mazak ko sun sabke face par smile aa gayi jiske baad..


MAI-chalen ki aur thodi der yahan rookne ka irada hai...???

ACCHUTA-waah..tum dono ki wajah se hi hum sab abhi tak yahan hain warna ab tak toh next quest ko paar karte hue us ALCAZAR ko apne naam likhwa chuka hota mai..


ye bol ACCHUTA aage badh gaya wahin uski baat sun MAHI aur woh teeno has pade jiske baad hum sab bhi uske piche ho liye...




THE DARK MAGICAL FOREST:-





HALKI KAALI DHUNDH,KAREEB 5 se 8 METRES CHHODKAR LAGE ASANKHYA PED...

PAR DO PEDH AISE JINKE BEECH BAS 3 METRE KA HI FAASLA THA AUR USSI FAASLE KE BEECH BANA THA EK HALKA CHOWDA PAGDANDI SA RAASTA JO SIDHE US ALCAZAR KI TARAF JAA RAHA HAI....

KOI SHIELD, NEGETIVE BARRIERS,TRICK HOLES FEEL BAHI HO RAHE,STRANGE NAA.!!!!


apne stabled ANGEL'S FORM POWER SOURCE ko jo bhale filhal woh yahan is duniya me ekdum se kisi par use nahi kar paa rahi thi, par scene detect toh kar hi sakti thi,wahi kar uske baare me batate hue mujhe dekha MAHI ne jispar....


MAI-kabhi kabhi simple dikhne waali cheezen hi sabse zyada complexed hoti hain...

anyways,chalo aage...


apni baat bol mai aur mere piche MAHI us DARK MAGICAL JUNGLE me enter kar gayi aur humare saath hi woh chaaron bhi ek baad ek piche ho liye...

mai bade dhyan se har taraf dekhta aur dhyan deta hi aage badh raha tha..

yahi cheez MAHI aur woh chaaron bhi kar rahe the...

hume chalte hue ab kareeb ek ghanta nikal chuka tha par ab tak naa toh humare saamne koi challenge aaya tha aur naahi kisi bhi tarah ki rukawat...

bade araam se chalte hue aage badh rahe the hum sab but haan, ek baat joki hum sabke liye kahin se bhi normal nahi thi,woh feel kar paa rahe the hum sab..

aur woh ye ki jahan lagatar kayi 100 kilometres tak tez doudne ke baad bhi hum sab thakte nahi the,wahin filhal bas chalte rehne bhar se hi hume thoda thoda tired feel hone laga tha...

infact meri aur MAHI ki thakan bhi ACCHUTA, SLUNDER, BRAWNY aur HIDA jitni hi thi jiska bas ek matlab tha ki ye MAGICAL JUNGLE ek energy drainage SPELL se bandha hua hai jo isme enter karne waale har shaksh ki pyscical energy ko equally sokhta hai...

but sawal tha kyun...!!!!

agar ye jungle ek energy drainage SPELL se bandha hua hai toh aisa karne ka maksad hai isme enter karne waale shaksh ko thakana aur phir kisi creature yaa task ke through usse khatm karna..

but naa toh abhi tak hume is jungle me koi creature feel hua tha aur naahi koi challenge sense...

phir saala logic tha toh tha kya..???

mai yahi sab sochte hue aage badh raha tha ki tabhi...


HIDA-guyzz...kuch der rookte hain naa...!!!kaafi thakan lag rahi hai...


haafte hue kahi ye baat HIDA jispar ACCHUTA, SLUNDER aur BRAWNY ne bhi haan me haan milaya..

aur ye dekh mai ghusse se unhe kuch bolne ko hua par tabhi...


MAHI-theek hai...5 minute ka break le lete hain...


mujhe request karti nazaron se dekhte hue kahi ye baat MAHI ne jispar ek baar usse ghusse se dekh mai shaant khada reh gaya...

waise thakan toh mujhe aur MAHI ko bhi kaafi lagne laga tha but ek toh hum dono ki iccha shakti bohot zyada prabal thi aur dusri bhale hi hum sab ke energies is jagah par equal amount me drain ho rahe the but MAHI aur meri recovery in paanchon se tez thi isiliye hum abhi unse zyada energy feel kar paa rahe the...

khair,MAHI ke 5 minute ke break ki baat sun woh chaaron kaafi relaxed ho gaye par ye relaxation zyada der tak chal nahi paayi aur woh isiliye kyunki rookne me baad bhi hum sabki thakaan kam hone ki jagah badhne lag gayi thi jiska ek hi matlab tha ki is forest me hum rooke ye chalte rahen, humari energy drain hoti hi rahegi..

ab ye baat kaafi dangerous thi... kyunki humko pata nahi tha ki hume kitne waqt tak chalna padega aur jitna waqt hum yahan rahenge,utne waqt tak humari thakaan badhti hi chali jaayegi..

aur upar se is duniya me woh paani bhi nahi tha jisse peekar hum apne sookh rahe gale ko geela kar sake...

wow,ye pehla aisa challenge tha jisme koi humpar attack nahi kar raha tha but phir bhi hum sabki jaan khatre me thi...

brilliant tactics.. absolutely brilliant...

khair,kar toh kuch sakte the nahi aur isiliye..


MAI-rook kar koi faayda nahi..agar thakna hi hai toh aage badhte hue aisa karen toh hi sahi hoga..

waise bhi,is thakaan aur challenge ko khatm karne ke liye hume is jungle se bahar nikalna hi padega...

meri baat sahi thi aur isiliye hadh se zyada thake hone ke baawjud woh sab kisi tarah khade hue jiske baad hum sab ek baar phirse aage badh gaye...

10 minute, phir 20 minute,30,40,50 aur phir ek aur ghanta hum sab aage badhte hi rahe par agar is dauran koi apni manzil ke paas pahunch raha tha toh woh thi hum sabhi ki thakaan joki ab behoshi me tabdil hone waali thi...

meri aur MAHI ki toh haalat humare recovery power ki wajah se phir bhi theek thaak thi but ACCHUTA, SLUNDER, BRAWNY aur HIDA....

ye chaaron toh chalte hue bhi aise lag rahe the maano neend me hon aur sleep walking kar rahe hon...

but phir kuch der baad ek aisa time bhi aaya jab...


DHOBBB.....


line se ek saath woh chaaron neeche zamin par mooh ke bal gire..itna hi nahi,pairon me taakat nahi hone ke baawjud sirf iccha shakti ke bal par lagatar chalte rehne ki wajah se un chaaron ke mooh se halka halka khoon bhi nikalne laga tha...

haan,hosh me ab bhi the woh chaaron but jaisi unki haalat thi,it was just a matter of time jab woh sab passed out ho jaate...

aur ye sab dekh aur unki bigadti situation ko samajh...


MAHI-inki haalat bohot zyada kharab hai..mujhe inhe apni thodi si energy deni hogi...

MAI-MAHI, tum khud apni HUMAN FORM POWER SOURCE ke reserved energy par ho...

agar tumne inhe us source se power diya,toh tumhari haalat bhi inki tarah ho jaayegi aur even worse..

kyunki i am sure ki ab tak tumne apne channelized ANGEL'S FORM POWER SOURCE ki shakti ko is jungle me activate karne ki koshish kar li hogi but usse koi faayda hua nahi hoga..

tumhari woh power source yahan kaam me aayegi nahi aur uske bina apne dusre power source ko use me laane ka matlab hai...

MAHI-i would completely drain out..i get it.. but inki haalat dekho..kuch der aur,phir ye yahan survive nahi kar paayenge...

meri power source se inki jaan bach jaayegi..haan mai drained out ho jaaungi aur mera ANGEL'S FORM POWER SOURCE mujhe us haalat me jaane se rok nahi paayega but woh mujhe marne bhi nahi dega..

aur itna kaafi hai...

MAI-think practically MAHI...tumhara power source inhe abhi ke liye toh bacha lega but uske baad kya..???

hume is jungle se bahar jaane ka naahi raasta mila hai aur naahi koi tarika...

thodi der baad ye sab phir abhi jaisi haalat me honge aur inhe dobara bachane ke liye tumhare paas koi aur source nahi bachega..

MAHI-tumhe khudpar ho naa ho RAAZ but mujhe tumpar pura bharosa hai..tum inhe aur mujhe kuch bhi nahi hone doge..

jo bhi raasta hai,tarika hai yahan se nikalne ka,tum usse khoj hi loge..

i trust you,the question is do you trust yourself and your immeasurable capabilities...


MAHI ki baat par usse ghoor kar dekha maine usse aur woh isiliye kyunki abhi usne ek tarah se mujhe challenge kiya tha and challenge is something that i crave about..

MAHI is baat ko jaanti thi aur usne meri is aadat ko trigger kar diya tha..


khair,apni baat bol MAHI un chaaron ke saamne jaakar joki ab tak behosh ho chuke the,ghutno ke bal baith gayi aur...


VAGIYEM....

REVIVE....


haath ko aage karte hue apne HUMAN FORM POWER SOURCE me jhaankte hue man hi man uccharit kiya is SPELL ko MAHI ne jiske baad uske andar se uski pyscical energy se bana ray nikal un chaaron ke body me sama gaya aur jab aisa hua toh...

ek saath do chizen hui...

pehli...

ANNNHHHHH..

jhatke waali lambi saans lete hue un chaaron ki behoshi jaati rahi aur woh sab conscious ho gaye..

dusri...

MAHI ki pyscical energy ka ek bohot bada hissa usse bahar nikal chuka tha aur isiliye woh bhi neeche ludhak si gayi..

hosh me toh thi woh but ab usme itni bhi jaan nahi bachi thi ki woh baith bhi sake..

waise hosh me toh woh chaaron aa chuke the but jis state se woh hosh me waapas aate the,woh itni deep thi ki hosh me aane ke baad bhi unki sirf saansein hi chal rahi thi..

woh chaaron ab bhi MAHI ki hi tarah neeche pade hue the..

paralyzed haalat jaise neeche pade hue paanch logon ko dekh raha tha mai jinhe kuch seconds dekh MAHI ki harkat par head shake karte hue mai akela hi aage badh gaya...

but is baar mera aage badhna kuch alag tha.

aur woh isiliye kyunki mai chal nahi raha tha balki bhaag raha tha..

haan,aisa karne se mai bhi jald hi dihydrate ho jaane waala tha but phir bhi mera bhaagna zaroori tha...

darasal is jagah ke baare me kuch kuch idea ho chuka tha mujhe...

woh ALCAZAR jo hamare aage badhne ke baad lagatar humare kareeb to aa raha tha but mujhe aisa feel ho raha tha jaise ye kareeb aana real nahi hai..

us ALCAZAR ko dekhte hue lagatar hawa me ek invisible deflection feel kar raha tha..

aur saath hi saath ye jagah...2 ghante lagatar chalne ke aur alag alag pedon ko dekhne ke baad bhi mujhe un different pedon me ek similarity dikh rahi thi aur ussi similarity ka sach janane ke liye bhaag raha tha mai..

aur abhi mujhe bhaagte hue 5 minute bhi nahi hua hoga ki mera shak yakin me badal gaya...

mujhe apne se kuch door saamne woh paanchon as in MAHI, ACCHUTA, SLUNDER, BRAWNY aur HIDA neeche zamin par pade dikhayi diye jisse dekh...


MAI- RECIPROCATION SPELL....


ek aisa SPELL jiski madad se aas paas ke drishya me bhram paida kiya jaa sakta hai..

har jagah repeat hoti hai aur woh bhi aise ki uspar asaani se nazar nahi padti...

aur yahan us DARK MAGIC JUNGLE me bhi yahi scene tha..

lagbhagh har pedh,direction,tedhe medhe mod ek se hokar bhi ek se nahi the..

kehne ka matlab hai ki pehli baar aage badhne par jo chiz pehle padti hai woh agli baar baad me padti hai...

saare places apne last position se change hote rehte hain aur isiliye is repetitive jagah ko detect karna asaan nahi tha..

but is baar mai ye isiliye kar paaya kyunki jinhe mai piche chhod kar aaya tha,MAHI aur woh chaaron is waqt mujhse kuch aage neeche lete se hue the...

mai ghum phirkar wapas wahin aa gaya tha jahan se shuruat ki thi...

aur aisa mai aur mere saath mere saare saathi pichle do ghanto se karte aa rahe the...


MAI-bewakuf...


khudko ye bolte hue apne sir ko shake kiya maine aur wapas piche palatkar chalne laga..

REASON...

woh do trees jo humne JUNGLE ke start me dekhe the,wahi do trees bas is jagah par aise the jinki jagah flip nahi hui thi..

pehle bhi dhyan gaya tha mera is baat par lekin maine isse casually liya tha...

but ab mujhe lag raha tha ki is jagah ko,is MAGICAL JUNGLE ko cross karne ke liye woh dono trees hi key the...

par us key ka istamal mujhe jald se jald karna tha aur woh isiliye kyunki MAHI aur un chaaron ki haalat ab aur kharab ho chuki thi...

bhale hi mai un sabke paas nahi gaya tha,but i had sensed their vulnerable situation..

khair, wapas palatne ke baad chalte hue mujhe zyada door nahi jaana pada..

JUNGLE ka starting point paas hi tha aur iska andaza mujhe ho chuka tha..

RECIPROCATION SPELL sirf hume aage ki taraf bhatkane ke liye tha,piche ki taraf nahi..

kuch ek minute se bhi kam waqt me mai un do trees joki ek dusre se bas 3 metres ki doori par the,unke paas pahunch chuka tha..

un dono trees ko gour se dekhne laga mai...

ab tak zyada dhyan nahi diya tha maine but ab woh dono trees mujhe pedh kam aur ek darwaza zyada lag rahe the..

haan,un dono ke beech gap thi par waisi gap aur kisi pedh ki jodi ke beech nahi thi..

bas in dono pedon ke beech se aage badhne ka way tha jiske beech se hokar hum aage badh sakte the aur badhe bhi the..

ab samajh me aa raha tha mujhe ki ye gap asal me ek hidden way tha is jungle se bahar nikalne ka...

par kaise..???

kuch der sochta raha mai par phir unme se ek pedh ke saamne khade ho usse apni bachi hui taakat joki behadh kam thi,usse dhakka diya maine aur mere aisa karte hi mujhe aisa laga jaise kuch meri taraf badha ho...

par ye movement thodi tez thi aur different bhi... isiliye ek baar aur try karne ke liye dobara push kiya maine us pedh ko par aisa karte hue meri nazar last baar ki movement ke disha ki taraf thi..

aur jab maine us tree ko push kiya toh uske agle hi pal jo hua,usse dekh mere face par ek smile naach uthi..

is jungle se bahar nikalne ka tarika pata chal chuka tha mujhe aur us tarike ko dekh aur jaan mai wakayi impressed tha..

bohot umda magic se banaya gaya tha ye raasta jisse paar karne se zyada mushkil tha uske baare me pata lagana...

aur jab tak woh raasta aur tarika pata chale,usse emplify karne ke liye energy hi naa bache,yahi toh plan tha VIRAAZ ka...

khair,bas 10 percent shakti hi bachi thi mere andar,us shakti ke saath is challenge ko pura karna tha mujhe...

haathon ko rub karte hue mai un dono pedon ke beech khada ho gaya...

aisa kar apna ek ek haath un dono pedon ke trunks par rakha maine aur ek lambi saans kheench apni saari bachi shakti ko apne dono haathon me daalte hue...


UMMMMMMMMM.......


ek grunting awaaz nikalte hue joki mere zor lagane se nikal rahi thi, dono trees ko push karne laga mai...

aur mere aisa karte hi wahi hua jo maine anticipate kiya tha..

mere push karne dono trees dusri taraf jhukne lage aur aisa hoti hi pura jungle un dono trees ko jado me kheenchata chala jaane laga..

yahi toh is DARK MAGICAL JUNGLE ka asli magic tha...

un do pedon ko unke opposite direction me push karna hi woh tarika tha jisse ye pura MAGICAL jungle aur hamari yahan ki journey puri ho sakti thi...

but ye asaan nahi tha..meri pysical situation utni strong nahi thi ki un do trees ko joki kaafi mazboot the,lagatar push kar sakun...

kuch hi palon ke push ke baad mujhe hadh se zyada thakaan ne gher liya jiski wajah se mere dono haath un dono pedon se sarak gaye aur mai neeche zamin par apne ghutno ke bal baith haanfne laga...

but jaise hi mere haath un do pedon se hate toh un dono trees ki jadon se jungle ka woh saara bhaag jo ab tak sama gaya tha,woh wapas bahar nikal gaya aur dekhte hi dekhte mai back to zero waali situation me pahunch chuka tha...

ab tak ki hui saari mehnat par paani padh chuka tha aur to make the scenerio worse, meri haalat bhi kharab ho chuki thi..

lambi lambi saansein leta hua mai neeche un dono trees ke beech let gaya aur apni aankhen band kar li..


SOUL POWER....


ek aisi power jisse pyscical strength ki toh zaroorat nahi padti par is power se pysical power ko strength zaroor milti hai...

aankh band kar apne SOUL me jhaank ussi soul power ko dhundne laga mai..

but yahan bhi ek problem thi...mere BLACK ENERGY ke consumption se meri soul power jaise kahin chhup si gayi thi..

aur bina usse dekhe mai uski power ko apne body me channelize nahi kar sakta tha...

aur isiliye mujhe dusra tarika apnana pada..

jitni shakti bachi thi,usse ikattha kar apne man me jhaanka maine aur..


HRIDAYAM PIDATOHAM

HEART PAIN

apne hi dil ko pain dene waala SPELL uccharit kiya maine aur mere aisa karte hi..

AHHHHHHHHH...

seene me uthi behadh tez dard se chilla utha mai par us dard ke beech mujhe apne dil ke kareeb ek urja bahar aati hui dikhayi di..

ye urja aur kuch nahi meri SOUL POWER thi joki mere heart me behosh ERRAPEL ki shakti ke piche chuppi hui thi..

but bahar aane ke baad woh urja wapas mere heart me piche samane lagi par woh puri tarah chhup paati,usse pehle...


AATMAM DEHAM SHAKTIYEM...

SOUL POWER TO BODY...


is SPELL ko uccharit kiya maine aur mere is SPELL ko uccharit karne ke agle hi pal mai ek jhatke me apne pairon par khada ho chuka tha..

meri pyscical energy kaafi hadh tak restore ho chuki thi par kyunki ye energy dusre power source se thi, isiliye temporary thi aur fast draining bhi...

zyada waqt nahi tha mere paas aur isiliye maine turant apne dono haathon ko expand karte hue dono trees ko pakda aur ek jhatke ke saath push karne laga..

mere aisa karte hi ek baar phirse pura jungle un do pedon ki jadon me samane laga aur saath hi saath meri temporary pyscical strength bhi double speed se drain hone lagi...

dekhte hi dekhte meri lagbhag 90 percent strength drain ho chuki thi aur aisa hone ke kaaran ek baar phirse mere dono haath dheele padne lage the..

kisi bhi pal mai wapas dihydrate hote hue neeche gir sakta tha but isse pehle ki mai neeche girta...


SWOOSSSSSSS.....

woh saara DARK MAGICAL JUNGLE tezi se simaththa hua aakhirkaar pura ka pura mere push kiye dono trees ke jadon me sama hi gaya aur aisa hote hi woh dono trees jinhe maine pakda hua tha,woh ek purple dhuen me convert ho gaye..

aisa hote hi mai wapas apne ghutno par aa chuka tha..

but lambi lambi saans lene ke beech mujhe us purple dhuen me kuch jaani pehchaani energy feel ho rahi thi..

abhi mai us energy ke secret ko samajhta ki tabhi us dhuen ka kuch bhaag mujhme sama gaya aur jab aisa hua toh mujhe us purple dhuen ka RAAZ pata chal gaya..

asal me woh dhuan hamari wahi energy thi jo is DARK MAGICAL JUNGLE ne consume ki hui thi par ab jab maine us mayavi jungle numa challenge ko paar kar liya tha,toh usne humari us sucked energy ko wapas hume louta diya tha..

khair,energy restoration ke baad mai turant khada hua aur aage badh gaya..

mai dekh raha tha ki mujhse kuch hi door MAHI aur woh chaaron neeche gire hue the aur abhi woh purple smoke un sabke bodies me sama raha tha..

mai jaanta tha ki woh sab completely dihydrated the aur energy loutne ke baad bhi unhe kuch samay lagega khudko restore karne me..

ab tak mai un sabke paas pahunch chuka tha..unki sucked up energy unme wapas sama chuki thi jiski wajah se unhe hosh aane laga tha..

ek pal un sabko dekh mai aage badh gaya...

wahin kuch der baad jab woh sab hosh me aaye aur jab kuch aur time ke baad un sabki energy completely restored hui toh woh sab ek jhatke me uthkar baith gaye..

ye dekh woh sab hairan the ki jahan kuch der pehle tak woh ek ghane jungle ke beech fase hue the,wahin ab woh ek khaali maidan jaisi jagah par baithe hue the..

but jab nazar idhar udhar ghumane ke baad un sabki nazar us disha ki taraf gayi jahan mai gaya toh unhe asli situation ka andaza ho gaya jisse jaan woh khush ho gaye..

woh sab uthe aur meri hi disha ki taraf jahan unse kareeb 100 metre door mai khada tha,tezi se badhe..

THE DARK MAGICAL JUNGLE me energy ke sucked down hone ki wajah se unki aankhon me jo thakaan tha,woh ab chamak me badal chuka tha..

woh sab samajh gaye the ki unka MAGICAL JUNGLE ka challenge pura ho chuka hai aur ye baat unhe mujhe dekh kar nahi balki mai jisse dekh raha tha,usse dekhkar pata chali thi..


THE ALCAZAR...woh killa jiske saamne is waqt khada tha mai aur ye dekh woh sab samajh gaye the ki hum sab INFERIOR LEVEL ke last challenge ke saamne pahunch chuke the..

khair,aage badhte hue woh sab mere aaju baaju khade ho chuke the..

ek pal mujhe gratitude ki nazar se dekh un sabki aankhen bhi meri hi tarah saamne dikh rahe us gigantic ALCAZAR par tik gayi..

wahin mai jo pehle se hi us ALCAZAR naamak INFERIOR LEVEL ke aakhri challenge ko dekh raha tha,meri aankhon me is waqt ek chamak thi aur dil ufaan maarte hue keh raha tha ki...


MAI-


maana ki teri soch, mai JAAN NAHI SAKTA.....

kis bhesh me kaun chuppa hai,mai PEHCHAAN NAHI SAKTA...

laga le jitna laga sakta hai zor tu....

jeetne tu dega nahi mujhe,aur haar, mai MAAN NAHI SAKTA....

















AAJ KE LIYE ITNA HI.....

















AAPKA APNA V...J.....
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AB TAK AAPNE PADHA KI JAHAN EK TARAF MAHI DEMONIC BLOOD PARTICLES SE AZAAD HO JAATI HAI WAHIN DUSRI TARAF USKI ANGEL'S FORM POWER SOURCE BHI EK JHATKE ME 25 PERCENT TAK TRIGGER HOTE HUE DUSRE POWER SOURCE KE TARAF SARAK JAATI HAI.


AB AAGE:-



CHAPTER-3


(THE DEVIL'S HAVEN,THE SACRIFICE & THE PERFECT EPILOGUE)



UPDATE-144



PLANET-ELYSIAN


PLACE-INFERIOR LEVEL



THE QUEST CONTINOUS


FOURTH CHALLENGE:THE DARK MAGICAL JUNGLE






THE DARK MAGICAL JUNGLE....ANY GUESSES,KAUN KAUN SE EVIL MAGIC SE POSSESSED HOGA YE JUNGLE...


khudse kareeb 500 metre door dikh rahe ek halke kaale rang ke jungle ko dekhte hue kahi thi ye BRAWNY ne jispar..


ACCHUTA-arre jungle chhod,ye dono itni der se kya badbada rahe hain aur kab tak aisa hi karte rahenge,koi ye bata sakta hai kya..!!!


mujhe aur MAHI ko dekhte hue,joki is waqt un chaaron se thoda aage ek dusre ko face kar aankh band kar baithe hue ek CHANNELIZING SPELL lagatar budbuda kar rahe the,ussi ko dekhte hue kahi thi ye baat ACCHUTA ne jispar...


SLUNDER-ek kaam kar,unhe CEREBRATION mode se nikal khud puch lena jaakar...

ACCHUTA-shakal ke level ko competition dene waali wahiyaad baat karni zaroori hai kya...????

SLUNDER-abbe daant kya andar ho gaye,handsome samajhne laga hai kya tu khudko..???

mujhe toh aaj bhi tere woh andar chale gaye daant bahar hi nazar aate hain..

ACCHUTA-batao.. jis umar me log hot girls ko bikini me imagine karte haun,usme tu mere un daanton ko jo bahar hain hi nahi, imagine kar raha hai..

ek baat bata,tere GOD GIFTED POWERS ke saath teri manly choices bhi toh lock nahi ho gayi...!!!


ACCHUTA ki baat par SLUNDER kuch react karta,usse pehle...


BRAWNY-oh stop it guyz....kaun si baat ko kahan lejaate ho tum dono...

maalum nahi hai kya tum dono ko ki MAHI aur RAAZ apne apne AURA'S ko channelize karne ki koshish kar rahe hain..

ussi kaam ke liye koi SPELL budbuda rahe honge dono..


BRAWNY ki baat sun uske saath ACCHUTA aur SLUNDER bhi hum dono ko yaa phir ye kahun ki specifically MAHI ko dekhne lage.

aur woh isiliye kyunki is waqt uske face par rahaat ke bhaav the joki kuch der pehle tak dard waale the...

toh hua yun ki THE DARK LAKE ke quest ko paar kar jab hum sab aage badhe toh MAHI ko apne chest me halka bhaaripan lagne laga jo guzarte waqt ke saath dard me badalne laga..

dekhte hi dekhte woh dard kaafi badh gaya aur uske mooh se ek ahh nikal gayi..

MAHI ko pain me dekh jahan uska chaaron dost uske liye pareshan ho gaye wahin RAAZ relaxed hi tha aur woh isiliye kyunki usse MAHI ke pain ka reason bhi pata tha aur solution bhi...

darasal MAHI ka ANGEL'S FORM POWER SOURCE jisse kuch der pehle MAHI ne control kiya tha,woh kaabu me toh aa chuka tha par yun achanak se trigger hone ki wajah se apni jagah par stable nahi ho paaya tha..

woh urja MAHI ke heart me baayin taraf dil ki hi tarah dhadakte hue khud ko adjust karne ki koshish kar rahi thi aur is proccess me woh apni MISTRESS MAHI ko hi pain pahuncha rahi thi..

wahin kuch kuch same haalat meri bhi thi..

MAHI ke ANGEL'S AURA se ladne ke liye mere vagus nerves se jo BLACK ENERGY ka AURA bahar aaya tha,woh wapas andar toh chala gaya tha but puri tarah vagus nerves me nahi samaya tha..

woh us part ke ird gird ghum raha tha..aisa hone se mujhe MAHI ki tarah pain toh nahi ho raha tha but bechaini zaroor ho rahi thi aur isiliye hi apne aur MAHI ke urja ko STABILIZE kar unhe unki asli jagah oar settle karne ke hi hum dono is waqt apne next quest THE DARK MAGICAL JUNGLE se kuch door baithe apne AANTRIK DRISHTI ki madad se apni urjaon ko stable karne me lage hue the...

khair,jahan hum dono PAUSED CEREBRATION me baithe hue the, ACCHUTA, SLUNDER aur BRAWNY hume dekh rahe the,wahin HIDA MAHI ko dekhte hue kuch gehri soch me khoyi hui thi jisse jab kuch der baad ACCHUTA ne gour kiya toh..


ACCHUTA-itni gehri soch..!!!aisa kya soch rahin hai WHIZZ aap..???


ACCHUTA ki awaaz sun HIDA ka dhyan MAHI se hath uspar aur uske baaju me khade baaki dono par gaya joki is waqt usse hi dekh rahe the aur isiliye...


HIDA-yaad hai MAHI ke unstable hone par humare dimag se jud RAAZ ne kya kaha tha...???

MAHI abhi sirf ek ANGEL hai...

BRAWNY-arre haan..ye baat toh us waqt mujhe bhi hit hui thi but us waqt ke situation ki wajah se mere dimag se nikal gayi..

kya matlab tha RAAZ ke us baat ka...???


MAINE KOI PARABLE NAHI BOLA THA...STRAIGHT BAAT BOLI THI..AUR JO BOLI THI, MATLAB BHI USKA WAHI THA..


ye awaaz meri thi jo ab MAHI ke saath hi apne CEREBRATION process se bahar aa chuka tha aur un chaaron ko dekh apni baat kahi thi jispar un sabki aankhe badi ho gayi aur..


BRAWNY-matlab..!!kya MAHI ANGEL hai..!!!!????

MAI-sort of..ohda thoda zyada bada hai iska...

ACCHUTA-bhai,tu kya bol raha hai,kuch bhi palle nahi padh raha..???ANGEL se bada ohda hai matlab..!!!!


ACCHUTA ki baat sun ek baar MAHI ko dekha maine jo shaant hi khadi thi aur woh isiliye kyunki woh bhi jaan gayi thi ki ab asliyat chhupane ka koi matlab nahi hoga..

khair,ek pal MAHI ki taraf dekh..


MAI-MAHI LORD OF ANGELS joki GOD'S SON bhi hain, unki beti hai...

BOOMMMM...

meri baat sun ek dhamaka sa hua un chaaron ke dimag me...

ANGELS LORD ki beti unki dost thi,ye baat ab digestable toh thi bhi nahi..

jiske saath hasi mazak karte aa rahe the woh sab,uska ohda itna uncha hai jaan apne aap hi woh chaaron apne ghutne par aa gaye jisse dekh MAHI turant un chaaron ke paas pahunchi aur unhe uthate hue...


MAHI-mai sirf tum teeno ki friend hun aur WHIZZ,aapki SAVENT..aap sabke liye meri yahi pehchaan hai aur mai chahti hun ki aap sab mujhe issi pehchaan ke hisaab se treat karen aur kisi bhi tarah se nahi..

ye request hai meri... please ispar amal kijiyega warna bura lagega mujhe...

MAHI ki asliyat sun trance me toh woh chaaron abhi bhi the par saath hi saath uski saralta ko dekh woh sab muskura bhi uthe aur man hi man behadh khush bhi..

wahin MAHI ki baat khatm hote hi..


ACCHUTA-yaar ek ek card banwa lete hain.. ANGEL'S LORD ki beti dost hai humari toh har jagah par apni dhaak chale,aisa koi identification card toh honi chahiye naa hum sabke paas...


ACCHUTA ke mazak ko sun sabke face par smile aa gayi jiske baad..


MAI-chalen ki aur thodi der yahan rookne ka irada hai...???

ACCHUTA-waah..tum dono ki wajah se hi hum sab abhi tak yahan hain warna ab tak toh next quest ko paar karte hue us ALCAZAR ko apne naam likhwa chuka hota mai..


ye bol ACCHUTA aage badh gaya wahin uski baat sun MAHI aur woh teeno has pade jiske baad hum sab bhi uske piche ho liye...




THE DARK MAGICAL FOREST:-





HALKI KAALI DHUNDH,KAREEB 5 se 8 METRES CHHODKAR LAGE ASANKHYA PED...

PAR DO PEDH AISE JINKE BEECH BAS 3 METRE KA HI FAASLA THA AUR USSI FAASLE KE BEECH BANA THA EK HALKA CHOWDA PAGDANDI SA RAASTA JO SIDHE US ALCAZAR KI TARAF JAA RAHA HAI....

KOI SHIELD, NEGETIVE BARRIERS,TRICK HOLES FEEL BAHI HO RAHE,STRANGE NAA.!!!!


apne stabled ANGEL'S FORM POWER SOURCE ko jo bhale filhal woh yahan is duniya me ekdum se kisi par use nahi kar paa rahi thi, par scene detect toh kar hi sakti thi,wahi kar uske baare me batate hue mujhe dekha MAHI ne jispar....


MAI-kabhi kabhi simple dikhne waali cheezen hi sabse zyada complexed hoti hain...

anyways,chalo aage...


apni baat bol mai aur mere piche MAHI us DARK MAGICAL JUNGLE me enter kar gayi aur humare saath hi woh chaaron bhi ek baad ek piche ho liye...

mai bade dhyan se har taraf dekhta aur dhyan deta hi aage badh raha tha..

yahi cheez MAHI aur woh chaaron bhi kar rahe the...

hume chalte hue ab kareeb ek ghanta nikal chuka tha par ab tak naa toh humare saamne koi challenge aaya tha aur naahi kisi bhi tarah ki rukawat...

bade araam se chalte hue aage badh rahe the hum sab but haan, ek baat joki hum sabke liye kahin se bhi normal nahi thi,woh feel kar paa rahe the hum sab..

aur woh ye ki jahan lagatar kayi 100 kilometres tak tez doudne ke baad bhi hum sab thakte nahi the,wahin filhal bas chalte rehne bhar se hi hume thoda thoda tired feel hone laga tha...

infact meri aur MAHI ki thakan bhi ACCHUTA, SLUNDER, BRAWNY aur HIDA jitni hi thi jiska bas ek matlab tha ki ye MAGICAL JUNGLE ek energy drainage SPELL se bandha hua hai jo isme enter karne waale har shaksh ki pyscical energy ko equally sokhta hai...

but sawal tha kyun...!!!!

agar ye jungle ek energy drainage SPELL se bandha hua hai toh aisa karne ka maksad hai isme enter karne waale shaksh ko thakana aur phir kisi creature yaa task ke through usse khatm karna..

but naa toh abhi tak hume is jungle me koi creature feel hua tha aur naahi koi challenge sense...

phir saala logic tha toh tha kya..???

mai yahi sab sochte hue aage badh raha tha ki tabhi...


HIDA-guyzz...kuch der rookte hain naa...!!!kaafi thakan lag rahi hai...


haafte hue kahi ye baat HIDA jispar ACCHUTA, SLUNDER aur BRAWNY ne bhi haan me haan milaya..

aur ye dekh mai ghusse se unhe kuch bolne ko hua par tabhi...


MAHI-theek hai...5 minute ka break le lete hain...


mujhe request karti nazaron se dekhte hue kahi ye baat MAHI ne jispar ek baar usse ghusse se dekh mai shaant khada reh gaya...

waise thakan toh mujhe aur MAHI ko bhi kaafi lagne laga tha but ek toh hum dono ki iccha shakti bohot zyada prabal thi aur dusri bhale hi hum sab ke energies is jagah par equal amount me drain ho rahe the but MAHI aur meri recovery in paanchon se tez thi isiliye hum abhi unse zyada energy feel kar paa rahe the...

khair,MAHI ke 5 minute ke break ki baat sun woh chaaron kaafi relaxed ho gaye par ye relaxation zyada der tak chal nahi paayi aur woh isiliye kyunki rookne me baad bhi hum sabki thakaan kam hone ki jagah badhne lag gayi thi jiska ek hi matlab tha ki is forest me hum rooke ye chalte rahen, humari energy drain hoti hi rahegi..

ab ye baat kaafi dangerous thi... kyunki humko pata nahi tha ki hume kitne waqt tak chalna padega aur jitna waqt hum yahan rahenge,utne waqt tak humari thakaan badhti hi chali jaayegi..

aur upar se is duniya me woh paani bhi nahi tha jisse peekar hum apne sookh rahe gale ko geela kar sake...

wow,ye pehla aisa challenge tha jisme koi humpar attack nahi kar raha tha but phir bhi hum sabki jaan khatre me thi...

brilliant tactics.. absolutely brilliant...

khair,kar toh kuch sakte the nahi aur isiliye..


MAI-rook kar koi faayda nahi..agar thakna hi hai toh aage badhte hue aisa karen toh hi sahi hoga..

waise bhi,is thakaan aur challenge ko khatm karne ke liye hume is jungle se bahar nikalna hi padega...

meri baat sahi thi aur isiliye hadh se zyada thake hone ke baawjud woh sab kisi tarah khade hue jiske baad hum sab ek baar phirse aage badh gaye...

10 minute, phir 20 minute,30,40,50 aur phir ek aur ghanta hum sab aage badhte hi rahe par agar is dauran koi apni manzil ke paas pahunch raha tha toh woh thi hum sabhi ki thakaan joki ab behoshi me tabdil hone waali thi...

meri aur MAHI ki toh haalat humare recovery power ki wajah se phir bhi theek thaak thi but ACCHUTA, SLUNDER, BRAWNY aur HIDA....

ye chaaron toh chalte hue bhi aise lag rahe the maano neend me hon aur sleep walking kar rahe hon...

but phir kuch der baad ek aisa time bhi aaya jab...


DHOBBB.....


line se ek saath woh chaaron neeche zamin par mooh ke bal gire..itna hi nahi,pairon me taakat nahi hone ke baawjud sirf iccha shakti ke bal par lagatar chalte rehne ki wajah se un chaaron ke mooh se halka halka khoon bhi nikalne laga tha...

haan,hosh me ab bhi the woh chaaron but jaisi unki haalat thi,it was just a matter of time jab woh sab passed out ho jaate...

aur ye sab dekh aur unki bigadti situation ko samajh...


MAHI-inki haalat bohot zyada kharab hai..mujhe inhe apni thodi si energy deni hogi...

MAI-MAHI, tum khud apni HUMAN FORM POWER SOURCE ke reserved energy par ho...

agar tumne inhe us source se power diya,toh tumhari haalat bhi inki tarah ho jaayegi aur even worse..

kyunki i am sure ki ab tak tumne apne channelized ANGEL'S FORM POWER SOURCE ki shakti ko is jungle me activate karne ki koshish kar li hogi but usse koi faayda hua nahi hoga..

tumhari woh power source yahan kaam me aayegi nahi aur uske bina apne dusre power source ko use me laane ka matlab hai...

MAHI-i would completely drain out..i get it.. but inki haalat dekho..kuch der aur,phir ye yahan survive nahi kar paayenge...

meri power source se inki jaan bach jaayegi..haan mai drained out ho jaaungi aur mera ANGEL'S FORM POWER SOURCE mujhe us haalat me jaane se rok nahi paayega but woh mujhe marne bhi nahi dega..

aur itna kaafi hai...

MAI-think practically MAHI...tumhara power source inhe abhi ke liye toh bacha lega but uske baad kya..???

hume is jungle se bahar jaane ka naahi raasta mila hai aur naahi koi tarika...

thodi der baad ye sab phir abhi jaisi haalat me honge aur inhe dobara bachane ke liye tumhare paas koi aur source nahi bachega..

MAHI-tumhe khudpar ho naa ho RAAZ but mujhe tumpar pura bharosa hai..tum inhe aur mujhe kuch bhi nahi hone doge..

jo bhi raasta hai,tarika hai yahan se nikalne ka,tum usse khoj hi loge..

i trust you,the question is do you trust yourself and your immeasurable capabilities...


MAHI ki baat par usse ghoor kar dekha maine usse aur woh isiliye kyunki abhi usne ek tarah se mujhe challenge kiya tha and challenge is something that i crave about..

MAHI is baat ko jaanti thi aur usne meri is aadat ko trigger kar diya tha..


khair,apni baat bol MAHI un chaaron ke saamne jaakar joki ab tak behosh ho chuke the,ghutno ke bal baith gayi aur...


VAGIYEM....

REVIVE....


haath ko aage karte hue apne HUMAN FORM POWER SOURCE me jhaankte hue man hi man uccharit kiya is SPELL ko MAHI ne jiske baad uske andar se uski pyscical energy se bana ray nikal un chaaron ke body me sama gaya aur jab aisa hua toh...

ek saath do chizen hui...

pehli...

ANNNHHHHH..

jhatke waali lambi saans lete hue un chaaron ki behoshi jaati rahi aur woh sab conscious ho gaye..

dusri...

MAHI ki pyscical energy ka ek bohot bada hissa usse bahar nikal chuka tha aur isiliye woh bhi neeche ludhak si gayi..

hosh me toh thi woh but ab usme itni bhi jaan nahi bachi thi ki woh baith bhi sake..

waise hosh me toh woh chaaron aa chuke the but jis state se woh hosh me waapas aate the,woh itni deep thi ki hosh me aane ke baad bhi unki sirf saansein hi chal rahi thi..

woh chaaron ab bhi MAHI ki hi tarah neeche pade hue the..

paralyzed haalat jaise neeche pade hue paanch logon ko dekh raha tha mai jinhe kuch seconds dekh MAHI ki harkat par head shake karte hue mai akela hi aage badh gaya...

but is baar mera aage badhna kuch alag tha.

aur woh isiliye kyunki mai chal nahi raha tha balki bhaag raha tha..

haan,aisa karne se mai bhi jald hi dihydrate ho jaane waala tha but phir bhi mera bhaagna zaroori tha...

darasal is jagah ke baare me kuch kuch idea ho chuka tha mujhe...

woh ALCAZAR jo hamare aage badhne ke baad lagatar humare kareeb to aa raha tha but mujhe aisa feel ho raha tha jaise ye kareeb aana real nahi hai..

us ALCAZAR ko dekhte hue lagatar hawa me ek invisible deflection feel kar raha tha..

aur saath hi saath ye jagah...2 ghante lagatar chalne ke aur alag alag pedon ko dekhne ke baad bhi mujhe un different pedon me ek similarity dikh rahi thi aur ussi similarity ka sach janane ke liye bhaag raha tha mai..

aur abhi mujhe bhaagte hue 5 minute bhi nahi hua hoga ki mera shak yakin me badal gaya...

mujhe apne se kuch door saamne woh paanchon as in MAHI, ACCHUTA, SLUNDER, BRAWNY aur HIDA neeche zamin par pade dikhayi diye jisse dekh...


MAI- RECIPROCATION SPELL....


ek aisa SPELL jiski madad se aas paas ke drishya me bhram paida kiya jaa sakta hai..

har jagah repeat hoti hai aur woh bhi aise ki uspar asaani se nazar nahi padti...

aur yahan us DARK MAGIC JUNGLE me bhi yahi scene tha..

lagbhagh har pedh,direction,tedhe medhe mod ek se hokar bhi ek se nahi the..

kehne ka matlab hai ki pehli baar aage badhne par jo chiz pehle padti hai woh agli baar baad me padti hai...

saare places apne last position se change hote rehte hain aur isiliye is repetitive jagah ko detect karna asaan nahi tha..

but is baar mai ye isiliye kar paaya kyunki jinhe mai piche chhod kar aaya tha,MAHI aur woh chaaron is waqt mujhse kuch aage neeche lete se hue the...

mai ghum phirkar wapas wahin aa gaya tha jahan se shuruat ki thi...

aur aisa mai aur mere saath mere saare saathi pichle do ghanto se karte aa rahe the...


MAI-bewakuf...


khudko ye bolte hue apne sir ko shake kiya maine aur wapas piche palatkar chalne laga..

REASON...

woh do trees jo humne JUNGLE ke start me dekhe the,wahi do trees bas is jagah par aise the jinki jagah flip nahi hui thi..

pehle bhi dhyan gaya tha mera is baat par lekin maine isse casually liya tha...

but ab mujhe lag raha tha ki is jagah ko,is MAGICAL JUNGLE ko cross karne ke liye woh dono trees hi key the...

par us key ka istamal mujhe jald se jald karna tha aur woh isiliye kyunki MAHI aur un chaaron ki haalat ab aur kharab ho chuki thi...

bhale hi mai un sabke paas nahi gaya tha,but i had sensed their vulnerable situation..

khair, wapas palatne ke baad chalte hue mujhe zyada door nahi jaana pada..

JUNGLE ka starting point paas hi tha aur iska andaza mujhe ho chuka tha..

RECIPROCATION SPELL sirf hume aage ki taraf bhatkane ke liye tha,piche ki taraf nahi..

kuch ek minute se bhi kam waqt me mai un do trees joki ek dusre se bas 3 metres ki doori par the,unke paas pahunch chuka tha..

un dono trees ko gour se dekhne laga mai...

ab tak zyada dhyan nahi diya tha maine but ab woh dono trees mujhe pedh kam aur ek darwaza zyada lag rahe the..

haan,un dono ke beech gap thi par waisi gap aur kisi pedh ki jodi ke beech nahi thi..

bas in dono pedon ke beech se aage badhne ka way tha jiske beech se hokar hum aage badh sakte the aur badhe bhi the..

ab samajh me aa raha tha mujhe ki ye gap asal me ek hidden way tha is jungle se bahar nikalne ka...

par kaise..???

kuch der sochta raha mai par phir unme se ek pedh ke saamne khade ho usse apni bachi hui taakat joki behadh kam thi,usse dhakka diya maine aur mere aisa karte hi mujhe aisa laga jaise kuch meri taraf badha ho...

par ye movement thodi tez thi aur different bhi... isiliye ek baar aur try karne ke liye dobara push kiya maine us pedh ko par aisa karte hue meri nazar last baar ki movement ke disha ki taraf thi..

aur jab maine us tree ko push kiya toh uske agle hi pal jo hua,usse dekh mere face par ek smile naach uthi..

is jungle se bahar nikalne ka tarika pata chal chuka tha mujhe aur us tarike ko dekh aur jaan mai wakayi impressed tha..

bohot umda magic se banaya gaya tha ye raasta jisse paar karne se zyada mushkil tha uske baare me pata lagana...

aur jab tak woh raasta aur tarika pata chale,usse emplify karne ke liye energy hi naa bache,yahi toh plan tha VIRAAZ ka...

khair,bas 10 percent shakti hi bachi thi mere andar,us shakti ke saath is challenge ko pura karna tha mujhe...

haathon ko rub karte hue mai un dono pedon ke beech khada ho gaya...

aisa kar apna ek ek haath un dono pedon ke trunks par rakha maine aur ek lambi saans kheench apni saari bachi shakti ko apne dono haathon me daalte hue...


UMMMMMMMMM.......


ek grunting awaaz nikalte hue joki mere zor lagane se nikal rahi thi, dono trees ko push karne laga mai...

aur mere aisa karte hi wahi hua jo maine anticipate kiya tha..

mere push karne dono trees dusri taraf jhukne lage aur aisa hoti hi pura jungle un dono trees ko jado me kheenchata chala jaane laga..

yahi toh is DARK MAGICAL JUNGLE ka asli magic tha...

un do pedon ko unke opposite direction me push karna hi woh tarika tha jisse ye pura MAGICAL jungle aur hamari yahan ki journey puri ho sakti thi...

but ye asaan nahi tha..meri pysical situation utni strong nahi thi ki un do trees ko joki kaafi mazboot the,lagatar push kar sakun...

kuch hi palon ke push ke baad mujhe hadh se zyada thakaan ne gher liya jiski wajah se mere dono haath un dono pedon se sarak gaye aur mai neeche zamin par apne ghutno ke bal baith haanfne laga...

but jaise hi mere haath un do pedon se hate toh un dono trees ki jadon se jungle ka woh saara bhaag jo ab tak sama gaya tha,woh wapas bahar nikal gaya aur dekhte hi dekhte mai back to zero waali situation me pahunch chuka tha...

ab tak ki hui saari mehnat par paani padh chuka tha aur to make the scenerio worse, meri haalat bhi kharab ho chuki thi..

lambi lambi saansein leta hua mai neeche un dono trees ke beech let gaya aur apni aankhen band kar li..


SOUL POWER....


ek aisi power jisse pyscical strength ki toh zaroorat nahi padti par is power se pysical power ko strength zaroor milti hai...

aankh band kar apne SOUL me jhaank ussi soul power ko dhundne laga mai..

but yahan bhi ek problem thi...mere BLACK ENERGY ke consumption se meri soul power jaise kahin chhup si gayi thi..

aur bina usse dekhe mai uski power ko apne body me channelize nahi kar sakta tha...

aur isiliye mujhe dusra tarika apnana pada..

jitni shakti bachi thi,usse ikattha kar apne man me jhaanka maine aur..


HRIDAYAM PIDATOHAM

HEART PAIN

apne hi dil ko pain dene waala SPELL uccharit kiya maine aur mere aisa karte hi..

AHHHHHHHHH...

seene me uthi behadh tez dard se chilla utha mai par us dard ke beech mujhe apne dil ke kareeb ek urja bahar aati hui dikhayi di..

ye urja aur kuch nahi meri SOUL POWER thi joki mere heart me behosh ERRAPEL ki shakti ke piche chuppi hui thi..

but bahar aane ke baad woh urja wapas mere heart me piche samane lagi par woh puri tarah chhup paati,usse pehle...


AATMAM DEHAM SHAKTIYEM...

SOUL POWER TO BODY...


is SPELL ko uccharit kiya maine aur mere is SPELL ko uccharit karne ke agle hi pal mai ek jhatke me apne pairon par khada ho chuka tha..

meri pyscical energy kaafi hadh tak restore ho chuki thi par kyunki ye energy dusre power source se thi, isiliye temporary thi aur fast draining bhi...

zyada waqt nahi tha mere paas aur isiliye maine turant apne dono haathon ko expand karte hue dono trees ko pakda aur ek jhatke ke saath push karne laga..

mere aisa karte hi ek baar phirse pura jungle un do pedon ki jadon me samane laga aur saath hi saath meri temporary pyscical strength bhi double speed se drain hone lagi...

dekhte hi dekhte meri lagbhag 90 percent strength drain ho chuki thi aur aisa hone ke kaaran ek baar phirse mere dono haath dheele padne lage the..

kisi bhi pal mai wapas dihydrate hote hue neeche gir sakta tha but isse pehle ki mai neeche girta...


SWOOSSSSSSS.....

woh saara DARK MAGICAL JUNGLE tezi se simaththa hua aakhirkaar pura ka pura mere push kiye dono trees ke jadon me sama hi gaya aur aisa hote hi woh dono trees jinhe maine pakda hua tha,woh ek purple dhuen me convert ho gaye..

aisa hote hi mai wapas apne ghutno par aa chuka tha..

but lambi lambi saans lene ke beech mujhe us purple dhuen me kuch jaani pehchaani energy feel ho rahi thi..

abhi mai us energy ke secret ko samajhta ki tabhi us dhuen ka kuch bhaag mujhme sama gaya aur jab aisa hua toh mujhe us purple dhuen ka RAAZ pata chal gaya..

asal me woh dhuan hamari wahi energy thi jo is DARK MAGICAL JUNGLE ne consume ki hui thi par ab jab maine us mayavi jungle numa challenge ko paar kar liya tha,toh usne humari us sucked energy ko wapas hume louta diya tha..

khair,energy restoration ke baad mai turant khada hua aur aage badh gaya..

mai dekh raha tha ki mujhse kuch hi door MAHI aur woh chaaron neeche gire hue the aur abhi woh purple smoke un sabke bodies me sama raha tha..

mai jaanta tha ki woh sab completely dihydrated the aur energy loutne ke baad bhi unhe kuch samay lagega khudko restore karne me..

ab tak mai un sabke paas pahunch chuka tha..unki sucked up energy unme wapas sama chuki thi jiski wajah se unhe hosh aane laga tha..

ek pal un sabko dekh mai aage badh gaya...

wahin kuch der baad jab woh sab hosh me aaye aur jab kuch aur time ke baad un sabki energy completely restored hui toh woh sab ek jhatke me uthkar baith gaye..

ye dekh woh sab hairan the ki jahan kuch der pehle tak woh ek ghane jungle ke beech fase hue the,wahin ab woh ek khaali maidan jaisi jagah par baithe hue the..

but jab nazar idhar udhar ghumane ke baad un sabki nazar us disha ki taraf gayi jahan mai gaya toh unhe asli situation ka andaza ho gaya jisse jaan woh khush ho gaye..

woh sab uthe aur meri hi disha ki taraf jahan unse kareeb 100 metre door mai khada tha,tezi se badhe..

THE DARK MAGICAL JUNGLE me energy ke sucked down hone ki wajah se unki aankhon me jo thakaan tha,woh ab chamak me badal chuka tha..

woh sab samajh gaye the ki unka MAGICAL JUNGLE ka challenge pura ho chuka hai aur ye baat unhe mujhe dekh kar nahi balki mai jisse dekh raha tha,usse dekhkar pata chali thi..


THE ALCAZAR...woh killa jiske saamne is waqt khada tha mai aur ye dekh woh sab samajh gaye the ki hum sab INFERIOR LEVEL ke last challenge ke saamne pahunch chuke the..

khair,aage badhte hue woh sab mere aaju baaju khade ho chuke the..

ek pal mujhe gratitude ki nazar se dekh un sabki aankhen bhi meri hi tarah saamne dikh rahe us gigantic ALCAZAR par tik gayi..

wahin mai jo pehle se hi us ALCAZAR naamak INFERIOR LEVEL ke aakhri challenge ko dekh raha tha,meri aankhon me is waqt ek chamak thi aur dil ufaan maarte hue keh raha tha ki...


MAI-


maana ki teri soch, mai JAAN NAHI SAKTA.....

kis bhesh me kaun chuppa hai,mai PEHCHAAN NAHI SAKTA...

laga le jitna laga sakta hai zor tu....

jeetne tu dega nahi mujhe,aur haar, mai MAAN NAHI SAKTA....

















AAJ KE LIYE ITNA HI.....

















AAPKA APNA V...J.....
Gazab ekdam speechless amazing update VJbhai
 

vj4u

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To kya ab pura alcazar tut pdega un sbhi ke uppr... Ya uski bhi koi limit hogi ki itne logo ko hra do tum paas ho jaoge ya kuchh aur hi h...wo to khair pta chl hi jaayega ki aage kya hona h...to mahi ne raaz ke attitude ko hi astra ki trha use kiya raaz pr...usko challenge fenk kr..aur raaz ne bhi apni taqat ka aakhiri katra tk lga diya is task ko pura krne me aur at last wo safal bhi hua...gjb...sath me sbhi ko.malum bhi pd gya ki mahi ki asliyat kya h..khair ye to hona hi tha...ab dekhte h yaha kya hone wala h aur iske baad kya hoga wo dekhna wakai mjedaar hone wala h..but phle yaha alcazar me ghamasan mchwa do brother...devil wala roop dikhna chahiye yaha pr raaz ka
Waiting brother
bas padhte jaaiye brother...the quest is going to get intense..saath bane rahiye
 

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I remember the old days while reading today's update, Acchuta's big teeth, Acchuta and Slunder together fun with Raaz, honestly enjoyed at that time.:lotpot: Acchuta and Slunder always make the atmosphere fun, so i likes them. :love2: Mahi's truth is shocking to any normal person. :approve:
I understood everything that the forest absorbs everyone's physical powers and that no matter how far we go, we move around and return, As always this time Raaz helped everyone and in such a situation it was very difficult to complete the task but he is a Raaz never gives up. :applause:
In the end, we have reached the final destination and according to what has happened so far, it is going to be very difficult, Everybody has to try their best. :?:

As always the update was great, You are writing very well, Now let's see what happens next, Till then waiting for the next part of the story.

Thank You...

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thanks for appreciating brother...be along
 

vj4u

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Superb update bhai..
Superb update
Excellent update bhai

Superb theory
Nice update
Super fantastic, mind blowing update bhai maza aa gya
Superb update
Lovely update bro
Bahut hi khubsurat update bhai
Amazing superb update...............?
keep posting...................?
waiting for next...................?
Wah story to kamal ki hai hi har update ke bad milne wali shayri bhi kamal ki hoti hai. Maza hi a jata hai. Thank you vj bhai
Atulye update mitr
Mast shaandar update
Nice update bhai
Very nice fantastic zabardast update waiting for next update
nice update vj bhai
to ab inka inferior level ka chellange pura hone wala h
wese last line kiske liye thi raaz ki???????????
बहुत ही उम्दा लेखक की उम्दा लेखनी द्वारा रचित, उम्दा कहानी का एक और उम्दा अपडेट।
विक्की भाई जवाब नही तुम्हारा
Fantastic updates
Nice update
Awesome update
Excellent update brother
Great going superb
Superb Update Bro...
Waiting For Next
Nice update bhai
B
Awesome update bhai....
Super Duper Hit & Fantastic & Fabulous & Awesome & Gajab & Very Nice Update Bro

Wah viraj ki y chal sach kamaal thi kyoki sb hard way soch rhe the or y kuch easy m way dekhna tha wo b energy bachate huye

Mahi ne lord ki beti hone ka farj pura kiya apne dosto ko bacha kr chaye uski halat b khrab ho jaye



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Gazab ekdam speechless amazing update VJbhai
thanks brothers....be along
 
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