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Fantasy ATTITUDE (KABHI ANGEL KABHI DEVIL) ( Completed )

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AB TAK AAPNE PADHA KI JAHAN EK TARAF VISION SERPENT KE FIRST LAYERED BODY KO HIDA, ACCHUTA,SLUNDER, BRAWNY AUR MAHI MILKAR KHATM KAR DETE HAIN WAHIN DUSRI TARAF RAAZ US SERPENT KE SECOND AUR FINAL LAYER KO MITA USSE PURI TARAH SE KHATM KAR DETA HAI.


AB AAGE:-



CHAPTER-3


(THE DEVIL'S HAVEN,THE SACRIFICE & THE PERFECT EPILOGUE)



UPDATE-142



PLANET-ELYSIAN


PLACE-THE INFERIOR LEVEL





THE QUEST CONTINOUS


THIRD CHALLENGE:THE DRAWNING LAKE






CHEHRE PAR HADH SE ZYADA THAKAN,PAIR THEEK SE UTH NAHI RAHE,I AM SURE NASEN CHADH CHUKI HONGI,PASINA PAANI SE ZYADA NIKAL RAHA HAI,HALKA HALKA DIHYDRATION PROCESS BHI SHURU HO CHUKA HAI...

PHYSICALLY ITNI TORMENTED SITUATION ME HONE KE BAAD BHI MUJHE AISA KYUN LAG RAHA HAI KI TAKLIF PYSICAL SE ZYADA MENTAL HO RAHI HAI TUM SABKO..!!!


un paancho ko dekh kahi thi maine ye baat...

REASON....

5 km lambe pathrile registaan ko jiske surface me ek ajeeb sa gravitational pull tha,paar kar finally jab humne us desert ka daayra paar kar hi liya..

aur aisa hote hi woh paanchon lambi lambi saans lete hue neeche kaali ghaans se bhare zamin me baith apni thakaan ko mitane ki koshish karne lage..

par pyscically itne negetive haalat me hone ke baad bhi un sabki aankhon se ek dusri hi taklif aur chehre se ek alag hi udasi chhalak rahi aur ussiko dekh kahi thi maine ye baat jispar un sabne kuch kaha nahi,bas sir jhukaye lambi saansein lete rahe jispar...


MAI-doctor se kuch bhi chhupana sahi nahi hota guyzzz....

MAHI-kya baat hai RAAZ...???jo hamesha jaan lene par utaaru rehta hai,woh aaj khudko jaan bachane waale doctor se compare kar raha hai...

MAI-har doctor jaan bachane ke liye medicine nahi karta MAHI..kuch,infact zyadatar log isiliye medicine karte hain kyunki is line me paise bohot hain...

aur aise doctors,unka mariz jiyega yaa marega,ye us mariz ki pysical strength nahi,balki uski financial strength se tay karte hain...

faayda agar unka hai,toh hi sahi maayne me woh doctors bante hain...

bottom line,mai bhi us tarike ka hi doctor hun...filhal tum sabse mujhe faayda hi hai, isiliye puch liya...

ACCHUTA-bhai tu logic kahan kahan se dhund kar laata hai..???saala selfishness ko bhi sach ke paani me dubokar aise pesh karta hai ki naa toh us selfishness ko hazam kar sakte hain aur naahi bole gaye sach se debate...

MAI-meri taarif chhod,apni aur in sabki taklif bata...achanak aisa kya ho gaya ki jahan tum sab pehle hadh se zyada excited aur motivated the,wahin kuch der se demoralised lagne lage ho..???

MAHI-upar se apne saath paanch paanch kamzoriyan saath lekar chal rahe ho...!!!!


VIRAZ ki un sabke liye kahi baat repeat ki MAHI ne jisse sun...


MAI-ohho....so he successfully played you all,haan..!!!

MAHI-played..!!!he only spilled the truth out RAAZ...sach hi toh kaha tha usne...hum sab is safar me,is quest me tumhare liye sirf extra baggages aur kamzoriyan hi toh hain...

agar tum last chunouti ke beech nahi aate,toh we all would have been dead...

MAI-but you are not...

MAHI-sirf tumhari wajah se...

MAI-humari har saans chalne ke peeche ek wajah hoti hai...kya har wajah ko talash khudko blame karti ho tum...!!!

ye yaad raha tum sabko ki ab tak tumne underperform kiya hai,par ye yaad nahi raha ki situations tumhare excel karne ke hain hi nahi..

aur naahi tumhare paas tum sabki full grown shaktiyan hain jiski madad se tum yahan apne dum par survive kar sako...

ek hi chiz hai...ATTITUDE....woh ATTITUDE jiske dum par yahan aane ka aur ladhne ka faisla kiya tha tum sab ne...

par ye dekhkar ajeeb lag raha hai ki ek waana be RAAZ ne apne manupaltive baaton se tum sabke us ATTITUDE ko hi hila diya..

ACCHUTA, SLUNDER, BRAWNY, HIDA...bhul gaye kya tum chaaron ki tum sabko GOD ne SAVENT banane ke blessings ke saath alag se bhi POWER GIFTS diye hain...

haan, bhale hi woh powers aaj locked hain,par hain toh tumhare andar hi...

tum sab aaj bhi blessed ho..par har blessing tabhi kaam me aati hai jab uspar bharosa kiya jaaye..

aur yahan toh blessings tum sab khud hi ho...khud par bharosa rakhna hai tumhe...

and MAHI...i dont think ki mujhe tumhe gyan dene ki zaroorat hai...

gyan ka bhandaar toh tumhe viraasat me mila hai...(VIKRAM)


halka mock karte hue kahi ye baat maine MAHI ko jisse sun itne der se depressed dikh rahi MAHI ke face par bhi smile aa gayi..

saath hi saath apne dad ki yaad aate hi uska saara demotivation jaata raha...

it was just the matter of time and patience...uske baad toh she will be unstoppable,jaanti toh thi woh ye baat but ab samajhne bhi lagi thi...

khair,apni baat ko aage badhate hue..


MAI-jaise is DEVIL'S HAVEN ko penetrate karna mera quest hai,thik waise hi khudpar bharosa karna, VIDEOUS aur VIRAAZ ke har demotivation ko dodge karna, tum sabka quest hai...

beat them by beating your negetiveness....

ye ek jungle hai guyzz...aur jungle ka ek hi niyam hota hai..SURVIVE...

aur is baat se fark nahi padta ki survive kaise kiya jaa raha hai..just hang on,har chiz apne place par pahunchne lagegi..

ACCHUTA-nahi pahunchegi toh pahuncha denge...


purane form ne aate hue kahi ye baat ACCHUTA ne aur phir mujhe hug karne meri taraf aane laga par tabhi mai ghumte hue aage badh gaya aur...


MAI-ab chalo guyzz...next challenge is waiting for us...

ACCHUTA-saala pehle motivate karke emotional kar diya aur phir khud nikal liya..


ACCHUTA ki baat sun baaki chaaron has diye aur woh sab bhi mere piche ho liye..

wahin MAHI thoda tez aage badhi aur mere baaju me pahunch...


MAHI-thanks...

MAI-kisliye..!!!maine pehle bhi kaha tha ki...

MAHI-jo bhi tumne kaha,woh sirf isiliye kaha kyunki isme tumhara faayda hai..i get it...

par aag bhi toh garam hota hai..jalane ka kaam karta hai..lekin wahi aag jab thand me jalta hai toh sharir ko sukoon pahunchata hai..

kuch der pehle hum sabka mind set ussi cold weather me lagne waali thand ki tarah tha aur tumhari baatein,us thand me sukoon dene waali aag ki tarah thi..

MAI-bilkul apne baap ki tarah ho...unki tarah har situation me positiveness ki noutanki karne ki aadat hai tumhe...

MAHI-i will take that as a big compliment...

waise RAAZ...tum toh unki urja se bane ho..tum toh unki har baat ko ,unki soch,samajh,har chiz ko feel karte hoge..

kuch batao naa unke aise tough situations ko deal karne ke tarike ke baare me...

MAI-usse pehle aage aane waale jheel me bina try kare hi naa doob jaaun mai...!!!


jahan apni baat bol mai aage badh gaya wahin MAHI pehle muskurayi par phir uske face se smile gayab hote hue sudden seriousness aa gayi..

woh turant mere paas aayi aur..


MAHI-kya bola tumne...jheel me bina try kare hi naa doob jaaun mai..!!

iska kya matlab hua..???

MAI-aisi hi thodi bohot soch aur samajh thi tumhare dad ki bhi..but ek difference bhi hai..!!!woh sawal puchne ke baad khud hi jawab bhi dhundh lete the aur saath hi saath uska solution bhi...

MAHI-kya baat hai..?? mere dad se nafrat karte ho aur ab unhi ki taarif bhi kar rahe ho...!!!

MAI-nafrat se sach toh nahi badal jaata.aur waise bhi,mai unki taarif nahi, tumhari kami bata raha tha...

MAHI-nazariye ki baat hai..tum meri kami bata rahe the aur mera dhyan dad ki taarif par tha..

but woh chhodo aur apne statement ka matlab batao..???

ab tak woh chaaron bhi humare paas aa chuke the, isiliye ek baar un sabko dekh..


MAI-yaad hai DESERT ke baad kis challenge ke bare me bataya tha maine..!!!

BRAWNY-haan, koi kaali jheel...

MAI-aur us jheel ka naam hai THE DROWNING LAKE...

HIDA-THE DROWNING LAKE...!!!!naam sunkar hi ghabrahat ho rahi hai..

MAI-honi bhi chahiye... kyunki naam me hi us lake ki khoobi chuppi hui hai...

DROWNING LAKE me swim nahi kiya jaa sakta...us lake ka paani usme utarne waale har praani aur jeev ko neeche kheench leta hai..

ab uske baad kya hota hai,ye toh us lake ke water ko touch karkar hi mai bata sakta hun..

ACCHUTA-bhai,aur batane ke liye bacha hi kya hai..ab ek baat toh obvious hi hai ki us lake ka paani bhi BLACK ENERGY se bhara hua hoga..

aur jaise hi koi usme doobta hoga, toh woh paani uske mooh ke through andar ghus usse khatm kar deta hoga..

SLUNDER-haan aur ho sakta hai ki paani ke andar deadly creatures bhi hon aur wahi us paani me utarne waale ko neeche pull karte hon.!!!

MAI-toh matlab aage nahi badhna hai..!!!

HIDA-kyun nahi badhna hai..bilkul badhenge...

MAI-then stop speculating and let's just walk there...


apni baat bol mai aage badh gaya aur woh sab bhi chup chaap mere piche ho liye...




THE DROWNING LAKE




OH SHIT...ISKA END KAHAN HAI.....???




kuch der chalne ke baad jab hum us DROWNING LAKE ke paas pahunche,toh us lake ke endless dimension ko dekh kahi ye baat BRAWNY ne...

jahan door door tak kaale paani se bhare us lake ko woh paanchon dekh rahe the wahin mai aage badha aur lake ke kinare par baith maine pehle wahan moujud paani ko touch kiya aur phir usme apna haath daal diya aur mere aisa karte hi...

jahan maine haath daala tha,us jagah ka paani kuch do hatheli jitna hi gehra tha par mere haath ke us gehrayi ke end point ko touch karte hi woh end part bhi aur neeche khisakne laga aur saath hi saath mere haath ko bhi apne saath neeche pull karne laga..

aisa hote hi maine turant apne haath se apni black energy ki ray release kar di..

aur jab maina aisa kiya toh achanak se hi naa sirf woh neeche khisakne waala part wapas uththe hue apni purani jagah par aa gaya balki mera haath bhi us pull se completely free ho gaya...

apni jagah par wapas khada ho chuka tha mai but aage kya karna hai,iska naa toh idea tha mujhe aur naahi koi plan..

mai toh apni kaali urja ki madad se aage badh sakta tha,but ye paanchon...!!

ye kaise paar karenge is jheel ko,main sawal toh yahi tha jiska filhal mere paas koi jawab nahi tha....

yahan mai ye sab soch raha tha aur wahan woh paanchon meri taraf dekh rahe the is ummid ke saath ki mai koi solution nikalunga...

par jab kuch der baad bhi mai apni sochon me gum raha toh MAHI mere paas aayi aur usne mere kandhe par haath rakha aur...


MAHI-kya hua RAAZ...!!!???kya soch rahe ho..???kya yahan se aage jaane ka koi tarika nahi sujh raha...???


MAHI ki baat sun usse dhyan se dekhte hue..


MAI-ab tak nahi sujha tha.. par shayad ab...!!!hold it....

apne ussi haath ko jisme jheel ka paani laga hua tha,usse aage karte hue kahi ye baat maine jisse samajh toh nahi paayi MAHI but phir bhi usne turant mere us haath ko hold kiya aur uske aisa karte hi....

ek tez sensation meri us hatheli par feel hui jisse mehsoos kar kuch pal ke liye meri aankhen kuch sochne ke andaaz se choti hui aur phir mai wapas mudte hue neeche jheel ke kinaare baith ussi haath ko jisse MAHI ne touch kiya tha,paani me daal diya aur mere aisa karte hi..

ek saath do chizen hui...

pehli...

mere aas paas ka paani vibrate hone laga jiski wajah se jahan pehle mera haath neeche pull ho raha tha,wahin ab uske ulat upar push hone laga..

dusri...

woh jagah jahan mera haath samaya tha,us hisse ka paani mere hatheli par aise tight hone laga tha maano meri hatheli hatheli naa hokar gardan ho aur woh paani us gardan ka gala daba raha ho...

maajra samajh chuka tha mai...aage badhne ka solution bhi mil chuka tha mujhe but woh solution hadh se zyada negetive tha...

but option aur kuch tha nahi aur jo tha,usse mujhe in paanchon ko batana tha isiliye mai wapas utha,un paanchon ki taraf ghuma aur....


MAI-aage badhne ka ek hi tarika hai...


meri baat sun ab tak jo tention un sabke face par thi, woh kam hoti chali gayi aur..


SLUNDER-haash...thank GOD...hume pata tha yaar ki tu koi na koi jugaad laga hi lega...

HIDA-obvio... after all he is RAAZ..the chosen one...

BRAWNY-bhai mai toh ye soch raha hun ki hum sabka dimag iski tarah kab chalega...!!!

ACCHUTA-arre iska jawab toh bohot simple hai..kabhi nahi....


jahan ACCHUTA ki baat sun woh teeno muskura diye wahin mera face jispar is waqt hadh se zyada seriousness dikh rahi thi,usse dekh MAHI ko andaza ho gaya ki jis tarike ki baat mai kar raha hun,woh mushkil toh hoga hi par saath hi saath negetive bhi..

aur isiliye..


MAHI-kya baat hai RAAZ..!!! tarika tough hai yaa kuch zyada hi tough hai..


MAHI ki baat sun un chaaron ka dhyan bhi mere face par gaya jisse dekh woh sab bhi wapas halke tensed dikhne lage..

wahin MAHI ki baat sun..


MAI-tarika tough nahi hai,faisla hai aur woh faisla tumhe lena hai....

MAHI-please be specific RAAZ...

MAI-ye jo jheel ka paani hai,ye normal paani de zyada thick hai..

SLUNDER-haan toh isme BLACK ENERGY ka AURA mixed hoga isiliye..

MAI-nope.. AURA power badhata hau,thickness nahi...


ASMODEUS aur tumhare PITAH ke beech jo fake fight hui, usme jitne bhi DEVILS maare gaye,un sabka khun mila hai is paani me...

isiliye is paani ki thickness zyada hai...


meri baat aur revalation ko sun aankhen hairat se badi ho gayi un sabki aur saath hi saath meri aage ki baat kitni negetive ho sakti hai,iska bhi ek anjana dar se bhara andaza ho chuka tha un sabko...

wahin apni baat ko aage badhate hue...


MAI-woh saare DEVIL'S directly ASMODEUS ke DEVILISH swaroop se bane the..

ek tarah se ye kehna galat nahi hoga ki woh sab ASMODEUS ke DEMONIC descendents the...

isiliye un sabke blood me bhi woh urja thi jo ASMODEUS ke negetive side me thi...

wahi urja ab is paani me bhi hai jisse dodge nahi diya jaa sakta....

MAHI-tarika nahi bataya tumne ab tak...!!!


MAHI ke sawal ki sun ek pal dekha maine usse aur phir...


RAAZ-YOU HAVE TO DIE....


jahan meri baat sun MAHI normal hi rahi aur woh isiliye kyunki usse meri pichli kahi baaton se aisa hi kuch hone ka andaza ho chuka tha wahin ACCHUTA, SLUNDER, HIDA aur BRAWNY ekdum se hadbada gaye aur..


HIDA-ye kya bol rahe ho RAAZ...??

MAHI-wahi jo sach hai...aur guyzz,is tarike ke implication par koi melo drama nahi...

is quest ko pura karna,yahi hum sabka ek maatra moto hai aur agar aisa karne ke liye mere marne ki zaroorat hai,toh aisa hi hoga...


MAHI ki baat sun un sabke face par laachari saaf dikhne lagi..MAHI ne jo kaha tha,woh ek tarah se un chaaron ke liye end of discussion tha,ye samajh gaye the woh sab par sawal toh the hi un sabke man me aur isiliye..


HIDA-but why only MAHI....???humme se bhi toh koi ye kurbaani de sakta hai...!!!

MAI-nope..it has to be MAHI...

CHAARON-par kyun..???

MAI-MAHI ke us AURA ko jo usne DARK SPACE ke bahar release kiya tha,kya usse sense kiya tha tum sabne...!!!???(ANGELS FORM ENERGY SOURCE)

CHAARON-haan..

MAI-wahi AURA aur power source hi is paani aur shakti ko divert kar sakta hai..

ACCHUTA-par MAHI ka woh AURA yahan INFERIOR WORLD me kaam nahi kar raha hai...

MAI-kaam karwana hai bhi nahi..bas us AURA ko apne body me circulate karwana hai.

aur ye kaam MAHI ko is paani me utarne ke baad karna hai.

iske waisa karte hi is pure jheel me faila DEMONIC BLOOD apni saari shakti ke saath MAHI ko yahan ke paani me drown karega...

saath hi ispar alag tarah se humla bhi karega..

us waqt is pure jheel me faila gravitational pull sirf MAHI ke position par focused rahega...

baaki jheel ka har part normal ho jaayega...us waqt hum sab is jheel ko paar kar sakte hain....


saari baatein bohot casually bol di thi maine jisse sun aur zyada depressed feel karne lage the woh sab par unme se koi kuch kehta ki tabhi..


MAHI-guyzz, RAAZ sahi hai..sirf yahi ek raasta hai..

HIDA-but MAHI...

MAHI-end of discussion...toh RAAZ,kya mai paani me utrun....!!!

MAI-thoda door jaakar...


meri baat sun kuch pal MAHI mujhe dekhti rahi...meri bhi aankhen uspar hi tiki thi..

khair,kuch der tak yun eye gaze karte rehne ke baad maine apni aankhen uspar se hata li jiske baad
MAHI bina kuch bole lake ke kinare chalte hue humse thoda door jaane lagi..

is beech mere sharir se chaar bade bade ropes nikle jinhone un chaaron ko mujhse baandh sa diya..

woh sab samajh chuke the ki maine aisa isiliye kiya tha taaki apne saath un sabko kheechte hue tezi se paani me aage badh sakun..

par is beech jab un sabne ek baar phirse us anthhin jheel ko dekha toh...


HIDA-itni lambi jheel paar karne me kitna waqt lag jaayega..???

MAI-ye dikh rahi lambayi ek illusion hai.. length itni zyada badi bhi nahi hai..

maximum 2 minute me hum jheel ke dusri taraf honge...

jab tak meri baat khatm hui,MAHI humse kaafi door jaakar ek jagah par khadi ho chuki thi aur aisa kar usne meri taraf dekha jispar haan me sir hilaya maine aur mere aisa karte hi MAHI apni aankhon ko band karte hue ek chhalang maarte us jheel me kood padi aur uske aisa karte hi...

SHSHSHSHSHSHHH....

pure jheel ke paani me tez leher uthne lagi jo is baat ka suboot tha ki MAHI ne apne ANGEL FORM POWER SOURCE ko apne body me shrug off kar diya tha...

uske waisa karne ki wajah se pure jheel ke paani me mila hua pure DEMONIC BLOOD MAHI ko pehchan gaya aur phir apni puri taakat ke saath woh shakti MAHI ki taraf badh chali thi...

wahin jaise hi maine jheel me uth rahe leher ko dekha toh mai samah gaya ki ab sirf MAHI ke aas paas waale portion me hi saara gravitational pull hoga jiska matlab tha ki now is the time when we should take off aur isiliye....


JAL BHEDAM

WATER PENETRATION


aage hawa me tezi se kudte hue is SPELL ko uccharit kiya maine jiske baad mera sharir kisi rocket ki tarah ek tez forward push ke saath
jheel me jump maar gaya aur mere saath hi bandhe hue woh chaaron bhi ek dhakke ke saath mere piche ho liye...

hum sab behadh tezi se paani ke upari satah par tairte hue aage badhne lage..

woh chaaron mere piche the aur baar baar tez speed ki wajah se unke sir paani ke andar chale jaa rahe the..

kisi tarah khudka balance banaye rakhe hue woh sab apne sir ko upar rakhne ki koshish kar rahe the..

is beech hum kaafi aage nikal chuke the aur aisa hote hi kuch der pehle meri kahi baat ka sach un chaaron ko dikhne laga..

jheel ki anthhin lambayi wakayi ek illusion thi aur ab woh ye dekh aur samajh paa rahe the...

hamare lagatar aage badhte rehne se woh faila hua illusion haththne laga tha jiski wajah se kaafi door hi sahi par hum sabko jheel ka dusra kinara dikhne laga tha...

us kinare ko dekhte hue meri speed aur badh gayi jiski wajah se bas 1 minute ke andar hi hum us river bank ke paas the..

aur jab dusri taraf ka surface humse bas kuch metres ki hi doori ka reh gaya toh maine ek baar phirse jump maari jiski wajah se meri aur mere piche un sabki body upar hawa me uththe chali gayi..

par is baar mere jump se release hui pressure zyada thi jiski wajah se woh sab jo ab tak mujhse bandhe mere piche the,un sabki bodies ko ek jhatka laga jiski wajah se woh tezi se mere upar se hote hue aage nikal gaye..

aisa hote hi maine woh ropes jinse woh sab bandhe hue the,woh gayab kar di thi..

khair,mujhe upar ki taraf se cross karte hue woh sab jheel ke dusri taraf ke surface par roll karte hue gire par girte hi woh sab turant uth chuke the..

wahin upar uchalte hue mai apne pairon par hi zamin par aaya tha..

landing bhale hi meri aur un sabki alag thi par land hone ke baad jo reaction aaya,woh hum paanchon ka ek hi tha..

aur woh reaction tha hum sabka ek saath us disha ki taraf dekhna jahan MAHI ne jump kiya tha...

aur kyunki illusion is taraf se nahi tha, isiliye woh disha,woh point hume dikh raha tha...

kuch der pehle jab hum lake ke dusri taraf the aur MAHI paani me koodi thi,tab jo leher pure lake par uth raha tha,abhi woh saara leher joki DEMONIC BLOOD ki shakti se bana tha,woh theek ussi point par uth raha tha jahan MAHI ne jump kiya tha..

aur iska sirf ek hi matlab ho sakta tha..woh saari demonic shaktiyan,MAHI par haawi ho chuki thi...

ab mai MAHI ke paas pahunch toh sakta tha nahi par MAHI ki halaat mehsoos zaroor kar sakta tha aur isiliye mai turant wapas paani ke paas pahuncha aur usme haath daal apni aankhen band kar pure lake me ho rahi movement ko mehsoos karne lag gaya aur jo scene mere aankhon ke saamne aaya,woh bilkul bhi positive nahi tha....

MAHI....jo kuch der pehle us paani me koodi thi..uske koodne par jaise hi uske sharir me beh rahi ANGEL'S FORM POWER SOURCE aur lake se jude DEMONIC BLOOD ka connection hua toh woh saara blood aur uski shakti ek saath MAHI ke ird gird jama hui aur jab aisa hua toh paani ka woh hissa jisme MAHI kudi thi aur jiski gehrayi bas 6 feet hi thi,achanak hi woh area kisi samandar ke anthhin dept jitna gehra ho gaya jisme MAHI tezi se dubti chali gayi..

saath hi saath us lake ke paani ke blood particles ne MAHI ke sharir ko bhedhne ki koshish ki par woh aisa karne me kaamiyab nahi ho paayi aur tab un particles ne khudko ek zanjeer ka roop aur sakhti dete hue MAHI ko khudme lapetne shuru kar diya..

aisa hote hi MAHI ka sharir jakadne laga aur saath hi saath uska gala bhi ghutne laga..

par woh DEMONIC BLOOD PARTICLES itne me hi nahi rooke..

unhone apna deadly AURA MAHI ke sharir me touch karana shuru kiya aur jab aisa hua toh MAHI ke body me ghum rahi uski ANGEL'S FORM POWER SOURCE tadap uthi...

woh turant MAHI ke sharir ke andruni bhaag me pahunch bachne ke kiye tezi se idhar udhar ghumne lagi par us DEMONIC BLOOD PARTICLES ka asar itna strong tha ki usse rahat nahi mili..

aur tab us POWER SOURCE ke paas khudko surakshit rakhne ka ek hi tarika dikha...

aisa tarika jo MAHI ke HUMAN FORM POWER SOURCE ke liye bilkul theek nahi tha..

woh ANGELS FORM POWER SOURCE MAHI ke chaaron AMPLIFICATION modes ke andar penetrate karne lagi aur jab aisa hua toh...

BHAKKKKKKK.....

MAHI ke body ka saara andruni system hil gaya jiski wajah se MAHI ke mooh se khoon ki ek moti dhaar nikal paani me fail gayi...

par ye toh external damage ka asar tha..asli damage toh MAHI ke andar ho rahi thi..

jaise hi MAHI ke chaaron AMPLIFICATION modes me ANGEL'S FORM POWER SOURCE touch hui,toh woh saare modes kaam karna band karne lage...

blood flow dheere ho gaya jo kisi bhi waqt completely rookne waala tha...

brain cells dead hone lage...body dheere dheere jalne lagi aur SOUL...

SOUL ki shakti aur uski urja,dono hi khatm hone lagi...

MAHI ki aankh aur uske saath uska saara thinking system band hone laga..

mout ke kagar par pahunch gayi MAHI aur jaisa ki aksar is state me pahunchte waqt hota hai,wahi MAHI ke band hote brain me dikhne laga..

woh maa baap jinhe usne kabhi dekha hi nahi,unka dhundla aks...FLORIN,MARIA,uske saare dost aur aakhir me RAAZ....

ye sab dekhte hue MAHI ke dard se bhare face par bhi ek smile naach uthi aur...


MAHI-


jaisa itihaas mere PITAH ne racha tha, mai waisa RACH NAA SAKI....

jo teri(RAAZ) aankhon ko mujhme baandh de, mai waisa SAJH NAA SAKI...

dimag bhi haar gaya aur dil bhi....

bohot kuch karna baaki tha,par afsos,kuch karne ke liye mai BACH NAA SAKI.....

















AAJ KE LIYE ITNA HI.....

















AAPKA APNA V...J....
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AB TAK AAPNE PADHA KI JAHAN EK TARAF VISION SERPENT KE FIRST LAYERED BODY KO HIDA, ACCHUTA,SLUNDER, BRAWNY AUR MAHI MILKAR KHATM KAR DETE HAIN WAHIN DUSRI TARAF RAAZ US SERPENT KE SECOND AUR FINAL LAYER KO MITA USSE PURI TARAH SE KHATM KAR DETA HAI.


AB AAGE:-



CHAPTER-3


(THE DEVIL'S HAVEN,THE SACRIFICE & THE PERFECT EPILOGUE)



UPDATE-142



PLANET-ELYSIAN


PLACE-THE INFERIOR LEVEL





THE QUEST CONTINOUS


THIRD CHALLENGE:THE DRAWNING LAKE






CHEHRE PAR HADH SE ZYADA THAKAN,PAIR THEEK SE UTH NAHI RAHE,I AM SURE NASEN CHADH CHUKI HONGI,PASINA PAANI SE ZYADA NIKAL RAHA HAI,HALKA HALKA DIHYDRATION PROCESS BHI SHURU HO CHUKA HAI...

PHYSICALLY ITNI TORMENTED SITUATION ME HONE KE BAAD BHI MUJHE AISA KYUN LAG RAHA HAI KI TAKLIF PYSICAL SE ZYADA MENTAL HO RAHI HAI TUM SABKO..!!!


un paancho ko dekh kahi thi maine ye baat...

REASON....

5 km lambe pathrile registaan ko jiske surface me ek ajeeb sa gravitational pull tha,paar kar finally jab humne us desert ka daayra paar kar hi liya..

aur aisa hote hi woh paanchon lambi lambi saans lete hue neeche kaali ghaans se bhare zamin me baith apni thakaan ko mitane ki koshish karne lage..

par pyscically itne negetive haalat me hone ke baad bhi un sabki aankhon se ek dusri hi taklif aur chehre se ek alag hi udasi chhalak rahi aur ussiko dekh kahi thi maine ye baat jispar un sabne kuch kaha nahi,bas sir jhukaye lambi saansein lete rahe jispar...


MAI-doctor se kuch bhi chhupana sahi nahi hota guyzzz....

MAHI-kya baat hai RAAZ...???jo hamesha jaan lene par utaaru rehta hai,woh aaj khudko jaan bachane waale doctor se compare kar raha hai...

MAI-har doctor jaan bachane ke liye medicine nahi karta MAHI..kuch,infact zyadatar log isiliye medicine karte hain kyunki is line me paise bohot hain...

aur aise doctors,unka mariz jiyega yaa marega,ye us mariz ki pysical strength nahi,balki uski financial strength se tay karte hain...

faayda agar unka hai,toh hi sahi maayne me woh doctors bante hain...

bottom line,mai bhi us tarike ka hi doctor hun...filhal tum sabse mujhe faayda hi hai, isiliye puch liya...

ACCHUTA-bhai tu logic kahan kahan se dhund kar laata hai..???saala selfishness ko bhi sach ke paani me dubokar aise pesh karta hai ki naa toh us selfishness ko hazam kar sakte hain aur naahi bole gaye sach se debate...

MAI-meri taarif chhod,apni aur in sabki taklif bata...achanak aisa kya ho gaya ki jahan tum sab pehle hadh se zyada excited aur motivated the,wahin kuch der se demoralised lagne lage ho..???

MAHI-upar se apne saath paanch paanch kamzoriyan saath lekar chal rahe ho...!!!!


VIRAZ ki un sabke liye kahi baat repeat ki MAHI ne jisse sun...


MAI-ohho....so he successfully played you all,haan..!!!

MAHI-played..!!!he only spilled the truth out RAAZ...sach hi toh kaha tha usne...hum sab is safar me,is quest me tumhare liye sirf extra baggages aur kamzoriyan hi toh hain...

agar tum last chunouti ke beech nahi aate,toh we all would have been dead...

MAI-but you are not...

MAHI-sirf tumhari wajah se...

MAI-humari har saans chalne ke peeche ek wajah hoti hai...kya har wajah ko talash khudko blame karti ho tum...!!!

ye yaad raha tum sabko ki ab tak tumne underperform kiya hai,par ye yaad nahi raha ki situations tumhare excel karne ke hain hi nahi..

aur naahi tumhare paas tum sabki full grown shaktiyan hain jiski madad se tum yahan apne dum par survive kar sako...

ek hi chiz hai...ATTITUDE....woh ATTITUDE jiske dum par yahan aane ka aur ladhne ka faisla kiya tha tum sab ne...

par ye dekhkar ajeeb lag raha hai ki ek waana be RAAZ ne apne manupaltive baaton se tum sabke us ATTITUDE ko hi hila diya..

ACCHUTA, SLUNDER, BRAWNY, HIDA...bhul gaye kya tum chaaron ki tum sabko GOD ne SAVENT banane ke blessings ke saath alag se bhi POWER GIFTS diye hain...

haan, bhale hi woh powers aaj locked hain,par hain toh tumhare andar hi...

tum sab aaj bhi blessed ho..par har blessing tabhi kaam me aati hai jab uspar bharosa kiya jaaye..

aur yahan toh blessings tum sab khud hi ho...khud par bharosa rakhna hai tumhe...

and MAHI...i dont think ki mujhe tumhe gyan dene ki zaroorat hai...

gyan ka bhandaar toh tumhe viraasat me mila hai...(VIKRAM)


halka mock karte hue kahi ye baat maine MAHI ko jisse sun itne der se depressed dikh rahi MAHI ke face par bhi smile aa gayi..

saath hi saath apne dad ki yaad aate hi uska saara demotivation jaata raha...

it was just the matter of time and patience...uske baad toh she will be unstoppable,jaanti toh thi woh ye baat but ab samajhne bhi lagi thi...

khair,apni baat ko aage badhate hue..


MAI-jaise is DEVIL'S HAVEN ko penetrate karna mera quest hai,thik waise hi khudpar bharosa karna, VIDEOUS aur VIRAAZ ke har demotivation ko dodge karna, tum sabka quest hai...

beat them by beating your negetiveness....

ye ek jungle hai guyzz...aur jungle ka ek hi niyam hota hai..SURVIVE...

aur is baat se fark nahi padta ki survive kaise kiya jaa raha hai..just hang on,har chiz apne place par pahunchne lagegi..

ACCHUTA-nahi pahunchegi toh pahuncha denge...


purane form ne aate hue kahi ye baat ACCHUTA ne aur phir mujhe hug karne meri taraf aane laga par tabhi mai ghumte hue aage badh gaya aur...


MAI-ab chalo guyzz...next challenge is waiting for us...

ACCHUTA-saala pehle motivate karke emotional kar diya aur phir khud nikal liya..


ACCHUTA ki baat sun baaki chaaron has diye aur woh sab bhi mere piche ho liye..

wahin MAHI thoda tez aage badhi aur mere baaju me pahunch...


MAHI-thanks...

MAI-kisliye..!!!maine pehle bhi kaha tha ki...

MAHI-jo bhi tumne kaha,woh sirf isiliye kaha kyunki isme tumhara faayda hai..i get it...

par aag bhi toh garam hota hai..jalane ka kaam karta hai..lekin wahi aag jab thand me jalta hai toh sharir ko sukoon pahunchata hai..

kuch der pehle hum sabka mind set ussi cold weather me lagne waali thand ki tarah tha aur tumhari baatein,us thand me sukoon dene waali aag ki tarah thi..

MAI-bilkul apne baap ki tarah ho...unki tarah har situation me positiveness ki noutanki karne ki aadat hai tumhe...

MAHI-i will take that as a big compliment...

waise RAAZ...tum toh unki urja se bane ho..tum toh unki har baat ko ,unki soch,samajh,har chiz ko feel karte hoge..

kuch batao naa unke aise tough situations ko deal karne ke tarike ke baare me...

MAI-usse pehle aage aane waale jheel me bina try kare hi naa doob jaaun mai...!!!


jahan apni baat bol mai aage badh gaya wahin MAHI pehle muskurayi par phir uske face se smile gayab hote hue sudden seriousness aa gayi..

woh turant mere paas aayi aur..


MAHI-kya bola tumne...jheel me bina try kare hi naa doob jaaun mai..!!

iska kya matlab hua..???

MAI-aisi hi thodi bohot soch aur samajh thi tumhare dad ki bhi..but ek difference bhi hai..!!!woh sawal puchne ke baad khud hi jawab bhi dhundh lete the aur saath hi saath uska solution bhi...

MAHI-kya baat hai..?? mere dad se nafrat karte ho aur ab unhi ki taarif bhi kar rahe ho...!!!

MAI-nafrat se sach toh nahi badal jaata.aur waise bhi,mai unki taarif nahi, tumhari kami bata raha tha...

MAHI-nazariye ki baat hai..tum meri kami bata rahe the aur mera dhyan dad ki taarif par tha..

but woh chhodo aur apne statement ka matlab batao..???

ab tak woh chaaron bhi humare paas aa chuke the, isiliye ek baar un sabko dekh..


MAI-yaad hai DESERT ke baad kis challenge ke bare me bataya tha maine..!!!

BRAWNY-haan, koi kaali jheel...

MAI-aur us jheel ka naam hai THE DROWNING LAKE...

HIDA-THE DROWNING LAKE...!!!!naam sunkar hi ghabrahat ho rahi hai..

MAI-honi bhi chahiye... kyunki naam me hi us lake ki khoobi chuppi hui hai...

DROWNING LAKE me swim nahi kiya jaa sakta...us lake ka paani usme utarne waale har praani aur jeev ko neeche kheench leta hai..

ab uske baad kya hota hai,ye toh us lake ke water ko touch karkar hi mai bata sakta hun..

ACCHUTA-bhai,aur batane ke liye bacha hi kya hai..ab ek baat toh obvious hi hai ki us lake ka paani bhi BLACK ENERGY se bhara hua hoga..

aur jaise hi koi usme doobta hoga, toh woh paani uske mooh ke through andar ghus usse khatm kar deta hoga..

SLUNDER-haan aur ho sakta hai ki paani ke andar deadly creatures bhi hon aur wahi us paani me utarne waale ko neeche pull karte hon.!!!

MAI-toh matlab aage nahi badhna hai..!!!

HIDA-kyun nahi badhna hai..bilkul badhenge...

MAI-then stop speculating and let's just walk there...


apni baat bol mai aage badh gaya aur woh sab bhi chup chaap mere piche ho liye...




THE DROWNING LAKE




OH SHIT...ISKA END KAHAN HAI.....???




kuch der chalne ke baad jab hum us DROWNING LAKE ke paas pahunche,toh us lake ke endless dimension ko dekh kahi ye baat BRAWNY ne...

jahan door door tak kaale paani se bhare us lake ko woh paanchon dekh rahe the wahin mai aage badha aur lake ke kinare par baith maine pehle wahan moujud paani ko touch kiya aur phir usme apna haath daal diya aur mere aisa karte hi...

jahan maine haath daala tha,us jagah ka paani kuch do hatheli jitna hi gehra tha par mere haath ke us gehrayi ke end point ko touch karte hi woh end part bhi aur neeche khisakne laga aur saath hi saath mere haath ko bhi apne saath neeche pull karne laga..

aisa hote hi maine turant apne haath se apni black energy ki ray release kar di..

aur jab maina aisa kiya toh achanak se hi naa sirf woh neeche khisakne waala part wapas uththe hue apni purani jagah par aa gaya balki mera haath bhi us pull se completely free ho gaya...

apni jagah par wapas khada ho chuka tha mai but aage kya karna hai,iska naa toh idea tha mujhe aur naahi koi plan..

mai toh apni kaali urja ki madad se aage badh sakta tha,but ye paanchon...!!

ye kaise paar karenge is jheel ko,main sawal toh yahi tha jiska filhal mere paas koi jawab nahi tha....

yahan mai ye sab soch raha tha aur wahan woh paanchon meri taraf dekh rahe the is ummid ke saath ki mai koi solution nikalunga...

par jab kuch der baad bhi mai apni sochon me gum raha toh MAHI mere paas aayi aur usne mere kandhe par haath rakha aur...


MAHI-kya hua RAAZ...!!!???kya soch rahe ho..???kya yahan se aage jaane ka koi tarika nahi sujh raha...???


MAHI ki baat sun usse dhyan se dekhte hue..


MAI-ab tak nahi sujha tha.. par shayad ab...!!!hold it....

apne ussi haath ko jisme jheel ka paani laga hua tha,usse aage karte hue kahi ye baat maine jisse samajh toh nahi paayi MAHI but phir bhi usne turant mere us haath ko hold kiya aur uske aisa karte hi....

ek tez sensation meri us hatheli par feel hui jisse mehsoos kar kuch pal ke liye meri aankhen kuch sochne ke andaaz se choti hui aur phir mai wapas mudte hue neeche jheel ke kinaare baith ussi haath ko jisse MAHI ne touch kiya tha,paani me daal diya aur mere aisa karte hi..

ek saath do chizen hui...

pehli...

mere aas paas ka paani vibrate hone laga jiski wajah se jahan pehle mera haath neeche pull ho raha tha,wahin ab uske ulat upar push hone laga..

dusri...

woh jagah jahan mera haath samaya tha,us hisse ka paani mere hatheli par aise tight hone laga tha maano meri hatheli hatheli naa hokar gardan ho aur woh paani us gardan ka gala daba raha ho...

maajra samajh chuka tha mai...aage badhne ka solution bhi mil chuka tha mujhe but woh solution hadh se zyada negetive tha...

but option aur kuch tha nahi aur jo tha,usse mujhe in paanchon ko batana tha isiliye mai wapas utha,un paanchon ki taraf ghuma aur....


MAI-aage badhne ka ek hi tarika hai...


meri baat sun ab tak jo tention un sabke face par thi, woh kam hoti chali gayi aur..


SLUNDER-haash...thank GOD...hume pata tha yaar ki tu koi na koi jugaad laga hi lega...

HIDA-obvio... after all he is RAAZ..the chosen one...

BRAWNY-bhai mai toh ye soch raha hun ki hum sabka dimag iski tarah kab chalega...!!!

ACCHUTA-arre iska jawab toh bohot simple hai..kabhi nahi....


jahan ACCHUTA ki baat sun woh teeno muskura diye wahin mera face jispar is waqt hadh se zyada seriousness dikh rahi thi,usse dekh MAHI ko andaza ho gaya ki jis tarike ki baat mai kar raha hun,woh mushkil toh hoga hi par saath hi saath negetive bhi..

aur isiliye..


MAHI-kya baat hai RAAZ..!!! tarika tough hai yaa kuch zyada hi tough hai..


MAHI ki baat sun un chaaron ka dhyan bhi mere face par gaya jisse dekh woh sab bhi wapas halke tensed dikhne lage..

wahin MAHI ki baat sun..


MAI-tarika tough nahi hai,faisla hai aur woh faisla tumhe lena hai....

MAHI-please be specific RAAZ...

MAI-ye jo jheel ka paani hai,ye normal paani de zyada thick hai..

SLUNDER-haan toh isme BLACK ENERGY ka AURA mixed hoga isiliye..

MAI-nope.. AURA power badhata hau,thickness nahi...


ASMODEUS aur tumhare PITAH ke beech jo fake fight hui, usme jitne bhi DEVILS maare gaye,un sabka khun mila hai is paani me...

isiliye is paani ki thickness zyada hai...


meri baat aur revalation ko sun aankhen hairat se badi ho gayi un sabki aur saath hi saath meri aage ki baat kitni negetive ho sakti hai,iska bhi ek anjana dar se bhara andaza ho chuka tha un sabko...

wahin apni baat ko aage badhate hue...


MAI-woh saare DEVIL'S directly ASMODEUS ke DEVILISH swaroop se bane the..

ek tarah se ye kehna galat nahi hoga ki woh sab ASMODEUS ke DEMONIC descendents the...

isiliye un sabke blood me bhi woh urja thi jo ASMODEUS ke negetive side me thi...

wahi urja ab is paani me bhi hai jisse dodge nahi diya jaa sakta....

MAHI-tarika nahi bataya tumne ab tak...!!!


MAHI ke sawal ki sun ek pal dekha maine usse aur phir...


RAAZ-YOU HAVE TO DIE....


jahan meri baat sun MAHI normal hi rahi aur woh isiliye kyunki usse meri pichli kahi baaton se aisa hi kuch hone ka andaza ho chuka tha wahin ACCHUTA, SLUNDER, HIDA aur BRAWNY ekdum se hadbada gaye aur..


HIDA-ye kya bol rahe ho RAAZ...??

MAHI-wahi jo sach hai...aur guyzz,is tarike ke implication par koi melo drama nahi...

is quest ko pura karna,yahi hum sabka ek maatra moto hai aur agar aisa karne ke liye mere marne ki zaroorat hai,toh aisa hi hoga...


MAHI ki baat sun un sabke face par laachari saaf dikhne lagi..MAHI ne jo kaha tha,woh ek tarah se un chaaron ke liye end of discussion tha,ye samajh gaye the woh sab par sawal toh the hi un sabke man me aur isiliye..


HIDA-but why only MAHI....???humme se bhi toh koi ye kurbaani de sakta hai...!!!

MAI-nope..it has to be MAHI...

CHAARON-par kyun..???

MAI-MAHI ke us AURA ko jo usne DARK SPACE ke bahar release kiya tha,kya usse sense kiya tha tum sabne...!!!???(ANGELS FORM ENERGY SOURCE)

CHAARON-haan..

MAI-wahi AURA aur power source hi is paani aur shakti ko divert kar sakta hai..

ACCHUTA-par MAHI ka woh AURA yahan INFERIOR WORLD me kaam nahi kar raha hai...

MAI-kaam karwana hai bhi nahi..bas us AURA ko apne body me circulate karwana hai.

aur ye kaam MAHI ko is paani me utarne ke baad karna hai.

iske waisa karte hi is pure jheel me faila DEMONIC BLOOD apni saari shakti ke saath MAHI ko yahan ke paani me drown karega...

saath hi ispar alag tarah se humla bhi karega..

us waqt is pure jheel me faila gravitational pull sirf MAHI ke position par focused rahega...

baaki jheel ka har part normal ho jaayega...us waqt hum sab is jheel ko paar kar sakte hain....


saari baatein bohot casually bol di thi maine jisse sun aur zyada depressed feel karne lage the woh sab par unme se koi kuch kehta ki tabhi..


MAHI-guyzz, RAAZ sahi hai..sirf yahi ek raasta hai..

HIDA-but MAHI...

MAHI-end of discussion...toh RAAZ,kya mai paani me utrun....!!!

MAI-thoda door jaakar...


meri baat sun kuch pal MAHI mujhe dekhti rahi...meri bhi aankhen uspar hi tiki thi..

khair,kuch der tak yun eye gaze karte rehne ke baad maine apni aankhen uspar se hata li jiske baad
MAHI bina kuch bole lake ke kinare chalte hue humse thoda door jaane lagi..

is beech mere sharir se chaar bade bade ropes nikle jinhone un chaaron ko mujhse baandh sa diya..

woh sab samajh chuke the ki maine aisa isiliye kiya tha taaki apne saath un sabko kheechte hue tezi se paani me aage badh sakun..

par is beech jab un sabne ek baar phirse us anthhin jheel ko dekha toh...


HIDA-itni lambi jheel paar karne me kitna waqt lag jaayega..???

MAI-ye dikh rahi lambayi ek illusion hai.. length itni zyada badi bhi nahi hai..

maximum 2 minute me hum jheel ke dusri taraf honge...

jab tak meri baat khatm hui,MAHI humse kaafi door jaakar ek jagah par khadi ho chuki thi aur aisa kar usne meri taraf dekha jispar haan me sir hilaya maine aur mere aisa karte hi MAHI apni aankhon ko band karte hue ek chhalang maarte us jheel me kood padi aur uske aisa karte hi...

SHSHSHSHSHSHHH....

pure jheel ke paani me tez leher uthne lagi jo is baat ka suboot tha ki MAHI ne apne ANGEL FORM POWER SOURCE ko apne body me shrug off kar diya tha...

uske waisa karne ki wajah se pure jheel ke paani me mila hua pure DEMONIC BLOOD MAHI ko pehchan gaya aur phir apni puri taakat ke saath woh shakti MAHI ki taraf badh chali thi...

wahin jaise hi maine jheel me uth rahe leher ko dekha toh mai samah gaya ki ab sirf MAHI ke aas paas waale portion me hi saara gravitational pull hoga jiska matlab tha ki now is the time when we should take off aur isiliye....


JAL BHEDAM

WATER PENETRATION


aage hawa me tezi se kudte hue is SPELL ko uccharit kiya maine jiske baad mera sharir kisi rocket ki tarah ek tez forward push ke saath
jheel me jump maar gaya aur mere saath hi bandhe hue woh chaaron bhi ek dhakke ke saath mere piche ho liye...

hum sab behadh tezi se paani ke upari satah par tairte hue aage badhne lage..

woh chaaron mere piche the aur baar baar tez speed ki wajah se unke sir paani ke andar chale jaa rahe the..

kisi tarah khudka balance banaye rakhe hue woh sab apne sir ko upar rakhne ki koshish kar rahe the..

is beech hum kaafi aage nikal chuke the aur aisa hote hi kuch der pehle meri kahi baat ka sach un chaaron ko dikhne laga..

jheel ki anthhin lambayi wakayi ek illusion thi aur ab woh ye dekh aur samajh paa rahe the...

hamare lagatar aage badhte rehne se woh faila hua illusion haththne laga tha jiski wajah se kaafi door hi sahi par hum sabko jheel ka dusra kinara dikhne laga tha...

us kinare ko dekhte hue meri speed aur badh gayi jiski wajah se bas 1 minute ke andar hi hum us river bank ke paas the..

aur jab dusri taraf ka surface humse bas kuch metres ki hi doori ka reh gaya toh maine ek baar phirse jump maari jiski wajah se meri aur mere piche un sabki body upar hawa me uththe chali gayi..

par is baar mere jump se release hui pressure zyada thi jiski wajah se woh sab jo ab tak mujhse bandhe mere piche the,un sabki bodies ko ek jhatka laga jiski wajah se woh tezi se mere upar se hote hue aage nikal gaye..

aisa hote hi maine woh ropes jinse woh sab bandhe hue the,woh gayab kar di thi..

khair,mujhe upar ki taraf se cross karte hue woh sab jheel ke dusri taraf ke surface par roll karte hue gire par girte hi woh sab turant uth chuke the..

wahin upar uchalte hue mai apne pairon par hi zamin par aaya tha..

landing bhale hi meri aur un sabki alag thi par land hone ke baad jo reaction aaya,woh hum paanchon ka ek hi tha..

aur woh reaction tha hum sabka ek saath us disha ki taraf dekhna jahan MAHI ne jump kiya tha...

aur kyunki illusion is taraf se nahi tha, isiliye woh disha,woh point hume dikh raha tha...

kuch der pehle jab hum lake ke dusri taraf the aur MAHI paani me koodi thi,tab jo leher pure lake par uth raha tha,abhi woh saara leher joki DEMONIC BLOOD ki shakti se bana tha,woh theek ussi point par uth raha tha jahan MAHI ne jump kiya tha..

aur iska sirf ek hi matlab ho sakta tha..woh saari demonic shaktiyan,MAHI par haawi ho chuki thi...

ab mai MAHI ke paas pahunch toh sakta tha nahi par MAHI ki halaat mehsoos zaroor kar sakta tha aur isiliye mai turant wapas paani ke paas pahuncha aur usme haath daal apni aankhen band kar pure lake me ho rahi movement ko mehsoos karne lag gaya aur jo scene mere aankhon ke saamne aaya,woh bilkul bhi positive nahi tha....

MAHI....jo kuch der pehle us paani me koodi thi..uske koodne par jaise hi uske sharir me beh rahi ANGEL'S FORM POWER SOURCE aur lake se jude DEMONIC BLOOD ka connection hua toh woh saara blood aur uski shakti ek saath MAHI ke ird gird jama hui aur jab aisa hua toh paani ka woh hissa jisme MAHI kudi thi aur jiski gehrayi bas 6 feet hi thi,achanak hi woh area kisi samandar ke anthhin dept jitna gehra ho gaya jisme MAHI tezi se dubti chali gayi..

saath hi saath us lake ke paani ke blood particles ne MAHI ke sharir ko bhedhne ki koshish ki par woh aisa karne me kaamiyab nahi ho paayi aur tab un particles ne khudko ek zanjeer ka roop aur sakhti dete hue MAHI ko khudme lapetne shuru kar diya..

aisa hote hi MAHI ka sharir jakadne laga aur saath hi saath uska gala bhi ghutne laga..

par woh DEMONIC BLOOD PARTICLES itne me hi nahi rooke..

unhone apna deadly AURA MAHI ke sharir me touch karana shuru kiya aur jab aisa hua toh MAHI ke body me ghum rahi uski ANGEL'S FORM POWER SOURCE tadap uthi...

woh turant MAHI ke sharir ke andruni bhaag me pahunch bachne ke kiye tezi se idhar udhar ghumne lagi par us DEMONIC BLOOD PARTICLES ka asar itna strong tha ki usse rahat nahi mili..

aur tab us POWER SOURCE ke paas khudko surakshit rakhne ka ek hi tarika dikha...

aisa tarika jo MAHI ke HUMAN FORM POWER SOURCE ke liye bilkul theek nahi tha..

woh ANGELS FORM POWER SOURCE MAHI ke chaaron AMPLIFICATION modes ke andar penetrate karne lagi aur jab aisa hua toh...

BHAKKKKKKK.....

MAHI ke body ka saara andruni system hil gaya jiski wajah se MAHI ke mooh se khoon ki ek moti dhaar nikal paani me fail gayi...

par ye toh external damage ka asar tha..asli damage toh MAHI ke andar ho rahi thi..

jaise hi MAHI ke chaaron AMPLIFICATION modes me ANGEL'S FORM POWER SOURCE touch hui,toh woh saare modes kaam karna band karne lage...

blood flow dheere ho gaya jo kisi bhi waqt completely rookne waala tha...

brain cells dead hone lage...body dheere dheere jalne lagi aur SOUL...

SOUL ki shakti aur uski urja,dono hi khatm hone lagi...

MAHI ki aankh aur uske saath uska saara thinking system band hone laga..

mout ke kagar par pahunch gayi MAHI aur jaisa ki aksar is state me pahunchte waqt hota hai,wahi MAHI ke band hote brain me dikhne laga..

woh maa baap jinhe usne kabhi dekha hi nahi,unka dhundla aks...FLORIN,MARIA,uske saare dost aur aakhir me RAAZ....

ye sab dekhte hue MAHI ke dard se bhare face par bhi ek smile naach uthi aur...


MAHI-


jaisa itihaas mere PITAH ne racha tha, mai waisa RACH NAA SAKI....

jo teri(RAAZ) aankhon ko mujhme baandh de, mai waisa SAJH NAA SAKI...

dimag bhi haar gaya aur dil bhi....

bohot kuch karna baaki tha,par afsos,kuch karne ke liye mai BACH NAA SAKI.....

















AAJ KE LIYE ITNA HI.....

















AAPKA APNA V...J....
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AB TAK AAPNE PADHA KI JAHAN EK TARAF VISION SERPENT KE FIRST LAYERED BODY KO HIDA, ACCHUTA,SLUNDER, BRAWNY AUR MAHI MILKAR KHATM KAR DETE HAIN WAHIN DUSRI TARAF RAAZ US SERPENT KE SECOND AUR FINAL LAYER KO MITA USSE PURI TARAH SE KHATM KAR DETA HAI.


AB AAGE:-



CHAPTER-3


(THE DEVIL'S HAVEN,THE SACRIFICE & THE PERFECT EPILOGUE)



UPDATE-142



PLANET-ELYSIAN


PLACE-THE INFERIOR LEVEL





THE QUEST CONTINOUS


THIRD CHALLENGE:THE DRAWNING LAKE






CHEHRE PAR HADH SE ZYADA THAKAN,PAIR THEEK SE UTH NAHI RAHE,I AM SURE NASEN CHADH CHUKI HONGI,PASINA PAANI SE ZYADA NIKAL RAHA HAI,HALKA HALKA DIHYDRATION PROCESS BHI SHURU HO CHUKA HAI...

PHYSICALLY ITNI TORMENTED SITUATION ME HONE KE BAAD BHI MUJHE AISA KYUN LAG RAHA HAI KI TAKLIF PYSICAL SE ZYADA MENTAL HO RAHI HAI TUM SABKO..!!!


un paancho ko dekh kahi thi maine ye baat...

REASON....

5 km lambe pathrile registaan ko jiske surface me ek ajeeb sa gravitational pull tha,paar kar finally jab humne us desert ka daayra paar kar hi liya..

aur aisa hote hi woh paanchon lambi lambi saans lete hue neeche kaali ghaans se bhare zamin me baith apni thakaan ko mitane ki koshish karne lage..

par pyscically itne negetive haalat me hone ke baad bhi un sabki aankhon se ek dusri hi taklif aur chehre se ek alag hi udasi chhalak rahi aur ussiko dekh kahi thi maine ye baat jispar un sabne kuch kaha nahi,bas sir jhukaye lambi saansein lete rahe jispar...


MAI-doctor se kuch bhi chhupana sahi nahi hota guyzzz....

MAHI-kya baat hai RAAZ...???jo hamesha jaan lene par utaaru rehta hai,woh aaj khudko jaan bachane waale doctor se compare kar raha hai...

MAI-har doctor jaan bachane ke liye medicine nahi karta MAHI..kuch,infact zyadatar log isiliye medicine karte hain kyunki is line me paise bohot hain...

aur aise doctors,unka mariz jiyega yaa marega,ye us mariz ki pysical strength nahi,balki uski financial strength se tay karte hain...

faayda agar unka hai,toh hi sahi maayne me woh doctors bante hain...

bottom line,mai bhi us tarike ka hi doctor hun...filhal tum sabse mujhe faayda hi hai, isiliye puch liya...

ACCHUTA-bhai tu logic kahan kahan se dhund kar laata hai..???saala selfishness ko bhi sach ke paani me dubokar aise pesh karta hai ki naa toh us selfishness ko hazam kar sakte hain aur naahi bole gaye sach se debate...

MAI-meri taarif chhod,apni aur in sabki taklif bata...achanak aisa kya ho gaya ki jahan tum sab pehle hadh se zyada excited aur motivated the,wahin kuch der se demoralised lagne lage ho..???

MAHI-upar se apne saath paanch paanch kamzoriyan saath lekar chal rahe ho...!!!!


VIRAZ ki un sabke liye kahi baat repeat ki MAHI ne jisse sun...


MAI-ohho....so he successfully played you all,haan..!!!

MAHI-played..!!!he only spilled the truth out RAAZ...sach hi toh kaha tha usne...hum sab is safar me,is quest me tumhare liye sirf extra baggages aur kamzoriyan hi toh hain...

agar tum last chunouti ke beech nahi aate,toh we all would have been dead...

MAI-but you are not...

MAHI-sirf tumhari wajah se...

MAI-humari har saans chalne ke peeche ek wajah hoti hai...kya har wajah ko talash khudko blame karti ho tum...!!!

ye yaad raha tum sabko ki ab tak tumne underperform kiya hai,par ye yaad nahi raha ki situations tumhare excel karne ke hain hi nahi..

aur naahi tumhare paas tum sabki full grown shaktiyan hain jiski madad se tum yahan apne dum par survive kar sako...

ek hi chiz hai...ATTITUDE....woh ATTITUDE jiske dum par yahan aane ka aur ladhne ka faisla kiya tha tum sab ne...

par ye dekhkar ajeeb lag raha hai ki ek waana be RAAZ ne apne manupaltive baaton se tum sabke us ATTITUDE ko hi hila diya..

ACCHUTA, SLUNDER, BRAWNY, HIDA...bhul gaye kya tum chaaron ki tum sabko GOD ne SAVENT banane ke blessings ke saath alag se bhi POWER GIFTS diye hain...

haan, bhale hi woh powers aaj locked hain,par hain toh tumhare andar hi...

tum sab aaj bhi blessed ho..par har blessing tabhi kaam me aati hai jab uspar bharosa kiya jaaye..

aur yahan toh blessings tum sab khud hi ho...khud par bharosa rakhna hai tumhe...

and MAHI...i dont think ki mujhe tumhe gyan dene ki zaroorat hai...

gyan ka bhandaar toh tumhe viraasat me mila hai...(VIKRAM)


halka mock karte hue kahi ye baat maine MAHI ko jisse sun itne der se depressed dikh rahi MAHI ke face par bhi smile aa gayi..

saath hi saath apne dad ki yaad aate hi uska saara demotivation jaata raha...

it was just the matter of time and patience...uske baad toh she will be unstoppable,jaanti toh thi woh ye baat but ab samajhne bhi lagi thi...

khair,apni baat ko aage badhate hue..


MAI-jaise is DEVIL'S HAVEN ko penetrate karna mera quest hai,thik waise hi khudpar bharosa karna, VIDEOUS aur VIRAAZ ke har demotivation ko dodge karna, tum sabka quest hai...

beat them by beating your negetiveness....

ye ek jungle hai guyzz...aur jungle ka ek hi niyam hota hai..SURVIVE...

aur is baat se fark nahi padta ki survive kaise kiya jaa raha hai..just hang on,har chiz apne place par pahunchne lagegi..

ACCHUTA-nahi pahunchegi toh pahuncha denge...


purane form ne aate hue kahi ye baat ACCHUTA ne aur phir mujhe hug karne meri taraf aane laga par tabhi mai ghumte hue aage badh gaya aur...


MAI-ab chalo guyzz...next challenge is waiting for us...

ACCHUTA-saala pehle motivate karke emotional kar diya aur phir khud nikal liya..


ACCHUTA ki baat sun baaki chaaron has diye aur woh sab bhi mere piche ho liye..

wahin MAHI thoda tez aage badhi aur mere baaju me pahunch...


MAHI-thanks...

MAI-kisliye..!!!maine pehle bhi kaha tha ki...

MAHI-jo bhi tumne kaha,woh sirf isiliye kaha kyunki isme tumhara faayda hai..i get it...

par aag bhi toh garam hota hai..jalane ka kaam karta hai..lekin wahi aag jab thand me jalta hai toh sharir ko sukoon pahunchata hai..

kuch der pehle hum sabka mind set ussi cold weather me lagne waali thand ki tarah tha aur tumhari baatein,us thand me sukoon dene waali aag ki tarah thi..

MAI-bilkul apne baap ki tarah ho...unki tarah har situation me positiveness ki noutanki karne ki aadat hai tumhe...

MAHI-i will take that as a big compliment...

waise RAAZ...tum toh unki urja se bane ho..tum toh unki har baat ko ,unki soch,samajh,har chiz ko feel karte hoge..

kuch batao naa unke aise tough situations ko deal karne ke tarike ke baare me...

MAI-usse pehle aage aane waale jheel me bina try kare hi naa doob jaaun mai...!!!


jahan apni baat bol mai aage badh gaya wahin MAHI pehle muskurayi par phir uske face se smile gayab hote hue sudden seriousness aa gayi..

woh turant mere paas aayi aur..


MAHI-kya bola tumne...jheel me bina try kare hi naa doob jaaun mai..!!

iska kya matlab hua..???

MAI-aisi hi thodi bohot soch aur samajh thi tumhare dad ki bhi..but ek difference bhi hai..!!!woh sawal puchne ke baad khud hi jawab bhi dhundh lete the aur saath hi saath uska solution bhi...

MAHI-kya baat hai..?? mere dad se nafrat karte ho aur ab unhi ki taarif bhi kar rahe ho...!!!

MAI-nafrat se sach toh nahi badal jaata.aur waise bhi,mai unki taarif nahi, tumhari kami bata raha tha...

MAHI-nazariye ki baat hai..tum meri kami bata rahe the aur mera dhyan dad ki taarif par tha..

but woh chhodo aur apne statement ka matlab batao..???

ab tak woh chaaron bhi humare paas aa chuke the, isiliye ek baar un sabko dekh..


MAI-yaad hai DESERT ke baad kis challenge ke bare me bataya tha maine..!!!

BRAWNY-haan, koi kaali jheel...

MAI-aur us jheel ka naam hai THE DROWNING LAKE...

HIDA-THE DROWNING LAKE...!!!!naam sunkar hi ghabrahat ho rahi hai..

MAI-honi bhi chahiye... kyunki naam me hi us lake ki khoobi chuppi hui hai...

DROWNING LAKE me swim nahi kiya jaa sakta...us lake ka paani usme utarne waale har praani aur jeev ko neeche kheench leta hai..

ab uske baad kya hota hai,ye toh us lake ke water ko touch karkar hi mai bata sakta hun..

ACCHUTA-bhai,aur batane ke liye bacha hi kya hai..ab ek baat toh obvious hi hai ki us lake ka paani bhi BLACK ENERGY se bhara hua hoga..

aur jaise hi koi usme doobta hoga, toh woh paani uske mooh ke through andar ghus usse khatm kar deta hoga..

SLUNDER-haan aur ho sakta hai ki paani ke andar deadly creatures bhi hon aur wahi us paani me utarne waale ko neeche pull karte hon.!!!

MAI-toh matlab aage nahi badhna hai..!!!

HIDA-kyun nahi badhna hai..bilkul badhenge...

MAI-then stop speculating and let's just walk there...


apni baat bol mai aage badh gaya aur woh sab bhi chup chaap mere piche ho liye...




THE DROWNING LAKE




OH SHIT...ISKA END KAHAN HAI.....???




kuch der chalne ke baad jab hum us DROWNING LAKE ke paas pahunche,toh us lake ke endless dimension ko dekh kahi ye baat BRAWNY ne...

jahan door door tak kaale paani se bhare us lake ko woh paanchon dekh rahe the wahin mai aage badha aur lake ke kinare par baith maine pehle wahan moujud paani ko touch kiya aur phir usme apna haath daal diya aur mere aisa karte hi...

jahan maine haath daala tha,us jagah ka paani kuch do hatheli jitna hi gehra tha par mere haath ke us gehrayi ke end point ko touch karte hi woh end part bhi aur neeche khisakne laga aur saath hi saath mere haath ko bhi apne saath neeche pull karne laga..

aisa hote hi maine turant apne haath se apni black energy ki ray release kar di..

aur jab maina aisa kiya toh achanak se hi naa sirf woh neeche khisakne waala part wapas uththe hue apni purani jagah par aa gaya balki mera haath bhi us pull se completely free ho gaya...

apni jagah par wapas khada ho chuka tha mai but aage kya karna hai,iska naa toh idea tha mujhe aur naahi koi plan..

mai toh apni kaali urja ki madad se aage badh sakta tha,but ye paanchon...!!

ye kaise paar karenge is jheel ko,main sawal toh yahi tha jiska filhal mere paas koi jawab nahi tha....

yahan mai ye sab soch raha tha aur wahan woh paanchon meri taraf dekh rahe the is ummid ke saath ki mai koi solution nikalunga...

par jab kuch der baad bhi mai apni sochon me gum raha toh MAHI mere paas aayi aur usne mere kandhe par haath rakha aur...


MAHI-kya hua RAAZ...!!!???kya soch rahe ho..???kya yahan se aage jaane ka koi tarika nahi sujh raha...???


MAHI ki baat sun usse dhyan se dekhte hue..


MAI-ab tak nahi sujha tha.. par shayad ab...!!!hold it....

apne ussi haath ko jisme jheel ka paani laga hua tha,usse aage karte hue kahi ye baat maine jisse samajh toh nahi paayi MAHI but phir bhi usne turant mere us haath ko hold kiya aur uske aisa karte hi....

ek tez sensation meri us hatheli par feel hui jisse mehsoos kar kuch pal ke liye meri aankhen kuch sochne ke andaaz se choti hui aur phir mai wapas mudte hue neeche jheel ke kinaare baith ussi haath ko jisse MAHI ne touch kiya tha,paani me daal diya aur mere aisa karte hi..

ek saath do chizen hui...

pehli...

mere aas paas ka paani vibrate hone laga jiski wajah se jahan pehle mera haath neeche pull ho raha tha,wahin ab uske ulat upar push hone laga..

dusri...

woh jagah jahan mera haath samaya tha,us hisse ka paani mere hatheli par aise tight hone laga tha maano meri hatheli hatheli naa hokar gardan ho aur woh paani us gardan ka gala daba raha ho...

maajra samajh chuka tha mai...aage badhne ka solution bhi mil chuka tha mujhe but woh solution hadh se zyada negetive tha...

but option aur kuch tha nahi aur jo tha,usse mujhe in paanchon ko batana tha isiliye mai wapas utha,un paanchon ki taraf ghuma aur....


MAI-aage badhne ka ek hi tarika hai...


meri baat sun ab tak jo tention un sabke face par thi, woh kam hoti chali gayi aur..


SLUNDER-haash...thank GOD...hume pata tha yaar ki tu koi na koi jugaad laga hi lega...

HIDA-obvio... after all he is RAAZ..the chosen one...

BRAWNY-bhai mai toh ye soch raha hun ki hum sabka dimag iski tarah kab chalega...!!!

ACCHUTA-arre iska jawab toh bohot simple hai..kabhi nahi....


jahan ACCHUTA ki baat sun woh teeno muskura diye wahin mera face jispar is waqt hadh se zyada seriousness dikh rahi thi,usse dekh MAHI ko andaza ho gaya ki jis tarike ki baat mai kar raha hun,woh mushkil toh hoga hi par saath hi saath negetive bhi..

aur isiliye..


MAHI-kya baat hai RAAZ..!!! tarika tough hai yaa kuch zyada hi tough hai..


MAHI ki baat sun un chaaron ka dhyan bhi mere face par gaya jisse dekh woh sab bhi wapas halke tensed dikhne lage..

wahin MAHI ki baat sun..


MAI-tarika tough nahi hai,faisla hai aur woh faisla tumhe lena hai....

MAHI-please be specific RAAZ...

MAI-ye jo jheel ka paani hai,ye normal paani de zyada thick hai..

SLUNDER-haan toh isme BLACK ENERGY ka AURA mixed hoga isiliye..

MAI-nope.. AURA power badhata hau,thickness nahi...


ASMODEUS aur tumhare PITAH ke beech jo fake fight hui, usme jitne bhi DEVILS maare gaye,un sabka khun mila hai is paani me...

isiliye is paani ki thickness zyada hai...


meri baat aur revalation ko sun aankhen hairat se badi ho gayi un sabki aur saath hi saath meri aage ki baat kitni negetive ho sakti hai,iska bhi ek anjana dar se bhara andaza ho chuka tha un sabko...

wahin apni baat ko aage badhate hue...


MAI-woh saare DEVIL'S directly ASMODEUS ke DEVILISH swaroop se bane the..

ek tarah se ye kehna galat nahi hoga ki woh sab ASMODEUS ke DEMONIC descendents the...

isiliye un sabke blood me bhi woh urja thi jo ASMODEUS ke negetive side me thi...

wahi urja ab is paani me bhi hai jisse dodge nahi diya jaa sakta....

MAHI-tarika nahi bataya tumne ab tak...!!!


MAHI ke sawal ki sun ek pal dekha maine usse aur phir...


RAAZ-YOU HAVE TO DIE....


jahan meri baat sun MAHI normal hi rahi aur woh isiliye kyunki usse meri pichli kahi baaton se aisa hi kuch hone ka andaza ho chuka tha wahin ACCHUTA, SLUNDER, HIDA aur BRAWNY ekdum se hadbada gaye aur..


HIDA-ye kya bol rahe ho RAAZ...??

MAHI-wahi jo sach hai...aur guyzz,is tarike ke implication par koi melo drama nahi...

is quest ko pura karna,yahi hum sabka ek maatra moto hai aur agar aisa karne ke liye mere marne ki zaroorat hai,toh aisa hi hoga...


MAHI ki baat sun un sabke face par laachari saaf dikhne lagi..MAHI ne jo kaha tha,woh ek tarah se un chaaron ke liye end of discussion tha,ye samajh gaye the woh sab par sawal toh the hi un sabke man me aur isiliye..


HIDA-but why only MAHI....???humme se bhi toh koi ye kurbaani de sakta hai...!!!

MAI-nope..it has to be MAHI...

CHAARON-par kyun..???

MAI-MAHI ke us AURA ko jo usne DARK SPACE ke bahar release kiya tha,kya usse sense kiya tha tum sabne...!!!???(ANGELS FORM ENERGY SOURCE)

CHAARON-haan..

MAI-wahi AURA aur power source hi is paani aur shakti ko divert kar sakta hai..

ACCHUTA-par MAHI ka woh AURA yahan INFERIOR WORLD me kaam nahi kar raha hai...

MAI-kaam karwana hai bhi nahi..bas us AURA ko apne body me circulate karwana hai.

aur ye kaam MAHI ko is paani me utarne ke baad karna hai.

iske waisa karte hi is pure jheel me faila DEMONIC BLOOD apni saari shakti ke saath MAHI ko yahan ke paani me drown karega...

saath hi ispar alag tarah se humla bhi karega..

us waqt is pure jheel me faila gravitational pull sirf MAHI ke position par focused rahega...

baaki jheel ka har part normal ho jaayega...us waqt hum sab is jheel ko paar kar sakte hain....


saari baatein bohot casually bol di thi maine jisse sun aur zyada depressed feel karne lage the woh sab par unme se koi kuch kehta ki tabhi..


MAHI-guyzz, RAAZ sahi hai..sirf yahi ek raasta hai..

HIDA-but MAHI...

MAHI-end of discussion...toh RAAZ,kya mai paani me utrun....!!!

MAI-thoda door jaakar...


meri baat sun kuch pal MAHI mujhe dekhti rahi...meri bhi aankhen uspar hi tiki thi..

khair,kuch der tak yun eye gaze karte rehne ke baad maine apni aankhen uspar se hata li jiske baad
MAHI bina kuch bole lake ke kinare chalte hue humse thoda door jaane lagi..

is beech mere sharir se chaar bade bade ropes nikle jinhone un chaaron ko mujhse baandh sa diya..

woh sab samajh chuke the ki maine aisa isiliye kiya tha taaki apne saath un sabko kheechte hue tezi se paani me aage badh sakun..

par is beech jab un sabne ek baar phirse us anthhin jheel ko dekha toh...


HIDA-itni lambi jheel paar karne me kitna waqt lag jaayega..???

MAI-ye dikh rahi lambayi ek illusion hai.. length itni zyada badi bhi nahi hai..

maximum 2 minute me hum jheel ke dusri taraf honge...

jab tak meri baat khatm hui,MAHI humse kaafi door jaakar ek jagah par khadi ho chuki thi aur aisa kar usne meri taraf dekha jispar haan me sir hilaya maine aur mere aisa karte hi MAHI apni aankhon ko band karte hue ek chhalang maarte us jheel me kood padi aur uske aisa karte hi...

SHSHSHSHSHSHHH....

pure jheel ke paani me tez leher uthne lagi jo is baat ka suboot tha ki MAHI ne apne ANGEL FORM POWER SOURCE ko apne body me shrug off kar diya tha...

uske waisa karne ki wajah se pure jheel ke paani me mila hua pure DEMONIC BLOOD MAHI ko pehchan gaya aur phir apni puri taakat ke saath woh shakti MAHI ki taraf badh chali thi...

wahin jaise hi maine jheel me uth rahe leher ko dekha toh mai samah gaya ki ab sirf MAHI ke aas paas waale portion me hi saara gravitational pull hoga jiska matlab tha ki now is the time when we should take off aur isiliye....


JAL BHEDAM

WATER PENETRATION


aage hawa me tezi se kudte hue is SPELL ko uccharit kiya maine jiske baad mera sharir kisi rocket ki tarah ek tez forward push ke saath
jheel me jump maar gaya aur mere saath hi bandhe hue woh chaaron bhi ek dhakke ke saath mere piche ho liye...

hum sab behadh tezi se paani ke upari satah par tairte hue aage badhne lage..

woh chaaron mere piche the aur baar baar tez speed ki wajah se unke sir paani ke andar chale jaa rahe the..

kisi tarah khudka balance banaye rakhe hue woh sab apne sir ko upar rakhne ki koshish kar rahe the..

is beech hum kaafi aage nikal chuke the aur aisa hote hi kuch der pehle meri kahi baat ka sach un chaaron ko dikhne laga..

jheel ki anthhin lambayi wakayi ek illusion thi aur ab woh ye dekh aur samajh paa rahe the...

hamare lagatar aage badhte rehne se woh faila hua illusion haththne laga tha jiski wajah se kaafi door hi sahi par hum sabko jheel ka dusra kinara dikhne laga tha...

us kinare ko dekhte hue meri speed aur badh gayi jiski wajah se bas 1 minute ke andar hi hum us river bank ke paas the..

aur jab dusri taraf ka surface humse bas kuch metres ki hi doori ka reh gaya toh maine ek baar phirse jump maari jiski wajah se meri aur mere piche un sabki body upar hawa me uththe chali gayi..

par is baar mere jump se release hui pressure zyada thi jiski wajah se woh sab jo ab tak mujhse bandhe mere piche the,un sabki bodies ko ek jhatka laga jiski wajah se woh tezi se mere upar se hote hue aage nikal gaye..

aisa hote hi maine woh ropes jinse woh sab bandhe hue the,woh gayab kar di thi..

khair,mujhe upar ki taraf se cross karte hue woh sab jheel ke dusri taraf ke surface par roll karte hue gire par girte hi woh sab turant uth chuke the..

wahin upar uchalte hue mai apne pairon par hi zamin par aaya tha..

landing bhale hi meri aur un sabki alag thi par land hone ke baad jo reaction aaya,woh hum paanchon ka ek hi tha..

aur woh reaction tha hum sabka ek saath us disha ki taraf dekhna jahan MAHI ne jump kiya tha...

aur kyunki illusion is taraf se nahi tha, isiliye woh disha,woh point hume dikh raha tha...

kuch der pehle jab hum lake ke dusri taraf the aur MAHI paani me koodi thi,tab jo leher pure lake par uth raha tha,abhi woh saara leher joki DEMONIC BLOOD ki shakti se bana tha,woh theek ussi point par uth raha tha jahan MAHI ne jump kiya tha..

aur iska sirf ek hi matlab ho sakta tha..woh saari demonic shaktiyan,MAHI par haawi ho chuki thi...

ab mai MAHI ke paas pahunch toh sakta tha nahi par MAHI ki halaat mehsoos zaroor kar sakta tha aur isiliye mai turant wapas paani ke paas pahuncha aur usme haath daal apni aankhen band kar pure lake me ho rahi movement ko mehsoos karne lag gaya aur jo scene mere aankhon ke saamne aaya,woh bilkul bhi positive nahi tha....

MAHI....jo kuch der pehle us paani me koodi thi..uske koodne par jaise hi uske sharir me beh rahi ANGEL'S FORM POWER SOURCE aur lake se jude DEMONIC BLOOD ka connection hua toh woh saara blood aur uski shakti ek saath MAHI ke ird gird jama hui aur jab aisa hua toh paani ka woh hissa jisme MAHI kudi thi aur jiski gehrayi bas 6 feet hi thi,achanak hi woh area kisi samandar ke anthhin dept jitna gehra ho gaya jisme MAHI tezi se dubti chali gayi..

saath hi saath us lake ke paani ke blood particles ne MAHI ke sharir ko bhedhne ki koshish ki par woh aisa karne me kaamiyab nahi ho paayi aur tab un particles ne khudko ek zanjeer ka roop aur sakhti dete hue MAHI ko khudme lapetne shuru kar diya..

aisa hote hi MAHI ka sharir jakadne laga aur saath hi saath uska gala bhi ghutne laga..

par woh DEMONIC BLOOD PARTICLES itne me hi nahi rooke..

unhone apna deadly AURA MAHI ke sharir me touch karana shuru kiya aur jab aisa hua toh MAHI ke body me ghum rahi uski ANGEL'S FORM POWER SOURCE tadap uthi...

woh turant MAHI ke sharir ke andruni bhaag me pahunch bachne ke kiye tezi se idhar udhar ghumne lagi par us DEMONIC BLOOD PARTICLES ka asar itna strong tha ki usse rahat nahi mili..

aur tab us POWER SOURCE ke paas khudko surakshit rakhne ka ek hi tarika dikha...

aisa tarika jo MAHI ke HUMAN FORM POWER SOURCE ke liye bilkul theek nahi tha..

woh ANGELS FORM POWER SOURCE MAHI ke chaaron AMPLIFICATION modes ke andar penetrate karne lagi aur jab aisa hua toh...

BHAKKKKKKK.....

MAHI ke body ka saara andruni system hil gaya jiski wajah se MAHI ke mooh se khoon ki ek moti dhaar nikal paani me fail gayi...

par ye toh external damage ka asar tha..asli damage toh MAHI ke andar ho rahi thi..

jaise hi MAHI ke chaaron AMPLIFICATION modes me ANGEL'S FORM POWER SOURCE touch hui,toh woh saare modes kaam karna band karne lage...

blood flow dheere ho gaya jo kisi bhi waqt completely rookne waala tha...

brain cells dead hone lage...body dheere dheere jalne lagi aur SOUL...

SOUL ki shakti aur uski urja,dono hi khatm hone lagi...

MAHI ki aankh aur uske saath uska saara thinking system band hone laga..

mout ke kagar par pahunch gayi MAHI aur jaisa ki aksar is state me pahunchte waqt hota hai,wahi MAHI ke band hote brain me dikhne laga..

woh maa baap jinhe usne kabhi dekha hi nahi,unka dhundla aks...FLORIN,MARIA,uske saare dost aur aakhir me RAAZ....

ye sab dekhte hue MAHI ke dard se bhare face par bhi ek smile naach uthi aur...


MAHI-


jaisa itihaas mere PITAH ne racha tha, mai waisa RACH NAA SAKI....

jo teri(RAAZ) aankhon ko mujhme baandh de, mai waisa SAJH NAA SAKI...

dimag bhi haar gaya aur dil bhi....

bohot kuch karna baaki tha,par afsos,kuch karne ke liye mai BACH NAA SAKI.....

















AAJ KE LIYE ITNA HI.....

















AAPKA APNA V...J....
Dhmakedar interesting shandar dhanso update
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AB TAK AAPNE PADHA KI JAHAN EK TARAF VISION SERPENT KE FIRST LAYERED BODY KO HIDA, ACCHUTA,SLUNDER, BRAWNY AUR MAHI MILKAR KHATM KAR DETE HAIN WAHIN DUSRI TARAF RAAZ US SERPENT KE SECOND AUR FINAL LAYER KO MITA USSE PURI TARAH SE KHATM KAR DETA HAI.


AB AAGE:-



CHAPTER-3


(THE DEVIL'S HAVEN,THE SACRIFICE & THE PERFECT EPILOGUE)



UPDATE-142



PLANET-ELYSIAN


PLACE-THE INFERIOR LEVEL





THE QUEST CONTINOUS


THIRD CHALLENGE:THE DRAWNING LAKE






CHEHRE PAR HADH SE ZYADA THAKAN,PAIR THEEK SE UTH NAHI RAHE,I AM SURE NASEN CHADH CHUKI HONGI,PASINA PAANI SE ZYADA NIKAL RAHA HAI,HALKA HALKA DIHYDRATION PROCESS BHI SHURU HO CHUKA HAI...

PHYSICALLY ITNI TORMENTED SITUATION ME HONE KE BAAD BHI MUJHE AISA KYUN LAG RAHA HAI KI TAKLIF PYSICAL SE ZYADA MENTAL HO RAHI HAI TUM SABKO..!!!


un paancho ko dekh kahi thi maine ye baat...

REASON....

5 km lambe pathrile registaan ko jiske surface me ek ajeeb sa gravitational pull tha,paar kar finally jab humne us desert ka daayra paar kar hi liya..

aur aisa hote hi woh paanchon lambi lambi saans lete hue neeche kaali ghaans se bhare zamin me baith apni thakaan ko mitane ki koshish karne lage..

par pyscically itne negetive haalat me hone ke baad bhi un sabki aankhon se ek dusri hi taklif aur chehre se ek alag hi udasi chhalak rahi aur ussiko dekh kahi thi maine ye baat jispar un sabne kuch kaha nahi,bas sir jhukaye lambi saansein lete rahe jispar...


MAI-doctor se kuch bhi chhupana sahi nahi hota guyzzz....

MAHI-kya baat hai RAAZ...???jo hamesha jaan lene par utaaru rehta hai,woh aaj khudko jaan bachane waale doctor se compare kar raha hai...

MAI-har doctor jaan bachane ke liye medicine nahi karta MAHI..kuch,infact zyadatar log isiliye medicine karte hain kyunki is line me paise bohot hain...

aur aise doctors,unka mariz jiyega yaa marega,ye us mariz ki pysical strength nahi,balki uski financial strength se tay karte hain...

faayda agar unka hai,toh hi sahi maayne me woh doctors bante hain...

bottom line,mai bhi us tarike ka hi doctor hun...filhal tum sabse mujhe faayda hi hai, isiliye puch liya...

ACCHUTA-bhai tu logic kahan kahan se dhund kar laata hai..???saala selfishness ko bhi sach ke paani me dubokar aise pesh karta hai ki naa toh us selfishness ko hazam kar sakte hain aur naahi bole gaye sach se debate...

MAI-meri taarif chhod,apni aur in sabki taklif bata...achanak aisa kya ho gaya ki jahan tum sab pehle hadh se zyada excited aur motivated the,wahin kuch der se demoralised lagne lage ho..???

MAHI-upar se apne saath paanch paanch kamzoriyan saath lekar chal rahe ho...!!!!


VIRAZ ki un sabke liye kahi baat repeat ki MAHI ne jisse sun...


MAI-ohho....so he successfully played you all,haan..!!!

MAHI-played..!!!he only spilled the truth out RAAZ...sach hi toh kaha tha usne...hum sab is safar me,is quest me tumhare liye sirf extra baggages aur kamzoriyan hi toh hain...

agar tum last chunouti ke beech nahi aate,toh we all would have been dead...

MAI-but you are not...

MAHI-sirf tumhari wajah se...

MAI-humari har saans chalne ke peeche ek wajah hoti hai...kya har wajah ko talash khudko blame karti ho tum...!!!

ye yaad raha tum sabko ki ab tak tumne underperform kiya hai,par ye yaad nahi raha ki situations tumhare excel karne ke hain hi nahi..

aur naahi tumhare paas tum sabki full grown shaktiyan hain jiski madad se tum yahan apne dum par survive kar sako...

ek hi chiz hai...ATTITUDE....woh ATTITUDE jiske dum par yahan aane ka aur ladhne ka faisla kiya tha tum sab ne...

par ye dekhkar ajeeb lag raha hai ki ek waana be RAAZ ne apne manupaltive baaton se tum sabke us ATTITUDE ko hi hila diya..

ACCHUTA, SLUNDER, BRAWNY, HIDA...bhul gaye kya tum chaaron ki tum sabko GOD ne SAVENT banane ke blessings ke saath alag se bhi POWER GIFTS diye hain...

haan, bhale hi woh powers aaj locked hain,par hain toh tumhare andar hi...

tum sab aaj bhi blessed ho..par har blessing tabhi kaam me aati hai jab uspar bharosa kiya jaaye..

aur yahan toh blessings tum sab khud hi ho...khud par bharosa rakhna hai tumhe...

and MAHI...i dont think ki mujhe tumhe gyan dene ki zaroorat hai...

gyan ka bhandaar toh tumhe viraasat me mila hai...(VIKRAM)


halka mock karte hue kahi ye baat maine MAHI ko jisse sun itne der se depressed dikh rahi MAHI ke face par bhi smile aa gayi..

saath hi saath apne dad ki yaad aate hi uska saara demotivation jaata raha...

it was just the matter of time and patience...uske baad toh she will be unstoppable,jaanti toh thi woh ye baat but ab samajhne bhi lagi thi...

khair,apni baat ko aage badhate hue..


MAI-jaise is DEVIL'S HAVEN ko penetrate karna mera quest hai,thik waise hi khudpar bharosa karna, VIDEOUS aur VIRAAZ ke har demotivation ko dodge karna, tum sabka quest hai...

beat them by beating your negetiveness....

ye ek jungle hai guyzz...aur jungle ka ek hi niyam hota hai..SURVIVE...

aur is baat se fark nahi padta ki survive kaise kiya jaa raha hai..just hang on,har chiz apne place par pahunchne lagegi..

ACCHUTA-nahi pahunchegi toh pahuncha denge...


purane form ne aate hue kahi ye baat ACCHUTA ne aur phir mujhe hug karne meri taraf aane laga par tabhi mai ghumte hue aage badh gaya aur...


MAI-ab chalo guyzz...next challenge is waiting for us...

ACCHUTA-saala pehle motivate karke emotional kar diya aur phir khud nikal liya..


ACCHUTA ki baat sun baaki chaaron has diye aur woh sab bhi mere piche ho liye..

wahin MAHI thoda tez aage badhi aur mere baaju me pahunch...


MAHI-thanks...

MAI-kisliye..!!!maine pehle bhi kaha tha ki...

MAHI-jo bhi tumne kaha,woh sirf isiliye kaha kyunki isme tumhara faayda hai..i get it...

par aag bhi toh garam hota hai..jalane ka kaam karta hai..lekin wahi aag jab thand me jalta hai toh sharir ko sukoon pahunchata hai..

kuch der pehle hum sabka mind set ussi cold weather me lagne waali thand ki tarah tha aur tumhari baatein,us thand me sukoon dene waali aag ki tarah thi..

MAI-bilkul apne baap ki tarah ho...unki tarah har situation me positiveness ki noutanki karne ki aadat hai tumhe...

MAHI-i will take that as a big compliment...

waise RAAZ...tum toh unki urja se bane ho..tum toh unki har baat ko ,unki soch,samajh,har chiz ko feel karte hoge..

kuch batao naa unke aise tough situations ko deal karne ke tarike ke baare me...

MAI-usse pehle aage aane waale jheel me bina try kare hi naa doob jaaun mai...!!!


jahan apni baat bol mai aage badh gaya wahin MAHI pehle muskurayi par phir uske face se smile gayab hote hue sudden seriousness aa gayi..

woh turant mere paas aayi aur..


MAHI-kya bola tumne...jheel me bina try kare hi naa doob jaaun mai..!!

iska kya matlab hua..???

MAI-aisi hi thodi bohot soch aur samajh thi tumhare dad ki bhi..but ek difference bhi hai..!!!woh sawal puchne ke baad khud hi jawab bhi dhundh lete the aur saath hi saath uska solution bhi...

MAHI-kya baat hai..?? mere dad se nafrat karte ho aur ab unhi ki taarif bhi kar rahe ho...!!!

MAI-nafrat se sach toh nahi badal jaata.aur waise bhi,mai unki taarif nahi, tumhari kami bata raha tha...

MAHI-nazariye ki baat hai..tum meri kami bata rahe the aur mera dhyan dad ki taarif par tha..

but woh chhodo aur apne statement ka matlab batao..???

ab tak woh chaaron bhi humare paas aa chuke the, isiliye ek baar un sabko dekh..


MAI-yaad hai DESERT ke baad kis challenge ke bare me bataya tha maine..!!!

BRAWNY-haan, koi kaali jheel...

MAI-aur us jheel ka naam hai THE DROWNING LAKE...

HIDA-THE DROWNING LAKE...!!!!naam sunkar hi ghabrahat ho rahi hai..

MAI-honi bhi chahiye... kyunki naam me hi us lake ki khoobi chuppi hui hai...

DROWNING LAKE me swim nahi kiya jaa sakta...us lake ka paani usme utarne waale har praani aur jeev ko neeche kheench leta hai..

ab uske baad kya hota hai,ye toh us lake ke water ko touch karkar hi mai bata sakta hun..

ACCHUTA-bhai,aur batane ke liye bacha hi kya hai..ab ek baat toh obvious hi hai ki us lake ka paani bhi BLACK ENERGY se bhara hua hoga..

aur jaise hi koi usme doobta hoga, toh woh paani uske mooh ke through andar ghus usse khatm kar deta hoga..

SLUNDER-haan aur ho sakta hai ki paani ke andar deadly creatures bhi hon aur wahi us paani me utarne waale ko neeche pull karte hon.!!!

MAI-toh matlab aage nahi badhna hai..!!!

HIDA-kyun nahi badhna hai..bilkul badhenge...

MAI-then stop speculating and let's just walk there...


apni baat bol mai aage badh gaya aur woh sab bhi chup chaap mere piche ho liye...




THE DROWNING LAKE




OH SHIT...ISKA END KAHAN HAI.....???




kuch der chalne ke baad jab hum us DROWNING LAKE ke paas pahunche,toh us lake ke endless dimension ko dekh kahi ye baat BRAWNY ne...

jahan door door tak kaale paani se bhare us lake ko woh paanchon dekh rahe the wahin mai aage badha aur lake ke kinare par baith maine pehle wahan moujud paani ko touch kiya aur phir usme apna haath daal diya aur mere aisa karte hi...

jahan maine haath daala tha,us jagah ka paani kuch do hatheli jitna hi gehra tha par mere haath ke us gehrayi ke end point ko touch karte hi woh end part bhi aur neeche khisakne laga aur saath hi saath mere haath ko bhi apne saath neeche pull karne laga..

aisa hote hi maine turant apne haath se apni black energy ki ray release kar di..

aur jab maina aisa kiya toh achanak se hi naa sirf woh neeche khisakne waala part wapas uththe hue apni purani jagah par aa gaya balki mera haath bhi us pull se completely free ho gaya...

apni jagah par wapas khada ho chuka tha mai but aage kya karna hai,iska naa toh idea tha mujhe aur naahi koi plan..

mai toh apni kaali urja ki madad se aage badh sakta tha,but ye paanchon...!!

ye kaise paar karenge is jheel ko,main sawal toh yahi tha jiska filhal mere paas koi jawab nahi tha....

yahan mai ye sab soch raha tha aur wahan woh paanchon meri taraf dekh rahe the is ummid ke saath ki mai koi solution nikalunga...

par jab kuch der baad bhi mai apni sochon me gum raha toh MAHI mere paas aayi aur usne mere kandhe par haath rakha aur...


MAHI-kya hua RAAZ...!!!???kya soch rahe ho..???kya yahan se aage jaane ka koi tarika nahi sujh raha...???


MAHI ki baat sun usse dhyan se dekhte hue..


MAI-ab tak nahi sujha tha.. par shayad ab...!!!hold it....

apne ussi haath ko jisme jheel ka paani laga hua tha,usse aage karte hue kahi ye baat maine jisse samajh toh nahi paayi MAHI but phir bhi usne turant mere us haath ko hold kiya aur uske aisa karte hi....

ek tez sensation meri us hatheli par feel hui jisse mehsoos kar kuch pal ke liye meri aankhen kuch sochne ke andaaz se choti hui aur phir mai wapas mudte hue neeche jheel ke kinaare baith ussi haath ko jisse MAHI ne touch kiya tha,paani me daal diya aur mere aisa karte hi..

ek saath do chizen hui...

pehli...

mere aas paas ka paani vibrate hone laga jiski wajah se jahan pehle mera haath neeche pull ho raha tha,wahin ab uske ulat upar push hone laga..

dusri...

woh jagah jahan mera haath samaya tha,us hisse ka paani mere hatheli par aise tight hone laga tha maano meri hatheli hatheli naa hokar gardan ho aur woh paani us gardan ka gala daba raha ho...

maajra samajh chuka tha mai...aage badhne ka solution bhi mil chuka tha mujhe but woh solution hadh se zyada negetive tha...

but option aur kuch tha nahi aur jo tha,usse mujhe in paanchon ko batana tha isiliye mai wapas utha,un paanchon ki taraf ghuma aur....


MAI-aage badhne ka ek hi tarika hai...


meri baat sun ab tak jo tention un sabke face par thi, woh kam hoti chali gayi aur..


SLUNDER-haash...thank GOD...hume pata tha yaar ki tu koi na koi jugaad laga hi lega...

HIDA-obvio... after all he is RAAZ..the chosen one...

BRAWNY-bhai mai toh ye soch raha hun ki hum sabka dimag iski tarah kab chalega...!!!

ACCHUTA-arre iska jawab toh bohot simple hai..kabhi nahi....


jahan ACCHUTA ki baat sun woh teeno muskura diye wahin mera face jispar is waqt hadh se zyada seriousness dikh rahi thi,usse dekh MAHI ko andaza ho gaya ki jis tarike ki baat mai kar raha hun,woh mushkil toh hoga hi par saath hi saath negetive bhi..

aur isiliye..


MAHI-kya baat hai RAAZ..!!! tarika tough hai yaa kuch zyada hi tough hai..


MAHI ki baat sun un chaaron ka dhyan bhi mere face par gaya jisse dekh woh sab bhi wapas halke tensed dikhne lage..

wahin MAHI ki baat sun..


MAI-tarika tough nahi hai,faisla hai aur woh faisla tumhe lena hai....

MAHI-please be specific RAAZ...

MAI-ye jo jheel ka paani hai,ye normal paani de zyada thick hai..

SLUNDER-haan toh isme BLACK ENERGY ka AURA mixed hoga isiliye..

MAI-nope.. AURA power badhata hau,thickness nahi...


ASMODEUS aur tumhare PITAH ke beech jo fake fight hui, usme jitne bhi DEVILS maare gaye,un sabka khun mila hai is paani me...

isiliye is paani ki thickness zyada hai...


meri baat aur revalation ko sun aankhen hairat se badi ho gayi un sabki aur saath hi saath meri aage ki baat kitni negetive ho sakti hai,iska bhi ek anjana dar se bhara andaza ho chuka tha un sabko...

wahin apni baat ko aage badhate hue...


MAI-woh saare DEVIL'S directly ASMODEUS ke DEVILISH swaroop se bane the..

ek tarah se ye kehna galat nahi hoga ki woh sab ASMODEUS ke DEMONIC descendents the...

isiliye un sabke blood me bhi woh urja thi jo ASMODEUS ke negetive side me thi...

wahi urja ab is paani me bhi hai jisse dodge nahi diya jaa sakta....

MAHI-tarika nahi bataya tumne ab tak...!!!


MAHI ke sawal ki sun ek pal dekha maine usse aur phir...


RAAZ-YOU HAVE TO DIE....


jahan meri baat sun MAHI normal hi rahi aur woh isiliye kyunki usse meri pichli kahi baaton se aisa hi kuch hone ka andaza ho chuka tha wahin ACCHUTA, SLUNDER, HIDA aur BRAWNY ekdum se hadbada gaye aur..


HIDA-ye kya bol rahe ho RAAZ...??

MAHI-wahi jo sach hai...aur guyzz,is tarike ke implication par koi melo drama nahi...

is quest ko pura karna,yahi hum sabka ek maatra moto hai aur agar aisa karne ke liye mere marne ki zaroorat hai,toh aisa hi hoga...


MAHI ki baat sun un sabke face par laachari saaf dikhne lagi..MAHI ne jo kaha tha,woh ek tarah se un chaaron ke liye end of discussion tha,ye samajh gaye the woh sab par sawal toh the hi un sabke man me aur isiliye..


HIDA-but why only MAHI....???humme se bhi toh koi ye kurbaani de sakta hai...!!!

MAI-nope..it has to be MAHI...

CHAARON-par kyun..???

MAI-MAHI ke us AURA ko jo usne DARK SPACE ke bahar release kiya tha,kya usse sense kiya tha tum sabne...!!!???(ANGELS FORM ENERGY SOURCE)

CHAARON-haan..

MAI-wahi AURA aur power source hi is paani aur shakti ko divert kar sakta hai..

ACCHUTA-par MAHI ka woh AURA yahan INFERIOR WORLD me kaam nahi kar raha hai...

MAI-kaam karwana hai bhi nahi..bas us AURA ko apne body me circulate karwana hai.

aur ye kaam MAHI ko is paani me utarne ke baad karna hai.

iske waisa karte hi is pure jheel me faila DEMONIC BLOOD apni saari shakti ke saath MAHI ko yahan ke paani me drown karega...

saath hi ispar alag tarah se humla bhi karega..

us waqt is pure jheel me faila gravitational pull sirf MAHI ke position par focused rahega...

baaki jheel ka har part normal ho jaayega...us waqt hum sab is jheel ko paar kar sakte hain....


saari baatein bohot casually bol di thi maine jisse sun aur zyada depressed feel karne lage the woh sab par unme se koi kuch kehta ki tabhi..


MAHI-guyzz, RAAZ sahi hai..sirf yahi ek raasta hai..

HIDA-but MAHI...

MAHI-end of discussion...toh RAAZ,kya mai paani me utrun....!!!

MAI-thoda door jaakar...


meri baat sun kuch pal MAHI mujhe dekhti rahi...meri bhi aankhen uspar hi tiki thi..

khair,kuch der tak yun eye gaze karte rehne ke baad maine apni aankhen uspar se hata li jiske baad
MAHI bina kuch bole lake ke kinare chalte hue humse thoda door jaane lagi..

is beech mere sharir se chaar bade bade ropes nikle jinhone un chaaron ko mujhse baandh sa diya..

woh sab samajh chuke the ki maine aisa isiliye kiya tha taaki apne saath un sabko kheechte hue tezi se paani me aage badh sakun..

par is beech jab un sabne ek baar phirse us anthhin jheel ko dekha toh...


HIDA-itni lambi jheel paar karne me kitna waqt lag jaayega..???

MAI-ye dikh rahi lambayi ek illusion hai.. length itni zyada badi bhi nahi hai..

maximum 2 minute me hum jheel ke dusri taraf honge...

jab tak meri baat khatm hui,MAHI humse kaafi door jaakar ek jagah par khadi ho chuki thi aur aisa kar usne meri taraf dekha jispar haan me sir hilaya maine aur mere aisa karte hi MAHI apni aankhon ko band karte hue ek chhalang maarte us jheel me kood padi aur uske aisa karte hi...

SHSHSHSHSHSHHH....

pure jheel ke paani me tez leher uthne lagi jo is baat ka suboot tha ki MAHI ne apne ANGEL FORM POWER SOURCE ko apne body me shrug off kar diya tha...

uske waisa karne ki wajah se pure jheel ke paani me mila hua pure DEMONIC BLOOD MAHI ko pehchan gaya aur phir apni puri taakat ke saath woh shakti MAHI ki taraf badh chali thi...

wahin jaise hi maine jheel me uth rahe leher ko dekha toh mai samah gaya ki ab sirf MAHI ke aas paas waale portion me hi saara gravitational pull hoga jiska matlab tha ki now is the time when we should take off aur isiliye....


JAL BHEDAM

WATER PENETRATION


aage hawa me tezi se kudte hue is SPELL ko uccharit kiya maine jiske baad mera sharir kisi rocket ki tarah ek tez forward push ke saath
jheel me jump maar gaya aur mere saath hi bandhe hue woh chaaron bhi ek dhakke ke saath mere piche ho liye...

hum sab behadh tezi se paani ke upari satah par tairte hue aage badhne lage..

woh chaaron mere piche the aur baar baar tez speed ki wajah se unke sir paani ke andar chale jaa rahe the..

kisi tarah khudka balance banaye rakhe hue woh sab apne sir ko upar rakhne ki koshish kar rahe the..

is beech hum kaafi aage nikal chuke the aur aisa hote hi kuch der pehle meri kahi baat ka sach un chaaron ko dikhne laga..

jheel ki anthhin lambayi wakayi ek illusion thi aur ab woh ye dekh aur samajh paa rahe the...

hamare lagatar aage badhte rehne se woh faila hua illusion haththne laga tha jiski wajah se kaafi door hi sahi par hum sabko jheel ka dusra kinara dikhne laga tha...

us kinare ko dekhte hue meri speed aur badh gayi jiski wajah se bas 1 minute ke andar hi hum us river bank ke paas the..

aur jab dusri taraf ka surface humse bas kuch metres ki hi doori ka reh gaya toh maine ek baar phirse jump maari jiski wajah se meri aur mere piche un sabki body upar hawa me uththe chali gayi..

par is baar mere jump se release hui pressure zyada thi jiski wajah se woh sab jo ab tak mujhse bandhe mere piche the,un sabki bodies ko ek jhatka laga jiski wajah se woh tezi se mere upar se hote hue aage nikal gaye..

aisa hote hi maine woh ropes jinse woh sab bandhe hue the,woh gayab kar di thi..

khair,mujhe upar ki taraf se cross karte hue woh sab jheel ke dusri taraf ke surface par roll karte hue gire par girte hi woh sab turant uth chuke the..

wahin upar uchalte hue mai apne pairon par hi zamin par aaya tha..

landing bhale hi meri aur un sabki alag thi par land hone ke baad jo reaction aaya,woh hum paanchon ka ek hi tha..

aur woh reaction tha hum sabka ek saath us disha ki taraf dekhna jahan MAHI ne jump kiya tha...

aur kyunki illusion is taraf se nahi tha, isiliye woh disha,woh point hume dikh raha tha...

kuch der pehle jab hum lake ke dusri taraf the aur MAHI paani me koodi thi,tab jo leher pure lake par uth raha tha,abhi woh saara leher joki DEMONIC BLOOD ki shakti se bana tha,woh theek ussi point par uth raha tha jahan MAHI ne jump kiya tha..

aur iska sirf ek hi matlab ho sakta tha..woh saari demonic shaktiyan,MAHI par haawi ho chuki thi...

ab mai MAHI ke paas pahunch toh sakta tha nahi par MAHI ki halaat mehsoos zaroor kar sakta tha aur isiliye mai turant wapas paani ke paas pahuncha aur usme haath daal apni aankhen band kar pure lake me ho rahi movement ko mehsoos karne lag gaya aur jo scene mere aankhon ke saamne aaya,woh bilkul bhi positive nahi tha....

MAHI....jo kuch der pehle us paani me koodi thi..uske koodne par jaise hi uske sharir me beh rahi ANGEL'S FORM POWER SOURCE aur lake se jude DEMONIC BLOOD ka connection hua toh woh saara blood aur uski shakti ek saath MAHI ke ird gird jama hui aur jab aisa hua toh paani ka woh hissa jisme MAHI kudi thi aur jiski gehrayi bas 6 feet hi thi,achanak hi woh area kisi samandar ke anthhin dept jitna gehra ho gaya jisme MAHI tezi se dubti chali gayi..

saath hi saath us lake ke paani ke blood particles ne MAHI ke sharir ko bhedhne ki koshish ki par woh aisa karne me kaamiyab nahi ho paayi aur tab un particles ne khudko ek zanjeer ka roop aur sakhti dete hue MAHI ko khudme lapetne shuru kar diya..

aisa hote hi MAHI ka sharir jakadne laga aur saath hi saath uska gala bhi ghutne laga..

par woh DEMONIC BLOOD PARTICLES itne me hi nahi rooke..

unhone apna deadly AURA MAHI ke sharir me touch karana shuru kiya aur jab aisa hua toh MAHI ke body me ghum rahi uski ANGEL'S FORM POWER SOURCE tadap uthi...

woh turant MAHI ke sharir ke andruni bhaag me pahunch bachne ke kiye tezi se idhar udhar ghumne lagi par us DEMONIC BLOOD PARTICLES ka asar itna strong tha ki usse rahat nahi mili..

aur tab us POWER SOURCE ke paas khudko surakshit rakhne ka ek hi tarika dikha...

aisa tarika jo MAHI ke HUMAN FORM POWER SOURCE ke liye bilkul theek nahi tha..

woh ANGELS FORM POWER SOURCE MAHI ke chaaron AMPLIFICATION modes ke andar penetrate karne lagi aur jab aisa hua toh...

BHAKKKKKKK.....

MAHI ke body ka saara andruni system hil gaya jiski wajah se MAHI ke mooh se khoon ki ek moti dhaar nikal paani me fail gayi...

par ye toh external damage ka asar tha..asli damage toh MAHI ke andar ho rahi thi..

jaise hi MAHI ke chaaron AMPLIFICATION modes me ANGEL'S FORM POWER SOURCE touch hui,toh woh saare modes kaam karna band karne lage...

blood flow dheere ho gaya jo kisi bhi waqt completely rookne waala tha...

brain cells dead hone lage...body dheere dheere jalne lagi aur SOUL...

SOUL ki shakti aur uski urja,dono hi khatm hone lagi...

MAHI ki aankh aur uske saath uska saara thinking system band hone laga..

mout ke kagar par pahunch gayi MAHI aur jaisa ki aksar is state me pahunchte waqt hota hai,wahi MAHI ke band hote brain me dikhne laga..

woh maa baap jinhe usne kabhi dekha hi nahi,unka dhundla aks...FLORIN,MARIA,uske saare dost aur aakhir me RAAZ....

ye sab dekhte hue MAHI ke dard se bhare face par bhi ek smile naach uthi aur...


MAHI-


jaisa itihaas mere PITAH ne racha tha, mai waisa RACH NAA SAKI....

jo teri(RAAZ) aankhon ko mujhme baandh de, mai waisa SAJH NAA SAKI...

dimag bhi haar gaya aur dil bhi....

bohot kuch karna baaki tha,par afsos,kuch karne ke liye mai BACH NAA SAKI.....

















AAJ KE LIYE ITNA HI.....

















AAPKA APNA V...J....
Fantastic update bhai....
 
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