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Fantasy ATTITUDE (KABHI ANGEL KABHI DEVIL) ( Completed )

Naik

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AB TAK AAPNE PADHA KI JAHAN EK TARAF RAAZ & COMPANY INFERIOR LEVEL KE ANDAR GHUS CHUKE HAIN WAHIN DUSRI TARAF WOH SAB UNHE MILI PEHLI CHUNOUTI,THE SOUL SUCKER TREES AUR TURBULENT SWAMP KO BHI PAAR KAR CHUKE HAIN.


AB AAGE:-



CHAPTER-3


(THE DEVIL'S HAVEN,THE SACRIFICE & THE PERFECT EPILOGUE)


UPDATE-140



PLANET-ELYSIAN


PLACE-INFERIOR WORLD



THE QUEST CONTINOUS:-





SECOND CHALLENGE: THE DARK DESERT....






YE RAAZ KYA KAR RAHA HAI...?????


BRAWNY ne pucha tha ye sawal..

REASON....

THE SOUL SUCKING TREES aur uske just baad kaali ghaans se bani zamin joki asal me ek swamp thi,usse paar kar kuch kilometres chalne ke baad hum sabke saamne thi THE DARK DESERT ki sarhad...

us sarhad ke chaaron taraf BLACK ENERGY ke baadal chaaye hue the jinse ek deadly energy nikal rahi thi..

us energy ki force itni zyada thi ki uske chapet se door hone ke baawjud ACCHUTA, SLUNDER,HIDA aur BRAWNY ko khaansi aane lagi thi..

wahin dusri taraf MAHI jiska HUMAN FORM POWER SOURCE activate tha aur is INFERIOR LEVEL ke first challenge ki wajah se usme nikhar bhi aaya hua tha,woh bina problem ke khadi hui thi..

aur mai..mujhe toh is jagah par aakar sukoon ki anubhuti ho rahi thi aur us anubhuti ko badhaya tha un BLACK ENERGY KE chhaye badalon ne jo mere brain me base BLACK ENERGY ko aakarshit kar rahe the...

yahi wajah thi ki maine apne kadam un kaale badalon ki taraf badha diye the aur issi ko dekh BRAWNY ne woh sawal pucha tha jispar...


MAHI-RAAZ ke dimag me basi kaali shakti aise mahoul me zyada tezi se nikharti hai...

woh BLACK CLOUDS aur unki energy asal me DEMONIC POISON hain jo inhale karne waale ko andar se gala dete hain...

ANGELS bhi is poison ke asar se bach nahi sakte hain...aur isiliye hi RAAZ us poison ko inhale karna chahata hai taaki uske andar basi ERRAPEL ki shakti puri tarah se shithil ho jaaye aur RAAZ puri tarah se apne BRAIN ke black energy ki shakti ko apne brain ki hi tarah body me bhi failakar usse use me laa sake...


yahan MAHI un sabko meri yojna ke baare me bata rahi thi,aur wahan mai us DARK DESERT ki sarhad par pahunch chuka tha..

aur mere wahan pahunchte hi BLACK CLOUDS joki DEMONIC POSION the,unhone mujhe chaaron taraf se gher liya aur uske baad woh sab meri aankhon aur naak se mere andar samane lage..

aur jab aisa hua toh mera sharir hawa me uth gaya... sir se paaon tak us kaale dhuen numa zeher se ghira hua tha mai par normal conditions se ulat,woh zeher mujhe sukoon pahuncha rahe the...

mere VAGUS NERVES me basi kaali shakti ki urja ne un saare zeher ko pehle khud me samet liya tha aur phir unhe refine karte hue mere saare sharir me failane lagi..

jaise jaise ye process aage badh raha tha,mai apne andar base ERRAPEL ke powers me,joki filhal kaam ke the bhi nahi,ek dheelapan mehsoos kar raha tha jiska matlab tha ki woh shakti bebas bhari haalat me behosh hoti chali jaa rahi hai...

jab aisa hua toh DARK POWERS ki joki ab tak bas mere BRAIN ka hi hissa thi,unhe mere pure sharir me basne ka aur usse capture karne ka mouka mil gaya...

par isse pehle ki woh sab aisa kar paati...



MASTISHKA SAMARPANAM

MIND CONTROL


apne VAGUS NERVES me base BLACK ENERGY ke AURA ko maine baaki ke saare energy flow par control karne ka SPELL uccharit kar diya aur aisa hote hi ek string jaisi ray ne mere sharir me flow kar rahi saari energy ko khud se baandh liya..

jab aisa hua toh.....


GADGADGADGAD.......


mere ird gird faila woh DEMONIC POSION numa baadal mere brain se nikal rahe AURA ki wajah se garaj pada...

is scene ko dekh ACCHUTA, SLUNDER, HIDA aur BRAWNY halke ghabra gaye aur..


HIDA-MAHI ye..

MAHI-relax guyz...darne ki zaroorat nahi hai..ye thunder RAAZ ki apni shakti ki wajah se nikal raha hai..

dhyan se dekho,un clouds ka colour halka sa change hote hue aur deep ho gaya hai..

ye colour maine tab bhi dekha tha jab RAAZ us SOUL SUCKING TREES ko apni kaali shaktiyon se jala raha tha...

CLOUDS me ye change RAAZ ki shaktiyon ka unpar control paane ki wajah se aaya hai..

isiliye panick mat ho...RAAZ naa toh change hone waala hai aur naahi tum sab par humla karne waala hai....

uske andar basi kaali shaktiyan usse sirf VIDEOUS aur uski duniya ke logon ko takkar dene ke liye hi mili hain..

woh inka istamal WHITE ENERGY ke numaindon ke upar nahi karega...

wahan MAHI un chaaron ko saara ganit samjha rahi thi,aur yahan jab maine un DEMONIC POSION aur unki shaktiyon par control paa liya toh meri aankhen khul gayi par aisa hote hi mera sharir jo is waqt hawa me tha, woh neeche zamin par aa gaya...

bhale hi maine un shaktiyon par kaabu paa liya tha,par kyunki woh saari shaktiyan naa toh meri thi aur naahi mere sharir ke banawat ke hisaab se dhali hui, isiliye mujhme samate hi unhone mujhe kamzor kar diya tha..

aur woh kamzori mere face par saaf dikh rahi thi...mai halki lambi lambi saansein le raha tha jisse MAHI aur un chaaron ne bhi dekh liya aur...

is cheez ko MAHI aur un CHAARON
ne bhi dekh liya..

woh sab turant mere paas aa gaye aur...


MAHI-are you ok RAAZ...???

MAI-filhal nahi, but thodi der me ho jaaunga...

ab dhyan se suno....

jo DARK POISON aur kaali shaktiyan maine inhale ki hain,unse mujhe yahan ke baare me ek baat pata chali hai..

hum yahan apni marzi ke mutabikh waqt lekar aage nahi badh sakte...

haan,kuch der ka halt le sakte hain hum par woh gap bohot kam hai..

we have to keep moving..kyunki agar humne aisa nahi kiya toh ye jagah khudbakhud hamare liye naye challenges taiyar karenge aur zara sa bhi extra burden hamare liye bilkul sahi nahi hoga..

MAHI-ok,toh ab..!!!hum is DARK DESERT me enter karen..!!!

MAI-haan,but meri shaktiyon ko restore hone me abhi thoda waqt hai...

last challenge toh maine handle kar liya tha but is challenge ko tumhe handle karna hoga...

aur ye asaan nahi hoga MAHI.. pichle challenge me tum apne opponents ko takkar hi de paayi thi,unhe hara nahi paayi thi par is baar challenge bohot zyada tough hone waala hai...

slightest of error and you all are dead....aur agar in chaaron me se koi ek bhi mara toh us maut ki zimmedar tum hogi MAHI...

toh isiliye soch samajhkar aage badho yaa phir best option hai ki wapas lout jaao...

abhi tak hum is WORLD ke depth me nahi utre hain.. it's still just the beginning part...

jahan se aaye ho,mai tumhe ussi raaste se wapas bhej sakta hun...

waise bhi VIDEOUS aur us VIRAAZ ko meri jaan se matlab hai,tum sabki nahi...agar mai tum paanchon ko wapas bhej bhi dun,toh woh adchan paida nahi karenge..

toh soch lo....!!!

SAB-soch liya...hum aage badhenge...


un sabne ek saath ek lay me ye baat kahi jiske baad..


MAHI-aur waise bhi,har baar agar tum hi hume bachate rahe toh phir hum apne potential ko kaise pehchaanenge....

kabhi na kabhi toh we have to be on our own..abhi hi sahi...

MAI-badhiya..ab jab saamuhik aatmahatya ka iraada bana hi liya hai toh badho aage...


meri baat par woh paanchon hi muskura diye par phir jab un sabki nazar mujhse hath saamne THE DARK DESERT par padi jiske sarhad par hum sab khade the toh ek pal ke liye un sabke faces par nervousness aayi par phir khud ko andar se strong banate hue ek lambi saans kheench chhodi un sabne aur...

apne apne INBORN REFLEXES me jhaankte hue shaktiyon ko activate karte hue un chaaron ne MAHI ke saath apne apne kadam DARK DESERT ke daayre me badha hi diye...

THE POISONOUS CLOUD ka saara asar mai sokh chuka tha isiliye un sabko ab POISON ka khatra tha nahi par haan,DESERT ki kaali mitti me ek strong magnetic force thi jiski wajah se un sabke kadam reth me jaise chipak se gaye the the..

aage badhte rehne ke liye unhe thodi zor massakat karni padh rahi thi...

wahin un paanchon se ulat mai bade araam se us reth me chal paa raha tha par aaye hue kamzori ki wajah se meri bhi chaal dheemi hi thi...

khair,abhi hum sab kuch kadam hi aage badhe the ki tabhi hume apne piche se kuch feel hua jispar hum sab turant piche palte par hume kuch bhi dikhayi nahi diya...

dikha bhale hi kuch nahi par aane waala khatra sabne mehsoos kar liya tha...

aur isiliye hi wapas saamne dekh us chumbakiya kheenchav ke baad bhi thoda extra zor lagate hue hum paanchon thoda tez gati se aage badhne lage par tabhi...


SRRRRRSRRRARRRSRRRRR....

abhi hum kuch kadam hi aage badhe the ki tabhi hum sabke kaano me ye awaaz padi jisse sun hum sab ek jhatke me palte par is baar bhi koi nahi tha...

lekin haan,reth me ek badi baarikh si zig zag line zaroor bani hui thi jo badi jaldi gayab bhi hone lagi thi..

par puri tarah gayab hone se pehle hi woh mujhe aur saath hi saath MAHI ko dikh gayi thi..

hum dono ki ek baar aankh mili jiske baad...


MAI-all yours....


MAHI se kahi thi maine ye baat jisse sun jahan ek taraf MAHI khudko ek super tough challenge ke liye man hi man ready karne lagi wahin dusri taraf un chaaron ko meri kahi baat ka matlab samajh me nahi aaya aur isiliye...


HIDA-all yours..!!!as in...!!!!


SRSRSRSRSRSRSRSRRRSSSRRR...

HIDA ke is sawal par jawab is ajeebogarib awaaz ke saath aaya jisse sun sabhi chownk bhi gaye par saath hi saath satark bhi ho chuke the...

is baar bhi sirf do zig zag lines dikhi thi hamare saath un sabko bhi par ye lines last time ke mukable thodi gehri aur moti thi..

iska sirf ek hi matlab ho sakta tha..aur woh ye ki jis bhi CHIZ se woh lines ban rahi thi,woh moveble thi aur is baar uski movement last baar se zyada tez thi..

khair,baaki sab toh apni jagah par hi khade rahe par mai un zig zag bane lines ki taraf badh gaya...

mujhe us taraf badhta dekh MAHI mujhe rokne ke liye kuch bolne ko hui par maine haath ke ishare se usse bolne se rok diya...

aage badhta hua mai un zig zag lines se kuch 3 feet door pahunch khada hua aur...


MAI-i can see you...saamne aa jaao....


SHHHHHHHHH......

SAB-HOLY SHIT....


mere bolne ke baad jo hua,usse dekh ye baat nikli thi un chaaron ke mooh se....

toh hua yun ki mere bolte hi un zig zag lines ke upar naa sirf ek aakruti dheere dheere dikhne lagi balki uske agle hi pal woh aakruti joki ek 50 feet lambe saanp ki thi,usne apna fun uthaya aur theek mere face ke saamne aakar funfkaar maari...

jahan us bhayanak saanp ko dekh hi HOLY SHIT kaha tha un chaaron ne wahin MAHI jisne CHOSENS ke ANCIENT CREATURES ki book me us saanp ke baare me padha tha, pehle toh uski aankhein badi hui par phir...


MAHI-ye toh ek VISION SERPENT hai...

(NOTE:-pre- colombian maya mythology)


MAHI ki baat sun ACCHUTA, SLUNDER, BRAWNY aur HIDA joki us daityakar saanp ko dekh ab tak bas shocked hi the,ab unka bhi proper dhyan us saanp par gaya aur aisa hote hi unhe bhi us saanp ke baare me padha hua yaad aaya...

VISION SERPENT..kaali shaktiyon se bhara hua ek aisa giant serpent jiski sabse badi khubi uske naam me hi nihit thi..

VISION.....

darasal ye serpent apne pratidwandi ya shikar ke 1 second aage ke moves ko feel karne ka hunar rakhta hai..

usse pehle hi maaulum ho jaata hai ki uske shikar ka next move kya hone waala hai...

ab aise me uske waar se bachna ek impossible task jaisa hota hai....

jahan VISION serpent ko dekh ye saari baatien un sabke dimag me chal rahi thi wahin woh VISION serpent apne lambe jeebh jo laplapate hue apni badi badi kaali aankhon se mujhe ghur raha tha..

aur mai,mai bhi bina palke chhapkaye ek tak us serpent ke fun ko dekh uski shaktiyon ko mehsoos kar raha tha..

waise toh ab tak VISION SERPENT ko mujhpar attack kar dena chahiye tha, par mere sharir se nikal rahe BLACK ENERGY ke AURA ko feel kar woh bas mujhe ghure jaa raha tha is ummid ke saath ki mai uspar humla karun jiske baad mujhe maarne ka usse ek reason mil jaaye...

par jab kuch der baad bhi mai shaant hi khada raha toh woh apne fun ko kisi insaan ki tarah left ki taraf tilt karte hue mujhse thoda piche khade un paanchon ko dekhne laga...

aisa karte waqt uski kaali aankhon ke beech ek peeli chingari si chamki maano un paanchon me usse apni man maangi muraad dikhi ho....

SHSHSHSH.....

jeebh ko laplapakar halki si awaaz karte hue woh mere baaju se hota hua un paanchon ki taraf badha aur jab usne aisa kiya,tab jaakar HIDA aur baaki teeno ko bhi meri boli ALL YOURS ka matlab samajh me aa gaya tha...

ye battle unki thi jisme mai participate nahi karne waala tha,is sach se paida hue dar ko khud me samet usse dabate hue woh paanchon us VISION SERPENT se bhidne ke liye khudko ready karne lage..

par kaise kar paayenge woh aisa,ye sawal unke man bhi tha aur mere man me bhi...

khair,SERPENT ab pas 20 feet ki hi doori par tha aur isiliye ek dusre ko dekh eye to eye contact karte hue un paanchon ne jaise koi plan banaya aur phir HIDA left ki taraf aur BRAWNY right ki taraf ek ghera banane ke iraade se chalne lage par tabhi....


DHAABBBBB...DHAABBB...


ek kadam hi left aur right ki taraf badhaya tha HIDA aur BRAWNY ne par tabhi VISION SERPENT ki tail tezi se pehle left aur phir right ki taraf ghumi...

us tail ke dono direction me ghumne ki speed itna zyada thi ki aisa laga maano ek hi waqt par woh 180 degree se bhi zyada dono taraf ghum chuka ho aur aisa hote hi woh tail left me kadam badhati HIDA aur right me kadam badhate BRAWNY ke kandhon par pade..

udte hue HIDA aur BRAWNY ek dusre se hi hawa me takrakar neeche gir gaye the..

haalaki girne ke baad woh dono wapas turant hi khade ho gaye the par un dono ke hi kandhe serpent ke tail lagne ki wajah se jhanjhana gaye the....

par is waar se kahin zyada un dono ko aur saath hi baaki teeno ko ghabrahat hui thi VISION SERPENT ke attack karne ke tarike ko dekh kar...

uske is ek hi attack se VISION SERPENT ne ye saabit kar diya tha ki un sabne uske baare me jaisa padha tha,woh koi myth nahi tha..

the SERPENT actually has the talent to know the future moves of its enemies..

aur ye baat bohot zyada darane waali thi...

khair,darne ka option un sabke liye is duniya me tha nahi aur isiliye saari ghabrahat aur negetive vibes ko apne dimag se jhatka un sabne aur individually apne attacks ke baare me soch....


HIDA-SARP DAKSHAM....

BRAWNY-VISH KHANDAM....

ACCHUTA-DEHAM BHEDAM

SLUNDER-DAVITA SANGAM


ek ke baad apne apne man me SPELLS uccharit kiye un chaaron ne jiske baad jahan ek taraf HIDA ke SPELL ke asar se behadh sharp nukile keel uske haathon se nikal VISION SERPENT ki taraf badh gaye,dusri taraf BRAWNY ke SPELL ke asar se ek liquid joki asal me khatarnaak se khatarnaak poision ko faint karta tha, woh aage badh chala,teesri taraf ACCHUTA ke SPELL ke asar se asankhya arrow SERPENT ke sharir ko cheerne ke liye nikal chuke the,wahin chownthi taraf SLUNDER ke SPELL ke asar se ek strong SHIELD ki cover jo SERPENT ke puri body ko naapte hue uske aage ek barricade ki tarah jo usse kaid karne waali thi,aage badh chuki thi par tabhi kuch aisa hua ki natija jaante hue bhi ACCHUTA, SLUNDER, BRAWNY aur HIDA ki aankhein badi ho gayi...

un chaaron ke mooh se abhi SPELLS uccharit hue hi the ki theek ussi pal VISION SERPENT ki body halki vibrate si hui aur aisa hote hi uske sharir se chaar alag alag GLEAMS nikli joki un chaaron ke SPELL ki counter reflection thi...

woh chaaron GLEAMS sidhe un SPELLS se nikle rays aur arrow se takraye aur un sabko khudme sokh liya...

jitni jaldi aur asaani se us VISION SERPENT ne ye kiya tha,usse dekh un chaaron ki aankhein hairani se badi hui thi...

wahin un chaaron se alag MAHI bade dhyan se ho rahe scene ko observe kar rahi thi aur phir jab SERPENT ne saare SPELLS ke asar ko khtam kiya toh....


RAVDHARIYEM GHAATAM...

ILLUSION ATTACK....


apne HUMAN FORM POWER SOURCE ki shakti se man hi man is SPELL ko uccharit kiya MAHI ne jiske baad uske sharir se ek saath 100 se bhi zyada astra shashtra nikal SERPENT ki taraf badh gaye..

ye saare astra shashtra illusionistic the...

par kyunki un sabse energy real nikal rahi thi,isiliye unke nakli hone ka guess nahi kiya jaa sakta tha...

khair,jab woh saare astra shashtra release hue,toh theek ussi waqt SERPENT ke piche jahan uski nazar nahi ghumi thi, kaali reth se bani ek patli par behadh strong rope jisme MAHI ki HUMAN FORM POWER SOURCE ka AURA bhi tha,uski shakl lete hue hawa me uthi aur tezi se aage SERPENT ki taraf badh gayi...

ab jaisa pichli baar hua tha,is baar bhi wahi hua..saare astra shashtra ke release hote hi us VISION SERPENT ke body se aage ki taraf ek moti chaadar se bani GLEAM nikli jisse takrakar woh saare astra shashtra gayab ho gaye par tabhi...

asli waar joki piche se hua tha,usne apna kaam kar diya...

SERPENT ke piche ki taraf se uski taraf badh rahi woh MAHI ke HUMAN shakti se bani kaali rope us tak pahunch chuki thi jiske baad ek pal ke 100th part se bhi kam samay me woh rope us serpent ko khudme baandhti chali gayi...

itna hi nahi,MAHI ki HUMAN FORM POWER SOURCE ki energy ke AURA ki wajah se us rope se ek power gush create hone laga jo behadh dheere dheere us serpent ke mote chamdi waale sharir ko bhedne laga...

wahin is achanak hue waar aur uske asar ki wajah se rope me bandha SERPENT chattpatane laga.

aur yunhi chhatpatate hue hi uske vishalkaay akaar me faili puri chamdi dheere dheere jalne lagi...

uski chamdi ko jalta dekh woh chaaron aur MAHI behadh khush ho gaye..

mission accomplished..us jalte hue SERPENT ko dekhkar yahi bol rahe the woh paanchon apne apne man me..

aur is beech jab MAHI ki nazar mujhpar padi toh...

mai usse hi dekhte hue apne sir ko NO me halka halka left right hila raha tha..

mujhe aisa karte dekh naa sirf MAHI ke face ki smile chali gayi balki aankhon me sawal liye woh mujhe dekhne lagi aur tab maine usse uske piche ki taraf dekhne ka ishara kiya..

mere ishare ke matlab lo samajh jab MAHI piche mudi toh..


MAHI-SHIT.....

zor se bolte hue halka piche ho gayi MAHI..

wahin khushi mana rahe un chaaron ne jab MAHI ki baat suni aur uske hairani se bhare aakhon aur face ko dekha joki is waqt unke piche ki taraf dekhte hue ban raha tha toh woh sab bhi apne apne face par question liye piche palte aur tab...


OH SHIT......

MAHI ki hi tarah un chaaron ke mooh se bhi ye do shabd nikla jiske baad woh chaaron hi thoda piche hote hue nervousness ki wajah se neeche gir gaye...

aur ye sab hua unke piche apna fun uthaye khade VISION SERPENT ko dekh kar...

jee haan VISION SERPENT...asli waala...

toh hua ye tha ki apne naam ke arth ko saarthak karte hue VISION SERPENT ne MAHI ke chaal ko bhaamp liya tha....

aur aisa hote hi usne MAHI ki chaal uspar hi chal di...

bina pata chalne diye hi usne khudko gayab kiya aur waisa karte waqt hi usne ek illusion create karte hue apne clone MAHI aur baaki chaaron ke saamne bana diya...

ye sab ek hi waqt me kiya usne jiski wajah se MAHI aur baaki sabko us chaal ki bhanak tak nahi lagi...

MAHI ki banayi rope ne SERPENT ke clone ko apni giraft me liya tha aur is scene ko aur phir un paanchon ki khushi ko bade araam se un sabke piche khada asli SERPENT dekh raha tha...

khair, nervousness me girne ke baad apne pairon par toh woh chaaron turant hi khade ho gaye the par VISION SERPENT ki kaabiliyat ko dekh unke housle abhi bhi gire hue hi the..

MAHI joki un sab me ek louti aisi thi jo ab tak kaafi confident thi, SERPENT ki visionary taakat ko dekh ab woh bhi halki halki nervous hona shuru ho chuki thi..

wahin un paanchon se alag VISION SERPENT jo ab tak bas un sabse khel raha tha,uska mood ab is khel ko apne shikaron ke saath khatm karne ka ho chuka tha...

daayen baayan karte hue us VISION SERPENT ne apne fun ko attack karne ke andaz me piche kiya..

usse aisa karta dekh uske manzoobo ko jaan gaye the woh paanchon aur isiliye un sabne ek saath asankhya astra shashtra se uspar waar kiya..

wahin MAHI ne bhi apne HUMAN FORM POWER SOURCE se ek bada sa chakrawat paida kiya aur usse SERPENT par chhod diya...

apne gift ke according apne taraf aate hue attacks us VISION SERPENT ko pehle se hi pata the aur isiliye hi jaise hi un chaaron ne apne apne attack SPELLS bole toh thik ussi waqt SERPENT ne apni jeebh ko tezi se laplapayi...

uske waisa karte hi uske jeebh se behadh strong acidic wave bahar aayi jisne uske taraf aa rahe saare weapons ko mid-way me hi galakar khatm kar diya..

saath hi saath MAHI ke apne HUMAN FORM POWER SOURCE se bane storm ko release karte hi uske kaath ke liye SERPENT ne apne DARK SOUL ki taakat se bane HURRICANE WIND ko release kar diya..

aur jab MAHI ki banayi storm aur SERPENT ke release kiye HURRICANE WIND takraye toh..

BOOOMMMMM....

ek tez dhamaka hua jiska asar itna strong tha ki ACCHUTA, SLUNDER, BRAWNY,HIDA aur saath hi MAHI bhi kuch feet piche jaakar gire..

wahin un sabke saath is baar thoda sa negetive asar us SERPENT ko bhi hua....

MAHI ki HUMAN FORM POWER SOURCE se bane HURRICANE WIND ka AURA itna strong tha ki khatm hote hue bhi usne ek halka sa hit SERPENT ko kar diya...

us hit ki wajah se woh VISION SERPENT lehrata hua piche ki taraf gira..

par girne ke agle hi pal woh ghusse se funfkaarta hua wapas fun uthaye khada ho gaya...

AURA ke hit hone se uski dono kaali aankhon ke beech upar ki taraf halka redish colour chamkane laga tha...

wahin dono storms aur hurricane ke takrane se ek half white aur half black dhuan MAHI & company ke just aage fail sa gaya tha...

neeche girne ke baad dhamake ke impact se hue pain se dheere dheere ubharte hue woh paanchon wapas khade hue..

faila hua dhuan bhi kaafi hadh tak chhat chuka tha....

ab tak us dhuen ke cover se bani energy ki wajah se woh sab kuch sense nahi kar paa rahe the par ab jab woh dhuan kaafi hadh tak hath chuka tha,tab kahin jaakar un paanchon ko apne ird gird ek khatra sa mehsoos hua jisse feel kar woh sabhi satarak ho gaye...

par shayad ab der ho chuki thi aur is baat se un sabne bhi ittafaq tab kiya jab woh dhuan puri tarah se chatta...

dhuan chaththe hi unki nazar apne gird gird gayi jahan is waqt kuch ghoomte hue unhe ghere hua tha...

aur ye KUCH aur koi nahi balki us VISION SERPENT ki body thi jisne un sabko khudme lapet liya tha...

khudko us SERPENT se ghira dekh woh sab hawa me uthne ko hua par tabhi....

SSHSHSHSHSHS......

hawa me apne zeher ki gandh chhod di us SERPENT ne joki kisi transperent wall ki tarah thi..

us gandh ke maamuli ansh ko inhale karte hi un paanchon ke pair aur brain,dono hi ek pal ke liye nishkriya hi gaye aur woh apni jagah par hi ladhkhadate hue girne lage...

par woh sab puri tarah gir bhi nahi paaye..

REASON....

us SERPENT ki body ne un sabko puri tarah jakad liya tha...

uski body se ek DARK AROMA release ho rahi thi jiske inhalation se joki sirf un paanchon ke naak se nahi balki body pours se bhi ho rahi thi,woh sab kisi bhi tarah ke MAGIC ke liye incapable ho chuke the...

halke nashe ki haalat me woh paanchon apni aankhon ko baar baar jhapkate hue us SERPENT ke fun ko dekh rahe the jo abhi apne jeebh ko laplapate hue dheere dheere unke faces ki taraf badh raha tha..

theek un paanchon se kareeb 2 metre door aakar us SERPENT ka fun rooka par phir apne us fun ko poora khol un sabko nigalne ki jagah usne apne mooh se ek kaala dhuan release kiya...

ye kaala dhuan asal me BLACK ENERGY se bana ek acid tha joki kisi bhi WHITE ENERGY ke dhaarak ke liye hadh se zyada painful bhi tha aur saath hi ek slow poison bhi....

MAHI ke waar se us SERPENT ko jo kshati hui thi,ussika badla lene ke liye usne ye tarika apnaya tha...

woh un sabko ek slow aur dardnaak mout dena chahta tha...

aur uska manzooba kaamiyab bhi hone laga tha...

AHHHHAHHHHAHHHH.....

nashe ki haalat me bhi us kaale dhuen me base acid se ho rahi taklif ki wajah se MAHI aur un chaaron ke mooh se darknaak cheekh nikalni shuru ho chuki thi...

wahin in sabke beech mai us SERPENT se kuch 20 feet khada ye sab hota dekh raha tha..

chal rahe scene ko dekh meri aankhen,chehra sab sapat the..ek tak mai un paanchon aur phir us SERPENT ko dekh raha tha par tabhi...

apne mooh ko khole kaale dhuen ko lagatar nikal un chaaron ke cheekhon ko sunte hue us VISION SERPENT ki nazar ghumte hue mujhpar padi aur jab aisa hua toh..


DHAKKKHHHH.....

brain toh mera normal hi raha par us VISION SERPENT ki nazar sidhe mere dil me utri thi aur aisa hote hi mere dil me chuppi behosh padi ERRAPEL ki shakti ne mujhe andar se hi ek dhakka sa diya tha..

ia dhakke ka asar itna strong tha ki jahan ek taraf mere VAGUS NERVE me basi BLACK ENERGY ki shakti tak hil gayi thi wahin mai khud bhi apne ghutno par aa gaya tha..

VAGUS NERVE waali BLACK ENERGY ka AURA toh mera apna tha, isiliye jhatka lagne ke baad bhi woh shaant hi raha par woh BLACK ENERGY jo is jagah se maine inhale ki thi,usne mere pure sharir me ghumte hue ERRAPEL ki shakti ko lalkarna shuru kar diya...

par ERRAPEL ki shakti jaagti toh usse koi jawab deti.. woh toh ab bhi behosh hi thi...

par jo jhatka usne mujhe diya tha,usne mere andar ek pure ENERGY GUSH ko paida kar diya tha jo is waqt ghum rahe BLACK ENERGY ko push karna shuru kar diya tha..

wahin BLACK ENERGY bhi us ENERGY GUSH ko dhakka dene ne lagi thi..

zor aazmaish in dono me hi rahi thi,aur haalat meri kharab hui padi thi...

ek perfect aur steady brain ke hone ke baad bhi mai derailed feel kar raha tha...

khair,khudko kaabu kar dono ENERGY aur GUSH ko mai kaabu karne me lag gaya jisme me successful bhi ho hi chuka tha par tabhi..


AHHHHHHHHHH.......

ek baar phirse ACCHUTA, SLUNDER, BRAWNY, HIDA aur aakhir me MAHI ki cheekh gunj padi mere kaano me aur aisa hote hi jahan ek taraf BLACK ENERGY khush hokar ERRAPEL ki ENERGY GUSH ko push karne lagi wahin woh ENERGY GUSH bhi behadh strongly BLACK ENERGY ko retaliate karne lagi...

in dono ke sangram me taklif meri badh rahi thi aur isiliye un dono ko alag karne ke liye maine apni aankhein khole hue hi apne andar jhaanka aur un dono ke kareeb gaya par jab maine wahan pahunch un dono energy sources ko alag karni ki koshish ki toh...



BLACK ENERGY-HHHHRRRRR....


ek guraahat si nikli us BLACK ENERGY se jiske baad...


BLACK ENERGY-yahi niyati hai...



hum waar karenge,aur baaki sab SAHENGE.....

pure bramhaand ko hum apna ghar bana LENGE.......

RAAZ,hum dono ko nahi, sirf mujhe chun....

tu aur mai milkar is SAFED URJA ko KAALI raakh bana DENGE....


WHITE ENERGY GUSH ko ek tagda push karte hue kahi ye baat mere andar basi BLACK ENERGY ne jispar same force se dhakka dekar aage aate hue...



WHITE ENERGY-niyati hoti nahi banani padti hai..

.........RAAZ.........



jo chiz jahan honi chahiye, usse wahan SAJA KAR DIKHA....

jo RACHAITA ne sochi hai,kahani ko waisi RACHA KAR DIKHA....

jaan se maar dena ya marne dena,bohot asaan hota hai.....

agar himmat hai, toh apne doston ko BACHA KAR DIKHA....

















AAJ KE LIYE ITNA HI......

















AAPKA APNA V....J.....
Shaandaar update bhai
Zaberdast shaandaar
Mazedaar lajawab
Bahot khoob superb
 

Aakash.

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Raaz is the only person who can handle both black and white powers and this feature will be useful for him in the future. Both powers have to be balanced because it would be wrong to choose one. Well the white power inside Raaz is asking him to help his friends but will Raaz do this?
The snake was huge and dangerous and full of elusive powers, seeing that it seemed impossible to defeat him because he already knew what was going to happen next. You created a very frightening and thrilling scene, everything looked real, I enjoyed a lot. The mind is desperate to know what will happen next.
As always the update was great, You are writing very well, Now let's see what happens next, Till then waiting for the next part of the story.

Thank You...

🖤🖤🖤
 

Fighter

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Super Duper Hit & Excellent & Fantastic & Awesome & Gajab & Very Nice Update Bro

Wah sach kamaal ka level h y iska challenge kuch vese hi lga jese apne calon se fight krna

Raaz ki white power behosh hone k bad b ek position action kr rhi h raaz ko apne dosto ko bachane k liye challenge de rhi h



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Rudrathakur

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Ek ladai bahar chl rhi h jo filhal ek trfa bni hui h..aur ek party usme khatam hone wali h..wahi ek ghamasan raaz ke andr bhi chhida hua h...jahan black energy apni aadat anusar usko laalach de rhi h ki mujhe chuno main tumhe wo sab dunga jiski tumhe khwahish h bikul hmare bhrast netao ki trha jo waade kuchh krte h aur kaam kuchh aur hi krte h...srf aise kaam jinse unko hi fayda ho ..waisa hi black energy ka bhi h..wo raaz ko use krna chahti h apne maqsad ke liye..wahi dusri taraf white energy jo usko lalkaar rhi h ki aao mere sang aur apni niyati khud bnao...haan main tumhe wo sab na de saku jo wadein black energy kr rhi h...par main tumhe wo de skta h..jo black energy kbhi nhi de skti..pyaar, dosti, aur bhi bahut kuchh jo amulya h kisi bhi taqat se jyada...ek aise yoddha bn skte ho tum jo jb bhi yaad kiya jaayega sbko garv hi hoga...ab dekhte h raaz kya krta h.kisko chunta h..par filhal to usko wo decision lena h jisse wo apne dosto ko bacha sakega....waise to wo vision serpent ko itni der se observe kr hi rha h to apne andr chhide dwand ko smapt kr usko vision serpent ko khtm krne ke liye 2 move nhi 3-4 move aage ki sochni hogi.. Aur raaz capable h iss cheez me..uski soch bahut dur tk jaati h..pr fir bhi aasan to hoga nhi ye sb..khair dekhte h kitni der me raaz ke andr chal rha dwand smapt hota h taki wo apne frnds ko jaldi hi bcha ske jitni der use lgegi ..utne paas wo sbhi maut ke jaate jaayenge...
So waiting fir the raaz action...😍😍😍😍
 
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