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Fantasy ATTITUDE (KABHI ANGEL KABHI DEVIL) ( Completed )

vj4u

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Bss ek yhi to cheez h jo hm insaano ko kbhi haar nhi manne deti...hmare andar ek aisa jazba paida krti h jiski madad se hm maut se bhi bhid jaaye..wo cheez h hmari antar-aatma ki aawaj...jb abhi raaz ke liye situation aisi bni hui h ki wo lyf and death ke beech ki line pr khda h...to uss waqt uski antaraatma se aawaj aayi ki nhi... U r not finished yet...aur iss trha se to bilkul bhi nhi...beshak uss antaraatma uske mata pita ke roop me uske jazbe ko bdha rhi ho...pr itna bahut h usko in sbse bahar niklne ke liye...wo raaz h. In sbka baap...wo marr jaayega pr haar nhi maanega kbhi...
To dekhte h aage kya hota h...aur bahar bIthe mahi nd baki team kya kr rhi h..aur viraaz ko to ye sb malum ho hi gya hoga aur videous ko bhi...to dekhte h ab aage kya hota h..aur kaise...so waiting for the next brother
thanks for the review brother...yunhi saath bane rahiye
 

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nice update bro......
to 1st level ke liye apne x friends or mahi k sath raazikal gya........
wese thodi der ke liye hi shi kuch jillat bhari jindgi ke bad x friends ki powers wapas aa gyi ....
dekhte h apni powers ko wapas permanent kb tk pate h ye...............
whi mahi bhi apni puri powers k sath h
whi black powers se ghirkar apni chetna khote raaz ko uski antaraatma m base uske maa-pita ki chavi ne uske real attitude ka ahsaas karwaya ki raaz kbhi haar nhi manta to ab kese maan sakte h.................

dekhte h banda yha se kese bahar aake marg banata h philhal to life and death ki situation m h..............
thanks for appreciating brother... yunhi saath bane rahiye
 

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We have got our first motive after coming back to school and that is Devils Heaven, Hope has returned but I am finding it very difficult. :eek1: Even though the Hug scene was something to know but I loved it, Raaz and Mahi are perfect for each other. :love3: There is a fight between good and evil and if we are supporting good, it is bound to be proud, Raaz is handling everything like a leader and it suits him, Raaz has to be a devil from the mind and an angel from the heart.
Anjali and Raunit always help Raaz and show him the right path but still Raaz hates them, don't know why but I don't like it and as long as with Raaz, no one can beat him, Raaz will probably have to connect with his inner soul.:?:
VJ bro, how do you write so well that every line touches the heart. :love2:You always keep writing and we always read and this sequence is always intact.:hug:

As always the update was great, You are writing very well, Now let's see what happens next, Till then waiting for the next part of the the story.

Thank You...

🖤🖤🖤
thanks brother.
u are liking,what i am writing, that's all which matters..be along..
 

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Nice update bhai
super hot update...............?
keep posting...................?
waiting for next...................?
Superb update bhai...
Superb update
Nice update brother
Mast update
Osm or fabulous update 💥
vj bhai

khani apne atim padav ki or jarahi
he

pata nahi kon jitega ya harega
lekin lashe jarur bichegi

esa mod pe story agai he
Hamesha ki tarah lajabab

Bahut hi khubsurat update bhai 😊
Superb Update Bro...
Waiting For Next
Fabulous, mind blowing, jabarjast update bhai, wakai mja aa gya.
Raaj apne apne parents ki chhavi ko apne atma me dekhta hai,aur Legaon ka mukabla karne ke lie use apni atma ko sparch karna hai jisme uske parents hai.
Ab dekhte hai Raaj is situation se kaise nikalta hai.
Waiting for next romanchak update
Awesome update bro
Fantastic update bhai....
Nice one dear excellent fantastic shandar update

Tagra plan mayajal racha h ,, videous,, ne raaz kliye
Let's see what happens
Excellent update bhai

Awesome lines

Superb action

Very very very good update bhai
Fantastic update bro
Wah kia baat bahot zaberdast shaandaar lajawab khoobsurat update VJ bhai
Superb very nice great update brother
super fantastic update bhai
Awesome updates
Nice update
Nice update

Waiting for new update
Super update hai bhai
Lagta hai ki Raaz ab mind se devil ban ker hi nikalega. Fir Jung shuru hogi Dil se angle banane ki...
Nice superb fantastic update bhai, lagta hey suru horaha hey Angel aur Devil banney ka process. dekhtey hey kya hota hey agey
KEEP IT UP AND AS ALWAYS WAITING FOR
badhiya update hai
shaandaar update bhai
Zabardast update
Wow adbhut story vj bro. Gjb ki story writting skill hai bro apme.Thank you so much for this amazing story.
Superb awesome fantastic update
Super Duper Hit & Fantastic & Excellent & Awesome & Gajab & Very Nice Update Bro

Wah jaha se raaz ne apni power ko badaya tha wahi se videous ne apne devil heaven ki level suru ki h

Yani abi tk raaz ka jo devil roop tha ab usse b khatarnak hone wala h kya ab power ka khel kamaal ka ho rha h



Waiting
thanks brothers
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be along
 

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AB TAK AAPNE PADHA KI JAHAN EK TARAF MAHI, ACCHUTA,SLUNDER,HIDA AUR BRAWNY DARK SPACE KE BAHAR HI REH JAATE HAIN WAHIN DARK SPACE ME RAAZ KE MAN ME USKE MOM AND DAD USSE BAAT KARTE HAIN.


AB AAGE:-



CHAPTER-3



(THE DEVIL'S HAVEN,THE SACRIFICE & THE PERFECT EPILOGUE)



UPDATE-139



PLANET-ELYSIAN


PLACE-DARK SPACE







AHHHH.....



RONIT ki baat khatm hote hi woh aur ANJALI gayab ho gaye aur aisa hote hi ye cheekh nikli..

par is baar ye cheekh meri nahi,balki LEGIONS ke mooh se nikli thi....

aur ye hua tha mere apni aatma ki urja jahan woh dono SERAPHIM ANGELS prakat hue the,usko dekhne maatr se...

aatma,jiska vaas sharir me bhi tha aur brain me bhi...

aur jo ek maatra chiz thi jo pure thi, infact purest thi...

us purest form of energy ki wajah se un LEGIONS aur unki kaali shaktiyon ko hadh se zyada taklif hui aur unhone mere brain ka expansion rok diya..

itna hi nahi,mai dekh raha tha ki woh akshar wapas move karte hue us locked part ki taraf badh rahe the aur phir jab woh alphabets us locked part ke paas pahunche toh us part ka pure BLACK AURA un aksharon par pada aur aisa hote hi...

woh akshar mujhe puri tarah samajh aane lage..mai padh sakta tha unhe aur maine waisa hi kiya...


BHANGAM KAWACHAM

BREAK THE SEAL



pure BLACK ENERGY ki taakat se bhara hua ek SPELL chhuppa tha un aksharon me jisse maime uccharit kar diya aur mere aisa karte hi woh akshar us sealed part me kisi opener ki shape me chipak gaye jiske agle hi pal..

KRR...

halka sa ghuma bhar woh sealed part.. khula nahi woh pura par uska seal toot chuka tha aur jab aisa hua toh us seal ke andar se ek super strong energy gush bahar aayi aur pure brain me fail gayi..

aisa hone ke baad woh seal wapas locked ho chuka tha jiska matlab tha ki abhi woh part mere control se bahar tha...

khair, jaise hi us locked part se woh energy gush bahar aakar mere brain me faila toh un LEGIONS ki cheekh aur badh gayi..

saath hi saath un LEGIONS ki giraft mere haathon aur pairon se joki asal me meri BRAIN hi thi,usse hath gayi..

aisa hone ki wajah se jahan ek taraf mai relaxed feel kar raha tha,wahin dusri taraf un LEGIONS ki cheekh badhti hi chali jaa rahi thi..

mere brain me ghusse BLACK ENERGY ke rays wapas nikalne lage the aur tabhi..

woh LEGIONS bijli se bhi tez speed se meri taraf aaye aur..

BOOM....

mujhe yaa phir ye kahun ki mere dimag ko hit kiya unhone jiski wajah se mai piche ki taraf jaakr gira..

abhi hue impact ki wajah se kaan sunn padh chuke the mere jo dheere dheere thik ho rahe the...

aur jab mere kaan back to normal hue toh meri aankhen khul gayi..

aankh khulte hi maine dekha ki mai wapas us DARK SPACE me hun jo ab utni dark thi nahi..

meri chaaron taraf faili woh kaali sukhi hui liquid pure space ko liye tezi se ghum rahi thi aur aisa hote hote woh woh us space se gayab ho rahi thi...

jaise jaise woh kaali urja us SPACE se gayab ho rahi thi,waise waise us SPACE me ek laal roshni ne janm lena shuru kar diya tha jiski rays ne mere sharir ko kisi chumbak ki tarah jakad liya tha...

aur phir woh waqt bhi aaya jab woh SPACE kaali shaktiyon se free ho gaya aur aisa hone par jab woh wahan laal roshni puri us SPACE me fail gayi toh...

SOOBHHHHH....

mujhe kheenchte hue us roshni ne khudke triggering point ke beech daal diya aur aisa hote hi mai bhi ek red beam me badal kisi unknown ray se bani passage me girta chala gaya...

wahin DARK SPACE ke bahar khade woh paanchon waqt ke guzarne ke saath saath restless hote chale jaa rahe the..

kar woh kuch sakte the nahi siwaye intezar ke...

kaafi waqt tak yunhi bechaini se idhar udhar hone ke baad achanak unhe us DARK SPACE me halki red light ki roshni dikhi jisse dekh woh sab satark ho gaye..

bade dhyan se us red light ke roop me aaye change ko woh sab sekh kar samajhne ki koshish kar hi rahe the kk tabhi.....

us RED LIGHT ne DARK SPACE ke pure andhere ko hata diya... par aisa hone par bhi us SPACE ka view clear nahi tha..

har taraf sirf laal hi laal dikh raa tha un sabko...

par saath hi saath DARK SPACE ke andhere me jo kaali shakti ki vibe un sabko aa rahi thi,woh bhi gayab thi ab..

aur isiliye halki jhijhak ke saath,un paanchon ne apne ek ek haath ko us laal roshni ke daayre me daal diya..

aur is baar jab unke haath araam se us laal roshni ke daayre me chale gaye toh ye dekh woh paanchon bade khush hue...

haath ki hi tarah woh sab bhi SPACE ke andar jaane ke liye badhne hi waale the ki tabhi unke haath me unhe ek khinchaw mehsoos hua jisse feel kar woh apne haath wapas kheenchne ko hue par tabhi...

us kheenchaw ne joki us red roshni ke rays se ho rahi thi,usne un paanchon ko bhi RAAZ ki hi tarah andar kheench liya jiske baad woh sab bhi RAAZ ki hi tarah us red light ki triggering point ke beech red beams me badal kisi unknown ray se bani passage me girte chale gaye...

us passage ke beech se guzarte waqt RAAZ aur ab MAHI aur baaki chaaron ko bhi samajh me aa gaya tha ki woh abhi ek transportation route ke beech hain jo unhe unke agle destination ki taraf lekar jaa raha tha...

ye jaan un sabki curiosity level bhi badh gayi thi ye dekhne ke liye ki aakhir woh sab pahunchne kahan waale hain...!!!!



"THE BEGINNING OF AN UNFORGETTABLE QUEST"......



THE INFERIOR LEVEL:-





DHAKKK,DHAKKK,DHAKKK,DHAKKK....



transportation route se hokar ek tunnel ke beech se neeche gire ACCHUTA,SLUNDER, BRAWNY aur HIDA....

wahin MAHI,joki beam me badalne ke baad bhi mentally kaafi active ths,woh ek summersalt maarte hue us tunnel se neeche utri thi...

khair,neeche girne ke turant baad uthe woh chaaron...

MAHI toh pehle hi standing position me hi thi...

aur uththe hi un sabki nazar gayi saamne ki taraf jahan khada tha mai aur aage ki taraf dekh raha tha..

aur jab meri tarah un sabki nazar bhi saamne ki taraf gayi toh....


ACCHUTA-woooooo...what is this place man...??? it's all looking so dangerous........


saamne ke nazare ko dekh kahi thi he baat ACCHUTA ne jisse aankhon se hi mook swikriti de di thi baaki sabne...


THE VIEW:-

hum sabse kareeb 20 metre door 8 gaadhe kaale rang ke vishalkaay pedon ka samooh tha...

4 left ki taraf aur 4 right ki taraf...ye pedh itne vishalkaay aur faile hue the ki inke breadth ko naapa nahi jaa sakta tha...

khair,un do lines me bane saare kaale rang ke pedhon ke beech aage badhne ke liye raasta bana hua tha...

par woh raasta kahan lekar jaane waala tha,ye pata nahi chal paa raha tha...

REASON...

kaala ghana kohra joki upar aasman ko chhu raha tha,woh un pedon ke aage ke drishya ko dekhne se rok raha tha...

par us kaale kohre ke beech kabhi kabhi gap ban raha tha aur jab aisa ho raha tha tab hume un gagan chumbi pedon ke bhi upar kayi 100 kilometres door kuch bana tha joki dikh raha tha...

ye kuch tha ek ALCAZAR....aasman se bhi unchi ek kaali imarat jisme bane asankhya chote chote khidkiyon me mashale jal rahi thi aur unhi ki roshni me woh darawana ALCAZAR dikh raha tha...

view toh itna hi nazar ke saamne tha par woh daityakar pedhon ka samuh,woh kaala kohra,woh endless area jisse hokar shayad hume us gagan chumbi ALCAZAR me pahunchna tha,itna sab dekhna hi kaafi tha nervous hone ke liye aur wahi nervousness feel kar rahe the woh chaaron...

khair, ACCHUTA ki baat ke baad woh sab mere left right aakar khade ho chuke the jiske baad..


HIDA-hai kaunsi jagah ye..???

MAI-INFERIOR LEVEL....


meri baat sun un paanchon ki nazar meri taraf moodi aur tab...


MAI-saamne un aath pedon ko dekho...un sabme unka jo sabse bada tana hai,unki shape read karo...

meri baat sun kab un paanchon ne aathon pedon ke un tano ko, jinhe read karne ke liye kaha tha maine,dekha toh unki aankhein badi ho gayi....

REASON...

aath pedh..aur un aathon pedon ke ek ek tahni par ek ek shabd likha tha jo pura banane par banta tha...

INFERIOR....

un paanchon ke mooh se ek saath ye shabd nikla tha aur aisa kar...


ACCHUTA-bhai....woh tahniyan toh achi khaasi dark hain...

us part par bhi tabhi dhyan jaa sakta hai jab bade dhyan se uske har part ko dekha jaaye..

aur tune un aathon ko itni jaldi figure out bhi kar liya...!!!

MAI-DARK SPACE me sirf mai hi isiliye ghus paaya tha kyunki BLACK ENERGY ka ansh mujhme moujud hai...

aur isiliye hi tum sabke mukaable ye jagah mujhe zyada saaf nazar aa rahi hai..

HIDA-acha...toh ye batao ki in pedon ke aage kya hai..???

kaali ghaans ki parath odhe zamin...uske aage ek kaali mitti se bana lagbhagh 5 kilometres lamba pathrila registaan hai,jiske baad ek KAALI JHEEL hai...

us jheel ko paar karne ke baad ek DARK MAGICAL JUNGLE aayega..

us jungle ko paar karne ke baad hi hum us ALCAZAR ke kareeb pahunch paayenge....


meri baat sun aur meri itni door tak dekh rahi nazar ko jaan woh sab aankhein faade mujhe dekhne lage the..


ACCHUTA-bhai,lage haathon ye bhi bata de ki us ALCAZAR ke andar kya hai..???


bade excitement se bhar puchi thi ACCHUTA ne ye sawal jispar...


MAI-bohot se gande rooms jiske liye ek male maid ki zaroorat thi aur issi wajah se safayi ke liye hi tujhe yahan bulaya gaya hai...

SLUNDER-popat....


meri baat ko sun ACCHUTA ko haskar dekhte hue kahi ye baat SLUNDER ne jispar baaki bhi hasne lage aur ACCHUTA ne SLUNDER ko pehle ghurkar dekha aur phir meri taraf palath..


ACCHUTA-bhai,mazak haste hue karna chahiye..mazak toh kar li tune,ab zara has kar bhi dikha de..

MAI-teri mayyat par hi hasi niklegi meri...

ab bakwas chhodo aur apni apni shaktiyon ko phirse trigger karo...

hum is level me enter karne waale hain..

par yaad rahe, shaktiyan sirf temporary hai..unki ek limit hai isiliye un powers ko use me tabhi laana jab bohot zyada zaroorat ho..


jahan meri baat par baaki sabne haami bhari wahin HIDA ke dimag me kuch aaya aur phir...


HIDA-MAHI,DARK SPACE ke bahar tumne ek behadh strong invisible AURA release kiya tha par unfortunately woh AURA us SPACE ko bhedh nahi paaya tha..

i think is jagah par bhi woh AURA kaam me nahi aayega....

MAI-iske paas ek AURA aur hai..(HUMAN FORM POWER SOURCE)

woh yahan kaam me aa sakta hai....


meri baat sun woh chaaron chownkne aur..


HIDA-what..!!!!ek aur AURA..but ye kaise possible hai..!!! har insaan ke sharir me ek hi AURA hota hai..phir MAHI tumhare paas dusra AURA kahan se aaya..???


HIDA ki baat sun maine ek nazar MAHI ko dekha..mai samajh gaya tha ki MAHI ne un sabko apni identify nahi batayi hai..

ab kyunki ye uski apni marzi thi isiliye...


MAI-zyada mat socho..waqt aane par sab pata chal jaayega..abhi ke liye itna jaan lo ki uske paas ek aisa AURA bhi hai jo yahan kaam me aa sakta hai...

HIDA-wow..toh phir us AURA ko khudke body par spray kar lo MAHI...

MAI-woh already kar chuki hai...

HIDA-tumhe kaise pata..???

MAHI-janab ki nazar ho naa ho,par chizon ki khabar puri hoti hai..

MAI-jab chiz mere kaam ki ho toh uspar nazar aur khabar meri hamesha hi rehti hai...


ye bol mai aage badh gaya aur mere aage badhte hi woh paanchon bhi mere saath ho liye the...

un pedon ki sarhad joki asal me INFERIOR LEVEL ki starting point thi,uske paas pahunch hum ek pal ke liye rooke aur phir hum sabne is quest ke starting line me kadam badha diye....

SNNNNNNN.....

hamare kadam aage badhate hi halki tez hawa chalne lagi thi jo hamare sharir ke aakhri layer tak ko chilled sensation de rahi thi...

par ek aur sensation thi jo hum sab is waqt feel kar rahe the...

aur ye sensation ho rahi thi hamare bodies ke andar....

hume apne andar kuch hilta hua sa mehsoos ho raha tha...

but kyunki ye hulchal taklif deh nahi thi, isiliye is baare me zyada naa sochte hue hum aage badhte chale jaa rahe the..

jaisa ki maine bataya tha ki ye aath ped kaafi bade aur faile hue the,isiliye inhe pura paar karne me hi hume kareeb 5 minute lagne waale the...

khair,abhi humne kul 2,2 pedh hi paar kiye the ki tabhi...

KRRRRRR....

ek ajeeb si awaaz dono hi taraf ke pedon me se aayi jisse sun mere dono haath bijli ki gati se dono taraf faile aur mere dono haathon ke nails se ek ke baad ek kayi sharp needles bahar nikal us aa rahi awaaz ki taraf badh gaye...

jaise hi woh needles pedon se takraye,woh awaaz aani band ho gayi...

par mere is movement aur attack ko dekh un chaaron ke saath saath MAHI bhi shocked ho gayi thi..

MAHI hi kya,infact mai bhi man hi man shock hua tha...

REASON......

is waqt hum ek kaali duniya me the jahan WHITE ENERGY ki pure powers kaam me nahi aa sakti thi..

MAHI ka apne ANGEL FORM POWER SOURCE ko naa use kar paana iska live example tha...

thik ussi tarah ERRAPEL,joki meri EMOTION POWER ka sabse bada shakti kunj hai, aur jo complete pure WHITE ENERGY se bani hai,woh bhi yahan kaam me nahi aa sakti thi...

uski powers locked thi.. aur kyunki usne mere AMPLIFICATION powers ko bhi apne control me liya hua tha, isiliye woh powers bhi locked thi...

phir aise me mera magic se astra shashtra ko use me laana aur woh bhi bina SPELL uccharit kiye,ye shocking baat toh thi hi..

aur isiliye...


MAHI-how did you do that..???


hairani se bhar pucha ye sawal MAHI ne mujhse jispar bina kuch kahe maine apni aankhen band ki aur apne brain me jahan ek unknown part se BLACK ENERGY ki ray release hui thi,wahan jhaankne laga..

aur mere aankhein band karne ke agle hi pal meri aankhen wapas khul bhi chuki thi aur aisa hote hi mere face par ek devilish smile aa gayi jisse dekh woh paanchon ek baar phirse hairan hue par saath me halke ghabra bhi gaye...

wahin maine bhale hi apni aankhen khol li thi,par meri aantrik nazar ab bhi mere brain ke thoda neeche ek hisse par thi..

aur ye hissa tha mera VAGUS NERVE..yaad toh hoga hi is nerve ka naam...

ye wahi nerve hain jiske andar INBORN REFLEXES chuppe rehte hain..

jinpar concentrate kar ACCHUTA, SLUNDER, BRAWNY aur HIDA ki god gifted shaktiyan temporarily kaam me aayi hain..

mere brain ke us particular part me jahan BLACK ENERGY locked thi aur ko bas ek second ke liye uncapped hui thi,us waqt usme se nikli ray aur energy mere VAGUS NERVE me bhi chali gayi thi aur phir paida hua mera apna personal BLACK INBORN REFLEX...

kaali shaktiyon se labrez woh REFLEX activate ho chuka tha aur abhi jo hua,ye ussi ki wajah se ho paaya tha..

ye REFLEX power bohot zyada deadly tha par kitna,ye mai nahi jaanta tha par jis jagah par mai tha,wahan bohot jald mai isse figure out karne waala tha..

is samudri tufaan jaisi jagah aur situation me jisme mai ghira hua tha,ye BLACK INBORN REFLEX mere liye us lakdi ke tukde ki tarah tha jisse mai modify karkar ek ship me badal sakta tha aur ye mai karke hi dum lene waala tha...

isiliye mai smile kar raha tha jiske baad....


MAI-yahan saath me chalna thik nahi...ACCHUTA,SLUNDER,HIDA, BRAWNY...tum chaaron aage jaaoge..hum dono tumhare piche rehkar tum chaaron ko cover karenge...

ACCHUTA-par bhai...agar humla saamne se hua toh...

MAI-toh sambhalna yaa mar jaana..waise bhi,tum sab toh yahan shahid hone ke jasbe ke saath hi aaye ho naa...!!!


meri baat sun woh chaaron hi jhemp se gaye aur phir bina kisi sawal ke woh sa aage badh gaye...

wahin unke aage badhte hi...


MAHI-tumhare irade sahi nahi lag rahe mujhe...

MAI-nazar niyat me rakho,iraade bhi sahi lagne lagenge..

khair,apne HUMAN FORM POWER SOURCE par jitna zyada ho sake, concentrate karna shuru kar do...

meri baat sun MAHI itna toh samajh chuki thi ki mujhe aage kya hone waala hai,iska andaza ho chuka hai isiliye bina koi aur sawal kiye man hi man apne HUMAN FORM POWER SOURCE par dhyan dete hue woh aage badhne lagi...

is beech uske andar ki bechaini badhne lagi thi..usse aisa lag raha tha jaise uske andar se kuch suck out ho raha hai...

aur isiliye woh is baare me kuch puchne waali hi thi ki tabhi..

AHHHHH......

ACCHUTA, SLUNDER, BRAWNY aur HIDA ke mooh se ek tez aah nikli aur woh chaaron apne ghutne par aa gaye..

ye dekh MAHI turant unke taraf badhne ko hui par tabhi...


MAI-apni jagah par raho MAHI....ye ped asal me SOUL SUCKERS hain...hamare inke daayre me aate hi ye active ho chuke the..

jo awaaz kuch der pehle aa rahi thi,woh inhi pedon ke AERIAL ROOTS (HAWAYI JADEN) ke chalne ki wajah se aa rahi thi..

unhi jadon me invisible SOUL SUCK BEAMS hoti hain jo dheere dheere activate hoti hain...

tumhare HUMAN FORM POWER SOURCE par concentrate karne ki wajah se ye beams tumpar zyada asar nahi kar paa rahi hain par agar tumne in chaaron me se kisiko bhi touch kiya toh woh beams multiple pressure ke saath tumhare SOUL par humla karengi jiske baad tumhara haal bhi in chaaron ki tarah hi ho jaayega....


meri baat sun MAHI samajh gayi ki kyun maine un chaaron ko aage bheja tha.. agar woh paas hote toh woh invisible beams unke zariye humpar bhi attack kar sakti thi..


MAHI-toh ab kya karen...????

MAI-guyzzz...


halke zor se kahi maine ye baat jisse sun behadh thake hue chehron ke saath joki lagatar soul suck hone ki wajah se bane the, palat kar dekha meri taraf un sabne jispar..


MAI-complete concentration ke saath apne apne powers ko trigger karo aur jab aisa ho jaaye toh run..

in pedon ke daayre se aage nikalna hai tum sabko...


meri baat sun un sabne apne apne vagus nerves me chuppe INBORN REFLEXES par completely focus karna shuru kar diya..

ab kyunki woh sab SAVENTS the, isiliye focus karne me kabji dikkat nahi aati thi unhe aur isiliye jaise hi unka concentration level 100 percent touch hua toh unki shaktiyan unke pure sharir ke andar circulate hui aur aisa hote hi un sabki energy halki si hi sahi par restore ho gayi aur phir...

ek jhatke me uthe woh sab aur phir lagadi un sabne doud...

haan,SOUL SUCK procedure ki wajah se speed kam thi un sabke bhaagne ki par kaafi thi...

wahin jab woh sab uthkar bhaagne lage toh...


MAHI-thank GOD...


halki relaxed hote hue kahi ye baat MAHI ne jispar..


MAI-dont thank him yet..in pedon ke daayre se bahar jaate hi un chaaron ki aur saath me hamari bhi main chunouti shuru hogi...

MAHI-main chunouti matlab...!!!!

MAI-un chaaron ko dekhti jaao...pata chal jaayega...


meri baat sun MAHI ki nazar un chaaron par tik gayi jo ab aakhri do pedon se hote hue is SOUL SUCKING area ke aage badhne hi waale the..

aur phir un sabne aisa kar bhi liya...

pedon ke daayre ko cross kar un chaaron ke face par task pura karne waali khushi naach uthi..

abhi bhi halka halka bhaagte hue woh chaaron hamari taraf palat kuch kehne ko hue par tabhi..


MAHI-arre.....ye chaaron kahan chale gaye...!!!!


achanak se hi gayab ho gaye the woh chaaron jispar chownkte hue kahi ye baat MAHI ne..

asal me faile hue kaale kohre ki wajah se saamne ka scene bas dhundla sa hi dikh raha tha jisme gayab sa hote dekha tha MAHI ne un chaaron ko..

wahin MAHI ki baat sun maine apne haath aage badhaya aur kuch mitaane ke andaaz se haath ko left right kiya..

mere aisa karte hi hamare saamne ka kohra kuch chhat sa gaya jisse aage ka view hadh tak clear ho gaya par jab aisa hua toh MAHI ki aankhein badi ho gayi aur..


MAHI-oh shit...SWAMP....RAAZ,ye chaaron toh daldal me gir gaye hain...aur woh bhi chakrawati daldal....

un chaaron ko dekh jo tezi se ek chakrawati urf ghumte hue daldal me fas chuke the,kahi ye baat MAHI ne jispar...


MAI-dikh raha hai mujhe bhi..


bohot casually kahi ye baat maine aur aage badh gaya jispar aakhon me hairani liye mujhe dekhte hue woh mere saath chalne lagi aur..


MAHI-kya us swamp se unhe koi nuksaan nahi hoga..

MAI-nuksaan nahi hoga,woh sab mar jaayenge...

MAHI-whatttt..!!!!phir tum itne casual...

AHHHHHH......


itna hi kaha tha MAHI ne tabhi kis cheez ne uske peth par waar kiya jiski wajah se woh cheekhte hue kuch peeche jaakar giri...

wahin attack toh mujhpar bhi hua tha par mai chowkanna tha, isiliye dodge de diya..

wahin MAHI girte hi uth gayi thi jispar...


MAI-picnic par nikle hain kya hum...!!!nazar hati, durghatna ghati..is kahawat ko hamesha yaad rakho yahan par..

BHADDHHHH....

apni baat bolte hue hi mere piche ki taraf se ek waar hua tha mujhpar,jisse mehsoos kar liya tha maine aur isiliye ek mukka ghuma mera jo us hue waar ke zariye se takraya jisse hui ye awaaz...

wahin MAHI ko bas ek patli si kaali cheez meri taraf aati dikhi thi jisse maine mukka maara tha..

isiliye mere paas aate hue..


MAHI-kya hai woh cheez...???

MAI-khud hi dekh lena..mukka pada hai,ab thoda thoda karkar nahi,ek saath humla hoga...


abhi meri baat puri hui hi thi ki tabhi...

KRRRRKRRRR....

humse kuch aage hamare dono taraf ek ajeeb si awaaz hui jisse sun jab humne saamne dekha toh paaya ki dono sides ke pedon se unke aerial roots bahar nikal hamare beech do aakrutiyan banate hue jama ho rahe hain aur dekhte hi dekhte un dono aerial roots ne do human aakruti le li...

jahan mere saamne ek male aakruti thi,wahin MAHI ke saamne ek black wooden female aakruti khadi hui thi jisse dekh..


MAI-bina is chunouti ko paar kiye hum aage nahi badh sakte...aur bas do minute hi hain hamare paas..do minute ke baad woh chaaron us daldal me puri tarah sama jaayenge..


meri baat puri hui hi thi ki tabhi....

un dono aakrutiyon ke naye bane sharir ke beech se ek ek bade root nikal jinme se kaali urja bahar aa rahi thi,humari taraf badhe par isse pehle ki woh hume touch kar paate...

ek side summersalt maara MAHI ne aur ek ke baad dono roots ko pakadte hue ghum si gayi....

dono roots ko hawa me hi pakadte hue hi woh unhe ek saath chipkate hue todne ko hui par tabhi...

KAALI urja se bhara ek vibration hua un roots me jisse generated power ke impact se MAHI chittak kar udte hue door girne lagi...

par ek baar phirse hawa me hi kala baazi khaate hue woh safely neeche zamin par land hui..

in sab ke dauran me shaant apni jagah par khada tha..par meri aankhen,unse chingari saaf bahar aa rahi thi aur apne shikar ko dekhkar jo chamak aati hai,wahi chamak mere pure face par dikh rahi thi..

MAHI ko chittakne ke baad woh dono aakrutiyan meri hi taraf ghumi thi par isse pehle ki woh mujhpar waar karti,maine apne VAGUS NERVES me jhaankte hue mere INBORN REFLEXES me moujud mere brain ki kaali shakti ke AURA ko feel kiya aur...

SOOBH......

jaisa ki maine kaha tha ki ab mai ab in nayi shaktiyon ko test karunga,wahi maine kiya..

sabse pehle apni speed ko test karne ki niyat se doud laga di maine un do aakrutiyon ki taraf aur jab maine aisa kiya toh MAHI ki aankhein ek baar phirse badi ho chuki thi....

REASON...

second ke duswe hisse me hi mai un do aakrutiyon ke beech khada tha...

wahin apni SPEED ko test kar uske natije ko dekh mere face me aayi devilish smile aur badh gayi thi...

waise mere is negetive smile ka ek aur reason bhi tha..

aur woh reason tha VIDEOUS....

darasal in dono aakrutiyon se ,jis pedh se ye bane the,usse wahi kaali urja nikal rahi thi jo VIDEOUS ke andar waas kar rahe BLACK ENERGY se aati thi..

jiska matlab tha ki is puri jagah ko aur yahan ke khatron ko ussine banaya tha...

ab jo chiz VIDEOUS ki urja se bani ho,usse mitane me meri excitement toh badhegi hi....

khair,mujhe apne paas dekh un dono roots se bani aakrutiyon ne tez dhaar nukile root stem jo kisi lohe ke sariye ki nok se bhi zyada dhaardhaar the,unhe mujhpar release kar diya....

par isse pehle ki woh root stem mujhe touch bhi kar paate,mere dono haathon me ek ek kaali urja se hi bani KATANA chamak uthi jiske baad mere dono haath ek second me 100 se zyada baar ghum gaye aur aisa hone par naa sirf un dono KATANAS ne saare root stems ko kaar diya balki saath hi saath mere tez dhaar KATANA ke kayi waar un dono aerial roots se bane aakrutiyon par bhi padh gaye the jiski wajah se kuch roots toot kar neeche gir gaye the...

wahin MAHI ne jab pehle meri speed aur phir mere waaron ki intensity ko dekha toh woh samajh gayi ki mai un dono aakrutiyon ko aaram se handle kar sakta hun...

aur isiliye time waste naa karte hue woh turant mere doston ki taraf bhaagi...

thik tabhi ek aakruti se ek lamba root ek bhaale ki shape lete hue mujhe penetrate karne ke liye meri taraf badha aur aisa hote dekh mai bas halka sa side hue aur us bhaale ki shakl liye root ko pakad usse beech se hi tod diya aur usse ghumate hue ussi aakruti ke seene waale bhaag me ghusa diya...

ye penetration itna forceful tha ki woh aakruti thoda piche jaakar giri thi...

wahin ab tak MAHI mere X doston ke paas pahunch chuke the..

MAHI ne dekha ki is chakrawat roopi swamp me lagatar tezi se ghumte rehne ki wajah se woh chaaron behosh ho chuke the..

saath hi saath woh chaaron gale tak us daldal me dhans bhi chuke the aur isiliye....


MANUSYAM KANAM PRAVATI

HUMAN FORM FINAL STAGE


humans bante mitti se hain aur phir sama bhi ussi me jaate hain..

isiliye is SPELL ko MAHI ne uccharit kiya tha..uske aisa karte hi uske andar base HUMAN FORM POWER SOURCE ne ussi mitti ko release kiya jisse humans bante hain...

woh saari mitti badi tezi se us daldal ke edge se hote hue uske neeche jaane lagi aur jab aisa hua toh woh pura swamp neeche se sukhne laga aur aisa hote hi naa sirf un chaaron ka neeche dhansa band ho gaya balki us mitti ne un sabke pairon ke neeche aate hue unhe upar uthana shuru kar diya..

sujh bujh se liye MAHI ke faisle ne ne un sabki jaan bacha li thi...kuch hi pal me woh chaaron us daldal ke jo ab MAHI ke release kiye mitti ki wajah se normal zamin me convert ho chuka tha,uske upar lete hue the..

aisa hote hi MAHI un sabke beech gayi aur usne apne HUMAN FORM POWER SOURCE ko ek baar phirse release kar diya..

uske aisa karne par jab uski urja un chaaron par padi toh..

ek jhatke me hi un chaaron ki aankh khul gayi aur woh sab uthkar baith gaye..

khudko surakshit dekh jiski ummid unhone chhod do thi,un sabne rahat ki saans li par isse pehle ki woh kuch kehte,unki nazar jahan mai tha,wahan gayi aur aisa hote hi un sabki including MAHI aankhen badi ho gayi...

REASON....

ek kaali parchayi me badal chuka tha mai jiske haathon me jakde hue KATANA un dono aakrutiyon ko upar se neeche tak kaaththe chale jaa rahe the...

dekhte hi dekhte un aakrutiyon ka 75 percent bhaag katkar unse alag ho chuka tha jiske baad jab un aakrutiyon ko samajh me aaya ki woh mujhe harana toh chhod,mujhse bach bhi nahi paayenge toh woh invisible ho gaye...

aur unke aisa karte hi mere face par ek baar phirse smile naach uthi..

woh aakrutiyan bhale hi gayab ho chuki thi,par mai jaan gaya tha ki woh wapas un aathon pedhon me lout gayi hain..

mai ye bhi jaan gaha tha ki woh aathon pedh joki VIDEOUS ki kaali urja ki wajah se jeevant hain,hamare aage badhne ke baad dusre tarike se hum par waar karenge..

wahin dono aakrutiyon ke gayab hone ke baad MAHI aur woh chaaron meri taraf aane ko hue par phir woh ek dum se rook gaye...

reason...

mai un aathon pedon ke theek beech khada hua..apne haathon ko puri tarah failaya maine...

aankhen band kar VAGUS NERVES me puri tarah se concentrate karte hue apne andar nihit kaali urja ki AAG ko mehoos karte hue aankh khol di maine....

aankh khulte hi meri ankhon ki putiliyan,unke peeche ka white part tak kaala ho gaya..mere pure sharir se kaala dhuan bahar aane laga jiski shakti ko mehsoos karte hue...


DARNAM JWALAM PRAKATAM....

BLACK FIRE APPEAR....



chillate hue uccharit kiya maine ye SPELL jo har taraf echo hone laga..

aur thik ussi waqt mere sharir se nikalte kaale dhuen ne kaali aag ka roop lete hue un aathon trees ki taraf rookh kar liya aur aur agle hi pal....

AAHAAHAHAHAHHHHHH.....

woh aathon pedh joki asal me asankhya kaali roohon ke aatma ki shakti se bane hua the,woh aag ke lapton ke beech jhulsate hue cheekh uthe...

jo aag maine chhodi thi,woh rooh tak ko jalane waali aag thi aur isiliye hi woh pedh aur usme basi roohen jalne ki wajah se tez cheekhne lagi...

jahan us unbearable cheekh ko sun mere x doston ne apne kaano par haath rakh liye the,MAHI bade dhyan se mujhe dekh rahi thi,wahin mai aankhon me sukoon liye un cheekhon ko sun raha tha...

dekhte hi dekhte un aathon pedon ke beech se hazaron ki tadad me roohen nikal aasman me uth gayi par woh bohot tezi se chattpata rahi thi...

kuch aur waqt beeta jiske baad woh saari roohen double tezi se wapas un aathon pedon ki taraf aayi aur unse takra gayi jiske impact se...


BOOMMMMMM.....

ek tez dhamaka hua jisne mujhe bhi khudme lapet liya tha..aisa hote dekh MAHI mere liye dar gayi thi par woh meri taraf badhti ki tabhi...


VIDEOUS......


mere mooh se nikli thi ye gunj jiske impact se mere aaju baaju faila dhuan chhat gaya aur mai MAHI aur baaki chaaron ki saaf dikhne laga...

wahin VIDEOUS ka naam lekar meri nazar upar asman me gayi..ye jagah aur yahan ka aasman jo ki kaala hi tha,ye sab VIDEOUS ki shakti se bana tha aur mujhe yakin tha woh is waqt mujhe dekh raha hai...

aur isiliye upar dekhte hue.....


MAI-


mujhe bas tere hi naam ki KHUMAARI HAI....

dekh aa gaya teri duniya me,aakhir loutana jo teri UDHAARI HAI....

meri taklif ka dour guzar chuka VIDEOUS....

mujhe jitna jalna tha,mai jal chuka,ab........teri BAARI HAI........

















AAJ KE LIYE ITNA HI.....

















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