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Fantasy ATTITUDE (KABHI ANGEL KABHI DEVIL) ( Completed )

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AB TAK AAPNE PADHA KI JAHAN EK TARAF MAHI KO ANZU KE ROOP ME EK NAYI PET MIL JAATI HAI WAHIN DUSRI TARAF RAAZ KO STALWART RIVER KE FOG KO COUNTER KARNE KA TARIKA MIL JAATA HAI.


AB AAGE:-



CHAPTER-3


(THE DEVIL'S HAVEN,THE SACRIFICE & THE PERFECT EPILOGUE)



UPDATE-134



PLANET-SPIRAM


PLACE-THE COLD VOLCANO









HUM SAHI DISHA KI TARAF TOH BADH RAHE HAIN NAA...???


ek strong chilling sensation ko feel karte hue kahi thi ye baat MAHI ne...

reason...

ANZU ke bataye anusar woh aur MAHI volcano ke disha ki taraf badh gaye the...

aur kareeb 3/4 doori tay karne ke baad MAHI ko achanak se hi pura mahoul halka thanda feel hona shuru ho gaya aur jaise jaise woh aage kadam badhati gayi,waise waise thand bhi badhne lagi thi...

aur isiliye hi MAHI ne woh sawal pucha tha jispar....


ANZU-haan,hum sahi disha me.hi chal rahe hain...dhyan se dekho,wahan pahad ke upar VOLCANO ka mooh dikh raha hai...


ANZU ki baat sahi thi...apne naak ki seedh me MAHI ko ek bada sa mountain aur uski nok par ek open volcano ka mooh dikh raha tha..

par naa toh us open mouth me se aag ke garmi se paida hone waala dhuan nazar aa raha tha aur naahi jaisa har jagah hota hai,volcano ke aas paas ki jagah bhi garam hoti hai,yahan uska bilkul ulat tha...

kampkapati thand ko jhelte hue MAHI us volcano ki taraf badh rahi thi..

ek aur baat thi jo kaafi hairani waali thi aur woh ye ki MAHI ne thand se bachne aur rahat paane ke liye sharir ko garm karne waala SPELL bhi uccharit kiya tha par uska koi asar hua nahi...

yahi sab ke baare me soch rahi thi MAHI jisse uske kandhe par tike ANZU ne bhaamp sa liya aur phir..


ANZU-kya aap yahan lag rahe thand aur isse bachne ke liye aapne kuch der pehle jo SPELL bola tha,uske asar naa karne ke baare me soch rahi hain...!!!???

MAHI-haan...

ANZU-is baare me meri ek opinion hai... agar FAIRY PRINCESS ki ijazat ho toh bolun...!??

MAHI-apni raay rakhne ke liye tumhe meri ijazat lene ki zaroorat nahi hai ANZU..

ek baat aur,mera naam MAHI hai..mujhe mere naam se hi pukaro
...tum khudko meri pet ya gulam bilkul mat socho..mujhe apni dost maano....

ANZU-is izzat afzayi ke liye shukriya... toh tumhe yaad hi hoga MAHI ki maine kaha tha ki mujhe is volcano se kuch alag hi feeling aa rahi hai..

woh feeling yahi coldness thi...par tab maine socha tha ki yahan ka ilaaka barfila hoga jiski wajah se woh coldness mujhe feel ho rahi thi....

par aisa hai nahi...mujhe lagta hai ki zaroor is volcano se jo thandak feel ho rahi hai,ye ek tarah ka distraction hai joki iske andar base chiz ko hide karne ke liye paida kiya hai..

MAHI-aur tum is natije par kaise pahunchi ho...!!!

ANZU-issi chilling weather ki wajah se jiska asar tumpar toh ho raha hai par mujhpar nahi...

MAHI-mai samjhi nahi..

ANZU-agar bura naa maano toh kya mai iska jawab tumhe volcano ke paas pahunchkar dun...!!!!

MAHI-isme bura manane waali kya baat hai...!!!chalo phir,filhal toh hamari agli manzil bhi wahi hai toh saare ganit wahin chalkar hi lagate hain..


ye bol MAHI aur ANZU tezi se us pahad ki taraf badh chale jiske top par tha woh volcano point...





PLANET-STALWART WORLD


PLACE-INFRONT OF THE STALWART RIVER





RAKTHAM PRAKATAM

BLOOD APPEAR



apne index finger ko aage kar uspar focus karte hue uccharit kiya is SPELL ko maine jiske baad mere index finger me cut padh gaya aur usse halka sa khoon bahar nikla aur aisa hote hi apne thumb par stick karte hue index finger ko saamne jhatka diya maine jisse mere khoon ka nikla bund aage FOG ke daayre ke andar chala gaya aur jab aisa hua toh...

jaisa maine socha tha,thik waisa hi hua...dekhte hi dekhte theek mere saamne ek straight line me pagdandi ka form lete hue FOG do hisso me bant gayi...

mera raasta clear ho chuka tha aur isiliye maine apne aage kadam badha liye par abhi mai us fog ke beech bane raaste par apna pehla kadam rakhun,usse pehle hi..


DEWEI-isse lete jaaiye..


DEWEI ki baat sun jab mai uski taraf palta toh paaya ki woh apna haath meri taraf badhaye khada hua tha..

uske haath me kuch tha jisse woh shayad mujhe dena chahta tha..

wahin mujhe palta dekh DEWEI meri taraf badha aur...


DEWEI-ye le lijiye..ye ek NOBLE COIN hai...ye ek kism ka gateway hai...

STALWART WORLD me entry ke waqt aapne hume shops jaisi jagah par dekha tha,woh shops asal me hamare world me aane aur yahan se jaane ka GATEWAYS hain jo aise hi COIN ke ki madad se kiya jaa sakta hai..

jab aap kaamiyab ho jaayenge tab aapko is NOBLE COIN ko crush karna hai,aisa karne ke baad hi aap aap aur aapki saathi apne liye nirdharit destination par pahunch paayenge...


DEWEI ki baat sun uske haathon se us NOBLE COIN ko liya maine aur ek baar usse dekhte hue...


MAI-let me guess..ye coin abhi abhi tumhare paas aaya hai aur aisa hone ke baad tumhare brain me iski info daali gayi hai, right..!!!

DEWEI-jee...

MAI-kamal hai..ANGELS kab se DEVIL'S ko copy karne lage...

DEVIL'S peeth piche waar karte han aur ANGELS peeth piche baatein kar rahe hain...


jahan meri baat sunane ke baad bhi chup hi raha DEWEI wahin apni baat keh us NOBLE COIN ko apne pocket me daal wapas palta mai aur mere liye bane pagdandi numa raaste ke beech chal pada..

jaise jaise mai aage badh raha tha,mere piche bana raasta wapas FOG se dhakta hua band hote chala jaa raha tha...

aage badhte hue meri nazar us sookh chuke RIVER ke mid point par thi aur woh isiliye kyunki jis sukhe zamin par mai chal raha tha,woh nami ke naa hone ke baad bhi halki bhuri thi par woh midway waala part circle shape liye white tha..

khair,kuch 2 minute ne hi mai us centre point ke paas tha aur wahan pahunch maine dekha ki kisi jagah par spot light padne par jaisi roshni hoti hai,us jagah par waisi hi roshni chhayi hui thi bas fark sirf itna tha ki spot light ki roshni upar se aati hai aur ye jagah naturally apne dum par chamak raha tha..

khair kuch soch me us roshni aur round shaped jagah par jaakar khada ho gaya jiske baad kuch seconds toh sab shaant hi raha par phir mere pairon ke neeche kampan hone lagi..

par mai apna balance banaye apni jagah par hi khada raha par tabhi...

mere neeche ki zamin ek jhatke me gayab ho gayi aur mai sidha neeche girne laga...

patal lok ki safar me nikla tha mai,ye feeling liye neeche girte chale jaa raha tha mai tabhi...

mujhe halki halki thand lagne lagi jo har guzarte pal ke saath badhte chali jaa rahi thi..

abhi mai is naye parivartan ke baare me sochta ki tabhi...

BHADDHHH......

mere pair neeche kisi sakht chiz se takraye aur aisa hote hi mai samajh gaya ki achanak thand kaise lagne lagi thi...

darasal is waqt mai ek bohot bade gufa me tha aur jispar par mai land hua tha, woh zamin nahi balki BARF thi....

mai neeche jhuka aur mere pairon ke neeche us tadke hue barf waale hisse ko chhua maine aur apni aankhen band kar mai kuch jaanane ki koshish karne hi waala tha ki tabhi...


AAP SAHI SOCH RAHE HAIN RAAZ...YE BARF STALWART RIVER KA HI JAM CHUKA PAANI HAI...


mere saamne se aayi thi ye awaaz jisse sun jab aage dekha maine toh paaya ki ek lamba chowda shaksh muskurate hue mujhse kuch door khada hua tha...


MAI-tum toh.......ABBADON ho....




BACK TO MAHI:-





PLANET-SPIRAM


PLACE-VOLCANO POINT





UNBELIEVABLE....IS VOLCANO ME GARM LAVA KI JAGAH BARF FLOW HO RAHA HAI....

volcano ke hole me neeche ki taraf jhaank kar dekhte hue hadh se zyada thand ki wajah se apne haathon ko rub karte hue kahi ye baat MAHI ne jispar....


ANZU-ek baar apne breast ke right ki taraf haath rakhiye aur bataiye ki kya woh jagah bhi thandi hai...!!!!


ANZU ki baat ka matlab toh nahi samjhi MAHI par bina kuch kahe usne apne breast ke right ki taraf apna haath rakha aur aisa karte hi MAHI ko laga shock..

usne turant apne breast ke left taraf aur phir pet par bhi haath lagaya par natija jaan uski hairangi badh gayi..

aur ussi hairangi ko chehre par liye..


MAHI-ab ye kaisa magic hai..??? mere breast ke right ki taraf ka bhaag kaafi warm hai jabki baaki puri body thandi...!!!!

ANZU-matlab mera shak sahi tha..darasal aapke breast ke right ki taraf aapka ANGEL FORM basta hai aur sirf wahi bhaag yahan itne cold atmosphere me bhi warm hai...

theek meri tarah..kyunki mai bhi tumhare ANGEL FORM se nikle WHITE ENERGY ke AURA se bani hun, isiliye mai bhi warm hun...


AAPKI YE NAYI SAATHI BILKUL SAHI KEH RAHI HAI MAHI...


MAHI ke kuch kehne se pehle uske kaan me ye anjaani si awaaz padi jisse sun jab usne saamne dekha toh halki chownki..

kyunki jis volcano ke top par woh khadi thi,ussi volcano ke andar se udta hua ek shaks bahar nikla tha..

wahin apni baat bol woh shaksh ek baar MAHI ke aage jhuka aur...


ANGEL'S LORD ki beti ko ABRAXAS ka naman..


MAHI-ABRAXAS....tum wahi hona jiske baare me LILITHA aur VALEFOR baat kar rahe the..

ABRAXAS-jee...sadiyon se is jagah par rehte hue aapki raah dekhi hai maine...aage ke hurdle ko paar kar mujhe mukt karne ka ehsaan kijiye...

MAHI-mukt hona aapka haq hai,jo aapko zaroor milega..toh bataiye,mujhe kya karna hoga..???

ABRAXAS-sabse pehle maafi ki arz karte hue kya mai aapke saathi ko is pinjre me tab tak ke liye kaid kar sakta hun jab tak aap apni chunouti ko paar nahi kar leti..

MAHI-aisa kyun...???

ABRAXAS-kyunki ye chunouti aapki hai...isse aapko akele pura karna hai..aap kisi bhi tarah ki madad nahi le sakti...

MAHI-koi baat nahi..mai madad nahi lungi,par ANZU pinjre me nahi jaayegi..

ABRAXAS-aapki baat kaat raha hun,iske liye maafi chahunga..par agar aapne aisa nahi kiya toh mujhe wapas aapko GALEN bhejna padega jiske baad aapko ye safar phirse shuru karna padega..


ABRAXAS ne bohot hi politely apni baat kahi thi jisse sun MAHI halki si tensed ho gayi thi..

bhale hi ANZU ek powerful creature thi par thi toh woh ek bird..aur ek bird ke liye pinjre me jaana bohot buri feeling hoti hai aur ye baat jaanti thi MAHI..

wahin MAHI ke tensed face ko dekh...


ANZU-relax MAHI..mujhe pinjre me jaane se naahi aitraaz hai aur naahi bura lag raha hai..

tum apna challenge pura karo taaki hum aage badh sake...


jahan ANZU ki baat sun halki si smile kar di MAHI ne wahin is beech ek chota aur pyara sa pinjra ready kar diya tha ABRAXAS ne jisme udte hue chali gayi ANZU...

aur aisa hote hi...


MAHI-toh ab bataiye..mujhe karna kya hai...???

ABRAXAS-RAAZ ki madad...!!!


ABRAXAS ki baat sun chownki hui MAHI aur...


MAHI-RAAZ ki madad matlab...!!!!

ABRAXAS-aap abhi do PLANETS ke CROSSOVER ke beech khadi hain...

is volcano ke dusri taraf hai woh PLANET jisme RAAZ moujud hai...

ye jo thandak aap feel kar rahi hain,ye bhale hi is VOLCANO se aa raha hai par iski jadh us dusre planet ka paani hai jo is VOLCANO aur RAAZ jis jagah par hai,uske neeche chhup gaya hai....

woh paani chhupe hue is PLANET aur us PLANET ke beech ek khaali volume me thehra hua hai..

ye isiliye hua hai taaki kisi bhi negetive aur BLACK ENERGY ke dhaarak ko is chhupe paani ke baare me kabhi pata naa chale...

ussi chhupe hue paani ko bahar nikalna hi aapki aur RAAZ,dono ki chunouti hai....

aur isse aapko us zariye,us hathiyar ki madad se karna hai jo aap dono ke andar hi hai,par abhi tak aapne usse istamal ne laana shuru nahi kiya....


MAHI-apne ANGEL aur HUMAN FORM POWER SOURCE ko activate karna..!!!

ABRAXAS-jee..par filhal aapko apne sirf HUMAN FORM POWER SOURCE ko activate karte hue uski energy ko temporarily hi sahi,par is VOLCANO se nikal rahe kohre par release karna hai...

MAHI-aur RAAZ ko...???

ABRAXAS-unhe apne HEART me chuppe ERRAPEL ki shakti ko,unke ANGEL form ko activate karte hue uski energy ko temporarily hi sahi,par jahan woh hain,us jagah par release karna hai...

MAHI-ho gaya kalyan...


RAAZ ki chunouti ko sun ek lambi saans chhodte hue khudse kahi thi ye baat MAHI ne aur uska aisa disheartened hona jayaz bhi tha..

bhale temporary hi sahi,par ERRAPEL waale part ko joki RAAZ se naaraz hai,usse kuch palon ke liye hi sahi,activate karna,woh bhi abhi RAAZ jis mood me hai, usme next to impossible chiz thi...

par option toh kuch tha hi nahi MAHI ke paas..woh bas RAAZ ki taraf se positive hope karte hue apne hisse ki chunouti par hi focus kar sakti thi aur usne wahi karne ki sochi..

dobara ek lambi saans chhod MAHI ne ABRAXAS ko dekha aur...


MAHI-ok then..i am ready....





BACK TO RAAZ:-





PLANET-STALWART WORLD


PLACE-ABOVE THE ICE BARRICADE





KYA AAP TAIYAAR HAIN...!!!!




jo baatein ABRAXAS ne MAHI ko batayi thi,wahi saari baat aur instructions dene ke baad pucha mujhse ye sawal ABBADON ne jispar mai khamosh hi raha..

REASON...

waise toh mere aage rakhe gaye har challenge ko bhale hi woh kitna hi tough kyun naa ho,mai accept karne me ek pal bhi nahi gawata par is baar ka maamla kuch aur tha...

is challenge me bhale hi participate
mai kar raha tha,par isse kaamiyab ERRAPEL ki shakti hi kar sakti thi..

woh shakti jo filhal mere kaabu me nahi thi aur naahi aisa hone ke koi asaar the...

aise me haar meri tay thi par haar se darne ka mindset mera naa kabhi raha hai aur naahi ab hone waala tha aur isiliye...


MAI-i am ready....


jaise hi maine apni baat boli toh us gufa ke andar ka temperature aur girne laga..itna hi nahi,woh barf jo mere pairon ke neeche jama hua tha,woh aur thandi hone lagi...

waise toh shoes pehni thi maine par ice ka thand itna zyada badhne laga tha ki woh thand mere shoes se hote hue mere pairon ko feel hone lagi thi...

halka halka kaampna bhi shuru ho gaya tha mai par in dono odds ko nazarandaaz karte hue mai apni jagah par khade khade hi PAUSED CEREBRATION me chala gaya...

sabse pehle maine BLOOD AMPLIFICATION ke tahat apne dhamniyon me beh rahe khoon ki gati ko tez kiya taaki har pal badh rahe thand ko jhelne se rahat paa sakun..

par jab maine aisa kiya toh ek nayi musibat mujhse jud gayi..

is jagah ki maya ki wajah se mai normal human jaisa ho chuka tha aur isiliye mera stamina bhi waisa hi ho gaya tha.

BLOOD AMPLIFICATION ko trigger karne se body temperature toh bas halka sa hi stabilize hua mera par saans meri tezi se chaddhne lagi...

is naye odd se ladhte hue maine apne EMOTIONS POWER ki taraf rookh kiya...

par aisa karte hi mujhe ek nayi odd situation ka saamna karna pada..

aur woh ye ki jahan pehle mere EMOTIONS power ka home,mera HEART hamesha jagmagate rehta tha,wahin ab uske bilkul ulat us area me dark andhera tha...

mai is change ka reason jaanta tha.. ERRAPEL... kyunki usne mujhe nahi apnaya tha, isiliye usne mere REFINER powers ke daayre ko dark kar diya tha par kyunki mai khud abhi dark stage me tha, isiliye bahari pysical tour par mujhe zyada fark nahi pada tha...

khair,us andhere me me ERRAPEL ki shakti ko feel karne ki koshish karte hue aage badhne laga mai aur aisa karte waqt door ek bohot baarikh se roshni ki kiran dikhi mujhe jisse dekh mai us roshni ki taraf badhne ko hua par tabhi....

woh roshni ki kiran jo door thi mujhse,bijli ki gati se aage badhi aur mujhe hit kar gayi..

ye ERRAPEL ki hi shakti thi jiske hit karte hi mere BRAIN ko laga ek tez jhatka aur woh behosh hone lag gaya..

wahin jab ERRAPEL ki shakti ne mujhe hit kiya toh mere body ke chaaron taraf ek bohot taakatwar energy force me janm liya..

aisa hote hi mere pairon ke neeche ki barf tadakne lagi aur dekhte hi dekhte woh toot gayi...

minus 100 degree se bhi kam taapman waale us barf ke neeche tha pure aur chilled water..wahi water jisse wapas STALWART RIVER me bhejna tha mujhe...

mai ussi water me samata chala gaya mai...

aisa hone par ek hadh se zyada chilling sensation feel kiya mere sharir aur khaas kar mere brain me..

issi beech mere mooh me woh water kayi gallen tak sama gaya jiski wajah se mera BLOOD AMPLIFICATION process bhi rook gaya..

itni saari chizon ke ek saath hone se mere brain ke behoshi waale state me jaane ki gati aur tez ho gayi...

bina AMPLIFICATION mode se bahar aate hi mai us gehre paani kr beech kisi murde ki taraf tairta hua BEHOSH ho chuka tha..




BACK TO MAHI:-



PLANET-SPIRAM


PLACE-ABOVE THE VOLCANO





ASATI....

MOVE...


apni aankhen band kar apne ANGEL FORM POWER SOURCE ko dekhte hue uccharit kiya is SPELL ko MAHI ne aur uske aisa karte hi us power source ki chamak thodi aur badh gayi...

par us power source ke saath hi MAHI ka HUMAN FORM POWER SOURCE bhi jagmagane laga joki nahi hona chahiye tha...

MAHI ko sirf apne ANGEL FORM POWER SOURCE ko move karna tha.. aisa hone par jo energy wave bahar aati aur volcano me jaati,ussise hi MAHI ki chunouti puri ho paati..

par kyunki SPELL bolne ke baad MAHI ka dusra power source bhi jagmagane laga tha isiliye woh SPELL naa sirf bekaar ho gaya balki saath hi saath jo thand MAHI ab tak feel kar rahi thi,woh bhi 10 times tak badh gayi...

aur is level ke thand ke beech MAHI dobara apne andar ke ANGEL FORM par concentrate nahi kar sakti thi aur isiliye usne ek naya idea lagaya.

usne apne BLOOD AMPLIFICATION mode ko activate kiya aur usse apne heart me bade ANGEL FORM waali jagah par le jaane lagi...

uske aisa karte hi MAHI ko lagne waali thand bhi kam hone lagi...

halka relaxed feel karte hi MAHI ne ek baar phirse ASATI SPELL ko uccharit karne ki sochi par woh aisa karti,usse pehle hi MAHI ke andar ek kism ka short circuit ho gaya....

toh hua yua ye ki kuch seconds pehle MAHI ki lagayi yukti jisme woh apne BLOOD AMPLIFICATION mode ki shakti ko apne ANGEL FORM ki taraf le jaa rahi thi,uska ek halka sa bhaag uske HUMAN FORM ki taraf bhi mood gaya aur jab woh bhaag us form ko touch hua toh us HUMAN FORM se ek energy beam nikal sidhe MAHI ke ANGEL FORM se takrayi..

ye takkar kaafi impactful thi jiski wajah se MAHI ka heart beat tak ek second ke liye rook gaya...

itna hi nahi,MAHI ke heart se nikal uske brain me jaa raha khoon bhi ubal sa gaya jiski wajah se wahan hamrage waali sththi paida ho gayi...

itna sab kuch ek saath hone se MAHI khudko sambhal nahi paayi aur woh lehrate hue behosh hokar neeche gir gayi...




BACK TO RAAZ:-




PLANET-STALWART WORLD


PLACE-INSIDE THE WATER





ITNI JALDI AANKHEN BAND KAR LI...!!!ITNA TOH KAMZOR NAHI HAI MERA BETA....


ek tez chamak se bani aakruti joki asal me meri MOM thi, unhone kahi thi ye baat mujhse...

behoshi ki haalat me tair raha tha mera body US DIVINE WATER me jabki meri aatma wapas STALWART WORLD ke sukhe river ke upar thi...

har taraf energy barrier se bana kohra jama hua tha aur us kohre ko cheerte hue woh roshni numa aakruti joki meri MOM thi,mere aage khadi thi...

aur unki baat par jab mai kuch naa bola toh..


MOM-is situation se nikalne ka tarika jaanana chaahoge....???

MAI-mujhe aapki koi madad nahi chahiye...

MOM-maine ye kab kaha ki mai tumhari madad karne waali hun...

tumhari madad ka zariya tumhare andar hi hai,bas usse bahar nikalne ka tarika jisse tum abhi tak anjaan ho,woh bataungi mai...


MOM ERRAPEL ki baat kar rahi thi,ye jaanta tha mai aur isiliye..


MAI-us zariye ne hi mujhe is state me pahunchaya hai...

MOM-aur wahi tumhe is situation se bahar bhi nikalegi par aisa hone ke liye ek sharth hai jo puri karni padegi tumhe....

MAI-souda...!!!!yahi toh karte aaye ho aap aaj tak..khair, bataiye,sun raha hun mai...

MOM-tumhe apne EMOTIONS power ka baaki ka pura bhaag jo filhal tumhare control me hai,usse ERRAPEL ki shakti ko soumpna hoga...

agar tum aisa karne ke liye taiyar hote ho toh tum yahan ki chunouti me safal ho jaaoge....


MOM ki naa sirf baat ko samjha tha mai,balki saath hi saath us baat,us sharth ke piche ke uddeshya ko bhi jaan chuka tha mai..

toh baat kuch yun thi ki mom ye baat jaanti thi ki mera woh ghussa jo unpar,dad par aur khaas kar dono LORDS par hai,jisse abhi ke liye toh maine dabakar rakha hua hai,woh CHOSENS pahunchte hi unleash ho jaayega..

aur phir mera keher sirf negetive logon par nahi,balki positive logon par bhi barsega...

mom ko ye bhi pata tha ki bhale hi is waqt ERRAPEL ki shakti joki meri sabse badi power source thi,woh mere khilaaf thi,par phir bhi mere EMOTIONS power ka baaki ka 90 percent bhaag bohot zyada taakatwar tha..

saath hi saath us 90 pratishat bhaag me ACCHUTA, SLUNDER, BRAWNY, HIDA aur ALFREEN ki GOD GIFT power ka 50 percent bhi mixed tha jo meri shaktiyon ko aur zyada deadly banati thi...

us power ke dum par bhi mai pure CHOSENS me kohram macha sakta tha...

aur isiliye hi mere aage ye sharth rakhi gayi thi...jo ek baar maine apne baaki ke REFINERS aur unke power ka control ERRAPEL ke haathon me soump diya,uske baad mai utni hi shakti ka istemal kar sakta tha jitne ki woh mujhe ijazat degi...

khair,in saare negetives ko jaante hue bhi is situation se nikalne ka aur koi tarika naa mujhe pata tha aur naa aage pata chalne waala tha aur isiliye MOM ki baat manane ke alawa mere paas aur koi option nahi tha...

isiliye....


MAI-mujhe manzoor hai...

MOM-bohot sahi faisla liya mere bacche...tum abhi SOUL FORM me hi ho, isiliye tumhe bas apne saare EMOTIONS aur REFINER powers ko yaad karte hue SURRENDER bolna hai..

tum bas itna karo,baaki ka kaam ERRAPEL khud kar legi...


MAI-I SURRENDER...


aankh band kar apne EMOTIONS aur REFINER powers ko feel karte hue kahi ye baat maine jiske baad meri SOUL wapas mere sharir me chali gayi..

aisa hote hi mujhe apne andar ek baar phirse wahi roshni joki ERRAPEL thi,dikhi jiske chunne se mai behosh hua tha...

par is baar woh sirf roshni nahi thi,balki us roshni me ERRAPEL ka glow karta hua face bhi dikh raha tha joki is waqt mujhe dekhkar smile kar rahi thi..

aisa karte hue hi uski roshni ne mere EMOTIONS aur REFINER powers ko khudse jodte hue unpar control set karna shuru kar diya..

aur jab ye procedure chal raha tha,toh ussi tarah muskurate hue dekhti rahi ERRAPEL mujhe aur phir...


ERRAPEL-



kya socha tha kabhi ki tere ravvaiye ki tujhe aisi saza MILEGI....

jis shakti ka ghamand tha tujhe,ab uski kami KHALEGI...

jitni manmaani karni thi,kar li tune,par ab bas....

shaktiyan bhale hi teri hain,par ab woh ERRAPEL ke hisaab se CHALEGI.....















AAJ KE LIYE ITNA HI......
















AAPKA APNA V....J....
My god vj bhai karte kya ho yr last line ka koi jvab nhi hota👌👌👌
 

Saddemon

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brother,ab tak kahani me RAAZ ke saath jo bhi situation create hui hai,aur us situation ko usne kaise handle kiya hai, pehle un chizon par baariki se dhyan dijiye...

aapko yaad hoga jab VIDEOUS ne RAAZ se kaha tha ki woh dono apni apni aloukik shaktiyan uski sword me chhupa denge,tab Raaz ne bina naatak kiye ya ladhe ek baar me haan kaha tha..

reason..

OPTION... joki uske paas tha nahi..game VIDEOUS ke hisaab se hi chal sakti hai,ye jaanta tha woh isiliye usse us faisle ko maanane me ek pal bhi nahi laga..

us scene ke baad jab RAAZ normal SAVENT ban gaya,tab apne REFINER powers ko activate karne me usse jaanleva pain feel hua tha par woh phir bhi data raha tha...

woh situation uske liye completely negetive thi..uske EMOTIONS ke power uske paas the hi nahi thik waise hi jaise ab uske paas uski shaktiyon ka control nahi hai lekin usne haar nahi maani aur uske target tak pahunch hi gaya..

jin do scenes ke baare me maine abhi bataya hai,woh ek hi bande ke do alag alag situation me liye gaye faisle hain..

ek situation me jab uske saamne uska dushman tha,toh uski baat bhi usne ek baar me maan li

aur dusra challenge uske saamne khudse hi tha jisme usne apna real ATTITUDE dikhaya..woh ATTITUDE jiski wajah se woh kaamiyab bhi hua..

VIDEOUS waale scene aur REFINER powers ke activate karne waale scene ka mishran tha aaj ka scene...

VIDEOUS waale scene ki hi tarah aaj uske paas option nahi tha..agar woh nahi maanta toh wahin fasa reh jaata..

aur bhai kahani puri kaise hoti phir...??

REFINER waale scene jaise scenes ab banenge jab uske paas uski shaktiyan toh hongi par unpar control nahi..

par ek chiz jo pehle bhi uske paas thi,aaj bhi hai aur aage bhi rahegi,woh hai uska never giving up ATTITUDE...

ek aisa ATTITUDE jo VIDEOUS toh kya VIKRAM aur ASMODEUS bhi usse nahi chhin sakte...

aur ek andar ki baat bataun.. VIKRAM aur ASMODEUS bhi ye baat jaante hain aur isiliye hi unhone jo kiya hai woh kiya hai..

ye sab RAAZ ka KABHI ANGEL KABHI DEVIL waala roop pura karne ki taiyari hai..

kyunki yahi woh roop hai jisse is kahani ka naam pura hua hai,aur aage chalkar ye puri kahani khatm bhi issi naam par hogi....
Ek andr ki baat btaw.....😀😀😀gajb Sun ke hi 🍇🍇🍇🍇aa gya muh me.
 

meehacker

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thanks for such a beautiful review brother..aise reviews bohot kam padhne ko milte hain...



aur woh jo aapki sex waali baat thi,toh mera aisa manana hai ki kamsekam ye ek aisi chiz hai jisse padhkar imagine karne me bhhaka kya maza..



jab aap sunny leone ko dekh sakte ho toh phir usse imagine kyun karna..!!!😄😄😄



haan, brother, poetries mai likhta hun,par yahan unhe zabardasti involve nahi karna chahta isiliye nahi daalta...



lekin aapke khubsoorat review ki wajah se ek poetry pesh karta hun..padhkar bataiye ki kaisa laga..???



toh arz kiya hai...





V.J

Jab LADKIYAN raat ko ghar se
nikalne se DARTI thi....

Jab JEENS kamar ke neeche nahi upar hua KARTI thi....

Jab haath me hamesha MOBILE nahi BAT hua karta tha,

Jab GHAR me baithe INTERNET use karne se nahi,
BAAHAR jakar khelne se daant PADTI thi....

Jab subah subah TRAFFIC ka nahi,
chidiyon ka SHOR tha....

Wo DAUR hi kuch AUR tha....



Jab DOSTON ke saath baith DIL khol kar HASA karte the....

Jab sach me BACHO ke DIL me BHAGWAN BASAA karte the....

Jab TEACHERS ki DAANT unka KAAM nahi ADHIKAAR hua KARTA tha....

Jab BADON ke saamne nahi,unse chhup kar NASHA KARTE the....


Jab Bohot mazboot hota RISHTON ka JOD tha....
Wo DAUR hi kuch AUR tha....


Jab ishq HAWAS nahi IBAADAT HUA KARTA tha.....

Jab Ghar se Bhaagna TREND nahi BAGAAWAT hua karta tha....

Jab ek ke saath hi puri ZINDAGI guzar jaati thi,

Ye tab ki baat hai Jab MOHOBBAT
kamzori nahi,TAAKAT hua karta tha....


Wo Duniya chhut gayi jaane wo kaunsa MOD tha.....

sach hi toh hai,wo DAUR hi kuch AUR tha.....
Badiya poetry brother 👏 and 100% real
 

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AB TAK AAPNE PADHA KI JAHAN EK TARAF MAHI KO ANZU KE ROOP ME EK NAYI PET MIL JAATI HAI WAHIN DUSRI TARAF RAAZ KO STALWART RIVER KE FOG KO COUNTER KARNE KA TARIKA MIL JAATA HAI.


AB AAGE:-



CHAPTER-3


(THE DEVIL'S HAVEN,THE SACRIFICE & THE PERFECT EPILOGUE)



UPDATE-134



PLANET-SPIRAM


PLACE-THE COLD VOLCANO









HUM SAHI DISHA KI TARAF TOH BADH RAHE HAIN NAA...???


ek strong chilling sensation ko feel karte hue kahi thi ye baat MAHI ne...

reason...

ANZU ke bataye anusar woh aur MAHI volcano ke disha ki taraf badh gaye the...

aur kareeb 3/4 doori tay karne ke baad MAHI ko achanak se hi pura mahoul halka thanda feel hona shuru ho gaya aur jaise jaise woh aage kadam badhati gayi,waise waise thand bhi badhne lagi thi...

aur isiliye hi MAHI ne woh sawal pucha tha jispar....


ANZU-haan,hum sahi disha me.hi chal rahe hain...dhyan se dekho,wahan pahad ke upar VOLCANO ka mooh dikh raha hai...


ANZU ki baat sahi thi...apne naak ki seedh me MAHI ko ek bada sa mountain aur uski nok par ek open volcano ka mooh dikh raha tha..

par naa toh us open mouth me se aag ke garmi se paida hone waala dhuan nazar aa raha tha aur naahi jaisa har jagah hota hai,volcano ke aas paas ki jagah bhi garam hoti hai,yahan uska bilkul ulat tha...

kampkapati thand ko jhelte hue MAHI us volcano ki taraf badh rahi thi..

ek aur baat thi jo kaafi hairani waali thi aur woh ye ki MAHI ne thand se bachne aur rahat paane ke liye sharir ko garm karne waala SPELL bhi uccharit kiya tha par uska koi asar hua nahi...

yahi sab ke baare me soch rahi thi MAHI jisse uske kandhe par tike ANZU ne bhaamp sa liya aur phir..


ANZU-kya aap yahan lag rahe thand aur isse bachne ke liye aapne kuch der pehle jo SPELL bola tha,uske asar naa karne ke baare me soch rahi hain...!!!???

MAHI-haan...

ANZU-is baare me meri ek opinion hai... agar FAIRY PRINCESS ki ijazat ho toh bolun...!??

MAHI-apni raay rakhne ke liye tumhe meri ijazat lene ki zaroorat nahi hai ANZU..

ek baat aur,mera naam MAHI hai..mujhe mere naam se hi pukaro
...tum khudko meri pet ya gulam bilkul mat socho..mujhe apni dost maano....

ANZU-is izzat afzayi ke liye shukriya... toh tumhe yaad hi hoga MAHI ki maine kaha tha ki mujhe is volcano se kuch alag hi feeling aa rahi hai..

woh feeling yahi coldness thi...par tab maine socha tha ki yahan ka ilaaka barfila hoga jiski wajah se woh coldness mujhe feel ho rahi thi....

par aisa hai nahi...mujhe lagta hai ki zaroor is volcano se jo thandak feel ho rahi hai,ye ek tarah ka distraction hai joki iske andar base chiz ko hide karne ke liye paida kiya hai..

MAHI-aur tum is natije par kaise pahunchi ho...!!!

ANZU-issi chilling weather ki wajah se jiska asar tumpar toh ho raha hai par mujhpar nahi...

MAHI-mai samjhi nahi..

ANZU-agar bura naa maano toh kya mai iska jawab tumhe volcano ke paas pahunchkar dun...!!!!

MAHI-isme bura manane waali kya baat hai...!!!chalo phir,filhal toh hamari agli manzil bhi wahi hai toh saare ganit wahin chalkar hi lagate hain..


ye bol MAHI aur ANZU tezi se us pahad ki taraf badh chale jiske top par tha woh volcano point...





PLANET-STALWART WORLD


PLACE-INFRONT OF THE STALWART RIVER





RAKTHAM PRAKATAM

BLOOD APPEAR



apne index finger ko aage kar uspar focus karte hue uccharit kiya is SPELL ko maine jiske baad mere index finger me cut padh gaya aur usse halka sa khoon bahar nikla aur aisa hote hi apne thumb par stick karte hue index finger ko saamne jhatka diya maine jisse mere khoon ka nikla bund aage FOG ke daayre ke andar chala gaya aur jab aisa hua toh...

jaisa maine socha tha,thik waisa hi hua...dekhte hi dekhte theek mere saamne ek straight line me pagdandi ka form lete hue FOG do hisso me bant gayi...

mera raasta clear ho chuka tha aur isiliye maine apne aage kadam badha liye par abhi mai us fog ke beech bane raaste par apna pehla kadam rakhun,usse pehle hi..


DEWEI-isse lete jaaiye..


DEWEI ki baat sun jab mai uski taraf palta toh paaya ki woh apna haath meri taraf badhaye khada hua tha..

uske haath me kuch tha jisse woh shayad mujhe dena chahta tha..

wahin mujhe palta dekh DEWEI meri taraf badha aur...


DEWEI-ye le lijiye..ye ek NOBLE COIN hai...ye ek kism ka gateway hai...

STALWART WORLD me entry ke waqt aapne hume shops jaisi jagah par dekha tha,woh shops asal me hamare world me aane aur yahan se jaane ka GATEWAYS hain jo aise hi COIN ke ki madad se kiya jaa sakta hai..

jab aap kaamiyab ho jaayenge tab aapko is NOBLE COIN ko crush karna hai,aisa karne ke baad hi aap aap aur aapki saathi apne liye nirdharit destination par pahunch paayenge...


DEWEI ki baat sun uske haathon se us NOBLE COIN ko liya maine aur ek baar usse dekhte hue...


MAI-let me guess..ye coin abhi abhi tumhare paas aaya hai aur aisa hone ke baad tumhare brain me iski info daali gayi hai, right..!!!

DEWEI-jee...

MAI-kamal hai..ANGELS kab se DEVIL'S ko copy karne lage...

DEVIL'S peeth piche waar karte han aur ANGELS peeth piche baatein kar rahe hain...


jahan meri baat sunane ke baad bhi chup hi raha DEWEI wahin apni baat keh us NOBLE COIN ko apne pocket me daal wapas palta mai aur mere liye bane pagdandi numa raaste ke beech chal pada..

jaise jaise mai aage badh raha tha,mere piche bana raasta wapas FOG se dhakta hua band hote chala jaa raha tha...

aage badhte hue meri nazar us sookh chuke RIVER ke mid point par thi aur woh isiliye kyunki jis sukhe zamin par mai chal raha tha,woh nami ke naa hone ke baad bhi halki bhuri thi par woh midway waala part circle shape liye white tha..

khair,kuch 2 minute ne hi mai us centre point ke paas tha aur wahan pahunch maine dekha ki kisi jagah par spot light padne par jaisi roshni hoti hai,us jagah par waisi hi roshni chhayi hui thi bas fark sirf itna tha ki spot light ki roshni upar se aati hai aur ye jagah naturally apne dum par chamak raha tha..

khair kuch soch me us roshni aur round shaped jagah par jaakar khada ho gaya jiske baad kuch seconds toh sab shaant hi raha par phir mere pairon ke neeche kampan hone lagi..

par mai apna balance banaye apni jagah par hi khada raha par tabhi...

mere neeche ki zamin ek jhatke me gayab ho gayi aur mai sidha neeche girne laga...

patal lok ki safar me nikla tha mai,ye feeling liye neeche girte chale jaa raha tha mai tabhi...

mujhe halki halki thand lagne lagi jo har guzarte pal ke saath badhte chali jaa rahi thi..

abhi mai is naye parivartan ke baare me sochta ki tabhi...

BHADDHHH......

mere pair neeche kisi sakht chiz se takraye aur aisa hote hi mai samajh gaya ki achanak thand kaise lagne lagi thi...

darasal is waqt mai ek bohot bade gufa me tha aur jispar par mai land hua tha, woh zamin nahi balki BARF thi....

mai neeche jhuka aur mere pairon ke neeche us tadke hue barf waale hisse ko chhua maine aur apni aankhen band kar mai kuch jaanane ki koshish karne hi waala tha ki tabhi...


AAP SAHI SOCH RAHE HAIN RAAZ...YE BARF STALWART RIVER KA HI JAM CHUKA PAANI HAI...


mere saamne se aayi thi ye awaaz jisse sun jab aage dekha maine toh paaya ki ek lamba chowda shaksh muskurate hue mujhse kuch door khada hua tha...


MAI-tum toh.......ABBADON ho....




BACK TO MAHI:-





PLANET-SPIRAM


PLACE-VOLCANO POINT





UNBELIEVABLE....IS VOLCANO ME GARM LAVA KI JAGAH BARF FLOW HO RAHA HAI....

volcano ke hole me neeche ki taraf jhaank kar dekhte hue hadh se zyada thand ki wajah se apne haathon ko rub karte hue kahi ye baat MAHI ne jispar....


ANZU-ek baar apne breast ke right ki taraf haath rakhiye aur bataiye ki kya woh jagah bhi thandi hai...!!!!


ANZU ki baat ka matlab toh nahi samjhi MAHI par bina kuch kahe usne apne breast ke right ki taraf apna haath rakha aur aisa karte hi MAHI ko laga shock..

usne turant apne breast ke left taraf aur phir pet par bhi haath lagaya par natija jaan uski hairangi badh gayi..

aur ussi hairangi ko chehre par liye..


MAHI-ab ye kaisa magic hai..??? mere breast ke right ki taraf ka bhaag kaafi warm hai jabki baaki puri body thandi...!!!!

ANZU-matlab mera shak sahi tha..darasal aapke breast ke right ki taraf aapka ANGEL FORM basta hai aur sirf wahi bhaag yahan itne cold atmosphere me bhi warm hai...

theek meri tarah..kyunki mai bhi tumhare ANGEL FORM se nikle WHITE ENERGY ke AURA se bani hun, isiliye mai bhi warm hun...


AAPKI YE NAYI SAATHI BILKUL SAHI KEH RAHI HAI MAHI...


MAHI ke kuch kehne se pehle uske kaan me ye anjaani si awaaz padi jisse sun jab usne saamne dekha toh halki chownki..

kyunki jis volcano ke top par woh khadi thi,ussi volcano ke andar se udta hua ek shaks bahar nikla tha..

wahin apni baat bol woh shaksh ek baar MAHI ke aage jhuka aur...


ANGEL'S LORD ki beti ko ABRAXAS ka naman..


MAHI-ABRAXAS....tum wahi hona jiske baare me LILITHA aur VALEFOR baat kar rahe the..

ABRAXAS-jee...sadiyon se is jagah par rehte hue aapki raah dekhi hai maine...aage ke hurdle ko paar kar mujhe mukt karne ka ehsaan kijiye...

MAHI-mukt hona aapka haq hai,jo aapko zaroor milega..toh bataiye,mujhe kya karna hoga..???

ABRAXAS-sabse pehle maafi ki arz karte hue kya mai aapke saathi ko is pinjre me tab tak ke liye kaid kar sakta hun jab tak aap apni chunouti ko paar nahi kar leti..

MAHI-aisa kyun...???

ABRAXAS-kyunki ye chunouti aapki hai...isse aapko akele pura karna hai..aap kisi bhi tarah ki madad nahi le sakti...

MAHI-koi baat nahi..mai madad nahi lungi,par ANZU pinjre me nahi jaayegi..

ABRAXAS-aapki baat kaat raha hun,iske liye maafi chahunga..par agar aapne aisa nahi kiya toh mujhe wapas aapko GALEN bhejna padega jiske baad aapko ye safar phirse shuru karna padega..


ABRAXAS ne bohot hi politely apni baat kahi thi jisse sun MAHI halki si tensed ho gayi thi..

bhale hi ANZU ek powerful creature thi par thi toh woh ek bird..aur ek bird ke liye pinjre me jaana bohot buri feeling hoti hai aur ye baat jaanti thi MAHI..

wahin MAHI ke tensed face ko dekh...


ANZU-relax MAHI..mujhe pinjre me jaane se naahi aitraaz hai aur naahi bura lag raha hai..

tum apna challenge pura karo taaki hum aage badh sake...


jahan ANZU ki baat sun halki si smile kar di MAHI ne wahin is beech ek chota aur pyara sa pinjra ready kar diya tha ABRAXAS ne jisme udte hue chali gayi ANZU...

aur aisa hote hi...


MAHI-toh ab bataiye..mujhe karna kya hai...???

ABRAXAS-RAAZ ki madad...!!!


ABRAXAS ki baat sun chownki hui MAHI aur...


MAHI-RAAZ ki madad matlab...!!!!

ABRAXAS-aap abhi do PLANETS ke CROSSOVER ke beech khadi hain...

is volcano ke dusri taraf hai woh PLANET jisme RAAZ moujud hai...

ye jo thandak aap feel kar rahi hain,ye bhale hi is VOLCANO se aa raha hai par iski jadh us dusre planet ka paani hai jo is VOLCANO aur RAAZ jis jagah par hai,uske neeche chhup gaya hai....

woh paani chhupe hue is PLANET aur us PLANET ke beech ek khaali volume me thehra hua hai..

ye isiliye hua hai taaki kisi bhi negetive aur BLACK ENERGY ke dhaarak ko is chhupe paani ke baare me kabhi pata naa chale...

ussi chhupe hue paani ko bahar nikalna hi aapki aur RAAZ,dono ki chunouti hai....

aur isse aapko us zariye,us hathiyar ki madad se karna hai jo aap dono ke andar hi hai,par abhi tak aapne usse istamal ne laana shuru nahi kiya....


MAHI-apne ANGEL aur HUMAN FORM POWER SOURCE ko activate karna..!!!

ABRAXAS-jee..par filhal aapko apne sirf HUMAN FORM POWER SOURCE ko activate karte hue uski energy ko temporarily hi sahi,par is VOLCANO se nikal rahe kohre par release karna hai...

MAHI-aur RAAZ ko...???

ABRAXAS-unhe apne HEART me chuppe ERRAPEL ki shakti ko,unke ANGEL form ko activate karte hue uski energy ko temporarily hi sahi,par jahan woh hain,us jagah par release karna hai...

MAHI-ho gaya kalyan...


RAAZ ki chunouti ko sun ek lambi saans chhodte hue khudse kahi thi ye baat MAHI ne aur uska aisa disheartened hona jayaz bhi tha..

bhale temporary hi sahi,par ERRAPEL waale part ko joki RAAZ se naaraz hai,usse kuch palon ke liye hi sahi,activate karna,woh bhi abhi RAAZ jis mood me hai, usme next to impossible chiz thi...

par option toh kuch tha hi nahi MAHI ke paas..woh bas RAAZ ki taraf se positive hope karte hue apne hisse ki chunouti par hi focus kar sakti thi aur usne wahi karne ki sochi..

dobara ek lambi saans chhod MAHI ne ABRAXAS ko dekha aur...


MAHI-ok then..i am ready....





BACK TO RAAZ:-





PLANET-STALWART WORLD


PLACE-ABOVE THE ICE BARRICADE





KYA AAP TAIYAAR HAIN...!!!!




jo baatein ABRAXAS ne MAHI ko batayi thi,wahi saari baat aur instructions dene ke baad pucha mujhse ye sawal ABBADON ne jispar mai khamosh hi raha..

REASON...

waise toh mere aage rakhe gaye har challenge ko bhale hi woh kitna hi tough kyun naa ho,mai accept karne me ek pal bhi nahi gawata par is baar ka maamla kuch aur tha...

is challenge me bhale hi participate
mai kar raha tha,par isse kaamiyab ERRAPEL ki shakti hi kar sakti thi..

woh shakti jo filhal mere kaabu me nahi thi aur naahi aisa hone ke koi asaar the...

aise me haar meri tay thi par haar se darne ka mindset mera naa kabhi raha hai aur naahi ab hone waala tha aur isiliye...


MAI-i am ready....


jaise hi maine apni baat boli toh us gufa ke andar ka temperature aur girne laga..itna hi nahi,woh barf jo mere pairon ke neeche jama hua tha,woh aur thandi hone lagi...

waise toh shoes pehni thi maine par ice ka thand itna zyada badhne laga tha ki woh thand mere shoes se hote hue mere pairon ko feel hone lagi thi...

halka halka kaampna bhi shuru ho gaya tha mai par in dono odds ko nazarandaaz karte hue mai apni jagah par khade khade hi PAUSED CEREBRATION me chala gaya...

sabse pehle maine BLOOD AMPLIFICATION ke tahat apne dhamniyon me beh rahe khoon ki gati ko tez kiya taaki har pal badh rahe thand ko jhelne se rahat paa sakun..

par jab maine aisa kiya toh ek nayi musibat mujhse jud gayi..

is jagah ki maya ki wajah se mai normal human jaisa ho chuka tha aur isiliye mera stamina bhi waisa hi ho gaya tha.

BLOOD AMPLIFICATION ko trigger karne se body temperature toh bas halka sa hi stabilize hua mera par saans meri tezi se chaddhne lagi...

is naye odd se ladhte hue maine apne EMOTIONS POWER ki taraf rookh kiya...

par aisa karte hi mujhe ek nayi odd situation ka saamna karna pada..

aur woh ye ki jahan pehle mere EMOTIONS power ka home,mera HEART hamesha jagmagate rehta tha,wahin ab uske bilkul ulat us area me dark andhera tha...

mai is change ka reason jaanta tha.. ERRAPEL... kyunki usne mujhe nahi apnaya tha, isiliye usne mere REFINER powers ke daayre ko dark kar diya tha par kyunki mai khud abhi dark stage me tha, isiliye bahari pysical tour par mujhe zyada fark nahi pada tha...

khair,us andhere me me ERRAPEL ki shakti ko feel karne ki koshish karte hue aage badhne laga mai aur aisa karte waqt door ek bohot baarikh se roshni ki kiran dikhi mujhe jisse dekh mai us roshni ki taraf badhne ko hua par tabhi....

woh roshni ki kiran jo door thi mujhse,bijli ki gati se aage badhi aur mujhe hit kar gayi..

ye ERRAPEL ki hi shakti thi jiske hit karte hi mere BRAIN ko laga ek tez jhatka aur woh behosh hone lag gaya..

wahin jab ERRAPEL ki shakti ne mujhe hit kiya toh mere body ke chaaron taraf ek bohot taakatwar energy force me janm liya..

aisa hote hi mere pairon ke neeche ki barf tadakne lagi aur dekhte hi dekhte woh toot gayi...

minus 100 degree se bhi kam taapman waale us barf ke neeche tha pure aur chilled water..wahi water jisse wapas STALWART RIVER me bhejna tha mujhe...

mai ussi water me samata chala gaya mai...

aisa hone par ek hadh se zyada chilling sensation feel kiya mere sharir aur khaas kar mere brain me..

issi beech mere mooh me woh water kayi gallen tak sama gaya jiski wajah se mera BLOOD AMPLIFICATION process bhi rook gaya..

itni saari chizon ke ek saath hone se mere brain ke behoshi waale state me jaane ki gati aur tez ho gayi...

bina AMPLIFICATION mode se bahar aate hi mai us gehre paani kr beech kisi murde ki taraf tairta hua BEHOSH ho chuka tha..




BACK TO MAHI:-



PLANET-SPIRAM


PLACE-ABOVE THE VOLCANO





ASATI....

MOVE...


apni aankhen band kar apne ANGEL FORM POWER SOURCE ko dekhte hue uccharit kiya is SPELL ko MAHI ne aur uske aisa karte hi us power source ki chamak thodi aur badh gayi...

par us power source ke saath hi MAHI ka HUMAN FORM POWER SOURCE bhi jagmagane laga joki nahi hona chahiye tha...

MAHI ko sirf apne ANGEL FORM POWER SOURCE ko move karna tha.. aisa hone par jo energy wave bahar aati aur volcano me jaati,ussise hi MAHI ki chunouti puri ho paati..

par kyunki SPELL bolne ke baad MAHI ka dusra power source bhi jagmagane laga tha isiliye woh SPELL naa sirf bekaar ho gaya balki saath hi saath jo thand MAHI ab tak feel kar rahi thi,woh bhi 10 times tak badh gayi...

aur is level ke thand ke beech MAHI dobara apne andar ke ANGEL FORM par concentrate nahi kar sakti thi aur isiliye usne ek naya idea lagaya.

usne apne BLOOD AMPLIFICATION mode ko activate kiya aur usse apne heart me bade ANGEL FORM waali jagah par le jaane lagi...

uske aisa karte hi MAHI ko lagne waali thand bhi kam hone lagi...

halka relaxed feel karte hi MAHI ne ek baar phirse ASATI SPELL ko uccharit karne ki sochi par woh aisa karti,usse pehle hi MAHI ke andar ek kism ka short circuit ho gaya....

toh hua yua ye ki kuch seconds pehle MAHI ki lagayi yukti jisme woh apne BLOOD AMPLIFICATION mode ki shakti ko apne ANGEL FORM ki taraf le jaa rahi thi,uska ek halka sa bhaag uske HUMAN FORM ki taraf bhi mood gaya aur jab woh bhaag us form ko touch hua toh us HUMAN FORM se ek energy beam nikal sidhe MAHI ke ANGEL FORM se takrayi..

ye takkar kaafi impactful thi jiski wajah se MAHI ka heart beat tak ek second ke liye rook gaya...

itna hi nahi,MAHI ke heart se nikal uske brain me jaa raha khoon bhi ubal sa gaya jiski wajah se wahan hamrage waali sththi paida ho gayi...

itna sab kuch ek saath hone se MAHI khudko sambhal nahi paayi aur woh lehrate hue behosh hokar neeche gir gayi...




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PLANET-STALWART WORLD


PLACE-INSIDE THE WATER





ITNI JALDI AANKHEN BAND KAR LI...!!!ITNA TOH KAMZOR NAHI HAI MERA BETA....


ek tez chamak se bani aakruti joki asal me meri MOM thi, unhone kahi thi ye baat mujhse...

behoshi ki haalat me tair raha tha mera body US DIVINE WATER me jabki meri aatma wapas STALWART WORLD ke sukhe river ke upar thi...

har taraf energy barrier se bana kohra jama hua tha aur us kohre ko cheerte hue woh roshni numa aakruti joki meri MOM thi,mere aage khadi thi...

aur unki baat par jab mai kuch naa bola toh..


MOM-is situation se nikalne ka tarika jaanana chaahoge....???

MAI-mujhe aapki koi madad nahi chahiye...

MOM-maine ye kab kaha ki mai tumhari madad karne waali hun...

tumhari madad ka zariya tumhare andar hi hai,bas usse bahar nikalne ka tarika jisse tum abhi tak anjaan ho,woh bataungi mai...


MOM ERRAPEL ki baat kar rahi thi,ye jaanta tha mai aur isiliye..


MAI-us zariye ne hi mujhe is state me pahunchaya hai...

MOM-aur wahi tumhe is situation se bahar bhi nikalegi par aisa hone ke liye ek sharth hai jo puri karni padegi tumhe....

MAI-souda...!!!!yahi toh karte aaye ho aap aaj tak..khair, bataiye,sun raha hun mai...

MOM-tumhe apne EMOTIONS power ka baaki ka pura bhaag jo filhal tumhare control me hai,usse ERRAPEL ki shakti ko soumpna hoga...

agar tum aisa karne ke liye taiyar hote ho toh tum yahan ki chunouti me safal ho jaaoge....


MOM ki naa sirf baat ko samjha tha mai,balki saath hi saath us baat,us sharth ke piche ke uddeshya ko bhi jaan chuka tha mai..

toh baat kuch yun thi ki mom ye baat jaanti thi ki mera woh ghussa jo unpar,dad par aur khaas kar dono LORDS par hai,jisse abhi ke liye toh maine dabakar rakha hua hai,woh CHOSENS pahunchte hi unleash ho jaayega..

aur phir mera keher sirf negetive logon par nahi,balki positive logon par bhi barsega...

mom ko ye bhi pata tha ki bhale hi is waqt ERRAPEL ki shakti joki meri sabse badi power source thi,woh mere khilaaf thi,par phir bhi mere EMOTIONS power ka baaki ka 90 percent bhaag bohot zyada taakatwar tha..

saath hi saath us 90 pratishat bhaag me ACCHUTA, SLUNDER, BRAWNY, HIDA aur ALFREEN ki GOD GIFT power ka 50 percent bhi mixed tha jo meri shaktiyon ko aur zyada deadly banati thi...

us power ke dum par bhi mai pure CHOSENS me kohram macha sakta tha...

aur isiliye hi mere aage ye sharth rakhi gayi thi...jo ek baar maine apne baaki ke REFINERS aur unke power ka control ERRAPEL ke haathon me soump diya,uske baad mai utni hi shakti ka istemal kar sakta tha jitne ki woh mujhe ijazat degi...

khair,in saare negetives ko jaante hue bhi is situation se nikalne ka aur koi tarika naa mujhe pata tha aur naa aage pata chalne waala tha aur isiliye MOM ki baat manane ke alawa mere paas aur koi option nahi tha...

isiliye....


MAI-mujhe manzoor hai...

MOM-bohot sahi faisla liya mere bacche...tum abhi SOUL FORM me hi ho, isiliye tumhe bas apne saare EMOTIONS aur REFINER powers ko yaad karte hue SURRENDER bolna hai..

tum bas itna karo,baaki ka kaam ERRAPEL khud kar legi...


MAI-I SURRENDER...


aankh band kar apne EMOTIONS aur REFINER powers ko feel karte hue kahi ye baat maine jiske baad meri SOUL wapas mere sharir me chali gayi..

aisa hote hi mujhe apne andar ek baar phirse wahi roshni joki ERRAPEL thi,dikhi jiske chunne se mai behosh hua tha...

par is baar woh sirf roshni nahi thi,balki us roshni me ERRAPEL ka glow karta hua face bhi dikh raha tha joki is waqt mujhe dekhkar smile kar rahi thi..

aisa karte hue hi uski roshni ne mere EMOTIONS aur REFINER powers ko khudse jodte hue unpar control set karna shuru kar diya..

aur jab ye procedure chal raha tha,toh ussi tarah muskurate hue dekhti rahi ERRAPEL mujhe aur phir...


ERRAPEL-



kya socha tha kabhi ki tere ravvaiye ki tujhe aisi saza MILEGI....

jis shakti ka ghamand tha tujhe,ab uski kami KHALEGI...

jitni manmaani karni thi,kar li tune,par ab bas....

shaktiyan bhale hi teri hain,par ab woh ERRAPEL ke hisaab se CHALEGI.....















AAJ KE LIYE ITNA HI......

















AAPKA APNA V....J....
Bahot shaandaar mazedaar lajawab damdaar zaberdast update bhai
Achcha game khel rehe h sab log raaz k saath lekin jab game khelna shuru karega tab sabki band baj jayegi filhal raaz fasa huwa h koyi raasta dikh nahi raha isliye baat maan li nahi raaz jhuke yeh kisi kitab likha nahi
Zaberdast shaandaar mazedaar bahot khoobsurat update bhai
 

Naik

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thanks for such a beautiful review brother..aise reviews bohot kam padhne ko milte hain...



aur woh jo aapki sex waali baat thi,toh mera aisa manana hai ki kamsekam ye ek aisi chiz hai jisse padhkar imagine karne me bhhaka kya maza..



jab aap sunny leone ko dekh sakte ho toh phir usse imagine kyun karna..!!!😄😄😄



haan, brother, poetries mai likhta hun,par yahan unhe zabardasti involve nahi karna chahta isiliye nahi daalta...



lekin aapke khubsoorat review ki wajah se ek poetry pesh karta hun..padhkar bataiye ki kaisa laga..???



toh arz kiya hai...





V.J

Jab LADKIYAN raat ko ghar se
nikalne se DARTI thi....

Jab JEENS kamar ke neeche nahi upar hua KARTI thi....

Jab haath me hamesha MOBILE nahi BAT hua karta tha,

Jab GHAR me baithe INTERNET use karne se nahi,
BAAHAR jakar khelne se daant PADTI thi....

Jab subah subah TRAFFIC ka nahi,
chidiyon ka SHOR tha....

Wo DAUR hi kuch AUR tha....



Jab DOSTON ke saath baith DIL khol kar HASA karte the....

Jab sach me BACHO ke DIL me BHAGWAN BASAA karte the....

Jab TEACHERS ki DAANT unka KAAM nahi ADHIKAAR hua KARTA tha....

Jab BADON ke saamne nahi,unse chhup kar NASHA KARTE the....


Jab Bohot mazboot hota RISHTON ka JOD tha....
Wo DAUR hi kuch AUR tha....


Jab ishq HAWAS nahi IBAADAT HUA KARTA tha.....

Jab Ghar se Bhaagna TREND nahi BAGAAWAT hua karta tha....

Jab ek ke saath hi puri ZINDAGI guzar jaati thi,

Ye tab ki baat hai Jab MOHOBBAT
kamzori nahi,TAAKAT hua karta tha....


Wo Duniya chhut gayi jaane wo kaunsa MOD tha.....

sach hi toh hai,wo DAUR hi kuch AUR tha.....
Wah wah wah kia baat h V J bhai bahot sahi baat kahi aapne iss poem m dil ko choo gayi bhai
Bahot bahot shukriya aapka gazal k liye bahot bahot khoobsurat
 

Suryaa

सुन, हमसे कायदे में रहोंगे, तो फायदे में रहोगे😎।
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thanks for such a beautiful review brother..aise reviews bohot kam padhne ko milte hain...



aur woh jo aapki sex waali baat thi,toh mera aisa manana hai ki kamsekam ye ek aisi chiz hai jisse padhkar imagine karne me bhhaka kya maza..



jab aap sunny leone ko dekh sakte ho toh phir usse imagine kyun karna..!!!😄😄😄



haan, brother, poetries mai likhta hun,par yahan unhe zabardasti involve nahi karna chahta isiliye nahi daalta...



lekin aapke khubsoorat review ki wajah se ek poetry pesh karta hun..padhkar bataiye ki kaisa laga..???



toh arz kiya hai...





V.J

Jab LADKIYAN raat ko ghar se
nikalne se DARTI thi....

Jab JEENS kamar ke neeche nahi upar hua KARTI thi....

Jab haath me hamesha MOBILE nahi BAT hua karta tha,

Jab GHAR me baithe INTERNET use karne se nahi,
BAAHAR jakar khelne se daant PADTI thi....

Jab subah subah TRAFFIC ka nahi,
chidiyon ka SHOR tha....

Wo DAUR hi kuch AUR tha....



Jab DOSTON ke saath baith DIL khol kar HASA karte the....

Jab sach me BACHO ke DIL me BHAGWAN BASAA karte the....

Jab TEACHERS ki DAANT unka KAAM nahi ADHIKAAR hua KARTA tha....

Jab BADON ke saamne nahi,unse chhup kar NASHA KARTE the....


Jab Bohot mazboot hota RISHTON ka JOD tha....
Wo DAUR hi kuch AUR tha....


Jab ishq HAWAS nahi IBAADAT HUA KARTA tha.....

Jab Ghar se Bhaagna TREND nahi BAGAAWAT hua karta tha....

Jab ek ke saath hi puri ZINDAGI guzar jaati thi,

Ye tab ki baat hai Jab MOHOBBAT
kamzori nahi,TAAKAT hua karta tha....


Wo Duniya chhut gayi jaane wo kaunsa MOD tha.....

sach hi toh hai,wo DAUR hi kuch AUR tha.....
Great poem brother
 
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