A.B.KING
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Extraordinary update bro
Excellent writing
Awesome scenes
Mind-blowing dialogues
Excellent writing
Awesome scenes
Mind-blowing dialogues
brother,ab tak kahani me RAAZ ke saath jo bhi situation create hui hai,aur us situation ko usne kaise handle kiya hai, pehle un chizon par baariki se dhyan dijiye...Toh bhai y indirectly ek order nhi h kyA???? Mere kehne ka mtlb y h ke jo banda sabki sun ke bhi us kaam ko apne alag dhang s karta hai wo kaise ek hi baar m tayar ho gaya errapel ko apne upar control dene ko y wahi old type senti pictures jaisa kaam ho gaya isme devilness kaha s aai??
brother,ab tak kahani me RAAZ ke saath jo bhi situation create hui hai,aur us situation ko usne kaise handle kiya hai, pehle un chizon par baariki se dhyan dijiye...Toh bhai y indirectly ek order nhi h kyA???? Mere kehne ka mtlb y h ke jo banda sabki sun ke bhi us kaam ko apne alag dhang s karta hai wo kaise ek hi baar m tayar ho gaya errapel ko apne upar control dene ko y wahi old type senti pictures jaisa kaam ho gaya isme devilness kaha s aai??
.Jajbaat badalnee k liye ek lamha hi khafi hota hai
.
Bhaav badalnee k liye ek eradaa hi khafi hota hai
.
Par Nazariya badalnee mai.....ek zindagi bhi kam pade jaate hai
.
.
Ab aate he update par
Erapel ko kaafi bedardee se maara but y sanee dekha par erapel nai jo kaha vo nahi suna
.
Jitnaa darde mujhe marnee par hoga utna hi dard raaz ko sahna hoga
.
It means agar erapel ki moute aasaan hoti too raaz ka path aasan ho jata
.
But he is raaz vo jeetnai k liye shortcut nahi letaa balki apnaa rastaa khudee banata hai
.
So uska way of expression morally galat tha but my attitude agree with it
Raaz ka attitude ko ek famous quote se samjhe saktee hai
Don't afraid of let it scarifies today's good for tomorrows best
Khuch esi tarikee se hai RAAZ
And
Griifeen asked wogger ki agar mahi raaz se love kartee hai to raaz mahi se love kyu nahi kar sakta
To yaha griffen ka que. Galate hai
Right que. Hai
Raaz mahi se eternal love karte huvi bhi ..apne love ko express kyu nahi karta
Eska answer que. Mai chuppa hai
Eternal love
Raaz mahi se eternal love karta hai
It mean unconditional love
Love is not about body ...it is about soul
Love is not about give and take policy
It is just give without any take policy
Love paanee ka naam nahi denee ka naam hai
Aur yahi raaz hai
Raaz janata hai at the end abhi tke koe bhi tarika nahi hai jise se raaz apnee moutee se bach jaae
Es liye wo janta hai all the time he spend with mahi
Is just giving her pain after her death
.
(((((Ho sakta hai raaz ka asli jeevan marnee k baade hi suru ho)))))
.
Esliye raaz mahi se ukhada rahta hai aur usi y kahta hai ki vikram ki beti honee karn vo mahi se nafratee karta hai
.
.
Most important raaz start to expessing his emotions as a human
Raaz nai apne emotions express karna shuru kar diya
.
.
Chahiye anger hi sahi
But emotion hai
And thats emotion
Kise bhi baate par koe expression ya statement dena wala cold hearted raaz
Abe cold nahi hot hogaya hai
.
And very hot(mtlab choti motee solar system ka sun manlo)
And at the end
Keep it up bro
.
Your writing skills are really good
.
And most important
.
Ek famous quote hai
Be the change you want to see in the world.
.
Y quote tumnaee sach kar dikhaya
.
Faltu ka sex, incest aur bakwaas se bhari befijool ka magic
Y adult forum par writers ka trend bann gaya tha
Usee trend k against jakrrr bina enn chizoo k ek amazing story likhee
.
.
Your writing skills can inspire anyone
.
Awesone dude
.
Agar kabhi koe poem likho ya book to batana jaroor
.
And ha agar songs ki tarah khucch poems ho to youtube par ya esse forum par batana jarurr
.
.Jajbaat badalnee k liye ek lamha hi khafi hota hai
.
Bhaav badalnee k liye ek eradaa hi khafi hota hai
.
Par Nazariya badalnee mai.....ek zindagi bhi kam pade jaate hai
.
.
Ab aate he update par
Erapel ko kaafi bedardee se maara but y sanee dekha par erapel nai jo kaha vo nahi suna
.
Jitnaa darde mujhe marnee par hoga utna hi dard raaz ko sahna hoga
.
It means agar erapel ki moute aasaan hoti too raaz ka path aasan ho jata
.
But he is raaz vo jeetnai k liye shortcut nahi letaa balki apnaa rastaa khudee banata hai
.
So uska way of expression morally galat tha but my attitude agree with it
Raaz ka attitude ko ek famous quote se samjhe saktee hai
Don't afraid of let it scarifies today's good for tomorrows best
Khuch esi tarikee se hai RAAZ
And
Griifeen asked wogger ki agar mahi raaz se love kartee hai to raaz mahi se love kyu nahi kar sakta
To yaha griffen ka que. Galate hai
Right que. Hai
Raaz mahi se eternal love karte huvi bhi ..apne love ko express kyu nahi karta
Eska answer que. Mai chuppa hai
Eternal love
Raaz mahi se eternal love karta hai
It mean unconditional love
Love is not about body ...it is about soul
Love is not about give and take policy
It is just give without any take policy
Love paanee ka naam nahi denee ka naam hai
Aur yahi raaz hai
Raaz janata hai at the end abhi tke koe bhi tarika nahi hai jise se raaz apnee moutee se bach jaae
Es liye wo janta hai all the time he spend with mahi
Is just giving her pain after her death
.
(((((Ho sakta hai raaz ka asli jeevan marnee k baade hi suru ho)))))
.
Esliye raaz mahi se ukhada rahta hai aur usi y kahta hai ki vikram ki beti honee karn vo mahi se nafratee karta hai
.
.
Most important raaz start to expessing his emotions as a human
Raaz nai apne emotions express karna shuru kar diya
.
.
Chahiye anger hi sahi
But emotion hai
And thats emotion
Kise bhi baate par koe expression ya statement dena wala cold hearted raaz
Abe cold nahi hot hogaya hai
.
And very hot(mtlab choti motee solar system ka sun manlo)
And at the end
Keep it up bro
.
Your writing skills are really good
.
And most important
.
Ek famous quote hai
Be the change you want to see in the world.
.
Y quote tumnaee sach kar dikhaya
.
Faltu ka sex, incest aur bakwaas se bhari befijool ka magic
Y adult forum par writers ka trend bann gaya tha
Usee trend k against jakrrr bina enn chizoo k ek amazing story likhee
.
.
Your writing skills can inspire anyone
.
Awesone dude
.
Agar kabhi koe poem likho ya book to batana jaroor
.
And ha agar songs ki tarah khucch poems ho to youtube par ya esse forum par batana jarurr
.
thanks for such a beautiful review brother..aise reviews bohot kam padhne ko milte hain...Jajbaat badalnee k liye ek lamha hi khafi hota hai
.
Bhaav badalnee k liye ek eradaa hi khafi hota hai
.
Par Nazariya badalnee mai.....ek zindagi bhi kam pade jaate hai
.
.
Ab aate he update par
Erapel ko kaafi bedardee se maara but y sanee dekha par erapel nai jo kaha vo nahi suna
.
Jitnaa darde mujhe marnee par hoga utna hi dard raaz ko sahna hoga
.
It means agar erapel ki moute aasaan hoti too raaz ka path aasan ho jata
.
But he is raaz vo jeetnai k liye shortcut nahi letaa balki apnaa rastaa khudee banata hai
.
So uska way of expression morally galat tha but my attitude agree with it
Raaz ka attitude ko ek famous quote se samjhe saktee hai
Don't afraid of let it scarifies today's good for tomorrows best
Khuch esi tarikee se hai RAAZ
And
Griifeen asked wogger ki agar mahi raaz se love kartee hai to raaz mahi se love kyu nahi kar sakta
To yaha griffen ka que. Galate hai
Right que. Hai
Raaz mahi se eternal love karte huvi bhi ..apne love ko express kyu nahi karta
Eska answer que. Mai chuppa hai
Eternal love
Raaz mahi se eternal love karta hai
It mean unconditional love
Love is not about body ...it is about soul
Love is not about give and take policy
It is just give without any take policy
Love paanee ka naam nahi denee ka naam hai
Aur yahi raaz hai
Raaz janata hai at the end abhi tke koe bhi tarika nahi hai jise se raaz apnee moutee se bach jaae
Es liye wo janta hai all the time he spend with mahi
Is just giving her pain after her death
.
(((((Ho sakta hai raaz ka asli jeevan marnee k baade hi suru ho)))))
.
Esliye raaz mahi se ukhada rahta hai aur usi y kahta hai ki vikram ki beti honee karn vo mahi se nafratee karta hai
.
.
Most important raaz start to expessing his emotions as a human
Raaz nai apne emotions express karna shuru kar diya
.
.
Chahiye anger hi sahi
But emotion hai
And thats emotion
Kise bhi baate par koe expression ya statement dena wala cold hearted raaz
Abe cold nahi hot hogaya hai
.
And very hot(mtlab choti motee solar system ka sun manlo)
And at the end
Keep it up bro
.
Your writing skills are really good
.
And most important
.
Ek famous quote hai
Be the change you want to see in the world.
.
Y quote tumnaee sach kar dikhaya
.
Faltu ka sex, incest aur bakwaas se bhari befijool ka magic
Y adult forum par writers ka trend bann gaya tha
Usee trend k against jakrrr bina enn chizoo k ek amazing story likhee
.
.
Your writing skills can inspire anyone
.
Awesone dude
.
Agar kabhi koe poem likho ya book to batana jaroor
.
And ha agar songs ki tarah khucch poems ho to youtube par ya esse forum par batana jarurr
.
Y that was i expecting k mere doubts vj bhaai d clear ho thank u vj bhai is explaination k liye and update was fantastic bahut hi aacha tha just waiting for next updatebrother,ab tak kahani me RAAZ ke saath jo bhi situation create hui hai,aur us situation ko usne kaise handle kiya hai, pehle un chizon par baariki se dhyan dijiye...
aapko yaad hoga jab VIDEOUS ne RAAZ se kaha tha ki woh dono apni apni aloukik shaktiyan uski sword me chhupa denge,tab Raaz ne bina naatak kiye ya ladhe ek baar me haan kaha tha..
reason..
OPTION... joki uske paas tha nahi..game VIDEOUS ke hisaab se hi chal sakti hai,ye jaanta tha woh isiliye usse us faisle ko maanane me ek pal bhi nahi laga..
us scene ke baad jab RAAZ normal SAVENT ban gaya,tab apne REFINER powers ko activate karne me usse jaanleva pain feel hua tha par woh phir bhi data raha tha...
woh situation uske liye completely negetive thi..uske EMOTIONS ke power uske paas the hi nahi thik waise hi jaise ab uske paas uski shaktiyon ka control nahi hai lekin usne haar nahi maani aur uske target tak pahunch hi gaya..
jin do scenes ke baare me maine abhi bataya hai,woh ek hi bande ke do alag alag situation me liye gaye faisle hain..
ek situation me jab uske saamne uska dushman tha,toh uski baat bhi usne ek baar me maan li
aur dusra challenge uske saamne khudse hi tha jisme usne apna real ATTITUDE dikhaya..woh ATTITUDE jiski wajah se woh kaamiyab bhi hua..
VIDEOUS waale scene aur REFINER powers ke activate karne waale scene ka mishran tha aaj ka scene...
VIDEOUS waale scene ki hi tarah aaj uske paas option nahi tha..agar woh nahi maanta toh wahin fasa reh jaata..
aur bhai kahani puri kaise hoti phir...??
REFINER waale scene jaise scenes ab banenge jab uske paas uski shaktiyan toh hongi par unpar control nahi..
par ek chiz jo pehle bhi uske paas thi,aaj bhi hai aur aage bhi rahegi,woh hai uska never giving up ATTITUDE...
ek aisa ATTITUDE jo VIDEOUS toh kya VIKRAM aur ASMODEUS bhi usse nahi chhin sakte...
aur ek andar ki baat bataun.. VIKRAM aur ASMODEUS bhi ye baat jaante hain aur isiliye hi unhone jo kiya hai woh kiya hai..
ye sab RAAZ ka KABHI ANGEL KABHI DEVIL waala roop pura karne ki taiyari hai..
kyunki yahi woh roop hai jisse is kahani ka naam pura hua hai,aur aage chalkar ye puri kahani khatm bhi issi naam par hogi....