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Fantasy ATTITUDE (KABHI ANGEL KABHI DEVIL) ( Completed )

Aakash.

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Both planets are connected through that volcano, wow, you wrote amazing. :applause: This challenge is not as easy as it seems. Both Raaz and Mahi find it very difficult but still they are not losing courage and for this reason both will also be successful.:approve:
Errapel is not supporting Raaz because she is angry and she said that the more trouble I am, the more Raaz will be and now she has control of the powers, maybe she was talking about this, Now Raaz will have to go according to Eraapel even if he does not want to, because if Eraapel does not agree, then she will not allow the use of powers or the use of full power. This will benefit Raaz as Mariya has said and a mother thinks only of her child.:approve: Whether or not the powers remain, this will not change Raaz's attitude. :what2:
As always the update was great, You are writing very well, Now let's see what happens next, Till then waiting for the next part of the story.

Thank You...

๐Ÿ–ค๐Ÿ–ค๐Ÿ–ค
 

vj4u

"Be The Wrong That Makes Everything Right"....
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Toh bhai y indirectly ek order nhi h kyA???? Mere kehne ka mtlb y h ke jo banda sabki sun ke bhi us kaam ko apne alag dhang s karta hai wo kaise ek hi baar m tayar ho gaya errapel ko apne upar control dene ko y wahi old type senti pictures jaisa kaam ho gaya isme devilness kaha s aai??
brother,ab tak kahani me RAAZ ke saath jo bhi situation create hui hai,aur us situation ko usne kaise handle kiya hai, pehle un chizon par baariki se dhyan dijiye...

aapko yaad hoga jab VIDEOUS ne RAAZ se kaha tha ki woh dono apni apni aloukik shaktiyan uski sword me chhupa denge,tab Raaz ne bina naatak kiye ya ladhe ek baar me haan kaha tha..

reason..

OPTION... joki uske paas tha nahi..game VIDEOUS ke hisaab se hi chal sakti hai,ye jaanta tha woh isiliye usse us faisle ko maanane me ek pal bhi nahi laga..

us scene ke baad jab RAAZ normal SAVENT ban gaya,tab apne REFINER powers ko activate karne me usse jaanleva pain feel hua tha par woh phir bhi data raha tha...

woh situation uske liye completely negetive thi..uske EMOTIONS ke power uske paas the hi nahi thik waise hi jaise ab uske paas uski shaktiyon ka control nahi hai lekin usne haar nahi maani aur uske target tak pahunch hi gaya..

jin do scenes ke baare me maine abhi bataya hai,woh ek hi bande ke do alag alag situation me liye gaye faisle hain..

ek situation me jab uske saamne uska dushman tha,toh uski baat bhi usne ek baar me maan li

aur dusra challenge uske saamne khudse hi tha jisme usne apna real ATTITUDE dikhaya..woh ATTITUDE jiski wajah se woh kaamiyab bhi hua..

VIDEOUS waale scene aur REFINER powers ke activate karne waale scene ka mishran tha aaj ka scene...

VIDEOUS waale scene ki hi tarah aaj uske paas option nahi tha..agar woh nahi maanta toh wahin fasa reh jaata..

aur bhai kahani puri kaise hoti phir...??

REFINER waale scene jaise scenes ab banenge jab uske paas uski shaktiyan toh hongi par unpar control nahi..

par ek chiz jo pehle bhi uske paas thi,aaj bhi hai aur aage bhi rahegi,woh hai uska never giving up ATTITUDE...

ek aisa ATTITUDE jo VIDEOUS toh kya VIKRAM aur ASMODEUS bhi usse nahi chhin sakte...

aur ek andar ki baat bataun.. VIKRAM aur ASMODEUS bhi ye baat jaante hain aur isiliye hi unhone jo kiya hai woh kiya hai..

ye sab RAAZ ka KABHI ANGEL KABHI DEVIL waala roop pura karne ki taiyari hai..

kyunki yahi woh roop hai jisse is kahani ka naam pura hua hai,aur aage chalkar ye puri kahani khatm bhi issi naam par hogi....
 

vj4u

"Be The Wrong That Makes Everything Right"....
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Toh bhai y indirectly ek order nhi h kyA???? Mere kehne ka mtlb y h ke jo banda sabki sun ke bhi us kaam ko apne alag dhang s karta hai wo kaise ek hi baar m tayar ho gaya errapel ko apne upar control dene ko y wahi old type senti pictures jaisa kaam ho gaya isme devilness kaha s aai??
brother,ab tak kahani me RAAZ ke saath jo bhi situation create hui hai,aur us situation ko usne kaise handle kiya hai, pehle un chizon par baariki se dhyan dijiye...

aapko yaad hoga jab VIDEOUS ne RAAZ se kaha tha ki woh dono apni apni aloukik shaktiyan uski sword me chhupa denge,tab Raaz ne bina naatak kiye ya ladhe ek baar me haan kaha tha..

reason..

OPTION... joki uske paas tha nahi..game VIDEOUS ke hisaab se hi chal sakti hai,ye jaanta tha woh isiliye usse us faisle ko maanane me ek pal bhi nahi laga..

us scene ke baad jab RAAZ normal SAVENT ban gaya,tab apne REFINER powers ko activate karne me usse jaanleva pain feel hua tha par woh phir bhi data raha tha...

woh situation uske liye completely negetive thi..uske EMOTIONS ke power uske paas the hi nahi thik waise hi jaise ab uske paas uski shaktiyon ka control nahi hai lekin usne haar nahi maani aur uske target tak pahunch hi gaya..

jin do scenes ke baare me maine abhi bataya hai,woh ek hi bande ke do alag alag situation me liye gaye faisle hain..

ek situation me jab uske saamne uska dushman tha,toh uski baat bhi usne ek baar me maan li

aur dusra challenge uske saamne khudse hi tha jisme usne apna real ATTITUDE dikhaya..woh ATTITUDE jiski wajah se woh kaamiyab bhi hua..

VIDEOUS waale scene aur REFINER powers ke activate karne waale scene ka mishran tha aaj ka scene...

VIDEOUS waale scene ki hi tarah aaj uske paas option nahi tha..agar woh nahi maanta toh wahin fasa reh jaata..

aur bhai kahani puri kaise hoti phir...??

REFINER waale scene jaise scenes ab banenge jab uske paas uski shaktiyan toh hongi par unpar control nahi..

par ek chiz jo pehle bhi uske paas thi,aaj bhi hai aur aage bhi rahegi,woh hai uska never giving up ATTITUDE...

ek aisa ATTITUDE jo VIDEOUS toh kya VIKRAM aur ASMODEUS bhi usse nahi chhin sakte...

aur ek andar ki baat bataun.. VIKRAM aur ASMODEUS bhi ye baat jaante hain aur isiliye hi unhone jo kiya hai woh kiya hai..

ye sab RAAZ ka KABHI ANGEL KABHI DEVIL waala roop pura karne ki taiyari hai..

kyunki yahi woh roop hai jisse is kahani ka naam pura hua hai,aur aage chalkar ye puri kahani khatm bhi issi naam par hogi....
 

vj4u

"Be The Wrong That Makes Everything Right"....
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Jajbaat badalnee k liye ek lamha hi khafi hota hai
.
Bhaav badalnee k liye ek eradaa hi khafi hota hai
.
Par Nazariya badalnee mai.....ek zindagi bhi kam pade jaate hai
.
.
Ab aate he update par
Erapel ko kaafi bedardee se maara but y sanee dekha par erapel nai jo kaha vo nahi suna
.
Jitnaa darde mujhe marnee par hoga utna hi dard raaz ko sahna hoga
.
It means agar erapel ki moute aasaan hoti too raaz ka path aasan ho jata
.
But he is raaz vo jeetnai k liye shortcut nahi letaa balki apnaa rastaa khudee banata hai
.
So uska way of expression morally galat tha but my attitude agree with it

Raaz ka attitude ko ek famous quote se samjhe saktee hai

Don't afraid of let it scarifies today's good for tomorrows best

Khuch esi tarikee se hai RAAZ

And

Griifeen asked wogger ki agar mahi raaz se love kartee hai to raaz mahi se love kyu nahi kar sakta

To yaha griffen ka que. Galate hai

Right que. Hai

Raaz mahi se eternal love karte huvi bhi ..apne love ko express kyu nahi karta

Eska answer que. Mai chuppa hai

Eternal love

Raaz mahi se eternal love karta hai
It mean unconditional love

Love is not about body ...it is about soul
Love is not about give and take policy
It is just give without any take policy

Love paanee ka naam nahi denee ka naam hai

Aur yahi raaz hai

Raaz janata hai at the end abhi tke koe bhi tarika nahi hai jise se raaz apnee moutee se bach jaae

Es liye wo janta hai all the time he spend with mahi

Is just giving her pain after her death

.
(((((Ho sakta hai raaz ka asli jeevan marnee k baade hi suru ho)))))
.
Esliye raaz mahi se ukhada rahta hai aur usi y kahta hai ki vikram ki beti honee karn vo mahi se nafratee karta hai
.
.
Most important raaz start to expessing his emotions as a human

Raaz nai apne emotions express karna shuru kar diya
.
.
Chahiye anger hi sahi
But emotion hai

And thats emotion

Kise bhi baate par koe expression ya statement dena wala cold hearted raaz

Abe cold nahi hot hogaya hai
.
And very hot(mtlab choti motee solar system ka sun manlo)

And at the end
Keep it up bro
.
Your writing skills are really good
.
And most important
.
Ek famous quote hai

Be the change you want to see in the world.

.
Y quote tumnaee sach kar dikhaya
.
Faltu ka sex, incest aur bakwaas se bhari befijool ka magic
Y adult forum par writers ka trend bann gaya tha
Usee trend k against jakrrr bina enn chizoo k ek amazing story likhee
.
.
Your writing skills can inspire anyone
.
Awesone dude
.
Agar kabhi koe poem likho ya book to batana jaroor
.
And ha agar songs ki tarah khucch poems ho to youtube par ya esse forum par batana jarurr
.
.
 

vj4u

"Be The Wrong That Makes Everything Right"....
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Jajbaat badalnee k liye ek lamha hi khafi hota hai
.
Bhaav badalnee k liye ek eradaa hi khafi hota hai
.
Par Nazariya badalnee mai.....ek zindagi bhi kam pade jaate hai
.
.
Ab aate he update par
Erapel ko kaafi bedardee se maara but y sanee dekha par erapel nai jo kaha vo nahi suna
.
Jitnaa darde mujhe marnee par hoga utna hi dard raaz ko sahna hoga
.
It means agar erapel ki moute aasaan hoti too raaz ka path aasan ho jata
.
But he is raaz vo jeetnai k liye shortcut nahi letaa balki apnaa rastaa khudee banata hai
.
So uska way of expression morally galat tha but my attitude agree with it

Raaz ka attitude ko ek famous quote se samjhe saktee hai

Don't afraid of let it scarifies today's good for tomorrows best

Khuch esi tarikee se hai RAAZ

And

Griifeen asked wogger ki agar mahi raaz se love kartee hai to raaz mahi se love kyu nahi kar sakta

To yaha griffen ka que. Galate hai

Right que. Hai

Raaz mahi se eternal love karte huvi bhi ..apne love ko express kyu nahi karta

Eska answer que. Mai chuppa hai

Eternal love

Raaz mahi se eternal love karta hai
It mean unconditional love

Love is not about body ...it is about soul
Love is not about give and take policy
It is just give without any take policy

Love paanee ka naam nahi denee ka naam hai

Aur yahi raaz hai

Raaz janata hai at the end abhi tke koe bhi tarika nahi hai jise se raaz apnee moutee se bach jaae

Es liye wo janta hai all the time he spend with mahi

Is just giving her pain after her death

.
(((((Ho sakta hai raaz ka asli jeevan marnee k baade hi suru ho)))))
.
Esliye raaz mahi se ukhada rahta hai aur usi y kahta hai ki vikram ki beti honee karn vo mahi se nafratee karta hai
.
.
Most important raaz start to expessing his emotions as a human

Raaz nai apne emotions express karna shuru kar diya
.
.
Chahiye anger hi sahi
But emotion hai

And thats emotion

Kise bhi baate par koe expression ya statement dena wala cold hearted raaz

Abe cold nahi hot hogaya hai
.
And very hot(mtlab choti motee solar system ka sun manlo)

And at the end
Keep it up bro
.
Your writing skills are really good
.
And most important
.
Ek famous quote hai

Be the change you want to see in the world.

.
Y quote tumnaee sach kar dikhaya
.
Faltu ka sex, incest aur bakwaas se bhari befijool ka magic
Y adult forum par writers ka trend bann gaya tha
Usee trend k against jakrrr bina enn chizoo k ek amazing story likhee
.
.
Your writing skills can inspire anyone
.
Awesone dude
.
Agar kabhi koe poem likho ya book to batana jaroor
.
And ha agar songs ki tarah khucch poems ho to youtube par ya esse forum par batana jarurr
.
.
 

vj4u

"Be The Wrong That Makes Everything Right"....
4,755
39,688
189
Jajbaat badalnee k liye ek lamha hi khafi hota hai
.
Bhaav badalnee k liye ek eradaa hi khafi hota hai
.
Par Nazariya badalnee mai.....ek zindagi bhi kam pade jaate hai
.
.
Ab aate he update par
Erapel ko kaafi bedardee se maara but y sanee dekha par erapel nai jo kaha vo nahi suna
.
Jitnaa darde mujhe marnee par hoga utna hi dard raaz ko sahna hoga
.
It means agar erapel ki moute aasaan hoti too raaz ka path aasan ho jata
.
But he is raaz vo jeetnai k liye shortcut nahi letaa balki apnaa rastaa khudee banata hai
.
So uska way of expression morally galat tha but my attitude agree with it

Raaz ka attitude ko ek famous quote se samjhe saktee hai

Don't afraid of let it scarifies today's good for tomorrows best

Khuch esi tarikee se hai RAAZ

And

Griifeen asked wogger ki agar mahi raaz se love kartee hai to raaz mahi se love kyu nahi kar sakta

To yaha griffen ka que. Galate hai

Right que. Hai

Raaz mahi se eternal love karte huvi bhi ..apne love ko express kyu nahi karta

Eska answer que. Mai chuppa hai

Eternal love

Raaz mahi se eternal love karta hai
It mean unconditional love

Love is not about body ...it is about soul
Love is not about give and take policy
It is just give without any take policy

Love paanee ka naam nahi denee ka naam hai

Aur yahi raaz hai

Raaz janata hai at the end abhi tke koe bhi tarika nahi hai jise se raaz apnee moutee se bach jaae

Es liye wo janta hai all the time he spend with mahi

Is just giving her pain after her death

.
(((((Ho sakta hai raaz ka asli jeevan marnee k baade hi suru ho)))))
.
Esliye raaz mahi se ukhada rahta hai aur usi y kahta hai ki vikram ki beti honee karn vo mahi se nafratee karta hai
.
.
Most important raaz start to expessing his emotions as a human

Raaz nai apne emotions express karna shuru kar diya
.
.
Chahiye anger hi sahi
But emotion hai

And thats emotion

Kise bhi baate par koe expression ya statement dena wala cold hearted raaz

Abe cold nahi hot hogaya hai
.
And very hot(mtlab choti motee solar system ka sun manlo)

And at the end
Keep it up bro
.
Your writing skills are really good
.
And most important
.
Ek famous quote hai

Be the change you want to see in the world.

.
Y quote tumnaee sach kar dikhaya
.
Faltu ka sex, incest aur bakwaas se bhari befijool ka magic
Y adult forum par writers ka trend bann gaya tha
Usee trend k against jakrrr bina enn chizoo k ek amazing story likhee
.
.
Your writing skills can inspire anyone
.
Awesone dude
.
Agar kabhi koe poem likho ya book to batana jaroor
.
And ha agar songs ki tarah khucch poems ho to youtube par ya esse forum par batana jarurr
.
thanks for such a beautiful review brother..aise reviews bohot kam padhne ko milte hain...



aur woh jo aapki sex waali baat thi,toh mera aisa manana hai ki kamsekam ye ek aisi chiz hai jisse padhkar imagine karne me bhhaka kya maza..



jab aap sunny leone ko dekh sakte ho toh phir usse imagine kyun karna..!!!๐Ÿ˜„๐Ÿ˜„๐Ÿ˜„



haan, brother, poetries mai likhta hun,par yahan unhe zabardasti involve nahi karna chahta isiliye nahi daalta...



lekin aapke khubsoorat review ki wajah se ek poetry pesh karta hun..padhkar bataiye ki kaisa laga..???



toh arz kiya hai...





V.J

Jab LADKIYAN raat ko ghar se
nikalne se DARTI thi....

Jab JEENS kamar ke neeche nahi upar hua KARTI thi....

Jab haath me hamesha MOBILE nahi BAT hua karta tha,

Jab GHAR me baithe INTERNET use karne se nahi,
BAAHAR jakar khelne se daant PADTI thi....

Jab subah subah TRAFFIC ka nahi,
chidiyon ka SHOR tha....

Wo DAUR hi kuch AUR tha....



Jab DOSTON ke saath baith DIL khol kar HASA karte the....

Jab sach me BACHO ke DIL me BHAGWAN BASAA karte the....

Jab TEACHERS ki DAANT unka KAAM nahi ADHIKAAR hua KARTA tha....

Jab BADON ke saamne nahi,unse chhup kar NASHA KARTE the....


Jab Bohot mazboot hota RISHTON ka JOD tha....
Wo DAUR hi kuch AUR tha....


Jab ishq HAWAS nahi IBAADAT HUA KARTA tha.....

Jab Ghar se Bhaagna TREND nahi BAGAAWAT hua karta tha....

Jab ek ke saath hi puri ZINDAGI guzar jaati thi,

Ye tab ki baat hai Jab MOHOBBAT
kamzori nahi,TAAKAT hua karta tha....


Wo Duniya chhut gayi jaane wo kaunsa MOD tha.....

sach hi toh hai,wo DAUR hi kuch AUR tha.....
 
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brother,ab tak kahani me RAAZ ke saath jo bhi situation create hui hai,aur us situation ko usne kaise handle kiya hai, pehle un chizon par baariki se dhyan dijiye...

aapko yaad hoga jab VIDEOUS ne RAAZ se kaha tha ki woh dono apni apni aloukik shaktiyan uski sword me chhupa denge,tab Raaz ne bina naatak kiye ya ladhe ek baar me haan kaha tha..

reason..

OPTION... joki uske paas tha nahi..game VIDEOUS ke hisaab se hi chal sakti hai,ye jaanta tha woh isiliye usse us faisle ko maanane me ek pal bhi nahi laga..

us scene ke baad jab RAAZ normal SAVENT ban gaya,tab apne REFINER powers ko activate karne me usse jaanleva pain feel hua tha par woh phir bhi data raha tha...

woh situation uske liye completely negetive thi..uske EMOTIONS ke power uske paas the hi nahi thik waise hi jaise ab uske paas uski shaktiyon ka control nahi hai lekin usne haar nahi maani aur uske target tak pahunch hi gaya..

jin do scenes ke baare me maine abhi bataya hai,woh ek hi bande ke do alag alag situation me liye gaye faisle hain..

ek situation me jab uske saamne uska dushman tha,toh uski baat bhi usne ek baar me maan li

aur dusra challenge uske saamne khudse hi tha jisme usne apna real ATTITUDE dikhaya..woh ATTITUDE jiski wajah se woh kaamiyab bhi hua..

VIDEOUS waale scene aur REFINER powers ke activate karne waale scene ka mishran tha aaj ka scene...

VIDEOUS waale scene ki hi tarah aaj uske paas option nahi tha..agar woh nahi maanta toh wahin fasa reh jaata..

aur bhai kahani puri kaise hoti phir...??

REFINER waale scene jaise scenes ab banenge jab uske paas uski shaktiyan toh hongi par unpar control nahi..

par ek chiz jo pehle bhi uske paas thi,aaj bhi hai aur aage bhi rahegi,woh hai uska never giving up ATTITUDE...

ek aisa ATTITUDE jo VIDEOUS toh kya VIKRAM aur ASMODEUS bhi usse nahi chhin sakte...

aur ek andar ki baat bataun.. VIKRAM aur ASMODEUS bhi ye baat jaante hain aur isiliye hi unhone jo kiya hai woh kiya hai..

ye sab RAAZ ka KABHI ANGEL KABHI DEVIL waala roop pura karne ki taiyari hai..
kyunki yahi woh roop hai jisse is kahani ka naam pura hua hai,aur aage chalkar ye puri kahani khatm bhi issi naam par hogi....
Y that was i expecting k mere doubts vj bhaai d clear ho thank u vj bhai is explaination k liye and update was fantastic bahut hi aacha tha just waiting for next update
 
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