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Fantasy ATTITUDE (KABHI ANGEL KABHI DEVIL) ( Completed )

vj4u

"Be The Wrong That Makes Everything Right"....
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Mindblowing fabulous superb update.........
keep posting bhai............
waiting for next update...........
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Nice update
Superb fantastic update zabardast shayari
Nice update
Nice update bro
Good One for poetry
Wah maza aa gaya nice update. Aaj fir shame tanhai hai ...Bahut khub vj bhai
Awesome update bhai...
Awesome update bro
Zabardast update
Nice update
Super update hai bhai
Kia baat h zaberdast dhun or bahot khoobsurat gana zaberdast
bahot shaandaar mazedaar or
lajawab update VJ bhai
bahot khoob superb
Wow bhai kamal ka update tha bhai

Aur aapake gane ki lyrics to kamal ki thi kash hame woh audio bhi sunane ko mil jata toh maja aaja ta bhai khari

Waiting for new update bhai...
vj bhai apki tareef ke liye to hamare pass word hi nhi hai
super fantastic update bhai maza aa gya ab dekhte hai ki aage kya hota hai
Lovely update
shaandaar update bhai
bahad hasheen update bhai
Nice update
Superb Update Bro...
Waiting For Next
Awesome update vj4u bhai
RAAZ ke ATTITUDE ki kami kuch had tak uska ansh WOOGER pori kar raha hai wahi apne master ka ek dam satik attitude.
MAHI ko dekhte hai RAAZ ke dimag ne reaction bohut hi khatarnak diya hai aur kya RAAZ ko pata hai ki MAHI VIKRAM ki beti hai?
Ab pora game ERRAPEL ke hath mai ki wo is khel ko kis taraf lekar jati hai.
vj4u bhai song badiya likha hai apne.
Nice superb update bhai.
KEEP IT UP AND AS ALWAYS WAITING FOR
As always speechless amazing update.
Boht hi zabardast awesome interesting shandar update
Marvelous update Bhai superb
bhai pura dimag kharab kar diya bhai
I love you โค bhai and miss u
congrets for member of month VJ bro........ab bs errapel ki powers ka raaz ko milne ka intzar h jo bilkul bhi raaz k liye aasan nhi hone wala........and second alfreen ka raaz ka samne aane ka or jo sacchai alfreen se chupi hui h uska alfreen ke samne aane ka ........dekhte h ye kb tk hota h..............
bahot khubsurat story hai
amazing story with loads of potential.. lets wait and see how it unfolds...
Finally...
Is attitude ne v apni krbt le hi le...
Back to back jitne khaternaak revaletion
hue h or jitne dangerous situation vidious ne create ki h...
Ye to sirf jhakhi h...
Raaz ki darindgi baki h...
Ab tk vidious ne Raaz ke junoon ko dekha h ab uski ab uski pagalpan ko dekhega or pura choosen bhogega...
Kahani mai baate hai
Lafzo mai jazbaate hai
.
Soch mai magnitude hai
.

Sach hai boss es kahani mai Attitude hai

Raaz Bina Yadaaste k Bhola hai

par yadaste k aate hi Aag ka gola hai


RAAZ vo Gola hai

Jo sabe khuch jala dega

apne dard ki aag se har kirdar ka

astive hila dega


Jo uske dard ka karn hai unhai Es

duniya ka Rachaayta bhi bachaa na

pae ga

Kyuki Raaz Apne dard k Lava mai

Apnae Rachaayta Vikram ko bhi


Jalaega
thanks brothers..be along
 

vj4u

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AB TAK AAPNE PADHA KI JAHAN EK TARAF MAHI GALEN PAHUNCH JAATI HAI WAHIN DUSRI TARAF RAAZ MAHI KO EK GAANA SUNATA HAI.


AB AAGE:-



CHAPTER-3


(THE DEVIL'S HAVEN,THE SACRIFICE & THE PERFECT EPILOGUE)



UPDATE-130



PLANET-GALEN


PLACE-THE GALEN MOUNTAIN








WOH DEKHO,WAHAN,US BHAAG ME MILEGA ATARAXIA FLOWER......


GALEN MOUNTAIN ke dakshini dhalaan ke end ki taraf ishara karte hue kahi thi ye baat ERRAPEL ne...

MAHI ne ERRAPEL ko MADDOX ki kahi woh baat jisme usne bataya tha ki RAAZ ke brain se ANGEL PARTICLES nikalte samay uske dimag ka shaant hona zaroori hai,bata diya tha..

MAHI ki baat sun ERRAPEL ke dimag me waisa karne ka sabse asaan aur kaargar idea aaya aur us idea ka naam tha....

ATARAXIA FLOWER....ek aisa flower jiski khusboo smell karne se mind aur heart dono hi puri tarah se shaant aur relax ho jaate hain....

aur isiliye hi is ATARAXIA FLOWER ko lene MAHI ERRAPEL aur GRIFFIN,teeno hi yahan is jagah par aaye hue hain...

khair, ERRAPEL ki ungli toh ussi disha ki taraf point kar rahi thi jahan woh ATARAXIA FLOWER paaya jaata tha par uska sir kisi aur taraf tha jisse MAHI ne dekh liya aur...


MAHI-kya baat hai ERRAPEL...!!!!kya hai us taraf...???

ERRAPEL-wahi COGNIZANT INSECTS jinhone mere baba ki jaan li thi..

MAHI-INSECTS ne..kaise..???


MAHI ke sawal par ERRAPEL ne kaafi bhare awaaz me jo hua tha,uska pura vivaran de diya jisse sun...


MAHI-niyati se koi nahi bhaag sakta ERRAPEL...tumhe toh khush hona chahiye ki finally tumhare baba ko moksh mil gaya...


MAHI ki baat sun usse ghoor kar dekha ERRAPEL ne jiske baad...


ERRAPEL-kya ye baat tum tab bhi itni asaani se bol paaogi jab RAAZ ka anth ho jaayega..!!!!


ERRAPEL ki baat sun ek feeki si muskaan naach gayi MAHI ke face par jiske baad...


MAHI-sabse pehle ye batao ki kya tumhe maalum hai ki DIGVIJAY ki mout ka itna dukh kyun hai tumhe..???

ERRAPEL-ye kaisa sawal hai..???baba the mere woh...

MAHI-galat.. sahi jawab ye hai ki tum RAAZ ka sabse powerful EMOTION ho..

woh EMOTION jo usse uske dad aur khaaskar uske mom ke tyag se mila hai..

aur jab ye tyag woh dono de rahe the,tab unke dil me apne bete se door jaane ka dukh tha..

wahi dukh,wahi jasbaat tumhare andar lagatar doud raha hai aur isiliye woh ek shaksh jiske tum hamesha se kareeb rahi thi,uske tyag ke liye tumhe ab bhi taklif ho rahi hai..

aur rahi baat RAAZ ki,toh RAAZ aur tumhare mooh bole baba me zamin aasmaan ka fark hai..

tumhare baba ke saath jo hua,woh saza nahi,vardaan tha jo unke asli swaroop ko joki shaitan ka tha,usko mukt karane ke liye karwaya gaya..

aur RAAZ,usse toh paida hone se pehle hi anath banakar uske saza ke dour ki shuruat kar di gayi thi...

aur woh saza ab bhi jaari hai..par us saza ka sthar badhta hi chala jaa raha hai..

isiliye bewajah ke tarkon par samay barbaad mat karo aur chalo,jiske liye aaye hain,usse lekar chalen yahan se...


jahan apni baat bol aage badh gayi MAHI wahin ERRAPEL hui uske piche ho li...

kuch hi der me woh dono GALEN MOUNTAIN ke dakshini dhalaan ke antim chhor jahan bohot se ped poudhon ka jhurmuth tha,wahan pahunch gaye...

wahan pahunch ERRAPEL MAHI se aage aate hue ek taraf badhti chali gayi aur phir ek jagah pahunch woh rook gayi...

MAHI joki uske piche hi thi,usne dekha ki is waqt ERRAPEL zamin par hi uge hue kuch off white flowers ko joki lotus flower ki shape me the,unhe dekh rahi thi..

ye dekh usse andaza ho gaya ki ho naa ho,woh flowers hi ATARAXIA FLOWERS the...


MAHI-toh ye hain ATARAXIA FLOWERS....!!!!

ERRAPEL-haan...

MAHI-so what are we waiting for...???inme se kisi ek ko todkar yahan se chalte hain...


MAHI ki baat par halki si smile naach uthi ERRAPEL ke chehre par aur..

ERRAPEL-har chiz inheritance jitni asaan nahi hoti madam..

agar in flowers ko todna itna hi asaan hota toh phir baat hi kya thi...phir bhi,LORD OF ANGEL ki beti hain aap,try karke dekh lijiye....


inheritance waali baat ko sun MAHI samajh gayi thi ki ERRAPEL usse mock kar rahi hai..

par waisa sunkar bhi MAHI bilkul offend nahi hui balki uske face par bhi halki si smile naach uthi jiske baad...


MAHI-well mezbaan toh aap hain...toh in flowers ki toughness ka ek baar demo hi de dijiye,phir mai bhi try kar lungi...


MAHI ki baat sun ERRAPEL aage badhi aur un ATARAXIA FLOWERS ke bunch me se ek ke neeche haath daal usse root se ukhaadne ke liye taakat lagane lagi par ukhadne toh door,woh flower apni jagah se hila tak nahi..

wahin ye sab MAHI bade gour se dekh rahi thi..khair,kuch der tak effort lagane ke baad jab woh flower ukhda nahi toh ERRAPEL ne koshish karna chhod diya..

woh apni jagah par khadi hui aur..


ERRAPEL-dekh liya demo..now it's all yours...


abhi bhi mocking saaf jhalak rahi thi ERRAPEL ki awaaz me jisse sun
halke smile ke saath in ATARAXIA FLOWERS ke paas badh chali MAHI..

is dauran ek second ke liye uski aankhen band bhi hui thi...

chalte hue MAHI bhi theek ussi jagah par baith gayi jahan kuch seconds pehle ERRAPEL baithi thi....

wahan baiththe hue MAHI ne bade dheere dheere apne hathon ko aage badhaya aur ussi ATARAXIA FLOWER ki jadh ko pakda jisse ERRAPEL ne kuch der pehle kheenchne ki koshish ki thi..

us point par haath rakh MAHI ne ek baar phirse apni aankhen band ki aur ussi condition ne bade halke se us flower ko kheenchna shuru kiya aur jab aisa hua toh...

ERRAPEL jiske face par ab tak smile thi,woh hairangi me badal gayi..

REASON...

MAHI bade araam se us ATARAXIA FLOWER ko ukhaadte hue wapas khadi ho chuki thi aur ek pyari si smile ke saath ERRAPEL ko dekh rahi thi......


ERRAPEL-how,kaise kiya tumne ye..???

MAHI-ATTITUDE..NAZARIYA...jaanti ho,ye word itna important kyun hai..???kyunki ye word insaan ka character justify karta hai...

kamal ki baat hai naa,mai human hone ke baad bhi jisse apne bhawnao ko apne hisaab se chunane ka hakh hai,bina buyest hue faisla le rahi hun par tum joki sirf aur sirf emotion se bani ho,tumhara koi dusra astitv ya pehchaan nahi,woh bhi nakaratmak hote hue har chiz ko judge kar rahi ho...


MAHI ki baat aur uske piche chuppa matlab samajh gayi thi ERRAPEL isiliye khamosh thi woh..

par saath hi uski jigyasa bhi saaf dikh rahi thi MAHI ko aur isiliye..


MAHI-tumne kaha tha naa ki ye ATARAXIA FLOWER dimag aur dil,dono ko shaant kar deta hai..

jiska matlab hai ki ye EMOTIONS ko neutralize karta hai...

ab aisi chiz ko haasil karne ke liye bhi toh ussi manobhaav ki zaroorat padegi naa..

inhe todne se pehle maine apne REFINER POWERS ko activate kar liya tha aur inhe hold karne ke baad ussi power ka AURA inpar release kar diya..

result,ye araam se bahar aa gaye..


(NOTE-yahi kar rahi thi MAHI aankhen band karne ke baad)


MAHI-ab chalen..yahan aaye hue kaafi der ho gaya hai...


apni baat bol MAHI aur uske saath abhi aayi GRIFFIN bhi aage badh gayi jinhe follow karte hue ERRAPEL bhi unke piche holi...




PLACE- NEAR ERRAPEL'S COTTAGE



GRRRHHHHH.....

ek gurrahat ne aankhein band kar lete hue WOOGER ka dhyan aakarshit kiya jispar usne palat kar dekha toh paaya ki ek bohot bada SNOW LEOPARD ussiki disha me sunghte hue aage badh raha tha..

ab WOOGER tha invisible form me isiliye woh LEOPARD usse dekh toh sakta tha nahi par uski gandh sungh aur usse aa rahe negetive AURA ko feel kar woh ghusse se gurra raha tha...

khair,sunghte hue woh SNOW LEOPARD WOOGER ke kaafi paas aa gaya tha aur isiliye usse apne theek saamne ek invisible shatru ki feeling aane lagi thi...

us invisible dushman ko feel karte hi woh SNOW LEOPARD halka sa piche hua aur phir usne us aa rahi feeling ki taraf challang laga di...

wahin WOOGER jo ab tak bade araam se us SNOW LEOPARD ko dekh raha tha,uske apni taraf jump lagane ke baad bhi woh shaant hi raha aur phir jaise hi woh SNOW LEOPARD uske paas pahuncha toh bijli se bhi tez gati se WOOGER side hat gaya jisse us SNOW LEOPARD ka waar khaali gaya..

par side haththe hi WOOGER visible ho chuka tha...

apne se bhi bade jaanwar ko dekh woh SNOW LEOPARD kuch seconds ke liye rook sa gaya par WOOGER ke sharir se nikal rahe negetive AURA ki wajah se usne ek baar phirse WOOGER par chhalang laga di...

is baar WOOGER side nahi hata balki woh us SNOW LEOPARD se bhi thoda upar jump laga gaya jiske baad jab woh neeche aaya toh WOOGER ke panjo ke neeche us SNOW LEOPARD ki gardan fasi hui thi...

woh LEOPARD kaafi zoron se chhatpata raha tha par WOOGER ke giraft se azaad nahi ho paa raha tha..

wahin WOOGER kuch der tak us SNOW LEOPARD ko chhatpatate hue dekhta raha par phir apne panjo par pressure daalte hue usne apna bada sa mooh khol diya..

mooh kholne ke baad ab tak behosh ho chuke LEOPARD ko khatm karne ke liye woh neeche jhukne hi waala tha ki tabhi...

DHAAKKK....

GRIFFIN jisne wapas aate waqt WOOGER aur uske neeche fase leopard ko dekh liya tha,woh tezi se aage badhi aur usne ek zor ki takkar WOOGER ko maar di jiske asar se woh thoda door jaakar gira....

par girte hi naa sirf WOOGER turant khada ho gaya balki apni aankhon me khoon utaare woh halka sa gurraya aur nape tule kadmo se GRIFFIN ki taraf badha..

is waqt WOOGER ki aankhon me jo intensity thi,usse dekh GRIFFIN se kuch door khade ERRAPEL aur MAHI bhi man hi man hadbada gaye..

reason...

WOOGER ki aankhon me GRIFFIN ko darane ya zakhmi karne ke bhaav nahi the..usse khtam karne ki determination thi..

ek aisi determination jo RAAZ ke faislon me hoti hai..aur isiliye ye situation deadly tha...

haan ye sach tha ki kyunki GRIFFIN MAHI ki urja se bani thi, isiliye jab tak MAHI zinda thi,usse bhi maara nahi jaa sakta tha par taklif toh pahunchayi jaa sakti thi..

aisi taklif jo mout se zyada dard de aur waisi hi koi taklif dene ke bhaav dikh rahe the WOOGER ke face par aur isiliye isse pehle ki WOOGER GRIFFIN ke aur kareeb jaata,MAHI turant aage badhi aur uske aur GRIFFIN ke beech aakar khadi ho gayi...


MAHI-shaant ho jaao WOOGER...

WOOGER-kyun, isiliye kyunki tum keh rahi ho..???

MAHI-nahi, isiliye kyunki takkar abhi barabar ki nahi hai..

apne MASTER ki haalat ki wajah se tumhara potential dab gaya hai aur meri shaktiyon ke merging process shuru naa hone ki wajah se GRIFFIN ka haal bhi sahi nahi hai..

aisi haalat me ladhne me maza nahi aayega...

WOOGER-mujhe maza aaye naa aaye,magar agar mere kisi kaam ke beech ye GRIFFIN aayi toh isse taklif zaroor ho jaayegi...

MASTER aa rahe hain....


WOOGER ki baat par koi react kare,usse pehle hi ye baat bol WOOGER invisible ho gaya..

wahin GRIFFIN toh pehle hi invisible thi, isiliye woh waise hi rahi...

khair, abhi WOOGER ko invisible hue kuch pal bhi nahi beeta tha ki tabhi...


HOLY SHIT....

cottage se nikalte hi ek bade se SNOW LEOPARD ko apne saamne behoshi bhari haalat me dekh shock me aa kahi thi ye baat maine jispar MAHI ke face par smile aa gayi aur...


MAHI-relax RAAZ..behosh hai ye aur agar hosh me bhi rehta tan bhi tumhare liye dangerous nahi hota...


MAHI ki baat sunte sunte us LEOPARD ko dekhte hue mai uske paas aa gaya jiske baad meri nazar padi uske haathon me pakde hue ek bohot hi khubsoorat flower pe jisse dekh...


MAI-wow..ye kaun sa flower hai..???

MAHI-isse ATARAXIA FLOWER kehte hain...waana have a look..??


ye bol usne us flower ko meri taraf badha diya jisse thaam liya maine jiske baad...

MAHI-smell it... isse nikalne waali khushboo jaisi scent pehle kabhi smell nahi ki hogi tumne..!!!

MAI-mujhe toh yaad bhi nahi hai ki maine kabhi koi flower ko smell kiya bhi hai yaa nahi toh phir tulna kisse karun???

MAHI-kya pata,isse smell karne ke baad tumhari memory hi wapas aa jaaye,jiske baad tumhare smell kiye saare flowers ki scent bhi yaad aa jaaye tumhe...

phir compare bhi kar lena..


MAHI ki baat joki actual me sach hi thi,usse mazak samajh muskurate hue maine us ATARAXIA FLOWER ko apne naak ke paas laaya aur usse smell kiya..

aur jab maine aisa kiya toh....

MAHI ki baat sahi thi...is flower ki khushbu wakayi bohot achi thi..

aur saath hi kaafi mind soothing bhi...

kuch dino se jabse meri yahan GALEN me aankh khuli hai,tabse hi mera dimag hamesha bhaari raha hai..

par jaise hi maine is FLOWER ko smell kiya,toh iski khushbu mere nathuno se hote hue mere dimag me chadh si gayi aur aisa hote hi mera dimag ek pal me hi shaant ho gaya...bilkul shaant...

itna hi nahi,woh smell,woh khushbu mere dimag se hote hue mere seene ke chaaro taraf bhi faile gayi jisse mera pura antarnam shaant ho gaya..

mujhe aisa lag raha tha jaise maine moksh paa liya hai..aankh band kar mai is behatarin shaanti ko mehsoos kar hi raha tha ki tabhi mujhe apne sir par kisika haath feel hua aur...


PRODHARATI KANAM

EXTRICATE PARTICLES


isse pehle ki mai apni aankhein kholun, mere kaano ko ek awaaz yaa phir ye kahun ki ek SPELL jaise shabd sunayi diye aur jab aisa hua toh....


AAHHHHHHHHHHHH...............

mere mooh se ek tez cheekh nikal gayi...

reason...

mujhe aisa lag raha tha jaise koi cheez joki meri naa hokar bhi mere andar thi,woh mere brain se kheenchate hue bahar nikal rahi hai...

aur ye process bohot zyada painful tha..

wahin SPELL bolne ke baad jab RAAZ chikha toh ek pal ke liye MAHI hadbada si gayi thi par phir bhi usne apna haath RAAZ ke sir ke upar se nahi hataya...

RAAZ ke opposite is waqt MAHI ko apne haathon me behadh thandak mehsoos ho rahi thi...

haath hi nahi,uske brain aur heart dono ko hi is waqt kaafi sukoon mil raha tha...

khair,dard ki adhikta se RAAZ behosh hone hi waala tha par uske behosh hone se pehle hi MAHI ne apne saare ANGEL PARTICLES uske brain se extract kar liye aur aisa karne ke turant baad bina apna haath hataye..


MAHI- ARYAHALAM MUNDAKA

INTERJECT BEAM


ye dusra SPELL uccharit kiya MAHI ne aur uske aisa karte hi RAAZ ke chehre par chaaye pida waale bhaav gayab hone lage...

dard apni seema laangh chuka tha isiliye behosh toh RAAZ ho hi gaya par waisa hote waqt ek sukoon dikhne lagi uske chehre par...

jahan RAAZ zamin par girkar behosh ho chuka tha wahin MAHI toh hosh me hi thi par ab usse bhi apne andar ek ajeeb sa bhaaripan feel ho raha tha..

darasal uske andar samaye kan apni ANGEL FORM POWER SOURCE waali jagah par adjust ho rahe the aur isiliye MAHI ko bhaaripan feel ho raha tha..

paas hi ke ek pedh par apna haath rakh apne sir ko jhukaye MAHI lambi lambi saansein le rahi thi...

ERRAPEL aur GRIFFIN bhi ussike paas aa chuki thi par isse pehle ki woh dono MAHI se kuch keh paate...

GRRHHHH....

ek ajeeb si gurrahat sunayi di un teeno ko jiske baad woh us sunayi de rahi gurrahat ki taraf palte..

aur aisa karte hi unhone dekha ki kuch der pehle tak behosh pada woh SNOW LEOPARD hosh me aa chuka hai aur is waqt uski nazar hai WOOGER ki taraf..

par ye dekh MAHI, GRIFFIN aur ERRAPEL chownke...

reason..

is waqt WOOGER visible mode me RAAZ ke just piche khada tha...

par un teeno ke hairani ki main wajah ye thi ki woh SNOW LEOPARD WOOGER ko dekhkar nahi,balki behosh pade RAAZ ko dekhkar gurra raha tha..

aur ye isiliye hua tha kyunki ab jab MAHI ne apne ANGEL PARTICLES RAAZ ke dimag se extract kar liye the isiliye ab usse wahi devilish AURA generate ho rahi thi jo WOOGER se usne feel ki thi..

us LEOPARD ki nazar me ab RAAZ bhi WOOGER ki hi tarah uska dushman tha...

MAHI aur GRIFFIN toh nahi,par RAAZ ke EMOTIONS se bani ERRAPEL is ganit ko samajh chuki thi aur isiliye...


ERRAPEL-MAHI, GRIFFIN...ye LEOPARD WOOGER ke saath saath RAAZ ko bhi apna dushman samajh raha hai..

woh uspar attack karne waala hai..

GRIFFIN-haan toh kya hua..?? WOOGER RAAZ ke paas hi toh hai..woh sambhal lega...


GRIFFIN ki baat MAHI ne suni zaroor,par usse ittafaq nahi rakha...

aur woh isiliye kyunki is waqt WOOGER ka expression kuch alag hi tha...

aisa kahin se bhi nahi laga raha tha ki woh RAAZ ko bachane ke liye uske paas khada hai...

wahan MAHI ne apni baat puri hi ki thi ki tabhi us LEOPARD ne RAAZ ki taraf jump laga diya aur aisa hote dekh MAHI bhi kaafi tezi se aage badhne ko hui par tabhi kuch aisa hua jisse dekh naa sirf MAHI ke badhte kadam rook gaye balki uske saath khade GRIFFIN aur ERRAPEL ki bhi aankhen hairat se khul gayi aur un teeno ke hi mooh s ek saath nikla...

RAAZ.....

RAAZ... matlab mai...jo us SNOW LEOPARD ke jump lagane se theek ek second pehle hi hosh me aa chuka tha aur woh puri tarah se...

aankhon ke saath saath dimag bhi puri tarah se khul gaya tha mera...

itna hi nahi,aankh khulte hi saamne se aa rahe khatre ko naa sirf mehsoos kar liya tha maine balki second ke 100th bhaag se bhi pehle maine apne ulte pade body ko ek jhatka diya jiske asar se mai kisi straight lakdi ki tarah khada hota chala gaya...

aur waise hi khade hote hote mere dono haath aage badh chuke the jiske baad un dono hathon ke beech me us SNOW LEOPARD ka khula hua mooh aa chuka tha..

uske mooh ke dono ends ko strongly pakde mai us SNOW LEOPARD ko dekhe jaa raha tha...

mujhe hosh me aate aur phir us LEOPARD ke jabdon ko pakde dekh MAHI, GRIFFIN aur ERRAPEL ke mooh se mera naam nikla tha par apna naam sunane ke baad bhi meri gardan un teeno ki taraf nahi mudi thi...

mai ektak us LEOPARD ko dekh raha tha joki abhi tezi se apne aage ke dono pairon ko mere chhati me gadane ki koshish karte hue chattpata raha tha..

jahan woh mujhe maarne ke liye apna pura dum laga raha tha wahin is waqt mere face par koi expressions nahi the..

naa khushi,naa gum,naa dard,naa koi rask..ek straight aur puri tarah kore bhaavhin chehre ko liye suni padi aankhon se mai us LEOPARD ko dekh raha tha..

wahin is beech bas WOOGER hi tha jo behadh khushi se mujhe aur mere haathon ke beech fase us LEOPARD ko dekh raha tha..

aisa kar usne ek baar sir ghumate hue MAHI aur GRIFFIN ko dekha maano keh raha ho...


"AB IS LEOPARD KO BACHA KAR DIKHAO"....


khair,mujhe us LEOPARD ke jabdon ko pakde dekh MAHI, ERRAPEL aur GRIFFIN,teeno ko laga ki mai us jabde ko faad dunga par unki ye soch hairangi me tab badli jab maine us LEOPARD ke mooh ko piche dhakka dete hue chhod diya...

dhakka khaate hi woh LEOPARD piche ki taraf gira par girte hi woh turant khada hua aur ek baar phir meri taraf tezi se badha...

aur jab usne aisa kiya toh maine apna haath piche ki taraf kiya..

mera aisa karna WOOGER ke liye ek hukm tha jisse usne naa sirf samjha balki ussi pal uspar amal bhi kar diya...

mere haath piche karte hi WOOGER khud ek SWORD me badal gaya aur sidhe mere haath me aa gaya aur jab aisa hua toh mai bijli se bhi tez aage badhta chala gaya aur LEOPARD ke paas pahunchte hi ek second me kareeb 20 baar chal gayi meri talwar...

aur jab ek second baad meri talwar rooki toh maine usse saamne ucchal diya joki zamin par girne se pehle hi wapas apne asli roop WOOGER me badal chuka tha..

khair, mere us ek second ki talwar baazi ke baad jab sabki aur khaaskar ERRAPEL ki nazar us SNOW LEOPARD par gayi toh uski aankhein hi pathra gayi....

REASON....

jaisa ki maine kaha ki kareeb 20 baar chali thi meri talwar jiske asar se us LEOPARD ke dono aankh,dono kaan,naak chaaron pair kat kar uske sharir se alag ho chuke the..

saath hi saath uske sir ke aur pet ke aage ke un bhaagon par jahan uska heart aur brain hote hain,wahan gaddhe ho gaye the aur un gaddhon ke andar se brain aur heart gayab the...

woh dono parts talwar ki nok se hote hue uske andar kisi seekh kabab ki tarah latak gaye the jinhe wapas apne asli swaroop me aane ke baad WOOGER bade chaav se khaa raha tha...

aur aisa karte hue woh ERRAPEL,MAHI aur GRIFFIN ki taraf dekh raha tha...

mera woh nirmam waar jiske baad bhi mai bilkul shaant khada tha, WOOGER ka us LEOPARD ke brain aur heart ko khaana,ye dono hi chiz ek hi waqt me do alag alag statements de rahi thi...

pehla statement mila tha MAHI aur GRIFFIN ko...aur woh statement ye tha ki...

RAAZ us LEOPARD ko kisi bhi tarah se maar sakta tha par usne WOOGER ko ek shashtra banakar usse maara jiska matlab tha ki RAAZ ne wahi kiya jo MAHI aur GRIFFIN ne kuch der pehle hone se roka tha..

WOOGER ke haathon us LEOPARD ki mout...

par RAAZ ne waisa karke dikha diya aur aisa kar usne indirectly un dono ko bata diya ki uske raaste me aane ki koshish naa karen....jo woh chahega,woh karega...

dusra statement gaya tha ERRAPEL ko jisne aaj pehli baar live RAAZ ki nirmamta dekhi thi aur jis tarah ki krurta usne dekhi thi,usse dekh usse yakin nahi ho paa raha tha ki woh ussi RAAZ ka EMOTION hai...

khair, statement ye tha ki sahi aur galat,maasum aur gunahgar ke beech ka fark RAAZ ko pata nahi tha aur naahi saza dene ka uske paas koi correct parameter tha...

taklif dene me uski suni aankhon ko bhi ek sukoon milta tha...

par is statement ko jaanane ke baad bhi woh ye jaanti thi ki RAAZ ko change karne ke liye woh kuch nahi kar sakti..

infact ab jab RAAZ ki memory wapas aa chuki thi,toh iska matlab tha ki uska RAAZ me samane ka waqt ho chuka hai..

anyways, bhale hi RAAZ ko sahi karne ke liye ERRAPEL kuch nahi kar sakti thi par jo ab bhi uske haathon me tha,uska use toh woh apne hisaab se kar hi sakti thi aur isiliye apne baaju me khadi MAHI ki taraf dekha usne aur...


ERRAPEL-mera waqt aa chuka hai MAHI...


ERRAPEL ki baat sun MAHI ne uski taraf dekha aur dekhte hi woh uski baat samajh chuki thi...

par woh kuch keh paati,usse pehle hi ERRAPEL ne apna haath MAHI ke haathon ke upar rakha aur apni baat ko aage badhate hue...


ERRAPEL-khair,woh toh kabhi na kabhi aana hi tha,aaj hi sahi...magar,dekhna ye hai ki ye hoga kaise...????

kyunki jis tarah mera waqt khatm hoga,woh tarika hi tay karega ki RAAZ ka waqt kab shuru hoga...???


is baat ko bol kuch aur shabd bole ERRAPEL ne MAHI se jiske baad MAHI kuch kahe,uss pehle hi usse ek strong force ka abhaas hua..

aisa hote hi jab uski nazar saamne gayi toh uski aankhein badi ho gayi..

reason...

MAI.... jiski nazar is waqt ERRAPEL par thi..aur usse dekhte hue meri aankhon ne ek aisa sunapan tha jo kisiko bhi jhakjhor dene ke liye kaafi tha...

mout si virani aankhon aur usse bhi cold face ko liye mai tezi se ERRAPEL ke paas pahunch chuka tha jispar..


MAHI-RAAZ meri baat sunnnnnnooo.........

itna hi aage bol paayi MAHI....

reason...

uske itna bolte tak hi mai ERRAPEL ke saamne pahunch chuka tha aur aisa hote hi mere haath bijli ki tezi se aage badhe aur maine ERRAPEL ke sir ko dono taraf se pakad liya..

aur aisa karte hi...


KHADD...KHADDD........KRRRDHKKKKK...


ek ke baad ek teen awaazein nikli...pehli aur dusri awaaz thi ERRAPEL ki gardan tootne ki jisse maine badi berehmi se pehle pura left aur phir pura right ghuma diya tha aur mere aisa karte hi asahaniya dard ke baawjud bina cheekhe hi ERRAPEL ki aankhein palat chuki thi..

par mai itne me rooka nahi..kyunki jo teesri aawaz aayi thi woh isiliye aayi thi kyunki maine ERRAPEL ke sir ke dono hisso ko zor se pakadte hue usse pura ukhadkar phek diya tha....

aur jab aisa hua toh toh ERRAPEL ka sharir aur us sharir se alag gira pada sir ek pure WHITE RAY me badal mujhme sama gaye..

mere andar samate waqt us ray se ek bohot hi powerful ENERGY generate ho rahi thi jiske pressure ki wajah se mai neeche baith gaya tha..

wahin maine jis tarah ERRAPEL ka kaam khatm kiya tha usse dekh...


GRIFFIN-he is a DEVIL indeed....


jahan GRIFFIN ki is baat par mere piche khada WOOGER muskura utha wahin MAHI ne toh jaise GRIFFIN ki baat suni nahi thi..

woh toh aankhon me bebasi aur dukh liye mujhe hi dekh rahi thi..

waise ye bebasi aur dukh ERRAPEL ke khatm hone ka nahi tha,balki jis tarah se maine usse khatm kiya tha,uski wajah se tha..

aur woh isiliye kyunki khatm hone se pehle jo aakhri shabd ERRAPEL ne bole the,meri harkat ne mujhe us baat yaa phir ye kahun ki us condition ke negetive side ki taraf khada kar diya tha..

ERRAPEL ki wahi condition,wahi baat is waqt MAHI ke dimag me gunj rahi thi jo kuch yun thi...


ERRAPEL-



mere anth ka TARIKA hi RAAZ ki takdir tay KAREGI...

RAAZ bachega PYAR se,tab nahi jab duniya usse DAREGI...

dard mujhe jitna kam hoga,uske liye utna behtar....kyunki,

mujhe haasil karna,tay karegi woh TAKLIF jisse sehte hue abhi ye ERRAPEL MAREGI....
















AAJ KE LIYE ITNA HI......
















AAPKA APNA V....J.....
 

vj4u

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First of all tum jis bande ki baat kr rhe ho unhone story ki start me hi bol diya tha ki wo Weekly me 1,2,3-4 updates hi denge.
2nd thing Story likhne me or Padhne me difference hota hai...Tumhare is ek comment me jitni spelling mistakes h na utni mistakes VJ bhai ki poori story mila ke hogi,
tumhe kya lgta h kesa hota h ye ??
3rd thing unhone Thursday kahi bola hi nhi Wednesday bola h unhone or hum sbko ptaa h ki update mostly Late night hi aata h or aaj bhi aayega.
4th thing Ho sakta h tum velle baithe ho, tumhari life me koi kaam na ho but it doesn't mean ki samne wala bhi Vella ho.
5th thing Jitne bde is story ke ek update hote h na utne me is poore xforum ke 95% writers ke 3-4 updates de dete h toh appreciate kro ki tumhe quality or quantity dono mil rhi h.
6th thing I understand ki tumhe update ka wait h hum sbko h maybe tumse jyda h but it doesn't mean ki tum kuch bhi likh doge.
Peace out.
arre relax brother..bura mat boliye...bol jaate hain kuch log zyada..chill out.. update is on the way..
 

vj4u

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waiting for next update
Waiting VJ Bhai eagerly waiting.
Update Kab Tak
First of all tum jis bande ki baat kr rhe ho unhone story ki start me hi bol diya tha ki wo Weekly me 1,2,3-4 updates hi denge.
2nd thing Story likhne me or Padhne me difference hota hai...Tumhare is ek comment me jitni spelling mistakes h na utni mistakes VJ bhai ki poori story mila ke hogi,
tumhe kya lgta h kesa hota h ye ??
3rd thing unhone Thursday kahi bola hi nhi Wednesday bola h unhone or hum sbko ptaa h ki update mostly Late night hi aata h or aaj bhi aayega.
4th thing Ho sakta h tum velle baithe ho, tumhari life me koi kaam na ho but it doesn't mean ki samne wala bhi Vella ho.
5th thing Jitne bde is story ke ek update hote h na utne me is poore xforum ke 95% writers ke 3-4 updates de dete h toh appreciate kro ki tumhe quality or quantity dono mil rhi h.
6th thing I understand ki tumhe update ka wait h hum sbko h maybe tumse jyda h but it doesn't mean ki tum kuch bhi likh doge.
Peace out.
Intejar kyu karna, gf se batya le bhai. Agar na h to padosi se kar le. Aur wo v na h to bahut saare app h play store pr us se kam chala le.
guyzzz,is kahani aur aap logon ke constant support ki wajah se mujhe MEMBER OF THE MONTH banaya gaya hai...

thanks for all the love and support..i will try and upgrade myself to the next level...

update posted...
 

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Awesome update bhaiiii ๐Ÿ˜ณ๐Ÿ˜ณ๐Ÿ˜ณ๐Ÿ˜ฅ๐Ÿคฉ๐Ÿคฉ




mere anth ka TARIKA hi RAAZ ki takdir tay KAREGI...

RAAZ bachega PYAR se,tab nahi jab duniya usse DAREGI...

dard mujhe jitna kam hoga,uske liye utna behtar....kyunki,

mujhe haasil karna,tay karegi woh TAKLIF jisse sehte hue abhi ye ERRAPEL MAREGI....


Ye last ki line's ๐Ÿ˜ฅ๐Ÿ˜ฅ๐Ÿ˜ณ๐Ÿคฉ poora update ek taraf or in lines ke andar ke Raaz ek taraf .๐Ÿ˜ณ๐Ÿ˜ณ๐Ÿคฉโค๏ธ

Best as always โค๏ธ๐Ÿคฉ๐Ÿคฉ

Eagerly waiting for nexttt ๐Ÿคฉ๐Ÿ˜ฅ
 

Kill_monger

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guyzzz,is kahani aur aap logon ke constant support ki wajah se mujhe MEMBER OF THE MONTH banaya gaya hai...

thanks for all the love and support..i will try and upgrade myself to the next level...

update posted...

Congrattssss bhaiii๐Ÿคฉ๐Ÿคฉ member of the year bhi aayega abhi toh ..agr ye award exist krta hoga toh๐Ÿ˜›๐Ÿ˜›๐Ÿคฉ

You're already on next level bhai isse jyda upgrade hoge aap toh fir Dark or Interstellar ke script writers ki naukri khtre me aa jayegi๐Ÿ˜‚๐Ÿ˜‚๐Ÿ˜ฅ just kidding ๐Ÿ˜›
Eagerly waiting for next ๐Ÿคฉ
 

Loverboy sukh

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Kaha kaha se aa jate ho bhai tmlog. Bhai story ka maja lo, thread ye sab comments dal kar kharab na karo. Aisa lagta h kvi bimar nai pade tm, kvi kahi ghumne nai gye. Jao yaar kahi bahar ghumne, bhut boring lyf h tmhari. Usk bad reply kar diyo.
Utni aap ki age nhi jitni age mene j&k mein bitati dost poori age nikal gai desh ki sewa krte huye army mein aap ko to lge gi hi boring life thanks
 
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