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Fantasy ATTITUDE (KABHI ANGEL KABHI DEVIL) ( Completed )

Jamesleon

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Wow bhai kya se kya ho raha har kisi ko power mil rahi hain bichare videous ne kya galti kar di jo use hi power nahi mil rahi hai aur agar errapel jo ki raaz ki 10 percent power hain aur agar woh use mil gayi to kya hoga

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Bro VIDEOUS power ke mamleme sub
Ka BAAP he
Akhir vo
Vikram or Asmodus ki first chapter me
In dono bhai ki ladai Horahi thi or
Jo urja Baher nikl Rahi thi
Us urja ka mix collection se bana he
Vidouse
Jo takat or soch ke Maamle me Bhot aage he brother
VIDOUse Khud ek Shakti he
Jo Vikram or asmoduski ladaika natija he


 
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AB TAK AAPNE PADHA KI JAHAN EK TARAF FALLON KO PATA CHALTA HAI KI ASTER ME REHNE WAALE LOG ASAL ME SPIRITS HAIN WAHIN DUSRI TARAF HORUS URF DIGVIJAY RAAZ KO HOSH ME LAANE WAALE COGNIZANT LEAF KO LENE NIKAL JAATE HAIN.


AB AAGE:-



CHAPTER-3


(THE DEVIL'S HAVEN, THE SACRIFICE & THE PERFECT EPILOGUE)



MEGA UPDATE-125



PLANET-GALEN


PLACE- THE GALEN MOUNTAIN






TOH YE HAIN COGNIZANT LEAFS...


kaale colour ke ek ped jinme peele colour ki pattiyan lagi hui thi,unhe dekhte hue kahi thi ye baat HORUS urf DIGVIJAY ne...

is waqt us COGNIZANT pedh se ek behadh hi lubhavani khushbu aa rahi thi jo kisiko bhi apni taraf aakarshit karne me saksham thi...

par HORUS jaante the ki ye kushbu asal me mout ka woh khinchaw hai jo sabko apni taraf aakarshit karta hai...

HORUS dekh rahe the ki COGNIZANT LEAFS ke kuch bhaag halke ubhre hue dikh rahe the..

ye bhaag asal me COGNIZANT WORMS the jo LEAFS ke saath jude hue the aur jo koi bhi un LEAFS ko todta,woh WORMS joki ek dead curse ki tarah the,woh us leaf ko todne waale ke sharir se chipak jaate aur apne deadly poison ko us vyakti ke pure sharir ke transfer karte hue usse ek slow aur unbearable pain waali mout dete...

ye saari baat HORUS jaante th par yahi toh unki niyati thi jisse woh bhaag nahi sakte the..

apne pichle human life me itne gunah unke naam the ki unke praayaschit ke liye ye dard unhe sehna hi tha...

aur isiliye ek lambi saans chhodte hue unhone apna haath aage badhaya aur ek jhatke me kuch COGNIZANT LEAFS ko tod liya aur jab unhone aisa kiya toh un saare LEAFS se chipke WORMS turant unke saare sharir par chhad gaye aur aisa hote hi...

AHHHHHHH...

ek zordar cheekh nikal gayi HORUS ke mooh se jiske baad woh ek jhatke me apne ghutno par aa gaye...

sharir par chadhte hi un COGNIZANT WORMS ne apna kaam shuru kar diya tha..

tezab jaisi apni poison un sabne HORUS ke sharir me transfer karni shuru kar di thi jisse uthne waale aseem dard ko jhelne ki koshish karte hue HORUS wapas kisi tarah apne pairon par khade hue aur ladkhadate kadmo se apne ghar ki taraf badh gaye...





PLACE-ASTER




YE TOH SPIRITS HAIN...




saamne hazaron laakhon black transparent spirits jinke beech waale hisse me halki si whiteness chamak rahi thi,usse dekhte hue kahi ye baat FALLON ne jispar...


MASTER-ye sab wahi spirits hain jo pehle kabhi DEVILS hua karte the aur salvation ke liye jinhone ZEAL me wapas janm liya tha...

wahan marne ke baad se hi ye saare spirits yahan ASTER me aakar rooke hue hain....

MAHI-par kyun...???inhe diya kaam toh pura ho chuka hai...toh phir DAD ke waade ke hisaab se inhe ab tak salvation kyun nahi mili..


DAD... pehli baar zindagi me istamal kiya tha is shabd ka MAHI ne aur aisa karte waqt usne is shabd ke maayne ko puri tarah feel bhi kiya..

wahin MAHI ke sawal ko sun...


MADDOX-kyunki inka ek ehem kaam abhi bacha hua hai...

FALLON-kaisa kaam...????


tumne in saare spirits ke centre point par gour kiya hai, dekho wahan kuch whitish chamak raha hai...

woh ek LUSTRAL BEAM hai....

kyunki in sabki ZEAL me mout inke karm revive hue the,ye sab ek complete soul changing procedure se guzre the, isiliye salvation ke saath saath as a gift in sabko ye LUSTRAL BEAM bhi mila tha..

par ye gift inhe apne use ke liye nahi balki kisi aur use ke liye provide kiya gaya tha...

aur ye sab ab tak yahan salvation ka wait karte hue isiliye rooke hain,kyunki inhe ye LUSTRAL BEAM tumhe dena tha MAHI...

MAHI-mujhe...!!par mere ye BEAM kis kaam ki...???

MADDOX-tumhare nahi,ye BEAM RAAZ ke kaam aayegi..kaise,ye mat puchna,sahi waqt aane par usse aur tumhe apne aap pata chal jaayega....

is BEAM ko tumhe filhal ke liye apne andar store karke rakhna hai aur phir jab tum RAAZ se milogi,toh uske sir par haath rakh isse uske andar transfer kar dena...

haan,par usse pehle tumhari cheez joki uske andar hai aur usse lagatar taklif deti aa rahi hai,usse zaroor uske andar se nikal lena...


MADDOX ki is baat par buri tarah chownki MAHI...uski koi cheez RAAZ ke paas hai jo usse lagatar taklif deti aa rahi hai, aisa kuch toh usne socha hi nahi tha aur isiliye....


MAHI-meri chiz RAAZ ke paas hai aur usse pain pahuncha rahi hai..!!ye kya keh rahe hain aap..???

MADDOX-woh ladhayi yaad hai jo kuch samay pehle tumhare aur MORANA ke beech hui thi jisme MORANA tumpar lagatar waar karti jaa rahi thi jiski wajah se tumhe bohot zyada pain ho raha tha..

kabhi socha hai ki us waqt achanak aisa kya ho gaya tha ki uske waar ke beech tumhare bina waar kiye hi MORANA kaise behosh ho gayi thi...???


MADDOX ki kahi baat sach thi..us waqt MAHI RAAZ ke berukhi ki wajah se itni sad thi ki uska is baat par dhyan hi nahi gaya tha..

par ab usse yaad aa raha tha woh scene jisme RAAZ ke beech me aane ke baad aur MORANA ke uspar lagatar chhod rahe beam ke beech apni ray involve kar ladhayi rokne ke baad se hi usne RAAZ ki body ko weak hote dekha tha..

MAHI ye sab soch rahi thi aur MADDOX uske soch ko bhaamp chuke the aur isiliye....


MADDOX-bhale hi tumhara ANGEL FORM yahan FALLON ke roop me moujud hai,par tumhare heart ke andar tumhare heavenly kan har waqt moujud rehte hain..

aur us ladhayi me jab tumhara sharir us ho rahe pain ko jhelne ki aakhri hadh tak pahuncha toh tumhare HEART ke andar samaye un HEAVENLY kano ne apne power ko release kar diya...

woh powers ek invisible ray ka roop lete hue MORANA ke chhode beam ke andar behkar ussiki taraf jaane lage..

agar woh ray MORANA ko lag jaata toh woh wahin jal kar raakh ho jaati...

saath hi us ray ka AURA har taraf faile jaata jiski wajah se waqt se pehle hi VIDEOUS ko tumhare baare me pata chal jaata..

but kyunki fortunately RAAZ wahan moujud tha, toh usne tumhare un invisible rays ko naa sirf MORANA ki taraf badhte hue feel kar liya balki sahi waqt rehte usne apni REFINER powers ki ray ko us beam ke beech chhod diya aur tumhare rays ko khudke sokh liya..

phir bhi MORANA par us ray ke AURA ka ek halka sa bhaag impact kar hi gaya jiski wajah se woh behosh ho gayi..

aur RAAZ, apne andar tumhare HEAVENLY power ke particles ko sametne se aur woh bhi tab,jab uske paas uski aloukik shaktiyan moujud nahi thi,woh andar hi andar hadh se zyada weak ho gaya...

haan,guzarte waqt ke saath jaise jaise uske REFINER powers aur strong hote gaye, tumhare power particles ko woh sambhalne ke laayak ho gaye par kyunki RAAZ filhal completely mortal hai isiliye woh saare particles uske heart se nikalkar uske brain me chale gaye hain...

abhi tak toh RAAZ pysically aur khaaskar mentally behadh strong tha,par ab aisa nahi hai..

isiliye woh particles zaroor uske upar koi naa koi side effects paida karenge..

( NOTE:-this is the reason behind RAAZ memory loss)

isiliye uske paas pahunchte hi apne particles usse le lena aur ussi waqt LUSTRAL BEAM uske andar transfer kar dena..

par ek baat ka dhyan rakhna ki aisa karte waqt RAAZ aur uska dimag shaant rahe..

brain ki instability us procedure me khatra paida kar sakti hai...


MADDOX ki baat ko dhyan se sun aur samajhte hue haan me sir hilaya MAHI ne jiske baad MADDOX ne usse woh SPELLS bataya jisse uske particles RAAZ ke dimag se extract kiye jaayenge aur LUSTRAL BEAM uske andar samayi jaa sakegi...


saari baatein clear ho chuki thi aur ab baari thi main cheezon ke hone ki..woh cheezen jinki wajah se MAHI yahan ASTER me thi, FALLON ka astitv bachaya gaya tha aur MADDOX ne itna lamba intazar kiya tha....


MADDOX-ab samay aa gaya hai FALLON tumhara MAHI me vilin ho jaane ka...

MAHI tumne FALLON ka bhi pura safar dekh aur jaan liya hai..woh safar tumhe isiliye dikhaya gaya hai taaki FALLON ke hone ka asli maksad tum pehchaan sako...

kyunki aisa hona is pure khel ke liye sabse zaroori hai...tumhari uttpatti aur FALLON ki journey ke tumhe dikhaye gaye pal interconnected hain...

isiliye RAAZ ko uske us ATTITUDE tak pahunchane ke saath saath jisse uska dimag DEVIL ka aur dil ANGEL ka banega, us interlinked aur connected CHEEZ ke baare me sochna aur usse figure out karte hue uspar kaam karna hi tumhara main maksad hai...

ye do cheezen hi is kahani ko uske sahi anjaam tak pahunchayegi...

taklifen bohot aayengi,par jab woh aayen toh khud ko bas itna yaad dilate rehne ki tum VIKRAM JAIRAJ SINGH ki beti hai...

us shaksh ki beti jiske aage har koi bhale woh chaahe yaa naa chahe, natmastak hokar hi rehta hai..

logon me ATTITUDE hota hai,par tum uska khoon ho jo khud sir se pair tak ATTITUDE hai...


jo kabhi uska dushman tha,aaj wahi VIKRAM ka gungaan pure dil se kar raha tha.. VIKRAM ki shaksiyat ka isse bada example aur bhala kya ho sakta tha..

aur ye baat MAHI bhi samajh rahi thi aur isiliye usse khudpar VIKRAM ki beti hone par garv ho raha tha..

khair,apni baat ko aage badhate hue...

MADDOX-MAHI,FALLON, ek dusre ka haath pakdo....


MADDOX ki baat sun MAHI ne apne dono haath aage kar diye jisse FALLON ne thaam liya jiske baad...


MADDOX-MAHI,aankhen band kar apne saare REFINERS power ko release kar do..

aur FALLON jab MAHI aisa karegi toh uski puri body shine karne lagegi...

jab aisa ho tab tumhe SAMNIVEZA....is SPELL ko uccharit karna hai...

aisa karte hi tum apne origin, matlab MAHI ke andar sama jaaogi...

MAHI,yaad rahe ki FALLON tumhara ANGEL FORM hai joki bohot zyada shaktishaali hai..

par tum abhi sirf ek ANGEL hi nahi balki human bhi ho...

aur naturally ek ANGEL aur human ka koi link yaa jod nahi hota...

isiliye jaise hi FALLON tumhare andar tumhare heart ke ek taraf samayegi toh tumhara human power dusri taraf khisak jaayega...

aur aisa hote hi tumhare ANGELS aur HUMAN power ke beech ek stopper ban jaayega jo tumhare true potential ko bahar aane se rokega..

us potential ko bahar laane ka,apni puri capability ko joki bohot zyada hai,use karne ka tumhare paas sirf ek hi tarika hoga..

aur woh ye hai ki tumhe apne dono powers, ANGEL aur HUMAN ko ek karna hoga...

strong AMPLIFICATION aur REFINER process,alag alag tasks aur challenges joki extreme level ke honge,usse aisa kar paana possible hoga...

and as we speak,jahan se tum yahan pahunchi ho,wahan is waqt jo ho raha hai,uske hisaab se tasks aur challenges ki kami nahi hone waali hai tumhe...

anyways,shuru karen...!!!!


MADDOX ki baat par dono me se kisine bhi kuch kaha nahi,bas ek dusre ko dekh MAHI aur FALLON dono ne hi ek dusre ka haath thaame rakha..

MAHI ne apni aankhen band kar li jiske baad usne apne sabhi REFINERS ko completely release kar diya aur uske aisa karte hi uski puri body tez glow karne lagi..

wahin jab FALLON ne aisa hote dekha toh usne bhi apni aankhen band ki aur...


SAMNIVEZA

INCLUSION

is SPELL ko uccharit kiya usne aur uske aisa karte hi uski body bhi MAHI ke body ki tarah chamakne lagi..

par saath hi uski body dheere dheere dhuen me badalti hui MAHI ke pure sharir ko khudme lapeththe hue uske dil ke hisse ke just upar ikattha hone lagi aur dekhte hi dekhte woh dhuan joki FALLON thi,woh MAHI ke heart me sama gayi...

FALLON joki MAHI ka ANGELS form thi,woh wapas usme sama chuki thi...

jahan aisa hote hi MAHI ka sir bhaari hone laga tha wahin kuch door us bade se compartment me itne samay tak rooke hue LIGHT SHOWER urf ANGELS AURA me kampan hone lagi jiske baad woh pura shower apni jagah ko chhodte hue bahar nikla aur MAHI ke paas pahunch usme samane laga...

jab ek baccha paida hota hai,tab agar uska operation kiya jaaye toh usse pata bhi nahi chalta par same cheez agar uske bade hone ke baad ho toh uspar aisa hone ka bohot zyada asar padta hai..

waisa hi kuch abhi MAHI ke saath ho raha tha....

bachpan se ab tak woh woh ek normal human ki tarah rahi thi par ab achanak woh ek ANGEL me aur woh bhi ANGELS LORD ki beti ke roop me badal rahi thi..

ye bohot badi baat thi jisse naa toh MAHI ka brain circulate kar paa raha tha aur naahi uska dil jahan FALLON aur ab AURA sama rahi thi..

MAHI ko is waqt unbearable pain ho raha tha jiski wajah se naa sirf uske senses weak padte jaa rahe the balki saath hi uska brain aur heart dono dead hote chale jaa rahe the..

aur abhi toh ek cheez honi baaki thi...

aur woh ye ki jaise hi woh LIGHT SHOWER MAHI ke andar samaya toh uske agle hi pal wahan moujud saare SPIRITS ke paas jo LUSTRAL BEAM thi,woh unse nikal pehle unke saamne ikattha hui aur phir aage badhte hue MAHI ke andar sama gayi aur jab aisa hua toh MAHI ke khade khade hi already behosh ho chuke sharir ko laga ek tez jhatka jiske baad woh neeche gir gayi...

har guzarte pal ke saath MAHI ki behoshi uski MOUT me convert ho rahi thi par aisa hote dekh bhi MADDOX ke chehre par ek smile thi....

reason...

issi ghadi ka toh unhe sadiyon se intezar tha...yahi woh pal tha jiske baad unhe moksh mil jaana tha...

muskurate hue neeche baithe MADDOX aur apna haath MAHI ke sir par rakh apni aankhen band ki unhone aur...


JIVANAM YAVAJJIVA

LIFE FOR LIFE


jaise hi MADDOX ne SPELL uccharit kiya toh uske agle hi pal unka pure sharir se unka life source nikal MAHI ke band hote dil aur dimag me sama gaya aur aisa hote hi MAHI ki naa ke barabar chal rahi heart beat pehle toh ekdum se tez hui aur phir normal ho gayi...

abhi bhi behosh hi thi MAHI jisse dekh muskuraye MADDOX aur aisa karte hue hi unki body ray me badal gayab ho gayi....


MADDOX ne toh apna kaam kar diya tha,par behosh padi MAHI ki urja filhal uncontrollable mode me pahunch chuki thi jiski wajah se woh saari urja MAHI ke sharir se nikal ASTER ki sarhad ko bhedete hue bahar nikalne lagi aur agar aisa puri tarah ho jaata toh VIDEOUS ko MAHI ki location mil jaati...

aur phir game over ho jaana tha....

khair,woh saari urja ASTER se bahar nikalti ki tabhi wahan prakat hui GRIFFIN aur usne woh saari urja khud me ikattha karna shuru kar diya...

par kyunki GRIFFIN ka life source khud MAHI thi jo filhal behosh thi aur weak bhi,isiliye GRIFFIN bhi kamzor thi..

yahi reason tha ki us urja ko sametthe hue woh haanfte hue neeche baithne lagi...

kamzori ki wajah se GRIFFIN bhi behosh hone waali thi par tabhi....

WOOGER prakat hua uske saamne.. RAAZ ki buri haalat ki wajah se WOOGER bhi kamzor tha par itna nahi ki GRIFFIN ko stability naa de paaye...

prakat hote hi usne apna panja GRIFFIN ke upar rakh diya aur aisa hote hi woh urja GRIFFIN aur WOOGER me aadhi aadhi bant gayi..

wahin jaise hi GRIFFIN ne WOOGER ko saamne dekha jisne uski madad ki toh..

GRIFFIN-thanks WOOGER....

WOOGER-aadat daal lo... bohot baar bolna baaki hai...

WOOGER ki baat par ghur kar dekha GRIFFIN ne usse par us ghoorne ka WOOGER par koi asar nahi pada jisse dekh...

GRIFFIN-hmmp...bilkul apne MASTER ki tarah hai.. completely full of ATTITUDE...






PLACE-ERRAPEL'S COTTAGE



BHAADDDD..........(update-117)


main door kuch zyada hi zor se khula aur uske beech se HORUS lambi lambi saansein leta hua hall me enter hua jahan is waqt ERRAPEL thik waise hi nirjeev sa behosh pade RAAZ ka haath pakde baithi hui thi..

HORUS jabse gaye the,tabse hi ERRAPEL ki aankhen ro rokar laal si ho gayi thi,chehre par dar aur dard, dono hi bhaav ek saath tairte aa rahe the,par ab apne BABA ko wapas apne saamne dekh itni der me pehli baar naa sirf usne chain ki saans li balki uske face me chhaye woh dar aur dard ke bhaav jaise ek jhatke me chhat se gaye the aur ab unki jagah khushi ne le li thi...

aur ussi khushi ko apne alfaazon me darshate hue..


ERRAPEL-aap aa gaye baba...mera dil kehta tha ki chaahe kuch bhi ho jaaye,aap zaroor wapas lout aayenge..


apni beti ki baat par muskurate hue
HORUS aage badhe aur thik ERRAPEL ke paas pahunch unhone apne haath aage kar diye jahan is waqt kuch peeli colour ki pattiyan thi jinhe dekh ERRAPEL samajh gayi ki yahi woh COGNIZANT LEAF hai jinhe lene uske baba gaye hue the...

ek pal un leafs ko dekh ERRAPEL ne unhe apne baba ke haath se le liya aur tabhi....


AHHHH....HAMMM....

ek dard bhari karah ke saath HORUS apne ghutno par aa gaye jisse dekh ERRAPEL hadbada bhi gayi aur dar bhi...

par woh kuch keh paati ki tabhi kuch aisa hua ki uski aankhen dar,dard aur khouf ki wajah se aur badi ho gayi...

HORUS ke sharir ka pura kapda khoon se naha sa gaya...

aisa lag raha tha maano HORUS ke body pores phat se gaye hain aur unse khoon ris raha ho...

ye dekh darte hue ERRAPEL apne baba ko chhune ko hui par tabhi..


HORUS-nahi beta...mujhe chhuna mat..verna meri jaisi haalat teri bhi ho jaayegi...


dard se bhari awaaz me ye baatein kisi tarah bol HORUS ne apne upari vastron ko jo khoon ke risne ki wajah se laal hone ke saath hi kamzor bhi ho gaye the,unhe pakad kar halka sa kheencha aur unke aisa karte hi chrrr ki awaaz ke saath woh kapda jo kisi kurte ki tarah tha par sweater ki tarah mota,wo faththe hue unke sharir se alag ho gaya aur jab aisa hua toh ERRAPEL ki aankhen badi ho gayi...

reason..

is waqt HORUS ke chest aur shoulder areas me bade bade keede lage hue the jo waise toh peele the par is waqt HORUS ke khoon se laal ho gaye the...

aur saath hi chest aur shoulders ke jis jis bhaag me woh keede chipke hue the,wahan se halka halka dhuan bhi nikal raha tha..

ye sab dekh dimag hi boukhla gaya tha ERRAPEL ka aur...


ERRAPEL-ye sab kya hai baba...???ye kaise kide hain...??inhe nikaliye naa...


ye bol ERRAPEL ne apna haath apne baba ke chest ki taraf badhaya par tabhi apni puri takat laga jo waise kam hi bachi thi, HORUS thoda piche hue aur...


HORUS-nahi ERRAPEL...inhe chhune ki galti kabhi mat karna..khaas kar tab jab tumne pehle hi COGNIZANT leaf ko chuu liya hai...

in keedo ka naam COGNIZANT WORMS hai..ye wahi shraap hain jo COGNIZANT LEAF ko todne waale ko lagte hain....

COGNIZANT LEAF ko chhune aur haasil karne ka mool hain ye keede jo ab mujhe lag chuke hain jo meri mout ke baad hi ab mujhse alag honge..

aur waise bhi,ye jo dhuan dekh rahi ho,ye inka zeher hai jo ab mere saare sharir me fail chuka hai,mai ab bas chand saanson ka hi mehmaan hun meri bacchi..


aakhri shabd kehte hue neeche zamin par gir chuke the HORUS....

unke sharir ki kampan unka dard aur taklif saaf bayan kar rahi thi aur us dard se hone waali aatmik taklif ko khudme samete hue baithkar ro rahi thi ERRAPEL..

jo hua hai,woh hona hi tha,ye pata tha usse par apne baba ko apni aankhon ke saamne marta hua dekh taklif toh honi hi thi usse...

khair,apni beti ko rota dekh..


HORUS-apni niyati se koi nahi bhaag sakta beti...aur meri haalat par rone ke bajaye tumhe toh garv hona chahiye ki tumhare baba ko saunpa daayitv unhone pura kiya...


ERRAPEL-garv aur dard kabhi kabhi ek saath dil me jagah bana lete hai baba....har mousam me hone waala badlav pehle hi maalum hota hai par jab woh mausam sach me aata hai aur us badlaw ko sharir chhuta hai,toh us kriya ki pratikriya hoti hi hai...


apni beti ki baat sun us beinteha dard ke beech bhi halka sa muskura uthe HORUS aur..


HORUS-waqt kam bacha hai ERRAPEL..meri saasein band hone se pehle agar in COGNIZANT LEAFS ko ras me badal RAAZ ko nahi pilaya tumne,toh mere sharir me lipte hue worms us leaf ki sugandh sungh tum par chhad jaayenge aur inse bacha nahi jaa sakta...

isiliye jaldi karo.. waise bhi antim baar apni aankhon ko band karne se pehle ek baar mai inhe hosh me dekhna chahta hun....

woh tumhare saamne pade flask ko sidha karo aur ek ek kar in saare leafs ko uske upar rakh ragdo...ye leafs ras me badalkar us flask me ikkatha jo jaayenge...


aankhen abhi bhi num thi ERRAPEL ki par aise waqt me bhi jab uske baba apni antim saans le rahe the,apne kartavya se mooh nahi mod sakti thi woh..

aur isiliye flask ko jo uske side me hi rakha hua tha,apne saamne rakh ek ek kar un COGNIZANT LEAFS ko ragadne lagi ERRAPEL....

ek haath me RAAZ ka haath jisse uske hosh me aane tak usse thaame rakhna tha, dusre haath me COGNIZANT LEAF jisse ragad apne kartavya ko nibhana tha, aur aankhon me apne baba ko unki maut ke darwaze par pahunchte dekhna tha,ek saath in teen alag alag situations ko ek saath handle kar rahi thi ERRAPEL...

wahin ab HORUS ki haalat kaafi kharab ho chuki thi..kisi bhi waqt unki saanson ki dor rook sakti thi par aise waqt me bhi unke face par ek sukoon tha..

aur ussi sukoon ke saath ERRAPEL ko dekhte hue..


HORUS-meri life me aane ke liye thanks beti...tune meri zindagi aur aur ab mout ko bhi saarthak banaya hai...


apne baba ki baat chupchaap aansu bahate hue suni ERRAPEL ne aur is beech usne saare leafs ko ras me badal flask me daal diya tha aur aisa hote hi usne turant us flask ko uthaya aur RAAZ ke dono gaalon ko pakad usse pichkaya jisse uska mooh halka sa khul gaya aur aisa hote hi ERRAPEL ne us flask ko uske mooh me sata dheere dheere ulta diya..

pura COGNIZANT LEAFS ke ras ko RAAZ ke mooh me udelne ke baad ERRAPEL usse alag hui aur itne der me pehli baar usne RAAZ ke haath ko chhoda aur apne baba ke paas pahunch kar khadi ho gayi..

wahin apni mout ke antim padhav par pahunchne ke baad bhi is waqt HORUS ke chehre par excitement saaf dikhne lagi thi...

unka dil jo ab tak khoon ke adhik beh jaane se kaafi dheere dheere beat kar raha tha,uski speed bhi achanak badh gayi thi...

is beech jaise hi RAAZ ke mooh se hota hua woh COGNIZANT LEAFS ka ras uske pure sharir aur mainly uske soul me pahuncha toh wahan ek vibration honi shuru hui...

ab tak andhere me dooba uske soul me achanak ek halki si roshni ne janm liya jo har guzarte second ke saath badhti chali gayi aur phir jaise hi woh roshni puri tarah se us ghar me joki RAAZ ka SOUL tha,bhar gayi toh...

ek jhatke me khuli uski aankhen aur woh uthkar baith gaya..

pathrayi aakhon se kuch pal sunya ko ghurne ke baad jaise achanak se dimag me jhanaka hua RAAZ ka aur woh apne present me wapas aaya..

present me wapas aate hi usne dekha ki woh abhi ek hall jaise kamre me hai....

par ye drishya yaa phir ye kahun ki ye hall uske liye anjana tha..

infact abhi toh RAAZ ke liye sabkuch hi anjaana sa tha..

aankhon me sawal liye RAAZ ka sir us taraf ghuma jahan neeche khun se latpath HORUS pade hue the aur unke hi paas ek khubsoorat si ladki khadi thi..

woh dono mujhe hi dekh rahe the jispar..


RAAZ-kaun hain aap dono...aur.........

MAI.... KAUN.....HUN.....!!!!!!...






PLANET-ELYSIAN


PLACE-ALFREEN'S ABODE




(6 HOURS AFTER RAAZ KILLED HIS PARENTS)





NAHI...NAHI....NAHI.....NAHI.....


aankhon ke aansu sukh kar unke kinaaron par sukhe parat ki shakl le chuke the..

zuban ko jaise lakwa hi maar chuka tha par DIL.... dil ke har kone par jo hua,usse yaad karte hue lagatar bas NAHI shabd hi nikal raha tha..

jahan behosh hokar neeche giri thi,wahin diwar ki oth liye is waqt ALFREEN pathrayi aakhon se andar sofe ki taraf jahan abhi bhi FLORIN aur MARIA ki raakh padi hui thi,usse dekh rahi thi...

dimag ne toh kaam karna pura band hi kar diya tha..bas ek dil hi tha jo naam maatra ke liye dhadakte hue ALFREEN ke zinda hone ki gawahi de raha tha....

hosh me aane ke baad se hi ALFREEN yunhi issi position ne baithi thi..shaam dhal chuki thi par ALFREEN ko kisi bhi chiz ka koi hosh nahi tha....

ghutne mod kar baithi thi ALFREEN jiski wajah se uske pehne lower ki right taraf ke pocket se ek kaagaz dheere dheere nikalta hua uski side me jaa gira....

ye wahi kagaz tha jisme CHOSENS ke 25 thousand purani parampara ke anusaar paheli likhi hui thi jisse solve karne waale ko AGATHOKAK naam ki upadhi milne waali thi...(update 24)

us kagaz ko hamesha ALFREEN apne jeb me hi rakhti aur baaki sabhi SAVENTS ki tarah jab woh bhi akeli rehti thi,tab us kaagaz me likhe paheli ko solve karne ki koshish karti thi...

anyways,jaise hi woh kaagaz neeche gira toh ussi waqt itne dwr se ALFREEN ki pathrayi aakhen ek baar phirse dabdaba gayi..

par is baar ke aansu me sirf dard hi nahi tha,balki jo hua,usse yaad kar dard ke saath RAAZ ke liye nafrat bhi bhara pada tha..

aansuon ki wajah se ankhen puri dhundli ho chuki thi ALFREEN ki aur aisa hone par sofe ka view jisme uske mom dad ka bacha ansh,unka raakh rakha hua tha,woh dikhna band ho gaya ALFREEN ko aur isiliye apne right hand se apne aansuon ko pochte hue ALFREEN ne apna haath neeche floor par rakh diya...

par jab usne aisa kiya toh uska haath jisme uske aansu lage hue the,neeche floor se lagne ke bajaye uske upar rakhe kagaz par jaakar tik gaya aur jab aisa hua toh ALFREEN ke aansu us kaagaz par lag gaye...

jahan ALFREEN is baat se anjaan thi wahin woh aansu us folded paper ke upari satah se hote hue uske andruni bhaag me samate chale gaye aur aisa hote hue jab woh aansu kagaz ke andar waale bhaag me likhe shabdon par, paheli par pade toh...


AHHHHH......

ek saath do chizen hui..

pehli...

ALFREEN ke pure sharir me ek jhatka sa laga jiske baad uske dimag me kuch palon ke liye beete saare lamhe mit se gaye...

dusri..

woh paper jisme paheli likhi hui thi,woh khul gayi aur khulte hue sidhe ALFREEN ke chehre ke saamne aakar rook gayi...


TU KHUD EK SAWAL HAI,
AUR TERA JAWAB MUJHME HAI...

PADH MUJHE US SYAHI SE,
JO HAR WAQT TUJHME HAI...


jhatke ke asar se ALFREEN ki badi ho chuki aankhon ne paheli ke ye shabd padhe jiske baad uska right haath apne aap hi uske left kalayi ke upar pahuncha aur...


RAKHT PRAKATAM...

BLOOD APPEAR....


apne kalayi ki skin ko chhute hue is SPELL ko uccharit kiya ALFREEN ne aur uske aisa karte hi us area me ek halka sa cut padh gaya jisse khoon bahar aane laga..

ALFREEN ne apne khoon ko apni ungliyon par liya aur apne ussi khoon lage haath ko aage badhate hue paheli ke upar mal diya..

saath hi saath aisa karte hue uske mooh se nikla..


ALFREEN-MY BLOOD....


SAHI JAWAB.....


ALFREEN ki harkat aur MY BLOOD ko bolte hi us paper ke aage hawa me ye line bante chala gaya aur jab aisa hua toh....



AHHHHHHHHHHHH...........

ek baar phirse ek zordar cheekh nikal padi ALFREEN ke mooh se..

reason...

SAHI JAWAB...ye shabd bante hi wo paper jisme paheli bani hui thi,woh GREY colour ke dhuen numa shakti me badalne laga aur aisa hone ke turant baad woh dhuan sidhe ALFREEN ke naak,mooh kaan aur aankhon se hote hue uske andar samane laga..

aisa hote hi ALFREEN ka sharir hawa me uth gaya aur saath hi usse apne andar ek ajeeb sa badlaw aur taakat feel hone laga par ye badlwaav hadh se zyada painful tha jiski wajah se uske mooh se cheekh nikal gayi thi...

cheekh ke saath saath ek aur cheez bhi ho rahi thi ALFREEN ke saath..

aur woh ye ki uske sharir ke kapde badalne lage the..jaha kuch der pehle tak usne normal casuals pehne hua the wahin ab uske sharir oar ussi grey dhuen se ek GREY robe banane laga tha aur jaise hi us GREY robe ne pura ALFREEN ke sharir ko dhaka,uske andar ho raha badlaw bhi pura ho gaya aur woh neeche zamin par aa gayi..

aankhen band thi is waqt ALFREEN ki..par uska roop naa sirf aur zyada nikhar gaya tha balki uske puri body se ek behadh hi cold AURA generate ho raha tha...

AGATHOKAK....woh prize,woh upaadhi jo ab naa sirf ALFREEN ko mil chuki thi balki woh khud hi ek AGATHOKAK me badal chuki thi..

ALFREEN THE AGATHOKAK..jiska matlab hai "QUEEN OF BOTH BLACK & WHITE ENERGY"....

ye shakti,ye upaadhi,apna ye naya astitv ALFREEN bhi jaan chuki thi...

aur aisa hote hi ek jhatke se uski aankhen khul gayi..

jahan pehle ALFREEN ki kaali gehri aankhen thi,wahin ab unka bhi rang badalkar GREY ho chuka tha...

khair,kuch pal tak apne is naye pehchaan ko feel karti rahi ALFREEN par phir jab ek baar phirse uski nazar saamne sofa par pade apne mom dad ki raakh par gaya toh aakhon me beintahan ghussa liye jiske asar se uske aas paas ki cheezen jalne lagi thi, ALFREEN us sofa ki taraf badhi aur uske saamne pahunch woh halka sa jhuki...

apne ek haath se apni mom ka aur dusre haath se apne dad ke raakh ko apni muthi me pakadte hue woh wapas sidhi hui...

kuch pal un raakh ke particles ko dekhne ke baad thik jaise RAAZ ne kiya tha, ALFREEN ne bhi us raakh ko apne chehre aur kapdo par mal sa liya aur aisa karne ke baad hile uske labh...


ALFREEN-RAAZ.............



gala ghota hai tune hamare VISHWAAS KAA......

galti humari bhi hai,bharosa kiya tha humne tujh jaise DAGABAAZ KAA.....

tune apni chala li,ab meri baari.....

aarambh hai ye ALFREEN ka aur saath hi RAAZ,tere VINAASH KA.....

















AAJ KE LIYE ITNA HI.....

















AAPKA APNA V....J......
Awesome extraordinary speechless amazing update. Ye chapter suru hote hi story ekdam bumper rocking ho gai hai VJbhai.aab toh soch ko bih sochne ka idea nahi bacha hai.:10:on:10:
 

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CHAPTER-2


(THE DEVIL'S HAVEN, THE SACRIFICE & THE PERFECT EPILOGUE)



MEGA UPDATE-124



PLANET-GALEN


PLACE-ERRAPEL'S COTTEGE







YAKIN NAHI HOTA KI DIGVIJAY SE HORUS TAK KA SAFAR JIS GHADI KE INTAZAR ME TAY KIYA THA,WOH AAKHIR AA HI GAYI....


behosh pade RAAZ ko dekhte hue kahi thi ye baat DIGVIJAY urf HORUS ne jispar RAAZ ke sirane par uska haath pakde baithi ERRAPEL muskura uthi aur....


ERRAPEL-finally..DIGVIJAY.....toh ye naam tha aapka apne past life me...


ERRAPEL ke is baat par HORUS muskura uthe aur....


HORUS-tumhe kaha toh tha ki jis din mere moksh ka dwar mere saamne hoga,us din apne past life ka naam tumhe bata dunga,toh bata diya...


MOKSH....ek aisa shabd jo har tarah se positive hota hai par abhi HORUS ne jab is shabd ka istamal kiya toh ERRAPEL ka chehra jisme muskaan thi,woh udaasi me badal gayi jisse dekh...


HORUS-ERRAPEL meri bacchi....jo hone waala hai,uske baare toh tumhe shuru se pata hai,phir ye udaasi kyun...!!!

tumhe toh khush hona chahiye ki tumhare BABA ka itna lamba intezar ab aakhirkaar khatm hone hi waala hai....

ek reh chuke DEVIL ke liye wapas manushya yoni me janm lena aur apna kartavya pura karte hue is yoni ko chhod MOKSH ko prapt karna,swarg ko prapt karna,ye woh asambhav aashirwad hai jo mujhe mila hai...

aaj meri dono jeeye hue zindagi ka sabse khaas din hai isiliye apne baba ki is khushi me khush raho...

aur waise bhi,ye mat bhulo ki meri hi tarah tumhari niyati bhi ek alag hi syahi se likhi gayi hai jisse mitkar bhi amar ho jaana hai...

jo shaksh tumhare saamne behosh pada hua hai,jiska haath tumne isiliye thaama hai taaki jab tak iska upchaar naa ho jaaye, iski saansein
chalti rahe,tum iska woh BHAAG ho jiske bina iski shakti puri nahi ho sakti...


HORUS ki baat sun ERAPPEL ke face par ek feeki si muskaan aa gayi aur..


ERRAPEL-BHAAVNA....ANGELS EMOTION....yahi SHAKTI hun naa mai iski...

woh shakti jo iske AMPLIFICATION aur REFINER powers ko ek karke isse super powerful banayegi...

woh shakti jo isse iske MOM ANJALI ke SERAPHIM ANGELS ke roop se mila hai aur ussise mujhe apna ya roop joki iske behen ka hai,pradan hua hai...


(NOTE:-aapko yaad hoga guyzz ki update 106 me jab DHANUR aur RAAZ aakhri baar aamne saamne the,tab RAAZ ne ye kaha tha ki usse apne emotions power ka aakhri 10 percent feel hi nahi ho raha...usse aisa lag raha hai jaise woh 10 percent emotions uske andar hai hi nahi...woh sach keh raha tha...woh 10 percent emotions joki uske baaki ke 90 percent emotions power se kayi guna zyada shaktishaali thi,wahi power hai ERRAPEL joki RAAZ ko uski mom ANJALI ne apni shakti se diya hai...ek aisi shakti jo agar puri tarah trigger ho gayi toh VIDEOUS ke har chakravyuh ko todne ka maada rakhti hai)


ERRAPEL-par pata hai sabse ajeeb baat kya hai..?? logon me EMOTIONS hote hain..mai toh khud hi ek emotion hun... har kisike taklif mujhe apni si lagti hai..

par aaj,abhi jab ye shaksh jisse mera wajood hai,mere saamne yun khoon se latpath behosh pada hai,toh mujhe isse,iske is haal par bura lagna toh door ki baat hai,koi humdardi tak nahi ho rahi..


HORUS-woh isiliye kyunki tum ek ANGELS EMOTIONS HO aur filhal jo shaksh tumhare saamne hai,woh out and out DEVIL hai..

abhi,is waqt, behoshi ke haalat me bhi iske EMOTIONS devilish hain...

isiliye abhi isse ek pure negetive AURA generate ho raha hai jo tumhare contrast hai...

yahi wajah thi ki GALEN ke upar lagi shield joki tumhari hi shakti se bani hai,usne pehle isse jhatke diye the aur andar enter karne se restrict kar diya tha..

sirf iske khoon ki wajah se joki pure hai,ye yahan enter kar paaya hai....

filhal tum dono ke beech itne odds hain toh aise me tumhe isse napasand karna normal baat hai...


apni baat keh ek pal ke liye rooke HORUS aur aage badhte hue thik RAAZ ke saamne pahunch khade hue aur...


HORUS-RAAZ......ab tak bohot se hurdles cross kiye hain tumne par tumhara sabse bada hurdle tum khud ho jisse paar kiye bina naa ye kahani apne anjaam tak pahunch sakti hai aur naa tumhari niyati...

DEVIL aur ANGEL ka koi mel nahi par tum is bramhaand ke ekloute aise shaksh ho jisse in do contrasting poles ko naa sirf kareeb lana hai,balki inhe ek karna hai...

ek saath ek hi pal me tumhe DEVIL bhi banana hai aur ANGEL bhi...

tab jaakar ERRAPEL naam ka emotion trigger hoga aur tumhe accept karega...

aur aisa hone ke baad hi tumhe tumhari SWORD wapas mil sakti hai....

aisa pehli baar hoga jab ek shaksh KABHI ANGEL hoga toh kabhi DEVIL.....


aankhen band kar apne safar ko aur pichli zindagi me jab woh DIGVIJAY the,apni galtiyon ko yaad kar ye aakhri baat kahi HORUS ne jiske baad unhone apni aankhen kholi aur main door ke bahar nazar ghumayi jahan is waqt andhera chhaane laga tha aur ye dekh...


HORUS-raat hone waali hai ERRAPEL..COGNIZENT LEAF jisse ye thik honge,usse laane ka samay ho gaya hai putri,mujhe jaana hoga...


HORUS ki baat sun aakhein dabdaba gayi ERRAPEL ki...

reason...

COGNIZANT LEAF....ek pure aur DIVINE LEAF hai ye par saath hi CURSED bhi..

kaise,ye toh HORUS ne nahi bataya tha ERRAPEL ko par itna zaroor bataya tha ki COGNIZANT LEAFS ko todne waale ko ek deadly curse lag jaata hai jiske asar se uska marna tay ho jaata hai..

but RAAZ ko sirf issi LEAF se hosh me laaya jaa sakta hai aur isiliye isse laana anivaarya hai..

but aisa karne ka matlab tha ki woh kurbaani jo HORUS urf DIGVIJAY ko deni thi,woh tay thi aur isiliye hi ERRAPEL ki aankhein dabdaba gayi thi..

RAAZ ka haath woh chhod nahi sakti thi isiliye apni jagah baithe hue hi nami bhari aankhon se apne baba ko woh dekhne lagi jispar HORUS khud aage badhe aur ERRAPEL ke sir ko apne seene se laga liya....

unke aisa karte hi ERRAPEL ke aansu badh gaye jisse mehsoos kar...


HORUS-tujhe meri zindagi me laa LORDS ne mujhe marne se pehle hi MOKSH de diya beti...

par ab mera kartavya mujhe bula raha hai.. apne aansuon se mujhe kamzor mat kar....

mera toh ye janm hi marne ke liye hua tha...jab niyati hi mout ho toh phir usk waqt aane par afsos kaisa...???

RAAZ ka haath mat chhodna....mai jaldi lotunga...


apni baat bol HORUS ERRAPEL se alag hue aur turant palaththe hue bina ek baar bhi wapas peeche dekhe cottage se bahar nikal gaye...

wahin unke jaane ke baad ERRAPEL bohot der tak cottage ke main door ko hi dekhti rahi par phir uski nazar wapas RAAZ ki taraf palti aur...


ERRAPEL-bohot logon ki jaan gayi hai RAAZ sirf isiliye taaki tum apni kahani puri kar sako...

i hope ki it's all worthied... U ARE WORTHIED....!!!!!






PLACE-ASTER





ITNA SAB BATA DIYA AAPNE MASTER...HAR JAGAH,HAR WAQT,HAR PLANNING KE BAARE ME BATA DIYA...

PAR JAHAN HUM HAIN,WAHAN BASE LOGON KE BAARE ME KUCH NAHI BATAYA....???


FALLON ne kahi thi ye baat jiske baad MASTER urf MADDOX kuch kehte ki usse pehle MAHI,jo jab se yahan aayi thi, tabhi se is jagah ko aur yahan ke environment ko lekar curious thi,uski jigyasa ne bhi sawal ka roop le liya aur..


MAHI-waise ye jagah hai kya...???i mean mai ek portal se ek underground tunnel ke through yahan pahunchi hun..

jis SHIELD ko cross kar mai yahan aayi hun,woh SHIELD aasman ke beech tha par woh aasman mujhe fake lag raha tha...

aur us SHIELD ke dusri taraf ye jagah hai jo kisi endless CAVE ki tarah hai, jiske exit ki taraf bas ek super glittering ujala dikh raha hai aur yahan is gufa ke andar bina kisi light ke bhi ek ajeeb sa ujala faila hua hai..

i mean i know ki magic se ye sab possible hai par pata nahi kyun ye ujala mujhe magic hokar bhi natural sa lag raha hai...

aur sabse hatke hai yahan ka atmosphere...ek ajeeb si garmi jisse kisi nakli thandak se suppress kiya gaya hai,aisa feel kar rahi hun mai..

in short,ye jagah kisi puzzle ki tarah hai...


MAHI ke sawal ko sun MASTER ke saath FALLON ne bhi smile kiya jiske baad..


MASTER-jab rachna LORD OF ANGELS matlab tunhare PITAH ki ho,toh chizen apne aap puzzle ban jaati hain....

bits and pieces me jo kayi saare sawal tumne kiye hain,un sabke liye sirf ek jawab kaafi hai...

aur jawab hai ASTER..is jagah ka naam,iski pehchaan..

jaanti ho ASTER kya hai..???

MAHI-a rocky planet..???


pathar se bane zamin,infact har jagah par faile chattan numa pattharon ko dekh kahi ye baat MAHI ne jispar pehle toh MADDOX muskuraye par uske baad....


MASTER-ASTER is not a planet.. it's a STAR....


MASTER ki baat sun shocked ho gayi MAHI aur...


MAHI-what...???STAR..!!!like a SUN.....

MASTER-haan....

MAHI-but how's that possible..i mean,thik hai ki ye pathrili jagah ek star ke andar hai...

par ek star ke molecular cloud me run kar rahe gas particles aur unki heat,ye is jagah ko magically thanda kar bhi den toh ye bas temporary hi hoga...

permanent stability possible nahi hai...

MADDOX-hahaha...tum humans bhi naa..

metaphysical worlds me padhne aur jeene ke baad bhi science aur uske logics ke base se hi sab decide kar lete ho..

fine then..tumhare science ke hisaab se hi jawab deta hun...

NEBULA,PROTOSTAR,MAIN SEQUENCE STAR,RED GIANT...

yahi chaar phases aur life stages hote hain naa star ke..!!!


MADDOX ki baat sun halki shock hui MAHI par phir haan me sir hilaya usne jispar....


MASTER-hum jis star me hain,woh filhal RED GIANT stage ko paar kar chuka hai..

infact jab ASTER bana tha,tabhi woh us stage ko paar kar chuka tha..

RED GIANT stage ke baad ek star ke khatm hone ka procedure shuru hota hai jisme sabse pehle aata hai
THE FUSION OF HEAVIER ELEMENTS....

(NOTE:-ye star ki life stages waali baat scientificly sach hai guyzz..socha pura imaginary rakhne se acha thoda reality ka bhi touch de dun...)


MASTER-ye jo fusion waala part hai naa,tumhare PITAH ne issime modification karke is jagah ko banaya hai..

jo garmi ke beech fake thand tum feel kar rahi ho,ye neeche pathar jo cold hain,ye bhi ussi modification ka natija hain...

star jab puri tarah khatm hokar ICY stage par pahunchta hain,toh uske minus temperature ko RED GIANT stage ke baad ki garmi se mila diya hai tumhare father ne jiski wajah se har second is star ki aur us artificial thand ke beech ladhayi hoti hai,jiska natija hai woh garmi se mili hui thand jo tum mehsoos kar rahi ho....

aur rahi baat us underground tunnel jaise portal ki jisse hokar tum yahan pahunchi hi,usse bhi tumhare PITAH ne CHOSENS se yahan pahunchne ke liye banaya tha..

woh bhi sirf one shot..dobara aisa nahi kiya jaa sakta...


MADDOX ki baat sun MAHI apne dad ke dimag ki kaayal ho chuki thi..

kitni baarikh se baarikh chiz ka calculation bhi kaafi accurately time kiya tha VIKRAM ne,ye jaan impress hona toh banta hi tha...

khair, jahan MAHI apni sochon me goom thi,wahin FALLON jiske sawal ka jawab abhi baaki tha,usne wapas MASTER se sawal kiya....


FALLON-aapne mere sawal ka jawab nahi diya MASTER...???

woh log jo yahan neeche ki taraf rehte hain,kaun hai woh sab....???

kya mai unhe ek baar dekh sakti hun....???


jahan ye sun aur jaan ki yahan aur bhi log hain,MAHI bhi in naye logon se milne aur unke baare me jaanane le kiye excited ho gayi thi wahin FALLON ke sawal ko sun MASTER muskuraye aur...


MASTER-zaroor FALLON...ab jab MAHI yahan hai toh tum un sabse bilkul mil sakti ho..


yahan MASTER ne apni baat khatm ki hi thi ki tabhi unke piche se ek ke baad ek kayi hazaar ki taadad me bheed dikhne lagi jisse dekh FALLON aur MAHI,dono ki hi hairani ka thikana nahi raha...

reason.....

jo bheed woh dono dekh rahi thi,ye wahi the jo ASTER ke nechle bhaag me rehte aaye the,jinhe barson se kaafi door se hi sahi,par FALLON regularly dekhti aayi thi par aaj jab woh saare FALLON ke saamne the,toh unhe dekh usse aur uske saath khadi MAHI ko laga jhatka joki normal bhi tha aur woh isiliye kyunki unke saamne khadi hazaaron yaa phir shayad laakhon ki bheed humans ki nahi thi,SPIRITS ki thi....





PLANET-ELYSIAN


PLACE-STELLARS GARDEN





(AFTER VIDEOUS & HIS PEOPLE LEFT)




AHHHHH......AHHHHHH.....AHHHHHH...AHHHHH.....

ek tez karah ke saath ACCHUTA, SLUNDER, BRAWNY aur HIDA neeche zamin se uthe aur khade ho gaye...

pehle toh waar karte waqt return me woh anjaan ray ka un sabpar padna jisse woh sab asahaniya dard ko jhelte hue behosh ho gaye aur phir baad me VIDEOUS dwara un sabki GOD GIFT capabilities ko baandh dena,in dono hi attacks ki wajah se un chaaron ka sir ghum raha tha..

saath hi woh sab khudko andar se powerless bhi feel kar rahe the...

WEAKLINGS se shuru hua un chaaron ka safar aaj wapas ussi condition me lout aaya tha jisse mehsoos kar kaafi udaas the woh chaaron..

par sabse zyada taklif ho rahi thi unhe MAHI aur RAAZ ke khatm hone ki baat ko jaankar..

RAAZ.....jisne ACCHUTA aur SLUNDER ke parents ko maar diya,jiski wajah se woh dono usse aaj yahan maarne hi aaye the,aur ab jab aisa ho chuka tha toh unhe bilkul bhi khushi nahi ho rahi thi...

kyunki kuch bhi ho,woh dono RAAZ ke un ehsaano ko nahi bhula paa rahe the the jo usne un dono par kiya tha..

bhale hi RAAZ apne matlab ke liye un dono ke saath tha,par ACCHUTA aur SLUNDER ne toh usse apne dil se apna dost aur brother from another mother maana tha,jo ab VIDEOUS ke according unke beech nahi raha tha...

same cheez BRAWNY aur HIDA ke liye bhi applicable thi...

aaj un dono ne RAAZ ka jo bhi negetive roop dekha tha,usse dekhne ke baad bhi woh dono is baat ko nahi jhhutla sakte the ki CHOSENS me un dono ki jo respectable position bani thi,uska reason bhi RAAZ hi tha..

BRAWNY ko toh suicide karne jaisi neechli manosthithi se ubhaarte hue RAAZ ne usse CHOSENS ka one the best SAVENT banaya tha..

aur HIDA,uski toh zindagi hi mout se badtar thi,jisse RAAZ ne naa sirf theek kiya balki usse itna layak bana diya ki jahan pehle har koi usse bully karta tha wahin ab koi bhi usse panga lene se pehle 100 times sochne par majboor jo jaaye..

MAHI.... BRAWNY, ACCHUTA aur SLUNDER ki one the best friends..

aur HIDA ki one of the favourite SAVENT joki VIDEOUS ke according ab RAAZ ke saath hi khatm ho chuki thi...

is baat ne in chaaron ko andar hi andar aur tod diya tha...

RAAZ aur MAHI,in dono ke hi baare me ye chaaron soch hi rahe the ki tabhi....

ACCHUTA,SLUNDER aur BRAWNY ki jebon me halki kampan mehsoos
hui jisse feel naa sirf woh teeno apni sochon se bahar aaye balki jab un teeno ne apni apni jeb me haath daal us kampan paida karne waali chiz ko bahar nikala toh hairan ho gaye...

reason...

woh kampan paida karne waali cheez aur kuch nahi balki wahi DECENTER thi jo unhe EXERTION me apne behatarin performance ke liye SOVEREIGN'S se as a gift mili thi....(UPDATE 104)

par un teeno ke asal hairani ka sabab ye tha ki unhe mile DECENTER ka knob jisse woh teen chaah kar bhi khol nahi paaye the,is waqt dheela hokar 90 percent khula hua tha...

ye dekh unhe SOVES ki kahi woh baat yaad gayi jisme unhe bataya gaya tha ki is DECENTER ka knob tabhi khulega jab aisa karne ka sahi waqt aayega...

aur ab jab knob apne aap hi khulne ki kagaar par tha, toh iska matlab tha ki woh waqt aa chuka hai...

us baat ko yaad kar ek dusre ko hairani se dekhte hue un teeno ne us knob ko jo bas khulne ke kagar par hi atka hua tha,open karne ka faisla kiya aur apna apna haath uski taraf badhate hue usse khol diya aur jab aisa hua toh....

SMMMMMM.....

us DECANTER ke andar ki perfume ek jhatke me wahan se nikal un teeno ke naak me sama gayi...

aur un teeno ke saath BRAWNY ke side me khadi ye sab dekhti HIDA ke naak me bhi woh khushbu sama gayi jiske baad un chaaro ko apne andar kuch ikattha hota hua sa mehsoos hua..

ye feeling kuch der tak hui,uske baad khatm ho gayi..

par us khushboo ke andar samaate hi jo weakness apne power ke seal hone par woh chaaron feel kar rahe the,woh kaafi hadh tak kam ho gayi thi...

khair,jahan ye sab hote waqt HIDA ka pura dhyan apne andar us khusboo ke store hone par tha wahin dusri taraf BRAWNY, ACCHUTA aur SLUNDER ki nazar apne haathon me pakde DECENTER par hi thi jahan is waqt uske andar rakha kaagaz uske nob ki nok par aakar atak chuka tha...

ACCHUTA aur SLUNDER ke DECENTER me rakha kagaz red colour ka tha jabki BRAWNY waala kagaz normal white...

khair,ek dusre ko dekh un teeno ne hi apne apne DECENTER me fasa kaagaz nikal liya aur uske layers open kiye aur jab aisa hua toh..


PUFF ME....

LIGHT ME.....

BRAWNY waale paper me PUFF ME likha hua tha aur ACCHUTA, SLUNDER waale paper me LIGHT ME...

PHOOOO....

jaisa paper me likha tha, BRAWNY ne waisa hi kiya..usne apne paper par phoonk maari aur jab usne aisa kiya toh...

woh paper ek dhuen me badal BRAWNY aur HIDA ke theek saamne hawa me jhoolne laga..

hawa me jhoolte hue us dhuen ne rectangular shape le liya aur aisa hote hi woh dhuan badal gaya ek DRISHYAM me jiske andar chalne lage ek saath do scenes jisse dekh aankhen badi ho gayi un chaaron ki...

reason...

is waqt un chaaron ke saamne is dhuen ke andar chal rahe DRISHYAM me wahi scenes chal raha tha jinki wajah se HIDA aur BRAWNY RAAZ par bhadke the aur usse maarne ka faisla kiya tha..

ek scene me RAAZ ne jo REGIS ko torture kiya tha,woh scene chal raha tha aur dusre scene me RAAZ ne jo NAOMI ke saath badsuluki ki thi,woh scene chal raha tha..

par un chaaron ki aankhein badi hone ka reason ye tha ki RAAZ ki jagah par un dono scene me dusre log the jo ye sab kar rahe the..

jo bande us scene me RAAZ ki jagah dikh rahe the,unhe kuch der pehle un chaaron ne hi VIDEOUS ke paas khade dekha tha...

aur ye yaad karte hi HIDA aur BRAWNY ka dimag pura clear ho gaya..woh jaan gaye ki unke saath game khela gaya ha jisme RAAZ ko unka apradhi dikhakar pesh kiya gaya...

aur is sach se rubaroo hote hi HIDA aur BRAWNY dono hi apne apne ghutno par aa gaye...

aansu ki ek moti parat un dono ke hi aankhon se girne lagi..

wahin is scene ko dekh aur sacchayi ko samajh ab ACCHUTA aur SLUNDER ka bhi dimag kharab ho gaya tha..

ek anjaane dar ne unke dil me ghar kar liya tha aur us dar ko door karne ka ek hi tarika tha..


LIGHT ME...

woh karna jo us paper me likha gaya tha...

ab bhale hi un chaaron ki extra ordinary capabilities bandh gayi thi,par ek SAVENT ke liye normal fire magic karna toh koi badi baat thi nahi isiliye...

JWALA PRAKATAM

FIRE APPEAR

ACCHUTA aur SLUNDER,dono ne hi apne apne kaagaz ko rub karte hue kahi ye baat jiske agle hi pal un dono papers me aag lag gayi..

par ACCHUTA aur SLUNDER ko ye dekhkar hairani hui ki jahan HIDA aur BRAWNY ke paper ne dhuen me badalne ke baad rectangular shape lena shuru kar diya tha,wahin un dono ke papers me aisa nahi hua..

aag lagne par jalkar unke papers bhi dhuan ban gaye par woh dhuan gayab ho gaya..

wahin jo paper jalne ke baad kaala bankar neeche zamin par gir gaya,woh girte hi transparent hokar roop lene laga..

dekhte hi dekhte us transparency me ek naya roop banane laga jo jab pura hua toh ACCHUTA aur SLUNDER dono ki hi haalat kharab ho gayi...

un dono ke aankhon ke aansu bhi tez nikalne lage...

reason..

is waqt un dono ke saamne unke MOM DAD ke spirits khade the jinhe dekh woh dono tezi se aage badhe aur unhe gale lagane ki koshish ki par woh aisa kar nahi paaye...

ab bhala spirit ko bhi koi chhu sakta hai kya..!!!

khair,jahan apne mom dad ko saamne dekh aur unhe naa chhu paane ki wajah se woh dono hadh se zyada nirash dikhne lage the wahin apne bacchon ko dekh unke mom dad ke spirits bohot khush dikh rahe the..

HIDA aur BRAWNY bhi un chaar spirits ko dekh apni taklif kuch pal ke liye bhul aankhen faade unhe dekh rahe the..

kuch pal tak apne bacchon ko dekhne ke baad...


ACCHUTAS DAD-handsome ho gaye hamare bacche...


ACCHUTA ke dad ki spirit ki baat sun ek feeki si smile di ACCHUTA ne jispar..


ACCHUTAS MOTHER-udaas mat ho mere bacche..kyunki isse sach nahi badlega...

waise bhi,hum jahan bhi hain,khush hain...ye after life human life se kayi guna sukoon deh hai..

SLUNDER-mom dad, uncle aunty,kya RAAZ ne hi aap chaaron ko maara hai..???

SLUNDERS MOTHER-haan...


SLUNDER ke mom ki spirit ki baat sun un dono ke face ka aur dil ka dard aur badh gaya jisse dekh aur mehsoos kar..


SLUNDERS FATHER-janana nahi chaahoge ki usne aisa kyun kiya..???

SLUNDER-kya isse kuch fark padega pitaji...???

SLUNDERS FATHER-tumhe kabhi fark naa pade, isiliye hi toh RAAZ ne hume maara....


jis taklif se RAAZ abhi guzar raha hai,tum dono ko us taklif se bachaya hai usne....

SLUNDER ke father ke spirit ki baat sun un dono ki dabadayi hui aankhon me sawal dikhne laga jispar...


SLUNDERS MOM-woh vegitative state toh yaad hai naa tum dono ki jisme hum sab behosh pade the aur RAAZ ne hume usse bahar nikala tha...

ACCHUTA/SLUNDER-haan,par sirf apne faayde ke liye...

SLUNDERS MOM-ek baat batao..kya jis waqt RAAZ ne hum sabko us state se nikala tha,tab kya woh tum logon ka dost tha...???

ACCHUTA-nahi..

SLUNDERS MOM-toh phir sirf humare liye ek anjaan insaan hume bhala kyun thik karta..

aisa toh koi bhi tabhi karega naa jab isme uska bhi koi faayda ho...toh phir RAAZ ne bhi waisa sochkar kuch galat toh nahi kiya...


SLUNDER ke mom ki spirit ki baat sun kuch kehte nahi bana un dono se..

wahin apni baat ko continue karte hue..


SLUNDERS MOM-usne aisa kiya toh beshak isme uska faayda tha par nuksaan toh humara bhi nahi tha...

haan par ek nuksaan tha jo pehle hi hume ho chuka tha aur uska reason tum dono the...


SLUNDERS MOM ke spirit ki is baat ko sun jhatka laga un dono ko aur..


SLUNDER-nuksaan hua tha woh bhi pehle se..!!aur us nuksaan ka reason hum dono the...!!!!hum kuch samjhe nahi....

ACCHUTAS FATHER-tum dono ko jo GOD GIFTS mile hain,tumhare parents hone ki wajah se us gift ke kuch kan humari life source ke saath jud gaye the...

par kyunki hum normal human beings the, isiliye humari bodies un GOD GIFTS ke particles ko accept karne ke laayak nahi thi..

jis waqt RAAZ ne SPELL bolkar hum sabko theek kiya,tab usse pata thi..

woh ye bhi jaanta tha ki jis din tum dono ke GOD GIFT powers puri tarah se trigger ho jaayenge aur tum unko use me laana seekh jaaoge,toh un GOD GIFTS shaktiyon ke kan jo hum chaaron me hain,woh humse nikalkar tum dono me sama jaayenge..

par aisa hote waqt woh kan joki humare life source se jude hue the,woh us source ko khatm kar dete..

matlab hum mar jaate..aur is cheez ko roka bhi nahi jaa sakta tha..saath hi saath usne humare planets ko bhi isiliye hi khaali karaya tha kyunki un planets me bhi tum dono ki shakti ke kan the aur tumhare power trigger karne ke baad unka life source bhi khatm ho jaata aur aisa hote hi hamare bekasoor log bhi mar jaate..

RAAZ ye saari baatein jaanta tha..

usse ye bhi pata tha ki agar hum un particles ke nikalne par marte, toh tumme samane ke baad woh particles humari mout ka sach tum dono ke saamne disclose kar dete..

ab tum dono batao,kya tum dono ye seh paate ki anjaane me hi sahi,par tum dono ki wajah se hum, tumhare parents mare hain...!!!

SLUNDER-ye kya keh rahe hain aap...??ye kaise sach ho sakta hai..??i mean agar GOD GIFT POWER ka aisa koi side effect hota toh BRAWNY par bhi ye laagu hota..!!!

par aisa toh kuch nahi hua..iske apne power haasil aur trigger karne ke baad bhi uncle aur aunty pure theek hain...

SLUNDERS FATHER-woh isiliye kyunki uska planet jis star system ka hissa hai,wahan se koi aur SAVENT paida nahi hua hai..

par tum dono ek hi star system se ho..kabhi socha hai tum dono ne ki tum dono ko hi itne contrasting GOD GIFTS kaise mile..???

ACCHUTA, tumhare paas maarak shakti ka ARROW hai aur SLUNDER tumhare paas iske ulat bramhaand ka sabse strong shield hai..

tum dono ke GIFTS ek dusre saath milkar aur khatarnaak hote hain...

par saath hi saath itne strong attack aur defense powers ke ek star system me hone ki wajah se us star system ka balance bhi hinder karte hain..

aur wahi hamare saath ho raha tha..us disbalance ko temporarily thik rakhne ke chalte tum dono ke power particles humare andar transfer hue aur isiliye taaki hamara star system aage bhi thik rahe, isiliye humara marna tay tha...

aisa hone par hi woh particles hume chhodkar tum dono me samaate aur sab normal reh paata...


pehle ACCHUTA ke father aur phir SLUNDER ke father ke spirit ki baat sun toh kaan se dhuan nikalne laga tha uska aur SLUNDER ka..

kaise react karen,ye samajh hi nahi aa raha tha un dono ko...

wahin ACCHUTA ke father ki spirit ki baat ko aage badhate hue...


ACCHUTAS MOTHER-aur isiliye taaki apne hi mom dad ko maarne ki taklif tum dono ko na sehni pade,usne hum chaaron ki iaan le li...

aur un kano se unki yaadon ko mitakar tum dono ko sounp diya..

par dekho toh kismat ka khel, dusro ko jis dard se bachaya usne,aaj khud us d
ard ko jhelna pada usse...

ACCHUTAS MOTHER ke spirit ki ye baat sun naa sirf ACCHUTA aur SLUNDER apne dukh se bahar aaye,balki unke saath khade is hairat angez kahani ko sunane waale BRAWNY aur HIDA ke dimag me bhi ek sawal click kiya aur...


HIDA-kis dard ki baat kar rahi hain aap...??kuch der pehle uncle (SLUNDERS FATHER) ne bhi kaha tha ki jis taklif se RAAZ guzar raha hai,us taklif se in dono ko bachaya hai usne...

what does that mean...???


HIDA ke sawal par un chaaron ne kuch kaha nahi balki apna apna haath aage badha diya jiske baad un chaaron ke haath se rays nikal ACCHUTA, SLUNDER, HIDA aur BRAWNY par padi aur aisa hote hi in chaaron ki aankhen band ho gayi..

band aankhon ke beech in chaaron ko RAAZ, MAHI aur is kahani ke sabhi important facts dikhne lage jisse dekh chaaron ki band aankhon ne vismay bhi naachne laga aur aaj jo RAAZ ke saath hua,usse jo kurbaani deni padi,usse jaan bohot dukh bhi hua..

ab kahin jaakar woh chaaron samjhe ki aaj jab woh RAAZ ko maarne aaye toh uski haalat itni kharab kyun lag rahi thi..

un chaaron ko khud par sharm aane lagi ki apne friend ki itni kharab situation me uska saath dene ke bajaye woh uski jaan lene ke iraade se aaye the..

saari sacchayi jaan aankh khul gayi un chaaron ki par gardan sharm se jhuk gayi jisse dekh..


SLUNDERS MOM-jo hua,woh hona tay tha baccho, isiliye embarrass aur dukhi feel karne ki koi zaroorat nahi hai...

SLUNDER-kaise dukhi nahi honge mom....jisne humare hisse ke paap bhi apne kandhon par ddhoye,usse hi maarne nikle the hum...

ACCHUTA-aur ab toh usse kabhi maafi bhi nahi maang sakenge..

ACCHUTAS MOTHER-kisne kaha...!!! RAAZ zinda hai bacchon..aur saath me MAHI bhi...


ACCHUTAS mother ke spirit ki baat sun un chaaron ke chehre me itne der me pehli baar khushi dikhi thi jiske baad...


SLUNDER-sach...!!!RAAZ aur MAHI zinda hain...!!!

SLUNDERS FATHER-haan woh dono zinda hai aur sahi waqt par yahan wapas bhi loutenge..


SLUNDERS father ke spirit ki baat sun behadh khush ho gaye the woh chaaron.. wahin apni baat ko continue karte hue...


SLUNDERS FATHER-RAAZ aur MAHI zinda hai,ye baat bhale hi khush karne waali hai par aane waala waqt tum sabke liye bohot zyada taklifon se ghira hua hai...

aaj bhale hi tum chaaron ke waar par RAAZ khamosh raha,usne jawab nahi diya par jab woh wapas aayega toh aisa kuch nahi hoga...

tum chaaron ko hi uske ghusse ko jhelna hoga..aur ye tum sabke liye bohot taklif deh hoga...

aur isiliye hi tum sabke andar DECENTER ka scent gaya hai..

us scent ki wajah se kisi bhi negetive aur black energy ke waar se hone waali taklif ko sehen kar paaoge tum...

RAAZ ab tak tum sabke liye ek ANGEL saabit hua hai,par jab woh wapas loutega toh wahi ANGEL tumhare liye DEVIL hoga...

woh andar se toota hua hai bacchon,aur jab tak woh toota hua hissa wapas jud nahi jaata,woh baaki sabko todta chala jaayega...

haan,tum sabki hi tarah jab woh yahan aayega toh woh bhi kamzor hoga..

yahan ke best SAVENTS se jeetne ki shakti nahi hogi usme par sanak uski pagalpan ki hadh ko paar karne waali hogi...

tum sabko uske pagalpan ko jhelna hai..uske har dard ka hissa tum sabko bhi jhelna hai..

tumhara dard usse sukoon dega,aur uske sukoon ke liye tumhe us dard ko dawa samajhkar peena hai...

yahi tarika hai usse waisa banaane ka,jaise uske liye banana zaroori hai...

ye ladhayi beshak uski hai,par iska hissa tum sab bhi ho aur jaante ho kyun...!!! kyunki....



har baazi jeeti jaa sakti hai,sacche doston ka saath JAB HO....

un doston ka zindagi me aana jab FAISLA-E-RAB HO.....

waise toh taakat bohot hai RAAZ ke paas magar,

uski sabse badi taakat,uska sabse bada GOD GIFT TUM SAB HO.....

















AAJ KE LIYE ITNA HI....



















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