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First time koi story likhne jaa rahaa hu mai bahot saalo se Xossip and XForum pai story padhta aa rhaa hu pr kbhi socha nhi tha story likhunga but story pdhte pdhte ab muje ese lagnaa lagaa k mujhe bhi story likhni chaahiye. Is story mai aapko Lust, Thrill, Action, Technology, Comedy, Incest, Love, Emotion bahot kuch hoga jo aapko aage story mai padhne ko milega hope yai story aap sab ko pasand aaye.

Kuch galti ho to pehle se hi maafi and please give your important suggestions and support me to write a beautiful story.

So isi k saath mai apni story start karunga iss story k koi bhi character kisi k bhi real life se jude nhi hai saare hi kaalpanik characters hai or jo bhi is story mai bataya jaayega wo sab just ek imagination hai.

"Zindagi Ek Bhram Hai, aur isi Bhram mai saari Duniya hai"
 
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Introduction

Hero ki family mai 4 log hai
Ashish Khanna - Dead or Alive mystery?

Supriya Khanna - Hero's mom jo ek housewife hai jisko fit rehna pasand hai height 5.5Ft or kaafi simple woman hai na jyada old fashioned or naa hi jyada modern hamesha saree pehanti hai. Inka figure kaafi maintained hai roz savere 5:30 AM baje uth k yoga and exercise krti hai us vajah figure kaafi sahi hai.

Priya Khanna - Three year older than hero. Supriya ki hi tarah isko bhi simple rehna pasand hai saare kism k kapde pahenti hai as per situations short dresses ko 6odh k. Yeah Supriya k saath morning mai uth jaati hai yoga and exercise k liye. Figure 34-22-32 Hero se kaafi lagaav hai College going girl hai.

Daksh Khanna - Hero gora chitta gabru jawan height 6Ft. Roz savere 5:30 baje uth k gym jata hai kaafi heavy workout krta jis vajah se body kaafi achi banaa li hai.
 
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Update 1: Pilot

Aakash Mai purv(east) disha ki aur se baadlo k bich se nikalta hua Suraj apni roshni bekher rahaa hai or kahi parindo ki chahakne ki awaaze aa rahi hai to kahi alag alag kalaaye dikhaate hue parinde jund Mai ud rahe hai to koi thandi hawaa ka aanand le rahe hai isi suhaane mausam k beech ek bandaa chat pai push ups lagaa rahaa or saath Mai ginte bhi ja rahaa hai 26...27...28...29...30 ese krte hue gin rahaa hai or thodi hi der mai wo apne 50 push ups complete kr leta hai or khade hoke aasman ka yeah sunhere drishya dekhta hai or Vitamin-D ka aanand leta hai push ups k baad ab wo skipping kr rahaa Jo normal se kaafi fast kr rahaa hai yeah bhi 50 pure hone k baad rok deta hai abhi dono haatho Mai 25-25kg k dumbbells uthaate hue apne haatho k muscles Pai dhyaan dete hue sets lagaata hai 50 ese bahot alag alag tarah see workout krtaa hai abhi uska Pura sharir pasine se bhiga hua usne sando pehna hua hai Jo banayan jesa hota hai wo Pura gila ho chuka or jahaa jahaa Pai kpda nhi dikh rahaa wahaa uska sharir pasine se chamak rahaa hai or upar se gorra chitta, bhuri bhuri aankhe jisme ek baar koi ldki dekh le to uspe Mar mite..Abhi bnde ka workout khtm hota hai to wo Jo apne saath juice laya thaa wo pita hai or pure do ghnte workout krne k baad ab ghadi Mai baji hai 7:30 AM usi samay piche se aawaaz aati hai

Daksh....to ye Jo hatta katta gabru jawaan bandaa hai wo hai apna hero to hero jab uski aawaaz ki or dekhta hai wahaa ek ladki ko paata hai terrace k darwaaje k paas Jo abhi apne jogging suit Mai hoti hai ye hai hero ki sister jo ek ghantaa jogging kar ke, apne bhaai ko terrace pai bulaane aati hai terrace kaafi badaa hota hai kyuki iss building Mai hr floor Pai 10 - 10 Ghar hai or 10 floor ki hai Jisme kuch 1BHK k Ghar hai to kuch 2BHK k Ghar hai to soch lijiye ki terrace kitna bdaa or upar se building Puri round shape Mai bani Hui round shape see Mera matlb hai ki bich Mai Ek badi si paani ki Tanki hai jahaa see building k har Ghar Mai paani jata hai or utni jagah Pai hr floor Pai bahaar passage hai 10 gharo k bich, to aate hai waapis terrace Pai jahaape savere jogging krna ho to aaram see kr skte hai pr
Priya(Hero’s Sister) ko greenery k bich jogging krna jyada psnd hai isiliye wo garden Mai jaati hai or wahi Daksh ko savere savere Vitamin-D Lena jyada psnd hai to wo terrace k door k side Mai east side mai workout krta hai

Daksh: Yes Didi

Priya(jise aage Didi likhunga): Come let's go home.

Daksh: Aata hu Didi aap pahocho Ghar...

Or ye bol k Daksh palat k apna samaan Leta hai ek bag Mai daalta hai or darwaaje ki taraf bdhta hai uska dhyaan darwaaze taraaf nhi hota hai chaltaa hai to chalte chalte wo ek ldki se takraa jata or wo ladki Jese hi girne waali hoti hai to Daksh use kamar se thaam Leta hai or ek haath pakad leta hai jab Nazar milti hai jab uski taraf dekhta hai to ek nayi nayi Shaadi shuda ldki hai Jo 9th floor pr rehti hai or abhi terrace Pai jogging suit Mai hoti hai uppar se t-shirt pehna hua hai Jo itna lambaa nhi hai isiliye girte samaay thoda upar ho jata hai to Daksh ka haath uski nangi kamar Pai hota hai or niche jogging pant pehna hai Daksh ka haath ldki ki kamar Pai lgte hai usse thodi jur juri hoti hai kyuki Daksh ka haath thoda thandaa hota mausam ki wajah see ladki ki aankhe Jese jil si thodi patli si fir lips thode pinkish type suraahi daar gardan uske niche uske 34 k boobs or niche uski thodi gehri naabhi or 24 ki kamar wheatish skin tone uske niche uske butt wo bhi 34 k honge or hieght Mai hero se 4 inch choti hero bs use kuch pl thaam ta hai or karib 2-3 sec. baad Mai usko khadaa kr deta hai...
 
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Update 2: Flirt

Daksh: I am really sorry bhabhi wo Mera dhyaan nhi thaa..

Ladki: It's ok koi baat nhi...

Daksh: BTW aapko Aaj see Pehle kbhi terrace Pai dekha nhi or kpdo se lgtaa hai aap Roz terrace pr aati hogi exercise krne.

Ladki(smile dete hue): wo to Maine bhi aapko nhi dekha aaj se pehle

Daksh(smile dete hue): Haa actually Mai 5:30 AM baje aata hu 7:30 AM baje nikal jata hu pr Aaj thoda late ho gayaa ghadi Mai dekhte hue..

Ladki: oh itni savere savere nice... Isiliye aapne nhi dekha hoga kyuki mai 7:30 baad aati hu..

Daksh(aage se me likhunga): oh achaa ok

Ladki: BTW aapka naam Kya hai aapko dekha hai 2-3 baar aap 10th floor Pai rehte ho right pr naam pataa nhi hai.

Me: My name is Daksh Khanna or Pyaar se mere dost muje DK bulaate hai so you can also call me DK btw dekhaa to Maine bhi hai aapko 9th floor pr Sanjay bhaiya ki wife hai aap right but Mai bhi naam nhi jaanta (Inka jyada koi role nhi hai to jyada kuch introduction dunga nhi to sirf itna ki ye ladki Sanjay ki wife hai or Sanjay bhaiya ki age 26 hai or bhaiya k saath unki maa rehti jiska role future mai aayega but introduction tab hi dunga)

Ladki: Yes right Mai sanjay ki wife hi hu My name is Aarushi and btw Mai kyu aapko DK bulaau(muskuraate hue) Mai koi aapki dost thodi hu...

Me: Kyu nhi ho Bhabhi

Aarushi: Are Pehle to Bhabhi mat bolo yrrr Mai aapse jyada koi badi nhi hu Just call me Aarushi...

Me: Itna badaa naam lete nhi aayega to Mai to aapko Aaru bulaaunga and btw aapne abhi just yrrr bola to ho gaye dost abhi to...

Aaru Bhabhi(haste hue): you are so smart baat baat Mai muje apna dost bhi banaa liyaa nice I am impressed..Thik hai Mai bhi DK hi bulaaungi ab to thik hai na..

Me(haste hue): Areeey ek dam thik hai...ghadi dekhte hue oh shit 15 min. Uppar ho gaye 8:00 AM baje Gaye abhi muje Jana hoga bhabhi fir milenge.

Aaru Bhabhi: fir Bhabhi?

Me: ?oh sorry Aaru Bubyee talk to you later yeah kehte hue mai ghar ki sidhiyo ki taraf bhaagta hu or piche see muje aarushi ki thodi si hasne ki awaaz sunaayi deti or aarushi bhi apni exercise k liye Chali jaati hai..

Aaru Bhabhi(man Mai): Kaafi sahi bandaa hai handsome bhi hai sweet bhi hai or aankhe to kitni mst hai yrr or body body to by God gajjab hai ye Mai Kya soch rahi hu aaru chal focus on exercise waapis sochti Hui...Aaru? Haste hue sir pr haath maar kr?apni exercise shuru kr deti hai

Chalo abhi Aarushi ko exercise krne dete hai or hum chalte hai hero k paas....
 
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