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Fantasy ATTITUDE (KABHI ANGEL KABHI DEVIL) ( Completed )

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AB TAK AAPNE PADHA KI JAHAN EK TARAF SHAILA MAHI KO RAAZ KI USKE PRATI BERUKHI KE SECRET JAANANE KA TARIKA BATATI HAIN WAHIN DUSRI TARAF JAB MAHI KO US SECRET KE BAARE ME BATA CHALTA HAI TOH USKI HAALAT KHARAB HO JAATI HAI.


AB AAGE:-



CHAPTER-2


(UNEARTH THE IMMORTALS)



UPDATE-116



PLANET-ELYSIAN


PLACE-CHOSENS




KAL HUA KYA THA TUJHE...ACHANAK SE BOLA KI NEEND AA RAHI HAI AUR PHIR TURANT SONE CHALE BHI GAYA..

DRINK ME NEEND KI GOLI TOH NAHI MILAYA THA TUNE...!!!


mujhe ghurte hue kahi thi ye baat ALFREEN ne jispar....


MAI-naya kaam chalu kiya aur bataya bhi nahi...

ALFREEN-naya kaam..!!?kya bol raha hai tu...??? maine koi naya kaam shuru nahi kiya...

MAI-toh fokat me detective giri karke kya milega tujhe...!! mujhe neend aayi,mai sone chala gaya,ye bhi koi discussion ka toioc hai kya...???


jahan meri baat sun ACCHUTA, SLUNDER aur BRAWNY has pade, ALFREEN ne apna mooh bichkaya liya wahin hasi toh MABEL bhi par phir jab uski nazar MAHI par padi toh...


MABEL-ab tujhe kya hua..??mooh kyun utaara hua hai tune...??aur ye teri aankhon ko kya hua hai...??? halki suji lag rahi hai aur laal bhi...


MABEL ki baat sun sabhi ki nazar MAHI par gayi jisse pehle toh andar hi andar hadbadayi MAHI par apne chehre ko normal hi rakha usne aur...


MAHI-arre kuch nahi yaar...woh raat ko theek se neend nahi aayi isiliye aankhen thodi jal rahi hai...

shayad isiliye sujan aur laalipan aa gaya hai...


ALFREEN-lai,ajeeb hai..in mahanubhav ko kal turant neend aa jaati hai aur iske ulat tujhe bilkul nahi aati...

ye kaisa contrasting raasta jaa raha hai yaar tum dono ka...

MAI-tujhe koi kaam vaam nahi hai kya...???kisko kitni neend aa rahi hai,issi par agar p.h.d karni thi toh yahan aayi hi kyun tu..??


meri baat par ALFREEN kuch kehti ki tabhi...


SILENCE EVERYBODY....


HIDA ki awaaz par naa sirf hum aur baaki saare SAVENTS ki aapsi baatien rook gayi balki hum sabki nazar saamne hamare teeno WHIZZ aur WHIZZDERS par tik gayi jiske baad...


HIDA-INVISIBLE WEAPON COMBAT....

aaj hum issi topic ke baare me baat karenge...

naam sun kar aap sabko andaza ho hi gaya hoga ki aaj kya hone waala hai..???

woh shashtra jo hum dekh sakte hain,unhe toh asaani se combat kiya jaa sakta hai par woh shashtra jisse gayab kar ke humpar chhoda jaaye,usse bachna aur ladhna behadh mushkil hota hai....

aur aaj hum ussi invisible fight tenchnique ke baare me aapko batayenge aur usse use me laana sikhayenge....

REGIS-apne shashtron ko apne sharir me gayab karke chuppana aur phir usse use me laana koi badi baat nahi hai...

COMBAT SPELL BOOK me aisa karne ke liye kayi SPELLS bataye gaye hain jinhe aapko bas memorize karke use me laana hai...

asal mudda hai khudko un invisible weapons se bachana...

haan, agar weapon ek hai aur bhaari hai toh usse nikalne waali tarange bhi itni heavy hoti hai jinhe mehsoos kar bacha jaa sakta hai,par agar light weapons jinka aakar chota ho,yaa phir magic se chota kar diya gaya ho toh unhe sense karna bohot mushkil hota hai..

aur mushkil tab aur badh jaati hai jab aap par koi ek weapon nahi balki bohot se adrishya weapons ke through ek saath humla ho jaaye..

aise me bachna next to impossible ho jaata hai aur aaj aap issi next to impossible task ko possible banane ka tarika sikhne waale hain..

SAPIUS-aur us tarike ka naam hai SAMOGAMA SHASHTRAM....

SAMOGAMA SHASHTRAM ek aisa SPELL hai jo BODY AMPLIFICATION ke antargat aata hai...

is SPELL ko agar apne BODY AMPLIFICATION ke saath merge kar liya jaaye toh aapka sharir adrisya humlon ko sense karne ke kaabil ho jaata hai...

HIDA-BODY AMPLIFICATION ke saath is spell ko thik se merge karne ke baad ek step aage badhte hue is SPELL ko apne SOUL AMPLIFICATION ke saath bhi merge kiya jaa sakta hai but aisa successfully kar paana kaafi time taking bhi hai aur hard bhi....

par woh baat ki baat hai.. pehla step toh BODY AMPLIFICATION ke saath SAMOGAMA SHASHTRAM SPELL ko merge karna hai aur aajse thik ek hafte tak aap sab yahi karenge...

ek hafte ke baad jab ye SPELL aap sabke bodies ke saath merge completely ho jaayega,tab hum aapko iske use ka live demo dikhayenge...

HIDA-waise live demo hum abhi bhi dikha sakte hain...


HIDA ke is acahanak kiye gaye baat par REGIS aur SAPIUS chownke aur....


REGIS-abhi,par kaise..???

HIDA-RAAZ.... usne merge kiya hua hai SAMOGAMA SHASHTRAM SPELL ko apne body ke saath..

SAPIUS-really...!!!


hairani se mujhe dekhte hue kahi ye baat SAPIUS ne jispar...


HIDA-yup..and he is really good...aur waise bhi,agar ek SAVENT ke through hum abhi ek demo de den,toh isse saare SAVENTS kaafi zyada motivate ho jaayenge...

REGIS-woh sab toh thik hai but are you sure about this...!!!ye vidhya asaan nahi hai...aur iske demo me bhi high risk hota hai..

do you really think RAAZ can do it...???

MAI-i am ready.. let's start the demo...


REGIS ke sawal ka jawab HIDA ne nahi,maine diya jisse sun jahan ek taraf HIDA aur mere baaki sabhi friends ke face par smile aa gayi,wahin in sabke beech thi MAHI,jisse mere demo me participate karne par tention ho gayi thi aur isiliye....


MAHI-RAAZ,you dont have to do it....

MAI-and who decides that..!!!you...!!!


ghurte hue kahi ye baat maine MAHI se jisse sun MAHI ko toh kuch fark nahi pada par uske yun beech me bolne se aur khaaskar mujhe interfere karne se mere saare dost hadbada gaye the..

unhe maalum tha ki MAHI ko meri fikr hai but woh ye bhi jaante the ki mujhe mere faislon me dakhal andaazi pasand nahi...

aur jab un sabne mujhe MAHI ko ghurte paaya toh ye soch ki mai zyada bhadakte hue sabke saamne MAHI ki fazzihat na kar dun...


ALFREEN-kya kar rahi hai MAHI..pagal ho gayi hai kya..!?sirf demo hai,aur woh RAAZ hai..

he is the best SAVENT of this PHASE...woh koi faisla yunhi nahi leta...agar usne demo ke liye haan kaha hai toh iska matlab hai ki he is ready...

isiliye beech me interfere karna band kar nahi toh teri love story shuru hone se pehle hi khatm ho jaani hai..


kheench kar baithate hue kahi ye baat ALFREEN ne MAHI se jispar MAHI baith toh gayi par ALFREEN ki baat sun..


MAHI man me-love story toh tab banegi naa jab RAAZ ki sansein chalengi...pata nahi kyun isse lagta hai ki isse kuch ho jaayega...

par unsure hokar toh kuch kehta hi nahi hai ye...par kya ho sakti hai woh cheez jisse isse lagta hai ki iski...!!!

nahi nahi..ye mai kya soch rahi hun..mai kuch nahi hone dungi apne RAAZ ko...uski taraf badhti hui mout ko mujhse hokar guzarna padega...

REGIS-ok then..toh demo mere saath perform karega phir RAAZ...


MAHI ye sab soch hi rahi thi ki tabhi REGIS ke awaaz se jaise present me jhatke se waapas aayi woh..

wahin REGIS ki baat par SAPIUS ya HIDA kuch kehte ki tabhi..


VALDIS-WHIZZDER,i have a request...agar demo me part ek SAVENT le raha hai toh uske saamne bhi ek SAVENT ko hi hona chahiye..

isse hum sab SAVENTS me excitement aur confidence, dono
hi badh jaayega...

jahan VALDIS ki baat par uske friends ne haan me haan milayi, wahin teeno WHIZZES aur WHIZZDERS ko bhi uski baat janchi but is suggestion par ek sawal bhi tha aur isiliye...


REGIS-idea acha hai VALDIS but ye possible nahi hai..haan, RAAZ ko is combat technique ke baare me maalum hai but uske alawa aur koi SAVENT iske baare me nahi jaanta..


MUJHE PATA HAI INVISIBLE WEAPONS COMBAT KE BAARE ME..I WILL PERFORM...


piche baithe VIDEOUS ne khade hote hue kahi ye baat jispar sabki nazar uspar padi aur...


HIDA-are you sure VIDEOUS....!!!

WOOOOO.....

HIDA ne sawal kiya hi tha ki tabhi uske aur baaki dono WHIZZDERS ne apni taraf aate hue kuch adrishya weapons ko feel kiya par isse pehle ki woh un weapons ko rokte,woh weapons wapas lout gaye the aur issi cheez par react kiya tha un sabne...

wahin is achanak hue action ke baad ab un teeno ke face par hairani thi aur issi hairani ke saath woh VIDEOUS ko dekh rahe the...

reason..

un teeno ko hi pata tha ki abhi abhi jo hua,woh VIDEOUS ne kiya tha par hairan woh is baat ko lekar the ki VIDEOUS ne abhi abhi jo invisible weapons use me laaye the,waisa karne ke liye usne SPELL uccharit nahi kiya tha balki bas budbudaya tha..

aur aisa sirf wahi kar sakta tha jisne SAMOGAMA SHASHTRAM SPELL ko apne body ke saath nahi balki apne SOUL ke saath merge kar liya tha.

aur ye ek PHASE 3 level ka hunar tha jisse VIDEOUS ne naa sirf seekh liya th balki perfect bhi kar liya tha aur yahi sab dekh aur jaan woh teeno kaafi hairan hue the..

wahin saare SAVENTS ne bhi kuch invisible par behadh powerful chiz hawa me mehsoos ki thi jisse feel kar woh sab bhi hairan the..

par in sabke beech ACCHUTA, SLUNDER aur BRAWNY bhi the jinhone naa sirf un invisible weapons ko feel kiya tha balki un weapons ki movement aur displacement tak se woh teeno waakif the..

unhe pata tha ki VIDEOUS ne aaj sikhaye jaane waali kala ka aur apne worthy hona ka first demo de diya aur ye jaan woh halke halke smile kar rahe the...

khair, VIDEOUS ke is presentation ke baad ab jahan HIDA relaxed thi,wahin REGIS aur SAPIUS ko ab VIDEOUS ki jagah RAAZ ki fikr ho rahi thi..

jis level ka demo abhi VIDEOUS ne dikhaya tha,usse dekh unhe RAAZ ke injured hone ka dar tha par woh dono ye bhi jaante the ki RAAZ kitna stubborn hai..

aur jab baat challenge ki aati hai toh backoff karna usse aata hi nahi isiliye ek thandi saans bharte hue..


SAPIUS-lets walk to the GREAT HALL...


ye bol jahan SAPIUS, REGIS aur HIDA aage badh gaye wahin sabhi SAVENTS bhi un teeno ke piche ho liye...

is beech MAHI ne ek baar phirse mujhse baat karne ki koshish ki par ACCHUTA aur baaki sabne usse aisa nahi karne diya....

woh sab nahi chahte the ki mujhe samjhane ke chakkar me MAHI ki insult ho...

anyways,apne man ko maarti hui MAHI bhi baaki sabke saath THE GREAT HALL ki taraf badh gayi....




THE GREAT HALL:-



HIDA-toh equation simple hai SAVENTS....

aap dono hi ek dusre par ek ke baad kuch INVISIBLE WEAPONS se attack karenge..

chaahe toh direct matlab straight kijiye aur chaahe toh zigzag pattern me...

jiska bhi hit saamne waale ko lag gaye,woh jeet jaayega...

lekin ek baat ka dhyan rahe, weapons chaahe aap jo bhi chune,ek chune yaa phir multiple,un weapons ki sharpness bohot kam honi chahiye taaki us weapon ke lagne ke baad bhi saamne waala injured naa ho jaaye...

ye sirf ek demo hai,isse demo bi rakhiyega..

got it...!!!

MAI/VIDEOUS-yes....


ek dusre kse kareeb 30 feet door aamne saamne khade the mai aur VIDEOUS..

jahan mai normal hi tha wahin VIDEOUS ki aankhon me ek chamak thi..

ek negetive chamak..waise ye negetive chamak bhi normal hi thi...

ab bande ka ATTITUDE hi negetive hai toh aankhon me positiveness toh aane se rahi....!!!

anyways, HIDA ne apni baat keh di thi jiska matlab tha ki ab hum jab chaahe,demo dena start kar sakte the...

wahin saare SAVENTS aankhon me excitement liye hum dono ko dekh hi rahe the ki tabhi....


VIDEOUS-taiyaar hai RAAZ..!!!!


SSSSSSWWWWSWWWWSSWWW


VIDEOUS ka sawal pura hua hi tha ki tabhi uske chaaron taraf ek ajeeb si awaaz uthne lagi jisse naa toh SAVENTS samajh paaye aur naahi turant teeno WHIZZ aur WHIZZDERS ke palle kuch pada tha..


par phir pehle HIDA ke aur phir dono WHIZZDERS ko un awaazon se nikalne waale intensity se sab samajh aa gaya aur aisa hote hi jahan ek taraf HIDA bas hairan thi ki itna intense waar maine kyun chuna hai woh bhi sirf ek demo me wahin SAPIUS aur REGIS ke toh dimag hi fuse ho chuke the..

kyunki woh dono hi ye jaan gaye the ki maine ek saath 100 se zyada alag alag ke astra aur shastra joki gayab awastha me the,unka awahan kar bulaya hua hai aur ye koi choti baat toh thi nahi..

bina SPELL bole maine ye kiya tha aur saath hi badi dakshata se un saare invisible astron ko sanchalit bhi kar raha tha..

ab itna kuch mere kar lene se un dono ka hairan hona toh banta hi tha..

wahin in sabke beech VIDEOUS bohot shaanti se khada tha...

aur kuch pal baad jab mere awahan kiye saare astra shashtra uski taraf badhe tab bhi woh shaant hi raha par haan,uske aankhon me halki si movements hui aur aisa hote hi..

TAN..TAN..TAN...TAN...TAN...TAN.....

ek ke baad ek kayi saare astra VIDEOUS ki taraf waise hi invisible mode me prakat hue the jinhone mere awahan kiye hue astron se takrana shuru kar diya tha...

us takrav se sirf awaaz hi nahi aa rahi thi,balki saath hi unke takrane se ek shockwave paida ho raha tha jisse teeno WHIZZES aur WHIZZDERS ke saath sabhi SAVENTS bhi feel kar paa rahe the...

us wave ko feel kar jahan ek taraf HIDA jaan gayi thi ki VIDEOUS bhi meri hi tarah ek exceptional case hai wahin SAVENTS ke beech khadi MAHI ka mere liye dar aur badh gaya tha..

saath hi VIDEOUS ke prati uska ghussa bhi kaafi badh gaya tha..

uska bas chalta toh abhi nichod deti VIDEOUS ko woh..

par filhal woh kuch kar toh sakti thi nahi isiliye bebas si khadi rahi woh apni jagah par...

khair,kuch der tak yunhi mere aur VIDEOUS ke astra shashtra takrate rahe par phir woh sab nirastra hokar gayab ho gaye aur aisa hote hi..


VIDEOUS-ab meri baari...

PHDDDDDDPHDDDDDD.....


VIDEOUS ke kapde ajeeb tarah se aur behadh tezi se phadphadaye aud aisa hote hi uske kapdo se ek behadh strong energy force nikla jisse mehsoos kar teeno hi WHIZZ aur WHIZZDERS ki aankhen badi ho gayi aur un teeno ke mooh se ek saath nikla...


TEENO-VASTRA AGHATAM....


ek behadh hi khatarnaak invisible weapon waar tha ye SPELL joki obviously ATTACH MODE ke tahat SOUL AMPLIFICATION ke under aata tha..

is SPELL ko practice kar use me laana bohot hi mushkil kaam tha par jis tarah se VIDEOUS ke kapde fadfadaye the,usse woh teeno hi samajh gaye ki VIDEOUS ne is SPELL par mastery kar li hai..

par ek dar bhi tha un teeno ko aur woh dua kar rahe the ki unka dar sach me naa badle..

aur woh dar tha VIDEOUS ke bole SPELL ke extreme level ke hone ka..

kyunki agar aisa hua toh uske kapdon me jo fadfadahat hui thi,jaise hi us fadfadahat se release hui hawa dusre kapdon ko touch karti,toh un saare kapdon me bhi halki si fadfadahat hoti jiske agle hi pal unme se bhi invisible astra shashtra bahar nikal jaate jiska matlab tha ki yahan moujud har SAVENT khatre me aa jaata..

teeno WHIZZ aur WHIZZDERS aisa naa ho,ye dua kar rahe the par jab saamne VIDEOUS ho toh dua kaam me aane ke chances kam hi hote hain aur yahan bhi ye hua...

VIDEOUS ke kapdon se release hui hawa jaise hi saare SAVENTS se takrayi,un sabke kapdon me bhi halki kampan hui jiske agle hi pal..

SRRRRRR.....

ek ajeeb si awaaz ke saath kuch invisible but nukile shastra saare SAVENTS ke saamne invisible mode me prakat hokar wahin un sabke aage aur piche tezi se ghumne lage jisse mehsoos karte hi..


HIDA-SAVENTS...dont move an inch... aap sabke saamne invisible astra ghum rahe hain..

agar aap aage yaa piche hue toh woh shashtra aapko chot pahuncha sakte hain...

jahan HIDA ki baat sun majority of the SAVENTS dar se gaye aur apni jagah par jadh hokar khade ho gaye wahin ACCHUTA, SLUNDER aur BRAWNY ko toh waise in shashtron se koi dar ya khatra nahi tha par phir bhi woh teeno bhi shaanti se apni jagah par khade rahe...

khair,in sabke beech tha mai jiski taraf tezi se bohot saare astra shashtra joki VIDEOUS ke kapdon se nikle the,woh badh chuke the par isse pehle ki woh shashtra mere radar ko chhu bhi paate,maine apna haath aage ki taraf tezi se lehraya aur mere aisa karte hi VIDEOUS ki hi tarah ek energy force mere saamne bhi ban gaya jiske bante hi VIDEOUS ke saare shashtra ek hi jagah par rook gaye..

VIDEOUS ke shashtra roopi waar ko toh rok diya tha maine,par jo dimagi waar joki uska asli waar tha,usse pehchaan nahi paaya mai aur jo woh chaahta tha,woh ho gaya...

hua ye ki light speed se meri aur badh rahe uske adrishya shashtron ko rokne ke liye mujhe apna pura concentration saamne rakhna pada aur isiliye jo energy force meri body se nikla tha,uski wajah se mere force aur VIDEOUS ke shashtron ke beech ek tadga impact hua jiski wajah se sirf ek nano second ke liye hi sahi,par VIDEOUS ke mere upar chhode saare shashtra visible ho gaye...

jahan SAVENTS aur teeno WHIZZ aur WHIZZDERS apne aage piche hawa me ghum rahe shahstron par concentrate kar rahe the wahin MAHI hi ek aisi shaksh thi jiska dhyan abhi bhi khudpar nahi balki mujhpar tha aur yahi wajah thi ki woh nano second ke liye dikhne waale shashtra uski aankhon se nahi chhup paaye..

un shashtron ki sankhya aur mere retaliation waale force ki wajah se unme aayi tez kampan ko dekh MAHI hadh se zyada dar gayi thi...

aur tabhi uska dar ek level tak aur tab badh gaya jab usne mere piche bhi kuch halke visible shashtron ko prakat hote aur phir meri taraf badhte dekha aur jab aisa hua toh uski zubaan toh jaise sil hi ho gayi par uske kadam khudbakhud aage badh gaye is baat ko completely bhulte hue ki uske aage aur piche bhi do adrishya shahstra ghum rahe the...

wahin jaise hi VIDEOUS ne mere piche bhi shashtra create kar mujhpar humla kiya toh mujhe is baat ka pata chal chuka tha aur isiliye isse pehle ki mere piche se meri taraf aate shastra mujhe chhu bhi paate,maine apne piche bhi ek energy force create kar diya tha jisse takrate hi woh saare shashtra aage nahi badh paaye par tabhi..


AHHHH....AHHHHHHH....

ek ke baad ek do baar cheekh sunayi di mujhe aur mere saath baaki sabko bhi jisse sun ALFREEN ki cheekh nikal gayi..

MAHI........

ye cheekh MAHI ki thi jo mujhe bachane ke chakkar me khud ko laparwaah kar baithi thi aur phir jab woh aage badhi toh pehle woh shahstra jo uske saamne tha joki ek GADE ke akaar ka solid crusher tha aur tezi se apni jagah par gol ghum raha tha,woh sidhe MAHI ke sir ko hit hua aur aisa hote hi pehli cheekh ke saath MAHI piche ki tarah ghumte hue halki si udi par tabhi MAHI ke piche ka shahstra joki ek bhala tha aur woh bhi ghum hi raha tha,MAHI ke kareeb aate hi us bhaale ka nok MAHI ke peeth ko cheerta hua nikal gaya jisse uske mooh se dusri cheekh nikli aur MAHI side ki taraf dham karkar gir gayi..

first hit joki uske sir par hua tha, uski wajah se behosh hone lagi thi MAHI..is beech apne peeth par gilepan ka ehsaas bhi hua usse jisse feel kar woh samajh gayi ki usse tez bleeding ho rahi hai...

ye feel karte hue woh puri behosh ho chuki thi..

wahin MAHI ki cheekh sun ek saath do chizen hui...


pehli..

ACCHUTA, BRAWNY aur SLUNDER,teeno ne hi turant apne haath hawa me ghumaye aur unke aisa karte hi unke aur baaki saare SAVENTS ke aage hawa me ghum rahe shashtra nishkriya hokar gayab ho gaye..

teeno WHIZZ aur WHIZZDERS ne bhi yahi kiya tha..

dusri..

ek baar MAHI ke behosh sharir ko dekh meri nazar saamne khade VIDEOUS par padi jo is waqt mujhe dekhkar muskura raha tha jaise bol raha ho ki uska plan kaamiyab hua..

aur ye dekh mera usse dekhna ghurne me badal gaya aur...


MAI-ye nahi karna chahiye tha tujhe....!!!

SAMPURN KANAM AAGHATAM...


apne dono haathon ko har taraf lehrate hue man me socha maine is SPELL ko aur mere aisa karte hi VIDEOUS jahan khada tha,uske chaaron taraf halki kampan ke saath hazaron ki sankhya me invisible weapons prakat hue..

saare shahstra ek dusre se jude hue the aur un sabne VIDEOUS ko halka sa bhi gap nahi diya tha jisse ki woh ud kar bache yaa phir gayab bhi ho sake..

kyunki gayab hone ke liye bhi ek halki si hi sahi par khuli jagah chahiye jiske through apne body ko invisible karne ke baad nikala jaa sake par woh space VIDEOUS ke paas nahi tha...

aur ye dekh us slight space ko create karne ke liye VIDEOUS ne apna haath aage lehrane ki sochi jisse uske haath se nikle energy se shashtra halke hi sahi hile jisse usse jagah mil sake par woh aisa karta ki tabhi...

maine apna haath aage kiya aur mere aisa karte hi VIDEOUS ka haath aage ki taraf lehrana toh door ki baat hai,hil bhi nahi paaya..

reason...

SPRADHAM VARJITE

MOVEMENT BLOCK...

is SPELL ke through apni jagah par khade khade hi maine VIDEOUS ke har movement ko block kar diya tha..

woh jo bhi karta,ek combat ki hi tarah uske har waar ko yaa harkat ko block kar sakta tha mai...

wahin apne haathon ko yun jakadte dekh VIDEOUS ne meri taraf halke ghusse de dekha aur phir shuru kiya usne lagana apna dum taaki meri grip usse chhut sake par apni aloukik shaktiyon ke bina ye karna uske liye asambhav tha...

par mai abhi jo chaahe kar sakta tha aur isiliye apne wrist ko ghumaya maine aur mere aisa karte hi VIDEOUS ko aisa laga jaise maine uski dono kalayi pakad li hai par isse pehle ki woh mere hatheli ko jhatakne ki koshish karta,

maine usse uski kalayiyon ke through hawa me ucchal diya aur jab aisa hua toh...


DHAABBBB....DHABBBB...DHABBBB.....


VIDEOUS ka sharir hawa me udta hua sidhe saamne ki taraf jahan shashtra ghum rahe the,unse takraya aur aisa hote hi un shashtron ne VIDEOUS ko hit karte hue dusri taraf fek diya jahan uske swagat me dusre shashtra ready hokar ghum rahe the aur isiliye jaise hi VIDEOUS ki body un shashtron ke range me aayi toh un shashtron ne bhi usse hit karte hue dusri taraf ucchal diya aur iske baad VIDEOUS ka body ek badminton ke CORK ki tarah ek disha se dusri disha ki taraf udne laga jisse dekh..


REGIS-RAAZ stop it...VIDEOUS ko chhodo...bhul gaye kya ki ye sirf ek demonstration hai,aur kuch nahi...

HIDA-haan RAAZ..aur MAHI ke saath jo hua,woh uski laparwaahi ki wajah se hua..agar woh apni hi jagah par rehti toh usse kuch bhi nahi hota...


jahan REGIS aur HIDA ki baat sun sabki nazar VIDEOUS aur uski CORK jaisi haalat par padi aur woh dar gaye wahin HIDA ki baat sun maine apna sir uski naasamjhi par halka sa left right hilaya...

waise uski bhi kya galti...!!!HIDA ko kahan maalum tha ki jo hua,ye is VIDEOUS ka hi kiya dhara tha..

khair,HIDA ki baat par maine apna haath ek baar phir se lehraya aur mere aisa karte hi mere create kiye gaye saare shashtra gayab ho gaye aur VIDEOUS neeche gir gaya..

aur jab aisa hua toh...


HIDA-REGIS,aap MAHI ko lekar HEALING section me jaaiye..mai VIDEOUS ko dekhti hun..

HIDA ki baat sun REGIS ne MAHI ko apni godh me uthaya aur aage badh gaye...

saare SAVENTS bhi unke saath ho liye the..HIDA bhi kuch aage tak gayi thi un sabke saath..

wahin is beech meri nazar VIDEOUS par thi jo abhi apni jagah par baitha apne upari kapdo ko jhaadte hue mujhe hi dekh raha tha..

usse kuch physical cut nahi aaya tha..aata bhi kaise..??saale ne hazaron talented WICKED SAVENTS ka AURA jo lapeta hua tha..

aur isiliye uske body ko pierce karna aam weapons ke bas ki baat nahi thi...

khair mujhe apni taraf dekhta dekh uske face par ek smile aa gayi aur usne mujh dekhte hue ek wink kiya...

wahin ek aur pal VIDEOUS ko dekh mai bhi THE GREAT HALL se bahar ki taraf nikal gaya..

is beech HIDA bhi VIDEOUS ke paas pahunch chuki thi aur jab usne VIDEOUS ko apne kapde jhaadte hue araam se khade hue dekha toh..


HIDA-thank god tumhe kuch nahi hua VIDEOUS...

VIDEOUS-VIDEOUS ko kuch ho sakta bhi nahi WHIZZ..aap MAHI ko dekhiye..make sure she lives...

HIDA-woh theek ho jaayegi..cut gehra zaroor hai but it can be taken care of...so,you dont worry...she will live..

VIDEOUS-she has to...aisi maut me maza kahan...????zindagi ki shuruat jab kisike saath hui hai,toh maut bhi uske saath hi honi chahiye...

HIDA-matlab..!!!

VIDEOUS-aa jaayega samajh..sahi waqt toh aane dijiye...


ye bol VIDEOUS ruka nahi,bahar nikal gaya wahin HIDA usse jaate dekhti rahi aur uski baaton ke matlab ko samajhne ki koshish karti rahi par jab uske palle kuch nahi pada toh..

HIDA-kabhi kabhi ye bhi mujhe RAAZ ka xerox hi lagta hai..kab kya bolta hai,pata hi nahi chalta...!!!






PLACE-HEALING ROOM



I WILL TAKE IT FROM HERE....


MAHI,ek bed par leti hui thi aur REGIS kuch jadibutiyon ka ras mix kar hi rahe the ki tabhi unke piche se aayi thi ye awaaz jisse sun jaise hi woh piche palte toh apne saamne khade sakshiyat ko dekh halka hadbada gaye..

unke saamne SOVES SHAILA khadi thi..ab SHAILA toh PHASE 2 kya PHASE 3 ke WHIZZES aur WHIZZDERS se bhi personally khud jaakar nahi milti thi,toh aise me unhe apne saamne dekhkar REGIS ka hadbadana toh laazmi hi tha..

khair,ab jab khud SHAILA MAHI ka checkup kar usse completely heal karne waali thi,ye janane ke baad REGIS ka wahan rookne ka koi matlab hi nahi tha...

aur isiliye..


REGIS-i will take your leave than SOVES...


apni baat keh sir jhukaaye hue hi REGIS healing room se bahar nikal gaye aur unke baahar nikal hi ACCHUTA,MABEL, ALFREEN SLUNDER aur BRAWNY jo wahin bahar hi khade MAHI ka theek hone ka wait kar rahe the, woh sab REGIS ke saamne aa gaye aur...


ALFREEN-how is MAHI WHIZZDER..??

MABEL-woh theek oh ho jaayegi naa..!!

SLUNDER-is he awake now...!!!

REGIS-relax SAVENTS.. sirf physical cut hua hai uski body me...aur sir par jo hit hua hai MAHI ke,jisse woh behosh ho gayi thi,usme bhi koi darne waali baat nahi thi...

filhal toh behosh hi hai woh but bohot jald usse hosh bhi aa jaayega aur uske cuts bhi pure heal ho jaayenge...

waise bhi,aap sabne SOVES SHAILA ko andar jaate dekha hoga,toh aise me agar kuch serious bhi hua hota,tab bhi MAHI ko theek ho jaana tha..

haan,usse hosh me aane ke liye kamsekam 2 ghanta toh lagega hi,toh agar aap sab chaahen toh apne apne ABODES jaa sakte hain..

2 ghante baad aa jaaiyega yaa phir MAHI se uske ABODE me hi mil lijiyega...

ALREEEN-no WHIZZDER,we will wait here.. hum usse saath lekar hi jaayenge..


ALFREEN ki baat par smile karte hue aage badh gaye REGIS aur unke jaate hi..


MABEL-ye sab us VIDEOUS ki wajah se hua hai..mai chhodungi nahi usse...

ACCHUTA-aisa sochna bhi mat..RAAZ ke hum strictly kaha tha ki VIDEOUS se hume khud involve nahi hona hai...

aur tum jaanti ho ki RAAZ kabhi kuch bhi yunhi nahi kehta isiliye koi usse kuch nahi kahega..

SLUNDER-waise bhi , WHIZZ HIDA ne kaha tha naa ki MAHI apni galti ki wajah se behosh hui hai.. isiliye chhodo is baat ko...


SLUNDER ki baat par koi kuch kehta ki tabhi un sabko mai saamne se aata dikha jiske baad unke discussion ka full stop lag gaya..

wahin jab mai unsabse guzarkar HEALING ROOM ke door ko kholne ko hua toh..


SLUNDER-RAAZ...andar SOVES SHAILA hai..

MAI-toh..


ye bol maine door khola aur andar chala gaya jisse dekh jahan ek taraf SLUNDER, ACCHUTA aur BRAWNY has diye wahin ALFREEN aur MABEL ka mooh ban gaya aur..


ALFREEN-ye SOVES ko bhi kuch nahi samajhta kya..???

ACCHUTA-RAAZ hawa ki tarah hai ALFREEN...jagah dekhkar nahi behti..apne hisaab se chalti hai...




INSIDE HEALING ROOM:-



SHAILA-kya dekh rahe ho RAAZ...!!???

MAI-behoshi me utni bewakuf lagti nahi hai jitni asal me hai...


MAHI ke behosh chehre ko dekhkar kahi ye baat maine jispar pehle toh SHAILA muskurayi aur phir....


SHAILA-waise aaj ke iski bewakufi ka reason toh tum the RAAZ....

apna woh RAAZ jo ab tak sirf tum tak tha,tumne mere through isse disclose karwa diya jiska natija aaj ki iski harkat hai...


SHAILA ki baat sun maine kuch kaha nahi jispar..


SHAILA-ek baat puchun..??aakhir kyun...???kya zaroorat thi tumhe apne RAAZ ko isse share karne ki...??

MAI-do wajah hain,ek ka toh pata hi hai aapko...

SHAILA-haan,par us wajah ke liye isse apni mout ke baare me batane ki kya zaroorat padh gayi tumhe...???

woh wajah toh waise bhi puri hogi aur kaise hogi,iske liye tumhe sir khapaane ki zaroorat hai hi nahi..

MAI-hmm...par meri kismat me mout hai,ye jaankar iski nazar har waqt mujhpar rahegi jisse us wajah ke anjaam tak pahunchne me asaani hogi...

SHAILA-aur dusri wajah...!!!

MAI-ek baat bataiye,aur sidhe sidhe bataiye,kya mera khatm hona kisi bhi tarah tal sakta hai...???


mere is sawal par kuch pal dekha SHAILA ne mujhe aur phir..

SHAILA-nahi...tumhari aur VIDEOUS ki ladhayi me yaa toh tum khatm ho jaaoge,aur agar kisi tarah tumne VIDEOUS ko khatm kar bhi diya toh uski keemat tumhari puri urja hogi...

aur kyunki tum aur VIDEOUS ek hi urja se bane ho, isiliye khatm hote hote bhi VIDEOUS ki urja tumhari urja ko bhi khudme sokh kar tumhaare har swaroop ko nigal jaayegi....

MAI-woh ant jo nishtit hai,uske baare me usse kyun chuppaya jaaye jo meri hi tarah is kahani ka mukhya kendra hai..

MAHI ke aankhon me mere liye junoon har guzarte din ke saath badhta chala jaa raha hai..

kohish karkar dekh li maine,par iske junoon ko mera rukhapan rok nahi paa raha tha..

pa mera bhavishaya jaan shayad ye khud ko mere bina soch sakegi...

haan,aaj ka iska action zaroor negetive tha par saath hi aisa hona normal bhi tha..

aag jab nayi nayi jalti hai toh uski law hadh se zyada fadfadati hai par phir woh khudko vatavaran ke anukul kar hi leti hai..

MAHI ke dil me bhi abhi nayi nayi aag lagi hai..jab ye sach ko accept kar legi,shaant ho jaayegi...


ye bol mai palat kar jaane laga par tabhi SHAILA ki awaaz aur baat ko sun mere kadam rook gaye...


SHAILA-ek baat ka jawab doge..sidhe sidhe..do u also have feelings for MAHI...???do you love her...???

MAI-jis pyar ki tum baat kar rahi ho,woh insaanso aur living creatures ke liye hoti hai..

aur mai ek robot hun SHAILA...jiski uttpatti ka sirf ek uddeshya hai...VIDEOUS ka khaatma..

ek yahi folder stored hai mere system me....aur kuch nahi...


ye bol mai rooka nahi aur room se bahar nikal gaya..

wahin meri baat sun mere jaane ke baad ek lambi aur thandi saans chhodi SHAILA ne aur....


SHAILA-yahin toh galat ho tum RAAZ....but taklif ye hai ki tumhe khud apne galat hone ka andaza tak nahi....par kar bhi kya sakte hain...????

woh waqt bohot nazdik hai jab tumhe apne robot hone ki galatfehmi ke baare me pata chalega....

...WAQT...!!!



aakhir,kisne socha tha ki waqt ek aisa khel RACHEGA....

sahi ho yaa galat,har taraf ek kohraam MACHEHGA....

woh waqt nazdik hai jab tu hoga apne wajood se rubaroo,aur tab,

mujhe dar hai ki ye sansaar VIDEOUS se nahi,tujhse kaise BACHEGA....!!!!!


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AAJ KE LIYE ITNA HI.....













AAPKA APNA V....J.....
 

ragish7357

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wowww.......nice update bro
to aakhir mahi ko raaz ka raaz pta chlanr ki piche ka raaz bhi raaz hi tha.....
dekhte h ab mahi raaz k liye kya kya krti h.....
but bro ab tk is story m ronit or anjli [ mahi's parents ] kha h ...wo dikhe hi nhi...
nd jesa aapne kha ki raaz se bachane ka dr h duniya ko to kya raaz bhi ek devil ki trh behave krne lg jayea.......jesa aapne phle bhi kha tha ki asli devil kya hota h ye raaz videous ko batayega........ab jb story m raaz bhi devil hi banega or usse bhi duniya k khtm hone ka dar h to ek devil ko khtm krne k liye dusra devil hi kyo laya gya........or agr lana tha to esi situaton kyo bni ki raaz se bhi duniya k khtm hone ka dar ho.........
 

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AB TAK AAPNE PADHA KI JAHAN EK TARAF SHAILA MAHI KO RAAZ KI USKE PRATI BERUKHI KE SECRET JAANANE KA TARIKA BATATI HAIN WAHIN DUSRI TARAF JAB MAHI KO US SECRET KE BAARE ME BATA CHALTA HAI TOH USKI HAALAT KHARAB HO JAATI HAI.


AB AAGE:-



CHAPTER-2


(UNEARTH THE IMMORTALS)



UPDATE-116



PLANET-ELYSIAN


PLACE-CHOSENS




KAL HUA KYA THA TUJHE...ACHANAK SE BOLA KI NEEND AA RAHI HAI AUR PHIR TURANT SONE CHALE BHI GAYA..

DRINK ME NEEND KI GOLI TOH NAHI MILAYA THA TUNE...!!!


mujhe ghurte hue kahi thi ye baat ALFREEN ne jispar....


MAI-naya kaam chalu kiya aur bataya bhi nahi...

ALFREEN-naya kaam..!!?kya bol raha hai tu...??? maine koi naya kaam shuru nahi kiya...

MAI-toh fokat me detective giri karke kya milega tujhe...!! mujhe neend aayi,mai sone chala gaya,ye bhi koi discussion ka toioc hai kya...???


jahan meri baat sun ACCHUTA, SLUNDER aur BRAWNY has pade, ALFREEN ne apna mooh bichkaya liya wahin hasi toh MABEL bhi par phir jab uski nazar MAHI par padi toh...


MABEL-ab tujhe kya hua..??mooh kyun utaara hua hai tune...??aur ye teri aankhon ko kya hua hai...??? halki suji lag rahi hai aur laal bhi...


MABEL ki baat sun sabhi ki nazar MAHI par gayi jisse pehle toh andar hi andar hadbadayi MAHI par apne chehre ko normal hi rakha usne aur...


MAHI-arre kuch nahi yaar...woh raat ko theek se neend nahi aayi isiliye aankhen thodi jal rahi hai...

shayad isiliye sujan aur laalipan aa gaya hai...


ALFREEN-lai,ajeeb hai..in mahanubhav ko kal turant neend aa jaati hai aur iske ulat tujhe bilkul nahi aati...

ye kaisa contrasting raasta jaa raha hai yaar tum dono ka...

MAI-tujhe koi kaam vaam nahi hai kya...???kisko kitni neend aa rahi hai,issi par agar p.h.d karni thi toh yahan aayi hi kyun tu..??


meri baat par ALFREEN kuch kehti ki tabhi...


SILENCE EVERYBODY....


HIDA ki awaaz par naa sirf hum aur baaki saare SAVENTS ki aapsi baatien rook gayi balki hum sabki nazar saamne hamare teeno WHIZZ aur WHIZZDERS par tik gayi jiske baad...


HIDA-INVISIBLE WEAPON COMBAT....

aaj hum issi topic ke baare me baat karenge...

naam sun kar aap sabko andaza ho hi gaya hoga ki aaj kya hone waala hai..???

woh shashtra jo hum dekh sakte hain,unhe toh asaani se combat kiya jaa sakta hai par woh shashtra jisse gayab kar ke humpar chhoda jaaye,usse bachna aur ladhna behadh mushkil hota hai....

aur aaj hum ussi invisible fight tenchnique ke baare me aapko batayenge aur usse use me laana sikhayenge....

REGIS-apne shashtron ko apne sharir me gayab karke chuppana aur phir usse use me laana koi badi baat nahi hai...

COMBAT SPELL BOOK me aisa karne ke liye kayi SPELLS bataye gaye hain jinhe aapko bas memorize karke use me laana hai...

asal mudda hai khudko un invisible weapons se bachana...

haan, agar weapon ek hai aur bhaari hai toh usse nikalne waali tarange bhi itni heavy hoti hai jinhe mehsoos kar bacha jaa sakta hai,par agar light weapons jinka aakar chota ho,yaa phir magic se chota kar diya gaya ho toh unhe sense karna bohot mushkil hota hai..

aur mushkil tab aur badh jaati hai jab aap par koi ek weapon nahi balki bohot se adrishya weapons ke through ek saath humla ho jaaye..

aise me bachna next to impossible ho jaata hai aur aaj aap issi next to impossible task ko possible banane ka tarika sikhne waale hain..

SAPIUS-aur us tarike ka naam hai SAMOGAMA SHASHTRAM....

SAMOGAMA SHASHTRAM ek aisa SPELL hai jo BODY AMPLIFICATION ke antargat aata hai...

is SPELL ko agar apne BODY AMPLIFICATION ke saath merge kar liya jaaye toh aapka sharir adrisya humlon ko sense karne ke kaabil ho jaata hai...

HIDA-BODY AMPLIFICATION ke saath is spell ko thik se merge karne ke baad ek step aage badhte hue is SPELL ko apne SOUL AMPLIFICATION ke saath bhi merge kiya jaa sakta hai but aisa successfully kar paana kaafi time taking bhi hai aur hard bhi....

par woh baat ki baat hai.. pehla step toh BODY AMPLIFICATION ke saath SAMOGAMA SHASHTRAM SPELL ko merge karna hai aur aajse thik ek hafte tak aap sab yahi karenge...

ek hafte ke baad jab ye SPELL aap sabke bodies ke saath merge completely ho jaayega,tab hum aapko iske use ka live demo dikhayenge...

HIDA-waise live demo hum abhi bhi dikha sakte hain...


HIDA ke is acahanak kiye gaye baat par REGIS aur SAPIUS chownke aur....


REGIS-abhi,par kaise..???

HIDA-RAAZ.... usne merge kiya hua hai SAMOGAMA SHASHTRAM SPELL ko apne body ke saath..

SAPIUS-really...!!!


hairani se mujhe dekhte hue kahi ye baat SAPIUS ne jispar...


HIDA-yup..and he is really good...aur waise bhi,agar ek SAVENT ke through hum abhi ek demo de den,toh isse saare SAVENTS kaafi zyada motivate ho jaayenge...

REGIS-woh sab toh thik hai but are you sure about this...!!!ye vidhya asaan nahi hai...aur iske demo me bhi high risk hota hai..

do you really think RAAZ can do it...???

MAI-i am ready.. let's start the demo...


REGIS ke sawal ka jawab HIDA ne nahi,maine diya jisse sun jahan ek taraf HIDA aur mere baaki sabhi friends ke face par smile aa gayi,wahin in sabke beech thi MAHI,jisse mere demo me participate karne par tention ho gayi thi aur isiliye....


MAHI-RAAZ,you dont have to do it....

MAI-and who decides that..!!!you...!!!


ghurte hue kahi ye baat maine MAHI se jisse sun MAHI ko toh kuch fark nahi pada par uske yun beech me bolne se aur khaaskar mujhe interfere karne se mere saare dost hadbada gaye the..

unhe maalum tha ki MAHI ko meri fikr hai but woh ye bhi jaante the ki mujhe mere faislon me dakhal andaazi pasand nahi...

aur jab un sabne mujhe MAHI ko ghurte paaya toh ye soch ki mai zyada bhadakte hue sabke saamne MAHI ki fazzihat na kar dun...


ALFREEN-kya kar rahi hai MAHI..pagal ho gayi hai kya..!?sirf demo hai,aur woh RAAZ hai..

he is the best SAVENT of this PHASE...woh koi faisla yunhi nahi leta...agar usne demo ke liye haan kaha hai toh iska matlab hai ki he is ready...

isiliye beech me interfere karna band kar nahi toh teri love story shuru hone se pehle hi khatm ho jaani hai..


kheench kar baithate hue kahi ye baat ALFREEN ne MAHI se jispar MAHI baith toh gayi par ALFREEN ki baat sun..


MAHI man me-love story toh tab banegi naa jab RAAZ ki sansein chalengi...pata nahi kyun isse lagta hai ki isse kuch ho jaayega...

par unsure hokar toh kuch kehta hi nahi hai ye...par kya ho sakti hai woh cheez jisse isse lagta hai ki iski...!!!

nahi nahi..ye mai kya soch rahi hun..mai kuch nahi hone dungi apne RAAZ ko...uski taraf badhti hui mout ko mujhse hokar guzarna padega...

REGIS-ok then..toh demo mere saath perform karega phir RAAZ...


MAHI ye sab soch hi rahi thi ki tabhi REGIS ke awaaz se jaise present me jhatke se waapas aayi woh..

wahin REGIS ki baat par SAPIUS ya HIDA kuch kehte ki tabhi..


VALDIS-WHIZZDER,i have a request...agar demo me part ek SAVENT le raha hai toh uske saamne bhi ek SAVENT ko hi hona chahiye..

isse hum sab SAVENTS me excitement aur confidence, dono
hi badh jaayega...

jahan VALDIS ki baat par uske friends ne haan me haan milayi, wahin teeno WHIZZES aur WHIZZDERS ko bhi uski baat janchi but is suggestion par ek sawal bhi tha aur isiliye...


REGIS-idea acha hai VALDIS but ye possible nahi hai..haan, RAAZ ko is combat technique ke baare me maalum hai but uske alawa aur koi SAVENT iske baare me nahi jaanta..


MUJHE PATA HAI INVISIBLE WEAPONS COMBAT KE BAARE ME..I WILL PERFORM...


piche baithe VIDEOUS ne khade hote hue kahi ye baat jispar sabki nazar uspar padi aur...


HIDA-are you sure VIDEOUS....!!!

WOOOOO.....

HIDA ne sawal kiya hi tha ki tabhi uske aur baaki dono WHIZZDERS ne apni taraf aate hue kuch adrishya weapons ko feel kiya par isse pehle ki woh un weapons ko rokte,woh weapons wapas lout gaye the aur issi cheez par react kiya tha un sabne...

wahin is achanak hue action ke baad ab un teeno ke face par hairani thi aur issi hairani ke saath woh VIDEOUS ko dekh rahe the...

reason..

un teeno ko hi pata tha ki abhi abhi jo hua,woh VIDEOUS ne kiya tha par hairan woh is baat ko lekar the ki VIDEOUS ne abhi abhi jo invisible weapons use me laaye the,waisa karne ke liye usne SPELL uccharit nahi kiya tha balki bas budbudaya tha..

aur aisa sirf wahi kar sakta tha jisne SAMOGAMA SHASHTRAM SPELL ko apne body ke saath nahi balki apne SOUL ke saath merge kar liya tha.

aur ye ek PHASE 3 level ka hunar tha jisse VIDEOUS ne naa sirf seekh liya th balki perfect bhi kar liya tha aur yahi sab dekh aur jaan woh teeno kaafi hairan hue the..

wahin saare SAVENTS ne bhi kuch invisible par behadh powerful chiz hawa me mehsoos ki thi jisse feel kar woh sab bhi hairan the..

par in sabke beech ACCHUTA, SLUNDER aur BRAWNY bhi the jinhone naa sirf un invisible weapons ko feel kiya tha balki un weapons ki movement aur displacement tak se woh teeno waakif the..

unhe pata tha ki VIDEOUS ne aaj sikhaye jaane waali kala ka aur apne worthy hona ka first demo de diya aur ye jaan woh halke halke smile kar rahe the...

khair, VIDEOUS ke is presentation ke baad ab jahan HIDA relaxed thi,wahin REGIS aur SAPIUS ko ab VIDEOUS ki jagah RAAZ ki fikr ho rahi thi..

jis level ka demo abhi VIDEOUS ne dikhaya tha,usse dekh unhe RAAZ ke injured hone ka dar tha par woh dono ye bhi jaante the ki RAAZ kitna stubborn hai..

aur jab baat challenge ki aati hai toh backoff karna usse aata hi nahi isiliye ek thandi saans bharte hue..


SAPIUS-lets walk to the GREAT HALL...


ye bol jahan SAPIUS, REGIS aur HIDA aage badh gaye wahin sabhi SAVENTS bhi un teeno ke piche ho liye...

is beech MAHI ne ek baar phirse mujhse baat karne ki koshish ki par ACCHUTA aur baaki sabne usse aisa nahi karne diya....

woh sab nahi chahte the ki mujhe samjhane ke chakkar me MAHI ki insult ho...

anyways,apne man ko maarti hui MAHI bhi baaki sabke saath THE GREAT HALL ki taraf badh gayi....




THE GREAT HALL:-



HIDA-toh equation simple hai SAVENTS....

aap dono hi ek dusre par ek ke baad kuch INVISIBLE WEAPONS se attack karenge..

chaahe toh direct matlab straight kijiye aur chaahe toh zigzag pattern me...

jiska bhi hit saamne waale ko lag gaye,woh jeet jaayega...

lekin ek baat ka dhyan rahe, weapons chaahe aap jo bhi chune,ek chune yaa phir multiple,un weapons ki sharpness bohot kam honi chahiye taaki us weapon ke lagne ke baad bhi saamne waala injured naa ho jaaye...

ye sirf ek demo hai,isse demo bi rakhiyega..

got it...!!!

MAI/VIDEOUS-yes....


ek dusre kse kareeb 30 feet door aamne saamne khade the mai aur VIDEOUS..

jahan mai normal hi tha wahin VIDEOUS ki aankhon me ek chamak thi..

ek negetive chamak..waise ye negetive chamak bhi normal hi thi...

ab bande ka ATTITUDE hi negetive hai toh aankhon me positiveness toh aane se rahi....!!!

anyways, HIDA ne apni baat keh di thi jiska matlab tha ki ab hum jab chaahe,demo dena start kar sakte the...

wahin saare SAVENTS aankhon me excitement liye hum dono ko dekh hi rahe the ki tabhi....


VIDEOUS-taiyaar hai RAAZ..!!!!


SSSSSSWWWWSWWWWSSWWW


VIDEOUS ka sawal pura hua hi tha ki tabhi uske chaaron taraf ek ajeeb si awaaz uthne lagi jisse naa toh SAVENTS samajh paaye aur naahi turant teeno WHIZZ aur WHIZZDERS ke palle kuch pada tha..


par phir pehle HIDA ke aur phir dono WHIZZDERS ko un awaazon se nikalne waale intensity se sab samajh aa gaya aur aisa hote hi jahan ek taraf HIDA bas hairan thi ki itna intense waar maine kyun chuna hai woh bhi sirf ek demo me wahin SAPIUS aur REGIS ke toh dimag hi fuse ho chuke the..

kyunki woh dono hi ye jaan gaye the ki maine ek saath 100 se zyada alag alag ke astra aur shastra joki gayab awastha me the,unka awahan kar bulaya hua hai aur ye koi choti baat toh thi nahi..

bina SPELL bole maine ye kiya tha aur saath hi badi dakshata se un saare invisible astron ko sanchalit bhi kar raha tha..

ab itna kuch mere kar lene se un dono ka hairan hona toh banta hi tha..

wahin in sabke beech VIDEOUS bohot shaanti se khada tha...

aur kuch pal baad jab mere awahan kiye saare astra shashtra uski taraf badhe tab bhi woh shaant hi raha par haan,uske aankhon me halki si movements hui aur aisa hote hi..

TAN..TAN..TAN...TAN...TAN...TAN.....

ek ke baad ek kayi saare astra VIDEOUS ki taraf waise hi invisible mode me prakat hue the jinhone mere awahan kiye hue astron se takrana shuru kar diya tha...

us takrav se sirf awaaz hi nahi aa rahi thi,balki saath hi unke takrane se ek shockwave paida ho raha tha jisse teeno WHIZZES aur WHIZZDERS ke saath sabhi SAVENTS bhi feel kar paa rahe the...

us wave ko feel kar jahan ek taraf HIDA jaan gayi thi ki VIDEOUS bhi meri hi tarah ek exceptional case hai wahin SAVENTS ke beech khadi MAHI ka mere liye dar aur badh gaya tha..

saath hi VIDEOUS ke prati uska ghussa bhi kaafi badh gaya tha..

uska bas chalta toh abhi nichod deti VIDEOUS ko woh..

par filhal woh kuch kar toh sakti thi nahi isiliye bebas si khadi rahi woh apni jagah par...

khair,kuch der tak yunhi mere aur VIDEOUS ke astra shashtra takrate rahe par phir woh sab nirastra hokar gayab ho gaye aur aisa hote hi..


VIDEOUS-ab meri baari...

PHDDDDDDPHDDDDDD.....


VIDEOUS ke kapde ajeeb tarah se aur behadh tezi se phadphadaye aud aisa hote hi uske kapdo se ek behadh strong energy force nikla jisse mehsoos kar teeno hi WHIZZ aur WHIZZDERS ki aankhen badi ho gayi aur un teeno ke mooh se ek saath nikla...


TEENO-VASTRA AGHATAM....


ek behadh hi khatarnaak invisible weapon waar tha ye SPELL joki obviously ATTACH MODE ke tahat SOUL AMPLIFICATION ke under aata tha..

is SPELL ko practice kar use me laana bohot hi mushkil kaam tha par jis tarah se VIDEOUS ke kapde fadfadaye the,usse woh teeno hi samajh gaye ki VIDEOUS ne is SPELL par mastery kar li hai..

par ek dar bhi tha un teeno ko aur woh dua kar rahe the ki unka dar sach me naa badle..

aur woh dar tha VIDEOUS ke bole SPELL ke extreme level ke hone ka..

kyunki agar aisa hua toh uske kapdon me jo fadfadahat hui thi,jaise hi us fadfadahat se release hui hawa dusre kapdon ko touch karti,toh un saare kapdon me bhi halki si fadfadahat hoti jiske agle hi pal unme se bhi invisible astra shashtra bahar nikal jaate jiska matlab tha ki yahan moujud har SAVENT khatre me aa jaata..

teeno WHIZZ aur WHIZZDERS aisa naa ho,ye dua kar rahe the par jab saamne VIDEOUS ho toh dua kaam me aane ke chances kam hi hote hain aur yahan bhi ye hua...

VIDEOUS ke kapdon se release hui hawa jaise hi saare SAVENTS se takrayi,un sabke kapdon me bhi halki kampan hui jiske agle hi pal..

SRRRRRR.....

ek ajeeb si awaaz ke saath kuch invisible but nukile shastra saare SAVENTS ke saamne invisible mode me prakat hokar wahin un sabke aage aur piche tezi se ghumne lage jisse mehsoos karte hi..


HIDA-SAVENTS...dont move an inch... aap sabke saamne invisible astra ghum rahe hain..

agar aap aage yaa piche hue toh woh shashtra aapko chot pahuncha sakte hain...

jahan HIDA ki baat sun majority of the SAVENTS dar se gaye aur apni jagah par jadh hokar khade ho gaye wahin ACCHUTA, SLUNDER aur BRAWNY ko toh waise in shashtron se koi dar ya khatra nahi tha par phir bhi woh teeno bhi shaanti se apni jagah par khade rahe...

khair,in sabke beech tha mai jiski taraf tezi se bohot saare astra shashtra joki VIDEOUS ke kapdon se nikle the,woh badh chuke the par isse pehle ki woh shashtra mere radar ko chhu bhi paate,maine apna haath aage ki taraf tezi se lehraya aur mere aisa karte hi VIDEOUS ki hi tarah ek energy force mere saamne bhi ban gaya jiske bante hi VIDEOUS ke saare shashtra ek hi jagah par rook gaye..

VIDEOUS ke shashtra roopi waar ko toh rok diya tha maine,par jo dimagi waar joki uska asli waar tha,usse pehchaan nahi paaya mai aur jo woh chaahta tha,woh ho gaya...

hua ye ki light speed se meri aur badh rahe uske adrishya shashtron ko rokne ke liye mujhe apna pura concentration saamne rakhna pada aur isiliye jo energy force meri body se nikla tha,uski wajah se mere force aur VIDEOUS ke shashtron ke beech ek tadga impact hua jiski wajah se sirf ek nano second ke liye hi sahi,par VIDEOUS ke mere upar chhode saare shashtra visible ho gaye...

jahan SAVENTS aur teeno WHIZZ aur WHIZZDERS apne aage piche hawa me ghum rahe shahstron par concentrate kar rahe the wahin MAHI hi ek aisi shaksh thi jiska dhyan abhi bhi khudpar nahi balki mujhpar tha aur yahi wajah thi ki woh nano second ke liye dikhne waale shashtra uski aankhon se nahi chhup paaye..

un shashtron ki sankhya aur mere retaliation waale force ki wajah se unme aayi tez kampan ko dekh MAHI hadh se zyada dar gayi thi...

aur tabhi uska dar ek level tak aur tab badh gaya jab usne mere piche bhi kuch halke visible shashtron ko prakat hote aur phir meri taraf badhte dekha aur jab aisa hua toh uski zubaan toh jaise sil hi ho gayi par uske kadam khudbakhud aage badh gaye is baat ko completely bhulte hue ki uske aage aur piche bhi do adrishya shahstra ghum rahe the...

wahin jaise hi VIDEOUS ne mere piche bhi shashtra create kar mujhpar humla kiya toh mujhe is baat ka pata chal chuka tha aur isiliye isse pehle ki mere piche se meri taraf aate shastra mujhe chhu bhi paate,maine apne piche bhi ek energy force create kar diya tha jisse takrate hi woh saare shashtra aage nahi badh paaye par tabhi..


AHHHH....AHHHHHHH....

ek ke baad ek do baar cheekh sunayi di mujhe aur mere saath baaki sabko bhi jisse sun ALFREEN ki cheekh nikal gayi..

MAHI........

ye cheekh MAHI ki thi jo mujhe bachane ke chakkar me khud ko laparwaah kar baithi thi aur phir jab woh aage badhi toh pehle woh shahstra jo uske saamne tha joki ek GADE ke akaar ka solid crusher tha aur tezi se apni jagah par gol ghum raha tha,woh sidhe MAHI ke sir ko hit hua aur aisa hote hi pehli cheekh ke saath MAHI piche ki tarah ghumte hue halki si udi par tabhi MAHI ke piche ka shahstra joki ek bhala tha aur woh bhi ghum hi raha tha,MAHI ke kareeb aate hi us bhaale ka nok MAHI ke peeth ko cheerta hua nikal gaya jisse uske mooh se dusri cheekh nikli aur MAHI side ki taraf dham karkar gir gayi..

first hit joki uske sir par hua tha, uski wajah se behosh hone lagi thi MAHI..is beech apne peeth par gilepan ka ehsaas bhi hua usse jisse feel kar woh samajh gayi ki usse tez bleeding ho rahi hai...

ye feel karte hue woh puri behosh ho chuki thi..

wahin MAHI ki cheekh sun ek saath do chizen hui...


pehli..

ACCHUTA, BRAWNY aur SLUNDER,teeno ne hi turant apne haath hawa me ghumaye aur unke aisa karte hi unke aur baaki saare SAVENTS ke aage hawa me ghum rahe shashtra nishkriya hokar gayab ho gaye..

teeno WHIZZ aur WHIZZDERS ne bhi yahi kiya tha..

dusri..

ek baar MAHI ke behosh sharir ko dekh meri nazar saamne khade VIDEOUS par padi jo is waqt mujhe dekhkar muskura raha tha jaise bol raha ho ki uska plan kaamiyab hua..

aur ye dekh mera usse dekhna ghurne me badal gaya aur...


MAI-ye nahi karna chahiye tha tujhe....!!!

SAMPURN KANAM AAGHATAM...


apne dono haathon ko har taraf lehrate hue man me socha maine is SPELL ko aur mere aisa karte hi VIDEOUS jahan khada tha,uske chaaron taraf halki kampan ke saath hazaron ki sankhya me invisible weapons prakat hue..

saare shahstra ek dusre se jude hue the aur un sabne VIDEOUS ko halka sa bhi gap nahi diya tha jisse ki woh ud kar bache yaa phir gayab bhi ho sake..

kyunki gayab hone ke liye bhi ek halki si hi sahi par khuli jagah chahiye jiske through apne body ko invisible karne ke baad nikala jaa sake par woh space VIDEOUS ke paas nahi tha...

aur ye dekh us slight space ko create karne ke liye VIDEOUS ne apna haath aage lehrane ki sochi jisse uske haath se nikle energy se shashtra halke hi sahi hile jisse usse jagah mil sake par woh aisa karta ki tabhi...

maine apna haath aage kiya aur mere aisa karte hi VIDEOUS ka haath aage ki taraf lehrana toh door ki baat hai,hil bhi nahi paaya..

reason...

SPRADHAM VARJITE

MOVEMENT BLOCK...

is SPELL ke through apni jagah par khade khade hi maine VIDEOUS ke har movement ko block kar diya tha..

woh jo bhi karta,ek combat ki hi tarah uske har waar ko yaa harkat ko block kar sakta tha mai...

wahin apne haathon ko yun jakadte dekh VIDEOUS ne meri taraf halke ghusse de dekha aur phir shuru kiya usne lagana apna dum taaki meri grip usse chhut sake par apni aloukik shaktiyon ke bina ye karna uske liye asambhav tha...

par mai abhi jo chaahe kar sakta tha aur isiliye apne wrist ko ghumaya maine aur mere aisa karte hi VIDEOUS ko aisa laga jaise maine uski dono kalayi pakad li hai par isse pehle ki woh mere hatheli ko jhatakne ki koshish karta,

maine usse uski kalayiyon ke through hawa me ucchal diya aur jab aisa hua toh...


DHAABBBB....DHABBBB...DHABBBB.....


VIDEOUS ka sharir hawa me udta hua sidhe saamne ki taraf jahan shashtra ghum rahe the,unse takraya aur aisa hote hi un shashtron ne VIDEOUS ko hit karte hue dusri taraf fek diya jahan uske swagat me dusre shashtra ready hokar ghum rahe the aur isiliye jaise hi VIDEOUS ki body un shashtron ke range me aayi toh un shashtron ne bhi usse hit karte hue dusri taraf ucchal diya aur iske baad VIDEOUS ka body ek badminton ke CORK ki tarah ek disha se dusri disha ki taraf udne laga jisse dekh..


REGIS-RAAZ stop it...VIDEOUS ko chhodo...bhul gaye kya ki ye sirf ek demonstration hai,aur kuch nahi...

HIDA-haan RAAZ..aur MAHI ke saath jo hua,woh uski laparwaahi ki wajah se hua..agar woh apni hi jagah par rehti toh usse kuch bhi nahi hota...


jahan REGIS aur HIDA ki baat sun sabki nazar VIDEOUS aur uski CORK jaisi haalat par padi aur woh dar gaye wahin HIDA ki baat sun maine apna sir uski naasamjhi par halka sa left right hilaya...

waise uski bhi kya galti...!!!HIDA ko kahan maalum tha ki jo hua,ye is VIDEOUS ka hi kiya dhara tha..

khair,HIDA ki baat par maine apna haath ek baar phir se lehraya aur mere aisa karte hi mere create kiye gaye saare shashtra gayab ho gaye aur VIDEOUS neeche gir gaya..

aur jab aisa hua toh...


HIDA-REGIS,aap MAHI ko lekar HEALING section me jaaiye..mai VIDEOUS ko dekhti hun..

HIDA ki baat sun REGIS ne MAHI ko apni godh me uthaya aur aage badh gaye...

saare SAVENTS bhi unke saath ho liye the..HIDA bhi kuch aage tak gayi thi un sabke saath..

wahin is beech meri nazar VIDEOUS par thi jo abhi apni jagah par baitha apne upari kapdo ko jhaadte hue mujhe hi dekh raha tha..

usse kuch physical cut nahi aaya tha..aata bhi kaise..??saale ne hazaron talented WICKED SAVENTS ka AURA jo lapeta hua tha..

aur isiliye uske body ko pierce karna aam weapons ke bas ki baat nahi thi...

khair mujhe apni taraf dekhta dekh uske face par ek smile aa gayi aur usne mujh dekhte hue ek wink kiya...

wahin ek aur pal VIDEOUS ko dekh mai bhi THE GREAT HALL se bahar ki taraf nikal gaya..

is beech HIDA bhi VIDEOUS ke paas pahunch chuki thi aur jab usne VIDEOUS ko apne kapde jhaadte hue araam se khade hue dekha toh..


HIDA-thank god tumhe kuch nahi hua VIDEOUS...

VIDEOUS-VIDEOUS ko kuch ho sakta bhi nahi WHIZZ..aap MAHI ko dekhiye..make sure she lives...

HIDA-woh theek ho jaayegi..cut gehra zaroor hai but it can be taken care of...so,you dont worry...she will live..

VIDEOUS-she has to...aisi maut me maza kahan...????zindagi ki shuruat jab kisike saath hui hai,toh maut bhi uske saath hi honi chahiye...

HIDA-matlab..!!!

VIDEOUS-aa jaayega samajh..sahi waqt toh aane dijiye...


ye bol VIDEOUS ruka nahi,bahar nikal gaya wahin HIDA usse jaate dekhti rahi aur uski baaton ke matlab ko samajhne ki koshish karti rahi par jab uske palle kuch nahi pada toh..

HIDA-kabhi kabhi ye bhi mujhe RAAZ ka xerox hi lagta hai..kab kya bolta hai,pata hi nahi chalta...!!!






PLACE-HEALING ROOM



I WILL TAKE IT FROM HERE....


MAHI,ek bed par leti hui thi aur REGIS kuch jadibutiyon ka ras mix kar hi rahe the ki tabhi unke piche se aayi thi ye awaaz jisse sun jaise hi woh piche palte toh apne saamne khade sakshiyat ko dekh halka hadbada gaye..

unke saamne SOVES SHAILA khadi thi..ab SHAILA toh PHASE 2 kya PHASE 3 ke WHIZZES aur WHIZZDERS se bhi personally khud jaakar nahi milti thi,toh aise me unhe apne saamne dekhkar REGIS ka hadbadana toh laazmi hi tha..

khair,ab jab khud SHAILA MAHI ka checkup kar usse completely heal karne waali thi,ye janane ke baad REGIS ka wahan rookne ka koi matlab hi nahi tha...

aur isiliye..


REGIS-i will take your leave than SOVES...


apni baat keh sir jhukaaye hue hi REGIS healing room se bahar nikal gaye aur unke baahar nikal hi ACCHUTA,MABEL, ALFREEN SLUNDER aur BRAWNY jo wahin bahar hi khade MAHI ka theek hone ka wait kar rahe the, woh sab REGIS ke saamne aa gaye aur...


ALFREEN-how is MAHI WHIZZDER..??

MABEL-woh theek oh ho jaayegi naa..!!

SLUNDER-is he awake now...!!!

REGIS-relax SAVENTS.. sirf physical cut hua hai uski body me...aur sir par jo hit hua hai MAHI ke,jisse woh behosh ho gayi thi,usme bhi koi darne waali baat nahi thi...

filhal toh behosh hi hai woh but bohot jald usse hosh bhi aa jaayega aur uske cuts bhi pure heal ho jaayenge...

waise bhi,aap sabne SOVES SHAILA ko andar jaate dekha hoga,toh aise me agar kuch serious bhi hua hota,tab bhi MAHI ko theek ho jaana tha..

haan,usse hosh me aane ke liye kamsekam 2 ghanta toh lagega hi,toh agar aap sab chaahen toh apne apne ABODES jaa sakte hain..

2 ghante baad aa jaaiyega yaa phir MAHI se uske ABODE me hi mil lijiyega...

ALREEEN-no WHIZZDER,we will wait here.. hum usse saath lekar hi jaayenge..


ALFREEN ki baat par smile karte hue aage badh gaye REGIS aur unke jaate hi..


MABEL-ye sab us VIDEOUS ki wajah se hua hai..mai chhodungi nahi usse...

ACCHUTA-aisa sochna bhi mat..RAAZ ke hum strictly kaha tha ki VIDEOUS se hume khud involve nahi hona hai...

aur tum jaanti ho ki RAAZ kabhi kuch bhi yunhi nahi kehta isiliye koi usse kuch nahi kahega..

SLUNDER-waise bhi , WHIZZ HIDA ne kaha tha naa ki MAHI apni galti ki wajah se behosh hui hai.. isiliye chhodo is baat ko...


SLUNDER ki baat par koi kuch kehta ki tabhi un sabko mai saamne se aata dikha jiske baad unke discussion ka full stop lag gaya..

wahin jab mai unsabse guzarkar HEALING ROOM ke door ko kholne ko hua toh..


SLUNDER-RAAZ...andar SOVES SHAILA hai..

MAI-toh..


ye bol maine door khola aur andar chala gaya jisse dekh jahan ek taraf SLUNDER, ACCHUTA aur BRAWNY has diye wahin ALFREEN aur MABEL ka mooh ban gaya aur..


ALFREEN-ye SOVES ko bhi kuch nahi samajhta kya..???

ACCHUTA-RAAZ hawa ki tarah hai ALFREEN...jagah dekhkar nahi behti..apne hisaab se chalti hai...




INSIDE HEALING ROOM:-



SHAILA-kya dekh rahe ho RAAZ...!!???

MAI-behoshi me utni bewakuf lagti nahi hai jitni asal me hai...


MAHI ke behosh chehre ko dekhkar kahi ye baat maine jispar pehle toh SHAILA muskurayi aur phir....


SHAILA-waise aaj ke iski bewakufi ka reason toh tum the RAAZ....

apna woh RAAZ jo ab tak sirf tum tak tha,tumne mere through isse disclose karwa diya jiska natija aaj ki iski harkat hai...


SHAILA ki baat sun maine kuch kaha nahi jispar..


SHAILA-ek baat puchun..??aakhir kyun...???kya zaroorat thi tumhe apne RAAZ ko isse share karne ki...??

MAI-do wajah hain,ek ka toh pata hi hai aapko...

SHAILA-haan,par us wajah ke liye isse apni mout ke baare me batane ki kya zaroorat padh gayi tumhe...???

woh wajah toh waise bhi puri hogi aur kaise hogi,iske liye tumhe sir khapaane ki zaroorat hai hi nahi..

MAI-hmm...par meri kismat me mout hai,ye jaankar iski nazar har waqt mujhpar rahegi jisse us wajah ke anjaam tak pahunchne me asaani hogi...

SHAILA-aur dusri wajah...!!!

MAI-ek baat bataiye,aur sidhe sidhe bataiye,kya mera khatm hona kisi bhi tarah tal sakta hai...???


mere is sawal par kuch pal dekha SHAILA ne mujhe aur phir..

SHAILA-nahi...tumhari aur VIDEOUS ki ladhayi me yaa toh tum khatm ho jaaoge,aur agar kisi tarah tumne VIDEOUS ko khatm kar bhi diya toh uski keemat tumhari puri urja hogi...

aur kyunki tum aur VIDEOUS ek hi urja se bane ho, isiliye khatm hote hote bhi VIDEOUS ki urja tumhari urja ko bhi khudme sokh kar tumhaare har swaroop ko nigal jaayegi....

MAI-woh ant jo nishtit hai,uske baare me usse kyun chuppaya jaaye jo meri hi tarah is kahani ka mukhya kendra hai..

MAHI ke aankhon me mere liye junoon har guzarte din ke saath badhta chala jaa raha hai..

kohish karkar dekh li maine,par iske junoon ko mera rukhapan rok nahi paa raha tha..

pa mera bhavishaya jaan shayad ye khud ko mere bina soch sakegi...

haan,aaj ka iska action zaroor negetive tha par saath hi aisa hona normal bhi tha..

aag jab nayi nayi jalti hai toh uski law hadh se zyada fadfadati hai par phir woh khudko vatavaran ke anukul kar hi leti hai..

MAHI ke dil me bhi abhi nayi nayi aag lagi hai..jab ye sach ko accept kar legi,shaant ho jaayegi...


ye bol mai palat kar jaane laga par tabhi SHAILA ki awaaz aur baat ko sun mere kadam rook gaye...


SHAILA-ek baat ka jawab doge..sidhe sidhe..do u also have feelings for MAHI...???do you love her...???

MAI-jis pyar ki tum baat kar rahi ho,woh insaanso aur living creatures ke liye hoti hai..

aur mai ek robot hun SHAILA...jiski uttpatti ka sirf ek uddeshya hai...VIDEOUS ka khaatma..

ek yahi folder stored hai mere system me....aur kuch nahi...


ye bol mai rooka nahi aur room se bahar nikal gaya..

wahin meri baat sun mere jaane ke baad ek lambi aur thandi saans chhodi SHAILA ne aur....


SHAILA-yahin toh galat ho tum RAAZ....but taklif ye hai ki tumhe khud apne galat hone ka andaza tak nahi....par kar bhi kya sakte hain...????

woh waqt bohot nazdik hai jab tumhe apne robot hone ki galatfehmi ke baare me pata chalega....

...WAQT...!!!



aakhir,kisne socha tha ki waqt ek aisa khel RACHEGA....

sahi ho yaa galat,har taraf ek kohraam MACHEHGA....

woh waqt nazdik hai jab tu hoga apne wajood se rubaroo,aur tab,

mujhe dar hai ki ye sansaar VIDEOUS se nahi,tujhse kaise BACHEGA....!!!!!














AAJ KE LIYE ITNA HI.....














AAPKA APNA V....J.....
Super fantastic update bhai maza aa gya
 

Rudrathakur

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Ye raaz ke raaz hi birbal ki khichdi hue ja rhe h raaz ke andar raaz fir un raaz ke andr bhi raaz h ek khulta nhi ki 10 aur raaz samne ? Mark lekr khade ho jayenge...
Kahan wo soch rha h ki abhi nnya nya pyaar h kuchh waqt me sach jaan kr khtm ho jayega pr wo kahan janta h ki saccha pyaar cheez kya h jo pyaar bhagwan tk ko jhukane ki taqat rkhta h unko unke liye faislo me chnge laane ko majbur kr deta h. Niyati ko bhi badalne ki kshamta rkhta h usko wo soch rha h ki khtm ho jayega srf itne se sach ko hi jaankar ...sacche pyaar ki to hmesha se hi yhi kahani rhi h usme kurbaniyo ki pratha hmesha se rhi h to iss baar bhi waisa hi h...
Agr uhi kuchh hasil ho jaye to mhnt krni hi kyu..
Aur according to soves raaz ko abhi apne purn wajood ka bhaan hi nhi h aur jb waqt aane pr pta chlega use to uske baad ke haal ko jaankr wo bhi drr rhi h aakhir kya chhipa h uske wajood me aisa jo usko bad se badtar bhi bna skta h aur shresth bhi... Apna santulan khoya to badtar bnega aur santulan kayam rkha to shresth bhi. Baki dekhte h mahi ka pyaar aur uske iss kahani ka mukhya kirdar bnne me kitna waqt lgega aur raaz ko apna wajood jaanne me ...
To intzaar rhega aane wale sbhi dhamako ka. Akhir kuchh to h raaz ke andr mahi ke liye bhi jo wo nhi chahta ki bahar aaye aur uske bahar aane se wo videous ke samne kamjor pad mission ke failed hone ke chance badha de...baki dekhte h ..
Waiting brother gjb update
 

vj4u

"Be The Wrong That Makes Everything Right"....
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wowww.......nice update bro
to aakhir mahi ko raaz ka raaz pta chlanr ki piche ka raaz bhi raaz hi tha.....
dekhte h ab mahi raaz k liye kya kya krti h.....
but bro ab tk is story m ronit or anjli [ mahi's parents ] kha h ...wo dikhe hi nhi...
nd jesa aapne kha ki raaz se bachane ka dr h duniya ko to kya raaz bhi ek devil ki trh behave krne lg jayea.......jesa aapne phle bhi kha tha ki asli devil kya hota h ye raaz videous ko batayega........ab jb story m raaz bhi devil hi banega or usse bhi duniya k khtm hone ka dar h to ek devil ko khtm krne k liye dusra devil hi kyo laya gya........or agr lana tha to esi situaton kyo bni ki raaz se bhi duniya k khtm hone ka dar ho.........

brother,mujhe pata hai ki ye attitude 2 first part se bohot zyada complicated hai par aisa hona hi tha...

yakin maaniye,iske revalations bhi aur har point joki dusre points se kahin na kahin juda hua hai,bohot zyada drastic hai...

aur kyunki ye part first part se lamba hai, isiliye bohot kuch ab bhi parde me hi hai...

isiliye bas padhte jaaiye brother..saare sawalon ke jawab jinke milne par mai ye guarantee ke saath keh sakta hun ki wakayi aapka dimag ghum jaayega,bohot jald milne waala hai...

bohot jald is chapter ka end hone waala hai jisme SHAILA ke dar ka kaaran pata chal jaayega..aur woh waqt bas aane hi waala hai..

bas padhte jaaiye...aur saath bane rahiye
 
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