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Fantasy ATTITUDE (KABHI ANGEL KABHI DEVIL) ( Completed )

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AB TAK AAPNE PADHA KI JAHAN EK TARAF ACCHUTA AUR MABEL MR AUR MISS CHOSENS BAN JAATE HAIN WAHIN DUSRI TARAF CHALLENGE HAARNE PAR RAAZ MAHI KE UPAR BHADAK JAATA HAI.

AB AAGE:-


CHAPTER-2


(UNEARTH THE IMMORTALS)



UPDATE-114



PLANET-ELYSIAN


PLACE-ALFREEN'S ABODE





HAHAHAHA....IS PIC KO DEKHKAR KAUN KEH SAKTA HAI KI ISME KHADA LADKA WAHI RAAZ HAI JO AB SABKE SAAMNE HAI...!!!!


ek badi si photo album ko jisse pakad sofe par baithe the FLORIN aur MARIA,usme se RAAZ ke bachpan ki ek pic jisme woh dubla patla sa tha,dekh kar haste hue kahi ye baat MARIA ne jispar FLORIN bhi muskurane lage aur...


FLORIN-waqt kahan se kahan pahunch gaya,hum kahan se kahan pahunch gaye,pata hi nahi chala...

pata hai MARIA,jab ALFREEN humse door ho gayi thi, hume laga tha ki hum usse kabhi nahi dekh paayenge toh uske baad se hi life se man ub gaya tha...

par phir humne orphanage khola,wahan baccho ke beech rehkar bhi woh khaalipan jo hamari beti ke jaane se mai feel karta tha,woh bhara nahi...

lekin phir ye RAAZ hamare orphanage me aaya..sabse alag,sahi shabd kahun toh sabse ajeeb....

naa toh kisise has ke baat karna aur naahi kisi se dosti rakhna...

khudko ek shell me band karke rakha is ladke ne har waqt...

humse bhi kabhi sidhe mooh baat nahi ki...par itne negetiveness ke baad bhi apne hi tarah ek ajeeb tarike se ek paheli ban kar mere dil ke khaalipan ko thoda thoda bhar diya usne....

MARIA-bilkul sach ye hai..aur dekhiye naa,aakhirkar RAAZ hi woh zariya bana jisse hum apni beti se dobara mil paaye...

FLORIN-hmm..pata hai,uska hamesha dikhane waale cold behavior ke baawjud mujhe uspar kabhi ghussa nahi aaya tha...

MARIA-mujhe bhi..par haan,mai hamesha se chahti thi ki ek baar,sirf ek baar usse muskurate hue dekhun joki finally yahan CHOSENS me possible ho paaya...

FLORIN-aakhir yahi toh uski destination thi... shayad isiliye yahan pahunchne ke baad usme saare changes bhi aane lage...

MARIA-hmm... chehra,sharir pura badal gaya RAAZ ka,par aaankhen nahi badli..

aur naahi badla uska woh bhaav..
uski aankhon me aaj bhi ek khaalipan dikhta hai...

pata nahi kis cheez ki talash hai usse...??par jab bhi mai us khaalipan ko dekhti hun,mujhe bohot taklif hoti hai...

FLORIN-ye toh maine bhi gour kiya hai..par pata nahi kyun lekin mujhe lagta hai ki shayad RAAZ khud bhi apne aankhon ke khaalipan se anjaan hai...

kyunki anjaane me hi sahi,uske face par kabhi udaasi nahi dekhi maine...


KISKI UDAASI KI BAAT KAR RAHE HO POPS....???


saamne se aati hui ALFREEN ne kahi ye baat jiske baad woh sidhe apne mom dad ke beech me jaakar baith gayi...

apni beti ko dekh MARIA ne bhi apne haathon me rakha photo album band kar diya tha..


MARIA-tu itni jaldi aa gayi...GALA night khatm ho gaya..!!!

ALFREEN-nahi, chalu hai..par mujhe bor lag raha tha,mood bhi off ho gaya tha isiliye mai wapas aa gayi...

FLORIN-arre,hamari beti ka mood kaise off ho gaya bhala...???

ALFREEN-chhodo naa pops.. friendz stuff...aap batao, kiski udaasi ki baat kar rahe the aap...???

FLORIN-RAAZ ki...

ALFREEN-RAAZ, aur udaas..!!!woh khud udaas nahi hota,haan,baaki sabko zaroor karta rehta hai...

MARIA-ab kya kar diya usne...???

ALFREEN-usne MAHI ko ka gala daba diya tha..us bechari ka pura face red ho gaya tha...idiot, stupid...completely insensitive & mean...

FLORIN-toh ye reason hai hamari princess ke moof off hone ka..

acha,what was the reason....!!!

ALFEEN-reason..!!!aapko lagta hai ki RAAZ ko kuch bhi karne ke liye kisi reason ki zaroorat hai..!!!

MARIA-hume lagta nahi hai,hum jaante hain...and mind you,hum dono RAAZ ko sabse better jaante hain..

isiliye uski burayi karne se pehle reason batao...


MARIA ke is baat par ALFREEN ne last challenge me jo hua aur uske baad RAAZ ne no kiya woh sab kuch bata diya jispar...


FLORIN- cristy yaad hai tumhe AL...wahi ladki jisse tumne bachpan me slap kiya tha...

ALFREEN-haan yaad hai,par uske baare me abhi kyun baat ho rahi hai..???

FLORIN-batata hun..par pehle ye tum batao ki kyun slap kiya tha tumne usse aur woh bhi itni zor se ki uske lips ke side areas fath gaye the..

ALFREEN-reason toh pata hi hai aapko pops...hum relay partners the...aur sirf uske casual approach ki wajah se first time mai kisi race me second aayi thi..

FLORIN-thik waise hi jaise aaj MAHI ki wajah se RAAZ second ho gaya...

aise me frustrate hona,ghussa hona toh normal hai naa...

ALFREEN-par dad MAHI ne jo kiya,ye uske bhale ke liye hi kiya.. challenge ke waqt maine khud dekha tha, RAAZ was not all looking good...

woh emotional pain jo us challenge me woh feel kar raha tha,agar waise chalte rehta toh usse uski haalat bohot zyada kharab ho jaati..

MAHI was just trying to help....

FLORIN-help karne se pehle ye jaanana zaroori hota hai ki ki kya saamne waale ko us help ki zaroorat hai...

aur jahan tak baat RAAZ ki hai,toh ab tak itna toh tumhe uske baare me maalum ho jaana chahiye ki uske faisla koi aur le,ye usse pasand nahi..

beta, RAAZ un logon me se hai jinke liye jeet unki life se zyada important hoti hai..

yahi wajah hai ki woh tumhare PHASE me sabse aage hai...beta choice koi universal word nahi, individual hai...

kisse kya karna hai,ye koi dusra tay nahi kar sakta..jitna ye sach hai ki MAHI ne jo kiya,woh RAAZ ke physical behatri ke liye kiya,utna hi sach ye bhi hai ki uski harkat ne RAAZ ko mentally taklif de di aur woh taklif uske physical pain se zyada thi...

aur outcome tha woh action jo RAAZ ne MAHI ke saath kiya... it's all about perception....

ALFREEN-RAAZ un logon me se hai jinke liye jeet unki life se zyada important hoti hai..pops, aisa hi kuch RAAZ ne bhi kaha tha..

aap toh wakayi RAAZ ko kaafi ache se jaante hain..

MARIA-tum bhi jaan sakti ho beta,bas apne choices uspar thopne ki koshish mat karna...

he is harmless untill some one pokes him...

but once you POKE, than he will make sure that you CHOKE...

ALFREEN-but what about MAHI...???woh kaafi sad ho gayi hai...

MARIA-she will get over it...woh samajhdaar hai,teri tarah hot headed nahi...

ALFREEN-how mean mom....!!!

FLORIN-acha ab woh sab chhod aur ye bata ki MR & MISS CHOSENS kaun bana...!!!

ALFREEN-MABEL aur ACCHUTA..aur pata hai POPS, ACCHUTA aur SLUNDER ka bhi RAAZ ki hi tarah complete transformation ho gaya hai....

they both have turned into damn handsome hunks..

FLORIN-ohho.. is my daughter interested in any of them.!!!

ALFREEN-hell no...i am not at all interested in this love shit....aapki beti ka focus sirf khudko better karne me hai..

FLORIN-ye hamari hi beti hai naa...!!!goon toh aadhe hi aaye hain...

ALFREEN-hahaha,very funny...

MARIA-kya funny, dekh MABEL ne bhi apne liye ladka dhundh liya hai..kya naam tha uska,haan, VALDIS....

woh toh bohot khush hoga aaj,uski gf MISS CHOSENS ban gayi..

ALFREEN-pata nahi par aaj bohot ajeeb behave kar raha tha woh..

maine door se dekha,MABEL se shayad halka rough hokar kuch kaha shayad usne..

kyunki MABEL ka face utar gaya tha...

FLORIN-arre,jab MABEL sad thi toh tu usse chhodkar kyun chali aayi... you should have been by her side...

ALFREEN-RAAZ ki wajah se...

MARIA-RAAZ ki wajah se, matlab....!!!

ALFREEN-exactly toh nahi pata,kal pata chalega... actually mujhe SLUNDER ne kaha ki RAAZ ne kaha hai ki aaj MABEL ko akela chhodna hai...

reason toh nahi bataya,bas itna kaha ki MABEL ke liye ye important hai...

MARIA-aaah,ek taraf tu RAAZ ko insensitive keh rahi thi aur dusri taraf uski baat jo usne directly tujhse nahi ki balki SLUNDER ke through apni baat pahunchwayi,usse ek baar me maan liya...

ALFREEN-mom,jo bhi ho,i know a thing for a fact ki RAAZ kuch bhi yunhi naa kehta hai,naa karta hai..

infact sometimes i feel ki uski thinking is beyond anybody's imaginations...

toh aise me kya doubt karun uske kisi baat par... waise bhi,kal toh pata chal hi jaana hai....

MARIA-jo baat abhi abhi tune humse kahi naa,woh hamesha khud yaad rakha kar..khush rahegi....

ALFREEN-kuch zyada hi tarafdaari nahi karte aap dono RAAZ ka...

khaaskar tabse ye taarif zyada hi badh gayi hai jabse SOVES se request kar ye ORPHANAGE ki photo album EARTH se aapne mangwayi hai...

anyways, aap dekhiye apni album..mai chali fresh hone...


jahan ye bol ALFREEN sofe se uth apne room ki taraf badh gayi wahin uski baat sun MARIA aur FLORIN muskuraye aur wapas album ko khol uske panne paltaane lage....






PLACE-CHOSENS


THE GREAT HALL




LAAYA..!!!!


VALDIS ke is sawal par uske dost ne bina kuch kahe ek hare colour ka churn joki ek polithin ke andar rakha hua tha,uske aage kar diya jisse haathon me pakad face par ek devilish muskaan liye...


VALDIS-VASHIBHOOTAM POUDHE KA CHURN....

aaj yahi churn meri nayya paar lagayega....


VASHIBHOOTAM POUDA FORBIDDEN FOREST me paaye jaane waala poudha hai jiske patton ka churn bana agar koi bhi dravya ke saath milakar kisiko bhi pila diya jaaye toh aisa hone ke baad ke kuch minutes baad hi jiske dwara bhi woh churn mishrit dravya pilaya gaya hai,peene waala uske sammohan ka shikar ban jaata hai aur ye sammohan kareeb 12 ghanton tak us shaksh par haawi rehta hai..

is dauran usse is churn ko pilane waala,jo chaahe karwa sakta hai jisse woh sammohit vyakti apni khushi se karta hai...

haan,is sammohan aur normal sammhonan me fark ye hota hai ki jahan normal summohan me vyakti robot jaisa behave karta hai,wahin is churn ko nigalne par hone waale sammohan me vyakti normal behave karta hai...

dekhne par kisi ko bhi pata nahi chalta ki saamne waala vyakti sammohan me hai..

khair,agar kabhi pyar waala paitra fail hota nazar aane lage,toh is BRAMHAASTRA ka jugaad rakha hua tha VALDIS ne jo aaj uske kaam aane waala tha....

haathon me pakde us churn ko apne poket me daal VALDIS chal pada MABEL ke paas jo is waqt apne partner MR CHOSENS ACCHUTA ke saath khadi thi aur SAVENTS usse aur ACCHUTA ko congratulate kar rahe the...

par ab ye congratulate karne ka daur apne aakhri charam par tha...lagbhagh sabhi ne un dono ko MR & MISS CHOSENS banane ke liye badhayi de di thi...

is pure douran ACCHUTA ko apne kareeb paakar MABEL ke man me ek ajeeb se gudgudi ho rahi thi...

woh lagatar apni kankhiyon se ACCHUTA ko dekhe jaa rahi thi...

waise haal toh ACCHUTA ka bhi MABEL se alag nahi tha par apne chehre ko sapat rakha hua tha usne....

khair,ab tak lagbhag sabhi SAVENTS ne un dono ko badhayi de di thi,par un dono ne ek dusre ko hi congrats nahi kaha tha aur isiliye...


MABEL-congrats ACCHUTA...

ACCHUTA-congrats to you too MABEL...anyways,tum toh hamesha se hi MISS CHOSENS banane ki daawedaar thi...

thankfully,aaj luck ne mujhe is is khitaab ke kaabil bana diya...

MABEL-haan,aur tum deserving bhi toh ho....


MABEL ki baat par halke se has diya ACCHUTA jisse naa samajh..


MABEL-hans kyun rahe ho...???

ACCHUTA-apne is naye appearence par....

MABEL-arre,par isme hasne waali kya baat hai..ye badla look toh kaafi jach raha hai tumpar...

ACCHUTA-jaanta hun...aur asar aur result dono hi aaj mile khitaab se dekh liya maine..

hasi bas is baat par aa rahi hai ki mai aaj bhi wahi hun jo pehle tha..

badla sirf roop hai..par sirf is ek badlwaav se logon ka mujhe dekhne ka tarika badal gaya..

auro se jo mujhe jaante hi nahi,unki kya baat karun,par jo mujhe kareeb se jaante hai,woh bhi achanak mujhse zyada impress dikhne lage hain...

unki nazar mujhpar theherne lagi hai... outer appearance se aaye itne drastic badlwaav se hairan bhi hun mai aur mujhe hasi bhi aa rahi hai...


ACCHUTA ki hasi naa khushi waali thi aur naahi dukh waali..ek theraav tha uski hasi me jisse samajh nahi paa rahi thi MABEL..

aur isiliye woh usse kuch kehne ko hui par tabhi...


VALDIS-MABEL,can we talk...!!!


VALDIS ki awaaz sun MABEL ki nazar uspar gayi jo uske saamne hi ek maasum surat banaye khada tha par VALDIS ko dekhte hi MABEL ko uski kahi baatein yaad aa gayi aur uska mood off hone laga..

woh usse baad me baat karne ke liye kehne waali thi par woh kuch kehti usse pehle...


ACCHUTA-excuse me guyzz...


ye bol ACCHUTA SLUNDER ki taraf joki ek ladki ke saath joki WALTZ dance me ACCHUTA ki partner thi,uske saath baitha hua tha,uski taraf badh gaya..

MABEL ka yun ACCHUTA ka jaana acha nahi laga tha par kyunki ab ACCHUTA wahan se nikal chuka tha, isiliye uski nazar VALDIS par padi aur aisa hote hi woh halki chownki...

reason...

VALDIS apne dono kaano ko pakde uthak baithak kar raha tha aur jab MABEL ki nazar uspar padi toh aisa karte hue hi..


VALDIS-sorry MABEL...i behaved like a total jerk... aur us baat ke liye mai tumhe dil se sorry kehta hun... please maaf kar do mujhe...


VALDIS ki baat sun apne sir ko haan me halka hilate hue uski apology ko accept kiya MABEL ne jisse dekh apni uthak baithak ko rokte hue behadh khushi se aage badha VALDIS aur MABEL ke gale lag gaya..

aaj pehli baar tha jab MABEL VALDIS ko aadhe man se hug kar rahi thi aur saath hi aisa karte waqt jab uski nazar ACCHUTA ki taraf padi joki SLUNDER ke saath baitha uski GALA ki first partner ke saath has has kar baat kar raha tha, toh uske dil me ek ajeeb si bechani ne ghar kar liya..

khair,kuch der MABEL ko hug karne ke baad alag hua VALDIS aur..


VALDIS-kaisa b.f hun mai..aaj meri gf MISS CHOSENS bani hai aur naa toh maine usse wish kiya hai aur naahi celebrate karna shuru kiya hai...

koi naa,chalo,DRINKS corner me jaate hain,wahin baith kar tumhare jeet ko celebrate karenge...

MABEL-aaj nahi VALDIS..mera mood nahi hai..phir kabhi celebrate karte hain..waise bhi hamare saare friends toh yahan hai hi nahi..

sabke saath milkar celebrate karenge..

VALDIS-arre woh toh karenge hi..par abhi ke liye ek chota sa celebration toh kar hi sakte hai naa..

chalo naa please..nahi toh mai samjhunga ki tumne mujhe maaf nahi kiya...


MABEL ka mood toh tha nahi par VALDIS ka dil rakhne ke liye...


MABEL-thik hai..par zyada der nahi rukenge... mujhe ghar jaane ka man hai..

VALDIS-now that's my girl..aur sirf ek drink woh bhi bas isiliye taaki hum hamara patch up aur tumhari aaj ki jeet celebrate karen..

that's it....


ye bol MABEL ke haath ko thaamte hue VALDIS wahin side me bane ek BAR counter ki taraf jahan bohot se MOCKTAILS aur COCKTAILS ka bhandar tha,badh gaya aur wahan pahunch MABEL ko ek couch me baithne ko bol woh counter ke dusri taraf khade ek ELUSORY ko joki aaj wahan ka bartender tha,mukhatib hua aur...


VALDIS-one
sparkling berry with pomegranate and one lemon lavender....


sparkling berry with pomegranate MABEL ka favourite drink tha jisse VALDIS ne uske liye order kiya tha....

order kar VALDIS ne ek baar palat kar MABEL ko dekha jo saamne couch par baithi hui thi aur uski nazar thode door par baithe ACCHUTA aur uski aajki first partner par thi aur ye dekh VALDIS je face par ek devil smile naach uthi aur..


VALDIS-jitna dekhna hai dekh le usse MABEL..kuch der aur phir mai bhi tujhe dekhunga aur woh bhi badi tassali ke saath..


ye bol ACCHUTA ne ek baar apni nazar pure hall par ghumayi,ye check karne ke liye ki koi uske raaste ka roda toh wahan moujud nahi hai par aisa koi naa dekh chain ki saans li usne aur wapas saamne palta jahan is waqt woh dono hi drinks jo usne order kiye the,rakhe hue the..

ye dekh badi hoshiyari se aur sawdhaani se usne woh VASHIBHOOTAM POUDHE ka churn nikala aur MABEL ke drink me usse mila diya aur aisa kar woh wapas palta par aisa karte hi woh halka hadbada gaya..

reason...

MABEL usse hi dekh rahi thi.. VALDIS ye soch kar ghabra gaya ki kahin MABEL ne usse us churn ko uski drink me milate hue dekh toh nahi liya par jab MABEL ne usse dekhkar smile kiya,tab jaakar kahin VALDIS ne chain ki saans li...

MABEL ki smile dekh VALDIS bhi muskurate hue aage badha aur MABEL ke saamne sparkling berry with pomegranate drink ko pesh kiya jispar usse thanks kehte hue MABEL ne us drink ko thaam liya jiske baad...


VALDIS-chears.....hamare patchup ke naam...


MABEL ke glass se apne glass ko takrate hue kahi ye baat VALDIS ne jiske baad ek dusre ki aankhon me dekhte hue un dono ne apni apni drink pi li aur jab aisa hua toh...

DMMMMM.....


MABEL ke dimag ko ek jhatka sa laga jiske baad uski aankhen kuch palon ke liye band ho gayi aur ye dekh VALDIS ki aankhen chamak uthi...

wahin kuch der tak aankhen band rakhne ke baad jab MABEL ki aankhen khuli toh uski aankhon me laal dore tairne lage the jisse dekh...


VALDIS-chalen..

MABEL-haan....


MABEL ki razamandi milte hi VALDIS khada hua aur ek taraf badh gaya aur MABEL uske saath ho ki...




KUCH DER BAAD:-


AHHHHH..AHHHHHH......


MABEL ki tez tez siskariyan padh rahi thi VALDIS ke kaano me jinhe aur badhate hue MABEL ke labon ko zoron se chuste aur kaaththe hue hue VALDIS uske boobs ko squeeze karta jaa raha tha...

aisa karte hue VALDIS ke haath MABEL ke boobs se hote hue neeche jaane lage par phir neeche ek jagah par uske haath atak se gaye...

atakne par VALDIS ne halka zor lagaya par jab uske baad bhi uske haath aage nahi badh paaye toh usse halki jhunjhlahat hone lagi isiliye..


VALDIS-ye kya ho raha hai yaar....!!!!


jhunjhlate hue kahi ye baat VALDIS ne aur aisa bol woh aage kuch kehta yaa karta ki tabhi...

CHHAPAKKK......


uske face aur puri body par khoob saara paani pada jiske baad uska sir ghumne lag gaya aur uski aankhen band ho gayi par tabhi...



HAHAHAHAHAHA...

UMMMMMMMMM.......


VALDIS ke kaano me dher saare logon ke hasne ki aur kisi ek ke dheere dheere rone,dono ki awaaz ek saath aane lagi jiske baad jab usne aankhen kholi toh usse laga ek tez jhatka....

woh is waqt THE GREAT HALL me hi neeche baitha hua tha aur uske saamne bohot se SAVENTS usse dekh has rahe the..

un sabko haste dekh VALDIS ko hairani hui aur woh hairani tab hadh se zyada badh gayi jab usne un SAVENTS yaa phir ye kahun SLUNDER aur ACCHUTA ke beech khadi MABEL ko dekha jo aankhon me angaare liye usse dekh rahi thi...


VALDIS man me-MABEL saamne hai toh phir mere saath kaun hai...??

ye sawal khudse karte hue VALDIS ek jhatke se wapas mooda aur aisa karte hi jab uski nazar uske neeche pade shaksh par gayi toh uska dimag hi ghum gaya...

uske neeche is waqt uska wahi dost rote hue leta hua tha jisne usse kuch der pehle VASHIBHOOTAM POUDHE ke churn diya tha...

is waqt us bande ka tuxedo gayab tha,shirt fata hua tha aur saath hi uske hothon se halka halka khoon rees raha tha aur ye sab dekh kuch naa samajh paate hue...


VALDIS-tu yahan mere neeche kya kar raha hai..??aur woh bhi is haalat me...teri shirt fati hui hai, honth se khoon nikal raha hai,saala ye ho kya raha hai...???

kisne maara hai tujhe...!!!

SLUNDER-hum bataate hain beta....


SLUNDER ki baat sun VALDIS wapas uski taraf palta aur jab aisa hua toh....


SLUNDER-sabse pehle ye jaan le ki tere is dost ko kisine maara nahi hai..

iska ye fata haal,iske honth se behta khoon tere aur iske beech abhi abhi hue us pyar bhari ladhayi ki nishani hai jiske gawah hum sab hain...


SLUNDER ka itna kehna tha ki wahan moujud sabhi SAVENTS zoron se hasne lage jisse dekh aur SLUNDER ki baat sun dimag hi fuse ho gaya tha VALDIS ka...


VALDIS-ye kya bakwas kar raha hai tu...!!! maine aisa kuch bhi nahi kiya hai...

SLUNDER-bilkul kiya hai beta,chaahe toh itne log hain yahan,in sabse puch le,yaa phir ussi se puch le,jiski izzat par haath daala hai tune...


SLUNDER ki baat sun VALDIS ki nazar wapas apne dost par gayi jo abhi bhi halka halka subak raha tha..

uski waisi condition dekh VALDIS ko usse kuch puchte hi nahi bana aur isiliye woh chup hi raha jispar..


SLUNDER-chal mai hi bata deta hun...woh jo khun nikal raha hai naa tere dost ke honthon se,woh tere usse zabardasti kiss karte hue kaatne ki wajah se hua hai aur woh shirt,tune jo breast ko chest samajhkar zoron se squeeze kiya hai,uski wajah se fata hai..

SLUNDER ki baat sun jahan ek taraf VALDIS hadh se zyada embarrass ho gaya, wahan moujud ladke SAVENTS zor se hasne lage wahin girl SAVENTS halki sharma gayi jisse dekh..


SLUNDER-sorry girls but in bhai saahab ko,oh sorry,gay sahab ko sach toh batana hi tha..


VALDIS-mai koi gay nahi hun...


cheekh sa utha VALDIS jispar usse bhi tez awaaz me..


ACCHUTA-maalum hai kitna bada mard hai tu...saale,yahin,issi waqt teri saari mardaangi nikal dunga mai,aur tu kya tere baap ko,tere pure khaadaan ko bina lund ke mooh se mootne par majboor kar dunga mai...


ye bol ghusse se bhara khada hua ACCHUTA aage badha aur neeche baithe VALDIS ko uske gale se pakad kisi takiye ki tarah upar hawa me utha diya...

aur ye dekh aur ACCHUTA ke awaaz me bani intensity ko sun aur mehsoos kar jahan ek taraf ab tak jo sab SAVENTS has rahe the,woh ekdum chup ho gaye, SLUNDER muskura utha wahin MABEL jo ab tak behadh ghusse me thi, ACCHUTA ki baat sun itne der me pehli baar uske face par halki si smile aa gayi..

khair, VALDIS ko hawa me uthaye hue hi ek baar phirse dahada ACCHUTA...


ACCHUTA-saale,kya laga tha tujhe...tu MABEL ke saath kuch bhi karne ka sochega aur hum aisa hone denge...

mai toh kab ka teri haalat bigaad chuka hota, bacha tu sirf isiliye tha kyunki MABEL ko pasand tha tu..

aur usse tera asli chehra nahi pata tha aur bina saboot mai uske saamne tujhe nanga nahi karna chahta tha..

par mujhe pata tha ki tere jaise saanp ko jitna bhi doodh pila do,mouka milte hi tu dasne se baaz nahi aayega....

aur isiliye hi har waqt meri nazar tujhpar aur teri harkaton par thi....

FORBIDDEN FOREST ke us do din ke camp ke waqt jab tu puri class se alag hokar apne chamcho ke saath ek disha ki taraf badha tha naa,tab maine peecha kiya tha tera...

aur tab jab tune VASHIBHOOTAM POUDHE ke patton ko toda aur uska churn banane ka instruction apne is dost ko diya,tab hi mai samajh gaya tha ki tu zaroor iska iska istamal MABEL par karne waala hai..

par uske liye tujhe iske kareeb jaana zaroori tha aur tu gaya...

par mai jaanta tha ki pehle tu iske jism ko pyar se haasil karne ki koshish karega aur jab naakamiyab hoga,tab is churn ka paitra aazmayega...

har baar jab bhi tu MABEL ke kareeb hota tha,toh SENSE SPELL ke through meri nazar har baar tujhpar hi rehti thi,aur aaj bhi thi...

tera plan,tere is dost ka apne ABODE se churn laana,sab jaanta tha mai...

man toh kiya ki tujhe aur tere doston ko ussi waqt jaan se maar dun,par pehle tere asli chehre ka pardafash hona zaroori tha....

SLUNDER-abbe chhod usse..dekh, chehra laal ho gaya hai iska..behosh hone ke kagaar par hai ye...


ACCHUTA ke uske gala dabane ki wajah se VALDIS ke sir par khoon ki awaa jaahi kam hone lagi thi aur uski aankhen band hone lagi thi jisse dekh ye baat kahi thi SLUNDER ne jiske baad ACCHUTA ne usse khudse door fekh diya..


KHOONN...KHONNNNN.....

neeche girre hi zor zor se khaanste hue kuch der tak baithe raha VALDIS par phir lambi lambi saansein leta hua woh ACCHUTA aur SLUNDER ki taraf dekhne laga aur uske dekhne ke tarike se uske man me uth raha sawal taad gaya SLUNDER aur isiliye...


SLUNDER-aaj,infact jo bhi hua,woh kaise hua,yahi jaanana chahata hai naa..!!

is episode ki kahani mai tujhe batata hun...par usse pehle,isse pehchaanta hai..!!!

2 alag alag patto ko haath me pakda hua tha SLUNDER ne jinhe dikhate hue pucha ye sawal usne VALDIS se jispar naa me sir hilaya VALDIS ne..


SLUNDER-kahan se pehchaanega..!!!ye tere kaam ki chiz thodi naa hai...

par humare kaam ki chiz aur tere kaam ke chiz ka kaat zaroor hain ye patte...

nahi samjha..samjhata hun..ye jo pehla patta hai,ye jis poudhe me paaya jaata hai,uska naam hai VASHKAATAM POUDHA...

is patte ke churn se us shasksh ko joki VASHIBHOOTAM POUDHE ke churn ki wajah se hypnotize hua hota hai,us state se turant bahar nikala jaa sakta hai...

aur ye jo dusra patta hai,ye MAYACHHALAM poudhe me milta hai...

aur is patte ka churn banakar agar kisiko khilaya jaaye,toh isse khaane waale ke dimag me woh jeevit taswir aur drishya banane lagta hai jiski usko sabse zyada talab hoti hai..

saamne koi bhi ho, mahoul kaisa bhi ho,usse sirf wahi dikhta hai jiski usse talab aur khwahish hoti hai..

sirf paani daalne par hi is maaya se bahar aaya jaa sakta hai jaise tu aaya tha...

jahan se tune VASHIBHOOTAM POUDHE ke patte liye the,unhi ke paas ye dono POUDHE bhi paaye jaate hain jinke paathen humne bhi tere wahan se jaane ke baad le liye the..

par hum shaant hi rahe the aaj tak kyunki aaj se pehle tak tu bas MABEL ke dil laga raha tha.par aaj jab tune dimag lagaya toh humne bhi apne paitre aazma liye...

aur woh aise mere laal ki jab tune ELUSORY se drink order kiya,aur uske baad jab tu piche ki taraf ghum sabko checkout kar raha tha,us waqt ELUSORY ne tera dono drink table par rakh diya tha jisme maine dheere se apne paas rakhe dono churn mila diye...

MABEL ke glass me VASHIKAATAM patte ka churn aur tere drink me MAYACHHALAM churn..

aur phir jab tune MABEL ke drink me apna laaya churn milaya toh us churn ko mere daale churn ne kaat diya..

aur drink peete hi MABEL ko jo halka jhatka laga aur uski aankhen band hui,woh ussi kaat ka side effect tha...

wahin tere drink peete hi us drink me mile churn ne apna kaam kar diya..

tere man me jo khayal us waqt tha,us churn ne us soch,us khwahish ko tera sach bana diya.

aur thik ussi waqt maine tere dost ko jisse tu MABEL samajh kiss kar raha tha,usse kaha ki tu usse bula raha hai..

us waqt woh tere piche ki taraf tha...

woh teri taraf badha aur jaise hi woh tere kareeb pahuncha aur usne tujhe touch kiya,maine MABEL ko piche kar diya...

uske touch karne par tu piche palta par tab tak us churn ne tere dimag par apna kabza kar liya tha...

isiliye piche palaththe hi jab tune apne friend ko dekha,toh usme tujhe MABEL dikhi aur saath hi ye hall tujhe tere ABODE ka room lagne laga..

phir kya tha,chadh gaye aap apne is naye bane mard MABEL par...

MABEL-aur jab tu mujhpar mitane waale hawas ko apne is dost ke upar mita raha tha,tab SLUNDER ne mujhe teri asliyat aur tera plan bataya...

chhi...mujhe toh khudpar ghinn aati ki maine tere jaise neech insaan ko pasand kiya...


ACCHUTA-"jo imtihaan na le,woh CHAAHAT NAHI....

log dhoka dete hain,MOHOBBAT NAHI...


isiliye khudko ruswa mat karo...ruswa toh ab ye neech hoga...

CHOSENS me ek STELLAR dusre STELLAR ki jaan nahi leta,aur naahi usse sharirik roop me hadh se zyada tod sakta hai,sirf isiliye tera ye sharir salamat rahega...


ACCHUTA ki baat sun jaise itni der me pehli baar raahat ki saans li VALDIS ne warna usse toh laga tha ki aaj yaa toh ACCHUTA usse maar dega yaa phir uski aisi haalat kar dega jisse usse mout asaan lagegi..

wahin MABEL ne jab ACCHUTA ki baat suni toh woh udaas ho gayi lekin VALDIS aur MABEL,dono hi nahi jaante the ki unki soch galat hai..

halka sa pause lene ke baad phir hile ACCHUTA ke honth aur...


ACCHUTA-par,jo tune aaj karne ki koshish ki,ek ladki ki sabse keemti cheez,uski izzat par daag lagane ki jo tune jurrat ki,iski saza tujhe zaroor milegi...

us saza se sharirik taur par dard bilkul nahi hoga tujhe,par maansik tour par tujhe ehsaas zaroor hoga ki ek ladki ke liye yaa phir kisike liye bhi uski izzat kya maayne rakhti hai.


SLUNDER....


ye bol ACCHUTA ne apne haath me pehna band jo is waqt uski jeb me tha,usse nikalkar SLUNDER ko de diya jisse apne ek haath me thaam SLUNDER VALDIS ki taraf badha..

wahin SLUNDER ko apni taraf aata dekh bhaagne ke uddeshya ae VALDIS ne gayab hone ki koshish ki par woh ho nahi paaya...

reason..

MABEL ko fasane ke chakkar me VALDIS ne apne haathon me pehne band ko utarna bhul gaya tha..

aur ye jaan aur apne band ko dekh VALDIS ne turant usse utarne ke liye apna dusra haath band waale wrist ki taraf badhaya par tabhi..

SLUNDER ne uska woh haath beech me hi pakad liya...

itna hi nahi,ek pal me hi bijli ki speed ikhtiyaar karte hue SLUNDER move hua aur aisa karte hue usne naa sirf VALDIS ke dono haathon ko modte hue piche kar diya balki uske dusre wrist par bhi usne ACCHUTA waale neutralizer band ko baandh diya aur aisa kar SLUNDER ne VALDIS ke dono haathon ko ek dusre ke paas laakar chipkaate hue man hi man ek spell budbudaya aur uske aisa karte hi ek behadh hi lachili par atrong grip waali rope se VALDIS ke dono haath piche ki taraf bandh gaye...

VALDIS ne apna pura zor lagaya par neutralizer band ki wajah se bina AMPLIFICATION aur REFINER powers ke woh kuch kar nahi paaya..

wahin uske bandhate hi ACCHUTA aage badha aur theek VALDIS ke saamne jaakar khada ho gaya....

apne right haath ke index finger ko lehrate hue usne VALDIS ke tuxedo ke upar rakha aur...


VASTRAM JWALAM.....

CLOTHES BURN.....


ACCHUTA ke SPELL uccharit karte hi uske us index finger se ek chingari nikli aur VALDIS ke tuxedo par chaddh gayi aur jab aisa hua toh..

us chingari ne aag ka roop le liya jisne aahista aahista se pehle VALDIS ki tuxedo ko,phir andar ke upper layers ko,phir neeche pant ko ,juto ke upar pehne socks ko aur aakhir me VALDIS ke underwear tak ko jalakar raakh kar diya...

ek minute ke andar VALDIS janmjaat awashta me sir jhukaaye khada tha aur usse yun nude dekh wahan moujud saare SAVENTS ne ab tak ko sabse zordaar thahaka lagaya...

wahin SLUNDER bhi pehle zoron se hasa aur phir...


SLUNDER-yaar logon ki toh izzat utarti hI,teri toh izzat jal gayi....


ye bol hasta hua woh ACCHUTA ke paas pahunchkar khada ho gaya...

saare SAVENTS abhi bhi zoron se has rahe the aur woh hasi VALDIS ke kaano ne garam lohe ki tarah pighalte hue ghus rahi thi..

khair,kuch pal VALDIS ko dekhne ke baad...


ACCHUTA-chal ab nikal aur dobara phir se apni fazzihat karwane ka shouk chaddhe,toh kuch naya try kar lena...


ACCHUTA ki baat sun ab tak jo sir jhuka hua tha VALDIS ka,woh dheere se upar utha..

is waqt VALDIS ki aankhen aisi lag rahi thi jaise kisine unme laal rang bhar diya ho..

halka sa ghusse se kaampta hua VALDIS kuch pal dekhta raha ACCHUTA, SLUNDER aur MABEL ko par uske baad..


VALDIS-is raat ko yaad rakhna ACCHUTA....ye raat teri hui,par aise hi ek aur raat aayegi,jo meri hogi...

SLUNDER-saale,rassi jal gayi par bal nahi gaya.teri toh mai..


ye bol VALDIS ko maarne ke liye aage badha SLUNDER par usse kandhe se thaam aage badhne se rok diya ACCHUTA ne aur...


ACCHUTA-mujhe intezar rahega...


ek baar phirse ACCHUTA, SLUNDER aur MABEL ko dekh VALDIS wahan se nikal gaya..

wahin uske jaate hi MABEL ACCHUTA ke saamne aayi aur....


MABEL-thanks ACCHUTA...


ye bol MABEL aage badhi aur ACCHUTA ke gale lag gayi aur yunhi gale lage hue...


MABEL-aaj ek bohot bada ehsaan kiya hai tumne mujhpar...


ACCHUTA jo MABEL ke gale lagne par us ehsaas ko jee raha tha, uske mooh se ehsaan waali baat sun woh dheere dheere MABEL se alag hua aur..


ACCHUTA-jaa SLUNDER.. MABEL ko ghar chhod aa...

SLUNDER-mai..!!!

MI-haan tu...

jaa ab...


aankh dikhate hue kahi ye baat ACCHUTA ne jispar kandhe uchka MABEL ko chalne ke liye kaha SLUNDER ne jispar...


MABEL-tum ghar nahi jaaoge...

ACCHUTA-nahi..abhi mai yahin hun..thodi der baad jaaunga...


ACCHUTA ki baat sun ek baar bharpoor nazar se usse dekhne ke baad MABEL SLUNDER ke saath palatkar nikal gayi...

jaate jaate kayi baar palti woh aur ACCHUTA ko dekha usne..

ACCHUTA bhi usse hi dekh raha tha aur jab MABEL baar baar palatkar usse dekhne lagi toh...


ACCHUTA-yun mat dekh MABEL mujhe.....


tere layak nahi hun mai,bohot mushkil se apne dil ko ye SAMJHAAYA HAI...

ehsaan nahi kiya tujhpar,bas tere liye apna farz maine NIBHAAYA HAI...

ajeeb hai,sahi salamat tu hai,par aisa lag raha hai,

ki tujhe nahi,balki apne aap ko aaj maine BACHAAYA HAI......

















AAJ KE LIYE ITNA HI......

















AAPKA APNA V...J....
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Iron Man

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AB TAK AAPNE PADHA KI JAHAN EK TARAF ACCHUTA AUR MABEL MR AUR MISS CHOSENS BAN JAATE HAIN WAHIN DUSRI TARAF CHALLENGE HAARNE PAR RAAZ MAHI KE UPAR BHADAK JAATA HAI.

AB AAGE:-


CHAPTER-2


(UNEARTH THE IMMORTALS)



UPDATE-114



PLANET-ELYSIAN


PLACE-ALFREEN'S ABODE





HAHAHAHA....IS PIC KO DEKHKAR KAUN KEH SAKTA HAI KI ISME KHADA LADKA WAHI RAAZ HAI JO AB SABKE SAAMNE HAI...!!!!


ek badi si photo album ko jisse pakad sofe par baithe the FLORIN aur MARIA,usme se RAAZ ke bachpan ki ek pic jisme woh dubla patla sa tha,dekh kar haste hue kahi ye baat MARIA ne jispar FLORIN bhi muskurane lage aur...


FLORIN-waqt kahan se kahan pahunch gaya,hum kahan se kahan pahunch gaye,pata hi nahi chala...

pata hai MARIA,jab ALFREEN humse door ho gayi thi, hume laga tha ki hum usse kabhi nahi dekh paayenge toh uske baad se hi life se man ub gaya tha...

par phir humne orphanage khola,wahan baccho ke beech rehkar bhi woh khaalipan jo hamari beti ke jaane se mai feel karta tha,woh bhara nahi...

lekin phir ye RAAZ hamare orphanage me aaya..sabse alag,sahi shabd kahun toh sabse ajeeb....

naa toh kisise has ke baat karna aur naahi kisi se dosti rakhna...

khudko ek shell me band karke rakha is ladke ne har waqt...

humse bhi kabhi sidhe mooh baat nahi ki...par itne negetiveness ke baad bhi apne hi tarah ek ajeeb tarike se ek paheli ban kar mere dil ke khaalipan ko thoda thoda bhar diya usne....

MARIA-bilkul sach ye hai..aur dekhiye naa,aakhirkar RAAZ hi woh zariya bana jisse hum apni beti se dobara mil paaye...

FLORIN-hmm..pata hai,uska hamesha dikhane waale cold behavior ke baawjud mujhe uspar kabhi ghussa nahi aaya tha...

MARIA-mujhe bhi..par haan,mai hamesha se chahti thi ki ek baar,sirf ek baar usse muskurate hue dekhun joki finally yahan CHOSENS me possible ho paaya...

FLORIN-aakhir yahi toh uski destination thi... shayad isiliye yahan pahunchne ke baad usme saare changes bhi aane lage...

MARIA-hmm... chehra,sharir pura badal gaya RAAZ ka,par aaankhen nahi badli..

aur naahi badla uska woh bhaav..
uski aankhon me aaj bhi ek khaalipan dikhta hai...

pata nahi kis cheez ki talash hai usse...??par jab bhi mai us khaalipan ko dekhti hun,mujhe bohot taklif hoti hai...

FLORIN-ye toh maine bhi gour kiya hai..par pata nahi kyun lekin mujhe lagta hai ki shayad RAAZ khud bhi apne aankhon ke khaalipan se anjaan hai...

kyunki anjaane me hi sahi,uske face par kabhi udaasi nahi dekhi maine...


KISKI UDAASI KI BAAT KAR RAHE HO POPS....???


saamne se aati hui ALFREEN ne kahi ye baat jiske baad woh sidhe apne mom dad ke beech me jaakar baith gayi...

apni beti ko dekh MARIA ne bhi apne haathon me rakha photo album band kar diya tha..


MARIA-tu itni jaldi aa gayi...GALA night khatm ho gaya..!!!

ALFREEN-nahi, chalu hai..par mujhe bor lag raha tha,mood bhi off ho gaya tha isiliye mai wapas aa gayi...

FLORIN-arre,hamari beti ka mood kaise off ho gaya bhala...???

ALFREEN-chhodo naa pops.. friendz stuff...aap batao, kiski udaasi ki baat kar rahe the aap...???

FLORIN-RAAZ ki...

ALFREEN-RAAZ, aur udaas..!!!woh khud udaas nahi hota,haan,baaki sabko zaroor karta rehta hai...

MARIA-ab kya kar diya usne...???

ALFREEN-usne MAHI ko ka gala daba diya tha..us bechari ka pura face red ho gaya tha...idiot, stupid...completely insensitive & mean...

FLORIN-toh ye reason hai hamari princess ke moof off hone ka..

acha,what was the reason....!!!

ALFEEN-reason..!!!aapko lagta hai ki RAAZ ko kuch bhi karne ke liye kisi reason ki zaroorat hai..!!!

MARIA-hume lagta nahi hai,hum jaante hain...and mind you,hum dono RAAZ ko sabse better jaante hain..

isiliye uski burayi karne se pehle reason batao...


MARIA ke is baat par ALFREEN ne last challenge me jo hua aur uske baad RAAZ ne no kiya woh sab kuch bata diya jispar...


FLORIN- cristy yaad hai tumhe AL...wahi ladki jisse tumne bachpan me slap kiya tha...

ALFREEN-haan yaad hai,par uske baare me abhi kyun baat ho rahi hai..???

FLORIN-batata hun..par pehle ye tum batao ki kyun slap kiya tha tumne usse aur woh bhi itni zor se ki uske lips ke side areas fath gaye the..

ALFREEN-reason toh pata hi hai aapko pops...hum relay partners the...aur sirf uske casual approach ki wajah se first time mai kisi race me second aayi thi..

FLORIN-thik waise hi jaise aaj MAHI ki wajah se RAAZ second ho gaya...

aise me frustrate hona,ghussa hona toh normal hai naa...

ALFREEN-par dad MAHI ne jo kiya,ye uske bhale ke liye hi kiya.. challenge ke waqt maine khud dekha tha, RAAZ was not all looking good...

woh emotional pain jo us challenge me woh feel kar raha tha,agar waise chalte rehta toh usse uski haalat bohot zyada kharab ho jaati..

MAHI was just trying to help....

FLORIN-help karne se pehle ye jaanana zaroori hota hai ki ki kya saamne waale ko us help ki zaroorat hai...

aur jahan tak baat RAAZ ki hai,toh ab tak itna toh tumhe uske baare me maalum ho jaana chahiye ki uske faisla koi aur le,ye usse pasand nahi..

beta, RAAZ un logon me se hai jinke liye jeet unki life se zyada important hoti hai..

yahi wajah hai ki woh tumhare PHASE me sabse aage hai...beta choice koi universal word nahi, individual hai...

kisse kya karna hai,ye koi dusra tay nahi kar sakta..jitna ye sach hai ki MAHI ne jo kiya,woh RAAZ ke physical behatri ke liye kiya,utna hi sach ye bhi hai ki uski harkat ne RAAZ ko mentally taklif de di aur woh taklif uske physical pain se zyada thi...

aur outcome tha woh action jo RAAZ ne MAHI ke saath kiya... it's all about perception....

ALFREEN-RAAZ un logon me se hai jinke liye jeet unki life se zyada important hoti hai..pops, aisa hi kuch RAAZ ne bhi kaha tha..

aap toh wakayi RAAZ ko kaafi ache se jaante hain..

MARIA-tum bhi jaan sakti ho beta,bas apne choices uspar thopne ki koshish mat karna...

he is harmless untill some one pokes him...

but once you POKE, than he will make sure that you CHOKE...

ALFREEN-but what about MAHI...???woh kaafi sad ho gayi hai...

MARIA-she will get over it...woh samajhdaar hai,teri tarah hot headed nahi...

ALFREEN-how mean mom....!!!

FLORIN-acha ab woh sab chhod aur ye bata ki MR & MISS CHOSENS kaun bana...!!!

ALFREEN-MABEL aur ACCHUTA..aur pata hai POPS, ACCHUTA aur SLUNDER ka bhi RAAZ ki hi tarah complete transformation ho gaya hai....

they both have turned into damn handsome hunks..

FLORIN-ohho.. is my daughter interested in any of them.!!!

ALFREEN-hell no...i am not at all interested in this love shit....aapki beti ka focus sirf khudko better karne me hai..

FLORIN-ye hamari hi beti hai naa...!!!goon toh aadhe hi aaye hain...

ALFREEN-hahaha,very funny...

MARIA-kya funny, dekh MABEL ne bhi apne liye ladka dhundh liya hai..kya naam tha uska,haan, VALDIS....

woh toh bohot khush hoga aaj,uski gf MISS CHOSENS ban gayi..

ALFREEN-pata nahi par aaj bohot ajeeb behave kar raha tha woh..

maine door se dekha,MABEL se shayad halka rough hokar kuch kaha shayad usne..

kyunki MABEL ka face utar gaya tha...

FLORIN-arre,jab MABEL sad thi toh tu usse chhodkar kyun chali aayi... you should have been by her side...

ALFREEN-RAAZ ki wajah se...

MARIA-RAAZ ki wajah se, matlab....!!!

ALFREEN-exactly toh nahi pata,kal pata chalega... actually mujhe SLUNDER ne kaha ki RAAZ ne kaha hai ki aaj MABEL ko akela chhodna hai...

reason toh nahi bataya,bas itna kaha ki MABEL ke liye ye important hai...

MARIA-aaah,ek taraf tu RAAZ ko insensitive keh rahi thi aur dusri taraf uski baat jo usne directly tujhse nahi ki balki SLUNDER ke through apni baat pahunchwayi,usse ek baar me maan liya...

ALFREEN-mom,jo bhi ho,i know a thing for a fact ki RAAZ kuch bhi yunhi naa kehta hai,naa karta hai..

infact sometimes i feel ki uski thinking is beyond anybody's imaginations...

toh aise me kya doubt karun uske kisi baat par... waise bhi,kal toh pata chal hi jaana hai....

MARIA-jo baat abhi abhi tune humse kahi naa,woh hamesha khud yaad rakha kar..khush rahegi....

ALFREEN-kuch zyada hi tarafdaari nahi karte aap dono RAAZ ka...

khaaskar tabse ye taarif zyada hi badh gayi hai jabse SOVES se request kar ye ORPHANAGE ki photo album EARTH se aapne mangwayi hai...

anyways, aap dekhiye apni album..mai chali fresh hone...


jahan ye bol ALFREEN sofe se uth apne room ki taraf badh gayi wahin uski baat sun MARIA aur FLORIN muskuraye aur wapas album ko khol uske panne paltaane lage....






PLACE-CHOSENS


THE GREAT HALL




LAAYA..!!!!


VALDIS ke is sawal par uske dost ne bina kuch kahe ek hare colour ka churn joki ek polithin ke andar rakha hua tha,uske aage kar diya jisse haathon me pakad face par ek devilish muskaan liye...


VALDIS-VASHIBHOOTAM POUDHE KA CHURN....

aaj yahi churn meri nayya paar lagayega....


VASHIBHOOTAM POUDA FORBIDDEN FOREST me paaye jaane waala poudha hai jiske patton ka churn bana agar koi bhi dravya ke saath milakar kisiko bhi pila diya jaaye toh aisa hone ke baad ke kuch minutes baad hi jiske dwara bhi woh churn mishrit dravya pilaya gaya hai,peene waala uske sammohan ka shikar ban jaata hai aur ye sammohan kareeb 12 ghanton tak us shaksh par haawi rehta hai..

is dauran usse is churn ko pilane waala,jo chaahe karwa sakta hai jisse woh sammohit vyakti apni khushi se karta hai...

haan,is sammohan aur normal sammhonan me fark ye hota hai ki jahan normal summohan me vyakti robot jaisa behave karta hai,wahin is churn ko nigalne par hone waale sammohan me vyakti normal behave karta hai...

dekhne par kisi ko bhi pata nahi chalta ki saamne waala vyakti sammohan me hai..

khair,agar kabhi pyar waala paitra fail hota nazar aane lage,toh is BRAMHAASTRA ka jugaad rakha hua tha VALDIS ne jo aaj uske kaam aane waala tha....

haathon me pakde us churn ko apne poket me daal VALDIS chal pada MABEL ke paas jo is waqt apne partner MR CHOSENS ACCHUTA ke saath khadi thi aur SAVENTS usse aur ACCHUTA ko congratulate kar rahe the...

par ab ye congratulate karne ka daur apne aakhri charam par tha...lagbhagh sabhi ne un dono ko MR & MISS CHOSENS banane ke liye badhayi de di thi...

is pure douran ACCHUTA ko apne kareeb paakar MABEL ke man me ek ajeeb se gudgudi ho rahi thi...

woh lagatar apni kankhiyon se ACCHUTA ko dekhe jaa rahi thi...

waise haal toh ACCHUTA ka bhi MABEL se alag nahi tha par apne chehre ko sapat rakha hua tha usne....

khair,ab tak lagbhag sabhi SAVENTS ne un dono ko badhayi de di thi,par un dono ne ek dusre ko hi congrats nahi kaha tha aur isiliye...


MABEL-congrats ACCHUTA...

ACCHUTA-congrats to you too MABEL...anyways,tum toh hamesha se hi MISS CHOSENS banane ki daawedaar thi...

thankfully,aaj luck ne mujhe is is khitaab ke kaabil bana diya...

MABEL-haan,aur tum deserving bhi toh ho....


MABEL ki baat par halke se has diya ACCHUTA jisse naa samajh..


MABEL-hans kyun rahe ho...???

ACCHUTA-apne is naye appearence par....

MABEL-arre,par isme hasne waali kya baat hai..ye badla look toh kaafi jach raha hai tumpar...

ACCHUTA-jaanta hun...aur asar aur result dono hi aaj mile khitaab se dekh liya maine..

hasi bas is baat par aa rahi hai ki mai aaj bhi wahi hun jo pehle tha..

badla sirf roop hai..par sirf is ek badlwaav se logon ka mujhe dekhne ka tarika badal gaya..

auro se jo mujhe jaante hi nahi,unki kya baat karun,par jo mujhe kareeb se jaante hai,woh bhi achanak mujhse zyada impress dikhne lage hain...

unki nazar mujhpar theherne lagi hai... outer appearance se aaye itne drastic badlwaav se hairan bhi hun mai aur mujhe hasi bhi aa rahi hai...


ACCHUTA ki hasi naa khushi waali thi aur naahi dukh waali..ek theraav tha uski hasi me jisse samajh nahi paa rahi thi MABEL..

aur isiliye woh usse kuch kehne ko hui par tabhi...


VALDIS-MABEL,can we talk...!!!


VALDIS ki awaaz sun MABEL ki nazar uspar gayi jo uske saamne hi ek maasum surat banaye khada tha par VALDIS ko dekhte hi MABEL ko uski kahi baatein yaad aa gayi aur uska mood off hone laga..

woh usse baad me baat karne ke liye kehne waali thi par woh kuch kehti usse pehle...


ACCHUTA-excuse me guyzz...


ye bol ACCHUTA SLUNDER ki taraf joki ek ladki ke saath joki WALTZ dance me ACCHUTA ki partner thi,uske saath baitha hua tha,uski taraf badh gaya..

MABEL ka yun ACCHUTA ka jaana acha nahi laga tha par kyunki ab ACCHUTA wahan se nikal chuka tha, isiliye uski nazar VALDIS par padi aur aisa hote hi woh halki chownki...

reason...

VALDIS apne dono kaano ko pakde uthak baithak kar raha tha aur jab MABEL ki nazar uspar padi toh aisa karte hue hi..


VALDIS-sorry MABEL...i behaved like a total jerk... aur us baat ke liye mai tumhe dil se sorry kehta hun... please maaf kar do mujhe...


VALDIS ki baat sun apne sir ko haan me halka hilate hue uski apology ko accept kiya MABEL ne jisse dekh apni uthak baithak ko rokte hue behadh khushi se aage badha VALDIS aur MABEL ke gale lag gaya..

aaj pehli baar tha jab MABEL VALDIS ko aadhe man se hug kar rahi thi aur saath hi aisa karte waqt jab uski nazar ACCHUTA ki taraf padi joki SLUNDER ke saath baitha uski GALA ki first partner ke saath has has kar baat kar raha tha, toh uske dil me ek ajeeb si bechani ne ghar kar liya..

khair,kuch der MABEL ko hug karne ke baad alag hua VALDIS aur..


VALDIS-kaisa b.f hun mai..aaj meri gf MISS CHOSENS bani hai aur naa toh maine usse wish kiya hai aur naahi celebrate karna shuru kiya hai...

koi naa,chalo,DRINKS corner me jaate hain,wahin baith kar tumhare jeet ko celebrate karenge...

MABEL-aaj nahi VALDIS..mera mood nahi hai..phir kabhi celebrate karte hain..waise bhi hamare saare friends toh yahan hai hi nahi..

sabke saath milkar celebrate karenge..

VALDIS-arre woh toh karenge hi..par abhi ke liye ek chota sa celebration toh kar hi sakte hai naa..

chalo naa please..nahi toh mai samjhunga ki tumne mujhe maaf nahi kiya...


MABEL ka mood toh tha nahi par VALDIS ka dil rakhne ke liye...


MABEL-thik hai..par zyada der nahi rukenge... mujhe ghar jaane ka man hai..

VALDIS-now that's my girl..aur sirf ek drink woh bhi bas isiliye taaki hum hamara patch up aur tumhari aaj ki jeet celebrate karen..

that's it....


ye bol MABEL ke haath ko thaamte hue VALDIS wahin side me bane ek BAR counter ki taraf jahan bohot se MOCKTAILS aur COCKTAILS ka bhandar tha,badh gaya aur wahan pahunch MABEL ko ek couch me baithne ko bol woh counter ke dusri taraf khade ek ELUSORY ko joki aaj wahan ka bartender tha,mukhatib hua aur...


VALDIS-one
sparkling berry with pomegranate and one lemon lavender....


sparkling berry with pomegranate MABEL ka favourite drink tha jisse VALDIS ne uske liye order kiya tha....

order kar VALDIS ne ek baar palat kar MABEL ko dekha jo saamne couch par baithi hui thi aur uski nazar thode door par baithe ACCHUTA aur uski aajki first partner par thi aur ye dekh VALDIS je face par ek devil smile naach uthi aur..


VALDIS-jitna dekhna hai dekh le usse MABEL..kuch der aur phir mai bhi tujhe dekhunga aur woh bhi badi tassali ke saath..


ye bol ACCHUTA ne ek baar apni nazar pure hall par ghumayi,ye check karne ke liye ki koi uske raaste ka roda toh wahan moujud nahi hai par aisa koi naa dekh chain ki saans li usne aur wapas saamne palta jahan is waqt woh dono hi drinks jo usne order kiye the,rakhe hue the..

ye dekh badi hoshiyari se aur sawdhaani se usne woh VASHIBHOOTAM POUDHE ka churn nikala aur MABEL ke drink me usse mila diya aur aisa kar woh wapas palta par aisa karte hi woh halka hadbada gaya..

reason...

MABEL usse hi dekh rahi thi.. VALDIS ye soch kar ghabra gaya ki kahin MABEL ne usse us churn ko uski drink me milate hue dekh toh nahi liya par jab MABEL ne usse dekhkar smile kiya,tab jaakar kahin VALDIS ne chain ki saans li...

MABEL ki smile dekh VALDIS bhi muskurate hue aage badha aur MABEL ke saamne sparkling berry with pomegranate drink ko pesh kiya jispar usse thanks kehte hue MABEL ne us drink ko thaam liya jiske baad...


VALDIS-chears.....hamare patchup ke naam...


MABEL ke glass se apne glass ko takrate hue kahi ye baat VALDIS ne jiske baad ek dusre ki aankhon me dekhte hue un dono ne apni apni drink pi li aur jab aisa hua toh...

DMMMMM.....


MABEL ke dimag ko ek jhatka sa laga jiske baad uski aankhen kuch palon ke liye band ho gayi aur ye dekh VALDIS ki aankhen chamak uthi...

wahin kuch der tak aankhen band rakhne ke baad jab MABEL ki aankhen khuli toh uski aankhon me laal dore tairne lage the jisse dekh...


VALDIS-chalen..

MABEL-haan....


MABEL ki razamandi milte hi VALDIS khada hua aur ek taraf badh gaya aur MABEL uske saath ho ki...




KUCH DER BAAD:-


AHHHHH..AHHHHHH......


MABEL ki tez tez siskariyan padh rahi thi VALDIS ke kaano me jinhe aur badhate hue MABEL ke labon ko zoron se chuste aur kaaththe hue hue VALDIS uske boobs ko squeeze karta jaa raha tha...

aisa karte hue VALDIS ke haath MABEL ke boobs se hote hue neeche jaane lage par phir neeche ek jagah par uske haath atak se gaye...

atakne par VALDIS ne halka zor lagaya par jab uske baad bhi uske haath aage nahi badh paaye toh usse halki jhunjhlahat hone lagi isiliye..


VALDIS-ye kya ho raha hai yaar....!!!!


jhunjhlate hue kahi ye baat VALDIS ne aur aisa bol woh aage kuch kehta yaa karta ki tabhi...

CHHAPAKKK......


uske face aur puri body par khoob saara paani pada jiske baad uska sir ghumne lag gaya aur uski aankhen band ho gayi par tabhi...



HAHAHAHAHAHA...

UMMMMMMMMM.......


VALDIS ke kaano me dher saare logon ke hasne ki aur kisi ek ke dheere dheere rone,dono ki awaaz ek saath aane lagi jiske baad jab usne aankhen kholi toh usse laga ek tez jhatka....

woh is waqt THE GREAT HALL me hi neeche baitha hua tha aur uske saamne bohot se SAVENTS usse dekh has rahe the..

un sabko haste dekh VALDIS ko hairani hui aur woh hairani tab hadh se zyada badh gayi jab usne un SAVENTS yaa phir ye kahun SLUNDER aur ACCHUTA ke beech khadi MABEL ko dekha jo aankhon me angaare liye usse dekh rahi thi...


VALDIS man me-MABEL saamne hai toh phir mere saath kaun hai...??

ye sawal khudse karte hue VALDIS ek jhatke se wapas mooda aur aisa karte hi jab uski nazar uske neeche pade shaksh par gayi toh uska dimag hi ghum gaya...

uske neeche is waqt uska wahi dost rote hue leta hua tha jisne usse kuch der pehle VASHIBHOOTAM POUDHE ke churn diya tha...

is waqt us bande ka tuxedo gayab tha,shirt fata hua tha aur saath hi uske hothon se halka halka khoon rees raha tha aur ye sab dekh kuch naa samajh paate hue...


VALDIS-tu yahan mere neeche kya kar raha hai..??aur woh bhi is haalat me...teri shirt fati hui hai, honth se khoon nikal raha hai,saala ye ho kya raha hai...???

kisne maara hai tujhe...!!!

SLUNDER-hum bataate hain beta....


SLUNDER ki baat sun VALDIS wapas uski taraf palta aur jab aisa hua toh....


SLUNDER-sabse pehle ye jaan le ki tere is dost ko kisine maara nahi hai..

iska ye fata haal,iske honth se behta khoon tere aur iske beech abhi abhi hue us pyar bhari ladhayi ki nishani hai jiske gawah hum sab hain...


SLUNDER ka itna kehna tha ki wahan moujud sabhi SAVENTS zoron se hasne lage jisse dekh aur SLUNDER ki baat sun dimag hi fuse ho gaya tha VALDIS ka...


VALDIS-ye kya bakwas kar raha hai tu...!!! maine aisa kuch bhi nahi kiya hai...

SLUNDER-bilkul kiya hai beta,chaahe toh itne log hain yahan,in sabse puch le,yaa phir ussi se puch le,jiski izzat par haath daala hai tune...


SLUNDER ki baat sun VALDIS ki nazar wapas apne dost par gayi jo abhi bhi halka halka subak raha tha..

uski waisi condition dekh VALDIS ko usse kuch puchte hi nahi bana aur isiliye woh chup hi raha jispar..


SLUNDER-chal mai hi bata deta hun...woh jo khun nikal raha hai naa tere dost ke honthon se,woh tere usse zabardasti kiss karte hue kaatne ki wajah se hua hai aur woh shirt,tune jo breast ko chest samajhkar zoron se squeeze kiya hai,uski wajah se fata hai..

SLUNDER ki baat sun jahan ek taraf VALDIS hadh se zyada embarrass ho gaya, wahan moujud ladke SAVENTS zor se hasne lage wahin girl SAVENTS halki sharma gayi jisse dekh..


SLUNDER-sorry girls but in bhai saahab ko,oh sorry,gay sahab ko sach toh batana hi tha..


VALDIS-mai koi gay nahi hun...


cheekh sa utha VALDIS jispar usse bhi tez awaaz me..


ACCHUTA-maalum hai kitna bada mard hai tu...saale,yahin,issi waqt teri saari mardaangi nikal dunga mai,aur tu kya tere baap ko,tere pure khaadaan ko bina lund ke mooh se mootne par majboor kar dunga mai...


ye bol ghusse se bhara khada hua ACCHUTA aage badha aur neeche baithe VALDIS ko uske gale se pakad kisi takiye ki tarah upar hawa me utha diya...

aur ye dekh aur ACCHUTA ke awaaz me bani intensity ko sun aur mehsoos kar jahan ek taraf ab tak jo sab SAVENTS has rahe the,woh ekdum chup ho gaye, SLUNDER muskura utha wahin MABEL jo ab tak behadh ghusse me thi, ACCHUTA ki baat sun itne der me pehli baar uske face par halki si smile aa gayi..

khair, VALDIS ko hawa me uthaye hue hi ek baar phirse dahada ACCHUTA...


ACCHUTA-saale,kya laga tha tujhe...tu MABEL ke saath kuch bhi karne ka sochega aur hum aisa hone denge...

mai toh kab ka teri haalat bigaad chuka hota, bacha tu sirf isiliye tha kyunki MABEL ko pasand tha tu..

aur usse tera asli chehra nahi pata tha aur bina saboot mai uske saamne tujhe nanga nahi karna chahta tha..

par mujhe pata tha ki tere jaise saanp ko jitna bhi doodh pila do,mouka milte hi tu dasne se baaz nahi aayega....

aur isiliye hi har waqt meri nazar tujhpar aur teri harkaton par thi....

FORBIDDEN FOREST ke us do din ke camp ke waqt jab tu puri class se alag hokar apne chamcho ke saath ek disha ki taraf badha tha naa,tab maine peecha kiya tha tera...

aur tab jab tune VASHIBHOOTAM POUDHE ke patton ko toda aur uska churn banane ka instruction apne is dost ko diya,tab hi mai samajh gaya tha ki tu zaroor iska iska istamal MABEL par karne waala hai..

par uske liye tujhe iske kareeb jaana zaroori tha aur tu gaya...

par mai jaanta tha ki pehle tu iske jism ko pyar se haasil karne ki koshish karega aur jab naakamiyab hoga,tab is churn ka paitra aazmayega...

har baar jab bhi tu MABEL ke kareeb hota tha,toh SENSE SPELL ke through meri nazar har baar tujhpar hi rehti thi,aur aaj bhi thi...

tera plan,tere is dost ka apne ABODE se churn laana,sab jaanta tha mai...

man toh kiya ki tujhe aur tere doston ko ussi waqt jaan se maar dun,par pehle tere asli chehre ka pardafash hona zaroori tha....

SLUNDER-abbe chhod usse..dekh, chehra laal ho gaya hai iska..behosh hone ke kagaar par hai ye...


ACCHUTA ke uske gala dabane ki wajah se VALDIS ke sir par khoon ki awaa jaahi kam hone lagi thi aur uski aankhen band hone lagi thi jisse dekh ye baat kahi thi SLUNDER ne jiske baad ACCHUTA ne usse khudse door fekh diya..


KHOONN...KHONNNNN.....

neeche girre hi zor zor se khaanste hue kuch der tak baithe raha VALDIS par phir lambi lambi saansein leta hua woh ACCHUTA aur SLUNDER ki taraf dekhne laga aur uske dekhne ke tarike se uske man me uth raha sawal taad gaya SLUNDER aur isiliye...


SLUNDER-aaj,infact jo bhi hua,woh kaise hua,yahi jaanana chahata hai naa..!!

is episode ki kahani mai tujhe batata hun...par usse pehle,isse pehchaanta hai..!!!

2 alag alag patto ko haath me pakda hua tha SLUNDER ne jinhe dikhate hue pucha ye sawal usne VALDIS se jispar naa me sir hilaya VALDIS ne..


SLUNDER-kahan se pehchaanega..!!!ye tere kaam ki chiz thodi naa hai...

par humare kaam ki chiz aur tere kaam ke chiz ka kaat zaroor hain ye patte...

nahi samjha..samjhata hun..ye jo pehla patta hai,ye jis poudhe me paaya jaata hai,uska naam hai VASHKAATAM POUDHA...

is patte ke churn se us shasksh ko joki VASHIBHOOTAM POUDHE ke churn ki wajah se hypnotize hua hota hai,us state se turant bahar nikala jaa sakta hai...

aur ye jo dusra patta hai,ye MAYACHHALAM poudhe me milta hai...

aur is patte ka churn banakar agar kisiko khilaya jaaye,toh isse khaane waale ke dimag me woh jeevit taswir aur drishya banane lagta hai jiski usko sabse zyada talab hoti hai..

saamne koi bhi ho, mahoul kaisa bhi ho,usse sirf wahi dikhta hai jiski usse talab aur khwahish hoti hai..

sirf paani daalne par hi is maaya se bahar aaya jaa sakta hai jaise tu aaya tha...

jahan se tune VASHIBHOOTAM POUDHE ke patte liye the,unhi ke paas ye dono POUDHE bhi paaye jaate hain jinke paathen humne bhi tere wahan se jaane ke baad le liye the..

par hum shaant hi rahe the aaj tak kyunki aaj se pehle tak tu bas MABEL ke dil laga raha tha.par aaj jab tune dimag lagaya toh humne bhi apne paitre aazma liye...

aur woh aise mere laal ki jab tune ELUSORY se drink order kiya,aur uske baad jab tu piche ki taraf ghum sabko checkout kar raha tha,us waqt ELUSORY ne tera dono drink table par rakh diya tha jisme maine dheere se apne paas rakhe dono churn mila diye...

MABEL ke glass me VASHIKAATAM patte ka churn aur tere drink me MAYACHHALAM churn..

aur phir jab tune MABEL ke drink me apna laaya churn milaya toh us churn ko mere daale churn ne kaat diya..

aur drink peete hi MABEL ko jo halka jhatka laga aur uski aankhen band hui,woh ussi kaat ka side effect tha...

wahin tere drink peete hi us drink me mile churn ne apna kaam kar diya..

tere man me jo khayal us waqt tha,us churn ne us soch,us khwahish ko tera sach bana diya.

aur thik ussi waqt maine tere dost ko jisse tu MABEL samajh kiss kar raha tha,usse kaha ki tu usse bula raha hai..

us waqt woh tere piche ki taraf tha...

woh teri taraf badha aur jaise hi woh tere kareeb pahuncha aur usne tujhe touch kiya,maine MABEL ko piche kar diya...

uske touch karne par tu piche palta par tab tak us churn ne tere dimag par apna kabza kar liya tha...

isiliye piche palaththe hi jab tune apne friend ko dekha,toh usme tujhe MABEL dikhi aur saath hi ye hall tujhe tere ABODE ka room lagne laga..

phir kya tha,chadh gaye aap apne is naye bane mard MABEL par...

MABEL-aur jab tu mujhpar mitane waale hawas ko apne is dost ke upar mita raha tha,tab SLUNDER ne mujhe teri asliyat aur tera plan bataya...

chhi...mujhe toh khudpar ghinn aati ki maine tere jaise neech insaan ko pasand kiya...


ACCHUTA-"jo imtihaan na le,woh CHAAHAT NAHI....

log dhoka dete hain,MOHOBBAT NAHI...


isiliye khudko ruswa mat karo...ruswa toh ab ye neech hoga...

CHOSENS me ek STELLAR dusre STELLAR ki jaan nahi leta,aur naahi usse sharirik roop me hadh se zyada tod sakta hai,sirf isiliye tera ye sharir salamat rahega...


ACCHUTA ki baat sun jaise itni der me pehli baar raahat ki saans li VALDIS ne warna usse toh laga tha ki aaj yaa toh ACCHUTA usse maar dega yaa phir uski aisi haalat kar dega jisse usse mout asaan lagegi..

wahin MABEL ne jab ACCHUTA ki baat suni toh woh udaas ho gayi lekin VALDIS aur MABEL,dono hi nahi jaante the ki unki soch galat hai..

halka sa pause lene ke baad phir hile ACCHUTA ke honth aur...


ACCHUTA-par,jo tune aaj karne ki koshish ki,ek ladki ki sabse keemti cheez,uski izzat par daag lagane ki jo tune jurrat ki,iski saza tujhe zaroor milegi...

us saza se sharirik taur par dard bilkul nahi hoga tujhe,par maansik tour par tujhe ehsaas zaroor hoga ki ek ladki ke liye yaa phir kisike liye bhi uski izzat kya maayne rakhti hai.


SLUNDER....


ye bol ACCHUTA ne apne haath me pehna band jo is waqt uski jeb me tha,usse nikalkar SLUNDER ko de diya jisse apne ek haath me thaam SLUNDER VALDIS ki taraf badha..

wahin SLUNDER ko apni taraf aata dekh bhaagne ke uddeshya ae VALDIS ne gayab hone ki koshish ki par woh ho nahi paaya...

reason..

MABEL ko fasane ke chakkar me VALDIS ne apne haathon me pehne band ko utarna bhul gaya tha..

aur ye jaan aur apne band ko dekh VALDIS ne turant usse utarne ke liye apna dusra haath band waale wrist ki taraf badhaya par tabhi..

SLUNDER ne uska woh haath beech me hi pakad liya...

itna hi nahi,ek pal me hi bijli ki speed ikhtiyaar karte hue SLUNDER move hua aur aisa karte hue usne naa sirf VALDIS ke dono haathon ko modte hue piche kar diya balki uske dusre wrist par bhi usne ACCHUTA waale neutralizer band ko baandh diya aur aisa kar SLUNDER ne VALDIS ke dono haathon ko ek dusre ke paas laakar chipkaate hue man hi man ek spell budbudaya aur uske aisa karte hi ek behadh hi lachili par atrong grip waali rope se VALDIS ke dono haath piche ki taraf bandh gaye...

VALDIS ne apna pura zor lagaya par neutralizer band ki wajah se bina AMPLIFICATION aur REFINER powers ke woh kuch kar nahi paaya..

wahin uske bandhate hi ACCHUTA aage badha aur theek VALDIS ke saamne jaakar khada ho gaya....

apne right haath ke index finger ko lehrate hue usne VALDIS ke tuxedo ke upar rakha aur...


VASTRAM JWALAM.....

CLOTHES BURN.....


ACCHUTA ke SPELL uccharit karte hi uske us index finger se ek chingari nikli aur VALDIS ke tuxedo par chaddh gayi aur jab aisa hua toh..

us chingari ne aag ka roop le liya jisne aahista aahista se pehle VALDIS ki tuxedo ko,phir andar ke upper layers ko,phir neeche pant ko ,juto ke upar pehne socks ko aur aakhir me VALDIS ke underwear tak ko jalakar raakh kar diya...

ek minute ke andar VALDIS janmjaat awashta me sir jhukaaye khada tha aur usse yun nude dekh wahan moujud saare SAVENTS ne ab tak ko sabse zordaar thahaka lagaya...

wahin SLUNDER bhi pehle zoron se hasa aur phir...


SLUNDER-yaar logon ki toh izzat utarti hI,teri toh izzat jal gayi....


ye bol hasta hua woh ACCHUTA ke paas pahunchkar khada ho gaya...

saare SAVENTS abhi bhi zoron se has rahe the aur woh hasi VALDIS ke kaano ne garam lohe ki tarah pighalte hue ghus rahi thi..

khair,kuch pal VALDIS ko dekhne ke baad...


ACCHUTA-chal ab nikal aur dobara phir se apni fazzihat karwane ka shouk chaddhe,toh kuch naya try kar lena...


ACCHUTA ki baat sun ab tak jo sir jhuka hua tha VALDIS ka,woh dheere se upar utha..

is waqt VALDIS ki aankhen aisi lag rahi thi jaise kisine unme laal rang bhar diya ho..

halka sa ghusse se kaampta hua VALDIS kuch pal dekhta raha ACCHUTA, SLUNDER aur MABEL ko par uske baad..


VALDIS-is raat ko yaad rakhna ACCHUTA....ye raat teri hui,par aise hi ek aur raat aayegi,jo meri hogi...

SLUNDER-saale,rassi jal gayi par bal nahi gaya.teri toh mai..


ye bol VALDIS ko maarne ke liye aage badha SLUNDER par usse kandhe se thaam aage badhne se rok diya ACCHUTA ne aur...


ACCHUTA-mujhe intezar rahega...


ek baar phirse ACCHUTA, SLUNDER aur MABEL ko dekh VALDIS wahan se nikal gaya..

wahin uske jaate hi MABEL ACCHUTA ke saamne aayi aur....


MABEL-thanks ACCHUTA...


ye bol MABEL aage badhi aur ACCHUTA ke gale lag gayi aur yunhi gale lage hue...


MABEL-aaj ek bohot bada ehsaan kiya hai tumne mujhpar...


ACCHUTA jo MABEL ke gale lagne par us ehsaas ko jee raha tha, uske mooh se ehsaan waali baat sun woh dheere dheere MABEL se alag hua aur..


ACCHUTA-jaa SLUNDER.. MABEL ko ghar chhod aa...

SLUNDER-mai..!!!

MI-haan tu...

jaa ab...


aankh dikhate hue kahi ye baat ACCHUTA ne jispar kandhe uchka MABEL ko chalne ke liye kaha SLUNDER ne jispar...


MABEL-tum ghar nahi jaaoge...

ACCHUTA-nahi..abhi mai yahin hun..thodi der baad jaaunga...


ACCHUTA ki baat sun ek baar bharpoor nazar se usse dekhne ke baad MABEL SLUNDER ke saath palatkar nikal gayi...

jaate jaate kayi baar palti woh aur ACCHUTA ko dekha usne..

ACCHUTA bhi usse hi dekh raha tha aur jab MABEL baar baar palatkar usse dekhne lagi toh...


ACCHUTA-yun mat dekh MABEL mujhe.....


tere layak nahi hun mai,bohot mushkil se apne dil ko ye SAMJHAAYA HAI...

ehsaan nahi kiya tujhpar,bas tere liye apna farz maine NIBHAAYA HAI...

ajeeb hai,sahi salamat tu hai,par aisa lag raha hai,

ki tujhe nahi,balki apne aap ko aaj maine BACHAAYA HAI......

















AAJ KE LIYE ITNA HI......

















AAPKA APNA V...J....
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AB TAK AAPNE PADHA KI JAHAN EK TARAF MAHI AUR MORANA KE BEECH PAIN SUSTAIN NAAM KA CHALLENGE HOTA HAI WAHIN DUSRI TARAF US CHALLENGE KE DAURAN KHUDKE LIYE RAAZ KI BERUKHI DEKH MAHI KA DIL TOOT JAATA HAI.


AB AAGE:-



CHAPTER-2


(UNEARTH THE IMMORTALS)



UPDATE-113



PLANET-ELYSIAN


PLACE-CHOSENS




THE PROM GALA NIGHT.......






GUYZ & GIRLS OF TEEN AGES,PEOPLE OF DIFFERENT PLANETS AND EXTREME PLACES,ROCK THIS NIGHT WITH ALL YOUR CHARM,& DANCE WITH YOUR PARTNER WITH TIGHT LACES....

BOTTOM LINE.... WELCOME EVERY BODY TO PROM GALA........


kaafi excitement se bhare hue ek professional host ki tarah swagat kiya THE GREAT HALL ke beech stage par khade hue REGIS ne sabhi SAVENTS aur WHIZZES, WHIZZDERS ka jispar zordar clapping aur hooting ke beech apni excitement dikhayi saare SAVENTS ne....

aaj har SAVENT,ladka ho yaa ladki kaafi ache lag rahe the..

kuch DUAD ke through aur kuch khud chun apne apne partners ke saath yahan prom gala ki shaam me shirkat karne aaye hue the...

sabhi is hasin shaam me khudko puri tarah doobone ke liye bohot zyada excited dikh rahe the wahin apni baat ko aage badhate hue...


REGIS-well SAVENTS... waise toh PHASE 2 aur as seniors, PHASE 3 ke bhi lagbhag sabhi SAVENTS yahan par pahunch chuke hain,par CHOSENS ke old tradition ke mutabik is tenure ke,is saal ke best SAVENTS apne partners ke saath sabse aakhir me entry karte hain aur un entries ka waqt ab ho chuka hai..

so sabse pehle with a huge round of applause,welcome MABEL & VALDIS....


REGIS ki baat khatm hote hi ek tez SPOT LIGHT padi THE GREAT HALL ke entrance me jahan is waqt ek bohot hi khubsoorat couple khada tha...

blue colour ki long GOWN aur BLACK COLOUR ki TUXEDO me bohot hi janch rahe the MABEL aur VALDIS...

waise GOWN aur BLACK TUXEDO hi aaj ka dress code tha...

khair,looks ke hisaab se ek beautiful couple lag rahe the MABEL aur VALDIS jinhe ek saath entrance me dekh THE GREAT HALL me moujud har shaksh ke aankhon me taarif dikhne lagi thi...

VALDIS ke right hand me apne left haath ko lapeththe hue thi MABEL aur issi tarah woh dono us spot light ke beech aage badhe aur stage ke paas jaakar woh dono khade ho gaye...

aur aisa hote hi unke upar pad rahi spot light ne apna rookh ek baar phirse dheere dheere wapas entrance ki taraf karna shuru kiya jahan ab baari thi ALFREEN aur SLUNDER ki entry ki...

par jahan is baat ko lekar ek taraf kaafi SAVENTS excited the, dusri taraf VALDIS jaise kuch SAVENTS ye soch kar man hi man has rahe the ki ALFREEN jaisi hoor SLUNDER jaise below average look waale bande ke saath kitni ajeeb dikhegi wahin teasri taraf ALFREEN joki entrance par lage parde ke piche hi khadi thi,woh kaafi nervous dikh rahi thi...

reason..

pichle ek mahine se SLUNDER aur ACCHUTA institution aaye hi nahi the..

pichle hafte MAHI ka jo dil PAIN SUSTAIN challenge ke waqt RAAZ ki berukhi ki se toota tha,uski wajah se ye pura hafta ALFREEN ne apni best friend ko moral support karte hue nikal diya tha aur phir aaj subah hi jab GALA ka time ho chuka tha,usse SLUNDER ke gayab hone ki yaad aayi thi par ab kyunki kaafi late ho chuka tha, isiliye naye partner ke liye woh kuch kar sakti thi nahi..

aur abhi bhi jab spot light entrance ki taraf badh chala tha aur SLUNDER ka koi ataa pata nahi tha,toh aise me uska nervous hona laazmi hi tha...

waise is nervousness ne usse uske pehne GREY GOWN me aur bhi zyada khubsoorat bana diya tha...

khair, SLUNDER ke absense ki wajah se ALFREEN ne wapas apne ABODE jaane ka faisla kiya aur ye faisla kar woh palatne ko hui hi thi ki tabhi...


SHALL WE....!!!!


ALFREEN ke saamne pahunch apne baanh ko uski taraf karte hue kahi ye baat SLUNDER ne jispar jab ALFREEN ki nazar SLUNDER ke face par padi toh uski aankhen hairat se faile gayi....

ek dabe rang ka patla sa below average look waala banda THA SLUNDER..."THA"...

kyunki abhi present me jo banda yaa phir ye kahun ki SLUNDER ALFREEN ke saamne khada tha,woh toh koi aur hi tha..

44 plus chest size, above average hight, tuxedo me completely tight hote hue apni muscularity dikhata uska body,zyada nahi par haan,bright face jo ek perfect jawline ki wajah se kaafi akarshak lag raha tha,aur us aakarshan ko aur badha raha tha uska pehna BLACK TUXEDO, in saare positive pysical appearance ke saath ALFREEN ke saamne muskurate hue khada tha ye new brand SLUNDER.....

aankhen faade SLUNDER ke is completely changed look ko dekh rahi thi ALFREEN jispar uske face ke aage ek chutki bajayi SLUNDER ne jisse woh jaise achanak se hosh me aayi aur....


ALFREEN-who are you....???


taarif bhari nazaron se dekhte hue kahi ye baat ALFREEN ne jispar...


SLUNDER-aaj ke liye aapka partner....

ALFREEN-that i know....jo nahi pata woh bata...ye drastic change!!!how...????

SLUNDER-tujhe kya lagta hai,ek mahine se kahan tha mai,aur kya kar raha tha..???

ALFREEN-plastic surgery karwane gaya tha tu..???


SLUNDER ke face ko touch kar skin ke difference ko check karte hue kahi baat ALFREEN ne jispar...


SLUNDER-oye, there's no plastic over my skin.. anyways,tu bas itna samajh ki kuch magical practices aise hote hain jo skin aur body structure ko bhi nourish kar dete hain..

mai aur ACCHUTA wahi practices me lage hue the pichle ek month se...


ALFREEN-toh ACCHUTA kahan hain...???

SLUNDER-arre,woh apni baari me aa jaayega naa maate...tu saamne dekh.. spot light entrance ke paas pahunchne hi waala hai... isiliye zyada soch mat aur chal...

ye bol SLUNDER ne apna haath halka modte hue tedha kiya jisse thaamte hue ALFREEN uske saath entrance ki taraf ho li aur jaise hi woh dono entrance par pahunche toh spot light bhi apna safar pura karte hue us jagah par pahunch gayi aur jab aisa hua toh ALFREEN aur SLUNDER us spot light ke roshni me naha gaye jinhe yaa phir ye kahun ki is naye badle aur enhanced SLUNDER ko dekh VALDIS, MABEL aur baaki sabka mooh khula ka khula reh gaya...

wahin in saare surprised expressions ke beech SLUNDER ALFREEN ke saath kisi professional model ki tarah chalte hue aage badhta chala gaya aur sidhe jaakar MABEL, VALDIS ke paas jaakar khada ho gaya..

par kyunki ab tak SLUNDER ke is change ko hazam nahi kar paaya tha VALDIS aur saath hi behadh shock ke saath usse dekh rahi thi MABEL, isiliye unke paas khade hone ke baawjud woh dono hi SLUNDER se kuch puch nahi paaye the par phir kuch der baad jab woh dono hi is naye mile shock se ubhre toh MABEL SLUNDER se kuch puchne ko hui par tabhi..


OH MY GOD.....


ek saath sabhi SAVENTS yaa phir to be specific,saari female SAVENTS ke mooh se jab ye chant ek saath nikla toh MABEL ki nazar pehle saari girls par aur phir jahan woh sab dekh rahi thi,joki tha ENTRACE par,us taraf mood gayi aur jab aisa hua toh...


MABEL-KYA YE...????

SLUNDER-ACCHUTA HAI....


entrance me ek ladki ke saath joki aaj ki raat ACCHUTA ki GALA partner thi,dekh,hairat se bhari MABEL ke mooh se nikle sawal ko pura kiya SLUNDER ne jispar MABEL ko aur uske baaju me khade VALDIS ko tez jhatka laga...

ACCHUTA....

BLACK TUXEDO ke piche chuppa uska body structure aur face cut puri tarah change ho chuka tha..

aankhen me badlaw toh ek mahine pehle hi aa chuka tha aur ab un blue ankhon ke ird gird bana uska face naa sirf kaafi fair ho chuka tha balki hadh se zyada aakarshak bhi...

SLUNDER ki hi taraf ek pefect body structure ke saath bohot handsome lag raha tha ACCHUTA jo pure confidence ke saath apni aaj ki partner ke saath entrance se hota hua aage badha...

ACCHUTA ki partner ussi ki phase ki ek random bandi thi jo DUAD ke through ACCHUTA ki partner bani thi...

ek mahine pehle jab DUAD ke through usse pata chala tha ki ACCHUTA uska GALA partner hai toh woh aadhi khush thi aur aadhi udaas..

khush is baat par ki kyunki uska partner apne PHASE ke best SAVENTS me se ek hai, isiliye ACCHUTA ke saath usse bhi khaas treatment milne waali thi aur udaas ACCHUTA ke look li wajah se..

par aaj ACCHUTA ke is badle hue swaroop ko dekh uski woh udaasi bhi hadh se zyada khushi me badal gayi thi..

khair,apni partner ke saath aage badhte hue ACCHUTA ki nazar ek baar MABEL ki taraf bhi gayi jo usse aankhen faade dekh rahi thi...

saath hi saath ACCHUTA ke saath us ladki ko dekh MABEL ke man me ek ajeeb si baichani ne janm le liye tha jisse woh chaah kar bhi khtam nahi kar paa rahi thi...

khair, chalte hue ACCHUTA aur uski partner bhi SLUNDER ke baaju me jaakar khade ho gaye aur aisa hote hi jab ALFREEN ne MABEL aur VALDIS ke surprised face ko dekha toh usne turant un dono ko woh sab bata diya jo SLUNDER ne usse apne aur ACCHUTA ke ek mahine se gayab hone ke reason ke baare me bataya tha..

ALFREEN ke baat sun VALDIS toh sabse apne ghusse ko chuppa mooh halka sa banate hue saamne dekhne laga par MABEL chor nazaron se ACCHUTA ko dekhne lagi..

ye baat ACCHUTA ne bhi gour kiya tha par usne apni nazarein entrance ki taraf hi rakhi jahan hi waqt do naye chehre dikhne lage the..


MAHI aur VIDEOUS..

jahan MAHI LIGHT RED GOWN me apni beinteha khubsoorti se HALL me moujud har bande ki dil ki dhadkan badha rahi thi wahin VIDEOUS bhi apne BLACK TUXEDO me hadh se zyada handsome lag raha tha....

MAHI aur VIDEOUS abhi tak ke sabse compatible aur khubsoorat couple lag rahe the jo apne har badhte kadam ke saath sabhi ko apne superior hone ka ehsaas dila rahe the...

aur jab woh dono bhi ACCHUTA ke paas jaakar khade hue toh sabhi ne un dono ki jam kar taarif ki...

wahin ACCHUTA aur SLUNDER ko dekh MAHI bhi hairan hui par saath behadh khush bhi...

khair,ab tak is phase ke lagbhagh saare extraordinary SAVENTS aa chuke the,bacha tha sirf ek pair..


RAAZ aur MORANA...

aur phir....

AAAAHHHHHH....

ek sisak aur aah si nikli saare ladki aur ladke ke mooh se..

reason..

entrance me khade the mai aur MORANA...

har bande ki tarah maine bhi BLACK TUXEDO pehna hua tha jisme mera bright face aur muscular pyscique aur nikhar kar saamne aa raha tha..

aur MAHI ki hi tarah MORANA ne bhi red gown hi pehna tha par MAHI ne light red gown pehna tha wahin MORANA dark red gown me thi...

mujhe aur MORANA ko dekh saare SAVENTS kuch naa kuch keh rahe the par in sabke beech thi MAHI jiski nazar aur zindagi dono hi jaise mere chehre par aakar khatm ho gayi thi..

jahan saari bandiyan mere exterior roop ko nihar rahi thi,mujhe paane ki hasrat liye mere face ko dekh rahi thi,wahin bas ek MAHI ki hi aankhen thi jo mere ankhon ke through mere rooh tak pahunchne ki koshish me thi..

par meri nazar uske face ki taraf gayi hi nahi..mai chalta hua aage badhta chala gaya aur MORANA ke saath VIDEOUS ke paas jakar khada ho gaya aur mere aisa karte hi..


MAHI-VIDEOUS...kya mai us taraf khadi ho sakti hun...???

VIDEOUS-sure...


MAHI ki baat sun ek smile aa gayi thi VIDEOUS ke face par jiske baad halka piche ho usne MAHI ko khudse guzrane ke liye jagah di..

wahin VIDEOUS se hote hue MAHI mere baaju me aakar khadi ho gayi aur ek tak mujhe dekhne lagi...

waise nazar sirf MAHI ki hi mujhpar nahi thi,balki pura hall dekh raha tha ki is waqt mai CHOSENS ki do sabse beautiful girls ke beech khada tha aur jaisi chaap maine ab tak ke apne CHOSENS ke safar par chhodi thi,sabko meri ye position worthy lag rahi thi....

par in sabke beech jahan mere dusri taraf khadi MORANA ne jab MAHI ko mujhe pyar se niharte dekha toh usne mere baazu ko aur zor se pakad liya wahin meri nazar MAHI par gayi hi nahi...

mai saamne stage ki taraf hi dekhta raha jispar...


MAHI man me-


teri is berukhi se haan mai tujhse NARAAZ HUN...

par khushi bhi hai dil me,ki saath naa sahi par kamsekam tere PAAS HUN....


KHONNN..KHONNN....


behadh halke se khaansa maine do baar aur aisa karte waqt mera ek haath mere face ki taraf gaya aur mera face MAHI ki taraf ho gaya aur jab aisa hua toh..

MAHI ko laga jhatka..

reason...

meri aankhon me kamzori ke saath ek dard tha, beinteha dard jo MAHI ne dekh liya tha aur usse dekh uske face par saaf tention dikhne lagi,par woh kuch kehti ki tabhi....


REGIS- so finally, it's the GALA time SAVENTS... toh aaj ki raat ko shuruat hogi THE WALTZ dance ke saath jiski shuruat karenge spot light ke saath enter kiye sabhi best SAVENTS aur unke partners aur phir baaki ke sabhi SAVENTS apne apne partners ke saath floor ko hit karenge...

(note-THE WALTZ ke bohot hi purana, traditional, beautiful aur iconic dance form hai..)


REGIS-kuch der tak WALTZ moves ke saath apne apne partners ke saath enjoy karne ke baad shuru hoga woh daur jisse is saal ka MR & MISS CHOSENS chuna jaayega...

kul do chote par kaafi chunoutipurn aur mazedar challenges se tay hoga us khitab ka hakdar...

so firstly,are you all ready to groove with your partners...???

SAVENTS-yes....

REGIS-so what are we waiting for..??? it's time... ACCHUTA, SLUNDER, MAHI, VIDEOUS, VALDIS, MABEL RAAZ...

with your partners,come to the floor and start the night...

REGIS ke is josh bhari awaaz aur baaton se MAHI ka mere liye sawal uske man me hi reh gaya...

jaise hi REGIS ne hum sab ka naam pukara,hum sab apne apne partners ke saath hall ke beech me jahan is waqt pura floor alag alag colours se chamak raha tha,chal pade..

floor par pahunch hum sab apne apne partners ke saamne khaade hue jiske baad ek bohot hi ear soothing romantic music play hua jispar hum sab thirakne lage...

is dance ke beech sirf meri, MORANA, SLUNDER, ALFREEN aur ACCHUTA ke partner ki hi nazar apne apne partner par hi rahi..

par ACCHUTA ki nazar reh reh kar VALDIS ki baahon me thirakti MABEL par chali jaa rahi thi, MABEL bhi beech beech me ACCHUTA ko dekh rahi thi, aur iska ehsaas VALDIS ko bhi ho chuka tha, isiliye woh bhi halke ghusse se kabhi MABEL ko toh kabhi ACCHUTA ko ghoor raha tha...

MAHI ki nazar toh zyadatar mujhpar hi thi aur issi wajah se uska partner joki VIDEOUS tha,apne face par smile liye MAHI aur beech beech me mujhe dekh raha tha...

khair, hamare baad baaki sabhi SAVENTS bhi apne apne partners ke saath floor par aa gaye aur woh sab bhi WALTZ dance form ke saath music par thirakne lage...

kareeb 10 minute tak ye sab chalta raha aur phir music band ho gaya jiske baad sabhi SAVENTS ne ek dusre ke liye aur GALA ki first activity ke pure hone par clapping kiya..

aur phir...


HIDA-aur ab un do activities,do challenges ki baari aa chuki hai jinme jeetne waale SAVENTS banenge aaj ki shaam ke MR aur MISS CHOSENS....

par usse pehle aap sabko ye apne apne wrist me pehenana hoga..


ek chamakti band jaisi chiz ko dikhate hue kahi ye baat HIDA ne jiske baad..


REGIS-ye band ek POWER NEUTRALIZER hai...

isse pehenene ke baad aap sabke AMPLIFICATION aur REFINER powers temporarily inactive ho jaayenge..

aap sab aam insaan ban jaayenge...aur ye sab isiliye kyunki aaj ke dono challenges kaafi mortal hain..

humanly hard hain par ek SAVENT ke hisaab se easy hain aur aaj ke liye aapke SAVENT powers ki zaroorat nahi hai...

so, bottom line ye hai ki aap sabko is band ko apne apne wrist me pehenena hai...

REGIS ki baat khatm hote hi teen ELUSORY hum sabke beech prakat hue jinke haath me ek ek bada sa tray tha jisme bohot se banda rakhe hue the..

woh teeno ELUSORIES hum sabki taraf badhe jiske baad hum sabne ek ek band us tray se utha apne apne wrist par baandh liya..

is beech..


ALFREEN-arre ye BRAWNY kahan hain..???

SLUNDER-woh nahi aaya..??usse is GALA me interest nahi tha..usne WHIZZ HIDA ko request kiya tha aaj naa aane ke liye liye..

aur kyunki naa toh usne khud apne liye partner chuni thi aur naahi DUAD ke through try kiya tha, isiliye
WHIZZ ne uski request maan li..

ALFREEN-ohhh..yaar mujhe bhi aisa hi karna tha..mai bhi bor hi ho rahi hun yahan....

SLUNDER-same yaar..pehle woh sada sa WALTZ dance aur ab normal human challenges..

mera toh mood hi off ho gaya hai...


ALFREEN aur SLUNDER ki baaton ke beech hi saare banda bat chuke the aur hum sabne usse pehen bhi liya tha jiske baad...


REGIS-so now,time for the first challenge..par usse pehle ek baat jaan lijiye...

bhale hi aap sabne khud apne partners chune hain yaa phir DUAD ke through aapko apne partners mile hain,par iska ye matlab hargiz nahi hai ki aap apne partners ke saath hi MR & MISS CHOSENS ka khitaab jitenge...

aap aur aapke partners sirf is first dance tak hi ek dusre ko compliment kar rahe the,par hone waale dono challenges me yaa phir ye kahun ki abhi hone waale first challenge me partners ka maths aur khitaab jeetne ka tarika badalne waala hai...

kaise,ye jaanane se pehle first task ko jaan lijiye...

toh first challenge me hoga ye ki saare ladke aur ladkiyon ko alag alag rows me aankhon me patti baandh khada kar diya jaayega..

uske baad girls,boys ek ek kar aage badhenge aur saamne waale ke face ko touch kar usse pehenchaanane ki koshish karenge...

apne saamne waale ko touch karne ke baad girls,boys, jinke haathon me ek note aur pen hoga uspar woh guess kar naam likhenge jinhe ELUSORIES collect kar apne paas rakhenge..

challenge ke aakhir me ELUSORIES hue batayenge ki kitno ka guess zyada sateek baitha hai..

agar kisi ladke aur ladki dono ne hi ek dusre ko touch kar naam sahi guess kiya toh dono ko hi extra mark bhi milenge....

ek baat aur,is first challenge ke sirf 2 hi random pair, matlab do boys aur do girls hi second aur final challenge ke liye select kiye jaayenge...

aur ye random pair tay bhi is first challenge me ho jaayega...

first challenge me mile marks ke mutabikh hi second challenge me aap sabke partners tay honge...

matlab MR and MISS CHOSENS ke khitab ke liye final round me sirf do pairs ke beech hi competition hoga...

got it....!!!

SAVENTS-YES WHIZZDER...

HIDA-alright then, shuru karte hain...


HIDA ke aisa bolte hi ELUSORIES ne ek ek kar sabhi SAVENTS ke aankhon ke upar kaali patti baandh di...

band ki wajah se ab saare SAVENTS ki extra sense ability bhi jaa chuki thi jiski wajah se ye simple challenge bhi un sabke liye kaafi hard tha aur isiliye hi sabhi thode nervous bhi the...

par in sabke beech do aise bhi log the jinke liye ye challenge without SAVENTS power bhi zyada mushkil nahi tha...

aur ye dono the MAHI aur RAAZ...

reason...

dono ne hi earth me BLIND SENSE naam ki book me likhi theories jinme chhu kar kisi bhi cheez ya insaan ko pehenchaanane ke baare me likha gaya tha,usse kaafi practice kiya hua tha..

khair,saare SAVENTS ke aankhon me patti bandhi jaa chuki thi aur un sabki jagah ko bhi badal ka girls boys ko ek dusre ke saamne khada kar diya gaya tha jiske baad woh sab ek ek kar khisakte hue apne saamne waale bande aur bandi ke face ko touch kar rahe the aur anumaan lagate hue note par saamne waale ka naam likh rahe the jisse teeno hi ELUSORIES collect kar check kar rahe the..

aur aisa karte karte aaya woh lamha jab ACCHUTA MABEL ke saamne aur RAAZ MAHI ke saamne aaya..

aur aisa hone par jahan ek taraf jaise hi MABEL aur ACCHUTA ne ek dusre ke face ko feel kiya toh un dono ka hi dil dhakk karkar reh gaya jiske baad dono ke hi haath apne note par gaye aur dono ne ek dusre ka naam likh diya...

wahin dusri taraf jab maine MAHI ke face ko chhua toh mujhe saamne kaun hai,ye pata chal chuka tha, aur isiliye MAHI ka naam likh mai aage badhne ko hua par mai aisa kar nahi paaya..

reason...

MAHI ab bhi mere face ko pakad usse alag alag tarah se chhu rahi thi jaise ki woh mujhe feel karna chahti ho..

khair,kuch der baad jab uska haath mere chehre par chalna band hua toh mai aur woh dono hi khisakte hue side ki taraf badh gaye..

aur is tarah first challenge pura hua jiske baad hum sabne apni apni apni aankhon par lagi patti hata di...

wahin jab ELUSORIES ne results REGIS ke saamne rakhe toh...


REGIS-UNBELIEAVABLE....

RAAZ,MAHI...aap dono ne hi saare SAVENTS ke naam ekdum sahi likhe hain....how...???


jahan REGIS ki baat sun sabhi SAVENTS shocked ho gaye wahin mere aur MAHI ke face par ek smile aa gayi jiske baad..


MAI/MAHI-BLIND SENSE....


hum dono ke hi mooh se hamari padhi us common book ka naam ek saath nikla jiske baad ek dusre ko k second dekh humne REGIS ko us book ke baare me bataya jisse sun..


REGIS-kabhi kabhi aam hona hi sabse khaas hota hai... normal humans se ye seekh milti hai hume..

dekhiye,aaj issi normal human way ne RAAZ aur MAHI ko is first challenge me sabse aage kar diya jiska matlab hai ki second aur final challenge me ab ye dono ek dusre ke partners honge..


REGIS ki baat sunkar jahan mai normal hi raha,MAHI ke face par khushi dikhne lagi, ALFREEN,MABEL, SLUNDER aur ACCHUTA MAHI ke liye khush ho gaye wahin MORANA ne ek ajeeb sa look diya MAHI ko..

khair,apni baat ko aage badhate hue....


REGIS-kyunki MAHI aur RAAZ ne sabhi SAVENTS ke naam sahi likhe hain,jiska matlab hai ki saare SAVENTS ko MAHI aur RAAZ ki wajah se do bonus points mile hain par aap sabme MAHI aur RAAZ ko chhodkar sirf do hi SAVENTS aise hain jinhone ek dusre ka naam bilkul sahi likha hai aur woh do SAVENTS hain ACCHUTA aur MABEL....


jahan is baat ko sun SLUNDER, ALFREEN,MAHI teeno hi kaafi khush dikhne lage the wahin VALDIS ki hadh se zyada sulag chuki thi aur us jale par namak chiddka MABEL ke face par dikh rahi smile ne jisse dekh khud par se halka sa control kho diya VALDIS ne aur uske paas pahunch...


VALDIS-kya baat hai..bohot khush dikh rahi ho...pasand aane laga hai kya woh losser tumhe...


halka sa gurrate hue dabi awaaz me kahi ye baat VALDIS ne jislar pehle toh MABEL halki chownki par phir..


MABEL-ye kaisi baat kar rahe ho tum mujhse VALDIS...aur tumne ACCHUTA ko looser kis base par bol diya...??

woh tumse aur mujhse bohot aage hai hamare PHASE me...

VALDIS-ohho..tarafdaari.sirf gala me partner badla aur tumhare soor hi badal gaye...

mat bhulo ki tum meri girlfriend ho..

MABEL-girl friend hun...tumhari private property nahi...


MABEL ki baat sun VALDIS achanak se hadh se zyada ghusse me uske aur nazdik aaya jisse dekh ek pal ke liye dar si gayi thi MABEL par phir kisi tarah khudko normal kar jab VALDIS ek disha ki taraf badh gaya toh normal ho gayi MABEL par normal sirf uska apperance tha,uska man hadh se zyada ashaant ho chuka tha...

pata nahi kab tak uska man yunhi ashaant rehta ki tabhi....


REGIS-so,final challenge ke liye MAHI,RAAZ, ACCHUTA aur MABEL,aap chaaron beech me aayiye...


REGIS ki baat sun hum chaaron hall ke beech me aa gaye jahan is waqt do tables lage hue the jiske dono taraf ek ek chair rakha hua tha...

dono hi tables ke beech ek mani jaisi cheez rakhi hui thi jisse do light beams nikal table ke dono taraf chairs par padh rahi thi..

saath hi tables ke dono ends par do do buzzor jaise button rakhe hue the..

ek buzzor normal plain tha par dusre buzzor ke upar QUIT likha hua tha...


REGIS-agle aur aakhri challenge ka naam hai PAIN SPLIT jo aap yahan in dono tables par pura karoge..

challenge ye hai ki aap sab apne pair ke saath ek ek table par aamne saamne baithoge...

aapke baiththe hi ye jo do beam aap dekh rahe hain,woh aapke seene ke beech me padenge...

aisa hote hi aap aur aapke partners me se kisi ek ke andar emotions ka tufaan aayega...

aur woh saare emotions negetive honge...

bramhaand me hone waale saari negetive chizon se jo pain bahar aata hai,uska bhaag aapke heart par padega jisse aapko apne andar ke positiveness ke through jhelna hai...

par ye asaan nahi hoga kyunki ek toh filhal aapki SAVENTS power neutralized hai aur dusri jo negetivity aap feel karenge,usse aapke dil ke saath saath aapka brain bhi feel karega jisse aap mentally kamzor hone lagenge...

khair,jaisa ki maine bataya ki beams ke padte hi dono partners me se kisi ek par negetive emotions ka pravah hoga toh aise me jab bhi dusre partner ko ye lage ki uska partner us emotional waar ko jhel nahi paa raha hai,toh apne saamne rakhe buzzor ko woh push karega aur aisa karte hi woh pain jo uska partner feel kar raha tha,usse woh feel karne lagega..

isiliye hi is challenge ka naam PAIN SPLIT hai kyunki isme aap apne partner ko pain baaththe hain..

aur fir yahi process aap dono ek ek kar tab tak continue karenge jab tak dusre table par baithe aapke opponents apne emotional pain ko naa jhel paakar dusri taraf bana quit BUZZOR naa daba den...

got it...


REGIS ki baat par haan me apna sir hilate hue hum chaaron hi ek ek table par baith gaye...

mere saamne MAHI baithi thi aur dusre table par ACCHUTA aur MABEL baithe hue the..

baaki saare SAVENTS humse thode door me ek ghera banaye khade bade hi excitement ke saath hume dekh rahe the...


ALFREEN/SLUNDER-all the best GUYZZ...jeete koi bhi,trophy aur party toh apne hi group me aane waali hai...


ALFREEN aur SLUNDER ki baat sun hum chaaron ne hi smile kiya aur apne apne partner ko dekhne lage..

ajeeb baat thi,is final challenge me ek dusre ke partners hone ke baad bhi hum chaaron me se kisine bhi ab tak ek dusre se kuch nahi kaha tha..

khair,humare chairs par baiththe hi hum par beams padne lagi jiske agle hi pal...

AHHHH....

AHHHH.....

mere table par MAHI ki aur dusre table par MABEL ke sir me ek ajeeb sa pain utha jiske achanak uthne se
dono ke mooh se ek aahh nikal gayi par phir dono shaant hote hue us ajeeb se emotional stress ko jhelne me lag gayi..

wahin MAHI ki dard bhari aah ko sun mai toh shaant raha par ACCHUTA MABEL ki tadap sehen nahi kar paaya aur usne turant PAIN SPLIT waale buzzor ko daba diya aur uske aisa karte hi MABEL ka pain uski taraf transfer ho gaya...

achanak se apne emotional pain ko jaata dekh MABEL thodi hairan hui par jab usne ACCHUTA ke face par halki si shikan dekhi toh woh samajh gayi ki ACCHUTA ne us hone waale pain ko khud ke hisse me kar liya hai...

is tarah waqt beetne laga aur jab maine MAHI ke body me halka shake dekha toh mai samajh gaya ki usse hone waala pain uske liye unbearable hone laga hai aur isiliye maine PAIN SPLIT waala buzzor daba diya aur khud us emotional pain ko jhelne laga..

par ACCHUTA,MAHI aur MABEL ke mukaabale is naye pain ka prabhav mujhpar kuch zyada hi hone laga tha..

aur iska sabse bada saboot tha ye ki dil se dimag par haavi hone waale is pain ki wajah se mere naak ke kinare halka khoon dikhne laga jisse maine apni ungli se saaf kiya..

par MAHI ne ye dekh liya tha aur woh mere nikalne waale khoon ko dekh hairan bhi hui aur dar bhi gayi..

mai kitna strong hun,iska andaza tha MAHI ko aur aise me agar mere naak se khoon nikalne laga tha,toh isse mere pain ka level samajh gayi woh aur isiliye usne turant PAIN SPLIT waala buzzor daba diya aur khud us emotional pain ko jhelne lagi..

pain ke jaate hi kamzori ne jakad liya tha mujhe...

saansein meri chhad chuki thi jisse mai aankhen band kiye control karne ki koshish kar raha tha...

wahin hamare side waali table par ab ACCHUTA ki haalat bohot kharab ho chuki thi par apne face ko normal rakhe hue woh baitha hua tha taaki MABEL split buzzor push kar pain naa jhele par kuch der baad MABEL ACCHUTA ke naa dikhane waale pain ko jaise bhaamp si gayi aur usne apna haath buzzor ki taraf badhaya par tabhi..

ACCHUTA ne turant MABEL ke haath ko beech me hi thaam liya aur naa me sir hilane laga..

sapat chehra tha is waqt ACCHUTA ka par uske aankhon me dard saaf dekh rahi thi MABEL bpar us dard ke saath ek aur chiz bhi thi jisse MABEL ne saaf feel kiya tha...

aur woh cheez thi fikr... ACCHUTA ki aankhon me MABEL ne apne liye beshumar fikr mehsoos ki...

aankhon hi aankhon me jaise ACCHUTA ne bata diya MABEL ko ki

"teri kahani me hamare bhi KISSE HAIN...

"tu khush reh,tere saare dard sirf hamare hi HISSE HAIN"....


in lines ko,jasbaat ko padh liya tha jaise MABEL ne ACCHUTA ki aankhon me jiske baad uska haath ACCHUTA ke haath me hi reh gaya aur woh yunhi uske haathon me apne haathon ko rakhe hue uski aankhon me dekhne lagi....

wahin MABEL ka yun usse dekhna ACCHUTA ke liye jaise painkiller saabit hua..

har negetiveness jo uske dil aur dimag me us beam ne create kiya tha,woh chhatne laga..

aur ek rahat ke ehsaas ko apne ragon me doudta feel karte hue woh bhi MABEL ki aankhon me ek tak dekhne laga..

wahin meri taraf is waqt jab meri mental thakan kuch kam hui toh meri nazar gayi MAHI ke face par jahan is waqt hadh se zyada pain dikhne laga tha aur ye dekh maine turant buzzor daba diya...

aankhen band kiye lambi lambi saans bharte hue MAHI kuch der tak sir neeche kar baithi rahi par phir kuch der baad jab usne sir uthaya toh hairan aur dar,dono gayi...

reason..

is baar mere face par naak ke saath saath kaan ke side se bhi khoon nikalne laga tha jisse dekh usne apna haath buzzor ki taraf karne ki sochi par phir usse ehsaas hua ki agar usne aisa kiya aur process ko jaari rakha toh next time jab mai wapas split buzzor ko push karunga toh meri haalat hadh se zyada kharab ho jaayegi..

haar toh mai kisi bhi condition me maanunga nahi,ye bhi jaanti thi MAHI isiliye ek faisla liya usne aur agle hi pal..


CLLLRRRR.....

QUIT BUZZOR ko push kiya usne jiske baad ek ajeeb si awaaz gunj uthi pure hall me jisse sun jahan ek taraf kaafi log ACCHUTA aur MABEL ke jeetne ki khushi me clapping aur hooting karne lage aur kaafi aise bhi the jinhe yakin nahi ho raha tha ki RAAZ haar gaya hai...

khair, MAHI ke quit buzzor dabate hi ek baar uski taraf dekha maine aur phir turant apni jagah se uth apne chaaron taraf ikattha bheed se hote hue bahar nikal gaya..

MAHI bhi mere piche piche hi aa gayi thi..

SLUNDER aur ALFREEN bhi ACCHUTA aur MABEL ke jeetne se khush the par challenge ke dauran un dono ne bhi mere chehre par khoon aur pain dekha tha isiliye woh dono bhi MAHI ke saath mere piche ho liya the..

wahin MAHI ke buzzor dabane ke baad sabke hooting aur clapping ko sun ek dusre ke aankhon me dube ACCHUTA aur MABEL ki jaise achanak se tandra tooti aur woh dono present me wapas aa gaye..

saare SAVENTS aur WHIZZES, WHIZZDERS un dono ko unki jeet par aur MR & MRS CHOSENS banane par congratulate karne lage jispar sabko thanks kehte hue woh beech beech me ek dusre ko apni kankhiyon se dekh rahe the..

kuch der baad dono hi stage par as MR & MISS CHOSENS khade the jispar jahan ek taraf baaki sab clapping kar rahe the wahin unke beech khada tha VALDIS apne kuch likewise negetive minded bando ke saath jo uske seene me lage aag par ghee daalne ka kaam kar rahe the..


1st-dekh bhai,itne time mehnat ki tune is bandi par,lekin aaj ek ghante me hi is ACCHUTA ne baazi aur ladki apne naam kar li..

2nd-haan yaar,mujhe toh lagta hai tu dekhta hi reh jaayega aur ye ACCHUTA teri bandi ko le bhi jaayega aur uska ras bhi pee jaayega...


Us second bande ki baat sun ghusse se bhare hue VALDIS ka dimag hi kharab ho gaya aur usne un ladko ko uske gardan ke sahare upar hawa me utha liya...


VALDIS-apni zuban ko apne aukaad ke daayre me rakh...

MABEL meri hai aur uske jism par sirf mera hakh hai samjha....


ye bol usse chhod diya VALDIS ne jiske baad aankhon me dar liye woh apne gale ko masalte hue chupchaap khada ho gaya...

aur uske saath baaki bande bhi bilkul chup ho chuke the jiske baad...


VALDIS-socha tha jo karunga,pyar se karunga...par saali ye pyar bhi badi kutti chiz hai, zabardasti karne par hi line par aati hai...

koi nahi,pyaar se naa sahi,par aaj ki raat MABEL mere bed par meri aagosh me hokar hi rahegi jahan mai bade itminaan se iski nath utaarunga...

oye sun,us CHIZ ko sambhalkar rakha hai naa...!!!

1st-haan yaar, mere ABODE me hi hai...

VALDIS-badhiya..jaa lekar aa...


VALDIS ki baat uska dost HALL se bahar nikal gaya aur uske jaate hi..


VALDIS-ye raat badi lambi hone waali hai MABEL...is raat ke baad teri akad aur teri virginity,dono hi toot jaayegi.....


wahan VALDIS apni planning kar chuka tha aur yahan mai apne dono haathon ko apne ghutno me rakhe hue sir ko neeche kar lambi lambi saansein le raha tha...

aur mere saamne khade the ALFREEN, SLUNDER aur MAHI...

kuch der tak apni jagah khade rehne ke baad MAHI mere paas aayi aur mere kandhe par haath rakh..


MAHI-are you allright RAAZ....???

UGGHHHGHHH...


itne hi clear shabd nikal paaye MAHI ke mooh se kyunki uske baad mai jhat se sidha hua aur maine uski gardan daboch li jisse woh chhatpatane lagi aur ye dekh pehle toh ALFREEN aur SLUNDER hadbada gaye par phir..


ALFREEN-RAAZ...kya kar raha hai..??chhod usse..mai kehti hun leave her..dekh uska mooh laal ho raha hai... RAAZ chhod usse...


ALFREEN ki baat sunane ke baad bhi kuch pal aur yunhi MAHI ke gardan ko daboche rakhne ke baad maine chhod diya usse jiske baad zoron se saans lete hue aur saath hi khaanste hue woh apne gale ko pakad kuch der tak sir neeche kar khadi rahi aur phir relax hone ke baad jab usne apna sir upar uthaya toh..


ALFREEN-are you ok...???

MAHI-haan...

ALFREEN-are you out of your mind RAAZ...??kya kar raha tha tu...???aur kis baat ka ghussa hai tu...???

MAHI ne quit BUZZOR apne liye nahi tere liye bajaya tha...teri bigadti haalat ko dekh kar hi usne woh kadam uthaya...

isse teri fikr thi aur ek tu hai jo isse dushmano ki tarah treat kar raha hai...

MAI-maine kaha tha meri fikr karne ke liye.. maine kaha tha BUZZOR dabane ke liye....

hai kaun ye mere behalf me faisle lene waali...ek baat kaan aur baaki sab khol kar sun lo tum sab,mere liye chote se chota challenge bhi jisme mai participate karta hun,meri jaan se upar hai....

aur mere liye har faisla,sahi ho yaa galat,usse lene ka hakh sirf mera hai.. sirf mera...

agli baar agar mere maamle me zyada dimag lagaya naa toh is baar sirf gala dabaya tha,agli baar ukhad dunga...

yaad rakhna, RAAZ dhamki nahi deta,future ka aayne dikhata hai jisse hone se kisika baap bhi nahi rok sakta...

apne haath aur apna ehsaan apne tak hi rakh, zinda rahegi....


MAHI ko ghoorte hue kahi ye baat maine aur phir palat kar HALL se bahar nikal gaya...

wahin meri baat aur us baat ki intensity ko feel kar jahan ek taraf SLUNDER aur saath hi ALFREEN ki haalat kharab ho gayi thi wahin meri kahi lagbhagh saari baatein sun kar ansuna kar diya tha MAHI ne par meri aakhir me kahi ehsaan waali baat uske dil par teer ki tarah chubh gayi aur phir...


MAHI-ehsaan nahi kar rahi thi RAAZ...pyar kar rahi thi...kyunki...




jo mere dil ko sukoon deta hai,
woh GEET, SIRF TUM HO......

jo mere saanson ke saath aur uske baad bhi chalegi,woh REET, SIRF TUM HO......

haan haare hai hum par is haar ka mujhe gum nahi...

kyunki jiske liye mai sab kuch haar sakti hun,woh JEET,SIRF TUM HO.....
















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