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Fantasy इच्छाधारी देव

Vk248517

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Supper update bro
 

Nevil singh

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UPDATE - 80



Rudra – ha bhai bol kaese ladega? Moujar vagerah chahiye to mangwa du, teer, bhala, talwar ? are kuchh to bol ya aese hi surrender karega.



SM ko gussa aa jata hae wo rudra pe lapakta hae aur rudra furti se taerta hua aage badh jata hae aur uske neeche se hote hue uski pooch pe ek kick marta hae. Jisse sm kafi door tak roll hota hua chala jata hae rudra bhi wahi jata hae uske peeche. Aur use alag alag tareeke se pitne lagta hae khud ka bachav karte hue. SM ka dhyan dev se hat jata hae to dev golden magarmachh (GM) ke pas jata hae.



Dev – kya aap swayam mujhe manchitra degi ya mae nikal lu?



GM – chale jao yaha se varna achha nahi hoga?



Dev taerta hua jata hae GM ke neeche se aur uski poonch pakad ke gol gol ghuma ke fenkta hae rudra ke viprit disha me isse un dono ke beech doori badh jati hae. Lekin is hamle se GM ko gussa aa jata hae wo teji se aakar dev pe poonch se prahar karti hae jo ke dev ki kamar me badi jor se lagta hae. Dev bhi ludakta hua door jakar girta hae. Use is GM ki taqat ka ahsas ho jata hae.



Dev fir GM ki traraf aata hae aur ek bharpoor ghusa uske jabde pe mar deta hae jisse GM sir ke bal waha ki mitti me ½ foot tak dhas jati hae kintu wo teji se us kichad se khud ko nikal ke apni ankhe kholti hae to uski ankhe ek dam lal ho chuki thi. Wo dev ki taraf dekh kar fir dev ki or badhti hae. Aur apne nukile jabde me dev ki tang dabana hi chahti hae ke aakhri pal me dev apni tang waha se hata deta hae yadi use ek second ki der hui hoti to GM ke jabde me dev ki taang aa jati. Dev fir pani me neeche ki taraf jump mar ke GM ke neeche jata hae aur use chipak ke gale laga leta hae. Aur GM teji se roll hone lagti hae 8-10 bar roll hone se dev ki pakad chhut jati hae. Aur wo jakar haddiyo ke pahad pe giurta hae.



Idhar rudra ne bhi SM ko apne punch aur kick se maar maar ke uska dhyan bhatka rakha tha. Uske do teen dant bhi tod chuka tha. Aur ab SM ke mooh se halka khoon nikal ke pani me mix hone laga tha.



SM bina jawab diye wapas nahi aa sakta tha. To wo bhi rudra pe akraman karne ki baar baar koshish me laga hua tha. Aur isi chakkar me ulajh kar wo GM se door hota ja raha tha.



Dev jaese hi un asthiyo ke pahad pe gira. To use apne jabde me daba ke kaat dene ke liye apna poora mooh khole GM uski taraf lapki usi speed bahot tej thi. Aur wo baehad gusse me bhi thi. Usne apna itna mooh khol diya ki jisme dev poora hi sama jaye aur wo use apne danto se kaat dale. Bas wo dev ko apne jabde me lene hi wali thi ke dev ne pas padi hui kisi ke baah(ckag) ki haddi utha ke GM ke kuchh samajhne se pahle hi uske mooh me fasa di jisse uska mooh khula ka khula rah gaya wo chat patane lagi aur apni hi jagah pe roll hokar us haddi ko apne mooh se nikalne ki koshish karne lagi. Lekin thodi der ke baad hi wo thak kar shant ho gayi.



Udhar SM ka dhyan is or tha hi nahi wo to rudra se ladne me vyast tha. Lekin rudra ki najar dev pe hi thi. Aur wo ye sb dekh chuka tha isiliye wo SM se is tarah lad raha tha ki jisse uski peeth GM ki taraf rahe. Aur wo uski sahayta ke liye na ja sake.



Idhar dev ne jab dekha ke ab GM kuchh nahi kar pa rahi hae aur ek dam shant ho chuki hae to usne wahi apni ichhadhari shakti ka prayog kar ke ek badi machhli ka roop le liya aur teji se GM ke pet ke andar chala gaya.



GM. Pet ke andar thodi der tak idhar udhar dhundhne ke baad dev (machli) ko ek lal rang ka gol aur hath bhar lamba danda najar aaya jo ke andar se khokhla tha jisme ke sandesh bheje jate hae. lekin wo GM ki aanto se chipka hua ya un me fasa hua tha.



Kintu dev is waqt ek mashli ke roop me tha wo teji se waha tak jata hae aur us lambe box ko apne mooh me lekar khinchta hae. jisse GM. Bahot teji se hilne lagti hae shayad apni aante khichne ki wajah se. dev fir koshish karta hae. lekin anjam wahi. Aakhir 3-4 koshisho ke baad GM ki aanto ko nuksan pahuchaye bina dev us lambe box ko nikalne me kamyab ho jata hae. aur use apne mooh me dabaye teji se GM ke pet se bahar aa jata hae. aur turant apne asli roop me aa jata hae. aur rudra ki taraf dekhta hae.



Rudra bhi dev ki taraf dekh kar khushi se hath hilata hae. to dev use ladai band kar ke apne pas aane ke liye kahta hae.



Rudra – o mahashay bas band karo ye ladai wo dekho hamne apna kaam kar diya wo bhi tumhari patni ko koi nuksan pahuchaye bina. Udhar dekh.



Jaese hi SM rudra ki ye bat sun kar peeche dekhta hae uski halat hi kharab ho jati hae. wo teji se dev ke pas aata hae. uske hath me manchitra wala box dekh kar wo GM ki taraf dekhta hae jiske mooh me abhi bhi hadii fasi hui thi.



SM – bahot khoob yuraj dev singh bahot khoob . aapne wo kar dikhaya jo aaj tak badi se badi sena nahi kar payi. Aapne ye manchitra hi hasil nahi kiya hame bhi shrap se mukti dila di hae .



Dev – shrap se? ye kya kah rahe ahe aap?



SM – sab bata duga kintu krapya pahle meri patni ke mooh me fasi hui haddi nikal kar use is takleef se mukt kar dijiye.



Dev rudra ko ishara karta hae to rudra ja kar GM ke mooh me fasi hadii nikal deta hae. aur aakar dev ke pas khada ho jata hae. udhar GM bhi SM ke saath aakar khadi ho jati hae.



SM – yuraj aap hame nahi jante kintu aapke hath me ye anguthiya dekh kar hum samajh gaye hae ke aapko van raj ne hi ye anguthiya di hae. jis wajah se aap itni der se yaha pani me rah paye hae. hum dono bhi vanraj se sambandhit hi hae. mae vanraj ka putra hu aur ye meri patni. Hamara naya naya vivah hua tha aur hum vivah ke pashchat is neel sagar me ghumne aaye the. Ek din hum pati patni ne ye socha ke pani ke andar prem karege aur hum dono nagn ho kar sambhog karne ke liye pani me aaye hamne poora din pani me sambhog kiya na jane kitni baar. Aur sambhog karte karte hum kab is sagar ke tal me pahuch gaye hame pata hi nahi chala yaha koi rishi baethe tap kar rahe the. Hum apne sambhog me itne vyast the ke maene apni nagn patni ko unki god me hi lita diya aur sambhog karne laga. Hamare sambhog karne ki wajah se us rishi ki tapasya toot gayi. Wo bahot jyada krodhit hue hame is tarah sambhog karte dekh kar. Wo uthkhade hue. Unke uthne ke baad hame pata chala ke ye to koi rishi hae. kyu ke wo lambe samay se yaha baethe tap kar rahe the. To un par pani ke podho ki bharmar ho gayi thi hame to pata hi nahi tha ke ye koi rishi hae. hum to unhe koi pani ki chattan samajh ke apni masti me mast the.
manmohak update bhai
 

Akil

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Toh yeh dono 🐊 dampatti vanraj ke parijan hain jo shaapvash magaramchh bane aur ab Dev aur Rudra dwaara inhein shaapmukti pradaan ho chuki hai that's nice dekhte hain ab aage inke kya kya chunautiyaan aani hain aur un chunautiyon ka niraakaran kis prakaar hona hai
 

Boby

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Toh yeh dono 🐊 dampatti vanraj ke parijan hain jo shaapvash magaramchh bane aur ab Dev aur Rudra dwaara inhein shaapmukti pradaan ho chuki hai that's nice dekhte hain ab aage inke kya kya chunautiyaan aani hain aur un chunautiyon ka niraakaran kis prakaar hona hai
Story ko gahrai se padhne ke liye dhnyavaad bhai. aage ka safar aur jyada romanchak aur manoranjak hoga. ye vaada hae. dhnyavaad bhai aap ke support ke liye
 
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