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Fantasy ATTITUDE (KABHI ANGEL KABHI DEVIL) ( Completed )

Ashu kumar

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AB TAK AAPNE PADHA KI JAHAN EK TARAF STELLARS KE TEENO WHIZZ AUR WHIZZDERS EK NAYE SPELL KE BAARE ME PURI CLASS KO BATATE HAIN WAHIN DUSRI TARAF RAAZ AUR BAAKI SABHI SAVENTS KE AURA KE MISHRAN SE EK NAYI ENERGY PAIDA HOTI HAI JISKA RAAZ JAAN VIDEOUS KO JHATKA LAGTA HAI.


AB AAGE:-



CHAPTER-2


(UNEARTH THE IMMORTALS)



UPDATE-109



PLANET-ELYSIAN


PLACE-CHOSENS






SUBAH SUBAH GHAANS ME CHALNE SE AANKHEN TEZ HOTI HAI,YE TOH SUNA THA,PAR GHOOR GHOOR KAR DEKHNE SE BHI AISA HOTA HAI,YE NAHI PATA THA MUJHE....


maine kahi thi ye baat jisse aur ALFREEN aur zoron shoron se mujhe ghoorne lagi thi.

abhi early morning hai..suraj ki halki halki laamima aakash me dikhne hai aur mai har din ki tarah is waqt apne ABODE ke aage bane garden me khada hun aur mere saamne apne kamar par haath rakh mujhe ghoore jaa rahi hai ALFREEN...

waise uska aisa karna kuch galat nahi hai...

reason...

darasal EXERTION ke baad se hi ALFREEN mere aur khaas kar ACCHUTA, SLUNDER aur BRAWNY ke improvement ka RAAZ jaanane ke liye bekaraar thi..

ab apna personal secret toh woh teeno bata nahi sakte the isiliye unhone bas usse itna bataya tha ki RAAZ ne matlab ki maine personally unki kaabiliyat nikharne me mehnet ki thi aur is baat ko sun woh mujhe usse nourish karne ke liye bhi kayi baar keh chuki thi jisse sun mai bas muskura deta tha..

is beech kal ACCHUTA ke through ALFREEN ko pata chala ki mai har subah yahan garden me aakar apne CEREBRATION process ko pause kar naye naye techniques ki practice karta hun aur isiliye hi wph mere piche piche hi yahan pahunch chuki thi aur is baat par ki ek toh mai har subah yahan aata hun jo ki baaju me rehne ke baad bhi usse pata nahi tha aur dusra ki uske lagatar bolne ke baad bhi ab tak maine uski baat ko yaa phir ye kahun ki sikhne ki request ko seriously nahi liya,naaraz thi ALFREEN..

khair,mere mazak ko sun..


ALFREEN-saaf saaf batao,tum mujhe sikhaoge ki nahi...

MAI-progress rate toh thik hai tumhari... 6 percent AMPLIFICATION aur 2 REFINERS touch kar chuki ho tum...phir extra effort kisliye...???

ALFREEN-ye tum puch rahe ho jo abhi se kisi bhi PHASE 3 SAVENT se zyada strong ho chuka hai aur apne saath ACCHUTA, SLUNDER aur BRAWNY ko bhi kisi bhi PHASE 3 SAVENT se zyada strong bana diya hai...

MAI-maine apni yaa un teeno ki nahi,tumhara reason pucha hai.. tum kyun alag se sikhna chahti ho...???


ALFREEN-

dar jab haar se lage toh JEET pakki..

par jo jeet se hi dar lagne lage toh HAAR pakki...


in do lines me hi mere sikhne ka reason hai RAAZ..

pehli line earth waali ALFREEN ka sach tha par second line ELYSIAN waali ALFREEN ki haqiqat banane lagi hai jo har guzarte waqt ke saath aur strong hote jaa rahi hai..

aur ye strongness mujhe weak bana rahi hai jo mai nahi chahti..so will you help me out....!!!??

MAI-desperation with calmness...i like it...aur tumhara jawab, reason bhi mujhe acha laga....

idhar aao,saamne khade ho jaao mere...


mere bolte hi ALFREEN mere thik saamne aakar khadi ho gayi jispar..


MAI-tumhari madad ka zariya tum tak bohot pehle pahunch chuka tha ALFREEN,bas tumne us zariye par ab tak gour nahi kiya...???

ALFREEN-mai samjhi nahi...

MAI-paused CEREBRATION state me kyun jaate hain hum...???

ALFREEN-kyun jaate hai matlab..???ye ek doorway hai saare METAPHYSICAL activities ka...

MAI-ye aadha sach hai...paused CEREBRATION jiska simple swaroop joki EARTH par practice kiya jaata hai, meditation,ye tarika woh key hai jisse humare brain ke woh hisse jinme extraordinary hunaron ko samete hue hote hain,woh khul jaate hain.

aur jab woh hisse khulte hain toh ek modified aur upgraded tarike ke saath woh hamare talents ko nikharte hain..

aisa hi ek talent,ek zariya chuppa hai tumhare brain ke kisi hisse me jo complete upgradation ke saath khulne aur bahar aane ke liye taiyar baitha hai...

ALFREEN-aisa kaun sa talent aur zariya chuppa hai mera mere andar jo mujhe bhi naji pata.....????

MAI-KAPU KUIALUA....naam se kuch yaad aaya...????

(NOTE:-fighting technique hai ye, update 2 me bataya gaya hai iske baare me)


mere mooh se KAPU KUIALUA naam sun chownki ALFREEN ayr phir..


ALFREEN-KAPU KUIALUA toh ek ancient fighting technique hai jisme pops expert hain..par iske baare me tumhe...


apni baat bolte bolte hi ALFREEN rook gayi kyunki usse yaad aaya ki mai toh uske pops ke orphanage se hi hun jisme woh is technique ko sikhaya karte the... anyways,ye yaad aate hi usne apna sawal badla aur..


ALFREEN-par ye fighting technique mere growth ka kaise zariya ho sakta hai...???

MAI- tum bhool rahi ho ki KAPU KUIALUA koi normal fighting technique nahi hai..ye ek ancient aur behadh deadly combat tenchnique hai jisme har koi expert nahi ban sakta..

hard se hard practice ke baawjud is technique me 50 percent tak bhi kaamiyab hona aam bande ke liye next to impossible hai par tumhare dad ne is technique ko nearly perfect kar liya tha aur tum unse bhi aage nikal chuki thi...

aksar tumhare dad tumhare baare me aur tumhare fighting techniques ko sikhne ke levels ke baare me apne students ko bataya karte the aur agar unki baat sach thi toh tumne is tenchnique ko 100 percent perfect kar liya tha...right..!!!


ALFREEN-yaa sort off..par sawal ab bhi wahi hai....us baat ka mere yahan par growth se kya link hai..???

ek baat aur batao,maine KAPU KUIALUA ke saath PANKRATION,BOKATOR aur aise hi bohot se combat techniques sikhe the par tumhe specifically KAPU KUIALUA ka hi naam kyun liya..???

MAI-dono sawalon ka jawab common aur ek hi hai...acha ye batao,KAPU KUIALUA ka main daav kya hai..??

ALFREEN-preasure points manupalation...

MAI-exactly.. pressure points ki sabse khaas baat ye hoti hai ki ye points sirf hamare BODY se nahi judi hoti balki BRAIN aur BRAIN functioning ki wajah se BLOOD ke saath bhi interlinked hoti hai,in short hamare teeno AMPLIFICATION modes ke saath ye judi hoti hai...

ab ek baat aur batao,KAPU KUIALUA ke perfection ke liye yaa phir to be precise, pressure points manupalation karne ke liye jis super hard concentration ki zaroorat padti hai,woh kaise kiya jaata hai...???

ALFREEN-meditation se...

MAI-right..the normal version of paused CEREBRATION...

woh version jisme insaan anjaane me hi sahi,par apne SOUL se khudko connect kar leta hai...

ALFREEN-oh shit.iska matlab hai ki KAPU KUIALUA technique ko sikhne ke liye chaaron AMPLIFICATION modes ki zaroorat hoti hai..

means,yahan aane se pehle hi mai anjaane me hi sahi,apne chaaron AMPLIFICATION modes ko access karne ki practice kar rahi thi..!!!


meri baat ko aage badhate hue kahi ye baat ALFREEN ne jispar maine usse ek smile diya aur...


MAI-yup..par yahan aane ke baad jab tumne wakayi me paused CEREBRATION process sikha aur AMPLIFICATION modes ke power ko trigger karne lagi toh tumhara woh tenchnique tumhare already triggered AMPLIFICATION modes ke powers ke saath tumhare BRAIN ke kisi locker me chhup gaya aur ab tumhe bas wahi bahar nikalna hai..

tumhari growth rate multiplication speed se badhne lagegi...


meri baat sun super excited dikhne lagi thi ALFREEN aur ussi excitement me...


ALFREEN-par mujhe exactly karna kya hoga...???

MAI-simple hai yaar...paused CEREBRATION me baitho, aur aisa kar KAPU KUIALUA technique ke har daav ko apne BRAIN me play karo..

jab tum aisa karogi toh tumhare BRAIN ka woh bhaag jisme woh technique chuppi hui hai,woh part vibrate karne lagega aur jab tum aisa kuch feel karo,toh apne paused CEREBRATION me behne waali urja ko us vibration waali jagah par mod dena..woh jagah unlock ho jaayegi...

haan,par ek warning bhi hai..

jab tum apne locked potentials ko bahar laane ki koshish karogi, toh ho sakta hai ki tumhara BRAIN tumhe negetive kare...

negetive vibes ke beech tumhe shivering feel hogi..hadh se zyada thand lagega tumhe..agar tum us thand ko bardasht nahi kar paayi toh bas apna haath aage kar dena aur man hi man apne REFINER power ko activate kar pure dil ke saath GRAVATEH SPELL jiska matlab SHARE hai, uccharit karna..

mai tumhara haath pakad lunga jisse tumhari aadhi taklif mujhme transfer ho jaayegi aur tumhara aage ka process thoda asaan ho jaayega..

ALFREEN-why,no..??jab baat mere progress ki hai toh bhala tum kyun suffer karoge...??

MAI-what are friends for ALFREEN..???aur waise bhi maine AGAR kaha hai..agar tum woh thand aur negetive vibes ka pressure naa jhel paayi toh SPELL bolte hue apna haath badhana..

agar jhel paao tum toh fir no tention....ab zyada socho mat aur shuru ho jaao...


meri baat sun khushi aur pure josh ke saath ALFREEN jahan khadi thi, wahin baith gayi aur jaisa maine kaha tha,waise usne kiya..

aur paused CEREBRATION me baithe usse kuch hi der hua tha ki tabhi ek saath so chizen hui..

pehli....

usse halka sa jhatka laga jisse dekh mai samajh gaya ki uske BRAIN ka woh bhaag jisme uski unutilized hidden potential hai,woh unlock hone lagi hai..

dusri..

jhatka lagne ke agle hi second ALFREEN ke pure body se ek WHITE AURA bahar nikalne laga jisse dekh mere chehre par smile aa gayi...

reason..

kuch der pehle maine ALFREEN se ek aadha sach aur aadha jhooth bola tha..

sach ye ki is process ke dauran usse thand lagegi jo ab usse wakayi lagne lagi thi...

aur jhooth ye ki ye thand usse sirf us brain locked area ko unlock karne se lagne waala tha par asal baat kuch aur thi..

darasal ALFREEN ka GOD GIFTED CAPABILITY bhi ussi lock ke andar kaid tha jo us unlock procedure me uske potential trigger hone ke saath bahar aane laga tha aur issi wajah se usse thand lag rahi thi...

saath hi is waqt ALFREEN ke face par ek dar saaf dikhne laga tha jo ki ussi negetive vibe ki wajah se thi jiske baare me maine usse bataya tha.

us vibe ki wajah se uska woh thand aur badhne laga tha aur saath hi saath uska heart beat bhi bohot zyada tez ho chuka tha..

us dar ka aalam ye tha ki minus degrees me lagni waali thand se hone waali kampkampi ke beech bhi ALFREEN ke maathe par pasina aane laga tha....

aur jab uski haalat uske liye unbearable ho gayi toh ALFREEN ke haath apne aap hi meri taraf uth gaye aur aisa kar usne man hi man uccharit kiya, GRAVATEH....

wahin uske meri taraf haath badhane par muskurate hue maine uska haath thaam liya aur mere aisa karte hi uski GOD GIFT shaktiyan mere andar chuppe SWORD me,uske negetive vibes mere brain me aur uski aadhi thand mere body me transfer hone lagi..

thand toh uski mere body me transfer hote hi mere EMOTIONS power ki wajah se khatm ho gayi par jab uske negetive vibes mere brain ne read kiye toh mujhe hui hairani..

us vibe ne mujhe soch me daal diya tha par aisa mai zyada der tak kar nahi paaya....

reason....

maine feel kiya ki ALFREEN ka process pura hone waala hi aur isiliye


RUHAVADEH

RECTIFY

mere man me soche is SPELL se ek urja create hui jo mere haathon se hote hue ALFREEN ke haathon me chali gayi aur wahan se woh urja apni manzil joki uske brain ka woh bhaag tha,jahan se woh negetive vibes nikal rahi thi,wahan pahunchi aur aisa hote hi woh vibes naa sirf us bhaag se nikalna band ho gayi balki us urja roopi ray ne ALFREEN ke mastishk se us vibe ke drishya aur yaad ko bhi mita diya...

khair, kuch der baad ALFREEN ki aankhen khul gayi aur aisa hote hi maine uska haath chhod diya...

is waqt ALFREEN ke face par sawal dikh rahe the aur isiliye...


ALFREEN-abhi kya hua tha mujhe...???kuch ajeeb sa feel kiya tha maine..!!!

kuch negetive par phir achanak se sab dhuan dhuan sa hone laga mere brain me aur phir mera CEREBRATION process wapas shuru ho gaya aur ab mujhe us ajeeb feeling ke baare me kuch yaad nahi...

MAI-saalon se band brain lock khula hai tumhara...bas ussi ka side effect hua tha tumhe aur yaad tumhe isiliye nahi kyunki woh feeling artificial thi jo us brain part opening ki wajah se aayi thi...

simple maths hai,zyada soch mat....

ALFREEN-oh,hang on, matlab mera woh closed brain part jisse meri ability nikharti, woh open ho gayi..!!!

MAI-haan..

ALFREEN-toh mujhe kuch alag feel kyun nahi ho raha..koi energy flow toh mehsoos nahi kar rahi hai mai..???

MAI-khaana khaaya hai kya jo khaane ke baad pet bhara hua lagega..

power booster hai,sahi waqt par apna asar dikhayegi,aur ab chalen.. institution bhi jaana hai..

ALFREEN-haan chalo...


meri baat sun kaafi khushi aur excitement se bhar kahi ye baat ALFREEN ne aur phir aage badh gayi is baat se bekhabar ki anjaane me hi sahi,usne apni GOD GIFT SHAKTIYAN mujhse share kar li thi....






PLACE-CHOSENS





BRILLIANT ALFREEN.... SIMPLY UNIMAGINABLY MAGNIFICENT....




behadh khushi aur hairani ke mishran ke saath kahi thi ye baat HIDA ne...

aur sirf HIDA ki nahi,balki unke saath is waqt REGIS, SAPIUS ke saath puri STELLARS hi hairan thi..

reason...

aaj yaa phir ye kahun ki just abhi ALFREEN ne ek saath apne second REFINER ke complete power ko activate karte hue apni third REFINER ke average power ko bhi ACTIVATE kar liya tha aur aisa hona CHOSENS jaise extraordinary institution me bhi rare baat thi...

par hairan hone ke saath saath ALFREEN ke saare friends uske is achievement se khush bhi bohot the aur isiliye HIDA ki baat sun woh sabhi uske paas pahunch usse congratulate karne lage the..

anyways class ka time khatm ho chuka tha aur isiliye teeno WHIZZES aur WHIZZDERS class se nikal gaye aur aisa hote hi ALFREEN turant meri taraf badhi aur usne mujhe thanks kehte hue gale laga liya jisse dekh MAHI aur baaki sabhi ko hairani hui jisse maine bhi dekh liya tha aur isiliye..


MQI-detailing nahi...


ALFREEN ke kaan me dheere se kaha maine jisse sun woh mujhse alag ho mujhe sawal bhari nazaron se dekhne lagi par phir mere ishara karne par jab uski nazar piche khade apne saare friends par gayi toh woh meri baat ka matlab samajh gayi..


wahin jab ALFREEN mujhse alag hui toh...


MABEL-RAAZ ko kis baat ke liye thanks bola jaa raha hai..!!!???

ALFREEN-wo actually RAAZ mujhe mere metaphisycal capabilities ko nourish karne me help kar raha hai aur aaj jo hua,woh ussi help ki wajah se possible ho paaya hai..


MABEL-hain..!!!! RAAZ teri help kar raha hai..phir humne kya paap kiya hai prabhu jo aapki chatrchaaya se abhi tak vanchit hain hum....???


meri taraf haath jodte hue natakiya tarike se ye baat kahi MABEL ne jispar sabhi muskura diye..


MAI- dil lagane se fursat mile toh focus sikhne me shift hoga naa madam...!!!


jahan meri baat sun jahan MABEL halki jhemp di gayi wahin ALFREEN has padi thi...

ACCHUTA bhi meri baat ka matlab samajh halka sad ho gaya tha aur is baat ko SLUNDER bhi samajh gaya tha isiliye usne ACCHUTA ke kandhe par haath rakh usse normal rehne ko kaha....

but in sabke beech MAHI meri baat ka matlab samajh nahi paayi aur ALFREEN ko haste dekh usne usse is baare me pucha jispar ALFREEN usse kuch jawab de paati ki tabhi...


CONGRATS ALFREEN...AAJ TOH WAKAYI KAMAAL KAR DIYA TUMNE....


ye awaaz thi VIDEOUS ki jo mere shoulder ko rub off karte hue aage badha aur ALFREEN ke saamne pahunch apni baat kahi jispar smile karte hue MABEL se thanks kaha jiske baad koi kuch kehta ki tabhi...


HIE MABEL...HIE EVERYONE....


MABEL ke piche se aayi thi ye awaaz jisse sun MABEL turant piche palti aur aisa karte hi uske face par ek dekhne waali muskaan naach uthi..

reason.....

class ke entrance ke paas VALDIS khada tha jiske face par kamzori aur halka pain saaf dikh raha tha..

darasal EXERTION me ACCHUTA ne jo uski gath ki thi,uski wajah se hi VALDIS ki ye haalat thi..

hosh me aane ke baad bhi uspar physically aur mentally,dono hi thakaan aur pain haawi the jiski jaankari usse allotted ELUSORY ne institution me de di thi aur hamare WHIZZDERS ne humko..

but VALDIS ko saamne dekh MABEL naa sirf behadh khush dikhne lagi balki ussi khushi me woh aage badhi aur VALDIS ke paas pahunch uske gale lag gayi jispar jahan ek taraf VALDIS ki aankhen chamak si gayi wahin baaki sab toh nahi par MAHI joki kaafi waqt se apne friends se alag thi, woh chownki jisse dekh..


ALFREEN-RAAZ issi baare me baat kar raha tha...

MAHI-matlab...!!

MAHI-arre duffer tune gour nahi kiya kya..!!!kal se hi MABEL halki sad thi jisse woh hamare saamne chuppane ki koshish kar rahi thi..

woh sadness VALDIS ke absence ki wajah se thi.. actually MABEL likes VALDIS....

MAHI-what...!!!really....


ALFREEN ke revalation se usse aur phir palat kar MABEL aur VALDIS ko joki ab bhi hug kiye hue the, dekhne lagi MAHI...

wahin VALDIS joki ALFREEN ke saamne hi khada tha,usne ALFREEN ki baat joki usne MAHI se kaafi dheere se hi kahi thi,sun li aur woh baat sun uske face par ek smile naach uthi aur...


VIDEOUS-wooohhh..yahan toh love is in the air...


halke zor se kahi ye baat VALDIS ne jispar ACCHUTA ka toh mooh hi chota ho gaya par MABEL ko ek dum se realize hua ki woh filhal class me hai aur woh turant VALDIS se alag ho gayi par face uska laal hone laga tha par VIDEOUS ki kahi baat par kuch kehna bhi tha usse aur isiliye...


MABEL-aisa kuch nahi hai...we are just friends aur ek ache friends ki tarah hi maine hug kiya hai...


MABEL ka chehra uski baaton ko saaf jhutla raha tha jisse sun jahan ALFREEN aur MAHI bas muskura rahe the wahin VIDEOUS jisne ACCHUTA ke face par taklif saaf mehsoos ki thi, usne us taklif ko aur badhane ki sochi aur..


VIDEOUS-oh common MABEL... your feelings are all over ur face...

aur jis tarah tumne VALDIS ko tightly hug kiya,aisa hug jisse tum dono ke beech hawa tak paas nahi ho paa rahi thi,waisa hug friends ke beech nahi, lovers ke beech hota hai...


jahan VIDEOUS ki baatein VALDIS ko khush aur MABEL ko aur zyada sharmaane par majboor kar rahi thi,wahin yahi baatein ACCHUTA ki taklif ko lagatar badhaye jaa rahi thi jisse dekh liya maine aur VIDEOUS kya karna chah raha tha,ye bhi jaan liya aur isiliye...


MAI-oho... SAVENT VIDEOUS has turned into LOVE GURU VIDEOUS... fantastico...

aur lovers ki paribhasha, defination toh kamal ki di hai aapne...

SLUNDER note le...

opposite genders tight hug equals love feeling....


KHMM..KHMMM....

ek dabi si hasi nikal gayi meri baat sunkar MAHI aut ALFREEN ke mooh se jisse dekh...


VIDEOUS-arre bhai,tu taarif kar raha hai yaa taunt maar raha hai.. waise maine kuch galat toh nahi kaha..

jo dikh raha hai, wahi bataya...

aur waise bhi,dekhne bhar se hi VALDIS and MABEL look great with each other....

aur in dono ka hug was like ice on the cherry with the sign of there love approval....

simple maths hai mere bhai,iske liye love guru hone ki zaroorat nahi hai..


jahan VIDEOUS ki baat ko sun ACCHUTA ki taklif badh gayi thi wahin ek smile ke saath mai aage badha aur ACCHUTA ke paas jaakar khada ho gaya...

mujhe apne paas dekh ACCHUTA ne apne chehre ke pain waale bhaav chhupa liye the...

khair,uske paas pahunch maine uske kandhe par haath rakha aur mere aisa karte hi jaise achanak uska jalta hue dil par thanda paani padne laga tha...

asliyat abhi bhi pehle jaise hi thi par mera uske paas hona ACCHUTA ke liye jaise dard par rahat bhari marham thi..

yahi wajah thi ki itne der me pehli baar uske face par halki si smile thi...


wahin in sabke beech MAHI ko ye feel hone laga tha ki jo bhi baat mai kar raha hun,uske piche koi aur hi reason hai aur tab jab achanak se usne ACCHUTA ko aur uske face par dikh rahe dard ko dekha,toh woh hairan ho gayi thi..

aur jab mai ACCHUTA ke paas jaane laga aur uske face par dikh rahe dard kam hone lage toh ye dekh usse itna samajh aane lag gaya tha ki meri baatein ACCHUTA se related hain....

yahi wajah thi ki woh meri baaton ko aur ACCHUTA ke haav bhaav ko bade gaur se dekhne lagi thi...

khair, ACCHUTA ko dekh maine saamne VIDEOUS ko dekha aur...


MAI-dimag ke saare chakshayu kholkar dhyan se sun ki...



jo dikhne waali chizen hi sach hai,toh adrishya hawa se bada koi JHOOTH NAHI....

jo jala de woh AAG hai, suraj se milne waali DHOOP NAHI.....

dil par asar dil ka hi hota hai,sharir ka nahi,

jo jism se lipatna hi mohobbat hai,toh phir AJGAR ke bada koi MEHBOOB NAHI.....















AAJ KE LIYE ITNA HI.....

















AAPKA APNA V...J.......
Fabulous update bro
Mind blowing
 

Rahul

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badhiya update pyar me dard mitha mitha pyara pyara are is diljale raaz ko bhi pyar ka gyan hui gawa baten hi aisi kar raha ye lakhon me se ek hai jo sab samjhta hai har baat dil ki
 

Rudrathakur

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Behtrin....to raaz ne alfreen se chupke se uske god gift ka hissa bhi le liya kapu kuialua ko activate krate hue...wahi god gift ke activate hote hi alfreen ki progress bhi tez ho gyi h ek sath 2 refiner ko activate kr diya ek ko full ek ko half..air isse sayd hi videous ko lge ki alfreen me bhi koi god gifted power h may be yes or not ...sayd wo mind na kre kyuki usko lge ki sayd raaz ne isme uski koi hlp ki hogi kyuki raaz ko ab bahut sari ancient tricks aati h jo chosens se bilupt ho chuki h...wahi dusri trf mabel aur valdis ki nazdikiyo ka karan wo waqt hi h jb mabel,mahi,and al ki friendship me kuchh waqt ki duri aayi thi aur usme usko ek sahara chahiye tha jiska fayda valdis ne uthaya khub achhe se aur uska ehsaas mabel ko exertion ke baad jb valdis sath nhi tha tb hui ab ye natural hi h...jb koi tumhari dukh ke waqt me sath de care kre tb ye ehsaas jaagna normal hi h opposite genders me ...par valdis ke liye to ye srf hawas h mabel ke liye wo pyaar ho....dekhte h achhuta kb tk tadpega aur kb wo valdis ki sacchai mabel ke samne layega jisme raaz to uske sath h hi...waise bhi raaz videous ki maarne me khin nhi chukta aakhir opponent ho to aise hi koi bhi koi moka na chhode aur agr moka nhi bhi mile to bhi moke bnaye agle ko thokne ke chahe baaton se ya mukke laato se...waise. Ek cheez to manne wali h raaz ki sangat ka asr sb jgha dikhne lga h sb ke sb shayariyaan krne lge h jise dekho... :mahboi: :grouphug: :party: :drunk: dekhte h kya kya nye gul khilte h aage aur mabel kb raaz ki baaton me fas kr usko apne god gift share krti h mahi ke mamle me ye cheez thodi tuff hogi pr dekhte h kya hota h...waiting brother..
 

Arsalan

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Awesome update bhai!
Raaz ne Alfreen se uska god-gift share bhi kar liya or usko iski bhanak bhi nahin lagne di.
Magar ye god-gift hai kya ye samajh me nahi aya koi fighting technique god-gift to nahin ho sakti.
Mabel, Valdis or Achhuta me toh love triangle shuru hogaya hai jisme Valdis ko toh sirf hawas mitane hai ye pyar to nahi ho sakta.
Raaz ne Achhuta ke dil ki halat samajhte hue uska achhe se sath diya hai or Videous ki jam ke sulgayi hai Mahi bhi ye samajh gayi hai.
Raaz ko love or romance ka bhi kafi achha gyan hai ye bhi is update me pata chala hamen or jo last ki chaar line thin Videous keliye woh toh aha kya kahne
jo dikhne waali chizen hi sach hai,toh adrishya hawa se bada koi JHOOTH NAHI....

jo jala de woh AAG hai, suraj se milne waali DHOOP NAHI.....

dil par asar dil ka hi hota hai,sharir ka nahi,

jo jism se lipatna hi mohobbat hai,toh phir AJGAR ke bada koi MEHBOOB NAHI.....

Waiting for next update!
 
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